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==''Kitty Hawk'', alternate or original name?== | |||
== First flying machine == | |||
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This image, used on the page, includes a note from Orville Wright which indicates that he is calling the plane ''Kitty Hawk''. It is clickable for a larger image. Was ''Kitty Hawk'' the name that the Wright's used for this plane and, if so, did they also name it, then or later, the ''Wright Flyer'' or was that a name used by others? , evidence that the plane was called the ''Kitty Hawk''. Seems enough to include it as an alternate name, but is there information that it should be the official name with ''Wright Flyer'' being the common name? The Smithsonian , but Orville's note doesn't include the word 'Flyer'. Thanks. ] (]) 00:27, 20 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The "Here is an article..." link above has a photo with the "Kitty Hawk" name displayed, would that be copyable for the page? ] (]) 20:29, 29 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
::The two photos (this page, and the truck with big sign in the wright.edu article) would be considered primary sources. But they seem to provide some support for applying the name "Kitty Hawk" to the plane. As a more general comment, I think the first sentence of any article should avoid, as much as possible, including a variety of different names (and pronunciations and linguistic versions) for the topic. I prefer that such additional identifiers be put at the end of the opening paragraph. Policy/Guidelines support that idea--of not stuffing the lead sentence with such material, making it hard to read. ] (]) 02:10, 30 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Sounds like a good format. The Smithsonian reference seems like the key one we presently have for the ''Kitty Hawk'' name (and Orville's note seems the icing on the cake). ] (]) 02:20, 30 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::Agree, the airandspace.si.edu article is good secondary source. ] (]) 02:24, 30 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::Looking again at the initial naming sentence (which I've edited for brevity) its placement seems fine as it contains no pronunciation and is brief enough not to confuse readers or their topic comprehension. It may actually read awkwardly moving those to the end of the first paragraph, and could inhibit reading flow from the first to the second paragraph. What wording are you envisioning, maybe I'm missing it and you have a good sentence in mind. Thanks. ] (]) 12:09, 30 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::Well, I just wanted to state my preference as a general principle. I envisioned simply moving all the secondary names to the paragraph end, beginning: "The airplane is also known as...." I almost did, but decided I can live with its present form. Those kinds of ledes are a pet peeve, and I always worry a little that another editor coming along will see the multiple names up front and decide to add another, and pretty soon the lede becomes a big speed bump right at the start of the article. Several Policies/Guidelines urge not stuffing a lede sentence with multiple names, pronouncers, etc., and as a reader of the encyclopedia myself, I couldn't agree more. On a great many articles, however, those recommendations are honored in the breach. Here is one that was so bad as to be laughable: ] (]) 02:19, 31 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::sol (smiling out loud and almost lol) at that . I've had the same reaction to many other articles which overrun the first sentence with similar, but no doubt not as extreme, examples as that one. After reading that one, and thanks for pointing it out, I may use it on my talk page intro, the first sentence here seems like a walk in the park and doesn't seem like it would hinder the word flow for too many readers. ] (]) 03:27, 31 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
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'''THANK YOU''', ], for highlighting this issue. And for these initial steps you've taken to correct the situation. | |||
Any child who grew up as an avid builder of plastic model airplane kits knows very well that this most famous airplane is called the ''"Kitty Hawk"''. That's because this was clearly the name on the box: | |||
The controversy about the ] already has its own article, and need not be attacked in this article. The part about 14-bis is already found in the article on the ], so in the interest of avoiding redundancy, I have removed that section in this page. I think it would be appropriate to move the part about 14-bis into the article about the ]. ] 21:10, 3 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
These ubiquitous kits, available all across the USA, spanned from the 1950s through the 1990s at a minimum. | |||
*Agreed. However, a reference to the 'first flying machines' article would be a good idea to make it clear where such discussion should go. I've added it.] 12:42, 2 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
And here is the motherload reference for the Wright Brothers' 1903 airplane being named the ''"Kitty Hawk"'': | |||
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This 'Wright 1903 Flyer "Operation Homecoming" Scrapbook' from the Smithsonian Institute has '''well over one hundred instances''' of this airplane being called the ''"Kitty Hawk"''. Furthermore, that is the name which is ''used exclusively'' throughout this document (with three rare exceptions cited below). Here are particular pages of note: | |||
An anonymous editor added the following to the opening. It is clearly NPOV, and I have reverted it: | |||
:- p41,p45,p73,p221 of254: airplane referred to as "Kitty", for short, along with the commonly used name "Kitty Hawk". | |||
:- PDF p29,p47-57,p81 of254: airplane referred to as "Kittyhawk" (with no space), along with the commonly used name "Kitty Hawk". | |||
:- PDF p41,p67 of254: "Kitty Hawk Day" proclamation. | |||
:- PDF p43 of254: US NAVY OFFICIAL MEMO & PLAN, airplane referred to as "Kitty Hawk" x2 in Memo, x1 in Plan, signed by XO of USS Palau. | |||
Here are the rare exceptions to where the aircraft is referred to by any name other than the "Kitty Hawk" (or "Kitty", or "Kittyhawk"): | |||
:''Much of it is vacuous. Even the 1905 Flyer has serious flaws, but it flew, really flew and the Wrights were there first, building a meticulous, systematic, thoughtful, creative, and persistent program to spectacular and unprecedented success.'' | |||
:- PDF p71 of254: airplane "...known as both the "Flyer" and the "Kitty Hawk"." (newspaper: Paterson Evening News, Paterson, NJ). | |||
:- PDF p87 of254: "...Orville sought to have the 'Flyer' (as they called me)...", Magazine article, Current Science and Aviation. | |||
:- PDF p109 of254: "...the Wright Brothers' "Flyer" is...", (along with calling it the "Kitty Hawk", newspaper: The Knickerbocker News, Albany, NY). | |||
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The same editor also added this. It brings up some good points, but it needs reworking: | |||
This speech transcript is what I consider to be the STRONGEST reference: | |||
