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*I think you guys get it wrong. There is actually a consensus of mainstream academic sources (many of which you just cited above) that all these deaths (in Gulag, during the Holodomor, Red Terror, Cultural revolution, etc.) were a result of the existing political systems. This is something articulated in the ] and in a lot of other books and articles by mainstream researches in this field. Are you saying these deaths were NOT a results of the communist political system? Which sources make such claim? Yes, perhaps one can find a bunch of revisionist historians like ], ], ] etc., but they would be in minority here. Do not push ]. ] (]) 02:40, 23 December 2021 (UTC) *I think you guys get it wrong. There is actually a consensus of mainstream academic sources (many of which you just cited above) that all these deaths (in Gulag, during the Holodomor, Red Terror, Cultural revolution, etc.) were a result of the existing political systems. This is something articulated in the ] and in a lot of other books and articles by mainstream researches in this field. Are you saying these deaths were NOT a results of the communist political system? Which sources make such claim? Yes, perhaps one can find a bunch of revisionist historians like ], ], ] etc., but they would be in minority here. Do not push ]. ] (]) 02:40, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
::If this consensus is so strong then why is the closed circle of the BBoC (and other works by the same authors) and Rummel all anyone can point too? If this consensus was as strong as you claim it is then we wouldn't be here. If everyone agrees on this, then go ahead and prove it. ] (]) 02:45, 23 December 2021 (UTC)

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Misplaced Pages:Articles for deletion/Mass killings under communist regimes (4th nomination)

My opinion is the page title shouldn't exist, therefore I have proposed the page be deleted and am assuming this is adequate notification, without individual pings, to those invested in its content. ~ cygnis insignis 15:07, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

May you expand the context of your opinion? WeiChengChao (talk) 22:32, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
How about no 2607:FEA8:F49A:F500:844B:8EE3:6322:1D9E (talk) 13:52, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

No. Vincenty846 (talk) 14:27, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

No. Oules (talk) 16:24, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Deleting this article would be truly Orwellian. It’s very nomination for deletion is a political act attempting to whitewash Communism. There is absolutely no justification for deletion.

It should remain. Ashley Payne (talk) 09:25, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

No, the article should not be deleted. Minimizing, mitigating, or downplaying any sort of historical atrocity is wrong, including ones that have occurred in the communist regimes of the 20th century. Furthermore, to state that only this article be deleted amidst the countless other articles of similar style of content that Misplaced Pages has is special pleading. GrammarGuy16 (talk) 18:54, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

I do not see any reason for deleting this article. It should stay.Horea Vêntilă (talk) 09:55, 26 November 2021 (UTC)

All, if you'd like to have your opinion on whether this article should be deleted noted, please refer to the AfD discussion. colejhudson (talk) 18:55, 26 November 2021 (UTC)

Agreed, I think the article should be deteled. It's such an absolute mess of outdated and disproven cold-war propaganda, made up death toles, and in some cases even labelling people who were killed by captialism as "victims of communism", that I don't see how this article can be fixed without demolishing it and starting from the beginning. The History Wizard of Cambridge (talk) 02:51, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Generalized broadsides like the above are not useful to article improvement. Totally denying that there were tens of millions of excess deaths—admittedly most likely closer to 60 million rather than the 100 million figure popular in certain areas of the Internet—caused by self-described communist governments in the twentieth century is, in fact, a WP:FRINGE view in reliable academic sources, in many ways comparable to Holocaust denial, and any editor who espouses it is more likely to be topic banned or otherwise sanctioned, I believe, then the editors who advocated for keeping this article. In any case, you are not using the word "tole" correctly, and it is unclear what "even labelling people who were killed by captialism as 'victims of communism'" refers to. Regards,TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 03:26, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Scope

I was thinking after reading Excess mortality in the Soviet Union under Joseph Stalin, that changing the title of this article to "Excess mortality under communist regimes" would probably be a better title if this article is to be kept, as this article covers more than simply intentional killings, like mass famines. Thoughts? Hemiauchenia (talk) 22:33, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Yes, we discussed that, and I think that may be one option. But the article needs a major rewrite anyway. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:37, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Maybe something like "Theories about the excess mortality under communist regimes" would be more fit if the article is to be kept as it is. Sadly I doubt that a complete rewrite would be left alone by the mob ; too many political interests are at stake behind the apparent acknowledgment of the higher estimation by Misplaced Pages, and now that the political focus is on the article, it will probably be hard to modify anything about the fringe estimations without conflicts in the coming months. Larrayal (talk) 23:10, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

“Excess deaths” and “mass killings” aren’t the same thing. Volunteer Marek 23:34, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Would you define the Great Leap Forward and Soviet famine of 1932–1933, which are both covered in this article, as mass killings? Hemiauchenia (talk) 23:39, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Some scholars define them as mass killings, others don't. That's why the article has the section Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Debate_over_famines. --Nug (talk) 02:04, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Minority of scholars define them as "mass killings", and there is no "debates" (except Holodomor). Paul Siebert (talk) 04:49, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Minority of sources define them as "mass killings", majority sees them as excess deaths (or variation thereof). Taking into account that "mass killing" is a subset of "excess deaths", the latter may serve as an umbrella term for both. A part (a minor part) of "excess deaths" is universally seen as "mass killings" by all authors. Other "excess deaths" is seen as mass killings only by a minority. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:52, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Where is the proof? I'm seeing 1650 hits for "mass killings and only 145 hits for "excess deaths". --Nug (talk) 18:05, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
& vs Paul Siebert (talk) 19:11, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Oppose. The argument made: "as this article covers more than simply intentional killings, like mass famines" implies that the mass famines were unintentional accidents by do-gooders such as good uncle Joe Stalin. The 3.5 million human beings killed by the man-made Holodomor may beg to differ. XavierItzm (talk) 14:17, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Not a surprising response here considering Xaviers long history of deliberately trolling. Hemiauchenia (talk) 15:54, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Why the fuck would he do it on purpose, that makes no sense. Every historian who seriously studied the topic concluded that it wasn´t intentional. These famines were recurring events that affected Russia every few years since the tsarist times then there was one final food shortage under Stalin that was blamed on communism by the likes of you. Not only that but sufficient grain was distributed to end the famine within a year. You´re literally rephrasing nazi propaganda.
¨For two years farming was dislocated, not, as often claimed, by Moscow’s enforcement of collectivization but by the fact that local people eager to be first at the promised tractors, organized collective farms three times as fast as the plan called for, setting up large-scale farming without machines even without bookkeepers. In 1932-33 the whole land went hungry; all food everywhere was rigidly rationed. (It has been often called a famine which killed millions of people, but I visited the hungriest parts of the country and while I found a wide-spread suffering, I did not find, either in individual villages or in the total Soviet census, evidence of the serious depopulation which famine implies.)¨ -from The Soviets expected it 24.51.233.5 (talk) 15:09, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Oppose. I think the point made by @XavierItzm: is actually a historically sound one, in particular as it relates to the Holodomor and the clear intentionality with which certain mass death famines occurred. That said, I am open to continue to hear more points on the matter. I think as it stands regarding the article though that has been around since 2009 or earlier, I think the title is comprehensive for the subject as is. As for subject matter within the article, I am sure there is some cleaning up that could be done. When I have some time I'll investigate that end more as well, but I stand with "Oppose" at least for the suggestion to change the name of the article. Thanks all for listening! ♥ Th78blue (They/Them/Their • talk) 19:09, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Support. Even man-made famines like Holodomor in some cases are not entirely intentional, with economic goals being at the forefront. To describe the Great Leap Forward as purposeful killings would be very much misleading, since while elements of intent exists in some forms, the goal was ultimately to industrialise China and develop its economy. Likewise, the policy of collectivisation caused excess mortality but was their goal ever to remove large amounts of the population? Dark-World25 (talk) 08:46, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Support per nom, this name would be a slightly more accurate description considering not only the famines but also other topics covered in the article like the deportations. 24.51.233.5 (talk) 15:09, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Hemiauchenia, the topic and scope are something that we need to address if we want to move us forward and fix the article.1
Merging the fact that large-scale mass killings (50,000 dead within five years) indeed happened under Communist regimes (Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes plus the Red Terror) with a global Communist death toll, which makes no distinction between universally recognized mass killing events, excess deaths, and demographic losses, and is controversial and not done by majority of historians and scholars, and adding common causes for all events (something that is done only by a minority of scholars, several of whom have not even been represented correctly), and needing majority of sources making the connection (Chirot, Mann, and Valentino only discuss Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot, do not provide any connection for all Communist regimes, and the "generic Communism" grouping as popularized by Courtois and Malia is controversial; it may be good as a general category but not when we are doing comparative analysis or finding commonalities, as this article is doing or attempts to do so), is not good — we are bordering on OR/SYNTH.
If we do not successfully identify majority, minority, and fringe views — most of the article is minority views, and we cannot write a NPOV article from this POV. If we actually had a tertiary source for this, we may write an NPOV article about it; on the other hand, there are tertiary sources about the narratives, theories, and criminalization of communism (2).
Davide King (talk) 16:59, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Undue. weight

I've noticed a lot of new sources have been introduced recently and it appears that many are given undue weight. For example why should we give any weight to Engel-Di Mauro when his paper is cited by nobody and his main area of expertise seems to be in the field of ecology? --Nug (talk) 19:02, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

@Nug: That is a rational argument. I wish you will apply it uniformly to all sources.
Yes, we need a common approach to assess weight issues. I already proposed you to express your thoughts on that account, but you did not respond.
WRT this concrete source, it is ridiculous to expect that the article published in May 2021 may have a large number of citations. In that case, the approach would be:
  • Evaluate a publisher: Taylor&Francis is a reputable publisher, but I don't know if this concrete journal is respectable. Try to find its impact-factor.
  • Evaluate the author: what is his main works? How well are they cited? and so on. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:13, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
It was discussed at RSN. As it was published this year, and is corroborated by other sources already cited there (Ghodsee 2014, Ghodsee & Sehon 2018), it seems premature to dismiss it like this. Apparently that is undue but Watson or Hicks (who is writing about criticism of postmodernism) are not? It is interesting how you find undue any form of controversy and criticism related to the topic, even if published in academic journals (e.g. you removed David-Fox too). Davide King (talk) 19:16, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Did Nug really remove David-Fox? If that is the case, he should self-revert, othervise he must be reported at AE for tendentious editing. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:39, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
They did here under the guise of "trim and tidy up", and here under the guise of "slim down and tidy up", and David-Fox has not been re-added since then. As you can see in both edits, they have also changed the heading sections to remove 'attempts' in regards to terminology and estimates. Davide King (talk) 20:06, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Yes, it seems you are right. It seems @Nug: removed this high quality and relevant source repeatedly, and under a false and misleading edit summary. It is premature to speak about that when the AfD procedure is in progress, but if the decision will be "keep", I'll ask admins at AE if these two edits are appropriate. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:52, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Here is the author's CV It is up to you decide if he is an expert. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:22, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Another problem with that source is that it uses some figures from Misplaced Pages. We need to discuss how to use this source to minimise a risk of citogeneicity problems.--Paul Siebert (talk) 19:42, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
There is a distinction between new opinions expressed in articles and a recitation of facts. In this case, Engel-De Mauro is merely reciting facts: that the 100 million figure has no support in reliable sources and was chosen for its propaganda value. He is not providing his own opinion. The advantage of a recent source is that the author would be aware of any changes in the academic literature.
One of the many problems with this article is that it relies too much on original opinion rather than literature that explains their weight. Why for example do we mention George Watson at all, when no academic sources on the subject have cited him? His translation of Völkerabfälle as "racial trash" is misleading, since the modern concept of race had not been invented. The Germany word for racial trash incidentally is Rassenmüll.
The other source provided translates the expression as "residual fragments of peoples." Engels did not actually call them that, but said that Hegel did.
And here we have in Talk:Mass killings under communist regimes/Archive 1 (over 12 years ago), Nug defending the translation. The discussion came up twice more, with AmateurEditor also defending it.
TFD (talk) 21:18, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
It's incorrect to say that "Volk" wouldn't be translated as "race" before "Rasse" came into use. "Volk" was the word Hitler used in Mein Kampf to refer to the nationalities he would later exterminate. He also refers to "das deutsche Volk literally dozens of times, without referring to "die deutsche Rasse" a single time; history has shown he wasn't referring to people with German citizenship. So saying that it's invalid because the modern concept of race hadn't been invented doesn't track. The genocide of Roma and Sinti is still referred to as "Völkermord", so it really doesn't make any sense to nitpick that translation of Engels. Or would you argue that "Abfall" doesn't refer to waste or trash? AShalhoub (talk) 09:27, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Radonić in The Holocaust/Genocide Template in Eastern Europe says a closer translation of völkerabfälle is "refuse of nations". Google translates völkerabfälle to "national waste". The International Convention on the Elimination of All Forms of Racial Discrimination includes discrimination based upon "national origin". I guess we will get pages and pages of heated discussion over the difference between "waste", "refuse" and "trash". --Nug (talk) 22:35, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
I don’t know about that, but I certainly can read a difference between “racial” and “national”. postleft ✍ (Arugula) ☞ say hello! 02:51, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Yeah, using "race" anywhere near völkerabfälle give a completely different idea from what is actually meant, and I would question both the translation ability and motives of anyone who translated it as "racial trash". Something like "national remains" or "fragments" would be more accurate IMO. "refuse" or "debris" could also be appropriate, though more negatively connotative than I would use. None of these are literal of course, but you shouldn't translate terms like this literally to begin with. BSMRD (talk) 03:05, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
@BSMRD: Pardon the blunt question BSMRD, but are you a German speaker? The reason I ask is that I have never heard anyone translate the word Abfall as anything other than some version of trash or waste. The only way "fragments" could be used is in the sense of "fragments of trash" i.e. since Abfälle is the plural form of the word, though I would translate as pieces of trash. The semantic translation of Völkerabfälle in modern English is probably something along the lines of "garbage nationalities", but literally would be "pieces of national trash." AShalhoub (talk) 12:51, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
"Small 'degenerated' ethnic groups—'ruined fragments of peoples' such as Bretons, Basques, Scottish Gaelic speakers and most Slavs, were rightly 'destined to perish'." Tombs, Bobby. "Must Marx and Engels be cancelled?". History Reclaimed. three weeks ago ~ cygnis insignis 14:12, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
@Cygnis insignis: Is the point of this quote to argue that Engels isn't racist, or that Abfall should be translated as fragments? AShalhoub (talk) 15:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
What Tombs is arguing is up to the reader, what I am noting is they used the same point to discuss Engels "three weeks ago" on their History Reclaimed site. I was reading the site because Tombs commented on this article in the Daily Telegraph, leveling an accusation at those who thought it should be deleted. ~ cygnis insignis 23:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
I'll tag on discussion of the site for those wondering about the redlink: Lester, Alan (15 September 2021). "History Reclaimed – But From What?". Snapshots of Empire . University of Sussex.. ~ cygnis insignis 00:16, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Directing hate against someone on the basis of national origin is still considered racist. —Nug (talk) 03:26, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Is it considered 'racist' by you? ~ cygnis insignis 03:37, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
By the Declaration on Race and Racial Prejudice: "Any distinction, exclusion, restriction or preference based on race, colour, ethnic or national origin or religious intolerance motivated by racist considerations, which destroys or compromises the sovereign equality of States and the right of peoples to self-determination, or which limits in an arbitrary or discriminatory manner the right of every human being and group to full development is incompatible with the requirements of an international order which is just and guarantees respect for human rights;". So yes, by that standard Engels was a racist. --Nug (talk) 04:06, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
By that and many more modern standards, majority of 19th century people we know about were racists, and many 20th century leaders would be considered white supremacists, so I do not see why single out Engels for that, especially when both Marx and Engels still represented at least a moderately progressive stand by their standards, and why we should cite Watson, who not only had no expertise on Communism and/or Marxism but held the fringe view that Hitler was a Marxist and Marx invented genocide. It is also an example of false balance because while we cite criticism by Grant in his academic review, we cite Andrzej Walicki as if Watson's views are not as fringe as they are because they are supported by a single historian. Davide King (talk) 05:24, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
  • That is WP:SYNTH. What matters is the relative prominence and reputability of the sources; Watson is nether particularly reputable nor noteworthy, so his personal feelings about how it ought to be translated and what it means carry no weight and shouldn't be discussed, certainly not with an entire paragraph devoted to them. --Aquillion (talk) 07:46, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Well given that Watson’s book has 20 cites and has been subject of a review, it certainly is more prominent and notable than Engel-Di Mauro who is cited by nobody. -Nug (talk) 15:05, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Just to be clear, that's your standard, then - anything relevant with ~20 citations and one review (which can be a critical review) ought to get a paragraph devoted to it in this article? I'm not sure it's viable to include everything at that standard, but it'll be useful to at least have a baseline in mind for inclusion at this level of detail. --Aquillion (talk) 22:22, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
@Aquillion: Actually, in this section, I already explained the flaw in this user's argumentation (just scroll a little bit up). However, instead of answering to my arguments, he decided to repeat this argument again.
I even may try to predict what the answer to your post will be. This user may argue that that is not his standard, but Paul Sibert's approach. Which would be totally wrong: according to my approach, citations count is just one factor out of many, and it should never be taken out of context. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:34, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Number of citations may be a sign of notability, not necessarily of reliability — e.g. it may also be cited in many sources that are unreliable. Holy moly, the chapter by Valentino deveoted to Communist regimes has been cited once (considering that the book is about genocides and mass killings in general during the 20th century, the number of citations for the book as a whole should not be seen as proof that Communist mass killing is widely cited). I guess we must remove Valentino now... Davide King (talk) 00:02, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Anyway, we are getting off topic here, the issue being WP:UNDUE with respect to some of these newer additions. The problem with this is: Author XXX publishes a paper on some aspect of MKuCR, which in turn is cited by 55 other scholars. Some editor finds one cite by author YYY that criticizes author XXX's paper and tells us this is proof that XXX is controversial and/or his paper is junk, but the editor ignores the fact that the other 54 scholars cite XXX's paper without criticism. What is happening here is that confirmation bias is leading to people giving more weight to some opinion than is warranted. --Nug (talk) 04:20, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

I find it interesting you say that because confirmation bias applies to defenders of this article who are looking for sources about Communist regimes and mass killings, ignoring the fact that most of them are either passing mentions in a much broader work (Mann) or are within the context of general genocides and mass killings in the 20th century (Fein, Valentino), and where a single university syllabus, which may well be based off this article and is why this article should have been deleted long ago and recreated only when such issues were solved, by someone who has published nothing on Communism and is an expert on Putin's Russia, is seen as the smoking gun that all our assertions are false.
Again, if all those were majority views, it should be easy to prove (hell, even AmateurEditor admitted that most of them are minority views but deemed them significant and fine as long as they are attributed, but if we have to attribute everything and the article is a bunch of "He said, she said", what is the point and what does it add?) — we cannot write a NPOV article based on minority views, no matter how significant they are, and it also matters in which field they are because genocide studies does not hold the same weight as political science, historians of Communism, and country experts and specialists hold. Davide King (talk) 05:12, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
  • You cannot simply focus scrutiny on newer additions. Due weight is relative; therefore, if you are going to object to one source on an article, it is logical to compare and contrast it with the weight accorded to others on the same page - especially ones with opposing viewpoints. When you object to one source on WP:DUE grounds, any other sources that can reasonably be construed as having comparable or lesser weight need to be discussed as well. It's fine to say "ah, but this source has a bunch of people who treat them as reputable", but you need to actually be able to produce and discuss those (which leads to its own discussions of which secondary opinions are more weighty - not every dismissal or citation is equivalent.) --Aquillion (talk) 07:46, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
The article didn’t appear like a mushroom over night, previous additions have been scrutinised, look at the pages of talk. So of course the focus is necessarily on new additions, obviously in context of what is already there. Other we run the risk of WP:COATRACKINGing. —Nug (talk) 15:17, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Actually, this is largely untrue. The article was full-protected for six years (and the protection was introduced in the middle of a serious conflict when the entire article was unstable); this is part of the reason it's in such a sorry state, since Misplaced Pages's standards advanced over those years and this article didn't. As a result, many additions never received proper scrutiny. --Aquillion (talk) 22:15, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
The statement by Engels in "The Magyar Struggle" is:
"There is no country in Europe which does not have in some corner or other one or several ruined fragments of peoples, the remnant of a former population that was suppressed and held in bondage by the nation which later became the main vehicle of historical development. These relics of a nation mercilessly trampled under foot in the course of history, as Hegel says, these residual fragments of peoples always become fanatical standard-bearers of counter-revolution and remain so until their complete extirpation or loss of their national character, just as their whole existence in general is itself a protest against a great historical revolution."
His first example was the Scots. As we all know, Scots were "suppressed and held in bondage" by the English, then became "fanatical standard-bearers of counter-revolution" of Bonnie Prince Charlie until his defeat at Culloden in 1746, after which the Jacobite uprising ended and Scots came to regard themselves as British. Subsequently Scots played leading roles in the British Empire.
TFD (talk) 12:31, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
A quote from the opening remarks of the 1978 UN declaration, a translation of Völkerabfälle, "So yes, by that standard Engels was a racist" … @Nug: is that what happened? ~ cygnis insignis 14:55, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
@TFD These völkerabfälle Scots are seeking independence from the UK at the last I heard. You know what “extirpation” means, right? And Engels called for the complete extirpation of these trash peoples because he saw them fanatical counter revolutionaries. In the light of current human rights practice how can anyone defend that today? —Nug (talk) 15:44, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Last I heard, Scotland voted 55% to remain in the UK and 62% to remain in Europe. Whether or not the seceed from the UK, there is no indication that an independent Scotland would be governed according to the clan system. Engels' view was part of liberal ideology of the day. It is entirely disingenuous of Watson to see this view as something invented by socialists.
There is no indication either that these comments were repeated. Watson's thesis was that similar comments were deliberately hidden from the public (although the view on assimilation continued to be part of liberal ideology into the 1960s), but somehow guiding modern communists. Ironcially, the same people who bring this up also accuse the Left of supporting "multiculturalism." TFD (talk) 21:57, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Please, correct me if I am wrong, but I have a feeling that a part of what Marx and Engels wrote during that period was a description of bourgeois (nationalist) revolutionary processes in those times Europe that, according to them, were paving a way to a Communist revolution. I found no statements in Marx or Engels work where they said that some national or ethnic group must be destroyed by or during or after some Communist revolution, and that their destruction is something that a new Communist government is supposed to accomplish.
In contrast, from the context, it is clear that potential destruction of of some backward groups during or as a result of European nation building processes was seen favourably by Engels. However, and it must be clear from the context, these processes were expected to be accomplished before Communist revolution would occur in Europe, and that destruction was not the Communists's goal. That destruction, as well as many other brutal processes were seen by Engels as a manifestation of capitalism, and it would create prerequisites for Communist revolution. There would be no backward ethnic groups anymore that Communists would need to destroy.
If my understanding of Engels is correct (and I have a strong feeling it is), all attempts to sherry-pick some statements from Engels to demonstrate his racism or to make i=him a proponent of "Communist genocide" a pure manipulation. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:23, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
I agree. And it is ahistorical to assign modern concepts to his article. Engels for example referred to revolutionary Slavs and Germans as revolutionary peoples, and Slavs and Germans opposing them as counter-revolutionary peoples. Watson would translate people as race and say this is racism. By that logic, the allies were racists for wanting to defeat Germany and japan. TFD (talk) 23:16, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Thoughts about this? Weiss-Wendt, Anton (December 2005). "Hostage of Politics: Raphael Lemkin on 'Soviet Genocide'". Journal of Genocide Research. 7 (4): 551–559. doi:10.1080/14623520500350017. ISSN 1462-3528. Davide King (talk) 00:27, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

'Dispute resolution' is not a legitimate reason to remove content.

Per this edit summary, "If the article is kept, let’s leave this to the reactivated DR process where there will be a number of RFCs", I'd like to remind people that there is nothing whatsoever in policy that says that people uninvolved in the DR discussion are in any shape or form obliged to wait for an undetermined length of time until particular contributors start as-yet-undefined RFCs. If, as seems likely, this article is kept, about the only positive thing likely to result from the trainwreck RfC discussion is that it has attracted a broader range of contributors to the article. Contributors who are fully entitled to edit the article, according to relevant policies, in any manner they see fit. 'Leave this' until a particular subset of contributors agree to something or other isn't remotely a legitimate reason to revert anything.

It seems readily apparent from the behaviour of a few individuals, on both sides of this debate, that there are severe 'ownership' issues involved, adding more heat to the obviously-contentious nature of the topic itself. I see no reason why this sort of delaying tactic should be tolerated if it is going to prevent progress, and I suggest that anyone thinking about using such arguments in the future should avoid them, if they don't want to be seen as disrupting the process. AndyTheGrump (talk) 15:10, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

?? Delaying tactic? That is just bizarre. Let’s have an RFC over this clearly contentious section then. -Nug (talk) 15:22, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Doesn't explain how you consider it ok to remove a well sourced and supported section, especially the previous justification was "oh well it wasn't there before". Dark-World25 (talk) 15:30, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
If the objective of writing "let’s leave this" wasn't to delay it, why did you write it? As for RfC's, I have no objection to properly-formed and policy-compliant ones, provided they actually serve a purpose. Having 'an RFC' in the abstract may or may not be a good thing though. Hard to tell, without knowing what it is supposed to be about. Personally, I think that the fundamental issue to be resolved is what exactly the scope of this article is supposed to be, rather than one about a few specific phrases, or about the exact meaning of the word "Völkerabfälle" (see section above), and that needs to be discussed first. By everyone, not just a few contributors who have been arguing back and forth inconclusively for years on end. AndyTheGrump (talk) 15:32, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
I guess you believe a chaotic approach will help fix things. Rather than sit on the fence criticising everyone, why don’t you start by articulating here what you think the scope of the article should be. —Nug (talk) 15:52, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
The scope of the article? For a start it absolutely, per WP::NPOV, must include scholarly debate over whether attempting to attribute 'mass killings' to something inherent in something as ill-defined as 'communist regimes' is fruitful, or even meaningful. It must also include scholarly debate over whether trying to compile a 'total' of 'mass killings' is an appropriate histographical process, given the obviously-problematic and inherently subjective inclusion criteria involved. And it must likewise, if such subjective 'totals' are to be included at all, note their historical context, and the (appropriately-sourced) later criticism of the validity of such 'totals'. What the article will not do, per WP:NPOV policy, is to define its scope is such a manner to precisely limit said scope to ensure that only one very limited perspective on the complex issues involved is covered. That, quite simply, is a violation of Misplaced Pages policy. And an insult to readers, who should be permitted to make up their own minds on such issues, rather than being spoon-fed simplistic one-dimensional rhetoric from the pop-up-book of Evil Empires. AndyTheGrump (talk) 16:13, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
The title is a descriptive, "Communist regimes" is a widely used term. The article makes no claim that "mass killings" is inherent in "communist regimes", no more than Valentino implies it, but he groups them together never the less. That these killings happened under communist regimes, that they were some of the worst episodes of the prior century, and that communist regimes have killed a massive number of people are mainstream and incontrovertible. That all communist regimes engaged in mass killing, that communism somehow inherently leads to such killings, that Communism is worse than Fascism aren't presented as fact in the article. In regards to your proposal for s section on the scholarly debate, does such a debate actually exist in the sources, all I see is a lot of criticism and polemic over Courtois's number (which is already covered in the article) which is then conflated to include the other dozen estimates in a WP:SYNTHy manner. Even if we halve Courtois' number by excluding famines, is 50 million killed somehow better than 100 million? --Nug (talk) 20:26, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
I am not going to get engaged in a debate with you here. You asked me for my opinion on the appropriate scope of the article, and I gave it, based on my understanding of Misplaced Pages policies. And if the article is kept, I shall endeavour to ensure that the article complies with such policies. AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:38, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Pray tell why the first results I get under both communist mass killings and "communist mass killings" are related to Indonesia (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)? Davide King (talk) 23:27, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
If you think I should search for "communist regimes" "mass killings", "communist regimes" mass killings, and communist regimes "mass killings", I get Rummel and Valentino but I also still get Indonesia ("Constructive Bloodbath" in Indonesia: The United States, Britain and the Mass Killings of 1965–66, mass killings in general, and mass killings in single Communist regime and/or "Asian Communist regimes" from Margolin (I stopped after a few pages because they were all like this) — so the issues remains, are Rummel and Valentino majority sources? We simply cannot write a NPOV article based on the views of a minority, no matter how significant. The structure must be reversed. Davide King (talk) 23:57, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
The fact that Valentino's chapter about Communist mass killing has been cited once, it must be considered a not so significant minority view, while the book itself is certainly more significant for Mass killing in general, since that is his whole point and scope. Is this wrong and/or I missed something, Paul Siebert? Davide King (talk) 00:06, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
No. You are wrong. Usually, a whole book is cited. And, by the way, that is a reason why Courtois is cited so broadly: when experts in Russia need to cite Werth, they inevitably cite the whole book. That is a standard practice.
It would be much productive to approach this problem totally differently, to answer the following questions:
  • What is the main Valentino's contribution to science? Why he is notable?
  • What in the Valentino's theory in general? How it describes and explains mass killings?
  • What is the place of "communist mass killings" in the Valentino's theory? What causal linkage he sees and what he rejects?
By having answered these questions, we will better understand how exactly this source should be used in this article (if it will be kept) or in other articles. However, it is a little bit premature to speak about that. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:16, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
I do not think we are going to get answers to that, since we are just going to be accused of misreading Tago & Wayman 2010.
I think that answers your questions — "Communist mass killings" is not what he is notable for, and most citations cite the whole book, but the whole book is about genocides and mass killings in the 20th century. I also have to agree with one comment that AndyTheGrump made in the AfD (As for Valentino and Rummel, these are the same authors that have been repeatedly cited for many years in discussions over the disputed article, and the fact that they are being cited yet again surely illustrates just how isolated from mainstream historiography they have become.), and even though it should not be up to us to prove whether they are majority and minority, I think we already did that. Valentino is not cited at all in Karlsson 2008, and Rummel is, well, dismissed to say the least; Courtois does not seem to represent a majority view either according to Karlsson 2008. What more 'proof' do we need?
Davide King (talk) 00:38, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
?? You clearly don't know what Tago & Wayman 2010 is about if you think it related to Valentino or Courtois. Paul's questions about Valentino's conclusions are irrelevant in terms of how this article is structured, the fact that he still grouped communist regimes together for the purpose of his analysis is the key point here. There is no synthesis in this grouping because that's what he and other authors like Bellamy have done. Nobody has claimed Valentino has inferred anything by that grouping because there is no issue with that grouping, and yet the delete !voters continue to claim this same structure infers something beyond what is clearly attributed to the various authors. --Nug (talk) 02:42, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: I am going to exhaustively address these your arguments in this my post. If there will be no response from you, I will assume you understood and accepted them. If you will not respond, but raise these arguments again, I am going to interpret it as stonewalling (and may use it in other platforms if I find that appropriate).
Three facts are important:
  • Valentino's theory of mass killings states that regime type and ideology are not important predictor of mass killings onset (that is important, because his main goal was not to explain, but to predict and prevent mass killings);
  • Valentino groups what he defines as "mass killings" under Stalin, Mao and Pol Pot into one chapter of his book, which implies some degree of commonality;
  • Valentino puts Afghanistan counter-guerilla warfare into a different chapter, which implies that the previous grouping was made according to some other criterion than Communism.
And now I am waiting for proposals from all of you guys how to correctly present Valentino's view in this article (of course, if it will not be deleted). I am not going to participate in this discussion until the admins's verdict. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:01, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

You are confusing cause (as a predictor) (the substance of Valentino's conclusion), and topology (the six types defined by Valentino: communist, ethnic, territorial, counterguerilla, terrorist and imperialist), where the communist type comprises of agricultural collectivisation and political terror (which is unique to this regime type). --Nug (talk) 04:44, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

It is — did you not say that we are misreading Tago & Wayman 2010 and that you think regime type is more important? Tago & Wayman 2010 say Valentino is just a bit closer to Rummel but also say that Valentino disagrees with Rummel's authoritarian and totalitarian conclusion, and that this is a complication of original theory his book is based on because regime type does not really matter. Valentino's Communist mass killing grouping is limited to Stalin's USSR, Mao's PRC, and Pol Pot's Kampuchea, while Afghanistan is grouped in counter-insurgency mass killing. It is Courtois and Malia who apply the Communist grouping to any nominal Communist regime ("generic Communism"), which is controversial and not supported by majority of scholars. We cannot write a NPOV article based on minority views — the article should be restructured from majority sources to present Courtois, Rummel, and other scholars' views, not vice versa.
The synthesis is not necessarily the grouping in itself, which is more a NPOV issue because it is not supported by majority of scholars who by and large discuss them individually, but taking chapters mentioning Communist regimes in works about mass killings in general to mean it is a separate category and treat it as such. A more accurate summary would be Mass killings under Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot, and/or a comparative analysis between those three regimes, because that is what most sources say. Even Bellamy says that "Communist regimes massacred millions of civilians during the Cold War" but limit himself to the Soviet Union, China, and Cambodia, and says uncontroversial things like that Communist regimes committed atrocities but there were no mass killings (50,000 within five years) other than Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes. Again, what is the main topic of this article supposed to be? Any Communist atrocity? Communist mass killings (Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot)? A Communist death toll (where the focus is not mass killing in its academic usage but (excess) mass deaths)?
You may think they are but those are not all the same things. Davide King (talk) 03:22, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

"The Cold War Struggle (1): Capitalist Atrocities". There are no excuses for a similar article about capitalist regimes then. By the way, I am not wasting my time to discuss what sources says (I will let Siebert doing that) — can we write a NPOV article if majority of sources used are, in fact, minority? Alex J. Bellamy is an academic who directs the Asia-Pacific Centre for the Responsibility to Protect and is a professor in the department of peace and conflict studies at University of Queensland. We should expect that if someone is going to write about Communism, they should have published works about Communism and/or being some specialists (e.g. Rosefielde or Wheatcroft) — we cannot write an article about Communism from the perspective of minority genocide scholars who have no relevant expertise about Communism. We would have no issues if scholars of Communism and genocide scholars actually relied on and cited each other but they do not, meaning that this article is always going to be from a minority POV of genocide scholars, who are criticized not only by mainstream political science (Verdeja 2012) and does not appear to have changed, which should be enough, but even among themselves (Weiss-Wendt 2008).

Davide King (talk) 03:40, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

An interesting source. That confirms an obvious notion that when some author group some fact into one book chapter, that does not implies a new topic is created. I expect to see @Nug:'s comments here. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:16, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Seumas Milne?

Why is Seumas Milne supposedly a reliable source for this article? He's a mediocre politician who did not exactly cover himself with glory in his most recent role as Jeremy Corbyn's enforcer for trying to deny the existence of antisemitism in the Labour Party. AnonMoos (talk) 16:13, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

The idea that Seumas Milne was an "enforcer for trying to deny the existence of antisemitism in the Labour Party" is a deranged fantasy of the UK's far-right media (and also a pretty clear libel). I'd be embarrassed to put it forward as a topic for discussion at the Spectator cocktail party, let alone on Misplaced Pages, but I guess nothing embarrasses some people. DublinDilettante (talk) 17:53, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
I'm not too interested in continuing this discussion (having made my point clearly), but for the record, I get the great majority of my UK news from the Guardian website, which has by no means followed a strict Corbynite party line, by the way: see 'Back in the bunker': Labour unease with Corbyn's cadre grows, as well as these: , . (I'm not even sure what the "far-right media" are in the UK.) AnonMoos (talk) 23:03, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
As you know, unless you're far too poorly informed to even be participating in this discussion, the Guardian has been the main organ of Blairite antipathy and resistance to Jeremy Corbyn and the strain of politics they believe he represents. If you don't know what the far-right media are in the UK, I look forward to you defending the Spectator's views on immigration, Muslims and the Wehrmacht. And that's before you get to the tabloids. And no, you haven't made your point clearly. You haven't made a point at all, just repeated a smear. DublinDilettante (talk) 23:14, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Umm, The Guardian is centre-left, the fact that you think it is far-right media somewhat invalidates your arguments I think. --Nug (talk) 02:56, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
That is clearly not what they said — they said The Spectator's views on immigration, Muslims, and the Wehrmacht are far right, while The Guardian represents the right wing of the Labour Party, which is clearly not the same thing. Davide King (talk) 03:49, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
As far as I'm aware, contributors personal opinions on the merits of politicians and other commentators aren't relevant to decisions as to their reliability as a source. If Misplaced Pages policy on this has actually changed, please indicate where exactly, as I'd like to be able to cite it while I rewrite half the content of the encyclopaedia... AndyTheGrump (talk) 16:20, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Anything that Seumas Milne wrote on the subject of antisemitism in the Labour Party (the scope of his most recent employment) would be overwhelmingly likely to be filled with lies and personal vendettas, so I'm not sure why he's a trusted source on Communism and Colonialism... Is Hugh Trevor-Roper a reliable source? AnonMoos (talk) 16:27, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
I'm not sure whether Milne is or isn't 'a trusted source on Communism and Colonialism'. I'm not even sure what a 'trusted source' means in the context of this article, given the self-evidently contentious nature of its topic. And WP:RS doesn't in any case require that sources be 'trusted' for their opinions. Whether such opinions are included in an article is of course subject to policies and guidelines, but again, not liking what they say about something isn't an appropriate reason to exclude them. AndyTheGrump (talk) 16:38, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Speaks volumes on the paucity of sources disputing mass killings that Seumas Milne is seen as reliable on this topic. --Nug (talk) 20:37, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Are you even pretending that your investment in retaining this page is not a political crusade at this point? Do you want to tell us what your issue with Seumas Milne is? This "contribution" alone invalidates all your arguments on this topic DublinDilettante (talk) 20:45, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
Have you not noticed that Milne is supported by historian Jon Weiner? Historian and journalists, such as Seumas Milne and Jon Wiener, have criticized the emphasis on communism when assigning blame for famines. In a 2002 article for The Guardian, Milne mentions "the moral blindness displayed towards the record of colonialism", and he writes: "If Lenin and Stalin are regarded as having killed those who died of hunger in the famines of the 1920s and 1930s, then Churchill is certainly responsible for the 4 million deaths in the avoidable Bengal famine of 1943." Milne laments that while "there is a much-lauded Black Book of Communism, no such comprehensive indictment of the colonial record." Weiner makes a similar assertion while comparing the Holodomor and the Bengal famine of 1943, stating that Winston Churchill's role in the Bengal famine "seems similar to Stalin's role in the Ukrainian famine." I fail to see what is so controversial about this, other than not simply liking any form of controversy and criticism, and the lack of same standard applied to colonialism. Davide King (talk) 23:31, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
More likely is that Milne read Weiner and is just repeating those same talking points, I doubt he did any independent research, so his inclusion doesn't add anything, it just looks ridiculous. --Nug (talk) 02:49, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
If we are removing sources for looking ridiculous, may I suggest that we remove Victims of Communism first? I hardly think that counting deaths due to the pandemic, Nazis killed in World War 2, and potentially unborn, unconceived children as "victims of communism" is any less ridiculous. Dark-World25 (talk) 03:11, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Considering that Milne (Milne 2002) was published in The Guardian (a reliable source) ten years before Weiner's reference (Weiner 2012), your allegation makes no sense. Davide King (talk) 03:49, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: On this talk page, I repeatedly mentioned the name of Cormac O'Grada, a renown famine expert. In one of his papers, he analyses Chinese and Bengal famines in much more neutral terms. Due to copyright reasons, I am not reproducing his conclusion in full, but one fragment is shown below.
"Not so the Bengal and Great Leap Famines, which tend to be blamed, not one conomic backwardness or harvest deficits, but on human agency. Malthus believed that the problems of corruption and poor governance were largely endogenous, and was sceptical of the power of public policy to mitigate famine. Most accounts, however, blame the Bengal famine of 1943–4 on a combination of market failure and public inaction rather than harvest failure, while the conventional wisdom on China sees the harvest failures that produced the famine as endogenous to the follies of the Great Leap. This paper attempts to add to our understanding in two respects. Firstly, in the case of China, it has been argued that more room should be made for the supply side factors stressed by Malthus. More historical context has been added by drawing attention to China’s relative poverty and the overlap between high excess mortality regions and those previously vulnerable to famine. The famine remains an outlier, but to an extent fits a pattern established by the mid-nineteenth century."
Since I pinged you, I assume you will see this text by the moment when you make your next edit. That article is one out of many articles that address and debunks your argument about a lack of independent comparative research of "communist" and "non-communist" famines. If this article will survive deletion, this, as many other discussions will be preserved. If you continue to put forward the same argument again (as if it has not been addressed), I may make some conclusion that I may share with admins. Paul Siebert (talk) 16:30, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

AfD Header

While this AfD has not yet been formally closed, it is locked for editing. The AfD header invites people to "share (their) thoughts on the matter at this article's deletion discussion page." As this is not possible, should the header be removed? schetm (talk) 05:18, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Perhaps the link could be piped to the AfD talk page? This is really an edge case, not a problem in 99% of AfDs. I don't think removing the header is the right move, considering it hasn't been decided yet. BSMRD (talk) 05:50, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
It's possible. The AfD has a talkpage. GoodDay (talk) 06:11, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Russian philosopher Karl Marx

This made my day. Paul Siebert (talk) 16:37, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Doh! AndyTheGrump (talk) 16:39, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
LMAO. X-Editor (talk) 21:00, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

FAQ Q1

How should Q1 of the FAQ be rephrased, now that most recent consensus is no longer to keep? I was going to just rewrite it myself, but figured seeking community input first would be for the best. BSMRD (talk) 18:44, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

What revised text were you proposing? AndyTheGrump (talk) 18:52, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Something simple to the effect of:
A1: According to a weak consensus of Misplaced Pages editors, the topic is found in reliable secondary sources and meets Misplaced Pages policy requirements. This consensus was established by two deletion discussions in 2010
A part of me feels uncomfortable saying there is any consensus on keeping the article though, considering there are double the No Consensus closes to Keep closes. BSMRD (talk) 18:57, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
We can't say that there is currently 'a week consensus' for the article. That isn't what the AfD close says. it says no consensus. All we can really say is that we have repeatedly debated the subject, and have been unable to resolve the matter. And that per policy, 'no consensus' articles are kept, until a firm decision is made one way or another. AndyTheGrump (talk) 19:19, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, in light of the last AfD, there only legitimate answer is "Because so far there was no consensus to delete it". I suggest to remove A1 altogether, because there is no consensus answer to this question. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:35, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
I think keeping the question is helpful, as it is obviously a topic which is regularly brought up - as evidenced by the AfD. It is also good context for editors wishing to edit the article. They can read previous discussions, or at the very least see that this is a controversial article. Until the DR is closed it could read something like 'This article was considered for deletion in November 2021 with no consensus achieved. The article is currently the subject of a DR that will determine its future'.
Having said that, I am not completely against the idea of removing the question if we can't find a decent solution. Vanteloop (talk) 20:01, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Sorry, but the DR isn't going to 'determine' anything. Per Misplaced Pages policy, it can't. DR is a mediation process between individuals, and nothing decided there is in any way binding on anyone else. If positive proposals result from the DR, they can of course be considered, but participants in that particular discussion have no more authority than anyone else. AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:07, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Fair point, the RfCs that spin out of that will be semi-binding if they can achieve consensus. But as I said I have no problem deleting it if needs be. Vanteloop (talk) 20:20, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

The question should obviously be deleted. Even the panel’s “ruling” more or less accepted that the article exists, at least partially, because some of the best-funded hard-right media organisations in the world have decreed that it should never be deleted. That’s a farcical situation, but at least we should be honest about it. DublinDilettante (talk) 22:50, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

"No consensus" and preliminary conclusions

Here is my summary of the recent AfD.

  • The AfD text was very poorly written.
  • The discussion has drawn attention of many new users, who may join the work on this article and improve it.
  • The verdict is "No consensus", which is not an endorsement of the current article's version by a community. That means this version cannot be seen as a stable one.
  • The summary of the article's problems made by the panes was accurate. It says:
"To the extent there were substantive attempts to engage between the two sides, the discussion centered on whether the references given in support of the article actually represented a significant, mainstream view in reliable sources, or were 'cherry-picked' examples from a non-significant, 'fringe' minority. A subsidiary debate concerned whether the sources presented were correctly interpreted. In our analysis, these questions represent the core of the dispute, and are critical to deciding whether the article should be deleted. Unfortunately, we can find no consensus on them, and consider it unlikely that further discussion in this forum will produce one.

In connection to that, I am going to focus exclusively on those two issues, which I propose to fix. If that will not be done in one-two years, I am going to write a good AfD, which will correctly formulate all core problems and demonstrate its fundamental incompatibility with article's existence. As this AfD demonstrated, admin's panel will not count votes, so, if the article will not be fixed, the outcome of a well written AfD will easy to predict. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:05, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

@Paul Siebert: Even if there is a well-written AfD in the future, I fail to see how that would stop the same disagreement and lack of consensus that plagued the last deletion discussion. I don't think we will ever be able to get rid of this article, not that I want it to be deleted since I voted Strong Keep in the last discussion. X-Editor (talk) 20:32, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
The panel did not make a summary of the article's problems as Paul suggests, they made a summary on what the discussion was centred on. --Nug (talk) 21:28, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
The media organizations that reported the deletion discussion were Fox News, Not the Bee, Media Research Center, Breitbart News and the Telegraph. Since those sources tend to attract both misinformed and far right readers (there's a strong overlap there), that no doubt had an influence on the outcome. TFD (talk) 21:31, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
@The Four Deuces: Yet another reason why there should not be a future deletion discussion anytime soon. It will inevitably be canvassed by these kinds of media organizations which will poison the well, or in this case, Misplaced Pages. X-Editor (talk) 21:45, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
I’m not seeing your logic here. Because dishonest extreme right-wing media organisations will distort the process by canvassing for the article to be kept, the article should be kept? If you have any regard for the integrity of Misplaced Pages, that’s an argument for deleting the article outright, not for retaining it! Bizarre reasoning. DublinDilettante (talk) 22:42, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
I hardly think that The Daily Telegraph is "far right". Even if half the keep !votes were discarded as "canvassed", there are still double the keeps compared to deletes, so I think this canvassing issue is somewhat overblown. --Nug (talk) 22:48, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
That you think an arbitrary hypothetical figure would be higher than another arbitrary hypothetical figure is not an argument for anything, but it’s pretty much been the standard of this debate, unfortunately. DublinDilettante (talk) 23:02, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug, that's the second time today you misrepresented someone who used the term far right, the other being at 02:56, 1 December 2021. IIRC you once accused me of calling you far right. The term seems to hit a raw nerve in you. FYI I did not say that the Telegraph is far right, which should be obvious to you, but that they attract far right readers. Here for example is a link to a picture of Steve Bannon, who has been described as far right, reading the Telegraph. Similarly, I have never called Fox News far right, but note that it is the go to network for U.S. right-wing extremists. Incidentally, the only other encyclopedia I could find with an article with this name was Metapedia. TFD (talk) 23:21, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
I'd think that Newsmax might be the go-to network for those who are really on the fringe right, rather than Fox News... — Mhawk10 (talk) 09:08, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
@DublinDilettante: What I'm saying is that it is impossible to have an honest deletion discussion because outside right-wing canvassers will ruin any future deletion discussions. X-Editor (talk) 23:15, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Which is functionally the same thing as giving right-wing canvassers a veto over the content of Misplaced Pages. DublinDilettante (talk) 23:28, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Absolutely no. This AfD demonstrated that admins do not count votes. If they did, the outcome would be "Keep". "No consensus" means the article barely survived deletion, and that "barely" is because the AfD text was very poorly written. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:34, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Alternatively it means that admins had no way of discerning consensus because of the disruptive canvassing. There's a big difference between a discussion that experiences canvassing disruption that makes things more uncertain and one that's really 50-50 either way without any disruption. To say that it barely survived deletion is the wrong conclusion in this case. — Mhawk10 (talk) 09:08, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
The AfD said: "Even before examining the strength of arguments, and allowing for canvassing, this 4:1 ratio strongly suggests that there is no consensus to delete the article." Therefore, canvassing indeed played a big role in the result to not delete the article, so while barely survived deletion may still be a far stretch, I think Siebert still got the AfD's conclusion mostly right and is closer to reality than saying admins had no way of discerning consensus because of the disruptive canvassing — the fact they counted strength of arguments and not votes shows that they clearly had way of discerning consensus, but due to canvassing and a 4–1 ratio they could not establish that there was consensus to delete. Davide King (talk) 00:30, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@X-Editor: I can explain. AfD revealed all possible arguments in support of "keep", and they were not impressive. If I were an Wiki-LZW, I would archive them into just few sentences that express just a couple of thoughts. As we all know, LZW is a good measure of redundancy: if some massage significantly shrinks upon archivation, it is redundant. All "keep" votes shrinks into just a few, and I know how to address them. A new AfD will contain their refutation, and I have a strong doubt the "keep" proponents will be able to properly respond. The 4th AfD demonstrated that admins do not just count !votes, and that means a new AfD may have serious chances for success. That is not my goal, but we all should keep that in mind. And, since the admins havev demonstrated that they do not count !votes, the only problem with canvassing is that they put an additional psychological pressure on admins. Personally, I was satisfied to see that every canvassed voter just repeated the same superficial arguments.
@Nug: The panel summarized the votes, and the votes described all serious problems of this article. Therefore, the panel de facto summarized the problems that may lead to potential deletion of this article in future. If we don't want this article to be deleted, we must fix them.
@The Four Deuces: That far right (or rightist) mass media criticized this deletion does not mean the article is leftist. It means it is rightist. And our goal is to restore the balance. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:11, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
This comment illustrates what hasn't been addressed about the whole AFD process. If you go through the discussion, it's all but impossible to come to the conclusion that several of the editors most engaged in the discussion view the article as an ideological battleground, which directly conflicts with the goal of providing neutral, informative content. In particular, I would ask those reading this if the following statement tracks: "That far right (or rightist) mass media criticized this deletion does not mean the article is leftist. It means it is rightist." Paul Siebert, can you explain how you came to this conclusion? AShalhoub (talk) 09:42, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
I cannot speak for Paul Siebert, so I ping them, but the fact that coverage came from right-leaning sources, most of them either unreliable or far right, shows that this topic is indeed a rightist one rather than mainstream scholarly discourse,1 and that if there is a battleground, it does not come from us or from the Left. If it truly was a mainstream scholarly discourse, as this article attempts to make it out to be, surely mainstream scholars of Communism would have expressed their thoughts and mainstream press would have reported it; even The Telegraph, the only reliable source to cover the story, cherry picked the opinion of a single 19th-century France specialist, who engaged in Holocaust trivialization and slippery slope that Misplaced Pages is going to delete genocides, when they could have asked prominent mainstreams scholars of Communism (Ellman, Getty, Fitzpatrick, Kotkin, Snyder, Suny, Wheatcroft) what they really thought, and chose Clifford May, of all people, saying that over 100 million have died under Communism, a claim not even supported by Courtois — it further proves mine and Siebert's point.
Here's the issue with that logic. This article is a long list of atrocities that everyone agrees took place. If it could be shown that the push for article deletion was promoted in leftist media, or that the people in support of deleting were leftist, would that prove that the atrocities were leftist atrocities? AShalhoub (talk) 08:32, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Notes
1. Again, if it is not a mainstream scholarly discourse and/or does not even represent a majority view, then what is the point and why are we discussing it in the first place without secondary/tertiary coverage? We cannot write a NPOV article from the POV of a minority view and without tertiary sources that help us establish weight. Davide King (talk) 00:24, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I am satisfied by the panel's closure, and I hope that now we will no longer be dismissed — there is no longer any consensus, and that is now 4–2. Personally, I think AfDs should be restructured because No consensus should not by default result in Keep — the onus should always be on those making a positive claim, not asking us to prove a negative. Because I simply see no way this article is going to be 'deleted' (content certainly will not, nor it should be, as it is already covered elsewhere and can be easily moved, and Siebert, The Four Deuces, and I have proposed the same topic but with a totally different and NPOV structure) other than a 'supervote', and I understand why no admin would want to take the burden considering the right-wing media shitstorm to follow. There are always going to be more users that vote to 'Keep' simply because the events indeed happened and are notable on their own, which add to those who think it meets notability as a grouping and has no significant NPOV/SYNTH/WEIGHT issues. Therefore, the only way I can see this article being deleted is through repeated 'No consensus', and that if we cannot achieve consensus in the next one, two years after over a decade by now, we should restart all over, which is not an outright deletion either, so it could be seen as a compromise. I agree that sources must be analyzed and scrutinized, and I hope that Siebert can do that at DRN — their source analysis has been published in an academic journal and they know better than me. Davide King (talk) 22:01, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Perhaps that should have been considered as one more reason to delete? The fact that this has attracted right-wing media, and apart from The Telegraph, most of it either unreliable or far right, should have showed that this article represents a very specific and minority POV view of Communism that not even Conquest made
  • (at least in his academic published works that I have read — e.g. Conquest did not write about mass killings under Communist regimes, he wrote about the Red Terror, the Holodomor, and the Great Purge in the Soviet Union. He treated these as separate subjects and did not develop a theory of mass killings under Communist regimes)
  • and that if it truly was a majority or even significant minority view that is part of mainstream scholarly discourse, surely a majority of academics and specialists, not a single historian whose main speciality is 19th-century France and who may have engaged in Holocaust obfuscation and slippery slope for saying we are going to delete the Holocaust next (which shows how laymen, no matter how educated, have not the faintest idea of how Misplaced Pages works), and non-rightist mainstream press, would have come out. Or are they all Communist puppets for not covering it? Certainly this means we are not crazy or Communist apologists, and any such false accuses should be seen as personal attacks.
Certainly it is also going to be a problem if the article is nominated again in the next years if we have failed to fix such issues, and I do not think there will ever be consensus for 'Delete' unless a panel of admins decide to summarize the dispute as unfixable, with no consensus, and that we should either start all over or give up trying until perhaps scholarly sources that treat it is a majority, mainstream scholarly discourse topic (again, what topic and context though? 20th century? Genocide? Human rights?) come out en masse. Davide King (talk) 00:34, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
The fact that right-leaning media report on a topic that right-leaning people are likely to click on doesn't really seem like as one more reason to delete, any more than left-leaning media reporting widely on a topic is a reason to delete. The fact that a Misplaced Pages article deletion discussion got media coverage while it was going on from a quality press outlet probably indicates that there's something that's a bit newsworthy and surprising about the fact that there was even a proposal to delete the article. — Mhawk10 (talk) 09:12, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Which of the far-right media outlets which manipulated this debate is a "quality press outlet?" I've really got to hear this...DublinDilettante (talk) 01:40, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I should have made it clear that it was not to be taken literally, it was more of an observation that I still maintain. The fact that this got media coverage by largely right-leaning and unreliable sources should be telling that this topic reflects a rightist POV and popular press rather than majority scholarly discourse. I fail to see how a single, mainstream right-leaning paper (The Telegraph, which we describe as "generally reliable" but also say that "ome editors believe that The Daily Telegraph is biased or opinionated for politics", which showed in their coverage) gave coverage to it "indicates that there's something that's a bit newsworthy and surprising about the fact that there was even a proposal to delete the article." You may have had a point if it was also reported by other mainstream papers. That was my point, which I do not think you have rebuked.
P.S. As for Fox News and the radical right, check Google Scholar, which supports what The Four Deuces said, namely that it is not far right but it has certainly attracted the radical right. Davide King (talk) 10:40, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
The issue is that the coverage in these publications encouraged the participation in the AfD of a lot of uninformed extremists, which affected the outcome.
Fox News averages 2.5 million viewers. 18% of Fox News viewers believe the media and government are "controlled by a group of Satan-worshipping pedophiles." That means the Fox News story reached 450,000 viewers . The argument that because most Fox News viewers are not far right, that they did not reach any members of the far right because none of them watch Fox News is bogus. I understand that some editors may have difficulty with basic arithmatic (apparently Courtois does too.) Anyway, Fox News and The Telegraph were not the only media that have far right fans. Not the Bee, Media Research Center and Breitbart News also have far right fans.
TFD (talk) 02:02, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Considering that the AfD said: "Even before examining the strength of arguments, and allowing for canvassing, this 4:1 ratio strongly suggests that there is no consensus to delete the article." Therefore, canvassing indeed played a big role in the result to not delete the article,1 and this article is never going to be deleted if we consider a ratio to be reflective of consensus on whether to delete the article because there are always going to more users that would !keep — this is a serious problem because it is going to happen again if we renominate it after attempts to fix it have failed, hence why I said the only way this article is going to be deleted is through a panel's decision and/or admins consider it that if there is no consensus to keep the article again, and we have indeed tried to fix the issues, we should restart all over — either through deletion and/or reduction to stub with name change.
Notes
1. The fact that it did not result in 'Keep' either shows that our arguments were either stronger, or strong enough to not consider it to be consensus to keep the article, so I consider that as a win — it is 4–2 now. Davide King (talk) 11:42, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Which quality press outlet? Levivich 02:09, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
I assume they meant The Telegraph but even then their bias showed, e.g. mentioning Clifford May. Davide King (talk) 11:42, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Indeed, I meant The Telegraph, which is indeed a quality press outlet. — Mhawk10 (talk) 01:57, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Here's another article in a right-wing source: "Misplaced Pages continues to rewrite history, this time prepares to delete page on mass killings under communist regimes: Here are the reasons they gave" (Opindia, Nov. 28) This source is right-wing and has routinely published fabricated stories, according to their Misplaced Pages article. I cannot provide a link because the site is blacklisted. TFD (talk) 18:02, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Terminology from the sandbox

The terms section written on the sandbox seems ready to replace the terms section of this article. However, considering that it is a high trafic page, I would like to reach a consensus before applying the change. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 22:39, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

This is a really old version of the article that hasn't been substantially edited for a long time. Feel free to blow it away and write something else. --Nug (talk) 22:42, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Some of the grammar needs be imoproved. Other than that, looks good to me. XavierItzm (talk) 04:59, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Prior to the changes just made by XavierItzm, substantial editing to the sandbox ceased in 2013, and the sandbox seems to have been almost entirely forgotten. It would be grossly inappropriate to add material in such a manner without clear prior consensus, even if we weren't already discussing whether we need a section on 'terms' at all. AndyTheGrump (talk) 14:58, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
WP:NODEADLINE. Arguments regarding date of contribution hold limited weight. Cheerio, XavierItzm (talk) 16:25, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

If the sandbox section is being proposed, and it is not obvious, launch an RfC and see what the community thinks about the new text. That seems to be the best way forward on heavily-contentious pages. — Mhawk10 (talk) 16:40, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

@New and old participants&DRN

I would love to resume my participation on the DRN, but I am a little bit concerned that the DRN may be seen by someone as insufficiently representative. Is anybody here who is skeptical about it (in terms of representation etc)? If yes,what solution can you propose? Paul Siebert (talk) 23:22, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Alternative wording for FAQ Q1

This is, I think, more than fair, given the acknowledged inadequacy of the "keep by default" convention in the case of the AfD debate we've just had.

The article exists because the most recent proposal to delete it resulted in no consensus to either keep or delete the article. In accordance with Misplaced Pages’s operative procedures as of December 2021, this lack of consensus to either keep or delete the article results in the article being retained.

Furthermore, it has been acknowledged that right-wing media organisations conducted significant canvassing in favour of the article’s retention, and that such canvassing is likely to be repeated upon any subsequent proposal to delete the aritcle. The extent to which this consideration should be permitted to influence the article’s content (or existence) is still being debated.

While many of the claims put forward in the article are adequately sourced as per Misplaced Pages guidelines, the accuracy and reliability of these sources remain heavily disputed.

DublinDilettante (talk) 23:24, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

I think that is a fair summary, though I am not sure the accuracy and reliability of these sources remain heavily disputed is correct — what we dispute is that they do not represent a majority, mainstream view (Courtois, Rummel, and genocide scholars are either controversial or minority), and that sources that are claimed to support the grouping as a separate category is likewise controversial and/or in several cases not true, e.g. Fein has a chapter about Soviet and Communist genocide but she does not treat this as a separate category, and most academic books about the subject are about mass killings in general, which is how the topic is discussed, not as we do.
This is also because we still do not agree on the main topic and its structure — is it a mere list of Communist mass killings, in which case it clearly violates our policies because only Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot's regimes engaged in the most commonly accepted academic definition of mass killing (50,000 within five years)? Is it about a link between communism and mass killings, in which case it still has problems because the discussion of the events only includes the minority views of those who may support the link? Is it about both, in which case there may be serious NPOV/SYNTH issues that have not been solved? Is it about a Communist death toll or literally any death, excess death, excess mortality, and mass deaths, under Communist regimes, and mass killings is used in this generic sense, in which case it contradicts Mass killing and still has the same problems?
By the way, "communist death toll" on Google Scholars results show either Rummel, mentions of The Black Book of Communism, or unrelated results (hell, at least one source mentions a post-Communist death toll!), which is yet another proof that body-counting is not a majority mainstream scholarly discourse and reflects a minority with a specific POV, and despite this article acting as a citogenesis for over a decade by now, it has not entered mainstream scholarly discourse as a majority view or separate subject.
Davide King (talk) 23:59, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
I'd personally leave out the second and third paragraph. They don't seem to be a direct answer to the FAQ. And, such canvassing is likely to be repeated upon any subsequent proposal to delete... seems honestly to be WP:CRYSTAL. — Mhawk10 (talk) 07:41, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
The first paragraph - or something like it, I think the wording could be improved - is all that is needed. AndyTheGrump (talk) 12:22, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I think the first paragraph alone is a good suggestion. It presents the findings of the panel in a straightforward and neutral way. That is all that is needed Vanteloop (talk) 12:56, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Terminology

I invite everybody to present arguments in a support of this section. Concretely, I would like to know an answer to the questions:

  • What is the need to explain the terms "Genocide" etc in this article?

I am asking because I see no logic in explaining broad and general terms in a more special and narrow article. Thus, the terms Plank constant, Momentum, uncertainty, coordinate are quite relevant to the Uncertainty principle article, and are being widely used in it. However, that article has no "Terminology" section that describes those terms, for a blue link system makes it redundant. In addition, most terms mentioned in the "Terminology" section are not used in the article at all.

Furthermore, some "terms" are not terms at all. Thus, the "term" red holocaust has no definition (if someone knows it, feel free to post it here). In contrast, it is ambiguous (a German book with this title is devoted exclusively to criticism of the Black Book; the same term is being used by other authors for the Holocaust obfuscation).

Another term, "repressions" has simultaneously much more narrow and more broad meaning, because it describes non-lethal victims, but it was applied to Stalinism only.

In summary, this section is misleading, useless, and it created a false impression that majority of scholars really try to propose some specific terminology for mass killings specifically in Communist states.

The only exception may be Mann's neologism "classicide", but, ironically, he proposed it in the book about a linkage between Democracy and mass killings.

In summary, I propose to delete this section. Deletion of this section will not lead to a loss of any valuable information from Misplaced Pages, for similar section exists in the Mass killing article, of which this one is a daughter article. The deletion will be a big step towards neutrality of this article.

