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Sorry Alexbrn, but I suspect that nothing I added would have satisfied. And your edit summary doesn't paint a picture of the changes I made. No worries. (] (]) 19:13, 22 May 2014 (UTC)) Sorry Alexbrn, but I suspect that nothing I added would have satisfied. And your edit summary doesn't paint a picture of the changes I made. No worries. (] (]) 19:13, 22 May 2014 (UTC))

{{od}} This is not balanced, in that it excludes all negative information and whitewashes what he does as "Integrative medicine." ] (]) 19:16, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

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The questions that we should be addressing are 1) Does the body of the article appropriately represent the mainstream academic view of the subject?

If not, 2) What is missing and needs to be added to the body? What is over-represented and needs to be condensed or removed from the body?

If yes, 3)Does the lead section appropriately summarize the body?

If not, 4) What is missing and needs to be added to the lead? What is over-represented and needs to be condensed or removed from the lead?

5) Does the initial sentence appropriately encapsulate what a reader coming to the article should know about the subject as identified by the body and the lead paragraphs? -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 21:39, 25 April 2014 (UTC)

I am thinking of adding something on Chopra's views on genetics (+response). He's also had some impact I think with his ideas about sexual activity, and about major religious figures (e.g. Jesus). I've seen these things mentioned in the secondary literature and there may be enough weight there to warrant inclusion? Alexbrn 04:50, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
i would think that for any of these topics if there are two or three sources discussing in a fairly significant manner (or if the topic is used by a reliable source as their introductory identification blurb of Chopra ) the subjects would be worthy of mention in the body, (unless Chopra's take on them are so esoteric or complex that the appropriate presentation and context would take too long to establish in prose) -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 05:29, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
What's missing are all mainstream views of the subject that show him to be a prominent endocrinologist, entrepreneur, pioneer, best selling author on mind body healing, consciousness and spirituality. What's missing is the impact he is made and why he is so notable. Both Bill Clinton and Gorbachev have given him very public accolades as a physician and a philosopher. Why? He has written 75 books, 23 NYTimes best sellers, and built an empire. Why is he so successful? He lectures, panels and writes books with some of the most prominent scientists and philosophers in the world. Why do they give him the attention?
One begins to wonder what makes Dr. Chopra so interesting for him to get that level of attention but they certainly wont find it from reading this article.
What's also missing are editors on this article who know the subject matter specifically, have read Deepak's books, are familiar with medical topics such as integrative medicine, and are familiar with philosophy and spirituality. That a number of dedicated editors here are suggesting that Dr Chopra is not notable for being either a physician or a endocrinologist tells me no one here have read any number of his best selling books, which mentions his work as a physician and endocrinologist in dozens of them. It also tells me they have not looked at their own sources, the majority of which mention him as a physician or endocrinologist. SAS81 (talk) 01:29, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
My thoughts on the body and the lead are the following. Both myself and Dr. Chopra find the article to be highly biased, misleading and incomplete by either omission or undue weight on criticisms. Obviously the first sentence frames the article and the subject - and that is why my attention has been there in addition to editors here specifically requesting I point out which sentence and which problem specifically, which I have been obliging. SAS81 (talk) 01:40, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
sorry I am NOT going to any endocrinologist who has learned his trade via reading NYT bestsellers and any endocrinologist who has is absolutely about the farthest thing away from mainstream academic endocrinology. Medicine does not work that way. mainstream / academic medicine is based on repeatable clinical trials, not who can shuck $25 bucks a piece out of the yokels for a hardback.-- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 01:45, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
@SAS81: regarding your specific points about "what is not included in the article"
  • "a prominent endocrinologist," - he is certainly not one of the prominently published endocrinologists who has influenced the field. i am also pretty sure that when you ask endocrinologists "Who are the top guys in your field?" Chopra will not be on the top ten list. What exactly do you mean by "prominent endocrinologist"?
  • entrepreneur, well, actually its right there in the lead section "Chopra has enjoyed business success "; in the body we have " became the founding president of the American Association of Ayurvedic Medicine," and " found the Chopra Center for Wellbeing " (both also covered in the lead) and " Chopra's business grosses approximately $20 million annually, and is built on the sale of various alternative medicine products such as herbal supplements, massage oils, books, videos and courses. " what exactly from the entrepreneur aspects are we missing?
  • "pioneer," WP:PEACOCK you will need to be more specific about what you mean by that
  • "best selling author " as noted above, we do already include the success of his book sales, and as noted in WP:PEACOCK we do not just throw around the appellation "best selling". The article could specifically call out that his books have been on best selling lists.
Without some more specifics, i dont see much of your claims as having a basis, particularly to claim that they are "missing". -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 16:49, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for sharing your thinking on the specifics. Now I'm a bit clearer on your thinking. This is something I can work with. I'm going to address these with massive sources. Standby. SAS81 (talk) 16:05, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
There are many labels that have been applied to Dr Chopra. We are just trying to find the best one that does not omit facts and that is also not a pejorative. Pioneer, guru, thought leader, global leader, transformation leader, spiritual leader, world renown philosopher, top motivational speaker and professor are all labels that have been applied to Dr. Chopra by mainstream sources and they all are trying to infer something similar. I'm working to try to satisfy your concerns as well here. SAS81 (talk) 19:27, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Update on TRPoD's breakdown

The last suggestion I made for compromise was: Deepak Chopra is an Indian American endocrinologist, best selling New Age author, motivational speaker and 'wellness' entrepreneur. Chopra is a polarizing figure, functioning as a spiritual leader to some and a promoter of dangerous ideas to others.

Let's work it out?

Dr. Chopra most certainly is a thought leader and that is what I now propose as a solution and compromise. Even if you disagree with his thoughts. I think this is a more appropriate and neutral way to frame him rather than guru or spiritual leader (since technically speaking he is neither of those things although he is those things to some people)

Here is my third suggestion (in which I am trying to work in your 'Fringe' concerns while still being respectful and neutral, referring only to facts)

Deepak Chopra is an Indian American endocrinologist, author, thought leader and 'wellness' entrepreneur. Chopra is a controversial figure, functioning as a New Age spiritual leader to some and a promoter of dangerous ideas to others.

sources for endocrinologist: 1 " DoctorFinder: Chopra, Deepak, MD. (Agree to terms, then search for Chopra, Deepak in California) 2, 3, 4

Notability as such: major doctors and scientists such as Candace Pert and Rudolph E. Tanzi have both mentioned him extensively as such , in addition to it being a major component of his many best selling books.

Sources for 'thought leader' - which I am offering as a compromise to replace guru and spiritual leader in the lead sentence only. I dont see how 'new age guru' applies to any of the below. other than it being a pejorative - it's also not a fair mainstream representation of who Dr. Chopra is.

  • Business Insider lists him as one of 6 major global thought leaders.

I'm open to finding a better phrase for 'wellness' entrepreneur - but the article is missing this key component to Dr. Chopra's as an entrepreneur and thought leader. SAS81 (talk) 19:27, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

This proposal is totally unbalanced. I'm not being paid for my time, so I don't feel like helping, but Oppose. Hipocrite (talk) 20:25, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
This was not meant to be up for a vote Hipocrite - but rather to find compromises and explain each other's thinking. If a label is unbalanced, which specifically? What do you suggest as a replacement? What sources are you using? The proposal satisfies BLP and Fringe, is comprised of facts and is neutral. As a matter of fact, it brings the WP Fringe concern up in the lead much more prominently than it is currently. SAS81 (talk) 22:20, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
Maybe start with pointing out a couple of sources from those offered that are both independent and reliable? At a glance, I'm seeing a lot of sources that are primary, not independent, or both. --Ronz (talk) 22:22, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
None of these sources I've listed in this section are primary sources, they are all mainstream independent sources. I have more too I just don't want to clutter the board. SAS81 (talk) 22:33, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
Perhaps you are using a definition of "primary" that I'm not familiar with? I'm referring to WP:PSTS and WP:BLPPRIMARY. I don't know what "mainstream" might refer to. By "independent" I mean WP:IS. --Ronz (talk) 23:35, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
So of the first four sources offered, the first and fourth are primary. The second is a public relations profile and the third is the book "Doctor of the Future". While I don't know what was meant by "mainstream", "Doctor of the Future" seems unlikely to be a reliable source in general, with all its acceptance and promotion of fringe viewpoints. Even if it were, it doesn't demonstrate that Chopra is more notable as an endocrinologist than how he's currently presented in this article. --Ronz (talk) 02:16, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
"thought leader" is pretty much as meaningless a buzzword as "pioneer". How is that a helpful term in understanding Chopra and his actual impact? -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 02:49, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
I'm starting to go through the sources, and of the batch above there are a few simple clarifications to all parties:
  • 1 " DoctorFinder: Chopra, Deepak, MD. (Agree to terms, then search for Chopra, Deepak in California) 2, 3, 4 (The American Medical Association is a notable secondary source, as is Gallup Inc, as both of them "...contains an author's interpretation, analysis, or evaluation of the facts, evidence, concepts, and ideas taken from primary sources." The National Institute of Health ref is a notable source since it's a peer-reviewed medical journal, but since it was written by Chopra {and other Drs} is considered a primary source. "Primary sources that have been reliably published may be used in Misplaced Pages; but only with care, because it is easy to misuse them. Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation." You could use the NIH source as evidence for the medical legitimacy of Chopra, but the conclusion would need to be spelled out in a secondary source to have full weight.)
  • Kellogg School of Management: Top business school in the world. mentions Dr Chopra specifically as a thought leader and his role is to teach 'global leadership', a leader of leaders even. (Primary source if the citation is based on Chopra's teaching at Kellogg, but secondary if the citation is used to present the summary of Chopra's qualifications. "Whether a source is primary or secondary depends on context.")
  • Forbes article mentions him as a global thought leader. (Notable secondary source, particularly since Forbes is a mainstream third party entity.)
  • Business Insider lists him as one of 6 major global thought leaders. (Secondary source, making an evaluative or analytic assessment.)
  • Tech Crunch mentions him as an example of a influencer or thought leader. (Secondary source, though notability is a question here.)
  • He is #3 of the 'biggest minds and ideas' on Linked in Pulse, ahead of both Bill Gates and Barack Obama. (This is a primary source, since it is a contemporary record of data with no evaluation or analysis. It is a notable source since LinkedIn is a reliable, mainstream independent entity, but since it's primary it should be used in conjunction with reliable secondary arguments)
It does seem that most of the sources above are secondary, and most (but not all) are reliable, mainstream and/or notable. I'm not attesting to the rest of SAS81's sources, just the selection above. I'll get into those when I have a bit more time, since I'm guessing they may not all be as concise. If anyone disagrees with my assessment of source types or reliability, please let me know. The Cap'n (talk) 16:12, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
I disagree with your implicit assessment that the sources say what the paid PR representative says they say. I further disagree that Gallup is a secondary source (they are reporting on their own employees), that Kellogg is a secondary source (they are reporting on their own program), and so on. In fact, I'm not sure you understand what a primary vs. secondary source is. Hipocrite (talk) 18:58, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
Yes, I think there's great confusion as to what it means to be a primary source. I don't know what "notable" means in this context either.
The AMA database entry is a primary source.
The Gallup profile is about their own employee. It has no independence at all, and demonstrates no prominence beyond what we currently present.
Kellog is promoting an event, therefore not independent.
The Forbes bit is a warmed-over press release promoting an event, therefore not independent.
Business Insider devotes a few paragraphs to him the context of how he turned his career away from medicine: "subsequently ending his promising career in endocrinology." It's a fluff piece and should be used with care if at all in a BLP.
Chopra is mentioned in passing by the TechCrunch article, and the information is ambiguous: "Be prepared to have a team devoted to managing this side of the business, and see if you can get a Deepak Chopra, Tim Ferriss, or other noted influencer, thought leader or celeb to co-author an app or module to showcase." This is an extremely poor source for such information in a BLP.
If those are the best offered, then we have little to nothing to work from, depending on how closely we follow BLP. --Ronz (talk) 19:49, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
@ Hipocrite, I am quite familiar with the distinction between primary and secondary sources, that's part of my day to day job (more on that below). As far as any "implicit assessment," I'm not summarizing content or arguments at this point, just establishing sourcing, and when I do I will go by by what I read in the sources themselves, not by rehashing what SAS81 says. If you disagree with my assessment I'm all ears, but please let me know which parts you think I got wrong and why.
Ronz, I do agree there needs to be clarification on what constitutes primary v. secondary sourcing, as this is coming up more and more often. I'm reposting your comments with my responses:
  • The AMA database entry is a primary source.
"Primary source material is original material or conclusions. Secondary sourced material is based on primary sourced material, and may include synthesis..." The AMA compiles primary records (medical license, office practice info, etc) to create a synthesized summary of its members. The AMA did not produce any original material, so it is not a primary source.
  • The Gallup profile is about their own employee. It has no independence at all, and demonstrates no prominence beyond what we currently present.
Please read WP:Secondary_does_not_mean_independent regarding confusion about the role of independence in secondary sources (namely, non-independent sources are legitimate as long as they are not the only source for an article). "However, reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective. Sometimes non-neutral sources are the best possible sources for supporting information about the different viewpoints held on a subject."
  • Kellog is promoting an event, therefore not independent.
Again, WP:Secondary_does_not_mean_independent & WP:BIASED, though it seems to me that the fact that Kellogg is hosting an event Chopra is featured at does not mean the university is not independent, any more than CNN would lose its independent status as a source for having Chopra on an interview.
  • The Forbes bit is a warmed-over press release promoting an event, therefore not independent.
Though I reiterate the piece on independent sources, I agree this article doesn't really have much weight behind it. I think if we're going to reference what Forbes says about Chopra, this is the most (it's just a simple bio, though if we wanted to there are a bunch of articles that could be brought in, if/when I have the time).
  • Business Insider devotes a few paragraphs to him the context of how he turned his career away from medicine: "subsequently ending his promising career in endocrinology." It's a fluff piece and should be used with care if at all in a BLP.
I should point out the other half of that quote established that he hadn't moved away from medicine: "But Chopra’s career wasn’t over. His adviser was “so arrogant that he had antagonized a lot of people, one of whom took delight in hiring me if it snubbed my adviser,” he explains." ] But more importantly, there's no connection to COI nor independence issues. You or I may think it's a fluff piece, but that's OR. I agree it should be used carefully in the BLP, but it can certainly be used to support broader arguments.
  • Chopra is mentioned in passing by the TechCrunch article, and the information is ambiguous: "Be prepared to have a team devoted to managing this side of the business, and see if you can get a Deepak Chopra, Tim Ferriss, or other noted influencer, thought leader or celeb to co-author an app or module to showcase." This is an extremely poor source for such information in a BLP.
As I mentioned in my summary, I agree that this source is not notable enough to warrant adding any sections to the article.
Even if these sources get included, the broader issue of how to categorize Chopra's mainstream standing remains. I agree with both of you that "notability" and "mainstream" are problematically vague terms here. In addition to standard WP policies of WP:Verifiability, WP:NOR and WP:PSTS, can we come up with some best practice guidelines for what we can all agree would constitute acceptable mainstream sources? I'll kick it off (feel free to debate these propositions): peer-reviewed journals, independent news articles, independent scholarly books, statements by notable figures (primary, true, but acceptable if no analysis is linked to the statement?), professional standing (medical, guruey and whatnot) and major independent websites. I look forward to your feedback. The Cap'n (talk) 22:32, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
You assert you know the difference between a primary and secondary source, but then use speaker blurbs as a secondary source. There's a problem there, in that you, fresh of your sanctions for antagonizing people via strawman socks in articles directly related to this one, are again distorting the truth. Speaker blurbs are not secondary sources. Hipocrite (talk) 23:54, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
We have seen the "statements by notable figures (primary, true, but acceptable if no analysis is linked to the statement?)," being promoted here and they are completely unacceptable. IE Clinton and Gorbachev puff quotes being touted as establishing Chopra's place in the scientific community. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 00:29, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
@Hipocrite, Thank you for your helpful feedback...
To which source are you referring as a speaker blurb, and how would you designate it? A primary source? A tertiary? If you're going to call me a liar, explain what the truth is rather than simply making assertions.
While we're on the topic of WP:CIVIL, I'd like to qualify the fact that the sock accusations you brought up (out of nowhere) were part of a pattern by a specific editor of accusing me (and numerous others) of socking over and over until the latest round was finally dismissed by admins, and had nothing to do with Deepak Chopra. I don't appreciate aspersions and am trying to civilly work on this page as requested in COI and BLP. I'm not trying to legitimize alternative medicine, I'm trying as a 3rd party to establish what we'll consider mainstream sources. Can we focus on working out differences and building consensus, or is this a zero-sum issue? The Cap'n (talk) 00:30, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
Askahrc is continuing to cast evidence-free WP:ASPERSIONS at me. No place is appropriate for this, but especially not an article talk page. Two administrators concluded, based upon evidence, that Askahrc had been harassing users from behind an IP sockpuppet. The other SPIs that Askahrc disputes regarding another editor (not "numerous" editors -- one edtior) are similarly backed by strong evidence; in one case the evidence was called "overwhelming" (see for yourself). Askahrc's dispute is really with the administrators evaluating the SPIs, however instead of challenging them he has been casting baseless aspersions at me in an apparent attempt to gain credibility. This is inappropriate and must stop immediately. vzaak 15:03, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
@TheRedPenOfDoom, Good point, thank you for responding. It seems reasonable that non-scientifically notable figures' endorsements should not be considered indicative of endorsement by the scientific community. What about statements for/against Chopra by notable scientific figures? Should we give those those weight or consider them just another individual statement? The Cap'n (talk) 00:49, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
Responding to 22:32, 29 April 2014:
Independence has nothing to do with a source being primary, secondary, etc. I'm glad we agree on that at least.
Sources that specifically promote Chopra are by their nature of little use to us, especially when they don't provide context to support their own claims.
The AMA database is a primary source, or at least no different from a primary source in any way that matters. While it verifies the information, it doesn't demonstrate that the material deserves any prominence at all. It is data without context.
Business Insider: If we cannot identify fluff pieces when discussing possible changes in pov for BLP articles, we're in big trouble. It's a hook/teaser article introducing a series about career challenges, very briefly summarizing some highly recognizable people's short articles about themselves. It's lazy journalism: get a bunch of people to write articles on a topic and highlight a few as an introduction.
I don't see any real disagreement with my conclusion that there's little or nothing here that should influence the prominence of information in this BLP article. --Ronz (talk) 01:11, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
When the AMA database is being used to verify that Chopra is listed as an endocrinologist in the AMA data base, it is being used as a primary source. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 01:17, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
From reviewing the (many, many, many) posts above, it looks like the AMA database was intended to verify the fact that Chopra is a licensed endocrinologist, which may have been under doubt at some point. Is that accurate, SAS81? The purpose for which the AMA source is intended does make a difference.
I heard back from TRPoD on the unacceptability of statements from notable figures (what about scientific ones?), so does that mean that moving forward the rest of us agree that using peer-reviewed journals, independent news articles, independent scholarly books, professional standing (medical, guruey and whatnot) and major independent websites constitutes notable sources? I'd feel more comfortable with the NPOV issue if we were focusing on the quality of the sources rather than whether we personally felt it was inappropriately promoting Chopra, which should still eliminate bad/fluffy pieces. Otherwise it seems like SAS81's in a bit of a Catch-22; if they want to argue a positive point about Chopra they need a notable source, but any source that makes a positive point about Chopra is by definition not notable. Basically, in an ideal world, what kind of sources could SAS81 provide that we'd find acceptable? The Cap'n (talk) 12:34, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
There seems to be some confusion about how physicians are licensed and credentialed (as well as about primary vs. secondary sources). There is no such thing as a "licensed endocrinologist". When physicians are licensed, they are free to practice any kind of medicine they choose. One is either a "licensed physician" or not; there are no separate licenses for specific specialties or subspecialties. To verify that Chopra is a licensed physician, the appropriate primary source is the Medical Board of California (), not the AMA Physician Masterfile. (Note that these are both primary sources).

Separately, physicians may be board-certified in various specialties. This process is separate from licensing, and is not formally required to practice medicine (although it is increasingly viewed as essential by hospitals and academic medical centers). Chopra is board-certified in Internal Medicine (in 1973) and Endocrinology (in 1977). The appropriate primary source to verify his board certification is the American Board of Internal Medicine website: . If we're committed to using primary sources, we should at least use the correct ones. MastCell  15:57, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

No no confusion. Lets call it what is is. A mistake on my part and I should have known better given that although I do not have the experience in human medicine the same systems are in place in animal medicine where I have a little more information. I don't agree that sites which list licensing and board-certification are primary sources since they must have oversight.

I do agree that these sources are usable as verification. I don't see a commitment to using primary sources. Primary sources can be definitive for some kinds of information.(Littleolive oil (talk) 17:34, 30 April 2014 (UTC))

Askahrc. Thanks for your input here. Notable is not generally a term used in reference to sources, so I'm not sure what you mean here when you say notable. What we have to determine is first, if a source is verifiable and then whether that verifiable source is a reliable source for the content we want to add. Sources that are either pejorative or positive to the topic are sources that can be used. We expect to find both kinds of sources. The quality of the source, the weight that source has per the RS sources determine if and how much of that source we can use in an article. The AMA is a reliable source for determining if Chopra is an licensed endocrinologist. It is not a primary source and has oversight. If we want to expand on that information we would need other sources. In terms of support for health claim content peer reviewed papers are not generally used unless they have been reviewed or part of a meta-analysis for example. See WP:MEDRS. Sources are only reliable per the content we want to add. While this article has content that deals with health claims it also has content that does not. The article is now full of possible reliable sources. They are worth looking at for new content.(Littleolive oil (talk) 14:26, 30 April 2014 (UTC))

I'm not sure where the focus on "oversight" comes from. Primary sources are not necessarily defined by oversight or lack thereof. For instance, court documents posted on a state's official website are clearly subject to oversight, but they remain primary sources. Likewise, research papers in the medical literature are subject to oversight (in the form of peer review) but remain primary sources. The AMA Physician lookup (like the medical board and ABIM credentialing lookups) are primary sources. They are simply databases with a publicly searchable Web interface.