:- PDF p173 of254: Hap Arnold's message at the Smithsonian presentation event, Dec 17, 1948, "...this priceless airplane, the "Kitty Hawk", is back home...", "...I can never think of the "Kitty Hawk" without being aware of...", "...which the "Kitty Hawk" fathered...". | |||
Hap Arnold knew the Wright Brothers personally. One of the "Early Birds", he was taught to fly by them at their school. He was the only 5-star general of the US Air Force, along with being the winner of the first Mackay Trophy, and being a founder of Pan Am and Project RAND. | |||
''Every flight of the aircraft on December 14 and 17 -- under mildly insane conditions on the 17th -- ended in a forced landing (two on one flight when it bounced) or a crash. Also, turns were not demonstrated. In 1904, the Wrights found they needed redesign and new techniques to fly successfully, achieving these goals at the end of the 1904 program and even more decisively in 1905. The 1903 Flyer was a magnificent test vehicle, but its mythical status has obscured its proper place in the incredible developmental program leading to the Wrights mastery of flight in 1905.'' | |||
And then of course there is ] of the Smithsonian who oversaw Operation Homecoming. Garber was one of the foremost historians on the pioneers of flight. He personally accompanied the aircraft during its legs from Nova Scotia to Washington DC. He had approval authority over these aspects of the entire mission, to include the name by which the airplane was referred to. | |||
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This Smithsonian reference includes examples from many various newspapers which referred to this airplane exclusively as the "Kitty Hawk", including <u>The New York Times, The New York Sun, The Los Angeles Times, San Francisco Chronicle, Washington Daily News, Pittsburgh Post-Gazette</u>, along with newspapers in <u>Paterson, NJ, Dayton, OH, Omaha, NE, Scranton, PA, Albany, NY, Buffalo, NY, Nova Scotia, and Wellington, NZ</u>. | |||
Upon examination of the plethora of sources contained within this Smithsonian scrapbook, it indicates quite clearly that the '''PRIMARY NAME''' for this famous airplane is the ''"Kitty Hawk"''. And this was my first thought when I first happened across this article, many years ago: "I wonder why they aren't calling this plane the ''"Kitty Hawk"''. --] (]) 02:13, 10 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
Orville and Wilbur weren't licensed pilots, couldn't that have contributed a great deal to the high crash rate in the beginning? -Me | |||
:Thanks Wright Stuf for your detailed research and analysis. Nice work. I enjoyed the link to decades of the scale model planes, all named ''Kitty Hawk''. You've shown that there is a case for ''Kitty Hawk'' as primary name, and it would be an interesting RM (as ''Wright Flyer'' has probably become the common name). At a minimum your research shows that ''Kitty Hawk'' should remain as the main alternative. ] (]) 11:51, 10 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
::These were great documents to read. And here is another excellent reference: | |||
==Wrong Location== | |||
::: (NASA Publication SP-2002-4527, published Sep, 2002) | |||
The wright flyer is currenly on display it's own gallery, so the picture is wrong.... | |||
::On pg123 (pdf132of153) you can find a batch of even more examples where the airplane is referred to as the ''"Kitty Hawk"'': | |||
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:::- Kitty Hawk in Museum. ''Aviation Week'', Nov. 29, 1948, vol. 49, no. 22, p.15 | |||
:::- The Kitty Hawk Comes Home at Last, by Findley, Earl N., ''U.S. Air Services'', Dec. 1948, vol. 33, no. 12, pp. 5-6 | |||
:::- Kitty Hawk's Last Landing. ''Air Force'', Dec. 1948, vol. 31, no. 12, pp. 18-19 | |||
:::- America Welcomes the Kittyhawk. Some Extracts from the American Press on the Return of the Aeronautical Beau Geste. ''Pylon'', June 1949, vol. 8, no. 2, p. 21 | |||
::It's quite colorful to call this plane the "Aeronautical Beau Geste". That aside, <u>Aviation Week</u> and <u>Air Force Magazine</u> are not shabby references, as with the highly prestigious newspapers previously cited above, and of course the US Navy and US Air Force themselves, along with the Smithsonian, the folks who own, keep and maintain the ''Kitty Hawk''. --] (]) 16:59, 12 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
===Legacy section, in light of the name ''Kitty Hawk''=== | |||
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Given the understanding that this famous aircraft has been widely and commonly known as the ''"Kitty Hawk"'', it is important for this article to likewise include the legacy of things which followed that were also named "Kitty Hawk". This includes aircraft and spacecraft, ships (airplane/aircraft carriers), and schools. | |||
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What about this picture? ] 20:29, 4 December 2006 (UTC) | |||
<blockquote>(<u>These following blockquote paragraphs can be skipped as largely being an aside, separate from the Legacy section being recommended</u>.)<br>The aircraft naming story is particularly interesting. Aside from single aircraft being given the name "Kitty Hawk", there is the legacy naming of an entire aircraft type as the "Kittyhawk". Then there is the naming pattern observed within a particular aircraft corporation. Grumman, for example, is widely noted for using nicknames ending in "-cat". These are the Wildcat, Hellcat, Tigercat, Bearcat and Tomcat for the F4F, F6F, F7F, F8F and F-14 respectively. Continuing the "cat" theme, there was also the Grumman Panther, Cougar, Jaguar and Tiger. We can guess that when Grumman won the Lunar Module contract, there were strong arguments within the company to give this spacecraft a "-cat" name to continue this legacy. And when that didn't happen, there were 9 Apollo crews who flew these, with the commanders of Apollo 11, 12, 13, 14, 16 & 17 all having been Navy carrier pilots. In the case of Apollo 12 & 14, BOTH moonwalkers were Navy officers who had flown off of carriers. So any of these missions could have given their spaceships "-cat" callsigns. Neil Armstrong, Pete Conrad, Al Bean, Fred Haise, Alan Shepard, John Young and Gene Cernan all had flown Grumman "cats" off of carriers as their primary aircraft. The others (Lovell, Mitchell, etc) probably flew Grumman "cats" as a Navy test pilot. The best opportunity seems to have been Apollo 12, the All-Navy crew, with all three being Grumman "cat" veterans, with moonwalkers Conrad & Bean having flown the F9F Cougar operationally (VF-43 & VA-44 repectively), and the Command Module Pilot Dick Gordon having flown the F11F Tiger as a test pilot. | |||
that's a good replica of the 1909 Wright Military Flyer at the Air Force Museum Dayton Ohio. The real one has been in the Smithsonian since 1911. ] (]) 15:04, 29 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
