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Hamas
The lead for the Hamas article currently includes this material: "Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated by Israel, the United States, Canada, the European Union, Jordan, and Japan as a terrorist organization. Others regard this classification as problematic, simplistic or reductive." However the "others" being referred to are cherry-picked academics found in Google Books. Given that the entirety of the paragraph (minus this exception) is focused on international positions, the inclusion of this remark misleadingly makes it seem as if these "others" were other countries, and this random "counterpoint" is non-neutral. There can be a separate section for academic views of Hamas. Drsmoo (talk) 16:06, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed, the way it is phrased implies the critical points are other nations but if they are just random academics (even if authorities in the area), this is the wrong way to introduce them. Either that should be removed, or a statement that summarizes the general academic take on how the classification is taken (including those that support it) should be used, but even here, this then might be undue weight in the lede. --MASEM (t) 17:48, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- Everything one objects to here is said to be sourced by 'cherrypicking', which, as often, here means, a careful survey of the relevant sources written by academic analysts of the Middle East who survey the available data. The whole section by the way is an abuse of WP:LEDE, since it is repetitively stuffed with a statement that could be synthesized in 2 sentences.
Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated as a terrorist organization by Israel, the United States, Canada, the European Union, and Japan. Hamas has been outlawed in Jordan Others regard this designation as problematic or simplistic. Israel outlawed Hamas in 1989, followed by the United States in 1996 and Canada in 2002. The European Union defined Hamas's military wing, the Izz ad-Din al-Qassam Brigades as a terrorist organization in 2001, and put Hamas in its list of terrorist organizations in 2003, but such designation was successfully challenged by Hamas in the courts in 2014 on technical grounds. The judgment was appealed. In 2016 an EU legal advisor recommended that Hamas be removed from the list due to procedural errors. The final decision is not thought likely to effect individual government lists. An Egyptian court ruled Hamas was a terrorist organization in 2015. Japan froze Hamas assets according to its legislation on terrorist entities in 2006. Australia and the United Kingdom have designated the military wing of Hamas as a terrorist organization. The organization is also banned in Jordan. It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil.
- (Discussion continues below after the list of references.)
References
- Davis, Richard (2016-02-05). Hamas, Popular Support and War in the Middle East: Insurgency in the Holy Land. Routledge. ISBN 9781317402589.
In 1999, King Abdullah of Jordan outlawed Hamas after accusing it of breaking a deal to restrict its activities to politics.
- Glenn E.Robinson,'Hamas as Social Movement,' in Quintan Wiktorowicz (ed.) Islamic Activism: A Social Movement Theory Approach, Indiana University Press 2004 pp112-141 p.112.
- Krista E. Wiegand, Bombs and Ballots: Governance by Islamist Terrorist and Guerrilla Groups. (2010) Routledge, 2016 p.124.
- Tristan Dunning, pp.28-30.
- Kirsten E. Schulze,The Arab-Israeli Conflict, Pearson Education, 2008 p.87.
- Luke Peterson ,Palestine-Israel in the Print News Media: Contending Discourses, Routledge 2014 p.99.
- "EU advised to drop Hamas and Tamil Tigers from terror list". BBC News. 2016-09-22. Retrieved 2016-09-22.
- 'Hamas Should Be Taken Off Terror List, EU Legal Adviser Says ,' Haaretz 22 September 2016.
- The sensible way per WP:LEDE and WP:NPOV to state this briefly is:
Hamas has been designated a terrorist organization by Israel, the United States, the EU, Japan, Egypt and Canada. It is banned in Jordan.It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. Many analysts view the designation as problematic, and Hamas successfully challenged in a court of law the EU classification in 2014.
- All of the details should be in the main body of the text. The bias given to the big actors in Western societies, their judgements count is obvious. Nishidani (talk) 17:52, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- You're not responding to the points that were made. The addition of cherry-picked analysts who support your opinion as a "counterweight" to international positions about Hamas (which is what the paragraph is about) is Undue. The paragraph is detailing international positions. If we want to talk about academic positions, it should be in it's own section which details the academic consensus. Drsmoo (talk) 18:09, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- Goodness grief. That is trivial. Nowhere is it stated in policy that a lead or the text it summarizes should privilege the political decisions made by governments (it's just politics) over what sober analysts of international affairs say. We even have in the sources above, a study that the EU decision was based on no formal government documentation, but on a presentation snipped from the internet. Governments act out of interest, or to pressure, or whatever. This section is a farce because in violation of NPOV, editors are persistently trying to pin the blame, and we don't do that. Nishidani (talk) 18:30, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- Again you're not responding to the points that were brought up. I'll quote Masem, who I fully agree with "Either that should be removed, or a statement that summarizes the general academic take on how the classification is taken (including those that support it) should be used, but even here, this then might be undue weight in the lede." In other words, what you did was the definition of cherry-picking. Instead of reflecting the academic consensus, you added a bunch of cherry-picked opinions as a counterweight to the international decisions, in a paragraph that was solely about opinions of countries. You also phrased it in a way that made it seems as if these objections were from countries (the term you used was "others"). Not that it would be appropriate to explicitly cherry-pick academics as a counterpoint to international decisions in the lead either Drsmoo (talk) 21:57, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- To add to what Drsmoo has pointed out, the reason that countries' stances on Hamas is importance is that that creates official policy around how those countries deal with those groups, whereas the opinions of respected academics is simply opinions. I will agree that Nishidani's point that countries that have proactively stated they do not consider Hamas as a terrorist organization should be include to balance against those that do (particularly as this includes big players like Russia and China, per above sources); that's also a NPOV. But to that end, then for the lede, I would expect that academic analysis will be similarly split on whether it is a fair assessment or not. So the lede should include the country list that do classify them group this way and those that have stated they do not, and should omit the academic opinions on this decision (which is a point for expansion in the body). --MASEM (t) 22:13, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- Well, point taken, but since we are dealing with an article on an organization, one should take care to see that political positions by great powers do not exhaust the lead description of its nature. Drsmoo's argument is that one should state the political angle and remove the analytic angle. Definitions in this kind of area tend to highlight the political, except when that is embarrassing. Al Nusra was deemed a terrorist organization, as was al Qaeda, by the US, but it still furnished arms to the former while its regional ally, Israel, has put neither on its designated terrorist lists, and actively helps the Islamic army groups, for a simple reason: they oppose Syria's Assad, and the fall of that dictatorship is in Israel's interests. Since the concept of 'terror organization' is supposed to use some form of objective criteria (as both the EU court and the Advocate General to the EU said the Hamas classification lacked, being based on a dossier of internet citations without institutional review), and nations are inconsistent, one has to be very careful in articles that aspire to NPOV not to give political spin the weight it has here while cancelling out a simple note that even Department of Defense Analysis /Rand Corporation experts like Glenn E. Robinson question its empirical value. Nearly all government policy comes from forward papers done by a coalition of bureaucratic/academic area specialists, and the distinction academic (wanker) and government experts breaks down. Finally, leads summarize the body of the article. The second suggestion you make is that the area specialist view point should be down in the body of the article, but no allusion should be made to it in the lead. That is obviously, from a technical point of view, anomalous. I can hardly shift an extensive series of citations down, in a section on 'Terrorist designation', point out the controversy, and not allude to this in the lead?
- I should add that I have no interest in defending Hamas here. It engaged intensively in terrorist operations for a decade. I just think political judgements by interested powers, whoever they are, are not necessarily useful to understanding the nature of their designated enemies,(with notable exceptions, WW2 etc.)Nishidani (talk) 13:26, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- My read is that it was not neutral to compare the countries that have positively labeled Hamas as terrorists to academics that have expressed concern on that choice; it's apples to oranges. The lede needs to split the comparison up, something like "Hamas has been classified as a terrorist organization by the United States, (list...) , while other countries like Russia, China, (list...) have opted to not to categorize the group as such. The act of labeling Hamas as a terrorist organization is a point of debate in political and academic circles." It keeps the intent there, but it avoids what could be seen as a non-neutral comparison. --MASEM (t) 13:39, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- In short, the objection is to the placement of that passage in the lead. I think you are correct in your call. I think your mediation and the suggested compromise illuminating. I'm fine with your suggestion. Thanks.Nishidani (talk) 13:50, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- Profiting from this advice, would this meet your criteria?
Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated as a terrorist organization by Israel (1989), the United States (1996), Canada (2002), the European Union (2001/2003), Japan (2006) Egypt (2015), and was outlawed in Jordan (1999). It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. Hamas appealed the EU blacklisting in 2008, and the European court found the earlier determination flawed. (2014). The European Council appealed the decision, and in 2016 its Advocate General advised that due to procedural errors, it should be dropped from the terror blacklist, unless proper and sufficient legal evidence to warrant its inclusion were forthcoming. Analysts have disputed the designation.
- Note that I have removed the links to the countries that designated Hamas as terrorist. Two reasons. The countries that did not designate it thus had their links removed apparently, creating dissonance. I have regularized this also because it is overlinking to direct readers to countries which are recognized by all. Alternatively all countries could be linked.
- I have also added 'unless proper and sufficient legal evidence to warrant its inclusion is provided' which only the EU press release contains, most other newspapers merely saying she advised it be dropped from the list, which is partial and ignores a key point. I.e. that her advice was conditional. Nishidani (talk) 16:43, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- The discussion above demonstrates that some editors are engaged in advocating for Hamas despite their denial. It would be helpful to cite sources explaining why Hamas is considered "terrorist" like for instance in this BBC source "due to its long record of attacks and its refusal to renounce violence. Under the group's charter, Hamas is committed to the destruction of Israel." or that point in NPR debate: "Hamas' central charter calls for the violent overthrow of Israel. Hamas continues to kill innocent civilians". Hamas supporters position also should be mentioned, something along lines "But to its supporters Hamas is seen as a legitimate resistance movement." I personally believe that Hamas is anti semitic organization, there are plenty sources about it, so supporting it seems strange. 2.53.39.50 (talk) 19:35, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- No, because the claim that "analysts have disputed the designation" is both incorrect and undue. I also agree with Masem that, as was said before, using analysts as a counterpoint to designations by countries would be apples to oranges and Undue. Drsmoo (talk) 19:46, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- The discussion above demonstrates that some editors are engaged in advocating for Hamas despite their denial. It would be helpful to cite sources explaining why Hamas is considered "terrorist" like for instance in this BBC source "due to its long record of attacks and its refusal to renounce violence. Under the group's charter, Hamas is committed to the destruction of Israel." or that point in NPR debate: "Hamas' central charter calls for the violent overthrow of Israel. Hamas continues to kill innocent civilians". Hamas supporters position also should be mentioned, something along lines "But to its supporters Hamas is seen as a legitimate resistance movement." I personally believe that Hamas is anti semitic organization, there are plenty sources about it, so supporting it seems strange. 2.53.39.50 (talk) 19:35, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- In short, the objection is to the placement of that passage in the lead. I think you are correct in your call. I think your mediation and the suggested compromise illuminating. I'm fine with your suggestion. Thanks.Nishidani (talk) 13:50, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- My read is that it was not neutral to compare the countries that have positively labeled Hamas as terrorists to academics that have expressed concern on that choice; it's apples to oranges. The lede needs to split the comparison up, something like "Hamas has been classified as a terrorist organization by the United States, (list...) , while other countries like Russia, China, (list...) have opted to not to categorize the group as such. The act of labeling Hamas as a terrorist organization is a point of debate in political and academic circles." It keeps the intent there, but it avoids what could be seen as a non-neutral comparison. --MASEM (t) 13:39, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- Goodness grief. That is trivial. Nowhere is it stated in policy that a lead or the text it summarizes should privilege the political decisions made by governments (it's just politics) over what sober analysts of international affairs say. We even have in the sources above, a study that the EU decision was based on no formal government documentation, but on a presentation snipped from the internet. Governments act out of interest, or to pressure, or whatever. This section is a farce because in violation of NPOV, editors are persistently trying to pin the blame, and we don't do that. Nishidani (talk) 18:30, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- You're not responding to the points that were made. The addition of cherry-picked analysts who support your opinion as a "counterweight" to international positions about Hamas (which is what the paragraph is about) is Undue. The paragraph is detailing international positions. If we want to talk about academic positions, it should be in it's own section which details the academic consensus. Drsmoo (talk) 18:09, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
Hold on, Masem's suggestion in this comment here states that there is, in fact, a way of presenting academic debate on Hamas' designation without confusing academic and governmental designations. Nishidani's proposal above is consistent with Masem's suggestion, though I believe the text could be shortened.
Drsmoo, with no offense intended, your statement about apples and oranges appears confused and confusing. There is no universe in which published academic viewpoints are irrelevant to a wikipedia article: they are the bread and butter of reliable and neutral content. -Darouet (talk) 20:39, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- Nope, the statement about Apples and Oranges is Masem's term (which you linked to), not mine. If you're going to start veering into personal statements calling someone "confused" you should take the time to read the actual statements. There also isn't an academic debate about Hamas being terrorists. Multiple sources state they are widely viewed as a terrorist group. What Nishidani did was cherry pick academics as an Undue counterweight for the policies of nations. No one has said academic viewpoints are irrelevant. In fact, both of us have said they should be in their own section. They're Undue when presented as a counterpoint to international policies. Drsmoo (talk) 21:20, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- I'll let Masem elaborate if they like, but their proposal keeps some reference to academic opinion: "...The act of labeling Hamas as a terrorist organization is a point of debate in political and academic circles." Do you or do you not reject that proposal? -Darouet (talk) 21:41, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- He/she can elaborate, but the original statement was very straightforward. "My read is that it was not neutral to compare the countries that have positively labeled Hamas as terrorists to academics that have expressed concern on that choice; it's apples to oranges." You then, for some reason, personally attacked me over it, which was weird. Multiple sources state that Hamas are widely viewed as a terrorist organization. The political debate is already expressed in the paragraph. Contrarian academic views should be expressed, but not in relation to foreign policies. Drsmoo (talk) 22:02, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- I'll let Masem elaborate if they like, but their proposal keeps some reference to academic opinion: "...The act of labeling Hamas as a terrorist organization is a point of debate in political and academic circles." Do you or do you not reject that proposal? -Darouet (talk) 21:41, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
- I'm sorry about writing that your statement was confused and confusing. I was happy to see Nishidani and Masem appear to arrive at an agreement on how to improve the text, and surprised that you still rejected the idea of placing academic views in the lead. Part of that rejection involved / involves rejecting the text both Nishidani and Masem proposed (depending on your current view). I support the text Nishidani and Masem proposed. -Darouet (talk) 01:52, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- It's ok. Nishidani said that he agreed, but then ignored the call to split the comparison up, which was the whole point. I rejected Nishidani's proposal. It compares foreign policies to academic views and does so in a misleading way. The claim that "analysts have disputed", when Hamas is widely viewed as a terrorist organization would also be incorrect and undue. Drsmoo (talk) 07:18, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- I'm having trouble understanding this hold.out. We disagreed. I took it to a neutral arbiter, a compromise along the lines he suggested was drafted. It contains all points, I believe, indicated, with the countries detached from the 'academic' viewpoint. WP:LEDE says you summarize the article, and in the body of the article, the 5 references I brought in will be cited to throw light on the question of the terrorist classification, and therefore it must be alluded to in the lead in a few words, along the lines I drafted, to respect policy. So, have we a compromise? Nishidani (talk) 12:39, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- It's ok. Nishidani said that he agreed, but then ignored the call to split the comparison up, which was the whole point. I rejected Nishidani's proposal. It compares foreign policies to academic views and does so in a misleading way. The claim that "analysts have disputed", when Hamas is widely viewed as a terrorist organization would also be incorrect and undue. Drsmoo (talk) 07:18, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
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- I'm not sure why you're using the term holdout? I don't see the arbiter agreeing with you. You ignored what Masem proposed, which was the entire crux of the issue. You didn't detach the "academic view" from the policy views of countries. What you added was "Analysts have disputed the designation", so what is "the designation"? It's what was in the preceding sentence, ie, they aren't detached. In addition, what you included directly misrepresents the "academic viewpoint". Hamas is "widely viewed" (and that's a quote) as a terrorist organization. One can cherry pick fringe theories to support any view, but to write it as "analysts have disputed" is incorrect and misleading. It's also incorrect to use the view of any analysts, let alone cherry-picked ones, as a counterweight to the foreign policies of countries. Regarding your new statement, the Lede summarizes the Body. The idea of throwing cherry picked and misleading sources into the Lede and then later claiming that as justification for using those same cherry picked sources in the Body is ridiculous. Drsmoo (talk) 13:58, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Drsmoo: your statements on this topic remain "confused and confusing," as I noted previously. I repeatedly linked Masem's proposal, which Nishidani basically paraphrased, but you ignore Masem's proposal and instead site their initial and more ambiguous statement because you can interpret it as supporting your POV. This looks like classic WP:IDHT and it's a waste of everyone's time.