I'm not categorically opposed to the use of primary sources (they can be useful to verify someone's credentials, for instance), but we need to be precise in how we use them. I note that you're still using the term "licensed endocrinologist", which is technically incorrect. Granted, it's probably a relatively minor matter, but these sorts of technicalities over credentialing tend to flare up in situations where subsets of editors are committed to promoting or discrediting a physician (cf. the Stephen Barrett article), so precision is important. MastCell  19:27, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

No, not continuing to use licensed endocrinologist. The two posts were combined. You're looking at the first post not the last post I made. I've fixed that formatting.
Per our policy sources must have "meaningful editorial oversight", primary sources tend to not have that kind of oversight. Research studies are one of the exceptions, although suggested by a scientist editing Misplaced Pages (not recent) that in fact a study is secondary once published and primary when data is collected and the paper written by the researchers themselves, but prior to publication. The study becomes reliable when included in a meta analysis, review, and so on, but until then is still secondary although, not reliable per Misplaced Pages. I'm not arguing this interpretation here, just an aside.
Somebody has to publish those look-ups otherwise anyone could post information. At any rate, this point is debatable, but do agree that primary sources can be useful for simple identifying, verifying information. (Littleolive oil (talk) 20:00, 30 April 2014 (UTC))
There is no "meaningful editorial oversight" of the AMA, state medical board, or ABIM credentialing databases. They're just databases. When a physician is issued a license, his/her demographics are imported into the database (along with a few self-reported variables like practice activity breakdown and specialty). This is not the sort of oversight that defines a secondary source. As an analogy, someone has to publish and maintain court documents on the relevant official websites, but these remain primary sources. The fact that data are made available over the Internet doesn't constitute "meaningful editorial oversight". MastCell  20:22, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

No problem. I can agree on this. Editorial oversight in this case is not meaningful, and one assumes the person ( possible meaningful aspect) entering the data is not going to be entering false information and is not expert in any way, but a technician. In discussing court documents with a lawyer, I've been told some court documents do have meaningful oversight, apparently, but that's another discussion and one I am not knowledgable enough to discuss(Littleolive oil (talk) 20:36, 30 April 2014 (UTC))

This has been a wonderfully productive discussion. Opening up new section for best practices via Capn, sources and clarification below. SAS81 (talk) 20:05, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for all your great input, Littleolive oil & MastCell! I think we have consensus that sources like AMA and similar databases are either primary sources or close enough to primary that they can/should be used to verify factual statements (possession of a valid license, board certification, etc) but not to articulate arguments.
I regret my lack of clarity in using the nonterm "notable sources." One of the main responses to SAS81's secondaries is that they are not independent or "important" enough to be used to describe attributes for which Deepak Chopra is notable. This seems a vague position that leaves too much room for OR, so I was trying to establish what kind of sources we can agree should be used to justify descriptions of what Chopra is notable for. I mentioned "notable sources" without explaining what I meant, apologies. The Cap'n (talk) 06:14, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

Much of the above is abusing "secondary does not mean independent". What that means is that independent does not automatically imply secondary. It doesn't work the other way around--you can't use it to say that something can be secondary even though it's not independent. Ken Arromdee (talk) 16:03, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

@Vzaak, I am not casting aspersions, did not even mention your name and did not contradict the admins. This has so far been a respectful, productive discussion; if you have any personal issues with me please bring them up on my talk, otherwise lets WP:FOC. Also, please be conscientious about WP:BOTTOMPOST. The Cap'n (talk) 19:30, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
@Ken Arromdee, There was no abuse of "secondary does not mean independent" implied here. The reason I brought it up is that independence was being used to discount a source as not being secondary, when in fact the two are not interrelated, either way around. You can have a source be secondary even though it's not independent, that's exactly what WP (and common academia) presents: "Secondary" does not mean "independent" or "uninvolved". Most independent sources are not secondary sources." It works both ways. Besides, policy is that an article (and we can extrapolate arguments within an article) must possess at least some independent sources, but certainly does not state that they are the only permissible sources. "Articles should not be built using only vested-interest sources."
I'm not really arguing with your sentiment, as I too would strongly prefer to rely on independent sources, but I did feel it necessary to point out that non-independent references can hypothetically still be acceptable secondary sources. The Cap'n (talk) 19:54, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
"independence was being used to discount a source as not being secondary" You sure about that? Diffs please. As far as I see, it is a straw man, hopefully from a misunderstanding of the comments. --Ronz (talk) 21:32, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
@Ronz, my statement above was aimed at Hipocrite's comment above that asserted a source did not qualify as secondary because Chopra had spoken at the institution writing the content. My argument is that this makes it non-independent, but is still secondary (the speech itself would have been primary, obviously). I asked for clarification of Hipocrite's comment and didn't receive any, so this is the meaning I took away from it, anyway. If I misunderstood I'm open to being corrected, I'm don't want to misrepresent anyone. The Cap'n (talk) 00:18, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
You're referring to . Given all the discussion since, I think it's best to summarize what's been said since. --Ronz (talk) 00:46, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

@Ronz, thank you for the clarification, I'd missed the other diff. Sorry for my delay in replying, I agree that this thread is becoming monstrous and suggest we create a new one with a boiled down summary. Feel free to do so, or I can in the next day or so. The Cap'n (talk) 06:13, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Best practices, primary secondary in context

Appreciate everyone's input. From an archiving perspective, I agree (almost) with Capn's input considering the context of what I was establishing and all sources at this stage are for discussion and 'common sense' assessments. If you need 'better' sources to establish what common sense shows as a mainstream label towards Dr. Chopra, let me know.

These sources I am providing at this stage are for discussion and consideration only in terms of establishing facts regarding labels applied to Dr. Chopra. I am using them as secondary sources to establish facts about how Dr Chopra is labeled and perceived. Sure, some of those sources could be primary or secondary, depending on the context they are applied.

It's a fact that Dr Chopra is labeled as a thought leader in the mainstream, among other labels assigned to him. That's all these sources show. The phrase 'thought leader' is no more or less meaningful than the label 'guru'. Any phrase or label that is applied to Chopra is going to be just as meaningful or meaningless as any other phrase. I believe the article requires showing mainstream labels and perspectives around this controversial figure - i believe it's the only way it can be neutral.

Tech Crunch, sure, by itself that's a weak source if my argument was solely resting on that source, but the point was that even briefly mentioned in passing in an unrelated article that is NOT promoting Dr Chopra, he is still referred to as a 'thought leader'.

Kellog's is a notable institution that trains 'thought leaders' and are synonymous with 'leadership' in their sector with global credibility as such. Therefore, they act as a secondary source to support the argument that Dr. Chopra is labeled as a 'thought leader' and teachers courses in business leadership (dr chopra is prominent in the 'conscious capitalism' movement). I don't think it's genuine to disqualify a global institution as biased because they are in it for the money. They have credibility producing leaders and offering leadership and Dr. Chopra is prominently apart of their institution because he is notable for thought leadership.

Gallup is unusually high quality institution that actually defines mainstream. There is absolutely no reason to put suspicions on Gallup for having Dr Chopra as a Senior Scientist on wellness and reference him as a thought leader in that sector. If Guru was the accepted mainstream term, then I would expect Gallup and Kellog's to be listing Dr Chopra as a New Age Guru for their New Age course and Gallup's Astrology section. (sarcasm)

The AMA source was to establish not Dr. Chopra as an endocrinologist, but rather as maintaining an office practice (I think it was JPS who asked for evidence he maintains an actual practice, instead of just a vanity license). Now that we have established Dr Chopra both as a practicing physician and an endocrinologist, prominently mentioned as such in books by notable scientists specifically for his contributions to endocrinology and in mainstream media I believe these sources are satisfied but please advise what source would work better.

I'm signing off for today and just wanted to leave these thoughts. If the Capn is willing, I look forward to participating in his suggestion for best practices for reviewing and assigning sources. Appreciate everyone's time. SAS81 (talk) 20:01, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

it seems that we are again running down into rabbit holes over label minutia. The labels we use to describe Chopra in the lead are dependent upon what the body of the article shows Chopra to be notable for.
The big questions that need to be addressed are :
1) What significant events or achievements and impacts are missing from the article?
2) What content is covered too extensively?
Once we have identified where people think the overall issues are, then we can worry about if something is primary source or not and if it is, whether the proposed use of the source is an acceptable one and then based on its importance within the article whether it raises to one of the major attributes we want to call out in the lead. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 22:17, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

I agree with some points TRPoD, but would clarify that as far I understand notability is the baseline, what determines if an article can be included in Misplaced Pages in the first place. The lead must summarize the body of the article, "The lead serves as an introduction to the article and a summary of its most important aspects" so the body will be much more than what has been considered notable about Chopra. "The lead should define the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points—including any prominent controversies." Maybe we could substitute significant for notable in the context of what is most important in the article. Important for all editors to have the same understanding seems to me which might head off potential conflict later(Littleolive oil (talk) 12:51, 1 May 2014 (UTC))

Misplaced Pages WP:N "notability" is about whether the subject is worthy of note to have an encyclopedia article at all. there is no serious consideration that Chopra does not meet the criteria laid out to have a stand alone article. The content of the article and the space we spend on it is dependent upon WHAT the reliable academic sources have noted about the subject and we follow their lead per WP:UNDUE. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 17:14, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
I think a lot of confusion has stemmed from differing terminology, which is what this section is all about. Rather than calling them "notable sources" let's stick to verifiable and reliable sources. I would disagree that academic sources are the only acceptable references (I think major news publications, etc are relevant), so perhaps the scope of criteria for sources are:
  • Secondary (except for factual statements)
  • Verifiable
  • Reliable (no blogs, etc)
  • Relevant (ie. news pieces are not relevant to his medical standing, but may be relevant to his public standing)
Again, I think peer-reviewed journals, independent news articles, independent scholarly books, professional standing (medical, guruey and whatnot) and major independent websites would fit these criteria, but what you all think of these standards? The Cap'n (talk) 18:52, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
Independence
The amount of context provided in the sources, especially historical context. --Ronz (talk) 20:04, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
Academic sources are obviously the best to use in any context on Misplaced Pages. That's not to say we can't use other sources, only that we shouldn't be using them as a counter/rejoinder/balance/replacement for academic sources. There are subareas of Misplaced Pages (Pokemon comes to mind) where this best-practice is eschewed largely because academia has ignored the subject, but we don't have that problem for this topic where many academic sources have commented on Chopra. The best thing to do is find acknowledged experts in medical, scientific, and media studies who have analyzed the larger context of Chopra and base our article on those sources. Where appropriate, we can add the commentary of believers in alternative medicine, quantum quackery, and New Age religion as long as we are clear that this is what they believe. Uncontroversial biographical details can be sourced more easily (e.g. the fact that Chopra has a medical license), while controversial details will need to be properly weighted according to the context (e.g. the claim that Chopra is practicing medicine is not found in the best sources about Chopra because of his advocacy of alternative medicine and pseudoscience so either leave out this altogether or follow the sources that are most reliable in discussing this issue which would be sources that evaluate the claims of medical practices, e.g., quackwatch). jps (talk) 20:48, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
This is exactly correct. The issue of Chopra being an endocrinologist is one of significance (i.e. editorial judgment) not verifiability; it is abundantly clear that those sources which mention this do so primarily in order to present Chopra as an authority in some area where his views run counter to the scientific consensus. It is not appropriate for Misplaced Pages to do this, for reasons thoroughly explained above. We are not under any obligation to keep explaining this until SAS81 accepts it, which is just as well because he probably never will. Guy (Help!) 23:19, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
@jps, I agree with your overall summary, particularly the focus on expert discussion. Chopra is mentioned in a lot of press releases and journo-blog blurbs, many of which seem to recycle the same data and aren't generally reviewed, let alone by a professional. That said, what do we consider a media expert? I'm clear on medical and scientific experts (doctors and scientists), obviously, but the media seems a little fuzzier. Are going to refer to major news publications as media authorities (Time, NYT, Wall St Journal, etc)? If we limit it to academia we'll likely be restricted to college work and blogs, most of which will not be particularly neutral or reliable. As I mentioned above, I'd prefer to leave out puff/hit pieces, blogs, etc, and focus on reliable experts, which IMO includes major news publications (not editorials, of course). Also, I looked through Quackwatch for stuff on Chopra's medical practice being operational or not and couldn't find anything. Do you have a source? Thanks again! The Cap'n (talk) 06:08, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
Media studies of Chopra include this: . Quackwatch discussion of Chopra here: . jps (talk) 08:59, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
Thanks, jps. "A Critique of the Holistic Health/New Age Movements" by Boer piece seems to be an excellent example of an academic media expert. I'm not sure the essay by Dr. Barrett on Quackwatch is in the same class, however. I've read & like a lot of Dr. Barrett's contributions and think the essay is a good source for debunking alternative medicine, specifically Ayurvedism, but he doesn't seem to have much background or expertise outside of the medical field and the article reflects this focus. I'm not sure I'd consider him a media expert. How about TIME magazine (excluding editorials)? TIME is a reputable media figure and is independent of Chopra's interests. Their archives are divided into different categories, the most significant would likely be cover stories, perhaps followed by health and science.
(Proposed Format for organizing acceptable sources) Expert Media Sources:
  • "A Critique of the Holistic Health/New Age Movements" by Hans Boer Good
  • "A Few Thoughts on Ayurvedic Mumbo-Jumbo" by Stephen Barrett, M.D. Questionable
  • Relevant Non-Editorial TIME Magazine Articles Good(?)
The Cap'n (talk) 02:35, 5 May 2014 (UTC)
Sorry? You asked for where Quackwatch discussed Chopra's medical practice. This is the example. It's not an example of a media studies source. Time magazine is pretty pulp, certainly not academic. That's not to say we can't use time magazine, only that it doesn't stand in the same class as the Boer source, for example. jps (talk) 02:43, 5 May 2014 (UTC)
Ah, miscommunication. Quackwatch is certainly an acceptable source regarding the medical community. I agree that TIME is not academic, but would it count as expert? If not, are there any major news outlets that are? I would think that for fields that do not lend themselves to scholarly writing (ie. media perception) expert news coverage could substitute for academic coverage, though not trump it. For example, if the Boer article and the NYT got into a deathmatch, Boer would win but the match would be legitimate. Does that bizarre analogy make any sense at all? The Cap'n (talk) 05:36, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Trying to decide in advance which publications might make good sources is perhaps not the best use of our time: it will always depend on what is being sourced. Baer's article (it is Baer not Boer, there is a fault in some of the publisher's metadata) is already well used in the article; so is Time; Quackwatch is nearly always a top source on altmed topics. All are potentially very good sources, though if Time had advanced (say) some claims of medical effectiveness, then it would not be a good, WP:MEDRS source for that. In general, this Talk page is getting very bloated to little point. I'd like to see some concrete proposals for textual changes - I think that may move things in a more productive direction. Alexbrn 16:06, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Good point, Alexbrn, and thanks for the clarification on Baer. I agree that this talk page is getting cumbersome and not progressing in a clear direction, though there's a lot of good feedback above that shouldn't be archived yet. Is anyone against my making a Proposed Changes section so that we can see if any of these sources lead anywhere, then collapsing many of these talk sections? The Cap'n (talk) 15:58, 6 May 2014 (UTC)

BLP Noticeboard

A discussion was initiated on the WP:BLPN in which no specific WP:BLP issues were identified, the discussion was closed there and archived here.
Template:BLP noticeboard SAS81 (talk) 22:00, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
This is getting tiresome. WP:IDHT, WP:FORUMSHOPPING, Barney the barney barney (talk) 22:12, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Brought back here

moved back to this page from WP:BLPN per WP:FORUMSHOP

Not all of this is relevant to all of you so I've created a quick read menu if you want to get to certain things quickly. Sorry its long. I know :/ SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Introduction, why I am here

I am here as a representative of both Dr. Chopra and the archive project he has contributed to in order to address concerns regarding what we believe to be a genuinely misleading and biased article on Deepak Chopra, M.D. This is my job and it’s important to do everything possible to address these problems in accordance with BLP.

https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BIOSELF#Dealing_with_articles_about_yourself

I also want to thank user JPS particularly in this regard and I believe he and I have set a good standard for how a SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

see extended content 1 for more

Extended content

Beyond my involvement with Dr. Chopra I am also invested as a representative of a newly formed archive. Our responsibility will be to present the subjects or topics that are archived in our repository on Misplaced Pages and the media. I feel it relevant to explain that none of us are alternative medicine practitioners and hold our positions as researchers and historians due to accredited skill sets, with the consultation of university professors and medical doctors. We have very strong ethics regarding our work and how we represent this knowledge to the world, including this encyclopedia. Neutrality and ad nauseum sourcing is a core ethic we share with Misplaced Pages. Our mission dictates that we contribute to the encyclopedia in the spirit and the letter of Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines. We have not made our official announcement yet (more details pending and will be discussed then) but our focus is the Misplaced Pages GLAM initiative and working with Wikimedia Foundation in the future to make our sources and materials easily accessible and to increase the breadth of knowledge on Misplaced Pages.

I’m stating the above not only as a courtesy and a part of my transparency as a COI, but to also say - hey guys, I’m here to work it out with you, listen, contribute, assist with proper sources and citation, guide against misframing of a BLP and genuinely work towards the creation of a great article.

I also understand that this particular subject is controversial, and many may have very strong opinions, labels, or associations with Dr. Chopra. I’m not here to sell you on Dr Chopra’s ideas. He is both loved and hated and the article should reflect that where appropriate. The mainstream balance of that dynamic is something I look forward to discussing with you all.

Request

I am hoping to encourage some savvy neutral editors to come in and help, listen to our concerns, share theirs and find a neutral consensus. SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Concerns

My concern here is that a majority of the current editors on the article have stated very strong, diverse suspicions regarding Dr. Chopra and there is a great deal of ambiguity expressed amongst them on how neutrality policies get applied to the article.

See extended content 2 for more

Extended content

1. Regarding what the working definition of “neutral” means, a number of the editors on the page have insisted on what appears to me to be a very peculiar interpretation of neutrality that suggests that the mainstream point of view of Dr. Chopra is that he is a snake oil salesmen/charlatan (or something similar). SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

2. The claim that this opinion of Dr Chopra IS ‘the’ mainstream label for him suggests that the article must be written and framed in this same voice, and editors hands are tied otherwise. As you can imagine, I have a difficult time wrapping my head around the idea that the small number of mainstream critics that have been cited represent the only legitimate voice of a BLP, let alone the suggestion that the article must be this way because Dr. Chopra critics are somehow the best representatives of mainstream opinion. SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

3. We feel we have significant grounds to argue the neutral mainstream opinion is not overtly critical despite the small number of sources they have; many of the detracting citations are from purely online publications, specialized skeptical books, or assertions in articles, many of them tertiary. On the other hand, we have supporting sources that include Time magazine, Bill Clinton (as sitting US President) in speeches to foreign dignitaries, Mikhail Gorbachev addressing a 15 member scientific panel, the American Medical Association, Gallup Inc., the Discovery Channel, National Institute of Health, numerous peer-reviewed medical journals, New York Magazine, University of California San Diego, Heart Failure Society of America, Health Grades, the Huffington Post, and Forbes, to name just a few. SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

4. The reaction to many of these sources has been reminiscent of a slippery slope. World leaders have been discounted as representative of mainstream opinion because they’re not in the medical field, the public’s endorsement of his best-selling books is trivial, associations with major philosophers such as David Chalmers, John Searle, Daniel Dennett at summits are referred to as parapsychology meetings outside of the mainstream, major news and media outlets have been ignored as mouthpieces for Dr. Chopra, while peer-reviewed medical journals are dismissed as apparently not being “peer-reviewed enough” if they came to a noncritical conclusion, i.e. wiki peer reviewing which is something I understand we are guided against. In short, world leaders, the public, the popular media, medical journals, major universities, academic philosophers, M.D.’s and Gallup itself (whose entire job is to determine the mainstream!) are all incapable of representing the mainstream opinion. SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

5. By this stage I have over studied and analyzed BLP and Fringe so much it’s coming out my ears. I get what fringe requires us to do on topic articles - but the idea that a biography is framed solely by critics even when supporters have more mainstream representation does not seem to be what Fringe is asking for. If that is what WP Fringe actually guides us to do, it is awfully problematic since it cancels out neutrality by the very definition of the word and forces UNDUE weight all over the article. SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

6. Given what I hope are very clear issues, I’ve been asking a number of editors to explain their reasoning for dismissing the noncritical perspective, I’m here to listen, understand and negotiate. However, it’s happening more frequently that when I discuss people’s positions, a number of editors retort with aspersions and accusations that I am refusing to accept a variety of broad policies and give me some link to another policy they claim I don’t understand, then hang a AE over my head. I have been upfront, reasonable (I think!) and respectful of both editors and Misplaced Pages policies. This situation is making things very difficult for me so I hope all of you can help. SAS81 (talk) 21:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Making things easier for comment and participation

We have plenty more sources coming (I could also use a little help in terms of the best practices of how I can easily list and supply the community with them. I do have my sandbox but any suggestions also helpful) but here are the key topics that could use some help in talk.

