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A comment has been made at Misplaced Pages:Articles for deletion/Ancestry of the kings of Britain that a particular version of the content of this page should be left untouched by other editors. The inviolable content is as follows, with my comments:

The Ancestry of the kings of Britain has long attracted historians' interest because the monarchs of Britain trace their lineage from them. It has a close connection with ancestry in the United States of America with the present royalty having long distant relatives who settled in New England.

The first sentence is untrue, at least of much of the material that is in this page. The Monarchs of Britain do not trace their ancestry from either the kings of Mercia, nor the Kings of Lindsey, the only two pedigrees given on the page. As to the ancestry of Woden which is shared by the Wessex pedigree, the Ancestry of the monarchs of Wessex page demonstrates the scholarly consensus that the descent of Cerdic from Woden is fatally flawed. Therefore none of the content of this page is relevant to the later monarchs of Britain. The second sentence is a non sequitur (just because some New Englanders are 'connected' with the queen need not imply that they are descended from the royal house of Lindsey). Further, it is UNDUE, as there are probably more people descended from the house of Wessex who did not settle in New England. Finally, Ancestry is a magazine for hobbyists, not a scholarly journal. Agricolae (talk) 21:54, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Geoffrey of Monmouth wrote a legendary chronology of the kings and legendary kings of Britain in the Historia Regum Britanniae c. 1136 CE. The ancestry has also been studied through "genealogies"; lists of names in various manuscripts. Ancestries include the Ancestry of the kings of Wessex and the Ancestry of the kings of Mercia. Scholarly analysis suggests the early part of some versions are largely an invention of the 8th and 9th centuries. They provides lines of names stretching from Godulf Geoting, presumably ruler of a Kingdom before Woden to Eanfrith, Aldfrið or Pybba and onwards. They have variations in a number of Anglo-Saxon royal genealogies.

Geoffrey of Monmouth did not write about Anglo-Saxon genealogy. He wrote about British (i.e. the Celtic peoples who predated the Anglo-Saxons on the island) pseudo-history, while the entire remainder of this page is talking about Anglo-Saxons. The next sentence combines apples and oranges, as the Wessex page is an analysis of the entire body of Anglo-Saxon genealogy from a Wessex perspective, while the unnecessary Mercia page is about one copy of one genealogical document with no analysis of the content. It looks like the text is being written toward the sole end of allowing links to other pages, as if that were a proxy for notability. No modern scholar presumes that Godulf Geoting ruled anywhere, nor is he the earliest non-person named in the pedigrees. Agricolae (talk) 21:54, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Manuscripts include references to names from the Kingdom of Lindsey, a settlement in the northeast of Britain that rose to prominence in the early years of settlement by the Angles. Little is known of the Kingdom and the people are not recorded participating in the wars of the seventh and eighth centuries. The first king generally regarded by history to have been real is Cretta, who led a migration into Mercia and became Creoda.

Manuscripts include all kinds of things, of which names from Lindsey represent one of the smallest and among the least studied groups. The comment about Cretta is based on a non-reliable non-scholarly source that just made up the claim to him being the first king (or copied someone else who made it up), since Cretta is only known from a single pedigree and all it says is that he was son of one person and father of another - no other information is given, no geography, no biography, no title - he is just a name between two other names in a pedigree collection that shows evidence of widespread forgery. Agricolae (talk) 21:54, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

The ancestry dates back to times when, as Winston Churchill said, "all the Britons dye their bodies with woad, which produces a blue colour, and this gives them a more terrifying appearance in battle".

The page is not even about the Britons Churchill was referring to, the Picts. That people on one part of a pretty big island were painting themselves blue 2000 years ago is neither here nor there - it adds nothing useful, other than decorating the page with a famous author who had nothing to say on the subject. Agricolae (talk) 21:54, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

None of this stuff is in the article anymore. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 01:51, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

