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== Semi-protected edit request on 2 April 2023 ==
== Other terms related to major depressive disorder/episodes. ==


{{Edit semi-protected|Major depressive disorder|answered=yes}}
I have found other terms related to major depressive disorder/episodes. I thought that they could be included in this article to increase the scope of MDD but somebody says that none of them belong here and that the article is already too long, even though there are articles that are even longer . The list of other terms are:
This article must be flagged as having a geopolitical bias. It needs to be globalized beyond the United States and other English speaking countries or Europe. ] (]) 20:34, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
:] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a ] and provide a ] if appropriate.<!-- Template:ESp --> ] (]) 22:48, 2 April 2023 (UTC)


== Sourcing of Biomedical Content ==
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You removed this: Research has found that unhappily married couples are at 3–25 times the risk of developing clinical depression.<ref>{{Cite web |last=Tatiana D. Gray, Matt Hawrilenko, and James V. Cordova |date=2019 |title=Randomized Controlled Trial of the Marriage Checkup: Depression Outcomes |url=https://arammu.com/assets/research/MC%20Depression%20Outcomes.pdf}}</ref><ref>{{Cite journal |last=Fink |first=Brandi C. |last2=Shapiro |first2=Alyson F. |date=March 2013 |title=Coping Mediates the Association Between Marital Instability and Depression, but Not Marital Satisfaction and Depression |url=https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4096140/ |journal=Couple & family psychology |volume=2 |issue=1 |pages=1–13 |doi=10.1037/a0031763 |issn=2160-4096 |pmc=4096140 |pmid=25032063}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Maria R. Goldfarb & Gilles Trudel |date=2019 |title=Marital quality and depression: a review |url=https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/ref/10.1080/01494929.2019.1610136?scroll=top}}</ref>
Do you think these terms should be included in this article? ] (]) 18:45, 22 July 2022 (UTC)


in favor of this: Couples that are unhappily married have up to 25 times the risk of developing clinical depression.<ref>{{cite journal |vauthors= Goldfarb MR, Trudel G |date= May 6, 2019|title= Marital quality and depression: a review |journal= Marriage & Family Review |publisher= Routledge: Taylor & Francis Group|volume= 55 |issue= 8 |pages= 737–763 |doi= 10.1080/01494929.2019.1610136 }} Citing among others: {{cite journal |vauthors=Weissman MM |title=Advances in psychiatric epidemiology: rates and risks for major depression |journal=Am J Public Health |volume=77 |issue=4 |pages=445–51 |date=April 1987 |pmid=3826462 |pmc=1646931 |doi=10.2105/ajph.77.4.445 }}</ref>
In reply to {{ping|zsteve21}}


That doesn't make sense.
* ] - esoteric. Term not in general use at all, so no.
* ] - short para included in article
* ] - is mainly a historical term not used any more. Overlaps with MDD. Target page needs review
* ] - is discussed already in article
* ] - is discussed already in article


You also removed: Should you have experienced four or more ], you're 3.2 to 4.0 times more likely to suffer from depression.<ref name="Anda20062">{{cite journal |display-authors=6 |vauthors=Anda RF, Felitti VJ, Bremner JD, Walker JD, Whitfield C, Perry BD, Dube SR, Giles WH |date=April 2006 |title=The enduring effects of abuse and related adverse experiences in childhood. A convergence of evidence from neurobiology and epidemiology |journal=European Archives of Psychiatry and Clinical Neuroscience |volume=256 |issue=3 |pages=174–186 |doi=10.1007/s00406-005-0624-4 |pmc=3232061 |pmid=16311898}}</ref>
] (] '''·''' ]) 02:57, 15 September 2022 (UTC)


