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Candidate entries
Articles created/expanded on July 28
- ... that after being mentioned on the Rush Limbaugh Show, internet traffic to the Wicks n' More website increased tenfold? (self-nom)--Bedford 01:38, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- Someone put this on AfD, despite obvious notability. Hopefully it will be closed soon.--Bedford 01:57, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the defection of Hussein Kamel and Saddam Kamel helped prompt the 1995 Iraqi presidential election? -- self-nom by Biruitorul 02:57, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 27
- ... that the Loire Valley estate Chateau de Goulaine is believed to be the oldest winery in existence and the third oldest commercial enterprise in the world? (new article self nom) Primary ref is Offline but I also added an extra online reference for additional verification (though the online ref add a general disclaimer the book is very reliable on its own). Agne/ 03:15, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Christopher Smart's two oratorios, Hannah and Abimelech, are based on biblical females who became fertile because of their devotion to God? self-nom. Ottava Rima (talk) 02:04, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... Donald Colman invented the football dugout in the 1930s while working as coach for Aberdeen F.C.? (self-nom) Watty1962 (talk) 00:33, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... Virginia Capital Trail is a new 54 mile long 8–10 foot wide paved bicycle and pedestrian trail between three historic capitals of Virginia: Williamsburg, Jamestown and Richmond? (self-nom) Mark in Historic Triangle of Virginia (talk) 22:19, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that while setting a Guinness World Record for distance traveled by a solar vehicle, the University of Waterloo's Midnight Sun VII was twice mistaken for a UFO?-Wafulz (talk) 20:42, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Jane Meutas (pictured) was drawn by Holbein and engraved by Bartolozzi? - self-nom by Xn4 (talk) 19:25, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- {{subst:DYKTick}} Length, date and hook verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 01:06, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Aliwan Fiesta (pictured) gathers different cultural festivals of the Philippines in a dance parade competition?
- ALT ... that Sinulog Festival of Cebu City in the Philippines has won the most number of championships in Aliwan Fiesta's (pictured) cultural street dance competition?
- ALT ... that the highlight of Aliwan Fiesta (pictured) is a four-kilometer dance parade of different representing cultural festivals of the Philippines? new article, self-nom by Starczamora (talk) 18:10, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Did you mean ... dance parade representing different cultural festivals ... ? Art LaPella (talk) 04:06, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 335th and 336th squadrons are the oldest in the Hellenic Air Force, having been formed as RAF units in the Second World War? - new articles, self-nom by Constantine ✍ 16:19, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie's second novel Half of a Yellow Sun won the the 2007 Orange Prize for Fiction? New article co-nomination with Sunderland06 by Malinaccier (talk) 03:01, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, hook and date verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 01:06, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the type of degree offered by a veterinary school (pictured) can vary widely, ranging from the Bachelor of Science to the Doctor of Veterinary Medicine? - five-fold expansion on July 27, 2008, and selfnom by Tim1965 (talk) 02:51, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length & reference verified. As a side note....WOW what a great job expanding the article on a topic that is arguably a core subject for an encyclopedia. Many Kudos to Tim. It would be wonderful if the article could be enhanced with some images or illustrations--maybe something to get into the lead slot on the DYK update? Agne/ 23:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- The image would have to be not-copyrighted, correct? By that, I mean no "fair use" images (because those can't be on the main page).- Tim1965 (talk) 00:50, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- I've added two images and a chart to the article (all drawn from Commons), and hope to find an exciting (!) picture of vet students doing clinical training (from my personal collection) to add to Commons tomorrow. Maybe even another chart, if I'm really industrious and lucky. - Tim1965 (talk) 01:45, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that New Year's Revolution (2005) was the first pay-per-view event produced by World Wrestling Entertainment to be held in Puerto Rico? Self nom, created the article myself. -- iMatthew T.C. 14:40, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 26
- ... that The "Madame Marie" mentioned in the song 4th of July, Asbury Park (Sandy) was a real-life fortune teller on the Asbury Park boardwalk? -- Article expanded fivefold by User:Wasted Time R; Nom by Rlendog (talk) 18:50, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Smith Estate (pictured) has been the home of a judge who wrote books on occultism, the head of a railroad, and a deputy mayor, and the shooting location for the cult film "Spider Baby"? new article, more than 5-fold expansion Cbl62 (talk) 15:49, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Giant Dead Leaf Mantis (shown) falls to the ground and lies motionless when threatened? self nom House of Scandal (talk) 01:55, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- My change of "lays" to "lies" was reverted, so please see Lay or Lie? Art LaPella (talk) 03:17, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry Art! I didn't realized someone changed it, I thought I wrote it wrong. - House of Scandal (talk) 03:31, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Drukair flights between Kathmandu, Nepal and Paro, Bhutan afford passengers a close aerial encounter with Mount Everest (pictured)? (Article expanded fivefold and self-nom) --Россавиа 23:48, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that an original 35 mm film print of the 1987 film A Month in the Country was only rediscovered in 2004 due to the intervention of a fan? (self-nom) Bob talk 22:41, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the St Nicholas Priory in Exeter is being restored with the same methods that were used 500 years ago? Created by NHSavage on 26 July expanded by myself on the same day. bsrboy (talk) 19:50, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and hook verified, but the article is supported by only one reference. PeterSymonds (talk) 01:00, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- I've added a new section on the museum with another reference now. bsrboy (talk) 01:30, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that David Nichtern wrote the hit song "Midnight at the Oasis"?