Here is my suggestion for further compromise, and satisfying both BLP and Fringe while stating nothing but sourced facts.

Deepak Chopra is an Indian American endocrinologist, author, thought leader, and 'wellness' entrepreneur. Chopra is a controversial figure, acting as a New Age spiritual leader to some, and a promoter of dangerous ideas to others.

This is being discussed on the talk page here: https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:Deepak_Chopra#Update_on_TRPoD.27s_breakdown

Would love to listen to any concerns on this. Thanks in advance. SAS81 (talk) 20:49, 28 April 2014 (UTC)


The definition of "neutral point of view" that we are using is the one that you have been pointed to several times. The one located at WP:NPOV and of particular relevance here, its subsections WP:UNDUE / WP:BALASPS and WP:VALID. Chopras non proven claims in the medical field are WP:FRINGE and are not going to be treated as anything other than that. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 23:08, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
I believe I addressed that in my opening - I've read all those links, have carefully and meticulously read and applied each one, and can be transparent with you about how I come to my conclusions or how I offer suggestions or compromises. When I request some editors explain 'how' they are applying these things and to share their thinking process - you know be transparent, it doesnt help me get clear on your thinking when I'm just slapped with a bunch of links and claims repeated ad nauseum. Perhaps if you could explain how you're applying these guidelines and specifically HOW critics of a living person are assumed a neutral voice on the article. There's a leap in logic there and I cannot account for the steps anyone has taken to come to that conclusion other than pointing to a webpage with a guideline on it. SAS81 (talk) 23:36, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
That is probably because your conflict of interest is getting in the way. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 23:47, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
I think it's great that all these volunteers are just giving their time away free to teach multi-millionare Deepak Chopra's paid representative how Misplaced Pages works. I love volunteering my time to benefit people who have thousands of times more money than I do! I also need my gutters cleaned. Anyone want to do that for me? Hipocrite (talk) 00:19, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Well you could do something notable, get an article written about you, find serious problems with it, then follow the steps laid on BLP to address these issues and find yourself here too. I'm not getting any treatment here that is not offered to anyone else. Also, let's have a productive conversation. Thank you. SAS81 (talk) 00:47, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Comments like that not helping TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom. Admittedly I have an inherent bias because of my responsibilities of archiving and my direct relationship with the subject. I revealed that. Inspite of that, I am able to work towards neutrality, listen to all of you and provide quality sources and navigate the policies and guidelines consistently. Also, as a representative of the subject matter, surely you are not suggesting that when living person's raises direct concerns with what appears to be a misleading article they are unable to address those concerns because of their own conflict of interest?
the "concerns" have been raised ad nauseum on the talk page and they have been answered there. the fact that the article is not promoting Chopra and is instead presenting the mainstream academic view is not an issue. it is what the article is supposed to do. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 01:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
If I believed they were answered there TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom, I would not be here. SAS81 (talk) 01:35, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
That you didnt like the answers is not surprising, but they were answered, fully, completely and multiple times.-- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 02:11, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Sending me a link to a policy page over and over is not what I call answering a question. Threatening me with an AE, then filing a COI noticeboard is also not answering questions. SAS81 (talk) 02:24, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Let's WP:FOC, please SAS81 (talk) 00:55, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
I'm confused, SAS81, which parts of Deepak Chopra do you feel are violating WP:NPOV? You're mentioning endocrinology, the words guru and philosopher, while TRPoD is referencing the medical validity of his work. Are you trying to argue that Chopra's approach is medically proven, or that the current page is not neutral/representative of mainstream views of Chopra? If the former, you may be in for a hard time; if the latter, do you have sources to back up your position? Nobody on WP, not me, TRPoD, you or Deepak Chopra, can independently assert what is mainstream or not, but one way or the other the sources will out. The Cap'n (talk) 13:29, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for participating. I'm arguing specifically that the article does not reflect the full mainstream view of Dr. Chopra with too much UNDUE on criticisms (the entire article is a criticism even before we get to the section called 'skepticism'). I'm extremely concerned by the amount of weasel words in the article and the eagerness to frame Dr Chopra as a charlatan as much as possible without coming right out and saying it. I'm not arguing that his approach is medically proven, that's not my job, but I am arguing that his approach in medicine has mainstream acceptance and that he is known for that. Additionally, since Dr. Chopra is an unusually prolific individual who is incredibly famous, his work as a physician is just one part of what he does. Even many of his books are based on historical or mythic fiction (outside of medicine) and he is a notable (philosopher, new age guru, motivational speaker dont know how best to frame it) individual who represents and articulates a view point on consciousness that also is outside of his medical career. He also is quite a notable entrepreneur (which is different than just 'enjoying business success') It looks like editors on the page want to apply Fringe to ALL of his biography, and to be honest I'm still having a hard time seeing actually 'where' it applies to his biography. As for sources, yes I have too many of them! Problem I am having is making these sources available in context to the discussion. When I put sources in the discussion to show notability, the sources seem to get discounted for reasons that do not appear to be factually correct (clinton, gorbachev, gallup not notable or credible, etc) . In my sandbox they seem to get ignored. How do I solve this? SAS81 (talk) 15:38, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Wait, so you're serious about having Gorbachev tell us (and our readers) that he's a mainstream physician? Apart from that: if you're actually having a hard time seeing how WP:FRINGE applies here at all, then it's going to be hard for mainstream Misplaced Pages editors to take this seriously. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 15:41, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
Hold on sir! Dr. Chopra IS a mainstream physician maintaining an office practice in endocrinology with AMA accreditation as well as focusing on research. I'm not relying on the Gorby quote for that. That's for his notability. But facts are facts. These are just a few of the sources I have. 1 " DoctorFinder: Chopra, Deepak, MD. (Agree to terms, then search for Chopra, Deepak in California) 2, 3, 4

I don't think anyone who knows the subject can say he is not notable for being an endocrinologist or a physician, as major doctors and scientists such as Candace Pert and Rudolph E. Tanzi have both mentioned him extensively as such , in addition to it being a major component of his many best selling books.

Additionally, the sources I have already provided show him squarely in the mainstream POV. He is a senior scientist for gallup, which is determines what the mainstream view actually is. One US president as mentioned his contributions as a 'pioneer' of alternative medicine (which is technically an incorrect title, Dr. Chopra does not practice alternative medicine) and Gorby mentions he is a notable physician and philosopher. Additionally and to his direct notability - Dr. Chopra was an official attendee at the Clinton Global Initiative, alongside some of the most notable global and thought leaders in the world.

This is an essential fact to Dr. Chopra's biography. Please explain how Fringe requires us to omit notable facts from notable sources regarding a BLP, I'm literally stumped on that one. This article completely fails to show why and how Dr. Chopra is popular and why he is considered a global thought leader. It leans solely on criticisms that are solely published as 'suspicions' and not facts. Are you suggesting that Fringe guides us to make the reader suspicious regarding a BLP? Are you denying that he is notable and prominent as anything other than a quack or are you saying that's what WP Fringe directly and specifically guides the editor to assume? SAS81 (talk) 17:40, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

"I don't think anyone who knows the subject can say he is not notable for being an endocrinologist or a physician"

I think otherwise.

"A lot of people mention that he's an endocrinologist" doesn't mean "he's notable for being an endocrinologist". The people who mention that he is an endocrinologist only do so to lend support to his fringe claims--they don't mention it because they think it's important all by itself. Ken Arromdee (talk) 18:00, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

So if notable prominent mainstream academics or leaders mention his work specifically in endocrinology, AND he mentions it in numerous best selling books AND a medical journals AND he teaches courses at the university level, AND maintains an office practice, AND is a notable board member, advisor, consultant to major mainstream institutions (such as gallup) AND have mainstream news coverage mentioning him as an endocrinologist for the past 20+ years how can you honestly determine that he is not notable for being a physician? Just a heads up - I'm not saying that he is 'only' a physician. He also does tons of other stuff which makes this challenging. Please explain your thinking without relying on original research or personal peer review, but based on sources only. SAS81 (talk) 18:11, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Okay, folks, let's take a deep breath here. Ken Arromdee is correct in that Chopra is not notable for being an endocrinologist if the only folks mentioning it are Fringe-pushers, but if SAS81 is able to provide neutral, notable sources that establish a pattern, they may have a case. Our own assertions about what's mainstream don't belong here, the sources can and should determine that. I don't know if they'll uphold what SAS81 wants, but I'd be willing to find out by going through their references, since they seem to be having some trouble there. Let me know if you want some help; I'm sick of WP:FRINGE stuff exploding into sanctions all over the place and would love to nip the hostility in the bud for once. Let's go through the process, organize and weigh the sources and then see what we see. Thoughts? The Cap'n (talk) 19:03, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
I've just put some sources per TRPoD's request here. I'm not sure if this is the best way to do it. I have so many sources and I've been getting called out on posting them or cluttering TALK so does this suffice for this particular branch of discussion? The problem I am having is Dr. Chopra is unusually prolific and does many things both in and outside of medicine. He is hard to nail down even if I am the only one writing about him. Plus there are thousands of references to him for each and every label put on him and it's getting messy fast. Any advice appreciated thank you! SAS81 (talk) 19:36, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Can we close the WP:FORUMSHOP now please? SAS81 is an acknowledged media representative for Chopra. We listen respectfully and reserve the right to reject, outright, every single suggestion the Chopra media machine might make. It's not our fault if the Chopra media machine are unable to understand why Misplaced Pages policies forbid us from presenting pseudoscience and science as having equal validity. Guy (Help!) 22:35, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

suggestion

I'm all for archiving the majority of this talk page, and keeping everything from number 10 "Moving Forward" posted by TPRoD on. This is getting cluttered and I see how I may have participated in that unwillingly. I think we can pick up the BLP noticeboard and everything else easily by following TPRoD's lead and taking it from there. I dont know how to archive these and I assume I probably shouldn't, but all for if someone else does. SAS81 (talk) 20:20, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

There is an automatic archiving system that should kick in if no one decides to do it in the meantime. jps (talk) 14:23, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

Deaths from Ayurvedic Medication

the discussion has wavered far off from the subject of the initial post, for which there is wide consensus that there is not appropriate sourcing to include in this article at this time

There have been deaths attributed to Ayurvedic Medications from the highly reputable source Center for Disease Control. "Although approximately 95% of lead poisoning among U.S. adults results from occupational exposure (1), lead poisoning also can occur from use of traditional or folk remedies (2--5). Ayurveda is a traditional form of medicine practiced in India and other South Asian countries. Ayurvedic medications can contain herbs, minerals, metals, or animal products and are made in standardized and nonstandardized formulations (2). During 2000--2003, a total of 12 cases of lead poisoning among adults in five states associated with ayurvedic medications or remedies were reported to CDC (Table). This report summarizes these 12 cases. Culturally appropriate educational efforts are needed to inform persons in populations using traditional or folk medications of the potential health risks posed by these remedies.

The first three cases described in this report were reported to CDC by staff at Dartmouth Hitchcock Medical Center at Dartmouth Medical School, New Hampshire; the California Childhood Lead Poisoning Prevention Program; and the California Department of Health Services. To ascertain whether other lead poisoning cases associated with ayurvedic medicines had occurred, an alert was posted on the Epidemic Information Exchange (Epi-X), and findings from the cases in California were posted on the Adult Blood Lead Epidemiology and Surveillance (ABLES) listserv. Nine additional cases were reported by state health departments in Massachusetts, New York, and Texas (Table)."

http://www.cdc.gov/mmwr/preview/mmwrhtml/mm5326a3.htm Skinnytony1 (talk) 12:37, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

Sorry it wasn't loading Skinnytony1 (talk) 12:41, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

unless you have ironclad sourcing that explicitly identify Chopra in deaths from Ayurvedic malpractice , such content has absolutely NO place in this article. WP:COATRACK, WP:BLP , WP:SYN and multiple others of our alphabet soup of rules. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 12:57, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
I don't see the irony here. He practices Ayurvedic medicine and there have been deaths by Ayurvedic medicine. Which is from a reputable source of Center for Disease Control. Where is the irony?
Who mentioned irony? Also, why do you want to link Chopra with deaths by Ayurvedic medicine - was he connected to those deaths? I doubt it. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 13:27, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
was there a misreading of "ironclad", perhaps? -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 14:27, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

I'd repeat, that unless the source specifically refers to Chopra, including such information is WP:OR and something we do not do in Misplaced Pages articles. As another example; we also could not say that because some people die from use of a prescribed medication of some sort; my local GP is at fault for prescribing that medication. The source must say specifically that my GP prescribed a medication that is implicated in a death(Littleolive oil (talk) 13:37, 3 May 2014 (UTC))

Cheers and thanks for the responses. It was a misreading of ironclad for irony, my bad...I was thinking that Chopra is the "founding president of the American Association of Ayurvedic Medicine" and there are deaths directly caused by Ayurvedic Medicine in America from a legit secondary source that is from a legit primary source ie http://www.cdc.gov/ I can understand the inflammatory nature of this but can this information be presented? If so how? thanks you Skinnytony1 (talk) 15:33, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
"thanks you"... i might add English is my first language :| Skinnytony1 (talk) 15:36, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
For inclusion in this article you will need a WP:MEDRES source that states "Chopra's prescription/advocacy of Ayurvedic treatments caused Y's death." Or you will need Chopra himself addressing deaths from Ayurvedic treatments.-- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 15:38, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

The lawsuit mentioned at Maharishi Vedic Approach to Health#Flint may be pertinent here. Alexbrn 15:52, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

I don't think this should be included in this BLP at all. For the record, it is included in the article Ayurveda -Roxy the dog (resonate) 15:56, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
That was my conclusion too when I reviewed this content - it's just an inconclusive legal action. But at least it's something other than OR. Alexbrn 15:59, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
What is interesting from the Flint link is that he appeared to be practising as a real doctor at the time, without a real doctor registration. Not good. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 16:03, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
  • We should perhaps be careful about making allegations here that are potentially libelous as in the above, "is that he appeared to be practising as a real doctor at the time, without a real doctor registration"(Littleolive oil (talk) 16:16, 4 May 2014 (UTC))
Which is of course why we should not associate Chopra with these deaths. However, I did use the word appeared when making the observation regarding a reliable source speculating on his registration !! -Roxy the dog (resonate) 16:20, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

I suggest the comment be removed. BLP refers to talk pages as well as articles which is easy to forget when in discussion mode.(Littleolive oil (talk) 16:29, 4 May 2014 (UTC))

I disagree. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 16:32, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
I understand you don't agree but that doesn't hold water when our BLP policy is clear and when you have suggested Chopra was practising with out a license, a libelous statement. You can remove the comment, or if you don't feel inclined to which I understand, I can, or perhaps someone else will. Your choice. (Littleolive oil (talk) 16:49, 4 May 2014 (UTC))
I think you misread my comment, which I phrased carefully. I suggested no such thing. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 16:51, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
he wasnt practicing medicine without a license, he was practicing music without a license. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 16:53, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
Practise, practice, lets call the whole thing off. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 17:11, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

While I do appreciate the sense of humour, I don't appreciate the libelous statement so I'll give it few hours then either delete or see if I can get an admin to do so.(Littleolive oil (talk) 17:57, 4 May 2014 (UTC))

Please stop claiming that statements are libelous. See WP:NLT. jps (talk) 21:09, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
No one is making legal threats. I am suggesting that a statement accusing the subject of a Misplaced Pages BLP article of an illegal action is a potentially libelous accusation and at the least does not belong on a BLP talk page. I am also suggesting that any editor who makes such an accusation might consIder removing it per WP:BLP and per human decency. I may ask for help; I have no problem backing off this if I'm wrong, although I am sorry the atmosphere here has been and still is one of liberally throwing around pejorative comments at the subject of this BLP, actions which seems lacking in a professional ethic. Just my opinion. (Littleolive oil (talk) 21:40, 4 May 2014 (UTC))...
To be clear, the issue is solely with the term "potentially libelous" and not the rest of what you are saying since those words can easily be construed as though you are considering a lawsuit (or considering encouraging a lawsuit). It's fine to ask for help, and it's fine to be concerned about basic decency and civility towards all people. Please just steer clear of that kind of wording. jps (talk) 00:36, 5 May 2014 (UTC)
At no time did I infer in anyway that I was considering a lawsuit. However, I am not comfortable on behalf of Misplaced Pages that a potentially libelous statement, which it may be since it is an untrue statement that alleges illegal actions on the part of Dr Chopra, is left sitting on this discussion page. (Littleolive oil (talk) 00:56, 5 May 2014 (UTC))
You shouldn't be so quick to pull the libel card. It stifles debate what I said was "He practices Ayurvedic medicine and there have been deaths by Ayurvedic medicine" and Chopra is the "founding president of the American Association of Ayurvedic Medicine." I can understand sensitivity but seriously. Skinnytony1 (talk) 03:29, 6 May 2014 (UTC)

My comment was not in reference to anything you said It was directed at another editor's comment.(Littleolive oil (talk) 03:40, 6 May 2014 (UTC))

Proposed Changes

Proposal by COI editor. Roundly rejected. Suggested reading for the COI editor to not make such incompatible suggestions again. Waste of time for anyone else to bother with.

This section is intended list out specific changes to the article with a justification of the sources used to justify that change. This is not intended to be a section to propose new sources and examine their quality indefinitely (we can do that in the many sections above), this is for clear, concise arguments of changes backed up by sources. The Cap'n (talk) 16:22, 6 May 2014 (UTC)

I would like to propose a further compromise. I am going to withdraw my request for listing Dr. Chopra as an endocrinologist specifically in the lead sentence. We've already formed a consensus over him as a physician with evidence to show he is practicing. He does run an all medical group, and I will provide further sources here as well. I'm going to have continual BLP problems with the reference to him as a 'New Age Guru' in the lead section, and I've proposed some alternatives that are mainstream terms that infer the role Dr Chopra plays in the eyes of millions. So I say we make this easier and here is a full lead section proposal. This is only to show my thinking on the lead and for consideration. I believe it matches BLP, neutrality, WP Fringe. SAS81 (talk) 18:27, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

Proposal for lead - my version of neutrality and fringe

Deepak Chopra is an Indian American physician, prominent author and speaker. Representing what he calls the ‘wellness’ lifestyle, Deepak Chopra functions as a mainstream cheerleader for integrating western medicine with alternative mind body practices such as yoga and meditation. A notable entrepreneur and business leader, Deepak Chopra has become a prominent voice in the conscious capitalism movement and promotes ‘wellness’ as including a successful financial lifestyle.