References

1. Peter (of Ickham) (1885). The Genealogy of the Kings of Britain: From Brutus to the Death of Alfred, Tr. from a Norman-French Ms. in the Library If Trinity College, Cambridge. Priv. Print. Retrieved 20 November 2012.
2. Ancestry Inc (2000-11 - 2000-12). Ancestry magazine. Ancestry Inc. pp. 18–. ISSN 1075475X Parameter error in {{issn}}: Invalid ISSN.. Retrieved 20 November 2012. {{cite book}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
3. Geoffrey (of Monmouth, Bishop of St. Asaph); Michael D. Reeve; Neil Wright (2007). The History of the Kings of Britain: An Edition and Translation of De Gestis Britonum (Historia Regum Britanniae). Boydell & Brewer. pp. 68–. ISBN 978-1-84383-206-5. Retrieved 20 November 2012.
4. ^ Stenton, F. M. (Frank Merry), "Lindsey and its Kings", Essays presented to Reginald Lane Poole, 1927, pp. 136-150, reprinted in Preparatory to Anglo-Saxon England: Being the Collected Papers of Frank Merry Stenton : Edited by Doris Mary Stenton, Oxford, 1970, pp. 127-137
5. Zaluckyj, Sarah & Feryok, Marge. Mercia: The Anglo-Saxon Kingdom of Central England (2001) ISBN 1-873827-62-8
6. Robert Dennis Fulk; Robert E. Bjork; John D. Niles (5 April 2008). Klaeber's Beowulf: And the Fighting at Finnsburg. University of Toronto Press. pp. 292–. ISBN 978-0-8020-9567-1. Retrieved 18 November 2012.
7. David Hughes (1 January 2007). The British Chronicles, VOLUME 1 ONLY. Heritage Books. pp. 246–. ISBN 978-0-7884-4490-6. Retrieved 20 November 2012.
8. Winston Churchill; Sir Winston S Churchill, K.G.; Christopher Lee (1 May 2011). A History of the English-Speaking Peoples: A One-Volume Abridgement. Skyhorse Publishing. ISBN 978-1-61608-240-6. Retrieved 20 November 2012.

Not found in my edition of the ASC ...

This line "An early king on record outside of the legendary genealogies is called Creoda mentioned in the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle entry 519...". Swanton says for the 519 entry that "Here Cerdic and Cynric succeeded to the kingdom of the West Saxons and the same year they fought against the Britons at the place they now name Cerdic's Ford." - no mention at all of Creoda in that entry. I'd like to see this Copley work that's being used for the citation ... Note also that the Handbook of British Chronology does NOT list Creoda as a king - merely that he was a son of king Cerdic, and the father of king Cynric. So that's two rather reputable sources that contradict the Copeley source. Ealdgyth - Talk 23:39, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

One of the snippets I get when searching the book for Creoda mentions the 519 ASC entry of the Parker mss., but it is not at all clear that it says he appears there. Agricolae (talk) 23:49, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

KIrby in Earliest English Kings (p. 40) says "The difficulties do not end with Cerdic. Cynric is associated with Cerdic in the Chronicle as his son in all the events in the annals between 495 and 530, and the Chronicle knows nothing of Creoda, who appears in the West Saxon Genealogical Regnal List as the son of Cerdic and father of Cynric. Cynric is credited with a long reign of twenty-six or twenty-seven years, though J. N. L. Myres was tempted to dismiss him as 'a ghost figure' so sparse is the annalistic record for him. The backward extension of West Saxon history to 514 or 495 and the omission from the annals of any information about Creoda appears to have resulted in a distended treatment of the material relating to Cynric to fill the resulting gap." I believe that means - Kirby doesn't see Creoda mentioned in the relevant entries (495-530) for the ASC. Ealdgyth - Talk 23:59, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Yorke in Kings and Kingdoms agrees that confusion exists and that Creoda isn't in the ASC - p. 131 "However, not all sources agree that Cyrnic was his son, for in the earliest recorded version of the West Saxon genealogy in the Anglian collection Cynric is given as the son of Creoda the son of Cerdic. Creoda is not mentioned at all in the annalistic version of the origns of Wessex or in the short genealogies included in the Chronicle." Ealdgyth - Talk 00:04, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

Nor does York in Wessex in the Early Middle Ages state that Creoda was a king ... it's pretty clear we're not looking at a king, but an addition made in some genealogy later than the period. None of the sources I've consulted call Creoda a king of Wessex ... so the claim in this article that Creoda was "an early king on record outside of the legendary genealogies" is quite clearly an extraordinary claim that needs balancing with the mainstream historian view - that he was indeed listed in the legendary genealogies (the listing of him in the 855 ASC is clearly derived from the genealogies) and that he was not a king ... not to mention that he may not have existed! Ealdgyth - Talk 00:12, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

I've changed the text appropriately and put in Yorke's opinion of Crida as possibly being an Ætheling. This issue remains unclear for now, need more info what the manuscript says in that entry. All your stuff is very interesting by the way, feel free to enter any of it that you like in the forthcoming Ancestry of the kings of England page. The more Cynric/Cerdic/Coverup stuff we can add there the better. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 18:22, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Assuming the AfD ends with this article being deleted, then if you create Ancestry of the kings of England with content similar to the material here, it is likely to be speedily deleted, as is any other article you create reusing material from this article. See criterion G4 here. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:27, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