- or:
- ALT hook: ... that David Nichtern's mother, Claire, was the first female Tony award winner? New article, self-nom. Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 19:36, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that while serving aboard HMS Carcass as a midshipman on an Arctic expedition (pictured), a young Horatio Nelson is reported to have chased a polar bear? - self nom, new article, Benea (talk) 19:25, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, hook and date verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 00:52, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Welsh sportsman Billy Bancroft not only played rugby for Swansea and cricket for Glamorgan at St Helens Ground but also lived there as a child and became its groundsman when he retired? (self-nom) FruitMonkey (talk) 18:57, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the music video for Blooddrunk was filmed at former Nazi barracks in Krampnitz, near Berlin? (self-nom) LuciferMorgan (talk) 14:41, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- According to this page, Kaserne Krampnitz was built by the Nazis as a Heeresreitschule (army riding school) and used as a base for Red Army armoured forces from the late 1940s. I suggest "Red Army barracks" instead of "Nazi barracks". Also, Krampnitz isn't in Berlin, it's in Potsdam. Xn4 (talk) 13:52, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I misread the source, and changed it to "near Berlin" - I'm assuming that's what the source means by "in the vicinity of..". Furthermore, do you have an English written source? I cannot speak German. Anyway, the article itself says the Russian army was stationed there "prior to the reunification of Germany". Would it be better if I chose an alternative fact instead? Please let me know - I'd rather change the fact than not have a DYK for the article not used. LuciferMorgan (talk) 18:26, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Your problem here is really that roadrunnerrecords.com isn't likely to be a very reliable source for the history and geography of Potsdam... and when you stop to check out what it says, it doesn't prove to do very well. Here's a page in English you could use, which refers to the riding school and the Russian barracks, but as channel4.com isn't much better than roadrunnerrecords.com, I should cite the bbfc.de page, too, noting that it's in German. Xn4 (talk) 20:04, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I misread the source, and changed it to "near Berlin" - I'm assuming that's what the source means by "in the vicinity of..". Furthermore, do you have an English written source? I cannot speak German. Anyway, the article itself says the Russian army was stationed there "prior to the reunification of Germany". Would it be better if I chose an alternative fact instead? Please let me know - I'd rather change the fact than not have a DYK for the article not used. LuciferMorgan (talk) 18:26, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- According to this page, Kaserne Krampnitz was built by the Nazis as a Heeresreitschule (army riding school) and used as a base for Red Army armoured forces from the late 1940s. I suggest "Red Army barracks" instead of "Nazi barracks". Also, Krampnitz isn't in Berlin, it's in Potsdam. Xn4 (talk) 13:52, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the German sculptor Paul Ondrusch was offered a position of a professor at the Munich Academy at the age of 22? (self-nom) --Kasjanek21 (talk) 13:26, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Article falls short of 5x expansion. It was around 2,901 bytes on July 20th and is now only around 6,997 bytes today. You will need to get closer to 14,505 to qualify. It would be great if you could expand the article further. I found it a very interesting read on a subject we don't see too often at DYK. Agne/ 22:49, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that John Buckler created 13,000 drawings and paintings of historic British buildings, such as Ely Cathedral (pictured)? Self nom Iain99 10:41, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ...
that the Fujairah power and desalination plant in the United Arab Emirates is the largest operational desalination hybrid plant in the world?-- self-nom. Beagel (talk) 12:04, 26 July 2008 (UTC)- ... that the Fujairah power and desalination plant in the United Arab Emirates was the first desalination hybrid plant in the Middle East? -- There are some doubts about previous fact about being the world's largest as different sources leaves room for some doubts. This fact is hopefully sound. Beagel (talk) 18:40, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Eliza Ridgely of Baltimore and Hampton is Thomas Sully's Lady with a Harp (pictured)? - self-nom by Xn4 (talk) 03:42, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Australian ophthalmologist Sir Norman McAlister Gregg discovered the link between rubella and congenital disorders in newborn infants after overhearing two of his patients discussing their illness during pregnancy? -- new article self-nom by Canley (talk) 11:18, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that according to Hindu mythology, the sovereign Prithu chased the earth – who fled as a cow – (the chase pictured) to end a famine and finally milked her to receive all vegetation and grain as her milk? Expanded five times. Self-nom. --Redtigerxyz (talk) 06:36, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the British government destroys ₤15 million of contaminated currency every year because its drug content makes it a health hazard? (self-nom by article creator) - Hexhand (talk) 03:50, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- The reference (and the article) don't quite say this - usually it is only destroyed as a precaution, and only rarely are the levels high enough to be a health hazard. I'd suggest instead something like
- ... that the British government destroys ₤15 million of contaminated currency every year because it contains heroin, cocaine or ecstacy? Iain99 07:11, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, there's a bigger problem with this article - whole paragraphs are cut and pasted from here. It needs substantial rewriting to avoid being a WP:COPYVIO. Iain99 07:17, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- The same article was nominated a day or two earlier in any case. Gatoclass (talk) 08:20, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Henry A. Smith became the dominant landowner in what is now Interbay (pictured), Seattle, Washington by buying when so many others were selling during an 1855–56 Indian War? - Jmabel | Talk 04:09, 27 July 2008 (UTC) (self nom, major expansion)
- ... that Bouse Hutton played ice hockey, lacrosse, and Canadian football at the highest respective level of competition, winning championships in each sport? (Self-nom, 5x expansion) Maxim(talk) 23:20, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date and hook verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 00:31, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Congregation Beth Israel of New Orleans, Louisiana, severely flooded after Hurricane Katrina in 2005, was flooded again in 2007? (self nom, article creator). Jayjg 02:39, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 25
- ... that the Narikuravas who reside in the Indian state of Tamil Nadu speak an Indo-Aryan language called Vagriboli?-increased five-fold and self-nom by -RavichandarMy coffee shop 22:49, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Raphael painted Felice della Rovere, the illegitimate daughter of Pope Julius II, into The Mass at Bolsena (pictured, della Rovere in black), commissioned for the Apostolic Palace? Savidan
- ... that original stained glass from the Miller and Herriott House was removed to a restaurant near Disneyland, prompting one writer to compare the new glass to the wooden leg on Sara Bernhardt? new articls, self nom. Cbl62 (talk) 15:26, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that British West Florida is a micronation in the United States which claims itself as a commonwealth of Great Britain? (new article self-nom) - Adolphus79 (talk) 00:01, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- The phrase "claims sovereignty to" gets 19 Google hits, and in none of those cases does the sovereign entry come after the word "to". "Sovereignty under" might be better, but the article doesn't say that, and the reference says: "We do not seek to restore 'British Sovereignty', rather we seek to restore the Native Sovereignty of our People under God and the Crown." Art LaPella (talk) 01:03, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Suggest "... that British West Florida is a micronation in the United States which claims Queen Elizabeth II as its sovereign?" - House of Scandal (talk) 01:57, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
Is that better? Otherwise "sovereignty under QEII" or "under England" would be fine, since it's British rule in general, not her specifically... - Adolphus79 (talk) 02:04, 26 July 2008 (UTC)OK... that should work... I think 'claims itself as a commonwealth' is about the most accurate description of the situation... - Adolphus79 (talk) 03:47, 26 July 2008 (UTC)- One single inline citation isn't going to cut it.--Bedford 06:21, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- I'd be leery about promoting a hook about a subject that's already been deleted five times. Also, please remove the blatant POV and personal opinions from the article ("Part 3 there is the interesting one" and "I kind of doubt it"). - Bobet 10:02, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- That section was a copyvio added by another user just this morning, it has been removed. - Adolphus79 (talk) 14:37, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- A couple more citations just added... regarding the previously deleted, from the deletion edit summaries, I assumed it had been deleted under CSD for lack of content (and that was 2 years ago IIRC). I tried to write a legitimate article, and don't think it would qualify for CSD in it's present form... - Adolphus79 (talk) 15:47, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- My concern is that the hook suggests some some of validation for its claims. Its a topic worthy to be on Misplaced Pages, but how many people realize what a micronation actually means?--Bedford 05:10, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- It suggests nothing, just that they claim sovereignty... and as for how many people know what a micronation is, isn't that all the more reason to have it as a DYK? People that don't know might actually learn something from it... - Adolphus79 (talk) 14:40, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I'd be leery about promoting a hook about a subject that's already been deleted five times. Also, please remove the blatant POV and personal opinions from the article ("Part 3 there is the interesting one" and "I kind of doubt it"). - Bobet 10:02, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- One single inline citation isn't going to cut it.--Bedford 06:21, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Stream Cliff Farm (pictured) is the oldest herb farm in Indiana?