But that didn't happen. I've never seen anyone refer to the LM as the ''Lunacat'', nor similar. These "Moon Sailors" never did that. And I've never heard this topic raised, nor any of the moonwalkers asked this directly. But Apollo 14 did name their Command Module the ''Kitty Hawk'' (made by North American Aviation, a company which curiously has the same initials as the "First Man", N.A.A.). In parallel with this entrenched history of Grumman "-cats", there is another aircraft company which has an extremely long history of using the "-hawk" nickname. Though I don't hear anyone discuss this one. The Wright Brothers started their own aircraft company. In later years, Wright Aeronautical merged with Curtiss to become Curtiss-Wright, a company which exists to this day, headquartered in North Carolina. You can visit their , and that page shows you the Wright Flyer. Click on that image, and it says this: | |||
==An absolute fact?== | |||
:"Curtiss-Wright Corporation ... has a long history with its roots dating back to Orville and Wilbur Wright's first flight in 1903, and Mr. Glenn Curtiss, the father of naval aviation. In 1929, the companies founded by these three great aviation pioneers, the Curtiss Aeroplane and Motor Company and Wright Aeronautical Corporation, merged to form the largest aircraft company at the time..." | |||
"It was the first successful powered, piloted, controlled heavier-than-air aircraft." | |||
Please give references for this statement, has the pope declared this as an absolute fact, or what is the basis for this statement, formed as an absolute fact? | |||
It is not the task of[REDACTED] to establish absolute truths. That statement needs a reference to an authority who says it is an absolute fact, or the sentence must be changed or stricken. According to whom? And where do you find anybody who can tell us what the absolute truth is? ] (]) 12:30, 23 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
So it is this company which produced the P-40 ''Kittyhawk''. Along with an entire line of "-hawk" aircraft, even predating the Wright merger. This includes the P-1, P-2, P-3, P-5, P-6, P-11, P-17, P-22, P-23, P-36 and AT-4 & AT-5 ...ALL named "Hawk". The P-40 is also known as the Warhawk and the Tomahawk. Various other Curtiss models were named the Seahawk, Sparrowhawk, Goshawk and Blackhawk. Then there was the Dayton-Wright XO-3 Mohawk . (Other companies have produced airplanes named the Skyhawk, Nighthawk, Jayhawk, and most recently the Red Hawk, along with the Hawkeye, and the more obscure Hawk Junior. Helo nicknames include the Black Hawk, Seahawk, Pave Hawk, Jayhawk and SpeedHawk. Pilotless aircraft have been named the Global Hawk, T-Hawk and SpyHawk.) | |||
Because nobody else corrected the sentence I did it myself. You are welcome change it to another reference, as long as it is not presented as an absolute truth without a reference to which institution you use to back up an absolute truth. ] (]) 15:45, 23 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
Now I am not aware of these Hawk-themed aircraft nicknames as being connected with the Wright Brothers, or was done in tribute to them (with the obvious exception being the ''Kittyhawk''). But I do see it to be important to have this mentioned here in the Talk page in case anyone were to find a reference where it is stated that there is some connection or tribute. If that were to be found, then it would be important to include that in the Legacy section. | |||
:Wow, you waited an hour and 15 minutes, and then added ''A lot of people think this''? The usual is to wait a few days at least, if not a week. That's not an encyclopedic statement btw, and I would have removed it even if I wasn't adding a source. The italics not below the first paragraph was actually sufficient to call into question the statement, though I have moved the link into the "See also" section, which is where such links usually go. I hope the stamet and link I have added meet with your apporval, but if not, I'd appreciate it if you would discuss it here first. - ] (]) 18:18, 23 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
One could even go so far as to identify commonality between these two different families of aircraft nicknames, both the -cat and -hawk traditions. The name "Kitty Hawk" has connotations of both -cat and -hawk. And then there is likewise commonality in the launching mechanism used by the Wright brothers, as well as the Navy carrier jet aircraft from more than one company, the Tomcat, the Skyhawk, etc. These used what is commonly called a "cat launch", here with the term 'cat' being an abbreviation for 'catapult'. 'Cats' using 'cats'. But this peripheral connection goes far beyond the naming pattern topic. And this entire blockquote section can be set aside for current purposes.</blockquote> | |||
::I was quite amused by the list of "reportedly" items claiming that various others beat the Wright Brothers. If the evidence was there, there would be no need for "reportedly". The charge that it's necessary to maintain some kind of "myth" about the Wrights being first, due to the need of Americans to claim it, looks to be the opposite - that America-haters are desperate for something to take away the "Wright"-ful claim. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 22:06, 23 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
For the time being, the recommendation being proposed is to add a Legacy section where direct connections are clear. This includes the specific aircraft and spacecraft named the ''Kitty Hawk'', along with the ships, and even one school in Texas, where the students at Kitty Hawk Middle School in San Antonio are known as ''The Flyers''. This school is located on Kitty Hawk Rd. And this road is one mile from the Main Entrance at Randolph, Air Force Base, the famous pilot training base that was given the nickname ''"West Point of the Air"''. Another school, back at the ], is ], with their mascot being the ''Nighthawks'', yet another -hawk themed name. Across the street is First Flight Middle School, where they are the Seahawks, and also First Flight Elementary, the Flyers. All three of these schools are adjacent to the Wright Brothers Memorial, with statue of the airplane being even closer. | |||
:While I wouldn't have worded it quite so strongly in places, I concur with the sentiments. One hundred years from now, there will probably be people who claim that Americans weren't the first to land on the Moon (if they'll even admit Americans ever did in the first place), and some may even cite Jules Verne as proof! The fact of the matter is that their first flight and the developments that followed changed the world - even if they really weren't first, they were the ones that inspired all the others that follwed them, not these then-unknowns that are still unknown. - ] (]) 22:37, 23 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
Another excellent subsection for this would include mention of these '''''statues''''' of the ''Kitty Hawk'', like at Embry-Riddle in Daytona, Florida, , , etc. At least citing the most prominent ones. It seems to be a fitting complement to the Reproductions section. | |||
:::Regrettably, we already have our share of dim-witted Americans who don't believe their countrymen landed on the moon. ] (]) 04:20, 19 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
And there's also the "Kitty Hawk Air Society" of the US Air Force Junior ROTC. Here's one page of theirs: showing the Wright Flyer. | |||
::You're right. Even if some (or even one) of those others beat the Wrights to the punch, nothing came of it, so it doesn't matter. Maybe a better comparison would be Christopher Columbus vs. Leif Ericsson. OK, so the Vikings came here first. But did it matter? No. Columbus' arrival is what mattered, which is why he still primarily gets the credit (or blame, depending on one's viewpoint). ] <sup>'']''</sup> 22:44, 23 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
