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:*On your first point: Horn of Africa is a geographical term which is clear and can not be interpreted any other way. East Africa, as a term for Horn of Africa is not clear, because East Africa generally refers to places like Kenya and Tanzania where E-M35 is much less common and where the unique clades being discussed have never been found. It is Misplaced Pages policy concerning geographical names that we should use the most commonly used name, and not necessarily what individual sources use. | :*On your first point: Horn of Africa is a geographical term which is clear and can not be interpreted any other way. East Africa, as a term for Horn of Africa is not clear, because East Africa generally refers to places like Kenya and Tanzania where E-M35 is much less common and where the unique clades being discussed have never been found. It is Misplaced Pages policy concerning geographical names that we should use the most commonly used name, and not necessarily what individual sources use. | ||
:*On your second point: I see no reason to remove references to Egyptians or Berbers. As mentioned, you have given ''no'' argument above, only repetitions of your faith in your own veracity. I'll restrict to ''many'' Berber populations as a compromise because I think there is absolutely no reasonable doubt that published sources refer to this and the high levels amongst them is obvious and striking. --] (]) 21:05, 9 January 2013 (UTC) | :*On your second point: I see no reason to remove references to Egyptians or Berbers. As mentioned, you have given ''no'' argument above, only repetitions of your faith in your own veracity. I'll restrict to ''many'' Berber populations as a compromise because I think there is absolutely no reasonable doubt that published sources refer to this and the high levels amongst them is obvious and striking. --] (]) 21:05, 9 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
:'''Point1'''- Not at all, there are times where Horn of Africa can mean just Somalia for instance, the name literally describes the peninsula that sticks out of Eastern Africa, but the term is also used as a collective for Ethiopia, Somalia, Djbouti and Eritrea at other times as well, however, you have no proof that Horn of Africa is more commonly used to describe these countries than East Africa is, the UN for instance does not designate these countries as Horn of Africa but rather Eastern Africa, ditto for several other International Organizations. Also, the reference of East Africa to Kenya, Tanzania and Uganda only comes from the colonial possessions of Britain in that region, i.e. British East Africa and has nothing to do with the fact that countries included in the Horn of Africa are not also commonly called East African countries, or within geographical East Africa. This is in addition to all the scientific sources that use the East Africa designation for E-M215's distribution that I mentioned earlier and I am re-iterating again. | |||
:'''Point2'''- I have already discussed why arbitrarily nit picking certain ethnic groups and leaving out others is not only unnecessary in the lead but also pretty much uncommon, if ever seen, in the lead of other WP haplogroup articles, we already have a list of all or most of the population samples taken from the scientific studies detailed out for any user that is wanting to dig deeper to see, either in this article or articles related to it, apparently you only want to see what you are wanting to see with respect to this issue, but this is not my problem and I refuse to re-enter my arguments all over again. ] (]) 23:35, 9 January 2013 (UTC) |
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why the Australian study is reliable.
http://www.sciencedirect.com/science?_ob=ArticleURL&_udi=B8JHP-4XMTJX4-1&_user=10&_coverDate=12%2F31%2F2009&_rdoc=1&_fmt=high&_orig=search&_sort=d&_docanchor=&view=c&_searchStrId=1440450800&_rerunOrigin=google&_acct=C000050221&_version=1&_urlVersion=0&_userid=10&md5=e96f699ccdba9ac59616162d945156ca Investigation of population structure in the Victorian Italian and Greek population using Y chromosome STR haplotype analysis Department of Genetics, Thank you Southernaussie (talk) 16:51, 24 August 2010 (UTC).
- I do not have access to this text (unless you can get me a copy) but honestly, the title says it is about Greeks and Italians in Melbourne. It does sound like an article claiming to present a new theory about the very ancient origins of E1b1b. Does it really present a new theory about the origins of E1b1b or does it just say something in passing referring to work done by others? --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 19:03, 24 August 2010 (UTC)
Hitler was from E1b1b?