claiming it was referenced elsewhere, and more recently. The description of ACEs in the article does not say 3.2 to 4. And I find your issue about the publication date very vague. ] (]) 15:47, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
== FA review needed ==
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These issues have not been addressed. ] (]) 15:46, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
: We discussed these at length on your talk page; once you've processed everything there, we can continue (I'll be away from computer for several hours). ] (]) 16:00, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
::We assuredly did not bring up ACEs even once. And why you would bring back the "bad" statement after that lengthy discussion about how everything had to be secondary source, with review articles is beyond me. ] (]) 16:10, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
:::What we've talked about at your user talk is information included in these links:
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::: The information about unhappy marriages, as we discussed, needs secondary sourcing (it now has that, and is in the article using the ]). {{pb}} I don't know what the "bad" statement is. Perhaps ] and ] will help; this is a broad overview article that has been community vetted, and we don't need to provide excess detail on well-established items like childhood adversity; such detail can probably find a home in a different article. We don't , and we don't have to repeat detail in a higher level article that may be covered in a sub-article. In terms of how much detail to include, we are governed by ] (in this case, of the highest quality recent secondary sources). ] (]) 19:07, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
::::A statement like "four ACEs" increase the risk of depression 3.2 to 4.0 times is relevant to many pages like Major depressive disorder, Family disruption, or Happiness. It's not undue weight. Personally, I find the severity of the increase difficult to spot, even on the Adverse childhood experiences page.
::::I do not agree with rephrasing all those findings into "an unhappy marriage increases the risk of depression." That's just common sense. People are going to fill in the blank thinking it's +5%, or something, not +200% or +2400% times. It's just a bad way of conveying information
::::I referred to this edit: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Major_depressive_disorder&diff=1186959470&oldid=1186959348 in which you changed 3-25 to "up to 25" and pointed the references to Weissman (1987) via Goldfarb after you told me that you thought that the 25 times study was old.
::::You then proceeded to remove "25 times in its entirety," in an a subsequent edit described as " →‎Environmental: general"
::::https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Major_depressive_disorder&diff=1186984595&oldid=1186959470 ] (]) 13:45, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
:::::{{u|Lau737}} could you please read ] and ]? Following talk page guidelines will make your posts easier for others to work through. {{pb}} As per our discussion on your talk, I'm still waiting for a secondary source on the 3 to 25 (we have the 25 at Goldfarb), so I generalized the whole thing pending that. If you can provide a secondary source, I agree that expressing a range up to 25 is more useful. {{pb}} Similar on the childhood adverse events: if you have more than a 15-year-old primary study for the content, "Should you have experienced four or more adverse childhood experiences, you're 3.2 to 4.0 times more likely to suffer from depression" ({{PMID|16311898}}), more detail can be added, but depending on ] in broad overviews of major depression, that content might find a better home at ]. This is a broad summary article; see ]. ] (]) 16:33, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
::::::The additional sources were already secondary: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Major_depressive_disorder&diff=1186959348&oldid=1186957111
::::::They were presented on my talk page before inclusion. One is from the Journal of Marital and Family Therapy, so peer-reviewed, the other is from Couple and Family Psychology, so peer reviewed.
::::::https://arammu.com/assets/research/MC%20Depression%20Outcomes.pdf
::::::https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4096140/
::::::I think restricting the information to Epigenetics of depression ignores the psychological importance of adverse childhood experiences.
::::::] (]) 16:55, 30 November 2023 (UTC)
:::::::Could you please see ] (I have again threaded for you). {{pb}} Both of those papers are primary studies. ] (]) 18:26, 30 November 2023 (UTC)
::::::::They are assuredly not. One is Fink et al. (2013) pointing to O-Leary et al. (1994), the other is Gray et al. (2019) which points to Whisman (1999). ] (]) 10:21, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
:::::::::* {{PMID|31584721}} (Gray) is a randomized controlled trial.
:::::::::* {{PMID|25032063}} (Fink) is a primary study, but the preamble does cite 10 to 25 to O'Leary.
:::::::::So I wouldn't be averse to using the 10 to 25 times, but I still don't know where we're getting the three. ] (]) 16:17, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
::::::::::Yes they are primary studies in regard to their own conclusions, but they are secondary sources in regard to the conclusions of O'Leary and Whisman. Whisman concluded three times. ] (]) 11:25, 6 December 2023 (UTC)


=== Management === == Extraordinary claim ==
... section is getting stubby ... lots of short paragraphs and information that needs to be merged or possibly removed. I see student editing here. (Also found info chunked in to the lead that was nowhere in the body, so fixed that.) ] (]) 18:50, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
:Yes! This is next on the to-do list ] (] '''·''' ]) 03:20, 15 September 2022 (UTC)


Please provide a source for this ]:
=== Elderly ===
This section looks also like it was chunked in as an afterthought. It duplicates some management information, which can be merged to Management or deleted, and the rest of it can go within the other sections as appropriate (prognosis or epidemiology?). ] (]) 19:08, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
:{{ping|SandyGeorgia}} this and the ''chldren'' section that had been tacked on at the end have been incorporated and vague or reduplicated bits removed (easier than I thought it would be actually) ] (] '''·''' ]) 03:19, 15 September 2022 (UTC)


