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== David Price == |
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== UNDUE content removed == |
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I have , cited to , which has demonstrable errors. |
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# Silvers was editor of the ''Review'' . |
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I know Counterpunch is deprecated, but I am restoring the usage by David Price. Price is the author of a book specifically about the FBI spying on intellectuals in the US, , and this specific article is cited . <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 23:20, 17 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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# Obituaries for his brother – who the source claims lived in Israel at the time – . |
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:That makes sense under ]: "{{tq|Self-published expert sources may be considered reliable when produced by an established subject-matter expert, whose work in the relevant field has previously been published by reliable, independent publications}}."''']''' <sub>]</sub> 03:38, 18 December 2021 (UTC) |
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# by and about Said were published in the ''Review'' during that time frame, |
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:Some of the facts are also supported by . piece mentions the FBI file. ] 06:22, 18 December 2021 (UTC) |
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#: including in 1982. |
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::If they supported by other sources why use depreciated source? ] (]) 06:36, 18 December 2021 (UTC) |
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# "He told me" in a non-peer reviewed essay is hearsay; considering the demonstrable inaccuracies in the source, they can be considered UNDUE, and the source is suspect. |
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:::That should be 'deprecated'. One cannot maintain the double standard of allowing generously a lot of trash sources (Algemeiner, Arutz Sheva, Jewish Chronicle etc.etc.etc., all over wiki pages, uncontested, while warring out any reference to CounterPunch/Mondoweiss, some of the scarce webzines that do provide on occasion solid reports written by authorities in the field. Context has always determined what to use in these cases. If the credentials are solid, and the article cogently written, it is acceptable, as VR notes. Otherwise people should press for a total ban on every noted writer, thinker, historian or scholar whenever they choose to write for that webzine - which would be folly.] (]) 10:59, 18 December 2021 (UTC) |
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] (]) 23:30, 12 November 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Why use this source? Because it is written by an expert in the field. By the person who uncovered the FBI surveillance of Said. Do you think this specific source is unreliable? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 13:38, 18 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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Shrike, let me ask you a straight question in the hopes of getting a straight response. is the author , published by ], a book focused specifically on the FBI's surveillance of of academics they considered activists, and, also published by DUP, focused on collaboration between the US intelligence agencies and military and anthropologists. His work is widely cited (eg , ). Do you challenge that David Price is a reliable source for the topic of the FBI surveilling Said? Because if you do then sure Ill take this specific source to RSN. If you dont, then kindly remove the tag. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 14:08, 18 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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:Though Nish, I think it best to give Shrike the opportunity to challenge the source or remove the tag himself tbh. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 14:27, 18 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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::Well, occasions when Shrike has argued for his views at length are few and far between. Correct me if I am wrong Shrike. I would want to see evidence that Shrike has read the source, rather than, as it strikes me is often the case, spotting the word Counterpunch and then removing or challenging it automatically. Boy I could spend days and ratchet up my edit count exponentially if I had a mind to question thousands of uses of Arutz Sheva, the Algemeiner and any of the dozens of provincial newspaper sources. One should always concentrate on the quality of the specific source, and its author. The case is obviously a no-brainer. And whatever the 'deprecation' judgement in that bizarre RSN discussion, the fact remains that numerous authoritative scholars choose to publish in that source, and attempts to purge anything ever written on CounterPunch from wikipedia indiscriminately is a mere cleansing on an abstract pretext for POV ends. I've removed the tag, since only Shrike objects. ] (]) 14:35, 18 December 2021 (UTC) |
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::In fact, this point should be clarified about a number of ostensibly 'deprecated sources' at the appropriate board. For the moment, everything deprecated refers to alternative websites that contain information on Palestinians, coverage of whom is reduced to 'mainstream' Israeli and US newspapers whereas the realities of Israeli and Jewish life have an indiscriminate and massive range of sources no one has waged a campaign against (and, in my view, rightly so). I dislike a large amount of the hysterical rubbish 'reportage' in the Tablet magazine, but at times (on the Yiddish dispute) it carries important and authoritative articles. Editors should learn to rely on consensual analysis of specific articles and not on a reflex 'gotcha' approach derived from an abstract egeneral judgement.] (]) 14:40, 18 December 2021 (UTC) |
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:::No, we are not quoting CounterPunch, any more than if I cite ] for an article appearing in ], I'd be quoting CQ. No one challenges the fact that we cite here Said from CounterPunch and ] . Now that I've tipped off editors who edit without actually reading the page that the objection to Price is anomalous, I guess they'll rush to tag those as well. Eventually we'll be banning ] as well, because he wrote for CounterPunch, and therefore guilt by association with a paranoid, conspiracy-mongering anti-Semitic organ (according to the RSN deprecation screed). ] (]) 23:14, 18 December 2021 (UTC) |