(self-nom)--Bedford 22:49, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Samuel Johnson's first published poems, Messiah and London, were directly inspired by the writings of Alexander Pope and Pope praised Johnson for his skill? self-nom, double nom. If you need help finding the citations, just ask. Ottava Rima (talk) 16:08, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Note - add User:Wetman for credit on London. Ottava Rima (talk) 21:02, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 1932 Southern German football championship final between Eintracht Frankfurt and Bayern Munich was halted seven minutes before the end due to Bayern supporters invading the pitch? self-nom, new article EA210269 (talk) 12:45, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the waxcap mushroom Hygrocybe austropratensis (pictured) has been declared an endangered species by the Government of New South Wales? Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 09:58, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that of the Mormon drama series Big Love's writing staff, Dustin Lance Black is the only practicing Mormon? (self-nom) —97198 talk 08:02, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- I don't think the article says he's a practicing Mormon. Rather it discusses Black's homosexuality and implies he is not a practicing Mormon. - House of Scandal (talk) 18:15, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Raised as Mormon, he was hired as the only Mormon writer on the HBO drama series Big Love about a polygamistic Mormon family. Sourced to a print-only interview with Black himself, and an interview with a Big Love cast member. —97198 talk 12:26, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- It doesn't say he's practicing and given the relationship between gays and the LDS he's probably not. I suggest "... that Dustin Lance Black is the only writer on Big Love who was raised Mormon?" avoids confusion and also reads easier. - House of Scandal (talk) 17:41, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Okay, sure. But maybe highlight in the hook that Big Love is actually a show about Mormons? —97198 talk 07:10, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, yeah, totally my mistake. Print source says he left the church as a teenager - my thanks for bringing that up! :) —97198 talk 07:18, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the BEL Weapon Locating Radar (pictured) was developed when, during a missile test, engineers accidentally noticed that the Rajendra Radar could detect and track artillery shells being fired nearby? Self Nom, expanded article. Sniperz11@S 07:55, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ALT #2: ... that the BEL Weapon Locating Radar (pictured) was developed from the Rajendra Radar when engineers accidentally noticed that it could detect and track artillery shells being fired nearby? Sniperz11@S 05:38, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ALT #3: "... that over 80% of Indian casualties in the Kargil War were caused by enemy artillery, prompting the development of the BEL Weapon Locating Radar (pictured)? Sniperz11@S 22:17, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ALT #2: ... that the BEL Weapon Locating Radar (pictured) was developed from the Rajendra Radar when engineers accidentally noticed that it could detect and track artillery shells being fired nearby? Sniperz11@S 05:38, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ...
that at WWE's No Mercy (2005) pay-per-view, Randy Orton and his father, "Cowboy" Bob Orton, locked The Undertaker (pictured) in a casket and set it on fire?New article, created by me. Self nom. –LAX 00:58, 25 July 2008 (UTC)- ... that at WWE's No Mercy (2005) pay-per-view, Randy Orton and his father, "Cowboy" Bob Orton, kayfabe locked The Undertaker (pictured) in a casket and set it on fire? –LAX 18:38, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Looks good, but perhaps the hook needs a tweak so people know it was a work?--Bedford 18:52, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- I've never been a big fan of any hook that relies solely on in-universe details. Was there something special about the event with real-world implications? - Bobet 10:02, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Okay then. How about the latter? –LAX 18:38, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Instead of "as part of their storyline", maybe say kayfabeed?--Bedford 20:25, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Now? –LAX 20:47, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Works for me.--Bedford 20:52, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Now? –LAX 20:47, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Instead of "as part of their storyline", maybe say kayfabeed?--Bedford 20:25, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Okay then. How about the latter? –LAX 18:38, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I've never been a big fan of any hook that relies solely on in-universe details. Was there something special about the event with real-world implications? - Bobet 10:02, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that International Association of Athletics Federations' third president, Adriaan Paulen, was part of the Dutch resistance during World War II? (self-nom) Chris (talk) 15:43, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
What are these 2 images for? They were posted here without a hook. --74.14.21.221 (talk) 16:44, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Japanese director Kei Kumai’s Sandakan No. 8 lost the 1975 Academy Award for Best Foreign Language Film to a film by another Japanese director, Akira Kurosawa's Dersu Uzala? (self-nom) Ecoleetage (talk) 17:56, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that on December 15, 1997, Hector Mercado was drafted by the Philadelphia Phillies in the 1997 rule 5 draft, and on the exact same day, the Phillies traded him to the New York Mets for Mike Welch? - Self nom. Thanks, RyRy (talk) 18:06, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, hook and date verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 22:42, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the small town of Hico, Texas, has developed a Western tourist industry through a museum which purports that Ollie P. Roberts, or "Brushy Bill" of Hico, was the real outlaw Billy the Kid?--self-nom, revised and expanded Billy Hathorn (talk) 02:01, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Article not expanded five fold. Was around 2,477 bytes on July 13th and is now only around 8,190 bytes of pure article text. It needs to get closer to 12,385 to qualify. Agne/ 22:22, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the New York Mets traded Mike Welch to the Philadelphia Phillies for Hector Mercado, a player who was drafted and traded the same day, only for him to play against the Mets on his major league debut? Self nom. I counted a 205 character hook, but we can always forgive that. Thanks, RyRy (talk) 18:06, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, hook and date verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 22:42, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that military sociology, one of the branches of sociology, looks at issues such as gender, minorities and power in the military? --article by various authors (see 5 authors listed here as Group 3), just destubbed. If there are commons on what needs to be improved in this article for it to be DYKed, please copy the comments to article's talk page. It was created as an educational assignments and the students may not be aware of the custom of commenting at this template talk. Nom by --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:19, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the stages of growth model describes the changing role of information technology in organizations? ----article by various authors (see 5 authors listed here as Group 4), expanded severalfold over the past few days. If there are commons on what needs to be improved in this article for it to be DYKed, please copy the comments to article's talk page. It was created as an educational assignments and the students may not be aware of the custom of commenting at this template talk. Nom by Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:22, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the sexual script is a sociological analysis of what leads up to sexual intercourse? ----article by various authors (see 5 authors listed here as Group 2). If there are commons on what needs to be improved in this article for it to be DYKed, please copy the comments to article's talk page. It was created as an educational assignments and the students may not be aware of the custom of commenting at this template talk. Nom by --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:25, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Jacob Kielland, one of the richest persons in Norway in the 1860s, was also the grandfather of novelist Alexander Kielland? -- self-nom by Punkmorten (talk) 21:16, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the small city of Hico, Texas, has developed its Western tourist industry through a museum which purports that Ollie P. Roberts, alias "Brushy Bill" Roberts of Hico, was the outlaw Billy the Kid?--self-nom, updated and expandedBilly Hathorn (talk) 01:59, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that during the Great Depression, violence in Seattle's Smith Cove (pictured) between longshoremen, strikebreakers and police ultimately resulted in the loss of much of the city's maritime traffic to the Port of Los Angeles? - Jmabel | Talk 06:52, 26 July 2008 (UTC) (self-nom, recent expansion of a stub to a solid article)
- ... that taxes to pay the costs of bribing prince-electors to become Holy Roman Emperor helped provoke the Revolt of the Comuneros against Charles V? - This is a translation of a Featured Article on Spanish Misplaced Pages. While a lot of the sources are in Spanish, the FA status helps vouch for them, and I found an English language reference for this hook anyway (it's pretty uncontroversial). Also: if more images are needed, I'd be willing to crop Image:Tizian 066.jpg down to Charles V's head for a suitable thumbnail. SnowFire (talk) 07:50, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- When I first read this, I wondered why the prince-electors were so reluctant to become Emperor, that they had to be bribed into accepting that high position. So here's my alternative:... that taxes to pay the costs of bribing prince-electors to elect Charles V as Holy Roman Emperor helped provoke the Revolt of the Comuneros? Art LaPella (talk) 00:19, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- That sounds fine; I was just trying to move the hooked article closer to the beginning/middle and apparently sacrificing precision in the process. SnowFire (talk) 02:15, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Guarijío of Mexico prepare an herbal tea, malo en el cuerpo (pain in the body), from Wimmeria mexicana, chamomile, and cilantro? self nom « D. Trebbien (talk) 22:26, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sir Murray Maxwell, a celebrated Royal Navy officer, was shipwrecked three times in his career, once spending several weeks marooned on a small island under attack from pirates following the loss of HMS Alceste in 1817? (self-nom)--Jackyd101 (talk) 23:23, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that ice hockey goaltender Hap Holmes (pictured) won the Stanley Cup four times, with four different teams, in four different leagues? (Self-nom, 5x expansion) Maxim(talk) 00:43, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date and hook verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 00:48, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 24
- ... that the design of the flag of Tunisia (pictured) was altered in 1999? expansion, self-nom by Nishkid64 (Make articles, not wikidrama) 17:20, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Wow! From this to this is definitely impressive.