- Nishidani, whatever Drsmoo's issue, I think your proposal is fine, but I think you should shorten it. Perhaps Masem can help you with that. My own suggestion would be to consider removing the dates. While they are informative, they may be too much for the lead. Furthermore, "Hamas appealed... were forthcoming" might also be shortened. -Darouet (talk) 18:53, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- You may be confused, but that has no bearing on policy. Nor on the fact that Nishidani's proposal is both factually incorrect (analysts do not dispute the Hamas characterization, Hamas is widely viewed as a terrorist organization) as well as ignoring Masem's proposal by directly using analyst theories as a rebuttal to the policies of nations Drsmoo (talk) 19:05, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- Instead of a careful survey of relevant sources, you need one good source that whose author has conducted a careful survey of relevant authors and expressed and opinion on the degree of acceptance of that designation in reliable sources. Generally reliable sources would not refer to them as a terrorist organization, and use the term for groups whose sole or major activity is terrorism, like the Abu Nidal group or the Weather Underground. TFD (talk) 19:03, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- We have that. Multiple sources state that Hamas is "widely viewed as a terrorist organization." "Two years before Sheikh Madhi's sermon, the PA—for purposes of conducting Intifada 2—made a de facto alliance with Hamas, widely viewed even in the Palestinian community as a terrorist organization." "Gaza itself remains under the control of a group that has been widely viewed as a terrorist organization." "Overwhelmingly, however, Hamas is best known as a terrorist organization." There are literally thousands of reliable sources that refer to Hamas as a terrorist organization. Which is why the cherry-picking is all the more ridiculous. Drsmoo (talk) 19:15, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
References
- Zelnick, Robert (2013-09-01). Israel's Unilateralism: Beyond Gaza. Hoover Press. ISBN 9780817947736.
- QC, Kenneth Watkin OMM, CD (2016-05-03). Fighting at the Legal Boundaries: Controlling the Use of Force in Contemporary Conflict. Oxford University Press. ISBN 9780190457983.
{{cite book}}
: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link) - Korany, Bahgat (2011-10-01). The Changing Middle East: A New Look at Regional Dynamics. American University in Cairo Press. ISBN 9781617973864.
- I was thinking more in terms of books about terrorism referring to the opinions of terrorism experts. Your first source for example is talking about public perception. Your second source cites a book by Matthew Levitt and CFR. In his book, Levitt "debunks" the theory that because Hamas also carries out non-terrorist activity, it should not be called a terrorist group. Levit is a fellow and director of the Stein Program on Counterterrorism and Intelligence at The Washington Institute for Near East Policy. The institute's board of advisers are Washington hawks: Henry Kissinger, Joe Lieberman, Richard Perle, Condoleezza Rice, James Woolsey and others. The CFR merely says, "The United States and the European Union consider Hamas a terrorist organization." I cannot read the full paragraph in your third source to understand the context, but note the author is not an expert on terrorism but on politics. TFD (talk) 13:29, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- You are referencing something that is already in the text and acknowledged by everyone, ignoring any helpful input on what I offered as a compromise. Darouet - I've pared the paragraph in the article as we have it from 206 down to 118 words, which is almost 50%. I could clip it even more, but taking out the dates elides important information, with minimal gain: Hamas or its military wing was defined by distinct countries at different times, by Israel during the First Intifada, by Canada and the EU with the outbreak of the Second Intifada just after 9/11 (as sources say) and Japan, under US pressure, didn't ban it: it froze Hamas accounts in that country just after the 2006 elections were democratically won by Hamas, (as the US and Israel worked to overthrow it in a coup d'état, if we can believe the Vanity Fair article). Since 2006, incidents of terrorism have been rare, given its past record, and in the following decade, the designation has been increasingly questioned by analysts. In any case, if you or anyone else thinks the diminished text still needs shortening, I'll try that again on request. Nishidani (talk) 20:48, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
- By the way Drsmoo. Your Watkin source states earlier:
It has been noted that “(o)ne problem Israel has in common with other democracies is that it focuses narrowly on its foes’ use of terrorism and ignores the wider strategies. While most groups Israel faces, such as Hezbollah and Hamas, have carried out terrorist acts against civilians, they are also broader social and governing organizations. As a result, it is suggested Israel needs to take lessons from counterinsurgency “which addresses not only the military (or “kinetic” in American soldier parlance) dimensions but also the political, economic, and social ones as well.’ P.112
- Treating Hamas only as a party that has engaged in terrorism has been counterproductive for Israel, since that designation occludes any other options, such as easing the economic stranglehold on Gaza, and adopting measures that would have a social and political impact on Palestinian consensus, to undermine Hamas. Nishidani (talk) 20:52, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
- The current wording is fine when when presented in this context. "Hamas is widely viewed as a terrorist organization, though some analysts regard this designation as problematic or simplistic." The issue is that in addition to not fully separating the ideas, the previous edit ignored the majority view. Hamas being widely viewed as a terrorist group is "acknowledged by everyone", in your words, and I agree. Drsmoo (talk) 22:00, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
- It's true you can get refs for 'widely viewed' meaning a number of Western countries, . It's also 'widely not viewed as a terrorist organization' by the majority of countries, including impeccable democracies. That is why I phrased it as I have. Your formulation is not NPOV, because you are making heavy water out of 'widely viewed' (in the real world) an implicit contrast to 'but this is disputed by a handful of eggheads'. You haven't budged, I have. Nishidani (talk) 22:34, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
(Discussion continues below after the list of references.)
References
- Zelnick, Robert (2013-09-01). Israel's Unilateralism: Beyond Gaza. Hoover Press. ISBN 9780817947736.
- QC, Kenneth Watkin OMM, CD (2016-05-03). Fighting at the Legal Boundaries: Controlling the Use of Force in Contemporary Conflict. Oxford University Press. ISBN 9780190457983.
{{cite book}}
: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link) - Korany, Bahgat (2011-10-01). The Changing Middle East: A New Look at Regional Dynamics. American University in Cairo Press. ISBN 9781617973864.
- Glenn E.Robinson,'Hamas as Social Movement,' in Quintan Wiktorowicz (ed.) Islamic Activism: A Social Movement Theory Approach, Indiana University Press 2004 pp112-141 p.112.
- Krista E. Wiegand, Bombs and Ballots: Governance by Islamist Terrorist and Guerrilla Groups. (2010) Routledge, 2016 p.124.
- Tristan Dunning, pp.28-30.
- Kirsten E. Schulze,The Arab-Israeli Conflict, Pearson Education, 2008 p.87.
- Luke Peterson ,Palestine-Israel in the Print News Media: Contending Discourses, Routledge 2014 p.99.
- Absolutely not. The sources say "Hamas is widely viewed" and "overwhelmingly viewed" and they're not referring to countries or "western countries". Your inferences are incorrect and not supported by the text. You completely ignored Masem's suggestion that we must include those who support the description of Hamas as terrorists. I've included refs for that, two from universities and one from a think tank. For every one academic who writes that Hamas aren't terrorists there are ten who write that they are. Drsmoo (talk) 22:46, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
- I want to reassert that for the purposes of the lede the complexity of how many people (not countries) view Hamas as a terrorist organization is far too difficult to cover, because exactly the splitting of hairs of which sources you pull from to support one majority or another. I think it is necessary to enumerate the major countries that have or have specifically not classified the group as a terrorist organization, but after that point, the debate in all other political and academic circles is so complex that its best say that it is a point of debate, and not try to quantify which is the prevailing view in the lede. The body has room to give more about things like how most western people in these circles would likely support this classification as such and most others would not. Keep in mind that this is the type of topic that can suffer from the Western /English-speaking language bias; it's very easy to pull in English sources which generally are Western and will lean towards supporting the classification. That's why at least in the lede, leave it as an open-ended point of debate, taking a middle-of-the-road stance. --MASEM (t) 23:50, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with that. Something simple like: "It is a point of debate in political and academic circles over whether or not to classify Hamas as a terrorist group." Drsmoo (talk) 03:12, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
References
- Jackson, Richard; Smyth, Marie Breen; Gunning, Jeroen (2009-02-05). Critical Terrorism Studies: A New Research Agenda. Routledge. ISBN 9781134050512.
- Still not clear. Following Masem's clear indications, I reduced the contended point to 'Analysts have disputed the designation.'(There are a dozen sources on this by now, and per WP:LEDE the fact that there is a significant debate on it requires a note in the lead., summary style. I'll be in Germany for a few days, anyway. But will look in on Sunday if this can be wound up, or wound down. Nishidani (talk) 21:14, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
- I regard the summary sentences proposed by Masem, Drsmoo and Nishidani as all more or less equivalent. -Darouet (talk) 21:23, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
- There's nothing unclear about "It is a point of debate in political and academic circles over whether or not to classify Hamas as a terrorist group." As opposed to "Analysts have disputed the designation", which makes it seem as if all analysts are disagreeing with the designation of Hamas as a terrorist group.
- I regard the summary sentences proposed by Masem, Drsmoo and Nishidani as all more or less equivalent. -Darouet (talk) 21:23, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
- Just to clarify, there are two meanings of the word disputed. One is a synonym of argued, the other is "to oppose". When used as a transitive verb, which is how your phrasing is using it, the grammatically correct and common interpretation of the phrase "Analysts have disputed the designation" would be that analysts in general think the designation is incorrect, which would be false. I used the exact same terminology as Masem, so I don't see any controversy here. Drsmoo (talk) 21:46, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
- Regardless of who originally wrote what, when, the above proposed
Nishidani's solution that includes It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. Many analysts view the designation as problematic, and Hamas successfully challenged in a court of law the EU classification in 2014. is obviously superior to the current wording. Countries that officially disagree with the "terrorist" designation deserve to be mentioned as much as those that classify Hamas as terrorists. I do basically agree with the statement that "others", referring to individual analysts rather than states, is problematic, but I also think that referring to these analysts is not a violation of NPOV -- deliberately leaving any mention of them out would be a more significant violation of NPOV. It is of course entirely irrelevant to NPOV that the lead should not include information not found in the body, which is why I don't like unique citations to external sources being invoked in the lead in general. Discussion of the wording of the lead based on what external sources say and which "others" are states and which are "cherry-picked analysts" is not a discussion we need to have. It should be noted that at least one of the states cited as classifying Hamas as a terrorist group in the lead is actually included thus in the body, but the attached footnote makes this attribution seem dubious, and the body actually uses the wording "designated the military wing of Hamas as a terrorist organization", which directly contradicts the current wording of the lead "Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated as a terrorist organization". Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 02:33, 16 October 2016 (UTC) Edited 08:08, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- The current wording which is "obviously inferior" is Nishidani's version (and it includes countries that disagree with the terrorist designation).I'm glad you agree that the current version is not ideal, and that others referring to analysts rather than states is problematic, that's why I brought it to the noticeboard. I also agree that we should discuss analysts in the lede. Regarding the new proposal by Nishidani in this noticeboard, my disagreement is with the line "Analysts have disputed the designation", which is incorrect. Instead, it would be preferable to use the following:
Drsmoo (talk) 05:23, 16 October 2016 (UTC)Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated as a terrorist organization by Israel (1989), the United States (1996), Canada (2002), the European Union (2001/2003), Japan (2006) Egypt (2015), and was outlawed in Jordan (1999). It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. Hamas appealed the EU blacklisting in 2008, and the European court found the earlier determination flawed. (2014). The European Council appealed the decision, and in 2016 its Advocate General advised that due to procedural errors, it should be dropped from the terror blacklist, unless proper and sufficient legal evidence to warrant its inclusion were forthcoming. It is a point of debate in political and academic circles over whether or not to classify Hamas as a terrorist group."
- @Drsmoo: I'm sorry, but the current version is identical to the one you quoted at the top of this thread, and Nishidani shortly thereafter appears to have suggested changing it to
Hamas has been designated a terrorist organization by Israel, the United States, the EU, Japan, Egypt and Canada. It is banned in Jordan.It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. Many analysts view the designation as problematic, and Hamas successfully challenged in a court of law the EU classification in 2014.
