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As discussed on Classical music (when the template was designed and again now), each individual instrument is important, for example no trumpets here, but oboe d'amore, speaking of love. "Instruments" appear at the very end of the box. Clicking on Scoring opens a table of the abbreviations, which are standard for publishing, well known, each with a link to what it stands for. Why should knowledge be limited to the level of those who wouldn't bother to look up what an abbr means? Please consider restoring the information. --] (]) 13:15, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | As discussed on Classical music (when the template was designed and again now), each individual instrument is important, for example no trumpets here, but oboe d'amore, speaking of love. "Instruments" appear at the very end of the box. Clicking on Scoring opens a table of the abbreviations, which are standard for publishing, well known, each with a link to what it stands for. Why should knowledge be limited to the level of those who wouldn't bother to look up what an abbr means? Please consider restoring the information. --] (]) 13:15, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | ||
:Hello Gerda! You had previously argued that infoboxes should be for those who know nothing about the topic. It would be very unlikely for such people to know anything about standards in music publishing. They would thus be very confused, even intimidated, to see "2Fl 2Ft 2Ob 2Oa 2Oa Fg 2Vl Va Vg Bc" in an overview. Sure, there are tooltips, but not everyone knows about or can easily use those. Listing the full names would be unwieldy. It's much clearer and more accessible to explain instrumentation in the article itself. After all, you suggested that we should ], right? Hope that helps you understand. ] (]) 15:02, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Trying to understand, but unconvinced, sorry. - Did you see where the link on "Scoring" takes you (or was it removed again as "duplicate")? Your quote above is a bit misleading, it said "two orchestras, 2{{abbr|Fl|flauto}} 2{{abbr|Ft|flauto traverso}} 2{{abbr|Ob|oboe}} 2{{abbr|Oa|oboe d'amore}} 2{{abbr|Oa|oboe d'amore}} {{abbr|Fg|bassoon}} 2{{abbr|Vl|violino}} {{abbr|Va|viola}} {{abbr|Vg|viola da gamba}} {{abbr|Bc|basso continuo}}" (in the Mass in B minor it's "instruments 3{{abbr|Tr|tromba}} {{abbr|Ti|timpani}} {{abbr|Co|corno}} 2{{abbr|Ft|flauto traverso}}, 2{{abbr|Ob|oboe}} 2{{abbr|Oa|oboe d'amore}} 2{{abbr|Fg|bassoon}} 2{{abbr|Vl|violino}} {{abbr|Va|viola}} {{abbr|Bc|basso continuo}}"), - I would think that people reading on a composition would get "orchestra" and "instruments" as "musical instruments", and those who know more get the details. Comparing to the the Mass, see the difference! A person who knows can almost hear that difference - if it is provided. Please note, that this is not the article on the St Matthew Passion, but its structure, addressing those who want to know the bit more. It's a work in progress. --] (]) 15:20, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Okay, if they'd get "instruments", then let's just say that and leave the details for where we can explain them. ] (]) 15:35, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I mentioned this discussion on ] where I read "If the reader is mystified, they can look it up later." Give those a chance who are not mystified but hear something reading the abbreviations, without an explanation necessary, --] (]) 15:51, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Those are the people who read the article and want to know things like which section has which instruments, which can't be covered by an infobox. As you yourself argued, the infobox is not for the people who want that detail, but for those who want a broad overview. ] (]) 16:02, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Right, it's topic of the article which section has which instruments. However, if there are trumpets at all, or recorders, is information that the interested reader could see at a glance if provided, - information that wouldn't hurt the others, imho --] (]) 16:11, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::But it would hurt those who can't understand it, and those who can would more likely care about the details. ] (]) 16:18, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I fail to see how a string of characters following the word "instruments" could possibly hurt, --] (]) 16:24, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Because if you don't understand what the characters mean, you get confused; maybe you spend time trying to figure it out or maybe you just leave, but either way not a good experience for the poor reader. ] (]) 18:32, 2 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
Excuse me, I come to a different conclusion: the experienced reader can win specific information, I feel only mildly sorry for a mild irritation of the other. Please see ] to explain the abbreviations better, and the documentation of the template, --] (]) 15:21, 3 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I've seen that discussion, and in it "those musical score abbreviations... quite off-putting and I suspect totally mystifying to the general reader". We should of course fix the template documentation as needed. ] (]) 15:52, 3 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Same discussion, quoting myself "In an article, I always use the complete names of the instrument. But in an infobox ... we have limited space." - I am afraid that the "poor" average reader (as you picture him, unable to look up an abbreviation) will have a