A polarizing figure - Deepak Chopra acts as a thought leader to some and a promoter of dangerous ideas to others. Time Magazine called him a ‘magnet for criticism’ and Richard Dawkins has criticized his usage of ‘quantum physics’ in his explanations of consciousness. Hans Baer referred to him as a ‘New Age Guru’ and others have been suspicious of his blend of capitalism and alternative medicine.

thoughts appreciated. SAS81 (talk) 18:27, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

A watering-down. My advice: if you're to contribute anything useful here (which seems increasingly in doubt) leave the lede alone, work on the body and THEN we can ensure the lede reflects the body (as it does now) in accord with WP's policies and guidelines. See WP:LEDE, WP:NPOV and WP:FRINGE particularly. The essay WP:FLAT may also provide useful background. Alexbrn 18:33, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
Please be specific. The only thing I see watered down is the bias. What does my proposal specifically fail to mention? SAS81 (talk) 18:37, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
Sigh. Can you really not see? You assert the apparently positive with some peacock wording: "mainstream cheerleader", "notable entrepenaur", "thought leader", "prominent voice in the conscious capitalism movement" (WTF is that anyway!? we don't mention it elsewhere). The negative things are all attributed: "Dawkins has criticized", "others have been suspicious", etc. This gives the impression that his virtues are fact, his bad points mere opinion. And where has the well-sourced criticism of Chopra's harmful altmed advocacy gone? This is the guy who - sickeningly - thinks AIDS can be treated with "primordial sound", right?
If you are consciously doing this, it is likely just a cynical attempt to spin Wikimedia according to your employer's wish; if not, allow me to suggest you're so hopelessly riddled with POV that it renders you incapable of neutral editing. Either way, it is - yet again - a disappointing waste of other editors' valuable time. Alexbrn 18:55, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
I've observed SAS81 at this talk page, at COIN, and now on my own user talk page. I do not think they are trolling or an attempt at cynical spin. This editor seems to be sincere and cooperative, between the self-disclosure, restricting themselves to the discussion page as our COI guideline suggests, and changing usernames when prompted to. I think your latter suggestion is closer to the mark. People who work in public relations often have difficulty writing in an encyclopedic manner, it's anathema to that industry. That's one of the reasons why we have a COI guideline in the first place. I understand that this makes working with SAS81 frustrating, but I still don't see a reason to attribute bad faith to their efforts. -- Atama 22:06, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
@Atama:, SAS81 has stated numerous times that he is not a PR professional, but rather an archivist. 17:41, 24 April 2014 - "I'm not a PR or a press agent and I feel awkward when I am referred to that way." 23:00, 21 April 2014 - "I'm not speaking as Dr. Chopra's rep when I say we should want a pristinely neutral and respectable first sentence, I am speaking as an archivist and historian for an encyclopedia." 14:36, 25 April 2014 - "Acting more as an archivist - I'm not here to argue if Dr. Chopra's ideas and thoughts are true or false and nothing I have published here would even come close to suggesting otherwise." 21:59, 27 April 2014 - "I feel it relevant to explain that none of us are alternative medicine practitioners and hold our positions as researchers and historians due to accredited skill sets, with the consultation of university professors and medical doctors." 01:04, 28 April 2014 - "Admittedly I have an inherent bias because of my responsibilities of archiving and my direct relationship with the subject."
Are you calling him a liar, and not being a "researcher and historian due to accredited skill sets," but rather a base PR professional? You could ask him I guess, but he's already said that he's not permitted to tell you what his credentials are - see 01:42, 11 April 2014 - " I am also authorized not to post any of my personal information, past experience, job duties or responsibilities other than those directly related to this issue." Hipocrite (talk) 12:23, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
Bloke walks into a pub and says "What's the difference between a PR professional and a Troll?" -Roxy the dog (resonate) 00:50, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
@Hipocrite: "Are you calling him a liar, and not being a "researcher and historian due to accredited skill sets," but rather a base PR professional?" I wasn't aware of those claims. To be perfectly honest, SAS81 does write like a PR professional. I'm sorry SAS81, but I've dealt with PR people many times over the years and your proposals don't look like the writing of a researcher and historian, it's the kind of writing I've seen from professional promoters multiple times. Not that I'm calling you a liar, because I have no way of knowing either way, but judging by your submissions this really does not look like a scholarly contribution. I'm not sure if it's due to pressure from your employer(s), or if you're drawing from talking points that you're compelled to include, or this is a skewed point of view based on your close work with the organization and/or Deepak Chopra himself, but the tone of what you've written above looks very promotional. You know I haven't taken sides in this debate and I still don't plan to get directly involved in the development of this article, but I have to confirm the opinion of others about how your suggestion appears. -- Atama 15:21, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
@Atama: on his userpage, SAS81 does indeed say "I'm not a PR or a press agent and I feel awkward when I am referred to that way." But he also says he's leading a research and archiving team working (and perhaps set up? that's not clear) on the basis of a grant from the Chopra Foundation. And that he speaks personally, daily, with Chopra and consults him "directly" (hmm? as opposed to what?) regarding Misplaced Pages's principles. Please read it for yourself, as I have quoted slightly loosely and added italics. @SAS81: I believe every word you say, and I get it that your function is not that of "PR or press agent" or, at least, your title/job description isn't that of PR or press agent. But from your own words, it doesn't look to me as if your actual function is removed from that of PR guy by more than a scintilla. Indeed, from the 'speaking daily' and 'consulting directly' phrasing, wouldn't it be fair to call you Chopra's mouthpiece? That's merely from what you say yourself on your userpage. (And indeed, you do call yourself "Chopra representative" higher up on this page.) From your proposed lead here, I agree with Atama that you speak PR-speak, not ordinary or neutral or encyclopedic English.
Another point, that Alexbrn and Hipocrite (in his inimitably rude way) have raised above, is that editors don't get paid to do this, while it appears that you are. The other people on this page are volunteers, they have day jobs, and I think you may be expecting too much of them when you ask them to chew over every proposed sentence before you will, reluctantly, concede the possibility of changing anything. Please read the comments you do get closely, value them more (if I may say so), and consider them, rather than merely treating them as debating points for you to bat aside. For instance, I thought Alex's comment here was (even if a little impatient) quite enlightening. Did you give it due weight, did you consider it? It's quite easy to wear out volunteers. Bishonen | talk 16:14, 8 May 2014 (UTC).
No. This writing is not encyclopedic. Waste of time to discuss. Hipocrite (talk) 19:27, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

If we are going to collaborate, just saying 'no' without making a contribution or sharing your thinking is not helpful. @Alex explain me your thinking, why is 'new age guru' okay to be attributed in Misplaced Pages's voice but not 'mainstream cheerleader', 'notable entrepreneur', 'prominent voice' ? Those are all labels that describe facts about Dr. Chopra in a respectable way. He is world famous, you can't take his fame and his notability of him away when they are intrinsic to who he is. It's simply a fact that he is accomplished, love him or hate him. This entire article fails to mention many facts and contexts regarding Dr. Chopra. Yes of course the negative things are attributed, those are opinions of Dr. Chopra, and not 'facts'. It is not my opinion that Dr. Chopra is a 'thought leader' and I even attributed that as well (a thought leader to some, a promoter of dangerous ideas to others..) right now, the article serves the reader to discover only what Dr. Chopra's critics think of him and how they interpret his ideas. Again, what does my proposal leave out? SAS81 (talk) 19:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

You are being paid to fillibuster. I'm not. Will you pay me for my time to help you learn to write for wikipedia? Hipocrite (talk) 19:49, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
Sure, I'll even make a contribution to Misplaced Pages if you jump in to help. SAS81 (talk) 17:25, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
You say it is an assertable "fact" that Chopra is a "mainstream cheerleader"!? Best just leave it there, I think. This just looks like trolling. Alexbrn 19:55, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
This suggestion from the Chopra Vanity Archive Project is a joke, and a waste of time. WP:IDHT all over the place, no concept of why the current article frames Chopra as it does, no concept of the policies of how wikipedia is supposed to be written, a huge time sink for volunteer editors. Based on the article as it is written, SAS81 has presented no sustainable argument for any substantial changes, and proposing changes to the lead without first making substantial changes to the body text which it summarises will not wash. Nothing I see on this page has come close to improving Chopra's WP:BLP. Meh. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 21:29, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
I'm not sure why this is so difficult for all of you. If I make a suggestion - it's to show you my thinking. I'm not saying "hey someone go copy and paste my edit into the article!" so telling me 'NO!' when I'm asking you all to collaborate is not helpful. It's meant to be something to build upon. Don't like a word? then take it out and explain why. None of you are acknowledging the compromises I am making and words like 'cheerleader' have also been suggested by JPS in terms of finding a better label for Dr. Chopra. You're informing me that my statement is biased, and I accept that liklihood of my position, but that does not remove your bias as skeptics - so I'm willing to work on a compromise.

@Roxy - it's a fact that Dr Chopra is famous and is known for 'encouraging' something. You're all fine with calling him a 'new age guru' to account for that. I'm trying to come up with a better label that is not a pejorative that is used by his critics.

@all of you - what would be helpful is if you could be specific. If you're not specific, then it just looks like you want me out of here because your skeptics and don't believe any other POV should be on the page. SAS81 (talk) 14:10, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

SAS81, I can see how the lede above is an attempt to compromise, but the main difficulty editors have (from what I can tell) is that some of the material you posted is not prominently mentioned in the body of the article (conscious capitalism, cheerleader). The lede is not just a summary of Chopra, it's a summary of the Chopra article and the statements in it should be almost a thesis statement of the main points of the article. To that end, do you have materials to suggest adding some of the statements you made into the body of the article? If the sources pan out we can add material to the appropriate section of the body, then eventually adjust the lede to reflect a new content summary. The Cap'n (talk) 14:54, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
I agree with Alexbrn that SAS81 should concentrate on specific facts in the article body before tackling the lead section. The text suggested by SAS81 is too promotional (cheerleader? mainstream??) so we should ignore it and move on. Since there is solid consensus against the suggested text, it is high time to close out this discussion. Binksternet (talk) 16:06, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
@@Atama: I trust you - and I can see how it looks like that, but the fact is I'm not a PR rep but I will try harder not to look like one regardless. It looks like that because my background is in media studies and specifically how issues are framed in the media. While I am a researcher, I am not an historian, that is the other archivist who is employed and is not participating on Misplaced Pages. I direct you to the sections below where I explain each sentence and why I choose to frame him in this light as a compromise but most importantly to share with the community my thinking. JPS was the one who suggested 'cheerleader' as a possible alternative to 'guru'. If I am using words like 'mainstream' 'cheerleader' and 'prominent' is because these are all fair labels to describe someone is who is popular, famous, or have had an impact and previous words that a historian would consider (such as physician, endocrinologist, philosopher, etc) have been rejected. 'New Age Guru' is absolutely NOT a term an historian archivist would use to frame Dr Chopra unless they were specifically criticizing him. If I sound like a PR rep, it's probably because I am peeling away at the layers trying to remove the 'rational wiki' influence the article currently has and trying to put both perspectives respectfully in the article. Everything that I frame is supported by sources, of which I will start making suggestions for in the body.
@Alexbrn - I'm not seeing the sources state that Dr Chopra proposes sound therapy for AIDS cures or to that matter I'm not finding him say much of anything outside of the mainstream when it comes to finding cures for these diseases. Can you show sources that talk about that specifically? He is not notable for talking about AIDS and cancer and even he himself as informed me he cannot even recall making any statements about AIDS and cancer except in passing reference. I'm all for removing some of the 'weasel' language which is designed to 'scare' the reader regarding Dr. Chopra. How do you propose we address certain facts about Dr Chopra such as the level of presence he has and his fame? That's missing from the article. You seem to be arguing that what critics say about Dr Chopra are facts, but facts that supporters use to describe Chopra are opinions. I'm saying we MUST have criticisms of Dr Chopra in the article, but we must also address his real accomplishments. By omitting facts about Dr Chopra, including facts about labels that Dr Chopra is given, we are skewering the article towards a biased review of his career.
Can't see, or won't see? Luckily for us Chopra's bonkers pronouncements on AIDS have attracted attention from one of the very stongest sources we use, an article by Lawrence Schneiderman, who is a top-tier academic, published in the Journal of Law, Medicine & Ethics, a high-ranking medical ethics journal. Schneiderman writes

I paid a visit to the alternative health section of the University of California San Diego bookstore to see what a few of the most celebrated gurus have to say about AIDS, for example. First I looked in the book Quantum Healing by Deepak Chopra, M.D. (6) According to Dr. Chopra, AIDS involves a "distortion in the proper sequence of intelligence" in a person's DNA. Siren-like, the AIDS virus emits a sound that lures the DNA to its destruction. (7) "'Hearing' the virus in its vicinity, the DNA mistakes it for a friendly or compatible sound. (8) This is a believable explanation, says Dr. Chopra, "once one realizes that DNA, which the virus is exploiting, is itself a bundle of vibrations." (9) The treatment? Reshape "the proper sequence of sounds using Ayurveda's primordial sound," which "guides the disrupted DNA back into line." (10) "Once the sequence of sound is restored," Dr. Chopra assures us, "the tremendous structural rigidity of the DNA should again protect it from future disruptions. (11) To put it mildly, Dr. Chopra proposes a treatment and prevention program for AIDS that has no supporting empirical data.

"To put it mildly"—indeed. Alexbrn 18:11, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
(Add) As for cancer, Chopra's flapdoodle about this disease and quantum physics has attracted the attention of another strong source: distinguished physics professor Robert L. Park, published by Routledge in the volume After the Science Wars: Science and the Study of Science. Park writes:

Physicists wince at Chopra's use of "quantum" in the context of curing cancer. Much of the sort of vague New Age quackery that is so popular these days is peddled for vague chronic symptoms such as headaches, fatigue, back pain or digestive disorders. Treatments such as magnet therapy, homeopathy or reflexology, which have only a placebo effect, may actually benefit the not-very-sick-to-begin-with if they replace unneeded antibiotics or antidepressants. But if something like Chopra's spiritual healing is substituted for genuine medical intervention in the treatment of cancer, it may deny patients any prospect of a cure, while adding a sense of guilt to their suffering. Reality, when at last it sets it, is all the more cruel.

"New Age quackery"—indeed.
I'll add that ideally, this is the quality of sourcing which we should aspire to be using throughout this article. Alexbrn 18:36, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
@Bishonen, Capn and Binksternet . I agree focusing on the body is a good idea and will move in that direction. However, I've just been following the advice of the community. At this stage, I've laid off this article for a week. I made a simple statement above and a simple proposal. I think it's disingenuous to accuse me of coming on here and pushing everyone to work full time on the article. I get that they are volunteering, however that does not mean they do not have to be responsible for their editing or decisions because they are not getting paid. Many of them seem to spend allot of time criticizing me and going around to various noticeboards wasting other editors and admins time - and it would take far less time to just collaborate. SAS81 (talk) 17:25, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
You have NOT been listening - you were told to identify issues in the body of the article multiple times. The one time you responded to a question about what was missing from the body, you recited a laundry list of items that you claimed were "missing" and every point was covered both in the lead and the body. That is not listening and that is not reading. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 15:21, 11 May 2014 (UTC)

Deepak Chopra is an Indian American physician, prominent author and speaker.

Please tell me the problems with this, explain your thinking about this sentence. these are facts. I am offering the word 'prominent' as a compromise so as to account for his fame in a way that is acceptable. I've also offered to shorten it and I retracted my previous requests! SAS81 (talk) 14:10, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Representing what he calls the ‘wellness’ lifestyle, Deepak Chopra functions as a mainstream cheerleader for integrating western medicine with alternative mind body practices such as yoga and meditation.

This sentence is comprised of facts. by 'mainstream' it just means 'famous'. Don't like the word? take it out. 'wellness' i am too offering as a compromise. Technically the term is 'integrative medicine' but there is no consensus around that term here so I found a word and attributed the meaning to Dr Chopra, as a compromise. the remainder of the sentence is still factual and tells us facts about Dr. Chopra. What is the problem with this sentence specifically?SAS81 (talk) 14:10, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

"Cheerleader" doesn't sound terribly encyclopedic, what about "spokesperson" or "figurehead"? Also, please see above for a summary of my views on adding this to the body of the article first. I think a piece on Chopra's role as the popular face of his movement would not be out of order. The Cap'n (talk) 15:00, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
I'm all for other words to describe a role he plays. I offerred 'Cheerleader' because I believe JPS suggested that as a possibility earlier. I'm just trying to offer suggestions other than 'New Age Guru' that can describe Dr Chopra but still reference the very real fact that to some people, many of them extremely notable, Dr Chopra is a thought leader. It's also a fact he promotes the integration of western medicine with things like yoga or meditation and that is one of the things he is extremely famous for. I'm fine with 'figurehead'. 'Spokesperson' does not seem to reflect the degree of his influence (anyone can be a spokesperson). SAS81 (talk) 17:36, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

A notable entrepreneur and business leader, Deepak Chopra has become a prominent voice in the conscious capitalism movement and promotes ‘wellness’ as including a successful financial lifestyle.

I can understand some problems with this sentence because I introduced 'conscious capitalism' into it. but this is a simple discussion, you can ask me questions but it's also a fact! Dr. Chopra simply IS a business leader and prominent business leaders and institutions refer to him that way. Currently the article just stops short of calling him a charlatan out to make a buck. This misleads the reader. SAS81 (talk) 14:10, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Again, reference the section above about inserting material into the body, but more significantly, what is Conscious Capitalism? It's not a common term that I'm aware of, in connection to Chopra or not, and thus should definitely be in the body of the article. Do you have specific sources on this? The Cap'n (talk) 15:09, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
I accept that I should not have included 'conscious capitalism' at this stage, it was probably from my frustration. I'm just trying to find a way to frame Dr Chopra for something he is extremely notable for. He is not a 'business man' enjoying 'business success' from advertising cures for cancer and aids, which is how the article currently leans towards him in the framing. His views on entrepreneurship and business leadership are essential to his biography as they are essential facts about him. Why would the Clinton Global Initiative, Linked IN, Devos Living, Kellog's all reference Dr Chopra is such a prestigious way? I believe if this article is meant to inform the reader about Dr Chopra, editors here should not be afraid to include genuine accomplishments, especially when he is notable for such. I agree the focus should be more in the body around this, and i will be introducing some more sources. SAS81 (talk) 17:42, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
read WP:PEACOCK . Read it again. And read it again. Then come back and tell us what your understanding of the issues with this phrase are. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 14:35, 11 May 2014 (UTC)

A polarizing figure - Deepak Chopra acts as a thought leader to some and a promoter of dangerous ideas to others.

This is a FACT. are editors here suggesting that we do not inform the reader that to some people Dr Chopra is a thought leader? Am I not including WPFringe by saying that to others he promotes dangerous ideas? Please don't tell me what voice an encyclopedia should have when none of you seem to be aware of what voice a neutral statement should take. SAS81 (talk) 14:10, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

I get how this works! You put out a proposed quote that is so far out of NPOV, then ask others, who support NPOV, to compromise with you - thus biasing the article your way. I'll give you an alternative! A thoroughly disreputable figure, Deepak Chopra acts as a cult leader to some and a promoter of pseudoscientific nonsense resulting in grave injury to others. Lets compromise! Hipocrite (talk) 16:42, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
Well your close, that is how collaborative writing works. And you see my thinking, and now I see yours. And if those are facts, I will oblige. Can you share with me the sources that show that Dr Chopra is a cult leader to some people and that he is a 'thoroughly disreputable figure' as a matter of biographical fact? And if he is such a disreputable figure - why do such prestigious mainstream institutions such as The Clinton Global Initiative, Kellogg's, Gallup and Delos Living focus on including him in such a prestigious manner? Do you think this article should be warning them against Dr. Chopra? You seem to have a view outside of the mainstream view of him. Genuine question. SAS81 (talk) 17:49, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
Have you ever heard of hyperbole? Genuine question. Hipocrite (talk) 18:04, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
Yes, I've heard of it just never heard it being used as a genuine consideration for framing a neutral article on Misplaced Pages. You've shared your views. If your views are facts, backed with sources, you will have my support. If my views are facts, backed with sources, I expect you to have mine. I expect both of us to work together. And yes, if you're asking to get paid, I will actually will be hiring researchers with Misplaced Pages experience so email me if those are serious questions. I will also make a contribution to Misplaced Pages under the REWARDS program specifically if you agree to work this through with me in a rational discussion. I'm willing to be honest and rational and listen, yes I'm paid so that's my job. if you need to be paid to do those things I'll see what I can oblige. SAS81 (talk) 18:49, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

I'm listening and making compromises, how come you're not?

Please post your comments about that HERE and keep the FOC above. thanks SAS81 (talk) 14:10, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Specifically - if I ask "What are the problems with this sentence" I dont mean 'Why arn't you posting this?' I just mean explain your thinking so I can work with you. SAS81 (talk) 14:14, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

@Atama: I appreciate your advice and fair judgement. I seem to be in a position to lose no matter what I do to compromise. First they ask me to focus on a sentence and I do and then they have problems because the body does not reflect the request. Then they ask me to focus on a section and I do and then I get accused of writing a PR journal and accused of being a troll?? SAS81 (talk) 14:23, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

If it makes you feel better, I've done nothing but weigh in on your sources and I'm already being called far worse. For better or worse, anything associated with WP:FRINGE gets people's blood boiling, so there's going to be heated, intense reactions to most things you do. It's regrettable and I've been trying to keep it from dissuading me (I'm stubborn like that), but it does make working toward consensus hard. Just be patient and forthright, though, and things will work out. The Cap'n (talk) 15:05, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
@SAS81: Working through content dispute resolution is a difficult and time-consuming process. I was a mediator for years, but I haven't done it for a long time because, frankly, it's a time-sink. I've literally spent months trying to resolve a dispute between a few people at a single article before. I've moved on to more urgent matters that require someone with admin tools (mediation only requires social skills, not technical tools), lately it has involved trying to reduce the backlog at sockpuppet investigations. But in my time as mediator I did learn a lot of tricks.
My suggestion to you in this situation is to slow down. Pick one thing, just one thing in the article that you think needs to be changed. One single point. Express your concerns, express how you'd like it to be changed, and ask if there is a way to implement that change that satisfies Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines. Don't express it in terms that you want specific wording, but something a bit more general. Just to give you an idea, one term you advocated is "mainstream cheerleader" which a number of people considered to be a peacock term (that's Misplaced Pages-speech for verbiage that unnecessarily inflates an article subject). Maybe you can say what you meant by that phrase, offer something to support your claim, and then ask how to rephrase the term to reflect the concept you're trying to convey. I'm not saying you should start there but this is just an example of somewhere you could start. I recommend that you instead narrow down the one specific thing that you consider to be most troublesome about the article and work on a compromise. My experience in dispute resolution is that people become less overwhelmed when you just focus on one thing at a time.
And finally, be prepared for rejection. This is something that everyone on Misplaced Pages faces now and then. It doesn't just have to do with your status as a paid individual with a conflict of interest, you will try to implement something that you just can't get consensus for. It happens to me too. Sometimes it can feel like you're being bullied, and sometimes people are bullied, but most of the time you're just in a position where your viewpoint is in the minority and you have to accept that your suggestion isn't going to be implemented. You can try to compromise, but even that won't always work. So just be prepared and don't take it personally when it happens, because it will. -- Atama 16:39, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

I am not willing to "compromise" on the lead as you have suggested because it is absolutely incompatible with Misplaced Pages content and presentation guidelines, POLICIES THAT YOU HAVE BEEN GUIDED TO MULTIPLE TIMES AND CONTINUE TO EITHER IGNORE OR LACK THE COMPETENCY TO UNDERSTAND. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 14:28, 11 May 2014 (UTC)

Alternatively, "no."

To keep up with the promotional material coming from the paid PR representative would require hours of work. I, unlike the paid editor, am not being compensated for my time. I'm not wasting it any more. Pay me or stop pushing the same points. Hipocrite (talk) 16:16, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

This discussion thread has run its course. SAS81 should move on to making suggestions regarding specific facts in the article body. Here's hoping that the positive spin is not so pronounced there. Binksternet (talk) 16:40, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

SAS81, Hipocrite has highlighted (above) a well-known problem from game theory. Two boys find a cake. The first boy grabs it and wants to eat it all. The second boy thinks they should take half each. An adult suggests they compromise between the two proposals, so the first boy gets three-quarters.

Some of your suggestions sound like the first boy, i.e. making proposals that aren't acceptable and expecting people to compromise on the basis of them. A better approach would be to start afresh with neutral material and language. A good way for a conflicted editor to suggest edits, per WP:NOPAY, is to use the {{request edit}} template. Gather good sources, write your proposal in disinterested language, post it, then give people a few days to respond so that volunteers don't feel overwhelmed. Best to avoid the lead at the moment, because focusing on that has made people suspicious.