- Am I missing something? Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 06:09, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, the current version is Nishidani's edit. I quoted it to say that it needs to be changed. We've already moved past that suggestion you quoted. Drsmoo (talk) 06:37, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Very well. I don't care who wrote what, when. The problem you appear to have with the current wording is not one I agree with. The above-suggested edit is superior to the current wording. Original comment edited accordingly. Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 08:08, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- If by the "above-suggested edit" you're referring to the one you initially quoted, it's no longer under consideration and both Nishidani and I have moved past it. Drsmoo (talk) 08:13, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- I don't care. All I said is that it's obviously superior to what's there now, and I stand by that statement. Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 08:42, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- If by the "above-suggested edit" you're referring to the one you initially quoted, it's no longer under consideration and both Nishidani and I have moved past it. Drsmoo (talk) 08:13, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Very well. I don't care who wrote what, when. The problem you appear to have with the current wording is not one I agree with. The above-suggested edit is superior to the current wording. Original comment edited accordingly. Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 08:08, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, the current version is Nishidani's edit. I quoted it to say that it needs to be changed. We've already moved past that suggestion you quoted. Drsmoo (talk) 06:37, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
- A point to several of the above statements: the lede should not be where complex arguments (supported by sources) should be laid out. Noting that Hamas is called or not called a terrorist organizations by several countries (which is factually true and a simple statement) is good. Trying to explain the EU delisting is getting a bit too much in the weeds (I would leave it out until it's officially removed), and trying to explain the arguements from the politics and academics side is far too complex beyond noting it is a point of contention. That keeps the balance and gives your body the amount of space needed to spell out specifics. --MASEM (t) 03:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- I don't see how that is compatible with WP:LEDE, summary style. There is no complexituy, surely, in simple words. WP:NPOV requires that we present this highly contentious issue with neutrality, meaning not just a list implying 'most civilized countries think Hamas' terrorist. What worries me most, however, is that I came here to work out a compromise. And Drsmoo hasn't budged. I appreciate Masem's suggestions, but they are, as I see it, all in Drsmoo's direction (the less about doubts on the terrorist clòassification the better). Nishidani (talk) 16:57, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- When you say "the less about doubts on the terrorist classification the better", that's showing a POV here. We have to recognize that whether or not Hamas is a terrorist organization is clearly a long-standing subject of debate, and which is the "majority" view near impossible to determine given the systematic bias of English-based (read mostly Western) sources. "Hamas is considered a terrorist organization by (list), while (second list) have stated the group is not a terrorist organization, and Hamas has recently disputed the EU's classification as such in 2014. Whether or not to designate Hamas as as a terrorist organization is a point of debate by many political and academic analysts." That's neutral and reflects the world view, keeping in mind the systematic bias, while allowing the body of the article to get into the more lengthy specifics. --MASEM (t) 17:29, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- I fully agree with Masem's suggestion. I also reject Nishidani's claim about me. There is nothing "unclear" about "It is a point of debate in political and academic circles over whether or not to classify Hamas as a terrorist group." Drsmoo (talk) 21:09, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- This has become pointless. We are all agreed on the new version, since I accept Masem's précis, Drsmoo's variation on my first proposal. In synthesis, to recap
(A=Nihshidani)Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated as a terrorist organization by Israel (1989), the United States (1996), Canada (2002), the European Union (2001/2003), Japan (2006) Egypt (2015), and was outlawed in Jordan (1999). It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. Hamas appealed the EU blacklisting in 2008, and the European court found the earlier determination flawed. (2014). The European Council appealed the decision, and in 2016 its Advocate General advised that due to procedural errors, it should be dropped from the terror blacklist, unless proper and sufficient legal evidence to warrant its inclusion were forthcoming. Analysts have disputed the designation.
(B=Drsmoo) Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated as a terrorist organization by Israel (1989), the United States (1996), Canada (2002), the European Union (2001/2003), Japan (2006) Egypt (2015), and was outlawed in Jordan (1999). It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. Hamas appealed the EU blacklisting in 2008, and the European court found the earlier determination flawed. (2014). The European Council appealed the decision, and in 2016 its Advocate General advised that due to procedural errors, it should be dropped from the terror blacklist, unless proper and sufficient legal evidence to warrant its inclusion were forthcoming. It is a point of debate in political and academic circles over whether or not to classify Hamas as a terrorist group.
(C= Masem's précis) Hamas is considered a terrorist organization by (list), while (second list) have stated the group is not a terrorist organization, and Hamas has recently disputed the EU's classification as such in 2014. Whether or not to designate Hamas as as a terrorist organization is a point of debate by many political and academic analysts.
- So, the compromise is version B, which contains all Masem's points, satisfies Drsmoo, and is just an controversial tweaking of what I proposed. Okay? If Darout, Hijiri and TFD have no objections, of course. Nishidani (talk) 21:53, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- The issue with versions A and B is that literally 46% of version A and 40% of version B is comprised of details regarding the ongoing EU appeal. That is obviously undue. It's strange that you suddenly decided that "this has become pointless." Drsmoo (talk) 03:33, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- You endorsed it with your tweak above. Drsmoo (talk) 05:23, 16 October 2016 (UTC). I accept that. Now you are raising another objection. Masem agrees with you, 4 other editors adopt nuanced comments that differ with that viewpoint. Is this attrition to get what you want 100% or are you willing, as before, to make a gentlemanly compromise? The EU appeal is critical for Hamas's own perspective: it succeeded in a court challenge to the 'Western consensus' and that court judgement will, if acted on, affect the designation of 28 countries. Hamas's legal POV cannot obviously be ignored: if it is, we are saying the US to China axis are relevant, the subject itself has no political relevance, unlike them. I believe I have a rough consensus that the version you and I agreed on is not objected to. I'm patient. I'll wait and see if objections from others involved here arise.Nishidani (talk) 20:02, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- If we are going to list the EU's designation in the lead, we also need to note subsequent developments. I still believe those two sentences about the EU process could be shortened, but they definitely need to be there somehow. -Darouet (talk) 21:06, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- I have no objection to the EU appeal being mentioned. I object to it being 46% of the paragraph. Something like "The EU decision is currently being appealed" with further detail given in the body paragraphs. Something like:
- If we are going to list the EU's designation in the lead, we also need to note subsequent developments. I still believe those two sentences about the EU process could be shortened, but they definitely need to be there somehow. -Darouet (talk) 21:06, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- You endorsed it with your tweak above. Drsmoo (talk) 05:23, 16 October 2016 (UTC). I accept that. Now you are raising another objection. Masem agrees with you, 4 other editors adopt nuanced comments that differ with that viewpoint. Is this attrition to get what you want 100% or are you willing, as before, to make a gentlemanly compromise? The EU appeal is critical for Hamas's own perspective: it succeeded in a court challenge to the 'Western consensus' and that court judgement will, if acted on, affect the designation of 28 countries. Hamas's legal POV cannot obviously be ignored: if it is, we are saying the US to China axis are relevant, the subject itself has no political relevance, unlike them. I believe I have a rough consensus that the version you and I agreed on is not objected to. I'm patient. I'll wait and see if objections from others involved here arise.Nishidani (talk) 20:02, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- The issue with versions A and B is that literally 46% of version A and 40% of version B is comprised of details regarding the ongoing EU appeal. That is obviously undue. It's strange that you suddenly decided that "this has become pointless." Drsmoo (talk) 03:33, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- I fully agree with Masem's suggestion. I also reject Nishidani's claim about me. There is nothing "unclear" about "It is a point of debate in political and academic circles over whether or not to classify Hamas as a terrorist group." Drsmoo (talk) 21:09, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- When you say "the less about doubts on the terrorist classification the better", that's showing a POV here. We have to recognize that whether or not Hamas is a terrorist organization is clearly a long-standing subject of debate, and which is the "majority" view near impossible to determine given the systematic bias of English-based (read mostly Western) sources. "Hamas is considered a terrorist organization by (list), while (second list) have stated the group is not a terrorist organization, and Hamas has recently disputed the EU's classification as such in 2014. Whether or not to designate Hamas as as a terrorist organization is a point of debate by many political and academic analysts." That's neutral and reflects the world view, keeping in mind the systematic bias, while allowing the body of the article to get into the more lengthy specifics. --MASEM (t) 17:29, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- I don't see how that is compatible with WP:LEDE, summary style. There is no complexituy, surely, in simple words. WP:NPOV requires that we present this highly contentious issue with neutrality, meaning not just a list implying 'most civilized countries think Hamas' terrorist. What worries me most, however, is that I came here to work out a compromise. And Drsmoo hasn't budged. I appreciate Masem's suggestions, but they are, as I see it, all in Drsmoo's direction (the less about doubts on the terrorist clòassification the better). Nishidani (talk) 16:57, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
Hamas, its military wing, together with several charities it runs, has been designated as a terrorist organization by Israel (1989), the United States (1996), Canada (2002), the European Union (2001/2003), Japan (2006) Egypt (2015), and was outlawed in Jordan (1999). The EU decision is currently under appeal. It is not regarded as a terrorist organization by Iran, Russia, Norway, Switzerland, Turkey, China, and Brazil. It is a point of debate in political and academic circles over whether or not to classify Hamas as a terrorist group. Drsmoo (talk) 21:36, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- Nope. That is falsification of sources. The EU verdict is not currently under appeal. See why one has to give a minimum of attention to details of the kind you wish to erase, Drsmoo. After endless discussion you still haven't grasped the meaning of the passage you want eliminated, which says the EU challenged the court's 2014 verdict in favour of Hamas, and its legal advisor said in 2016, that the EU had to look to other options, since the court decision was correctly formulated.Nishidani (talk) 19:58, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
- Nope. That's the wording used by the EU court. I didn't say the verdict was under appeal, I said the decision was under appeal, and it is. The court has not yet issued its final ruling. Drsmoo (talk) 21:08, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
- Nope. That is falsification of sources. The EU verdict is not currently under appeal. See why one has to give a minimum of attention to details of the kind you wish to erase, Drsmoo. After endless discussion you still haven't grasped the meaning of the passage you want eliminated, which says the EU challenged the court's 2014 verdict in favour of Hamas, and its legal advisor said in 2016, that the EU had to look to other options, since the court decision was correctly formulated.Nishidani (talk) 19:58, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
Malaysia Airlines Flight 17 and nonneutral caption of Satellite image of Russian MoD
Some group of authors keep changing caption to the satellite image in the article presented by Russian MoD making it nonneutral and biased ignoring reliable sources. Before I posted a message here I conscientiously called those authors on the article talk page to follow WP:NPOV . Other conserned WP authors should pay attention to this in order to work out the overall consensus. Discussion is here: Talk:Malaysia Airlines Flight 17#Should this image be added to the article?--Александр Мотин (talk) 15:26, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- "Neutral" means, if anything, that the text represents reliable sources. Which in this case it does. What Aleksandr is complaining about is that the sources don't say what he wants them to say. Inserting a caption which does not represent the sources is what is non-neutral, not the other way around.Volunteer Marek (talk) 15:42, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- While you and Александр Мотин have contested the image caption, declaring the images are either real or faked, the situation is not so simple, as pointed out in this interview appearing in Der Spiegel, and in a statement published by the chief editor of Spiegel Online. I would at least attribute the term "faked" to the report, as newspapers do, or more properly refer to the images as contested. Jeffrey Lewis, once of the researchers involved in developing the software, states that there are multiple reasons the photographs may appear doctored, with intentional fabrication one of the reasons. Jens Kriese, in his interview with Der Spiegel, points out the obvious fact that any image making its way from a satellite to the public will undergo multiple rounds of processing. -Darouet (talk) 14:47, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
- This seems to be resolved because the image was removed. My very best wishes (talk) 01:27, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
- I think the image still exists. -Darouet (talk) 02:04, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
- This seems to be resolved because the image was removed. My very best wishes (talk) 01:27, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
- While you and Александр Мотин have contested the image caption, declaring the images are either real or faked, the situation is not so simple, as pointed out in this interview appearing in Der Spiegel, and in a statement published by the chief editor of Spiegel Online. I would at least attribute the term "faked" to the report, as newspapers do, or more properly refer to the images as contested. Jeffrey Lewis, once of the researchers involved in developing the software, states that there are multiple reasons the photographs may appear doctored, with intentional fabrication one of the reasons. Jens Kriese, in his interview with Der Spiegel, points out the obvious fact that any image making its way from a satellite to the public will undergo multiple rounds of processing. -Darouet (talk) 14:47, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
POV fork: Malia Obama (celebrity)
Randomly came across this article and I believe it's a POV fork of Malia Obama which currently redirects to Family_of_Barack_Obama#Malia_and_Sasha_Obama. K.e.coffman (talk) 17:48, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- Definitely should be deleted: a bunch of semi-literate BS including "In addition to a student, Obama is occupationally a babysitter... She was reported dancing and causing a storm because of exposing her buttocks. She was also reported to smoking marijuana, raising the question of favoritism according to editorials." She is a child and entitled to protections afforded others in the periphery of various famous people. -Darouet (talk) 17:59, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- The article has been redirected. I requested a speedy deletion to remove the article history. I also wonder if it would be appropriate to request sanctions against the article's creator Special:Contributions/BBBH. Any thoughts on this? K.e.coffman (talk) 18:51, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- Looking over their contributions it's almost impossible to tell if they are grossly incompetent or prank trolling Misplaced Pages. I am not usually involved in discussions regarding enforcement on those issues so I'll leave it to the judgement of others. -Darouet (talk) 19:01, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- I took an extensive look at their history as well as the history of some other editors of the same topics. My vote is 'trolling undisclosed alt account'. BBBH has been aware of the issues surrounding this since 2008, its unlikely in 8 years they have neither matured or failed to grasp how wikipedia works. Only in death does duty end (talk) 09:48, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
- Looking over their contributions it's almost impossible to tell if they are grossly incompetent or prank trolling Misplaced Pages. I am not usually involved in discussions regarding enforcement on those issues so I'll leave it to the judgement of others. -Darouet (talk) 19:01, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
trying again: Tchaman vs Ébrié
The question got archived without being answered; if nobody knows, or has an opinion, fine; I am just trying to assess whether there is any reason NOT to make the change I propose, since these are deep waters about which I know little. But I have come back to the article where this arises, and hope to finish it some day... (It's long and on a list for translation cleanup. But notable enough to chip away at the cleanup).
The issue is this -- French wikipedia uses Ébrié. Just about the only thing that the stublet says for fr is that these are the same people as the Ébrié, but the latter is a derogatory name that they are called by another ethnicity. Their own name for themselves is the Tchaman, which the english wikipedia redirects to Ebrié, which is a misspelling as well. If I don't hear otherwise I plan to remove the redirect, and possibly point it in the other direction, and I guess translate the part about derogatory. (Apparently it means unclean). However there are no sources provided for any of this and I am a little wary of taking French wikipedia's word unsupported on tribal/ethnic issues. Any thoughts?
Since this doesn't seem to be a burningly controversial issue I may see if there is an Ivory Coast portal or something where someone may know Elinruby (talk) 08:27, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
- For thoroughness' sake: Misplaced Pages:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard/Archive 61#Ebrie people. Ibadibam (talk) 22:32, 18 October 2016 (UTC)
The proper mechanism for this is WP:RM#CM. Request that Ebrié be moved to whichever term you prefer. In your submitted rationale, be sure to point out that WP:NCET#Self-identification indicates we should prefer autonyms over derogatory terms. Ibadibam (talk) 22:47, 18 October 2016 (UTC)Thank you Elinruby (talk) 09:42, 19 October 2016 (UTC)I have not done this yet but I will Elinruby (talk) 23:51, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
this is answered and suggested resolution is implemented Elinruby (talk) 03:31, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
Number inflation of Serbs
In the articles Serbs and Slavs, any total population figures lower than 12 million are removed. I warned and asked that the editors explain their edit according to WP:REVEXP, but the persistent edit war without edit summaries continue. I take that as silent crypto-nationalist WP:IDONTLIKEIT motivation and vandalism of sourced content, so to report it here. Judist (talk) 13:33, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
Odd outdated/racist wording
Both our Tipu Sultan and Christianity in India articles (and probably others) include the following:
His skin had darkened to the swarthy complexion of negroes
I'm almost certain his is a quotation from a contemporary (eighteenth century) source, but it is not marked as such. The entire section in which the text is embedded (in both articles) is poorly written and very questionable. More eyes (better eyes than mine) would be good. Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 22:35, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
Our James Scurry article marks "complexion of negroes" as a quotation from the guy's memoirs, meaning that the other two articles that don't are probably engaged in OR based on very old, biased, dubious primary sources. Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 22:40, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
Can I please have some help at Shooting of James Boyd?