Check this out: http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/worldnews/article-1305414/Hitler-descended-Jews-Africans-DNA-tests-reveal.html
It is quite interesting. However, more reliable source would be needed. Miraceti (talk) 20:55, 24 August 2010 (UTC)
- Another one: Stonemason89 (talk) 03:05, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
- It is kind of interesting, but also kind of a side issue for the subject, and additionally it is currently very hard to know how to source in a way which will satisfy. A lot of famous people were E1b1b. Previous debate about mentioning famous people, which you can find in the archives, led to the situation of today which is none of them being mentioned. I do not think it should go in the article itself? It would certainly raise a lot of issues if we did.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 08:20, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
- It is a news Item, but I haven't seen whether there is an actual scientific article published. Wapondaponda (talk) 11:49, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
- I think indeed that it the reliability of the claims can't really be said to be high in the first place. My above comments are assuming that they are found to be reliably published. I know people are interested in this kind of thing, although I must say this interest is often a bit weird and even creepy. I have seen internet forums urging that it is really important to find out what Y haplogroup Hitler was. I don't think his Y haplogroup will tell us anything about him or his haplogroup apart from that they intersect.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:59, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
- Most haplogroups articles include a section "Famous members" (see haplogroup T with Jefferson, Haplogroup C with Gengis Khan, Haplogroup G with Statlin for exemple and so on). So either you remove the section from all articles .... but no reason to remove the section from e1b1b just because Hitler is included... Moreover this analysis was commented by Ronny Decorte, a renown geneticists, head of the Laboratory for Forensic Genetics and Molecular Archaeology, lecturer in Forensic Genetics at the K.U.Leuven and member of the National Commission on Forensic DNA analysis in Belgium. So this is for sure much more reliable than the sections related to Gengis Khan, Stalin or Jefferson haplogroups ...90.36.146.39 (talk) 17:31, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- I've been in this kind of argument before, and I think I'll stay out of it. I'll just point out that the famous people section idea has been controversial and many such sections have been deleted. I do have some sympathy with both sides of the argument. What I would ask is that whatever you post you source it as well as you can, and you write it as neutrally as you can. You will get controversy.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 18:43, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- Oh, and thanks for posting here on the talk page. That also helps. I would also suggest that you'll be taken more seriously by some Wikipedians if you register yourself as an editor rather than posting anonymously.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 18:44, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- Ok, so to avoid controversy, I have created a wikiquote page related to Eb1b that will list all sourced quotes related to famous members and many others. So it is maybe better to create a link to this page and to remove the section from the article if you prefer. A quote is neither right or wrong but just a quote ... so people are still free to disagree ... Moreover interesting quotes about Eb1b1 from different studies can also be listed other sections. Don't hesitate to add some as long as they are sourced.Antoine17 (talk) 19:06, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- Interesting approach. Let's see how it goes. You might want to look through the archives here. There are a number of famous people likely to be E1b1b, but it is not easy to source most of them to WP standards. Thanks for your constructive approach!--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 19:10, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- Ok, so to avoid controversy, I have created a wikiquote page related to Eb1b that will list all sourced quotes related to famous members and many others. So it is maybe better to create a link to this page and to remove the section from the article if you prefer. A quote is neither right or wrong but just a quote ... so people are still free to disagree ... Moreover interesting quotes about Eb1b1 from different studies can also be listed other sections. Don't hesitate to add some as long as they are sourced.Antoine17 (talk) 19:06, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- Oh, and thanks for posting here on the talk page. That also helps. I would also suggest that you'll be taken more seriously by some Wikipedians if you register yourself as an editor rather than posting anonymously.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 18:44, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- I've been in this kind of argument before, and I think I'll stay out of it. I'll just point out that the famous people section idea has been controversial and many such sections have been deleted. I do have some sympathy with both sides of the argument. What I would ask is that whatever you post you source it as well as you can, and you write it as neutrally as you can. You will get controversy.