completely wrong impression if all he gets to know is two orchestras". Why limit? --] (]) 16:02, 3 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::You just answered your own question: we limit because we have limited space in an infobox. After all, per MOS, "the less information it contains, the more effectively it serves". ] (]) 16:26, 3 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::You didn't read far enough: "two orchestras" is misleading. See also , "I doubt I would have done it like this myself, but the abbreviations are likely to be known & understood by most people reading a relatively detailed article like this." --] (]) 16:34, 3 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Yes, I had indicated we could do without "two orchestras", but you had expressed concerns that this might confuse people into believing that the work is a capella. The statement you link suggests people reading these articles would be unlikely to have that confusion, but I respect your concern, so including "two orchestras" is a compromise. ] (]) 17:03, 3 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Indeed, the comment quoited was by me, & applies here too. I see we have ], and a piped link there is enough for any readers who are puzzled, in my view. ] (]) 17:09, 3 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Wikilinks are a beautiful thing for the non-expert reader. Infoboxes need to not mislead through over-simplification any more than excess detail. Known abbreviations and links when needed work fine. ]<sup>]</sup> 18:35, 4 April 2013 (UTC) |
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A fact from St Matthew Passion structure appeared on Misplaced Pages's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 April 2012 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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The main author of the FA (de equivalent) is Wikiwal who did an outstanding job, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:35, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
- What does "FA" mean? Basemetal (talk) 21:08, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
- Featured article. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 06:23, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
Decorative images?
Should Misplaced Pages follow the tradition of purely decorative images in articles? At the beginning of the article there's a photograph of a painting by Cranach the Elder. A decorative purpose seems to be the only purpose for the presence of that photograph in the article. What do Cranach the Elder or his painting (of more then two hundred years before Bach's St Matthew Passion) really, specifically, have to do with the structure of Bach's work? The German version gives a justification of sorts ("Lucas Cranach d. Ä. deutet in seinem Bild Christus als Schmerzensmann (1515) das Leiden Jesu ebenso wie Bach realistisch und zugleich mystisch"). But seriously! This sort of speculation about vague connections between works of art, without any positive evidence that Bach ever even saw or knew of that painting, let alone that it had anything to do with the creative process that led to the St Matthew Passion (a fortiori its structure!) belongs in an essay, not in a factual source of information such as an encyclopedia. You might as well put a picture of Martin Luther with the "justification" that Bach's Lutheran faith "informed his life and music" or that Martin Luther must be "connected" to the St Matthew Passion because after all Bach used the text of his translation of the Gospel. Consider that a textual digression about Cranach the Elder's painting (or on Martin Luther) in the body of the article would never be considered justified. Images are documents and data just as much as the text. They should therefore be directly connected with and relevant to the subject matter of the article. When they're there just to prettify they're just clutter. The fact that almost all dictionaries and encyclopedias do it is not a good reason to also do it in Misplaced Pages. Basemetal (talk) 12:37, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
- That image is not decorative; it illustrates the subject of the article, the St Mattew Passion. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 06:23, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
- You must be someone who believes confident reiteration can turn nonsense into sense. "A Cranach the Elder painting (ca. 1515) illustrates Bach's Matthäus-Passion (1727)". And, you don't see any problem with this statement, logicwise? Wow. Signed: Basemetal (write to me here) 19:00, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- Do you read German? Four good reasons to have this image were given on the talk of the German article, including that Bach may have know this image. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:04, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. German discussion here for those interested. Signed: Basemetal (write to me here) 05:24, 29 November 2012 (UTC)
- Do you read German? Four good reasons to have this image were given on the talk of the German article, including that Bach may have know this image. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:04, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- You must be someone who believes confident reiteration can turn nonsense into sense. "A Cranach the Elder painting (ca. 1515) illustrates Bach's Matthäus-Passion (1727)". And, you don't see any problem with this statement, logicwise? Wow. Signed: Basemetal (write to me here) 19:00, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
Referencing images?