Far more important, and arguably the ''most'' important of all of these, is the ] (]), the 40-plus year predecessor to NASA itself. --] (]) 23:30, 12 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
Regardless of other not well reported or proven motor driven flights (Weisskopf/Pearse), the Wright Flyer always required a substantial speed of wind to start against or in many cases a catapult launch. Therefore, it was not a motor driven "self-sustained and controlled aircraft". The first aircraft according to this definition was flown and recognized worldwide (of course just first "european" airflight in the English Misplaced Pages) by Brazilian ]. ] 01:39, 14 July 2008 | |||
::The Wright flights near Kitty Hawk in 1903 were roughly equivalent to the straight-ahead 15 to 30 second flights of Santos-Dumont in the 14-bis in 1906. Wright flights in 1905 which lasted more than a half hour circling an Ohio field were, by definition, "self-sustained and controlled," regardless of their acceleration to takeoff speed by catapult. ] (]) 01:50, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::Here's another one I had missed: | |||
:Please provide reliable sources for any claims you add to the article, or they WILL be removed as OR/POV. The issue is covered in ], and that's the place to fight your battles, not here. - ] (]) 04:14, 14 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
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::::The Viking B-8 Kitty Hawk, used as a trainer during World War II (along with the Waco and Cub). One of the most famous pilots who trained in this Kitty Hawk was none other than ], who flew this as prep for entering the "V-5 Naval Aviation program". The screening was done at Amherst's Civilian Pilot Training Course as the first phase of officer candidate training (). This B-8 Kitty Hawk was built by Viking Flying Boat Co. of New Haven, CT, after a merger with Bourdon Aircraft Corporation of Hillsgrove, Rhode Island (info & , stating that 34 were built). document shows that ] was picked at the same place and time as Ted Williams by the Naval Aviation Cadet Selection Board. So it appears that it would be a reasonable guess that George Bush ''ALSO'' flew the B-8 Kitty Hawks at Amherst. (Bush & Williams ended up as "Cloudbusters" in the V-5 program at ] along with ], as stated by Anne Keene in , with ] going thru the V-5 program in Iowa.) The marketing slogan that Bourdon used was: | |||
:::::The Kitty Hawk: ''"'''Flies Like a Hawk — Lands Like a Kitten'''"'' | |||
:::::(see , with the logo of pilot's wings featuring a cat's face as the center crest, and the words KITTY HAWK on the wings.) | |||
::::Imagine if someone were to discover a photo of a pilot like Ted Williams or George Bush flying one of these Kitty Hawks. --] (]) 21:05, 22 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
:: The P-40 Kittyhawk and Tomahawk names are British creations. ] (]) 21:41, 14 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
Where I have to fight battles is not anyones concern. It is not anyones concern to define any of these issues as battles. The facts are: the Wright flyer was never a self-sustained aircraft, because it needed headwind of about 25 miles/hour or a catapult launch until end of 1906 or even later. At least there were not sufficient independent witnesses outside the US at any time to see such a self-sustained flight of the Wright brothers. That is quite simple to understand and sources will be given within the next days. ] 00:45, 17 July 2008 | |||
:::Here's an in-depth reference which explains: | |||
:There's no argument that the Wrights used a catapult beginning in September 1904. It is historical fact. Five-minute circling flights that year and half-hour flights in 1905 demonstrate the Flyer was "self-sustained" and controlled. Regarding witnesses, you're right: there were no "witnesses outside the US" to the flights. That was a question people raised in 1906. But it is not 1906 anymore. Today, photographic and documentary proof is easily available. Dozens of historical photographs in the U.S. from 1903-1905 show the flights. Dozens of books are available (see References in the ] article for some examples.) The catapult and headwind facts are well-known to aviation historians. Your personal interpretation of those facts disagrees with the overwhelming majority view held by the historians. I look forward to seeing your sources to learn if you have discovered legitimate experts who can overrule the worldwide community of aviation historians and prove your point. ] (]) 02:45, 17 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::"...the export version of the P-40, tagged the Tomahawk by Curtiss." | |||
::::"...designating it the D-model, while the Royal Air Force gave it a new name: the Kittyhawk." | |||
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:::And here's another excellent reference which shows that the name "Warhawk" was not used until the F-model (Kittyhawk Mk II): | |||
::Keeping it very simple for non-aviation historians: The Wright Flyer did not have the capacity to start ITSELF until late 1906 (or even later), even though you may define catapult started or headwind of more than 35 km/h requiring flights as SELF-SUSTAINED flights. Unfortunately, this fact has always been concealed for the US and UK public as in the current[REDACTED] article. ] 01:27, 21 July 2008 | |||
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:::This section of Misplaced Pages explains that the batch of P-40s delivered to the AVG Flying Tigers were "Tomahawks": | |||
:"Self-sustained" is a term of your devising. "Sustained flight," which the historians speak of, means continuing without loss of velocity or altitude. The successful circling flights in 1904-1905 prove beyond rational doubt that the Flyer had that ability. The headwind at Kitty Hawk subsituted for a long acceleration run, which was impractical at the site. The catapult in Ohio performed the same function, for the same reason. Contrary to what you have written, the Flyer did not ''require'' a 20+ mph/35+ km/h headwind. It flew in a wind that strong in North Carolina because the brothers did not want to wait another day for calmer conditions; they wanted to finish and travel home for Christmas. They never again piloted a Flyer in such a strong wind. If you have read the entire article, you will know that contrary to what you wrote, it does not "conceal," but explicity refers to both the headwind at Kitty Hawk and the catapult in Ohio. Legitimate historians do not obsess over the headwind and catapult because those issues are of no significance compared to the Wrights' success in researching, designing, building and flying the first successful airplanes; unfortunately, only willful or poorly-informed detractors want to use those issues to disqualify the Wrights. ] (]) 03:51, 21 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
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:::Tomahawk IIB's, to be exact. So P-40C's. That was well before the USAAF started calling the P-40F's the Warhawk. | |||