"Major depressive episodes often resolve over time, whether or not they are treated."
=== Terminology ===
This section is not "terminology" and some of it looks undue; relevant content can be merged elsehwere. ] (]) 19:11, 17 August 2020 (UTC)


It is unsourced and dangerous. Why would people seek help if it resolves over time?
=== Stigma ===
:The citation immediately after the claim includes "Since major depression is often a self-limiting disorder that tends to resolve over time...". The claim as-is appears to have existed in the article since at least Feb 2022 so I am hesitant to adjust. Any suggestions are welcome.--] (]) 08:53, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
Out of whack, and looks like people are just chunking in random factoids here, rather than following ]. "There has been a continuing discussion of whether neurological disorders and mood disorders may be linked to creativity," has WHAT to do with stigma? The section is not very well written. ] (]) 19:13, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
:<s>Sigh....I'll compare current with featured version in the first instance for structure etc. ] (] '''·''' ]) 23:25, 17 August 2020 (UTC)</s>
:That section dates right back to the FAC. I can see it there almost unchanged in December 2008. So I think I might be the guilty party on that one. :P - I do think we need to do something about the length of the article and updating etc. Am looking now.] (] '''·''' ]) 01:20, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
:: If you are guilty, so am I;) ] (]) 01:37, 18 August 2020 (UTC)


== FA concerns ==
Resurrecting this from the archive, as this is now the longest standing medicine-related FA at ]. Sandy and {{U|Casliber}}, how do you feel about the article's current state? If you're pleased with changes, I can remove it from the template. If not, I can try to whip up some volunteers to plug away at any deficiencies. All else fails, we can start the ] process. Thanks for all your work on this! -- and of course thanks to Casliber for doing the heavy lifting to bring this to FA condition almost 13 years ago. I hope you're both doing well. ] (]) 14:47, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
:{{Ping|Ajpolino}} I think the article needs some cleanup. I've mostly been looking at unclear/inelegant prose today, but I intend look into Sandy's content concerns soon. Haven't gotten through the whole article yet, but the "Pathophysiology" section, for one, seems overly detailed. Cheers, ] (]) 00:39, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
::Sigh...on the "to do" list - will have a look later. Daytime here ] (] '''·''' ]) 01:02, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
:::Thanks both. Take whatever time you need, of course. And let me know if there's anything I can do to be useful. ] (]) 13:46, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
:::::What I'm doing is comparing the current version to which was soon after it was promoted and near time it was mainpaged. Just to compare the prose and scope mainly. However, the data needs to be updated to latest studies. I've begun adjusting the prose a bit. Work in progress....] (] '''·''' ]) 14:16, 25 September 2021 (UTC)


As part of ], this article has been noticed for ] in and . Circling back onto it now, I see that the article has an "update needed" orange banner at the top of the page. Is anyone actively maintaining this article, and able to address this banner? If not, should this go to ]? ] (]) 02:16, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
=== Basic Problems of this Article ===


