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What Is Your Dangerous Idea?

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FIRST Lego League

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  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
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Intelligent Thought: Science Versus the Intelligent Design Movement

Stick to Drawing Comics, Monkey Brain!: Cartoonist Ignores Helpful Advice

What We Believe But Cannot Prove: Today's Leading Thinkers on Science in the Age of Certainty

The Stuff of Thought

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