Any objections? Paul Siebert (talk) 00:09, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Yes, I object. The Mass killing article, which was recently expanded into an article in 2018 has serious underlaying POV issues. Let's discuss this in the DR process. --Nug (talk) 00:21, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I've got to agree that this section seems questionable. An attempt to gather together multiple sources describing several seemingly different concepts, in order perhaps to construct a synthesis around the idea that they are all synonyms for 'mass killing'. Some may be, but if they are, in the context of the specific subject of this article ('communist regimes'), they don't need to be defined, merely cited in any appropriate section for material they directly support. As for discussing it 'in the DR process', feel free to do so if you like, but meanwhile the rest of us (those not participating in DR) will continue the process of trying to resolve the obvious issues this article has. AndyTheGrump (talk) 00:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Ironically, I think that Mass killing was the NPOV article of Mass killings under communist regimes, e.g. it reflects majority of sources which discuss the topic in general and do not make such grouping and/or treat it as a separate category, so MKuCR is a content POV fork of Mass killing — that you think the reverse is true is certainly interesting but also doubtful. I agree to discuss it at the DR process, though you could have replied us back at Talk:Mass killing. Davide King (talk) 00:33, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I don't have a feeling all participant of this talk page discussion are interested in that DRN, and it is not binding. That is why I want to see an opinion of a broader audience. What kind of POV issues are you talking into account? What concrete POV is overrepresented or underrepresented there?
In addition, we are talking about this article, and you failed to provide any argument in support of this section. Please, do it, otherwise I delete it. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:41, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: I see no fresh comments from you. If you are still objecting, I don't mind to start the DRN. If you are still insisting on a mediated discussion, please, let me know. However, I don't see why cannot we try to resolve the dispute here. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:26, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
One more point. This section conflates legal terms (genocide and crime against humanity) with scholarly terms. The former belong to a totally different section. All of that is deeply misleading, confusing, and aims to push one specific POV. That is an additional argument for deletion. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:45, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I think the difference in regard to the Uncertainty principle article is that the vast majority of scholars use substantially identical definitions for those terms, which isn't the case in this area.
My personal opinion is that the section is useful to introduce the reader to these terms - and importantly to the idea that different scholars approach the concept in different ways. However I do think for example Professor Klas-Göran Karlsson uses crimes against humanity, which includes "the direct mass killings of politically undesirable elements, as well as forced deportations and forced labour." Karlsson acknowledges that the term may be misleading in the sense that the regimes targeted groups of their own citizens, but he considers it useful as a broad legal term which emphasizes attacks on civilian populations and because the offenses demean humanity as a whole. Historian Jacques Sémelin and Professor Michael Mann believe that crime against humanity is more appropriate than genocide or politicide when speaking of violence by communist regimes. See also: Crimes against humanity under communist regimes. is overly-long for a definition and that the section should be cut down. Vanteloop (talk) 01:27, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Why it is useful in this concrete article? Most of those terms are not used in the article at all, and, importantly, they are not used by 99% of country experts. "Genocide" and "Crimes against humanity" are not scholarly terms, they are legal terms, and they should be discussed in other sections.--Paul Siebert (talk) 04:45, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Usually, when we need to introduce a reader to the term "democide", we just used brackets like this: "Democide". That was invented specially for that case. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:47, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Oppose proposed deletion. A list of terms is useful. If you feel the "Genocide" item can be trimmed down, boldly go ahead. Thanks, XavierItzm (talk) 05:02, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
    @XavierItzm: If you believe it is useful, please, provide your rationale. In particular, please, explain how this list helps understand other sections if most "terms" listed there are not mentioned at all? And, please, demonstrate what is a purpose of usage of such terms? Why some many terms were proposed? If you provide no answer, your post is just a !vote, which is not a part of a consensus building process. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:24, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
As a general rule, explanations of terms are extremely useful to define how certain terms, which may be controversial, are used in an article. Feel free to boldly remove any terms which are not used in the article, of course. Posts not in agreement with such generally self-evident principles of building an encyclopaedia may perhaps not be considered part of an encyclopaedic process. XavierItzm (talk) 16:16, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
@XavierItzm: What is the need to explain a term if a simple blue link automatically directs a reader to the article that explains it in details? In reality, an overwhelming majority of scholars and other authors absolute;y do not care about a specific terminology for the topic. The whole story is aimed just to mislead a reader and create an impression that they do.
In reality:
  • "Genocide" (and "Crimes against humanity") is a legal term, and its discussion is more relevant to the "Legal status ..." section. In particular, it should be explained in a context of a discussion of some concrete case, in particular, Cambodian genocide.
  • "Mass killings" is a Valentino's term proposed as an umbrella to discuss all XX century coercive deaths inflicted by governments and paramilitary organizations. It was proposed as a category for statistical analysis and general theorizing, and it has no special implication to Communism
  • "Politicide" is the same type terms, but it includes a subset of mass killings.
  • "Democide" is a Rummel's concept that was discussed in details in another article. For all three cases, a blue link to relevant articles is quite sufficient.
  • "Red Holocaust" is not a term at all.
  • "Repressions" are used by the scholars who study USSR, and they do not imply any broader generalization. Wheatcroft's opinion was directly misinterpreted here.
In summary, all those terms must be either moved to another section ("Legal status ..."), where the discussion of what mass killings are considered genocide and why, and what are not is quite relevant, or deleted completely as useless and confusing.
However, if there is a disagreement about that, I propose to make that a subject of the first new DRN. Does anybody wants to participate? @Robert McClenon: is a brilliant mediator, and I am sure discussion under his supervision will lead to some consensus. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:25, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert, you say "an overwhelming majority of scholars and other authors absolute;y do not care about a specific terminology for the topic". This is untrue. As you know, scholars do spill a lot of ink using and defining the highly specific terms they have chosen to use to cover this topic. You yourself mention Valentino and Wheatcroft; your internal inconsistency here is glaring. This is so blindingly obvious, I won't even bother citing further sources.XavierItzm (talk) 16:41, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@XavierItzm: Can you please answer two questions:
1. What is the main reason why Valentino introduced his term "Mass killing"?
2. What exactly Wheatcroft writes about the term "Repressions", and in which context he is using it?
In general, I think we definitely need a well organized and mediated discussion. I propose DRN. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:24, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert, it is interesting that 'Terminology' pushed the view of Soviet machination of opposition to inclusion of political genocide, when even Genocide tells a different story, and use the more cautious may wording, at 'International law.' Davide King (talk) 04:37, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
This section hardly serves the reader in understanding the further content in the article. It looks more like an artifact of the talk page disputes rather than a genuine attempt to aid the reader. Besides the mentioned reasons for removing (which are not being addressed) it's just plain poor writing. fiveby(zero) 14:30, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Ok, I saw no reasonable arguments in support for keeping this section. In next few days, I am going to move "Genocide" and "Crimes against humanity" to the "Legal status ..." section, where this content is quite relevant, and to remove general terms, neologisms, non-terms, and country-specific terms. That will lead to a complete deletion of the section, which will be an important step that will make the article more neutral. If someone has reasonable arguments against this step, please, present them here. If someone plans to resits to that, please, identify yourself, and we will start a DRN right now. --Paul Siebert (talk) 06:07, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Oppose removal User:XavierItzm , User:Nug, and myself have all disagreed with this proposal. There is clearly no consensus. Sections of the article dont get removed if Paul isn't satisfied. They get removed according to consensus. To remove this section without further discussion leading to consensus would be a clear act of bad faith. Filibustering to the point of exhaustion does not mean you have 'won' Vanteloop (talk) 10:39, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
It is not sufficient to disagree, you need to make a rational analysis based on our policies and guidelines, and explain why we are wrong — consensus is based on respect for our policies and guidelines, not votes. All the terms are already linked in the lead and are blue, so what does it add? It would have made sense if the terminology was actually widespread used, or limited to Communist mass killings, but it is not — except perhaps for classicide. Davide King (talk) 11:24, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
...and the side that argues for mass deletion has not yet made arguments sufficient to generate a consensus for mass deletion of a section. Therefore, any hypothetical such mass deletion of a section would be subject to review and potential revert due to lack of TP consensus.XavierItzm (talk) 16:48, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Religious experience has a section called "definitions" but it's not a glossary, it's a comparison of various author's definitions. Have you actually read the section we're discussing? That's exactly what it does.

glossary is a section of an work that defines terms used in the work to help the readers' understanding of the work. That is exactly what Ethics does in its section "Defining ethics". Simply saying Ethics doesn't have a glossary. doesn't make it true. The ironic thing is that I agree the section needs to be improved considerably - but this idea that you can't define terms when discussing a contentious area in which there is significant disagreement between authors barely merits discussion. Why dont we work to formulate a RfC that can be used to improve the section? Vanteloop (talk) 18:14, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

  • It seems we need a mediated discussion, because a further continuation of the discussion in this vein will hardly lead us to anything reasonable. I asked Robert if he thinks it makes sense to start the DRN process about that issue.--Paul Siebert (talk) 18:06, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    I agree approaching this in a different way could be useful, whether thats by agreeing a RfC or through some mediated discussion. I do believe there is a chance of consensus to improve this section - including signficantly changing it where necessary. I don't think that the solution is to remove it entirely, or to declare that those in opposition to deletion haven't satisifed some criteria so that means it will be done regardless of consensus, but don't mistake opposition to those things as a wholesale endoresement of the section as is. The reason I suggest we work to create a RfC is that other parts of WP are clearly wary of being dragged into discussion, so showing that disagreeing parties have agreed that some area needs improvement, and at least agreed on some of the possible ways forward (even if not endorsing them) they might be convinced that contributing will be worthwhile Vanteloop (talk) 18:20, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    I explicitly object to RfC. That is not a substitute for a normal discussion. That is a misuse of the procedure, because Editors are normally expected to make a reasonable attempt at resolving their issues before seeking help from others. I see no evidences that you made any reasonable attempt to resolve this dispute. In that situation, resorting to de facto !vote would be a misuse of the RfC procedure.--Paul Siebert (talk) 18:30, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    Just a couple of notes 1) RfC isn't a vote. 2)I see no evidences that you made any reasonable attempt to resolve this dispute I believe you are making the same mistake as when you took the other editor to WP:ANI for creating a RfC (for which you were rebuked) in that you think "reasonable attempt" means satisfying you personally. That being said if there are objections to even creating an RfC then that undermines my reasons for suggesting it. Vanteloop (talk) 18:36, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    1} Whereas RfC is formally not a vote, it is de facto a vote: outside users come, cast their ballot ("Support"/"Do not support"), and most of them disappear. There is usually no multi-round discussion, and, importantly, people change their opinion (vote) very rarely during RfCs. Therefore, RfC is a tool to figure out people's opinion, but it is not a tool to reach some consensus.
    2) I didn't take anyone to RfC, I called no names, I just wanted this RfC to be speedy closed, because, in my opinion, it is an attempt to bring democracy where it is not supposed to be.
    I hope you will accept my invitation to join the DRN, and I hope our discussion will be productive.
    Sincerely, Paul Siebert (talk) 18:47, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    Having looked at WP:DRNMKUCR I would be hesitant in using that as a method of moving forward on this. That DR has been open for more than 28 days and 14 rounds and what has actually been achieved? If editors go into a similar situation and after 3 months come out with a compromise we have already seen editors express that they dont think decisions made through that process carry any more weight than on the talk page. Vanteloop (talk) 18:45, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    It was devoted to a very global topic. In contrast, the DRN that I propose is much more narrow: it discusses just one section. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:49, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

I checked Wheatcroft (1996), the source cited in this section, and the author says:

"The events we are discussing are sometimes referred to as 'the terror', 'the purges', repression, 'the holocaust', genocide and mass killings. The most neutral of these terms are repression and mass killings. 'Repression' is the broader concept, and although in common Russian usage will certainly include mass killings,4 in other languages and in reference to Hitler's Germany would not normally be assumed to cover mass killings. This is the main reason for the rather clumsy title of this article. The use of the word repression alone would imply that the events in the different countries at different times were uniform and in some aggregate sense comparable. I think that this would be mistaken. "

Note, the author discuss Stalin's USSR and Nazi Germany, and he explicitly objects to any attempt to describe the events as uniform and comparable in some aggregate terms. This source was directly misinterpreted in the MkuCR article, and I remove it.--Paul Siebert (talk) 20:22, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

I checked through the source as well and I agree that Wheatcroft is not using the term 'repression' to refer to subject of this article, you were correct to remove it in my opinion Vanteloop (talk) 21:18, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I moved "Genocide" into the "Legal status" section. There is no need to mix legal terms with scholarly terms. Actually, a discussion of "genocide" in a context of MKuCR should focus on one question: why this term is generally NOT applicable to MKuCR. In reality, just few events (mostly Cambodian genocide) was recognized as such by majority of sources.
I removed "Crimes against humanity", because this term is much broader, and it includes non-lethal actions. And, similar to "Genocide", it is not a scholarly term. It is not used in the article except the "Legal status" section. A blue link is quite sufficient.
I am going to remove "Democide", because that is just a statistical category: that is literally a criterion for collection of data into the Rummel's database. It is equally applicable to all deaths that occurred as an act of omission or commission and perpetrated by a state against its citizen. There is nothing specific in application of this term to Communist mass killings.
I also plan to remove "Red Holocaust" as useless (it explains nothing, is not used in this article, and it is highly provocative).
If somebody disagrees, or if my edits will be reverting, I propose to continue at DRN. If you believe this issue is relatively minor, and there is no need to involve Robert McClenon, let's resolve all possible disagreement here, in this section.--Paul Siebert (talk) 03:06, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • In general, the whole "Terminology" section looks like a collection of individual examples of usage of some epithets by some authors. That looks more like trivia: for example, does a reader really need to know that some author called some mass killing "the Holocaust"? How does it help a reader to understand the rest of the article? All of that is especially ridiculous keeping in mind that an overwhelming majority of authors do not use those terms at all, or apply them to "communist mass killings" in the same manner as they apply them to other mass killings. Thus, Barbara Harff applies "genocide" to Cambodia and Indonesia, and there is nothing in her usage of this term that needs a separate explanation.
Furthermore, can anybody explain me a reason for invention of the neologism "classicide"? Actually, I know the answer, because I read Mann (and that is why I understand that text is irrelevant to the article, and I am going to remove it). However, I am wondering if those who objected to its removal realise the actual context. --Paul Siebert (talk) 03:48, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I hoping the answer is in the article: classicide. ~ cygnis insignis 03:59, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
No. That is not an answer. How Mann itself explained the need to introduce the term "classicide", and why it was introduced? Again, I know the answer, but I would like some proponent of this term to explain that. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:13, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

RFC on Terminology Section

User:Vanteloop has stated that they are interested in an RFC on the Terminology section. The development of the RFC can be done here (the article talk page), although it is "noisy", or in some quieter corner, such as the DRNMKUCR subpage. The RFC will run on this article talk page when it is ready to run. I will add User:Vanteloop to the list of participants in the DRN subpage, but the list is unimportant because all editors are welcome to participate as long as they agree to moderation. Alternatively, if User:Vanteloop wants to moderate the development of an RFC, I will create another subpage where they can moderate. Where do we want to discuss the Terminology, with the objective of developing another RFC? Robert McClenon (talk) 16:23, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

In short, yes I am interested for the rationale I gave above. If you are willing I would prefer you to moderate. You are vastly more experienced than me and I believe I am too involved in the discussion. In regards to where to have the discussion I have no strong preference. I want to work with as many editors as possible to create a RfC that fairly represents the disagreements and proposed solutions of this section - I honestly believe this is possible. My only concern is if other editors refuse to even entertain the idea of a RfC and then don't accept the outcome. In that case we have wasted everyones time. Finally, I just want to note I am also willing to work in whatever way on other topics, not just the 'terminology' section. Whatever will do the most to actually achieve some meaningful progress. Vanteloop (talk) 16:50, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I strongly object to this RfC. First, I have no idea how the question can be formulated. Any short question would be totally misleading, and it is tantamount to manipulation. We need not an RfC, but a discussion. Before starting an RfC, editors are normally expected to make a reasonable attempt at resolving their issues. Have those reasonable attempts been made? I saw no such attempts. In that situation, any discussion of an RfC can hardly be seen as a demonstration of genuine efforts to resolve the dispute.
Another reason why this RfC is a bad idea is that we still have no agreement on the article's topic. We must decide what this article is about, and our answers to more local questions will depend on the answer to that (main) question. The text of the prospective RfC about this section strongly depend on whether the community votes for A or for B. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:50, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
It's up to Vanteloop. GoodDay (talk) 18:03, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Personal attacks

I remind all participants to stay polite and assume good faith. This edit summary is a clear and unprovoked personal attack. I removed this text, and supplemented it with a quite adequate edit summary. That was a legitimate BOLD edit, and it was aimed to initiate a discussion. I did that after I got no objections to my last arguments on the talk page. I don't need an explicit permission to make edits. If a user abstains from further participation in a discussion, that means they either accepted the arguments, or they lost interest to the discussion. Anticipating possible disagreement, I proposed a DRN, but there was no response. Accusations of bad faith without providing strong evidences is a personal attack, and it may be reported. If you believe removal of that text was unjustified, please, explain that on the talk page, otherwise, do not prevent others from editing. I am waiting for your counter-arguments, or for your agreement to participate in the DRN. --Paul Siebert (talk) 19:00, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Multiple editors already presented our counter arguments. You ignored and said you were going to delete anyway. I and two other editors explicitly stated that you should not do so as there was clearly no consensus. I also told you that to do so would be in bad faith. You then did so, as mentioned by User:‎Robert McClenon your actions are bordering on WP:CPP and without a hefty amount of good faith would be seen as disruptive. I will remind you once again of WP:FILIBUSTER which states repeatedly pushing a viewpoint with which the consensus of the community clearly does not agree, effectively preventing a policy-based resolution. Can we spend less time playing games and work on improving the article. If you continue with this behaviour it may be seen as evidence of a pattern of disruptive behaviour Vanteloop (talk) 19:17, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Furthermore please read WP:SATISFY Vanteloop (talk) 19:20, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Vanteloop: Well, let me explain you something.
  • "Yes, I object. The Mass killing article, which was recently expanded into an article in 2018 has serious underlaying POV issues. Let's discuss this in the DR process. --Nug (talk) 00:21, 2 December 2021 (UTC)" Is not a counter-argument. That is just an objection. The only positive information here is the idea to take the dispute to DRN. However, that post was made on 2 December, and Nug didn't respond to my invitation to join a DRN that I made on 03:26, 6 December 2021 (UTC). From that, I conclude they changed their mind.
  • "Oppose removal User:XavierItzm , User:Nug, and myself have all disagreed with this proposal. There is clearly no consensus. Sections of the article dont get removed if Paul isn't satisfied. They get removed according to consensus. To remove this section without further discussion leading to consensus would be a clear act of bad faith. Filibustering to the point of exhaustion does not mean you have 'won' Vanteloop (talk) 10:39, 4 December 2021 (UTC)" is not an argument at all. There is nothing to address here; all of that can be summarised as "I object"
  • "Are we going around in circles here? This was already discussed a year ago in Talk:Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes/Archive_44#Terminology_section. --Nug (talk) 16:12, 4 December 2021 (UTC)" It is not an argument either, for there may be some fresh arguments, which the user does not want to hear.
Who else objected? Meanwhile, there were some users who supported removal. I fully realise that vote count is not a good approach, but you should keep in mind that you even cannot pretend you are speaking on behalf of majority of users.
I raised a legitimate concern about this section, and I expect this my concern to be properly addressed. By the way, do you know that the process marked by addressing legitimate concerns held by editors is called "consensus building"? And your "I object" is by no means an attempt to address my legitimate concern.
I placed a DS template on your talk page, which means you have been duly warned. Any personal attack from your side may be reported now at WP:AE. You already made this attack: you accused me of filibustering, and you claimed I am "repeatedly pushing a viewpoint with which the consensus of the community clearly does not agree, effectively preventing a policy-based resolution". I have strong reasons to believe that that claim is false: first, the number of users who objected to my proposal is not bigger than the number of those who supported it, so there is no reason to speak about any consensus. Second, I repeatedly propose DRN, and I have no response. In that situation, your accusation, which lack a strong support, is an obvious personal attack. Please, remove this statement.
I am not going to participate in that discussion until the new RfC, which I am going to initiate, will lead to some concrete outcome. However, if you will make another personal attack, I'll report you.
P.S. It would be very helpful if you confirm that the edit summary, where you accused me of bad faith was your error, and you regret about that. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:13, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
User talk:Paul Siebert Be aware yoour report may WP:BOOMERANG like your previous report to ANI. I see the neutral moderator Robert McClenon has already placed a DS template on your talk page so I wont bother repeating it, but be duly warned. I also note that you are again exhibiting in the behaviour that neutral moderator Robert McClenon described as civil POV pushing, which is disruptive. If you classify all our objections as simple statements then I'm not convinced you've read the section you're talking about. Have you read WP:SATISFY as I suggested? As I have said before, please spend less time engaging in unproductive disputes and more time in helping to improve the article. With regard to this argument first, the number of users who objected to my proposal is not bigger than the number of those who supported it, so there is no reason to speak about any consensus. You should note WP:VOTE which i have tried to explain to you previously when you objected to any RfCs on this page. Vanteloop (talk) 20:35, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Leave in Black Book

@Elishop: just removed all references to the Black Book of Communism in the text. I have reveerted him. If anybody wants to say that the Black Book is an unreliable source please just take it to WP:RSN (I believe it's been tried before and the issue has been talked to death here). The "let's delete all the sources we don't like" folks lost the AfD, so are now just going back tp deleting sources. Shame on you. Smallbones(smalltalk) 02:00, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Please remember to WP:AGF and to avoid framing things as a WP:BATTLEGROUND; if you remember those previous discussions, you know how firmly split they were - I would not at all characterize them as producing a consensus supporting that source's reliability, so it's not that unremarkable that there continue to be people questioning the heavy way we're leaning on it. In any case, looking over this, we're citing the book an awful lot of times for a source that is unquestionably controversial. I don't think it would hurt to pare it down a bit, if nothing else - the extensive way we're sourcing it gives the impression that it is a mainstream survey of the topic, which it really, really is not. --Aquillion (talk) 02:45, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
As a notice for everyone here who is interested, it has been taken to WP:RSN. BSMRD (talk) 03:23, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I agree with Smallbones. We should use this source, and make a stress on his best part (the Werth's chapter), whereas the Courtois's opinion should be put into a proper context, supplemented with a due criticism this list of sources may be helpful.--Paul Siebert (talk) 04:48, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
And, when Courtois's opinion is presented, it is always necessary to present Werth's opinion on what Courtois says.
By the way: how many people here have read the BB in full (not just the introduction)? Who can tell me what Werth says about the roots of Stalinism? Paul Siebert (talk) 04:51, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Notice to DRN Participants

@Paul Siebert, Cloud200, Nug, and Davide King:

In case you haven't noticed, the DRN has been resumed. Now that the DRN has been formally closed, you are invited to make the statements that I described.

Maybe you don't remember that DRN Rule 5 says: "It would be better not to discuss the article on the article talk page or on user talk pages while moderated discussion is in progress, because discussion elsewhere than here may be overlooked or ignored." If all of you would rather discuss here, then I can close the DRN as abandoned by the participants, perhaps because you think that discussion without a moderator will be more productive, or because you will be more likely to "win" the discussion (which doesn't mean that you will "win" any content disputes). The discussion of the FAQ can reasonably be here, because it isn't about article content, but some of the discussion that just restarted is about article content.

Robert McClenon (talk) 05:40, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

@Robert McClenon:, I asked you a question on your talk page. I am not sure DRN can continue in the old format. There are two reasons. First, many other users has come to the page, they do not seem to be interested in participating, and they do not feel the DRN decision has any binding effect. Second, as we can conclude from the message on the DRN page, it is "an informal place to resolve small content disputes as part of dispute resolution." The dispute about this article is by no means small. Thus, the dispute must include a comprehensive analysis of a representative sample of sources, which by no means fits into a current format, which was specifically designed for minor disputes.
Nevertheless, I would love to continue to work with you as a mediator. I propose to switch to another format: to discuss more local issues, step by step. That will allow us to be more focused and that gives us a hope to find a way out of an impasse.
I have some concrete plan, but I would like to hear your opinion first. Also, I have a feeling that some participants quit the DR (@AmateurEditor: does not seem to be active, @Cloud200: did not respond to my invitation to join the DR.
In connection to that, the best approach would be to let the talk discussion to proceed for several days, to find the most important local points of disagreement and to, probably, include new participants into the DR.
I anticipate there will be a series of RDs about more local aspects.
What is your opinion on all of that? Paul Siebert (talk) 15:41, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Going Forward with Dispute Resolution

I am ready to restart moderated dispute resolution at the Dispute Resolution Noticeboard. I will first reply to a few comments. Two of the principals in the suspended discussion say that the AFD has rendered the previous dispute resolution moot. I am not sure why that would be. In particular, an RFC on the overall structure of the article still seems to be a good idea. It is not clear to me such an RFC has been overtaken or superseded. If there are issues with the article overall, then they are likely to complicate or even corrupt efforts at local dispute resolution. If the principal editors in the DRN think that the previous dispute resolution process is moot, I can close the dispute resolution, but I think that then the overall neutrality and verifiability issues will bog down any local dispute resolution.

A suggestion was made to focus on what sources to use. Questions about the reliability of sources should be addressed at the Reliable Source Noticeboard, and can be discussed there without suspending DRN. Other questions about sources have to do with what classes of sources to use, which are questions of overall structure.

User:Paul Siebert correctly quotes the DRN page as saying that DRN is intended for small content disputes. It is also true that the English Misplaced Pages no longer has a formal procedure for the resolution of large content disputes, and how to handle such disputes was the topic of one of my questions to the ArbCom candidates. However, I was deliberately ignoring the restriction to small content disputes when I opened this case. This was not the first time that I have accepted a DRN case knowing that it could last for months because of its size.

If any editors have any specific ideas for how to direct the dispute resolution, they may post them either here or at the dispute resolution page.

I will comment further within 24 hours. Robert McClenon (talk) 08:12, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

If anyone wants to start an (appropriate and relevant) RfC, they are of course welcome to do so. If some of the contributors to this article want to use the existing DR thread to decide on wording for such an RfC, they can do likewise. However, it has to be made clear that absolutely nothing decided during DR is in any shape or form binding on anyone not participating, and that none of those participating in that discussion - including the moderator Robert McClenon - have any special authority over this article. My personal advice to participants in that process would be to shut it down, before the obvious issues of ownership that were apparent during the AfD come to a head once more. Issues which involved, amongst other things, citing DR as a reason not to edit the article, or even discuss potential edits: a clear attempt to stall progress. This is a divisive and complex issue, and it isn't going to be resolved by splitting contributors into two different groups discussing the same topics in two different places. Or by giving, intentionally or otherwise, the impression that one group has more say regarding the process than the other. AndyTheGrump (talk) 09:31, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Follow-Up on Going Forward

There have been what may be two different ideas on the next steps for dispute resolution. First, User:Paul Siebert has said that they will propose a plan for how to continue the dispute resolution, and that they will describe it in more detail shortly. Second, User:AndyTheGrump has said that, with the large number of editors who have come to this article talk page during the AFD, the DRN should be shut down.

My opinion is that, due to the large number of editors who are now involved in editing the article, it is very unlikely that any progress can be made other by RFC. If Paul Siebert or anyone else has a proposal for moderated discussion, I will be glad to read it and comment on it. If any editor wants assistance in formulating a neutrally worded RFC, I will provide that assistance either at DRN or on this article talk page. I would prefer to provide the assistance at DRN simply as a "quiet corner" in a noisy talk page. I will cancel the rule against editing the article and the advice against discussing anywhere else, and will allow any editor to take part in DRNMKUCR, regardless of whether they are one of the listed editors.

So, for now, DRNMKUCR is open for the development of RFCs. I will consider the proposal to shut it down, and any proposal for any other sort of moderated discussion. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:35, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

I think it might be good to do a source analysis of the currently in-use references and to summarise what they say on the topic. It doesn't necessarily need to cover every reference, but just the ones being used for the content disputes (i.e. is there a tie between communism and mass killings). Dark-World25 (talk) 17:41, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
@Dark-World25: that would be a quite reasonable approach, except the sources this article is currently using do not fully represent scholarly views on that subject. Paul Siebert (talk) 05:55, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: Currently, a possible way to start the DRN is as follows. In text few days, I am going to propose some local but significant change. Most likely, that will be a removal of the "Terminology" section. If there will be no serious explicit objections, I am going to implement these changes. Most likely, those changes will face a serious opposition and support. In that case, I propose to start a new DRN devoted to this specific issue, and include all parties into it. Do you think that may work? Paul Siebert (talk) 06:00, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
User:Paul Siebert - What would you expect to be the result of the DRN? Would you expect it to result in approval of your idea, compromise, an RFC, what? Robert McClenon (talk) 07:40, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: sorry, but your question doesn't look serious. If I wanted just an approval of my idea, it would be senseless to resort to DRN.
My proposalis as follows: I outline a problem, and I propose a possible solution. If this solution is supported by others, there will be no need in DRN. If this solution faces a serious opposition, that means we have a disagreement, which I propose to decide via DRN (which consists of several rounds of a mediated discussion), where will lead either to approval of my solution (which is unlikely), or to development of some other mutually acceptable solution (which is what DRN is needed for).
Actually, the first part of my plan has already been implemented. We already have a point of disagreement, where I propose to remove the "Terminology" section by rearrangement or removal its content. @Nug:, @XavierItzm:, and @Vanteloop: disagreed with that, although their rationale seems unclear. @Levivich:, @Fiveby:, @Davide King:, @AndyTheGrump: (and I) believe the section have serious problems, and its removal is one of possible solution.
A course of the recent discussion demonstrated that we need a mediated discussion to achieve some consensus. IMO, DRN would be the best platform for that.
Can you please suspend the current DRN and start a new one (or, maybe, I should do that? I am not completely familiar with the procedure)? IMO that issue is much more local than the discussion about the article as a whole, and, therefore, it has much more chances for a quick success. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

RfC: Neutrality tag

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In September, a {{POV}} tag was added atop the article. Is it still the case that the tag should be in the lead of the article?

  • Option A No, the {{POV}} tag is not necessary atop the article, nor in any section.
  • Option B The tag should be moved to particular sections where neutrality is contested, using {{POV section}}.
  • Option C Yes, the {{POV}} tag should be placed atop top of the article.

Mhawk10 (talk) 06:19, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Survey: Neutrality tag

  • Option B. It does not seem to be the case that the neutrality of the entire article is meaningfully contested in a way that warrants a tag on top of the article. I've yet to see any meaningful objections that characterize the terminology section as being non-neutral. The same goes for the sections on Cambodia, Legal status and prosecutions, and Memorials and museums. I'm seeing some opposition to the inclusion of particular Soviet content, as well as particular PRC content, but it makes more sense to me to actually tag the appropriate sections rather than to lump the whole article together as non-neutral. Section-level tagging would also serve to focus on content discussions within particular sections, which would seem to be more helpful than the current system of going back-and-forth and getting nowhere over the article more broadly. — Mhawk10 (talk) 06:19, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  •  Comment: As long as we are relying on genocide scholars, who are a minority, and only one side of historiography, we are always going to have NPOV issues for the whole article. "Terminology" should go as SYNTH, not as NPOV, because the first three sentences are about Mass killing in general, and because there is no consensus even among genocide scholars, as we already acknowledges; as has been noted, it also mixes scholarly terminology with legal one. Davide King (talk) 07:23, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
    • A minority among whom? Ecologists are a minority among scientists, but they seem to be the relevant people in the field of ecology. Genocide scholars seem to be the relevant people to look towards to analyze genocides from a scholarly perspective. — Mhawk10 (talk) 07:37, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
      • We would have no problem if genocide scholars and mainstream historians supported and relied on each other, but that is not the case. Genocide studies is a relatively new field, have had issues with mainstream political science, and they are not bent on Communism as this article appears them to me. As noted by Siebert, "when some author group some fact into one book chapter, that does not implies a new topic is created." This is why need to drop them off and focus the article on Courtois et al. theories about Communism being the greatest murderer of the 20th century from a mainstream scholarly POV, that is the notable topic. You mention genocide but Communist/Soviet genocide is even more controversial — see Weiss-Wendt, Anton (December 2005). "Hostage of Politics: Raphael Lemkin on 'Soviet Genocide'". Journal of Genocide Research. 7 (4): 551–559. doi:10.1080/14623520500350017. ISSN 1462-3528. Davide King (talk) 08:19, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
        • I'm sorry, but are you supporting your argument that these scholars should be ignored due to POV issues with a reference to the Journal of Genocide Research, which is run by... the International Association of Genocide Scholars? If there's disagreement within the field, that's fine—there often is. But to dismiss the field wholesale because of the concept of Commmunist Genocide being messy (with the exception of the particular Cambodian genocide) doesn't do service to WP:NPOV, which would compel us to include all the significant views published by RS on a topic in a manner consistent with the principle of due weight. What articles like that one show is that genocide scholars do serious work and, while they disagree with each other at times, they're more than well-equipped to engage in scholarly inquiry in this area. — Mhawk10 (talk) 08:44, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
          • No, what I am saying is that we cannot have an NPOV article if we do not identify majority, minority, and fringe views, and genocide scholars are clearly a minority for not being relied by country experts when discussing the events. As was admitted by major contributor AmateurEditor, the article is based on minority views, especially in regards to proposed causes; how can we write an article from a minority POV? We got the whole structure wrong — it is those who we currently dismiss as controversy and criticism that are majority views, and genocide scholars and all others that represent a minority view. Academic fields are also not all the same and do not hold the same weight, and you seem to overlook all their problems, especially in comparative analysis, which is what this article tries to do by creating a commonality between all those events — contrary to what we do here, majority of genocide scholars do not treat this topic as a separate topic but write in general terms; it is for the same reason I do not support similar articles categorized by other ideologies and system like capitalism or fascism — "when some author group some fact into one book chapter, that does not implies a new topic is created." I think Paul Siebert can explain you this better than I did. Davide King (talk) 10:16, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Option C, given that my addition of an unreliable sources tag was removed with the reasoning that it was covered under {{POV}}, the large amount of content dispute occurring in the article as well as the continued use of...dubious...sources throughout the article, it should be clear that the tag should remain where it is. Dark-World25 (talk) 08:37, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Option C. We've just had an AfD discussion, where it was quite obvious that neutrality of the article was disputed by a significant proportion of participants (or at least, a significant proportion of those who actually understood what the RfC was about). I really don't understand why this even needs to be discussed, under such circumstances. AndyTheGrump (talk) 11:38, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • This needs DR or other collaborative approach, not a contentious RFC immediately following a contentious AFD, but if I had to pick it would be "A" (invited by the bot, plus I was already here.) Most bias claims seem to be about the mere existence of this article, and we just went through and AFD on that. North8000 (talk) 13:36, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I agree in a collaborative approach, but that is clearly not the reasoning being the NPOV tag — the reason is that is not only selectively about sources but they represent a minority view, no matter how significant, and that there is a contradiction between historians and scholars of Communism, and country experts and specialists in general, and genocide scholars, whose comparative approach, which is what we are trying to do here by positing a commonality, has failed and/or is rifled with problems. We simply cannot write a NPOV article from the POV of a minority, and/or if everything has to be attributed and cited to A rather than B or C. Davide King (talk) 00:42, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Trout the nom for a waste of time RFC, on the heels of our biggest AFD ever, and while here is an open DRN and an open RSN. No RFCBEFORE? No discussion about what is necessary to clear the tag? I don't think I've even seen an RfC over a tag before. Levivich 13:41, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Option C since we're voting, because the NPOV problems haven't been cleared yet (and they apply to the whole article, including but not limited to the title and the lead). Levivich 16:51, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
That RFC hasn't been properly closed. Someone should make the request at Misplaced Pages:Closure requests. -- GoodDay (talk) 15:06, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Procedural close. Per North8000 and Levivich. This RfC should not have been started. ––FormalDude 14:41, 2 December 2021 (UTC) (Summoned by bot)
  • Option C Since the purpose of the article is to present evidence to prove that genocide is a core component of communist ideology, rather than reporting sources that make this conclusion, it is POV. TFD (talk) 15:50, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Option C. Other people have detailed the specific reasons, but all else aside there have been long-running POV disputes over essentially the entire article (not just one or two parts of it) for years, none of which have come anywhere close to resolution. Obviously it needs the article-level tag to indicate that fact and to encourage new people to enter the discussion in hopes that it will eventually go somewhere. --Aquillion (talk) 18:53, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C I don't really care where the POV tag ends up, but considering the entire article has been called POV repeatedly in the AfD that just closed, a global tag seems warranted. Definitely Not A. BSMRD (talk) 18:58, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C Should be procedurally closed but otherwise Status Quo until actual effort is made to resolve the decade long concerns of editors. Slywriter (talk) 21:12, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • B - Heck knows, it's close to impossible to get 100% neutrality in these types of articles. GoodDay (talk) 21:24, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Multi-Whack! If we can't stop arguing about arguing, maybe an RfC to RfC the RfC is in order. And then we can dispute the closure of the RfC of the RfC. It'll be Turtles all the way down. MarshallKe (talk) 23:45, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • B - we need focus here, and methodically sort out the specific issues. Indiscriminate WP:TAGBOMBING is disruptive. --Nug (talk) 00:16, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C many long standing unresolved issues, so no need to change anything. ActivelyDisinterested (talk) 00:54, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C - The tag should be at the top of the article. The title of the article is itself problematic, as has been mentioned. The AFD closers did not state that the article is neutral or partly neutral. Robert McClenon (talk) 08:00, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C although I admit to giving it no more consideration than I already have, being a nice day to go out. ~ cygnis insignis 08:15, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C and procedural close — I agree that the title is itself problematic, and thus the main topic and its structure as a result. As long as we are relying on genocide scholars, who are not relied on by historians and country experts, cherry pick and misrepresent sources (e.g. works about genocide and mass killings in general, authors like Mann whose main thesis is that many genocides, such as Rwandian genocide, were a result of democratic transformations in those countries, hence the book's title Dark Side of Democracy, but we cherry pick his mention of classicide and Communist regimes,1 Kotkin, who does not support the view that the Holodomor was a genocide/mass killing and is talking about demographic losses, not mass killings, and many other examples), and only push the view of the most extreme one-sided, Cold War-like of Communist historiography, we are going to have NPOV issues for the whole article. Mention of WP:TAGBOMBING, which says is the unjustified addition of numerous tags to pages or unjustified addition of one tag to multiple pages, is clearly contradicted by the AfD and not tag bombing. Wanting to remove them in light of this, and lack of consensus, is disruptive.
Notes
1. What we need to do to fix NPOV issues is to look at secondary/tertiary coverage — is there any credible academic source that emphasizes classicide and Communist regimes in Mann's work? If there is not, they are likely undue and/or cherry picked; if there is, in what context is it cited and what is its status — majority, minority, fringe? Is it part of scholarly literature and discourse, or is it in isolation and limited to genocide studies? We need to ask the same questions about Valentino and any author that we discuss here. Rather than write "A says B", and cite it to A itself, we need to find if there is C, and whether C is quoting A in the context of Communist mass killings, e.g. this topic, or not (e.g. it could be about mass killings in general or criticism of Communism, or a totally different topic). Davide King (talk) 11:24, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • A or B We should not tag the article as a whole. There is simply no doubt that there were mass killings under communist regimes, and we should not do anything that makes this appear dubious. Section tags can be decided on a case-by-case basis, but tags should be used with caution. Adoring nanny (talk) 13:28, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
    Ah, POV pushing by removing the {{POV}} tag I see. I suggest reading through the AfD and especially both the nomination and the deletion votes by Paul Siebert and Davide King to understand why the topic is problematic. Dark-World25 (talk) 14:14, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Good lord, how are people still saying this. IT IS NOT IN CONTENTION THAT MASS KILLINGS OCCURRED UNDER COMMUNISTS. THIS HAS NEVER BEEN IN CONTENTION. No one here thinks that Communists didn't kill anybody, and no one here wants to "hide" killings by Communists. It's just tiresome at this point. BSMRD (talk) 15:55, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Bold capitalised printing isn't required. AFAIK, nobody here has optical difficulties. GoodDay (talk) 16:55, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
You cannot say Rummel's data is unreliable in light of Wayman and Tago's analysis of his dataset in 2010. Also Harff has grown more critical of country experts who challenge these systematic empirical studies. --Nug (talk) 17:11, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C Disputes obviously persist, so removing the notice altogether is wrong; bikeshedding over details of tag placement isn't going to solve content problems, so let's leave the tag as it is and move on. XOR'easter (talk) 17:26, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C It´s not only specific sections with a disputed validity, the existance of the article itself is not even something we have consensus on. The issues with this article are still far from being resolved. 24.51.233.5 (talk) 16:30, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
  • B Tag the section so the problem areas can be identified and solved. Tagging the whole article is not helping identify the issues so they can be rectififed and the article can be improved. Deathlibrarian (talk) 22:03, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C – I haven't reviewed the article, so I have no opinion about whether it is neutral, but from this talk page and the DRN discussions, it seems that major neutrality-related concerns affecting the article as a whole are still being discussed and are not remotely resolved. Therefore the tag should remain for the time being. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 00:43, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
  • C Judging by the recent AfD and the talk page here, the neutrality of this article seems to be disputed by many editors and should remain for now. RoseCherry64 (talk) 10:56, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Discussion: Neutrality tag

Mere hours after the AfD was closed? Ok. GoodDay (talk) 08:28, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

So much for the DR lol. BSMRD (talk) 08:44, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I don't think an RfC on where maintenance tags should be placed precludes a DRN. — Mhawk10 (talk) 08:47, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I know, it's just amusing. I have no real opinion on this so I probably won't vote. I do think the Dispute Resolution has become... less efficacious, considering the vastly increased activity and attention on the article. BSMRD (talk) 08:53, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
@Mhawk10: Admins panel recognosed that there is a major disagreement about neutrality of this article, and this disagreement must be resolved via dispute resolution tool. The tag cannot be removed until that disagreement is resolved. By starting this RfC you literally propose a community to overrule this decision by merely !voting. This is a disruption of a normal process, and if I were you I would withdraw this RfC ASAP. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:50, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Two things:
  1. This is an RfC on where the dispute tags should be placed. I take the view that it should be section-by-section. You may not. But, admins did not close the AfD with instructions in this regard; to imply that they made such a statement is simply wrong. And, even if such a statement were to be made, the proper place to resolve issues with the placement of maintenance tags is surely the article talk page, rather than a discussion that is centered around the question over whether or not to delete the article.
  2. Admins did not conclude that DR was the only pathway forward for resolving the dispute. I have actually only encountered the article and all of the related walls of DR text after !voting to the AfD. I am not a party to the DR and I take the view that the DR is at a point where we need to fire off RfCs to start to actually move anywhere—especially since the DR has achieved very little in terms of approaching a consensus among those involved. I am not the only one who thinks this, nor am I bound to enter into a months-long DR that is running into the same exact issues that killed the WP:Mediation Cabal. On top of that, the DR is not about answering the philosophical question whether to place a maintenance tag on top of the article or only in the specific sections to which it applies.
Your aspersion that this is somehow disruptive to the normal process is unfounded, and I kindly suggest that you strike it. — Mhawk10 (talk) 16:22, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
@Mhawk10: The neutrality tag is just an indication of a major disagreement over an article's neutrality. It is removed only after the disagreement is resolved. I put this tag because I see serious and fundamental problems with the article's neutrality, and I provided quite convincing arguments in support of this my actions. By starting this RfC you invite other users just put my arguments into a trash and to !vote for removal of this tag without analysing if neutrality issues have been resolved. This is an utter disrespect and a misuse of the AfD procedure. I don't find my statement an aspersion.
A more correct AfD question would be: "Do you think that the neutrality issues that lead to the NPOV placement have been resolved, so the tag may be removed or placed to some individual sections?" That question would be more in agreement with a procedure, but it would be still illegitimate in light of the conclusion of the admins panel, which explicitly recognised that there IS a major neutrality dispute, which is still unresolved.
Therefore, I don't find your arguments convincing. If this AfDRFC will not be speedy closed or withdrawn, I may ask admins if it is in accordance with our rules. Paul Siebert (talk) 16:39, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul, I am not proposing another AfD, nor do you have to find my argument convincing for an RfC to be held on an article talk page. If you don’t like the proposal to move the neutrality tag into article sections, you can simply !vote and make your arguments. I think that this is a fine RfC to place, so I see no need to withdraw it. Especially considering the exact locations of the neutrality dispute seem to be unclear and not strictly defined in the admin close of the omnibus AfD, I think this is appropriate. — Mhawk10 (talk) 16:47, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
@Mhawk10: I fixed the typo. Of course, I meant RfC.
With regards to the rest, if one user placed a NPOV template and provided a reason for that, you should discuss a reason first, and only if the reason will be found frivolous or already resolved, a discussion of the tag removal may start (or it may be removed automatically). The opposite is a disruption. Do you want me to discuss this question at ANI? Paul Siebert (talk) 16:55, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul, with due respect, if you are going to take me to ANI over my decision to launch an RfC over whether it is better to include the tag in particular sections or if it is better atop the page, I cannot stop you. That being said, I don’t think that a discussion over where is the best place to apply maintenance tags in this article is disruptive. — Mhawk10 (talk) 17:09, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
The option A says: No, the "POV" tag is not necessary atop the article, nor in any section. That needs no comments.
And, discussion of the tag's placement without discussing an original reason for that is inappropriate.
Furthermore, the question " Is it still the case that the tag should be in the lead of the article?" implies that some significant changes happened in the article that resolved the problems. That question if misleading, because NO significant changes has been made.
It could be quite correct to start this RfC after some work has been done to resolve the problems with NPOV-violations. However, no such work have been done yet, and the attempt to resort to voting is a misuse of the procedure. Actually, that RfC is a direct attempt to undermine the results of the recent AfD, which confirmed that the article has severe problems. Although they are insufficient for article's deletion, they are quite sufficient to keep this tag. If the RfC will not be withdrawn, I'll put this text to ANI. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:31, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
If you have a policy-based reason against A (I !voted for B but included A for completeness) then you can make the case against A. If your implication is that I am trying to remove all mention of the neutrality issue from the article (which I agree would not be appropriate) then the implication is wrong. — Mhawk10 (talk) 17:36, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
"A" directly means that you are trying to remove all mention of the neutrality issue from the article.
Discussion of the tag placement without discussing the reasons is hardly appropriate. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:42, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

It looks premature and uncalled for (there are more pertinent and important RfCs that we should be doing, like the main topic, its structure, its core sources), and the issues have already been confirmed by both AfD1 and DRN. But by all means, go ahead. If this lead us to a discussion about sources' majority, minority,2 fringe status — it may move us forward.

Notes

1. As noted by the AfD closure, 'Keep' side's main argument was not that the article was neutral and/or there were no issues but that it was a notable topic and issues could be fixed. Having the first RfC to be about whether or not we should have tags until such issues are fixed is disingenuous to say the least.

2. The China section relies on Dikötter, Valentino, and the Newsweek rather than country and famine specialists. Majority of sections do not accurately summarize majority views on each event but present a minority POV within the context of genocide and mass killings,3 e.g. the section about the Red Terror does not really explain the context and background of the Russian Civil War and White Terror, which is how majority scholarly sources treat the topic, and/or present popular history sources like Figes and Pipes, or outdated sources pre-1991, and even one from 1927 (!). It certainly is not a summary of the events but a presents specific POV within the context of a Communist death toll, hence why most 'summary style' events are more about how many people died, or how the main cause was communism, rather than fairly summarize the events according to majority scholarly sources. Paul Siebert can explain this better than I did, and I would love to see their take on each sources by sections, and how it would look like if we relied on majority sources, e.g. Ó Gráda for the Great Chinese Famine, or Ellman and Wheatcroft, who ignore the global Communist grouping and/or death toll and focus on the Soviet Union, especially the Stalin era.

3. Just look at how many of the sources' titles are general topics about mass killings to see how majority of events are discussed separately, not together, and so are Communist states — even those who discuss together Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot (three leaders of three specific periods of three different Communist regimes), some like Jones separates Stalin and Mao from Pol Pot, and Fein sees Pol Pot more in line with fascism than Marxism. Davide King (talk) 10:28, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

GoodDay, I don't understand the reasoning in your vote. Neutrality means fairly representing the facts and opinions with the weight they have in reliable sources. We can do this among other ways by seeing how a topic is treated in tertiary sources such as reputable encyclopedias and academic textbooks. Just as sources may disagree on their analysis, so can editors. But which facts and views have greatest weight should never be a matter of disagreement, since we have a clear policy to determine it. TFD (talk) 21:57, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I don't think every section in the article has NPOV problems. GoodDay (talk) 22:00, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
We cannot tell that until the issue of the article's overall neutrality is addressed. The section on Romania for example could be neutral for an article on mass killings under romanian communist regimes, but be undue for inclusion as a separate section of this article. TFD (talk) 22:18, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I'll accept whatever the decision/result of this RFC turns out to be. GoodDay (talk) 22:21, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I’m seeing some mentions that the title is contested. Does anyone plan to open a move request to try to get the community to resolve that dispute? — Mhawk10 (talk) 16:11, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • First, I propose that Robert McClenon open and neutrally write any RfC, if they want. Second, even before discussing the title, we need to agree on what exactly is the main topic and how it should be structured — I do not know whether this can be done in a single RfC or in two separated ones but we clearly need to agree on what the main topic is, and which sources support it, and analyze them, as suggested by Dark-World25. Davide King (talk) 23:50, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

While I agree with Siebert and those at ANI that Mhawk10 was not a behavioral issue and that they simply put 'Option A' for completeness, even though I think Robert should have started the first RfC and that this was premature and useless, the fact that several users have supported 'Option A', even though the AfD's conclusion is 'Option C' (not every single section may have the same NPOV issues but many sections would have to be tagged, and considering the controversy and dispute it just makes more sense to place it at the top), is telling and may be disrupting, not least because we simply cannot fix the article if there are users who still think it is either perfectly fine or has no NPOV issues. Davide King (talk) 23:55, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

User:Davide King - What RFC are you saying I should have been allowed to start before we were distracted by this tagging dispute? Robert McClenon (talk) 01:06, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Robert McClenon, essentially about what you have outlined so far and below too. We need one or more RfCs about:
1. What is the main topic, and its structure and core sources
  • (majority, minority, fringe — is majority discussing Communism as a separate or special topic, or simply as part of genocide and mass killings discourse in general?)
2. Theory-based and focused
  • (e.g. Courtois' thesis and link between Communist states and mass killings, and whether the link can be extended to communism itself)
OR
3. Events-focused and based
  • (e.g. summary of events according to majority scholarly sources and country experts, not genocide scholars, so rather than discuss them as death toll events, we simply say what happened and summarize majority views, in which case the article must be refocused away from mass killings1 and Communist regimes, and focused on Communist leaders (e.g. Valentino's thesis) and limited to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot, plus the Red Terror within the context of Russian Civil War and White Terror)
WHETHER
4. It is part of scholarly mainstream literature and discourse, or is in isolation with one-sided historians like Courtois and/or a minority of genocide scholars.
5. If it is more of an anti-communist propaganda topic in the (right-wing) popular press (100 million, oversimplifications and generalizations about the causes) that is used to dismiss left-wing politics in general as part of an anti-communist/totalitarian field of memory to criminalize communism as a whole, not just Bolshevism/Leninism/Stalinism.
6. If it is part of Holocaust obfuscation (double genocide) and trivialization in equations with Nazism, and politicization of Holocaust memories.
I think I have already provided sources in support of this (e.g. Neumayer 2018 and others), but if you feel the need, I can provide them for each claim, and I am sure Siebert can also provide more. Some of the same points may be discussed in the same RfC, so we may not need literally six RfCs — I hope you can organize and summarize those disputes in one or more RfC, and add anything I may have missed. Davide King (talk) 03:20, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Notes
1. I found this comment by Siebert about terminology particularly revealing and helpful, and why we need to drop it and move away from mass killings, which is a proposed umbrella term, including Valentino (who gave this article the current name), "to discuss all XX century coercive deaths inflicted by governments and paramilitary organizations. It was proposed as a category for statistical analysis and general theorizing, and it has no special implication to Communism ."
Davide King (talk) 03:46, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
In my opinion, any tagging dispute is a distraction from resolving a content issue. This is different from other article tagging disputes only in that the underlying content dispute is larger, and so the tagging issue is potentially a larger distraction from a larger issue. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:06, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I disagree with the idea that we can remove the top-level tag and work on the sections, because that is based on the assumption that the section organization of the article is correct. It only makes sense to work on the article section-by-section if the sections are correct. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:06, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Also, we should only remove the top-level tag after we have resolved any disputes about the meaning of the title of the article. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:06, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I am still willing to work with any editors at DRNMKUCR on any other RFCs that can run while this tagging RFC is in progress. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:06, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
An RFC & DRN occurring at the same time, about the same article. Rather confusing. GoodDay (talk) 01:39, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Victims of Communism Foundation

While the BBoC discussion is underway on RSN, I propose that all references to the Victims of Communism to be stripped in the meantime. The last RSN discussion concluded with all participants voting unreliable, so the fact that it still remains in the article (and other articles) is a mistake that ought to be rectified. As I have pointed out elsewhere on this page, the foundation inflates the deaths count even beyond the BBoC, including deaths of Nazi belligerents in WW2, deaths due to the covid pandemic as well as potentially unborn, unconceived children that could have been born. Dark-World25 (talk) 14:52, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

I could only find one example where it was used as a source. My understanding is that the Foundation does not conduct its own research and therefore even if it were reliable, which it obviously isn't, it would be better to use those sources directly. However, the Foundation should be mentioned in this article. TFD (talk) 14:59, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Agreed. Keep the source as appropriate. XavierItzm (talk) 15:05, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Who exactly are you agreeing with? AndyTheGrump (talk) 15:08, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
As a general rule, indentation denotes which post is being replied to. Cheerio, XavierItzm (talk) 16:18, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
While I recognise that it is used with attrition, I would still argue against the inclusion as an estimate given the reasons I have named above. Perhaps in this case we could add a sentence following it to the effect of "this figure is generally disputed by academics" or noting its staunchly conservative, anti-communist leaning? Dark-World25 (talk) 15:16, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Currently, the Foundation is used as one of three sources for the following sentence: "Holocaust – communist holocaust has been used by some state officials and non-governmental organizations." The whole sentence should be deleted. We are not supposed to compare and contrast what sources say, per no original research. Only if a source does this can we can report what they say. Furthermore, "some" is a weasel-word, that cannot be used if it is in the source. TFD (talk) 15:30, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
The sentence is appropriate and should be kept as per its sources. If you feel a need to attribute in main text, boldly go ahead.XavierItzm (talk) 16:20, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
But with attribution it would be WP:UNDUE - why is it so important what this one particular organization has said? If we're going to rely on primary usages of the term to cite that sentence, we need to attribute who is specifically using the term in each case, we can't just vaguely say "people use it" - that's WP:SYNTH. And none of them are individually that noteworthy. If we're going to mention it we should find secondary coverage instead. Compare / contrast to the much better sourcing we have discussing the use of red holocaust (which, based on the sourcing, ought to be the main focus of the paragraph.) --Aquillion (talk) 18:52, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
Aquillion, this is essentially the problem with the whole article, as it is not only a bunch of "he said, she said" but apart from few exceptions (e.g. Rummel quoted through Totten & Jacobs) we all cite it to A rather than C. If we cannot find secondary/tertiary coverage for that, it means they are either undue or we cherry picked quotes in support, e.g. majority of works are about genocide and/or mass killings in general, so it looks like we just cherry picked mentions of communism and attributed to sources a separate grouping or speciality to communism — Mann's main thesis is, in fact, that many genocides, such as Rwandian genocide, were a result of democratic transformations in those countries (hence the book's title Dark Side of Democracy, but we cherry pick his mention of classicide and Communist regimes. Davide King (talk) 11:05, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
It is not properly attributed because none of the sources say, "communist holocaust has been used by some state officials and non-governmental organizations." Instead, it is an anaylsis, which is not permissable per no synthesis. TFD (talk) 20:11, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I'm okay with the VoCMF being mentioned in this article, so long as an efn is included to inform readers the Foundation is controversial, has strong links to the neoliberal think tank The Heritage Foundation, and its blog has published provocative and disputed material (like blaming Covid deaths on communism, and the CCP in particular ).--C.J. Griffin (talk) 15:34, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • At the very least we should not be citing it their blog the Estimates section. That section says that it covers notable estimates, but the cite is to their blog, which is obviously WP:UNDUE in this context - if it is a notable summary, it ought to have secondary coverage. Summarizing their view, with attribution, in sections more specifically devoted to opinions and advocacy surrounding the topic makes sense, though I would prefer to use secondary sources; citing a blog as if it is a usable source for a notable summary of estimates is absurd. --Aquillion (talk) 05:06, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

'Many commentators on the political right ...' better citation requested

Many commentators on the political right state that the mass killings under communist regimes are an indictment of communism

The citations given for this are examples, rather than references that posit this view. Does anyone have a better source for this (which shows that the statement is correct)? As is, it seems like WP:OR with the citations used as evidence for an argument. Vanteloop (talk) 20:28, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

References

  1. https://dict.leo.org/german-english/Abfall
  2. Engel-Di Mauro 2021. sfn error: no target: CITEREFEngel-Di_Mauro2021 (help)
  3. Piereson, James. "Socialism as a hate crime". newcriterion.com. Retrieved 2021-10-22.
  4. Satter, David (2017-11-06). "100 Years of Communism—and 100 Million Dead". Wall Street Journal. ISSN 0099-9660. Retrieved 2021-10-22.
Forgot to mention the first source. This states These right- and left-wing attacks on communism nourish a return to anti-communism in the legal frameworks of liberal democracies and threaten the political prospects and personal safety of socialists of any stripe. Anti-communism should be as unacceptable and as vigorously challenged as the ignorant equation of anarchism with chaos and terrorism.. The article seems like more of an attack on anti-communism than a reliable source desribing a phenomenon among many right-wing political commentators. I understand this might be bordering on WP:BLUE but I believe it should have at least one reference considering the contentious nature of the article Vanteloop (talk) 20:33, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I agree. A representative sample of sources assembled by me, as well as the sources presented by other users, suggest that we should not use that type language.
Instead, I propose the following.
1. Completely rewrite and rename the "Estimates" section.
2. From this section, the sources that are recognized as unreliable for figures should be removed. That include, first of all, Rummel and White.
3. Other sources should be presented as follows:
  • Some authors (Courtois and few others; name them explicitly) argued that a total amount of premature deaths, including the deaths caused by mass shooting and executions, and the deaths as a result of harsh living conditions (famine) that occurred under Communist regimes should be combined in a single category and directly linked to Communism and Marxism in particular.
  • The main aspects of that approach have been criticized by other authors, who (i) point that that approach is intrinsically politicized and serves some concrete ideological goals; (ii) find the very idea to combine poorly related events into a single category; (iii) see no direct linkage between these events and Marxism; (iv) find the figures unreliable and inflated.
I also noted that some sources in this section are directly misinterpreted. Thus, Kotkin is used as a source for this statement:
"communist regimes killed at least 65 million people between 1917 and 2017, commenting: "Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering."" In reality he says:
"In the Soviet Union, China, Mongolia, Eastern Europe, Indochina, Africa, Afghanistan and parts of Latin America—communism has claimed at least 65 million lives, according to the painstaking research of demographers."
which means he speaks about demographic losses, which is not the same as "mass killings". "Demographic losses" is a much broader category, and it refers to those 65 million, not to "even more", as a reader may conclude from the article.
In summary, the section must be rewritten. I propose to start collecting sources, quotes, arguments, and if there will be any disagreement, I propose to try DRN. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:49, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • The entire section is a mess, and I'm not sure it's really useful to have a section labeled "controversies" in the first place when the entire article is a giant controversy. What it seems to cover, instead, is discussion of whether mass killings under communist regimes are an indictment of communism and whether they are a phenomenon unique to communist governments, or ideologically inherent within them. It should be rewritten and retitled to cover that aspect of the debate; it should probably be expanded, but right now most of the sources are terrible; "talking heads at the WSJ and random websites say this" isn't a particularly useful thing to build a section around. But it's also possible it's redundant with the "proposed causes" section and should just be merged into that - what it's really discussing is "is communism the cause?", which we cover better elsewhere. Perhaps it could be turned into a subsection there; but, again, most of the sources are so weak that I'm not sure what we'd be preserving. --Aquillion (talk) 21:04, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
    "To expand" by adding new sources and to get rid of garbage sources (as you propose) means "to re-write. It is ok to have a "controvercy" section on teh top in the article that discusses the intrinsically controversial subject.
    "Proposed causes" is just a fake. Even the sources it cites do not support what it says.
    However, I propose to stay focused. Do you agree "Estimates" must be rewritten? Can you propose another plan (instead of mine)? Paul Siebert (talk) 21:11, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
I moved all the info in the controversy section to the ideology section, which is more fitting. X-Editor (talk) 22:01, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
This, which I support and I thanked you for it, is in fact a call to a rewrite and restructuring, which is what Siebert and I advocate to fix the issues — if the concept is disputed, it must be rewritten to reflect majority views (i.e. those who dispute the concept), and rely on Ghodsee 2014, Neumayer 2018, and others to summarize for us this anti-communist1 phenomenon that criminalizes communism by positing an inherency or link, rather than be like "A said B, and cite it to A rather than C."
I think Siebert, or it may be someone else, were onto something when they said this article essentially attempts to prove the Black Book thesis, and presents it as a majority view or significant part of mainstream scholarly discourse, hence the cherry picking of works about genocide and mass killings in general, the misreading of sources that do not make or discuss a Communist grouping (Courtois and Rummel are prominent exceptions) as a separate topic, and many other errors which Siebert may describe in detail. I may add that it uses the discussion of the events, which indeed happened and Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's (plus the Red Terror) regimes indeed engaged in mass killings, not as a summary of majority sources, which do not rely on genocide scholars or the terminology that we synthesize as common, but to further legitimize and hide this fact.
By this, I mean that the discussion of the events as grouping is not notable and/or is clearly a minority views even among genocide scholars, who compare and group Communist and non-Communist regime types, showing that communism is not the common link. The real notable topic is this link, and the attempt to criminalize communism as a whole, which is presented by a minority of one side of historiography but is more mainstream in the (right-wing) popular press and political institutions (e.g. Prague Declaration, equations between Communism and Nazism, etc.), based on the assumation that it was the greatest murderer of the 20th century (c. 100 million) and that deaths and killings under Communist states were linked to communism as main cause, is rejected by most scholars, and how it fits in the Holocaust memories and politicization.
Rather than prove the Black Book thesis, this is a NPOV version of the same topic. If you want to group the events, we can listify them and/or have a disambiguation page. As it stands, we cannot mix the two without violating NPOV, e.g. 'Proposed causes' only discussing those who see a link, and events being described as death toll events rather than summarize according to majority scholarly views and country experts. Without adding such majority sources, we are violating NPOV but if we add them we may engage in OR/SYNTH because by and large those sources do not rely on genocide scholars, their terminology, and do not link communism as main cause for the mass killings.
Notes
1. Even scholars that may be considered "anti-communist", and/or "orthodox", do not usually go that far in criminalizing communism as a whole. "Revisionist" scholars who are now mainstream, such as Michael Ellman, Sheila Fitzpatrick, J. Arch Getty, Ian Kershaw, Moshe Lewin, Stephen G. Wheatcroft, and many other well-respected scholars in the field, can only be described as anti-communists by Communist apologists, and as pro-Communists by anti-communists and now revisionist scholars who are still struck in the Cold War era and the discredited 1950s totalitarian model.2
2. Doumanis, Nicholas, ed. (2016). The Oxford Handbook of European History, 1914–1945 (E-book ed.). Oxford, England: Oxford University Press. pp. 377–378. ISBN 9780191017759. Retrieved 2 December 2021 – via Google Books. At first sight, accusations that Hitler and Stalin mirrored each other as they 'conducted wars of annihilation against internal and external enemeis ... of class, race, and nation,' seem plausible. But such a perspective, in reality a recapitulation of the long-discredited totalitarian perspective equating Stalin's Soviet Union with Hitler's National Socialist Germany, is not tenable. It betrays a profound misunderstanding of the distinct natures of the Stalinist and Nazi regimes, which made them mortal enemies. Stalin's primary objective was to forge an autarkic, industrialized, multinational state, under the rubric of 'socialism in one country'. Nationalism and nation-building were on Stalin's agenda, not genocide; nor was it inherent in the construction of a non-capitalist, non-expansionary state—however draconian. Davide King (talk) 23:01, 2 December 2021 (UTC) Davide King (talk) 23:28, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
We may simply change it to anti-communist per sources — as noted many times by The Four Deuces, anti-communism, by which we mean the movement and not any criticism (ironically, this is very Soviet-like), which is common even on the Left (e.g. about Communist states), is largely a right-wing phenomenon. We already have secondary and tertiary sources for this, so there is no need to put primary sources. Davide King (talk) 22:39, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

DRN participants

Should users who are active in editing this article be involved in the resurrected dispute resolution? The baton seems to be passed to others in disputing this territory, whereas previous participants may be constrained once more, after the temporary lifting of a moratorium on editing, arising from the AfD, is presumed to be active again. I don't intend to edit the article myself, excepting perhaps removing the worst examples of coatracking, my concern is bringing the previous discussion, well moderated, to bear on active participants. ~ cygnis insignis 06:54, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

An increasingly drawn-out farce

It's clear that, having failed to make any plausible case for retaining this article (even with the organised support of far-right media outlets), the Keepist camp is attempting to "win the peace" by locking in a hard-line, POV intepretation of history through a series of bureaucratic manoeuvres and "sandbagging" of those they see as their opponents. There is no good faith being exercised, and none is possible in these conditions.