This case is also at the OR noticeboard, but no outside editors have commented yet and the other editor keeps editing in the OR. This is really becoming more a matter of behavior than lack of knowledge of WP policy, as I originally assumed. I have already spent way more time on this than I had and today I gotta be elsewhere today so I'll have to do the fleshing out and diffs later, and I guess I am supposed to close the other discussion (?) However I'll leave it up while I am gone, for reference, for now, as the two issues described there are among the of several problems faced by the article. The sort of very angry line-by-line refutation of the smallest details you see there is another. Almost every attempt to discuss has gone off into the weeds. A few of the current concerns, which may require attention today:
- repeated reinsertion of, essentially, an OR refutation of the prosecutor's opening statement. These are studies the editor went out and found on his own.
- possible outing of another editor, @Activist, and stark refusal to delete the material from his page, because, he says, he wants to prove how ignorant that editor is.
- Needless to say we don't see that editor on the page any more very much at all.
- he likes the word ignorant and uses it a lot
- editor has said he knows he is right and primary sources are acceptable if used carefully. "Careful use of primary sources" in this case is, per that editor, a courtroom exhibit briefly seen on a YouTube video. I am inclined to believe the video is genuine and there is such an exhibit but the sources do not use terminology he wants in the article; his contention is that the accuracy of the terminology is obvious from the exhibit.
- editor has said he doesn't care what I or any other editor say about this.
- there was some sort of rant about BS yesterday, which, as best I can determine, refers to a prosecution witness' testimony.
- editor has said he has "inside sources"
- there are COI discussions open re the city of Albuquerque
- editor makes wild and unfounded accusations
- editor makes remarks about other editors. All the time, non-stop, and assumes bad faith.
- editor, when asked directly if he has a contract with the city of albuquerque, editor replies that he is not a city employee Elinruby (talk) 17:03, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
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I found that very hard to read and I actually mostly know what he is talking about. I am itching to slap a hatnote on that mess but I think someone else should do that if in fact it is appropriate. One of the things I need help with is keeping my temper. Another is trying to explain NPOV to Beanyandcecil, because he is sure not listening to me, and I have been working on this for more that a week full-time, and come on, that is ridiculous. He has said he doesn't care what I or anyone else thinks of his OR, because he is sure he is right. Perhaps he will listen to several of you. Whatever you do though, do not attempt to explain anything inline as he will inline-answer your explanation to tell you how wrong you are and ping you for each inline alleged refutation. Let's attempt a different format. I have promised diffs on the issues in the weeds and am late on that. But I feel a need to address, as one uninterrupted train of thought, the most recent astonishing pronouncement from Beanyandcecil. Perhaps he should ask the Kari Brandenburg about his certitude that APD does not engage in retaliation. I'll pursue my own privacy issue through the proper channel, but the important point here is that Beanyandcecil is dismissing safety concerns about which he has no information whatsoever. I will not be bullied into exacerbating them, nor will I be bullied into letting Beanyandcecil distort the account of this homicide on Misplaced Pages. I feel also the need to point out (and should not feel this need imho) that I have had a global account for almost five years, although I created this username in 2007. Before that I had some IP edits, almost all of the copywriting variety. I came to Misplaced Pages through the Open Education Repository. As noted in my user profile, my background is computer networking and internet security. I have more than 19,100 contributions on 18 projects. I usually translate and currently am working on articles about trade theory (en->fr), the appeals process in French law (fr->en) and Mexican proto-punk(es->en). Not only do I seriously have other things to do than be schooled on What is Misplaced Pages -- much less privacy on the internet, omg -- by Beanyandcecil, I get very few complaints about my ability to communicate ;) let alone my mental stability, forsooth. I can of course make a mistake like anyone else, but my work is autopatrolled on Wikimedia Commons and I have had an IP block exemption on English Misplaced Pages, so there have been a couple of findings already that on the whole I try to do the right thing and often actually do. I have been profoundly involved as a 3rd party mediator in big messy disputes both here at NPOV and at the RS noticeboard and on talk pages. Articles like Ugg boot, Leopold II of Belgium. Recently I extensively contributed to Panama Papers. I am somewhat familiar with BLP policy ;) Before that, Stop Online Piracy Act (remember the day they turned off Misplaced Pages?). Yeah, I've heard of NPOV. No blocks, ever, not even any administrative contact not initiated by me, I don't think. And ;) someone who just now broke 500 edits this month wants to explain to me that Misplaced Pages has an NPOV policy. Because I letting my emotions govern my edits. Or something. Bah. Back to diffs, sorry about the delay there. ~~
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List of non-neutral statements (non-exhaustive)
The following list is the heart of the NPOV concerns. The insults, insinuations of bias, incompetence, wild assumptions based on his life experience, and OR make the problem more difficult to address, as does the editor's habit of copying everything said to him on the talk page and arguing with it inline. Swear to God, I really tried hard not to bite the newbies -- it's one of my own pet peeves -- but if the newbie just assumes he knows better then what is an editor supposed to do?
talk page
- when another editor said his edits 'seem to me as if they're written by defense counsel for the shooters.' Beanyandcecil says he takes that as a compliment.
- when another editor mentions "the shortcomings of the ABQ police force and LEO in general in dealing with the mentally ill" Beanyandcecil replies "nonsense! LE deals with the mentally ill thousands, perhaps millions of times a day in the US."
- note: In the case of Albuquerque at least, the US Department of Justice disagrees.
- "DOJ Report on APD". KRQE.
article
- unsourced "clarification", as he calls it in edit summary, that Boyd "threatened one of the officers"
- changes "and the dog tore at his leg" to "the police dog was again sent to bite him.", which certainly minimizes the gore and leaves open the question of whether the dog actually did bite.
- removes "One of the officers responsible for the shooting" next to an officer's name - this one might be justifiable as BLP as this was before the verdict and "responsible" is a legal term. Except that a) not even Sandy disputes that Sandy shot him and b) the edit summary says he is "Correcting errors. Cleaning up language" which is.... kind of misleading. It makes it sound like typos or english that he is correcting. Elinruby (talk) 11:57, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- changed "He threatened police officers who came near him" to "He threatened to kill any police officer who came near him." This is described in the edit summary as a "minor correction". Leaves reference saying Boyd threatened 19 times to kill police officers. Nothing there about "any" or for that matter "near him", but I am not sure at the moment where the latter came from.
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Since this is going to be another hat note, fine, since apparently you are not going to reconsider and ::cough:: re-read the page, let's go there. At one point I thought you might actually be capable fo discussion. I am going to try AGAIN. Anyone can post a wall of accusations, you know.
that drew my response which appears just below. Removing the context of my comments is something that Elinruby does with great frequency,
and here, she does it again.
This came up when she was again on a rant
about how I've kept "personal information" about Activist. I have not, the information he posted contains no personal information.
Nonetheless, Elinruby wrote this,
If Elinruby has some evidence of officers killing Misplaced Pages editors that post things they might not like, have her present it here.
Otherwise it's nothing but obsessive ramblings. Equating the filing of charges against a DA to prevent or in response to a filing of charges against some police officers is one thing.
The stalking and killing of a Misplaced Pages editor for posting information that they may not like is quite another.
This is BEYOND absurd.
But this is the sort of thing that happens when people let their emotions run away."}}
But she so often misquotes me, when a simple search would reveal the truth and the reality, she's getting closer to it, simply by refusing to verify such claims before she makes them. Here is what I ACTUALLY wrote on this,
It's clear from what I wrote that I was referring to ANOTHER DOJ report, one conducted where I live. But it's really irrelevant to this shooting incident. The DOJ report did not examine the incident discussed in the Article. It occurred after the DOJ had completed their investigation. They only referred to it by mentioning a comment made by the Chief. My point back then was that each incident of this nature, officer involved shootings, need to be investigated on their own, to determine if it was justified or not. They should not automatically be classified according to a DOJ report, or any other.
He should read the DoJ report.
I can confidently say that it does not say that APD has any history of retaliation against WP editors.
Such an investigation is only useful to show general tendencies and what happened in the incidents that were actually investigated. Any such report should NOT be used to judge all officers, all shooting incidents or anything other than incidents that were actually investigated.
But some will do it anyway, painting anyone who wears a police uniform with the same brush.
The report IS quite useful for inflaming the emotions of a few. Beanyandcecil ([[User talk:Beanyandcecil|talk]]) 04:21, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Removing the context of my comments is something that Elinruby does with great frequency,
This came up when she was again on a rant
about how I've kept "personal information" about Activist. I have not, the information he posted contains no personal information.
If Elinruby has some evidence of officers killing Misplaced Pages editors that post things they might not like, have her present it here.
Otherwise it's nothing but obsessive ramblings. Equating the filing of charges against a DA to prevent or in response to a filing of charges against some police officers is one thing.
But this is the sort of thing that happens when people let their emotions run away."
So I'll give Elinruby another ten Pinocchios for her claim that I
It should be clear from what I wrote that I was referring to ANOTHER DOJ report, one conducted where I live. But this DOJ report done on APD is really irrelevant to this shooting incident. The DOJ report did not examine the incident discussed in the Article. It occurred after the DOJ had completed their investigation. They only referred to it by mentioning a comment made by the Chief. My point back then was that each incident of this nature, officer involved shootings, or other UOF, should be investigated on their own situation and facts, to determine if it was justified or not. They should not automatically be classified according to a DOJ report, or any other.
The DOJ report did not address this shooting so it's irrelevant to this discussion.
I can confidently say that it does not say that APD has any history of retaliation against WP editors.
Such an investigation is only useful to show general tendencies and what happened in the incidents that were actually investigated. Any such report should NOT be used to judge all officers, all shooting incidents or anything other than incidents that were actually investigated.
But some will do it anyway, painting anyone who wears a police uniform with the same brush.
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- "mental patients mental patients are highly resistant to pain"
- "I've also had them change from quiet and mild to murderous, without an obvious trigger and without any warning. They are unpredictable and can be set off by many triggers without one even realizing that they've set them off, until it's too late."
- "argues that K-9 handler said "Phooey"" in response to suggestion on talk page (never added to article for RS reasons) that Perez says "Booyah" ; this is stated as fact although it is unsourced and does not match the audio. Elinruby (talk)
- "I suggest that you take a look at this video. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YyJWbvk-KY4 It's from the highly anti−LEO site, PINAC (Photography Is Not A Crime) and shows one of their contributors, Charlie Grapski at the area where this incident occurred. At 1:04 on the video the camera zooms in on the sign that's posted at the entrance to the area. The sign is entitled "City of Albuquerque, Open Space Regulations. One of the activities that is prohibited is "camping and fires." Down at the bottom of that sign is this, "city and county ordinances. state statues, and federal laws governing resource protection public conduct and safety apply and violations are punishable by fine and imprisonment." ." -- to another editor, implies that illegal camping is an arrestable offense based on a video he himself says is not neutral. (AFAIK "illegal camping" is a violation of a city ordinance; I provided a link to the city webpage where the rule appears). Elinruby (talk) 09:25, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- "He certainly lacks the necessary knowledge to be a peace officer. He didn't even recognize that a felony had been committed, much less the misdemeanor (probably) of the camping violation." - in reference to CIT officer Mikal Monette
- "It's not necessary that he use the word "Taser." It's not that it's the "police version" it's that it's a reasonable conclusion to come to" - in response to me, about repeatedly adding the word "taser" to a quote because he thinks this is what the officer meant. He be may right about what the officer *meant* but a quote is supposed to be what someone *said* Elinruby (talk) 09:37, 24 October 2016 (UTC) edia.org/?diff=742580643] to emphasize it might be dangerous
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- Unsourced description of knife
- Unsourced addition to text:"Sandy then threw a flash-bang grenade toward Boyd, but it landed in a rocky area to Boyd's right. A police dog was released to bite Boyd but he was distracted by the flight and explosion of the flash-bang. A Taser shotgun was fired at Boyd, but it did not appear to have any effect. Boyd dropped the bags he had picked up, and retrieved the knives from his pockets, with one knife in each hand he assumed a squared off stance. Officers then ordered Boyd drop the two knives several times, but he did not comply." this and a similar edit are together described as "Corrections, Deleted material to move to new section, Deleted redundancies, General clean up"
- in the same "cleanup edit" adds unsourced remark that "Because of the danger presented by the knives, one officer fired three bean bag rounds at Boyd."
- still in the same edit described as "cleanup" adds " The dog grabbed one of the stuff sacks and brought it to his handler who had advanced his position towards Boyd, accompanied by two of his back-up officers. Boyd took a step towards the officers and stopped. The canine handler tried to get his dog to drop the stuff sack and redirect onto Boyd. While he was distracted doing this, he was about 8'-10' from Boyd, and was looking down at his dog. Officers Sandy and Perez thought that he presented an imminent deadly threat to the dog handler and together they fired a total of six shots. Three bullets hit Boyd — one in the back and one in each arm. He was turning an instant before they started firing and he fell to the ground, face down, still holding onto both of his knives. After he fell to the ground Boyd said "Please don't hurt me. I can't move." There is nothing at think link but a video.
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"But I doubt that any of those topics bring out anywhere near the emotions that does the killing of someone by the police, particularly these days. And so, while I've not looked at your other edits, I doubt that there is as much confrontation over the topic as there, quite naturally is, over this one."
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I'll pick up the NPOV list with more diffs a bit later today but I think people get the idea. Meanwhile all editing has stopped on the actual article. Elinruby (talk) 23:46, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations - Child rape claim
Within the Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations page is a claim by a woman, called "Jane Doe", who says that at the age of 13 she was raped by Donald Trump on multiple occasions. She first filed a suit in California, but it was thrown out due to filing issues; The plaintiff filed the case by herself, without a lawyer. A civil lawsuit was filed in New York earlier this year, and a third attempt at litigating the case began with an October 2016 filing.
Although there has been widespread press coverage of allegations against Donald Trump of sexual assault or misconduct since the second presidential debated on October 9, 2016 — this case has not received significant press. Although we have reputable mainstream press sources that have reported that a suit was filed and that a hearing is scheduled for December 2016, there is not widespread coverage.