:@] Updating the information would just include changing some of the older referances (2014 and below) to newer ones. I don't believe {{u|SandyGeorgia}} is super active anymore but some other more recently active editors who have contributed to the article are {{u|Casliber}}, {{u|Boghog}}, and {{u|Cosmic Latte}}. Not sure if anyone else has interest in the article but I could help with updating the article as well. ]] <sup>(])</sup> 13:59, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
Hi, I was studying this article that I realized there were many sentences that do not have a reference. Also, the references were not added to the article alike, some one are sfn and others are not. Many parts need to be updated and the article is not comprehensive. I do not know how this article was Featured but must not be Featured now. <span style="-moz-border-radius:5px;margin:3px;border:solid 1px#A50021;background-color:#F5F5F5;">]&nbsp;<sup>]&nbsp;</sup></span>&nbsp; 09:29, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
::{{re|IntentionallyDense}} I'm happy if editors step up to update the article. I point out the previous notices because it seems like this article is the type that needs constant monitoring and updating: if editors are willing to do so, that's great. If not, a discussion about its FA status might be warranted. I also think it would be really cool, after updates are complete, to nominate this for ] as it is an important topic of interest to many users. ] (]) 14:31, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
: I can't find a single unsourced paragraph in this entire article, are they any concrete instances you can point out where a source would be needed but is lacking? I ask the same for what you think needs updating and what information is missing.--] (]) 11:21, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
:::Just saw this. I'll take a look (again) as well. And probably invite {{u|Tobiasi0}} to take a look to see when they are statisfied with the updates and removing the tag. ] (] '''·''' ]) 19:27, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
:Likewise, where is the specific uncited text? Every sentence does not need to be cited; the reference may after a subsequent sentence. ] (]) 15:42, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
::::Sounds good. If I get around to it today I can also try updating some of the citations. ]] <sup>(])</sup> 19:50, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
::@]:For example, the first paragraph of the management section, the second paragraph of Antidepressants.
{{od|::::}}Okay to help with this I'm going to compile a list of refs that should ideally be replaced (excluding guidlines and historical articles per ]:
::@]: The main problems I mentioned in the article were not the only one. To the things I mentioned above, add the short introduction of the article and Having a reference in the introduction.
::Issues not covered in the article: , In the pathophysiology section, it is also possible to discuss the relationship between major depression and chronic diseases
::Updates:
::<span style="-moz-border-radius:5px;margin:3px;border:solid 1px#A50021;background-color:#F5F5F5;">]&nbsp;<sup>]&nbsp;</sup></span>&nbsp; 19:28, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
:::The first paragraph of management clearly references the NICE guidelines, which are cited at the end of that para (including the bullet points). The second paragraph of antidepressants is cited, so I'm unsure if I'm looking somewhere different than you are ?? {{pb}} The size of the lead is fine, and citations in the lead are neither required nor discouraged; I see no problem there. {{pb}} Could you please provide a PMID or description of what you consider not covered, so others don't have to click on each little bracketed number to see the concern? It would help, thanks. {{pb}} {{u|Casliber}} I am wearying of being the only person maintaining this article. Can we get it updated or else ]? I am swamped, and yet here I am, trying to click on little numbers to figure out what is wanted next. ] (]) 20:51, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
::::Oh joy. Updating medical articles. Ok, will have a look soon. Just got some other chores to attend to (long time since I looked at this) ] (] '''·''' ]) 21:45, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
::::: Joyous it is not, and I'm really tired of it; we need committed FA-knowledgeable editors to keep this article updated. Are the 2004 NICE guidelines the latest? ] (]) 21:53, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
::::The statistics presented in to ==> ] (update)