There is a COI template for the top of talk pages that takes you with one click to the request-edit template. It also gives a header and a date when the request was made. I'll add it for you in a minute. SlimVirgin 18:19, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Okay, that's done. All you have to do is click, make your suggestion with your sources, and save. SlimVirgin 18:28, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Recent edits: GA?

I note CorporateM has recently performed a bold edit on this article, removing a large amount of its more weakly-sourced content, copy editing, and making various other changes. The (much discussed) lead has also been re-worked. Overall, I think this improves the article (I have just done some minor tidying-up edits afterwards). I wonder, is it time to think of taking this article towards being a GA? Alexbrn 07:30, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

I think it still has a ways to go to meet the GA standard, but it is close enough that it would be worthwhile to start aiming for it. The first thing that comes to mind is that all the sources need to be checked one-by-one. For example, citation 35 and 37 look like they may be bordering on advocacy sources. Number 60 needs an accessdate. Citation 64, yuck. And there are still quite a few default bio-type pages that are posted on third-party websites, but are the types of places that repost bios provided by the article-subject. Some of these I did not remove on my first read-through, because the article-text looked like something worth keeping if we can find better sources. CorporateM (Talk) 08:03, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Do you think it would be better to nix the "and alternative medicine" part in the first sentence to avoid the double "and"? I just started reading our page on New Age and I got the sense there was some redundancy between the two (alternative medicine being one outlet for a New Age philosophy?). I know very little about the topic... CorporateM (Talk) 08:18, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Can you guys consider putting "New Age Guru" back? If all this article consisted of the sentence ... "Deepak Chopra is a New Age Guru" it wouldn't have actually lost much. It frames him so well. Pretty please? ;) -Roxy the dog (resonate) 08:24, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Yes, I suppose the word "guru" has been much discussed and there is consensus for it. I have been wondering about "celebrity" too, since that seems in the sources a fair amount. I agree we can ditch CAM from the first sentence to avoid the double "and" -- we mention CAM in the next sentence anyway. I've tried an edit - see what you think ... Alexbrn 09:23, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Thank you - and all joking aside, I do think the page has been improved noticeably today. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 09:42, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Normally I would think of "guru" as promotional, but in this case there are strong sources for it and being a "guru" seems to be his primary claim to notability. I might be of a different opinion after reading more. CorporateM (Talk) 13:39, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

what is the reason for mentioning chopra's "wealth" in the first paragraph, and what is the basis of comparison on which someone says he is one of the "wealthiest" new age figures? do we have comparables? seems like an implied criticism somehow, like he is in it for the money, which if true should be shown by data, not innuendo. Zach bender (talk) 04:53, 17 May 2014 (UTC)

Misc

Does anyone have access to citation 4? "Offit, Paul (2013). Do You Believe in Magic? The Sense and Nonsense of Alternative Medicine" or the full-text of this TIME Magazine article? CorporateM (Talk) 13:47, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

I had access to the Offit book when I added that content, but it appears its content is no longer accessible via Google Books; the Time article appears to have been cross-posted here. Alexbrn 15:22, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

For the record: Concerns per extensive changes on a highly contentious article which falls under two arbitrations

I am concerned that a highly contentious BLP which falls under both the TM arbitration and possibly pseudoscience arbitration in which a preliminary DR strategy have been sought here and in which further DR strategies, such as the DR NoticeBoard, have been discussed here has undergone extensive changes with out prior discussion including extensive peremptory deletion of sourced content here. Primary sources are in some cases as here, RS for content and even definitive. Further the removal of accurate and obvious content from the lead that Chopra is an Indian- American and a physician is another red flag. I'd add that in my opinion the article is heavily weighted, especially now and especially given the lead, to discredit another human being and is unacceptable per our BLP policy. Further the article is not even remotely stable given the ongoing contentious discussions, so GA status is premature. (Littleolive oil (talk) 16:02, 13 May 2014 (UTC))

I don't know how the changes violate BLP, much less "discredit" Chopra, but I share the concerns about rewriting the lede while the article is under such scrutiny. It seems overly bold and inappropriate given all the recent discussion on the very information that was changed. --Ronz (talk) 16:21, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
I think these concerns are ill thought out, premature and inaccurate. The article is improved from what it was, most of the edits have been copy/edit improvements, and despite Olive's claims, the lead retains Chopra's Indian American connections, and has considerable detail on his career as a physician. I'm not sure that Olive has read the same lead as me. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 16:20, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
The changes in emphasis and style are rather startling: The first paragraph is very tight, summarizing his notability. The second paragraph loosely introduces him and his career. The third (last) paragraph of two sentences tells of his transition to his current business. I expect that the first paragraph is of most concern. --Ronz (talk) 16:28, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
This attempt to filibuster improvements to the article by pointing to irrelevent discussions elsewhere that most parties were wholly unaware of is highly problematic. Hipocrite (talk) 16:22, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Yes, while due care must be taken for any BLP, and Misplaced Pages's policies guidelines and policies should guide and police as always, the thought that somehow extra caution is warranted here could be seen as a victory for those that would bring external pressure to disrupt the normal course of Misplaced Pages editing. Alexbrn 16:29, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Regarding the Awards and memberships section it looks to be made up entirely of primary sources, but the nature of the information is such that its significance needs to be verified through secondary sources. You can see my views on these types of sections here. Regarding BLP, it does not prevent us from including well-sourced criticisms, but it does encourage us to "write conservatively" which is why I toned down a lot of editorialized quotes from the media and more work along those lines needs to be done in the body. Like any professional journalist, we should consider it our ethical obligation to give the article-subject a voice against their accusers. Therefore, there needs to be a sentence in the Lead that features his defense and/or the viewpoint of his followers. Chopra himself or his representative(s) are the best suited to provide this particular aspect of the article with the best available source. CorporateM (Talk) 17:02, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Given how much concern there was over the COI's interest in the lead, I think it reasonable to expect the same level of caution be exercised by all parties regarding it. From what I can see there is a lot of contention over what the lead does/doesn't summarize, and a clearer body would help provide a better narrative for the lead to summarize. Despite the (rather absolutist) collapsing of the proposed changes section, I think we could do some significant work ironing out the body of the article, where changes do not risk misrepresenting the whole work. I agree that while folks can (and violently do) defend individual pieces of the BLP, the overall feel of it has often not been very objective. The Cap'n (talk) 20:03, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Sorry, I thought you were going to be mediating. It's got to be a new mediation tactic where the mediator expresses their own personal viewpoints and takes sides. I guess you're not mediating? Hipocrite (talk) 20:14, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
It is established best practice to work on the body of the article first and do the Lead last, so you can make sure the Lead is representative of a quality article. Though it shouldn't prevent incremental improvement, it's good advice as far as saving any nit-picking for later. I don't really care what the COI does or doesn't want - my interest is in improving articles. I previously bumped into something TM-related and have been having an itch to work on a topic with a negative reception. Editors should chip in in article-space, not the drama boards. And keep in mind, this is suppose to be fun :-p CorporateM (Talk) 20:29, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

CorporateM when an editor makes changes this fast with out input as to their suitability, its almost impossible to keep up, input, or even know where to start That you perceive this as an article you want to edit because it has a negative reception instead of what this is, a BLP, does not engender confidence in the neutrality of what you are doing. You are being supported by self declared skeptics which I expected given the way the lead first paragraph, especially now, reads. My point in posting was for the record, and to make clear this article is contentious. This resulting thread proves my point as I thought it would. Such highly contentious articles should remain stable for a fair period of time to be considered for GA status. Clearly this article is not stable. However, I do believe you are acting in good faith even though your edits seem to ignore the extensive preceding discussions on some of the content you added. (Littleolive oil (talk) 22:06, 13 May 2014 (UTC))

aside
@Hipocrite, I came here because of a BLP notice for help with sourcing, which I'm in the process of doing, and since then I've been working toward a NPOV article. --- ...if you think my saying there have been issues with objectivity is "taking sides", I recommend reviewing WP:NPOV and WP:BLP. I'm assuming this is a simple misunderstanding and not a misrepresentation of my statements. Again, I urge folks to temper their passions; this is an encyclopedia, not war. The Cap'n (talk) 00:28, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
That's a bald faced lie. Retract it now. Hipocrite (talk) 05:43, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
What do you consider a lie? --- You told Barney he should be "waiting for him (me) to make a mistake large enough (like sockpuppeting again) that you can civilly report his completely disruptive actions." and posted a fake AE to my Talk page as a "warning." Or are you saying that it's a lie that this is an encyclopedia, not a war? That would explain some of your hostility here, at least. The Cap'n (talk) 20:24, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
@Askahrc: You can report someone for disruptive actions, or warn a person about arbitration, without actively campaigning for a block. I would also like to see a concrete example of Hipocrite advocating that you be indefinitely blocked or site-banned, or retract your statement, as otherwise it appears to be a violation of WP:NPA. -- Atama 20:36, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
@Atama, I will grant that he has never said he wanted me indefinitely blocked, and I did not intend to imply he had said those words. I will retract that portion of text. I was basing my assumption that he did not welcome my presence on the statements he'd made in AE (that, aside from the quote above, reiterated the dismissed SPI/death threat issue) and the posting of a mock-up AE on my Talk page. No falsehood or personal attack was intended. The Cap'n (talk) 21:16, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Fair enough, thank you for clarifying. -- Atama 21:19, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Characterizing that SPI as "dismissed" is not quite accurate. There was ample evidence to warrant a checkuser, and a checkuser was performed. I am responding because you had previously tried to discredit other SPIs on this talk page, and I can't help but see the above comment as a continuation of that. It would be best to avoid the topic altogether, of course, but if I feel something is being misrepresented then I will step in. vzaak 06:10, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

Sources

I was wondering if citation 14 was added by anyone that is still paying attention to the article that may be able to provide the text or vouch for its contents. A Google search shows that the article exists (second hit on the search), but the website is no longer hosting the content (broken link). My library doesn't appear to have a copy in their online archives, nor does Highbeam. It looks to be a reliable source for the information it is cited for, but I'd like to verify it. CorporateM (Talk) 21:03, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

Hipocrite (talk) 21:31, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Thank you!!! I will take a look in a moment. CorporateM (Talk) 21:53, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
I added an attribution since the source is an interview. Also, this edit is a bit iffy (again coming from an interview) and anyone is welcome to change it back if they disagree. I also noticed that the source points out that TIME Magazine called him the "poet prophet of alternative medicine", which made me think it was a copy/paste of promotional materials at first, but I found other sources that are secondary from TIME Magazine that discuss it. It seems this may actually warrant inclusion, though I'm not sure where to put it. Anyways, I have it on my watchlist and I might circle back later (maybe in a few months maybe) if the drama has died down by then. I wouldn't mind bringing it up to GA. CorporateM (Talk) 23:08, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
@Alexbrn I wanted to discuss this on Talk rather than revert, but I don't think the removal of that content was necessary. When my justification was that the previous version was not providing a contextual account of the original source, introducing a quote from the original source is not undue. Including the quote on the Ayurvedic stuff right next to an analysis of the dangers of denying medical knowledge gives the impression that was the context of the quote, when in fact he emphasized the medical facts behind AIDS in the same section. That's why the representation is an issue.
It's true that the source comes from a book Chopra wrote, but the section in question is summarizing that same book. The analysis of the content is from an appropriately secondary source, but it is acceptable (and standard) to use the original, primary document to establish its own quotes and content. The Cap'n (talk) 05:20, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Your analysis of the primary texts or of what is important "context" is immaterial - we follow the analyses in secondary sources. This is in a section about "alternative medicine", and Schneiderman's point is about evidence and ethics wrt HIV/AIDS treatment, so your addition was also off-topic. Worse, it might have the POV implication there is some mitigating sanity in Chopra's view, whereas the real context here is that mixing real medicine with nonsense gives you: nonsense. Alexbrn 06:00, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
I didn't have any analysis of the primary texts, I included what was actually said in them and left the secondary sources to do the analysis. Everything in that paragraph was in reference to Chopra's comments on AIDS from his Quantum Healing book, so referencing what Chopra said about AIDS in Quantum Healing is not only on-topic and leaves the secondary analysis coherent, it's necessary for accuracy. Also, arguing that we need to exclude any source that doesn't make the subject look adequately insane is itself POV and very much against BLP. Many of Chopra's views may seem silly, but that doesn't mean we can exclude the ones that aren't just to emphasize illegitimacy. The Cap'n (talk) 14:40, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Primary sources are generally allowed for explaining the point-of-view of the article-subject, so long as they are not used to substantially alter the weight of the arguments. That is a case where you would have to take a look at the article as a whole and see if primary sources are used excessively in a manner that turns the page into a kind of advocacy for the article-subject's point-of-view. CorporateM (Talk) 14:57, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Yup, and they have no bearing on the efficacy or ethical status of Chopra's altmed views on HIV/AIDS, so are at best confusing. If Chopra had written something that bore directly on the Schneiderman point, that would be another matter. Alexbrn 15:01, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Of course they don't, and I didn't try to argue the efficacy or ethics of Chopra, but rather included a reference to the source that Schneiderman is talking about (that's about as directly bearing as you can get). There is no Schneiderman point without this source, I don't see how this is contentious. I'm not trying to say that Chopra's views were effective, ethical, magical, or anything, and that's the point. I'm not trying to say anything, I'm trying to accurately represent what the section relates to. Chopra said A, Schneiderman said B in response. We can't post B without a reference to A. I'm not looking to edit-war, Alexbrn, but I'm not seeing a lot of a solid justification behind these reverts. The source does bear directly on this specific topic, the Schneiderman quotes are rebutting a point that is not fully represented in the first place and the content makes no independent analysis nor justification for Chopra's views, it just states them. The Cap'n (talk) 15:13, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Huh? In Quantum Healing Chopra gives a cursory description of orthodox theories & treatments (which you are quoting, though you might have quoted the most astonishing bit: "no drug is capable of treating it ") and then Chopra segues into his own beliefs which he writes might offer "a move toward a deeper level of understanding, and therefore of treatment." Your edit is in a section on Chopra's own ideas on alternative medicine and it is those with which Schneiderman is taking issue. You edit introduces content which is (a) irrelevant to the section, (b) irrelevant to our secondary source and (c) a misrepresentation of what Chopra is writing in relation to Schneiderman's points. If we wanted to add relevant material from Quantum Healing, we could add more detail quoting for example that Chopra thinks "cancer and AIDS seem to be cases where the proper sequence of sutras must be unravelled at the deepest level". Alexbrn 15:31, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
I'm all for including more objective material rather than less, so feel free to include the sutra stuff. Also, yes, I'm including material in a section on Chopra's own ideas on alternative medicine, which, appropriately, are quotes of Chopra's own ideas. The section is on Chopra's ideas and their reception, my material is Chopra's ideas, Schneiderman is the reception. Just curious, what is your justification for stating that quoting Quantum Healing would be relevant if we were including material that depicted Chopra as "insane" but is irrelevant if it seems to say "there is some mitigating sanity in Chopra's view"? That's not the way BLP works.
By the way, the reason why I didn't feel it relevant to bring up Chopra's insane idea that there are no medications to treat HIV/AIDS is that the book was written in 1989, when there were no medications to treat HIV/AIDS. This is why context is important. The Cap'n (talk) 16:03, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
If it's not covered by the secondaries or directly related to a secondary, it's probably undue. From what you are saying, I do not think you understand the source. The only person who has used the word "insane" (repeatedly), or who has raised the topic of Chopra's sanity (as opposed to the sanity of his views) is - you. Another misunderstanding, I am sure. Alexbrn 16:13, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
You write "the book was written in 1989, when there were no medications to treat HIV/AIDS." This is blatently false. . Hipocrite (talk) 16:31, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

@Hipocrite here's the timeline of AZT distribution, which was not broadly distributed until the same year the book was published, 1989. Also, can you define the difference between "false" and "blatently false"? @Alexbrn, again, how is the QH book not related to the secondary when the secondary is writing about the QH book? As far as sanity, you said "Worse, it might have the POV implication there is some mitigating sanity in Chopra's view..." Whether you're referencing the man or his views, excluding content because people might not think he or his views are appropriately decried is not ideal BLP work. Putting in what Chopra said, followed by Schneiderman's analysis of what Chopra said, is NPOV and accurate. What is the problem here? I'm not trying to write a puff piece or anything, just reference the content being discussed. I'd welcome some other opinions. What do you think, CorporateM? Is the inclusion of a reference from the Chopra book Schneiderman's discussing undue here? The Cap'n (talk) 20:44, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

Are you really doubling down on your misstatements? Now it's just willful. AZT was widely distributed well before 1989. Your source doesn't say that it wasn't. Please stop making things up. Still further - you said "there were no medications to treat HIV/AIDS," not "no widely distributed..." You said "no." Could you consider writing, perhaps, that you were wrong, just once, given that you were, and remain, wrong? Hipocrite (talk) 21:10, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Sure. After reviewing the sources, I was wrong in my initial statement and AZT was available in limited distribution in 1987, not 1989. Also, I said that as an off-hand example of material I did not include in the article, so I'm not sure why you're so concerned with it, but there you are. The Cap'n (talk) 21:23, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
I don't know how many ways I can say this. I'll try one more time: Schneiderman is addressing different content in Chopra's book than the content you included. Have you read Schneiderman? Chopra actually discusses AZT in Quantum Healing so I'm astonished you asserted it didn't exist when he was writing. Are you actually reading these sources? Alexbrn 04:59, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
I have read the sources and still think the content makes sense there, but I don't feel strongly enough about it to slow everything down with another wall of text, especially since I can see your point. As for AZT, that was my mistake, as I noted above. I'm okay with leaving it and moving on. The Cap'n (talk) 19:11, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

New references found

I had forgotten “advice,” a category created in the 1990s when New Age books by Deepak Chopra with wacky titles like The Quantum Alternative to Growing Old began dominating the nonfiction list. I’m pretty sure there is only one alternative to growing old, and I don’t recommend it. Nonetheless, Chopra once had four books in the nonfiction top-10 at the same time. The fact that Chopra’s pseudoscientific New Age blather sells at all is a sad commentary on reading tastes, but we don’t burn books anymore, even terrible books. However, we do segregate them. It’s not a perfect solution.

Source: Robert L. Park. (2009). Superstition: Belief in the Age of Science. Princeton University Press. pp. 124-125

By broadcasting his series of lectures, it gave him an unchallenged forum to preach his brand of magical metaphysics supported by deceptive pseudoscience. His philosophy is fundamentally and deeply religious, but Chopra gets great mileage with the media and public by disguising the religion as science. Even mainstream religions don't clamor for equal time because they too are blindsided by the clever approach. When KCET in Los Angeles used Chopra as a fundraiser, he spewed his usual gibberish, the moderator heaped on the usual praise, and the pledges poured in. It was like a New Age televangelical fundraiser.

Source: Kurt Butler. (1999). Lying for Fun and Profit: The Truth about the Media: Exposes the Corrupt Symbiosis Between Media Giants and the Health Fraud Industries. Health Wise Productions. p. 164

Chopra has forsaken rationalism and become a godman with a difference. Instead of fooling people with sleight of hand, he fools them with sleight of tongue. And instead of scamming superstitious Indian peasants, he scams the superstitious American middle class. This recipe has brought him great wealth. After his conversion to the TM cult Chopra was appointed Lord of Immortality by Maharishi Mahesh Yogi and became Ayurvedic medicine's messiah in America.

Source: Kurt Butler. (1999). Lying for Fun and Profit: The Truth about the Media: Exposes the Corrupt Symbiosis Between Media Giants and the Health Fraud Industries. Health Wise Productions. p. 237 Goblin Face (talk) 20:56, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

Chopra is also mentioned in Kurt Butler and Stephen Barrett's book A Consumer's Guide to "Alternative Medicine": A Close Look at Homeopathy, Acupuncture, Faith-healing, and Other Unconventional Treatments. (1992). Prometheus Books. pp. 110-116. Goblin Face (talk) 21:14, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Chopra is also mentioned in the book Sleeping with Extra-Terrestrials: The Rise of Irrationalism and Perils of Piety by Wendy Kaminer on pages 165-167. Does anyone have access to these sources? Goblin Face (talk) 21:30, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
I have added the book by Butler and Barrett to the further reading section. Some information about the book can be found here , . Butler is a nutritionist and health writer who founded the Quackery Action Council. In his book Lying for Fun and Profit, Butler has an entire chapter on Chopra. I have added some brief quotes above. I suggest that some of Butler's commentary be added to the article. Goblin Face (talk) 20:30, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

Ref and date format

I'd like to tidy the refs if that's okay. A couple of things:

Most are last name, first name; some are the other way round. Does anyone mind if I make them first name, last name? There's no reason to put the last name first if the list isn't alphabetical, and they're easier to write if we don't have to change the order.