Please see argument presented by Mandruss (emphasis his):
- We should look at percentage of the whole who have reported it, not simply the number who have reported it. We should consider that the others have not reported it, despite the fact that they must know about it. They have made a positive decision that it is not newsworthy, not simply overlooked it. We have to assume that.
- I have essentially proposed limiting our "universe" to 18 of the highest quality sources for the purpose of judging WP:DUE. The alternative is to expand the universe to all reliable sources, research all of them, and then calculate a new percentage who report it. That would be completely unworkable for multiple reasons.
- 16.6% of our current universe have reported it. 83.3% of our current universe, 5 times as many, have deemed it not newsworthy. That does not justify content about accusations of the repeated rape of a 13-year-girl. Accusations don't get much more serious, short of murder.
- I have said in multiple places that this rationale is only for the purpose of deciding whether to include any content. If we decide to do so, then we can use other reliable sources to determine content.
Due the visibility of Donald Trump during his campaign and the severity of the claim, we would like to have your assistance to settle the issue of whether or how accusations by this woman should be included in the page. Conversation about this issue is posted at The lawsuit didn't receive much coverage / Remove Jane Doe?.
Thanks so much!--CaroleHenson (talk) 03:23, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
This section became difficult to manage and find the discussions, so as requested, I created subsections. I collapsed them, then, too - hoping that makes any further content easier to edit + it highlights that it would be good, if you have an opinion, to vote on approaches at the RfC.--00:54, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
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1) Should content be included if only 16% of key mainstream media has picked up the story? 2) If it is included, because of the nature of the story and the uneven reporting, should we tone down the verbiage, such as eliminating the word "rape" and mention of Epstein and his parties?--CaroleHenson (talk) 14:44, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
"I have essentially proposed limiting our "universe" to 18 of the highest quality sources for the purpose of judging WP:DUE. The alternative is to expand the universe to all reliable sources, research all of them, and then calculate a new percentage who report it. That would be completely unworkable for multiple reasons." Well, yes. So don't impose self-created rules that are impossible to enforce. Multiple reliable sources cover the rape allegation, the tie-in to Epstein, and an impending court date. Misplaced Pages is not censored and both WP:V and WP:RS are satisfied. Not really seeing why this is an issue, of course it should be included (in neutral language (but not hiding the fact that it is rape that is alleged) and without sensationalising it. Bastun 15:48, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
A note to interested editors, this content is in a section titled Legal proceedings, where there is a link to the Main article - Legal affairs of Donald Trump, where this same content (with more details) is in a sub-section titled Rape claim, which is sourced to - The Daily Mail, HuffPo, National Review, LawNewz, NY Daily News, Snopes, and primary documents. So even if the consensus is to remove and/or reduce the material from this particular article, it still remains in another article.-- Isaidnoway (talk) 21:57, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
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Any attempt to create numerical thresholds is going to fail because you can't really compare sources that way.- Sorry for the late response. The first sentence at WP:DUE uses the word "proportion", so it says we should "compare sources that way". The world uses numbers for clarification, and it has done for thousands of years. It is not useful to say, "Relatively few sources have reported this", since the immediate response is, "Oh yeah? What are you calling 'relatively few'?". Using numbers simply saves us that time. In response to people who are afraid to fly because airliners crash in a scary way and kill a lot of people, is it more useful to say, "Well the rate of fatalities per passenger mile is really, really low", or "There are x fatalities per one million passenger miles"? This is not the first time I have encountered resistance to quantifying things, as if only fuzzy thinking is useful, and I strongly oppose such resistance. Percentages represent proportions very effectively and clearly. This is not to say that numbers should be our only thinking tool, that they should be codified in policy, or that they should represent bright lines, only that such things should not be forbidden or dismissed in thinking and discussion. ―Mandruss ☎ 23:47, 21 October 2016 (UTC) |
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But suppose the story had never received mainstream coverage and we decided to cover it in Cruz's article. We would then be disseminating a story to a wide audience that would otherwise never have heard about it, without explaining how reasonable the theory was. We would put Cruz in the position of having to deny the story and push it into mainstream media or ignore leaving some Misplaced Pages editors believing it to be true. Its role would then be the same as news media, deciding what is or is not important and driving coverage in other news media. That is beyond neutrality, which is to merely reflect what is reported, rather than driving what is reported. TFD (talk) 07:02, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
@Jack Upland: In response to your comments:
@Jack Upland: Who said we should exclude this case because it would detract from other allegations? You've talked about it; I haven't yet found anyone else. Madshurtie (talk) 09:55, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
Most legitimate news outlets have picked up the story, so the argument of UNDUE seems silly at this point. Something that has been bothering me about this discussion is the inherent discounting of a rape accusation. It doesn't matter who its leveled at, its serious and those sorts of accusations should always be taken seriously. If we have sources, that should be the sole point governing whether to include or not. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 17:02, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
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CaroleHenson I am a little bowled over at your note of Politico's as biased. During the election, it has been the only one to consistently act as fact-checker, calling out each party when they "fib". It only looks like they are biased because there are so many "fibs" on the part of the Republicans and their nominee (you can blame that on Karl Rove, btw). That Fox was even considered a neutral source is likely the source of your traction problem. Fox News is about as biased as you can get in America, apart from some of the more racially-charged altnews groups. Huffington post does have a liberal bias, as it was created to counter the Drudge report (and yeah, it is pretty effing sad that we have to create biased news sources to counter other biased news sources). I get that maybe you were trying to source-balance the story left (LA Times), right (Fox News) and center, but NPR has a specific and very public pro-feminism stance - they cannot be considered neutral in any discussion of the treatment of any woman.
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RfC at article talk page
Being that the debate in this thread has become largely circular, after almost 5 days of discussion about this question, I think it's time to get that RfC started. There has been no acknowledgement of my above comment about the RfC, let alone any comments about the draft. So, unless I hear an objection here within about an hour, with some cogent rationale, I'm starting the RfC as currently drafted, at Talk:Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations. ―Mandruss ☎ 10:49, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
- I added a "Votes" section and cast the first vote.--CaroleHenson (talk) 15:24, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
Simple inclusion of a notable recurring character
In lieu of entering a lengthy Talk Page debate of back-and-forth opinions or launching an edit war (of which I have never been a party), I would like to address this matter of neutrality here regarding the simple inclusion of the recurring character "Charlie the Bartender" played by Danny Wells on the The Jeffersons WP page. I am inviting editor Quis separabit? to the discussion. My first inclusion was rv'd by Rms125a@hotmail.com (and rightly so). After having sought advice from editors and admins as to how I could improve the situation, notability via expansion of the actor's WP page was suggested: which I diligently accomplished. I made it known on the actor's talk page of my intent as well as the The Jeffersons's talk page and felt confident to reinstate "Charlie" from the overwhelming evidence that I had found in my research from reliable sources claiming the recurring role and notability for the character in relation to others already included. Within hours, it was rv'd on the basis that there had been no consensus on the talk page. With all due respect and with the highest regard to all contributors on WP, including Rms125a@hotmail.com, with the long standing history of deletions by him/her, I felt it to be non-neutral to the article. I would appreciate a side-by-side discussion as to why this character is being deleted in relation to the others that remain; a few of whom are equal, if not less than equal, to that of Danny Wells in notability and recurrence. This is not my opinion, but cited within the resources on the very same pages that claim the other characters. Thank you. Maineartists (talk) 16:22, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
- Comment Setting personal opinion aside and focusing on existence of comparison evidence on WP and reliable sources for subjects and articles, here is my argument for inclusions. Please keep in mind, when presenting "evidence" for televisions shows in this genre, "evidence" (even that which is found in the WP article itself, is mostly "trivia" and should be seen and treating equally for inclusion as well as exclusion. That being said:
- Since the show has little support to claim an actual definitive "starring cast" except that of credit titles, the opening spot for The Jeffersons listed as follows: “Starring: Sherman Hemsley, Isabel Sanford, Roxie Roker, Franklin Cover, Mike Evan/Damon Evans, Zara Cully (until her death), Berlinda Tolbert & Paul Benedict”. In the 6th season it was just Hemsley, Sanford, Roker, Cover, Benedict and Gibbs. Evans and Tolbert are not listed even though they are listed as "Main" on the WP. Wertimer and Hammer are never listed; yet they are listed in the Infobox on the WP as "Starring". This term places them there at a certain level on the basis of their notability from their either their WP pages, appearances in episodes/seasons, or sources that directly either used that term or terms relative to that status: "recurring", "supporting", "guest appearance", etc. Even main stars such as Marla Gibbs (who is considered the 3rd main cast star after Hemsley and Sanford has been titled: "recurring", "supporting", by the same sources that have placed Wertimer and Hammer on the Jefferson page, yet exclude Wells on all acounts. Even on this WP page, Florence Johnston is said to be a "recurring" role at the beginning, and also listed here at TV.com
- In External Links on The Jeffersons WP page, source lists Danny Wells directly after Ned Wertimer and before Jay Hammer.
- Regarding the term "recurring" in Main Cast (which is misleading and an incorrect title for this section), here are links that refer to Wells and his character as a recurring character on The Jeffersons: The Today Show , TV.com , Variety , Entertainment Weekly , TV.com #2 , Wikia , this source directly talks about a specific episode focused on Well's character (alcoholism) as being a "pressing social issues: .
- Character is named "Supporting" , "Starring" in order: , Most notable across multiple seasons: , Listed above Jay Hammer , Featured Cast: , Jefferson cast: , Cast , Cast Members: , Day Time Royality: , Famous:
- Character "Charlie the Bartender" and actor Danny Wells is actually mentioned in this book: "Historical Dictionary of African American Television"
- In the 11th season "Charlie the Bartender" became a staple character, along with his bar, in the series.
- The character of Jay Hammer (Season 5 only - 8 episode) and Ralph the Doorman (11 seasons - recurring), equal (or less) in notability to Wells, are included in The Jeffersons WP page with no reliable sources for inclusion. Wells has been rv'd twice in same categories (even after article expansion) without reason.
Thank you. Maineartists (talk) 21:52, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Regardless the outcome, extra editorial eyes would greatly be appreciated on this subject to form a consensus before the topic is archived. Thanks so much! Maineartists (talk) 13:23, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
Issues at a Donald Trump page
- 1. The problem is with respect to this page: Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations.
- 2. The issue is the extent to which Trump's version, and his defense against the sexual misconduct allegations, can be included in the main article. Also, whether the views of people who have defended Trump from the allegations, like Mike Pence, can be included in the page; and whether any comment of Hillary Clinton on these allegations can be included in the main article. Finally, whether Trump's claim that he intends to sue all the women who have been making these allegations can be included in the main article; and whether Trump's claim that the Clinton campaign could be responsible for these allegations can be included in the main article. The consensus on the talk page seems to be to reduce Trump's defense against the sexual misconduct allegations to the bare minimum. However, i believe this is in violation of WP:DUE,WP:BALANCE,WP:IMPARTIAL, and WP:BLP.
- 3. The diffs in question are: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Donald_Trump_sexual_misconduct_allegations&diff=745237756&oldid=745233947, and https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Donald_Trump_sexual_misconduct_allegations&diff=745706477&oldid=745699707
- 4. Discussion about the first diff has taken place here: https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:Donald_Trump_sexual_misconduct_allegations#Response_by_Trump_and_Trump.27s_attorney
- 5. Discussion about the second diff has taken place here: https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:Donald_Trump_sexual_misconduct_allegations#Trump_wants_to_sue_and_condemns_his_accusers
- 6. The first diff involved a reversion of my edit by CaroleHenson. The second diff involved a reversion of Zigzig20s's edit by CaroleHenson.Other editors who have participated in the talk page discussions involving the two diffs are: Smallbones,SPECIFICO, K.e.coffman, Mandruss, and J mareeswaran
- 7. I am posting my query here so that more editors can participate on this very sensitive issue since more editor participation is the best way to eliminate or reduce any possible bias in this very sensitive page. Soham321 (talk) 22:51, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
- Comment - For several reasons, I posted a comment about this on the article talk page.--CaroleHenson (talk) 23:40, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
- This article covers an obviously very contentious, emotional, and very, very important topic. So obviously it is a very difficult article to edit. In 10 years of editing on Misplaced Pages, I've made perhaps 2 dozen edits related to presidential elections and generally have regretted it. Too many sharp elbows. Too many emotional POV editors. I don't see this article as much different, though it actually falls on the calmer side of things. Also CaroleHenson has done a good job trying to keep editing within the rules, though I have disagreed with her a couple of times. I also have given up on editing the article, but have commented several times on the talk page. All in all, I'd say it's about as well written as can be expected and the process is working about as well as can be expected. Smallbones(smalltalk) 00:03, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I would generally concur with all of that. But on something like this I don't know we need an extended debate at NPOVN. One or two experienced and uninvolved editors could review the article for NPOV and give opinions. ―Mandruss ☎ 00:07, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I think that anyone who stands to benefit from Trump emerging innocent/guilty of rape charges cannot be use, as they are hopelessly biased. Of course, HRC wants this out in front, since it only benefits her political campaign. Of course Pence is going to dismiss it...for now. If his ride to the White House is later kicked out, he becomes the driver. Nope, nobody political - and we are going to have to stay very, VERY vigilant on this matter, as other political articles of different politicians (Guliani and his ilk) are going to try and sneak in commentary about it. We use neutral articles and court records, and vet out any others collaboratively. The election is 2 weeks away; depending on whether Trump "keeps us in suspense" over conceding defeat. Some of this will die down afterwards.