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::::no idea what you mean, but we ''are'' quoting CounterPunch (regardless of who wrote the report), which is a deprecated source. Therefore the tag is warranted, and tags should generally not be removed without coming to a consensus on the talk page. ] (]) 09:43, 19 December 2021 (UTC) |
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:::::It is a simple distinction in English, between citing a source and quoting a person. If you can't see it, well. . . The reference does not quote CounterPunch: it '''paraphrases''' what Price writes. Ah, one can only deprecate the loss of all sensitivity to what words mean, and how in a semantic field, related terms neatly distinguished are collapsed and jumped as if they were all interchangeable synonyms (as, for a fourth example, the confusion of 'depreciate' with deprecate') above. Not understanding simple prose, lastly, is not a good sign for talk pages ] (]) 10:26, 19 December 2021 (UTC) |
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::::::stop with the personal attacks. That's not how quoting or citing works. If you quote price ''in'' counterpunch you are using (citing Price in) counterpunch, which is depreacted and shouldn't be used. ] (]) 10:37, 19 December 2021 (UTC) |
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:::::::Price is an expert in the field and may be used if he were writing on his blog. Are you challenging the reliability of Price in Counterpunch here? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 21:02, 21 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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Since I find this tagging to be absurd, Ive raised the issue at RSN. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 21:40, 21 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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:And a few more Said publications in the ''Review'': |
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No, you can't achieve ] against a broad general RFC on a local talk page. Also, please review ] and stop with the personal attacks - ] (]) 22:03, 21 December 2021 (UTC) |
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:] specifically says that all removals are to be looked at. I am raising your editing elsewhere. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 22:04, 21 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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:] (]) 00:11, 13 November 2023 (UTC) |
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== Said's father is a Palestinian-American == |
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::I looked. HTH! - ] (]) 22:06, 21 December 2021 (UTC) |
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:::Did you look at how you removed ] sources and The Nation? Great help. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 22:58, 21 December 2021 (UTC)</small> |
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Said's father should be identified as a Palestinian-American. According to the Guardian's obituary "His father Wadie, a Christian, had emigrated to the US before the first world war. He volunteered for service in France and returned to the Middle East as a respectable Protestant businessman - with American citizenship - before making an arranged marriage to the daughter of a Baptist minister from Nazareth. |
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== Clarify censorship employed at CSU Fresno == |
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In Out Of Place (1999), the memoir of his childhood and youth, Said described his father, who called himself William to emphasise his adopted American identity, as overbearing and uncommunicative." |
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So while Said's father was born in Palestine (during Ottoman times), he emigrated to the US and later gained citizenship during military service. He returned to the region, then under British control, as an American expat to do business. He married a local woman and raised children. But there is no indication Said's father gave up his citizenship in the US despite living and working in Palestine and Egypt. |
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In the "]" section, there's this snippet: |
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So he should be identified as Palestinian-American. Compare his identity to that of ] who is identified as "Palestinian-American" because she gained American citizenship during her adulthood but lived most of her life in the Middle East (mostly the Palestinian Territory of the West Bank and also partially in Jordan). If she is Palestinian-American than so is Said's father. |
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> In 2016, ] started examining applicants for a newly created Professorship in Middle East Studies named after Edward Said, but after months of examining applicants, Fresno State canceled the search. Some observers claim that the cancellation was due to pressure from some individuals and groups. |
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So the sentence "His parents were born in the Ottoman Empire: his mother Hilda Said (née Musa) was half Palestinian and half Lebanese, and was raised in the city of Nazareth; and his father Wadie "William" Said was a Jerusalem-based Palestinian businessman." should instead read "...Wadie "William" Said was a Jerusalem-based Palestinian-American businessman."] (]) 15:43, 17 March 2024 (UTC) |
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Source ] clearly states that the it was pro-Israel groups (Zionists) and even mentioned that the ] was involved. Given that, it's not accurate to simply say "some groups", but to actually label the censorship from those who employed it: pro-Israeli groups. |
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== Suggestion for edit for clarity == |
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Side-note, please consider updating the source 115 to point to the archived link: https://web.archive.org/web/20211204061306/https://www.insidehighered.com/news/2017/05/31/why-did-fresno-state-cancel-search-professorship-named-after-late-edward-said. ] (]) 01:07, 29 December 2021 (UTC) |
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: After the ], he relocated to Egypt and then to the United States, enrolling at ] and ], respectively. |
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] (]) 01:08, 29 December 2021 (UTC) |
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The above sentence might be better rendered as |
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==Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 14 August 2022 == |
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{{Edit extended-protected|Edward Said|answered=yes}} |