The article should never have been retained. Someone really needs to take this in hand, because it's clearly not going to stop. DublinDilettante (talk) 01:53, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

If you think a user is engaging in disruptive editing, take them to ANI and provide specific evidence. Vague statements alleging that a keepist camp is engaging fully in bad faith is not something generally fit for an article talk page. — Mhawk10 (talk) 01:59, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
You know what's going on here is way beyond bad or disruptive behaviour by individual editors. Let's not pretend, after everything that's happened on and off Misplaced Pages over the past week, that this is a simple edit dispute which can have a negotiated outcome. No-one here is that naive. DublinDilettante (talk) 02:04, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I don’t think anybody thinks that this is a simple edit dispute—the series of disputes on this article is complex—but I don’t think that a lack of simplicity implies bad faith behavior by editors. If DR processes (mediated outcomes) don’t work, that’s the whole point of launching requests for comment to bring the whole community to work on an issue. I think this is what the mediator is saying anyway at this point, though obviously Robert McClenon can speak for himself in that regard. — Mhawk10 (talk) 02:11, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
User:Mhawk10, User:DublinDilettante - I am not the mediator here. I am only in the role of mediator at DNRMKUCR, and I was not really trying to mediate there either, but to formulate one or more RFCs, so I am really a facilitator there. If anyone wants to come there and talk about RFCs, they are welcome. We have one RFC in progress here, but it is a tagging dispute, and it is my opinion that tagging disputes are a useless distraction; and one or more substantive RFCs can run while the tagging dispute is also argued. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:21, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I think you meant WP:DRNMKUCR. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 08:21, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@DublinDilettante: To add on to my first-indent comment above, I would kindly ask you to strike this comment and to close this section. If there is a legitimate complaint you have about long-term behavioral issues, then it should be handled respectfully at the relevant editors' talk pages or at AN(I). An article talk page is not the right place for a discussion primarily on user conduct. — Mhawk10 (talk) 02:16, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
User:DublinDilettante, User:Mhawk10 - I would advise that complaints about user conduct are more likely to be dealt with more effectively at Arbitration Enforcement than at WP:ANI. Dealing with conduct in areas covered by discretionary sanctions is what Arbitration Enforcement is for. But that is the call of a filer. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:25, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@DublinDilettante: If you want to improve the article, the best way would be to completely abandon the manner to discuss another party's intentions (and to stop discussing any behevioural issues). If you see that some user is engaged in disruptive editing, POV-pushing and misinterpretation of sources, report them at AE. You may warn them once at their talk page. The users who were sanctioned previously per ARBEE do not need even a DS warning. If you are ready to blame them of misbehaviour, go to AE. If you are not ready, please, focus on the content issues exclusively, and do not discuss their behaviour here. In general, this talk page is a bad place for discussion of such topics as "attempting to "win the peace" by locking in a hard-line, POV interpretation... etc". This may result in your own topic ban, which will eliminate you from this dispute. I am not sure that is an outcome you want to achieve. Paul Siebert (talk) 06:18, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@DublinDilettante: I am not gonna sugarcoat it for you, but your entire comment smells of hypocrisy. With that aside however, although I am not gonna reiterate what I have said previously at the AfD which I am fairly certain you remember, there is the matter of fact that your display of maturity confirmed both my comment's assertion, and my own suspicion that you do not care about the article's quality, and only wishes it gone because you do not like it. Checking your talk page makes it evident that you are politically motivated to edit on Misplaced Pages since 2021 and will actively push unsourced POV until you get blocked following multiple warnings, all the while going as far as to accuse other editors of pushing their political agendas; quite as exactly as you did right here by implying motives with your comment about the keepist camp, a rhetorical word salad that definitely gives off the impression that you only view your own opinions as correct.
Think about my comment strongly before you say another word, please. I know you can be better than this. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:22, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I think we're all probably a bit embarrassed for you after that puerile little outburst, so I'll simply remind you that you always have the option of deleting it, and of thinking about what you're doing with your life, and your time on Misplaced Pages. DublinDilettante (talk) 15:37, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
So you seriously think he's wasting his life time because he didn't vote to delete or disagrees with you? --TheImaCow (talk) 19:02, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
The article has been retained. Complaining about it is a waste of time, unless you're planning a fifth AfD. GoodDay (talk) 15:46, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
lol "keepist" camp. This is beyond parody. I recommend closing this talk section. WeifengYang (talk) 22:22, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@WeifengYang: Agreed. Opinionated screeds do not belong here. X-Editor (talk) 23:26, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Name change

I suggest we change the name to "Victims of Communism" which is a term used in reliable sources. While it lacks neutral tone, so do all the other alternatives. While it also lacks precision, since victims could include people who suffered in any way from Communism, the term is defined to refer to deaths.

There is recent literature that addresses the debate over whether Communism should be blamed for crimes that occured in Communist states. For example:

  • "Their reading of the past led to criminalising communism by making criminality the essence of the communist ideology and of the regimes that claimed it across all national contexts and historical periods." (Neumayer, Laure. "Introduction."The criminalisation of communism in the European political space after the Cold War. Routledge, 2018.)
  • "One way of dealing with the Nazism-Communism comparison is to adopt the idea of totalitarianism, stating that there is a straight line between ideological intention and repression." p. 73 (Adler, Nanci, et al. Perspectives on the Entangled History of Communism and Nazism: A Comnaz Analysis. Lexington Books, 2015. P. 73)

The reason this article attracted controversy is that it begins with an assumption that socialism (at least in its Marxist form) is homicidal and sets out to prove it through a body count. The criticism of this approach is that it could be applied to any ideological or other grouping. A neutral approach would be to explain the arguments connecting communism ideology and mass killings carried out by Communists. TFD (talk) 13:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

No, the title implies mass killings occurred under governments that attempted to implement their vision of communism. --Nug (talk) 21:16, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I like that idea. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:40, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
The reason this article attracted controversy is that it begins with an assumption that socialism (at least in its Marxist form) is homicidal and sets out to prove it through a body count. And the title "Victims of Communism" doesn't do this... how, exactly? BSMRD (talk) 14:11, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I was writing about the article not the title. The current first sentence is not neutral: "Mass killings under communist regimes occurred throughout the 20th century." Compare this with the following: "Many murders have been committed by men with the surname of Smith." In both cases there is an implied connection.
Titles are not required to be neutral, per Non-neutral but common names. Elsewhere the policy says that "Boston massacre" is an acceptable title, because that is its common name, even though it probably was not a massacre but was described that way in order to advance political agenda. We don't for example call it "1770 Boston shooting incident."
The title Jewish Bolshevism is also non-neutral but preferable to "Allegation of undue influence of Jewish people under communist regimes."
TFD (talk) 14:36, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Ok, I think I see your point. Not 100% sure that's the best name, but it's not the worst I guess. BSMRD (talk) 15:56, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
The heading of your discussion is confusing. It appears at first glance, as though you are suggesting an RM. GoodDay (talk) 15:58, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Doesn’t “Victims of Communism” significantly broaden the scope of the article? I don’t think that this is a WP:COMMONNAME and I’m not convinced that it is better than the current name (or something very similar, like “Mass killings by Communist regimes”). Jewish Bolshevism is a WP:WORDISSUBJECT-like article title to describe the particular idea that was influential in the rise of Nazism. Untermensch is similar in this regard—the term has no value in terms of academic merit in its own right, but it has received significant coverage owing to the influence of that particular term in Nazi ideology. But, this article isn’t a word-is-subject sort of article. I do not think the point of the article is to describe the term “victims of communism”, but instead to be a summary style article on mass killings committed by communist regimes. As a result, I am inclined against the name change. — Mhawk10 (talk) 16:04, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Agreed, but the problems with "Victims of Communism" as a title don't solve the (similar) problems with the current title. Since this was discussed in 2020, the conclusion from that earlier discussion should be summarized here, as the counterargument to renaming in this discussion has been weak. Boston Massacre is a widely recognized term of art. "Mass killings under communist regimes" doesn't roll off enough tongues to meet the WP:NPOV threshold: An article title with non-neutral terms cannot simply be a name commonly used in the past, it must be the common name in current use. The common name. --Wragge (talk) 16:12, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
The current article title is no less neutral than say, Domestic violence in the United States. That article isn't making an implicit claim that the USA is a nation of wife beaters. --Nug (talk) 16:18, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I think this is an important point. The idea that mass killings are somehow inherent to communism is clearly very contentious - but the title is referring to that contentious claim, not asserting it is true. For example, Creation science doesn't need to be changed to 'Pseudoscience of Creationism' because the article is about the concept of 'Creation science' and the validity of the concept is discussed in the article. I think once we can improve the article to include a more clear description of the criticisms and academic consensus on the subject of MKUCR the name issue will become moot. Vanteloop (talk) 16:25, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, I agree. Creation science is a good example, the title doesn't imply that creation science is a real science. Also note title is referring to the regime type, not the ideology. --Nug (talk) 16:36, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
Disagree. All nations have at least some domestic violence; not all nations have mass killing. Furthermore, the "communist" grouping implies that there is something special or unique about mass killings under individual communist governments that makes it worthy to collect them all and discuss them as a single topic. The comparable title would be if we had an article named eg. Domestic violence under Capitalist regimes - something there actually are some sources for. But that'd obviously be a non-neutral way to approach that topic. --Aquillion (talk) 19:13, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
We have Communist terrorism, all communists certainly did not engage in terrorism or that communism is intrinsically terroristic, but terrorism was certainly carried out by groups who claim to adhere to it, in the advancement of it. Similarly, this title is careful to include "regime", to indicate it is about the governments actions rather than the ideology --Nug (talk) 21:16, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I mean, Communist terrorism is in even worse shape than this article? A big chunk of the history section describes the term as political propaganda created by Nazis. The background section contains a small paragraph mostly consisting of passing mentions from timelines of terrorism that, again, don't really establish that there's a unified topic there, then a single paragraph containing back-and-forth between a handful of scholars over whether Lenin supported terrorism. And the bulk of the article (both in the history section and the examples section) is a list of random examples from sources that largely don't treat it as a unified topic - essentially editors trying to argue the topic of that brief paragraph in the history section via WP:SYNTH. That's certainly not an article I would use as an example for anything - at the very least, I'm glad you brought it to people's attention here, given that most of the problems on this article are even worse there due to it not having really attracted enough attention in the past. --Aquillion (talk) 09:39, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Here is a quote from Michael Ellman, which specifically discusses this issue in a context of Staliniam:

"Estimates of the total number of Soviet repression victims depend both on accurate estimates of the numbers in particular sub-categories and on judgement of which sub-categories should be included in the category ‘repression victims’. The former is a matter of statistics on which we are better informed today than previously but on which the Ž gures are still surrounded by a signiŽ cant margin of uncertainty. The latter is a matter of theoretical, political and historical judgement. " EUROPE-ASIA STUDIES, Vol. 54, No. 7, 2002, 1151–1172

The title "Victims of Communism" opens a can of worms, because a whole population of Communist states may be formally seen as a "victim of Communism". Can a person who was deported be considered a victim? It is quite possible to find sources that say so. Can children of a repression victim, who lost their apartment in Moscow and have to live in a remote place be considered a victim? Can the victims of WWII time famine (which had probably never happened without Nazi invasion) be considered as the victims of Communism? Yes, some sources say so. And so on, and so forth. This title would be much worse than the current one, in particular because nothing will prevent addition of non-lethal events into this article. The title is terribly bad.--Paul Siebert (talk) 18:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

So you don't think this title has opened a can of worms?

That's the etymological fallacy - that the meaning of an expression must reflect the original meaning of its words. It is permissable for example to have an article called anti-Semtism because it is a recognized expression that refers to prejudice against Jews even though the literal meaning is opposition to Jews and Arabs, who together are Semites. In this case victims refers to people who died as a result of Communism.

The advantage of using a term that has been reported in academic writing, rather than a term invented by Misplaced Pages editors, is that it is a concept defined in reliable sources.
With a new title, the scope of the article then becomes the extent to which Communism is responsbile for these deaths, according to experts.
Nug's comparison of the current title with "Domestic violence in the U.S." isn't valid as we discussed many times. The equivalent would be "Mass killings in the Soviet Union." If we had an article called "Domestic violence in Nug's family," he might complain.
TFD (talk) 19:22, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
"victims of Communism" "chinese famine"&"victims of Communism" "Soviet famine" vs "Chinese famine" victims&"Soviet famine" victims Paul Siebert (talk) 20:17, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I have to agree with Paul Siebert on "Victims of Communism". Given the rhetoric over Captive Nations, it could be argued that the entire populations of all communist countries were victims, and that would number into the billions of people. --Nug (talk) 21:16, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
It could be argued. The reality is that the term normally refers to people killed by Communists. For example, this article says, "In Hungary, the Gloria Victis Memorial to honor "the 100 million victims of communism" was erected in 2006 on the 50th anniversary of the Hungarian Revolution." An article in the Heritage Foundation is called "We Must Never Forget the 100 Million Victims of Communism." The Vicims of Communism Memorial Foundation (VOC) is dedicated to "the more than 100 million victims of communism around the world and to pursuing the freedom of those still living under totalitarian regimes." As you repeatedly mention, the VOC was sponsored by the U.S. government. The U.S. Dept. of State has an article called "America honors 100 million victims of communism."
I notice it doesn't bother you that there were no "communist regimes" because communism means the state has withered away. You voted against capitalizing Communist even though it would remove ambiguity.
The VOC incidentally was set up by the National Captive Nations Committee.
TFD (talk) 00:14, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Did I? I can't find the associated discussion related to this move in June 2018, only this failed move request during that period. --Nug (talk) 00:50, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

"Mass killings under Communist party rule" might be a more accurate title because this article is more about the actions of communist parties and their leaders than the ideology of Communism itself. X-Editor (talk) 21:50, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Why are we giving “regimes” a pass, if the article must be retained? “Regime” is a term most commonly used by Western states and their media to describe governments ("democratic", dictatorial or otherwise) with whom they find themselves in dispute. It’s a loaded and inherently ideological term. It is not within the gift of Misplaced Pages editors to determine what is and is not a legitimate government.

Given that many of the governments alleged to have committed the crimes listed in this article enjoy (or enjoyed) popular legitimacy within their own states, why not simply refer to them as “governments?” If alleged mass killings make a government a “regime”, then the term must be applied to the United States and most of its allies. DublinDilettante (talk) 23:48, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Regime is often used to refer to governments that are dictatorships or authoritarian, which an accurate description of the governments mentioned in the article. X-Editor (talk) 23:58, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
I am once again reminding you that assertions do not become facts because you happen to believe in them. DublinDilettante (talk) 00:09, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Says the person who went on an opinionated screed about the so-called "keepist" camp for the article. X-Editor (talk) 00:12, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Indeed, these governments were all a "Dictatorship of the proletariat" after all. In any case "Communist regime" has higher usage than "Communist government". --Nug (talk) 00:08, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug, since you don't believe they were dictatorships "of the proletariat," and that is merely how they described themselves, I take your comments as sarcasism rather than legitimate argument. It's best to leave comments like that out of these discussions. TFD (talk) 00:19, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Do you have a diff to support your assertion? I was reading Bellamy the other day. What struck me was apart from the number of victims which distinguishes communist from non-communist mass killings, another key distinction is the fact that communist perpetrators and their supporters exhibit very little recognition that their ideology of selective extermination of large numbers of people (presumably the Völkerabfälle) might be morally problematic. Apparently Stalin and his clique remained proud of the mass killings they had sanctioned to the very end of their lives. Towards the end of the Cold War some communist regimes, notably the Soviet Union, shifted from openly espousing selective extermination to strategies of denial according to Bellamy. And this denial seems to be intensifying, as historian Professor Robert Tombs said, it is "at least as bad as Holocaust denial". --Nug (talk) 05:05, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
That’s the Robert Tombs who credits England, the country with the longest record of imperialist genocide in history (continuing well into the 20th century in Kenya, India and elswhere) with “their long pioneering of the rule of law, of accountability and representation in government, of religious toleration and of civil institutions; and for their determined role in the defeat of modern tyrannies”? DublinDilettante (talk) 13:09, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
A contributor to the SignPost quoted it slightly differently in the section "User talk:Cygnis insignis#"As bad as Holocaust denial", I feel a little better now. ~ cygnis insignis 09:36, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Dictatorship of the proletariat means, according to its entry in Encyclopedia Britannica, "rule by the proletariat—the economic and social class consisting of industrial workers who derive income solely from their labour—during the transitional phase between the abolition of capitalism and the establishment of communism." You obviously do not believe that the Soviet Union was ruled by its working class.

I don't know what you were reading, but will instead reply to you. Why do you think it is necessary to compare Communist and non-Communist mass killings? Also, why would you think that other editors are not aware that such comparisons have been made, especially when the talk pages are filled with such discussions?

This article is not the place to advance personal beliefs, no matter how valid. The best we can do is to present the various views with the weight they are accorded in reliable sources. That means incidentally that view you are railing against would not receive much credit in this article. But as is obvious from the discussions, none of the editors see it as a valid view either. There are more constructive ways to advance your views than to post them here.

TFD (talk) 05:41, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

Wasn't the Soviet Union ruled by a "Vanguard party" that claimed to represent the working class? At least the National Socialist Workers Party of Germany gained 33% of the vote in the last free elections before they seized power, who voted for the Bolsheviks? And no, not my personal thoughts, just relaying what Bellamy wrote in the Human Rights Quarterly. --Nug (talk) 06:11, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Comment was edited to explain Nazi. ~ cygnis insignis 06:30, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Wow! You caught me out editing my own comment! --Nug (talk) 06:47, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Are you genuinely saying the Nazis were better than the Soviets because people voted for them??? BSMRD (talk) 07:19, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Nazis are the scum of the earth. --Nug (talk) 07:48, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Just not as bas as the people they were specifically sworn to destroy, and who ultimately defeated them at the cost of tens of millions of lives? DublinDilettante (talk) 13:16, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug -- they apparently got around 24% of the vote in the 1917 Russian Constituent Assembly election... -- AnonMoos (talk) 07:39, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Oh okay, that's interesting, thanks. --Nug (talk) 07:48, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug, I did not ask you if the Communists claimed to represent the working class. I asked if you believed the Soviet Union was ruled by the working class. TFD (talk) 07:42, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Didn't I just ask you if the Soviet Union was ruled by a "Vanguard party" that claimed to represent the working class? --Nug (talk) 07:48, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
You: "Indeed, these governments were all a "Dictatorship of the proletariat" after all.
Me: "Nug, since you don't believe they were dictatorships "of the proletariat," and that is merely how they described themselves, I take your comments as sarcasism rather than legitimate argument"
You: "Do you have a diff to support your assertion?"
Me: "You obviously do not believe that the Soviet Union was ruled by its working class."
You: "Wasn't the Soviet Union ruled by a "Vanguard party" that claimed to represent the working class?"
Me: "Nug, I did not ask you if the Communists claimed to represent the working class. I asked if you believed the Soviet Union was ruled by the working class.
I do not understand why you cannot answer the question. I hope you appreciate the difference between someone making a claim and its actually being true.
TFD (talk) 07:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
And you explicit question was where in that exchange? All I see are claims of "since you don't believe ..." and "You obviously do not believe that ..."--Nug (talk) 08:05, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Nug, do you believe the Soviet Union was ruled by its ruling Class? TFD (talk) 09:19, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Jumping in—why does the electoral success of the NSDAP or the Bolsheviks actually matter for purposes of this article? It seems like this is getting far in the weeds to such an extent that it’s diverging from the goal to discuss rationales regarding a potential change in article title. — Mhawk10 (talk) 08:03, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
It could be that Nug understand "dictatorship of the proletariat" only in Soviet terms, e.g. vanguard party ruling in representation of the working class rather than "dictatorship of the proletariat" in academic/Marxist terms, e.g. the working class itself as the ruling class. All Communist states were dictatorships in the first term, not the second. Davide King (talk) 09:24, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

This is becoming a huge mess. Paul Siebert, as far as I see it, "Victims of Communism" is the common name of the topic you outlined here:

"In my opinion, the really notable topic is the discussion of the view that Communism was the greatest mass murderer in XX century. Who said that? Why? What was the main purpose for putting forward this idea? How this idea was accepted? Who supports that? Who criticise it and what the criticism consists in? How this idea is linked to recent trends in Holocaust obfuscation? And so on, and so forth. This would be a really notable topic, and that can save the article from deletion. However, that will require almost complete rewrite of the article."

This is clearly the notable topic, and we can write a NPOV article without engaging in OR/SYNTH, since as has been noted by The Four Deuces there is, in fact, a literature about this. We need not to worry about any can of worms because the article will be theory-focused and based, and any significant event will simply be linked, thus avoiding coatracks and forks of describing events according to genocide scholars rather than summary style that fails NPOV without the majority sources which do not describe an event as mass killing, or any other term we list at 'Terminology', discuss events separately, and do not make any Communist grouping as we do here. Davide King (talk) 07:59, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

I think that the notable article topic is the one that serves as a summary style piece covering mass killings committed by communist regimes. The topic you are proposing might be part of a section in that summary style article (or a sub-article thereof), but I do not see that as being the main focus of this sort of page. — Mhawk10 (talk) 08:05, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Then this article is unfixable because, as noted by the AfD and Robert McClenon in particular, the name is the problem. I do not understand why you are so fixed on mass killings — if you truly want a summary style about mass killings, it must be refocused on Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot (three Communist leaders, not Communist regimes), plus the Red Terror, as those are the only events that majority sources describe as mass killing events. Those are also two different topics, except one has scholarly literature and does not fail NPOV/OR/SYNTH (Siebert, TFD, and mine), the other is unfixable — you also have no excuse not supporting similar articles about capitalist and fascist regimes. We have a chapter about capitalist atrocities during the Cold War, and The Black Book of Capitalism as well. I do not think engaging in such grouping is fruitful but at least we are consistent in violating policies all around, and not just for Communism ... You have repeatedly failed in providing the Communist grouping and genocide scholars as majority sources, and as something that is part of mainstream scholarly discourse rather than in isolation. Davide King (talk) 08:16, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
I agree with Mhawk10. The very first sentence in Valentino's chapter on Communist Mass Killings is "Communist regimes have been responsible for this century’s most deadly episodes of mass killing." That is just a plain fact. As to why that is the case Valentino has his conclusions, which are mentioned in Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Proposed_causes, along with the other proposed causes. --Nug (talk) 08:22, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Just like Bellamy, they say Communist regimes but in practice what they mean and discuss is Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot. Why we should give so much weight to those two authors, even though Valentino is about mass killings in general, and Bellamy also discusses capitalist regimes is something that none of you has answered — a chapter in a book does not mean a new topic has been created. We also still disagree about Valentino. Davide King (talk) 08:27, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Adam Jones also discusses Stalin and Mao together, and Pol Pot in a separated chapter. We never doubted that there are sources, what we doubt is whether they represent a mainstream, majority view and/or new topic; the fact that they are mostly chapters about general mass killings show that we need not to discuss this in a separate article but simply expand Mass killing discussing their theories of the events, not the events themselves. Davide King (talk) 08:31, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Doesn't matter what you think of Valentino, is there a source that disputes his claim that "Communist regimes have been responsible for this century’s most deadly episodes of mass killing"? What is this so called "mainstream view" that communist mass killings did not occur during the 20th Century? --Nug (talk) 08:37, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Are you returning to strawman us as denying the events? In fact, that quoted part is perfectly in line with my proposed topic. For a "mainstream view", take a look at Ellman, and note that he is referring only to Stalinism because most historians and scholars and Communism do not support such broad Communist grouping or death toll for the same reasons. Davide King (talk) 08:44, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
I just read the Ellman paper, there is nothing in there to support your claim, you are just making it up. --Nug (talk) 09:04, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Please, be more specific and to what exactly claim you are referring to. That the paper is not focused on Stalinism? That the "victims of Stalinism/Soviet power" is itself not problematic or confusing (so imagine how problematic and confusing it must be to do this for Communism as a whole)? That it is not a "mainstream view"? Davide King (talk) 09:12, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
That is why I provided Ellman, not because "communist mass killings did not occur during the 20th Century", which is a strawman on your part and no one is denying this, but because of the body counting itself and the whole grouping categorization, which serious historians like Ellman do not do for Communism as a whole. Davide King (talk) 09:15, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
I do not understand why you are so fixed on mass killings… if you are arguing that I have a personal fixation with mass killings, then I would remind you that the start of my involvement in this article was when it got nominated for deletion. The reason I am arguing this is (a) the sources I’m this article and those presented in the AfD clearly establish that this is a grouping used by scholars and that (b) attempts to transform the article to cover some other topic entirely really does not cover “mass killings under communist regimes”. Is an article on mass killings under communist regimes primarily supposed to be about the historical methods that different people use to come to various different estimates for death tolls? No; it’s supposed to be about describing the actual killings primarily. Additionally, the repeated assertion that genocide scholars are somehow a fringe minority group on the topic of… mass killings… really seems to be an extraordinary claim. But, of course, feel free to take it to FTN if you think genocide scholars are a fringe group in this regard. Regarding I do not think engaging in such grouping is fruitful, perhaps you do not, but that does not change the fact that your original research on the supposed lack of usefulness of the grouping has no bearing on notability when in-depth reliable sources exist that argue against that point. Fortunately, we do not have to relitigate that AfD on this page, but rejecting sources offhand because they find the grouping to be useful (or, alternatively, they discuss different views on how useful the grouping is) really does not seem to be consistent with WP:NPOV. And appeals to other pages feel entirely spurious; if you want to go make a page on all the mass killings conducted by fascist regimes and you have enough reliable sources that discuss the killings as a group to attain notability, then go for it and make the page. — Mhawk10 (talk) 08:43, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
About mass killing fixation, I was talking in general — it is precisely because mass killing is an academic term with certain criteria that we should drop it if we want to discuss all Communist regimes. As noted by Valentino, only Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot engaged in mass killings under the most accepted definition; of course, people died under many other Communist regimes but they do not fit this mass killing categorization, which is why I propose that we drop this, e.g. we should re-focus to death tolls rather than mass killings, hence "Victims of Communism" renaming. the sources I’m this article and those presented in the AfD clearly establish that this is a grouping used by scholars Let me stop you right here — by scholars is not sufficient, it is either majority or minority of scholars, and which ones?
Also, we have disputed some sources that you and others say they support Communism as a special grouping, when I and others say they do not (e.g. Fein and Valentino), so there is a dispute about sources, and I think Paul Siebert is better at explaining this and go down on each source. I never said genocide scholars are fringe, I always said they represent a minority, and that is because if they are going to discuss Communism, they should not contradict what historians and country specialists say, and that their attempts at comparative analysis have had many problems. Again, it appears that you are denying the NPOV probelms repeatedly outlined at both the AfD and by DRN moderator, so I kindly ask Robert McClenon to weight in and comment to help us on this — because we obviously disagree, and unless we engage in an analysis of sources to compare whose reading is correct, we are not going to move forward. Davide King (talk) 08:55, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
File:Welcome logo VOC Logo Words Navy copy.png
Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation logo

The title Victims of Communism currently redirects to Soviet and Communist studies#Victims of Communism, not sure if that has been pointed out. ~ cygnis insignis 08:19, 5 December 2021 (UTC) & note the website of another VOC is victimsofcommunism.org ~ cygnis insignis 09:13, 5 December 2021 (UTC) The site includes current successful programs like VOC Spurs Uruguay’s Elimination of Cuban Medical Brigades Program"We found that Cuba’s communist medical brigades in Uruguay have been penetrating Uruguay since 2005 … " ~ cygnis insignis 09:23, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

That could be the lead of a separated article, e.g. a rewrite/move of this. Davide King (talk) 08:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Excuse the post scripts after replies, unhelpful really. ~ cygnis insignis 09:30, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Also compare "victims of communism" (first results shows literature) vs. "communist mass killings" (first results show the mass killings of communists in Indonesia). Davide King (talk) 09:20, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

The problem with this proposal is that this article was originally Communist Genocide; its proponents seek to claim that the article ought to speak about a real phenomena of preventable, intentional, mass killings, due to an ideology, which certain states possessed. Sadly the categories or real, preventable, intentional, mass, ideological and trans-state have all been demonstrated as faulty, or non-scholarly. As a result the article genuinely belongs at hysteric titles: about a fabulist conspiracy theory. State specific crimes against humanity are sufficient articles: go forth and edit famine as politics in the soviet union. Fifelfoo (talk) 09:01, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

The degree of acceptance of a theory does not determine whether or not there can be an article about it. So for example, there are articles about evolution and creation science. We can for example have an article about the theory an hysterical conspiracy theory. In fact the article Jewish Bolshevism already exists. Some editors thought that article should list the numbers of Jews in the Soviet Communist Party and explain their "disproportionate" influence. TFD (talk) 09:37, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
I have my own title proposal, since "mass killings" implies that the communist regimes actively pushed people to die and is, therefore, why it is SYNTH, I propose that we instead rename this article to "Deaths under communist regimes" which is exactly the premise of the article, especially since it includes deaths from famines, and not exclusively politicides. Additionally, I would propose to drop the term "regime" to shorten the title of the article, so it should read "Deaths under communism". MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 11:51, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
People are always dying, so your proposal is too broad and ambiguous. Scholars have more correct terms: "excess mortality" or "excess deaths". That would be a solution, and I proposed that earlier. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:50, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
@Fifelfoo: Actually, you are not completely right. Thus, Valentino discusses the "mass killing" category as real, preventable, intentional, but he explicitly excludes ideology, and do not discuss it as a trans-state phenomenon. That is sufficient to discuss those events in one article, but insufficient to link them to Communism (which is the main goal of this article, according to the most numerous party) Paul Siebert (talk) 15:54, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Per WP:CRITERIA my proposal is fine and acceptable, however, I do not object your idea. Simply put: Anything would be better than the current title. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 16:05, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
"Victims" is incredibly vague. If we're talking about deaths, we should say "deaths". For example, "Death toll of the X, Y, and Z regimes" would be more specific, although regime is a loaded term; to avoid it, we might go with "Excess deaths under the X, Y, and Z governments". Specifically naming the regimes/dictatorships/governments involved would also curtail the risk of WP:SYNTH. XOR'easter (talk) 17:23, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
But "Victims of Communism" is incredibilty not vague, since it is a term defined in reliable sources. Similar arguments to yours have been made for changing the names of Anti-semitism, Homophobia, Islamophobia, etc. We could even change the term "communist regime," since communism literally means no regime. Maybe we should not call it the West Indies, since it is nowhere near India. It is not up to Misplaced Pages editors to correct or reinvent terms defined in reliable source. TFD (talk) 18:39, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Your title is bad, because it is blatantly non-neutral. If we are not going to narrow the article's scope, we cannot use the title derived from the term that is used by a tiny fraction of sources.
  • How many sources describe the victims of the Great Purge as "Victims of Communism"? (a hint: majority of sources that I saw do not discuss them in that context: they were the victims of Stalin's campaign directed against his political opponents, real or perceived);
  • How many sources describe the victims of Cambodian Genocide as "Victims of Communism"? (a hint, read, e.g. Kiernan)
  • I can analyse each category of deaths described in this article, but I see no need in that. Everyone can do that, and for almost every category the conclusion will be the same: those deaths are described as VoC only by a minor part of sources.
In addition, there are sources (quite reliable sources) that openly criticize the idea to ascribe all those deaths to some "generic Communism". I already cited those sources, on this talk page and elsewhere. Thus, one of the authors who objects to that approach is Nicolas Werth. Therefore, by proposing this term, you present the views expressed by Courtois or Malia (which have been extensively criticised) as majority views, and imply that the views expressed by such authors as David-Fox or Werth are a minority views.
It is your real intention? I don't think so. Please, stop pushing this absolutely biased title. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:57, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Sources that connect the Great Purge, Khmer Rouge mass murder and other mass killings to the communist ideology, or movement use the term "Victims of Communism." That should be the topic of the article: the theory that these events are connected and how accepted that view is in reliable sources. That can be neutral in the same way the articles on evolution and creation science are neutral. The fact that we are using the term created by people who draw a connection should not be a problem: people who see no connection have not invented a term to describe the connection because they don't see one.
Both the title and the first line of this article make an implicit connection between Communism and mas killings: "Mass killings under communist regimes occurred throughout the 20th century." It then goes for a body count and provides a number of authors who explain what the connection is. No Misplaced Pages article should ever make an implicit connection.
You say that neutrality can be achieved by saying that many if no most scholars draw no connection. But the whole structure of the article, beginning with the title, prevents this.
We could begin this article by saying, "Vicims of Communism" is a term used by some writers to attribute mass killings in various Communist led countries to the international Communist movement or ideology."
TFD (talk) 21:01, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
In other words, you propose to rename it to "Victims of Communism", and not to Victims of Communism. In other words, it is supposed to discuss the narrative rather than the actual events. However, by doing that, you put a cart before the horse: renaming does not reflect the content of this article, in contrast, it reflects your vision of its future scope.
If the article's topic will be changed as you proposed (actually, I myself, as well as @North8000: also proposed something of that kind), then this title would be ok. However, currently it is absolutely premature to speak about that, because majority of users will interpret this title as a story of all (real or perceived, lethal and non-lethal) victims of some "generic Communism". I propose you to drop this idea, at least for a while, and to focus on more realistic and local things. One of the most obvious article's problems is its "Terminology" section, which creates an absolutely false impression that the topic ("Mass killings under Communist regimes") is a focus of research interest of a scholarly community, which is trying to develop some common terminology. That is obviously wrong, and this section must be deleted. It would be great if you helped us to resolve this dispute. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:24, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
(edit conflict) First, even if "Victims of Communism" were a solidly established term of art within a narrow field, there would still be a good argument not to use it as a title for an article that will be read widely outside that field. Second, the claim that it is an established term of art is in dispute. Third, WP:NOTDICT: we generally write about what things are, not what they're called. Why would an article about a term used by some writers be called for? Surely the priority ought to be on the historical events themselves. Fourth, the term "victims of communism" is used in other meanings, including those imprisoned or displaced but not killed (e.g., ). XOR'easter (talk) 21:43, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Lots of Misplaced Pages articles use words or phrases for their titles, that doesn't mean they are dictionary entries. In the example provided, a definition of an octopus would tell you what the word means and so would a dictionary. The difference is that an encyclopedia would provide empirical information about the animals. The fact that a word or term may have different meanings does not mean that it should not be used as an article title. Octopus has different meanings which is why there is a page called Octopus (disambiguation). TFD (talk) 00:58, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Now I'm thinking about octopuses, but wanted to note another article title resulting from expertly crafted propaganda, The Jewish question, and I believe race and intelligence has been mentioned before, neither of these necessarily imply they are 'mainstream' scholarly fields. The proposal would align the content to what is discussed, such as who, why and where these questionable propositions, 100 million victims of communism are being expounded. ~ cygnis insignis 02:15, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
XOR'easter, that is the problem — this article should not be events-focused but theory-focused. The events are notable on their own, not as a grouping, which is at best a minority view. The topic of this article should be about the theory that those events are connected, 100 million is the number of victims (while victims of communism may be used to include non-deaths, it is commonly used to mean the 100 million dead), and that communism is the main cause.
Paul Siebert, what TFD proposed is what I propose too, and what you, TFD, North8000, I, and others support is indeed that — the only disagreement is how to arrive that, hence why your suggestion to TFD, which I can understand and is why I support your latest edits. I would, however, propose that we seriously start thinking about having a sandbox about it, especially because many users may better understand how it would look like and change their mind to support it, and another sandbox from the current version that you can work on (e.g. as you did for World War II), where you may make more extensive edits that may be reverted here, and also to better show and explain the problems, the why, and the how to fix them. Because I really want to have a NPOV article about it but I would not know how to start without some help or clear structure, e.g. some of my edits were reverted as OR/SYNTH but that is because the current article is OR/SYNTH, and saying that the concept is disputed or ignored, while true, it is OR/SYNTH with the current structure because we got the structure wrong.
As an example, we have citation needed tags for this: The concept of mass killing as a phenomenon unique to communist governments, or ideologically inherent within them, is heavily disputed. This is totally backwards. Davide King (talk) 04:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
"Victims of Communism" is a bad name for the theory, not least because people who didn't die are called "victims of Communism". If the page is supposed to be about a theory, we ought to call it something like Attribution of excess deaths to communism. XOR'easter (talk) 16:12, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Open an RM on this proposal

Abysmally terrible sources and citations

Just one peak at this wiki and I see why so many people were calling for its deletion. Death toles are cited using works by people such as Robert Conquest, a former propagandist for the British government's secret Information Research Department, and whose works have been beaten into the dirt by history professors such as Wheatcroft, Suny, Davies and Manning.

Within several areas of the wiki the "Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation is used as a source, despite the fact the organisation has such a terrible history of fudging numbers to make higher death toles that it counts every single death of every person (edited: during the Covid pandemic), no matter which country they are from as a "victim of communism". They're so desperate to artificially inflate deaths that they count people who died in capitalist regimes because they could not afford privatised healthcare as victims of communism. Again a look at their funding shows them to be a propaganda front for the US government and their board has included former war criminals such as George W Bush.

As if the sources couldn't get even worse, the infamous The Black Book of Communism is used as a source, a work so terribly researched that many of its own contributors denounced it, and its own wiki page includes an eight paragraph long list of professional historians attacking the book for its oversimplifications, sloppy research, and quest to achieve as higher and higher death toll numbers.

This is just what I've spotted in an hour but I'm sure it will get worse the closer I look at the citations. I could be wrong but I think we should also take a closer look at the sources for some of the photographs cited. A brief look at the source for one of them, the "Ukrainian American Youth Association", appears to have some dodgy links with the one-time Nazi collaborators of the Organisation of Ukrainian Nationalists, nad includes some glorification of fascists like Stepan Bandera.

This is just terrible, I've rarely seen wiki pages which are this much of a mess. I don't know how we can possibly fix all this because anytime somebody tries you get an activist who just undoes everything. BulgeUwU (talk) 21:18, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

See WP:RSE. Those sources are deemed by the community at large reliable and presumably appear on other Misplaced Pages articles talking about Communism. If you remove a source that is deemed reliable of course you will be reverted that is why I have not done it myself. The first paragraph must include the title written in bold, and currently, there is a debate ongoing to rename the article to something more appropriate. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 21:23, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
You might want to make your case over WP:RSN to get those sources removed. That was suggested to another editor a week ago. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 21:28, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Books published by Oxford University Press and Harvard University Press are considered reliable, gold-standard sources on Misplaced Pages. The misleading presentation above has no basis in Misplaced Pages policy.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 21:36, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Is the Black Book of Communism a reliable, gold-standard source, yes or no? Yes or no? That specific book. Yes or no? DublinDilettante (talk) 21:56, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
Conquest's The Great Terror is certainly a gold-standard reliable source, and, yes, at least Werth's and Margolin's contributions to The Black Book of Communism without question meet that standard as well.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 22:52, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
There’s a very old joke about a diffident curate who gets served a rotten egg at the vicar’s table, and when the vicar points it out, the curate says, “oh no, sir, I assure you, parts of it are excellent!” It’s meant to be a joke and not a guide for editing Misplaced Pages. A crank publication edited by a crank for the purposes of right-wing crankery is still that, even if it came ex libris God himself. DublinDilettante (talk) 00:02, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Take a look at the RSN discussion about the Black Book. There is no binary answer to your question. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:10, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Books by acclaimed university presses are generally reliable, but no publisher is perfect. Even Homer nods; I can think of at least one philosophy book from Oxford UP that is absolute dreck. XOR'easter (talk) 21:58, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
In response to a recent edit by BulgeUwU, I have reverted the change partially removing the reference to the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation. I think there's might be enough disagreement here that we could have a discussion about that source alone. IDontHaveAnAccountYet (talk) 23:22, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
I note that user BulgeUwU, who instigated this valuable section and accurately characterised the nature of this article, has now been blocked from editing, apparently due to concerns over their user name (which means nothing to me). My own account was blocked for 31 hours due to a user following me from this page to edit war on another. There is absolutely no way any progress can be made, or any credible RfC undertaken, in this total absence of good faith and with this rampant degree of disruption. DublinDilettante (talk) 17:17, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I used to be "BulgeUwU, and I frequently edited on wikipedia for over a year with no problem. Then the very moment I made edits to this wikipedia page somebody falsly flagged my username as being inappropriate, which then led to me being blocked and forced to change it, and even continued to block me even days after I requested a change in username. I'm certain somebody who didn't like my perspective on this wiki page (which I believe should be deleted) decided a quick way to shut me up for a week would be to falsly flag my account. All it's really done is make me more determined to fix the countless problems this article faces. The History Wizard of Cambridge (talk) 02:46, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
If that is true that you edited on Misplaced Pages for an entire year with that username, then that is surprising, but also possibly explainable. When I saw your username I thought it was weird, but I did not think it was offensive enough to warrant reporting you, so because I deemed that was ultimately trivial and demanded more effort than just simply going on with my business I did not report you and I presume you survived 1 year with that username because you happened to come across editors like me who err at your username, but would rather not bother with you because there was inherently nothing disruptive about your username. Additionally, I know for a fact that people on Twitter have had similar usernames to yours, but much more objectionable. I also presume it was Captain Eek who reported you based on what they said on your talkpage, and in fact, they participate in the discussion below, therefore, you are completely correct when you say that your participation on this talkpage is what caused your username to finally be reported to the admins. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 12:59, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

Robert Tombs

Just so people know, this is the historian being relied upon as the moral authority for the retention of this article, and who was permitted to influence the AfD (and is even mentioned on the Ideological Bias article itself!)

https://www.dailymail.co.uk/debate/article-9543161/PROFESSOR-ROBERT-TOMBS-daftest-lecture-wokery-yet.html

He’s writing in the Daily Mail, a far-right tabloid deprecated as a source on Misplaced Pages, decrying the Liverpool Guild of Students’ decision to rename an accommodation block after Dorothy Kuya. The previous title, Gladstone Hall, has been changed because (he says) "...in the eyes of the woke brigade, Gladstone committed the mortal sin of having a family connection to slavery".

Needless to say, one of his issues with the mixed-race female anti-racism campaigner Kuya is that she was a member of the Communist Party. If this doesn’t make it clear where Tombs’s anticommunist perspectives come from, nothing will.

The anticommunist sources being relied on in this article are absolute garbage.

DublinDilettante (talk) 01:17, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

The Daily Mail is conservative, not far-right. There's no need to continue to complain about the AfD. That's over now and our main focus should be on fixing this article instead. X-Editor (talk) 02:18, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@X-Editor: regarding your revert, my backdating the article tag, do you now recognise where WP:Synthesis links to? ~ cygnis insignis 02:37, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Cygnis insignis: I don't really care that deeply about what date the tag is, so I wouldn't mind if it goes back to 2009. X-Editor (talk) 02:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Ta. I restored it, but self-reverted because it was 3rr, apologies for that. @Nug: was rolling back a bunch of my edits without edit summaries, so if someone could restore my edit I would appreciate it. ~ cygnis insignis 02:55, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Oh good, what I have noted above is buried and I aint done with responding to his assertions. I found another blog comment on Tomb's History Reclaimed site, explained at Why We Are Reclaiming History, which notes "Despite the facile narrative that defines this type of media, the claim is not without merit when noting that most endorsers are of emeritus status. The advancement of their own academic careers is evidently no longer central to their practice. Self-censorship is likely to operate amongst younger scholars of a similar persuasion in departments where mainstream narratives may apply suffocating pressure to conform with anti-imperial and decolonising programmes". Solares, Carlos Conde (14 October 2021). "Reclaiming an imperial history of the (white, Anglo-Saxon) West (that excludes Spain)". North East Bylines. ~ cygnis insignis 02:37, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Another source express.co.uk/news/ Woke fightback: Academics launch plan to take on 'blatantly false' reading of history. ~ cygnis insignis 02:48, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Tombs argues in his article that Gladstone's name was removed from a building because his father once owned slaves. In fact, it was removed because Gladstone himself supported slavery and as an MP voted against the Slavery Abolition Act 1833. His maiden speech in parliament was a defense of slavery and the plantation system, his father being one of the largest slave owners in the British Empire, according to his Misplaced Pages article. Whether or not this is sufficient reason to remove Gladstone, Tombs' account of the facts is false. TFD (talk) 10:10, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
So what? This whole section is pointless and does not contribute to improving the article per WP:NOTFORUM. --Nug (talk) 11:43, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
You wrote at the AfD, "Tombs says the article is careful and balanced. What makes you better qualified than Tombs to judge?" Peronally, I would say "who cares?" if a person who falsified facts in order to push a political views said this article was "careful and balanced." While this may not matter to you, it does to other editors who are more concerned with accuracy than supporting a political position. TFD (talk) 02:33, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Wow. Is this accurate, Nug? Did you brush off revelations about Tombs’s academic and political background after previously asserting that he was a better source than the participants in the AfD? Genuinely, and in all fairness, you should remove yourself from this discussion if so. I think there’s a strong case for re-running the AfD in the light of this revelation. DublinDilettante (talk) 12:18, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

100 million figure in the lead

The claim that the 100 million figure is the most common-cited number has been reverted back into the lead, even though there is no support whatsoever for that wording in the body. The closest things in the body are a cite to the blog of the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation - an obviously WP:BIASED source funded by a think tank - and a quote by Engel-Di Mauro that that is the most common figure used by a specific, narrow surge of anti-communists in that particular time period, which is devoted to exhaustively debunking it. Neither of these are anywhere near sufficient to support the argument that that is the most common figure in general, which is what the proposed text implies. I feel it's undue for the lead in any form, but it is flatly factually inaccurate and unsupported by both the article and its sources in the version people keep attempting to add. In fact, the one source that was being used for anything remotely resembling it in the text specifically did not support the idea that it was a common claim in general - it specifically said that it was an opinion that originated solely in the introduction to The Black Book of Communism and was otherwise unsupported. The lead rewrite is already WP:BOLD; this addition is clearly contentious and needs discussion per WP:BRD (though I see absolutely no possibility that it could be supported in its current form - it is a misreading of the article, nothing more.) The only sources in the article that actually endorse it (as opposed to bringing it up to criticize it) are the intro from The Black Book of Communism and the blog of the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation, which are some of the lowest-quality and most WP:BIASED sources in the article and which certainly cannot be used to define the lead. This is a highly-controversial article; when an WP:EXCEPTIONAL new addition to the lead is disputed, discuss it, don't just put it back with an edit summary saying it's fine. Do not restore it without consensus. --Aquillion (talk) 02:58, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

It has been strongly suggested, or I am now (again), that is the synthetic topic the article is based on. I'm starting to favour the title change to "Victims of Communism", the canard that mention 100 million. ~ cygnis insignis 03:16, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Aquillion: that is in my to-do list. However, first, I would prefer to focus on the Terminology section, which creates an absolutely false impression that MKuCR is some well defined scholarly topic. After we resolve this problem, I propose to totally rewrite the "Estimate" section: in reality, not only the figure by itself, but even the very idea to come up with some single figure and link it to Communism is seen as deeply politicised and controversial idea. That means the discussion of any global estimates must be done only in a context of political implications of that figure. It is deeply incorrect to use a pseudo-neutral scholarly tone for that description. Instead, we must explain why the idea to combine all figures into a singe aggregate figure was proposed, who links it with Communism, what are political purposes, who supports this approach, who criticises, etc. After all of that will be done, the lead will be updated.
I propose you to join my work on "Terminology", and after that we will jointly work with "Estimates". I have a plan, I have a lot of sources, and we will be able to convert the section into a nice and neutral story. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:21, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
That is fine, but this is a new addition to the lead. It's easier to object when it is first added, especially given that I feel that the body simply doesn't support it; the article has gone without this line for years, it can go without it for a while longer until / unless we reach a consensus on some alternative version. --Aquillion (talk) 03:23, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Usually, the lead is supposed to reflect what the article's body says, so the best way is to start from the article's body. Since the latter says "100 million", there is no strong reason not to include it into the lede. It may be reasonable to remove it, but that is not a urgent need. And keep in mind that the article is under 1RR, so you may be reported for technically exceeding the 1RR limit. I am warning you, because the only block that I got during my Wikilife was exactly for that reason and when I was editing this article. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:33, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
As soon as we started talking about estimates, take a look at this:
"In 2017, historian Stephen Kotkin wrote in The Wall Street Journal that communist regimes killed at least 65 million people between 1917 and 2017, commenting: "Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering."
From this quote, a reader may conclude that Communists killed 65 million, and even more died from starvation. That is a direct lie. Kotkin said that 65 million deaths is the demographic estimated. ...in the Soviet Union, China, Mongolia, Eastern Europe, Indochina, Africa, Afghanistan and parts of Latin America—communism has claimed at least 65 million lives, according to the painstaking research of demographers. That means, (i) Kotkinn cites someone other's figures (not his own data), (ii) he speaks about demographic losses. The current text of this "well written and well sourced" article contains tons of misinterpretations or a direct lies. It need a thorough analysis and, probably, major rewrite. However, let's finish with Terminology first. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:01, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert, with respect, you are not parsing Kotkin's statement accurately, probably because English is not your first language. Kotkin's statement means that, while communists did in fact kill people deliberately, the majority of the 65 million+ deaths they caused were the result of unintended famines. There is no other way to parse Kotkin's statement that would be internally consistent or logical. When Kotkin states that there were at least 65 million victims of communism, some of whom were purposefully killed, and that "even more of its victims have died from starvation," the reference to "victims" refers back to the larger whole of 65 million. In English, "Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation" does not mean that "communism has killed 65 million people intentionally, and even more victims have died from starvation," nor could anyone fluent in the language reasonably construe it to mean such a thing.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 04:46, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
It seems you parse my own statement incorrectly, for I am saying exactly what you say.
The full paragraph says:
"But a century of communism in power—with holdouts even now in Cuba, North Korea and China—has made clear the human cost of a political program bent on overthrowing capitalism. Again and again, the effort to eliminate markets and private property has brought about the deaths of an astounding number of people. Since 1917—in the Soviet Union, China, Mongolia, Eastern Europe, Indochina, Africa, Afghanistan and parts of Latin America—communism has claimed at least 65 million lives, according to the painstaking research of demographers.
Communism’s tools of destruction have included mass deportations, forced labor camps and police-state terror—a model established by Lenin and especially by his successor Joseph Stalin. It has been widely imitated. Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering"
This paragraph does not allow double interpretation: Kotkin says that, (i) according to demographers, at least 65 million people died prematurely, and (ii) these deaths included such categories as mass deportations, state terror, starvation etc.
Demography is intrinsically incapable of separating death by categories. It is a pure statistical discipline that deals with deaths (from all causes), births, migration etc. The figure of 65 million may mean either "excess mortality" (all premature deaths) or "population losses" (unborn infants, emigration AND premature deaths). Period. I totally rule out an possibility that Kotkin, a professor in Princeton, use "population losses" figures (that would be ridiculous), so he definitely means "excess mortality". And, obviously, he is too educated to refer to demographic data as an estimate for the number of execution deportation etc. Demography cannot provide such information. To claim the opposite would be as ridiculous as to claim that by using a multi-meter it is possible to tell if the electricity in your home was produced at nuclear or gas power plant.
That means, Kotkin's statement is in agreement with other sources: yes, "excess mortality" (all premature deaths) in Communist states (excluding WWII deaths in teh USSR) amounted to 65 million at least, and lion's share of those deaths were Great Chinese famine deaths. That is what he says.
And what we see in the MKuCR article?
  • It falsely ascribe to Kotkin a claim that Communists killed 65 million (that is a double lie: that figure was obtained not by Kotkin, but by unnamed demographers, and Kotkin never said 65 million were killed by Communists)
  • It claims that famine deaths and other categories are not included in those 65 million (that is a direct lie, for Kotkin says that, according to demographers, Communist rule lead to a loss of 65 million, and that included executions, deportations, starvation etc).
Just an example of one (out of many) falsifications that I found in this "pretty well sourced and well written article". Paul Siebert (talk) 23:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
How does one deal with such a proliferation of misstatements as that uttered by Paul Siebert above?
  • "It seems you parse my own statement incorrectly, for I am saying exactly what you say." Right, which is that our text (consisting almost entirely of a direct quote from Kotkin) is very clear and cannot reasonably be misunderstood as double-counting the 65 million excess deaths that were caused by communist governments in the twentieth century.
  • "It claims that famine deaths and other categories are not included in those 65 million (that is a direct lie ... " Our Misplaced Pages article, which includes a footnote with the entire excerpt for readers to examine for themselves, very obviously says nothing of the kind (nor has any other editor supported your peculiar interpretation), so your statement could indeed be considered a "direct lie."
  • "It falsely ascribe to Kotkin a claim that Communists killed ... " To the contrary, our article merely quotes Kotkin accurately as stating that "communism has claimed at least 65 million lives ... Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering." Note that Kotkin's use of "intentionally" implies that communist governments also unintentionally killed people.
  • "And, obviously, is too educated to refer to demographic data as an estimate for the number of execution deportation etc." Based on this comment, it seems like you are suggesting that even though the source (Kotkin) uses demographic data to estimate excess deaths, which he himself refers to as both intentional and unintentional "killings," the source is wrong and should know better (based on his education) that only direct executions (which demography cannot separate from other causes of death) qualify as "killings" (or "mass killings"). If your original research were accepted, this would set a drastic precedent for the rest of the article, but, alas, we cannot use Paul Siebert as a reliable source. We have to stick to what the source says, and cannot change it based on editor opinion alone.
  • "It falsely ascribe to Kotkin ... that figure was obtained not by Kotkin, but by unnamed demographers ... " For the record, the current version of the article states: "In 2017, historian Stephen Kotkin wrote in The Wall Street Journal that ... 'communism has claimed at least 65 million lives, according to the painstaking research of demographers.'" Paul Siebert's suggestion that we are somehow misrepresenting or distorting Kotkin, in some way, or that "wrote" isn't the correct form of attribution, and hence that the only solution is to remove Kotkin entirely as a source, seems like an astonishing (and disappointing) case study in bad-faith wikilawyering.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 23:29, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
  • The body certainly does not say, in the article voice, that the most common estimate overall is 100 million (that was my specific objection.) It doesn't say anything remotely close to that. It only mentions it a handful of times, most of them criticizing the number or attributing that view specifically to a handful of fierce anti-Communists. I assume you are not going to argue that we can use the blog of the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation unattributed in the lead; and even attributed I would argue it is undue for the lead (there is currently a reasonable argument above over whether they should even be used in the body, but citing their blog in particular seems dubious even in the body - personally I would never support putting them in the lead. Their blog could only be cited as WP:RSOPINION at best and they're just not noteworthy enough for their opinion to be leadworthy. "Think tank / advocacy group believes thing in line with their views", with no secondary sources treating it seriously, isn't really noteworthy.) Even before I changed it, the bit cited to Engel-Di Mauro still (accurately) stated that the figure is used only by anti-communist scholars, making it misleading for the lead to state that the figure is common overall. If we mention it in the lead at all, we would have to word it very differently - one thing the WP:RSN seems to be leaning towards is that we definitely cannot use Courtois without attribution, which this would be doing (since the sources near-universally agree that that number originates exclusively from him.) Regarding the 1RR, my last edit was two days ago - unless you meant my two recent edits; the second one wasn't a revert, but even if it were, multiple consecutive edits with no intervening edits are counted as one for 3RR / 1RR purposes. --Aquillion (talk) 04:58, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
The 100 Million claim is obviously very contentious, and as far as I can tell only used by the fiercest partisans of this topic, i.e. Courtois, the VOCMF etc. To say that it is the most common number is not supported by the body or the sources provided, and if it is presented in the lead or even really the article at all it must be presented as what it is, a (WP:FRINGE at worst, minority at best) view held by people who have demonstrated clear ideological bias with regards to this topic. BSMRD (talk) 03:42, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Please, go to the AfD talk page and read the quotes collected by me. That representative sample of sources gives an impression of how this approach is treated by scholars. It is especially interesting to read Werth's opinion. IMO, all those sources must be used in the re-written "Estimates" section to provide a proper context. And the section should be renamed to something like "Attempts to propose global estimates of Communist death toll and its political implications". Paul Siebert (talk) 04:05, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Howdy hello folks. I added the 100 million figure based on my reading of the article. I have no connection to the article, I just like writing leads a lot (its my favorite part of Misplaced Pages). When I saw this article only had like three sentences for a lead, that felt just criminal! So I spruced it up a bit from what I got out of the article. The 100 million figure stood out because it was mentioned repeatedly. If it isn't reliable, that should probably be made more clear in the body. Or perhaps there could be a note in the lead saying something like "100 million is mentioned commonly in the popular press, but is likely inaccurate as well." But I think some number should exist in the lead. Folks don't want to sift through 20 different estimates. That's why I included the high and low values, and what appeared to be the mode (100 million). I have no attachment to that number, aside from that some numbers should be mentioned in the lead. Remember, the majority of readers don't ever make it past the lead. CaptainEek 05:52, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • CaptainEek, this goes back to what is the main topic supposed to be — Communist mass killings, in which case the events and what happened is more important (e.g. we would say what happened according to majority scholarly sources, and limit ourselves to Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot, and the Red Terror with the Russian Civil War and White Terror in mind, e.g. mass killing events according to the most accepted definition of 50,000 within five years, which makes it pointless to mention death tolls, as that is out of the scope), or Communist death toll, in which case the events are to be seen as death toll events (e.g. we would say number of people died under event A, and we may mention all Communist regimes, in which the case the scope is much broader). The problem of the article is that it attempts to do both things, and treat all events as generic mass killings, plus ascribing a number of causes that are too ideologically-centered and not as nuanced and context-minded as majority scholarly sources and country experts do.
  • Until we actually agree on the main topic, its structure, and core sources, we are always going to have this problem. I would not have a problem mentioning estimates, perhaps just changing the wording that lower estimates are more reliable, higher estimates are from the popular press and/or include famines and other events which scholarly sources say should not be counted, and of course the criticism of the body-counting itself as a useless exercise to score a political point and push the view that Communism was worse than Nazism because it killed 100 million, or more people in general. Davide King (talk) 06:17, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
It should be pointed that Valentino (Cornell University Press, 2005) says: "Communist regimes have been responsible for this century's most deadly episodes of mass killing. Estimates of the total number of people killed by communist regimes range as high as 110 million." This puts the lie to the canard that only Courtois (Harvard University Press, 1999) or Dissident (2016) have arrived at 100 million.XavierItzm (talk) 13:28, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Can’t believe I have to point this out, but saying “estimates include” does not constitute making an estimate. If you want examples of people quoting the 100m figure, any fascist meme page on Facebook will have plenty. The issue is where the estimate comes from. DublinDilettante (talk) 14:49, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, it does not support your contention that someone other than Courtois reached 100 million - note, the blog you mentioned as your other source was vague as to who it was summarizing, which is to be expected for a mere blog post, but, as far as I can tell, was merely referencing Courtois as well. "Estimates include" means it surveyed all other estimates and that, presumably, Courtois was one of the ones they included (obviously, it doesn't support saying that it was the most common estimate, but I think we're past that particular dispute - I don't see anyone still arguing that 100 million is the most common or that we can say that in the article voice.) If you want to show that someone other than Courtois reached that figure, you need to show another source reaching the figure, or saying that someone other than Courtois reached the figure, not a source vaguely acknowledging that that is a figure that has been reached (we know it has been reached, by Courtois.) Also, could you stop referencing the blog as Dissident (2016) as if it were some sort of academic source? It's a blog; we cannot use it in the article. --Aquillion (talk) 23:22, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
A distinction without a difference. Dissident (2016) is the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation putting out its own number. What you are trying to say is that a Tweet by The Coca-Cola Company is not a tweet by Coca-Cola Company because obviously Coca-Cola Company has no fingers so it can't type a tweet. Duh! Obviously the person who writes Coca-Cola tweets is an employee of the company and whatever is published by the official tweet account is considered as spoken by the company. Ergo, what Dissident put out in 2016 is evidently what the Memorial Foundation is saying. XavierItzm (talk) 04:32, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
If you believe that someone's opinions or speculation on a random blog is an appropriate cite for a figure in this article, you're free to take it to WP:RSN (though the last discussion near-unanimously found this exact source unreliable for this exact statement; I'm baffled as to how it somehow creeped back in.) But I think your time and energy would be better spent finding better sources - if, as you say, this figure is actually significant, then it should be easy to find actual high-quality WP:RSes covering it, with a weight comparable to the other sources in the section, rather than being reduced to arguing that we can include random opinions from blogs. You might feel that it makes no difference where an opinion is published, but WP:BLOGS and WP:RSOPINION disagree - RSOPINION covers only some sources; it does not simply allow us to use any source we please as long as we have an in-text citation, while BLOGS flat-out says such sources are largely not acceptable. Again, seriously - you are arguing that this is a vital figure of paramount importance that belongs in the lead, and you are citing this to a rando think-tank blog! Come on. If you're convinced its so central to the topic, just find a better source. --Aquillion (talk) 21:12, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
@Aquillion: let's be realists. For many years various users were trying to fill the "Estimates" section with reliable data, and that lead to the current (quite a pathetic) state. Just in case if you haven't seen it, take a look at my post that I made in the "Blog..." section. It seems there lousy sources are the only sources on this topic. The section must be completely rewritten (followed by the lede). Taking into account, that the DRN is going to be very slow, I have a feeling I should not wait for its end. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:32, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
@XavierItzm:
Valentino cites Rummel, who is recognised as an unreliable source for figures (see RSN). Dulic provided a nice analysis of all flaws in Rummel's approach, and, according to Harff, Rummel's response to Dulich's criticism didn't satisfy Dulich.
Valentino's own study do not involve any analysis of figures. He just cited this figure without any critical analysis. He is neither demographer, nor historian, he is a genocide scholar, and his expertise is not figures. The main goal of his study was to identify causes of mass killings and find the methods for their prevention. By the way, do you know what is his main conclusion? A conclusion is: regime type does not matter (and that is equally applicable to Communism too). In connection to that, don't you find it amazing that those users who extensively cite Valentino, simultaneously resist to bringing the article into accordance with his main conclusion? Paul Siebert (talk) 23:54, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul, stop repeating this canard that Rummel's data unreliable. Wayman and Tago did a comprehensive analysis of his data and found Rummel numbers are consistent and his database is a good framework for studying mass killings during the 1900-1987 period. --Nug (talk) 00:32, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: Thanks. I saved this diff.
Please, explain (with quotes) what concrete analysis of Rummel's figures was performed by Wayman&Tago.
Assuming that your assertion is correct (in reality, it is not), explain, how this W&T's assertion can be reconciled with the outcome of Rummel vs Dilic discussion, and with Harff's summary of it?
Assuming that your assertion is correct, how it can be reconciled with Karlsson's conclusion?
Assuming that this your assertion is correct, how can it be interpreted in a context of the recent RSN discussion of Rummel
Please, explain that, otherwise I have a serious reason to accuse you of personal attacks (accusation in repeating a "canard") and cherry-picking. In addition, repetition of already debunked arguments may be considered as a sign of WP:IDHT. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:12, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
I've explained this to you previously. Dulić's analysis was criticised for extrapolating his findings on Yugoslavia to Rummel's complete dataset, moreover his analysis only covered a portion of the time period covered by Rummel (Rummel, RJ One-thirteenth of a data point does not a generalization make: A Response to Dulić. Journal of Peace Research 41(1): 103–104.). Secondly, Karlsson's conclusions on Rummel is grossly WP:UNDUE and is not cited by anyone apart from you here on Misplaced Pages, it is confined to a couple of sentences in his paper with no further elaboration, whereas Wayman&Tago devote an entire 11 page paper showing that after examining the 18 consensus cases of communist regimes, Rummel's identification that 72% of communist regimes have engaged in mass killings compared to Harff's identification of only 22% is due to the fact that Harff's dataset is a narrower dataset strictly confined to geno-politicide and excludes other mass killings outside of that definition. Thus Wayman&Tago state: Most communist regimes, one can say, based upon the literature as we have reviewed it, are 'guilty' of democide but not of geno-politicide. --Nug (talk) 03:59, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: sometimes, I have a feeling that you are acting in bad faith, and all what you write is a pure demagogy. However, your other posts (including your last post) create an impression that you are a quite reasonable person, who sincerely wants to achieve consensus. I sincerely want to resolve this puzzle. Let's agree about the following: I answer to your arguments in full, and I will try to address all your major points. If you disagree, in your responce, please explain me why exactly you find my arguments unconvincing. If you don't answer, I will conclude that my arguments satisfied you. In the latter case, please, do not raise the same arguments again, neither during a discussion with me, not in your responses to other users; if you do that, I will conclude you are acting in a bad faith, and will act accordingly. The same is equally applicable to me: if you demonstrate that my arguments are flawed, I will never repeat them at any Misplaced Pages page. Deal?
If you agree, please, let me know, and I will provide a detailed responce about Rummel, Dulic, Karlssen, Harff etc. It is a really interesting issue, which I will gladly discuss with you. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:33, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
First I'd like your input on what you think Wayman&Tago2010 is discussing and what you believe their conclusions are with respect to Rummel. --Nug (talk) 21:27, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Ok.
First, you must understand that the author's goal was to demonstrate "that differences in the two major datasets can significantly affect the results of predictions of mass political killing". They do not examine validity of datasets. They just assume that both Rummel and Harff use reliable data, and W&T do not question their validity.
They acknowledge that Rummel's figures and Harff's figures are different, but W&T attribute this difference to different inclusion criteria used by these two authors. In other words, if Rummel's "democide" in, some state was 40 million, and Harff's "politicide" was 2 million, that is not because Rummel's or Harff's data are wrong, but because these two authors include different categories of deaths into their database.
However, they noted that
  • "...most scholars except Rummel have worked with Harffs data." (W&T, page 7). That directly contradicts to your previous assertion that Rummel's database is at least as popular as Harff's. In connection, your allegation about my ostensible POV-pushing in Mass killing look somewhat groundless. I am waiting for your comments on that. What about some form of apology?
  • that Harff's data are systematically lower (more than an order of magnitude for most periods) (ibid)
  • that application of a lower threshold eliminates a large case of democides from the analysis, but it does not eliminate or even significantly reduce the basic difference between the Rummel's and Harff's data. (W&T, p 10)
  • the only plausible explanation is that Rummel includes non-targeted (a.k.a unintentional) mass killings, whereas Harff doesn't (famine, the most deadly events, are not included into politicide database).
However, I haven't seen any indication of even a minimal attempt to verify validity of raw data in Rummel's and Harff's database.
W&T just say: "Ok, these two authors, using two different approaches and two different data sets, came to different conclusions. Leaving the question of validity of their datasets beyond the scope, what may be a reason of such a discrepancy?
Since W&T do not conclude that Rummel'd data are correct, but they assume that (and leave that beyond the scope of their analysis), this article cannot serve neither as an evidence of validity of Rummel's figures nor as a demonstration of its non-validity.
Do you have any objections to this my interpretation? If you do, please, explain. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:29, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

I never said "Rummel's database is at least as popular as Harff's", I pointed out that it is at least as significant as Harff's (PITF), as demonstrated by its inclusion on Oxford University affiliated website If Rummel's dataset was such trash as you claim it to be, why would W&T even bother in writing a 12 page paper on comparing the two datasets? Clearly in the minds of W&T the validity of Rummel's database is taken as granted, and they do say it is a good framework for studying mass killings during the 1900-1987 period. --Nug (talk) 22:18, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

@Nug: What is a measure of significance? That it was included in a list of four datasets? What if they just listed all available datasets (which is highly likely)?
W&T do not focus on comparison of datasets, they are trying to understand the difference between conclusions made by Harff and Rummel. And they note that their datasets were dramatically different. They do not say whose dataset is correct, they leave that question beyond the scope.
In connection to that, I do not understand why you are carefully ignoring Dulic, who devoted two articles specifically to the analysis of Rummel's data. He clearly says:
"In any case, it seems the discrepancy between Rummel's figures and what can be reasonably be estimated is simply much too high to be taken lightly. However, these deficiencies cannot be eliminated by mere adjustments if Rummel uses similar sources in other case studies. On the contrary, I argue that the problematic presuppositions regarding the variation principle warrant a thorough revision of the method. Whether such a revision would change Rummel's overall results, particularly when it comes to the ranking of 'democidal' regimes, remains undecided."
This is a clear and severe criticism, which, according to Gleditsch, Rummel failed to adequately address. Why are you ignoring it? And why the opinion of Karlsson, who is notable enough to use his article as a core article for CAHuCR, but who is not notable for his opinion about Rummel? Paul Siebert (talk) 04:39, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

The claim genocide it is not a scholarly, but a legal term

Surely this claim in the edit comment appears somewhat disingenuous, the most basic Google scholar search shows it to be a topic of much scholarly study. Unfortunately Paul's edit has made the section Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Terminology_and_usage a POV fork of linked article Genocide definitions. --Nug (talk) 04:31, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

"Genocide" has two meanings: it is a legal term, and it is used as a synonym of "mass killing". Thus, a scholarly discipline called "genocide studies" does not study only genocides, and "genocide scholars" (like Valentinio) do not study genocide exclusively. It is not our goal to explain colloquial meaning of each term. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:37, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, I am in a progress now, thank you for pointing at a redundant link. I think, it is better to remove it. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:39, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I guess you think The International Association of Genocide Scholars is an organisation of legal professionals. Unfortunately Paul's edits are a POV fork of Genocide studies. --Nug (talk) 04:44, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Genocide is not merely an international legal term; if there were, there'd be no a reason that the page listing various genocide definitions would be a notable list. If we're considering whether or not to use "genocide" in Wikivoice, it's probably best to use the genocide convention definition, but to say that it's merely a legal term is simply not correct when there is so much scholarly study on the topic of genocide. — Mhawk10 (talk) 06:39, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

DRN and RFCs

This is another follow-up about the possibility of facilitation and the (non)possibility of mediation.