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 18:43, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- Most haplogroups articles include a section "Famous members" (see haplogroup T with Jefferson, Haplogroup C with Gengis Khan, Haplogroup G with Statlin for exemple and so on). So either you remove the section from all articles .... but no reason to remove the section from e1b1b just because Hitler is included... Moreover this analysis was commented by Ronny Decorte, a renown geneticists, head of the Laboratory for Forensic Genetics and Molecular Archaeology, lecturer in Forensic Genetics at the K.U.Leuven and member of the National Commission on Forensic DNA analysis in Belgium. So this is for sure much more reliable than the sections related to Gengis Khan, Stalin or Jefferson haplogroups ...90.36.146.39 (talk) 17:31, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
- I think indeed that it the reliability of the claims can't really be said to be high in the first place. My above comments are assuming that they are found to be reliably published. I know people are interested in this kind of thing, although I must say this interest is often a bit weird and even creepy. I have seen internet forums urging that it is really important to find out what Y haplogroup Hitler was. I don't think his Y haplogroup will tell us anything about him or his haplogroup apart from that they intersect.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:59, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
- It is a news Item, but I haven't seen whether there is an actual scientific article published. Wapondaponda (talk) 11:49, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
- It is kind of interesting, but also kind of a side issue for the subject, and additionally it is currently very hard to know how to source in a way which will satisfy. A lot of famous people were E1b1b. Previous debate about mentioning famous people, which you can find in the archives, led to the situation of today which is none of them being mentioned. I do not think it should go in the article itself? It would certainly raise a lot of issues if we did.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 08:20, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
deletion of Coffman-Levy quote
Amongst recent editing on this article I notice a slow edit war of deletions of the Coffman-Levy quote from JOGG. User:Jayjg has been deleting on the basis of WP:RS. Relevant to understanding Jayjg's position are some other discussions:-
It is as clear as I think it will ever be that by implying that JOGG citations can be deleted without even considering content is ignoring the RS/N consensus (and I would say also ignoring all normal WP policies concerning how to edit by consensus, as well as common sense). HOWEVER, a less tendentious argument Jayjg has offered is clearly needing consideration, and that is that JOGG material can indeed sometimes come under WP:REDFLAG, meaning that it is too controversial and technical and would need a more technical source. JOGG is not by default a strong technical source for genetics as such. In this particular case (as I have tried to discuss on Jayjg's talk page) there is however nothing technical or controversial as it was just a passage about word usage which maybe did not even need sourcing.
As a next step however, I have not resisted the deletion, but instead replaced the passage with a similar one with no special sourcing. My justification for doing this, which anyone who reads through the archives of this article will understand, is that the Coffman-Levy quote itself sounded more controversial and complicated than it really was, which led to many different debates over the history of this article about what the passage was trying to say, and in a way maybe that is what has led to Jayjg's deletion. So to avoid future problems it seems simpler to just simplify the text so that it just observes what needs to be observed.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 09:29, 10 September 2010 (UTC)
- It's pretty clear to me that the RS/N conclusion was the opposite of what you claim it is, that the "slow edit war" was imaginary, that my edits in no way violated any policies - but rather upheld them, and that the claim that my argument was "tendentious" is itself "tendentious". That said, I have no objection to the edit you made here. Jayjg 19:03, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
- Sometimes WP works in practice not in theory, I once saw someone say.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 19:09, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
Please use the talk page here
There are edits being made by User:Southernaussie which really need discussion here on the article talk page. (I'd try already giving some comments, but actually it is not even always clear what these edits are trying to achieve.) They are messy, leaving things "broken" and a big part of the edits involves blanked inline comments. That is not the correct way to propose things. Please don't put comments into the real article. Use this talk page. That is what it is for. Looking forward to discussion.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 06:36, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Pereira et al. 2010
