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The question asked by ] – "how do readers know they must hover over each flag" – is about twenty years out of time. People of all ages nowadays know how to use their mice. Okay? They are not stupid. Graphics and images and links are abundant in the internet and people hovering their mice to get a connection or a bit of info is second nature. And anyway, as PeeJay says, this should all be discussed at WP:FOOTY as the arguments raised are generic. ] (]) 18:40, 11 April 2014 (UTC) | The question asked by ] – "how do readers know they must hover over each flag" – is about twenty years out of time. People of all ages nowadays know how to use their mice. Okay? They are not stupid. Graphics and images and links are abundant in the internet and people hovering their mice to get a connection or a bit of info is second nature. And anyway, as PeeJay says, this should all be discussed at WP:FOOTY as the arguments raised are generic. ] (]) 18:40, 11 April 2014 (UTC) | ||
:Please note that I have reverted the latest edit by ], again removing the flags, because no consensus has been reached in this discussion and I think he should wait until this has been achieved before trying to impose his view on the article. I note that he has performed what amount to four edit reverts yesterday and today. I think this is out of order given that the matter is currently subject to discussion and I believe he should be patient. ] (]) 19:20, 11 April 2014 (UTC) |
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Manchester United–Arsenal brawl (1990) has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: April 7, 2014. |
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 11:17, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
I'll review this sometime in the next couple days. Wizardman 11:17, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
- "The match is often said to have instigated the rivalry between Arsenal and Manchester United, which carried on through the 1990s and 2000s." Having this and the following note in the background section feels odd. It's written well, but shouldn't the post-rivalry boom be in the aftermath section, and the background part be rewritten accordingly?
- I'll leave this one for the original author to deal with. – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- Have changed order. Lemonade51 (talk) 12:23, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
- I'll leave this one for the original author to deal with. – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- "Arsenal arrived at Old Trafford on the back of an 22-match unbeaten run" either 'a 22-match..' or 'an unbeaten..'
- Changed to "a 22-match unbeaten run". – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- "Brian McClair blasted the penalty over the crossbar " blasted might be on the journaly side rather than the encyclopedic.
- Changed to "hit the penalty". – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- "Neil Webb deputised for club captain Bryan Robson" can this be clarified? I imagine if i understood football more I'd have no problem with this, but as is I only partially get what I think it's saying.
- Done a comprehensive rewording. – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- "Michael Thomas was declared fit to start in midfield and David O'Leary travelled as part of the squad." in a vacuum this doesn't sound important, but i imagine it is due to its inclusion; can this (and possibly the previous sentence) be added on a bit?
- I don't have access to the original source, so I can't add to this. Imagine the author was struggling for content about the Arsenal team selection and this was the best he could do. – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- PeeJay is correct, there was little team news to find on Arsenal. Removed the O'Leary bit because he never featured in the match -- just an unused sub. Lemonade51 (talk) 12:23, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
- I don't have access to the original source, so I can't add to this. Imagine the author was struggling for content about the Arsenal team selection and this was the best he could do. – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- " proceeded to kick out at Winterburn and Limpar" a bit jargony. The summary I could follow at least despite it being a bit heavy in that regard, but this phrase i'm not quite getting.
- I don't really understand this phrase either as I don't remember the brawl in detail, but I've changed "kicked out" to "retaliated". – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- "Ferguson ordered his players to the training ground, where they watched the match." did they watch film of the match, or watch something after the fact? A bit confusing as worded.
- I imagine they watched a recorded broadcast of the match. Not sure what else they could possibly have watched. – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- A more general question that may be showing ignorance, but I'm curious: how was Arsenal so far behind Liverpool in points if they only lost one game all season? Was it just the way schedules were designed, or was it a part of the points structure i'm not understanding?