::::: Citation: {{cite web |url= https://www.nimh.nih.gov/health/statistics/major-depression |publisher= U.S. ] (NIMH) |date= January 2022 |title= Major depression |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220809144808/https://www.nimh.nih.gov/health/statistics/major-depression |archive-date= 9 August 2022 |access-date= 14 August 2022}} ] (]) 11:40, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::::: , but this may be overemphasizing one country (Misplaced Pages is global); I would not be surprised if someone deletes it. ] (]) 22:45, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
::::«Structured psychotherapies» section in to ==> ] (for reference update and article expansion)
::::: {{PMID|34877271}} is how you can easily reference a source on talk for others. ] (]) 11:28, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::::: Citation format: {{cite journal |vauthors=Karrouri R, Hammani Z, Benjelloun R, Otheman Y |title=Major depressive disorder: Validated treatments and future challenges |journal=World J Clin Cases |volume=9 |issue=31 |pages=9350–9367 |date=November 2021 |pmid=34877271 |pmc=8610877 |doi=10.12998/wjcc.v9.i31.9350 |type=Review}} ] (]) 11:28, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::: to ==> ] and ] (for example generalized anxiety disorder, obsessive-compulsive disorder, panic disorder, and social anxiety disorder and poor treatment outcomes)
::::: That is a news source, not a secondary review. ] (]) 11:22, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
::::::I think this reference is considered a secondary review, because at the end of it, the bibliography section is placed. In addition, its source is the American Psychiatric Association. <span style="-moz-border-radius:5px;margin:3px;border:solid 1px#A50021;background-color:#F5F5F5;">]&nbsp;<sup>]&nbsp;</sup></span>&nbsp; 13:09, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::::::: I'm not using a source like that in a Featured article; an alternate approach to adding whatever content you wish to include is to see if any of the sources listed at the end of that article are secondary reviews, and use them. ] (]) 15:09, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
::::I will mention the shortcomings of the article's introduction in the future. My written English grammar is a little weak, otherwise I would have added the required content to the article myself. <span style="-moz-border-radius:5px;margin:3px;border:solid 1px#A50021;background-color:#F5F5F5;">]&nbsp;<sup>]&nbsp;</sup></span>&nbsp; 09:27, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::::I'm willing to help do the updates as I have time, but I can get to things faster if you provide MEDRS sources and if I don't have to do all the citation formatting (see above). Do you have the used in this article? Or you can use the PMID template followed by a bracket and the number for easier reference. For today, I have to finish work on another Featured article, so perhaps someone else will get to them faster. {{u|Spicy}} have you any interest in helping maintain this FA? I don't have time to get to it today, and two updates needed are identified above. ] (]) 11:45, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::::::Sorry Sandy, but this is pretty far out of my wheelhouse and I'm busy with other things at the moment. ] (]) 17:48, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
::::::Only one source remained:
::::::{{cite journal |vauthors=Laishley EJ, Barrett AM, Isaac O, Thiemer K, Jariwalla R, Grossberg SE, Sedmak JJ, Anderson TR, Slotkin TA |date=November 1975 |title=Regulation and properties of an invertase from Clostridium pasteurianum |url= |journal=Can J Microbiol |volume=21 |issue=11 |pages=1711–8 |doi=10.1139/m75-251 |pmid=140}} to ==> ] <span style="-moz-border-radius:5px;margin:3px;border:solid 1px#A50021;background-color:#F5F5F5;">]&nbsp;<sup>]&nbsp;</sup></span>&nbsp; 13:22, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::::::That's a very dated primary source; the information should have been mentioned in a ] compliant ]. ] (]) 15:12, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
::::::::@]:It seems that I mention the wrong reference. Correct reference: ] <span style="-moz-border-radius:5px;margin:3px;border:solid 1px#A50021;background-color:#F5F5F5;">]&nbsp;<sup>]&nbsp;</sup></span>&nbsp; 16:58, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
:::::::::Better :) I can attempt to work on some of this over time, but for the next few days, I am up to my eyeballs at the ] ], and must stay focused on getting that wrapped up. I'm hoping someone else will jump in here to help ... what is listed so far does not look insurmountable. ] (]) 18:54, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
::::::::::I hope you will be successful in improving the above article. There is no rush, we will improve the article as time permits. I will also try to add things to the article over time, although it needs to be checked grammatically by an English speaker. Sincerely <span style="-moz-border-radius:5px;margin:3px;border:solid 1px#A50021;background-color:#F5F5F5;">]&nbsp;<sup>]&nbsp;</sup></span>&nbsp; 20:28, 14 August 2022 (UTC)