I said, above, that DRNMKUCR was available for the development of one or more RFCs. That is what I said. I didn't say that was offering to conduct mediation on any limited topics.

  • User:Paul Siebert wrote: "In that case , I propose to start a new DRN devoted to this specific issue, and include all parties into it. Do you think that may work?"
  • I wrote: "What would you expect to be the result of the DRN? Would you expect it to result in approval of your idea, compromise, an RFC, what?"
  • User:Paul Siebert wrote: "sorry, but your question doesn't look serious. If I wanted just an approval of my idea, it would be senseless to resort to DRN."
  • The question was completely serious. Would you be expecting compromise, or an RFC? I could instead have gone ahead to answer your question of whether it may work with "Probably not", but I had thought that maybe your objective was an RFC. Mediation does not work well with a large number of participants. That is one of the reasons that I was offering to facilitate RFCs, and not to mediate, or to conduct moderated discussion.
  • However, in the discussion of Terminology, User:Vanteloop proposed discussion leading to an RFC.
  • But User:Paul Siebert wrote: "I explicitly object to RfC. That is not a substitute for a normal discussion. That is a misuse of the procedure, because 'Editors are normally expected to make a reasonable attempt at resolving their issues before seeking help from others.' I see no evidences that you made any reasonable attempt to resolve this dispute. In that situation, resorting to de facto !vote would be a misuse of the RfC procedure."
  • When there are a large number of editors, it is unlikely that discussion will resolve a dispute or result in agreement. Editors who object to an RFC may do so because they would prefer to stonewall, or because they are unduly optimistic about their own power to persuade other editors. The good-faith assumption in this case is that an editor who objects to an RFC overestimates their own power of persuasion.
  • I personally consider explicitly objecting to an RFC to be a form of civil POV pushing, which is disruptive. I do not plan to take part in discussion in which editors have the right to refuse to take part in RFC.

I am still willing to facilitate one or more RFCs. I do not plan to lead moderated discussion with some other objective. I find the objection to RFC troubling.

I will likely comment on some specific issues in the next 24 hours, but I will clarify that I do not intend to try to mediate in any way other than facilitating RFCs. Robert McClenon (talk) 06:14, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for your time, I have a few questions that I hope you can address in your next comments. Have you checked my series of questions that one or more RfCs should address to find a way forward? If so, are they good, did I miss anything? Would it be possible to also have an RfC about analysis of sources? If not, what is the best way to perform a (moderated or not) analysis of sources? I mention sources because the AfD said it is the core issue of the dispute. Davide King (talk) 06:31, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: I'm somewhat surprised Paul has basically ignored your efforts at DR post AfD. Maybe he is worried about any potential RFC's not going his way, I don't know. Paul flagged his removal of the terminology section in Talk:Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Terminology, several editors objected and I suggested this could be something for DR. Many articles have a "definitions" or "terminology" section to help the reader, so this could have been a candidate for an RFC. But Paul has just ignored everyone who doesn't agree with him and has started removing text anyway. --Nug (talk) 06:32, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
diddums, but Robert has just stated, more or less, they are not here to mediate individual grievances eg. sentences beginning with 'But UserName has … ~ cygnis insignis 06:54, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: I would like to put forward my willingness to work to create a RfC regarding the terminology section. I initially was willing to go some other route in the spirit of building consensus. At this point however, I am inclined to agree with your assessment of users who blanket object to any RfC. Let me also say it may well be the case the RfCs results in a consensus to remove the terminology section or make the changes Paul and others have suggested. I may even support some of those options. What I have objected to is the stonewalling of any chance of consensus, and pushing edits through over the explicit objections of multiple editors. Vanteloop (talk) 09:39, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I personally consider explicitly objecting to an RFC to be a form of civil POV pushing, which is disruptive. As a follow up can you confirm what the consequences will be for editors who continue in this disruptive behaviour (ie. refuse to work to build consensus and instead edit without regard to this discussion)? I don't think its a worthwhile use of time to engage in good faith attempts to build consensus in the face of such behaviour. Vanteloop (talk) 09:49, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
The article is under a discretionary sanctions regime, so any admin is empowered to issue topic bans or blocks at their discretion for such disruptive behaviour. --Nug (talk) 11:34, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
"under a discretionary sanctions regime" ~ cygnis insignis 15:18, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Vanteloop: is that summary of what is arguably most of the contributions to the article's long history a withdrawal of the offer to create that RfC? ~ cygnis insignis 14:22, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
This is all deeply undignified. Surely there should be sanctions applied for canvassing to get users with opposing views topic-locked during an edit dispute? This is not good faith. The circumstances for an RfC clearly don’t exist. DublinDilettante (talk) 14:44, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
This you? It's clear that, having failed to make any plausible case for retaining this article (even with the organised support of far-right media outlets), the Keepist camp is attempting to "win the peace" by locking in a hard-line, POV intepretation of history through a series of bureaucratic manoeuvres and "sandbagging" of those they see as their opponents. There is no good faith being exercised, and none is possible in these conditions. Vanteloop (talk) 15:42, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Not seeing your point? Have I tried to get anyone topic-locked? DublinDilettante (talk) 15:51, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
One assumes it was, I remind myself that a lot of comments expressing astonishment at deletion have expressed deep concern based on humanistic sentiments, censorship, and historical revisionism, and that is done in 'good faith' when the title is an 'article of faith'. ~ cygnis insignis 16:01, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: I believe I already answered your question about DRN. However, to avoid misunderstanding, let me do that again. Your question " Would you expect it to result in approval of your idea ... ?" implies that you see me as a person who is not prone to arguments and who does not respect other's opinion. Of course, I, as well as any reasonable person, am ready to all scenarios: that the RDN discussion will result in approval of my idea, OR compromise, OR even in a complete rejection of my idea, etc. Every outcome is possible, and I would be a dishonest person if joined a DRN discussion without being ready to accept all possible outcomes.
I am sure that was not your intention, but your question sounded somewhat provocative and insulting (it implied that I may be an intellectually dishonest person). Therefore, my reaction was quite understandable. I believe, we may consider this incident resolved, and there will be no misunderstanding between us in future.
WRT my objections to RfCs. Obviously, I objected not to RfCs in general, but to a misuse of the RfC procedure. An example of such a misuse is the RfC that is currently open, and, by the way, I am by no means the only person who says that (just read comments).
Sometimes, an RfC may be a very bad idea. Sometimes, it is absolutely necessary. Thus, we absolutely need an RfC that will answer a question about the article's topic. The article's topic can be either the events (mass killings etc) (an option A), or it can be the narrative (that Communism killed 100+ million)(an option B). The core problem of this article is that it a hybrid: it is a story about the events, which is embedded into some narrative (and that narrative expresses the views of a minority of scholars). I repeated, for many times, that we need to choose between A and B (btw, I myself is absolutely neutral in that aspect, I accept any decision), and that problem can be resolved only via a carefully written RfC. Note, this question is intrinsically impossible to resolve at the DRN, it can be resolved only via an RfC.
However, there are some questions that cannot and should not be discussed during RfCs. Consider this example: If I start the following RfC: Do you think that the article is well sourced?", an overwhelming majority of users would answer "Yes". And I perfectly understand them, for I myself thought the article was well sourced. However, when I started to check sources, one by one, I found that many of them are twisted, misinterpreted of just do not tell anything about the topic. That means, such an RfC would lead to totally misleading and harmful outcome, because majority of users are not deeply familiar with the topic and do not analyse sources. That would be a pure manipulation.
Therefore, there are some questions that can be resolved only in a multiround mediated discussions (such as DRN), which requires participants to deeply dive into the topic and respond to each other's arguments, and there are questions that require an RfC, and cannot be resolved at the DRN. It is also possible that a DRN discussion may lead to an RfC, but I am not sure it is really necessary in every case.
I believe the misunderstanding between us may be considered resolved now. If you still disagree, please, let me know. Paul Siebert (talk) 16:27, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
And, by the way, I agree that DRN is not a good for resolving a dispute among a large number of users. That is why I attempted to split a "big" DRN on smaller subtopics, which are more suitable for the DRN format. I asked your opinion about that, but there was no answer from you. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:40, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Let the related-DRN run its course. Before, continuing anything else here. GoodDay (talk) 21:06, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Additional Comments on Analysis of Sources

I was asked whether I will facilitate an RFC for the analysis of sources. The answer is "It all depends", for at least three reasons. First, questions about the reliability of sources should be addressed at the reliable source noticeboard rather than here.

Second, in my opinion, much of the discussion about the analysis of sources reflects a misconception about what can be accomplished by the analysis of sources. An analysis of sources can have either or both of at least two objectives, analysis of verifiability and analysis of reliability. The first objective is to compare the source to a section or statement in the article and see if the source supports the statement. The second objective is to assess the source to decide how reliable it is. The first is relatively easy, and the second is likely to be contentious. However, most of the questions about sources are not really about whether they are reliable but whether they are neutral or biased, and how to present an overview of what different sources and types of sources say. (The idea that an analysis of sources will decide that some sources should be accepted and others rejected, and that that will resolve the questions about the article, is a distraction.)

Third, there have been questions identified, since the start of this discussion, about types of sources, including journalistic and historical sources on specific events, genocide scholars, and critics of Marxism-Leninism. In my opinion, the issue (as noted above) is not what sources to exclude, but how to organize an article that refers to multiple types of sources.

If an editor has a specific idea for an RFC on how to organize the article in order to reflect the different sources, I will work with them to facilitate the RFC. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:26, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

We could start with these sources:
  • Benjamin Valentino, Assistant Professor of Government at Dartmouth College, in a chapter called "Communist Mass Killings: The Soviet Union, China, and Cambodia" in his book "Final Solutions: Mass Killing and Genocide in the Twentieth Century", published by Cornell University Press: Communist regimes have been responsible for this century's most deadly episodes of mass killing. Estimates of the total number of people killed by communist regimes range as high as 110 million. In this chapter I focus primarily on mass killings in the Soviet Union, China, and Cambodia - history's most murderous communist states. Communist violence in these three states alone may account for between 21 million and 70 million deaths. Mass killings on a smaller scale also appear to have been carried out by communist regimes in North Korea, Vietnam, Eastern Europe, and Africa." ..."Communism has a bloody record, but most regimes that have described themselves as communist or have been described as such by others have not engaged in mass killing. In addition to shedding light on why some communist states have been among the most violent regimes in history, therefore, I also seek to explain why other communist countries have avoided this level of violence." ..."I argue that radical communist regimes have proven such prodigious killers primarily because the social change they sought to bring about have resulted in the sudden and nearly complete material and political dispossession of millions of people. These regimes practiced social engineering of the highest order. It is the revolutionary desire to bring about the rapid and radical transformation of society that distinguishes radical communist regimes from all other forms of government, including less violent communist regimes and noncommunist, authoritarian governments.
  • Michael Mann, UCLA sociologist, in a chapter called "Communist Cleansing: Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot" from his book "The Dark Side of Democracy: Explaining Ethnic Cleansing" published by Cambridge University Press: All accounts of 20th-century mass murder include the Communist regimes. Some call their deeds genocide, though I shall not. I discuss the three that caused the most terrible human losses: Stalin's USSR, Mao's China, and Pol Pot's Cambodia. These saw themselves as belonging to a single socialist family, and all referred to a Marxist tradition of development theory. They murderously cleansed in similar ways, though to different degrees. Later regimes consciously adapted their practices to the perceived successes and failures of earlier ones. The Khmer Rouge used China and the Soviet Union (and Vietnam and North Korea) as reference societies, while China used the Soviet Union. All addressed the same basic problem - how to apply a revolutionary vision of a future industrial society to a present agrarian one. These two dimensions, of time and agrarian backwardness, help account for many of the differences." ..."Ordinary party members were also ideologically driven, believing that in order to create a new socialist society, they must lead in socialist zeal. Killings were often popular, tha rank-and-file as keen to exceed killing quotas as production quotas. The pervasive role of the party inside the state also meant that authority structures were not fully institutionalized but factionalized, even chaotic, as revisionists studying the Societ Union have argued. Both centralized control and mass party factionalism were involved in the killings." ..."This also made for Plans nurtured by these regimes that differed from those envisioned in my sixth thesis. Much of the Communist organization of killing was more orderly than that of the ethnonationalists. Communists were more statist. But only the Plans that killed the fewest people were fully intended and occurred at early stages of the process. There is no equivalent of the final solution, and the last desperate attempt to achieve goals by mass murder after all other Plans have failed. The greatest Communist death rates were not intended but resulted from gigantic policy mistakes worsened by factionalism, and also somewhat by callous or revengeful views of the victims. But - with the Khmer Rouge as a borderline case - no Communist regime contemplated genocide. This is the biggest difference between Communist and ethnic killers: Communists caused mass deaths mainly through disastrous policy mistakes; ethnonationalists killed more deliberately.
  • Jacques Semelin, professor of political science and research director at CERI-CNRS in Paris and founder of the Online Encyclopedia of Mass Violence, in his chapters "Destroying to Subjugate: Communist regimes: Reshaping the social body" and "Destroying to eradicate: Politicidal regimes?" in his translated book "Purify and Destroy: The Political Uses of Massacre and Genocide" published in english by Columbia University Press: Dynamics of destruction/subjugation were also developed systematically by twentieth-century communist regimes, but against a very different domestic political background. The destruction of the very foundations of the former society (and consequently the men and women who embodied it) reveals the determination of the ruling elites to build a new one at all costs. The ideological conviction of leaders promoting such a political scheme is thus decisive. Nevertheless, it would be far too simplistic an interpretation to assume that the sole purpose of inflicting these various forms of violence on civilians could only aim at instilling a climate of terror in this 'new society'. In fact, they are part of a broader whole, i.e. the spectrum of social engineering techniques implememted in order to transform a society completely. There can be no doubt that it is this utopia of a classless society which drives that kind of revolutionary project. The plan for political and social reshaping will thus logically claim victims in all strata of society. And through this process, communist systems emerging in the twentieth century ended up destroying their own populations, not because they planned to annihilate them as such, but because they aimed to restructure the 'social body' from top to bottom, even if that meant purging it and recarving it to suit their new Promethean political imaginaire." ..."'Classicide', in counterpoint to genocide, has a certain appeal, but it doesn't convey the fact that communist regimes, beyond their intention of destroying 'classes' - a difficult notion to grasp in itself (what exactly is a 'kulak'?) - end up making political suspicion a rule of government: even within the Party (and perhaps even mainly within the Party). The notion of 'fratricide' is probably more appropriate in this regard. That of 'politicide', which Ted Gurr and Barbara Harff suggest, remains the most intelligent, although it implies by contrast that 'genocide' is not 'political', which is debatable. These authors in effect explain that the aim of politicide is to impose total political domination over a group or a government. Its victims are defined by their position in the social hierarchy or their political opposition to the regime or this dominant group. Such an approach applies well to the political violence of communist powers and more particularly to Pol Pot's Democratic Kampuchea. The French historian Henri Locard in fact emphasises this, identifying with Gurr and Harff's approach in his work on Cambodia. However, the term 'politicide' has little currency among some researchers because it has no legal validity in international law. That is one reason why Jean-Louis Margolin tends to recognise what happened in Cambodia as 'genocide' because, as he points out, to speak of 'politicide' amounts to considering Pol Pot's crimes as less grave than those of Hitler. Again, the weight of justice interferes in the debate about concepts that, once again, argue strongly in favour of using the word genocide. But those so concerned about the issue of legal sanctions should also take into account another legal concept that is just as powerful, and better established: that of crime against humanity. In fact, legal scholars such as Antoine Garapon and David Boyle believe that the violence perpetrated by the Khmer Rouge is much more appropriately categorised under the heading of crime against humanity, even if genocidal tendencies can be identified, particularly against the Muslim minority. This accusation is just as serious as that of genocide (the latter moreover being sometimes considered as a subcategory of the former) and should thus be subject to equally severe sentences. I quite agree with these legal scholars, believing that the notion of 'crime against humanity' is generally better suited to the violence perpetrated by communist regimes, a viewpoint shared by Michael Mann.
  • Daniel Chirot, Professor of International Studies and Sociology at the University of Washington, and Clark R. McCauley, Professor of Psychology at Bryn Mawr College and Director of the Solomon Asch Center for Study of Ethnopolitical Conflict at the University of Pennsylvania, in the chapter "Why Genocides? Are they different now than in the past?: The four main motives leading to mass political murder" in their book "Why Not Kill Them All?: The Logic and Prevention of Mass Political Murder", published by Princeton University Press: The modern search for a perfect, utopian society, whether racially or ideologically pure is very similar to the much older striving for a religiously pure society free of all polluting elements, and these are, in turn, similar to that other modern utopian notion - class purity. Dread of political and economic pollution by the survival of antagonistic classes has been for the most extreme communist leaders what fear of racial pollution was for Hitler. There, also, material explanations fail to address the extent of the killings, gruesome tortures, fantastic trails, and attempts to wipe out whole categories of people that occurred in Stalin's Soviet Union, Mao's China, and Pol Pot's Cambodia. The revolutionary thinkers who formed and led communist regimes were not just ordinary intellectuals. They had to be fanatics in the true sense of that word. They were so certain of their ideas that no evidence to the contrary could change their minds. Those who came to doubt the rightness of their ways were eliminated, or never achieved power. The element of religious certitude found in prophetic movements was as important as their Marxist science in sustaining the notion that their vision of socialism could be made to work. This justified the ruthless dehumanization of their enemies, who could be suppressed because they were 'objectively' and 'historically' wrong. Furthermore, if events did not work out as they were supposed to, then that was because class enemies, foreign spies and saboteurs, or worst of all, internal traitors were wrecking the plan. Under no circumstances could it be admitted that the vision itself might be unworkable, because that meant capitulation to the forces of reaction. The logic of the situation in times of crisis then demanded that these 'bad elements' (as they were called in Maoist China) be killed, deported, or relegated to a permanently inferior status. That is very close to saying that the community of God, or the racially pure volksgemeinschaft could only be guaranteed if the corrupting elements within it were eliminated (Courtois et al. 1999).
  • David Bellamy, Professor of Peace and Conflict Studies at The University of Queensland, Australia and Director of the Asia Pacific Centre for the Responsibility to Protect, in the chapter "The Cold War Struggle (2): Communist Atrocities" in his book "Massacres and Morality: Mass Atrocities in an Age of Civilian Immunity", published by Oxford University Press: Communist regimes massacred millions of civilians during the Cold War. Governments in the Soviet Union, China and Cambodia initiated programs of radical social transformation and killed, tortured or allowed to starve whole groups thought hostile to change or simply unworthy of life. But it is not simply the number of victims that distinguishes communist from non-communist atrocities in the Cold War. guided by ideologies of selective extermination, communist perpetrators rarely even acknowledged the moral questions raised by their policies of sometimes systematic extermination. Ideological solidarity prompted communist governments to support one another, often enabling communist perpetrators of mass killing to secure sufficient legitimacy.
Feel free to add others. --Nug (talk) 19:18, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
User:Nug - Thank you. Am I correct in inferring that those sources are not currently used in the article? If so, I see no reason that they cannot be added to the appropriate sections of the article, but the structure of the article is being discussed and they might be moved. However, I had been discussing analysis of sources, which is a different matter than adding sources. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:31, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Robert McClenon, as far as I understand it, those sources are all used at least once already in the article, and they are better considered to be the core sources of MKuCR — indeed, those sources were the reason why the article resulted in 'Keep' for the first time but that is no longer the case, as there is no consensus.
By the way, have you noticed that all those sources are about genocide and/or mass killing in general (as was noted by AndyTheGrump in the AfD), and while they discuss Communism (some of them give them chapters, but they also give them for capitalism and other regime types, while others are more in passing), I am not sure that supports Communism as a separate and/or special category by majority sources.
As noted by Paul Siebert, they do not necessarily entails that a new topic is created; as they are works about mass killings in general, and discuss all sort of regime types, it looks cherry picked in single outing Communism as a special and/or separate category; in other words, all those sources are good ones to actually expand Mass killing, not creating a new topic and article about Communism as if it was a separate category, hence the POV forking; we also still disagree about Valentino. It could be a different thing if they were focused solely on Communism (note that they say Communist regimes but in practice they mean Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot because those are the Communist regimes under which mass killings happened, so those sources are still misread1 to imply Communism as a whole, which can be done only if we, ironically, move away from mass killings and focus on excess deaths) and represented a majority view. Davide King (talk) 07:21, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Notes
1. Mann's main thesis, as shown by the book's title, is that democratic transformation can result in genocides, as it has happened in Rwanda. Yet, we treat him as if he was writing about Communism in a special or separate category when they are passing mentions, and he is proposing the concept of Classicide. Davide King (talk) 07:24, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Comment About Source Analysis

The closing administrators wrote, in closing the RFC with No Consensus: "We therefore strongly recommend that the DRN process be resumed and pick up the attempts at source analysis carried out in this discussion, which show promise in breaking the deadlock." I wish that I could be as optimistic as the closers about the ability to break the deadlock by source analysis. However, I am willing to facilitate an RFC to the effect as noted above. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:31, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

As I explained in my previous post, the core issue, which had been recognised many years ago, but which is still unresolved, is the article's topic. Actually, many discussions, for example, a recent discussion about the new title, lead us to thin core issue. If we resolve this issue (I always maintained that I am totally neutral about that), that would be a huge step forward. That has a direct relationship to the your question about the best way to reflect sources. If that linkage is not obvious, ask me, and I'll explain.
It can be resolved only via an RfC. However, the RfC question must be very well written, because (i) users must clearly understand what they are voting for (that should be a real vote, because, from the point of view of our policy, both options are acceptable, so the answer to that question is a matter of taste), and (ii) there should be no ambiguity in its implementation (if a majority of users vote for "B", then it should be clear what concrete consequences it has).
I propose to start writing this RfC. It is much more realistic goal, it does not require a deep knowledge of sources, and there should be no fundamental disagreement among users. If you agree, what platform is more suitable for that? This talk page or DRN? Paul Siebert (talk) 16:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

A new RfC about the article's topic.

This draft RfC is not yet open for comments. Please discuss changes to the format of this RfC on the talk page, but do not comment on the topic of the RfC itself until it opens.

As it was noted earlier, there is no agreement among users about the article's scope and topic. This is a core problem, which leads to numerous conflicts, edit warring, and that is a main reason why the article has huge neutrality problems. I propose to resolve this problem by starting an RfC. As I, as well as many other users, noted that this article can either describe all mass killings and mass mortality events in Communist states (so it must be a Summary style article for such articles as Cambodian genocide, Great Chinese famine, Great Purge, etc (an option A), or it can be a discussion of a narrative about a possible linkage between all premature and coercive deaths under Communist rule and Communism (as some single phenomenon) (an option B). This two options are intrinsically incompatible, so we must select only one. In this discussion, I am neutral (I equally like both approaches), but I believe it is absolutely necessary to pick one, and to rewrite the article accordingly. I propose to jointly start writing a correct text of the RfC, which must give as an answer that will rule out a possibility of double interpretation. Who wants to participate? Paul Siebert (talk) 17:21, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

There's still a DRN occurring on this article & an RM is being proposed. Anyways, it's your choice. GoodDay (talk) 17:36, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
A draft of the RfC:
What is the topic of this article?
  • A The topic is all mass killings and all mass mortality events in Communist states. The article should be a summary style article of such articles as Excess mortality in the Soviet Union under Joseph Stalin, Great Chinese famine, Cambodian genocide, Katyn massacre and similar articles, and it should provide a neutral description of those events according to the views expressed by majority of RS.
  • B The topic is a discussion of a linkage between Communism and various lethal events that took place in Communist states. This includes the views expressed in the sources that see such a linkage and the sources either openly disagree with that, or that say otherwise.
This is a preliminary version of the RfC that I am going to initiate in a couple of weeks or earlier, depending on your comments. I especially invite @Nug:, @North8000:, @The Four Deuces:, @Davide King:, and @Robert McClenon: to comment on that, but comments from other users are warmly welcome too.
Since the article's topic is a core issue, I am going to focus on it exclusively, and I am suspending my participation on all other disputes. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:35, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I am gonna vote ahead of time: B. Additionally, I would like to add that the main subject of contention is not the topic, but rather the title which is completely different from the given premise of the article. Title claims A, whereas, main topic of focus is B. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 19:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@MarioSuperstar77: Please, don't. This is not an RfC, that is just a discussion of its possible text. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:20, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

I'd add:

  • C The topic about the phenomena of mass killings by Communist states with a discussion of the possible causes, of which ideology is one of many proposed. I don't see why it has to be binary choice between A or B. --Nug (talk) 20:00, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
No. This is inconsistent with NPOV. That makes this article a POV-fork, for it discusses the events from a perspective of just one (minority) school of thought. If you disagree with that, and if you are not going to withdraw your "C", I will start a DRN, where I am going to name you as a party. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:16, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul, with due respect, excluding options that multiple editors have expressed a preference for renders the RfC to be non-neutral. Threatening(?) to take a single user to DRN is not actually a way to solve this content dispute; the point of the RfC would be to make arguments for and against the ideal article topic. There is not a community consensus that Nug’s suggestion is incompatible with NPOV—the AfD certainly did not establish it and I am unable to find any affirmative consensus elsewhere that supports your claim. And, even if there were, consensus can change. I think Nug’s wording can be tweaked, but I don’t think that rejecting something similar to Nug’s proposal offhand is going to make this Draft RFC better. — Mhawk10 (talk) 20:42, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
For the record, Paul has also in the past few minutes threatened to report me if I do not go along with his demands. Vanteloop (talk) 20:46, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Mhawk10: It seems you misunderstand something. We don't need a consensus that someone's suggestion is incompatible with NPOV. The policy works in an opposite way: there should be a consensus that it IS compatible. I raised a concern that that suggestion is incompatible with NPOV, and this my legitimate concern must be properly addressed. Unless that has been done, we cannot claim this suggestion is compatible with NPOV.
I believe you understand this point. If we use your approach, any edit that violates some policy may be removed only if there is an explicit consensus about that. That approach directly contradicts to the fact that NPOV is non-negotiable, and the principles upon which it is based cannot be superseded by (...) editor consensus.
If you believe C is in agreement with NPOV, prove it. And if your arguments will be supported by consensus, I will accept your arguments.
With regards to "threatening(?) to take a single user to DRN ", I cannot believe you are serious. DRN is not ANI or AE, it is not a place where people can be taken. That was just a proposal to continue this discussion at DRN, and I named Nug because he was the only person who presented some arguments. If you want, I may invite you, or anybody else. I am open to any suggestions, unless they are not violating our content policy. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:17, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
POV fork of what exactly? Nobody disputes that mass killings did occur under communist regimes. Grouping them together is topological, they all share the fact that the killings occurred during agricultural collectivization and political terror, a combination unique to communist regimes. That topology isn't disputed by any source. What is subject to differing academic POVs are the various proposed causes of the mass killings, the article presents them, whether it was ideology or personalities of the leadership, etc, in a NPOV way. --Nug (talk) 21:26, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Regarding, If you believe C is in agreement with NPOV, prove it. And if your arguments will be supported by consensus, I will accept your arguments, why is the RfC an inappropriate place to discuss that option? It’s certainly gotten a good bit of discussion in the AfD, and I see no reason why we should exclude it as a mere option in a request for comment.
Regarding the straw man raised in the second paragraph, I am not arguing that we could, by local consensus, choose to deliberately ignore the principle of neutral point of view. What I am arguing here is that discussion on the extent to which a particular option is consistent with those principles is both necessary and proper in any RfC on the article topic. If the argument is that a particular editor (or even a small group of editors) can somehow veto mere discussion a particular option due their own interpretation of NPOV that is not clearly shared by the rest of the community, that would simply enable ownership of articles and would render RfCs largely toothless.
And regarding my characterization of your threatening(?) Nug, that is how I read your statement that if you are not going to withdraw your "C", I will start a DRN, where I am going to name you as a party. I do not quite know a better word to otherwise characterize a statement indicating your intent to unilaterally drag someone to a dispute board unless they take a specific action. The reason for the question mark is that I find the concept of threatening to drag someone to such a board as rather odd, since that board is something that ordinarily is agreed to by mutual consent, but I cannot think of any better word to use there. — Mhawk10 (talk) 21:59, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I explained that many times. Just read talk page archives. Briefly, WP:SS requites a direct correspondence between a "summary style" and "daughter articles", and they must be even synchronised. That is not what we are having in this case.
"why is the RfC an inappropriate place to discuss that option?" Because we already have serious reasons to believe that it violates our policy. We cannot start an RfC if some of us expressed a legitimate concern about possible policy violations, and that concern was not addressed properly. How can we propose a community to vote if we are not sure our proposal is in agreement with policy?
I am only superficially familiar with DRN, but I know that nobody can force you to join a DRN discussion if you disagree. If someone names you as a party, that is just an invitation, which you may accept or reject. Neither I nor ArbCom members nor even Jimbo Wales can force Nug to participate in DRN. You are free to interpret me as you want, but my words are just an information about my desire to move the dispute to another platform. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:08, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Paul, there is an excluded middle here—supporting option A requires supporting all “mass killings and all mass mortality events” in an article titled “mass killings under communist regimes”. A good RfC would also include an option that says that the topic is a summary style article of “mass killings committed by communist regimes”. It seems like this would be worthwhile to include as an option—I also think that it is what people who have been arguing for summary style are generally arguing for. — Mhawk10 (talk) 20:02, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Benefits/downsides of mobile comments is that you don’t always get to see edit conflicts. I think Nug’s proposal above partly gets this, but I also do think that a summary style article focused on mass killings would inherently have to discuss causes as well and, like Holodomor, it would have to describe how different academics classify different actions as killings or not. — Mhawk10 (talk) 20:07, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
The article cannot be a description of, e.g. Great Chinese famine embedded into the Black Book narrative. The reason is simple: an overwhelming majority of sources do not describe it as a mass killing of politicide. Even "genocide scholars" do not do that. Thus, it is not included even into Harff's database. Majority of sources describe it in the same neutral terms as, e.g. Bengal famine. Just read all "daughter articles" and compare them with what this article says. A "summary style" article must say the same story as daughter articles. Anything else is a POV-fork. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:27, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Mhawk10: just to make sure that we are speaking about the same things: have you read WP:SS? Do you understand all criteria a summary style article should meet. There is no sarcasm in my question: I have a feeling you genuinely don't understand what WP:SS is. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:18, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, Paul, I understand what a summary style article is about. If the reason that you do not think I understand the text of WP:SS is that we do not agree on how to apply the guideline to this article, then I would kindly ask you to understand that I am analyzing and applying the guideline in good faith. — Mhawk10 (talk) 20:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert:, since February this article has been a child of the Communism article with, in my opinion, some very poor content percolating up from here. I think that adds weight to your arguments but cuts both ways. If the anti and anti-anti narratives are put in their proper place, what content goes in Communism? Back to the pre-February sterile version? fiveby(zero) 21:19, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Fiveby, that is the problem. This article should not be the child of Communism but rather of Communist state and Mass killing. Davide King (talk) 06:47, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
One of the first transclusions to this article is Template:communism sidebar, which states it is part of a series of articles on Communism. What is a 'child' of what is tends to OR in my view. ~ cygnis insignis 06:58, 7 December 2021 (UTC) P.S. What I linked there transcludes content at Template:Communism, found that out when I removed some other related topics. ~ cygnis insignis 07:24, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Well, Communism does claim a history section doesn't it? When you raise questions about summary style i look at Communism#History, History of communism, etc. Concerns about this article which should be addressed look much less concerning in comparison. Oh and i think you were looking for the three "misunderstandings" (but "roots of Stalinism" is really too much of a burden to put on Werth) to show that i'm not just drive by commenting and put at least a minimal effort in here.fiveby(zero) 11:35, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Strongly agree with Nug. This RfC is very poorly formed, and is presenting an overly restrictive binary interpretation of problem. Even if an editor disagrees with Nug's suggestion it shouldn't be banned from the RfC. It's worth noting that this user has been rebuked by a neutral moderator for what could be considered 'to be a form of civil POV pushing, which is disruptive.' when they outright refused to entertain the possibility of any RfCs on this topic not long ago. Although now they are writing one - and deciding what options are allowed in it their opinion may have changed (I hope)? Vanteloop (talk) 20:52, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
The wording of any third option can be worked out, it was to illustrate that Paul's two options are a classic false choice. --Nug (talk) 21:12, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Based on the title, I would expect to see A. An article about "Earthquakes under communist regimes" would list major earthquakes, tell us how many earthquakes there were etc. Of course we have no such articles because most people believe that earthquakes are a function of natural rather than political geography, although some people see natural disasters as collective punishment for turning away from God.
The reason why many editors object to this article is that it makes an implicit connection between communism and mass killings. That's why we don't have articles such as "Black sex offenders" or "Jewish Communists." We can however have articles about how and why some people connect blacks and sex crimes or Jews and Communism and they are discussed in Race and crime and Jewish Bolshevism. So we could have neutral articles called "Ideology and mass killings" or "Victims of Communism."
TFD (talk) 21:41, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
The idea that mass killings are somehow inherent to communism is clearly very contentious - but the title is referring to that contentious claim, not asserting it is true. For example, Creation science doesn't need to be changed to 'Pseudoscience of Creationism' because the article is about the concept of 'Creation science' and the validity of the concept is discussed in the article. I think once we can improve the article to include a more clear description of the criticisms and academic consensus on the subject of MKUCR the name issue will become moot. As Nug says The current article title is no less neutral than say, Domestic violence in the United States. That article isn't making an implicit claim that the USA is a nation of wife beaters. Vanteloop (talk) 22:04, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
It is not clear from the wording that it is about a contentious claim. An article called "Mass killings in the Soviet Union" for example would not be about a contentious claim, because it is not contentious that the Soviet Union carried out mass killings. And while some people question the term creation science on the basis that it is unscientific, we use that term because it is the recognizable term used by its proponents. But mass killings under communists regimes is not a term used by people who connect the two. TFD (talk) 22:13, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Option

  • C The topic about the phenomena of mass killings by Communist states with a discussion of the possible causes, of which ideology is one of many proposed needs be added. Choice is always better. Attempts to reduce choice in an attempt to force Wiki editors down one pre-determined path might appear unseemly to some.XavierItzm (talk) 14:09, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Alternative Proposals

The RfC has now been developed so I am collapsing this. If you would like to offer your opinion at the RfC please do so on this talk page

As the talk page can get quite noisy it is worthwhile having a section for alternative proposals, so as to keep it seperate from the debate about Paul's draft proposal I have created a sub-heading. These proposals could be alternate wordings of a RfC on this topic, or ideas about how best to approach this problem. Hopefully we can work towards a RfC that is acceptable to all so that any consensus the wider community comes to is less disputed. Vanteloop (talk) 21:30, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Alternative proposal 1:Split the article

I list a rough first draft of a RfC below, are there any objections to something along these lines? Again just to be clear, this is a working draft on what may eventually be put to editors. Do not vote on this. I believe splitting the article could be useful because then a seperate AfD discussion could be had on the first article without confusing with the legitimate discussion and critique of linking communism and mass killings in such a way.

Should this article be split?
  • Yes The article should be split into 2. The first should be a summary style article and it should provide a neutral description of those events according to the views expressed by majority of RS. The second is a discussion of the linkage between Communism and various lethal events, including critiques of this view.
  • No The article should not be split.

Vanteloop (talk) 22:49, 6 December 2021 (UTC) Update: It seems my alternative proposal 2 below will be chosen as the basis of the RfC instead of this one so I have strucken it. See more at the dispute resolution page Vanteloop (talk) 16:44, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

It is not alternative proposal, it is complementary one. That would be a good option "C". Paul Siebert (talk) 22:54, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
That is a possibility yes, although judging by discussion above we would also need "D" "The topic about the phenomena of mass killings by Communist states with a discussion of the possible causes, of which ideology is one of many proposed". to cover the opinions expressed so far Vanteloop (talk) 22:58, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
No. That does not work. A neutral article written in that way would be a combination of two totally different parts. It will be literally the option C, where two totally different articles were forcibly and artificially connected together.
My rationale is as follows: if you look at the sources that discuss, for example, Great Chinese famine or Cambodian genocide specifically, you will see that they form a compact domain where each source is connected by a network of cross-references. These domains are totally separated from the sources that discuss "generic Communism" and its linkage to mass killings (GCF sources even do not use the term "mass killings"). In other words, they form different and totally unconnected realms, each of which tells different stories, and, especially, provide different interpretations.
That means, if we start to write a truly neutral article, 95% of space must be devoted to the country-specific sources (and their narrative), and the rest will be a totally different story told by "generic Communism" sources and its critics. And, these two stories will be totally unconnected to each other, so the split will be the only possibility. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:18, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
That argument seems more like an argument against the option, rather than an argument against its inclusion in the RfC. Am i correct in that you have no objection to Alternative Proposal 1 as written? Vanteloop (talk) 23:24, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I object to the very idea of alternative proposal. I presented a draft, which means it can be amended, expanded etc. Why cannot you just add your "Yes" as option "C" into the original draft? I believe Nug does not insist on his "C" anymore. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:30, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Are you saying you object to any RfC not written by you? Several commentators have rejected your draft outright as a false choice, if we are going to make progress I believe we should float several ideas and see what sinks if you will. Do you have any objection to the alternative proposal 1 as written? Vanteloop (talk) 23:33, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Hmmm. I would say the same in somewhat different way: I proposed a draft and invited everybody to jointly write some text. You proposed your own text in a separate section. And who is refusing to collaborate, you or I?
Your "No" is de facto an endorsement of the current version, which is a POV-fork. It is unacceptable. Your "Yes" implements Nug's proposal. Therefore, I am asking again" why you refuse to collaborate and reject all what was proposed in the above section? Paul Siebert (talk) 23:46, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Your "No" is de facto an endorsement of the current version, which is a POV-fork. It is unacceptable. That may very well be the case, and that argument should be made at a RfC, but as North says below that option has to be included in some form - otherwise we are relitigating the AfD. You propose a "draft" and invited "everybody" to jointly write some text. As well as expressing my opinion on that draft, I noted that several of the objections were to the fundamental framing of your draft and I accepted your invitation to write some text. I did this by re-framing the proposal and presenting it as an alternative. Are you refusing to even accept the possibility people work on a RfC other than the one you proposed? Please work with me here. I am not saying your RfC draft is wrong, I am merely floating an alternative I think may have wider acceptance. If that is not the case we have lost nothing. Vanteloop (talk) 23:56, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
For reference of other users, the quote I mention by North is I still disagree that #1 & #2 can't coexist. And add to that, that coexistence is what the current article is.....arguments that policy says that the current article shouldn't exist are arguments of the AFD's. I'm not arguing for "both", but am observing that it's not possible to exclude that choice. Vanteloop (talk) 00:04, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
To start an RfC with a question "Is this article a POV-fork?" means to restart the AfD, for if the RfC comes to a conclusion that it is a POV-fork, that means the article must be deleted. Do you really want to pave a way to a an AfD#5? I don't, because my plan is to spend at least one year in attempt to save this article. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:07, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
The options in AltProp1 are 'split' and 'don't split'. POV fork isn't mentioned. That is you projecting your view that the article cannot be kept in its current form (for the record I actually agree with you here) but note that the outcome of the last AfD was 'no consensus' so if it is decided to not split the article we are in no different position than we are now. Vanteloop (talk) 00:14, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Well, I proposed a draft that discuss the article's topic. You propose "alternative" draft about the article's split. Don't you find that these are two different RfCs? The RfC proposed by me is if the article can be converted in either SS or the article about "generic Communism" (let's use this term for brevity). I agree that some third option is desirable, and your (actually, Nug's) proposal (which I personally like) is a good alternative. However, that is not a reason to exclude first two options.
We don't want to keep this article in its present form (if nothing will change in one year or so, I'll start a new AfD, which will be properly written, and which will take into account all previous AfD; I want to avoid this scenario, so if your RfC will result in "No", that means we inevitably start "my" RfC (I call it "my" conditionally). Then why cannot we just combine them? Paul Siebert (talk) 00:27, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Because the foundation of the original proposal is This two options are intrinsically incompatible, so we must select only one. In this discussion, I am neutral (I equally like both approaches), but I believe it is absolutely necessary to pick one, and to rewrite the article accordingly. which has been rejected as a sound foundation by multiple users. None more eloquently than North :I still disagree that #1 & #2 can't coexist. And add to that, that coexistence is what the current article is.....arguments that policy says that the current article shouldn't exist are arguments of the AFD's. I'm not arguing for "both", but am observing that it's not possible to exclude that choice..
if your RfC will result in "No" and if it results in yes the issue is solved.
I'll start a new AfD The results of an AfD a year from now are not my concern, I want to improve this article as soon as possible. Vanteloop (talk) 00:46, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
When I wrote that #1 and #2 are incompatible, that didn't imply no other options can exist. Whan I say that #1 cannot be combined with #2, I never said it precludes existence of some #3 or #4. Actually, Nug's idea to split the article is better than #1 and #2. I didn't plan to vote for #1 or #2, but I will definitely vote for #3 (if Nug will approve its inclusion). Paul Siebert (talk) 00:54, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
So it seems we are approaching common ground. #1, #2 being 'pick one or the other', #3 being 'split' and #4 being The topic about the phenomena of mass killings by Communist states with a discussion of the possible causes, of which ideology is one of many proposed is a proposal i can see gaining some consensus Vanteloop (talk) 01:04, 7 December 2021 (UTC)


Note, the last AfD's outcome was not "keep", it was "no consensus", which means the panel acknowledged the article has some severe problems, which are not sufficient for immediate article's deletion, but may be a reason for its serious rewrite. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:10, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Not exactly. Per NPOV, we cannot discuss mass killings (as events) only in a context of one theory (or one school of thought), we must add a summary, fairly, proportionally and without a bias of ALL majority and significant minority views. In the next section, I described what will happen: the theories that links Communism and mass killing will sink in an ocean of good country-specific studies. That means, your #4 does not work. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:10, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I see so you still don't accept North's view? "I still disagree that #1 & #2 can't coexist. And add to that, that coexistence is what the current article is.....arguments that policy says that the current article shouldn't exist are arguments of the AFD's. I'm not arguing for "both", but am observing that it's not possible to exclude that choice.". I think this is the main sticking point in finding consensus , and I have yet to hear you refute that view as positied by North, Nug, and others Vanteloop (talk) 01:13, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
North8000 is knowledgeable in our policy (more knowledgeable than I), but I am more familiar with sources. North8000 is right that theoretically we can combine everything in a single article, but that will require us to re-write it from perspective of majority point of view. In contrast to most of you, I know what it means: if we write it "fairly and proportionally", there will be literally no space for theories that link Communism and mass killings (even Valentino, whose "mass killings" concept gave the article its name, didn't see a significant linkage). And that is why I repeat my question: is it the outcome that you really want to achieve? Paul Siebert (talk) 01:23, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
theoretically we can combine everything in a single article Thank you for this, I genuinely believe we can reach consensus now we accept all these outcomes are possible - however unlikely or however much we disagree with them. Vanteloop (talk) 01:27, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
If I'll start to describe, even very briefly, all significant causes of Red Terror, Great Purge, Afghan War, Chinese famine, Cambodian genocide, etc, there will be virtually no room for Courtois or Rummel's "theorising".
By the way, I've just realised, what is a different between your #4 and my #1? I don't see any significant difference. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:30, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for your input on the proposal. I agree that the options should be presented more distinctly. Since no comments had been left on the proposal I have updated the options Vanteloop (talk) 01:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
No, you incorrectly summarised #4: our policy does not allow us to discuss mass killings in Communist states in a context of just one school of thought. Your #4 would be correct only in one case: if some theories existed that discuss MKuCR in a context of Communism, and other authors either supported or criticised them. In that case, your #4 could be quite legitimate. However, the situation is quite different: we have, e.g. 10 sources that discuss MKuCR in a context of Communism, 11 (or 9) sources that criticise these views, and 990 sources that tell a totally different story. (Of course, I do not pretend these numbers to be exact). Your #4 leaves the third category (the most numerous one) beyond the scope, which is absolutely unacceptable per NPOV. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:48, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Alternative proposal 2: One, both, or split

Please find below a second proposal. My reasoning for including option 3 is it has been suggested by several editors as a possible middle ground. I include option 4 so as to represent users such as Nug and North8000 who says "I still disagree that #1 & #2 can't coexist. And add to that, that coexistence is what the current article is.....arguments that policy says that the current article shouldn't exist are arguments of the AFD's. I'm not arguing for "both", but am observing that it's not possible to exclude that choice." I agree with this assessment. I welcome input on this potential RfC.

  • 1 The article should be a summary style article , providing an overview of mass killing events under communist governments
  • 2 The article should be a discussion of the linkage between Communism and various lethal events, including critiques of this view
  • 2 The article should discuss the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments, including proposed causes and critiques of the concept
  • 3 The article should be split, one for each of the above
  • 4 The article should be both 1 and 2 together

Vanteloop (talk) 01:21, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Note: I have updated the options following input from Paul Siebert. No comments had been left at time of update. Vanteloop (talk) 01:35, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Note 2: I have updated option 2 following input from Nug. The original option is left strucken through. Further input and critique is always welcome. Vanteloop (talk) 10:24, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

I'm not too sure about the wording of the second option, because it seems focused on a single viewpoint as it rules out other causes beyond ideology, like leadership for example. Perhaps: "The article should be a discussion of the potential causes that have led to the apparent correlation between mass killings and communist governments, including critiques of the various views" --Nug (talk) 09:46, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I understand your point. The wording is probably overly-simplistic, however I also think the wording you propose could be clearer. What are your thoughts on: The article should discuss the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments, including proposed causes and critiques of the concept. Of course the usual guidelines regarding due weight and NPOV would apply to this article. Vanteloop (talk) 10:06, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, I think that is better. I've read one source that suggests over zealous lower level bureaucrats may have been a possible cause, so we don't want to rule anything out. --Nug (talk) 10:16, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug and Vanteloop:, by commenting here, are you declining the invitation to participate in the formulation of these proposals at Misplaced Pages:Dispute resolution noticeboard/Mass killings under communist regimes ~ cygnis insignis 10:26, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
No Vanteloop (talk) 10:29, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
You said you hadn't read preceding discussion there, but note the comment above your own section for proposals and comments, "The purpose of resuming this dispute resolution is to formulate any Requests for Comments that will resolve any of the issues about this article." ~ cygnis insignis 10:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I'm struggling to intepret this comment. Is the point that I should not try to seek input here if I am also willing to work at the DRN? That process hasn't even started yet. As Robert Mclenon says Multiple RFCs can be developed both at the DRN subpage and on this article talk page, but the editors developing the RFCs should take reasonable care to avoid having conflicting RFCs. That is what I am trying to do here by 'reading the room' on what RfC structure seems the most accepted. If I have misintepreted your comment I apologise. (and while I have you, do you have any input or crtique on this or any other RfC proposal?) Vanteloop (talk) 10:59, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I'm suggesting to Vanteloop (talk · contribs) that is better done at the DRN subpage, and noting the supposedly contrary advice states "reasonable care to avoid having conflicting RFCs" in a new section titled "Alternative proposal 2: One, both, or split". ~ cygnis insignis 12:09, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
better done at the DRN subpage that's a fair opinion, I have already explained why I disagree - I will do so again, but I don't think its productive to continue going round in circles. "reasonable care to avoid having conflicting RFCs" Gathering input about what potential RfCs have the greatest consensus before moving forward is doing exactly that. This is not a RfC, it is a proposal up for input.
Do you have any input on the proposal as currently stated? Vanteloop (talk) 12:22, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes. ~ cygnis insignis 12:30, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

User:XavierItzm Pinging you because you expressed a desire for a proposal with all options considered. This proposal has received input from multiple editors already but I am still seeking more before deciding whether to move forward. Do you have any opinions on this proposal? Vanteloop (talk) 15:12, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks, Option 2 as suggested by Nug seems reasonable. XavierItzm (talk) 04:21, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Structural analysis and recommendation

Thanks for the ping. I agree that the future of this article will be an eternal mess unless editors START by deciding what it's scope and subject will be. And I agree that the two big potential "content blocks" possibilities are:

  1. A discussion of a possible linkage between Communist rule and mass killings (or possibly include mass excess deaths)
  2. An overview of mass killings and mass mortality events in Communist states. This could be simply a higher level summary of of those, or it could be a distillation with emphasis on the aspects that related to communist rule.

I don't agree that they can't exist in the same article. In fact inclusion of both may be inevitable, but it's important that the editors decide and then record that decision for posterity (since the title does not define it and probably can't be modified to define it) #1 contains the material that is unique to this article. IMO it's the main thing that this article has to offer readers that is not elsewhere. But the summary or "distillation with emphasis" aspect of #2 also has some value to readers. Also, #2 might help cover #1.

At the beginning of the above process, maybe the main editors could come to a "meeting of the minds". There is probably a real world contest blended into this whole process. This could be between people who tend to want to make communist look as good or bad as possible, or concern that the "other" group of editors is trying to do that. Possibly the main editors could agree to set this aside for at least this first decision. Whether that be for a higher purpose (to make a good, informative article, which is also more fun) or a pragmatic one of avoiding the Mutually Assured Destruction of eternal pain here for the editors.

So there are three choices: #1, #2 or both. To avoid math problems, rather than a three way choice, I would recommend 2 separate decisions: Whether or not to include #1, and whether or not to include #2. And maybe these decisions could be made in a friendly discussion between the active editors. Maybe these questions could be raised or decided at DRN. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 21:45, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

A would not discuss whether there is a connection between communism and mass killings but why there is one. TFD (talk) 21:54, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
That is true but I thought that wording that pre-supposes that there is one would turn some people off or sound POV.North8000 (talk) 22:31, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
An alternative question may be: should the current article be split into two articles #1 and #2. --Nug (talk) 22:21, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Maybe, but that would chart a pretty complex and difficult course in several respects.North8000 (talk) 22:35, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, it is also an option. That could be an option C. It is totally consistent with our policy. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:41, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Thanks, North8000.
I agree with almost everything except one thing: #1 and #2 are mutually exclusive, so your "both" is not an option. WP:SS and WP:SPINOFF apply severe restrictions on that. How can you imagine a "summary style" article that discusses both #1 and #2, especially if #2 is not just briefly discussed at the very bottom?
The reason is simple. Most "daughter articles" explain each specific mass killings/mass mortality case by a number of factors, and Communism is usually not the only, and even not the major one. If we combine a neutral summary of those events with a discussion of a role of Communism, this discussion should inevitably split onto many country-specific sections, because in each case the role of Communism as a factor was totally different. However, if we try to discuss a role of some "generic Communism", we will give an undue weight to that highly questionable theory. In my opinion, Nug's proposal is much better: "Both #1 & #2" means that we need two different articles.Paul Siebert (talk) 22:39, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I was just giving my assessment, and my only opinion is to do my best at that. I hate to go into the weeds here but it might be useful. It's likely that some things that go along with actual communist regimes are enablers of mass killings: totalitarian government, a course that calls for major (=forceful) re-indoctrination of the residents, or the latter providing cover for some bad person who wants to do really bad stuff. All these are not inherently a part of a communist philosophy. And per TFD (who I highly respect) possibly a correlation existing is widely accepted as a given. I still disagree that #1 & #2 can't coexist. And add to that, that coexistence is what the current article is.....arguments that policy says that the current article shouldn't exist are arguments of the AFD's. I'm not arguing for "both", but am observing that it's not possible to exclude that choice. Regarding splitting, that possibility should also be offered, possibly as step #2 after a decision that both should be covered. IMO the execution of that approach would be near-impossible, but it should be offered. North8000 (talk) 23:22, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
I tried to collect a representative sample of sources, and I found that the idea of a strong causal linkage between Communism and mass killings may have more critics than supporters among scholars.
With regard to "correlation", it is tricky. Thus, the black people are overrepresented among the US prisoner population, so there is a strong reason to speak about some correlation here. However, I have a strong doubt a linkage between the race and criminal intents has been convincingly demonstrated in something like randomised double blind studies. Correlation does not implies causation, and majority of authors, unlike Rummel, prefer to discuss causes, not to look for correlations. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:41, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, we already have an article about correlations. This article is Democide. We don't need another one (per policy). If this article will be devoted to some generalisations, it should discuss causation, not correlation. And this discussion must include three aspects: who sees Communism as a promary cause and why, who disagrees and why, and what majority of authors think about causes of those events (a spoiler: they explain that mostly by country-specific factors, and some of them, like Valentino, attribute them to other non-country-specific factors than Communism). Paul Siebert (talk) 23:53, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Democide is about an academic concept. MKuCR is more similar to Aboriginal deaths in custody, that article title doesn't suggest a causal link between jail and aboriginal deaths, neither does MKuCR suggest a causal link between mass killings and communist regimes, but the correlation exists and is undisputed. Any causal link that may or may not exist is explored within the appropriate sections of the respective articles. --Nug (talk) 00:04, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I am sorry, but your argument does not look really convincing. If the article implies no significant causal link, then the "Causes" section must be removed. "Terminology" section must be removed too. And "Estimates" must be significantly modified. Who is resisting to that: I (who agrees that the article should not stress causal linkage), or you (who proclaims that it doesn't, but whose edits contradict to those proclamations)? Paul Siebert (talk) 00:15, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
But investigating causal links is a legitimate field of study as acknowledged by you by your statement that #1 is a legitimate topic. You also say that #2 is also a legitimate topic. Since #1 is a discussion of #2, surely they both better together in the one article as it give the reader greater context, as we currently have it. Aboriginal deaths in custody also has a section on definitions and death totals. --Nug (talk) 00:26, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I already explained, the sources that discuss a casual link (or a lack thereof) between Communism and mass killing is a separate domain of sources that exist in isolation from the sources that discuss country-specific causes, or discuss other casual linkages. These are different domains, which even do not cite each other. They tell totally different stories, and they discuss totally different concepts.
Ok, I can give you an example:
There are tons of sources that discuss Great Chinese famine, either taken separately, or in context of other Chinese famines (which were pretty regular in history of China), or in a context of Bengal or Irish famine, etc. And there are few sources that link it to Communism (not to the Communist party of China, which is just a reincarnation of previous Chinese ruling elite, but to some abstract "Communism" as a universal phenomenon). if we decide to tell a full story, fairly and proportionally, without a bias, how this story will look like? It will be a story of a desperately poor China, which was regularly suffering from deadly famine, a China with almost no statistical apparatus, a story of "communal dining rooms" (a purely Chinese innovation), a story about a weird sparrow extermination campaign, etc. How much space will be left to Courtois's speculations? A couple of sentences in a "Controversy" section. And the same will happen with other subtopics. That is what may happen if we combine these different topics in one article: the sources this article currently rest upon will sink in an ocean of high quality country-specific sources, and they will be ghettoised in a "Controversy" section at the very bottom. Is it a result you want to achieve? Paul Siebert (talk) 00:43, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
The problem is that scholars who don't see Communist ideology as a driving factor are not likely to say that or to explain why it was not. But it's OR to use sources that do not directly address the connection. We can't say for example that since A attributes mass killings in Kampuchea to the psychopatholgy of its leader that A concludes that the killings were unconnected to killings in other Communist states. Why for example would the Khmer Rouge chose to be led by a homocidal psychopath?
In the example of black criminality, your example is about for one state, which would be part of mainstream study. But mainstream scholars don't study criminality among black people in general.
TFD (talk) 00:38, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
As I explained, neutrality requires that the article about the events (mass killings and mass mortality) to be written based on majority views. Majority sources are the scholars who don't see Communist ideology as an important driving factor. That means, Courtois, Malia, Rummel and few others will be barely visible in the ocean of country specific sources. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:48, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I'm sure there is a whole ocean of fish species specific sources that make no mention of the impact of volcanos on the excess mortality of fishes. That doesn't mean that studies into that aspect of fish mortality is some how a minority view compared to the rest of the field of marine science, it is just a different topical aspect. Even Harff has grown more critical of country experts who challenge systematic empirical studies, who often think they know better what happened in one particular country but are not focused on global data. --Nug (talk) 02:01, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Space for Siebert and TFD's response.
In regards to Nug's latest comment above, to which I will let The Four Deuces and Paul Siebert address, I want to focus on their comment that "Harff has grown more critical of country experts who challenge systematic empirical studies, who often think they know better what happened in one particular country but are not focused on global data" — I would like to see a source for this claim, and the presumably academic journal in which it has been published. Ironically, I do not think that this is a good thing for those supporting genocide scholars as core sources of this article, giving that if this were to be true, it would just show how isolated they are, considering that country experts represent majority views, and how we simply cannot write a NPOV article with that structure and core sources. Davide King (talk) 08:03, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I can understand Harff's point, single country experts are focused on single countries, how can they see the trends in the global data. They can't see the forest for the trees. --Nug (talk) 09:36, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I can understand that too, but it does not change the fact that country experts are majority sources and genocide scholars represent a minority. You have completely ignored the fact that genocide scholarship has been criticized and has problems, especially in regards to comparative analysis (which is important considering that we are grouping together many different Communist states), which is why it did not appear in mainstream political science journal and behave in isolation. If this appears to be changed, Paul Siebert must be more aware of it than me. That does not mean they are fringe, that they cannot be relied on at all, or any strawman you may make out of this comment, it just means that they do not represent a majority or mainstream view, are not relied by historians and country experts (they may complain about this but it does not change this fact), and we cannot write articles from the POV of a minority. Davide King (talk) 09:55, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Your argument is classic fallacy of composition, just because individual country experts believe something with respect to that one country, it doesn't follow it continues to hold true when looking at a global grouping of countries. This whole argument of "single country experts are majority view while genocide scholars are minority view" is complete nonsense. --Nug (talk) 10:07, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
It does indeed follow when genocide scholars are not relied when discussing the events, e.g. Werth does not rely on Rummel's works about Communism, how do you explain that? Since this topic is about Communism and Communist regimes, if genocide scholars are not cited by scholars of Communism and/or do not have publications about Communism, and are not experts on Communism, we have a NPOV problem and they represent a minority POV in that regards. What you fail to realize is that not all academic fields are the same or in equal standing; if you think genocide studies, which is a relatively new field and appears to be and work in isolatation, is on equal standing with that of history, I do not know what to tell you. Davide King (talk) 10:16, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

I was trying to provide a structural perspective and and propose a roadmap for editor input and choices to begin navigating out of the morass that this article is currently in. Paul, maybe you are making arguments that conflict with yourself. You offered that possible-correlation-causation field of inquiry as a possible topic of an article, and now IMO you appear to be saying that the field of inquiry is not legit / should not be an option because the causality or correlation has not been proven prior to the inquiry. In any event, I was not attempting to mediate the many debates involved, I was just trying to offer a way to navigate out of the morass.  :-) Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 01:54, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Hi, North8000.
First of all, correlation should not be mixed with causation. Usually, these are different types of studies, and they are performed by different authors. Studies that identify correlations are usually done by means of factor analysis (one of pioneers of application of factor analysis was Rummel), and many independent variable are used (Communism is just one out of many. A full (very long) list of variables can be found, e.g. in R. J. Rummel. Democracy, Power, Genocide, and Mass Murder, The Journal of Conflict Resolution, Mar., 1995, Vol. 39, No. 1 (Mar., 1995), pp. 3-26. Stable URL), and I see no reason for arbitrarily selecting Communism as one variable. We already have articles (for example, Democide or Democratic peace theory) that are supposed to cover the correlations issue. Importantly, my analysis of that type sources demonstrates that no (or very little) sources study correlations between mass killings and specifically Communism.
Therefore, in our case, a discussion of correlations should not be considered as an option.
Causation is a totally different topic, and the sources that discuss Communism and mass killings approach to that issue in rather philosophical way. Yes, they can, and they should be discussed, but they must be an object of the discussion. I believe you perfectly understand that, so I apologise in advance for repeating that, but let me do that one more time (Consider this also as a response @Nug:):
Imagine we have some phenomenon X and three theories that explain it (theories A, B, and C). Can we write an article that discusses only the theory A and the phenomenon X? Obviously no. That is explicitly prohibited by our policy,which says All facts and significant points of view on a given subject should be treated in one article except in the case of a spinoff sub-article. The theories B and C are "significant points of view on a subject X", therefore, we either include ALL theories, or discuss only A, but it should be the object of the discussion. That can be achieved only in one way: if a discussion of X is removed from the article (it must be only briefly mentioned to explain the context).
I believe I explained my view, and, as you can see, there is no contradiction here. If possible, I would prefer to accept Robert's proposal and continue the discussion at DRN. Paul Siebert (talk) 16:23, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

My opinion and suggestion is at the beginning of this subsection. I plan to un-watch this. @Robert McClenon:, as someone with the skills, interest, objectivity, temperament, and willingness to invest significant time here is the rock star of the chances for resolving this, and DRN is their main venue on this. IMO they will need to start with orchestrating a decision on the scope and content of this article. Ping me if you think I can help. Wish you all the best! North8000 (talk) 21:40, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Sorry to see you go, I hope you didn't feel WP:BLUDGEONed, your input has been valuable here. --Nug (talk) 04:37, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: Thanks. Although the article and situation may be seeing some of that, nothing I received chased me away. It's simply that this situation is so huge and complicated and entangled that I don't think it is possible for any advice to be followed or for me to be helpful here at this time. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 20:54, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Structural analysis of each main topic and its core sources

Disclaimer — I believe that the only NPOV article that can be written without violating our policies and guidelines is theory-based and focused on the link and the "victims of communism" narrative, which is nothing more than the same topic as this one but written and structured neutrally according to majority and scholarly sources. Any of the other proposed topic fails NPOV because majority of historians and scholars simply ignore the topic and/or do not do such Communist grouping (hence why it was and remains so hard to improve and fix the article in this current structure),1 which is done by some genocide scholars and a few others who adopt the "generic communism" grouping — we simply cannot write a NPOV article from the POV of a minority. For Creationism, we do not use sources from the proponents but rely on secondary and tertiary scholarly sources that do it for us.