Pereira; et al. (2010). "Linking the sub-Saharan and West Eurasian gene pools: maternal and paternal heritage of the Tuareg nomads from the African Sahel" (PDF). {{cite journal}}
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This paper was published early this year, though only the abstract was available for free. There is a free copy online now. The study has some new stats, for E-M81, E3a and R1b among others. Wapondaponda (talk) 17:44, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
- Cheers--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 12:02, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
Einstein, Hitler & Napoleon, all E1b1b
This seems notable enough to be mentioned that these three all belong to the, rather sparse for European, Y-haplogroup E1b1b. 66.243.215.2 (talk) 03:54, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
- Such things have been discussed many times. Check the archives. Some people are strongly against it, but most argument has been about the fact that it is difficult to find good publications to confirm these things. So theoretically speaking if a strong source can be found I see no reason not to have a "famous people" section. It has however been argued occasionally that DNA articles should not have sections about famous people because that is too scientific. What sourcing would you propose?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 14:31, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
ISOGG shows 2 subclades for E-M215 and NOT 4 as introduction implies
The substructure of EM215 in ISOGG currently shows 2 main bifurcating subclades and not 4 as implied in the introduction piece of this article. These 2 subclades are E-M35.1 and E-M281. E-M35.1 itself has 4 primary subclades that we know of as of now: E-Z827, E-V68, E-V92 and E-V6, of which the first two contain the vast majority of known E-M215 lineages, this is the current substructure, and is somewhat correctly explained in the main article, however the introduction is misleading to this fact, when trying to revert, WP editor: Andrew Lancaster would not allow. Another issue is the nitpicking of ethnic groups with high frequency of E1b1b and displaying them in the introduction section, this is simply arbitrary, as there are multitudes of Ethnic groups in the horn of Africa with high levels of E1b1b. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.88.60.165 (talk) 21:19, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for finally using the talk page, but please remember to sign your talk page posts. First to make the differences clear:
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E-M215 is especially common among Oromos and Somalis in the Horn of Africa, as well as Berbers, Egyptians and Tuareg in North Africa. It is also frequently observed in West Asia, from where it spread into the Balkans and the rest of Europe. E-M215 has at least four common subclades: E-V68, E-V257, E-M123, E-M293, the last of which spreads from Ethiopia to South Africa. | E-M215 has two common subclades: E-M35.1 and E-M281, in turn, E-M35.1 has 4 common subclades: E-V68,E-Z827,E-V6 and E-V92, of which the two subclades, E-V68 and E-Z827, contain the vast majority of E-M215 bearers. |
And now to summarize the edit summaries (which are a bad way to have a discussion):
- I wrote: old version of this was better. It explains the most common clades (irrespective of artificial ideas about which ones are on the same level) in terms that can be found in main sources
- You wrote: Disagree, if the mentioned substructure is 'artificial' then it should not even be mentioned in the main article below, either stick with Trombetta '11 or current ISOGG
- I wrote: Nothing in this disagrees with Trombetta! Here clades are broken up as per same authors to explain what is most comm in mod'n populations
- You wrote: Never said it disagreed with Trombetta, rather it disagrees with current ISOGG, which is the same as the substructure below
- I wrote: It does not disagree with ISOGG either. You clearly do not understand ISOGG? Please use talkpage and do not revert again
- You wrote: I do understand ISOGG, please see talk page
Thirdly, to address your points, in as far as I understand them from your comments so far:
- There is no fixed number of sub-clades within any version of this family tree. But I do agree that you can of course describe the number of sub-clades at each particular level, as long as you mention that this is just the current state of knowledge. In this we seem to agree. But please note that the number and relationship of sub-clades on each known level is discussed in many places in the article already. There is not much point having this paragraph if it is just going to name the clades at one specific level that are named elsewhere anyway.
- All the sub-clades on all the "levels" are really sub-clades of E-M215. They do not have to be immediately under E-M215 to be a sub-clade of E-M215. For example E-V13 is a sub-clade of E-M215. It is also a sub-clade of E-V68 and E-M78. This is how authors write about it. Still, if you think it causes confusion, you can propose a wording tweak to fix this specific problem. However this is not what you have done, and this problem is pretty clearly not your biggest concern.