- I hate politic-related articles. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 03:06, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Perhaps all American editors should step back and allow only truly uninvolved editors to examine the article for bias, NPOV, and undue weight issues. --Taivo (talk) 03:11, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Leave it to the Russians!--Jack Upland (talk) 03:18, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Good idea. Thankfully, I live in Uganda. ―Mandruss ☎ 09:39, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I think its good to have some foreign input but, having lived outside the US myself in both Africa and Asia, their news media tends to be far more biased than ours. Using lots and finding the healthy medium of neutral, reliable sources seems the best course to plot. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 19:41, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Perhaps all American editors should step back and allow only truly uninvolved editors to examine the article for bias, NPOV, and undue weight issues. --Taivo (talk) 03:11, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
Comment: Jack Sebastian, please explain why you believe Mike Pence's comments defending Trump from the allegations should not be included in the main article, considering that Michelle Obama's comments criticizing Trump because of these allegations have been included in the page.Soham321 (talk) 07:53, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I've noted elsewhere that we shouldn't include anyone with a vested interest in the outcome of the election, which presents a reason to be disingenuous or manufactured. Pence fulfills this criteria; Trump wins the election and is then convicted of any one of these crimes which could easily force him from office. Pence would assume the presidency. Defending his ride to the White House could result in him staying there when Trump leaves. The same doesn't apply to Michelle Obama; she has nothing to gain from the election. Thus, her comments are notable and honest. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 14:23, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Jack Sebastian:@Soham321:I don't see a problem with listing the most notable reactions by American politicians. The politicians may have conflict of interest, but they have generated a lot of the media comment, so their reactions are very notable. The context of many of these events happening within a campaign season is relevant to this article. We can't include every politician, but I think we should continue to include the notable ones in a balanced way. Madshurtie (talk) 09:23, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Madshurtie, this is also my view. But note one more thing. As per WP:WEIGHT, it cannot be that there are 10 lines in the main article dealing with Michelle's statement, and 1-2 lines for Pence's statement. Either Michelle's statement should be reduced/condensed, or Pence's statement be given equal weightage. Right now, bizarrely enough, Michelle Obama's criticism of Trump on account of these allegations is being given more weightage than Trump's defense of himself in the main article.Soham321 (talk) 09:39, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I find it bizarre that you would find it bizarre, as it is blindlingly obvious as to why Mr. Pence's commentary cannot be given the same weight as Mrs. Obama's. He has something to gain from his comments (ie, his ticket to the White house, as either VP or successor should Trump be impeached after being convicted for a crime). Thusly, anything he might comment on in this regard is tainted. Obama, OTOH, has absolutely nothing to gain by her comments. I am not saying we should ignore Pence, but anyone who stands to gain from their viewpoint should be discounted, despite their prominence. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 14:30, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Jack Sebastian Since no one has commented yet, I thought I'd take a crack at this. While Pence does have a significant vested interest in the outcome of the election, one could argue that so does Michelle Obama. She has been campaigning since this year's graduation season when she gave at least one commencement address and spoke of her concerns if Trump was to become president. Michelle has been actively campaigning for some time. Some have said that may be one of the most effective orators on HRC's behalf. She's the wife of the man who told the National Black Caucus Convention that he would take it as an insult to his administration if Democrats don't vote for Hillary. She is leaving a legacy as First Lady - and both POTUS and FLOTUS have been standard-bearers for the country - so I would think she has a strong interest about whether a Democrat becomes the next president. My two cents, I have no idea how someone would analyze the weighting of Pence and Michelle Obama's interest, though. --CaroleHenson (talk) 16:52, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I find it bizarre that you would find it bizarre, as it is blindlingly obvious as to why Mr. Pence's commentary cannot be given the same weight as Mrs. Obama's. He has something to gain from his comments (ie, his ticket to the White house, as either VP or successor should Trump be impeached after being convicted for a crime). Thusly, anything he might comment on in this regard is tainted. Obama, OTOH, has absolutely nothing to gain by her comments. I am not saying we should ignore Pence, but anyone who stands to gain from their viewpoint should be discounted, despite their prominence. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 14:30, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- CaroleHenson I think that thinking represents a false equivalency. While Pence stands to gain by discounting the rape rumors as a Trump surrogate (for reasons noted earlier), Michelle Obama gains nothing from Trump's winning or losing the election. She gains no office (nor, by all accounts, does she seek such), receives no compensation and garners no more fame than she already has as FLOTUS and as her own woman. If Pence said, 'screw this, I'm not partnering with this clown' and wrote himself off the ticket, then that would be something, because - again - he wouldn't stand to gain anything from his remarks.
- Because he stands to gain by his comments, they should have less standing in the article. Since Mrs. Obama stands to gain nothing, her words carry considerable weight. Selflessness will always be more convincing than self-interest. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 22:22, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- "She gains no office (nor, by all accounts, does she seek such)".. Do we really know that? HRC did, Mrs. Obama could. comp.arch (talk) 12:56, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Seeing that such would be fortune-telling. I think its been said in several interviews that she doesn't really like Washington, and is only sticking around in DC after they leave the White House to wait for their remaining daughter to finish school. In any case, she doesn't stand to foreseeably gain, and that's the divider here. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 19:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- "She gains no office (nor, by all accounts, does she seek such)".. Do we really know that? HRC did, Mrs. Obama could. comp.arch (talk) 12:56, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Soham321: WP:WEIGHT says we should give viewpoints weight 'in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in the published, reliable sources.' Michelle Obama has had more coverage than Mike Pence, so I see no problem there. Pence is also included in the Trump campaign, whose reaction we've already given, so it may cause duplication. That said, I don't see much of a problem adding Pence if he has a novel and widely covered reaction we can add. Madshurtie (talk) 10:06, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Also note that we haven't added Clinton. Madshurtie (talk) 10:09, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Madshurtie is correct, neutrality does not mean equal treatment. And that misunderstanding may be part of the reason we're here. ―Mandruss ☎ 10:10, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, you added the neutrality tag a few minutes before being shown that you don't understand neutrality, so I won't fault you on that. But you might reasonably consider self-reverting that. ―Mandruss ☎ 10:21, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Mandruss, I am not reverting the neutrality tag until an uninvolved Admin or senior editor has closed this discussion, and neither should you in my opinion. Soham321 (talk) 10:25, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I promise not to touch it. And I'm not aware that noticeboard discussions have closes or closers. ―Mandruss ☎ 10:26, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Mandruss, I am not reverting the neutrality tag until an uninvolved Admin or senior editor has closed this discussion, and neither should you in my opinion. Soham321 (talk) 10:25, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Madshurtie, you did not comment on whether you also believe that Michelle's statement criticizing Trump on account of these allegations should be given more weightage than Trump's defense of himself in response to these allegations. Note that Trump addressed this issue in the third presidential debate, and also in several campaign speeches and interviews.Soham321 (talk) 10:28, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Soham321: Trump's own statements by themselves have been given more content than Michelle Obama. In the Trump campaign reaction section alone, my screen shows more lines discussing Trump's reaction (including the note) than Michelle's. That's not to mention that Trump gets a quote in most of the womens' sections, and in the intro. On top of that, we are giving additional space for reactions by his affiliates, who are clearly directed by Trump. The only person we have included who has spoken for the Hillary Clinton campaign is Michelle. Basically, 1) Trump gets more coverage in the reactions section 2) Trump gets far more coverage in the whole article 3) The Trump campaign gets massively more coverage than the Clinton campaign. If anything, the article is biased in the other direction. Madshurtie (talk) 11:18, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Madshurtie, you did not comment on whether you also believe that Michelle's statement criticizing Trump on account of these allegations should be given more weightage than Trump's defense of himself in response to these allegations. Note that Trump addressed this issue in the third presidential debate, and also in several campaign speeches and interviews.Soham321 (talk) 10:28, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
Madshurtie, on my 15 inch laptop, Donald Trump's defense against the allegations get approximately six lines of coverage (5 1/2 lines + the word "choice"), in a sub-sub section titled "Donald and Melania Trump" within the sub-section "Trump and affiliates' reactions" in the "Reactions" section. Michelle's comments on the allegations against Trump get 9 1/2 lines of coverage. Michelle's comments are included in a sub-section titled "Michelle Obama" in the "Reactions" section. So I cannot agree if your contention is that Donald Trump's defense is being given more coverage and more prominence than Michelle's reaction. This, mind you, is just one NPOV related issue; there are in fact multiple NPOV related issues in the article which spring from the fact that details about Trump's defense of himself against the allegations, which have been inserted in the main page, have been either removed or drastically reduced. That is why it is important that uninvolved editors and/or Admins get involved in this page. Two other editors have expressed support for my position on the talk page of the article: Isaidnoway, and Zigzig20s. Soham321 (talk) 12:07, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Soham321: This is the most inane discussion, because you have ignored the point that Trump is quoted multiple times in other sections of the article so that you can nit-pick these paragraphs. However, I have word counted the two sections. The two paragraphs about Trump's reactions inside "Donald and Melania Trump", excluding the Melania paragraph, and including the quote note, add up to 239 words. The one paragraph in the Michelle Obama section, plus the quote box, adds up to 234 words. So you don't have a case, even if we balanced articles like this based on word count. Madshurtie (talk) 12:45, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
Hi there, There's a comment from David Eppstein that is relevant to previous discussions about content additions. I am not sure which diff that's listed above that it might apply to. As the review proceeds, would you please take a look the question I asked (in gray) and his response from this edit? That would be great!--CaroleHenson (talk) 10:50, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- @CaroleHenson:
As the review proceeds,
- Que? If you mean this discussion, this is not what I've meant when I used the word review. I have suggested soliticing an experienced and uninvolved editor to review the article for NPOV so we can dispense with this debate, which is not likely to be very productive. We have already seen that at least one editor present didn't even know what neutrality means. ―Mandruss ☎ 11:14, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, Mandruss, when you bring someone in to review the article for NPOV, could David's comments be included as well, perhaps a #8? I would be happy to type it up in a summary if that would help. It pertains to comments about the accusers. He's not a regular here, I just wanted to make sure it didn't fall through the cracks. It came up at the first dispute, and since the content about accusers was backed-out in editing, it was a non-issue until now.
- I was just informed that my ping did not work with this mention because I did not sign it. It sounds l ike that's immaterial, but I thought I'd give you a "heads up". --CaroleHenson (talk) 11:36, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- What I would do would be to ask David Eppstein if he would care to do a review, something similar to a GA review but perhaps less time-consuming for the reviewer. He appears to have the competence, and I think he qualifies as uninvolved. So he could write a list of points for improvement. We would then make those improvements and use that review as a guide for future editing. ―Mandruss ☎ 11:48, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Lovely idea! Oh, if that doesn't work out, I do have experience with a number of GA editors - you and others probably do, too! Yes, there are sections of the GA that wouldn't need to be followed, but that's a great template - or mindset - for reviewing issues!!!--CaroleHenson (talk) 11:56, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Obviously, certain editors who don't agree with his points for improvement will accuse him of bias, just because that's how they roll (anyone who disagrees with them is obviously a POV pusher), but I think we can deal with that. ―Mandruss ☎ 12:00, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, I think you have much more experience with disputes, RfCs, etc. and know how to manage the process. You may not need this, but there are a number of different templates, this is my favorite GATable, which might be a good reference to determine what sections might apply for a NPOV review.--CaroleHenson (talk) 12:06, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I'd let Eppstein decide how to do it, should he choose to accept the mission. ―Mandruss ☎ 12:10, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, I think you have much more experience with disputes, RfCs, etc. and know how to manage the process. You may not need this, but there are a number of different templates, this is my favorite GATable, which might be a good reference to determine what sections might apply for a NPOV review.--CaroleHenson (talk) 12:06, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Obviously, certain editors who don't agree with his points for improvement will accuse him of bias, just because that's how they roll (anyone who disagrees with them is obviously a POV pusher), but I think we can deal with that. ―Mandruss ☎ 12:00, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Lovely idea! Oh, if that doesn't work out, I do have experience with a number of GA editors - you and others probably do, too! Yes, there are sections of the GA that wouldn't need to be followed, but that's a great template - or mindset - for reviewing issues!!!--CaroleHenson (talk) 11:56, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- What I would do would be to ask David Eppstein if he would care to do a review, something similar to a GA review but perhaps less time-consuming for the reviewer. He appears to have the competence, and I think he qualifies as uninvolved. So he could write a list of points for improvement. We would then make those improvements and use that review as a guide for future editing. ―Mandruss ☎ 11:48, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
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CaroleHenson, I am aware of talk page etiquette and would not have reverted you but for the fact that you closed the discussion on the talk page which was following immediately after i gave a link to this discussion on the talk page. You were closing not just your comments, but the comments of other editors, including myself, and you are very much an involved editor in this discussion. I still find it objectionable that you should close the discussion on the talk page which is related to this discussion which continues to take place here, given that you are very much an involved party. Soham321 (talk) 12:28, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
For what it's worth, I support collapsing everything from my "Cool!" exclamation at 12:18, 23 October 2016 (UTC) to this point, since it is not in keeping with the goal of this page.--CaroleHenson (talk) 16:56, 23 October 2016 (UTC) |
- OMG y'all, you're talking not about allegations but about responses to allegations. Why not include responses to those responses? An encyclopedic suggestion would be to leave out the responses. Pence's response or whatever isn't relevant to the allegations; it's only relevant to the campaign, so it doesn't even go in here--one could argue. Drmies (talk) 03:34, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Personally, i don't see a problem with adding responses to the responses, given the importance of the individual concerned. And in fact these are being added in the main article. See diff. Soham321 (talk) 07:28, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Once again tonight, I am confused. I'm not sure how adding that posting diff bolsters your point. For one thing, there was a discussion recently about adding content about what might happen. And, I'm not seeing how this is an adequate response to a good scope question. It almost seems as if referral to this kind of reaction bolsters Drmies point about the scope of the article content.--CaroleHenson (talk) 08:00, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- You make some good points, Drmies, and I'm afraid it might get lost here. This relates to some of TFD's comments at the bottom of the Arbitrary break 1 section. What do you think about moving your question there?--CaroleHenson (talk) 07:13, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- My question was really rhetorical. Drmies (talk) 17:43, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Finding the content mix is a balancing act. My apologizes to Soham321. I should have let you speak for yourself, Drmies.--CaroleHenson (talk) 18:04, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
Arbitrary break 1
One of my NPOV concerns is the section titled Allegations of pageant dressing room visits. The section doesn't explain how these "dressing room visits" are considered sexual misconduct, which is the topic of this article. None of the people mentioned in that section allege sexual misconduct, sexual assault, sexual harassment or even anything of a sexual nature. In fact, one of the sources used in that section explicitly states that: none accused Trump of saying anything sexually explicit or of making physical contact in the dressing room. Seems like we are trying to imply that something of a sexual nature happened during these "dressing room visits" without identifying what the actual sexual misconduct was. If the former contestants themselves aren't saying it was sexual misconduct, then why are giving so much weight to these allegations in the article. None of the sources used in that section allege that Trump engaged in sexual misconduct during these dressing room visits. If this section is to remain, then we need to explain to the reader, via reliable sources, how these allegations of pageant dressing room visits constitute sexual misconduct.-- Isaidnoway (talk) 17:07, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- It wasn't sexual misconduct in a literal sense, but the media seems to agree that it was a completely improper thing to do. Therefore it has a place in the article. If you can propose a title that is not too long and better encompasses the subject matter, please do. ―Mandruss ☎ 17:12, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Has anyone besides me noticed that this has been nothing but an extension of article talk? Is anything being done here that can't be done there? ―Mandruss ☎ 17:19, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- The dressing room visits are considered sexually hostile work environment under the law. I am a former retired CEO of several companies and have had to deal with sexual harassment issues with employees for many years. They are sexual misconduct per se under the law. His visits to the dressing rooms are stalking and sexual harassment. Octoberwoodland (talk) 18:26, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Do we have any reliable sources that describe or consider these dressing room visits as a "sexually hostile work environment under the law" or "stalking" or "sexual harassment" or "sexual misconduct"? Have any former contestants described these dressing room visits as sexual misconduct or stalking or sexual harassment or a sexually hostile work environment? If not, then why are we implying that these dressing room visits fall under the topic of sexual misconduct without any reliable sources or contestants making that specific assertion. Just because the media seems to agree that it was a completely improper thing to do, doesn't mean WP should take that opinion of it being improper and imply that these dressing room visits constitute sexual misconduct. That doesn't appear to be neutral.-- Isaidnoway (talk) 18:54, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Many of the sources are explicit about claiming Trumps conduct is sexual harassment. Sexually Hostile Work environment is a form of sexual harassment. You need to go and read up on sexual harassment because from what I can tell, most of the folks editing around the dressing room allegations don't understand that. Octoberwoodland (talk) 19:35, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Hi, I would think that there has to be sources that are abel to make some sort of sexual harassment or other claim. I am not sure that sexually hostile workplace is the right fit. Here's a thought: check out the Department of Justice definitions - it's one of the sources in the article and see what that says and check for how this type of behavior is categorized. I think that I read that it's a step in the evolutionary process of many people who end up sexually assaulting. I mean to be peeping toms. There has to be something if the girls are as young as 15. I am happy to do some researching.--CaroleHenson (talk) 19:02, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- The sexual crime that seems to apply is Voyeurism#Criminology, or "noncontact sex-related crimes, per the This Department of Justice doc p. 3.. Voyeurism is defined as a criminal act and sexual abuse. It appears that there are varying state laws for this. It seems federal laws, too. Oh, there was a lawyer on earlier, right? We could use him or her.