There is no evidence that any of the Wright flights did not require substantial headwinds of a minimum of 35 km/h. Otherwise catapults would not have been necessary at other locations. These questions are not an obssesion, but are the critical historical points. First of all, the introductory section of this article is misleading: "The Wright Flyer (...) was the first powered aircraft designed and built by the Wright brothers. The flight is recognized by the Fédération Aéronautique Internationale, the standard setting and record-keeping body for aeronautics and astronautics, as "the first sustained and controlled heavier-than-air powered flight".." | |||
:::Then there's also the fighterbomber units who nicknamed their P-40's the "Kittybomber". --] (]) 04:48, 15 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
These statements are wrong in that way that the make any reader believe that the Wright flyer could start by its own engine, which was never the case. Therefore, it has to be clarified in the above mentioned introduction that the Wright flyers required various aiding devices or circumstances for a succesful start. | |||
:::: "Kittybomber" is Kittyhawk+bomber (see also "Hurribomber" from ]+bomber, "Whirlibomber" from Westland Whirlwind+bomber and Bombphoon from Bomb(er)+Hawker Typhoon. | |||
Contrary to what you wrote - for whatever honest reason, e.g., being an US patriot - there is no mentioning of any catapult in Ohio or any headwind in the current article. The only hint that there could be something wrong with the myth of the Wright flyer is " ... 2003 from Kill Devil Hill. Although the aircraft had previously made several successful test flights, sour weather, rain, and WEAK WINDS prevented a successful flight." | |||
:::: British designations early in the war for American aircraft were taken from placenames in the US. ] (]) 06:33, 15 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
The term "detractor" only applies to someone ignoring the achievements of other more significant inventors in early aviation, such as ] or ]. ] 20:29, 21 July 2008 | |||
: This preoccupation with headwinds is baffling. An aircraft that can take off and rise above ground effect —with zero groundspeed because of a headwind—is still in powered flight. In fact, large birds—which are the very model which people have classically treated as the raison d'être for human flight—instinctively generally start off from level ground into any headwind or breeze immediately available; the stronger the headwind, they happier they are likely for it; and no reasonable person stands around and laughs and points at their aeolian crutch. ] (]) 03:43, 28 October 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::: One other issue to be resolved. Are things named Kitty Hawk named after the aircraft itself or the first flight (location)?] (]) 07:45, 15 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
* * Even today aircraft get weather reports(wind speed, direction of wind, pressure etc the same as the Wrights did) before taking off from airports. Aircraft still take advantage of wind conditions after all these decades since 1903. Observe next time you take a flight from an airport. | |||
The 1903 machine used no catapult, the majority of the flights of 1904(May-September) were without catapult, not all flights of 1905 were with catapult, Wilbur's Hudson-Fulton flights used no catapults just the launching rail cause he had no wheels. Catapults or no catapults, they don't make the aircraft fly and stay in the air. The machine has to be able to do that from the efficiency of it's design. ] (]) 15:16, 29 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::Re: <u>Place vs Plane</u> | |||
:You are correct: this article does ''not'' mention the headwind and catapult; they are mentioned in the main Wright brothers article. I am sorry for the mistake. Here is what Wilbur said in 1904 about the Flyer's takeoff speed: "While the new machine lifts at a speed of about 23 miles , it is only after the speed reaches 27 or 28 miles that the resistance falls below the thrust. We have found it practically impossible to reach a higher speed than about 24 miles on a track of available length...." From Wilbur's comment, it is clear that a breeze of much less than 20 mph (35 km/h) was sufficient for takeoff, contrary to your conclusion. Wilbur also said "winds are mostly very light" at the field (Huffman Prairie in Ohio). Neverthless, the Wrights made about 50 takeoffs there ''before'' they began using the catapult. There is no evidence (nor was there a requirement) that any of those takeoffs was done in a wind of 20 mph or more. You also incorrectly conclude that if strong winds were not required, "catapults would not have been necessary at other locations." Wilbur did use the catapult in Europe in 1908, but by then he had a more powerful engine and used the catapult by preference. It was a safer way ot taking off than a long ground run. When the French Aero Club threatened to disqualify Wilbur from making a prize-winning flight because of the catapult, he lengthened the rail and took off without the catapult (and won the prize). Other than a few jealous Aero Club bureaucrats, the many thousands of expert and ordinary witnesses to Wilbur's European flights did not snub their nose at his feats because of the catapult (as a number of revisionist Misplaced Pages editors are prone to do). Rather, they joyfully embraced his achievement for what it obviously was: the solution to an age-old challenge. | |||
:::::I myself do not see that as being anything that needs to be resolved. | |||
:Criticism based on the headwind and catapult completely and foolishly disregards the Wrights' pioneering achievements in successful control and effective aerodynamics, which the Flyer represented and which became the basis for all later airplanes. That is the importance of the Flyer, not that its engine was a few horsepower short of desirable strength. | |||
:::::...because the ''only'' reason why the place became famous is because of that singular event which happened on one particular day in history. The day that this aircraft became the first successful airplane. | |||
:Santos-Dumont was a more significant inventor than the Wright brothers in the specialty of lighter-than-air flight but not heavier-than-air. His first fixed-wing aircraft, the ''14-bis'', did not introduce any innovations to aviation. His short, straight flights in that machine were significant because they were publicly witnessed and stimulated other pioneer aviators in Europe to increase their efforts. Neverthless, two years after the 14-bis flights, European aviators still did not know how to make a coordinated banking turn, nor did they even understand the concept. Wilbur's flights introduced them to it and they rushed to adopt it. The achievements of Whitehead are subject to much controversy and doubt, and other than possibly some of his work with engines, none of his inventions have ever been shown to have contributed to progress in aviation. In any case, this article is not titled, "History of the Invention of the Airplane." Far from ignoring Santos-Dumont and Whitehead, I have made signifcant contributions (and corrections!) to those articles. | |||