- What you have done instead is made the paragraph meaningless, or at least removed all indication of its original meaning. Originally it was, as you say yourself, a quick description of the most highest frequency populations in the world, giving the names of geographic/ethnic groups, and the clades involved (at whichever "level" they happen to be in, for example V257 is not related to any simple geographic area or linguistic or ethnic group, while M293 clearly is.)
- Your new version of the paragraph is not about what is common at all anymore, although it still uses the word "common". It trus now very incorrectly implies that for example V6 is similarly common as V68. No point having a paragraph which only make a misleading remark like this?
My conclusion: I think what you really need to justify is your assertion that a paragraph in the intro about highest frequency areas is "nitpicking" and "simply arbitrary". That seems to be your real issue? But isn't it one of the most basic things anyone coming to this article will want to know before they start reading further? Isn't it indeed how a lot of published articles start out when they introduce discussion of a specific clade? Please comment on this.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 16:04, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
Andrew, you should not simply assume which of the 2 separate issues is my biggest concern, as I have not given you any premise to undertake this assumption, in any event I will start with issue # 2, the arbitrary nitpicking and display of geographical and ethinic groups with high levels of E-M35.
First of all let's start with the horn of Africa, the Cruciani '04 article shows E-M215 being present in both the Amhara and Wolayta at equal levels with the Ethiopian Oromo, although it is true that higher levels were seen in the Borana oromo and Somalis, but why aren't the Wolayta and Amhara also stated if the Oromo, without any specification, are included, there are close to 100 Ethno-lingusitic groups in the horn of Africa, with E-M215/M35 SNP tests being carried out on only a handful of these groups, why then would the Oromos and Somalis be nitpicked? The fact that the lineage itself likely originates in this area is further reason that it would be widespread throughout the whole region, is it not?
Going on to Berbers, which type of Berbers? Siwa Berbers in Egypt have much less E-M215 than North West African Berbers for instance, again arbitrary. Why specify some and not specify others.
Next, let's go to Egyptians, again which Egyptians? Studies have shown different frequencies of E-M215 throughout Egypt, why no specifics and nitpicking on the Egyptians?
Next let's look at the Balkans, is E-M215 spread evenly throughout the Balkans, why aren't their populations pulled apart like those from Africa, surely, the frequency of E-M215 in Kosovar Albanians and Greeks is not at the same level as that of say Croatians is it?
So all the above is to say that the best way to relay this information is to display or link to the actual population samples that have been surveyed thus far (like it shows in the E-V68 Misplaced Pages page for instance) and/or may be even an interpolated or contour map of the frequency of E-M215 (like that shown in the Cruciani '04 publication) and just simply leave it at that, any other verbal description of what is 'common', mind you common is undefined here, is it 50%, 30% , 80%??, is unnecessary and simply will cause more confusion.
Now let me go to issue # 1, the issue which you wrongly thought was less important to me, lets revisit the sentence again: “E-M215 has at least four common subclades: E-V68, E-V257, E-M123, E-M293, the last of which spreads from Ethiopia to South Africa. “
Why am I insisting that current knowledge of E-M215's substructure should be unambiguously incorporated in the above sentence? Because the sentence makes little sense without incorporating the substructure, in-fact, I could re-write the above sentence as :
“E-M215 has at least four common subclades: E-M78, E-M81, E-M34, E-M293.....”
and be equally correct, so which subclade to choose? well the more downstream you go the more ambiguity is introduced, therefore, the correct and only choice is to start from as close to the root of the tree being described as possible, that is, as much as current knowledge can afford us.
One last thing with respect to the sentence “the last of which spreads from Ethiopia to South Africa”, although true, it makes it seem as if the others are not spread from Ethiopia to North Africa/Levant, which is the wrong impression, because we know that both E-V68 and E-M123 are spread from Ethiopia to NA/Levant as well, hence why I omitted it. 138.88.60.165 (talk) 19:41, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
- I have not simply assumed what your concerns are. I read your comments and edits, and did my best. Your latest post above seems to have almost nothing to do with any concerns you have raised previously, and so you should have come out with them way earlier. Let me go through them:
- Why specify the Borona, Oromo and Somalis? Because (a) they form one single ethno-linguistic group, in contrast to the many other groups in the Horn area who have been tested and because (b) they consistently turn out to have some of the highest frequency levels of all groups tested in that area, and this is frequently remarked upon. There is nothing illogical or arbitrary about this. Please also note that there have been more than one study of groups from that area. Short answer: the paragraph just follows the literature, and that is how Misplaced Pages works. My question to you: if this was your concern, why not just tweak the words to say "and other groups from the Horn of Africa"?