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Edward Said was not an influence on Talal Asad. Talal’s critical account of Orientalism preceded Said’s book of that name. On the contrary Talal and Edward had substantial disagreements according to Tala Asad. Also Talal’s discussion of Orientalism was published 5 years early the Said’s Orientalism. |
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] (]) 21:13, 14 August 2022 (UTC) |
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:] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a ] and provide a ] if appropriate.<!-- Template:EEp --> ] (]) 21:34, 14 August 2022 (UTC) |
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: After the ], he relocated to Egypt and then to the United States, enrolling at ] while in Egypyt and ] after arriving in the United States. |
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== Edward Said's father was a veteran of the U.S. Expeditionary Forces, not a U.S. Army veteran == |
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The article says Wadie Said obtained US citizenship because he was a US Army veteran, but it would seem he was only a veteran of the U.S. Expeditionary Forces that were disbanded in 1920. ] (]) 19:04, 31 May 2023 (UTC) |
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for clarity. But as I don’t yet have 500 edits, I don’t have the requisite privileges to make the edit myself. ] (]) 14:15, 16 July 2024 (UTC) |
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: Yes, that is an improvement. Thank you {{u|D A Hosek}}. ] (]) 15:45, 16 July 2024 (UTC) |
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== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 26 October 2024 == |
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== Said's response to 1999 Commentary reporting == |
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Hello, the Palestinian National Council subsection (under the Politics section) currently ends with several lines about an investigation by Commentary in 1999 that seem to call into question Said's "claims" about his "Palestinian boyhood". Said's response to these criticisms is not mentioned. Based on , I would like to suggest an addition at the end of the current section, something like: |
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"Said responded to these reports, noting that he had described his upbringing as being split between Jerusalem, Cairo and Lebanon in his 1999 memoir, ''Out of Place''. Said claimed that ''Commentary's'' investigation was intended to discredit Palestinian activism more broadly, stating: "If they can prove that the leading Palestinian intellectual is a liar, what does this say about the rest of the Palestinians?" ] (]) 18:26, 29 September 2023 (UTC) |
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I'd like to replace the profile picture. The profile photo of Prof. Edward Said shown in the article is not really a representative one, in the sense that's not how he's known around the world. It's also a side profile of the professor, and that's just poor. I have better pictures of him. ] (]) 09:54, 26 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:Misplaced Pages has strict rules about the use of images, so as to avoid copyright violations. If they're pictures you took yourself, you can upload them with ]. Otherwise, you'll have to prove that they're either in the public domain or were released under an applicable Creative Commons license. ] (]) 22:42, 26 October 2024 (UTC) |
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== First wife not mentioned == |
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:I read the paragraph in the PW article you cite, but it is underwhelming. At most, per ], I would write: Said responded that ''Commentary's'' investigation was intended to discredit Palestinian activism by discrediting him. -- ] (]) 18:11, 20 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Would make sense to also add a note that before Mariam he was also married to Maire Jaanus from 1962-1967. It is common knowledge that you can find many sources for online. From example here - https://www.theguardian.com/books/1999/sep/11/2 and here - https://www.independent.co.uk/news/obituaries/edward-said-37181.html ] (]) 18:35, 2 November 2024 (UTC) |
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==Still a GA?== |
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For anyone who follows this page (or anyone who reviews this sort of thing), do you think this article is still a GA? It looks to me like it has accumulated quite a bit of cruft since it was promoted. -- ] (]) 18:14, 20 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Said's father should be identified as a Palestinian-American. According to the Guardian's obituary "His father Wadie, a Christian, had emigrated to the US before the first world war. He volunteered for service in France and returned to the Middle East as a respectable Protestant businessman - with American citizenship - before making an arranged marriage to the daughter of a Baptist minister from Nazareth.
In Out Of Place (1999), the memoir of his childhood and youth, Said described his father, who called himself William to emphasise his adopted American identity, as overbearing and uncommunicative."
So while Said's father was born in Palestine (during Ottoman times), he emigrated to the US and later gained citizenship during military service. He returned to the region, then under British control, as an American expat to do business. He married a local woman and raised children. But there is no indication Said's father gave up his citizenship in the US despite living and working in Palestine and Egypt.
So he should be identified as Palestinian-American. Compare his identity to that of Shireen Abu Akleh who is identified as "Palestinian-American" because she gained American citizenship during her adulthood but lived most of her life in the Middle East (mostly the Palestinian Territory of the West Bank and also partially in Jordan). If she is Palestinian-American than so is Said's father.
So the sentence "His parents were born in the Ottoman Empire: his mother Hilda Said (née Musa) was half Palestinian and half Lebanese, and was raised in the city of Nazareth; and his father Wadie "William" Said was a Jerusalem-based Palestinian businessman." should instead read "...Wadie "William" Said was a Jerusalem-based Palestinian-American businessman."ItsRainingCatsAndDogsAndMen (talk) 15:43, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
for clarity. But as I don’t yet have 500 edits, I don’t have the requisite privileges to make the edit myself. D A Hosek (talk) 14:15, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
I'd like to replace the profile picture. The profile photo of Prof. Edward Said shown in the article is not really a representative one, in the sense that's not how he's known around the world. It's also a side profile of the professor, and that's just poor. I have better pictures of him. Nzmnsum (talk) 09:54, 26 October 2024 (UTC)