- Alt hook: ... that the design of the flag of Tunisia (pictured) was altered slightly in its 1999 codification?
- « D. Trebbien (talk) 21:12, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Wow! From this to this is definitely impressive.
- ... that the Mooers House (pictured) is named after a man who spent years prospecting in the Mojave Desert with a burro and a pick-axe before discovering the Yellow Aster gold mine? new article, self nom Cbl62 (talk) 15:10, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- alt: ... that the Mooers House (pictured), often used as an illustration of West Coast Victorian architecture, is named for a prospector who struck gold after years in the Mojave? new article, self nom. Cbl62 (talk) 15:20, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- to the second hook. I have assumed that the references verify the claims. « D. Trebbien (talk) 21:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Royal Spring Park may have been the site of the first sour mash process in the production of bourbon? (created by User:FloNight, nominated by --Bedford 04:28, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I can't find anything about sour mash in the cited sources. Daniel Case (talk) 03:22, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... (alt hook) that Royal Spring Park may have been the site of the first bourbon whiskey production?
- ... that in the 1981 Nepalese national election, one candidate was elected with just 3,137 votes, less than 10% of what the top vote-getter received? --Soman (talk) 18:25, 26 July 2008 (UTC) (selfnom)
- Length verified; taking offline source on good faith. Added to hook (for once) to explain why this is interesting. Daniel Case (talk) 03:18, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the papal conclave of 1294 was the only papal conclave celebrated during the lifetime of the preceding Pontiff? self-nom CarlosPn (talk) 19:00, 26 July 2008 (CET)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 03:15, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Anne Aghion won an Emmy Award in 2005 for her feature documentary, In Rwanda We Say…The Family That Does Not Speak Dies, which examined the situation in post-genocide Rwanda? (New article by User:Tamiworonoff, I expanded and added refs). Cunard (talk) 16:31, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Link to MSNBC isn't working. Daniel Case (talk) 03:13, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the General Board of the United States Navy (1947 board pictured) was an advisory body of the United States Navy, effectively a naval general staff? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Raul654 (talk • contribs) 16:29, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- I fixed your hook according to standards and practices.--Bedford 00:42, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Do we have something to indicate where this "effectively a general staff" comes from? It's sort of implied but not stated, and we need to be clearer than that. A quote in a note, or an actual source saying this, would be helpful. Daniel Case (talk) 03:08, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- In effect a naval general staff, the General Board lost most of its usefullness with the establishment of the position of Chief of Naval Operations in August 1916. - US Military Dictionary. The Oxford Essential Dictionary of the U.S. Military. 2001, 2002, Oxford University Press, Inc. (Copied by way of WikiAnswers) Raul654 (talk) 03:20, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- Do we have something to indicate where this "effectively a general staff" comes from? It's sort of implied but not stated, and we need to be clearer than that. A quote in a note, or an actual source saying this, would be helpful. Daniel Case (talk) 03:08, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Pine Creek Path, a Native American trail along Pine Creek in Pennsylvania, was later used by lumbermen, then its course was followed by a railroad, and today it is a rail trail (pictured)? Self-nom Ruhrfisch ><>° 14:24, 25 July 2008 (UTC), Note that the basics of the hook can be verified online in the "Human Influence on the Canyon" in this website .