- Berbers. Again, the reasoning is simple: while there might be Berbers with lower and higher frequencies, Berbers have a whole are frequently reported as having one of the highest levels of E-M215 in any ethno-linguistic or geographic grouping. There is nothing arbitrary or wrong about remarking this. It is quite a simple, correct and logical description, and it follows what published experts say.
- Egyptians. Same again: whatever details will be discussed later in the article, there is nothing arbitrary about saying Egypt as a whole is one of the places in the world with one of the highest overall numbers of E-M215 men, either compared to the population as a whole, or just counted up.
- Is the paragraph derived from a contour map? No. Look at the size of the bibliography of the article. Regional distributions are discussed in the body of this article and its daughter articles. This is just the lead.
- Is it confusing what "common" means? Well, you left the word in, so I presume this was not your original concern, but the answer is no. In the areas named, E-M215 is common in every possible sense, when compared to other parts of the world. The areas named have the highest absolute numbers and relative numbers (ignoring small areas such as individual villages).
- There is in fact nothing ambiguous about “E-M215 has at least four common subclades: E-M78, E-M81, E-M34, E-M293.....”. What is the problem with that sentence? There is little difference between E-M78 and E-V68 in terms of how common they are for example, so either could be used. You seem to be saying that it is obviously illogical to make two statements such as "big cats are common here" and "lions and leopards are common here" as approximately equivalent. But such sentences are in fact approximately equivalent.
- "the correct and only choice is to start from as close to the root of the tree being described as possible, that is, as much as current knowledge can afford us". Why? This is not a logical or necessary thing at all as far as I can see. Going as close as possible to the root means going to E-M35, and that would be meaningless. To divide something into useful categories you have to by definition go away from the root.
- "“the last of which spreads from Ethiopia to South Africa”, although true, it makes it seem as if the others are not spread from Ethiopia to North Africa/Levant". How can you get that implication out of those words? In effect you are saying that "spreads from point A to the south" implies "spreads from point A to the north"?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 20:18, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
Well, I have explained at length both issues of (a) substructure and (b) Pointing to arbitrary ethnic groups in the lead.
Incidentally, I went through a few haplogroup articles here on WP, like R1b,R1a and E1b1a and this is the only article that I have seen thus far that proposes to include nitpicked ethnic groups in the lead, with out exception, all the articles show MACRO-REGIONAL distributions of the relevant lineage.
That being said, I see no point of repeating the arguments I stated over again, however I will acknowledge a couple of points that were raised by you (1) The usage of the word 'common' in the context of my proposal is unnecessary (2) some type of a general frequency snapshot of E-M215 carriers around the world can be useful if included, therefore here is my new proposal:
- E-M215 has two basal branches: E-M35.1 and E-M281, in turn, E-M35.1 has four branches: E-V68, E-Z827, E-V6 and E-V92, of which the first two, E-V68 and E-Z827, contain the vast majority of E-M215 bearers whom are to be more frequently observed in the East, South and North of Africa and to a lesser extent in the Near East and Europe.
