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| I made some major changes. Much of the language, ], sounded like an advert (see ]) and I believe was not from NPOV (see ]). | |||
| I suppect the changes by ] {, } were ] violations (see ]), as the text appears to be identical to the MaRS Discovery District FAQ (see: ). ] <small>]|]</small> 16:48, 1 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
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MaRS is so much more than a collection of buildings and the activities performed there is much more than just research and spans all technologies, not just medical and biological.
I propose the following:
MaRS Discovery District was founded in 2000 by private and public sector leaders to maximize the economic and social impact of Canadian innovation. The MaRS community is anchored by the MaRS Centre, which opened in 2005 and is located in Toronto's Discovery District, adjacent to the University of Toronto and its affiliated research hospitals.
MaRS houses over 60 tenants from across the innovation spectrum, and offers educational programs focused on entrepreneurship.
Phase II of the MaRS Centre is targeted to open in 2009.
(Perhaps also add the blog link, which is the main area where content is posted: http://blog.marsdd.com)
38.116.199.130 18:03, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
Changes
I made some major changes. Much of the language, IMHO, sounded like an advert (see WP:ADVERT) and I believe was not from NPOV (see WP:NPOV).
I suppect the changes by User:Rpab {, } were copyright violations (see WP:COPYVIO), as the text appears to be identical to the MaRS Discovery District FAQ (see: http://www.marsdd.com/portals/mars/faq/). Nephron T|C 16:48, 1 June 2007 (UTC)