- Length & reference verified. Thanks for the link! It helped. Agne/ 23:37, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Cheonhado (pictured) is a unique type of circular world map developed in Korea in the 17th century? Self-nom PHG (talk) 05:02, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- How are these unique? The article doesn't seem to make this claim, and Mappa mundi are also circular world maps with many similar features. The article itself acknowledges the potential Western influences. Can the hook state the explicit features which are unique to this style of map perhaps? Benea (talk) 12:57, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose. The article is really still a stub, with only a single source, and makes claims "such as 'produced in Korea only'" which really need more than a single source (which doesn't even use wording quite that strong). --Elonka 17:40, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that young Heliobolus lugubris lizards imitate certain ground beetles which squirt a pungent acid in defense? (self nom) Dysmorodrepanis (talk) 01:25, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Expansion length verified. The wording of the hook is a little odd in regards to the article & referencing. Reading the hook at face value it appears to say that the one of the ways that the lizards imitate ground beetles is by squirting a pungent acid in defense. However the article and reference only say that the lizards imitate the beetles in their coloring and movement. At closer inspection, it looks like the hook is trying to combine two separate interesting facts in a cumbersome way that encourages confusion. I recommend rewording the hook with the simplest solution being dropping the pungent acid defense. However, you may want to explore a new hook regarding Charles Darwin's work and interaction with the beetles. The name recognition would add to the "catchiness". Agne/ 22:00, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Grand Lodge of Indiana was started at the Schofield House (pictured) of Madison, Indiana's historic district on January 13, 1818?(self-nom)--Bedford 01:17, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Not the most exciting, but I may make this a triple hook, so I thought I'd get the process started.--Bedford 01:17, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Text counter was down, but Schofield House should be long enough.--Bedford 12:02, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- It is: 2,064 bytes of readable prose. Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 12:43, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks. Added a third new article.--Bedford 13:36, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- It is: 2,064 bytes of readable prose. Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 12:43, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Text counter was down, but Schofield House should be long enough.--Bedford 12:02, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- What's special about this day? Was it a Friday? --74.14.16.90 (talk) 00:35, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Nothing especially notable about the day. The hook could stand without the date, if there is a need to be shortened.--Bedford 00:40, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Ikazuchi class destroyers, the first class of destroyers in the Imperial Japanese Navy, were all built in Scotland? <self-nom>--MChew (talk) 21:43, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Suggest: "(example pictured)". --74.14.21.221 (talk) 17:10, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length verified. Offline reference taken in good faith. Agne/ 23:32, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the mother of Ivy Gordon-Lennox (pictured) announced in The New York Times that her daughter was "Not Engaged" to marry Earl Winterton? - self-nom by Xn4 (talk) 20:07, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length okay, hook fact supported by source okay, looks great to me. Perhaps different emphasis in the hook, e.g. "was NOT engaged to marry", would be better (credit a version revised along these lines to the original nominator). doncram (talk) 22:47, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, but it's a quotation, so I've made it "Not Engaged". Xn4 (talk) 23:11, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- I think that's better, great. doncram (talk) 02:12, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, but it's a quotation, so I've made it "Not Engaged". Xn4 (talk) 23:11, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length okay, hook fact supported by source okay, looks great to me. Perhaps different emphasis in the hook, e.g. "was NOT engaged to marry", would be better (credit a version revised along these lines to the original nominator). doncram (talk) 22:47, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Harwich Force, under Commodore Reginald Tyrwhitt, oversaw the surrender of German U-boats (pictured) at the end of the First World War? - new article, self nom, Benea (talk) 19:19, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length verified. Offline reference taken in good faith. Agne/ 23:28, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sozin's Comet: The Final Battle is a two-hour, four-part series finale for the Nickelodeon television series, Avatar: The Last Airbender and held the top slot for telecast on broadcast and basic cable television for the week of July 14? --haha169 (talk) 19:00, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length & reference verified. Agne/ 23:27, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that despite his winning the 1916 election by 43 votes, court rulings removed George W. P. Hunt as Governor of Arizona for nearly a year? -- Article expanded fivefold and self-nom by --Allen3 14:52, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Hook seems misleading: per article, at first he lost by 30 votes, only after contesting later was deemed to win by 43. Perhaps revise to something like "despite losing reelection by 30 votes, first Arizona governor George W.P. Hunt contested results for a year(?) and was eventually deemed to win by 43". doncram (talk) 02:35, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- The wording was carefully chosen to make it interesting enough to draw people to the article. A person winning an election but being kept out of office suggests a story worth reading, while the loser of an election challenging the results looks more like sour grapes. If the wording is too misleading then an alternate hook is below. --Allen3 23:49, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ALT:... that Will Rogers asked Arizona's George VI to adopt him so that the comedian could succeed to his "hereditary governorship"? --Allen3 23:49, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- The wording was carefully chosen to make it interesting enough to draw people to the article. A person winning an election but being kept out of office suggests a story worth reading, while the loser of an election challenging the results looks more like sour grapes. If the wording is too misleading then an alternate hook is below. --Allen3 23:49, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Hook seems misleading: per article, at first he lost by 30 votes, only after contesting later was deemed to win by 43. Perhaps revise to something like "despite losing reelection by 30 votes, first Arizona governor George W.P. Hunt contested results for a year(?) and was eventually deemed to win by 43". doncram (talk) 02:35, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that session steel guitarist Lloyd Green has played on 115 number one hits, including those by Jerry Lee Lewis, Alan Jackson, and Dolly Parton? -- self nom by Izzy007 Talk 01:34, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- - Hook unreferenced. Sunderland06 (talk) 00:54, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Alt hook ... that session steel guitarist Lloyd Green learned to play Hawaiian guitar by age seven and graduated to the steel guitar that he played professionally in clubs by age ten? (alt nom) ww2censor (talk) 14:50, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that scenes set in the fictional Needmore, Pennsylvania, during the 30 Rock episode "Hiatus", were filmed in Battery Park City, Manhattan? --Jamie jca (talk) 00:58, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Another fact from the same article: ... that Elaine Stritch's appearance as Colleen Donaghy, in the 30 Rock episode "Hiatus", earned her a Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Guest Actress in a Comedy Series? -- Jamie jca (talk) 01:01, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length & reference verified for both hooks. I think the 2nd one is more catchy. Agne/ 23:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Buffalo Gap Historic Village in the small town of Buffalo Gap south of Abilene contains fifteen outdoor structures and other artifacts which document West Texas life in the late 19th and early 20th centuries?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 14:16, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and references check out. Also, I checked and found that the courthouse is on the National Register of Historic Places. --Elkman 05:22, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that one of the owners of Woodlawn Farm (pictured) in Slate Hill, New York used the wild teasel from his fields to card wool at his nearby hat factory? Self-nom Daniel Case (talk) 18:10, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and creation date confirmed; hook fact verified on NRHP. Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 22:05, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Counter Admiral, member of the Norwegian Parliament and Minister of the Navy Henrik Steffens Hagerup was also the father of later Norwegian Prime Minister Francis Hagerup? -- self-nom by expander Punkmorten (talk) 20:36, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date and hook check out. Lampman (talk) 01:15, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the dark purple-brown mushroom Russula caerulea is edible and mild-tasting, although the cap skin is bitter if chewed? Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 23:58, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
Would taste be each individual's own POV?--74.14.16.90 (talk) 03:22, 25 July 2008 (UTC)- The group of mushrooms, the russulas, are either mild or peppery. In this case, mild just means little flavour or heat really. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:40, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- I apologize. I misread "bitter" as "better". (What tastes better is obviously a POV...) --74.14.16.90 (talk) 03:50, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length verified. Offline reference accepted in good faith. Agne/ 21:37, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I apologize. I misread "bitter" as "better". (What tastes better is obviously a POV...) --74.14.16.90 (talk) 03:50, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- The group of mushrooms, the russulas, are either mild or peppery. In this case, mild just means little flavour or heat really. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:40, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Congregation Beth Israel of Honesdale, Pennsylvania, is one of the oldest synagogues in the United States, and was billed as "The smallest temple in the world"? -- self-nom by article creator Jayjg 00:33, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
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- Ah, I see, the article name wasn't bolded. I've fixed that. Jayjg 00:04, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Congregation Beth Israel (Honesdale, Pennsylvania) needs to be expanded from <600 characters to >1500 characters. --74.14.16.90 (talk) 00:24, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Ah, I see, the article name wasn't bolded. I've fixed that. Jayjg 00:04, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 1992, baseball player Steve Rodriguez was named one of the West Coast Conference's (location pictured) top fifty athletes of all time? Expanded five-fold by RyRy (talk · contribs) and MusiCitizen (talk · contribs). Thanks, RyRy (talk) 03:11, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length, hook and date verified. PeterSymonds (talk) 03:55, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Lorry Lokey has donated $132 million USD to the University of Oregon, but did not attend the school? (self, former redirect) Aboutmovies (talk) 10:38, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Are all other donors alumni? --74.14.16.90 (talk) 00:28, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- No, but usually the large donations for colleges come from alumni. For instance, Phil Knight is the school's largest donor, and arguably the highest profile alum. Aboutmovies (talk) 09:16, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Really? Not sure if that's a worldwide view.