- Hi, I would think that there has to be sources that are abel to make some sort of sexual harassment or other claim. I am not sure that sexually hostile workplace is the right fit. Here's a thought: check out the Department of Justice definitions - it's one of the sources in the article and see what that says and check for how this type of behavior is categorized. I think that I read that it's a step in the evolutionary process of many people who end up sexually assaulting. I mean to be peeping toms. There has to be something if the girls are as young as 15. I am happy to do some researching.--CaroleHenson (talk) 19:02, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Many of the sources are explicit about claiming Trumps conduct is sexual harassment. Sexually Hostile Work environment is a form of sexual harassment. You need to go and read up on sexual harassment because from what I can tell, most of the folks editing around the dressing room allegations don't understand that. Octoberwoodland (talk) 19:35, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Do we have any reliable sources that describe or consider these dressing room visits as a "sexually hostile work environment under the law" or "stalking" or "sexual harassment" or "sexual misconduct"? Have any former contestants described these dressing room visits as sexual misconduct or stalking or sexual harassment or a sexually hostile work environment? If not, then why are we implying that these dressing room visits fall under the topic of sexual misconduct without any reliable sources or contestants making that specific assertion. Just because the media seems to agree that it was a completely improper thing to do, doesn't mean WP should take that opinion of it being improper and imply that these dressing room visits constitute sexual misconduct. That doesn't appear to be neutral.-- Isaidnoway (talk) 18:54, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- The dressing room visits are considered sexually hostile work environment under the law. I am a former retired CEO of several companies and have had to deal with sexual harassment issues with employees for many years. They are sexual misconduct per se under the law. His visits to the dressing rooms are stalking and sexual harassment. Octoberwoodland (talk) 18:26, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- I will research for reliable sources that address Isaidnoway's question.--CaroleHenson (talk) 19:39, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Because Trump owned the beauty pageant at the time, his conduct falls under the civil statutes of sexual harassment and hostile work environment. From a criminal perspective, his conduct could easily fit in the category of stalking and other laws which vary by state dealing with peeping and invasion of privacy. Octoberwoodland (talk) 19:44, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, thank you for that. Yes, so that ties into the article link I provided and the Department of Justice document.
- Would it be helpful for me to research for reliable sources that describe the dressing room acts as criminal acts? — Preceding unsigned comment added by CaroleHenson (talk • contribs) 19:49, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
As I said earlier, there is no reason that we can't make the title fit the content rather than the other way around. Also I generally oppose overthinking in article titles. It's exceedingly difficult to embody complex sets of content in so few words. The more precise you make a title, the more important precision becomes in that title, and this can become an endless feedback loop. I expect readers to read at least the lead—not arrive, read the title, and leave, believing they are now informed about the issue. We should do the best we can with a title but not obsess over it. ―Mandruss ☎ 21:41, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
I haven't studied WP:TITLE in detail, but I just browsed its WP:CRITERIA and I don't see anything that says we have to do this kind of thinking. And we've seen that it's a bad idea to invent neutrality rules that are not in policy. Is there something in WP:NPOV that says we have to think like this? Another general opinion, this job is hard enough without our making it harder. ―Mandruss ☎ 21:50, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
I'm not sure how many people saw Eppstein decline the review request, as he for some reason put it in the collapsed off-topic above. "Sorry, I think I am too biased wrt Trump to be a good reviewer. I have tried to limit my contributions to this article to BLP issues involving other people than Trump." (As if anybody who cares a whit about political articles could have a neutral opinion about Trump!) Back to square one on neutrality. I wouldn't know where to otherwise request such a review if not right here on the neutrality noticeboard. Consistent with my experience, this noticeboard discussion, which is supposed to get attention and input from editors more experienced in neutrality, is an extension of article talk. And it will end up in the wrong archive. ―Mandruss ☎ 22:33, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Is there a way that we could find someone from Canada, Australia or the UK?--CaroleHenson (talk) 00:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Or perhaps Mars? It seems that everyone has an opinion regarding Trump, and it's not a very good one, unfortunately. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 04:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- I am Canadian. I do not think this will solve anything. Most other Canadians I have spoken to about Trump are not neutral on the subject. Ditto Europeans, although I know fewer of those Elinruby (talk) 05:26, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Unless you are quite right-wing (UKipper or French NF) the European perspective is generally going to be 'what a clown, how the hell do you guys let him be in the position where he could be president' while throwing its hands up and leaving the US to it. Only in death does duty end (talk) 08:56, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- I am Canadian. I do not think this will solve anything. Most other Canadians I have spoken to about Trump are not neutral on the subject. Ditto Europeans, although I know fewer of those Elinruby (talk) 05:26, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Or perhaps Mars? It seems that everyone has an opinion regarding Trump, and it's not a very good one, unfortunately. - Jack Sebastian (talk) 04:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
Comment: In which i describe some inaccuracies in the main article under consideration: Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations - Donald Trump's response - NPOV related issues In view of these inaccuracies, the entire article needs to be scrutinized carefully for similar inaccuracies. Soham321 (talk) 05:46, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Soham321, based on our discussions, I hope you don't mind that I formatted a url.--CaroleHenson (talk) 23:39, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- I am not seeing that there are some inaccuracies in the main article from that discussion -- but it does look as if you are concerned about content that is not added, which seems mostly to be about inclusion of Trump's claims, theories, and derogatory statements made by Trump about the accusers. That link is a good place to go, though, to see the discussion about your points.--23:51, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Soham321, based on our discussions, I hope you don't mind that I formatted a url.--CaroleHenson (talk) 23:39, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Actually, it appears that many of the involved editors are non-American, including myself.--Jack Upland (talk) 07:38, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Okay, there have been very good points that whether someone is an American or not does not necessary mean that they don't have a clear opinion.
- That's actually really good to know, Jack Upland. I wonder if we should find someone that hasn't been working on the article? Perhaps others can way in on that.
- How about the Misplaced Pages:Arbitration Committee or Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Politics/American politics, being that my name is mentioned in the initial posting I won't ask around, but maybe someone else could ask at one of these places - or somewhere else that might be a good place to find a viable reviewer? Do you have any ideas, Soham321 or Mandruss, of where we might find a reviewer so that we can move this along?--CaroleHenson (talk) 01:07, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Pretty much everyone commenting on the case in reliable sources has a viewpoint. Editors are supposed to report them according to the degree of acceptance they have, which does not necessarily mean providing greater weight to neutral commentators. And Michelle Obama is not neutral. Her husband is the Democratic president who says that Clinton will maintain his legacy, while Trump will destroy it. Don't forget too that Michelle Obama's speaking fees (and her husband's) will be greater under Clinton. Incidentally most non-Americans overwhelmingly prefer Democratic presidents. The "We are the greatest country in the world and do not care about what the rest of the world thinks" messaage is always stronger among Republicans and alienates people outside the U.S. This election has been slightly different because Trump has suggested he would decrease hostility toward Russia and other U.S. rivals. TFD (talk) 04:02, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
Neutrality banner and list of sources
There have been a lot of comments about the list of reliable sources on the DTsma - About the neutrality banner discussion —here—and other DTsma discussions.
At the About the neutrality banner discussion, I have explored 1) Guardian and the list of sources, 2) Daily Beast, and 3) Jezebel, each in their own subsections.
I have also I posted a question at the RSN - Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations - List of sources and discussed the list of sources use - and how that has caused problems.
- The questions are: Is there any reason why we should not be using RSN as a resource to determine whether sources are reliable? Is it inappropriate to find replacement sources based upon RSN postings?
I posted this here, because there has been so much talk about this, and seems to be a major part of the NPOV claim.--CaroleHenson (talk) 23:36, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- The response at the RSN is that BLPN is the right place to go with this issue. This is the posted request.--CaroleHenson (talk) 06:14, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
Content disputes related to election elsewhere
I've been following parts of this conversation, and would like to ask if editors would consider giving feedback on another article where the election and surrounding debates have an impact on editing there. At 2016 Democratic National Committee email leak, there has been a great deal of controversy over what to include, what not to include, and how to give different aspects of the story prominence. One example is the issue of possible Russian involvement, and where that material should go in the article. Should it precede a description of the leak timeline and contents? Should it follow?
The reason I'd like input is that it's hard to fail to notice that the decision about where to place the material is one that both the Trump and Clinton campaigns are battling over every day.
Is this a good place for comment? What about an RfC? @Mandruss: while we've disagreed in the past, I've appreciated your strict dedication to BLP issues, and would welcome your opinion. I saw you formulated an RfC recently for a pretty complicated topic (which I don't feel qualified to weigh in on). Input from all appreciated. -Darouet (talk) 00:53, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Darouet: I'm really not that strong on things like
what to include, what not to include, and how to give different aspects of the story prominence
. I can't seem to get my head around things like that. This is probably because I have an attention problem that prevents me from reading and absorbing large amounts of source material.
In my experience RfC is the only way to break an impasse in open discussion, and they can be wastes of time if the question is not well formulated. E.g., an RfC shouldn't ask only, "How should the article treat balancing aspects?" - that is probably too vague to produce a consensus discernible by the closer. You would have to nail down a group of options, such as in that Jane Doe RfC. If you decided to go to RfC, I might be able to give some useful input on it; just hit me up on my talk page. I and two others worked on that RfC in a sandbox before copying-and-pasting to the article talk page. ―Mandruss ☎ 02:58, 26 October 2016 (UTC)- @Mandruss: I appreciate the advice, and will run text by you before proposing RfC, if I do that. -Darouet (talk) 03:54, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
Misophonia ... need help with NPOV
Dear editors, the Misophonia article needs help in regard to NPOV.
I have misophonia. I suffer from it. It has affected my life since childhood but i didn't know what it was, just thought i had a weird shameful problem. Only recently, like a lot of people who also have the condition, i heard that there is in fact a specific condition with those very specific symptoms, and found some relief in this, knowing that it seems to actually be a psychological condition. I have no other unusual psychological conditions or disorders of which i know. Otherwise i'm a fully functioning adult in the world. But i've always had serious problems with chewing sounds and a few other very specific sounds. It's driven me to distraction and i sometimes have an involuntary feeling of rage against the sound or its origin. I've learned to cope with it by many strategies. I never understood it, until i heard of the existence of misophonia and read papers like this one about the condition. Now at least i know something about it.
I found this article about a subject i know intimately, and have been learning more about through scientific literature. I made a few edits, along with a few other editors. The article seemed fairly decent.
Then, a single editor recently went there and made 27 edits in under an hour, nearly all significant cuts of the work of other editors, and said they were "removing advocacy" whereas the article was really based on WP:MEDRS sources reported fairly well. Look at the article's edit history. It's been heavily edited recently and very much transformed.
We are not seeming to be able to have good dialog about the topic. I've been trying on the talk page to figure out and resolve what the issues are. Apparently the editor doesn't think misophonia is a "condition" despite good sources calling it such, like the most recent review article on the subject by Cavanna and Seri 2015.
I've tried at length to discuss this in a reasonable way on the talk page Talk:Misophonia especially here and yet seem to be hitting a wall.
I've tried to place a POV tag on the article twice and got reverted promptly each time.
Anyway, the NPOV issues are subtle but real. There is a real difference between the lede simply saying:
Misophonia is condition in which negative emotions, thoughts, and physical reactions are triggered by specific sounds.
and what it says now:
Misophonia, literally "hatred of sound," was proposed in 2000 as a proposed disorder in which negative emotions, thoughts, and physical reactions are triggered by specific sounds.
There is a real difference between what it used to say a few days ago:
Misophonia can adversely affect ability to achieve life goals and to enjoy social situations.
and what it says now:
Proponents suggest misophonia can adversely affect ability to achieve life goals and to enjoy social situations.
In both cases, first simpler version is directly supportable by MEDRS sources -- review articles in the relevant field of science. But a particular editor does not want to allow the simple statements, but rather this arms-length it's-not-really-real sort of language of denialim. What is the article on global warming were written like that. "Global warming is a proposed hypothesis..." instead of following reliable sources consensus?
Imagine if the article on Autism said something like "Autism is a proposed disorder proposed in 1943 by Leo Kanner" instead of what it actually reads, "Autism is a neurodevelopmental disorder characterized by impaired social interaction, verbal and non-verbal communication, and restricted and repetitive behavior." Maybe there are issues with that lede sentence, but at least it speaks of autism as if it exists. Imagine if the article said "Those who believe it exists say that it affects their lives" instead of "It affects people's lives" as is obvious from reliable sources?
There are not as many sources on misophonia as on autism, as it's a less frequent and generally less life-affecting condition, but it's real and there are a good number of reliable sources on it. We need an article that reflects the reliable sources on the topic.
Please, we need some more eyes on this topic with a goal of neutral point of view as following reliable sources.
SageRad (talk) 11:20, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Autism is in the DSM and ICD, Misophonia is not. Only in death does duty end (talk) 11:22, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, i know this of course. That's a different question and the article reflected that accurately. Sometimes things take time with DSM and maybe it'll never be in there, but there are still multiple MEDRS sources that sy misphonia is a condition that exists, and describe it, and why should the article not follow this? That's the very essence of the best practice in Misplaced Pages. SageRad (talk) 11:37, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Its not a different question, its the core of the issue. Because they do not actually say 'it exists' like your autism example (which is a recognised condition). They say its something people clearly suffer from (have symptoms for) and have proposed a condition for it, but that was 16 years ago and in that time it has yet to be proven it exists, can be reliably defined etc or that the symptoms are not related to other conditions. Only in death does duty end (talk) 12:02, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- But, there are multiple reliable sources within psychological science. The DSM is not the only source. Please understand that. SageRad (talk) 00:13, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- the double use of "proposed" is simply a mistake, unkindly repeated here. There is no "agenda" but rather following the MEDRS sources which are clear that the condition may not be a self-contained "thing" - the field is uncertain. I've copied the three bits from three most recent MEDRS sources twice now for the OP, who is ignoring them:
- Bruxler (PMID 26508801) handles this in an interesting way. He says "Misophonia is a symptom associated with obsessive-compulsive disorder and anxiety disorders and may be a syndrome in itself associated with significant distress and avoidance."