:The Wright Flyer did use a headwind to gain sufficient airspeed to take off from level ground at Kitty Hawk, but did so under its own engine power. If you disagree with the FAI statement, I suggest you file an objection with them. If you feel the wording in this article's introduction should be changed or expanded, please do so, but in a way that is explanatory, not as an accusatory effort to debunk a "myth". The "critical historical points," as you put it, are that the Wright Flyer embodied the Wright brothers' invention of three-axis airplane control and their pioneering airfoil and propeller research, all factors which enabled the airplane to make the first sustained and controlled flight, even though its engine was less powerful than those used by other, unsuccessful inventors at the time. The only "myth of the Wright flyer" that might exist would result from deliberate efforts to re-write history and distort or disregard the importance of the Flyer and its inventors. ] (]) 03:22, 22 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::Now the US Navy, for example, will tell you their official story that the aircraft carrier was named in tribute to the ''<u>place</u>''... | |||
Pytor, if you say the Wright Flyer's flights(1903-1905) didn't have sufficient witnesses then the same could be triply said for Whitehead & Richard Pearse. The Wrights had viable & credible witnesses(not to mention back issue newspapers) but didn't seek out mainstream press after they witnessed the debacle that happened to poor ] by the media. It's also important to recognize the three Wright Flyers as three distinct machines unto themselve all the process of increased development & knowledge gained by the brothers. Once you understand the step-by-step methodical approach by the Wright Brothers, you can then appreciate the way they beautifully & efficiently invented the airplane. The airplane wasn't invented in one fell swoop. Inventions, especially one as complex as an airplane, don't happen that way. As far as witnesses to their flights the Wrights had to stop flying in October 1905 because they no longer had the secrecy(or patent) they wanted and scores of townspeople were witnessing the flights and talking about it. | |||
::::::"'''Named for:''' Kitty Hawk, N.C., and for Kill Devil Hill, the site approximately four miles south of the village of Kitty Hawk, where Orville and Wilbur Wright made the first successful sustained powered flights in a heavier-than-air machine on 17 December 1903. | |||
It also seems the Santos-Dumont argument has found it's way from Youtube-to-Misplaced Pages. Laughable. But interesting all the same. Im pretty sure the Wrights are laughing in heaven. ] (]) 14:59, 29 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
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:::::But I see this to be as silly as if those kids in San Antonio were told that their school, Kitty Hawk Middle School, is named after ! | |||
:::::It creates cognitive dissonance as to why these kids refer to themselves as ''"The Flyers"'', and not, say, ''"The Asphalts"''. | |||
==You're in the Air Force, now== | |||
:::::And with the US Navy, to maintain that the ship is named for the village, then it DOES NOT explain why their ship's symbol unambiguously depicts '''''the airplane''''': | |||
Since I can't find it, let me post this here: "The Aeronautical Board, which conducted the official tests of the 1909 Flyer, were Lt. Frank Lahm, Lt. George Sweet, Maj. Charles Saltzman, Maj. George Squier, Capt. Charles Chandler, Lt. Benjamin Foulois and Lt. Frederick Humphreys." From http://www.nationalmuseum.af.mil/photos/index.asp?galleryID=529&page=260 <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 05:16, 23 January 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:::::If it was really only named for the village of Kitty Hawk, then a proper symbol would be the Town Hall, or at least their local 7-Eleven. | |||
== FAI == | |||
:::::These prominent facts make it absolutely clear that regardless of what their official story might be, these are all examples of things being ''de facto'' named ''in honor of the Wright Brothers'' and ''their airplane''. | |||
:::::Even in the case of the '']'', here is a patch design which does not depict a silhouette of the two brothers, but instead shows their airplane in flight: | |||
I had removed the FAI citation because it inaccurately implied that the FAI cites a 1903 Wright brothers flight in its official list of aviation records. A search of the FAI website does not show any such record, and a private email I received from FAI in response to my question states, "The flight of the Wright Brothers has been considered a historical event but never has been given an official "grade" by the FAI." I have re-written the article's introduction to more accurately cite the FAI view. The article published by the FAI (linked in this Misplaced Pages article's citation), although obviously written with sincere admiration, contains a number of inaccuracies and apparent fabrications. ] (]) 17:28, 12 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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:::::All of this is unambiguous evidence that what is being honored here is not merely the place, and not only the two men, but THE EVENT that was accomplished by these two brothers at this particular place. These are unequivocal tributes to the ''Wright Flyer'', the ''Kitty Hawk.'' --] (]) 16:03, 15 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
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:I see nothing on the FAI site that states this is not an offical site of the organization. I'm certainly not going to base my analysis on a letter that's not verifiable. Please gain a consensus to remove this, rather than continue to remove first. - ] (]) 17:41, 12 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
OOPS. I now see that I misread your comment, ].<br> | |||
You were questioning: | |||
:<u>Plane vs ''Event''</u> | |||
Not Plane vs Place.<br> | |||
Here I do not see how the two can be separated. Again, the only reason why the plane is famous is because of the event. And I would assert that our biggest guide on that question is the fact that here on Misplaced Pages, this Wright Flyer article covers both. There is no separate article covering the event as distinct from the aircraft. We have articles on the inventors, the photographer, and the plane. Each of these discuss the event. But not a separate article for that. And so I see no need whatsoever for us to split out any such distinction. And I don't see how we would go about attempting to do that, even if someone saw that to be a productive effort. --] (]) 16:39, 15 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
<br>Here is what I see to be another excellent guide for us here...<br> | |||
::My apologies, I didn't realize this was ], or I wouldn't have asked you to discuss your changes first. I'll move on. - ] (]) | |||
This example of ]. | |||
:::A revision to correct misleading text is not a symptom of "ownership". I compromised with your objection to removal and restored the citation, but with a more accurate context. You seem to have misunderstood the issue ("...this is not an offical site..."). I pre-Discuss changes if they are clearly controversial, but saw no sign of that here and simply edited "boldly". ] (]) 18:27, 12 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