Also, a couple of refs have a dash after the page, "e.g. pp. 46–". Is that p. 46, p. 46ff? SlimVirgin 21:09, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

Meh, I usually go with whatever the citation templates do. The extra dash is often put in there by the automatic citation wizards and has to be taken out manually. I'm glad to see there is more discussion about actual sources (above). As a side-note, it looks like there is a weird run-on sentence in the second paragraph of the Lead. CorporateM (Talk) 20:43, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
I'll take the absence of objection as an okay to go ahead, so I'll do that during my next edits. I may also try (over time) to flesh it out with some biographical details and info about his work. Some of the sources could be replaced too; it's better to choose a small number of high-quality sources and stick with them. SlimVirgin 22:34, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
  • The date formats are also inconsistent. My own preference is day-month-year, but I don't mind either way. If people have a preference, please say. SlimVirgin 02:48, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
As far as dates go, I'm fine with any layout as long as the month is spelled out to prevent confusion by those who aren't used to that system. I also prefer last name, first, but it's nothing I'm passionate about. I just think it makes it easier for those searching for specific authors. The Cap'n (talk) 16:48, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for the reply. I had already changed to first name/last name when you posted, but we can easily change back if people want to. I'd quite like to line up the dates as day first, but given it's about someone in the US (where they prefer month first), I'll wait to see if there are objections. SlimVirgin 00:24, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

Park's commentary deleted

"Physics professor Robert L. Park has written that physicists wince at the "New Age quackery" in Chopra's cancer theories." - Is there any reason this was deleted, can we add this back in. Goblin Face (talk) 03:41, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

It's repetitive of material that's already in that section. I think it would make sense to remove/paraphrase some more quotes, because there's a quite a bit of "me too" in the article. SlimVirgin 05:10, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Quote Confusion

@Ronz I was not putting my opinion in the quote, but placing the actual quote from the source. Someone had added "where he spouts a few platitudes and gives", but that's not what's in the quoted book. I simply removed the vandalized content and restored the quote. Please check the book and find the reference, then I respectfully request you undo your revert. The Cap'n (talk) 18:01, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Best keep edit summaries specific to explanations of the edit. I saw all the commentary and assumed that it was part of your explanation. --Ronz (talk) 18:09, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for the undo and feedback, I appreciate it. The Cap'n (talk) 18:13, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Not vandalism. The quote is simply from the Skeptic's Dictionary website which differs slightly from the book form. The quote presumably appears in the article because Baer uses it in his paper. It seems further from original research if we use an expert like Baer to identify a relevant passage, but either version of the quote seems fine.

Though unnamed, User:Alexbrn was implicitly accused of vandalizing the article. That's not helpful. vzaak 05:50, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

New Age guru

I'd like to remove this from the lead, but I see there has been discussion before, so I'm checking here first. Whenever I read it, it jars slightly because it jumps out as either a compliment or insult, depending on your perspective, but not a factual description. That is, it has more connotation than denotation (in this context). SlimVirgin 00:20, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

He has a large following outside the New Age community too. I was thinking of simply: "is an Indian-American alternative-medicine practitioner." The next sentence makes clear that he's a prolific author too, and that he has a large following. So:

Deepak Chopra (/ˈdiːpɑːk ˈtʃoʊprə/) (born October 22, 1947) is an Indian-American alternative-medicine practitioner. He is the author of several dozen books and over 100 audio or video products on complementary medicine, and has become one of the best-known and wealthiest figures in the holistic health movement.

SlimVirgin 01:52, 18 May 2014 (UTC)
The thing about "guru", awkward as it is, is that it captures a lot of meaning compactly. "Practitioner" is not quite right. Perhaps sometime like "celebrity advocate of New Age ideas" would work, so long as the next sentence mentioned "alternative medicine". (We shouldn't use "holistic health" as we are now, it's a loaded term here). Alexbrn 03:17, 18 May 2014 (UTC)
Agree with Alex about "holistic health" and I have stated my preference for "new age guru" when it was previously removed. Also I'm not convinced that he is a practitioner of Alt-Med as much as an advocate, as I doubt he spends much time over a mortar and pestle grinding ayurvedic remedies, more likely hunched over a Mac keyboard in a plush office, grinding out his next HuffPo article. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 06:26, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

It's a loaded term and I'd say it should be avoided. "celebrity advocate of New Age ideas" is even worse in my opinion. We should use the language or terms most often found in secondary sources like these:

  • @Keithbob: I think your presentation of the sources is misleading in the extreme. To take only the final source ("Reuters"), I assume you're citing this press release (you haven't provided actual hyperlinks, so please correct me if I'm wrong). That source is a press release promoting a meeting featuring Chopra. It is not a news article from Reuters. That should be immediately clear, since the source says at the very top: Reuters is not responsible for the content in this press release.

    To reiterate what should be obvious: news articles from Reuters are reliable sources. Promotional press releases reposted on the Reuters website with a disclaimer are not reliable sources. Can you (Keithbob) please clarify whether the other cited sources are in fact objective news pieces, as opposed to promotional material reposted on various news websites? MastCell  22:35, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

  • I checked the second-to-last and found this article on CNBC's web site, where it looks like that language came from Sharon Epperson who is a financial correspondent for the news channel.
  • The next one up looks to be from this article at the LA Times, and was written by Betty Hallock (who is a "deputy food editor" for the paper), but it's just a notification of a book signing so it is probably just repeating info provided by Chopra's people.
  • The next one up I found at this page (you need to log in to HighBeam to see the whole thing) and it doesn't have any indication of being a press release, it looks like an article written by John Rebchook, who is the Real Estate Editor for Rocky Mountain News. I don't find it repeated anywhere else, so it's probably not from a press release.
  • It looks like the next one up is from a press release. I can't find the Journal of India article, but I found that exact same language here and repeated at other pages online, which clearly stem from a press release.
  • The next one up also seems to be a press release. The LA Times article itself doesn't say that it is, but I found this press release which is the same language, so clearly it came from a press release generated by OWN.
  • Bottom line, most of those above are from press releases, but a couple of them aren't. -- Atama 18:22, 19 May 2014 (UTC)
Atama, thanks for doing that legwork - it's very helpful. I guess the bottom line from my perspective is that it would be helpful for experienced editors to set a good example in terms of approaching sources scrupulously (as Atama has). It's pretty disappointing to see obviously promotional press releases presented as if they were "secondary sources" suitable to base an encyclopedic biography upon. Thanks again to Atama for helping to clarify. MastCell  22:39, 19 May 2014 (UTC)

some sources and clarifications re: New Age Guru

This article has really come along way and the work speaks to Misplaced Pages's process. I want to add some clarifications regarding the above discussion with facts, acting as Dr Chopra's archivist. Some of the confusion here is around common misperceptions (some of them so common even Dr Chopra accepts them quite often)


Fact 1: Dr Chopra is not an alternative medicine practitioner. A alternative medicine practitioner implies a license or a practice that Dr Chopra does not have. What is factually correct is that Dr Chopra has been a 'champion' (for lack of a better word) of integrating western medicine with yoga and meditation. Dr. Chopra runs a medically licensed clinic (1A), the Mind Body medical group/Chopra Center is all comprised of licensed medical doctors but there is a very strong emphasis on yoga, meditation and various ‘wellness’ practices. Additionally Dr. Chopra’s clinic teaches AMA certified CME courses on Integrative (not alternative) Medicine under the aegis of UCSD medical school (1B). Integrative (or "complementary" in NIH documents) is the recognized approach for Dr. Chopra (1D).

1A: "Although he uses ayurvedic techniques in his practice he is still a practicing endocrinologist and if a patient presents with hypothyroidism he still prescribes thyroid replacement therapy. He acknowledges that antibiotics and cancer chemotherapeutic agents interfere with the mechanism of disease. However, ayurvedism says that the mechanism and origin of disease are not the same." Source: Goldman, Brian, PhD. .National Institute of Health, 1/15/1991. "Ayurvedism, Eastern medicine moves west", CMAJ. p. 218-221.

→→→→→→→ Two things: first of all, your citation is wrong on several points. The author, Brian Goldman, is an M.D., not a Ph.D. He is not affiliated with the "National Institute of Health" , but rather is a practicing ER doc in Toronto. (Both facts should be obvious to anyone perusing the first page of the article, let alone an archivist). Secondly, and more importantly, your selected excerpt doesn't really convey the tone of the source. Goldman writes: "In building his case against western medicine, Chopra cloaks himself carefully in the mantle of 'rational Western physician'." Thus, the author expresses significant skepticism about Chopra's commitment to Western medicine, instead framing it as a pose adopted by Chopra to advocate more successfully for alternative approaches. I realize that you are trying very hard to avoid conveying anything of the sort here on Misplaced Pages, but since you cited this source, the least you can do is accurately represent its content. MastCell  22:50, 19 May 2014 (UTC)

my response is at the bottom where it is appropriate, please avoid splitting other editor's comments. SAS81 (talk) 01:53, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but you keep posting massive text dumps full of inaccuracies. I haven't even gotten past "1A" yet and I already see significant errors of both fact and interpretation. It would be helpful if you could be a bit more patient - recognizing that while you are paid to edit this article as your job, the rest of us are volunteers. Try breaking your posts into smaller, more easily discussed segments, and focus on one issue until it's resolved before moving on. These text dumps are not really conducive to any kind of collaborative editing, and instead leave the sense that you're trying to beat down any concerns or dissenting voices with the sheer volume of your posts. MastCell  03:02, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
I am going to ask you to retract this statement "' but you keep posting massive text dumps full of inaccuracies." that is an aspersion and if you find an inaccuracy, I will retract it. please stop trying to discredit me. I can't please everyone here. I am posting less than once a week, am compiling sources which take up space, and my own comments are hardly that long. I'm just not popular here because of my position. I request you afford me the same respect you would anyone else. SAS81 (talk) 15:12, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
Your massive text dump - just the first one - was filled with inaccuracies. You wrote "Goldman, Brian, PhD" - inaccurate. You wrote "National Institute of Health" - inaccurate. Then, you use a bunch of blurbs. Are you sure you're a trained archivist? Hipocrite (talk) 15:34, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

If you are not going to list this great waterfall of inaccuracies please retract your statement. If my inaccuracies are inputting PhD for MD are all you have, kindly be patient with me, I have fat fingers and drink too much coffee. 'NIH' is where the source was retrieved, thus why it's listed that way. Send over your best practices for citations, I'll give it a review. SAS81 (talk) 23:12, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

1B: "Journey into Healing is an accredited course in integrative medicine presented in partnership by the internationally renowned Chopra Center for Wellbeing and U.C.S.D.’s School of Medicine. This experiential workshop is for health care professionals who want to expand their knowledge of mind-body medicine and its practical applications for patient care.

CME credits are available for health care practitioners. Physicians should only claim credit commensurate with the extent of their participation in the activity."

Source: Chopra Center website, Continuing Medical Education Units (CMEs), http://www.chopra.com/programs/journey-into-healing/continuing-medical-education-units-cmes last accessed 5/19/2014.

1C: "A contemporary physician and meta-physician originally from India, he presents and integrates the ageless wisdom of spirituality , quantum physics and medicine." Sources: Friis, Robert H (Emeritus Professor and Chair Department of Health Science - CSU Long Beach), Seaward, Brian Luke (Drexel University - College of Nursing and Health Professions), Dayer-Berenson, Linda. Managing Stress. (Jones & Bartlett Learning, 2013) ISBN:1284036642, p. 185.

1D: "…the second work (of Dr Chopra) places considerably less emphasis on Ayurveda and ‘is grounded in references to Western mind-body medicine, pscyhoneuroimmunology, and physics.’ (Goldstein 1999:112)" Source: Baer, Hans A. Toward an Integrative Medicine: Merging Alternative Therapies with Biomedicine. (AltaMira Press, 2004) ISBN:075910302X, p. 128.

1E: "For more than a decade, he has participated as a lecturer at the Update in Internal Medicine event sponsored by Harvard Medical School’s Department of Continuing Education and the Department of Medicine, Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center. Dr. Chopra is a fellow of the American College of Physicians, a member of the American Association of Clinical Endocrinologists, an adjunct professor at Kellogg School of Management, and a senior scientist with the Gallup Organization. Before establishing the Chopra Center, he served as chief of staff at Boston Regional Medical Center." Source: Delos Living website, Advisory Board members. http://delosliving.com/people/dr-deepak-chopra/ last accessed May 19, 2014

Fact 2: Dr Chopra is not a New Age Guru. His own statements contradict this directly and Dr Chopra has always rejected the ‘guru’ title (2A), while many sources avoid the term, even when referring to others who do identify as gurus (2H, 2J). It’s also primarily used as a pejorative against him by his many critics. Case in point one editor in this discussion who has been vocal of their low opinion about Dr Chopra specifically said ‘If all this article consisted of the sentence ... "Deepak Chopra is a New Age Guru" it wouldn't have actually lost much’. While concise descriptions are difficult to articulate, it is factual to say that Dr Chopra is a known advocate, champion, thought leader or some kind of spokesperson promoting the integration of practices such as yoga and meditation with western medicine along with his views on consciousness. The problem is what term do we use? This is challenging - but here are some sources that reference his ‘position’ using other language that is more mainstream and neutral than 'New Age Guru'. It's likely some editors will attempt to dismiss several of these sources, but I hope you will give these fair weight against the sources being used for 'New Age Guru'.

2A: "(Interviewer) Motivational guru, poet, prophet, pioneer of alternative medicine, inspired philosopher — which epithet would Deepak Chopra use to define himself?

(Chopra) I am neither motivational, nor am I a guru, the rest are labels. I am an explorer of a domain of awareness people call consciousness. Just like people climb mountains, I explore the mind. Then I report my findings. My background is in neuro-endocrinology — the study of brain chemicals. I am a physician by training. So I have a great interest in how consciousness differentiates cognition, moods and emotions, perceptions and behaviour, biological functions, social interaction, personal relations, environmental situations and even our interaction with nature."

Source: Bhaduri Jha, Nilanjana. India Economic Times, 6/22/2004. Employee loyalty comes first, the rest will follow'

2B: "Deepak Chopra, M.D., a global leader in the field of mind-body medicine" Source: Gallup Inc. “Gallup Senior Scientists/Senior Advisors

2C: A renowned physician and author, Deepak Chopra is undoubtedly one of the most lucid and inspired philosophers of our time. Source: Gorbachev, Mikhail. Recipients of the Medal of the Presidency of the Italian Republic: Richard Dawkins, Deepak Chopra, Michael Albert. (Books LLC, 2010)

2D: “Deepak Chopra, endocrinologist, lecturer, celebrity and author of many books…” Source: Yachter, Daniel. Doctor of the Future. (Advantage Media Group, 2010) ISBN:1599321564. p. 162.

2E: "...global thought leaders such as Deepak Chopra, Google’s Chief Internet Evangelist Vint Cerf, star chef Rick Moonen and violinist Charles Yang..." Source: Atkinson, Kim. Chopra Meets Cosmology at Colorado's Curiosity Retreats. Forbes website, http://www.forbes.com/sites/forbestravelguide/2014/04/02/chopra-meets-cosmology-at-colorados-curiosity-retreats/. Last accessed 4/2/2014.

2F: "The Soul of Leadership’s Academic Directors (author, physician and thought leader Deepak Chopra..." Source: Kellogg School of Management. Soul of Leadership: Become and Engaged Leader. http://www.kellogg.northwestern.edu/execed/programs/soul.aspx last accessed May 15, 2014.

2G: "Deepak Chopra, physician, educator and best-selling author..." Source: Epperson, Sharon. Deepak Chopra's guide to thinking rich, CNBC. http://www.cnbc.com/id/101607619, last accessed May 18, 2014.

2H: "Notable conference guests have included President Bill Clinton, who attended the National Governor’s Conference in 2000, Deepak Chopra and alternative health guru Andrew Weil." Source: Appelman, Hilary. Penn Stater Conference Center celebrates 20 years of bridging academia, world. Penn State News. May 5, 2014. http://news.psu.edu/story/314070/2014/05/05/academics/penn-stater-conference-center-celebrates-20-years-bridging last accessed May 18, 2014.

2I: "Dr Deepak Chopra, global thought leader and best-selling author..." Source: Media Update. New global communications platform, State, is making a push into SA. May 6, 2014, www.mediaupdate.co.za/?idstory65004*

*Corrected Link: www.mediaupdate.co.za/?idstory=65004

2J: "Conversely, the publication of Health and Healing (1995a; originally published in 1983) marks the beginning of the “late Weil” – namely the “good hippie doc” and a prominent holistic health guru…

In contrast to Weil, Chopra has become the preeminent figure in a long tradition of positive thinkers in American society over the course of the past decade or so (Meyer 1965)."

Source: Baer, Hans A. Toward an Integrative Medicine: Merging Alternative Therapies with Biomedicine. (AltaMira Press, 2004) ISBN:075910302X, p. 121-129.

2K: "Other people look favorably on me and smilingly tell me that I am a guru (a label I would never apply to myself, not because of its odor of charlatanism in the West, but because the title is revered in India)." Source: Chopra, Deepak. Brotherhood: Dharma, Destiny, and the American Dream. (New Harvest, 2013) p. 15

2L: "Deepak Chopra: Founder, The Chopra Center for Wellbeing; Founder, The Chopra Foundation" Source: Clinton Global Initiative, 2012 Featured Attendees List. http://www.clintonglobalinitiative.org/ourmeetings/2012/attendees/

2M: "Founder of the Chopra Foundation. Deepak Chopra is a world-renowned authority in the field of mind-body healing, a best-selling author, and the founder of the Chopra Center for Wellbeing. Heralded by Time Magazine as the “poet-prophet of alternative medicine,” he is also the host of the popular weekly Wellness Radio program on Sirius/XM Stars." Source: Delos Living website, Advisory Board members. http://delosliving.com/people/dr-deepak-chopra/ last accessed May 19, 2014

One possible consideration maybe to just refer to Dr Chopra the way the Clinton Global Initiative refers to him - as an Indian American author, speaker, and founder of the Chopra Center for Wellness.

I hope this has been somewhat helpful, thank you everyone for improving this article, I'm hoping we can make it a great one. SAS81 (talk) 22:10, 19 May 2014 (UTC)

MastCell- yes sorry about the MD, PhD, thanks for pointing out that citation error. That he lives in Toronto has no relevance to the citation.His article is preserved at NIH and that is where it was retrieved from, nothing out of form there, retrieval from databases need to be cited. In terms of the ‘tone’ of the article, the author comments on many sides of an argument around Dr Chopra - and one of the things he comments on is one of the facts that I am using him as a source for, primarily a fact that Dr Chopra integrates western medicine with meditation and yoga. His tone is irrelevant when we are discussing facts. SAS81 (talk) 01:53, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
First of all, the article is not "preserved at NIH". That's akin to saying that bigfootexists.com is "preserved at Google". The article is indexed on MEDLINE, a service of the National Library of Medicine, which is in turn part of NIH. It's a searchable database of the medical literature, but the article is not hosted or otherwise endorsed by NIH, any more than the millions or billions of other articles indexed by MEDLINE. I'm not telling you how to do your job as an archivist, but this is a really, really basic aspect of the medical literature and if it's unclear then I would strongly suggest seeking assistance from a reputable medical librarian.