No, i'm not entering this into some sort of Ancestry of the kings of England page - you need to wait until the AfD resolves for THIS article - my personal opinion is that you don't quite grasp the concept of what makes notability nor how to use secondary sources for writing wikipedia articles. This article has an amazing numbers of problems that if it was kept at AfD would need fixing ... and you should probably spend some time reading some of the basic works on Anglo-Saxon history before plunging into areas you lack the background knowledge of. We don't need to consult the manuscript for what it says ... that's the job of the historians. We deal with what they say and consult them and report their conclusions, we don't make those conclusions ourselves here at wikipedia Ealdgyth - Talk 18:26, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Ok, there are various ways I could substantially alter my way around a G4. I've got all sorts of Progonoplexia up my sleeves. But in respect to you learned gentle-persons, I will continue trying to substantially improve this article and hopefully convince you that it deserves your re-consideration for inclusion. I've done that again tonight and altered all the text that I could see an argument against. If there is anything else that needs attention, please start again here. Thanks for all the help and assistance one and all. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 22:28, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Removal of the Flag

Please can the genealogy of the Union Jack picture be restored. I think it is appropriate for the article. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 00:22, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

Err.... how is it relevant to an article on the ancestry of people to show the progression of the Union Jack? It's useless here and not relevant. Ealdgyth - Talk 00:24, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

It is the British flag. It shows how the Ancestry of the kings of Britain relates to all British or British descended peoples. I have put a map for now but would still like a show of support for the flag. Hasn't anyone seen James Bond? Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 18:59, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

I am perfectly well aware it's the British flag. What relevance the Union Jack has to sub-Roman Britannia is what needs to be explained. And certainly James Bond has nothing to do with ... early medieval history. "Show of support"? We are writing an encyclopedia, not a patriotic website. Ealdgyth - Talk 04:33, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

What relevance indeed? James Bond? Show of support? Huh??? Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 04:39, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Sisam?

Who the heck is "Sisam" in the various footnotes? Ealdgyth - Talk 13:50, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

See Ancestry of the kings of Wessex, which I think is mostly Agricolae's work. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:20, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Godulf Geoting

I put a on Geot as I can't find him listed in Stenton's book. It's in the external link to an ancient Britannica, but both that and my have been mysteriously removed and I don't consider it particularly reliable anyhow. I go with Stenton and can't find Geot. He lists the five kings before Woden differently to us, and I think we should go with modern sources, so I'm changing that table.Dr Barbara Yorke (1990). Kings and Kingdoms of Early Anglo-Saxon England. Psychology Press. ISBN 978-0-415-16639-3. Retrieved 22 November 2012. Barbara Yorke's list shows those five names listed by their last surnames and included (ing) after Geot in the name of the first one. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 18:52, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Proposal to rename to Ancestry of the British monarchy

This fits better with Wiki-precedents, is not gender-specific and probably better understood. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 22:30, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Wait on the end of the AfD. No sense dealing with moving this when it's most probably going to be deleted. Ealdgyth - Talk 22:42, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but this is for the purpose of the ongoing deletion discussion as part of the argument why it shouldn't be deleted according to all common sense. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 22:50, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Incoherent reference

A citation has been added back that has so little factual information as to be nearly useless. The Genealogist is not a book, it is a journal. Thus the citation should be to the author and title of the article that contains the useful information, not just the journal. Second, there is no vol. 15-16 of The Genealogist. There is volume 15 and there is volume 16. Sometimes libraries choose to bind successive volumes of soft-cover periodicals together, but that doesn't change the fact that the volumes are distinct entities. The publisher of this journal is not "The Association". Obviously, and completely inappropriately, this source has not actually been read, but is instead just being harvested from a Google Books snippet. Lacking full context, these snippets can be deceptive in terms of reflecting the overall conclusions of the article and author in question. One should only cite material one has actually read, and this clearly has not been read, so I am removing it. Agricolae (talk) 02:28, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

You are making assumptions again Agricolae. I have read it and can track the exact info down again if needed, please replace. Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 07:48, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

If needed? Yes, it is needed. Agricolae (talk) 08:20, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

The bigger question is why you persist in trying to cover up any note of Crida's doctoring in the historical record and deletion out of history? Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 09:50, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

No cover-up concerning this little bit of obscurity. Note that the text in question, "Creoda has been deleted from some of the genealogies", remains in the article even though it is somewhat POV - who's to say that it hasn't been added to some genealogies, as opposed to being removed from the others. All I took out was a citation that was so imprecise and inaccurate that it indicated the source being cited had not actually been consulted. Agricolae (talk) 14:38, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

Well there's plenty of other info to get out there about Crida (JW s.a. 627),Crioda (GV 91), Creoda Cynewalding (ASC 'A' s.a. 755, 'BC s.a. 626, Creoda also GC 437, 438, and JW, p. 251), and Creada (HH, IV, 21, s.a. 755). I'll get on to destroying your bogus genealogies with it now and making the Way straight. Deleted text - The Chronicle suggests that Cynegils was a son of Ceola, and a great-grandson of Ceawlin. Second, Creoda apparently has been deleted through a different process from one that deleted Creoda in the Regnal List and 855 genealogy. (That's not the 519 entry you are also running around trying to cover up). Paul Bedson ❉talk❉ 16:27, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

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