It is also why I think that Paul Siebert's compromise proposal fails (excess mortality and mass killings) for the same reasons — most scholars (e.g. Soviet specialists, Chinese specialists, in other words country experts) either discuss each event separately or limit themselves to the country or particular era (Stalinism, Maoisim), so even if we rely on country experts, and each section is a summary of Excess mortality in the Soviet Union under Joseph Stalin, and do the same for each Communist state, we are bordering in OR/SYNTH by grouping them together2 for the simply fact that majority of country specialists do not group them together like this and the controversy regarding "generic communism", which would be undue — I think this was also The Four Deuces's criticism, and is why AmateurEditor thought it was OR/SYNTH, probably the only disagreement I may have with Siebert.

Said this, I may change my mind if I could see a sandbox of each possible topic and core sources, so as to check whether writing a NPOV article is possible for each proposed main topic, or if some main topics fail our basic policies and guidelines. If we can identify core sources for each proposed topic (Nug did this, and I cannot wait for Siebert to analyze them), it could be helpful in moving us forward. Because it is not sufficient that we identify a possible main topic, it must be supported by majority of reliable sources, with a preference for scholarly ones both to avoid controversy and because they are the best possible sources. Davide King (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

The reason country specialists don't group them together is because country experts are focused on one single country, obviously. Grouping them together is not OR/SYNTH because many scholars have already done the grouping per RS. So please stop repeating this nonsense. --Nug (talk) 09:09, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
See Notes below — if you were right, the AfD would have resulted in 'Keep' but it went from 'Keep' to 'No consensus' (the Misplaced Pages editing community has been unable to come to a consensus as to whether "mass killings under communist regimes" is a suitable encyclopaedic topic), therefore I would kindly ask you to refrain yourself from such patronizing comment and nonsense wording, when the AfD said otherwise and took it seriously. Davide King (talk) 10:00, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Notes

1. "The problem is that scholars who don't see Communist ideology as a driving factor are not likely to say that or to explain why it was not. But it's OR to use sources that do not directly address the connection. We can't say for example that since A attributes mass killings in Kampuchea to the psychopatholgy of its leader that A concludes that the killings were unconnected to killings in other Communist states. Why for example would the Khmer Rouge chose to be led by a homocidal psychopath?" —The Four Deuces

Davide King (talk) 08:11, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

TFD's argument is a straw man. The article makes no claim that Communist ideology as a driving factor, it discusses many possible factors in the section Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Proposed_causes. --Nug (talk) 09:09, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I have often wondered if the carpet bombing of countries under communist régimes has been proposed for inclusion, not that I am, the response might be they are collateral damage in the war on communism. ~ cygnis insignis 09:17, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Probably would be included in Anti-communist_mass_killings#Vietnam. --Nug (talk) 09:52, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Please, stop expressing your clear views on this as facts, when other users have expressed disagreement. Even if you disagree, respect those views, as I respect yours. Davide King (talk) 10:05, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
As you can see here, there are clearly users who either believe the article already does that or that it should, so please avoid saying that it does not do that or that there are no users who think it does or should do it. Davide King (talk) 07:30, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

2. As noted by the AfD:3 "The principal argument for deletion is that the article collects together incidents of mass killing by communist regimes that reliable sources normally treat individually, not together under the umbrella of 'communist mass killings'. Misplaced Pages editors are not permitted to 'synthesize' disparate bodies of information in this way, because it is considered original research that violates our commitment to verifiability and a neutral point of view."

3. Of course, the AfD also noted the counterpoint: "The principal argument for keeping the article is that the topic meets the 'general notability guideline', our basic criteria for including a topic in Misplaced Pages as a standalone article. They contend that there are reliable sources which discuss the article topic in a cohesive fashion and that these are prominent enough within the scholarly literature that basing an article on them is not undue weight." Considering that the result was 'No consensus', and not 'Keep', this remains a serious issue and a valid argument unless we are shown that majority and scholarly sources do this grouping.4

4. It is interesting that the closure used 'Communist mass killings', perhaps aware that MKuCR for short results in mirrors and citogenesis, because Google Scholar results on 'Communist mass killings' show no such literature,5 as proposed by in the counterpoint, and mixes it with anti-communist mass killing (Indonesia).

5. I get Rummel and Valentino, and general works about genocide and mass killing, so there is, in fact, no literature — just several sources that either mentions Communist regimes, or devote chapters to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot, but which in my view do not present it as a separate or new topic.

Davide King (talk) 09:49, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Nug, making a list of "mass killings under communist regimes" implies there is a connection, otherwise why make a list? It's like saying, "I'm not saying there is a link between vaccination and autism nudge nudge wink wink but here's a list of cases of people who were vaccinated and developed autism." Both cases use anecdotal evidence to prove a theory, whether that is done implicitly or explicitly. TFD (talk) 14:21, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Whereas in Communism#History we can omit mention of deaths and state plainly Stalinism...was intrinsically non-genocidal, and Marxist communism was a restraining factor that did not allow Stalin to unleash a true genocide. fiveby(zero) 16:01, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
IOW, two wrongs make a right. That text you cited is sourced to Stephen G. Wheatcroft, an expert on the Soviet Union. It's probably not clearly phrased. Wheatcroft's point was that mass killing in the Soviet Union were not based on ethnicity. Indeed we are allowed to report all kinds of opinions so long as they are sourced and we explain their weight in reliable sources. We cannot use Misplaced Pages articles to present our own opinions, whether implicitly or explicitly. TFD (talk) 21:15, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
@Davide King: is that a quote from Wheatcroft you added here or your own summary? I don't find any support for it in the given citation. fiveby(zero) 22:50, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Ok, I see that too many people quote these my words, so some explanations are needed. I quoted, from memory, the article by Eric D. Weitz (Racial Politics without the Concept of Race: Reevaluating Soviet Ethnic and National Purges. Slavic Review, Spring, 2002, Vol. 61, No. 1 (Spring, 2002), pp. 1-29. Published by: Cambridge University Press Stable URL: )
Actually, I forgot the name of the article, but now I found it again. Weitz says:
"Yet it is important still to distinguish between states that commit genocide and genocidal regimes. The latter are, thankfully, relatively rare. They are the systems in which genocide moves to the core of state practices to such an extent that one can see the entire system revolving centrally around human destruction. The Third Reich constitutes the supreme example, and Cambodia under the Khmer Rouge a second one. The regimes that commit genocidal actions are many and include western colonial states going back to the fifteenth century as well as particular cases in the Soviet Union under Stalin. But it is at this precise juncture that the absence of an explicit racial ideology in the Soviet Union becomes so critical. Racial ideology, when adopted and practiced by a state, necessarily entails the subordination of defined population groups and includes impulses toward ethnic cleansings and genocides. The absence of such an ideology acted as a brake on the Soviet regime's population politics, preventing the unfolding of a full-scale genocidal program along the lines of Nazi Germany"
A comparison of my words with this source shows that I didn't quoted it completely correctly. Instead of "intrinsically non-genocidal", it would be more correct to say "non-intrinsically genocidal" (i.e. in genocidal in the same way as many other regimes). However, the main idea, namely that Soviet official ideology served as a brake that prevented Stalin from unleashing a full scale genocide was correct (thus, he was contemplating a genocide of Jews by the end of his life, but the only thing he could do was their deportation, which never happened). I believe the incident is resolved. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:57, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
So who is responsible for that content, you or Davide King? The content in this edit? From a source which states ...particular cases in the Soviet Union under Stalin. the added content is intrinsically non-genocidal? Combined with the suspicious Wheatcroft bit this looks very bad. Whoever added that content and is also adding pages and pages of NPOV, OR, and SYNTH concerns on this article and the AfD has a lot of fucking gall. fiveby(zero) 02:24, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
That page is not even in my whatchlist. I recognise some fragments of text, which almost verbatim reproduce Wheatcroft's article, but some statements are, to some degree, suspicious. This article is not in my immediate to do list, but I can join a discussion on its talk page if you initiate it and ping me. Paul Siebert (talk) 02:38, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Gotcha and sorry for the tone of my comment. Thought you were referring to the edit with "my words". Thanks for the source and quote. fiveby(zero) 03:14, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Fiveby: Actually, I thought you quoted one my talk page post, because I recall I wrote something of that kind. My point was (I took this idea from Weitz and from some other source, which I cannot find again) that, since the core of Marxism is the idea that biological nature of any person is much less important factor than economic relationships this person is involved in, that makes Marxism intrinsically incompatible with any type of genocide. As a result, Marxist legacy was like handcuffs on Stalin's hands, who, despite his obvious predisposition to genocide, could not unleash a real genocide, because it would be very difficult to justify by Marxist phraseology. That what I meant under "intrinsically non-genocidal". Paul Siebert (talk) 03:26, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
However Marxism proved not to be brake but in fact an accelerator pedal on the extermination of class enemies or counter-revolutionary völkerabfälle. --Nug (talk) 04:10, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert:. Yeah, i would point to "particular cases" and ask to what extent Stalin was ever handcuffed by Marxism (but note you said legacy and phraseology while the source gave "absence of such an ideology" and now what a mess we are in.) I think that highlights some of the points you have been trying to make here. On the other hand, if this article is an implied proposition, argument, or conclusion, therefore concerning under WP's policies, then taking the counter-arguments to such a proposition and throwing them naked into the Communism article is even more concerning. Those aren't your edits, but i think you should be aware how the dispute in this article is playing out elsewhere. It might also help inform those writing future RfCs concerning the approach to take here. fiveby(zero) 14:47, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Leave space for Paul Siebert's reply.
Did you guys miss The Oxford Handbook of European History, 1914–1945?
  • Doumanis, Nicholas, ed. (2016). The Oxford Handbook of European History, 1914–1945 (E-book ed.). Oxford, England: Oxford University Press. pp. 377–378. ISBN 9780191017759. Retrieved 8 December 2021 – via Google Books. At first sight, accusations that Hitler and Stalin mirrored each other as they 'conducted wars of annihilation against internal and external enemeis ... of class, race, and nation,' seem plausible. But such a perspective, in reality a recapitulation of the long-discredited totalitarian perspective equating Stalin's Soviet Union with Hitler's National Socialist Germany, is not tenable. It betrays a profound misunderstanding of the distinct natures of the Stalinist and Nazi regimes, which made them mortal enemies. Stalin's primary objective was to forge an autarkic, industrialized, multinational state, under the rubric of 'socialism in one country'. Nationalism and nation-building were on Stalin's agenda, not genocide; nor was it inherent in the construction of a non-capitalist, non-expansionary state—however draconian.
  • Weiss-Wendt, Anton (December 2005). "Hostage of Politics: Raphael Lemkin on 'Soviet Genocide'". Journal of Genocide Research. 7 (4). Routledge: 551–559. doi:10.1080/14623520500350017. ISSN 1462-3528. S2CID 144612446.
Presenting Soviet genocide by giving it equal weight, when that is an example of double genocide theory or is politicised and controversial/debated, is an example of false balance. Davide King (talk) 15:07, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Leave that for Comparison of Nazism and Stalinism article. What is in scope of this article is that the communist ideology in self-declared communist countries justified mass-scale extermination of people in these countries. No comparisons against political systems X, Y, Z are neither necessary nor proposed here, dead people are dead in the same way under any regime. Cloud200 (talk) 16:26, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Let the DRN play out

Recommend ya'll put the RFC preparations on hold, until the related-DRN is resolved. One thing at a time. GoodDay (talk) 21:00, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Template removals

Obvious sock puppet accounts (IP only, no edits before today) are removing the templates from the page, for which there is obviously no consensus. Edit summaries make clear this is being done on an ideological basis. Can someone keep an eye on it and revert when necessary? I presume this is an attempt to sucker editors into falling foul of the revert sanctions, so if whoever is doing that happens to be reading this, please grow up and stop. Thanks. DublinDilettante (talk) 18:07, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Yes these edits are clearly vandalism. I don't think anyone could reasonably argue that editors undoing them are breaking the revert sanctions. Vanteloop (talk) 18:11, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@DublinDilettante: Per WP:NOT3RR (which also applies to 1RR), obvious vandalism (which undiscussed template removal is) is free to revert as many times as needed without fear of reprisal. BSMRD (talk) 18:30, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
@DublinDilettante and Vanteloop: - There were no IP edits for a week or so until today because it was semi-protected. The semi-protection has expired, and I have requested that it be restored for a month or so. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:39, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
That seems sensible Vanteloop (talk) 22:51, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

DRN Status (yet again)

I have posted another moderator's statement at the DRN subpage, and am ready to resume discussion at DRN for the purpose of developing RFCs. As I have already said, there are too many editors for moderated discussion to be able to arrive at any compromise that all of the editors will accept.

I think that I saw a reference to the moratorium on editing the article while DRN is in progress. I have deleted the rule that says not to edit the article while discussion is in progress. Editing the article is limited by the 1RR rule, except for the reversion of disruptive edits. Edits to the article may be rolled back by any RFCs that are closed, but you knew that.

I will point out that one advantage and one disadvantage of using DRN to develop RFCs are both that it is a slower, more deliberate process than development here on the article talk page. An advantage of using DRN is that the DRN subpage is a "quiet room", while this article talk page is a "noisy room", like drafting a work document at a cocktail party. Multiple RFCs can be developed both at the DRN subpage and on this article talk page, but the editors developing the RFCs should take reasonable care to avoid having conflicting RFCs.

I have identified two possible topics for RFCs at the DRN subpage, one of which may also be being worked on here. Anyone is welcome to propose another RFC subject. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:56, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

We've got an DRN ongoing & a RFC being prepared separate from that DRN. Too much traffic, IMHO. GoodDay (talk) 07:18, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Robert, I accept your invitation, and I am going to continue the discussion at DRN. If a significant number of users will ignore your proposal, and the work on this RfC will continue on this talk page, I will have no choice but to come back and to suspend my participation in the DRN discussion. Paul Siebert (talk) 16:27, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments to One Editor

Comment acknowledged, let's focus on content. Individual concerns are better addressed on user talk pages. — Wug·a·po·des23:14, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.

User:Paul Siebert – I am aware that you are acting in good faith and are trying to improve an article that needs improvement. However, you should be aware that it looks to other editors as if you are attempting to exercise ownership in improving the article. You proposed that the AFD be suspended so that you could work on an analysis of sources. That idea was ignored, but you were trying, in good faith, to bypass normal process. You then went to WP:ANI concerning what I thought was a mistaken RFC, rather than simply !voting, or ignoring it. The appearance was that you had to be in charge. You then strongly objected to an RFC on Terminology as bypassing normal discussion. That was two RFCs that you objected to, maybe because you want your own approach to be the approach that is taken/. You then have proposed that you will draft another RFC. It looks as if you are trying to control the improvement of the article. I am sure that you have had your reasons each time, but the impression adds up.

If you want to regain the trust of the community, it might be a good idea not to try to lead the development of an RFC, but to let it be developed at DRN. But that is up to you. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:56, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

I am less interested in discussing editor's behaviour than I am in trying to move forward on improving this page, however it is important that when behaviour becomes disruptive it is called out. I have mentioned to User:Paul Siebert multiple times that their behaviour requires a heavy dose of good faith to intepret as constructive. I have twice (or more?) asked this user to read WP:SATISFY to correct their behaviour, because of their reasoning such as this If a user abstains from further participation in a discussion, that means they either accepted the arguments, or they lost interest to the discussion. For example, this user proposed a removal of the terminology section. Multiple editors presented counter arguments. The user ignored these and said they were going to delete anyway. I and two other editors explicitly stated that they should not do so as there was clearly no consensus. I also told them that to do so would be in bad faith. They then did so anyway. And when I reverted the changes they threatened to report me. That is just one example of the behaviour I have warned them for. The user is clearly knowledgeable and committed on this subject, so I warmly hope they correct their behaviour and join us in trying to work constructively to create a RfC or other consensus building process. Vanteloop (talk) 09:26, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
I do not get the impression that Paul Siebert (unlike other editors) is attempting to control the improvement of the article, and nor do I feel that Paul Siebert has lost the trust of the community. I would strongly question your entitlement to make that assertion, and consider it wildly inappropriate. It should be withdrawn. DublinDilettante (talk) 12:30, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: For more than a decade I've stalked this page on off, and in all that time, I think (I can't remember!) but I'm fairly sure I have never commented here nor edited the article. I am literally *loathe* to participate; I !voted delete at the recent AfD. Further, I've interacted with Paul Siebert for more than a decade; I'm well aware of his practices and efforts. My perspective on his effort during the AfD was a genuine attempt at compromise (I disagreed, but did not regard his effort as problematic); perhaps witnessing the coordinated subversion of the AfD process, he sought to propose a good-faith alternative for those committed to the project, no matter what their perspective on MKuCR. He has shown a decade-long commitment to seeking the highest possible professional standards with this article. So, I simply will not accept a statement which indicates that Paul Siebert has lost the trust of the community. Please withdraw this. He may have frustrated you, he may have engaged in a practice you disagree with, but the community is not defined by a group of editors in dispute over a single article. For the record, I have never communicated with Paul Siebert in any other form than on his talk page or article talk pages. Regards, --Goldsztajn (talk) 20:57, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
@Robert McClenon: Thank you for your comment on me. That was useful, it helped me to understand your vision of the issue. Let me, in responce, made some comments on you. Robert, I have a feeling that you are a very good moderator. I would love to resolve all article's problems at the DRN, and I would like to see you as a moderator. However,
  • First, I disagree with your description of the RfCs issue. As I already explained, I objected not to any RFCs, but to those RfCs that bypass a normal process {Editors are normally expected to make a reasonable attempt at resolving their issues before seeking help from others.) I already explained that, and I am not sure why you returned to that issue. Yes, I proposed a draft of a new RfC, but that was in a full accordance with a standard procedure. The reason is simple: "mine" RfC was not a freshly invented RfC. This RfC was a result of a several years long discussion on this talk page, and I, along with several other users, have made all reasonable attempts to resolve this problem, and now it is a time for the RfC. Therefore, your conclusion about my ostensible attempts to control the talk page process may be just a result of your unfamiliarity with the talk page history. I would be grateful if you refrained from unjustified generalisations.
  • Second, I respect your ability to mediate disputes, but I doubt that gives you a right to speak on behalf of the community. Your words "If you want to regain the trust of the community..." addressed to me, do not seem appropriate. You imply that (i) you know what the community thinks about me, and (ii) you know that the community doesn't trust me, and (iii) you know what should I do to regain this trust. Even if we leave the factual accuracy of your words beyond the scope (in reality, my views are supported by many users on this talk page, and this support is mutual, so by no means I need to regain anything), these your words sound somewhat not modest.
  • Third, during past few days, I asked you, repeatedly, how can we resume the DRN process, but your responces were scarce and not enthusiastic. In that situation, I decided to take initiative, so your accusations should be partially directed to you.
In summary, you are a reasonable person, and I am a reasonable persons. Reasonable persons can make awkward statements, but they learn from their mistakes. You pointed at some aspects in my behaviour that, in your opinion, are problematic, and I also explained some problems in your manner to express yourself. I believe we will take these comments into account, and there will be no misunderstanding between us in future.
I would like to continue to work with you as a Moderator, and I would like to resolve as many problem as possible at the DRN. I will try to minimize my activity here during the DRN, however, if other users will ignore it, I will have to return (reluctantly) here, on this talk page.
Regards, Paul Siebert (talk) 20:58, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Blog source in the estimates section

I mentioned this above, but since it keeps getting brought up in other contexts I feel it deserves its own section. The paragraph I tagged here is cited solely to a blog; that is obviously not an WP:RS or an acceptable source on an article of this nature, especially given the wide range of academic sources available. It needs to be removed entirely - if people think the figure is important, perhaps a better source can be found to replace it (though of course we would have to adjust the wording to whatever the new source said), but obviously someone's personal opinions and speculations on a blog, with no indication of any process to ensure fact-checking and accuracy, don't qualify as meaningful estimates or as a valid way to assess the literature. --Aquillion (talk) 23:29, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Actually, the whole section must be rewritten. It contains several sources that were found unreliable during previous RSN discussions, it misinterpets other sources, it takes the data out of context, etc. However, since I resumed my participation in the DRN discussion, I am not going to edit the article for a while. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:42, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
It does, but this one seems like low-hanging fruit to me. Determining the best academic sources to use and how to use them is difficult and will require a lot of time and discussion; determining that we should not use a blog seems like it ought to be easy. --Aquillion (talk) 23:46, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, I recall there was a discussion about White at RSN, and a consensus was "not reliable" I am not sure why it is still in the article. The same story is Rummel. If I remember correctly, WOC was also discussed at RSN a couple of years ago. Yes, it makes sense to start purging it, but I am not ready for that work. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:01, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
By the way, the current state of the Estimate section is a brilliant demonstration of a desperate lack of good sources for this topic... Paul Siebert (talk) 00:03, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
A couple of cites in a section are dubious, hence the whole section is bad and therefore demonstrates the whole topic lacks good sources. Nice fallacy of composition argument Paul. --Nug (talk) 00:39, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: As I already explained elsewhere, the section is bad not because a couple cites are dubious. It is bad because (i) ALL sources are either dubious (like Rummel) or misinterpreted (like Kotkin), and (ii) the very concept of "estimates of a global death toll of Communism" is highly poloticised, and it cannot be represented as a neutral scholarly topic: it should be discussed only in a context of its meaning, support and criticism. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:56, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Aquillion: Look at This and that, it may be helpful. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:13, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I'd agree entirely with Aquillon; that paragraph needs to go. It's a serious due weight problem. Vanamonde (Talk) 01:06, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
    Not exactly. The figure of 100+ million can be frequently found in many popular web sites. We should not remove it, we should explain who made these estimates, what these estimates mean, what concrete political idea is conveyed by the author(s), who agrees with that, who ctiticises that concept, and why. If we just remove the whole section, Misplaced Pages may be accused of a "leftist bias" (we have seen it during the recent AfD). Paul Siebert (talk) 01:18, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
And? The claim that Jews run the world or that the earth is flat can be found on "many websites". Let people accuse us of "leftist bias", the info is undue and the article isn't about these claims. If the scope changes we can discuss them properly, but right now there is no need. BSMRD (talk) 02:39, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Your analogy is wrong. A Jewish conspiracy is not discussed at WSJ or NYT, and is not published by Harvard University Press. The information that Communists killed 100+ is unreliable, but the claim is very popular. Therefore, instead of just deleting it, we need to discuss it, and to explain why Courtois made this claim, how this figure was obtained (including explanations of all manipulations), is this very popular claim supported by other authors, and who criticises it and why, and who supports it. I think that would be a nice and detailed story that will explain all nuances of that minority viewpoint. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:14, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert is quite correct in all respects and we should keep the section and keep the various claims (including the one made by the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation) and explain the various claims and their origins exactly as Paul Siebert rather cogently explains.XavierItzm (talk) 04:12, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
That risks inserting a WP:SYNTHy POV narrative as to the origin of the 100+ million claim. The mind boggles at how upset some people get over this, even if the WP:True number was half or even a quarter of 100 million, does it really put communist regimes in a better light? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nug (talkcontribs) 04:27, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
I think whether a claim is merely detached from reality or detached so far from reality as to belong to another universe is an important consideration for something that aspires to be an encyclopaedia (and sign your edits, we all know who this is). DublinDilettante (talk) 09:53, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
XavierItzm totally misinterpreted my words. I didn't mean to keep all those ridiculous figures. In particular, WOC Memorial is unreliable source per RSN, and should be removed without any reservations. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:16, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Are you truly saying that the article shouldn't cite a source because the source might be biased? Consider the following case: the current Misplaced Pages article on the Lebensraum extensively quotes the Zweites Buch (i.e., Mein Kampf part II); will people come out of the woodwork to say it should not be cited, because it is evidently biased because it was penned by Adolf himself?
Not to mention that by definition all sources contain their own biases; this is why we survey, present them, and attribute them as required. Apologies for the reductio ad hitlerium.XavierItzm (talk) 05:37, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Sorry but how did you come to the conclusion that Siebert said that? Siebert has not mentioned biased at all but rather unreliable, which is a different thing — a biased source can still be generally reliable. The issue is of weight — if there is no secondary coverage in reliable sources citing, discussing, or mentioning the Dissident article, it is undue. That is a problem with the whole article because it is a bunch of "he said, she said", and rather than cite it to secondary sources, which may contextualize what the authors said (e.g. if they are writing within the context of general mass killings or if they are discussing Communism as a separate or special category that warrants a new topic, which is the point of our dispute), we cite them to the author themselves; this is not necessarily an issue because we are not disputing their reliability (e.g. they are academics) but whether they are correctly paraphrased and contextualized. If we cannot distinguish from majority, minority, and fringe views, how can we write a NPOV article, which explicitily requires that we give weight to each views proportionally to their representation in reliable sources? Davide King (talk) 07:17, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
The Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation is clearly a reliable source for its own views. Certainly the data point presented by such a prominent organisation merits inclusion, with proper attribution and contextualization, of course. So, fear not your ability to distinguish majority and minority views: let policy be your guide.XavierItzm (talk) 16:20, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Firstly, your comment can be summed up as a meaningless word salad that does not disprove any of the points made here, nor does this rebuke the over all belief that the source is partisan. Secondly, the consensus is very clearly tipping in your defavor. In the page linked above, not a single person marked this source as being reliable, and nobody, besides you, supports the inclusion of this source on this talkpage right here. Additionally, I would suggest not to speak in such a snobbish condescending tone, this does nothing to help your argument. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 19:43, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
@XavierItzm: You misinterpreted my words twice. I think, the best apology would be if you carefully read the text below, and answer if you agree or disagree. If you disagree, then provide a detailed answer. If you agree, please, do not repeat your arguments again in any discussion with me or other users.
I never said biased sources could not be used. That can, and they should be used if their bias is properly explained. However, these sources must be reliable. Second, as Rummel correctly noted (that is a part of his approach, and, in that aspect, he is totally right), the sources must be independent on each other. That means, each of them must present figures that were obtained independently: if a source "A" says that 100 million were killed, and the source "B" says 100 million were killed, we must be sure "A" does not just cite "B", otherwise, only "A" or "B" should be used. Third, all sources are supposed to discuss the same topic, and that topic must be well defined and non-controversial. If it is poorly defined and/or controversial, all of that must be clearly and exhaustively explained.
I can give you an example of a good presentation of that type data, the GULAG article: some modern consensus figures of GULAG mortality are presented, and historical estimates are given in a separate section to show how human knowledge of the scale of that tragedy was developing (actually, the "Historical estimates.." table was written mostly by me). As a result, a reader can clearly see, what was a GULAG death toll according to modern consensus figures, and, simultaneously, they can understand why other figures frequently appear in mass-media (usually, they come from sole old source).
Note, almost every source cited in this and that sections is a research article or a book that is specifically devoted to the same, well defined topic (i.e. a number of people who died in camps or few years after their release). Each source provides independently obtained data, and this is not just a repetition of the same information taken elsewhere (actually, not every source, I've just noticed some fresh additions, so the article may need some cleanup, but it will not lead to any significant changes of the main idea).
And what do we have here?
  • Old and new data are mixed together. That confuses a reader, who wants to know real facts, not a history of the topic.
  • Most sources are not peer-reviewed publications or university level books, but blogs, newspaper op-eds, or self-published sources
  • It is almost no evidence that these sources are independent (i.e., they do not provide figures taken from each other or from other sources)
  • The very topic is poorly defined, and it is not clear what some concrete author means (most importantly, some authors speak about executions and similar coercive deaths, other authors include famine, others speak about "demographic losses" or "excess mortality"). All of that are different categories and different topics.
  • And, finally, the most important thing: this section totally ignores the fact that the very idea to come up with some aggregate estimate of "Communusm death toll" is extremely controversial, and majority of authors either ignore it or openly criticize. That means, that the sources presented in this section is an extremely biased sample that expresses a minority POV.
I remind you (and all other users), that a discussion of those problems cannot be superficial. Keep in mind that WP:CIR, so superficial objections and unsubstantiated refusal to accept facts and sources may elevate to conduct issues. Please, approach this discussion seriously.
Now let's take a look at concrete sources:
  • Culbertson. A desperately outdated source that was not cited and has no review on Jstor.org. What is the reason to add this garbage?
  • Lenczowski. The article by John Lenczowski in The Christian Science Monitor about the events in Nicaragua. Just think: a US Department of State person, a professional propagandist, published an op-ed in a conservative newspaper 36 years ago, were he wrote about the events in Nicaragua. What is a probability that this article presents his own data? What is a reason to believe a reader may be interested to know an opinion of the US propagandist about the events that he mentions just in passing? I see no idea who added this ideologically motivated and outdated garbage, which cites some figures from unknown sources>
  • Brzezinski. Another former US official and propagandist. In contrast to the two previous sources, his book is well cited, but the death toll is not a focus of his study, for the book discusses a totally different subject. A snippet view provided as a reference does not allow us to understand the context, and we even don't know whom Brzezinski cites. However, it is obvious that 60,000,000 is not his own figure, he took it from other sources, and those sources are "desperately outdated", and we even don't know what category of deaths they discuss. Conclusion: remove this garbage.
  • US Congress. I do not understand why US official document is used as a source of data. Maybe I missed something, and Misplaced Pages is now affiliated with US government?
  • Rummel. As I explained elsewhere, Rummel did no his own research. His approach is as follows: to collect ALL publications that discuss all cases of mass killings and obtain an average. As Dulich noted, Rummel was not doing any source criticism, so he treated all sources as equally trustworthy. Furthermore, his statistical approach (when higher figure have no upper limit, whereas lower figure have a natural limit, a zero) inevitably leaded to inflated figures, because too high data points are not compensated by too low ones. That was recognized by Harff and by Karlsson. Obviously, Rummel's estimates work fine when high quality data sets with a normal distribution are available, and that is why he provided pretty good figures for Cambodia. However, the major part of his global Communist figure is USSR, and the data in his "Lethal politics" are awful. He uses mostly indirect estimates obtained in the West by the end of 1970s, and he even never tried to update his data set. Currently, much better data are available, thus, Gulag mortality is, according to scholarly consensus, c 1.5 million, whereas Rummel says it was tens of million. Rummel sources for USSR are worse than the historical sources cited here. All other scholars, even Conquest, even Rosefielde, recognised their earlier errors and reconsidered their estimates, but Rummel refused to do so. That his mistake undermines any credibility of his figure of total deaths Rummel total figures are garbage, and they represent only historical interest.
  • Courtois. I (and many other users) already explained that numerous sources criticize Courtois for the very idea to combine all deaths and attribute them to Communism. We already had several RSN discussion, and this source was not recognised as reliable for this concrete figure. Why Courtois is still here?
  • Valentino. If you read his book (I did), you know that the total figure is not a focus of his study. He just cited data presented by others (mostly by Rummel). He is not an expert in that, and he never pretended to be an expert. Incidentally, the core conclusion of his work is that there is no significant connection between a regime type and mass killings. He never did any research of that type, and these data do not belong to him. Valentino was taken out of context, he is not an independent source, there is absolutely no need to present the figure from his book, which discussed a totally different aspect of mass killings
  • Matthew White. Who he is? Why he is here? Maybe, the next step would be to use Guiness book as a source? This is obviously a tertiary source of a questionable quality. By using White, we discredit this article and demonstrate a desperate lack of good sources on that topic.
  • Bellamy. I looked through this essay, it is a well written and a serious source with a large number of inline citations. The problem is that the figure of 6.7 and 15.5 million has no inline citation. It is clear from the context that Bellamy took it from some other source (the essay's topic is not figures), but, due to the lack of inline citation, we cannot figure out the source. Bellamy, although it is a high quality source in general, cannot be seen as an independent source for those figures, because the author does not explain where he took those numbers.
  • Julia Strauss. Not bad. The problem is, however, that Strauss provides no total figures. She gave two figures for two countries. If we want to include data by country experts, what is a reason to include only Strauss, why tens of other authors are ignored? But, if we include other authors, that may be SYNTH, because most country experts do not support the very idea that different events in different Communist states had significant similarities, and importantly, they even do not consider most of them as "mass killings". We should either include all most important country experts (which requires a total rewrite), or remove Strauss.
  • VOC is considered unreliable per a recent RSN discussion (I already provided a link in this section). Why it is still here?
  • Kotkin. As I already explained above, we have a direct falsification here. Kotkin never wrote that Communists killed 65 million, he said that, according to some (unnamed) demographers, population losses (or excess deaths from all causes, it is not completely clear: his words allow a double interpretation) in Communist states amounted to 65 million. And they included, among other categories, execution, famine, etc. In contrast, the Misplaced Pages article falsely says that, per Kotkin (a first lie: that is not Kotkin's figure, he obtained it from some unknown source), Communists killed 65 million, and even more were starved to death (a second lie: a figure of 65 million includes all categories, maybe, even a birth deficit)
In summary, I don't know who wrote that (I've just finished my analysis, I didn't look at that section before), we are dealing either with a direct attempt to introduce a false information (a conduct issue), or there is a WP:CIR problem. There is no sources in this section that are both of a reasonable quality and are used in a correct way. That demonstrates a desperate lack of high quality sources for this topic.
Believe me, I know what I am talking about, because I am speaking based on my experience that I obtained during my work with GULAG article, which now has (partially due to my efforts) a large number of high quality sources.
I propose to delete this piece of ****. Currently, I am participating in the DRN, and I am not going to edit the article until the discussion ends. However, this section is a shame, it needs a complete rewrite (which may depend in the result of the discussion about the article's topic). In any event, it cannot exist in this form, that discredits Misplaced Pages. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:07, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
I removed a blatantly false statement, I am not going to edit the rest for a while.--Paul Siebert (talk) 21:16, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
I'll review each of your points and respond in due course. This fixation on numerical precision is misplaced, as Harff writes: "Compiling global data is hazardous and will inevitably invite chagrin and criticism from country experts. Case study people have a problem with systematic data because they often think they know better what happened in one particular country. I have sympathized with this view, because my area expertise was the Middle East. But when empiricists focus on global data, we have to consider 190 countries and must rely on country experts selectively. When we look for patterns and test explanations, we cannot expect absolute precision, in fact we do not require it. ... Over time I have become more critical of country experts who challenge systematic empirical studies. Case studies are scarce, of dubious accuracy, or non-existent for some episodes of mass death, and estimates vary greatly.". --Nug (talk) 22:21, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for quoting the source that I quoted on this talk page for the first time several years ago (and which is being cited by others since then). However, that demonstrates my point: what is the reason to cite a scholar who had never been interested in obtaining precise numbers, and who is known to provide inflated figures? And, whose estimates for the USSR (61,911,000 million) is totally inconsistent with modern data? By the way, when I was a student, my professors told me that a too large amount of significant figures is the first sign of a poor education. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:38, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
WRT "Over time I have become more critical of country experts who challenge systematic empirical studies", the problem is not only in what Harff think about country experts, but what country experts think about her. And guess what they think? Nothing. They just ignore her "theorising". Paul Siebert (talk) 22:46, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
I think the discussion has gone on long enough, I'm taking the initiative of removing the controversial text from the article and its associated citations. Just in case, I will not be touching the museum and memorial section of the article, I will exclusively change the contentious information marked as WP:UNDUE. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 19:54, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
It should be pointed out that a discussion is ongoing and that you have jumped the gun. XavierItzm (talk) 17:55, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
@XavierItzm: It seems you have a time to comment on another user under a pretext that "a discussion is ongoing", but you ignore my responce to you, where I explain what is fundamentally wrong with all sources. In connection to that, your reference to some "ongoing discussion" looks somewhat odd.
In addition, what "ongoing discussion" is possible about the source that was recognized unreliable at RSN? I saw no fresh arguments, except "It is reliable for VOC position". However, that is not an argument, because it is equally applicable to almost every source. I am still waiting for your comments on my post. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:18, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert:, please observe WP:NODEADLINE. All good things come to those who wait. On the other hand, due to some people jumping the gun, it was important to highlight that the discussion is ongoing and that MarioSuperstar77 had no right to delete the ref being discussed here on TP. Cheerio, XavierItzm (talk) 14:46, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
@XavierItzm: NODEADLINE is just an essay. It is somewhat disrespectful to ignore responses from your opponents. I expect you either to answer to my full responce, or at least to acknowledge that you have read and understood it. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:25, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I reviewed the RSN dicussion regarding the source and it seems the main reason for saying it is unreliable is due to the source's bias, but per WP:BIASEDSOURCES, that isn't a valid reason. Clearly they are a reliable source for their own opinion, regardless of how biased some may think it is, and given that their opinion is clearly attributed to them I see not issue here. --Nug (talk) 20:54, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
I hadn't even noticed the RSN discussion, which is near-unanimously unreliable. Most of the people there are questioning its reliability (it's a blog, after all), not its bias; but more generally it's a clear consensus of unreliable. If you disagree, feel free to re-open the discussion there, but I'm skeptical you'll convince anyone you can cite a blog. --Aquillion (talk) 21:05, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
WRT "they are a reliable source for their own opinion" - that is unbeatable argument, which is applicable to almost every source. The question is what makes WoC blog notable enough to include it in this section? Are they a scientific or scholarly institution? Do they have some broadly recognised expertise that make their opinion notable? Paul Siebert (talk) 21:09, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
victimsofcommunism.org is a bit more than a blog, it is a website of a educational and research foundation with an academic council with a program of research. Just because people think it is anti-communist isn't a valid reason to exclude it per WP:BIASEDSOURCES. --Nug (talk) 21:41, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
This deserves a serious analysis. I will think about that, and I expect that meanwhile you will respond to my analysis of W&T. The ball is on your side. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:01, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

The "Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation" should be avoided at all costs. Firstly they were founded and funded by the US government so they're far from neutral. Secondly their staff includes a slew of war criminals including George W. Bush, and a bunch of politicians who supported the Contras. Thirdly they are so desperate to boost the number of people killed by communism that they claim that every single global death from Covid-19 as victims of communism. So even people who live under capitalism and died because they could not afford healthcare under a privatised medical system, are counted by the Foundation as killed by communists. It's very simply a government funded propaganda outlet. The History Wizard of Cambridge (talk) 22:19, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Yeah, no. Just because you think someone is a "war criminal" doesn't mean they are. Whether they were founded by US Gov or not is irrelevant. It's not at all surprising that it includes some people who supported opponents of a communist government. I have no idea what Covid has to do with any of this. Volunteer Marek 21:59, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: From one hand, VoC really looks like a serious organisation, and your argument sounds seriously. However, there is another aspect. If read Rummel, one aspect of his estimates (which is methodologically correct) is that each source must be independent: if two articles or books take their data from the same source, only one should be used. Currently, we have data from (i) VoC (founded by the US Congress and supervised by Brzezinski), (ii) Lenczowski (a US official), (iii) Brzezinski again, and all those sources are affiliated with the federal US authorities. Don't you find that the point of view of one singe state is overestimated in the article? And is Misplaced Pages supposed to represent an opinion of any state at all? In addition, I have a strong reason to suspect these sources are not independent, because it is not clear where they took their data. I think, we should combine these three references together, and to say that US officials and some institutions affiliated with the US federal authorities maintain that the number of victims of Communism amounts to 100 million. This short statement should replace the existing text, and it should be supplemented by these three references (VoC should be re-added to the article). If there will be no reasonable criticism, I am going to do that in next few days. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:05, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
In addition, Rudolph Rummel was one of the members of the VoC advisory council. Therefore, it is quite likely that the number of 100 million may reflect Rummel's views. How many sources that cite Rummel's figures are we going to cite as ostensibly "independent" sources? Paul Siebert (talk) 04:54, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
First you say nobody uses Rummel's data, now you say everyone is using Rummel's data. Nice try, but no, the VoC only cites Rummel for Vietnam and North Korea (and the lower estimate for North Korea at that), they cite other scholars for the other communist regimes. --Nug (talk) 11:08, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
Don't twist my words. The claim that Rummel data are not used by other scholars belongs not to me, but to W&T, and you are perfectly aware of that. And, I don't say everyone uses Rummel's data: I says that many sources affiliated with US federal administration use Rummel. And, you haven't checked the data: thus, Panin's figures (57,000,000 to 69,500,000) are cited by Rummel's "Lethal politics", and Rummel's own estimate (61,911,000) is close to the average of Panin's high and low estimate. Clearly, Rummel's opinion is overrepresented in the VoC data. Anyway, VoC cites the Blacl Book, Rummel, and a couple of similar questionable sources, which makes it non-independent: we de facto cite the same figures twice, thereby giving an undue weight to highly questionable, politicised and outdated sources, and to the position of the US government.
I am going to rewrite this section, leaving these sources in, but combining them together (for they are by no means independent) and explaining their affiliation, as well as political implications of those statements and those figures. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:52, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
No, your conclusions are pure synthesis, you have no evidence that these other authors have used Rummel's numbers and they are not independent and combining them together would be considered disruptive. --Nug (talk) 01:57, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: My conclusion is a pure analysis (not a synthesis). I can give a more detailed responce, but I would prefer to do that after you review and answer to my previous posts (to which you promised to give a detailed responce). Paul Siebert (talk) 03:36, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I noticed VoC became a subject of an edit war. That is fruitless, and we need to stop it.
Let me explain what, imho, we should do:
  • VoC, Rummel, Brzezinsky etc should stay (I mean the reference stay).
  • They should be combined together, and its affiliation with the US government should be explained. Something like that Starting from 1980s US state officials and institutions affiliated with the US administration maintain that Communism killed XX to YY people(ref to VoC and other sources).
  • With regard to other sources, some of them should be removed (e.g., an obscure 1970s source, teh first line) and a collection of figures made by an amateur scientist);
  • A proper context should be provided for Courtois's estimate (I already presented sources, other users also provided several excellent sources that are relevant to that topic).
  • A discussion of demography (Kotkin) should be moved to a separate section, for which I can find modern sources of high quality.
If someone disagrees, please, provide rational arguments. If someone wants to join this work, please, let me know. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:31, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
I disagree. There is no basis for combining VoC, Rummel, Brzezinsky etc together, you have no evidence they are not independent, only you conjecture which isn't RS but in fact SYNTH. --Nug (talk) 02:02, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: You promised to review my analysis of the sources, but you still haven't done so. It seems you even haven't started, because that is an only possible explanation of this your statement (leaving a bad faith action as a less realistic possibility)
Of course, all those sources are totally independent on each other, and they are not affiliated with any concrete state.
Or, maybe, I am wrong?
Please, don't forget to ping me if you respond, otherwise I may not notice your post. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:10, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
  • This seems to be a continuation of a tag team war. I propose @MarioSuperstar77: to self-revert and join a talk page discussion. The section needs a major revision, and this concrete source is not the major problem. The AE report was submitted against one user who removed this content twice in less than 24 hours, but I am going to inform admins about other users who who de factoare participating in a tag-team campaign over this source. This is a bad tactics, that is a non-productive tactics, and we must avoid it. MarioSuperstar77, please, self-revert, and thank you in advance for your cooperation. Although this source is biased, and it is definitely not independent, we may probably keep it, but explain that this, as well as several other sources, reflects a position of the US authorities on that matter. In that sense, it makes sense to keep it, but place into an appropriate context. All of that is a subject of a talk page discussion, not of a tag-team war.--Paul Siebert (talk) 15:46, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
    It is a bad source.--Horace Snow (talk) 10:03, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

Further nomination should be considered disruptive behavior

I saw the media coverage of this article's deletion discussion.

https://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/2021/11/27/wikipedia-may-delete-entry-mass-killings-communism-due-claims/

https://www.foxnews.com/politics/wikipedia-page-mass-killings-communist-regimes-deletion-bias

https://www.mrctv.org/blog/mass-killings-under-communist-regimes-wikipedia-page-being-considered-deletion

https://www.rebelnews.com/wikipedia_wants_to_delete_its_mass_killings_under_communist_regimes_article

Hungarian- https://precedens.mandiner.hu/cikk/20211130_wikipedia_kommunizmus_cenzura_cancel

Slovak- https://www.postoj.sk/93610/wikipedia-chce-vymazat-stranku-o-vrazdach-spachanych-komunistickymi-rezimami

With time, an article's notability is likely to increase, not decrease. If anyone makes another fifth nomination, it should be closed as speedy keep. And if the nominator includes anyone from the past nominators or past delete voters in the last four discussions, then he should be blocked for one month. Knight Skywalker (talk) 06:28, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for letting us know you think extremist right-wing media should have a veto over Misplaced Pages content. This is obvious trolling from the user above, but if one thing has been made clear in the “debate”, it’s that a future AfD is inevitable, and should happen sooner rather than later. DublinDilettante (talk) 09:47, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
I don't know who is an extreme wing of right or left. I know only about Fox News. And I did a google news search of, Mass killings under communist regimes. These websites showed in search results. If you have doubt, then search recent media coverage.
Adding :
https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/volokh-conspiracy/wp/2017/11/07/lessons-from-a-century-of-communism/
https://www.levandehistoria.se/sites/default/files/wysiwyg_media/crimes-against-humanity-under-communist-regimes-research-review.pdf
https://www.degruyter.com/document/doi/10.7591/9780801467172-006/html
https://www.ceeol.com/search/article-detail?id=86279
https://www.cambridge.org/core/books/abs/dark-side-of-democracy/communist-cleansing-stalin-mao-pol-pot/5BC0D5F39EF9C5A1F6BA171572F419E9
https://www.jstor.org/stable/25654524
Knight Skywalker (talk) 11:09, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
The AfD's media coverage listed is all from one side (several of which even very far to the right), and only The Telegraph can be considered generally reliable. The closure was very clear that this was not an issue of notability but of NPOV/OR/SYNTH. If you were right, it would have resulted in a speedy 'Keep' closure already but it did not.
Google is not a good way to make such a research (WP:GSNR), Google Scholar is much better for this, especially because "Mass killings under communist regimes" is considered to be a descriptive title. You should be searching "communist mass killings" (the name also used in the AfD closure) on Google Scholar, and the painted picture is not as clear, with many sources being about mass killings of communists (Indonesia). By the way, have you noticed that two scholarly sources you linked are about genocide and mass killings in general? Of course, Communist regimes are discussed because the events indeed did happen and many, many people have died — but does that warrant Communism as a separate category or new topic, rather than expansion of Mass killing? Mann's main thesis is that democratic transformation can result in genocide, as it has happened in Rwanda, hence the title, and many similar general works have chapters for capitalist regimes and other regime types, but that by itself does not mean that a new topic is created or it is to be considered a separate or special category by majority of scholarly sources. Davide King (talk) 12:45, 8 December 2021 (UTC) Davide King (talk) 13:26, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Adding to Davide King's comment. The result of the AfD was 'no consensus to delete'. That is a significant distinction to 'keep' that should be noted. Of course using common sense we should not re-nominate this for a while following that exhausting AfD but renomination is not off the table in the future if editors feel the issues with the article have not been resolved Vanteloop (talk) 13:02, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
A newb mistake dear, the spectrum is Consensus => delete -> keep => No Consensus. ~ cygnis insignis 13:10, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
@Knight Skywalker: The Empire did nothing wrong, how dare you name check that murderous rebel! ~ cygnis insignis 13:04, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Media coverage was not about the subject of this article (whatever that might be), media coverage was about the AfD process, two different things. FWIW, no consensus = status quo ante. Regards, --Goldsztajn (talk) 02:53, 9 December 2021 (UTC)


Fox News needs no introduction and "rebel media" is infamous for giving fascist activists a voice and a paycheck. No wonder you're so deep into anti-communist propaganda if this is where you get your news. The History Wizard of Cambridge (talk) 18:44, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
I mostly focus on BBC, CNN, NYTimes. And when you say anti-communist propaganda; there is no need for propaganda, they have done enough killings; and as we can see China, a developed country, trying to dominate Hong Kong, Taiwan, Manipur. Knight Skywalker (talk) 14:36, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
Agree. In fact a study showed that people who watch Fox News are less informed than people who read or watch no news at all. TFD (talk) 19:59, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

Just change it.

Simply remove the word ‘communist’.

These regimes weren’t communist. If somewhere has a regime / dictator, it’s not communist by any stretch of the imagination - how did workers own the means of production and make decisions collectively in Stalin or Pol Pot’s dictatorships? In no way at all. 82.11.45.175 (talk) 09:36, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Communist states are called "communist" due to their self-declaration of allegiance with the communist ideology, as in Communist Party of the Soviet Union, Chinese Communist Party etc. That's pretty widespread political denomination that is discussed in detail in communist state article. Cloud200 (talk) 16:19, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Bad idea for two reasons. Firstly, this article only cites regimes that call themselves Communist, and makes no mention of the Fascist regimes. Therefore, it would be out of scope unless you are willing to put in the time to expand the article with other regimes unrelated to Totalitarian/Statist Communism (Stalinism, Maoism, etc). Secondly, if you were to focus on all regimes as mentioned above, that article would become longer than it is as of right now, and eventually, the article would be split up, causing it to revert back to Mass killings under Communist regimes, see WP:LENGTH. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 20:47, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
What a brilliant idea, surely no one has thought of "just changing" the article before. What does "Mass killings under regimes" even mean? At that point just make List of mass killings. BSMRD (talk) 22:51, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
C should be captialized to avoid confusion. Small c communism means a post socialist society where the state no longer exists. TFD (talk) 03:16, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Why did you lie that I "voted against capitalizing Communist even though it would remove ambiguity" when you know very well that MOS:ISMCAPS is reason for not capitalizing per the discussion you participated in at Talk:Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes/Archive_39#Capitalization_of_"Communist". --Nug (talk) 21:39, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
The word itself, communism, is not derived from a personal name or any other kind of proper noun. It's derived from French communisme, whence Marx's kommunismus. From Latin root communis. Every step of the way it has been a common noun. Humorously, it literally meant "common"-ism at the time. The only reason to elevate a common noun denoting a philosophy/ideology to a proper noun is ideological. And as Nug noted, the MOS is very clear on that. Also, it does not enhance clarity. Some especially educated individuals might interpret small-c communism to mean a free post-state society. But many of the same individuals will interpret big-C Communism to mean the same thing. Simply, most people familiar with modern Russian and Slavic literature will only interpret capitalized Communism or Kommunismus or Коммунизм as an indication of the sociopolitical leanings of the author and perhaps their sympathy towards communism. It would not help elucidate the specific formulation of communism they reference. Nor would it help to illustrate whether they mean state communism or post-state communism, since in Russian sources (from which most modern communist theory operative in real world regimes was gleaned) those were either purposefully conflated or referred to by entirely different words. Aminomancer (talk) 00:28, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Except that in that case Communism is considered to be a proper noun because Communist party is a proper noun, and is why many scholars make such distinction, which is helpful to distinguish a post-socialist society and a state ruled by a Communist party. The Black Book of Communism did the same thing, I do not see why we should not be doing the same both for clarity (this is the English Misplaced Pages, so Russian and Slavic literature is irrelevant) and because it is indeed used as a proper noun, thus capitalization is in full respect of our policies. Capitalized Communism is clearly not referring to an ideology but to a sovereign state ruled by a Communist party — it is for the same reason we capitalize Nazism and Italian Fascism. Davide King (talk) 07:15, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Make the section "Proposed Causes" its own article

Per WP:LENGTH and WP:SYNTH, this article is too long and for an article this controversial any theory and gossip should be avoided, which this entire section focuses about. Don't get me wrong, there is nothing wrong with this section in itself as it is properly cited, etc, but its inclusion in this specific article is a tad bit problematic for the reasons cited earlier. If not moving this section into its own article, removing it entirely will, at the very least, weed out some subjectivity from this contentious article.

If it was to be made, this new article should be titled something along the lines of "Proposed causes for the democides within Communist regimes", though this title is a bit long. So, any suggestion for a shorter title is welcome. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 21:33, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Nope, won’t do that. What it would do is allow the implicit connection between communism and mass killing to stand unchallenged within the article itself, particularly as it’s implied by many of the (ludicrously tendentious) sources quoted. DublinDilettante (talk) 23:37, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Either the section is moved into its own article or the section in question should be removed per WP:LENGTH. Note that you can challenge the content on the newer article if you believe there is something objectionable. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 19:48, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Yeah, and bog down the debate across two articles. Come on, let’s be serious with one another here. If only the western allies had been so keen to give the Soviets the second front they were begging for in WWII, a lot of mass killing might have been avoided. DublinDilettante (talk) 23:35, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
"Proposed causes for mass killings under communist regimes" would be a better title. X-Editor (talk) 02:51, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
  • If length is a concern, I think the "Terminology and usage" section should probably go first, or at least be cut down. I think the "proposed causes" section is much more interesting and relevant to readers. They aren't looking for a semantics debate about what "killing" really means, they're looking for an explanation of these killings. Personally, I skimmed right over the terminology section on my first read, because it just doesn't seem super relevant. I could also see cutting down the proposed causes section a bit, but I think it should stay. Also, the article isn't exceptionally long, 65k is fairly short compared to most controversial articles. CaptainEek 22:42, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
    @CaptainEek: Regarding "Causes", take a look at this Majority of sources that are cited in this section either are taken from context or just tell something else. Some sources that say that Marxism supported violence (which, by the way, was not unique in XIX century, a century of national revolutions), are used to imply that Pol Pot's genocide directly followed from Marx (although they do not say that). This is a pure WP:SYNTH.
    Valentino's main idea was that regime type and ideology are not important factors - and the section selectively cites Valentino as a source for a directly opposite claim. And so on, and so forth.
    A huge number of authors stress uniqueness of each case (Nicolas Werth is among them) - their opinion is totally ignored. This section is a pure POV-fork, and it is one of the major reasons why this article is a POV-fork. We need not to put it forward, but delete, and replace with the explanation of uniqueness of each case, and add that some (minority or) authors believe in commonality, but that view is not supported by a majority of authors. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:02, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
    WRT "Terminology and usage", there is NO common terminology, these terms are used by a tiny minority of authors. Actually, I don't want to repeat myself, I already presented these arguments a couple of weeks ago.
    By the way, the only term that may be considered as specifically proposed for the topic, "classicide", was coined by Mann in his very famous book "The Dark Side of Democracy", where he argued that democracy is the main cause for mass killings, and, importantly, leftist (he prefers to use this term) mass killings ("classicide") and rightist mass killings had much more in common than many people think. It is very interesting how literally each source in this article is twisted, cherry-picked and misinterpeted. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:10, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
You are confusing phenomenon with causal factors. Valentino does in fact group communist mass killings together as a factual phenomenon (as this article does), while his conclusion as to the causal factors are reported in the "proposed causes" section. And the fact that Mann even proposed a new term for this phenomenon as "classicide" shows that the grouping isn't synthesis per RS. You made all the same arguments of SYNTH and POVFORK during the AfD, but the closing panel remained unconvinced, otherwise the article would have been deleted. --Nug (talk) 23:18, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Valentino in fact group three communist mass killing together, but his point is that many more communist regimes committed mass killings. That is his point: to prevent mass killings, there is no need to change the regime, it is sufficient to eliminate several persons from power.
WRT Mann, may I ask you a question: did you read him? I did.--Paul Siebert (talk) 00:04, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Leave space for Nug's response to Siebert.
The closing panel also remained unconvinced that there is consensus that this article is encyclopedic, so you may have had a point if the panel explicitily said they did not find our arguments convincing and the result was 'Keep' but they did not do that — therefore, please stop acting as though our arguments hold no weight or have been discredited, the mere fact it went from 'Keep' to 'No consensus' should tell you otherwise... Davide King (talk) 07:34, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
If the sources are bad, then the section should be fixed, not removed. I don't see how making the section its own article will solve its POV problems. CaptainEek 23:20, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
Sources are not bad, they just do not support what the article says. That means, they must be removed and replaced with "citation needed" tags (followed by rfemoval of the text after some time)
Making this section a separate article is impossible, because All facts and significant points of view on a given subject should be treated in one article, and the most sigificant point of view on this subject is that each mass killing had its own cause, and there were more differences than commonalities.
And for the same reason we cannot have this section in this article: each subsection links to other "daughter articles" that says virtually nothing about ideology or other "common causes". Paul Siebert (talk) 23:32, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
So if I understand correctly, you would prefer to integrate the section into the article, and just have sections for each country, and include the individualized reasons for each? CaptainEek 23:45, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
@CaptainEek: That is one option. Currently, a DRN discussion is in progress where we are trying to write a text of the RfC about the article's topic. Depending on the results of this DRN (and a subsequent RfC), different modifications may be proposed. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:57, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
I did not argue that it is POV, only it is subjective as it focuses on debates and arguments from historians and scholars which effectively introduces unassuming subjectivity inside an otherwise objective-focused article due to their opinions. Normally, I would not suggest this to be removed/moved in spite of its subjectivity, but the article is both controversial and has SYNTH issues partially due to this section as that is given as much weight as the remainder of the article which is meant to be fully objective instead of subjective. If it was given its own article, readers would know that it is a fully subjective article that discusses the opinion/s of historians and scholars on the potential causality of democides within Communist regimes which would be more appropriate than what we do have there. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 23:44, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

Mass killings

Stop trying to change or cover up history!! It’s history. Learn from it!! Just because you don’t like it don’t make it untrue. This stuff happened!! Teach history as it was. There are still people around that can verify all of it. 2600:1006:B1E1:FC8B:E102:AFB4:AF7B:4013 (talk) 16:47, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

Stick to your main account, my dude. DublinDilettante (talk) 17:37, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
They probably don't have an account. Media is running stories on this controversy. Concerned individuals are trying to stop the page from being deleted, for obvious reasons. Aminomancer (talk) 00:33, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
The obvious reason being the right-wing media’s habitual desire to falsify history. DublinDilettante (talk) 00:41, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Are you arguing that mass killings did not occur under communist regimes? I think the general concern from randos is that people think that the information was under threat of being wiped from Misplaced Pages, which they see as a threat to the ability to easily access information that summarizes these sorts of mass killings. And that are some who would try to continue to deny the scope of the Katyn Massacre despite the Soviets literally confessing to it in the early 90's, for example, doesn't exactly help in convincing random people on the internet that Misplaced Pages is free of ideological censorship. Not that this has any bearing on Misplaced Pages policy, but it's worth considering. — Mhawk10 (talk) 05:35, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Link fix "there are some" ~ cygnis insignis 06:11, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Thank youMhawk10 (talk) 06:12, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Kotkin

Paul Siebert, please respond in this newly-created thread in order to help make this talk page easier to navigate, as we have moved on to a distinct topic with our discussion of Kotkin.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 23:38, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

As soon as we started talking about estimates, take a look at this:

"In 2017, historian Stephen Kotkin wrote in The Wall Street Journal that communist regimes killed at least 65 million people between 1917 and 2017, commenting: "Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering."