Secondly, we do actually have a responsibility to preserve an author's tone and not merely quote-mine his work for the most sympathetic passages. The tone of Goldman's article is quite skeptical of Chopra in places, but you've ignored these aspects of the source and instead used it to promote the official party line. This is the kind of thing that gives paid editing a justifiably bad name. MastCell  02:54, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

SAS is using a quote from the source to underpin the term and idea integrative medicine. He is not selecting content to paint a picture either positive or negative about Chopra.
I disagree with your analysis of the source and its tone. Certainly there is some skepticism but the tone overall is quite neutral and mild, and in some places even interested. You are accusing SAS of ignoring the skeptical aspects of the article even though those aspects have nothing to do with what he's discussing. And you are implying your reading of the article's tone is the accurate one. I think you have a valid opinion, but nor more valid than anyone else's.
I think its fair to ask an editor to slow down because one's editing time is limited. However, many editors on Misplaced Pages are highly productive for reasons other than that they paid. Selecting paid editing as reason to attach blame seems a little selective, and a red herring.(Littleolive oil (talk) 04:03, 20 May 2014 (UTC))
Details about citation style aside, I just finished reading the source in question. I know I've caught more than a few sources that were quoted as being highly critical of Chopra, then have actually read the source to discover it was actually a defense of Chopra, with all the accusations but the defense left out. That's misrepresentation. This isn't. The author is, in my opinion, admirably well balanced. He examined Chopra's history, qualifications and criticisms neutrally and without rancor. There were critiques of Chopra in there, but there was also praise, and the author's intent was clearly to be objective. I think we venture into dangerous waters when we ask editors to judge what the opinion of the author was and only include material that reflects that opinion. In a good, objective source there should be numerous points, any of which should be able to be quoted on their own. One would be able to find material in this source to argue that Chopra is an intelligent man, a highly controversial figure, a licensed physician, a practitioner of ayurveda, a successful businessman or a lightning rod for the medical community. And, lo and behold, all of those might be correct. Just sayin'. The Cap'n (talk) 04:36, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

@ mastcell - This is being discussed ad nauseum, so a couple clarifications. Yes, I am aware of PubMed, and no I never stated the NIH endorsed that article. The article was archived with PubMed under the NIH where it was retrieved. We cited the NIH as the broader entity, with the PubMed Central designation in the link itself. If anyone has issues with our citation style, feel free to alter it when added to Misplaced Pages. First there were issues with the author's degree, which we acknowledged. Then there complaints that the reference is cited improperly because the doctor is from Toronto, which made no sense and were dropped, and now there are complaints that we cited the NIH rather than its hosting subsidiaries. This obsession over the minutia of a single reference's formatting seems bizarre and unproductive. Secondly I am asking you to retract your statement that I post a bunch of inaccuracies. if you find an inaccuracy, I will retract it. So far my only inaccuracy is listing him as a PhD and not an MD. Doesn't change the context or validity of the source and what it's being used to support. SAS81 (talk) 17:03, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

I thought you were a trained archivist. Wouldn't basic citation styles be part of that? What kind of citation style is it that goes "Author, search engine owner, article, date, article, journal, page?" Isn't it typically "Author, institution, article, journal, date, page?" Perhaps you thought the author worked for the NIH? Hipocrite (talk) 17:20, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
Tell you what Hipocrite, if you provide me the exact citation and source types you would prefer to see me post I'll reformat them for you. Until then, try to focus on the actual content in the sources as provided. SAS81 (talk) 23:08, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
The problem here should be obvious. When you cite a source as Goldman, Brian, PhD. National Institute of Health, 1/15/1991, you are obviously implying that its author works for the NIH and that the source is produced by and endorsed by NIH. None of these things are true. Presumably none of us want to imply things that aren't true. The issue has very little to do with formatting per se, or with Toronto, although you keep miscasting it in those terms. It's a simple matter of being sure we honestly convey source content. I don't want Hipocrite to spoon-feed you a proper citation; I want you to understand why proper citations are important, before you continue posting massive tracts here. MastCell  00:48, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
I guess I'm confused. When you wrote "hold our positions as researchers and historians due to accredited skill sets," you imply that you were trained as either a researcher or historian, and that that training is relevant to your current profession. Admittedly, my training as a researcher ended when I left the academic world some 15 years ago, and my training in citation styles is even LESS relent to what I do than the partial differential equations that led me to give up on the whole "researcher" bit, but I do recollect there being a number of different citation styles. In fact, I remember there being exactly 5 - APA, Turabin, Chicago, APA and MLA. I went to look each of them up, to find out which one includes "owner of the search engine used to find the document," as the second item to list. Shockingly, it wasn't in any of the 4! Perhaps there's a 5th citation style out there. Could you please show me what citation style has "search engine owner" as the second, or even any, of the things you're supposed to include as a citation? I guess I'm being a bit over the top now, but you are having a really hard time with the honesty here - you didn't have the first clue what PUBMED was, did you? Hipocrite (talk) 19:03, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Recent edits to lead

I've used an inclusive approach to include both the edits of an experienced uninvolved editor and the edits which were made recently to the lead. (Littleolive oil (talk) 21:55, 19 May 2014 (UTC))

I have boldly replaced the word "state" with "claim" in the lead, deliberately to indicate that there is no evidence for Deepak's assertions, per wp:claim. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 00:41, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
which claims specifically? the effects on physical health from yoga and meditation are well documented. Integrative Medicine is mainstream.The lead still does not capture Dr Chopra's actual ideas, but at least they are closer than before. Dr Chopra does not claim that's a mental process over the physical, but rather an holistic process, meaning 'physical emotional mental spiritual & environmental' all contribute to the well being of the individual. That's not an unsupported claim, that is integrative medicine. SAS81 (talk) 02:01, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
As had been discussed, practically no source concentrates on the "physician" aspect of Chopra, no having it as the first thing we mention about him is completely undue, and out of alignment with the sources. Alexbrn 04:38, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
Multiple sources on Chopra's life begin by saying he is a physician. That he was a physician is critical to an understanding of why he veered off into integrative medicine so I would disagree that mentioning this as a base line point for his life's work is undue.(Littleolive oil (talk) 17:07, 20 May 2014 (UTC))

AIDS, CANCER views

Chopra has described the AIDS virus as emitting "a sound that lures the DNA to its destruction". The condition can be treated, according to Chopra, with "Ayurveda's primordial sound". Taking issue with this view, medical professor Lawrence Schneiderman has said that ethical issues are raised when alternative medicine is not based on empirical evidence and that, "to put it mildly, Dr. Chopra proposes a treatment and prevention program for AIDS that has no supporting empirical data".

AIDS and Cancer are not topics central to Dr Chopra's main thesis, that integrating western medicine with meditation is beneficial towards health so focusing on them in the lead section puts to much weight on ideas that are not core to his thesis. There are some highly selective quotes in the section on Quantum Healing regarding Dr Chopra's description of AIDS and cancer that heavily imply he rejects basic medical understanding of how these diseases operate. This is factually incorrect. Dr Chopra writes about integrating Western medicine, not rejecting it, with meditation practices.

In order to help foster some more accurate representation, below are additional quotes from the book that reflect a more balanced position. I hope any discussion of the book in the article will reflect the actual contents of the book.

Source: Chopra, Deepak. Quantum Healing: Exploring the Frontiers of Mind/Body Medicine. (Bantam, 1990) ISBN: 0553348698

p. 237: “One AIDS patient in Germany has been treated with Ayurveda for two years as part of a pilot program conducted in Europe. Diagnosed in 1984, he is still alive at the time of this writing in August 1988 (80 percent of AIDS patients die within two years of diagnosis); he leads a normal life and is without overt symptoms. …the subjects know that Ayurveda is not promising a cure, but the supervising physicians feel that they are seeing improvements, particularly in the patients’ ability to withstand the debilitating fatigue that saps the strength and will of AIDS patients.”

p. 238: “The diagnosis had been made four years earlier after he came down with pneumonia. Rather than the typical pneumonia caused by pneumococcus bacteria, his came from a protozoa known as Pneumocystis carinii; this disease is one of the most common that strike AIDS patients when their immune systems collapse. He recovered from the attack and decided to change his life. He learned to meditate, and for the first time in his adult life he gave up the habitual routine of long nights, heavy drinking, pills, smoking, and promiscuity that had been attached to his career. (Interestingly, a survey of long-term AIDS survivors shows that all of them have made this kind of “take charge” decision over their disease. Standard medicine cannot explain why this should be such a lifesaver, but it is.)”

Dr Chopra specifically states what causes AIDS and nowhere does he say he it caused by sound mutations. That Dr Chopra may describe ‘how’ Ayurveda would view an illness is not the same thing as Dr Chopra viewing that illness in the same way.

p. 237: I kept one foot firmly planted in my private endocrinology practice - although I felt in tune with Ayurveda theory, I was nervous about the results."

p. 237: This is not yet a cure, but a huge step towards recovering one."

p. 239: "AIDS is caused by the HIV virus, plus its related mutations, which are a researcher's nightmare." “A cold or flu virus is content to let DNA build proteins for it, but a retrovirus like HIV goes one better by blending into the DNA’s own chemical strands, masking itself as the host’s genetic material.”

p. 243: “The pneumonia that an AIDS patient typically catches is caused by a variety of Penumocystis that is present in everybody’s lungs all the time. The AIDS virus activates such diseases from the inside by demolishing one part of the immune system (the helper T-cells), thus breaking apart the network of information that holds us together.”

p. 251: “…Ayurveda therefore pays much less attention to surface emotions than does current mind-body medicine. The whole rationale for treating cancer (or AIDS) with primordial sound and bliss techniques is that they reach the deep levels of consciousness common to everyone, the weak as much as the strong.”

“…Eleanor was diagnosed with advanced breast cancer that had metastasized to the lymph nodes under her arm. She underwent one radical mastectomy, followed by a second; her reaction to chemotherapy afterward was extremely poor. Finding the side effects intolerable, she abandoned conventional treatment altogether, even though her doctors made her well aware that the cancer had now spread to her bones. Patients in this category of metastasis have about a 1 percent chance of survival. As it happens, Eleanor was advised by her family doctor to start meditating in 1986, in the middle of her disease. Through her meditation practice, she heard about Ayurveda. She came to Lancaster for inpatient treatment, where I met her and instructed her in the primordial sound for treating cancer. The results were remarkable. Her severe bone pain disappeared (this incident was mentioned earlier, in chapter 9), and whenever she returned home to be X-rayed, her radiologist found fewer and fewer pockets of bone cancer.

It was far too late for these regressions to have been caused by her earlier treatment. Generally, if a tumor is being treated with radiation or chemotherapy, it shrinks very quickly. If Eleanor survives for two more years, she will enter the privileged ranks of patients who beat all the odds.”

SAS81 (talk) 02:30, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

if there is one thing you do not lack, it is verboseness. are you by chance getting paid by the word? -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 03:10, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
AIDS and cancer may not be central to Chopra's "thesis", but certain of his pronouncements on these topics are extraordinary enough to have attracted analysis from serious people published in high-quality sources—the kind of analysis, in other words, that Misplaced Pages uses as a basis for its articles. Alexbrn 04:44, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

@TPROD, I get paid to do this because no volunteer would put up with this much abuse as a hobby and volunteers tend to get harassed away from the article. My own text is hardly that long I don't appreciate how you engage with me. @Alex - you can use that analysis and sources, but the weight should be in accordance to the facts. I hardly doubt that Dr Chopra has all the critics he does because of 7 comments he made in a book written in 1989. Please do not use 'AIDS and CANCER' and all the suffering caused therein as a way to weasel in a perception about Dr Chopra does not represent his actual viewpoint. SAS81 (talk) 15:22, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

I thought you were being paid as an archivist. How would you know how much abuse you'd have to put up with, exactly? Are you sure you're an actual archivist? I mean, you didn't know what Pubmed was, right? Hipocrite (talk) 15:29, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
"but the weight should be in accordance to the facts" No, and that's the long-running problem with your contributions to Misplaced Pages. You feel you know the facts, and you are working to have the article rewritten accordingly.
What you feel are the "facts" should be irrelevant, if you understood our policies.
Your insistence that these "facts" should drive the article is simply wrong.
You've been told these things long ago. What's the problem? --Ronz (talk) 15:44, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
In all fairness, this is something I had an issue with myself awhile back. The issue seems to be the attention that Chopra's comments on AIDS and cancer caused, and here's a bigger list of times he's commented on them. Why is this a bad thing?
I do think it's unreasonable to have a section about Quantum Healing but then only include the criticisms of it while dismissing all but the most parsed of quotes. While primary sources should not drive the article's narrative, the very book that is the subject of a section can and should be referenced. We can leave in the stuff that's critical but also give an accurate accounting of Chopra actually said. I thought my version did that, but anyone's welcome to do one better. The Cap'n (talk) 16:26, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
We are writing an encyclopedia. We are meant to be a tertiary source, digesting what secondary sources say. We are not meant to become a weird secondary source by relaying primary details from Chopra's books that no quality secondary source on the planet has found worthy of mention. Alexbrn 16:39, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

If we are describing Quantum Healing or any of Chopra's theories /Philosophies the first place to go is the primary source. It is acceptable and even necessary to set as a base for whatever else we include from tertiary sources on Chopra's words on the subject. Primary sources must only be used with care, but this is one of the places a primary source is useful, necessary and definitive.(Littleolive oil (talk) 17:01, 20 May 2014 (UTC))

We should be including material from secondary, not "tertiary" sources (unless unavoidable). We have no need to try and interpret what "Quantum Healing" is more widely than has drawn attention from quality commentators. If we were to include our own summary Chopra's fringe notions, we would be obliged to label them as pseudoscientific/fringe/nonsense/whatever, which would be difficult without secondary sources in any case. Alexbrn 17:10, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

@Hipocrite - FOC, please. Not only is it wise policy, but it will save you lots of your time volunteering on this article towards something productive. SAS81 (talk) 17:10, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

I don't feel like being lectured on policy by you, paid editor. Where's my check? Hipocrite (talk) 17:16, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
well I'm going to focus on content and just leave it at that. SAS81 (talk) 23:21, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
i would recommend focusing on policies first (like WP:NOTADVERT and WP:NPOV) and how they apply to content and presenting content, since its been obvious from the start that you are not really focusing on content so much as focusing on getting promotional content into the article - which is not really helpful. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 01:47, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
It's entirely justified and normal WP policy to rely on primaries for quotes and factual statements about a work being discussed. We are merely discouraged from using primaries as the sole sourcing for an article, but there's not some sort of ban on referencing material directly for quotes to illustrate content (ie. primaries are not good for discussing Chopra's perception, but are appropriate for explaining the content of a book). Using primary sources does not make us a secondary source unless we write in our own analysis. Read the WP procedures:
Primary sources are appropriate when the purpose of using them is purely illustrative, such as providing a photograph of a historic event in an article about that event or providing a quote of an author's prose in an article about the author. When using primary sources it is necessary to avoid attempts at interpreting the sources: the purpose is to give readers representative and neutral examples.
Therefore it is not OR to write Deepak Chopra said "Blah blah blah..." which is contradicted by Dr. Whatsit, who says "blah blah blah...", while it would be OR to write Deepak Chopra believes in the completely discredited blah blah blah, and all doctors, including Dr. Whatsit, think he's a lunatic. We are intended to cite primary sources when we discussing that source's factual content, then we use secondaries to present analysis and interpretation of that content. This is not controversial stuff. The Cap'n (talk) 22:01, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
Correct. It's not as much a OR problem as WP:NPOV and WP:BLPPRIMARY. That's been the problem the whole time, trying to counter well-sourced information with primary sources and personal opinions. --Ronz (talk) 22:29, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
It is not violating NPOV nor BLPPRIMARY to include representative quotes from a book in a section about that same book, and there's nothing in those policies that says so, merely that primaries should be used with caution. I have tried to be very cautious with my use of them. I wasn't trying to counter anything with my edit, I included a quote from the source being discussed that dealt with the topic the secondary referenced. It was a straightforward, descriptive statement.
A primary source may only be used on Misplaced Pages to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge. For example, an article about a novel may cite passages to describe the plot, but any interpretation needs a secondary source.
I think there's been some misconceptions on all sides about the role of primaries v. secondaries. I'm certainly not arguing that this article should be based off of primaries, but when we read Primary 1 and see A, then Secondary 1 is referenced saying that Primary 1 says B, we can include a quote of A from Primary 1 without inserting our own POV or refuting Secondary 1 ourselves. That's reporting descriptive, factual quotes, not opinions. There's nothing making this an insurmountable issue. The Cap'n (talk) 23:24, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
Primary sources, even when self-published, are allowed where the BLP subject is the author. They shouldn't be over-used, but it's fine to use them to describe the subject's views instead of "X wrote that Y said." SlimVirgin 00:51, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Discussion here on this topic. (Littleolive oil (talk) 01:01, 21 May 2014 (UTC))

Thanks, yes, I would agree with that. SlimVirgin 01:15, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Using primary sources to counter better ones is a POV (and in this case a BLPPRIMARY) violation. The problem is that it is used to "balance" information from far better sources. Primary sources should be used to complement and provide pertinent details, not to provide "balance". --Ronz (talk) 01:25, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
I haven't see anyone adding primary sources to counter better sources. Did I miss something.(Littleolive oil (talk) 01:31, 21 May 2014 (UTC))
I'm not arguing that point, Ronz, but in the specific instance being discussed there's no countering going on. Schniederman wrote that Chopra described AIDS as some sort of sound like siren or something (not looking at the source right now), then went on to say that rejecting scientific understandings of AIDS was unethical. I read the Quantum Healing source this was based off of and saw that prior to the discussed section on ayurvedic perspectives, Chopra had clearly described the scientific understanding of AIDS and directly endorsed it, so I included a reference to this context without refuting Schniederman. I've never argued Schniederman should be dismissed or tried to counter his source with a primary, but it's unreasonable to say that if a secondary source critiques a book, no quotes can be provided from that book that do not support the critique. The Cap'n (talk) 01:42, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
SAS81 seems to think otherwise. --Ronz (talk) 01:50, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Maybe, but we're different people and I'm not here to represent SAS81. You're free to think what you will about what they're arguing for, but I'm interested in getting feedback on the edits I've proposed. Leaving SAS81 aside, does the scenario I described above seem reasonable and within WP policy? I certainly think so, but if you don't I'd be interested to hear why not. The Cap'n (talk) 02:01, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Regardless of whether we use a primary or secondary source to describe Chopra's views, I hope we all agree that we have to get those views right. So we have to use high-quality secondary sources who are familiar with Chopra's work and describe it properly. It's completely appropriate at that point to use Chopra himself, even if only as an adjunct. There is no point in saying "Smith wrote that Chopra wrote ..." (description), though of course we can say "Smith wrote that, in adopting position X, Chopra implied that ..." (analysis). SlimVirgin 02:03, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

@SlimVirgin Agreed. I also agree with Ronz and Alexbrn that the Schneiderman analysis is appropriate and should be the only nonquoted analysis in the section (given that I haven't seen any other secondaries on the matter). No countering, just context. So we have a section on a book with the book's quoted context and then secondary analysis. That seems like a good, NPOV breakdown. The Cap'n (talk) 18:19, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

You've inserted irrelevant content into the article again (I reverted it). Schneiderman is competent enough to include the material from Chopra which is related to his argument. We don't want Misplaced Pages adding extraneous stuff which has no bearing. Alexbrn 20:24, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
It's not irrelevant or extraneous, that's what we've all been discussing, and therefore I think your revert was unwarranted. Schneiderman included the material that was relevant to his argument, but WP isn't just about presenting arguments, but facts. If we have material from a secondary source critiquing Chopra's book's mention of AIDS, how is it irrelevant to include quotes from the section of that book where Chopra mentions AIDS? Only including Schneiderman's critique without the contextual material that is directly related gives a false impression of the material cited. Schneiderman's analysis, out of context, gives the impression that Quantum Healing denies the medical definition of AIDS, when in fact the source says the exact opposite. That's inserting POV by omission. The Cap'n (talk) 21:34, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
"That's inserting POV by omission" What part of NPOV supports that interpretation? --Ronz (talk) 22:14, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Balance states that when there are two perspectives from equally reputable sources, both should be represented. I don't think it can be argued that Quantum Healing is not a reputable source for the section on Quantum Healing. Impartiality discourages the arrangement of sources or facts that do not accurately represent the relevant positions.
You're arguing that the only quotes from the book that can be cited are those from a critic of the book, and have repeatedly reverted any quotes from the book that contain material that does not support the implication in the Schneiderman quote that Chopra rejects the scientific conception of AIDS (something Chopra directly addresses). That's both misrepresenting the author's position and arranging the facts to only support Schneiderman's position. That's how it violates NPOV.
Given the fact that two other editors have supported the use of QH in the section about QH, and that your only objection at this point is that it's "irrelevant or extraneous" (both of which have been addressed at length), I respectfully ask you to undo your revert or justify why it is necessary. The Cap'n (talk) 22:54, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Here are a few more primary sources from QH that can help determine secondary sources clarifications around Chopra's views. These clarify Dr Chopra's message on integrating, not rejecting western medicine, what his approach is, and how he treats cancer by adding meditation practice and not discontinuing productive treatments in western medicine. Hope these help

p. 2 “The physical basis of science is very solid, and in the eyes of every medical doctor, extremely convincing. On the other hand, the healing power of the mind is considered dubious. Yet I was determined to show that this healing power was a science in it’s own right.”

p. 11 “The word holistic, which tends to offend orthodox doctors, simply means an approach that includes the mind and body together.”

p. 12-13 “She also continued the course of chemotherapy set up by her doctor at home in New York. When we talked about that I said, “If I could confidently put you on nothing but Ayurveda, I would- the deterioration in your physical state would then be much less. But you came to me a very sick woman, and we know that chemotherapy works as an outside approach. Let’s combine the outer and the inner and hope that they add up to a real cure.”

p. 14 “The chemotherapy had caused almost constant nausea, and her hair fallen out in frightening amounts, adding to the shame she felt following her breast surgery. All this compromised the Ayurvedic treatments we were trying. If even higher doses of chemotherapy were given, she would become more depressed, more prone to infections, and weaker in every way.

Yet, at the same time, I did not have a strong enough reason to tell her not to proceed. What if she suffered a relapse in six months and died?

“Go ahead with your chemotherapy,” I advised, “but stick with our program, too, okay?”

SAS81 (talk) 23:39, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

"equally reputable sources" How exactly are they equal? --Ronz (talk) 01:17, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
Seriously? Whatever we may think of Chopra's scientific standing, he's a reliable, reputable source for reporting what he himself said. Accurately representing what's in a book is not endorsing it, for crying out loud, it's being an encyclopedia. The Cap'n (talk) 14:58, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
Seriously. They are not equal. Misplaced Pages is not a venue for promotion. We simply don't treat primary sources equally with independent, secondary sources. --Ronz (talk) 16:01, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
"Misplaced Pages is not a venue for promotion." This is a bizarre statement that typifies the circles we've been talking in. If you're writing a section about a book, citing that book's content is not promoting it, it's referencing it. There's no analysis, promotion or apologetics in the proposed change, just contextual quotes relevant to the topic being discussed.
Mein kampf is directly cited in its own article, are we really arguing that Deepak Chopra is less reliable or reputable than a genocidal despot, or alternatively that WP is promoting Hitler by citing his book? Our job is to present information, not censor it, and the primacy of secondary analysis (which is not being challenged) does not mean and has never meant that primary sources (especially the primary source being discussed) cannot be cited. The Cap'n (talk) 16:42, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
Mein kampf is a published work which does not change over time, and does not engage in self-promotion. Chopra cannot be compared to a book. Binksternet (talk) 16:55, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Source request

I'm looking for a source for the final part of the last sentence in the lead: "His views have led to criticism from medical professionals, who say … that he provides patients with false hope that may prevent them from seeking medical assistance." An earlier version sourced it to Time magazine, but I can't see that article. Could someone post here what it says, or do we have an alternative source? SlimVirgin 04:46, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

This?

Chopra has been a magnet for criticism—most of it from the medical and scientific communities. Accusations have ranged from the dismissive—Chopra is just another huckster purveying watered-down Eastern wisdom mixed with pseudo science and pop psychology—to the outright damning. Chopra's extravagant claims for Ayurveda and other traditional healing techniques can, some have argued, create false hope in genuinely ill people and dissuade them from seeking medical care and guidance.