- ALT:... that Lorry Lokey, who donated US$132 million to the University of Oregon, is one of the few non-alumni to have donated as much to this university? --74.14.21.221 (talk) 16:52, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- If he is a top-ranked non-alumni donor and we have a ref for a list, this may be good hook material. --74.14.21.221 (talk) 17:06, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Really? Not sure if that's a worldwide view.
- No, but usually the large donations for colleges come from alumni. For instance, Phil Knight is the school's largest donor, and arguably the highest profile alum. Aboutmovies (talk) 09:16, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Florida Railroad was the first railroad to connect the east and west coasts of Florida and the longest railroad to be completed in Florida before the start of the American Civil War? new article self-nom by Donald Albury 02:14, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length verified. Offline reference accepted in good faith. Agne/ 23:07, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that non-heterosexual is an umbrella term, describing people who do not or no longer identify as heterosexual? expansion, self-nom by Banjeboi 21:12, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Note: This article is finishing up AfD process and I expect it will be kept. Banjeboi 21:12, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 23
- ... that abolitionist George Bradburn (pictured) was with Frederick Douglass on an 1843 anti-slavery lecture tour in Indiana, when they were attacked? self nom Victuallers (talk) 22:28, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:24, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that nitric oxide, found in 1991 to be present in samples of exhaled breath, was awarded the title "Molecule of the Year" in 1992 by Science journal? ~ Article by Stevenfruitsmaak; nominated by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 12:42, 25 July 2008 (UTC).
- I find this hook a little misleading. The 1991 discovery was not the reason for NO being named MotY in 1992.
- ALT:... that exhaled nitric oxide can be measured in a breath test for asthma and airway inflammation? --74.14.21.221 (talk) 03:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the margin of victory in the 1994 Alaska gubernatorial election was the smallest in Alaska's history? Self nom Davewild (talk) 21:59, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Johnny Cash covered the song Johnny 99 by Bruce Springsteen and made it the title song of the album it appeared on? -- new article self-nom by Rlendog (talk) 00:54, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- How about "... that Bruce Springsteen's song "Johnny 99" became the title song of a Johnny Cash album?" - Jmabel | Talk 05:30, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- I like that better. Thanks! Rlendog (talk) 13:25, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- How about "... that Bruce Springsteen's song "Johnny 99" became the title song of a Johnny Cash album?" - Jmabel | Talk 05:30, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:19, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Karnataka state has banned the use of convocation caps – the "mortarboard" – and students have now the option to wear the State's traditional Mysore Peta?--Nvvchar (talk) 00:44, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- How about "... Karnataka has banned mortarboard caps at convocations and replaced them with the Mysore Peta?" Sniperz11@S 14:41, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Looks like a considerable degree of plagiarism in this article. Can't be featured until editor puts the information in his own words. Gatoclass (talk) 14:47, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Francisco de Borja (pictured), a cardinal-nephew of Pope Alexander VI, died before learning of his excommunication by Pope Julius II? Savidan 00:19, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Which one of the 3 in the pic is Francisco de Borja? --74.14.18.205 (talk) 02:08, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- I assume you're joking? It's the baby Jesus and the Virgin Mary, to say (pictured, right) would seem like a bad joke. Lampman (talk) 20:21, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Suggest: (pictured with the baby Jesus and the Virgin Mary), +/- wikifying. --74.14.16.90 (talk) 03:30, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:18, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Suggest: (pictured with the baby Jesus and the Virgin Mary), +/- wikifying. --74.14.16.90 (talk) 03:30, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- I assume you're joking? It's the baby Jesus and the Virgin Mary, to say (pictured, right) would seem like a bad joke. Lampman (talk) 20:21, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that actor Aksel Hennie had to persuade the director that he was not too young to play the title role in the film Jonny Vang? -- both new articles, self-nom -- Lampman (talk) 22:06, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- ALT:... that Aksel Hennie won an Amanda Award for "Best Actor" for his effort in the Norwegian film Jonny Vang, playing the title role for which he was at first deemed to young to play? (a little more context for the general audience of the main page, many of which are not familiar with Norwegian films.) --74.14.18.205 (talk) 13:17, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Works fine, with some fixes to the language. ALT:... that Aksel Hennie won an Amanda Award for "Best Actor" for his effort in the Norwegian film Jonny Vang, playing the title role for which he was at first deemed too young? Lampman (talk) 20:16, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:14, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that no head coach of the Suns has ever been elected into the Basketball Hall of Fame as a coach? -- new article self-nom by K. Annoyomous24 21:52, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- List's intro text is too short. Daniel Case (talk) 20:09, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Mesodermochelys is thought of as one of the better representatives of dermochelyids from the Mesozoic era? Over 30x expansion; self-nom. Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 21:06, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
Still just 44 characters too short. Daniel Case (talk) 20:08, 27 July 2008 (UTC)- You don't have to condemn it, Daniel. There's still time for me to expand it further; that should be a possible vote symbol. Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 21:00, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I have expanded it further, and the main body is now at 1522 characters. Are there any other problems that need to be fixed? Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 21:35, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length verified; offline ref accepted on good faith. Daniel Case (talk) 02:59, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- I have expanded it further, and the main body is now at 1522 characters. Are there any other problems that need to be fixed? Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 21:35, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- You don't have to condemn it, Daniel. There's still time for me to expand it further; that should be a possible vote symbol. Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 21:00, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I request that this article no longer be considered for DYK as the editor has admitted to making nonsense edits purely for the goal of getting this article in DYK with the proper count number, including an attempt at a revert war from a legible and more accurate interpretation of a scientific article. In addition the editor is making personal attacks in edit summaries on this article in order to obtain her stated trophy of 5000 DYK edits at any cost. She has also resorted to personal attacks in her reversions while removing purposeful careful edits in order to get the word count right so she can score a DYK point. I will also request the editor be banned from contributing to DYK for some time until this attitude changes. --Blechnic (talk) 04:39, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that early 20th century immigrants to the United States are said to have seen New York for the first time from the decks of the ferryboat Yankee (pictured)? x5 expansion of an existing article by Gatoclass (talk) 16:21, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:06, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Mason County Courthouse in Michigan was first in a farmhouse (pictured)? new article, self nom by --Doug 11:43, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Nice pic. Hook is a bit awkward, as it pretty clearly implies that the pictured building was itself within a farmhouse. Why not include the available picture of the prior courthouse, the farmhouse? Or reword. doncram (talk) 15:08, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for suggestion - switched pictures. Also thanks for improvements to article. --Doug 15:38, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Better hook suggestion:
- ... that Mason County, Michigan's courts used an old farmhouse (pictured) until the county courthouse was built?