- In the Football League (and practically all other football leagues across the world), teams are awarded three points for a win and one for a draw (or a tie, in North American vernacular). Liverpool won more and drew fewer games than Arsenal, so they benefited by an extra two points for every extra win. – PeeJay 23:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 23:05, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
The changes so far look good. All I need, aside from the couple things deferred to the author, is a copyedit and de-jargoning of the game summary, just to make sure it's more fully readable for someone who stumbles across it. Wizardman 00:48, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review. I've combed through parts of the match summary where I think suffers from jargon and removed irrelevant bits. Lemonade51 (talk) 12:23, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
- Not a problem; reads much better now. Only hiccup I saw was the Winterburn being tended to issue that you guys had already hatnoted; i just removed it until it can be noted better if it's importance. The article now passes as a GA. Wizardman 22:35, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
Compliance with Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation etc.
- Re the insistence of User:PeeJay2K3 in adding back flag icons I removed on several occasions, those flag icons are not relevant and are distracting. The international composition of the teams has zip to do with a bust-up in what is a purely local match. MOS:FLAG#Use of flags for sportspersons says:
Flags should never indicate the player's nationality in a non-sporting sense; flags should only indicate the sportsperson's national squad/team or representative nationality (and it is not an exception to #Avoid flag icons in infoboxes). Where flags are used in a table, it should clearly indicate that they correspond to representative nationality, not legal nationality, if any confusion might arise. (bolding is mine)
- You are expected to abide by guidelines and not ignore them merely because you disagree; reverting correctly applied guidelines is considered disruptive behaviour. -- Ohc 13:34, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
- I don't understand how that guideline forbids the use of flags in this article. Yes, it says that flags should not indicate players' nationality in a non-sporting sense, but that's not what they're doing; they're showing what national teams those players are/were eligible for. That is not forbidden. – PeeJay 18:53, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
Flags deliberately hiding the information from readers?
I, for one, have no idea what countries those splotches of bright colours refer to. Could someone explain why readers are denied this information in favour of a garish array that actually looks quite slipshod? Tony (talk) 10:17, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for your opinions. Given that they are personal to you and mine are starkly different, I will take them with a pinch of salt. It is clear that you are opposed to the use of flags, though for what reason I cannot discern. Through the use of {{flagicon}}, the flags now automatically provide a link to the article of the country to which they refer, meaning that any reader who hovers his/her mouse over the flag will find out what the country is immediately. Furthermore, they are not "splotches of bright colours", they are flags, and I do not appreciate your facetiousness in the making of your point. Finally, "garish" and "slipshod" are rather extreme terms for what I myself deem to be a well-organised and efficient presentation of information. – PeeJay 19:19, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
- They're not "personal" in any particular way, which is how you're trying to frame them: they're fact. You seem to believe that withholding the country-name from a table is a good thing. Why? Tony (talk) 03:40, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Well, the flags don't withhold the information. It is a matter of presenting the information graphically instead of using narrative. As PeeJay says, you can read the name of the country simply by hovering over the flag with your mouse. I think there are articles in which use of flags is overdone, but not in this one. As I have pointed out at WT:FOOTY, I believe this article should be renamed to reflect the match, result and date per similar one-match articles. GnGn (talk) 04:44, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Tony, when you use words like "garish" and "slipshod", that indicates to me that this is a matter of opinion. Just because other people may share that opinion doesn't mean it's not personal to you. Furthermore, just because a plurality of people share the same opinion doesn't make it correct. I'd like to flip the scenario on you, if I may, by asking why you think removing the flags altogether is preferable to keeping them in just because they don't spell out the name of the country to which they refer right next to them. – PeeJay 08:36, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- What information do the flags add? Or are they decorative? --John (talk) 11:25, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Not merely decorative. As stated aove, they are a graphic means of presenting information, in this case the nationality of each player in the lists. I'm still a relatively new member but I believe I've read somewhere that editors should strive to use images, graphics, etc. where practicable as otherwise the reader sees only a wall of boring old text. I feel sure that most readers would prefer to see the St George's Cross umpteen times in a list rather than repetitive use of the word England. Besides which, the flag saves space as it enables a narrower column in the table. GnGn (talk) 11:36, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Precisely. They are not exclusively for decoration, they are simply a more efficient and aesthetically pleasing way of indicating the nationalities of the players, hence indicating the international nature of the sport. – PeeJay 11:52, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Are