Alexbrn 05:19, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
Thank you. I wonder if that's a strong-enough source for this claim in a BLP. We say that medical professionals say he may be preventing patients from seeking medical assistance, a serious claim for physicians to make of another physician. But it's unattributed – "some have argued" – so perhaps we ought to make it invisible until we find a better source (and preferably more than one). SlimVirgin 05:54, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
It's fine for reporting on the views of "the medical and scientific communities" I think. This was raised before at WP:BLP/N. For a reinforcing source, we had Park on the "cruel" nature of giving false promise, but - I think you removed this? Alexbrn 06:04, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
I don't think we should use Time magazine for this, unless perhaps it were reporting what a named physician said. It doesn't even say that physicians are saying it. "Some have argued" could refer to other scientists, or even someone else entirely. Park is a physicist, so it would be odd to use him as a source for this. The point is: if this really is a criticism that physicians make, we should be able to find them making it in high-quality sources. SlimVirgin 06:50, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
This is not the view of "a physician" commenting on "a physician", but what the "medical and scientific communities" think of Chopra's views at large as expressed in his wide-ranging writings. Perhaps the problem was the way this community was not best summarized as "medical professionals", which I've changed to the more generic "scientists" (which Park is, if we want to use him). Alexbrn 07:06, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

Time magazine is a reliable source for unnamed criticism. WP:BLP does not require that critics be name, rather that the statements be verifiable. The statement is verifiable. Hipocrite (talk) 12:34, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

So we're good with TIME? Great to know, there had been some talk awhile back that TIME wasn't hard enough journalism to be cited prominently. The Cap'n (talk) 16:31, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
I'll assume good faith that you're not preparing some "AHA, GOTYA" moment or something, but Time is generally reliable unless other more reliable sources disagree with it. Hipocrite (talk) 17:14, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
And of course it would not be reliable for some things. It is not WP:MEDRS for example. Alexbrn 17:18, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
@Alexbrn, I agree, it's reasonable and in line with MEDRS policy to preclude TIME from being a reliable source for establishing the professional validity of Chopra or other medical/scientific figures or positions.
@Hipocrite it somewhat diminishes the assumption of good faith when you promptly imply that you suspect me of plotting some "AHA, GOTYA" moment, but thanks nonetheless. The Cap'n (talk) 23:46, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
The statement that Chopra has been widely criticized is not a biomedical one. Alexbrn 05:23, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
No, not in general, and there should definitely be material about him being criticized/controversial, etc. That said, TIME probably shouldn't be used a source to determine the position of the scientific community as a whole, especially when that wasn't the focus of the article and they cited no large studies. The Cap'n (talk) 16:17, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Time is fine for how its used. Large studies of quantum healing?! Are you kidding! Alexbrn 16:21, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Quantum healing is just a label Dr. Chopra put on it - but the thesis itself is just integrative medicine, combining western medicine with things like meditation and yoga. Plenty of studies on that, and many medical universities now teach and train in complimentary and integrative medicine - so Capn's comment isnt far off and there are plenty others that talk about integrative medicine, Dr Chopra is not the only voice by any means. Integrative medicine is mainstream or at worst a minority voice in the medical community. It's not fringe and it's misinformed to refer to it as such. I do think it's important for the lead to show that Dr Chopra has his critiques, don't get me wrong, but there are better and more accurate sources that communicate a clearer context. By resting on Time magazine to create a broad rejection of Dr Chopra's ideas on medicine, there is a miscommunication then to the reader since there actually is a much wider acceptance than most are commonly aware of. SAS81 (talk) 23:54, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

No, Alexbrn, of course not large studies of Quantum Healing. Large studies of what the scientific or medical community feels about Chopra. They made sweeping, common-sense statements about the views of the community, but there were no statistics, surveys or research in the piece to reliably report on what the scientific community thinks, not even a "51% of scientists disagree with Chopra." That's fine for a news piece, but not for determining the position of the medical or scientific community.
I'll simplify this. If the TIME piece had said that many scientists felt Chopra was on the right track, would you think that was suitable under MEDRS? No, of course not. And it's not suitable under the reverse condition. That's why popular press is specifically mentioned in MEDRS for being a bad source for referencing what scientists/doctors think professionally. The Cap'n (talk) 00:32, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

TM connectedness

Should members of the TM collective participating here be declared on this talk page? vzaak 05:35, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

What is a TM collective exactly?(Littleolive oil (talk) 05:38, 20 May 2014 (UTC))
I was referring to the people listed here. Call it what you wish. vzaak 05:51, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
If you have something to say about an old CU and arbitration case you should say it. If you have concerns about editors here, please be straightforward with out dragging up past case which obscures the issues at hand.(Littleolive oil (talk) 05:59, 20 May 2014 (UTC))

Vzaak - you obviously don't know the rule. You do not discuss the failure of editors in or around Fairfield, Iowa to desire to maintain NPOV on any articles. You do not accuse them of having any conflict of interest at all. This is verboten - everyone knows about the conduct and the COI, but it's an open secret - we don't talk about it in public. Hipocrite (talk) 12:54, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

Arbcom at WP:ARBTM. --Ronz (talk) 15:53, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
This does bring up a good point. This article should fall under the purview of TM (it is associated with the TM WikiProject after all) so discretionary sanctions are applicable. Fortunately, things seem to be surprisingly constructive here so I don't see that enforcement (or even formal notification) is needed at this point. -- Atama 15:56, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

Placebo effect

I've restored "consciousness creates reality" to the lead, because that's a central concept of his. In that regard, the next sentence isn't correct as written: "has led to criticism from scientists, who say his treatments rely on the placebo effect ..." Chopra embraces the placebo effect, calling it "real medicine." To call it criticism that his treatments rely on the placeco effect somewhat misses the point. So we should find a way to reword that or remove it (move it to a later section where we can explain it). SlimVirgin 01:06, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

"To call it criticism that his treatments rely on the placeco effect somewhat misses the point." Howso? --Ronz (talk) 01:17, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Maybe "has led to criticism from scientists, who say his treatments misrepresent the placebo effect ..."? That addresses Chopra's embrace of the effect AND the scientific community's problem with that position. Not sure if he actually does embrace it, I'm just taking SlimVirgin at their word. The Cap'n (talk) 01:25, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
He writes about the effect of consciousness (thoughts, subjectivity, inner experience, expectations, desires) on the healing process. Beliefs can heal, in his view. Article of his here: "The placebo effect is real medicine, because it triggers the body's healing system." SlimVirgin 01:32, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
He's trying to redefine placebo to his gain. That's not what the criticism is about. --Ronz (talk) 01:41, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

edit conflict:

Chopra sees the so called placebo affect as an legitimate result of mind body integration, and so potential healing. So while scientists might criticize that kind of medicine or deny that it is medicine Chopra believes placebo is actually effective medicine because it can heal. This deserves explanation seems to me both from the side of the critical and from Chopra's view which would give the reader a more complete understanding of where Chopra tends to veer off from more conventional medicine at least in terms of how he views healing. I guess I 'd move and expand. And, I think the term that describes Chopra's approach might be integrative medicine rather than alternative medicine. Chopra's approach does include allopathic medicine/western medicine as well as other methods for healing.(Littleolive oil (talk) 01:54, 21 May 2014 (UTC))
per Ronz. He's redefining how placebo is viewed; he's saying mind can heal body, ie placebo, and that is a legitimate aspect of healing and medicine. Within western medicine placebo is seen as a kind of accidental healing. Its the view of what placebo is and its value that Chopra's views challenge. This dichotomy is worth expanding and exploring. (Littleolive oil (talk) 01:54, 21 May 2014 (UTC))
That's still not what the criticism is about. --Ronz (talk) 01:57, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Perhaps the problem is that there are different definitions of the term placebo effect, but the lead obviously isn't the place to discuss that. SlimVirgin 02:17, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure I get the point here, but is it being claimed that Park is misrepresenting Chopra? Park discusses the placebo effect in the source cited, After the Science Wars. That text borrows from Voodoo Science, which has an entire chapter dedicated to the placebo effect. It seems pretty certain that Park understands Chopra and the placebo effect. vzaak 04:56, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Gamel is the source for this in the lead, rather than Park. Vzaak, I'm not sure which point you're referring to, but if it's mine, it's that the term placebo effect is used in different ways. This is a good account if anyone is interested: Fabrizio Benedetti, Placebo effects, Oxford University Press, 2009; summary here. To say that Chopra's treatments have been criticized for relying on the placebo effect, without saying what we mean and without pointing out his own view, is misleading – but we can't explain it all in the lead. SlimVirgin 05:31, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Incidentally, on Chopra and placebo effects, by David Gorski is pertinent to these discussions. This is a source we should probably be using. The thing is, I'm not sure Chopra is that "focussed" on power-of-the-mind stuff. A large part of his altmed business today derives from the sale of very physical products (creams, supplements, etc.) So, I'm just not sure this lede is accurate in playing this mental aspect up as so central. Alexbrn 05:49, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
The sources clearly indicate Chopra's mind-body approach and integrative medicine approach is what has made him notable. He is not notable for selling supplements or twigs and berries:O) Rather those supplements have grown out of his mind body approach to medicine. Why is Gorski an authority on Chopra?(Littleolive oil (talk) 16:08, 21 May 2014 (UTC))
Well actually, these days, his altmed business has made him notable (according to our Offit source). I don't know what the "mind" aspect of diet pills is! Gorski is an oncologist, a professor, and an authority on alternative medicine - pretty much on-song for many topics around Chopra's "medicine" views. Alexbrn 16:15, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
I'd like to point out that Gorski is an authority on real medicine too. -Roxy the dog (resonate) 16:29, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

The criticisms of Chopra's treatments being ineffective and relying upon the placebo effect mean that the treatments don't work. That belongs in the lede. Sorry there's confusion about what that means. Perhaps we should explain it further in the body of the article.

Chopra spins the criticism by redefining placebo effect. If there are independent sources that talk about this spin, then that could be included in the body as well. Let's just not conflate his spin from the criticisms. --Ronz (talk) 16:42, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

That's a personal interpretation of the sources. I don't see any evidence of Dr Chopra 'spinning' the placebo effect as a criticism, he mentions placebo effect extensively in QH as an example of the mind healing the body and is hardly the first or only person to do that. As to 'criticisms' that Dr Chopra's treatments are ineffective - this is old hat. There are plenty of studies on integrative medicine and the benefits of adding things like yoga or meditation to medical treatment. Additionally, the placebo effect has been shown to have a measurable effect on the brain. Should I post sources of studies in peer reviewed journals for editors to consider?
If the article is informing the reader that Dr Chopra's treatments don't work that would be factually incorrect. If the article is informing the reader that orthodox doctors are suspicious of adding meditation to things like chemotherapy treatments to help improve a patient's sense of well being is dangerous - that would be factual too. But let's be clear about what Dr Chopra is talking about. Adding, not subtracting western medicine. And yes some western doctors dont think anyone should bother 'adding' things to their treatments. But there is a minority voice in medicine called integrative medicine and that is now established. SAS81 (talk) 16:10, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Concerns about primary source use, misrepresentation

Using Chopra as a primary source, the article now says:

He has used the metaphor "quantum healing" to describe his approach, using the word quantum to refer to a discrete jump from one level of functioning to another (a quantum leap) and to the idea of thought as an irreducible building block. He defines quantum healing as "the ability of one mode of consciousness (the mind) to spontaneously correct the mistakes in another mode of consciousness (the body)."

I am concerned that this is a rather over-neat, and somewhat apologetic, account of Chopra's views, and this is an example of the danger of editorializing from primary sources. If we look at Chad Orzel's account of Chopra's views in

Then Orzel quotes this passage from Chopra as pertinent:

Our bodies are fields of information, intelligence and energy. Quantum healing involves a shift in the fields of energy information, so as to bring about a correction in an idea that has not gone wrong

Later, Orzell tells us, Chopra invokes "physicists" in writing of "quantum soup".

So what Misplaced Pages is saying is out-of-alignment with how a secondary source sees it (Orzel's views were in the article before, but have been deleted) and more importantly, it is just wrong. Chopra is dabbling in non-metaphoric usages and using terminology from physics to create a "word salad". We are making him out to be more coherent than he is by saying he is just metaphorical.

We need to stop using primary sources and providing original summaries of them, as WP:FRIND has it: "Points that are not discussed in independent sources should not be given any space in articles". Alexbrn 07:12, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Also, the criticism about the misuse of physics terminology needs to be restored in the lead. That is perhaps the "most prominently wrong" thing that scientists see about Chopra. The lead currently introduces the idea that quantum mechanics is somehow involved but without a mainstream rebuttal, amounting to a violation of WP:NPOV, in particular WP:PSCI. vzaak 07:35, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Chopra is a salesperson. Trying to find consistency and logic across sales pitches are usually a waste of time. We simply shouldn't expect any, hence the need to follow the independent and secondary sources. --Ronz (talk) 16:53, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
The criticisms about usage of quantum physics should be referenced in the article, as that's a concern that's been raised in a few places. As far as using Orzel, it's ideal to cite secondary sources for interpretation or analysis, but they are not necessary to cite what the subject of a BLP has directly said about their own beliefs. A primary source can be as or more appropriate to determine the factual details about the subject's stated positions. The Cap'n (talk) 18:29, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

Just noting that primary sources are allowed, per WP:NOR (section WP:PSTS), which is policy, though of course they have to be used carefully. Self-published sources are not allowed in BLPs unless written by the subject, per WP:BLPSPS, which is why I removed Orzel's blog post. SlimVirgin 01:19, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Orzel is not a reliable source for details about Chopra as a subject in terms of the biography, but in terms of the incidental material, this is one of the better sources. A physicist is an expert in physics and those are the sources that should be used when describing claims about physics. Whether the source was used in this fashion or not is another discussion, but WP:BLPSPS should only be invoked when removing material about the person as a subject, not the ideas they are advocating. jps (talk) 15:07, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Some edits

Hi all.

This shows some of the changes I made to the lede.

The first change was to reorder the descriptors of Chopra. I think he is most famous for being an advocate of alternative medicine. This is enhanced by the fact that he is ha licensed physician. His guru status is one that he himself contests and is perhaps dominating but not as self-identified and so we should be WP:BLP sensitive to that.

The second change I made was to the lede claiming that he uses ideas from quantum physics. I see him using ideas from quantum mysticism, but that's a very different thing. Chopra does not, to my knowledge, use solutions to the Schrodinger equation when he offers solace to the suffering. He doesn't seem to know how to do basic physics calculations and he certainly isn't an experimental quantum physicist. His ideas are all properly "quantum mysticism". We could take reference to "quantum" stuff out of the lede completely, but if we are going to reference it properly we have to send the readers to the correct article.

jps (talk) 14:54, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Hi JPS, it was better before. He is primarily a physician, and that doesn't have to be what he's most notable for (see e.g. "Rudolf "Rudi" Vrba ... was a professor of pharmacology at the University of British Columbia. Originally from Slovakia, he is known for his escape, at the age of 19, from the Auschwitz concentration camp ..."), though as a matter of fact it is what he's known for. I've also added to the lead that scientists have criticized his use of quantum-physics terms. SlimVirgin 15:51, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
"He is primarily a physician" ← don't think so, after his early career this has been but a minor aspect, and is not what he's known for. Alexbrn 15:58, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
Agreed. We've been over this, and the sources say he is not "primarily a physician". Ironically, some of the sources we've considered have Chopra himself has repeatedly backed away from presenting himself as a physician, and sometimes he's done so out of legal issues. --Ronz (talk) 16:06, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
It's standard to begin biographies with a person's professional status, and there's no consensus to begin this one any differently. It's already odd-looking that we call him a New Age guru. To remove (or move) physician would be to carry on further down that odd path. SlimVirgin 16:14, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
Then we've a conflict between what the sources say and MOS for biographies. Given this is a BLP, we should be extremely wary of not following the sources, but I suspect that there are FA and GA biographies we can follow for a solution. --Ronz (talk) 16:20, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
I think part of the problem is that a "professional status" usually indicates the primary means by which paid occupational time is spent. Chopra does not spend most of his time practicing medicine in the normal fashion whereas "Rudolf "Rudi" Vrba did spend most of his professional life as a pharmacologist. No one disputes that Chopra is licensed as a physician, but, professionally, he is an advocate, speaker, and author mostly. jps (talk) 16:37, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Agree with Slim Virgin. far from a 'minor aspect'. a physician is a fundamental fact to who Dr Chopra is, both 30 years ago and today. He still runs a clinic and medical group to this day, partners with UCSD Medical and his clinic even teaches courses for CME credits for the AMA. The majority of all of his best selling books speak of his medical experience extensively, and he still publishes with other medical doctors in the field. What makes physician peculiar to many is because most confuse his celebrity or his books on consciousness or spirituality with his medical experience and they are different things. SAS81 (talk) 16:22, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

and still unclear on why 'new age guru' is still there. it's used as a pejorative by critics, is a subjective label, and primary sources deny it. I dont mind if the article says "Deepak Chopra is to some a new age guru" but putting that in Misplaced Pages's voice is really jarring and does not even match many of the sources in the article. SAS81 (talk) 16:26, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
You agree with whatever puts Chopra in the best possible light - that's your job and reason for being here. However, Misplaced Pages is not a forum for promotion. --Ronz (talk) 16:29, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
So should we look at other articles, or have the round of changes resolved the problems? --Ronz (talk) 16:30, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

It's pretty clear he is most notable for being an alternative medicine proponent. It's also clear he is a licensed (if not necessarily practicing) physician. I don't think the lede as I constructed it makes his licensure a "minor aspect". I think that we should be able to describe this in the lede. jps (talk) 16:35, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

It's clear that he's notable for being a proponent for integrative/alternative/complementary/whatever medicine, but the phrase "New Age Guru" is pretty specific. How many prominent sources do we have that call him that? Also, using objective language is not being promotional. The Cap'n (talk) 17:33, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
Multiple editors *(four I think) have mentioned concerns with New Age guru. Licensed physician rather than physician seems somewhat redundant, but wouldn't argue its inclusion at this point. (Littleolive oil (talk) 17:52, 22 May 2014 (UTC))
"How many prominent sources do we have that call him that?" ← quite a few. Alexbrn 18:01, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

I appreciate the attempt JPS, but we can clean this up better. Slim Virgin also has an admirable flair for writing a good sentence and article that reads well in addition to be neutral, so I will trust Slim VIrgin's judgement here too. I would like to recommend something a bit closer to this:

Deepak Chopra (/ˈdiːpɑːk ˈtʃoʊprə/) (born October 22, 1947) is an Indian-American physician, author and lecturer known for his view that healing is primarily an integration of physical and mental processes. The author of several dozen books and videos, he has become one of the best-known and wealthiest figures in the holistic-health movement, making him a promoter of alternative medicine to some and a new age guru to others.

I'm not sure the utility of adding 'licensed' to physician. it seems redundant if he was not licensed he would not be a physician and makes for an awkward sentence as a read. If there is a point there that you would like to see the article reflect, it's lost and perhaps could be made at another location in the article. SAS81 (talk) 17:57, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

@Ronz - I'm working my hardest to stay neutral as possible given the circumstance - and it's possible to achieve in a collaborative environment its not rocket science. I agree wikipedia is not a place for promotion, but it's also not an OP/ED either designed to criticize subjects or individuals, it's meant to be an encylopedia, right? a place to discover who Dr Chopra is, what his ideas and contributions have been, and what reception he has received. Some of the problem seems to be that when Dr Chopra's factuals are translated into objective 'just the facts ma'am' phrases, critics and skeptics are so used to consuming Dr Chopra in pejoratives that even neutrality appears promotional to that perspective. Misplaced Pages should not be responsible for satisifying the skeptic point of view, just the neutral point of view. They should not be confused as the same thing. SAS81 (talk) 18:09, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

@Alexbrn: Exactly - "call him that:. New Age Guru is a label, not what he is. Its cleaner and clearer (and frankly more sophisticated IMO in terms of writing style) to delineate what he is from what the labels are. We can say something like,

Deepak Chopra (/ˈdiːpɑːk ˈtʃoʊprə/) (born October 22, 1947) is an Indian-American, licensed physician, who practices and advocates integrative-medicine. He is best known for his view that healing is primarily a mental rather than physical process., and as a speaker, and author of several dozen books and videos. Chopra has been labelled a New Age guru...( include other labels here), and has become one of the best-known and wealthiest figures in the holistic-health movement.

(Littleolive oil (talk) 18:43, 22 May 2014 (UTC))

Labels that describe of how Chopra is viewed can be added.(Littleolive oil (talk) 18:43, 22 May 2014 (UTC))
Maybe Alexbrn could detail his objections? (Littleolive oil (talk) 18:45, 22 May 2014 (UTC))
I must have missed some breakthrough in philosophy if we can now distinguish cleanly between things as described, and things in themselves. Meanwhile your proposed edit just ignores the many discussions above about using loaded language, about DC not being a practitioner, about undue weight to his physician activities and his mind/body stuff ... Alexbrn 18:48, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, try to keep up! :O) You are fast on the revert key.

Let's look at the changes I made.

  • added "practices" So Chopra does not practice integrative medicine, or if we say that we are giving him some kind of credit that weights his position? Is that right? Why is that?
  • added Integrative medicine instead of alternative medicine. See our own articles on Integrative medicine and alternative medicine.
  • Loaded language. Jps added famous ... I added "best known". How does that support a loaded- language claim. Where else does my edit show loaded language?
  • I added speaker? Is he a notable speaker? True or not? In most sources? True or not? Loaded language?
  • I did add label... that is a noteworthy change. I opened the door for an examination of how Chopra is viewed both negative and positive in a neutral way. You closed that door.

Sorry Alexbrn, but I suspect that nothing I added would have satisfied. And your edit summary doesn't paint a picture of the changes I made. No worries. (Littleolive oil (talk) 19:13, 22 May 2014 (UTC))

This is not balanced, in that it excludes all negative information and whitewashes what he does as "Integrative medicine." Hipocrite (talk) 19:16, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

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