We have an entire section on ].<br> | |||
I have not delved into this, but I would be shocked if anyone there attempts to split out any distinction between the aircraft vs the event. --] (]) 16:47, 15 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
==Italics== | |||
::::Sorry I changed the lead before I noticed this discussion, I have simplified the statement to be more factual. ] (]) 18:32, 12 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Hello {{u|Ahunt}}. Single aircraft which are named are italicized (''Wright Flyer'', ''Enola Gay'', etc.). Saw you also removed italics from the name of a Space Shuttle and the ''Ingenuity'' helicopter, so wanted to let you know before other Space Shuttle pages are unitalicized. Thanks. ] (]) 21:48, 3 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Why was section discussing pieces of Flyer on Moon and Mars deleted??? == | |||
== Proposal to delete the 14 bis section == | |||
This article is about the Wright Flyer, and yet a substantial section is dedicated to a completely different flying machine. There seems to be no good reason for this, especially since the 14 Bis is only one of many "rivals" to the Flyer's throne. For example, Richard Pearse's flying machine of 1902-03 has more of a claim to beating the Flyer than the 14 Bis. | |||
All, | |||
In short, I propose that the 14 Bis section be deleted and replaced with a much shorter section naming some other flying machines of the period without getting into too much debate about who was first. Please add your opinions below.<span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 06:17, 18 May 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:I agree with this. However, whenever specific names of other aircraft are included, people usually add more detail and more names, and the text re-grows to unruly size. So I also suggest that instead of a separate shorter section mentioning specific names of other early aircraft, a sentence be included in an existing section, or even in the introduction, to say simply that other claims exist for 'first airplane', and make a link in that sentence to the Misplaced Pages ] article. ] (]) 19:01, 18 May 2010 (UTC) | |||
::yes, I didn't see your proposal up top here and left a similar effort at the bottom. Move it!, yes. It would go fine in the ''first flying machines'' section. The article is about the Wright Flyer not the 14bis or whether it flew properly(it didnt !). I don't know what it is with this Santos crowd continuing this nonsense.] (]) 01:10, 20 May 2010 (UTC) | |||
:The 14-Bis section was copied and pasted into this article from its own article. I would not recommend adding the section to the First flying machine article, which is supposed to be only a list, without pro and con "arguments" in narrative sections. If the 14-bis section is deleted from this article, it will still exist in its own article. ] (]) 08:28, 20 May 2010 (UTC) | |||
Why did editor ] remove the short section about pieces of the Wright Flyer being brought to the Moon and Mars? His edit claims "there is an entire section about this at the page below" but it's not clear what "page" he is referring to. I no longer see any references to these in the article. | |||
:I actually just moved it to the First Flying Machine entry after spending 1/2 re-typing before I read your response. I didn't know it was in the 14 bis article. ''Why wasn't it removed from the Wright flyer article'' earlier? well, it's done, the First Flying Machine article ends with the Santos flights so I thought this made a neat little addendum since the crux of the whole First Flying Machines article is speculation amongst the many different experimenters. Anyone want to remove the 14bis debate from First Flying Machines, be my guest.] (]) 02:53, 14 June 2010 (UTC) | |||
Certainly, the section as written was entirely accurate and now no information about the Wright Flyer pieces brought to the Moon and Mars appears in this article at all. | |||
==Wright Flyer vs. 14bis== | |||
this is a good section but it doesn't belong in an article on the Flyer. It certainly could be inserted into the article on ''first flying machines'' perhaps at the conclusion of the article. Im thinking of moving the section to there. It's better worthy of discussion and dialogue at ''first flying machines'' than being the conjecture that it is in an article on the Wright Flyer.] (]) 00:48, 20 May 2010 (UTC) | |||
:I deleted this section from the Wright Flyer entry. It is totally and irrevocably out of place here in the entry about the ]. I re-instituted the whole article word-for-word in the ''First Flying Machines'' article, though it might not belong there either. But for those who want or care to debate this issue go over to the ''First Flying Machines'' article. This makes for good talk, it's not going to change anything I feel as this argument was settled decades ago. Ok without much more adieu, there you have it , I made the change. 02:43, 14 June 2010 (UTC)] (]) 02:44, 14 June 2010 (UTC) | |||
Strongly need this restored. ] (]) 03:01, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Stability == | |||
:As I said in my edit summary, a section already existed when you added yours. You can find it at ]. Please have a look to see if more needs to be added, thanks. ] (]) 03:05, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
P.S. I now see that the "page" he was referring to is within the "Artifacts" roll-up subsection of this article. However, still need to understand why the Moon and Mars references are better hidden in an "Artifacts" roll-up section and not in the main body of the article. ] (]) 03:06, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I don't know what you mean by 'roll up section'. The topics have a decent sized section with some good images. ] (]) 03:08, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
::{{u|TheGreyMouser2016}}, thanks for the suggestion, I've added a brief note in the lead as a summary of the Artifacts section. ] (]) 03:16, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::When {{u|TheGreyMouser2016}} mentions the "roll- up subsection", I can only conclude that this editor is reading the article on the godforsaken mobile app which displays ''only'' the lead section of the article, unless the reader clicks on a pull-down menu to actually read the body of the full article. {{u|Randy Kryn}}, this is the type of havoc that WMF software foolishness wreaks. The fully functional desktop site works fine on 2021 mobile devices and the app is addressing 2010 problems. ] ] 03:27, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::The only time I looked at Misplaced Pages on mobile was when a friend looked something up about 10 years ago, and I've never edited on mobile, so thanks for the explanation and a sad thing to hear. Because of TheGreyMouse's commendable persistence I've added a summary to the lead which should do the trick. ] (]) 03:34, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::{{u|Randy Kryn}}, I do 99% of my editing on Android smartphones, and I use the desktop site. I only check out the mobile site from time to time, to verify that it still sucks, which