Comments
- There's no need to wikilink US in the opening sentence, and I know TRM at peer review said to use "US" over "American" but after looking at any FA or FL about songs, episodes, films from the US, they all say "American". In both regular conversation and formal language, for me I think "The US sitcom Friends" jars compared to "American"
- "Friends was broadcast in 236 episodes" in doesn't sound correct here
- "Each episode excluding the season finale has the title which starts with 'The one...' " is incorrect. The pilot is called "The Pilot", and it's the series finale, not season finale, which also doesn't end with "The One..." One needs capitalising, too, as it's a quote of the titles.
- That entire sentence is a bit long, and would flow better if it was recast as separate sentences, especially since the topic jumps from titles to length.
- "for a 30-minute timeslot" perhaps clarify by mentioning this is to allow for commercial breaks
- is there an article for "first unit"? It's a bit of a specialised term that many people won't get
- There isn't, I could only find Second unit. I have rephrased the terminology.
- Sentences shouldn't begin with "However", just as they shouldn't begin with a But, Although, etc
- "filmed in Burbank" vs "Taped in London"
- "broadcast on NBC after the first airing of "The One with Joey's New Brain" (February 15, 2001)" ---> "broadcast following "The One with Joey's New Brain" on February 15, 2001"
- "Conan O'Brien hosted a light-hearted discussion with the cast from the Central Perk set" needs recasting, it currently sounds like "the cast from the Central Perk set", as opposed to him hosting it on the set
- As well as DVDs, have episodes been released on BluRay, or for streaming at Hulu, Amazon, Netflix, etc?
- Complete series on Blu-ray.
Would I need to include a seperate table for that? Blu ray has been confirmed but no release date as of yet.
- "but Chandler falls in love with her only to break up when he suspects she is cheating on him with a fellow actor." -- "only to break up" what does this mean? You haven't told the reader they got together
- The season summaries need work. Have they been copy edited? Some of the sentences are a bit run-on or poorly structured in other ways. Some are contradictory, such as "Season five features Monica and Chandler trying to keep their new relationship a secret from their friends." ... "Monica and Chandler go public with their relationship"
- Season 8's "The One After "I Do"" -- because the template forces "" around the title, you should use single quotes around the I Do to avoid the repetition of ""
- Were Pheobs, Chandler and Monica absent from season 8?
- For me, you don't have to have the season plot summaries. It doesn't violate 3b by including them or excluding them. This is a page that just lists the episodes and any further information such as what happens in them can be found by looking at the season specific articles which have summaries for all episodes. There aren't many Featured episode lists that do this anyway -- certainly not the more recently promoted -- and looking through most of them I found only a couple that do. List of Veronica Mars episodes is one, and that has a lot of episode articles anyways so the summaries aren't really necessary. List of Lost episodes is another, but again, each episode has its own article. Those that don't have a lot of episode articles and also don't have summaries include List of Avatar: The Last Airbender episodes, List of Dexter episodes, List of Numb3rs episodes, List of Gunsmoke television episodes, List of The Unit episodes and List of Smallville episodes so I'm not sure where the precedent is for that request.
- I decided to exclude the season summaries because they are covered in the seperate season articles (some in detailed length).
- MOS:HASH says to avoid using "№" and "#". I would name the first two columns "No. in series" and "No. in season" for clarity
- The specials don't have numbers, so you don't need those columns in those tables
- TRM said in the PR to make sure all tables meet MOS:DTT. Do they?
- What's the reasoning for the two left Ratings columns to be a different background colour, and why small text for the year ranges?
- I assume rowscopes are needed to highlight ratings?
- Titles, writers, directors and production numbers and airdates are still unreferenced, despite being marked as Done in the PR.
- They come under the 'General' reference, the 15th anniversary DVD which includes the specials.
- Not all articles lend themselves to images. The FL? doesn't require one to be promoted, it says they're to be included if appropriate for the topic. Here the topic is specifically the list of episodes, and a photo of a couch and coffee table doesn't illustrate a list of episodes even if those episodes did feature that prop.
Matthewedwards : Chat 05:55, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
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