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== Article contradicts its self == | |||
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in the 3rd paragraph of the article introduction it says 'medium-grain rice is stickier, and is used for sweet dishes, and in Italy for risotto; and sticky short-grain rice is used in Japanese sushi as it keeps its shape when cooked.' | |||
It says that risotto is medium grain, and sushi is short grain. | |||
Under Food > Eating it says 'Short-grain rices include Italian Arborio rice for risotto. Medium-grain rices include Japanese sushi rice, which is slightly sticky.' | |||
It says that risotto is short grain, and that sushi is medium grain. ] (]) 10:48, 24 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: Fixed: rewrote the 'Eating qualities' section from a better source. ] (]) 11:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Lede == | |||
Hi, @], I did go through the body of the article before I started making cuts to the lede. | |||
'''“Domesticated”''' | |||
It is absolutely redundant to mention that the grain three billion people eat is the domesticated variety. Because obviously something that widespread would become domesticated. Not to say that talking about rice’s domestication is redudant. Just that the lede is not the place for superfluous details like that the most widely consumed crops is in fact domesticated.<small>edit made by User:Showerlemon 08:42, 2 June 2024 </small> | |||
: No, it's absolutely necessary to mention, right up front, that this is a major domesticated grain. Since Misplaced Pages articles are required to stand alone, it is right that a cereal article states in terms that the plant has been domesticated: readers must not be expected to navigate to another article (which isn't even named in your version!) in order to discover key facts. People eat a variety of wild and semi-wild cereals, and the first farmers ate only undomesticated crops for some thousands of years before the plants could be said to have been domesticated, so it's very far from redundant. And by the way, please sign your posts. ] (]) 08:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== Second sentence === | |||
In a similar vein, I don’t agree with you reverting back | |||
{{blockquote|The seed of the grass species '']'' (Asian rice)—or, much less commonly, '']'' (African rice)—it was domesticated in ] some 13,500 to 8,200 years ago; African rice was domesticated in Africa about 3,000 years ago}} | |||
the “it” is talking about Asian rice since I put the part about African rice in its own subclause. I don’t think anyone would mix those two up from how I phrased it.<small>edit made by User:Showerlemon 08:42, 2 June 2024 </small> | |||
: People who have English as a second or third language can readily be confused by unclear wording, and even native speakers can stumble over poorly-written sentences. Our goal is to be as clear as possible, not to try to get away with as much as possible. ] (]) 08:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
:check the origin of rice in "Archaeology: Theories, Methods and Practice 2004" | |||
:the oldest rices about 13,500 years ago samples were found at sorori of South Korea not China. ] (]) 23:05, 6 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: Um, we go by recent, reliably-cited sources. The source in the History section is from 2022, and it states unequivocally that rice was domesticated in China, probably in the Yangtze valley. ] (]) 06:57, 7 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== “the staple food” === | |||
I took an issue with “the staple food”, because using the definite article gives the impression that people who eat rice ''only'' eat rice as their staple. It’s might be a personal thing, but I felt saying “a staple food” seemed clearer{{--}}since people eating rice, also probably eat a lot of other staples in their diets? Also has the benefit of, “Rice is a cereal and staple food…..”, sounding a lot sharper by virtue of being terser. | |||
: Terseness is not the goal; clarity is. You are totally allowed to have your own way of writing, but Misplaced Pages articles need to be written for a wide audience. The definite article is required in British English (and in Commonwealth English), so it's mandatory in this article. ] (]) 08:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Austronesian agriculture == | |||