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 20:04, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Better hook suggestion:
- Thanks for suggestion - switched pictures. Also thanks for improvements to article. --Doug 15:38, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Nice pic. Hook is a bit awkward, as it pretty clearly implies that the pictured building was itself within a farmhouse. Why not include the available picture of the prior courthouse, the farmhouse? Or reword. doncram (talk) 15:08, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Battle of Ontario, between Toronto and Ottawa, is often called one of the top rivalries in the NHL? (split from other article, edited and reformatted; self-nom by User:Random89)
- split from other article? Where? Is this a 5x expansion? --74.14.16.88 (talk) 09:21, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Much of the content came from the article NHL Rivalries. I split it off to its own article, cleaned it up, sourced it, and removed POV and un-encyclopedic statements. I think this still qualifies for DYK, but correct me if I'm wrong. Random89 19:05, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Reference verified. The article is not a 5 five fold expansion because the vast majority of the text is taken from the NHL Rivalries article. If we have a shortage of hook and are in a pinch, this one is a maybe. I do think we should revisit the issue at Misplaced Pages talk:Did you know. I can see strong points for including splinter articles that have been substantially cleaned up but not quite 5x expanded. However, I do think they should be lower on the totem pole to articles that have been written from scratch or truly 5x expanded. But it is something that should be part of a larger consensus discussion. Agne/ 21:05, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Much of the content came from the article NHL Rivalries. I split it off to its own article, cleaned it up, sourced it, and removed POV and un-encyclopedic statements. I think this still qualifies for DYK, but correct me if I'm wrong. Random89 19:05, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Congregation Beth Israel, a Conservative synagogue in Lebanon, Pennsylvania, was designed by Percival Goodman to mirror the barns of nearby Pennsylvania Dutch farmers? (created by User:Jayjg, nominated by User:Masterpiece2000) Masterpiece2000 (talk) 08:22, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Article is currently in AfD. --John Nagle (talk) 05:21, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- ...where the !vote is currently at 14 Keep, 4 Delete. Jayjg 00:35, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Misplaced Pages:Articles for deletion/Congregation Beth Israel (Lebanon, Pennsylvania) needs to be closed before this hook gets picked for DYK. --74.13.127.194 (talk) 17:57, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- How does it get closed? At this point the AfD vote is up to 17-4 to keep. Rlendog (talk) 18:54, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Misplaced Pages:Articles for deletion/Congregation Beth Israel (Lebanon, Pennsylvania) needs to be closed before this hook gets picked for DYK. --74.13.127.194 (talk) 17:57, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ...where the !vote is currently at 14 Keep, 4 Delete. Jayjg 00:35, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Bao Jinghowlal's middle name, Davis, was the last name of an American solider that befriended his family during the US occupation of Yap? Soccahdude1122 (talk) 05:48, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- No qualifying article. Bao Jinghowlal is neither new enough nor long enough. Art LaPella (talk) 20:43, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in the early 1990s, Surət Hüseynov successfully led a military coup d'état in Azerbaijan (flag of Azerbaijan pictured) to become the Prime Minister? -- new article by Parishan (talk | contribs); nom by Collegebookworm (talk) 07:43, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- I must say that this article seems excellently made and the creator deserves a pat on the back; Google Translate works well to verify the external sources. Collegebookworm (talk) 07:43, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- So the sources are verified and the article is good to go then? Daniel Case (talk) 15:15, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 2008 film Fifty Dead Men Walking is based on a 1998 autobiography by British secret agent Marty McGartland, who was later shot six times in a failed 1999 assassination attempt by the IRA? -- new article by User:Moviefan (talk); nom by Collegebookworm (talk) 06:49, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that the 2008 film Fifty Dead Men Walking is based on a 1998 autobiography by Marty McGartland, who worked for three years as a British secret agent within the IRA? -- Collegebookworm (talk) 03:47, 25 July 2008 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.252.253.19 (talk)
- Length and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 15:14, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Elvis Presley is said to have made an impromptu performance at Colonial Gardens in Louisville's Senning's Park (pictured), while visiting his nearby grandparents? (self-nom)--Bedford 02:55, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Picture was taken by someone else; have added here for consideration.--Bedford 03:36, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- That's not a problem. Length and reference verified. Reworded hook a little for clarity. Daniel Case (talk) 15:11, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 2002, the Rev. Desmond Tutu called for a campaign of disinvestment from Israel in order to pressure a change in Israel's policies towards the Palestinians? --John Bahrain (talk) 12:56, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure we really need to include the style for Tutu, but if we're going to, as Archbishop Emeritus, he is correctly Most Revd. David Underdown (talk) 13:02, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Surely you can find a better reference for this than thirdworldtraveller.com? Gatoclass (talk) 05:38, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the red bolete mushroom Boletus rubellus (pictured), regarded as edible by some, tastes of soap?...Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:06, 23 July 2008 (UTC) + User:Luridiformis
- Length verified; offline reference accepted on good faith. Daniel Case (talk) 15:07, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... "that studies have shown that three out of every four U.S. dollar bills are contaminated by cocaine or another illicit drug?"(new article self nom) - Hexhand (talk) 18:22, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Too short. Gatoclass (talk) 15:44, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Too short in what way? A bit of descriptiveness might help matters. - Hexhand (talk) 20:03, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Gatoclass means that the main body of the article, which excludes the images and their captions, the list of sources, and the "See also" section, is too short. The smallest an article can be to be truly Start-class, and ready for DYK, is 1500 bytes in the main body, this article's only got about 1235. There's still time to expand it up to the desired length, however. But as a side-note, you might wish to tweak the hook you have provided, as "of every four, more than three..." sounds strange; with four being the maximum limit given, isn't the only full number larger than three four? Good luck, though! Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 20:54, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Okay, I have since fixed the nom, expanded the article to 26kb, and found a boatload of info about the contamination of the British pound as well. A word to the wise: stop licking bank notes. Yuck-o. - Hexhand (talk) 00:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
