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== Wrong location referenced for airport and crash site. == | |||
==Final report== | |||
The AAIB final report into the accident will be . This has been confirmed by local TV news. ] (]) 18:15, 22 February 2017 (UTC) | |||
:AAIB now saying the report will be published 3 March. ] (]) 12:13, 2 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
::I've read the report in full. Although pilot error is given as the primary cause, there are underlying factors including the airworthiness of the aircraft, CAA oversight of the airshow organizers and maintainers of the aircraft and other factors. Maybe best to discuss here first before adding to the article. ] (]) 16:39, 3 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::""The aircraft crashed because at the top of its aerobatic manoeuvre it was too low to complete it."" - BBC news item on AAIB report here: <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 11:03, 4 March 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
::::95.149... yes, noted and covered in article already. | |||
::::OK, been digesting the report. Things I think worth mentioning are the the initial climb in the loop was not performed at full throttle, AAIB unable to determine whether or not the condition of the fuel pump diaphragm was a contributory factor or not. Pilot had not practiced escape manoeuvres. A/C permit to fly validation was not legal, and had not been since 2010. Method of renewing Display Authority on different type of a/c. Possibly worth mentioning the ejector seat issues, and tip tanks being made of phenolic asbestos thus hazardous to first responders. ] (]) 19:38, 4 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::::All good points. Agree. ] (]) 21:58, 4 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::::If I can contribute to this "brainstorming" session, what I found the most striking aspect of the report is the way the AAIB draws a distinction between cause of the accident (pilot error) and severity of the outcome (imperfect organisation). ] (]) 13:59, 6 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
== Rename? == | |||
How has this escalated from a "crash" to a "disaster"? Also, in the past we used to discuss renames ''first''.] (]) 15:45, 4 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Fair question. I see that ] is still called just a "crash", although it killed 31. ] (]) 15:48, 4 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
::I hate it; I think it should have been discussed first; I would prefer it to return to "crash". I won't lose sleep over it but I still really do not like it. ] (]) 20:33, 5 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::I see this has now been moved by ], but without any further discussion. ] (]) 19:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::{{ping|Martinevans123}} What else do we need to discuss? This incident produced a similar amount of fatalities as the ], ] and ], all under similar titles. Even the ] with 31 fatalities falls under a similar title. This incident doesn't come anywhere close to the number of casualties produced by the Ramstein or Sknyliv air show disasters, so it seems like a relatively uncontroversial move. ] (]) 19:19, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::::Yes, I can't disagree. I just expected to see an input here before it actually happened! I'm not sure who actually moved to "disaster" and when, are you? I see you were last here in August 2015. Thanks. ] (]) 19:23, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::::+1 for the renaming, also because now the title contains the year. --] (]) 19:32, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::::::{{ping|Martinevans123}}Well I usually do add my input on the talk page before a decision is made when it comes to moving a page, however I figured that since no one had replied to this section for a while that there was already a good consensus. As for the user who moved the page to "disaster", it seems to be ] on November 4, 2017, in ] (]) 19:35, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Thanks, for that. Yes, it was more as a courtesy to ], really. I see that George was editing only yesterday, so maybe he will give his input. ] (]) 19:44, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I moved it under what was at the time ] (having waited at least a year I think it was after the crash to do so to let it settle) and hence thought it would be uncontroversial, but looking at Google results now the "crash" name seems to have re-emerged as the more common name so if you feel it would be better to move it back then I don't have any opposition to this. ] (]) 21:24, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::: ] that, George <small>(... although not as romantic as ], of course).</small> ] (]) 21:31, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Conflict of interest - I love the rename but think we should probably have discussed it here first! <small>Tut, what a big old hypocrite I am!</small> Cheers ] (]) 20:19, 18 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
== Prosecution == | |||
Can we decide which of these statements is true. | |||
* "The trial of Hill began (...) on 19 April 2018". | |||
* "The trial started on 15 May". | |||
* "The trial began as scheduled on 14 January". | |||
And delete the two that aren't. ] (]) 07:30, 17 January 2019 (UTC) | |||
:They are all true. The first is the date of the hearing at the Magistrates Court; the second is the start of the main hearing before it was adjourned. The third is the start after the adjournment. ] (]) 13:18, 17 January 2019 (UTC) | |||
== Pilot negligence? == | |||
There is No mention of Lancing even though the airport and the crash were both in lancing not Shoreham. Tried editing but removed. ] (]) 09:25, 19 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
Would this be classed as pilot negligence? From what I’m seeing on the news it sure does sound like it. | |||
Lancing is listed as the location of the airport in other wiki pages but not mentioned here https://en.m.wikipedia.org/Brighton_City_Airport ] (]) 09:40, 19 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=9vyzS5rp7M4 | |||
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==Did you know nomination== | |||
] (]) 17:33, 1 February 2019 (UTC) | |||
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==Potential edit war== | |||
:There is currently a criminal trial underway to determine the answer to exactly that question. <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">]</span> (<span class="nickname">Pigsonthewing</span>); ]; ]</span> 19:53, 1 February 2019 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|ED12345555|Toddy1}} we're not going to ] over whether or not the United Kingdom is linked in the lede, are we. It would be a pity to have to open my banhammer case this side of Xmas. ] (]) 06:50, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:The defense case seems to rest on the claim that Hill was incapacitated, or at least impaired, by the g-forces of the manoeuvre. A brief news clip, like that ITV snippet, can't properly examine the exact timeline of those g-forces (which may or may not have been accurately recorded for later scrutiny) nor with the issue of whether the incapacitation was recklessly, or unintentionally, self-inflicted. ] (]) 23:50, 1 February 2019 (UTC) |
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Wrong location referenced for airport and crash site.