That's the problem with splitting off articles and leaving inadequate summaries behind. See ]. <small>]</small><span style="font-size:medium;font-family:times new roman;">†</span><small>]</small> 15:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{u|Chidgk1}} - is your recent addition ideally worded? I've got a couple of slight concerns. First, we're saying that it's the ''plant'' that emits most gases. Would it not be more accurate to say that its ''production'' produces more than for any other plant? I also interpret that source as indicating that this is in total, rather than per unit weight or per calorie or whatever. More people grow and eat rice than wheat, one would expect the emissions from production to be higher. We should be clear on this point (perhaps by going to the Xu et al paper that the Guardian is using as a source.) ]] 12:38, 14 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The fact remains that ]. ]] 15:42, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{u|Girth Summit}} Yes you are right we need to be clear. Ah I thought I could only see Xu abstract but it seems the whole thing is public - taking a look and hope to cite it directly if you don't first. I doubt any more words should be added to the lead otherwise it would be undue weight, but feel free to clarify the body as my text is probably not the best.] (]) 13:40, 14 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Then I shall add it.-- <small>]</small><span style="font-size:medium;font-family:times new roman;">†</span><small>]</small> 15:46, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
== "Highly undesirable repetition" == | |||
::{{u|Girth Summit}} Cited Xu et al and attempted to be clear - no doubt you or others can improve further. ] (]) 14:00, 14 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Thanks for being so amenable. I've tweaked the wording slightly, feel free to fiddle if you think I've gone too far. Cheers ]] 19:17, 15 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
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:::: Just letting you know: The first paragraph of the section on "climate change" is now transcribed to ], the second para is transcribed to ]. More content could still be added (unless this kind of information is in another sub-article that I haven't found yet?). ] (]) 09:33, 11 March 2022 (UTC) | |||
Any reason on why you're keeping it vague by just saying it was "domesticated in China", without saying who did the domestication? ] isn't the same thing as modern China. The fact that rice centers in the Neolithic are associated with these cultures are not in question. <small>]</small><span style="font-size:medium;font-family:times new roman;">†</span><small>]</small> 16:49, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Shouldn't this paragraph also indicate the Greenhouse gas emission per unit weight, for fair comparison? Skimming through the paragraph quickly can make readers think that rice is only half as problematic as beef when it comes to greenhouse gas emissions. | |||
:Poore & Nemecek (2018) report 50 kgCO2eq for 100g of protein for beef. And in supplementary material, that 1kg of beef is equivalent to 200g of proteins. Which gives us 100 kgCO2eq/kg | |||
:For rice, they report 1.2 kgCO2eq for 1000 Kcal. And in supplementary material, that 1kg of rice is equivalent to 3685 kcal. Which gives us 4.4 kgCO2eq/kg. | |||
:Therefore, beef seems to emit ~23 times more greenhouse gas per unit of weight. | |||
:Poore, J., & Nemecek, T. (2018). Reducing food’s environmental impacts through producers and consumers. Science, 360(6392), 987-992. ] (]) 19:09, 6 April 2023 (UTC) | |||
: Um, we do not want to say that rice was domesticated in the Yangtze basin twice, which the article now does after your edits. You have been reverted by two other editors, which might take a bit of explaining. Further, since there is a "main" article which covers this section, we don't need to "keep a dog and bark ourselves" - that's the job of the other article. It'd be much appreciated if you could edit down the material you have copied-and-pasted (without attribution) to say the minimum of essential points just once. Many thanks. ] (]) 16:55, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
== reflist "Liu" == | |||
I cannot see a link for the reference to the article "Rice feeds more than half the world's population" - as far as I'm concerned, there is no such article. ] (]) 10:45, 23 April 2023 (UTC)LeetToTheBeatMakeItRoar | |||
:Thanks for pointing this out. It looks like someone's attempts to tidy the cites last year resulted in the reference to "Novel Insights into Rice Innate Immunity Against Bacterial and Fungal Pathogens" being totally removed, which made everything citing it effectively meaningless. I've rescued it and put it back in. The cites using this as a reference all need to be fixed so that they are in line with all the other cites. But at least they're all listed together now where they make some sense. --] <sup>]</sup> 17:07, 23 April 2023 (UTC) | |||