- Cavanna 2015 (PMID 26316758 PMC 4547634 )is even more careful. "Jastreboff et al first reported original clinical observations of subjects complaining of decreased sound tolerance with or without tinnitus. Interestingly, classic descriptions of hyperacusis (as characterized in patients who respond consistently to sounds above a certain intensity and whose reactions can be correlated with the physical parameters of the sound) did not fit majority of the reported cases. The authors therefore proposed misophonia as a new medical entity and defined misophonia as present when an abnormally strong reaction occurs to a sound with a specific pattern and/or meaning to an individual, with the context in which sound is presented frequently playing a role as well."
- Duddy 2014 (here) goes though an analysis of what it may be and what it isn't, and then summarizes (so that she has a working definition) "The definition of misophonia for purposes of this article is an abnormally strong reaction to certain sounds"
- NPOV says we reflect what reliable sources say and there is very clear uncertainty in the sources. The OP seems to confusing questions about whether this is a definable condition on its own, and questions over whether people experience these symptoms. There is doubt that it is a condition; there is no doubt that people experience these symptoms. The question is how to consider those symptoms. Jytdog (talk) 16:19, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Dear SageRad First, my apologies for your ailment. Despite the unfeeling approach of certain editors that seem to only wish to write a well-sourced article, it must be a struggling existence to live with these symptoms. That being said, I went to the article before reading any argument or debate with fresh eyes. What I came away with was a very negative slanted belief that this "condition" was not to be believed and was not proven - and that those suffering from these symptoms were seen with unsympathetic editorial contributions.
- In the lede, the second sentence states: "Misophonia has no classification as an auditory, neurological, or psychiatric condition, there are no standard diagnostic criteria, it is not recognized in the DSM-IV or the ICD-10, and there is little research on its prevalence or treatment." This is good WP article writing? To me it smacked of personal agenda right out of the gate. IMHO.
- Third sentence: "Proponents suggest misophonia can adversely affect ability to achieve life goals and to enjoy social situations." Advocates "suggest"? and then further paint those suffering in a negative removal from life light. This is all that advocates can state in this entire article?
- Classification Ok. We get it. So where is the other side? The "but current research shows ... " There was a time when Fibromyalgia was unclassified, not diagnosed, not believed, but in time, with research, it is now a medical condition. I think certain editors get too caught up in the "up until now" rather than in the on-going progress statistics in building a good article to even out the neutrality.
- Signs and Symptoms "As of 2016 the literature on misophonia was very limited." Come on. "Some small studies show ..." Subjective. "These sounds are apparently...", "People with misophonia are aware they experience it and that it is not normal ..." negative choice for inclusion once again.
- Society and culture "The press has sometimes overemphasized the strength of misophonic reactions" Out of that entire article, which had wonderfully positive, supportive quotes, this is the one single quote an editor chooses?
Over all, I walked away with not one point-counter point, or feeling that this was not agenda driven. I can't imagine someone else stumbling across this article for the first time (without invested time in editing it), who would not feel the same way towards its subject. The phrasing and wording is in desperate need of editing by a separate party not listed on the history page and not associated with the subject. With all due respect. Maineartists (talk) 17:23, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- I tend to agree with the above, that while this is a condition that is not classified under any of the medical systems listed, to treat it as if it doesn't exist is problematic. "Misophonia has no classification as an auditory, neurological, or psychiatric condition, there are no standard diagnostic criteria, it is not recognized in the DSM-IV or the ICD-10, and there is little research on its prevalence or treatment." is bad. It could be worded. "Misophonia, first documented in 2000, has limited research to determine its prevalence or treatment, and it is currently not classified as an auditory, neurological, or psychiatric condition within DSM-IV or ICD-10." Saying the same thing, but putting the fact that this is sufficiently recent that we may not known enough about it to say if it does exist or not. (I don't see anything in the article that proves out "nope, this is a psychosomatic condition and not a real condition". We do need to be careful to not impress that it is a established medical condition, but not to act like it has been proven outright to not exist. --MASEM (t) 17:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
So, there are some fundamental misunderstandings expressed here, not in the least from those who intend to help. Comparisons to autism or fibromyalgia are irrelevant, because they are currently accepted diseases. However, if Misplaced Pages were written before that we would not have claimed they were accepted, because that is to engage in WP:CRYSTALBALL. And to Masem I can only say: where did you get the idea that psychosomatic conditions aren't real, or that anyone is of that mind? Without going into the politics of nosology and overmedicalization — it suffices to say: it is questionable because it isn't accepted, not because it is psychosomatic.
Carl Fredrik 💌 📧 22:02, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- I will say here what I said on Misophnia Talk Page: : CFCF your lack of WP:ETIQ, excessive editing warring, and WP:POINT is leaning toward a warrant of admin warning. Your comment to Masem was uncalled for: similar to your many comments left in your rv edits on ] i.e. "Plain English in the lede!" I highly recommend that you take an editorial hiatus from the topic article for a while. In all best interest. Maineartists (talk) 22:20, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- You accuse me of having a COI without a smidgen of evidence, tell me that I'm edit-warring with people I haven't been in conflict with at all, and say that my insistence on using plain language in the lede is a breach of etiquette? And then you have the stomach to tell me that I should take an editorial hiatus? I suggest you reevaluate your position before it is disregarded entirely. Carl Fredrik 💌 📧 22:33, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- From what I can see of the sources, it does not appear to be the case that Misphonia is fully discredited/not accepted, but also far from being readily accepted either. There is certainly doubt from experts this is a "new" symptom, and there's a several lack of necessary studies to support a conclusion in any direction. To that end, the language in the present article has the tone "This doesn't exist", which doesn't seem to reflect the state that the sources give, which is the issue that I see at the end of the day. We can't write this to act that it does exist (since sources are far from this stance), obviously and I can understand the concerns others have to push the article in that direction. --MASEM (t) 00:37, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
Yeah the "sides" thing is weird. We follow the sources, and per MEDRS sources it is clear that a) putting these symptoms into a bucket called "misophonia" was proposed 16 years ago; and b) doing that has not been widely adopted or integrated into any diagnostic scheme. Look at the three quotations above, for pete's sake. Again nobody is denying the symptoms exist... it is just that the MEDRS sources are clear that this bucket called "misophonia" is a valid thing. There isn't even a big debate about it. All three sources just go - "yep, it was proposed and pretty much everything about this is uncertain" To put a stake in the ground, compare Morgellons which is a condition that definitely does not exist but that some people passionately believe they have. Misophonia is not that far over on the scale of nonexistent-to-existent, but misophonia is closer to the nonexistent pole than say breast cancer, which definitely exists.- Something like chronic lyme disease might be a more useful parallel (although very much not in some ways - mainstream medicine denies that longterm B. burgdorferi is a real thing but some doctors passionately believe in it and give very dangerous treatments (long term antibiotics delivered through a central line... which has a high risk of infections from the central line, which that have killed people).. and there is high profile public controversy)... but misophonia is similar in being a proposed diagnostic category that has attracted some people who believe this names what is going on with them and want it addressed. Just in that regard. I am just trying to show that diseases/conditions get proposed that are not necessarily valid and that the scientific problem gets tangled up with advocacy.
- And again, for misophonia -- it was proposed 16 years ago and has not really gone anywhere scientifically and remains in limbo.
WP cannot become a vehicle for advocacy to try to push it one way or other. Our role is not to be "encouraging" or "discouraging" to anybody, and anybody applying that metric is doing something we are NOT up to here in WP. Jytdog (talk) 22:22, 24 October 2016 (UTC)(restated below Jytdog (talk) 22:58, 24 October 2016 (UTC))
- CFCF Your response says it all. With kind regards. PS I still think you owe Masem an apology. Maineartists (talk) 22:50, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah the "sides" thing is weird. We follow the sources, and per MEDRS sources it is clear that a) putting these symptoms into a bucket called "misophonia" was proposed 16 years ago; and b) doing that has not been widely adopted or integrated into any diagnostic scheme. Look at the three quotations above, for pete's sake. Again nobody is denying the symptoms exist... it is just that the MEDRS sources are clear that this bucket called "misophonia" might not be a valid thing; it is uncertain. There isn't even a big debate about it. All three sources just go - "yep, it was proposed and pretty much everything about this is uncertain" The Bruxler article is really great and I encourage folks to read it. It was written by a doctor, recently, who stumbled over this and went and read the literature and produced a review. Fresh eyes.
- To provide context, compare Morgellons which is a condition that definitely does not exist but that some people passionately believe they have. Misophonia is not that far over on the scale of nonexistent-to-existent, but misophonia is closer to the nonexistent pole than say breast cancer, which definitely exists. It might even be better to say it floats above the continuum - proposed but not accepted or fully rejected. It is... uncertain.
- In my work on this topic, it has become clear to me that there are people who experience strong reactions to soft sounds, and yet other people who are very sympathetic to them and try to get attention and money to study this and help people who have strong reactions to soft sounds. People who have the reactions, have come to the article and tried to add all kinds of poorly sourced stuff about it, and bizarrely, the studiers and helpers have abused our WP article to promote their own work and/or denigrate others, again using poor sources. With regard to that latter group (the studiers and helpers) this was obvious from their editing, and they have admitted as much on their own talk pages when I asked them.
- If you study the article history carefully, as I did when I first came across it last February, this will also become very clear to you. I urge anybody who wants to get involved in this article, to do as I did.
- There is a dearth of decent sources about all that, which is why the article doesn't say much about it. (unlike the Mogellons article, which is entirely "society and culture" stuff, based on good sources.) There aren't even many high quality nonMEDRS sources we can use for the "Society and Culture" part of the misophonia article... and opening the misophonia article to poor quality sources just invites all the nonsense I described above back in, and that would be very unwise - impossible to referee. We need to keep source quality high in light of the advocacy. If anybody finds more high quality sources, content based on them will be great to add. The article is minimal because there is not that much that can be said about "misophonia" based on high quality sources.
- WP cannot become a vehicle for advocacy to try to push this one way or other. Our role is not to be "encouraging" or "discouraging" to anybody, and anybody applying that metric is doing something we are NOT up to here in WP. Jytdog (talk) 22:54, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
I am very very thankful to those people above who actually heard what i'm saying and also looked at the article with fresh eyes. Thank you.
I also see quite plainly what Jytdog believes about the condition in the above statement. That's ok. It's quite an odd way to see the article, to see conspiracy of misophonia researchers trying to get funding and to take over the article, but perhaps most are simply people like me -- people who edit Misplaced Pages and have an interest because they or a friend seem to have this condition. Not everyone needs to think it's real, just like not everyone needs to think racism exists, but people who are not in line with the bulk of reliable sources are not supposed to dominate an article. Reliable sources, in a WP:DUE fashion, are supposed to. NPOV and RS policies are critical.
Thanks so much. Just know that misophonia is not Morgellons. I've read about that, and it's a quite different thing. It's a form of hallucination apparently, or delusion. On the other hand, misophonia is a directly triggered involuntary emotional response, not anything like a delusion. These mind things can be "real" at the same time as "not real" in other senses. There is also trypophobia -- fear of patterned holes. This seems to be a real thing as well. The human mind is quite complex, of course, and there are many aspects where a slight difference from the typical mind makes a "glitchy" response that is often livable, sometimes even enjoyable, and sometimes a real pain.
Perhaps it's neurological. Perhaps it's cultural. Perhaps it's a product of a certain neurological disposition with cultural and life-history factors. That is not known to medical science. The article should reflect this. But it has been recognized as a condition by medical science.
I'm grateful for the eyes and minds of everyone here who has expressed themselves with kindness and civility, even those with whom i may not see the world identically. SageRad (talk) 00:29, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Editing Misplaced Pages has nothing to do with what you or I or anyone believes. Nothing. And I never said that misophonia = morgellons. Not even close. Just argh. The Trypophobia article is a kind of interesting parallel. Not really a phobia, rather a revulsion. Interestingly parallel. Why do you find that article so much better? Jytdog (talk) 03:49, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
Malleus Maleficarum
This page is in clear violation of the rule of Neutral Point of View and thus Manual of Style. User Asterixf2 (talk), presumably of WikiProject Feminism, has made over 230 edits to this page under the guise of "major expansion," when it was really an ocean of bias and biased sources. On no less than four occasions, the topic of bias has been brought up on the talk page and promptly refused or ignored.
In addition, though I (Vami_IV) have thus far warranted it unnessacery to do to apply to the Edit Warring noticeboard, Asterixf2 has on at least occasion reverted thousands of bytes of constructive material, most notably added by Ryn78, complete with more credible sources no less. I feel insulted that I have to do this, but it is obvious to me that this editor is not editing in good faith. It is, however, funny to me that Asterixf2 has done this while informing others that he has reverted their edits, telling them not to do it again, and then cites "Misplaced Pages is not censorship.
References
Citations
- The summary openly declares the book "misogynistic"
- Talk:Malleus Maleficarum#On Bias
- Talk:Malleus Maleficarum#Removed External Link
- Talk:Malleus Maleficarum#Recent attempts to undo the longstanding consensus
- Talk:Malleus Maleficarum#Changes, comparison
- Talk:Malleus Maleficarum#Request for proper sourcing of Behringer, Wolfgang. "Malleus Maleficarum"
- User talk:Ryn78#Malleus Maleficarum
Notes
- And this is only from a Ctrl+F search of the talk page for the word "Bias." I have not invested time into fully reading the talk page
Discussion
- WikiProject Feminism wasn't involved. --Asterixf2 (talk) 12:52, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- This section was added by User:Vami IV and not signed . It was created immediately after I have filed to ANI a related case . --Asterixf2 (talk) 12:57, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- I have added 7th citation. :) Apparently 6 is not enough to be convincing. --Asterixf2 (talk) 13:16, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
- I too have cited sources. At the time, I was unable to sign because of time constraints. Class had began and it was highly imperative that I departed the computer I was using ASAP. I would also like to say that I had no idea there was an ANI claim filed as I had just arrived at the school, saw Asterixf2 was up to his old tricks again, and filed this complaint. --Vami IV (talk) 15:08, 27 October 2016 (UTC) Dues Vult!
- PS. link to previous revision (current was changed by reintroduction of the content that has been previously discussed). Therefore the revision with the 7 citiations I was talking about and the one that was current at the time of this complaint is here: Malleus Maleficarum, previous revision with last edit by Asterixf2