ref 2: Richards CS, O'Hara MW (2014)
=== Urgent FAR needed ===
I am one person and cannot maintain this old FA alone, and will no longer endure the demoralization of trying to do so. This is one of the oldest listed at ], and my recommendation is that someone submit it urgently to ]. ] (]) 14:36, 18 August 2022 (UTC)


ref 4: Kessler RC, Bromet EJ (2013)
== Citation 283 is mis-linked ==


ref 7: Cooney GM, Dwan K, Greig CA, Lawlor DA, Rimer J, Waugh FR, et al.
It should be linked to https://doi.org/10.1080/09638239917427 ] (]) 14:19, 12 October 2022 (UTC)


ref 11: Global Burden of Disease Study
=== Dated text removed for improvement ===
There is not a single modern citation in this text, which should be updated to modern sources if re-incoporated. Most of this dated text is based on sources at least 20 years old; ]. Debatesdebates? It's also unclear why it belongs in the Terminology section. ] (]) 14:37, 12 October 2022 (UTC)


ref 12: Patton LL (2015)
<blockquote>The diagnosis is less common in some countries, such as China. It has been argued that the Chinese traditionally deny or ] emotional depression (although since the early 1980s, the Chinese denial of depression may have modified).<ref>{{cite journal |vauthors=Parker G, Gladstone G, Chee KT |title=Depression in the planet's largest ethnic group: the Chinese |journal=The American Journal of Psychiatry |volume=158 |issue=6 |pages=857–64 |date=June 2001 |pmid=11384889 |doi=10.1176/appi.ajp.158.6.857 }}</ref> Alternatively, it may be that Western cultures reframe and elevate some expressions of human distress to disorder status. Australian professor ] and others have argued that the Western concept of depression ] sadness or misery.<ref>{{cite journal |vauthors=Parker G |title=Is depression overdiagnosed? Yes |journal=BMJ |volume=335 |issue=7615 |page=328 |date=August 2007 |pmid=17703040 |pmc=1949440 |doi=10.1136/bmj.39268.475799.AD}}</ref><ref>{{cite journal |vauthors=Pilgrim D, Bentall R |year=1999 |title=The medicalisation of misery: A critical realist analysis of the concept of depression |journal=Journal of Mental Health |volume=8 |issue=3 |pages=261–74 |doi=10.1080/09638239917427}}</ref> Similarly, Hungarian-American psychiatrist ] and others argue that depression is a metaphorical illness that is inappropriately regarded as an actual disease.<ref>{{cite web |author=Steibel W (Producer) |year=1998 |url=http://www.szasz.com/isdepressionadiseasetranscript.html |title=Is depression a disease? |website=Debatesdebates |access-date=16 November 2008 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20081228184624/http://www.szasz.com/isdepressionadiseasetranscript.html |archive-date=28 December 2008 }}</ref> There has also been concern that the ''DSM'', as well as the field of ] that employs it, tends to ] abstract phenomena such as depression, which may in fact be ].<ref>{{cite book |vauthors=Blazer DG |title=The age of melancholy: 'Major depression' and its social origins |publisher=Routledge|location=New York |year=2005 |isbn=978-0-415-95188-3}}</ref> American ] ] writes that depression can be healthy for the ], insofar as "it brings refuge, limitation, focus, gravity, weight, and humble powerlessness."<ref>{{cite book |vauthors=Hillman J |veditors=Moore T |title=A blue fire: Selected writings by James Hillman |publisher=Harper & Row |location=New York |year=1989 |pages= |isbn=978-0-06-016132-3 |url=https://archive.org/details/bluefireselected00hill/page/152 }}</ref> Hillman argues that therapeutic attempts to eliminate depression echo the Christian theme of ], but have the unfortunate effect of demonizing a soulful state of being.</blockquote>


ref 13: Fournier JC, DeRubeis RJ, Hollon SD, Dimidjian S, Amsterdam JD, Shelton RC, et al. (January 2010)
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ref 14: Kirsch I, Deacon BJ, Huedo-Medina TB, Scoboria A, Moore TJ, Johnson BT (February 2008).
{{ping|SandyGeorgia}} I originally placed it there as elaborates on idea of definition and meta-aspects. However looking at it now, and given the length of the article and the age of the quotes, I feel the article is better without it - much of these are more pertinent to more general discussion of mood disorders, the reification sentence possibly could stay if I can update it and find discussion making it notable but not fussed really. ] (] '''·''' ]) 03:04, 23 November 2022 (UTC)


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ref 20: "Insomnia: Assessment and Management in Primary Care".
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::Oh cool. Some will be able to be updated and some won't - will start looking soon. ] (] '''·''' ]) 01:43, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
:::Yeah I didn't really pay a lot of attention to how all of the sources were used so some may be fine as is. Some of these (such as the dsm 4 refs) should be easy as newer editions of the books have been published since. Another strategy would be to see what papers cite the studies and update from there. ]] <sup>(])</sup> 04:26, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
::::I haven't forgotten about this one either....sigh ] (] '''·''' ]) 00:43, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

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This article must be flagged as having a geopolitical bias. It needs to be globalized beyond the United States and other English speaking countries or Europe. BennuPedia (talk) 20:34, 2 April 2023 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Lizthegrey (talk) 22:48, 2 April 2023 (UTC)

Sourcing of Biomedical Content

You removed this: Research has found that unhappily married couples are at 3–25 times the risk of developing clinical depression.

in favor of this: Couples that are unhappily married have up to 25 times the risk of developing clinical depression.

That doesn't make sense.

You also removed: Should you have experienced four or more adverse childhood experiences, you're 3.2 to 4.0 times more likely to suffer from depression.

claiming it was referenced elsewhere, and more recently. The description of ACEs in the article does not say 3.2 to 4. And I find your issue about the publication date very vague. Lau737 (talk) 15:47, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