One annoying problem with images (or other non-text documents: video, audio) throughout Misplaced Pages is: they don't carry fig numbers. Why don't they? Is this a Misplaced Pages bug or a "feature"? Was this done on purpose or was it just overlooked? It certainly makes referencing an image more awkward than it ought to be ("the photograph of blah blah blah in the third section of the article blah blah blah to the left, below the table of blah blah blah"). Is there no way to fix that? Basemetal (talk) 12:48, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
- Normal practice is to position non-text documents next to the text that deals with them, thus no explicit referencing is needed. If such referencing should be needed, it can be achieved as described at Help:Anchor. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 06:23, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
Instruments in Infobox
As discussed on Classical music (when the template was designed and again now), each individual instrument is important, for example no trumpets here, but oboe d'amore, speaking of love. "Instruments" appear at the very end of the box. Clicking on Scoring opens a table of the abbreviations, which are standard for publishing, well known, each with a link to what it stands for. Why should knowledge be limited to the level of those who wouldn't bother to look up what an abbr means? Please consider restoring the information. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:15, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Hello Gerda! You had previously argued that infoboxes should be for those who know nothing about the topic. It would be very unlikely for such people to know anything about standards in music publishing. They would thus be very confused, even intimidated, to see "2Fl 2Ft 2Ob 2Oa 2Oa Fg 2Vl Va Vg Bc" in an overview. Sure, there are tooltips, but not everyone knows about or can easily use those. Listing the full names would be unwieldy. It's much clearer and more accessible to explain instrumentation in the article itself. After all, you suggested that we should keep it simple, right? Hope that helps you understand. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:02, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Trying to understand, but unconvinced, sorry. - Did you see where the link on "Scoring" takes you (or was it removed again as "duplicate")? Your quote above is a bit misleading, it said "two orchestras, 2Fl 2Ft 2Ob 2Oa 2Oa Fg 2Vl Va Vg Bc" (in the Mass in B minor it's "instruments 3Tr Ti Co 2Ft, 2Ob 2Oa 2Fg 2Vl Va Bc"), - I would think that people reading on a composition would get "orchestra" and "instruments" as "musical instruments", and those who know more get the details. Comparing to the the Mass, see the difference! A person who knows can almost hear that difference - if it is provided. Please note, that this is not the article on the St Matthew Passion, but its structure, addressing those who want to know the bit more. It's a work in progress. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:20, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, if they'd get "instruments", then let's just say that and leave the details for where we can explain them. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:35, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- I mentioned this discussion on Classical music where I read "If the reader is mystified, they can look it up later." Give those a chance who are not mystified but hear something reading the abbreviations, without an explanation necessary, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:51, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Those are the people who read the article and want to know things like which section has which instruments, which can't be covered by an infobox. As you yourself argued, the infobox is not for the people who want that detail, but for those who want a broad overview. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:02, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Right, it's topic of the article which section has which instruments. However, if there are trumpets at all, or recorders, is information that the interested reader could see at a glance if provided, - information that wouldn't hurt the others, imho --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:11, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- But it would hurt those who can't understand it, and those who can would more likely care about the details. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:18, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- I fail to see how a string of characters following the word "instruments" could possibly hurt, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:24, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Because if you don't understand what the characters mean, you get confused; maybe you spend time trying to figure it out or maybe you just leave, but either way not a good experience for the poor reader. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:32, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- I fail to see how a string of characters following the word "instruments" could possibly hurt, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:24, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- But it would hurt those who can't understand it, and those who can would more likely care about the details. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:18, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Right, it's topic of the article which section has which instruments. However, if there are trumpets at all, or recorders, is information that the interested reader could see at a glance if provided, - information that wouldn't hurt the others, imho --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:11, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Those are the people who read the article and want to know things like which section has which instruments, which can't be covered by an infobox. As you yourself argued, the infobox is not for the people who want that detail, but for those who want a broad overview. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:02, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- I mentioned this discussion on Classical music where I read "If the reader is mystified, they can look it up later." Give those a chance who are not mystified but hear something reading the abbreviations, without an explanation necessary, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:51, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, if they'd get "instruments", then let's just say that and leave the details for where we can explain them. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:35, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
- Trying to understand, but unconvinced, sorry. - Did you see where the link on "Scoring" takes you (or was it removed again as "duplicate")? Your quote above is a bit misleading, it said "two orchestras, 2Fl 2Ft 2Ob 2Oa 2Oa Fg 2Vl Va Vg Bc" (in the Mass in B minor it's "instruments 3Tr Ti Co 2Ft, 2Ob 2Oa 2Fg 2Vl Va Bc"), - I would think that people reading on a composition would get "orchestra" and "instruments" as "musical instruments", and those who know more get the details. Comparing to the the Mass, see the difference! A person who knows can almost hear that difference - if it is provided. Please note, that this is not the article on the St Matthew Passion, but its structure, addressing those who want to know the bit more. It's a work in progress. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:20, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
Excuse me, I come to a different conclusion: the experienced reader can win specific information, I feel only mildly sorry for a mild irritation of the other. Please see the related discussion to explain the abbreviations better, and the documentation of the template, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:21, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- I've seen that discussion, and in it "those musical score abbreviations... quite off-putting and I suspect totally mystifying to the general reader". We should of course fix the template documentation as needed. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:52, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Same discussion, quoting myself "In an article, I always use the complete names of the instrument. But in an infobox ... we have limited space." - I am afraid that the "poor" average reader (as you picture him, unable to look up an abbreviation) will have a completely wrong impression if all he gets to know is two orchestras". Why limit? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:02, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- You just answered your own question: we limit because we have limited space in an infobox. After all, per MOS, "the less information it contains, the more effectively it serves". Nikkimaria (talk) 16:26, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- You didn't read far enough: "two orchestras" is misleading. See also this comment, "I doubt I would have done it like this myself, but the abbreviations are likely to be known & understood by most people reading a relatively detailed article like this." --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:34, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, I had indicated we could do without "two orchestras", but you had expressed concerns that this might confuse people into believing that the work is a capella. The statement you link suggests people reading these articles would be unlikely to have that confusion, but I respect your concern, so including "two orchestras" is a compromise. Nikkimaria (talk) 17:03, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Indeed, the comment quoited was by me, & applies here too. I see we have Shorthand for orchestra instrumentation, and a piped link there is enough for any readers who are puzzled, in my view. Johnbod (talk) 17:09, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Wikilinks are a beautiful thing for the non-expert reader. Infoboxes need to not mislead through over-simplification any more than excess detail. Known abbreviations and links when needed work fine. Montanabw 18:35, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
- You didn't read far enough: "two orchestras" is misleading. See also this comment, "I doubt I would have done it like this myself, but the abbreviations are likely to be known & understood by most people reading a relatively detailed article like this." --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:34, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- You just answered your own question: we limit because we have limited space in an infobox. After all, per MOS, "the less information it contains, the more effectively it serves". Nikkimaria (talk) 16:26, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
- Same discussion, quoting myself "In an article, I always use the complete names of the instrument. But in an infobox ... we have limited space." - I am afraid that the "poor" average reader (as you picture him, unable to look up an abbreviation) will have a completely wrong impression if all he gets to know is two orchestras". Why limit? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:02, 3 April 2013 (UTC)