Plenty long enough now. I am verifying in spite of the fact that the refs. need registration, as at least one article summary more or less confirms it. My only quibble would be that I would be happier if it was phrased "that studies have shown" as most of the studies seem to have been quite small, ie, to make it something like "that studies have shown that three out of every four U.S. dollar bills are contaminated by cocaine or another illicit drug?" Gatoclass (talk) 02:38, 27 July 2008 (UTC)- Done, though I was under the impression that the article title had to be in the DYK. Did I misread that?- Hexhand (talk) 03:06, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Yes. The article title does have to be bolded and linked, but ] accomplishes that. The unpiped article title is sometimes preferred, but not always required, and it isn't a written (or Unwritten) rule. Art LaPella (talk) 03:17, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Okay; just want to point out that the rules, unwritten or otherwise, don't list that as an option. Thanks for the input. :)- Hexhand (talk) 06:02, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Since another user claims to have just caught Hexhand making a large copyvio to this article, it will have to be thoroughly checked before it is promoted. I don't currently have time to do that, so I'm changing my vote from verified to possible in the meantime. Gatoclass (talk) 08:18, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Maybe before besmirching my rep, maybe you could actually look into the matter before passing judgment, Gat. Poor form. - Hexhand (talk) 14:52, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- See here - the expansion was done by copying text from two newspaper articles, with some minor alterations which Hexhand (in good faith I believe, but mistakenly) thought were enough to stop it being a copyright violation. Iain99 21:08, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Maybe before besmirching my rep, maybe you could actually look into the matter before passing judgment, Gat. Poor form. - Hexhand (talk) 14:52, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Since another user claims to have just caught Hexhand making a large copyvio to this article, it will have to be thoroughly checked before it is promoted. I don't currently have time to do that, so I'm changing my vote from verified to possible in the meantime. Gatoclass (talk) 08:18, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Okay; just want to point out that the rules, unwritten or otherwise, don't list that as an option. Thanks for the input. :)- Hexhand (talk) 06:02, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Yes. The article title does have to be bolded and linked, but ] accomplishes that. The unpiped article title is sometimes preferred, but not always required, and it isn't a written (or Unwritten) rule. Art LaPella (talk) 03:17, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Done, though I was under the impression that the article title had to be in the DYK. Did I misread that?- Hexhand (talk) 03:06, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Okay, I have since fixed the nom, expanded the article to 26kb, and found a boatload of info about the contamination of the British pound as well. A word to the wise: stop licking bank notes. Yuck-o. - Hexhand (talk) 00:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Gatoclass means that the main body of the article, which excludes the images and their captions, the list of sources, and the "See also" section, is too short. The smallest an article can be to be truly Start-class, and ready for DYK, is 1500 bytes in the main body, this article's only got about 1235. There's still time to expand it up to the desired length, however. But as a side-note, you might wish to tweak the hook you have provided, as "of every four, more than three..." sounds strange; with four being the maximum limit given, isn't the only full number larger than three four? Good luck, though! Mess around with the guy in shades all you like - don't mess around with the girl in gloves! (talk) 20:54, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Too short in what way? A bit of descriptiveness might help matters. - Hexhand (talk) 20:03, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Major League Baseball player Dell Alston was signed as a free agent with the Cleveland Indians, only to be released about two years later? --Expanded fivefold. Modeled after Steve Adkins, Santo Alcala, two DYKs.--LAAFan 20:00, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Isn't this common? -74.14.18.205 (talk) 02:08, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, it is very common. Length and date verified. The hook? Not so much. The hook is about something too common and it is overall not interesting. Please try to find a different hook. Regards, RyRy (talk) 10:14, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Childress, Texas, located equidistant from Amarillo and Wichita Falls, is known as the "Gateway to the Texas Panhandle"?--self-nom, expanded version Billy Hathorn (talk) 02:57, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- OR:
- ... that Walter Chrysler, the founder of Chrysler Motor Corporation, lived for a year in Childress in the Texas Panhandle, where he was employed by the Fort Worth and Denver Railway?--self-nom, expanded version Billy Hathorn (talk) 03:04, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- OR:
- ... that Childress, a small city in the Texas Panhandle, is named for George Campbell Childress, the author of the Texas Declaration of Independence?--self- nom, expanded version Billy Hathorn (talk) 03:06, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Note: Someone reverted all of my revisions to the original short story. Can you recheck what I had submitted? There is no way that the existing article is better than what I had, for I had a full story that took over three hours to write.-Billy Hathorn (talk) 02:52, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
- Whatever linked article gets featured on the main page must be ready for show before the hook can be approved. You may want to discuss at Talk:Childress, Texas with whoever edited over your contributions ASAP. --74.14.16.90 (talk) 03:36, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
Expiring noms
Articles created/expanded on July 22
- ... that United States Senator Evan Bayh's Washington, D.C. home is actually in his wife, Susan Bayh's, name? (created by User:Thirdreading, nominated by --Bedford 01:26, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
Currently under AfD, but its going to be kept after the closing of the AfD, so once that happens, it good to go.--Bedford 01:26, 27 July 2008 (UTC)- It was kept.--Bedford 02:49, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- That's a very prosaic hook. Can't you find something a bit more interesting? Gatoclass (talk) 14:32, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I'm open to suggestions. The other citations seemed either uninteresting, or criticism.--Bedford 16:54, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Having looked at the article, I think there may be some BLP issues here, given that the article on her seems only to exist in order to attack her husband with COI charges. The sources are only local too. I'm not an expert on BLPs, but while I certainly wouldn't propose deleting the article, I'm not sure we should really be featuring something like this on the front page. Gatoclass (talk) 18:58, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I know someone from WP:Indy who's a real Democrat partisan, but is still a stand up guy. I'll ask him to peruse it. If he has no problems, then it should be A-OK.--Bedford 20:16, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Everything seems okay as far as POV is concerned, everything has a reference. As soon as I get a chance I will add some more info. HoosierState 01:18, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- I know someone from WP:Indy who's a real Democrat partisan, but is still a stand up guy. I'll ask him to peruse it. If he has no problems, then it should be A-OK.--Bedford 20:16, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Having looked at the article, I think there may be some BLP issues here, given that the article on her seems only to exist in order to attack her husband with COI charges. The sources are only local too. I'm not an expert on BLPs, but while I certainly wouldn't propose deleting the article, I'm not sure we should really be featuring something like this on the front page. Gatoclass (talk) 18:58, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I'm open to suggestions. The other citations seemed either uninteresting, or criticism.--Bedford 16:54, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Czech dancer Edouard Borovansky founded the first ballet company in Australia after being stranded there during the Second World War? (self nom)--Cazo3788 (talk) 17:10, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
- Is Borovansky the nomination? Though it's relatively new, it wasn't significantly expanded on the 22nd. Lampman (talk) 18:20, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 21
- ... that the Japanese visual novel Furifuri is described by its development team as an everyday interruption adventure game? Self-nom -- クラウド668 17:05, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- I'm a little uncomfortable with a self-promotional hook. References are all in Japanese, which means we'd take it in AGF, but an alternative hook is beyond us regular DYK reviewers.--Bedford 18:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Cardinal Tiberio Crispo, the castellan of Castel Sant'Angelo, may have been the son of his elevator, Pope Paul III?
- Comment: I'm uncomfortable with this hook on the grounds that "may have been" gives a semblance of conjecture. --Rosiestep (talk) 06:07, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Alt Hook:... that Cardinal Tiberio Crispo (pictured), the castellan of Castel Sant'Angelo, is believed to have been the son of his elevator, Pope Paul III? Savidan 04:24, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Hook changed. He was definitely a relative. Some say a son, some say just a relative. Savidan 04:24, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the Alt Hook, but I couldn't figure out which citation verifies the Alt Hook. I reviewed refs #1, #2, and #11. Ref #2 is several pages long, and maybe the hook verification is there; if so, what page? Also, the article has several red-links. --Rosiestep (talk) 03:55, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
See also
- User:AlexNewArtBot/GoodSearchResult – This is an automated list of promising new articles generated by AlexNewArtBot (talk · contribs · logs).