::I've merged it with the first sentence. I do not see the repetition with specifically identifying which Neolithic cultures did the domestication and where in the Yangtze. That's pretty important information. Just saying "domesticated in the Yangtze in China" does not give any detail at all, and misleadingly makes it seem like rice was a Sino-Tibetan domesticate. Isn't that the reason why you reverted my categorization earlier? | |||
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:: with much more detail, before it was split off. I do not need to attribute myself.-- <small>]</small><span style="font-size:medium;font-family:times new roman;">†</span><small>]</small> 17:01, 19 June 2024 (UTC)-- <small>]</small><span style="font-size:medium;font-family:times new roman;">†</span><small>]</small> 17:07, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
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::: Thanks for the explanation, which would have come much better before you started reverting everyone and we could have reached a sensible consensus. Certainly the section needs to be brief: the longer, the worse is the maxim when there is a lengthy subsidiary article. ] (]) 17:11, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
== ] removal == | |||
::::It's as brief as it can be, I think. Pretty much just saying who did it. Where. And where it spread and when.-- <small>]</small><span style="font-size:medium;font-family:times new roman;">†</span><small>]</small> 17:14, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
Hello {{ping|Zefr}} In your most recent article damaging edit you removed ], the ] and ] as {{tq|non-notable sources}}. How do we stop you from doing this? ] (]) 19:54, 22 July 2023 (UTC) | |||
::::: Many thanks. ] (]) 18:22, 19 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
:1) The Consumer Reports source was 11 years out of date and is not a good secondary source for an article on rice constituents. A better reference for potential arsenic intake from rice in US states would be from or as applicable; 2) the IRRI is sourced (and linked) several times in the article, so is not needed as an external link - read ]; 3) Talbot is listed among many authors in cited in the article. What purpose is served to a general reader of the rice article by linking his name individually? | |||
: was justified to rid the article of your '''obsessive use of the '']'' keys''', particularly for references and even for acronyms, as evident in many of the articles you edit. The ] guidelines are clear, but apparently you do not see or understand them: "''A good question to ask yourself is whether reading the article you're about to link to would help someone understand the article you are linking from"'' and ''"<u>The purpose of linking is to clarify and to provide reasonable navigation opportunities, not to emphasize a particular word. Do not link solely to draw attention to certain words or ideas, or as a mark of respect.</u>"'' What purpose is served to a general reader of the rice article by so much of your redlinking to publishers or locations? | |||
:] says: ''"Red links ... cannot be excessive. Editors who add excessive red links ... are expected to actively work on building those articles, or the links may be removed."'' I do not see you building articles for the hundreds of unnecessary redlinks you added to the rice article and many others. | |||
:Next time you feel compelled to tap '']'' while editing, remind yourself of the MOS guidelines. ] (]) 00:33, 23 July 2023 (UTC) | |||
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Article contradicts its self
in the 3rd paragraph of the article introduction it says 'medium-grain rice is stickier, and is used for sweet dishes, and in Italy for risotto; and sticky short-grain rice is used in Japanese sushi as it keeps its shape when cooked.'
It says that risotto is medium grain, and sushi is short grain.
Under Food > Eating it says 'Short-grain rices include Italian Arborio rice for risotto. Medium-grain rices include Japanese sushi rice, which is slightly sticky.'
It says that risotto is short grain, and that sushi is medium grain. 5.133.46.201 (talk) 10:48, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed: rewrote the 'Eating qualities' section from a better source. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Lede
Hi, @Chiswick Chap, I did go through the body of the article before I started making cuts to the lede.