References

  1. Tatiana D. Gray, Matt Hawrilenko, and James V. Cordova (2019). "Randomized Controlled Trial of the Marriage Checkup: Depression Outcomes" (PDF).{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)
  2. Fink, Brandi C.; Shapiro, Alyson F. (March 2013). "Coping Mediates the Association Between Marital Instability and Depression, but Not Marital Satisfaction and Depression". Couple & family psychology. 2 (1): 1–13. doi:10.1037/a0031763. ISSN 2160-4096. PMC 4096140. PMID 25032063.
  3. Maria R. Goldfarb & Gilles Trudel (2019). "Marital quality and depression: a review".
  4. Goldfarb MR, Trudel G (May 6, 2019). "Marital quality and depression: a review". Marriage & Family Review. 55 (8). Routledge: Taylor & Francis Group: 737–763. doi:10.1080/01494929.2019.1610136. Citing among others: Weissman MM (April 1987). "Advances in psychiatric epidemiology: rates and risks for major depression". Am J Public Health. 77 (4): 445–51. doi:10.2105/ajph.77.4.445. PMC 1646931. PMID 3826462.
  5. Anda RF, Felitti VJ, Bremner JD, Walker JD, Whitfield C, Perry BD, et al. (April 2006). "The enduring effects of abuse and related adverse experiences in childhood. A convergence of evidence from neurobiology and epidemiology". European Archives of Psychiatry and Clinical Neuroscience. 256 (3): 174–186. doi:10.1007/s00406-005-0624-4. PMC 3232061. PMID 16311898.
We discussed these at length on your talk page; once you've processed everything there, we can continue (I'll be away from computer for several hours). SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:00, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
We assuredly did not bring up ACEs even once. And why you would bring back the "bad" statement after that lengthy discussion about how everything had to be secondary source, with review articles is beyond me. Lau737 (talk) 16:10, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
What we've talked about at your user talk is information included in these links:
Information about adverse childhood experiences is already in the article, cited to a newer and higher quality source. The information about unhappy marriages, as we discussed, needs secondary sourcing (it now has that, and is in the article using the citation style of this article). I don't know what the "bad" statement is. Perhaps WP:ONUS and WP:SS will help; this is a broad overview article that has been community vetted, and we don't need to provide excess detail on well-established items like childhood adversity; such detail can probably find a home in a different article. We don't have to necessarily repeat information across multiple articles, and we don't have to repeat detail in a higher level article that may be covered in a sub-article. In terms of how much detail to include, we are governed by due weight (in this case, of the highest quality recent secondary sources). SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:07, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
A statement like "four ACEs" increase the risk of depression 3.2 to 4.0 times is relevant to many pages like Major depressive disorder, Family disruption, or Happiness. It's not undue weight. Personally, I find the severity of the increase difficult to spot, even on the Adverse childhood experiences page.
I do not agree with rephrasing all those findings into "an unhappy marriage increases the risk of depression." That's just common sense. People are going to fill in the blank thinking it's +5%, or something, not +200% or +2400% times. It's just a bad way of conveying information
I referred to this edit: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Major_depressive_disorder&diff=1186959470&oldid=1186959348 in which you changed 3-25 to "up to 25" and pointed the references to Weissman (1987) via Goldfarb after you told me that you thought that the 25 times study was old.
You then proceeded to remove "25 times in its entirety," in an a subsequent edit described as " →‎Environmental: general"
https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Major_depressive_disorder&diff=1186984595&oldid=1186959470 Lau737 (talk) 13:45, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
Lau737 could you please read WP:TALK and WP:THREAD? Following talk page guidelines will make your posts easier for others to work through. As per our discussion on your talk, I'm still waiting for a secondary source on the 3 to 25 (we have the 25 at Goldfarb), so I generalized the whole thing pending that. If you can provide a secondary source, I agree that expressing a range up to 25 is more useful. Similar on the childhood adverse events: if you have more than a 15-year-old primary study for the content, "Should you have experienced four or more adverse childhood experiences, you're 3.2 to 4.0 times more likely to suffer from depression" (PMID 16311898), more detail can be added, but depending on due weight in broad overviews of major depression, that content might find a better home at Epigenetics of depression. This is a broad summary article; see WP:ONUS. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:33, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
The additional sources were already secondary: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Major_depressive_disorder&diff=1186959348&oldid=1186957111
They were presented on my talk page before inclusion. One is from the Journal of Marital and Family Therapy, so peer-reviewed, the other is from Couple and Family Psychology, so peer reviewed.
https://arammu.com/assets/research/MC%20Depression%20Outcomes.pdf
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4096140/
I think restricting the information to Epigenetics of depression ignores the psychological importance of adverse childhood experiences.
Lau737 (talk) 16:55, 30 November 2023 (UTC)
Could you please see WP:THREAD (I have again threaded for you). Both of those papers are primary studies. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:26, 30 November 2023 (UTC)
They are assuredly not. One is Fink et al. (2013) pointing to O-Leary et al. (1994), the other is Gray et al. (2019) which points to Whisman (1999). Lau737 (talk) 10:21, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
  • PMID 31584721 (Gray) is a randomized controlled trial.
  • PMID 25032063 (Fink) is a primary study, but the preamble does cite 10 to 25 to O'Leary.
So I wouldn't be averse to using the 10 to 25 times, but I still don't know where we're getting the three. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:17, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
Yes they are primary studies in regard to their own conclusions, but they are secondary sources in regard to the conclusions of O'Leary and Whisman. Whisman concluded three times. Lau737 (talk) 11:25, 6 December 2023 (UTC)