the nationalities of the players an important factor in the article? Are we talking their "sporting" nationalities or their official ones? --John (talk) 12:36, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- In football articles (I can't speak for other sports), we always refer to a player's "sporting" nationality, i.e. the national team for which the player is qualified to play. I don't think the players' nationalities were relevant to the specific incident that made this match notable, but for the sake of consistency among other club football match articles, it makes sense to indicate players' nationalities in all articles. – PeeJay 13:11, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- It's a very contrived argument you have concocted there. The purpose of the flags is purely to render some colourful graphics, and because people use it in other articles. This match is not an international match, so nationalities are not sporting nationality for the purposes of MOS:FLAG and thus are totally irrelevant. -- Ohc 17:35, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- In football articles (I can't speak for other sports), we always refer to a player's "sporting" nationality, i.e. the national team for which the player is qualified to play. I don't think the players' nationalities were relevant to the specific incident that made this match notable, but for the sake of consistency among other club football match articles, it makes sense to indicate players' nationalities in all articles. – PeeJay 13:11, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Are the nationalities of the players an important factor in the article? Are we talking their "sporting" nationalities or their official ones? --John (talk) 12:36, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Precisely. They are not exclusively for decoration, they are simply a more efficient and aesthetically pleasing way of indicating the nationalities of the players, hence indicating the international nature of the sport. – PeeJay 11:52, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Not merely decorative. As stated aove, they are a graphic means of presenting information, in this case the nationality of each player in the lists. I'm still a relatively new member but I believe I've read somewhere that editors should strive to use images, graphics, etc. where practicable as otherwise the reader sees only a wall of boring old text. I feel sure that most readers would prefer to see the St George's Cross umpteen times in a list rather than repetitive use of the word England. Besides which, the flag saves space as it enables a narrower column in the table. GnGn (talk) 11:36, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- What information do the flags add? Or are they decorative? --John (talk) 11:25, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- They're not "personal" in any particular way, which is how you're trying to frame them: they're fact. You seem to believe that withholding the country-name from a table is a good thing. Why? Tony (talk) 03:40, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- How, then, do readers know they must hover over each flag to learn what it means? Why doesn't the key to the column explain whether it's the player's nationality or the team? Tony (talk) 13:15, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Why would it be the team's nationality? The team's nationality is indicated by the fact that no flags are assigned to them (what with it being a domestic game) and the country the game was played in is indicated by the lead paragraph (or at least it should be). As for your other comment, perhaps we need a better way of presenting football line-ups so that people know that "GK/DF/MF/FW" are the players' positions, the numbers are their jersey numbers and the flags indicate their nationalities. But that's not a discussion for here, that's for WT:FOOTY. – PeeJay 13:22, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
I'd just like to answer the points three posts above by User:Ohconfucius as I presume he is not a football fan. The use of flags is, for the third time, a graphic means of presenting information instead of saying England, England, England, England, England, England, oh! Wales, England, England, etc., ad nauseum. It is NOT "purely to render some colourful graphics". The use of graphics to convey information is widespread in all spheres of communication, not just the internet. As for folk using it in other articles, well, if they do then that presents a consensus, doesn't it? No, the match was not an international but the nationalities of the players are relevant in football because for the last thirty-odd years since the arrivals of Ardiles and Villa, nationality has been and still is a burning issue in English football. There are people now who will reluctantly admit that Liverpool have more top-class English players than anyone else at present but still criticise the club for employing South Americans. It is very important to specify players' nationalities.
The question asked by User:Tony1 – "how do readers know they must hover over each flag" – is about twenty years out of time. People of all ages nowadays know how to use their mice. Okay? They are not stupid. Graphics and images and links are abundant in the internet and people hovering their mice to get a connection or a bit of info is second nature. And anyway, as PeeJay says, this should all be discussed at WP:FOOTY as the arguments raised are generic. GnGn (talk) 18:40, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
- Please note that I have reverted the latest edit by User:Ohconfucius, again removing the flags, because no consensus has been reached in this discussion and I think he should wait until this has been achieved before trying to impose his view on the article. I note that he has performed what amount to four edit reverts yesterday and today. I think this is out of order given that the matter is currently subject to discussion and I believe he should be patient. GnGn (talk) 19:20, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
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