From this quote, a reader may conclude that Communists killed 65 million, and even more died from starvation. That is a direct lie. Kotkin said that 65 million deaths is the demographic estimated. ...in the Soviet Union, China, Mongolia, Eastern Europe, Indochina, Africa, Afghanistan and parts of Latin America—communism has claimed at least 65 million lives, according to the painstaking research of demographers. That means, (i) Kotkinn cites someone other's figures (not his own data), (ii) he speaks about demographic losses. The current text of this "well written and well sourced" article contains tons of misinterpretations or a direct lies. It need a thorough analysis and, probably, major rewrite. However, let's finish with Terminology first. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:01, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Paul Siebert, with respect, you are not parsing Kotkin's statement accurately, probably because English is not your first language. Kotkin's statement means that, while communists did in fact kill people deliberately, the majority of the 65 million+ deaths they caused were the result of unintended famines. There is no other way to parse Kotkin's statement that would be internally consistent or logical. When Kotkin states that there were at least 65 million victims of communism, some of whom were purposefully killed, and that "even more of its victims have died from starvation," the reference to "victims" refers back to the larger whole of 65 million. In English, "Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation" does not mean that "communism has killed 65 million people intentionally, and even more victims have died from starvation," nor could anyone fluent in the language reasonably construe it to mean such a thing.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 04:46, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
It seems you parse my own statement incorrectly, for I am saying exactly what you say.
The full paragraph says:
"But a century of communism in power—with holdouts even now in Cuba, North Korea and China—has made clear the human cost of a political program bent on overthrowing capitalism. Again and again, the effort to eliminate markets and private property has brought about the deaths of an astounding number of people. Since 1917—in the Soviet Union, China, Mongolia, Eastern Europe, Indochina, Africa, Afghanistan and parts of Latin America—communism has claimed at least 65 million lives, according to the painstaking research of demographers.
Communism’s tools of destruction have included mass deportations, forced labor camps and police-state terror—a model established by Lenin and especially by his successor Joseph Stalin. It has been widely imitated. Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering"
This paragraph does not allow double interpretation: Kotkin says that, (i) according to demographers, at least 65 million people died prematurely, and (ii) these deaths included such categories as mass deportations, state terror, starvation etc.
Demography is intrinsically incapable of separating death by categories. It is a pure statistical discipline that deals with deaths (from all causes), births, migration etc. The figure of 65 million may mean either "excess mortality" (all premature deaths) or "population losses" (unborn infants, emigration AND premature deaths). Period. I totally rule out an possibility that Kotkin, a professor in Princeton, use "population losses" figures (that would be ridiculous), so he definitely means "excess mortality". And, obviously, he is too educated to refer to demographic data as an estimate for the number of execution deportation etc. Demography cannot provide such information. To claim the opposite would be as ridiculous as to claim that by using a multi-meter it is possible to tell if the electricity in your home was produced at nuclear or gas power plant.
That means, Kotkin's statement is in agreement with other sources: yes, "excess mortality" (all premature deaths) in Communist states (excluding WWII deaths in teh USSR) amounted to 65 million at least, and lion's share of those deaths were Great Chinese famine deaths. That is what he says.
And what we see in the MKuCR article?
  • It falsely ascribe to Kotkin a claim that Communists killed 65 million (that is a double lie: that figure was obtained not by Kotkin, but by unnamed demographers, and Kotkin never said 65 million were killed by Communists)
  • It claims that famine deaths and other categories are not included in those 65 million (that is a direct lie, for Kotkin says that, according to demographers, Communist rule lead to a loss of 65 million, and that included executions, deportations, starvation etc).
Just an example of one (out of many) falsifications that I found in this "pretty well sourced and well written article". Paul Siebert (talk) 23:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
How does one deal with such a proliferation of misstatements as that uttered by Paul Siebert above?
  • "It seems you parse my own statement incorrectly, for I am saying exactly what you say." Right, which is that our text (consisting almost entirely of a direct quote from Kotkin) is very clear and cannot reasonably be misunderstood as double-counting the 65 million excess deaths that were caused by communist governments in the twentieth century.
  • "It claims that famine deaths and other categories are not included in those 65 million (that is a direct lie ... " Our Misplaced Pages article, which includes a footnote with the entire excerpt for readers to examine for themselves, very obviously says nothing of the kind (nor has any other editor supported your peculiar interpretation), so your statement could indeed be considered a "direct lie."
  • "It falsely ascribe to Kotkin a claim that Communists killed ... " To the contrary, our article merely quotes Kotkin accurately as stating that "communism has claimed at least 65 million lives ... Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering." Note that Kotkin's use of "intentionally" implies that communist governments also unintentionally killed people.
  • "And, obviously, is too educated to refer to demographic data as an estimate for the number of execution deportation etc." Based on this comment, it seems like you are suggesting that even though the source (Kotkin) uses demographic data to estimate excess deaths, which he himself refers to as both intentional and unintentional "killings," the source is wrong and should know better (based on his education) that only direct executions (which demography cannot separate from other causes of death) qualify as "killings" (or "mass killings"). If your original research were accepted, this would set a drastic precedent for the rest of the article, but, alas, we cannot use Paul Siebert as a reliable source. We have to stick to what the source says, and cannot change it based on editor opinion alone.
  • "It falsely ascribe to Kotkin ... that figure was obtained not by Kotkin, but by unnamed demographers ... " For the record, the current version of the article states: "In 2017, historian Stephen Kotkin wrote in The Wall Street Journal that ... 'communism has claimed at least 65 million lives, according to the painstaking research of demographers.'" Paul Siebert's suggestion that we are somehow misrepresenting or distorting Kotkin, in some way, or that "wrote" isn't the correct form of attribution, and hence that the only solution is to remove Kotkin entirely as a source, seems like an astonishing (and disappointing) case study in bad-faith wikilawyering.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 23:29, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
    The source says that according to demographers, 65 million died prematurely. That is what Kotkin says when he cites demographers. He cannot say that Communism killed 65 million, according to demographers, because demographic figures contain no information about causes of deaths. Therefore, there is no other way to interpret Kotkin: 65 million, or maybe more, died prematurely under Communists.
    He continues, that those deaths may be a result of " mass deportations, forced labor camps and police-state terror", but also "even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering".
    In other words Kotkin says that, according to demographers, 65 million people died prematurely, and those deaths were a result of " mass deportations, forced labor camps and police-state terror" but mostly "from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering". All those categories are included in 65 million.
    The article says a quite different thing. It says that communist killed 65 million, and even more were starved to deaths. That is a lie, and I cannot understand why you are defending that.
    And, finally, citing op-ed by Kotkin as a source is hardly an indication of a good job. If he cites demographers, find them. But demographic figures are hardly relevant to this section, for demographic consequences of the Communist rule is a separate topic (the main consequences was not "excess deaths", but "excess lives": both in USSR and PRC, Communist rule lead to an explosive growth of life expectancy, and, as soon as demography is concerned, that also must be discussed.
    One way or the another, you failed to address my arguments. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:51, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
"He cannot say that Communism killed 65 million, according to demographers ... " Unfortunately for you, Kotkin does use the word "killed," including in reference to those who were unintentionally killed in famines. WP:V and WP:TRUTH apply here. "The article says a quite different thing. It says that communist killed 65 million, and even more were starved to deaths." No, our article does not say that, at all, but if you think that our summary is unclear or misrepresents Kotkin in some way, then you are free to propose drafting improvements to make Kotkin's intended meaning clearer for readers, rather than deleting this sourced content wholesale. "And, finally, citing op-ed by Kotkin as a source is hardly an indication of a good job." This is a new argument that you have not made previously. Yes, op-eds can never be used for factual claims, but they can be used for attributed opinions from subject matter experts. This is partially a matter of editor discretion, but Stephen Kotkin is an academic expert on Soviet communism, so I don't think that the source is obviously WP:UNDUE. Either way, the long-standing content should remain in place until there is a consensus to remove it. I'm not going to engage with you any further on this matter as I feel that you are bludgeoning the discussion (and, no, silence does not mean that I am conceding you are correct, as you've suggested previously), but I certainly welcome other editor's views on our use of Kotkin as a source.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 03:14, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
I do not care what exact word he use, but the source of his information is demographic data. Demographic data are the source for "excess deaths" or "population losses", not for "killings", and if Kotkin is inaccurate in terminology (which is normal for non-peer-reviewed publications), that is not an excuse for us. Kotkin may use the word "killed", but you must understand that he meant "excess deaths from all causes", and if you don't understand that, keep in mind WP:CIR. Kotkin cannot cite demographic data in a context of deaths from some specific cause, he definitely meant deaths from all causes.
The article says:
In 2017, historian Stephen Kotkin wrote in The Wall Street Journal that communist regimes killed at least 65 million people between 1917 and 2017, commenting: "Though communism has killed huge numbers of people intentionally, even more of its victims have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering." The words in quotation marks may be understood as a comment on the figure of 65 million, but they can also be understood as an additional remark implying that "even more of its victims" are those who were not included in the number of "65 million killed", "have died from starvation as a result of its cruel projects of social engineering." The latter is the most plausible interpretation of this text. That is a problem, amd this problem is not only my concern. You re-added this ambiguous text, and I expect you to propose an idea how to fix this problem.
I am supporting the idea to discuss demographic consequences of the Communist rule, but Kotkin's op-ed is not the best source for that. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:42, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
"The words in quotation marks may be understood as a comment on the figure of 65 million, but they can also be understood as an additional remark implying that 'even more of its victims' are those who were not included ... " I don't think that interpretation is even remotely plausible, but, if it will resolve your concern, I would support changing the text to: "In 2017, historian Stephen Kotkin wrote in The Wall Street Journal that communist regimes killed at least 65 million people between 1917 and 2017, primarily by starvation."TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 03:54, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Do you understand what the words "demographers data" mean? Kotkin's words actually mean: "(i) I claim that Communists killed many people, and many more died from starvation, and (ii) according to demographers data, there were at least 65 million excess deaths in Communist states". That is a precise meaning of their words. Do you understand the difference? Paul Siebert (talk) 04:04, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, I understand the field of demography and that demographers calculate excess deaths. But I'm trying to stay focused on specific article text improvements, so I really don't have time for lengthy metaphysical digressions.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 04:11, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
If we limited ourselves to the most accepted definition of 50,000 killings within five years and discussion of Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes (while noting that other Communist regimes killed people on a smaller threshold but not discussing them as we do because they are out of scope, unless we finally move on from mass killings), which is, ironically enough, exactly what core sources do (Chirot, Jones, Mann, and Valentino), we would not have such issues about terminology and global death tolls. If this article uses mass killings but then in practice uses it in a very liberal way, with no defined criteria, conflating universally recognized mass killing events for excess deaths and demographic losses, or direct killings not fitting the most accepted criteria, merging mass killings with a global Communist death toll (much broader than mass killing), acting as though there is a common terminology, then we are bordering OR/SYNTH and have no clear topic, or it is problematic. Davide King (talk) 07:08, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
I think Davide King's re-write of the section is a good compromise which represents the source well. The only change I would suggest is re-adding 'at least' before 65 million. Either way, the full quote is there for readers to assess themselves. Vanteloop (talk) 23:41, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
The source used is "Editorial: The legacy of 100 years of communism: 65 million deaths." See what News organizations says, "Editorial commentary, analysis and opinion pieces, whether written by the editors of the publication (editorials) or outside authors (invited op-eds and letters to the editor from notable figures) are reliable primary sources for statements attributed to that editor or author, but are rarely reliable for statements of fact." That means we cannot use this article to report what Kotkin said. We can't use Kotkin's article either, because he is not an expert on mass killings. TFD (talk) 04:06, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, as I already said, Kotkin's opinion is that "Communists killed many people" (which is non-controversial, but trivial), and that "some demographers calculated the number of excess deaths under Communists, and it is 65 million (which is hardly controversial, because the Great Chinese famine alone caused nearly 40 million deaths). The first part of this statement hardly belongs to the "Estimates" section. The second part refers to a totally different category, namely, "excess deaths". Again, if we decide to discuss demographic consequences of the Communist rule, I can provide many interesting sources, but that is a totally different topic. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:46, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
And, if we want to discuss demographic data, maybe, it would be better to look for demographic sources, not their summary in some op-ed? I am not sure Kotkin is a big expert in demography. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:48, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
You sure you want to go down TFD's suggested path? I suspect that most of the sources you suggest that do not discuss those mass killings in a context of Communism are not experts on mass killings or experts in demography either. --Nug (talk) 10:18, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
That is a circular reasoning. You arbitrary select one term, and you declare that the authors who use this term are experts in the subject, whereas the authors who use other terms are not. However, the subject is not "mass killing", but some concrete event that lead to a loss of human lives (no matter how different authors call that). If Valentino call Great Purge "mass killing", and Mann "classicide", who is a better expert in Great Purge? Paul Siebert (talk) 21:38, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
Playing terminology games again? So a "classicide" isn't a "mass killing" according to you? --Nug (talk) 02:06, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: First, in contrast to you, I've read The Dark Side of Democracy by Mann, and I know what exactly he means under "classicide" (a spoiler: Mann's "classicide" is just a small subset of Valentino's "mass killing", and it is a "dark side of democracy" rather than a product of a murderous ideology). Second, I find your habit to stop responding to arguments in one section, and then starting a dispute in another section somewhat suspicious. I am getting impression that your goal is not to find some productive solution, but to filibuster the process of the article's improvement.
By the way, if you are going to respond to my previous arguments (and it would be impolite not do do so), please, ping me, because the talk page becomes so long that it is becoming increasingly difficult to see new posts in the middle of the page. Paul Siebert (talk) 02:55, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: Upon reflection, I came to a conclusion that you totally misunderstood my argument. It does not matter if "classicide" and "mass killing" are the same (a spoiler: they aren't, but that is not important in this context). Let's assume they are totally the same thing. However, if you read Mann, you probably noticed that he discusses "classicide" mostly not in a context of Communism. Actually, Valentino also discussed his "mass killings" not in a context of Communism. That does not necessarily make them non-experts. Paul Siebert (talk) 06:20, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

Mann, Marx and "classicide"

I am currently reading reviews on Mann's "The Dark Side of Democracy", and several reviewers mention Mann's name in a context of "the work of the great comparativists of classic sociology - Karl Marx and Max Weber." It is interesting to see how the MKuCR article uses Mann as a reliable source and simultaneously describes another great comparativist, Karl Marx, as a founder of a murderous ideology. What sources are you reading, colleagues? Paul Siebert (talk) 06:33, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

It is possible to believe both that 1) Marx was an influential and incisive thinker 2) the views of historians who criticise his writings as legitimising violence should be included in this article. Vanteloop (talk) 08:33, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
Again, this is a prime example of VERIFY vs. NPOV/WEIGHT. That there are some historians who say that (VERIFY) is not sufficient if they fail WEIGHT; it is the same thing for the VoC estimate — if they do not get secondary coverage, they fail WEIGHT, and if they do not get significant scholarly coverage, they fail NPOV. Without a tertiary source, we must assume that all those views are minority — but are they significant enough? They all appear either one-sided or decontextualized, and generalizations which lacks the full, necessary context (hence POV forks accuses), and fails NPOV in presenting all significant views in proportion to their weight in the literature. Simply asking us to add stuff is not a good approach either, if those sources do not write within the context and structure of the current article. If we cannot identify majority views, and if this article is a collection of minority views, some of which significant, some of it not, some of it fringe, then what is the point? Davide King (talk) 12:38, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
@Vanteloop: Marx, without any doubts, legitimised violence of a certain kind. However, there is a big difference between the statement: "Marx ligitimised violence" and "Marx's theory was a justification of mass killings".
Legitimisation of violence was a mainstream trend during XIX and early XX century, for revolutions (note, mostly bourgeois revolutions and national revolutions, which is essentially the same) created at least a half of all currently existing states in Europe, including Italy, France, Germany, Hungary, etc. Are you going to seriously claim they were not violent? A revolutionary leader or activist was one of role models. Moreover, violence is justified by, e.g. US constitution: its Second Amendment stipulates the right of people to bear arm, for organised militia serves as a "moral check" against both usurpation and the arbitrary use of power. The very spirit of the Second Amendment is to keep people prepared for violent actions when it is needed.
Therefore, the question is not if Marx justified violence (he obviously did), but if he stayed apart from a mainstream trend (which is highly unlikely, for violence was universally seen as a quite acceptable tool both in a political struggle and for solving territorial disputes between states).
The transition between "he theoretically justified violence" and "his theory justified mass killings" is something that does not follow from the sources cited in this article. It is (i) a piece of original research, and (ii) an obvious minor POV-pushing, for I provided several mainstream peer-reviewed publications that clearly say otherwise. They can be found on this talk page and the AfD's talk page. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:06, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert, there is clearly a dispute between WP:VERIFY and WP:NPOV/WP:WEIGHT in this article, where that the events indeed happened, that events under Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes universally fit the category of mass killings, that there are sources that mentions Communist regimes (by which they really mean Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot — that is what Chirot, Jones, Mann, and Valentino really discuss), and that this is sufficient to have an article about it but it is not, in fact, sufficient due to NPOV and WEIGHT concerns. I would say that also in light of the AfD's closure, this is no longer sufficient because, to quote from the closure, the Misplaced Pages editing community has been unable to come to a consensus as to whether "mass killings under communist regimes" is a suitable encyclopaedic topic.
The current structure simply cannot be improved or fixed to no longer have NPOW and WEIGHT issues because the only possible tertiary source (Karlsson) is dismissive towards Courtois and Rummel, does not mention Valentino at all, etc. and the article is a collection of minority views, and we cannot add more sources because majority of sources do not write within the context of this article, do not write in a commonality Communist grouping, and do not engage in a global Communist death toll. By attempting to fix NPOV and WEIGHT, we too engage in OR/SYNTH because the article's structure is reversed and wrong — it is, in itself, OR/SYNTH; if it was not, the result would have been 'Keep.'
As noted by the AfD, sources are the main issues, and their issues are in regards to both WEIGHT and VERIFY (e.g. Chirot, Mann, and Valentino are clearly respected academics but are they discussed fairly and correctly in the article or are they misrepresented? — since we are not citing them to secondary coverage but to their own works, I am not surprised that this is the case. Do they separate Communism in a special category as a new topic? If so, how accepted this approach is and do they represent majority or minority views?). The simplest way to fix this article is to find a topic for which we have tertiary sources (Neumayer et al.), and that is what TFD, others, and I propose. If you want to discuss Communist mass killings, we have Mass killing for that, if you want to have its own article it must only discuss Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes, as Chirot, Jones, Mann, and Valentino do, or we may have a disambiguation page linking to events themselves. Anything would be better than merging events with theories, merging Communist mass killings with global Communist death toll and theories by non-experts on Communism. In fact, doing so may be disruptive and it amounts to ignoring both the closure and moderator acknowledgment of issues, which are the result of this merging approach, hence no consensus as to whether MKuCR is a suitable encyclopedic topic.
Davide King (talk) 11:57, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

Source Analysis?

I think that I respectfully disagree in detail with a statement by the AFD closers, when they wrote: "We therefore strongly recommend that the DRN process be resumed and pick up the attempts at source analysis carried out in this discussion, which show promise in breaking the deadlock." I do not understand how source analysis will break any deadlock, and in fact this recommendation by the closers seems to contradict their conclusion: "Unfortunately, we can find no consensus on them , and consider it unlikely that further discussion in this forum will produce one." It is clear to me that source analysis isn't going to resolve the dispute, because there are a multitude of good-quality sources supporting different viewpoints.

If someone has an alternate approach for source analysis, please describe it. There are reliable sources to support multiple viewpoints and approaches, and enough of them so that looking for what is the "majority" viewpoint probably will not be helpful.

I agree with the statement that verifiability is not the key policy here. It is an important, non-negotiable policy, but there are sources that support multiple viewpoints. So the question is one of balance and due weight, which are aspects of neutral point of view.

Discussion on how to focus the topic of this article is in progress at DRNMKUCR. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:27, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

I totally agree that verifiability problem is not a key problem. The key problem here is neutrality. All verifiability issues of this article are a result of its non-neutrality: the sources "resist" to their usage in a non-neutral way, and significant distortion, cherry-picking or direct falsifications are needed to write this non-neutral content using these sources. It is not possible to fit the whole body of sources into this totally non-neutral format without cherry-picking, falsifications and misinterpretations.
An example that demonstrate my point is "Causes" section (I already wrote about that, so I will not repeat myself). A fresh example is "Estimates" section: it uses four sources closely affiliated with the US government (and which cite essentially the same obsolete data), one desperately outdated source, of source authored by an amateur scientist, one source that cites demographic data (which is intrinsically incapable of identifying causes of deaths), one highly controversial source, which was severely criticized for its figures, and a couple of sources authored by country experts (and leaves beyond the scope tons of good quality modern sources authored by excellent country experts). Some of those sources were already recognised as lousy at RSN. Why better sources cannot be used? The reason is that the sources used in this section are the only sources that tell about "Communist mass killings" in general, and they are the best available sources about the topic defined as "Communist mass killings". However, if we start to talk about each of those events separately from each other, we immediately find tons of good, modern, high quality sources. The only problem is that they do not tell about Communism as a single phenomenon, they discuss each country and each event in their own historical context and separately from each other. Clearly, this section has severe verifiability problems, but the key issue is its non-neutrality. By choosing a totally non-neutral topic and non-neutral structure, the article leaves beyond the scope tons of good sources and distorts those sources that are already being used in it.
Again, the reason is non-neutrality, and Robert absolutely correctly identifies it. I see only two solutions, and I already presented them in my version of AfD. A third solution is Nug's proposal (split). I propose to move this discussion to the less noisy platform. Paul Siebert (talk) 05:59, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
There's like roughly five ongoing separate yet related discussions happening on this article's talkpage, concurrently. Jumpin' Junipers. GoodDay (talk) 16:09, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Problem is that the current structure, which is focused of Communism as a single phenomenon, does not allow us to do that; majority of sources discuss each country individually and separately, and at best engage in comparative analysis between three very specific Communist leaders (Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot) rather than Communist regimes, not all of which is the same (e.g. Jones discusses Stalin and Mao together but Pol Pot separately), and is also done with non-Communist regimes (e.g. a Communist regime is compared not with another Communist regime but with a non-Communist one, as in the Holocaust, Cambodia, and Rwanda). We cannot agree on how to present such competing views, if we cannot identify which are majority, minority (significant or not), and fringe views — the structure focuses on Communism as a single phenomenon and Communist mass killings in general, which does not allow us to fix those problems because majority of sources do not write in such context, and the fact those are the best sources about Communism mass killings in general should be telling. So please, CaptainEek, understand and respond to this — it is as if we did not discuss all those already for the past two years ... We still cannot agree how to present them because the structure is problematic, which was denied by the other side — I think the AfD at least gave partially right to those who argue the structure is problematic, but we still have not found a solution, and I do not think that we will find it, if we still maintain the current structure, for which there is no longer any consensus. A neutral way is to find a topic with tertiary sources. Davide King (talk) 20:47, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
    I am replying here because not all talk page discussion participants are represented at DRNMKUCR. Let's stay focused at only one problem at any concrete moment of time.
    IMO, the only logical and non-controversial way is (i) WHAT?, and then (ii) HOW? And, it is vitally important not to mix these two issues.
    We must ask the community about the article's topic, but our question must contain only "WHAT?", and not "HOW?"
    After the answer to the first question has been obtained, we can start thinking about a neutral representation of the newly defined topic.
    If the topic is "the theories that link Communism with mass killings", that leads us to ONE set of sources (and we will try to think how can we represent them neutrally).
    If the topic is "the events that lead to premature deaths in Communist states ("premature deaths" is a neutral umbrella term used by scholars, it is not my euphemism)", then we obtain the SECOND (somewhat different) set of sources.
    The course of our discussion of neutrality will significantly depend on what sources we analyze, so it is premature to speak about sources until we haven't heard the opinion of the community about the topic. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:07, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

Well I have very little clue as to what ya'll are arguing about. But, do let me know when ya'll start on RFC on whatever it is ya'll are arguing about. GoodDay (talk) 04:06, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

@GoodDay: If you don't understand my 12 Dec post, please, ask a question. It seems we have identified a key point, and we may be ready for an RfC soon. I will gladly answer all your questions is you have any. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:21, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Just ping me, when the RFC is started. GoodDay (talk) 04:23, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
@GoodDay: ping. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:26, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Welcome to this ship, Admiral. We will try to maintain order on this ship. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:29, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Removal

. To put it simple, this is sourced to a number of sources (which appear in the diff), not to a single source. I do not see any problem here. My very best wishes (talk) 16:04, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

A source engaging in COVID-19 misinformation and politicization1 is not a good tertiary source. Besides, if it was really due, it should be easy to provide a reliable source citing that article or scholarly sources relying on them. Unfortunately, as majority of sources discuss each event and country separately, the sources doing this global Communist death toll are not the best or represents a minority views in academia, even if they may be more widespread in the popular press. Davide King (talk) 16:13, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Notes
This is relevant because that article is no longer available, and they have since stated to consider any death from COVID-19 to be part of the global Communist death toll. Davide King (talk) 16:15, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
That diff includes 15 references/sources. Which one are you talking about? My very best wishes (talk) 16:26, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
My issue is not with the 15 references but the Dissident article as a tertiary source; for one, it uses all estimates irrespective of their weight (Rummel's 60,000,000+ number for the Soviet Union is fringe among Soviet specialists), but the mere fact the article is not available anymore is problematic. I can only assume it is because they now consider any COVID-19 death to be added at the Communist death toll, which made them go fringe. As it stands, it is undue. Note that the earlier, other estimates are there because they are at least cited by Valentino, which gives them some weight. There would be no problem if a reliable or scholarly cited that same Dissident article, which would give them weight and my support for their inclusion with attribution. This does not appear to be the case, and they do not appear to be a good tertiary source. Davide King (talk) 16:36, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Thanks, I see. That link is no longer available, and I can not even check what it actually claims. But I can see a number of other cited sources (yes, like Rummel). Are you saying you checked these other sources, and they do NOT provide such estimates? As far as I remember, some of them (like Rummel) do make such claims. My very best wishes (talk) 16:45, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
I do not think is an issue of VERIFY (e.g. I do not think they got those numebrs wrong on VERIFY grounds), it is more an issue of WEIGHT (e.g. Rummel did indeed maintain his 60,000,000+ estimates for the Soviet Union but it is a fringe claim in Soviet scholarly literature among mainstream Western scholars that the article does not appear to note). The article is not a good tertiary source because a good tertiary source would provide us the grade of acceptance of each estimate (again, I do not dispute that Rummel really did not estimate those precise numbers, he really did estimate that), but they appear to think every estimate is of equal weight, when no Soviet specialist still cite 60,000,000+ Rummel's estimate as serious). The other issue of WEIGHT is that, unlike other sources cited by Valentino, I could not find no secondary coverage to use instead. Davide King (talk) 17:00, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
I do agree the "Dissident" link/site is a weak source. As about other sources, they seem to be valid. From what I read, the numbers by Rummel are not fringe (he is a well known scholar), but this is merely a situation when different researchers count different numbers. Here is what he counted: . There were direct and indirect killings, like the man-made hunger. Should the latter be counted? The opinions by historians differ. My very best wishes (talk) 18:09, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
That is indeed a problem of such Communist death tolls in general because it depends on definition, terminology, and criteria used. Not all Rummel's numbers are fringe, he got much accurate numbers for Cambodia, but his estimates for the Soviet Union are not relied on by mainstream historians as serious post-1989. We already include estimates by Rummel, we also already include Courtois, another sourced cited by that article. Others may not be included because they are country figures (e.g. Afghanistan), which is what majority of country experts do, while Courtois and Rummel did indeed a body count for Communism as a whole, which is the purpose of the section. Davide King (talk) 18:31, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Sorry to disagree, but I do not see any reason to remove all these numbers altogether (as in this diff). These numbers are sourced to a number of RS and useful for a reader. If there are discrepancies in RS, one should simply include range of numbers. My very best wishes (talk) 00:04, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
No problem, it is perfectly fine to disagree. I do not think we are removing all these numbers altogether because several of sources mentioned and used are already discussed. If we had a stronger source (we can agree that this is a week source) doing that for us, especially if it was a scholarly one (e.g. country experts themselves), I would not have any problem, but I do not think there is one, and it appears to be consensus is not to use it here unless a better source is found or a reliable sources reporting the VoC findings and summaries of estimate is found, which would certainly make it due. Davide King (talk) 11:12, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
I guess we both agreed that whereas the "dissident" source is disputable, all other numerous cited sources, including Rummel can be used. My very best wishes (talk) 23:58, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
@Davide King:: My very best wishes has restored the disputed text, in violation of both the consensus above and at RSN, with the argument that there is an "agreement on talk"; I certainly see no agreement here to use this blog in any capacity. Could you clarify? My reading is that we could potentially use a totally different, completely rewritten paragraph citing other sources, which would involve using their surveys and summaries rather than opinions from a blog - but we absolutely cannot state that a random blog's opinion is that 100 million the most commonly cited figure; we would need an actual WP:RS stating that. --Aquillion (talk) 00:33, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, but we already cite those (Brezinski, Courtois, Rummel), so there is no need to use the blog without secondary coverage or a better source. Here, Siebert gave a good summary of each sources used by the blog. It must be noted that most scholarly and neutral sources do not engage in a global Communist death toll (each country specialists give numbers for each country, and they would dispute the addition of the Great Chinese Famine toll or demographic losses to the total, or even to have a Communist death toll because it is too politicized and controversial), so it is not surprising that even the sources best (Courtois and Rummel) are controversial, outdated, or unreliable in light of all those considerations. Davide King (talk) 00:42, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I see only a single source. Where are the other sources saying that In 2016, the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation made an effort to compile ranges of estimates using sources from 1976 to 2010, and wrote in its Dissident blog that the overall range "spans from 42,870,000 to 161,990,000" killed, with 100 million the most commonly cited figure? That is the text you are attempting to add to the section, so you must find a WP:RS specifically saying that. Obviously, we cannot simply survey those papers and reach that conclusion ourselves; and obviously, a blog is not a suitable source for such a survey. So you need to present a better survey, or substantially rewrite the text to avoid relying on the blog. --Aquillion (talk) 00:29, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, absolutely not - the statements you're trying to revert back into the article has only a single unreliable source, since it says that they, specifically, reached a conclusion with 100 million the most commonly cited figure - none of the other sources say that. If you want to cite that conclusion, you need a reliable source saying so, not a blog. Note that this was just discussed above with a consensus to remove, as well as on RSN with a consensus that it is an unreliable source, so your restoration is against consensus; I certainly don't see a consensus to continue to use this source even in this section, certainly not enough to overturn the discussion directly above it. If you think that other sources can be found, use them, but you can't use a blog to summarize them. As I have said repeatedly in discussions over this, if you think that this figure is so important and so widespread, find and use sources other than a blog to summarize it. Waving your hands and saying "but the blog says they surveyed 15 sources" is no use - what meaning is there to random people claiming random things on a blog? We have no reason to trust their accuracy, their methodology, or to give their opinions any weight; and, again, if this figure is so important, better sources (comparable to the rest of the section) ought to exist, and we ought to be able to cover it relying on them directly. The instance on repeatedly re-adding a blog undermines the very contention that the opinion the blog expresses is actually so widespread and significant. But at the very least we can't use a blog for it - there were overwhelming consesuses to exclude it both above and on WP:RSN. If you think the sources that the blog used are sufficient, then rewrite to use them directly without mentioning the blog or relying on anything from the blog itself. (But, and it hardly needs to be said, you cannot combine them yourself to make the argument that 100 million is the most commonly cited figure - you need a secondary WP:RS for that. You can say X said Y for some RS saying Y, but you need another secondary RS to provide a broad survey like you're trying to do here. Currently, AFAIK, none have been presented for that statement.) --Aquillion (talk) 00:21, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
    @Aquillion: I think, instead of debating minor issues, let's think globally. The situation is as follows:
    • Different authors use different terminology for different events. Thus, Rummel "democide" for all premature deaths, including any man-made famine deaths. Harff uses "politicide" for just few events is several states. Mann uses "classicide" just for Cambodia, and some relatively minor (as compared to Cambodia) outbursts of violence in China and USSR. Valentino uses "mass killings" in his own interpretation. Obviously, each of them mean different sets of events.
    In contrast, this article implies they are speaking about the same events, but describe them differently
    • Using this different terminology, authors provide different estimates. Again the article does not explains clearly that different estimates are because (i) the authors speak about different events, and (ii) the authors use different data. It is a clear and unequivocal attempt to mislead a reader.
    Finally, all authors who provide global estimates (except Valentino) do that to convey some specific idea: usually, the idea is that Communism was the worst mass murderer. It is deeply incorrect and dishonest to separate these estimates from their context, and present them as a neutral research.
    In connection to that, it is necessary:
    • To combine "Terminology" and "Estimates" and put is into a correct context.
    • Move all old figures (Rummel, Brzezinski, etc) together to a footnote, and write that Valentino summarised all old attempts to estimate what he called "mass lillings", and concluded that these estimates represent highest possible figures. That is what Valentino says (see my previous posts). Of course, these sources are early estimates, and they cannot be represented as a current state of knowledge.
    Next, since this section started to use country experts (it cites figures for China, USSR, Cambodia), we, instead of total figures, which are not available from serious publications, should provide modern consensus data for each individual state. Importantly, taking to account that overwhelming majority of authors do not use terms "mass killings", "classicide", "democide", we must provide itemised figures, separately for executions and mass murders (that are described as such in majority of sources), and for excess mortality, especially for famine. In connection to that, it is necessary to know that there is no "debates over famine", as this article claims: a majority view is that most famines under Communists were not "mass killings" or "democide": they were just man-made famine, as well as all other XX century famines per Amartya Sen. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:16, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

Inaccurate paraphrasing, or synthesis/interpolation of source material

The article takes a quotation from a blog post, by way of this research review, summarizing it like this: "Karlsson describes Rummel's estimates as being on the fringe, stating that "they are hardly an example of a serious and empirically-based writing of history", and mainly discusses them "on the basis of the interest in him in the blogosphere."

I think that this is a biased and innacurate citation, since Karlsson never uses the word fringe, and is clearly referring to Rummel's blog post as the target of not being "serious and empirically based" and not his estimates of the death counts.

A similar mistake is repeated a bit lower, about the Black book of Communism: "Courtois' attempt to equate Nazism and communist regimes was controversial, and remains on the fringes, on both scientific and moral grounds."

The source says that the comparison is controversial, but not "on the fringes". The word "fringe" is being targeted in both cases, although it doesn't appear in the source that is being cited. I think that both references should be changed. The authors should either be quoted directly or have their quotations not synthesized together and interpolated in this way. AShalhoub (talk) 20:16, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

Interesting find. Though I do not personally know would this should be rephrased to be correctly paraphrased or accurately portrayed on the article. Removing the word "fringe" would be a start. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 00:12, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
I am not sure they are referring only to his estimates on the blog. "While Jerry Hough suggested Stalin's terror claimed tens of thousands of victims, R.J. Rummel puts the death toll of Soviet communist terror between 1917 and 1987 at 61,911,000.121. In both cases, these figures are based on an ideological preunderstanding and speculative and sweeping calculations." (p. 35) I hope those edits addressed your concerns and improved wording. Davide King (talk) 11:24, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
Mostly okay, I tweaked your wording to be closer to the source. --Nug (talk)
I think the "blogosphere" part is important because we mention that Rummel revised his numbers up for China but he did so in his blog, and Karlsson, like our policies and guidelines also says, comments that his blog posts and non-academic works are not reliable. Davide King (talk) 01:23, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
But Rummel's numbers are published in his book "Death by Government", so reference to blogosphere is largely irrelevant. --Nug (talk) 01:44, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
How frequently Rummel's figures published in his "Lethal policies" are cited by recent works by experts in Soviet history (for example, in 1995-2020)? And what figures are considered consensus figures for USSR? And what is the difference between the former and the latter? And, if the difference is big, why are you still beating this dead horse?
Instead of stonewalling, try to give answer to these relatively simple question, honestly and neutrally, without cherry-picking and manipulations.--Paul Siebert (talk) 03:14, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
This section is about inaccurate paraphrasing, stop trying to hijack every discussion with your anti-Rummel advocacy. --Nug (talk) 04:08, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
"But Rummel's numbers are published in his book" — No, not his additions for China, which came from his blog posts, therefore that part is relevant and was noted even by the OP, that Rummel's blog posts, including the additions for China, "are hardly an example of a serious and empirically-based writing of history", and mainly discusses them "on the basis of the interest in him in the blogosphere." Either we remove his additions for China, or we must re-add this relevant passage from Karlsson. Davide King (talk) 11:08, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
The Karlsson quote I'm speaking of is referring specifically to Rummel's summary of Mao's intentionality to kill people by way of famine and it doesn't mention anything about death counts. Karlsson has other things to say about that elsewhere in the article. In any case, I'm not sure it makes any sense to mention either Rummel's blog or criticism of Rummel's blog in this article.AShalhoub (talk) 20:01, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Do you mean this quote:
"R. J. Rummel is one of those who claim to have identified an extreme intentionality in Mao, and who insists that even the mass starvation was in some way ‘intentional’. He writes: ‘M ao's policies caused the famine. He knew about it from the beginning. He didn't care! Literally. Indeed, he wanted to take even more food from the mouths of his starving people in order to increase his export of food. It was all he had to export and he was after power... Those in the top circle of the CCP tried to alleviate the famine. They were arrested, some tortured, some executed or allowed to die horribly... So, the famine was intentional’. It could, quite rightly, be claimed that the opinions that Rummel presents here (they are hardly an example of a serious and empirically-based writing of history) do not deserve to be mentioned in a research review, but they are still perhaps worth bringing up on the basis of the interest in him in the blogosphere."
Yes, that is a useful quote: Rummel's opinion is popular in the blogosphere, and that raises a question of we are going to reflect the opinion of the blogosphere or we write the article based on the opinia of experts. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
I mean, the review is 15 years old; is it really pragmatic to pick apart an outdated blog post when Rummel has heavily cited published material? It's like searching for the weakest possible argument to shoot down. AShalhoub (talk) 21:24, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
As I wrote, if we are going to mention Rummel's addition for China, we must inevitably add Karlsson. In regards to Rummel's published material, we must distinguish between that published in the academic press, which was much better, and that published by the non-academic press. By the way, as was noted here, that review is the true source that makes this article, as currently structured, notable, and that is an argument against Karlsson, which I do not think that is the path you would want to make. Perhaps the fact there has been no other such review, or similar source (that is the kind of sources we need for an article of Communism as a single phenomenon rather than chapters in works about mass killings in general), proves that there have not been much development despite over a decade to do so. Davide King (talk) 21:35, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
@AShalhoub: Yours "is it really pragmatic to pick apart an outdated blog post when Rummel has heavily cited published material?" is a quite reasonable argument. However, two considerations must be taken into account.
  • This "outdated blog post" (if I correctly understand you, you mean Karlsson, aren't you?) is a core source for Crimes against humanity under Communist regimes article. The same source is used in this article too. Do you propose to remove it completely, or you assert that it is unreliable only in this aspect? If the latter is correct, what is the reason?
  • You implicitly assume that Rummel has is heavily cited. However, is it a proof that he is an expert in China? How frequently Rummel (the source that is even older that Karlsson) has been cited by modern experts in Chinese famine? Is hes opinion on Mao shared by experts? I found no discussion of Rummel's views by experts in Chinese history: no criticism, no support - nothing. That means if we remove Karlsson, we have even more reasons to remove Rummel. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:01, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
I didn't implicitly assume he has citations, I looked, and he has thousands of citations on google scholar. But anyways, the blog post I meant was the literal blog post that Karlsson cites at http://freedomspeace.blogspot.com/2005/11/reevaluating-chinas-democide-to-be.html which doesn't even exist anymore. The article says he caused a stir in the blogosphere, in 2008. People seem to be complaining that this page is bloated and that's exactly the kind of fat that should be trimmed. But if it's left in, you can't confound that specific criticism with the authors' criticisms of Rummel's academic work, so therefore just quote him correctly. All these other questions you're asking here seem to me to be distracting and bloating the topic at hand. AShalhoub (talk) 22:21, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
WRT "I didn't implicitly assume he has citations, I looked, and he has thousands of citations on google scholar." Whom are you talking about? Paul Siebert (talk) 22:50, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
I am pretty sure they were referring to Rummel, who has indeed many citations; of course, the mere numbers of citation is better seen as a sign of notability rather than reliability, unless such citations are analyzed to check what they actually say and what is the context. I am going to guess that majority of those citations come from his work on democratic peace theory, which is Rummel's expertise and is mainstream on that, rather than Communism, which is the subject of this article, and the context will be either outdated sources who still relied on Rummel pre-1989, sources that did not account for the archives revolution, and sources that mentions how his estimates are no longer accepted or relied on by majority of country experts. Davide King (talk) 23:29, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
The question is how frequently Rummel's China's bloody century is cited by experts in Chinese history. I didn't find much. One old review (there is no fresh reviews) says that the main point of the author is that "absolute power in hands of tyrants" is the primary cause of deaths, and he combined late Qing, Nationalists and Communists into a single category.
In addition, the reviewer (Nathan) discusses Rummel's method:
"Rummel's method is to break democide down into chronological and functional parts (land reform, suppression of counter-revolutionaries, three and five-anticampaigns, collectivization, labour camp deaths, the Cultural Revolution, and so on); to seek high and low estimates for each part from among what he regards as responsible sources; to split the difference, after throwing out any highs or lows that he thinks are clearly exaggerated, among those that remain to arrive at a midpoint esdmate; to readjust, in cases of doubt, this midpoint downward to arrive at a 'conservative' number, and then to label this midpoint estimate the 'most likely' figure, with the averages of the high and low estimates retained to provide a probable range of error.
In other words, the spirit of the enterprise is to use relatively mechanical computational procedures to find a rough average among the numbers in available sources, hoping to avoid injecting personal bias into the evaluation and interpretaton of the sources. While Rummel admits that the sources themselves are often not very accurate, he hopes that their errors will more or less cancel one another out, leading to what he calls a 'prudent estimate'.
How convincing one finds this procedure depends on how much confidence one has in the sources from which he draws his raw numbers."
That is literally the same that I was trying to explain to @Nug: Paul Siebert (talk) 23:57, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
It seems this is the link. Blogosphere ii full of that. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:47, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert, this is really getting the flavor of "you're removing X, so I'm removing Y". I think the conversation about Rummel must have been had dozens on times on this wiki, so if you want to take down all of his references, I would follow up on where that conversation in a better place than this thread, which is very specifically about misquotations in the Karlsson paper. AShalhoub (talk) 08:12, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
Absolutely not. I am just saying that we must be consistent. If Karlsson is outdated, then Rummel is even more outdated. And, if we remove Karlsson's opinion on Rummel, this source is not acceptable in other context too (Karlsson is used not only as a source about Rummel, but for other statements)?
But if we decide that Rummel is acceptable, why Karlsson is not?
And I am not going to get rid of Rummel. His contributions into science are important and widely acknowledged. However, his figures are highly unreliable, and, importantly, outdated, and his "Democide" concept is challenged by many authors, including Valentino and such a renown sociologist as Michael Mann. Paul Siebert (talk) 16:07, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
I describe Rummel's 'statistics' below. 'his figures are highly unreliable' - exactly. He tried to describe the whole world using mostly English language sources. Xx236 (talk) 13:24, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Not exactly. Sometimes, English sources are quite reliable, for example, for Cambodia. But that is not applicable for Cold war era data on the USSR. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:39, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

Source Analysis Subpage

This statement largely repeats what I have said at DRNMKUCR. On the one hand, I am pessimistic about the possibility that source analysis will result in agreement about how to improve the article on Mass killings under communist regimes. On the other hand, it seems that some editors either are pessimistic about an RFC on restructuring the article without source analysis, or are optimistic that further source analysis will make it easier to go forward. So I have opened another subpage for source analysis. It is at Misplaced Pages:Dispute resolution noticeboard/MKUCR Source Analysis. It starts with its own set of ground rules, which largely repeat what I have said at DRN and at DRNMKUCR. If I say to be civil and concise repeatedly, it is because there is a lack of conciseness. But you now have a page for source analysis. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:24, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

The position of one party at DRNMKUCR indicated the we need to analyse what majority sources say about a linkage between Communism and mass killings. That means, the whole discussion must move to Source analysis subpage, and, after this issue will be clarified, we can move back to DRNMKUCR to resume the discussion of the RfC. --Paul Siebert (talk) 15:48, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Culberston, Rummel, Courtous, VoC, Brzezinsky, White, Valentino&demography

To demonstrate the quality of sources that are used in this article, and how they are used, let's take a look at these sources. The article cites Culberston, Rummel, Courtous, VoC, Brzezinsky, White, and Valentino as INDEPENDENT sources of data. Let's take a look on them

  • Culberston: It is not clear where he took figures, but this source is clearly desperately outdated.
  • Brzezinski: Again, an outdated source whose author was affiliated with the US government
  • Rummel: This author provides a comprehensive and transparent analysis of Cold war era source. However,
- Since these sources are old, this Rummel is outdated.
- His procedure was described as seriously flawed by two authors (Dulic and Nathan, whereas Karlsson notes his strong ideological bias). Detailed analysis of Rummel deserves a separate section (and I am going to do it below), but a preliminary conclusion is that it is a piece of trash. Just few examples: Rummel heavily cites old Conquest data that were reconsidered by Conquest himself after "archival revolution". Rummel calculates "democide deaths" by subtracting outdated figures of WWII losses (20 million) from a total number of deaths; Rummel extensively cites Antonov-Ovseenko, who is considered unreliable now, etc. As Nathan correctly noted, reliability of Rummel's estimates depends on reliability of his sources, and his sources for USSR are extremely unreliable and outdated.
  • Courtois; Due to the lack of inline references, it is very hard to understand where he took his figures, but these figures are the most criticised part of the Black Book;
  • VoC: Two RSN discussiona almost anonumously agreed that this source is unreliable. Furthermore. This source is not independent, it cites Brzezinski (already in the list), Rummel (Already in the list), Courtois (already in this list), and White (already in this list), and a couple of outdated newspaper publications.
  • White: this source is authored by some amateur who just collects various figures and calculates a median value. For Communism, he cites Rummel (already in this list; in addition: Rummel is doing the same, but more professionally. Being an amateur, White even doesn't understand the Rummel's method, otherwise he would never add Rummel's average data to the sample), he also cites Brzezinski (already in the list), Courtois (already in the list), and HIMSELF! (the last is a brilliant idea!)
  • Valentino cites:
-Rummel
-Courtois
-Brzezinski
-Matthew White
-Culberston
and says they are considered "The highest end of the range" ("Final solutions", p. 275)
Valentino says that he made his own estimates based on "numerous" sources, but he provides no information about those sources.

In summary, the "Estimates" section contains an apparently long list of "independent" sources that cite each other, and that contains biased and desperately outdated estimates, which should be considered "highest published estimates" according to at least one reliable source. And, a significant fraction of those sources are directly or indirectly linked to the US authorities. Frankly, I cannot see how a good faith user can support this terrible text that undermines any credibility of Misplaced Pages. Although I am not going to speculate about motives of those who wrote that garbage, it looks like an attempt to mislead a reader and to make an impression that large amount of high quality and independent sources exists on the topic. In reality, this section had demonstrated the opposite: No good quality and non-controversial sources exist on this topic.Paul Siebert (talk) 19:54, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

@Paul Siebert: There also exists a slightly different estimates section in the article Criticism of communist party rule that could have some of its contents copied into this article. X-Editor (talk) 21:02, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
@X-Editor: according to post-Soviet demographic studies (this source is considered reliable by Maksudov&Ellman and other experts (e.g. , ), total demographic losses (which include not only excess deaths, but migration and fertility decline), during 1927-46 was 56 million. Demographic losses in 1927-41 were 13.5 million, but human losses (actual deaths) were 7 million (ibid. p. 431). That give you an impression of a difference between demographic losses and human losses (excess deaths). A consensus figure of human losses (not demographic losses) during WWII is 26 million (ibid. p. 436). The WWII fertility decline partially interfered with WWI/civil war wave (it was a time when woman born in 1914-1922 came to a fertile age). Therefore, the only figures of excess deaths during 1927-46 are 7 million plus 26 million (WWII time, mostly war related), and some number of post-WWII famine deaths, which cannot be derived from the demographic data, probably, due to their relatively small number.
The question is: where Rummel's 68 million come from? Paul Siebert (talk) 21:39, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert: Not sure, that section of the other article might have to be checked out too. X-Editor (talk) 21:44, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
Yes, it is in my to-do list. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:45, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert: That's good. X-Editor (talk) 22:57, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert:, will you publish your research in a journal so we can use it as a WP:RS? --Nug (talk) 00:33, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: WP:NOR says: "Articles may not contain any new analysis or synthesis of published material that serves to reach or imply a conclusion not clearly stated by the sources themselves". Since I am not going to add results of my own analysis or synthesis to any Misplaced Pages article, I don't need to publish anything. Meanwhile, let me remind you that (i) "neutrality" means carefully and critically analyzing a variety of reliable sources and then attempting to convey to the reader the information contained in them fairly, proportionately, and as far as possible without editorial bias, that means not only we should analyse sources, we MUST do that to achieve neutrality. (ii) If you are incapable of performing such an analysis, or even understand the analysis presented by others, then you are incapable of writing a neutral content, and, therefore, this article is probably a wrong place for you per WP:CIR. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:43, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: I can answer in less acrimonious way: imagine some book claims that Hitler killed 20 million Jews (more Jews that lived in Europe before WWII). Imagine that no serious RS dispute this fact (maybe, because this source is just ignored). Would it be correct to add this source to "The Holocaust" article? In my opinion, that would have discredited this article and Misplaced Pages in general.
I am explaining that according to Rummel, Communism murdered more people in the USSR that died prematurely as a result of WWII, collectivisation, repressions and all other non-standard reasons, and Rummel's figure is about two times greater that demographic data say. If we treat this figure seriously, that means (i) Hitler didn't kill anybody and (ii) Hitler's occupation lead to a dramatic decrease of deaths and increase of life expectancy of the occupied population. That is the only plausible explanation. Can a good faith user accept that? I believe, that is possible only if that user is totally incompetent. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:57, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
If I declared some "crusade" against the source that claimed that Hitler killed 20 million Jews, could anybody call me the Holocaust denier? No, for both a claim that Holocaust never was and the claim that it killed more Jews that lived in Europe equally undermine a credibility of the real tragedy. Similarly, Rummel's false figures undermine credibility of real horror of Stalin's regime. Paul Siebert (talk) 02:04, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
What exactly is “outdated” here? And being “affiliated with US government” (Brzezinski) does not actually affect reliability (though it should be attributed). Volunteer Marek 00:40, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
First, you need to self-revert. Then, read this and related discussions. If you will find fresh counter-arguments, please, present them, and we analyze them. Please, do that. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:45, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Obviously I *have* read this discussion since I’m asking you to clarify a word you keep using in it, what exactly is “outdated” here and what makes it so? Volunteer Marek 00:59, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
I am not sure I have to answer every question: I am not this page's technical support service, and you are not a customer. You made a revert that is against consensus, and that was explained to you, calmly and politely, by another user. Please, re-read what that user wrote, apologize for being rude, self-revert, and read all related discussions, because these discussions already address most of your arguments. If after that you will come to a conclusion that you have some new arguments, we will gladly discuss them with you.
So far, it is clear from your question that you haven't bothered to familiarise yourself with previous arguments, and your question is tantamount to the request to briefly summarise all previous discussions for you. That is not polite. I think any discussion with you is possible after you self-revert. Again, if I were you, I would apologise before Mario, for not every newcomer is a sock of you-know-who. However, that is optional, because it is an indication of one's self-esteem (which may be different in different persons). Paul Siebert (talk) 01:48, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
No, I am simply 1) asking what “outdated” means in this context and 2) pointing out that a source being “government affiliated” does not render it unreliable (although it should be attributed). I can’t really make it clearer than that. Volunteer Marek 08:54, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
You are repeating questions that had been already asked and answered here (and elsewhere) several times. That is a disruptive behaviour. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:23, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Rummel's metod was sometimes - source one 100,000, source two 1,000,000, so Rummel's estimation was 100,000 plus 1,000,000 divided by 2 made 550,000. But one of the two sources could be precize and the other one inflated. Xx236 (talk) 13:18, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, you just reproduce Dulic's and Nathan's criticism. However, Dulic's criticism is deeper:
First, Rummel takes all sources without criticism, so he combines obviously unreliable data and reliable data in one pool. Rummel states that when he uses many data points, unreliable low figures and unreliable high figures will cancel each other. Dulic correctly argues that low estimates have a natural limit (zero), whereas high estimates are limited only with the author's imagination. That inevitably leads to inflated data.
Nathan correctly notes that reliability of Rummel's data depends on a quality of his data sets. You can easily see, that the raw data for Cambodia are pretty reliable and have relatively low dispersion, so Rummel's estimates are quite reasonable. In contrast, the quality of his data for the USSR is awful, and they are dramatically outdated, so no serious expert in Russia ever cited Rummel (maybe, just in a historical context).
That should be absolutely clear to any good faith user. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:22, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

Adding back controversial statements with controversial citations

@Volunteer Marek: I noticed that you kept adding back text that was deemed unreliable by both the talk page here and WP:RSN, that is in violation of consensus which was previously set and that currently has not changed yet. If you really wish the text to come back, you should opt to talk it out on the talk page, and not start edit-wars with Horace. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 19:58, 16 December 2021 (UTC)

I think that is becoming a conduct issue. Forget it for a while, I have a feeling the whole section will be purged soon. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:05, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
Hi "MarioSuperstar77" who created their user page in July 2020, who has 175 edits, most of them to this page (or ... some other "noteworthy" articles), I suggest you, and "Horace" reach autoconfirmed status with your account before jumping into controversial articles and lecturing long standing users by leaving notices on their talk pages that, honestly, no account with just 175 edits would be very unlikely to know about. Volunteer Marek 21:02, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
@Volunteer Marek: For 1, you do not understand the rules as you actively break them. By consensus, the information on the page with the controversial text removed was fine as it. However, you on your own, decided to reintroduce them without anyone's agreement. Paul, who is extended confirmed, agrees that what you have shown here is behavioral problems and that can be taken to WP:ANI and WP:A/R for disciplinary actions. For 2, I am autoconfirmed, otherwise, I would not be able to edit the page which is semi-protected. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 22:01, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
You have 177 edits and are talking like some Misplaced Pages pro! Lol. Volunteer Marek 00:37, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul has already taken one editor to ANI for which he was rebuked, as well as threatening multiple other editors (including me) with sanctions. Furthermore he has been publicly rebuked for his behaviour multiple times including by a neutral moderator. Regardless of this dispute I'm not sure he is an authority to rely on Vanteloop (talk) 10:36, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
I do not think that is an accurate summary (e.g. threatening multiple other editors (including me) with sanctions, which is too much an oversimplification, especially considering that are not an admin, the ones who can inflict sanctions; if they thought a user was being disruptive, or in violations with our policies and guidelines, they would report them to verify if there were indeed violations or disruption, and I believe they have made clear they do not want any user to be because "AE sanctions will bring unneeded drama, which will immediately create a very toxic atmosphere", which I something I agree with, and I hope that I am not the only one. In this specific case, both Mario (who I feel has been unfairly dismissed) and Paul are indeed correct, and below Aquillion gave a good summary. Certainly, if users keep adding that same source and context, without secondary coverage or better sourcing, it becomes disruptive and against consensus, and may need to be notified or sanctioned if they persist without making no improvement to address the problems of this addition. I really hope we do not reach that point. Davide King (talk) 16:15, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
I agree, I am simply pointing out that the argument of a user with a checkered (at best) history of behaviour should be taken with a pinch of salt, and not as validation for an edit war Vanteloop (talk) 16:48, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Are you going to comment on the "Source analysis" page? You are delaying the process. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:10, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
I don't think this article is under 30-500 restrictions or anything of that sort (though perhaps it ought to be), but either way their summary of previous discussions seems correct to me. The last RSN discussion was extremely lopsided against using that source, and the more recent discussion was as well - it's the blog of an advocacy organization; it simply isn't reasonable to present the opinions posted there as WP:DUE in comparison to the higher-quality sources used elsewhere in the rest of that section. Given that the things that they're saying are arguments that were made repeatedly above, it's likely they got them from there. And as I said in the discussion above - if it is actually true that that is a common assessment of the estimates, it should be easy to find a non-blog source saying it; the constant insistence on trying to cite it to a blog undermines the larger argument that the blog is trustworthy or accurate, since it's an WP:EXCEPTIONAL claim (contradicting numerous higher-quality sources describing those figures as controversial at best and outright unsupported at worst) that people only seem to be able to find a single advocacy-blog making so stridently. --Aquillion (talk) 04:30, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Also, this is the third section opened for that source. We have a discussion directly above for this. We cannot cite a blog's summary, fullstop. That shouldn't even require serious discussion, and the argument that it counts as fifteen sources because the blog says they based their opinion on fifteen sources is obviously absurd - if you think that those sources support the text, you can use them, but you can't cite the blog itself. --Aquillion (talk) 00:25, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Aquillion, the disputed addition has been re-added ... again, see here. Edit summary is misleading in light on Aquillion's comments explaining this. By the way, we already cite several of the same cited sourced (Brezinski, Courtois, Rummel), so there is no need to re-add that specific text if we do not have a secondary source reporting that, or a better and more reliable source doing a similar survey, as pointed out by Aquillion. Davide King (talk) 00:33, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
    Brezinski, Courtois, Rummel etc should go into a subsection on early estimate of "generic Communism death toll" and their political implications.
    Actually, I have a hypothesis how all this piece of ... brilliant work was written. Some user took Valentino (p. 275) and collected all sources cited by him. He added those sources to the article, but "forgot" to add that Valentino described them as "upper possible margin". Since no serious authors was interested in calculating "lower margin" (this topic is not a part of a neutral scholarly discource), "upper margin" became "Estimates". We must restore the balance and put it into the proper context. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:28, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

Copyright violations

I asked this, and the answer was this, this and this. I am going to remove quotes from footnotes. Feel free to put some of them back, but only if that is really necessary, and only if they are brief no longer that 2-3 sentences. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:25, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

If you want to keep some quote, please, reorganize them as explained by Masem (see the above diffs). I will remove quotes during weekend. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:45, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, most quotes are marginally relevant to the topic: thus, we do not need to educate a reader about a general meaning of "genocide". I am going to remove almost all of them. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:51, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

An interesting source

I was looking for sources about "democide", and I found this. The author warns against biased studies that "may unwittingly and erroneously incorporate aspects of thinking endemic to one region, religion, or political orientation." The author provides four examples of biased approaches:

"... if one studies only cases of African democide, political or cultural features associated with Africa may inadvertently and erroneously become part of a purportedly scientific model of democide. This would lead to erroneous overdiagnosis of African polities or societies as proto-democidal, and underdiagnosis elsewhere. Analogously, an analysis that focused only on democide carried out in communist regimes would lead similarly to a biased model, misconceiving aspects of communist systems as part and parcel of democidal tendencies. A different bias would arise if only fascist or authoritarian cases were examined."

The author concludes that any study of democide with a particular provenance should bereated with cautions, and more general model of the phenomenon are preferrable. Interestingly, that is exactly the argument many of us were making during the AfD and talk page discussions. Paul Siebert (talk) 18:56, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

Best I can tell, this is their motivation for the particular approach they take in their paper rather than a general injunction for methodology. They specifically want to compare vary different types of cases because they believe this will highlight stuff that is missed in research which focuses exclusively on one category of cases. But that's different than saying that any other approach is invalid. Volunteer Marek 19:20, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
Paul Siebert, that is certainly interesting. It certainly proves that it is problematic, and makes it harder to write a NPOV article about it. It would be much better to have a general article, which should indeed be general and not limited to Communism. Both The Cambridge History of Communism and the Oxford History of Communism attempt to do a globalized categorization but it is much more nuanced than The Black Book of Communism and is not discussed as a single phenomenon either (e.g. there was certainly some connection and clear), and take a middle position between Communism as a single phenomenon (The Black Book of Communism) and communisms (Le Siècle des communismes).1 They are both concerned in providing context, e.g. what communists thought, what they expected, general historical and societal context (e.g. World War I, post-revolutionary waves, etc.). They include chapters by Michael David-Fox, Sheila Fitzpatrick, and Geoffrey Roberts, and appear to confirm what you wrote here.
There are many "... under Communism" chapters but no "Mass Killings under Communism" or "Communist Death Toll" chapters.2 Of course, one may argue that is the job of genocide scholars but it does prove it is not as notable as it may appear on first glance, and that events are discussed individually and in context, indeed both works provide plenty of context from what I have been able to read so far. It would have also been different if genocide scholars actually wrote plenty of Communist Mass Killings books but they are at best chapters in general books about genocide and mass killing, and are mostly limited to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot. I do not think chapters are enough for a standalone article, or else Mass killings under capitalist regimes and other regime types would have been created already, since genocide scholars do not categorize Communism as something separate or special but discuss it like any other times and even compare it with non-Communist regimes. I do not think doing such grouping for any regime type is encyclopedic, if there are no such academic works specifically devoted to it as a separate topic (e.g. there are plenty of sources about "Genocide of indigenous people", there is even a book devoted specifically to a critical bibliography review; if we had such things for Communism, we would not even need to discuss this in the first place. That is why I think the best structure if following scholarly sources, e.g. either actually expanding Mass killing3 or turn this into a general article for mass killing events.4
Notes
1. The Oxford Hanbook of Communism, p. 4.
2. The Oxford Handbook of Communism does cite The Black Book of Communism and Matthew White in a reference but I could not see the context, and either way it appears to be in passing, which is the point. A useful chapter may be "Communism, Violence and Terror" by Hiroaki Kuromiya from the Cambridge History of Communism. I could only read the first page but it already tells that ideology was more used as a justification, rather than a cause, and says that "iolence ebbed and flowed dependent on many factors, and often Bolshevik terror had little to do with the ideology of communism per se." The same work also distinguishes it from fascism, which saw violence as an end in itself, while communists saw it as a means or inevitability. I hope you can get access to the full chapter because it could be very useful.
3. If it grows too big, we may simply split it — indeed, the problem is that this article was created before the latter, when the general article should have been created first and the Communist mass killings article should have been seen as a split due to space. As we have sources reviewing the literature, I think we can certainly briefly discuss the events irrespective of regime type, with the main articles being each event, without having do group mass killings by ideology, or whatever, in separate, too synthy articles.
4. If there would be a problem of space, the solution should be a general article like is done for Genocides in history to discuss all relevant mass killing events, as scholarly sources do (e.g. discusses together, not separated in category, which means we can use a header to regime types by ideology, region, or whatever, which is one thing, it is a whole another thing to have full main article based on category by ideology, region, or whatever if we do not have enough works that are specifically relying on such categorization, rather than chapters in general works of mass killings. Davide King (talk) 01:50, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
If you want my opinion, The Cambridge History of Communism and its Oxford twin are good sources for Communism, but what they tell about "Communist mass killings"?
I am familiar with Roberts's works, he is expert in Stalin, but he discusses Stalin in a context of political situation in Russia and in Europe, and not in a context of Communism. If all chapters in these books are authored by the authors who approach to the topic in the same way, then TCHoC is not a good source for this article: according to this source, all those events should be analysed in their own historical context, and they are loosely linked to each other and to Communism. Paul Siebert (talk) 02:00, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
It is just further proof that we need to move on from this Communism as a single phenomenon, and it is proof both those two academic sources represent mainstream, majority views, and that this article fails NPOV as a result. If we cannot rely on such scholarly sources, we cannot write a NPOV article about it. That is why the only solution to write within the context of Communism is the "victims of communism" topic put forward by TFD, for which we actually have tertiary sources and a literature about it. It will be about Courtois and Malia's thesis, and those in the popular press who see the events caused mainly by communist ideology, that Communism was the worst murderer of the 20th century, and as a result should be criminalized like Nazism, irrespective of the different views among communists and anti-authoritarian and democratic/libertarian communists, because mass deaths is the inevitable result of any form of communism and radical politics anyway.
Again, we simply cannot write a NPOV article for the POV of a minority — if those writing within the context of Communism represent a minority view, we cannot rely on them to write a NPOV article. Instead, we must refocus and restructure the article, and rely on secondary and tertiary coverage like Neumayer for the linkage and narratives, and put it within the context of "anti-communist memory entrepreneurs" and attempts at criminalization. Indeed, Communism as a single phenomenon can only be justified if it represented a majority view; if we cannot use academic sources that do not write in such context, we should not drop such good scholarly sources but restructure the article according to majority, and minority, academic and scholarly sources and views. Davide King (talk) 02:14, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

"Where revolutionary regimes in general, and communist regimes in particular, part company from non-revolutionary regimes is in the degree to which they have been historically willing—indeed compelled—to deploy escalating degrees of extreme political violence...The Soviet Union's formative experiences of civil war, forced collectivization, and ever wider waves of terror against presumptive internal enemies, both within and outside the Communist Party, established a template that that other communist parties in power variously imitated, adjusted, reacted against, and occasionally amplified in the light of their own domestic and regional security circumstances. Full-scale Terror with a capital T was not, a priori, irreversible encoded into the DNA of communist revolution: some states experienced relatively more severe, protracted, or spasmodic versions of terror than others. But common to all communist states were factors, albeit influential to varying degrees, that systematically removed constraints on the prosecution of terror as a means to guarantee the revolution...

from Strauss "Communist Revolution and Political Terror" in Oxford. I do not have access to the entire chapter, but you are way out on a limb in some of your claims. fiveby(zero) 18:42, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
@Fiveby: It seems my last responce to Cloud200 (see the section below) addresses your point. In addition, Strauss is not an expert in Soviet history, so some of her interpretations or generalizations may non-justified. Thus, many authors (whom I already cited) note that there much more difference between USSR and Cambodia than commonalities (thus, KR used revolutionary peasants to suppress and destroy urban population and create a rural utopis, whereas in USSR forceful collectivisation of peasantry was used to accelerate urbanisation).
On another hand, many authors see more commonalities between genocides in Asia (communist and non-communist ones) than between mass killings in Asian communist states and in Europe.
That is only a small part of possible counter-arguments. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:15, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
I see no mention of 'mass killings', 'mass murder', or any other terms we employ as common terminology in reference to all Communist regimes. Indeed, the chapter can be useful for the topic about the links and theories (though they seem more indicated to be about communism and terrorism/violence rather than a proposed topic of link between communism and mass killings), which is exactly what I support. What I oppose is describing the events as a single phenomenon, when that is not what majority of scholarly sources do, and essentially treating them as death toll events (e.g. the emphasis on listing how many people died according to several sources rather than summarize and contextualize the events as majority of sources do, distinguishing between universal mass killing events, and mass deaths and excess mortality events) within the context of a global Communist death toll. Davide King (talk) 21:00, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

Another interesting source

A lesson from a parallel Talk:Denial of the Holodomor debate: please very carefully verify the sources and quotes supplied by people proposing "objective and transparent" review of sources by means of Google Scholar because, as you can clearly see from that debate, even our champions of objectivity can, in a completely random and unintended slip of keyboard, miss key paragraphs from the sources they are quoting that testify to the opposite of the thesis they are proposing. Trust, but verify, pun intended.