Extraordinary claim

Please provide a source for this extraordinary claim:

"Major depressive episodes often resolve over time, whether or not they are treated."

It is unsourced and dangerous. Why would people seek help if it resolves over time?

The citation immediately after the claim includes "Since major depression is often a self-limiting disorder that tends to resolve over time...". The claim as-is appears to have existed in the article since at least Feb 2022 so I am hesitant to adjust. Any suggestions are welcome.--Commander Keane (talk) 08:53, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

FA concerns

As part of WP:URFA/2020, this article has been noticed for WP:FAR in 2020 and 2022. Circling back onto it now, I see that the article has an "update needed" orange banner at the top of the page. Is anyone actively maintaining this article, and able to address this banner? If not, should this go to WP:FAR? Z1720 (talk) 02:16, 20 November 2024 (UTC)

@Z1720 Updating the information would just include changing some of the older referances (2014 and below) to newer ones. I don't believe SandyGeorgia is super active anymore but some other more recently active editors who have contributed to the article are Casliber, Boghog, and Cosmic Latte. Not sure if anyone else has interest in the article but I could help with updating the article as well. IntentionallyDense 13:59, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
@IntentionallyDense: I'm happy if editors step up to update the article. I point out the previous notices because it seems like this article is the type that needs constant monitoring and updating: if editors are willing to do so, that's great. If not, a discussion about its FA status might be warranted. I also think it would be really cool, after updates are complete, to nominate this for WP:TFA as it is an important topic of interest to many users. Z1720 (talk) 14:31, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
Just saw this. I'll take a look (again) as well. And probably invite Tobiasi0 to take a look to see when they are statisfied with the updates and removing the tag. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:27, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
Sounds good. If I get around to it today I can also try updating some of the citations. IntentionallyDense 19:50, 20 November 2024 (UTC)

Okay to help with this I'm going to compile a list of refs that should ideally be replaced (excluding guidlines and historical articles per WP:MEDDATE:

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ref 104, 105, 106, 117: Sadock 2002

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ref 114: Parker GF (1 June 2014).

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ref 159: Paykel ES (February 2007)

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ref 162: Coelho HF, Canter PH, Ernst E (December 2007)

ref 163: Khoury B, Lecomte T, Fortin G, et al. (August 2013).

ref 164: Jain FA, Walsh RN, Eisendrath SJ, Christensen S, Rael Cahn B (2014).

ref 165: Simkin DR, Black NB (July 2014)

ref 167: Dworetzky J (1997).

ref 168: Doidge N, Simon B, Lancee WJ, et al. (2002)

ref 169: Barlow & Durand 2005,

ref 170: de Maat S, Dekker J, Schoevers R, et al. (2007).

ref 175: Thase ME (December 2006).

ref 176: Royal Pharmaceutical Society of Great Britain 2008

ref 177: Whooley MA, Simon GE (December 2000).

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ref 323: Simonton DK (2005).

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ref 330: Paykel ES, Hart D, Priest RG (December 1998)

That's all for now. Feel free to edit my comment to cross off items on this list. IntentionallyDense 22:13, 20 November 2024 (UTC)

Oh cool. Some will be able to be updated and some won't - will start looking soon. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:43, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
Yeah I didn't really pay a lot of attention to how all of the sources were used so some may be fine as is. Some of these (such as the dsm 4 refs) should be easy as newer editions of the books have been published since. Another strategy would be to see what papers cite the studies and update from there. IntentionallyDense 04:26, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
I haven't forgotten about this one either....sigh Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:43, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
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