“Domesticated”
It is absolutely redundant to mention that the grain three billion people eat is the domesticated variety. Because obviously something that widespread would become domesticated. Not to say that talking about rice’s domestication is redudant. Just that the lede is not the place for superfluous details like that the most widely consumed crops is in fact domesticated.edit made by User:Showerlemon 08:42, 2 June 2024
- No, it's absolutely necessary to mention, right up front, that this is a major domesticated grain. Since Misplaced Pages articles are required to stand alone, it is right that a cereal article states in terms that the plant has been domesticated: readers must not be expected to navigate to another article (which isn't even named in your version!) in order to discover key facts. People eat a variety of wild and semi-wild cereals, and the first farmers ate only undomesticated crops for some thousands of years before the plants could be said to have been domesticated, so it's very far from redundant. And by the way, please sign your posts. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Second sentence
In a similar vein, I don’t agree with you reverting back
The seed of the grass species Oryza sativa (Asian rice)—or, much less commonly, O. glaberrima (African rice)—it was domesticated in China some 13,500 to 8,200 years ago; African rice was domesticated in Africa about 3,000 years ago
the “it” is talking about Asian rice since I put the part about African rice in its own subclause. I don’t think anyone would mix those two up from how I phrased it.edit made by User:Showerlemon 08:42, 2 June 2024
- People who have English as a second or third language can readily be confused by unclear wording, and even native speakers can stumble over poorly-written sentences. Our goal is to be as clear as possible, not to try to get away with as much as possible. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- check the origin of rice in "Archaeology: Theories, Methods and Practice 2004"
- the oldest rices about 13,500 years ago samples were found at sorori of South Korea not China. 165.229.105.239 (talk) 23:05, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- Um, we go by recent, reliably-cited sources. The source in the History section is from 2022, and it states unequivocally that rice was domesticated in China, probably in the Yangtze valley. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:57, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
“the staple food”
I took an issue with “the staple food”, because using the definite article gives the impression that people who eat rice only eat rice as their staple. It’s might be a personal thing, but I felt saying “a staple food” seemed clearer—since people eating rice, also probably eat a lot of other staples in their diets? Also has the benefit of, “Rice is a cereal and staple food…..”, sounding a lot sharper by virtue of being terser.
- Terseness is not the goal; clarity is. You are totally allowed to have your own way of writing, but Misplaced Pages articles need to be written for a wide audience. The definite article is required in British English (and in Commonwealth English), so it's mandatory in this article. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:52, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Austronesian agriculture
That's the problem with splitting off articles and leaving inadequate summaries behind. See History of rice cultivation. OBSIDIAN†SOUL 15:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- The fact remains that articles must actually contain information that explicitly merits the categorization in question. Remsense诉 15:42, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- Then I shall add it.-- OBSIDIAN†SOUL 15:46, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
"Highly undesirable repetition"
Any reason on why you're keeping it vague by just saying it was "domesticated in China", without saying who did the domestication? Neolithic China isn't the same thing as modern China. The fact that rice centers in the Neolithic are associated with these cultures are not in question. OBSIDIAN†SOUL 16:49, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- Um, we do not want to say that rice was domesticated in the Yangtze basin twice, which the article now does after your edits. You have been reverted by two other editors, which might take a bit of explaining. Further, since there is a "main" article which covers this section, we don't need to "keep a dog and bark ourselves" - that's the job of the other article. It'd be much appreciated if you could edit down the material you have copied-and-pasted (without attribution) to say the minimum of essential points just once. Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:55, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- I've merged it with the first sentence. I do not see the repetition with specifically identifying which Neolithic cultures did the domestication and where in the Yangtze. That's pretty important information. Just saying "domesticated in the Yangtze in China" does not give any detail at all, and misleadingly makes it seem like rice was a Sino-Tibetan domesticate. Isn't that the reason why you reverted my categorization earlier?
- I expanded this section a very long time ago with much more detail, before it was split off. I do not need to attribute myself.-- OBSIDIAN†SOUL 17:01, 19 June 2024 (UTC)-- OBSIDIAN†SOUL 17:07, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the explanation, which would have come much better before you started reverting everyone and we could have reached a sensible consensus. Certainly the section needs to be brief: the longer, the worse is the maxim when there is a lengthy subsidiary article. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:11, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- It's as brief as it can be, I think. Pretty much just saying who did it. Where. And where it spread and when.-- OBSIDIAN†SOUL 17:14, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:22, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
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