138.88.60.165 (talk) 22:37, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
- I think that concerning our bullet point discussion above, the summary is that your edits do not match the discussion. Your new reply now reverts to what you previously implied was not your main concern, but which obviously is. Here it is: your main concern is that you do not think there should be a paragraph in the lead about which variants (note: the word sub-clade is easy to avoid) are most common in which ethnic and/or linguistic and/or geographic areas. You think it is arbitrary and nitpicking to do this. So you turned the paragraph into a useless repetition of a description of part of the family tree. Why not just delete the paragraph? Anyway, it strikes me we can save a lot of time and energy by directly discussing your real concern, which is whether it is a bad idea to describe where you find the thing that the article is about. Please address this point. I can not see why you think this is nitpicking or arbitrary and you have not yet given any explanation to this key point. If a person looks up Lions on Misplaced Pages, would it be arbitrary and nitpicking if they would find a paragraph in the lead which attempted to mention the regions where they can be found? --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 15:40, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- BTW, of course the R1a and R1b articles have sentences in their leads concerning where they are most common. You must not have looked very hard.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 15:55, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- I think that concerning our bullet point discussion above, the summary is that your edits do not match the discussion. Your new reply now reverts to what you previously implied was not your main concern, but which obviously is. Here it is: your main concern is that you do not think there should be a paragraph in the lead about which variants (note: the word sub-clade is easy to avoid) are most common in which ethnic and/or linguistic and/or geographic areas. You think it is arbitrary and nitpicking to do this. So you turned the paragraph into a useless repetition of a description of part of the family tree. Why not just delete the paragraph? Anyway, it strikes me we can save a lot of time and energy by directly discussing your real concern, which is whether it is a bad idea to describe where you find the thing that the article is about. Please address this point. I can not see why you think this is nitpicking or arbitrary and you have not yet given any explanation to this key point. If a person looks up Lions on Misplaced Pages, would it be arbitrary and nitpicking if they would find a paragraph in the lead which attempted to mention the regions where they can be found? --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 15:40, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
Also, here is a new draft, in case it helps:--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 15:47, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
the older version | my new proposal |
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E-M215 is especially common among Oromos and Somalis in the Horn of Africa, as well as Berbers, Egyptians and Tuareg in North Africa. It is also frequently observed in West Asia, from where it spread into the Balkans and the rest of Europe. E-M215 has at least four common subclades: E-V68, E-V257, E-M123, E-M293, the last of which spreads from Ethiopia to South Africa. | E-M215 is especially common in the Horn of Africa, and in North Africa, for example amongst some Berbers and Egyptian poulations. It is also frequently observed in parts of West Asia, the Mediterranean and Balkans, from which areas it is thought to have spread into Europe. Two of the most common variants of E-M215 in modern populations are E-V68 and E-V257. South of the Horn of Africa however E-M293 is the main variant found, stretching as far as South Africa |
Note that I see no point trying to write out a description of the family tree in the lead, because this is exactly what the body of the article does, and we should avoid repetition.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 15:55, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- “Anyway, it strikes me we can save a lot of time and energy by directly discussing your real concern, which is whether it is a bad idea to describe where you find the thing that the article is about. Please address this point.”
Its not a bad idea, I never said it was a bad idea, however what is a bad idea is the way you are choosing to describe it, which I termed as nitpicking and arbitrary, I have no problem using Macro-Regional descriptions that roughly depict E-M215's distribution like in most other WP haplogroup pages, alternatively or additionally, an interpolated or contour map for E-M215 can also be used, I see that other WP haplogroup pages use this as well. I have also told you to stop assuming what my real (and by implication not so real) concerns are, but you seem intent on continuing to assume so, I have raised 2 issues that I would like to be BOTH addressed equally, so I will again ask you to stop assuming which one you think is more important.138.88.60.165 (talk) 18:23, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- “BTW, of course the R1a and R1b articles have sentences in their leads concerning where they are most common. You must not have looked very hard”
And you must have not looked very hard at what I wrote.138.88.60.165 (talk) 18:23, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- “Note that I see no point trying to write out a description of the family tree in the lead, because this is exactly what the body of the article does, and we should avoid repetition.”