I skip the whole Holodomor denial-related debate, and just move to one particular source - found by replicating the "objective and transparent" methodology - that in my opinion demonstrates how you can present the topic of mass-killings in multi-dimensional yet objective manner. The publication is from a historical conference in Russia in 2012 and discussed the topic of Holodomor in the broader context of mass-scale repressions in the USSR:

The greater context of the Holodomor within the Soviet famines of the 1920’s and 1930’s as well as the apparent political goals of the Soviet leadership at the time indicate that the Holodomor was in fact not genocide but should be classified under the more general concept of democide. Soviet repression, although often affecting certain ethnic groups more than others, was not designed to eliminate certain ethnic groups, but was a result of state policies aimed at modernization as well as general repression of the entire Soviet populace. There can be no doubt that the Soviet collectivization policy played a major role in causing the Holodomor. Stalin’s desire to modernize the Soviet economy at unprecedented speed, coupled with an attempt to destroy the remaining power and influence of the kulaks served as the primary vehicles for the collectivization policies (Naimark, 2010, 71).

He then goes into details what specific particular policies led to the death of 6 million people:

The Ukrainian harvest of 1932 was 10-12% below the 1926-1930 average, a significant decrease but not necessarily enough to cause an emergency situation (Subtelny, 1988, 413). However, the harvests of 1931 and 1932 both fell below expectations, and this coupled with Moscow’s increasing quotas accelerated the situation (Ellman, 2007, 677). As the state began to seize more and more grain from the peasants, Ukraine’s communist leadership warned Moscow that the grain procurement would cause grave food shortages. Despite these warnings, Stalin actually raised Ukraine’s grain quotas for 1932 by 44%..

Now, there's a piece that I personally don't agree with but respect 1) the author's admission that "many commentators" have different view, 2) a pretty balanced and nuanced flow of arguments on why he disagrees with one interpretation (of intentional destruction of Ukrainian nation) in favor of another (destroy a specific social class).

Many commentators have claimed that it had always been Stalin’s intent to destroy Ukrainian nationalism with famine. Although there is evidence supporting the idea that Stalin’s regime sought to weaken the position of the kulaks, there is no substantial evidence proving that the Soviet regime wanted to use the famine to wage a campaign of genocide against the Ukrainian people as a whole. Davies and Wheatcroft note that Soviet authorities vastly underestimated the time it would take to mechanize collective farms. The Soviet government expected an above average crop in 1931, grossly overestimating the initial effectiveness of collectivization policies. These miscalculations created the conditions for the famine. (Davies & Wheatcroft, 2006, 626) Repression of the kulaks, which had been ongoing since the Revolution in 1917, continued during the famine. Soviet policies of closing the border coupled with failures to provide needed aid can be attributed to Soviet authorities seizing the opportunity to destroy the kulaks, but cannot be seen as an attempt to destroy the Ukrainian nation.

Finally, on that subject:

The Holodomor serves as a reminder that governments can be responsible for millions of deaths without actively exterminating their populations. Although the Holodomor was not an attempt to exterminate the Ukrainian people, it was a crime against humanity and a result of unrealistic industrialization policy goals.

Now, on everone's favorite subject of generalizing the ideology of communism onto the mass killings:

A full examination of the Holodomor must view the Great Famine as part of the greater scope of Soviet policies throughout the pre-World War II era. Soviet policies covered the entire scope of Goldhagen’s “eliminationism,” ranging from the Red Terror in the 1920’s that was clearly an act of state terrorism, to the forced internment and relocation of ethnic groups in the Caucuses region (Goldhagen, 2009, 14-15). Soviet policies of eliminationism were part of an over-reaching program of nation-state building. The Soviet leadership sought to euthanize potential threats and create a more docile society that would easily acquiesce to efforts from Moscow to create a communist utopia.

Please also note that he, quite logically, considers the whole Soviet period as one continuum of terror, from 1920 on, without jumping into excuses popular among some editors such as "it was all Stalin" and the link between the mass-scale extermination of people (however you call it) is quite obvious to the author. One source that draws attention is Goldhagen, D. (2009) Worse Than War: Genocide, Eliminationism, and the Ongoing Assault On Humanity. New York. Affain Books which I don't have but looks like it's focused just on the topic of this article. Cloud200 (talk) 14:07, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

That's not how I would interpret it. While it says that the Soviet motivation was communist, it doesn't link it to other communist countries. Someone for example might kill someone because he thinks God told him to, but that doen't necessarily connect him to eveyone who kills in God's name. Also, per weight, Daniel Goldhagen's views are fringe and largely ignored in the literature of mass killings, hence don't belong in this article. TFD (talk) 16:45, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

Goldhagen

As the source is easily found on LibGen, I can now summarize how the author describes the communist flavor of eliminationism (the book describes all of them from right to the left, each of them with their own specifics and rationales):

The political Left’s murderous ideologies, communisms of various hues, seek to reorganize society according to a totalizing political and social vision, glorify that vision and the class or segment of society that is declared to be its bearer, and declare as enemies all individuals and groups that consider themselves or that are “objectively” defined to be opposed to that vision. This vision admits little possibility of coexistence with doubters and dissenters, let alone actual enemies. Communist regimes and their followers have a strong proclivity for eliminating the communist vision’s opponents. Because Marxism promises and requires a homogenous, dissent-free paradise, and because it posits sizable groups as being, by definition, “socially dangerous elements,” powerful roadblocks to that world’s creation, communists see the need to remove them as acute, so the restraints on how it may be done crumble. (Goldhagen, 2009)

The above is quite obvious and directly flows from the principles of Marxism-Leninism. Now, about the global scope of these communist-inspired state policies:

Mass-murdering communist regimes have most notably, after initially drawing on poor and resentful proletarians and peasants, reared generations of true believers, by inculcating the young, who then readily lend themselves to eliminationist programs. Especially using their control of schools, the Soviets, communist Chinese, and communist North Koreans instilled in many of their subjects the fanatical belief in their political systems’ rightness, in the existence of systematic enmity among many people inside and outside the country, and the systematic need to do just about anything to eliminate those enemies. The Soviets erected the gulag, produced mass famine death, and deported putatively disloyal peoples. In some Soviet satellite countries, communist regimes killed (especially in Yugoslavia) and imprisoned in labor camps (as in Romania) real and imagined enemies. The communist Chinese slaughtered more people than the Soviets, including mass numbers in their Laogai labor camp gulag. North Korea’s true believers have turned the entire country into a quasi-gulag, with a landscape peppered by the camps of the regime’s formal gulag, the Kwanliso, or Special Control Institutions. Each communist system’s most loyal supporters were continuously replenished by new communist-raised generations. (Goldhagen, 2009)

Cloud200 (talk) 14:28, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

@Cloud200: I am sure that it is possible to find even more sources that say essentially the same as the sources provided by you. The problem is not in that. The questions that we need to answer is as follows:
1. "What majority of reliable sources say about the events described in this article, and do they link them to Communism (as some general phenomenon), or to some local factors, which were specific to each concrete society?"
2. "Do majority of reliable sources see a significant linkage between these events, or they prefer to discuss them separately, and to provide separate explanations for each of them?"
These two questions are impossible to answer by presenting just a couple of sources. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:54, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
@Cloud200: There is an obvious flaw in your approach: If you look for information specifically about a linkage between Marxism and mass murder, you definitely will find it. However, does it prove anything?
  • If you do, e.g. this, you get a lot of sources supporting your POV. However, there is absolutely no proof that these sources reflect majority views on mass killings in the USSR in 1937.
  • If you do this, you get another list of sources, and this list is more neutral (teh keywords "stalinism repressions" are more likely to be selected by a user who has no preliminary knowledge of the subject, and, therefore, no POV).
I am not going to analyse each sources in these lists right now (I would like to do that later). However, one source that is found in both lists is interesting. This source is Vincent Barnett (2006) Understanding stalinism—the ‘Orwellian discrepancy’ and the ‘rational choice dictator’, Europe-Asia Studies, 58:3, 457-466, DOI:10.1080/09668130600601982
It is a discussion of a linkage between Marxism, Stalin's personality and repressions (a.k.a. mass killings). Author's conclusion is:
"Hence it should be accepted that Stalin was not rational, but neither was he mad: he was just ignorant and corrupt. He was ignorant of conventional economic theory, ignorant of the real long-term consequences of the terror, and blind to the original impetus of Marx’s egalitarian vision of a communist economy. He was also paranoid with regards to maintaining power, as any dictator must be. The implications of all this are that it is ignorance, paranoia and dictators that must be overcome; their actions should not be surreptitiously justified through the attempt to interpret them as ‘rational’ or as ‘more complex than previously thought’ or even as ‘generated by difficult circumstances’, no matter what their nominal political affiliation might have been. This does not mean that studying the detail of Stalin’s rule is not a completely legitimate activity for historians, only that the temptation to use this detail as valediction should be resisted. "
As you can see, the main factors that lead to the most murderous mass killings ("repressions") in the USSR are seen in Stalin's personality, and it is more a deviation from Marxism than its implementation. If you are familiar with history of Soviet Russia, you probably know that late Stalin's period was marked by restoration of many features of pre-revolutionary Russian Empire: separate education for boys and girls, old-style uniform (and batman) for military officers, conversion of peasants to de facto serfs, imperial style in architecture, formation of nomenklatura as a new nobility, etc.
In other words, we have two conflicting views (at least). Which one is more predominant? That question is absolutely necessary to answer before we rewrite this article. And it can be answered only by analysing a representative set of sources, not by cherry-picking a couple of sources that you (or I) like.
However, some preliminary conclusions can be made even using the sources used in this article.
Thus, Valentino's theory (which is one of the core sources for this article) says that ideology is not an important factor, and the key factor is leader's personality. That is closer to Barnett than to the sources cited by you. And, importantly, Valentino's views were twisted and misinterpreted in this article, which must be fixed.
Michael Mann, in his super-influential "The Dark Side..." (which is also cited in this article) concludes that XX century mass killings were the dark side of democracy (not Communism or Marxism), and mass killings in Communist states were, to some degree, democratic ("bottom up") too, and they were a result of perversion of socialist ideas in the same sense as mass killings in other states were a result of perversion of liberal-democratic ideas. That is also more in agreement with Barnett than with your sources.
Of course, this is just a preliminary conclusion, but it is an additional argument in support of a comprehensive source analysis. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:05, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

...and more

I was not my intention to analyse sources from this biased list, but one of them worth mentioning. It is fifth in the list (Eagelton). The first chapter starts with:

"Praising Karl Marx might seem as perverse as putting in a good word for the Boston Strangler. Were not Marx’s ideas responsible for despotism, mass murder, labor camps, economic catastrophe, and the loss of liberty for millions of men and women? Was not one of his devoted disciples a paranoid Georgian peasant by the name of Stalin, and another a brutal Chinese dictator who may well have had the blood of some 30 million of his people on his hands? The truth is that Marx was no more responsible for the monstrous oppression of the communist world than Jesus was responsible for the Inquisition. For one thing, Marx would have scorned the idea that socialism could take root in desperately impoverished, chronically backward societies like Russia and China. If it did, then the result would simply be what he called generalized scarcity, by which he means that everyone would now be deprived, not just the poor. It would mean a recycling of the old filthy business—or, in less tasteful translation, the same old crap. Marxism is a theory of how well-heeled capitalist nations might use their immense resources to achieve justice and prosperity for their people. It is not a program by which nations bereft of material resources, a flourishing civic culture, a democratic heritage, a well-evolved technology, enlightened liberal traditions, and a skilled, educated workforce might catapult themselves into the modern age."

T. Carver, who wrote the introduction, is from University of Bristol, and the list of his publications makes him a good expert. I, again, am surprised how desperately biased the MKuCR article is. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:47, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

Jesus was not obsessed about the necessity of "violent revolution", while Marx was. Cloud200 (talk) 15:05, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
In XIX century, almost every progressive thinkers was advocating revolutionary violence. A Greek revolution, Bolivarian revolutions, Hungarian revolution, French revolutions (several), American revolution, Italian Garibaldi wars, German revolution, Russian revolution (February), and many others have nothing in common with Marxism, but most of them were violent, and all of them were supported by progressive thinkers. Violence was seen as one of the most common and normal way for changing a state system, and Marx was not the first and not the last thinker who said that.
Please, stop your ahistorical claims. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:00, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
"Marx would have scorned the idea that socialism could take root in desperately impoverished, chronically backward societies like Russia" - yes, Marx made different and often contradictory statements during his life, but this doesn't justify author's ignorance as to the presence of 1881 correspondence between Marx and Vera Zasulich where he happily allowed for such application of Marxism based on agrarian communes instead of proletariat. Cloud200 (talk) 15:10, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
...and what is a linkage between a support of agrarian communes and advocacy of mass killings? Paul Siebert (talk) 17:01, 20 December 2021 (UTC)

"It was not my intention, but here's another cherry-picked source that I happen to like"

No amount of "preliminary conclusion" or "it was not my intention but" syntactic sugar changes the fact that you are just doing exactly the same thing as you have done above in the discussion under Mann, Marx and "classicide" and countless other times. You call for an "impartial review of sources" and immediately come up with "interesting sources" that by means of careful cherry-picking happen to support your POV. When someone comes up with other sources that happens to not suit your taste, you immediately unroll an elaborate and extremely verbose discussion to discredit these sources.

This is simply disruptive and this is precisely why this debate has been fruitless since September.

Your claim that the article must be based on a single thesis supported by "majority of reliable sources". This is nonsense. From WP:BALANCE (subsection of WP:NPOV):

Neutrality assigns weight to viewpoints in proportion to their prominence. However, when reputable sources contradict one another and are relatively equal in prominence, describe both points of view and work for balance. This involves describing the opposing views clearly, drawing on secondary or tertiary sources that describe the disagreement from a disinterested viewpoint.

This has been of course proposed plenty of times but you always dismiss them, and come up with your own "preliminary" sources, which of course are not "preliminary" - you propose them to support your POV. The only purpose of you insisting on finding the "more predominant", "main factors" and "majority of sources" in this case it to prevent any progress in improving this article and wasting people's time until they give up, and you are certainly quite successful at this. Cloud200 (talk) 20:31, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

@Cloud200: Please, refrain from personal attack: you literally accuse me of cherry-picking. If you are still a participant of the DRN process, please, stick with common rules. If you are not participating in this process anymore, please, let me know. In the latter case, next time when you make similar remarks, I'll report you.
I didn't cherry pick anything. I pointed editors's attention on this source, because I myself didn't expect to see this source among the search results that I was seen as an anti-Communist subset of sources.
Frankly, I think my explanations are sufficient to stop the conflict between two good faith users. If you will continue in the same vein, that may cast a doubt on your good faith, or on your ability to understand other's arguments.
Regards, --Paul Siebert (talk) 20:49, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

One general problem with source analysis

To avoid possible misunderstanding, let me reiterate the following.

  • It is absolutely clear, and noone in clear mind is going to deny this fact, that some sources link Communism (in general) and Marxism (as an ideological doctrine and social theory) with "mass murder" or "mass killings". Let me call these sources as "group 1" sources.
  • Definitely some sources exist that directly criticise the views that link Communism (in general) and Marxism (as an ideological doctrine and social theory) with "mass murder" or "mass killings". Let me call these sources as "group 2" sources.
  • Finally, some sources exist that see no significant link between Communism (in general) and Marxism (as an ideological doctrine and social theory) with "mass murder" or "mass killings". They are not debating with "group 1" sources, they just tell a totally different story about each of those events taken separately, Let me call these sources as "group 3" sources.

The problem with this article is that it picked "group 1" sources and created a narrative that is based exclusively on them. It embedded "group 3" sources into that narrative, thereby totally misinterpreting them. And it totally ignored "group 2" sources. That may be quite correct if "type 1" sources represent majority view, "type 3" sources are significant minority view, and "type 2" sources are fringe. However, so far I saw no evidence of that. Therefore, the goal of our source analysis is not just to pick another source that confirms one's POV, but to reveal relative weight of these three groups, and then represent all significant facts and opinia, and required by WP:NPOV Paul Siebert (talk) 22:03, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

I agree that there exists such source types. Could you provide a few examples of good sources for each group type? Both to better comprehend it and to compare them and their weight. Davide King (talk) 22:18, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
I think that the best sources from the group 1 had already been found, and almost all of them are already in this article. The most important one is the Black Book (Courtois).
The "group 2" sources are, for example, the sources that discuss The Black Book of Communism (they can be found in the BB article or at its talk page). Frankly, since the "group 1" sources do not seem to be mainstream, majority of historians ignore them, hence the lack of criticism. For example, the fact that Rummel's approach to data collection and treatment was a subject of criticism by only two authors (one of whom is an expert in Yugoslavia), suggests that most experts simply ignore him (his data are neither cited nor discussed by experts in Russian history).
"Group 3" sources belong to several subcategories. The first category is country-specific sources. One example is ... the Black Book, more specifically, its best part (Werth's chapter, where he traces the origin of terror back to Sergey Nechayev, who was a nihilist, but not a Marxist), another examples is the book by Kiernan about Cambodian genocide.
Another subgroup of "group 3" sources are devoted specifically to some event or a group of events. Examples are this or that.
One more subgroup pf "group 3" sources is the writings of genocide scholars. As a rule, all of them (except Rummel) do not write specifically about Communism. They discuss just "mass killings"/"politicides"/"genocides" in general, and they are not focused on any specific linkage between Communism and mass killings. Thus, Harff identified four Communist states (out of 18) where politicides occurred, which implied no correlation between politicides and Communism. Valentino's core idea is that regime type does not matter, and he does not link Communism with mass killings, although he notes that in those Communist states where mass killings took place they had some specific features. Similarly, Mann openly disagrees with Rummel, and he proves that mass killings are rarely linked with totalitarianism: his point is that mass killings is a result of perversion of democracy and socialism. His opinion is especially important, for he, in contrast to Rummel, is sociologist, who does not focus on mere correlations. Interestingly, the views of Valentino, Mann, Werth, Harff and others is totally misinterpreted, and they are presented as "Group 1" authors, which is, frankly speaking, a blatant lie. IMO, at that level of misinterpretation, WP:CIR becomes applicable. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:57, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
This is a pretty convoluted reading of sources. How can you possible characterize Valentino as regime type does not matter? Please read again his extensive comments and comparison of regime types.

The single most important cause of mass killing in the twentieth century appears to be fading into history.

p. 150. He does not link Communism with mass killings??? You are picking at the edges of some works on genocide. It is hardly surprising given such complex questions that many differing answers and perspective arise concerning modern genocide or mass killings. These nuanced opinions on the overall causes and factors leading to mass violence do not negate the specific opinions authors may take concerning Communism. Valentino can say in his introduction that: "understanding of mass killing must begin with the specific goals and strategies of high political and military leaders, not with broad social or political factors." This does not somehow make Valentino inappropriate for this article, and it is a very poor reading of the source to make that claim. The three proposed categories look like an effort to divide sources based on the anti-communist and anti-anti-communist narratives and to exclude the middle ground. fiveby(zero) 16:12, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Cherry picking from Valentino is not a good approach either; we need to look at what academic reviews say about it, and they show that Valentino does not focus only of Communism (he actually discusses eight case studies), and Tago & Wayman 2010 consider his Communist mass killings subcategory as a complication of original theory his book is based on because Valentino's theory is that regime type are not as important, and it is the leaders that can explain mass killings. I could only find that quote in The Better Angels of Our Nature: The Decline of Violence in History and Its Causes by Steven Pinker, who is neither a scholar of Communism or a genocide scholar, and the book was published by Penguin Books, which is not an academic publisher. Davide King (talk) 17:24, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
You will find the quote on page 150 of Final Solutions and throughout an extensive discussion of the relation of Communism to mass killing. Pinker was quoting Valentino. You and Paul Siebert have proposed that regime type is not important to Valentino, demonstrating the ridiculousness of that proposition with a quote is hardly cherry picking. That he did not find Communism as an important consideration for preventing future episodes of mass killing while "fading into history" does not in any way negate his observations of Communism in the 20th century. fiveby(zero) 19:01, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
You clearly missed the point, since I was not questioning Valentino saying that; what I questioned is the relevancy and whether that same quote, or point, was reproduced in secondary academic sources or cherry picked. I could only find it reproduced by Pinker, who is an expert in a different field and the book was not published by the academic press. Again, I am sure both Siebert and I can cherry pick from Valentino to show you otherwise, but we are not going to do that because that is the point — we should not look at what Valentino said, we should look at what academic reviews have said about him and how they summarized his book (e.g. independent reliable sources, Valentino is a primary source about himself, we need secondary sources about him). If you actually read them, you will see that Siebert gave a good summary of academic secondary coverage of Valentino's work. Like most genocide scholars, Valentino is perfectly good for B, which is the topic and approach I support and see as the best way to fix the article. Davide King (talk) 19:16, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
@Fiveby: You may look at p. 91, where the author says:
Communism has bloody record, but most regimes that have described themselves as communist or been described as such by others have not engaged in mass killings.
The page 97 says:
Communist regimes have also engaged in mass killings for variety of other reasons, mostly unrelated to communism itself.
In connection to that, I think an accusation of cherry picking should be addressed not to me, but to you. In contrast to you, I am discussing the core idea of Valentino, and it is quite obvious that the claim that Valentino sees Communism as a primary cause of mass killings in Communist states is inconsistent with his major thesis (although I agree that some of his statements contradict to that, but that inconsistency had already pointed by reviewers, and it does not undermine his major thesis). Paul Siebert (talk) 19:40, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
@Fiveby: What is the main idea of Valentino's theory? To understand that, we must keep in mind that the main reason for all his work was development of new approached to prevention of mass killings. To this end, he analyses eight cases of mass killings, which took place under different regimes, and analysed them in a context of similar regimes that committed no mass killings.
And his conclusion was that main factor leading to mass killings was a decisions of some concrete persons, a small group of elite, who decided that mass killings in that concrete case are the most optimal way to achieve that goal. And this conclusion leads us to some practical recipe to eliminate mass killings: that can be achieved by removing a small group of people from power, and that does not require changing the regime type.
Actually, his theory fully confirmed even when we compare Khrischev's USSR (Communist) with Stalin's USSR (Communist too). Regimes were the same, but removal of a small group from power totally stopped mass killings.
Finally, as you can see, Valentino does not include Afghanistan into the "Communist mass killings" chapter. And that, again, demonstrates that he does not see Communism as a factor (Afghan case was a "counter-guerilla mass killing", which resembled other mass killings of that type, according to Valentino. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:47, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, many authors noted inconsistencies in Valentino's writing, who initially claims that regime type does not matter, and then discusses the role of Communist ideology. That is why it would be totally incorrect to pick just one phrase, and, instead, to focus of the main idea of his work. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:51, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Indeed, this could explain disputes about Valentino. You and I are using secondary coverage (e.g. academic reviews), whereas others are using Valentino's work itself, which has some inconsistency per academic sources, yet they make it clear that your summary of them is adeguate and correct. Davide King (talk) 18:06, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
It makes perfect sense that Valentino compares atrocities committed during the Soviet–Afghan War to atrocities committed during other counter-insurgency wars (including those committed by the U.S. during the Vietnam War), while simultaneously discussing the commonalities that led a disproportionate number of communist states to commit mass killings during peacetime. I would hardly say that this constitutes an "inconsistency" or contradiction.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 19:40, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
The point is different, and it is described by Valentino at p. 97: many mass killings in Communist states were not related to Communism, according to Valentino. Therefore, it would be incorrect to describe them as a single phenomenon that had some common causes and that is seen by majority of authors as a single topic. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:45, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
(ec)Why do observations made concerning the best way to predict or prevent future violence negate the observations of violence in the 20th century? Valentino's four factors that distinguish the "less violent" Communist regimes are relative population size, degree of radicalism, capability of the dispossessed to leave the country, and degree of paranoia of the leaders. That is along with

Why did the communist utopias of the Soviet Union, China, and Cambodia become history's greatest slaughterhouses? I argue that radical communist regimes have proven such prodigious killers primarily because the social changes they sought to bring about have resulted in the sudden and nearly complete material and political dispossession of millions of people. These regimes practiced social engineering of the highest order. It is the revolutionary desire to bring about the rapid and radical transformation of society that distinguishes radical communist regimes from all other forms of government, including less violent communist regimes and noncommunist, authoritarian governments.

How is that not appropriate for this article? Why is Werth reduced to Nechayev while the "misunderstandings" and conflicts between the Bolsheviks and greater society ignored? The spiraling cycles of violence based on acceptance of prior atrocities? If this article follows to closely or takes the moral argument and exhortation of Courtois—the arithmetic to create a billboard slogan—and presents as fact; well, point taken. But that is no reason to exclude or downplay the sources that directly address the article's topic and are not part of the "anti" narratives. fiveby(zero) 19:43, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
If you want a serious discussion, maybe, we move it to a separate section? Paul Siebert (talk) 19:47, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Why are so many discussions being opened about the same (sources) topic? GoodDay (talk) 23:44, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

Good point.--Paul Siebert (talk) 00:03, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
The problem is that since Group 3 does not discuss the communist genocide theory, that you cannot make any assumptions on what their authors' thought or even comment that they don't mention the connection. Furthermore, most Group 2 authors are not genocide scholars and generally don't rebut Group 1. Instead, they explain what motivates group 1. The final problem is that most of group 1 is poor scholarship compared with Group 3. Even if they were, we are using writings that never received much scholarly attention, such as Rummel's website. The only actual dispute that is reliably sourced is Werth's criticism of Courtois' arithmetic. TFD (talk) 00:13, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
@The Four Deuces: You mix two different things: (i) source analysis that reveals majority/minority/fringe POV and (ii) the way majority/minority POVs must be presented. These are two totally different aspects, and, for the beginning, I propose to focus on the first one. That will be a preliminary but quite necessary step. Since this discussion does not lead to any immediate changes of the article, any possible accusations of OR/SYNTH (if someone decided to accuse us) are not acceptable. Moreover, keeping in mind that NPOV requires us to do source analysis as a path to neutrality, this discussion is quite legitimate. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:21, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
If I understand you, you are trying to establish the weight of opinion in reliable sources by writing a review article. To me, that is original research and beyond the scope of what editors should do. Instead we should rely on reliable sources that explain weight. We do not for example read all the papers on global warming in order to determine the weight of scientific opinion but use sources that have already done and explained that.
The other issue is that if a source does not explicitly attribute mass killings to Communism, that does not mean they are claiming there is no connection.
TFD (talk) 02:12, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
You understand me almost correct, although I prefer different wording. I am trying to carefully and critically analyze a variety of reliable sources and then attempting to convey to the reader the information contained in them fairly, proportionately, and as far as possible without editorial bias. And I have a strong doubt that is violates any policy.
As I explained, this is just the first step, which will not lead to some concrete text in the article's space. However, from this analysis, we will be able to define a correct way for re-writing this (desperately POV) article. Paul Siebert (talk) 02:45, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Valentino, Communism etc

@Fiveby: In responce to your 19:43, 19 December 2021 post, let me explain you that my answer to your question:

How is that not appropriate for this article?

is: "That IS appropriate". The problem is, however, that, instead of presenting that as one opinion (actually, as one aspect of one author's book), the article presents it as the only mainstream viewpoint.--Paul Siebert (talk) 21:47, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Furthermore, you assume that Valentino's " population size, degree of radicalism, capability of the dispossessed to leave the country, and degree of paranoia of the leaders" are independent parameters, although they are obviously dependent (and many authors implicitly assume that). Thus, it must be obvious to any reasonable person that "population size" and "capability of the dispossessed to leave the country" are strongly correlated, and this correlation is inverse: just imagine how and where could 100 million Chinese escape; that would be technically impossible, and no other country would accept them. Similarly, it is obvious that the degree of radicalism is correlated with the degree of social and economic tensions, which usually are higher in desperately poor countries. It is easy to see that the first three factors are strongly dependent from each other, and only the last one is not. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:09, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
However, even if we assume that those factors are independent, I don't see how Communism can be a cause of any of them.
In reality, majority of authors (including Werth) use a very rational approach: they just put a horse before the cart, and they do not discuss how an evil ideology brought havoc to some idyllic society, instead, they explain how the society with huge internal tensions leads to radicalisation of ideology.
That approach is correct because it is not Manichean: instead of creating a false dichotomy ("evil Communists vs good liberals) it gives a nuanced picture.
In reality, if you look at post WWI Central Europe, you may see that only two states were really democtratic: Czechoslovakia and Finland. All other states were to some degree authoritarian and repressive, and Volyn massacre or widespread Jewish pogroms (when local population enthusiastically participated in killing Jews when Nazi allowed them to do that) are example of huge tensions in those societies. In reality, we don't know what could have happened in Europe if Bolsheviks were defeated, but it is highly likely that the new Russian state could be similar to fascist regimes in Croatia or Italy, and it could be even more murderous, keeping in mind pre-history of its formation (Civil war etc). Furthermore, it is quite possible to imagine a scenario when Stailn was defeated in a political struggle against, e.g. Bukharin, and in that case it would be quite unreasonable to expect that collectivisation or Great Purge ever happened.
There is no reason to claim that horrors of Stalinism were pre-determined in October 1917, and there is no reason to expect that a failure of October revolution would bring peace and democracy to Russia: most likely it would be a grim authoritarian state with huge internal social and ethnic tensions.
Most authors who study Soviet Russia do not discuss Stalin in a context of Communism: they explain his steps through the prism of is paranoid desire of personal power, his attempts to militarise and indiustrialise Soviet society, his strategic blunders and incompetence. And that is realistic approach, which is a mainstream POV. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:29, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
You mix up categorisation with conclusions. Valentino groups together communist mass killings into one chapter because the common element of these mass killings phenomena is that they arose from both the agricultural collectivization and political terror, which is unique to communist regimes. Valentino's conclusions are independent of that categorisation. --Nug (talk) 22:32, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, no. "Collectivisation" was Stalin's invention, and Mao picked it from Stalin. Therefore, it would be more correct to speak about commonalities between Stalin's USSR (not USSR in general) and Mao's China (not PRC in general). In other words, some actually, two, regimes that committed collectivization related mass killings had something significant in common. That is true, and I see no reason for not discussing Mao and Stalin as closely related phenomenae.
However, political terror in China and USSR had different roots. In China, the campaign against landlords was de facto a civil war: landlords were a signoifocant military and political power in provinces, which was not the case for Soviet Union in 1930s. In contrast, Stalin's repressions were dictated by his desire to accumulate and keep power on his hands, and, as I explained, there is no reason to expect that some other leader (even Trotsky, and definitely Bukharin) would have unleashed so huge terror campaign: they simply didn't need to do that.
With regard to Pol Pot, it was a totally different case: in Cambodia, urban population was destroyed by peasants, and that movement was democratic (i.e. it had a wide popular support). And, taking into account specifics of agriculture in Cambodia, there were not much opposition to collectivisation (as far as I know, but I am not sure, I need to check it). Paul Siebert (talk) 22:49, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Stop trying to divert the discussion, this thread is about Valentino, and he clearly and explicitly associates mass killings under collectivization and political terror as a scenario common to the communist mass killing type, and conducts a comprehensive discussion of the nature of these collectivization actions with to the USSR, PRC and Cambodia, while indicating collectivization in Bulgaria, East Germany, Romania, North Korea and Vietnam may also be mass killing events. --Nug (talk) 00:31, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Please, be civil. Although I took an obligation not to report you while DRN is in progress, that does not allow you to commit personal attacks. I am not "diverting" anything.
You perfectly know W&T who said:
"Disagreeing with Rummel's finding that authoritarian and totalitarian government explains mass murder, Valentino (2004) argues that regime type does not matter..."
although the same source admits that
"A complication in his work is that one of Valentino's three main categories of killing is 'communist' mass killing, so he brings in regime type, after
all, and so ends up a bit closer to Rummel than one would have expected at the outset of the book."
In other words, this source is intrinsically controversial. This controversy can be resolved only if we look at the core of his theory. If we remove his major thesis (that regime type does not matter}, it is unclear what is new in Valentino's book: it contains no new facts, no new sources, just a new theory.
Therefore, the stress should be made on his main thesis (that regime type does not matter)
WRT "Communist mass killings", that is a specific Valentino's definition, which includes famine, but excludes, e.g. Afghanistan. Actually, Valentino's book cannot be a core source for this article, for it does not define "Communist mass killings" as all killings committed by Communist, it speaks about some specific events, which Valentino (but not majority of scholars) sees as mass killings. Paul Siebert (talk) 00:55, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
You are taking two pieces of text out of context from different parts of W&T and putting them together to claim it is "intrinsically controversial". The first part "Disagreeing with Rummel's finding that authoritarian and totalitarian government explains mass murder, Valentino (2004) argues that regime type does not matter..." is related to Valentino's conclusions, but the second part "A complication in his work is that one of Valentino's three main categories of killing is 'communist' mass killing, so he brings in regime type, after all, and so ends up a bit closer to Rummel than one would have expected at the outset of the book." is related to categories, the other two categories being "ethnic" and "counter guerilla". Do you really not understand the difference between categorization of types and conclusions of the causes, or are you willfully confusing them here? --Nug (talk) 03:28, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for quoting the same piece again.
"Categorisation" and "causation" is not the same. In reality, it is quite correct to say that some mass killings that happened in some Communist states had something in common. Communism is one of the factors that made them somewhat similar. However, it does not mean that Communism was a cause of those events, and that is exactly what Valentino says.
Do you understand in now?--Paul Siebert (talk) 04:07, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert: "Most authors who study Soviet Russia do not discuss Stalin in a context of Communism" - the fact that you're calling for "source analysis to establish the majority" while at the same time routinely making far-fetching (and unsourced) statements about "most authors" clearly indicate that you already have a well-established POV on what the majority is and the whole discussion is just a diversion. Cloud200 (talk) 14:58, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
@Cloud200: You again commented on my alleged POV. Are you still a party of the DRN? Please, answer. If you will not confirm that you are a participant, and will not comment at WP:DRNMKUCR in 2 days, I will conclude that you are not a participant anymore, and I will act accordingly (which may include reporting you at AE).
When I wrote "Most authors ...", I meant my conclusion that I made based on my superficial and preliminary analysis of sources. I never pretended it was exhaustive and final, and already proposed discuss the results of my search, which lead me to that conclusion, and I, for several times, invited other user to finish that work jointly. However, they, including you, seem to ignore my proposal, and prefer to resort to personal attack. I am not going to tolerate it anymore. You either explicitly apologise, or you make some concrete steps that will confirm your active participation in DRNMKUKR. If you fail to do that in next few days, I may report you at AE. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:43, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
@Paul Siebert: Oh, back to Rummel. Gotcha. Yes a messy contrast to Rummel. Even more problematic might be his "strategic approach", he is not looking for underlying conditions which may lead to violence, but instead looking for the conditions under which leaders might see violence as a valid solution. So for instance where you see population size as not independent, he is looking at: Small population size, especially in the agricultural sector, can open up an entirely different set of options for communist leaders with examples of options that do not include dispossessed leaving the country.
Wayman and Tago are looking at the Harff/Rummel datasets and all democide/politicide. Communism is mostly past tense for Valentino and the "strategic approach" creates a "complication" for W&T. I would say Valentino is only "intrinsically controversial" insomuch as the article is intrinsically stuck on answering Rummel or "Communism was a cause of those events". Source analysis to determine appropriate sources for the article is much different than source analysis to attempt to reach a conclusion on Rummel. fiveby(zero) 13:42, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
@Fiveby: Actually, you are not completely right. Rummel's approach looks attractive due to his simplicity, but there are some serious problems with it. First of all, his approach is not sociological, but statistical, and, as we know correlation does not mean causation. And that is one reason why Mann, a very respectable and influential sociologist, strongly disagreed with Rummel.
Second, Rummel operates with very questionable data: he didn't perform source criticism, and he took all data, including obviously unreliable ones, into his data set.
Third, there is a problem with his regime categorisation: he describes some concrete regime as, e.g. totalitarian during the whole period of the regime's existence, and he attributes "democide" to the regime as a whole, not to the regime in its concrete stage.
In that aspect, Valentino's "controversial" approach is actually more nuanced: he correctly notes that majority of Communist regimes didn't commit mass killings, and correctly points out that mere change of leadership usually leaded to cessation of mass killing tactics. Actually, majority of genocide scholars are more in agreement with Valentino's conclusions than with Rummel. Paul Siebert (talk) 15:13, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
Not completely right is not bad, but I did not mean that Valentino is messier in comparison with Rummel and therefore the latter preferable. His "strategic approach" is problematic for Wayman and Tago (they are looking at the datasets), didn't mean problematic in any other sense. fiveby(zero) 16:38, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

RFC: Structure of Mass killings under communist regimes

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Which of the following approaches should be used as the overall structure for the article on Mass killings under communist regimes? Robert McClenon (talk) 06:12, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

The four approaches that are being considered are listed below. Please reply as to each approach, indicating whether it is acceptable, with a brief explanation.

A. The article should be reorganized as a summary style article, providing an overview of mass killing events under communist governments, and linking to articles on each of the mass killing events.

B. The article should discuss the concept of a correlation between mass killings and communist governments, including proposed causes and critiques of the concept

C. The article should be an amalgamation of A and of B.

D. The article should be split into two articles, as described above.

Instructions to Editors: Please enter your approval or disapproval of each approach in the Survey subsection for that approach, by entering Yes or No with a brief statement. That means that you are requested to enter four statements, one in each lettered Survey. You may reply to the statements by others in the Threaded Discussion section. Note that this RFC, and the article, are subject to Eastern Europe discretionary sanctions for disruptive editing of this RFC or this talk page or article. (You don't need to worry about discretionary sanctions if you observe Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines.) Robert McClenon (talk) 06:13, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Closer: Please determine what approach is most strongly supported by strength of arguments. Robert McClenon (talk) 06:13, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Survey on A

  • Yes - An overview of the major events seems appropriate for wikipedia. Option B, while interesting, it would make the article very lengthy, and may give ground for important major events to be excluded from the article where there is no RS to explain the connection between the event and the government. Deathlibrarian (talk) 07:40, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - Would effectively remove important information from Misplaced Pages rather than reforming it or adequately presenting it. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:28, 19 December 2021 (UTC) This is by far and large the worst option on the list due to how contentious the estimate section is compared to the remainder of the information within the article. This option serves no purpose other than that it will make the SYNTH problem tenfold more apparent, all the while erasing useful information from Misplaced Pages. Of course, the "Estimates" section could be fixed, but in that case you might as well vote yes for C or D. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 23:18, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No if discussing all Communist regimes but if limited to its proper scope, it would be an improvement — if we limit it to proper universally recognized mass killings, i.e. to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot (three Communist leaders), and the only debate about famines is limited to the Holodomor, as I noted in my addendum.
  • It also depends on whether it is to be treated as a single phenomenon or not; most of the events are treated individually, and as noted by The Four Deuces, " list of MKuCR implicitly says they are is a consensus that the events are connected", which is the biggest issue and is the reason why we do not have any other Mass killings under ... regimes article. If we are going to use country experts, we can achieve NPOV but may violate OR/SYNTH because they do not discuss them within such a global or single phenomenon context (e.g. Soviet specialists about the Great Purge); if we are going to use genocide scholars, the grouping may be justified as a generalization but we cannot achieve NPOV because we would have to rely on non-experts when describing the events; hence, while this approach may easily improve issues, I am not sure all NPOV and OR/SYNTH issues would be solved — certainly, it is better than the status quo or C. In conclusion I would prefer that we expand Mass killing and/or create Mass killings in history (akin to Genocides in history), irrespective of regime types, as the simplest way to avoid NPOV and OR/SYNTH issues and still discuss Communist regimes.
  • Notes — I do not know why but I thought the topic also included excess deaths and mortality, which is why I mentioned it; instead, it appears to be exactly what I proposed (e.g. Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot), and may be fine if we highlight both similarities and diversities
  • This is in line from the genocide and mass killing literature I have read. Communism is placed within the context of genocides (basically Cambodia, which is compared to the non-Communist Holocaust and Rwanda) and mass killings in general, and mainly limited to Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes (I do not think chapters about Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot, with passing mentions about the obvious facts that people were also killed in other Communist regimes, make this particularly topic, as proposed, stand out on its own — the only reason is due to space, but we should at least attempt to expand Mass killing first rather than assume a priori it will be necessary; as there is literature that summarizes that for us, and that events can simply be linked without wasting space to describe each one by one as we do here, it can be done in short paragraphs). This will also likely solve any content forks issues between Mass killing and this article, as this approach will allow us to remove any inconsistency between the two articles.
  • Another thing to consider is that such scholars focus on universally recognized mass killing events, not excess mortality; it is country experts who focus on the latter, and it is only a minority of scholars (Courtois and Rummel) who mix the too, further adding demographic losses, to create a global Communist death toll. Again, I do not exclude that this topic, as proposed here, is not possible or will not be possible in the future (I would like to see a draft and a list of sources first) but I do not think this is a good choice that would help us fixing the article, it is likely the hardest because I still see many disagreement among us. Davide King (talk) 14:11, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Addendum — another possibility is taking the Communist mass killing(s) name from Valentino but limiting the scope only to mass killings under Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's regimes (e.g. as I discussed in my comment about D). Excess mortality is better discussed in separate articles by each state (e.g. Excess mortality in the Soviet Union under Joseph Stalin) because having a general article focused on all deaths under Communism would be too close to OR/SYNTH, for (1) country experts do it for each country, and do not engage in a global Communist death toll, and (2) the latter of which has been controversially done by Courtois. As currently worded, A is too close to OR/SYNTH.
  • Either this, or a disambiguation page as another alternative. Davide King (talk) 15:43, 19 December 2021 (UTC) Davide King (talk) 19:51, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Besides that, I would like to make an important note to participants. During the preparation of this RfC, there was a disagreement among DRN participants about a description of A and C. I, and DK insisted that it was necessary explain that WP:SS must include all important aspects, and if the source analysis demonstrates that the linkage between Communism and mass killings is seen as important by at least significant minority sources, the discussion of this linkage will be added to A-style article per WP:NPOV. This reservation was removed from the final version, but I (and, I assume, DK too) believe it was implied by default. Therefore, posts made by North8000, @ModernDayTrilobite: and @Cloud200: and some other may be partially a result of misunderstanding of our proposal. I apologise for that.--Paul Siebert (talk) 21:17, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No A list of MKuCR implicitly says they are is a consensus that the events are connected, which is POV OR. TFD (talk) 18:19, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes This seems fine. A listing of all qualifying events with short summaries culled from the ledes of their primary pages seems straightforward and useful. There are enough sources tying the events together such that the page itself needs little justification for its existence. 73.152.116.51 (talk) 18:49, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - Best not to make into a summary. GoodDay (talk) 19:30, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Maybe This one really depends on how strictly we curate entries, which is a debate that I can already see never ending. If we can find a reasonably strict list that actually relies on widely recognized mass killings, this could be good, but I can see it becoming a quagmire very quickly. BSMRD (talk) 20:29, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Preferable to C / current or to D, but not ideal (ie. prefer B). It'd be better than the current version by reducing the directness of the synthesis the list is presented to support, and clear inclusion criteria would certainly reduce the problems it causes somewhat, but it would be a backwards way to solve the underlying dispute in that we'd be omitting any discussion of the underlying controversy that gives the list meaning and context while retaining a list whose meaning is still mostly synthy. --Aquillion (talk) 22:05, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Comment - Since we all accept Valentino’s definition of mass killings as “50,000 killed within five years”, we should also accept Valentino’s topology of mass killings too, where he groups communist governments together because they share the common mass killing scenario of collectivisation and political terror that is unique to them. Valentino groups USSR, PRC and Cambodia together as confirmed mass killers, and adds Bulgaria, East Germany, Romania, North Korea and Vietnam as possible mass killers. So can we stop with this "the grouping is WP:SYNTH", Valentino has published such a grouping. --Nug (talk) 01:01, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, but I don't know how feasible it is. There would have to be an inclusion criteria, and that criteria would have to be defined in prose. There would also probably have to be some definition of terms. However, I think that this would be the most NPOV, and therefore the best, version possible, as there wouldn't be any fiddling with motives and critiques of one scholar verses another. Grouped together, the events would pass WP:NLIST, and that may just be the best way to go. schetm (talk) 01:57, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No as it will result in significant loss of well-sourced content mentioned in "B". Cloud200 (talk) 15:02, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, prefer C. My very best wishes (talk) 19:39, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - Discussion of individual mass killing events, without a discussion of the underlying academic views on their relationship, would constitute WP:SYNTH. ModernDayTrilobite (talkcontribs) 16:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No This option as a stand-alone (i.e. not as a part of "D") would eliminate coverage of a possible cause-effect relationship. IMO, the possible cause-effect relationship should be covered somewhere, and such is the main thing that is uniquely covered in this article. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 20:57, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Survey on B

  • Yes Providing a list of killings implies that there is a connection, which is implicit synthesis and contrary to neutrality. TFD (talk) 07:53, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - Would effectively remove important information from Misplaced Pages rather than reforming it or adequately presenting it. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:28, 19 December 2021 (UTC) It will not solve SYNTH issues as that spares the sections "Proposed causes" and "Debates over famines" which are overtly opinionated and up to interpretation. Therefore, once the RfC concludes, editors should have to edit both sections of the article repeatedly until the issue is resolved which admittedly is very unlikely as this article just brings about dispute after dispute about the content therein. The least that could be done and should be done is to add a paragraph that states that they are entirely subjective and the opinions of experts in that field of research. Additionally, particularly since the article is 290 thousand bytes in size, it won't fix the LENGTH problem : They would have to be removed outright and I feel that this would effectively remove information from Misplaced Pages. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 23:12, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • B will still run the issue of synthesis since it still gives opinionated sources weight and will still very much lead to the article being highly controversial. B includes "Proposed causes" and "Debate over famines" which are both highly subjective and up to interpretation. Some will choose to believe what the scholars and specialists say are entirely true, others will be more skeptic - ultimately leading back to the issue that was originally posed by the "Estimates" section. That was why I proposed what tantamounts to D since we could have a fully fact-based article (Example: Adolf Hitler) and a fully theory-based article (Example: Principle of relativity) which would include the estimates, the proposed causes and the debates, mainly my concern was about the proposed causes section originally. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 20:53, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes — this is the best approach to fix the article, and does not necessarily exclude any of the other option. By choosing this topic, we will commit to source analysis to weight scholarly sources and individuate majority, minority, and fringe views. If Courtois and Rummel are majority views, there would be no problem in following their approach.
  • If there is no universal agreement among scholars on the link, other options (e.g. the events themselves, or "providing a list of killings implies that there is a connection, which is implicit synthesis and contrary to neutrality") may violate NPOV and SYNTH. Again, compare the Soviet Union with Cambodia, the former used forceful collectivization of peasantry to accelerate urbanization, while the latter used revolutionary peasants to suppress and destroy urban population. An events-based-and-focused article, by the mere fact of grouping them together implies that there is a clear connection, but that is not there and scholarly sources alo emphasize their differences, and more importantly give each event and country separate causes; it is only a minority of sources, some of it significant, some of it fringe, that gives general causes for mass killings; even genocide scholars, who give generalizations and correlations, do not say communist ideology was the main cause as Courtois and Malia claim — Mann says they were a perversion of both democratic (Rwanda) and socialist ideals (Communism), and Valentino (who writes within the context of mass killings in general) is more concerned about leadership than ideology, and concludes that by removing leaders who engaged in genocides or mass killings, that can stop them from happening, which is based on reality.
  • Valentino's work is Final Solutions: Mass Killing and Genocide in the 20th Century, not Final Solutions: Mass Killing and Genocide under Communist Regimes. Mann's work is The Dark Side of Democracy: Explaining Ethnic Cleansing, not The Dark Side of Communism: Explaining Ethnic Cleansing. I could go on and on, but there is cherry picking in treating Communism as a single or special phenomenon when that is not what scholarly sources do. Purify and Destroy: The Political Uses of Massacre and Genocide is about "demonstrat that it is indeed possible to compare the Holocaust, the Rwandan genocide, and ethnic cleansing in Bosnia-Herzegovina while respecting the specificities of each appalling phenomenon." No emphasis or mention of Communism. We can only discuss the theories and link about the events, not the grouped events themselves as a single, special phenomenon, as is done by Courtois and Malia in The Black Book of Communism. Why Not Kill Them All?: The Logic and Prevention of Mass Political Murder is not Why Not Kill Them All?: The Logic and Prevention of Communist Mass Murders. Both of those sources may be used for this topic but they are clearly misunderstood to imply they discuss Communism as a separate or special new topic on its own; rather, they place it in the proper context of a general topic. In regards to events, they can simply be linked when mentioned or discussed, or through 'See also' links, where they are discussed in context; there is no need to coatrack them here too.
  • See also proposed topic and non-primary literature. Davide King (talk) 14:41, 19 December 2021 (UTC) Davide King (talk) 19:44, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Neutral--Paul Siebert (talk) 17:07, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes This seems fine. There is a clearly an ongoing debate on the effect communist founding principles had on the actions chosen by the resultant governments. There are enough sources to justify the existence of this page, though I expect it will be a battleground for years. 73.152.116.51 (talk) 18:49, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - as this could invite disputes over the topic. GoodDay (talk) 19:31, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes This is the actual topic here. Simply listing Communist deaths is something only done by some proponents of the idea that mass killings are inherent to Communism, but that question, whether or not they are inherent, has a much larger body of scholarship and will lead to a much more neutral and informative article. This won't remove any information from WP, all the articles on the individual events are still right there and will be linked when discussed. This version of the article would in fact add information to Misplaced Pages, as an analysis of this debate does not exist elsewhere on WP. BSMRD (talk) 20:38, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, an article cannot discuss any debate on the correlations or causes without mentioning the government actions that has led to that debate in the first place. It would be like discussing Causes of World War II without having the article World War II. --Nug (talk) 21:24, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, with the caveat that individual killings can be mentioned when referenced by specific authors, in the context of describing their views and how they believe they are connected - ie. we can say "author X has thesis Y says that this and this and this support their thesis", if we have appropriate cites. What we can't do is perform WP:OR to argue their thesis for them - we ought to be reporting notable research that others have done (and any notable debates over that research), not doing our own. --Aquillion (talk) 21:57, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - I can't see a faster way to get this page permalocked again than by going down this route. There are very strong willed individuals with strong POV's on both sides of this issue active in the article/on this talk page, and I'm not sure that those POV's can be set aside to create an NPOV article. I'm also not sure as Option B would even pass the GNG or could avoid being entirely SYNTH. If someone wants to go this route, they should draft Option B first so that the community could see if it is at all encyclopedic - I'm unsure it ever could be. Nonetheless, if Option B is chosen, individual killings/historical events must be at least mentioned to give the reader context. schetm (talk) 01:58, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No as it will result in significant loss of well-sourced content mentioned in "A". Cloud200 (talk) 15:02, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, prefer C. My very best wishes (talk) 19:39, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes - This is the best option, in my opinion. There are certain prominent scholars who draw a correlation between Communism and mass killing – enough to make a discussion of the concept notable, even if it is not a majority viewpoint. ModernDayTrilobite (talkcontribs) 16:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes I consider B,C & D to all be fine, and in an ideal world "C" would be best (see my notes there), but if you include being pragmatic, this is the one I most recommend. This would be trickier to write (it would need to refer to mass killings without actually covering them) but much better in the long run because it is the one most likely to avoid the eternal unsolvable debates of which should be covered under killings and what to call them. It sticks to the thing that covered only in this article vs. a summary or condensed version of what is covered in other articles. North8000 (talk) 21:08, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Survey on C

  • Further, imagine we have some phenomenon X and several theories that explain it. Can we write an article that discusses only the theories without mentioning the phenomenon X? Obviously not. That is explicitly prohibited by our policy, which says all facts and significant points of view on a given subject should be treated in one article. The phenomenon X here is the mass killings that have occurred under communist governments (option A), and the possible causes/linkages are discussed are in an appropriate section (option B). --Nug (talk) 22:27, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No — as noted by Nug, this is essentially the current version, on which the the latest AfD (2021) ruled that "the Misplaced Pages editing community has been unable to come to a consensus as to whether 'mass killings under communist regimes' is a suitable encyclopaedic topic." It is not a good approach either to fix the article because it is too close to OR/SYNTH, and a split would be better. We tried this approach for over a decade by now, it is time to change it.
  • Again, this does not exclude it cannot be written but I do not think that this is the good approach to fix it. B is the best one because if we find scholarly sources saying there is a universal link, and this is a majority view, then the automatic results will be this. The only possibility could be to rely on country experts and specialists for A and genocide scholars and other mainstream scholars for B; however, this is still too close to OR/SYNTH, as A scholars do not write within the context of Communism as a single phenomenon and give different causes or interpretations from B scholars, who write within the context of finding generalizations and correlations, which may be at odds with each other. Nonetheless, this approach would be the easiest way to fix the article in the now but I do not think it is going to fix the greater OR/SYNTH issues later on.
  • Davide King (talk) 14:58, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • It seems there is a misunderstanding of what people are voting for. The @Nug:@Aquillion: posts are a good example. They both are right, but they focus on different aspects. Nug is right that a discussion of a theory that explains X should include a description of X, provided, but only provided, that this theory is a majority view. In the context of the option C, the opposite question is legitimate: should the theory that describes X be presented in the article about X? The answer is obvious: "Yes, but it must be presented along with all other voewpoints, fairly, proportionally, and without editorial bias. That inevitably makes C and A the two identical options: if we describe mass killings in Communist states, we must discuss all important theories that explain them, as a group and/or as separate events. If the concept that Communism was a primary factor in mass killings is a majority or a significant minority view, this topic will be discussed in the A-type and C-type articles, and it will be discussed at the same level of detailisation. Our policy simply does not allow anything else.
  • Therefore, "A" and "C" is intrinsically the same, and "C" is not necessarily the status quo. It may be the status quo, if our prospective analysis of sources will demonstrate that "Communism as a primary reason of mass killings" is a mainstream view shared by majority of genocide scholars and country experts. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:57, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No for the same reasons I opposed A. Having a list of incidents implies there is consensus that they are connected, which is POV OR. TFD (talk) 18:21, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No I do not think these topics can coexist and produce a useful article. 73.152.116.51 (talk) 18:49, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes - as that's basically what we've already got. GoodDay (talk) 19:32, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No All this debate and consternation is happening because the status quo is obviously not satisfactory. If we want to improve this article in any way, it needs structural change. BSMRD (talk) 20:17, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, such an amalgamation (as we have currently) effectively uses the list from A as synthesis to support the arguments presented in B; it's an inherently non-neutral article. --Aquillion (talk) 21:55, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes - this is what we have, and it's fine. Not super (that would be Option A), but fine. The historical events are treated with accuracy and, most helpfully, there are wikilinks to the main articles of each of these events. Theories about those mass killings, their connection to communism/their connection to communist regimes are dealt with, and a coherent, albeit lengthy, article is the result, to the benefit of our readers. schetm (talk) 01:58, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes Cloud200 (talk) 15:02, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Comment The purpose for including this option is because the community did not reach a consensus to delete the article as it is (nor to keep) in the AfD. Therefore to not include an option to represent the article as it currently is would be controversial and could be seen as a way to 'backdoor' a deletion of the article following the unsuccesful AfD. In this sense Nug, Davide King, and others' interpretation of this option reflecting the current version are correct. Also a reminder to please use the section below for replying to other people's comments, or for multiple paragraphs of statements if possible. Ta Vanteloop (talk) 21:24, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, which corresponds to "status quo" of the page. One should not separate data and conclusions that follow from the data. My very best wishes (talk) 19:39, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - Although the discussion of the underlying concept makes this option preferable to A, it still retains Option A's OR/SYNTH issues. ModernDayTrilobite (talkcontribs) 16:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, but my #2 choice Ideally, this could make the best article. Coverage of possible correlation, and a short summary of key killings which would support and optimize that coverage. But this is basically the status quo, which under current realities and current wiki policies and guidelines has been an eternal painful unsolvable situation. North8000 (talk) 21:14, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Survey on D

  • Yes - Per proposal. The article, as it, does not give proper weight to the facts while it focuses too much on the opinions of academics. Hence, it is partially the causality for WP:SYNTH, and the article itself, as mentioned earlier, is already very lengthy. However, I should add that I am completely opposed to A and B and would prefer status quo over the previous two options as that information could still be used either separetely (The preferable option) or mutually to teach people about the horrors of auth-left Communism that plagued the Earth for decades and continues to do such in present day. With all due respect, Deathlibertarian you could have picked option D, so that this article is not so lengthy. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:24, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I do note that I changed my mind from my original proposal on the prospect of possibly removing entirely a section of the article, I do not think that will do much good in the long run since it can, at any time, be reintroduced accidentally or intentionally. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:54, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Comment - When I originally voted for this, I was not aware of an article with my expressed idea above already existing (Thanks @Davide King:), that article is Criticism of communist party rule which is a noncontroversial opinion-focused article that repeats verbatim several paragraphs from Mass killings under communist regimes. I do not know which article plagiarized the other, but one fact I know for sure is that several opinion pieces within MKUCR are very ill-fitted to be here, whereas they belong in that other article as highlighted previously. My new proposal would be to just nuke the estimates section, the proposed causes section and the debate section off MKUCR since they already exist elsewhere, and due to how the other article is much better presented in contrast to this one (MKUCR) which has a heavy focus on facts, therefore, partly the cause for the SYNTH issues within MKUCR with its improper synthesis of textual content + the sources implying something that isn't necessarily true. I am not voting in support of A or B as they still spare those sections and instead will propose a procedural close for status quo, afterward those sections should be removed, and I wish to hear no "but" nor "wait", just nuke them off MKUCR please. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 18:48, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
    • To quote Davide King: No information is actually going to be lost, as we already discuss all the events either indivdiually or by each Communist state as is done by majority of scholarly sources, and the current "Proposed cause" section as well as "Estimates" are already at Criticism of communist party rule, and estimates are further discussed at Democide, which is a more accurate category, since it is very broad. I am gonna ping other people who had similar concerns to mine about information erasure, so to make sure that they are aware that removing information from here will not completely remove said information off Misplaced Pages since it already exists elsewhere: @Cloud200: @Schetm: @My very best wishes: @X-Editor: MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 19:06, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes | Noonly if | unless they are general articles and not limited to Communism
  • As I showed in my comments, genocide scholars write general works about genocide and mass killings, they do not limit themselves to Communism or treat it as a special category that represents a separate or new topic. Causes of genocide and/or Causes of mass killing would be more in line with genocide scholarship, majority of which does not necessarily emphasizes regime types or treat them as separate categories, and those who do can easily be discussed in an appropriate section, including one about correlations in general and correlations by regime type or other characteristics that scholarly sources analyze or compare, which should make everyone happy.
  • If there were mainstream academic books fully dedicated to Communist Mass Killings rather than chapters about it, like is done for any other regime type, and most of them limited to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot (three Communist leaders rather than Communist regimes), establishing this as a separate and new topic, I can accept such possibility. As things stand, I can only propose a separate article about Mass killings under Joseph Stalin, Mao Zedong, and Pol Pot. Davide King (talk) 15:09, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

*Yes - The article is a bit long, so splitting it in two as proposed would make reading more comfortable for the reader. I also think it would be counterproductive to remove information about either topic, as both the mass killings and the causes of them are notable topics. The two articles, in my opinion, should be named Mass killings under communist states and Proposed causes of mass killings under communist states. There should also be a third article named Terminology of mass killings under communist states and a fourth article named Estimates of the death toll for mass killings under communist states. The sections "Debate over famines", "Legal status and prosecutions", and "Memorials and museums" should be kept in the Mass killings under communist states article as they relate most to the killings themselves. If the terminology section is too problematic to be split into a separate article as suggested below by Paul Siebert, then the section and its information should be removed entirely, as terminology is the least important factor of Communist mass killings. Any information in the Mass killings under communist states article that cannot be backed up by sources calling them Communist mass killings should be removed, as that would be original research and synthesis. As for the concern that calling these mass killings "communist" is not neutral, calling them communist states would create a distinction between the ideology itself and the execution of the ideology in real life as a form of state. Per WP:COMMONNAME, we would also have no choice but to use the term communist, since it is the most common term used to refer to these mass killings. This is my proposal for dealing with this topic. X-Editor (talk) 16:06, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

  • I'm honestly not sure what should be done about this article. MarioSuperstar77's proposal sounds interesting, but I'm still not so sure about it. X-Editor (talk) 01:47, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Neutral --Paul Siebert (talk) 17:09, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No per POVFORK. We would then have one article that implcitly states the events were connected and another that examines whether or not they were. TFD (talk) 18:23, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes The only real solution here, to my mind, is to segregate the "article about the bodies" from the "article about the debate." This isn't because the two topics are disjoint; this is a practical matter as I do not believe editors drawn to the first topic can coexist with editors invested in the second. Perhaps in some decades these two subjects can come together again, but for now we should split the baby and take advantage of the notability of the resultant parts. 73.152.116.51 (talk) 18:49, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No - as we can't deny that Communist regimes were destructive to humans, who dared to oppose them. GoodDay (talk) 19:33, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No This really is just asking to become a WP:POVFORK issue. These articles will inevitably diverge from each other despite theoretically very similar content, which is explicitly not allowed by WP. Keeping it all one article is the best way to avoid these issues. BSMRD (talk) 20:22, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, too likely to result in a WP:POVFORK. Arguments that tie together individual mass killings should be presented (with appropriate attribution and discussion) in a central article; a laundry-list of mass killings without that key secondary framing is going to turn into editors using their own WP:OR / WP:SYNTH to argue the point of the main article. --Aquillion (talk) 22:00, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, as I'm not sure Option B could stand on its own - see my comments above. schetm (talk) 01:59, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes for the sake of making the article more readable in editorial sense. Cloud200 (talk) 15:02, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, prefer C. My very best wishes (talk) 19:39, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, but B would be preferable. This solution would create one article about the concept of communism/mass-killing linkages, which would be a useful encyclopedic article in line with other articles on historical theories. The other, summary-style, article would likely be problematic under WP:SYNTH or WP:POVFORK; however, splitting it off could be a first step toward the establishment of a more balanced summary article on mass killing events. ModernDayTrilobite (talkcontribs) 16:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes but my #3 choice It includes coverage of the possible correlation which is essential. And the "possible correlation" article is less likely to have the huge unsolvable questions that have kept this article in pain for over a decade. It would be a bit tricky to write the "possible correlation" article without covering the killings themselves, but that is likely to get solved. Those "huge unsolvable questions that have kept this article in pain for over a decade." would likely remain with the "cover the killings" article. Also, without the purpose of supporting the "possible correlation" coverage, the criteria is a bit POV'ish. So this would be my #3 choice of the 4. North8000 (talk) 21:24, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Threaded discussion

As I explained during the DRN discussion, if we stick with NPOV, the options "A" and "C" must be the same, so addition of "C" just dilutes the voices, and "A"/"C" option may not win. Just think: the article of the type "A" tells a story about mass killings in Communist states, and if Communism, according to majority RS, was an important factor, then its discussion must be added to the "type "A"" article. As an example, take a look at the World War II article: it includes such general sections as "Background" or "Aftermath", and, similarly, if we choose SS AND Communism is seen as a significant factor by majority RS, we will inevitably have the section about the role of Communism in the SS (type A) article. It would be against NPOV to do otherwise. Similarly, the "Type "C"" article is a combination of the story of mass killings and their linkage with Communism, which is described "fairly, proportionally, and without editorial bias". Actually, these two options are the same, and that if why I initially proposed to remove "C" as redundant. However, since other DRN participants didn't support removal, I agreed on "C". I am neutral about the outcome of this RfC, and I am pretty comfortable with any result. Happy voting :)

--Paul Siebert (talk) 17:17, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
@X-Editor: "Terminology" section is a pure original research and minority POV-pushing. --Paul Siebert (talk) 17:27, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Are anonymous users usually allowed to comment on a RfC? Especially on an article that they cannot edit as it is semi-protected? MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 18:56, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