There is No mention of Lancing even though the airport and the crash were both in lancing not Shoreham. Tried editing but removed. 86.16.123.86 (talk) 09:25, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
Lancing is listed as the location of the airport in other wiki pages but not mentioned here https://en.m.wikipedia.org/Brighton_City_Airport PrinceAndrewoops (talk) 09:40, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Trains2050 (talk · contribs) 14:15, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): I am very happy with spelling and grammar. Prose is quite clear and does not use a lot of technical language and understandable to a broad audience. However can you please rephrase this line: Hill, the pilot, was thrown clear of the aircraft in his ejection seat, which was live when the aircraft departed from North Weald.
- b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): I am very happy with spelling and grammar. Prose is quite clear and does not use a lot of technical language and understandable to a broad audience. However can you please rephrase this line: Hill, the pilot, was thrown clear of the aircraft in his ejection seat, which was live when the aircraft departed from North Weald.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- I run the article through checks. Both automatic and manual, chance of plagiarism is very low.
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
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- Pass/fail:
- On hold. Great article, please can you just change the line that I stated above. Trains2050 (talk) 17:09, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Trains2050: Reworded, and clarified that the live seat posed an additional danger to rescuers. Mjroots (talk) 17:21, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Mjroots: Thanks so much for making these changes! After reviewing the criteria, I am confident that no further changes are needed so I am passing this article. Thanks again for your cooperation during theis review. Have a great day! Trains2050 (talk) 17:30, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Trains2050: and thank you for the review! Mjroots (talk) 17:47, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Mjroots: Thanks so much for making these changes! After reviewing the criteria, I am confident that no further changes are needed so I am passing this article. Thanks again for your cooperation during theis review. Have a great day! Trains2050 (talk) 17:30, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Trains2050: Reworded, and clarified that the live seat posed an additional danger to rescuers. Mjroots (talk) 17:21, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- On hold. Great article, please can you just change the line that I stated above. Trains2050 (talk) 17:09, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Misplaced Pages talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Theleekycauldron (talk) 03:49, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
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- ... that the 2015 Shoreham Airshow crash was the United Kingdom's deadliest airshow disaster since the 1952 Farnborough Airshow crash? Source: https://archive.today/20150823211045/http://tvnewsroom.org/newslines/world/shoreham-airshow-crash-pilot-in-critical-condition-97709/
- ALT1: ... that no Shoreham Airshow has either taken place or been announced since the 2015 Shoreham Airshow crash? Source: http://www.shorehamairshow.co.uk/ , https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-35364481 , http://www.theargus.co.uk/news/15045789.Organisers_reveal_Shoreham_Airshow_will_not_return_in_2017/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Nathaniel H. Gates
Improved to Good Article status by Mjroots (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 20:44, 11 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/2015 Shoreham Airshow crash; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Comment - another angle for a hook is the 7 years it took for the inquest to take place. Mjroots (talk) 16:10, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
- Review underway... Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 21:43, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
- The article, which was started on the date of the crash, was nominated on 8 March 2023, the date it was approved as a Good Article.
- I have reviewed the Good Article review, and all seems to be in order.
- Both hooks are accurate and are supported by various reliable sources.
- Good-quality sources are used throughout. The quality of the prose is also good.
- Unfortunately, the article was featured in the prose section of the "On this day" section of the Main Page on 22 August 2022 (link), which makes it ineligible for DYK on the face of it (based on DYK criterion 1c). A shame, as this is clearly a high-quality and important article which would benefit from appearing again on the Main Page, especially since significant further developments have happened since August 2022 in relation to the inquest. I wonder if we could invoke WP:IAR in view of this...?
Let's get some more thoughts on this from experienced DYK personnel. I would be happy to support the article appearing on DYK despite its appearance at "On This Day" within the last year, in view of the updates which have happened since then. In its present state the article and both hooks are suitable for DYK except for this issue. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 22:11, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Onegreatjoke: would you like to make a request for an IAR exemption at WT:DYK? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 21:32, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Theleekycauldron: Nah, just withdraw. When I nominated this I didn't realize it had been on OTD last year. I think I saw that it appeared in 2020 and thought that it was okay without realizing that it appeared last year. Onegreatjoke (talk) 02:38, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
Potential edit war
@ED12345555 and Toddy1: we're not going to edit war over whether or not the United Kingdom is linked in the lede, are we. It would be a pity to have to open my banhammer case this side of Xmas. Mjroots (talk) 06:50, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
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