Yet, you see a point in mentioning about frequencies in the lead ? even-though the body of the article describes where E-M215 variants are found in detail as well. This makes no sense.138.88.60.165 (talk) 18:23, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
My Original Proposal | My Modified Proposal |
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E-M215 has two common subclades: E-M35.1 and E-M281, in turn, E-M35.1 has 4 common subclades: E-V68,E-Z827,E-V6 and E-V92, of which the two subclades, E-V68 and E-Z827, contain the vast majority of E-M215 bearers. | E-M215 has two basal branches: E-M35.1 and E-M281, in turn, E-M35.1 has four branches: E-V68, E-Z827, E-V6 and E-V92, of which the first two, E-V68 and E-Z827, contain the vast majority of E-M215 bearers whom are to be more frequently observed in the East, South and North of Africa and to a lesser extent in the Near East and Europe. |
I have redone my proposal in the table format above 138.88.60.165 (talk) 18:46, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, I see no point in putting a paragraph in the lead which is almost identical to a several parts of the article, but I do see value in putting a basic comment in the lead about where a person would expect to find the thing which is the subject of this Misplaced Pages article. I have asked you to explain why you do not. Please explain. Please try to address the points I make.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 19:39, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
Not only have I explained above, but I have also incorporated it into my modified proposal. Please read again. 138.88.60.165 (talk) 19:58, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- I only see comments insisting that it is the "correct and only choice" to do what you want, and that what existed previously in the article is "nit picking" and "arbitrary". That is not an argument, and adding more words by answering indirectly is not going to help you make your case. This kind of stuff can work on internet forums but you can quickly find yourself categorized if you try it too often on Misplaced Pages. Help yourself out please, and give a real argument.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 20:11, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
I see that you have decided to go ahead and edit the page, you have also put in a semblance of substructure, which is good, however, I would like to change the reference to the Horn of Africa to Eastern Africa, (a) for directional uniformity with Northern Africa, (b) most studies use Eastern Africa (Cruciani '04, Cruciani '07) when discussing E-M215. I would also like to take out the reference to Egyptians and Berbers, for reasons discussed above, the Macro-Regional description: North Africa is enough. 138.88.60.165 (talk) 20:39, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- On your first point: Horn of Africa is a geographical term which is clear and can not be interpreted any other way. East Africa, as a term for Horn of Africa is not clear, because East Africa generally refers to places like Kenya and Tanzania where E-M35 is much less common and where the unique clades being discussed have never been found. It is Misplaced Pages policy concerning geographical names that we should use the most commonly used name, and not necessarily what individual sources use.
- On your second point: I see no reason to remove references to Egyptians or Berbers. As mentioned, you have given no argument above, only repetitions of your faith in your own veracity. I'll restrict to many Berber populations as a compromise because I think there is absolutely no reasonable doubt that published sources refer to this and the high levels amongst them is obvious and striking. --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 21:05, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- Point1- Not at all, there are times where Horn of Africa can mean just Somalia for instance, the name literally describes the peninsula that sticks out of Eastern Africa, but the term is also used as a collective for Ethiopia, Somalia, Djbouti and Eritrea at other times as well, however, you have no proof that Horn of Africa is more commonly used to describe these countries than East Africa is, the UN for instance does not designate these countries as Horn of Africa but rather Eastern Africa, ditto for several other International Organizations. Also, the reference of East Africa to Kenya, Tanzania and Uganda only comes from the colonial possessions of Britain in that region, i.e. British East Africa and has nothing to do with the fact that countries included in the Horn of Africa are not also commonly called East African countries, or within geographical East Africa. This is in addition to all the scientific sources that use the East Africa designation for E-M215's distribution that I mentioned earlier and I am re-iterating again.
- Point2- I have already discussed why arbitrarily nit picking certain ethnic groups and leaving out others is not only unnecessary in the lead but also pretty much uncommon, if ever seen, in the lead of other WP haplogroup articles, we already have a list of all or most of the population samples taken from the scientific studies detailed out for any user that is wanting to dig deeper to see, either in this article or articles related to it, apparently you only want to see what you are wanting to see with respect to this issue, but this is not my problem and I refuse to re-enter my arguments all over again. 138.88.60.165 (talk) 23:35, 9 January 2013 (UTC)