MarioSuperstar77, WP:RFC says: "All editors (including IP users) are welcome to respond to any RfC." I am also not concerned, since RfCs are not a vote and Robert McClenon has made it clear that the closer has to "determine what approach is most strongly supported by strength of arguments." Davide King (talk) 20:13, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
User:Davide King - The statement that the RFC is not a simple vote is always the policy. I didn't make it as a special rule.
User:MarioSuperstar77 - The closer can decide how much credence to give to any editor including unregistered editors.
Any editor is welcome to invite the unregistered editors to create accounts. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:47, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for your comments, I have clarified that RfC is not a vote not per you but per policy. I am fully aware of it, I just wanted it to be clear for IPs and users who did not take part to any RfC before. Davide King (talk) 23:00, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

C

note:these comments were originally left in the main section of the RfC, but were later moved here for clarity Vanteloop (talk) 17:20, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

This option does NOT present the status quo: the current article does not present all significant point of view fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, and its current structure may create some apparent hierarchy. Therefore, voting for C is not an endorsement of the correct topic/structure. Paul Siebert (talk) 23:17, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Responding to this comment by Nug. Note added by Davide King (talk) 18:57, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

...and we should accept the main conclusion made by Valentino: that regime type is not an important factor that explains mass killings. You may speculate about the meaning of each of his phrases, but that does not change the fact that the core if his theory is: "leader's personality is the main factor, so removal of few persons from power eliminates a risk of mass killings even without political transformations of the regime." Paul Siebert (talk) 01:18, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Again, you confuse his grouping of the phenomena into a communist type with his conclusions as to the causes of the phenomena. I've told you this multiple times, yet you seem to instantly forget. I'm starting to think this may be some kind WP:NOTGETTINGIT. --Nug (talk) 01:24, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Frankly, I think there is some confusion here: it was me who says that Valentino's grouping does not imply he saw Communism as a significant cause. The current version of this article carefully attenuates this fact. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:24, 20 December 2021 (UTC)

The purpose for including this option is because the community did not reach a consensus to delete the article as it is (nor to keep) in the AfD. Therefore to not include an option to represent the article as it currently is would be controversial and could be seen as a way to 'backdoor' a deletion of the article following the unsuccesful AfD. In this sense Nug, Davide King, and others' interpretation of this option reflecting the current version are correct. Also a reminder to please use the section below for replying to other people's comments, or for multiple paragraphs of statements if possible. Ta Vanteloop (talk) 21:24, 20 December 2021 (UTC)

And that is why I was insisting on clear and detailed explanation of "A-D". You disagreed, and as a result, different people understand each of four options differently. I am afraid after closure of this RfC we may have another RfC to resolve a dispute on how exactly the results of this RfC should be interpreted. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:45, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Please move your reply and my response to the section below, to avoid clutter - and do the same for your other replies in the wrong section. So far you are the only one who has failed to understand the instructions of the RfC not to reply to other's top level comments (and the only one who has misunderstood the meaning of C). Vanteloop (talk) 22:07, 20 December 2021 (UTC)

B and D

MarioSuperstar77 say B is still synthesis like C but what do they respond from both BSMRD and The Four Deuces that D is a content fork? " e would then have one article that implcitly states the events were connected and another that examines whether or not they were." If they think B is SYNTH, how can they support D, which is essentially A and B as separate articles? What did I miss in their arguments? I invite them to clarify and discuss this. Davide King (talk) 21:56, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

I had stated it in several different ways, but apparently I am not able to make myself clear. I checked on the net for something that I'd like to call "Interpreting an opinion as fact" since I am certain that I have not invented this, but the best citation I could find relating to my point is from the philosopher's mag. Any way, I will attempt to reiterate what I have said above one more time; my idea is to split the article into two articles: one that is based in facts with all the data and statistics fact-checked several times and the other based in theories, hypotheses, and debates. My proposal intends to clearly highlight that one of the articles is fully objective and factual and must be read as such, and the other is fully subjective and the opinion of academics, scholars, researchers and specialists, and therefore, must be read as such, therefore, no synthesis because the reader knows what to expect from both articles. Option B does not fix the synthesis issue that plagues the article, to fix the synthesis issue, first you would have to remove the Proposed causes section which heavily implies that the motives of Communism are always going to cause massive democides. The paragraphs that start in "The concept of mass killing as a phenomenon unique to communist governments-" and "Many commentators on the political right state that the mass killings-" were added to the article solely as a means to add balance to the section, not because of POV mind you, but because the section implies something that none of the sources attested for. If you go to any major article relating to politics on Misplaced Pages such as Donald Trump, Conservative, Liberal, Adolf Hitler, etc, none of them have any major focus on opinions from experts that can are implied to be true and, therefore, misinterpreted for facts; whereas, this article has multiple. B only removes the estimates which, for all intent and purpose, are one of such implications, "Proposed causes" and "Debates on famines" are the other two, and there are a few paragraphs across the article with similar synthesis. If B or A do pass, I can stipulate that we will continue to hear about this article for weeks on end because as I said multiple times now, this does not fix the synthesis problem from the article. At the very least, there ought to have been an option E that proposes to remove everything that I previously mentioned above and more to make the article fully objective. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 00:06, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
I am not sure it still clear what you are saying, and I think you may get a better response from Aquillion, BSMRD, The Four Deuces, Siebert, and other users in this regards, and indeed I may update this comment to give you a better reply and better address your points. For now, let me tell you that you seem to assume B must imply "Proposed causes" and "Debates on famines" as currently written rather than completely changed; B will require significant rewrite, so any issues you may have about SYNTH can be solved and I hope that this is clear (indeed, both sections as currently written are SYNTH but I am not advocating for them, I am advocating for rewrite, which will solve major issues), if you did not take in consideration that B would require significant rewrite. Secondly, the topic will be about theories and narratives, and it will be made clear, so I do not get your point about presenting opinions as facts and vice versa. If I get you right, pretty much any A and B article (e.g. Race and intelligence), which is how I imagine B to be similarly named, is SYNTH to you because you think it presents opinions as facts but that is not the case, and will not be the case for B. To conclude, it appears that your issues are mainly with the article's current structure, and because of this it is hard to check sources, and you are indeed correct "the article is so bloated in size that nobody would bother to properly check the information on the article and simply assumed that the article had no issue." We both want the same thing — a NPOV article without any SYNTH issue; I see B as the only possibility to achieve that, and I am skeptical about D because I am afraid it may give defenders of the current structure yet another excuse to not improve the article because we can simply create a separate article, so we need not to worry about this article. Davide King (talk) 01:52, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Race and intelligence's opinions are presented as being unreliable, yet historically relevant. Again, the presentation is one important thing that makes D a proper option as all the elements that cause synthesis will no longer do so if they are written on the prospect that they are hypotheses, all the while keeping all the information intact. I have read WP:SYNTH page 5 times now because I don't think we're on the same line, so to make sure, we define synthesis as An implication which results into an incorrect conclusion that was never attested by the sources themselves. With this definition in mind, assuming we both agree that this is the correct definition in other words, an article on the subject of "Possible explanation for the democides within Communist regimes" would very clearly highlight that the article is entirely focused on opinionated theories such as Principle of relativity and Obesity paradox rather than hard facts like other pre-existing articles, and that distinction would prevent synthesis as the conclusion is never reached, there is a difference between "This person is probably evil" and "I think this person is probably evil", the former reaches a conclusion thanks to its implication, the latter does not and specifies that the person is thinking about it. Now, one valid concern here is POVFORK and I admit that I did not think about that, though if both articles are monitored frequently that issue should not occur, if it does occur an AfD could be created for the offending article. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:20, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Have you looked at my sandbox possibility? Change Race and intelligence's opinions are presented as being unreliable, yet historically relevant to 's opinions are presented as being disputed, yet historically notable, and there should be no issue; there are indeed authors who see a link between race and intelligence, or between Communism and mass killings, that is indeed their conclusions but the article does not, and will not, treat it as a fact or even a mainstream position that is uncontroversial or not disputed; both articles are about notable yet controversial discussions. Again, see Race and crime in the United States. A really SYNTH article is Communism and Jews — that is truly SYNTH and even antisemitic, which is why it has been deleted. B does not even come close to it, and would be perfectly in line with all others and articles we already have discussion correlations and links, whether they are supported or not, whether they are controversial or not, all of which is to be made clear per NPOV and WEIGHT; what matters is whether they are notable and B clearly is — again, look at non-primary literature I proposed at sandbox.
You do not seem to understand SYNTH — it is grouping events without a clear connection (e.g. they happened in Asia, were Communists, their common language is Indo-European, therefore we must have an article about mass killings in Asia or mass killings under Indo-European languages — this is SYNTH), not B. If the issue is you think an article discussing Communist regimes and mass killings, and that this implies all communists support mass killings or something like that — well, I do not know what to tell you because by this standard every options, from A to D, is SYNTH and you should have supported 'Deletion' in the AfD. As for POV forks, the problem is that both articles will be seen as POV forks of each other and thus both should be deleted. Davide King (talk) 14:46, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Your sandbox would definitely improve the article by a margin, but that is assuming that all the offending sources within the article are removed, but from your previous comments I learned that you intended to remove them anyway, so it would be a step toward the right direction. Comparing option B to an article that was deleted ensuing an AfD is not a good look, I trust that you will clean up the article proper once this RfC concludes, regardless of which option passes, but if that is not done well the article will continue to draw ire from other Wikipedians.
You do not seem to understand SYNTH — it is grouping events without a clear connection Here comes what is written on WP:SYNTH Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any source. Similarly, do not combine different parts of one source to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by the source.-. I think this is clear and concise to me, so I have to return the favor that I believe that you may not understand WP:SYNTH, although you have been on Misplaced Pages for much longer than I, so perhaps I am missing something from the page in spite of reading it 6 times now. DublinDilettante actually thinks that this article was synthesis on the premise of it being about Communist mass killings; however, the information can be presented in such a way that only data and facts are present on the article which would void the synthesis. First off, the article should not be called "Mass killings under Communist regimes" which is a clear implication that mass killings would occur majoritarily within Communist regimes and that was what the AfD mainly focused on. Then, it should be void of any opinion piece, regardless of the expertise of the person who writes said opinion, so to make this article not-synthesis, Kotkin, Rummel, etc should be removed entirely, or per my proposal moved into its own article focusing on the theories of what led to Communist mass killings in the first place. I had opposed the AfD because I was afraid that extremists were attempting to whitewash the bloodstains of statist Communism. Additionally, although that was fairly paranoid on my part, I was afraid that would give the green light to Fascists to remove articles critical of Fascism. I genuinely do not understand why you bring up my vote on the AfD as that is completely unrelated to the current RfC. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 16:57, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Chiming in here, there is no implication in article title that communist regimes are more prone to mass killings, any more than the title War crimes of the United States implies that the USA is more prone to committing war crimes than any other country. --Nug (talk) 02:33, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
No, that is cheating. The "War crimes of the United States" is a quite legitimate title simply because "the US" is a quite concrete single entity. In contrast, there is no consensus among scholars that such an entity as "Communist regimes" or "generic Communism" exists. Many authors discuss, e.g. genocides in Cambodia, China and Indonesia, or discuss Stalin and Hitler. A similar situation is impossible for the US, for, e.g. "War crimes in California and Baja California" is hard to imagine. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:27, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
Yet, only Communism is discussed as a separate topic, users make 2+2, do it too. Just like Crimes against humanity under communist regimes is a POV fork of Crimes against humanity because (1) it implies Communism is a special phenomenon (we do it only for it; if the scope is simply to list crimes against humanity under Communist regimes, that can be done for any other regime type and category) and (b) Crimes against humanity only discuss Cambodia and Yugoslavia, not China, North Korea, and other states discussed there. That is why I think Crimes against humanity under communist regimes and Mass killings under communist regimes are also both content POV fork of Crimes against humanity and Mass killing, which are simply NPOV version of the topic; neither of them discuss Communism in a way that warrants a separate article. If you think that a chapter is enough to justifify a new topic, I suggest you to start creating Mass killings under capitalist regimes, Mass killings under fascist regimes, etc. I would not do that myself because it may appear as WP:POINT and I think they are going to have the same problems as this one. If we do not do this for other regime types, you should stop being surprised when users take it for granted that is indeed the implication if we do this only for Communism. Davide King (talk) 04:35, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
First of all, thanks for your kind words and for engaging with me, it is really interesting, which is why this reply is going longer than usual and I hope to you can forgive me for that. The problem is that it has been a decade that we have tried to cleanup the article, and any major attempt to fix it, including removing stuff or adding stuff, has been reverted and is opposed by those who were for 'Keep' and denied that the article had not even issues in the first place; indeed, my comment in the AfD was for 'Delete' but it essentially was for 'Rewrite' because I saw that, and I still saw it, as the only way to fix issues once and for all. I also did not compare B but a delete article (Jews and Communism), if that is what you think; Jews and Communism was an article that was indeed SYNTH, while B is not, just like Race and intelligence, and like-minded article, are not SYNTH either. Speaking of which, do you understand the difference between causation and correlation? If some authors say there is a causal connection, whereas other say there is not, it should be not "Proposed causes", but "Discussion of possible causal linkage between mass killings and Communism", or "Communist states and mass killing" for short. If B (again, keep in mind the difference between causation and correlation) and SYNTH, then Race and intelligence, Race and crime in the United States, and a majority of article structured as B are SYNTH. If B is SYNTH, so is D, which includes B, and would also be content POV fork; nonetheless, I myself can support D as a means to improve things, but I think that you are being contradictory if you think B is SYNTH, since D entails that A and B are discussed separately rather than together like in C — it appears to be that A is the option that would fit better what you actually put forward, if you think B is still SYNTH, or I persuaded you that is not the case.
I will try to explain this better — if there was agreement among scholars that communism caused mass killings in those states, it is not SYNTH to treat them as a single group; indeed, for A not to be SYNTH, that communism caused mass killings, or was the major cause, and that this represent the mainstream and majority view among scholars, this would have to be true. Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any source. Similarly, do not combine different parts of one source to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by the source. It means that we cannot combine country-specific sources about mass killings about Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot (e.g. taking one book about mass killings under Stalin, another book about them under Mao, and so on, and us concluding that since they happened under three or more Communist regimes, we can write Mass killings under communist regimes, if that is not what the sources also conclude or make) to imply there is a MKuCR grouping, or that sources that do discuss Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot together to imply it is a MKuCR, which means a much broader discussion, rather than Stalin–Mao–Pol Pot grouping, which is a much more narrow scope and is how I understand A to be. In addition, sources that discuss together Stalin's, Mao's, and Pol Pot's mass killings are a minority, while the overwhelming majority of them discuss them separately and individually, or are country-specific, and thus the former would be a content POV fork of the latter and NPOV violation. NPOV requires that all majority and minority views are discussed but that cannot be done if only a few sources group Stalin–Mao–Pol Pot together, and even then they disagree (Jones discusses Stalin–Mao together and Pol Pot separately).
I agree that there should be a name change, though that mass killings would occur majoritarily within Communist regimes and that was what the AfD mainly focused on is an oversimplification, since the main reason for delete was that while all events indeed happened, majority of sources discuss them individually or by country, and only a minority of them discuss them together — again, there is no Communism Mass Killings scholarly book, only chapters in general works about mass killings, and they are limited to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot, even thought the name may imply they are talking about every nominally Communist regime. I do not know why I brought up your AfD comment, but I think that since you are critical of the article perhaps you should have considered 'Delete' as a bigger possibility than you thought, especially since 'Delete' can also result in reducing the article to a stub or totally rewrite, rather than total removal of information, which seems to be one of the reasons you did not consider it as a serious possibility. In this regards, I suggest you to reconsider this. No information is actually going to be lost, as we already discuss all the events either indivdiually or by each Communist state as is done by majority of scholarly sources, and the current "Proposed cause" section as well as "Estimates" are already at Criticism of communist party rule, and estimates are further discussed at Democide, which is a more accurate category, since it is very broad. Finally, that the AfD was the result of extremists ... attempting to whitewash the bloodstains of statist Communism is part of right-wing misinformation, as has been noted in the closure, since the overwhelming majority of 'Delete' comments had a totally different reasoning. Again, that we are going to remove the Holocaust next is an absurd strawman, as noted by several users.

"We have a lot of books and monographs that provide a neutral and balanced description of WWII as a topic. However, we have virtually no such books about MKuCR: a couple of sources that discuss this topic are highly controversial, and other works do not discuss the topic as a whole, and they focus on subtopics (or more global topics) instead." —Paul Siebert

"WWII is also a single unified topic with no serious (overarching) dispute over what falls under it, or over if and how the things that fall under it are connected. None of this is true here, which means that collecting events, framing them as mass killings, and lumping them together into a single unified topic becomes WP:SYNTHESIS unless the discussion is informed by, structured according to, and attributed to secondary sources, with appropriate text in each case being devoted to underlying academic disputes." —Aquillion

"The reason there is an article on WWII is that there is academic consensus that the various wars were part of a larger war, viz, WWII. There is no consensus that killings in Stalin's Soviet Union, etc., are part of a pattern of MKuCR." —The Four Deuces

This also perfectly applies to World War II, so you have nothing to be afraid of. Compare the Google Scholar results of "the Holocaust" and "World War II with "communist mass killings" and "mass killings under communist regimes". Davide King (talk) 04:35, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
And because of WP:LENGTH, because you can theoretically go for C and fix the synthesis. But, what is the point when the article is so long that it is difficult to read? This makes editing the article take more time, this makes checking the citations and the text take more time, and this is what introduced the synthesis because the article is so bloated in size that nobody would bother to properly check the information on the article and simply assumed that the article had no issue. This is one thing that I am thankful for the AfD as that brought so much attention to the article. Finally, we are now trying to fix it after years! The least that could be done is to make the article shorter. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 00:18, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
This is because Mass killings under communist regimes was created many years before Mass killing, which is the NPOV article. Before rasining any issue about length, we should at least first attempt to expand Mass killing in the first place. Finally, have you considered a Mass killings in history, akin to Genocides in history, as an alternative? I do not understand this obsession for Communism as a separate topic when there is not a non-controversial academic work (apart from The Black Book of Communism and Red Holocaust) that treats it as a single phenomenon, so why should we too? Chirot, Jones, Mann, Valentino, and others all place Communist mass killings within the context of mass killings in general, and this can be easily done at either Mass killing and/or Mass killings in history. Again, this article may be justified only if we first attempted to do this. Davide King (talk) 01:52, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
I do not understand this obsession for Communism as a separate topic when there is not a non-controversial academic work (apart from The Black Book of Communism and Red Holocaust) that treats it as a single phenomenon I like when things are properly categorized, it makes it easier to research a certain topic. I should note that I am also supportive of a mass killings under Capitalist regimes article and a mass killings under Fascist regimes article. As for the mass killings article, it should be improved, but not everybody is necessarily enticed to overlook it. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 13:20, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
I believe The Four Deuces can explain you this in a simpler way but that is why we have policies about SYNTH; for a grouping, there must be a connection, it is not sufficient that something was nominally capitalist, Communist, or fascist. It is the reason why we only have Mass killings under communist regimes and not for any other regime type; it is SYNTH without majority of scholarly sources making a clear connection, and your proposal is simply a recipe for further OR/SYNTH. Indeed, that was one scholarly criticism of The Black Book of Communism, see below. Why must we give so much weight to such a controversial work and discuss Communism as a separate and single phenomenon, rather than how majority of genocide scholars treat it (e.g. chapters in works about general mass killings book)?
  • Dallin, Alexander (Winter 2000). "Review. Reviewed Work: The Black Book of Communism: Crimes, Terror, Repression by Stéphane Courtois, Nicolas Werth, Jean-Louis Panné, Andrzej Paczkowski, Karel Bartošek, Jean-Louis Margolin, Jonathan Murphy, Mark Kramer". Slavic Review. 59 (4). Cambridge, England: Cambridge University Press: 883. doi:10.2307/2697429. JSTOR 2697429. Whether all these cases, from Hungary to Afghanistan, have a single essence and thus deserve to be lumped together—just because they are labeled Marxist or communist—is a question the authors scarcely discuss.
  • David-Fox, Michael (Winter 2004). "On the Primacy of Ideology. Soviet Revisionists and Holocaust Deniers (In Response to Martin Malia)". Kritika: Explorations in Russian and Eurasian History. 5 (1). Bloomington, Indiana: Slavic: 81–105. doi:10.1353/kri.2004.0007. S2CID 159716738. David-Fox, Michael (Winter 2004). "On the Primacy of Ideology. Soviet Revisionists and Holocaust Deniers (In Response to Martin Malia)". Kritika: Explorations in Russian and Eurasian History. 5 (1). Bloomington, Indiana: Slavic: 81–105. doi:10.1353/kri.2004.0007. S2CID 159716738. Malia thus counters by coining the category of 'generic Communism,' defined everywhere down to the common denominator of party movements founded by intellectuals. (Pol Pot's study of Marxism in Paris thus comes across as historically more important than the gulf between radical Soviet industrialism and the Khmer Rouge's murderous anti-urbanism.) For an argument so concerned with justifying The Black Book, however, Malia's latest essay is notable for the significant objections he passes by. Notably, he does not mention the literature addressing the statistical-demographic, methodological, or moral dilemmas of coming to an overall communist victim count, especially in terms of the key issue of how to include victims of disease and hunger.
Do you still think this is a good idea? Have you considered my Mass killing expansion and Mass killings in history spinoff (general article about mass killings irrespective of regime type) proposals? Concerns about length are not legitimate if we do not even try first. Davide King (talk) 14:23, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
The only issue from my proposal is POVFORK and that is assuming the article will not be monitored enough to keep it fresh and encyclopedic, therefore, I still do not think my idea is a bad one, only that it would require effort to manage both articles. As for your idea - yeah, it is a decent idea. You could and should expand on that. MarioSuperstar77 (talk) 16:57, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
I think you are being too optimistic about it; we discussed this over the last year and nothing has actually been truly changed or improved. I do think that D may be a way to actually incentivize improvement and a means to that end, but I also ask you to seriously consider some of my arguments, and if you think they are wrong, I am missing something, please let me know and rebuke them; in particular, I would like to see you discussing sources and your thoughts about my sources research and analysis; again, if I missed anything or you disagree about something, feel free to tell me.
  • (e.g. to actually discuss Communist mass killings together, there must be a correlation; since there is not but some authors have proposed correlations, we cannot discuss them together or separately but only the discussion of correlations put forward)
notes about sources
  • (there are no Communist Mass Killings books that would establish it as a separate topic, only "Communist Mass Killings — Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot" chapters within the context of mass killings in general, which is how I propose to have them discussed — cft. Google Scholar results for "communist mass killings" and "mass killings under communist regimes" — do you see the difference?)
and information
so nothing is going to be lost, only the SYNTH of it. Davide King (talk) 04:35, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

B and C

Nug say "an article cannot discuss any debate on the correlations or causes without mentioning the government actions that has led to that debate in the first place. It would be like discussing Causes of World War II without having the article World War II." The problem is that there is no academic work fully dedicated to mass killings under Communist regimes,1 or Communist mass killings — they are mostly chapters of works about the general topic and are limited to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot; indeed, there are a bunch of books about World War II as a whole, there are no academic books about Communist mass killings as a whole (again, they are mainly chapters limited about Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot — Chirot, Jones, Mann, and Valentino, all of which are within the context of mass killings in general). I can accept an article limited to those three Communist leaders, but I do not accept Nug's premise if by A they mean Communism as a single phenomenon and exclude country experts by default, and broad it to include any other Communist regime.

Notes

1. The Black Book of Communism and Red Holocaust (limited to Stalin, Mao, Kim, Ho Chi Min, and Pol Pot) appear to be the exceptions, and it is those kind of works that we need, e.g. works fully devoted to Communism as a special phenomenon rather than chapters in books about mass killings in general. The Red Holocaust's "ubsequent chapters make comparisons with Germany and Japan under Hitler and Hirohito, respectively. Although several topics are raised, the book's message can be easily summarized. Totalitarian ideologies have taken different forms in the twentieth century (communism, Nazism, and fascism), but they have all produced similar results: mass terror and crimes against humanity. Some distinction are also made." In light of this, we may have an article focused on totalitarian crimes and mass killings, and discuss their similarities and differences.

Davide King (talk) 21:56, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

  • WRT @Nug:'s It would be like discussing Causes of World War II without having the article World War II. We have a lot of books and monographs that provide a neutral and balanced description of WWII as a topic. However, we have virtually no such books about MKuCR: a couple of sources that discuss this topic are highly controversial, and other works do not discuss the topic as a whole, and they focus on subtopics (or more global topics) instead.--Paul Siebert (talk) 22:34, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • WWII is also a single unified topic with no serious (overarching) dispute over what falls under it, or over if and how the things that fall under it are connected. None of this is true here, which means that collecting events, framing them as mass killings, and lumping them together into a single unified topic becomes WP:SYNTHESIS unless the discussion is informed by, structured according to, and attributed to secondary sources, with appropriate text in each case being devoted to underlying academic disputes. --Aquillion (talk) 23:03, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Except that it isn't WP:SYNTHESIS, otherwise why would some authors be disputing the grouping of events as communist mass killings if that grouping didn't exist in published sources, are they hallucinating? Can we finally stop this "it's WP:SYNTH" bs? --Nug (talk) 00:42, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Ok, by combining Valentino (who considered Stalin's mass killings as "Communist mass killings", but Afghan mass killings as non-Communist) with Courtois, who considered Afghan victims as vicrims of Communism, but didn't use Valentino's term "Communist mass killings", the article is doing no synthesis?
  • Actually, the article is a collection of events that were called as "mass killings"/"genocide"/"politicide" etc by at least one author. If that is not synthesis, then what is? Paul Siebert (talk) 00:59, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • "Communist" is, to some degree, an additional motive in all events that we discuss. But the claim that it was a main motive in all cases is a minority POV, as my analysis of sources demonstrates. Grouping some events together based on some minor trait is a clear and unequivocal POV-pushing.
  • So far, you provided no such analysis, and I have no reason to believe you are expressing a majority POV. Paul Siebert (talk) 01:27, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Again you are trying to conflate Valentino's mass killing types with his mass killing causes. --Nug (talk) 02:04, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
    Actually, it seems you described your own point of view. In contrast, I am objecting your attempts to conflate grouping with causation, which you do for Valentino, Bellamy and some other authors. Yes, Valentino put some mass killings in Communist states in one group, which called "dispossessive a.k.a. Communist mass killings". However, from that, it does not follow that he saw Communism as a cause. Paul Siebert (talk) 20:00, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Well, if we have authors making the connection, we can rely on those (as I specified in my comments above.) But it isn't enough just to vaguely say they exist; we actually have to cite them, and rely on them, and use them to determine how we structure and discuss the events in question, without relying on any sources that don't make that broad topical connection. Put simply, it's WP:SYNTH / WP:OR to make or imply a connection that the sources we're using don't. Obviously this is a sweeping RFC so it's hard to drill down into the individual examples, but if you're confident that you can write a version that carefully documents and attributes each example in the context of an author connecting it to the concept of mass killings as a specifically Communist thing, then doing so should make a lot of the objections go away and will, basically, be B - a focused, specific article that reflects actual arguments people make. You can't, though, just point to a source that said "this mass killing occurred in this communist regime" because building a list out of that to imply that the commonality is significant, using sources that don't say or discuss things like "this mass-killing happened because Communism", is synthesis and means you're making the argument yourself as an editor - you need to rely on the sources that specifically discuss that commonality. --Aquillion (talk) 03:04, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Let's put this in perspective for the closer, shall we? One user is relying on their personal reading of Valentino (Nug), while another is relying on academic secondary coverage of Valentino (Siebert); if Nug's reading is correct, surely it would be reflected in academic secondary coverage already? But those sources, in fact, give a more nuanced picture that is closer to what Siebert is summarizing for us, and I do not have no reason to believe Siebert got this one wrong. So please, I ask that everyone rely on secondary coverage rather than cherry picking from Valentino. Again, surely if you are right and what you are citing or quoting from Valentino is due, it has been reported and mentioned in academic secondary coverage of him, and should be easy to provide, don't you think? Davide King (talk) 01:33, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • What the heck? Priselac's review of Valentio's book explicitly mentions the three mass killing types: communist, ethnic and counter-guerrilla and takes no issue with it while praising the book as excellent. I don't to see how Paul Siebert's view is "a more nuanced picture", given he seems to not understand the basic difference between case study type and conclusion. --Nug (talk) 02:04, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • And? No one is denying that Valentino outlines such mass killing types; however, as noted by Straus, Communist mass killing is a subtype, not a major type, which means it can be discussed at Mass killing, not as a separate topic. To quote Straus:

    "Valentino identifies two major types, each with three subtypes. The first major type is 'dispossessive mass killing,' which includes (1) 'communist mass killings' in which leaders seek to transform societies according to communist principles; (2) 'ethnic mass killings,' in which leaders forcibly remove an ethnic population; and (3) mass killing as leaders acquire and repopulate land. The second major type of mass killing is 'coercive mass killing,' which includes (1) killing in wars when leaders cannot defeat opponents using conventional means; (2) 'terrorist' mass killing when leaders use violence to force an opposing side to surrender; and (3) killing during the creation of empires when conquering leaders try to defeat resistance and intimidate future resistance."

  • "One of Valentino's central arguments is that 'characteristics of society at large, such as pre-existing cleaves, hatred and discrimination between groups and non-democratic forms of government, are of limited utility in distinguishing societies at high risk for mass killing. Valentino's strongest arguments in support of this statement are his comparative studies of regimes that committed mass killing with similar regimes that did not." Did you also miss this from Prisalec? This is literally what Siebert have been saying the whole time. Davide King (talk) 02:11, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • No, it can't be discussed in Mass killing because the article would be absolutely huge if it discusses all the types, this communist type is already almost 300kB, so it would have to be split up anyway. You also don't understand the difference between type topology and conclusion, or are you purposely confusing them? And coming back to my original point, it proves that grouping mass killings based on communist type is not WP:SYNTH. --Nug (talk) 03:14, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • You ignore that much of the space is occupied by non-free, lengthy quotes, and that even if we have space issues, we can have a Mass killings in history article; you also act as if this article is the be-all and end-all, and cannot be rewritten or restructured to make it much more concise and space-saving. As I said, Valentino's Communist mass killing is not even a major type but a subtype, which makes it undue as a separate topic. Even if you are right, such category must be the mainstream, majority view and not be disputed or controversial; Aquillion gave a good summary and criteria. None of Valentino's scholarly publications emphasize Communism or are publications about Communism. Chapters or passing mentions are not good enough to establish it as a separate topic, and they are placed within the context of mass killings in general, therefore they must be discussed together generally; they can be grouped together as part of the structure but it must be a general article.1 This is what genocide scholars do, and their main concerns are correlations and generalizations, which fits B; they rely on country experts and specialists to summarize the events. Davide King (talk) 04:08, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
    Notes
  • 1. If it is not so clear, by this I mean that the article's grouping will be irrespective of regime type (it will be a general article about mass killing events irrespective of categories) but we can have a section categorized by Communist regimes, if not geographically or other fitting categorizations used to have a well-organized table of contents. What I oppose is having separate articles about the events for each regime type, whether it is capitalist, Communist, fascist, or whatever, when we already discuss them individually. There are simply no sufficient scholarly sources that treat them as separate topics, and it is better to discuss them in short paragraphs together (e.g. no need to say what happened in great details, just mention and link the events themselves, there is no need to provide a coatracked summary there too). Davide King (talk) 04:19, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • WP:GNG is the criterion by which we determine if a standalone article is warranted, it states "Significant coverage is more than a trivial mention, but it does not need to be the main topic of the source material". The fact we have a chapter in Valentino (and in Bellamy and others) meets the requirement. --Nug (talk) 04:39, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I am curious to see Aquillion's response to this, since you did mention at least two sources now and your back-and-forth discussion was interesting and useful, so I hope that you can discuss that further; however, Bellamy and Valentino fit B more than anything, and is fine by me because that is what I support — my issue is how such sources are used to support A or C rather than the more proper B.
  • I do not think that excludes my proposal of general mass killings either; in addition, Bellamy puts Communism within the context of the Cold War, while Valentino puts it within that of mass killings in general and as a subtype of dispossessive mass killings. If there is consistency, then a similar article about capitalism must be created due to Bellamy's chapter about "Capitalist Atrocities" — I do not think A-style articles for both are good, but at least there would be consistency. I also do not think this solves NPOV and WEIGHT issues, and the contradictions between country experts and historians, and genocide scholars and their weight (majority, minority, fringe), which is necessary to have for an NPOV article.
  • Bellamy has the chapter "Totalitarian Mass Killing", so I do not see why we should not go for a general article, with Communist regimes being a section, or a general mass killings article divided into Capitalist, Communist, and Totalitarian as Bellamy does. Indeed, now that I think about it, Bellamy's work is perfect for my proposal of Mass killings in history. It may well be such article's table of content.
  • 2. State Terror in the Long Nineteenth Century
  • 3. Totalitarian Mass Killing
  • 4. Terror Bombing in the Second World War
  • 5. The Cold War Struggle (1): Capitalist Atrocities
  • 6. The Cold War Struggle (2): Communist Atrocities
  • 7. Atrocities and the 'Golden Age' of Humanitarianism
  • 8. Radical Islamism and the War on Terror
  • I fail to see how you can read Bellamy and come to the conclusion that Communism is a single phenomenon and must be discussed as a new topic. Davide King (talk) 05:15, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
  • And? I already acknowledged it when I said the book places it within the context of the Cold War. My issue has never been if we can discuss mass killings that happened under Communist regimes, my issue has always been how to do that and make it encyclopedic, which is what the AfD tried to rule and said there is no consensus among us. If Bellamy and Valentino are perfectly acceptable sources for the topic of mass killings, can you explain why they cannot be used for Mass killings in history (or a general article about mass killings, a spin off of Mass killing that analyzes the concept in greater details, using summary style for each event, etc.)? Why must we cherry pick chapters about Communism only, and ignore all the others? You said a chapter is sufficient to establish a topic, I have at least two full books about mass killings in history, why is not this proposal preferable? You simply cannot assume space or length a priori, so that is not a good rebuttal, find a better one. Davide King (talk) 14:01, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: I think a symmetry in the Bellamy's book is clearly seen: he groups Cold war perpetrators by camps, and he analyzed atrocities committed by both camps. It should be clear to any good faith logical thinker that Bellamy does not connect Communism with atrocities: he forms two groups of perpetrators, each of which belong to one of opposing camps. Therefore, a proper context here is not Communism, but Cold war.
In general, I find your position non-constructive and disruptive. It is absolutely clear to any good faith user that picking one more source and claiming "My source says this" is totally senseless. As I (and admins panel) noted, we need a detailed source analysis. I already proposed to establish the majority viewpoint by collecting a representative sample of sources and analyzing them. I am expecting to see your thoughts on what other users have already posted at WP:DRNMKUCR, as well as your own ideas. If you will not do that in next few days, I will not consider you as a party of the DRN process, and my voluntary obligation not to take any actions against you will not be in effect any more. Paul Siebert (talk) 17:17, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Re Nug's comment: "an article cannot discuss any debate on the correlations or causes without mentioning the government actions that has led to that debate in the first place. It would be like discussing Causes of World War II without having the article World War II."
The reason there is an article on WWII is that there is academic consensus that the various wars were part of a larger war, viz, WWII. There is no consensus that killings in Stalin's Soviet Union, etc., are part of a pattern of MKuCR.
There was a similar discussion about Jewish Bolshevism, aka Jewish Communism. Some editors argued that the article explained one theory connecting Jews and Communism but there should be an article about the facts behind the theory. Therefore, Jews and Communism was created as a fork. At AfD, I argued that although there was literature about Jewish involvement in Communist movements in different times and places, there was none about the topic as a whole. The article was therefore a POVFORK which implied that Jews had a propensity to become Communists or had a "disproportionate" influence on it.
Nug's reasoning is circular because he begins with the assumption that there is a correlation or causal connection. But there is no consensus for that view in reliable sources, just as there is none for Jews and Communism. This could be an example of apophenia, "the tendency to perceive meaningful connections between unrelated things." Or it could be because the theory precedes the evidence, which is collected to support a predetermined theory.
TFD (talk) 05:13, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Nope, I never said there was a causal connection. Some authors say there is, other say there isn't, that why there is a Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes#Proposed_causes section. But then again you said I "voted against capitalizing Communist even though it would remove ambiguity" when you know very well I never did such a thing and that MOS:ISMCAPS was the reason for not capitalizing per the discussion you participated in at Talk:Mass_killings_under_communist_regimes/Archive_39#Capitalization_of_"Communist". --Nug (talk) 06:24, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
I said "correlation or causal connection." Do you not beleive there is a correlation? TFD (talk) 06:36, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
@Nug: Do you realise that if some authors say there is a causal connection, whereas other say there isn't, the section's title should be not "Proposed causes", but "Discussion of possible causal linkage between mass killings and Communism"?
And, in reality, your description is still desperately incomplete: in reality, some authors see a strong connection between mass killings and Communism, other authors disagree, and another group of authors just ignore this dispute, and prefers to discuss mass killings not in a context of Communism. My preliminary source analysis demonstrates that the last group is an overwhelming majority. Paul Siebert (talk) 19:29, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Okay, by your logic if source analysis reveals that the majority of sources do not discuss the education system in communist countries, we can conclude that the overwhelming majority view is that no education system existed in these countries. That's basically your argument about the "third group" in a nutshell. --Nug (talk) 22:28, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
No. If according to my logic, majority of sources discuss education system in each communist country taken separately, then we can write an article that discuss each country separately, and discuss commonalities in a small section at the very bottom. And that would be pretty much ok, keeping in mind that e.g. Vygotsky's works are discussed in almost all sources not is a context of Mao's China, and not in a context of Marxism. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:35, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
No. Your logic is if we have 10 sources that discuss the education system of a group of communist states, and 40 sources that discuss education system in each communist country separately, then the argument is that commonalities discussed in the 10 sources are a minority viewpoint because the 40 sources that discuss the individual countries make no mention of any commonalities with other communist states. --Nug (talk) 02:45, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
That is not that simple. Let's make a situation even more extreme: we have 5 sources that discuss the education system of a group of communist states, and 500 sources that discuss education system in each communist country separately. However, if majority (or a significant fraction) of those 500 sources cite those 5 sources, we still can speak about some significant commonality or a linkage. If the same were true for mass killings, then the current article (in it's current shape) would be Ok. The problem is that so far my analysis does not confirm that. "Genocide scholars" work in separation from country experts, the latter cite the works of genocide scholars very rarely. And even genocide scholars themselves (e.g. Harff) do not see Communism as an important factor affecting mass killings.
One way of the other, this is becoming fruitless. I propose to switch to a real source analysis at DRNMKUCR and to let this RfC come to some logical end. We have done our part of the job. We could have done that better, but now it is too late. Let's wait for results.
I am expecting to see your posts at DRNMKUCR. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:14, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
Okay, list these 500 sources at DRNMKUCR so that we can analyze them. --Nug (talk) 11:01, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
In the example, we would have an article that compares and contrasts education in communist countries. East Germany for example inherited a well developed education system onto which they imposed their own ideology. Someone reading a brief article does not want to read how East German universities developed in the Middle Ages or how Prussia developed a system that was later imposed on the states of East Germany. If they did, they can go to "Education in Germany" or "Education in East Germany." Basically it would be filled by cut and paste information rather than what the reader wanted to know. TFD (talk) 00:47, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Consider the article Education in the United States. (Education is a state matter in the U.S.) It doesn't have separate sections for each state. It merely points out the commonality and differences between states. TFD (talk) 01:40, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Undue weight given to source

This paper is cited no less than three times in the article, as in the following: "Another common criticism, as articulated by anthropologist and specialist in former European communist regimes Kristen Ghodsee and other scholars, is that the body-counting reflects an anti-communist point of view..." The article describes Ghodsee as a specialist in former communist regimes, however a look at her published work shows a focus on gender studies and Bulgaria, with nothing on the USSR, China, or Cambodia. Given the clear ideological bias of this academic, and the extent to which we are running the magnifying glass over cherry picked sources and domain expertise of actual, widely cited historians, is it really fair that this academic is sourced at all for this article, let alone 11 times? AShalhoub (talk) 22:05, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

I like your approach. However, it is valid only when applied consistently. We can limit ourselves with sources that say "A" and the sources that criticise "A" only in one case: if "A" is a majority viewpoint, and no other significant viewpoints on the subject exists.
The problem with this article is, however, quite different. Thus, Rummel was criticized only by a couple of authors, and none of them performed a global analysis of his "democide" data set. Normally that implies wide acceptance, but... Take a look at such a topic as Soviet Russia history, or at Great Chinese famine. Imagine that you have no preliminary knowledge about that, but you know that there were some political repressions in the Soviet Union under Stalin, and the Great Leap caused a terrible famine in China. With this knowledge in mind, try to find most reputable sources that discuss history of these two events. After that, try to find how the authors estimate the number of victims, what terms they use, and what causes they propose. Finally, try to check how frequently each of them cite Rummel.
All of that would be quite instrumental for understanding of who is cherry-picking and who gives undue weight to which sources. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:19, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
A hint: if you will do a neutral and unbiased source analysis you will find that most country experts essentially ignore Rummel, so both those who made estimates of "global Communist killings" and many of those who criticize them do not express a majority viewpoint, whereas majority scholars just ignore this topic, and they prefer to focus on study of separate countries.--Paul Siebert (talk) 22:26, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
I disagree with mentioning anyone's opinions in text unless their opinions are significant to the topic. For example, I would mention Raphael Lemkin's opinions on genocide because he came up with the concept and is frequently cited. Is this "common criticism" the consensus view in the literature, is it a left-wing view or is it the view of communist apologists? Policy requires us to explain the weight of different opinions. Incidentally saying something is a "common criticism" is a violation of Unsupported attributions. Although we can use that term if it is taken from reliable sources, we cannot make that conclusion based on our understanding of the literature. TFD (talk) 23:10, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
@The Four Deuces: What you say is indisputable but trivial. Now answer the following question: is the opinion of Rudolph Rummel significant to such topic as "Stalinist repressions in the USSR"? If "yes", how do you explain a nearly total lack of support, criticism and even mentioning of his works by major experts in this topic?--Paul Siebert (talk) 23:18, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
No, it is not significant. Furthermore, since he is not an expert on this topic, his writings on it published outside academic publishing are not reliable for facts. TFD (talk) 23:43, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
Rummel’s books Death by government (cited by 1577), Power kills: Democracy as a method of nonviolence (cited by 540), Lethal Politics: Soviet Genocide and Mass Murder Since 1917 (cited by 238) and China's Bloody Century: Genocide and Mass Murder Since 1900 (cited by 190] were all originally published by the academic publishing house Transaction Publishers, with new editions by Francis Taylor. --Nug (talk) 01:51, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
There has been previous discussion of Transaction Publishers. See for example Misplaced Pages:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 54#Pioneers of genocide studies. While their main focus was reprints of post war era social sciences classics, they were a publisher for modern extreme right books, that reputable publishers would avoid, such as books defending racism. So if you are an academic who wants to argue that the black race is inherently violent, the wrong side won the U.S. Civil War or the Communists killed 100 million people, that's the publisher you went to. The company was bought by Taylor and Francis in 1997. After it disappeared as a separate imprint, Taylor and Francis did not publish and new works from Rummel, who turned to self-publication. TFD (talk) 02:40, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Oddly enough the only people seeing an issue with Transaction Publishers (and certainly no mention of anything untoward in the article) at Misplaced Pages:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 54#Pioneers of genocide studies are involved editors who have perviously voted to delete MKuCR, all other uninvolved people say it is perfectly fine. Strange coincidence that. As for Taylor and Francis they certainly have published Rummel since acquiring Transaction Publishers. --Nug (talk) 03:38, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
I think this discussion is senseless. We already had two (or even more) RSN discussion, and we have a consensus that Rummel is generally reliable, his democide theory is seen as a serious contribution, but it contradicts to later works by second generation of genocide scholars. Valentino and especially Mann explicitly disagree with his conclusions. And, more importantly, Rummel is not reliable for figures (except Cambodia). Therefore, yes, you are right about the source in general, but you are not right about some aspects of this source. TFD is not right about the source in general, but we still cannot use Rummel as a source for figures, and we need to discuss Rummel's theory in a context of latter works by other scholars. Paul Siebert (talk) 04:42, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Why are you continuing to discuss Rummel, when this section is about Ghodsee? --Nug (talk) 05:06, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Because too much weight is given in the article to the views of Rummel and few other authors that advocate similar ideas. Actually, the whole article is written from their perspective. Therefore, we need to fix this issue first, and then focus on Ghodsee and similar sources, which are on the opposite side of the opinia spectrum. It doesn't matter (now) whether Ghodsee is a good or bad source, it is not a major article's problem. Later, when we fix the main problem, we will probably think about putting Ghodsee in a proper content (and I cannot rule out a possibility that this source may be completely removed; I have no strong opinion yet, because that is not urgent). Paul Siebert (talk) 06:13, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Dismissing User:AShalhoub's legitimate concern regarding WP:UNDUE usage of Ghodsee and continuing to focus on Rummel after making this commitment: "If you agree to apply policy "even handedly", let's do that. First, White should be deleted as a poor quality tertiary source authored by a non-expert, which duplicates figures from the sources that are already presented in this article. After you self-revert, I am ready to discuss other issues." raises a question about your sincerity. --Nug (talk) 06:44, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
And your post raises a question about your abilities to understand what I write.
I never dismissed any legitimate concern, I just wrote that it is not my priority, because, WP:UNDUE should be primarily applied to Rummel himself. I cannot rule out a possibility that when we change the article's structure to something more neutral, and put Rummel, Courtois etc into a proper context, there will be no need in such sources as Ghodsee at all. Paul Siebert (talk) 14:15, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
That's because the Transaction Publishers was at the time so small that it had very few original volumnes. In fact most if not all of the discussions at RSN were about Rummel. While you may believe theories advanced in their books that blacks have substandard intelligence, that goes against mainstream thought. Basically, it was a a publisher for extremists who couldn't get published anywhere else. But as you say, Nug, you don't see an issue with it. TFD (talk) 04:46, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
No, I said uninvolved editors like User:Jayjg, User:Crum375, User:Jayen466 and User:DGG had no issue with the publisher. --Nug (talk) 05:06, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Transaction also published a book by Ivan Van Sertima who is best known for the obviously fake theory that Amerindian culture was created by Africans. Calling it discredited would give it too much credit. Serious writers cannot be bothered to reply to it, which is similar to Rummel's theories. Usually people who hold minority views don't argue their views are mainstream, they argue that the mainstream is suppressing their views because they are controlled by whomever. Do you think that reputable publishing houses publish racism and pseudohistory? TFD (talk) 06:15, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
This is nonsense, Francis and Taylor still publishes Rummel but not Ivan Van Sertima, so clearly they still find Rummel's work relevant. Do I detect a personal attack in your "Usually people like you...", do you want to refactor that? --Nug (talk) 06:44, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
I don't know what the policy is when they acquire another publishing company. They still have books by Joseph Scotchie. See Neo-Confederacy: A Critical Introduction, p. 40: "Scotchie is a neo-Confederate sympathizer, has been a League of the South member....He has published essays in Southern Review that are hostile toward imigrants." No mainstream academic publishers would publish these books if they were written today. The League of the South incidentally is listed by the SPLC as a neo-confederate hate group. TFD (talk) 14:42, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I agree with that usage of Ghodsee is WP:UNDU and saying something is "common criticism" is a violation of WP:WEASEL. Unfortunately Paul's justifications for ignoring policy with: "However, it is valid only when applied consistently" and "What you say is indisputable but trivial" followed by a digression to Rummel raises questions on whether we can trust Paul Siebert to apply policy even handedly rather than selectively. --Nug (talk) 01:28, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
    @Nug: If you agree to apply policy "even handedly", let's do that. First, White should be deleted as a poor quality tertiary source authored by a non-expert, which duplicates figures from the sources that are already presented in this article. After you self-revert, I am ready to discuss other issues. Paul Siebert (talk) 03:29, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
I don't think Misplaced Pages policy is meant to be transactional but rather an absolute we all have to adhere to. In any case I already reverted nine hours ago after I read this. --Nug (talk) 03:44, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Ops, didn't see it, sorry. I agree that our policy is absolute.--Paul Siebert (talk) 04:20, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I agree this academic seems to be given undue weight in the article. With regards to their 'bias', that doesn't make them an unreliable source although in-text attribution of their views may be appropriate. To be honest, I think on such a contentious article as this on such a politically polarised subject in-text attribution is going to be needed for almost all sources. I also agree that we should make changes on individual merit, not taking an 'all or nothing' approach. Vanteloop (talk) 13:18, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • This section should be called Undue weight given to source because I fail to see how one can read the article, and not see any problem and think Ghodsee (of all sources) is the issue. By the way, everything is attributed (the article is a bunch of "he said, she said", which is not a good approach in writing a good article) because pretty much everything has been recognized as a minority view, and is why I think we should refocus and restructure the topic to something for which we have tertiary sources and a clear weight of sources, but we make no distinction between significant ones and fringe ones. Are not Stephen Hicks, George Watson, and many others also not only undue but even non-experts? If it can be argued that people raising concerns about Transaction Publishers' history of publishing fringe authors and dismiss them because they are critical of this article, it is telling that any source dissenting or criticizing the topic is dismissed as undue (first it was Karlsson for being dismissive of Courtois and Rummel, two core sources), even though it is attributed like everything else and at least has some expertise and publications on Communism. Davide King (talk) 14:11, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Undue weight

Ok, we achieved a consensus with @Nug: that NPOV should be applied even handedly. I take Nug's words not just as mere a declaration, because he demonstrated his good faith by self-reverting his (re)addition of a highly questionable White's book.

Now it is my turn.

I decided to apply WP:DUE to Rummel first.

  • Step 1. Search for mass deaths. Rummel (with impressive 236 citations appears on the first page. Ok, he passes a preliminary step 1.
  • Step 2. Let's see who cites him. To this end, check other authors from the top of the list.

These are all sources that I found at the first two pages of the google scholar search on this topic. I didn't cherry-pick them, and even didn't know the results of my check: I am typing in a real time, I check one source in the list, then I type what I found, and then I move to the next one. I am totally transparent. My preliminary conclusion: Rummel and other sources exist in "parallel universes": they almost do not interfere.

I didn't do the opposite check for an obvious reason: Rummel's books are old, and most sources in this list are more recent, so it is not a surprise that he doesn't cite them.--Paul Siebert (talk) 18:47, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

  • Step 3. Let's check who cites the authors from this list.
  • Ellman (his second article): this list includes such authors as Cormac O Grada, Mark Harrison, Steven Rosefielde, Mike Haynes, Oleg Khlevniuk, Barnett, Stephen Wheatcroft - most of them are experts in Soviet history. It is easy to check that most of those authors cite Ellman's works., so all those scholars are interconnected by a dense networks of cross-references, which demonstrates that they exist "in the same universe" (incontrast to Rummel).
  • Wheatcroft: actually, everybody is welcome to analyse this list using the same scheme. I randomly checked some sources, and they confirm my initial expectations: they cite Ellman, they cite other experts in Soviet Russia, but they do not cite Rummel.
  • (I'll add my analysis of other authors from this list if needed)
  • Step 4. What those authors tell about deaths in the USSR, and what sources do they use? To answer this question, I first looked at this list of sources, and one of them, On Sources: A Note. Author(s): Michael Ellman. Source: Soviet Studies, 1992, Vol. 44, No. 5 (1992), pp. 913-915 seems especially relevant. Although it is old, it is interesting for two reasons. First, the author is acting as an arbiter in the dispute among two prominent scholars, Wheatcroft and Rosefielde, so this source provides us with information about opinia of three authors. Second, Ellman analyses the the relative merits of 'statistical' and 'literary' sources for the study of Soviet history.
In this article, Ellman concludes that literary sources, and, especially, the book by Antonov-Ovseenko (in the latter book he reproduces some figures that he heard when he was a GULAG prisoner) are unreliable sources, and that early estimates of human life losses in the USSR (which relied mostly to literary sources) are unreliable.
Another article by the same author, is a more recent source, and it performs a detailed analysis of human losses in Stalin's era. To the best of my knowledge, these figures (at least, all that relates to GULAG) represent scholarly consensus. I make this conclusion based on the results of my work on the GULAG article. The edits that I made many years ago, and the sources that I added, are still there, and they have not been seriously challenged by other users. Therefore, I may conclude that the sources that I found during the above search procedure are good, and they reflect scholarly consensus. Note, I found those sources "in real time", I didn't cherry-pick them, and this procedure lead me to essentially the same facts and sources that currently represent a consensus view on the history of repressions in the Soviet Union. That means the above search procedure is quite adequate.
  • Step 5. What about Rummel's sources?
Analysis of Ellman's "Soviet Repression Statistics..." shows that the author used a large amount primary and secondary sources about different aspects of Soviet repressive machinery. The full list of sources and endnotes is 7 pages long, so it is impossible to reproduce it here. A significant part of those sources are books, articles, and documents that became available after 1990 ("archival revolution"). Now it is a good time to compare it with Rummel's sources.
Rummel's sources for the USSR can be found here, here, here, here, here, here, here, and here
The problem with these lists is that they provide no full references. I can look only by names, but this, or this is not informative at all. I recognize some names, for example, Nikolay Tolstoy, a post-WWII British author whom Dulic dismissed as extremely unreliable. Next, the name of Antonov-Ovseenko already appeared in this discussion, it is the very same source that is considered by Ellman as non-reiiable (that is actually a hearsay). Similarly, Rummel uses Bukovsky's memoirs, Solzhenitsyn's figures etc as a source for statistics, and all of that is not considered as reliable data by modern authors, such as Ellman and other scholars from his pool. That my claim is totally verifiable: just open the sources that are listed in step ##2,3 (and other sources in that list) and check that by yourself.
Not only Rummel's sources are unreliable, they are outdated. Rummel cites Dyadkin, but that book was published in 1983. Rummel cites Dallin&Nikolaevsky, and I perfectly know that source: it is "David J. Dallin and B. I. Nikolaevsky, Forced Labor in Soviet Russia (New Haven, 1947), p. 13". Just think: it is the source published in 1947!!!
Furthermore, Rummel cites some "census data". Obviously, he cites some old and incomplete data, because more recent data, published by E.M. Andreev, L.E. Darskii & T.L. Kharkova (this source is extensively used by Whaeatcroft, Ellman and others) totally debunk his "democide" estimates: ADK say that demographic losses in the USSR from 1927 to 1946 were about 56 million people, and these losses included 26 million death during WWII, more than ten million birth deficite, migration etc}}. How can all of that be consistent with Rummel's data in table 4a (11,440,000 deaths in 1929-35), table 5 (4,245,000 deaths in 1937-38), table 6 (5,104,000 in 1940-41), table 7 (13,053,000 deaths in 1941-45: I assume he concludes all civilian deaths, including the Holocaust deaths were "Communust democide"?), and table 8 (15,613,000 deaths in 1956-53). It is inconsistent with all available modern data.
I can tell you what was the main source of Rummel's error. If you look at the tables you will see that Rummel (i) dramatically exaggerated the population of GULAG, and (ii) made a totally arbitrary assumption about the death rate. These two blatant errors are responsible for a significant part of his exaggerated figures. I am familiar with this topic, because creation of this table was essentially made by me. I know that some early estimates of GULAG population were unreasonably high, and that modern authors do not consider these figures are reliable. Obviously, the word "modern" cannot be applied to Rummel in that sense.
It is now a scholarly consensus that the number of people who passed through GULAG was 14 million + 4 million in colonies (two years term), and the mortality rate was really high only during short periods of its history. These two blatant errors are sufficient to totally remove Rummel's data and leave it in a footnote as a historical estimate. I would support keeping Rummel because he is popular in blogosphere, so its complete removal may lead to accusations of "bias".
Conclusion
Why should we use such sources as Ghodsee for critique of the views of the authors who share Rummel's ideas? The answer is simple: serious authors ignore Rummel. It is as hard to find serious sources that criticise Rummel as to find serious sources that debunk flat Earth theory.
Your comments are welcome. Participants of the DRN may make their comments at WP:MKUCRSA too, whereas other users are welcome to comment here.--Paul Siebert (talk) 19:09, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

Paul's flawed methodology applied to other authors gets the same results

Paul's methodology is gravely flawed and can be used to "prove" any author is "undue". Let's do the same for Ellman.

  • Step 1. Search for mass deaths. Ellman (with impressive 121 citations appears on the first page. Ok, he passes a preliminary step 1.
  • Step 2. Let's see who cites him. To this end, check other authors from the top of the list.

So by your methodology everyone ignores Ellman his use is "undue" any where in Misplaced Pages. --Nug (talk) 21:29, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

In addition, this is just a preliminary step. The authors whom I site are in a permanent interaction: they take data and arguments from each other, they comment on each other, they belong to some common pool. In contrast, I saw no attempt to discuss Rummel by any of those authors. Paul Siebert (talk) 21:47, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Interesting, thanks to you, I found Rosefielde's review on Rummel's "Lethal politics" among the above search results. Rosefielde finds 10 million collectivization death a quite plausible figure, but that was 1990 Rosefielde! He reconsidered his estimates after "archival revolution" (which Rummel refused to do). In addition, Rosefielde notes serious flaws:
"Specialists of various persuasions however will be dissatisfied with numerous aspects of the work. Rummel relies entirely on English language sources, some of which are of dubious worth. In one instance he cites a Newsweek report of a classified CIA study to support his estimate of post-Stalinist democide. Unfortunately the reporter either misread the primary document, or was misbriefed. As a consequence, Rummel greatly overstates the likely magnitude of democide 1954-87. Similarly, he ignores most of the specialized demographic, jurisprudential and Sovietological literature on the subject which makes his calculations extraneous to the on-going debate. His estimates are not so much erroneous as they are unresponsive to a welter of serious counter-evidence."
Actually, even the 1990 version of Rosefielde confirms my conclusions that I made. Rosefielde was not aware of many facts that we currently know, but he correctly identified the problem. Another important problem is Rummel's indiscriminated approach:
"Sovietologists will also be disappointed that Rummel does not carefully explore the applicability of his thesis to the current situation. Is democide an artifact of immature authoritarian Marxism, or should we anticipate a new wave of mass murder if and when Gorbachev finally capitulates to the right? Are glasnost' (openness), demokratzatsiia (democracy), novoe myshlenie (new thinking), and perestroika (radical economic reform) antidotes, or will democide persist even under a liberalized Soviet Marxist regime? These are profound issues which should not have been overlooked."
Again, Rosefielde correctly notes that Rummel's obsession with numbers and formal aspects makes his "theory" worthless: it has virtually no predictive power.
I think it is obvious from this review why Rummel is essentially ignored by serious historians. Paul Siebert (talk) 22:10, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Actually, that is just a start of the work. If we continue, we will find that there is a huge domain of sources connected by cress-references, where authors discuss each other's findings or use them. I just started this work, but I have a strong impression that Rummel is not a part of the domain that combines Ellman Wheatcroft, Davies, Getty, Alexopoulos, Werth, Graziosi, Khlevniuk etc.--Paul Siebert (talk) 21:55, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
This is precisely what we need to write a NPOV article without OR/SYNTH; sources need to be connected and cross-referenced, and we should use those who do, and not those who operate in a vacuum like Harff and Rummel, even though I personally respect them both and appreciate their scholarly work. The problem is that none of those sources (country specialists) appear to write within the context of this article, so I think TFD is right that we cannot use them,1 which is why I had to rely on Ghodsee and is absurd to consider her undue as things stand. But the problem is not Ghodsee, the problem is that mainstream scholarly sources ignore the sources who write within that context, and genocide scholars are distorted to falsely imply they support Courtois, Malia, and Rummel's thesis, which is the really notable topic but currently fails NPOV and OR/SYNTH because we got the structure totally wrong. As The Four Deuces asked: "Is this 'common criticism' the consensus view in the literature, is it a left-wing view or is it the view of communist apologists?" It is, in fact, the consensus or mainstream view (e.g. scholarly reviews of The Black Book of Communism).2
Notes
1. Again, here comes the contradiction. To solve NPOV issues, we must rely on country experts and mainstream, majority views of each mass killing events (e.g. structure A — using Ó Gráda and Wheatcroft rather than Conquest and Dikötter), and on genocide scholars for the theories (e.g. structure B — some genocide scholars hold more weight than other); however, scholarly sources about A write within the context of each country, scholarly sources B write within the context of global Communism (though majority of them limit themselves to Stalin, Mao, and Pol Pot). By merging the two, we are committing OR/SYNTH, falsely implying they rely on, and support from, each other.
2. The problem is that there is no literature for what we currently do (as noted by Aquillion, "such an amalgamation (as we have currently) effectively uses the list from A as synthesis to support the arguments presented in B; it's an inherently non-neutral article", which is also what TFD and Siebert have been saying for years, e.g. this article tries to prove Courtois', Malia's, and Rummel's thesis, hence Ghodsee appears as criticism, when it is simply a mainstream view (in regards to body-counting, especially Communism) but there are no better sources because they ignore the topic as currently structure. As noted by Siebert, this article does not even present a NPOV summary of the mass killing events according to majority scholarly sources and specialists, it treats them as death toll events.3
3. Rather than trying to explain the events when we discuss them, what happened, why (which does not necessarily imply communism), and what is to be learned from it, we put death tolls. This is why I think TFD suggested to name it Victims of Communism because that is what we do; we do not summarize the events, we treat them as death toll events/communism as the main cause, and since we put an overemphasis on ideology and generalize and oversimplify too much (this is not surprising considering the level of sources currently used, all representing minority views), we are essentially following the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation's narrative as mainstream and majority view, rather than disputed (e.g. on scientific and methodological grounds, not that many people were indeed victims of the system, which is not disputed or denied) and controversial (e.g. "Advocating the cause of the victims of Communism" in The Criminalisation of Communism in the European Political Space after the Cold War).
Davide King (talk) 22:44, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
If it was renamed "Victims of Communism," then we could concentrate more on Rummel because he was a member of the National Advisory Council of the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation, along with Robert Conquest, Bob Dole, Jack Kemp, Richard Pipes and others. Rummel was possibly the first to come up with the the over 100 million victims estimate in his 1993 unpublished essay "HOW MANY DID COMMUNIST REGIMES MURDER?" The Black Book was not published until 1997. And then there would be no need to cite authors who don't connect mass killings to Communism. TFD (talk) 23:31, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
The "Victims of Communism" article will become a loose collection of facts or events that were described as "victims of Communism" by one reliable source. That article will be an NPOV nightmare. And we don't need to concentrate on Rummel, for he and his democide already have their own articles.
Actually, I propose to stay focused. This section must answer the question: "What should we do with Rummel as a source?". --Paul Siebert (talk) 00:02, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
In regards to "a loose collection of facts or events that were described as 'victims of Communism' by one reliable source", that would be a clear violation of both our policies and guidelines, and the structure, since TFD and I advocate such renaming only for B, which would not entail summarizing or describing the events, so I am not too worried about that. We may distinguish between the popular press views (e.g. Courtois, Malia, and Rummel's thesis popular there — Communism as main cause) and the scholarly views (e.g. Valentino and other scholars who discuss Communism and mass killings as correlations and theories, not as events, which are more nuanced — it is more complicated than simply blaming communism, or communism as a whole rather than authoritarianism or one particular current). In regards to Rummel, he is due only for B but we should cite secondary coverage of him. Davide King (talk) 01:13, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I think you guys get it wrong. There is actually a consensus of mainstream academic sources (many of which you just cited above) that all these deaths (in Gulag, during the Holodomor, Red Terror, Cultural revolution, etc.) were a result of the existing political systems. This is something articulated in the Black Book of Communism and in a lot of other books and articles by mainstream researches in this field. Are you saying these deaths were NOT a results of the communist political system? Which sources make such claim? Yes, perhaps one can find a bunch of revisionist historians like Zhukov, Grover Furr, Arch Getty etc., but they would be in minority here. Do not push WP:GEVAL. My very best wishes (talk) 02:40, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
If this consensus is so strong then why is the closed circle of the BBoC (and other works by the same authors) and Rummel all anyone can point too? If this consensus was as strong as you claim it is then we wouldn't be here. If everyone agrees on this, then go ahead and prove it. BSMRD (talk) 02:45, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
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