it still does. ] ] 03:39, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::Yeah, not the mobile life for me. Edit on a chesttop laptop, much easier laying around than sitting up. My related quibble is the small size of the default print, I crank my machine up to 175 percent and that suits me fine. ] (]) 03:44, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I have removed it from the lede - a couple of swatches of cloth are too minor to put in the lede and has little to do with the aircraft and its flights during its operational life time. It is mentioned down in the body of the article under "artifacts" and that is sufficient. - ] (]) 12:18, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Hello {{u|Ahunt}}. The lead summarizes its page and, apparently, is the only thing shown on some screens. Instead of removing these important honors of the ''Wright Flyer'' this lead could use a couple more paragraphs in addition to this one. Maybe concentrate on extending the lead summary, which is now too short, and provide the standard lead-overview of the article. ] (]) 12:25, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::It doesn't matter really, even if the lede is expanded, or split into more paras, the fact that a tiny swatch of fabric was sent to Mars is still really minor and wouldn't belong in the lede. - ] (]) 12:29, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::I'd disagree. If there was an adequate lead summarizing the page the honoring, no matter how large a piece of the ''Wright Flyer'' was used (what if NASA had sent an entire wing of the plane? The tiny fabrics, and the wood which went to the Moon, have the same effect: symbolizing in real-time and space the enormity of what the Wright's accomplished) it would find inclusion in the summary. ] (]) 13:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::I would basically classify it as ], but let's see if any other editors think it should be in the lede. - ] (]) 13:37, 17 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Interesting but in the end it is trivia and doesnt need a mention in the lead. ] (]) 17:17, 19 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
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==The Wright brothers were not the first== | ||
Stringfellow beat them. | |||
There is no evidence, no filmed images, no witness, no credible document on the internet, no documentary on Discovery Channel, nothing to certify that the Flyer reproduction has ever performed a successful test flight, more precisely a flight able to replicate the original Dec. 17 1903 flights. | |||
https://www.newscientist.com/definition/first-powered-flight/ <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) </span> | |||
:From this article: | |||
This text should be removed: "Although the aircraft had previously made several successful test flights" <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 16:12, 2 October 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:{{tq|The U.S. Smithsonian Institution describes the aircraft as "the first powered, heavier-than-air machine to achieve controlled, sustained flight with a pilot aboard."}}<ref name="NASM">{{cite web|url=http://www.nasm.si.edu/exhibitions/gal100/wright1903.html|title=Exhibitions|date=2016-04-28}}</ref> | |||
:From the article ]: | |||
:{{tq|They made the first controlled, sustained flight of a powered, heavier-than-air aircraft...}} | |||
:Key words are ''pilot'', and also ''controlled'', which, back then, would be a pilot. ] (]) 04:39, 28 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
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:I think the key word that you quote is "sustained" that doesnt apply to Stringfellow. ] (]) 11:54, 28 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Artifact image referencing STS-51-L == | |||
::{{Ping|MilborneOne}} Well, ]'s craft flew about 90 feet vs Wright's 120 feet. So I gathered the key distinction was control. Stringfellow's craft was unmanned and thus uncontrolled. ] (]) 13:13, 28 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
In the UK in a small village near Great Ayton there was a steam powered craft that half glided and half flew over a field a few years before the Wright brothers. It is not very well known but the wright brothers were the first to make a sustained flight back in 1903. I'm unaware of any other pre WB flight! <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 04:40, 7 December 2022 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:Misplaced Pages content is based on published reliable sources. ] (]) 04:43, 7 December 2022 (UTC) | |||
== Colorized image (again) == | |||
== Jane's All the World's Aircraft == | |||
The article once again features a colorized image, in the Specifications section, as added by {{u|Wright Stuf}} in {{Diff2|1063413146|this edit}}. I believe the colorized and edited photo has no place in this article. I also remember this was the consensus in the ], which I hope we do not need to reproduce here. I will remove it now. ] (]) 19:45, 23 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
], which I think is safe to say is a fairly authoritative publication, has stated that it no longer considers the Wright Flyer the world's first powered aircraft , instead giving the ] that honour. I know this discussion comes up frequently, but given the evidence, can the introduction be changed to something like "believed to be the first" or "amongst the first"? ] (]) 05:28, 16 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Despite the consensus, this image seem to be constantly reintroduced. I agree it does not belong, looks really awful. It looks more like a screenshot from a video game than a historical photograph. - ] (]) 01:36, 19 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
== Opening paragraph == | |||
::I again oppose use of this colorized image in this article, which is jam packed full of original research on the part of the colorizing editor. No one can possibly know what the actual colors were at the time of the flight, and all of the truly encyclopedic content is contained in the black and white photo. This simply does not belong here. ] (]) 07:24, 20 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
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The opening paragraph states that "The Wright Flyer (often retrospectively referred to as Flyer I or 1903 Flyer) was the first successful powered aircraft, designed and built by the Wright brothers". I think that sentence is a bit ambiguous. Does it mean that the Wright Flyer was the first successful powered aircraft in the world (which isn't true), or does it mean it was the first one designed and built by the Wright brothers? ] (]) 04:57, 17 June 2014 (UTC) | |||
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=== Vandalism - or perhaps an alternative explanation as to recent edits which have degraded article quality === | |||
:The comma after "first successful powered aircraft" answers your second question. You already answered your first question but your answer of "wrong" is wrong. ] (]) 05:34, 17 June 2014 (UTC) | |||
This article has been repeatedly ]. And subsequent editors appear to be perfectly accepting of incremental deliberate damage that has been done. On Jan 12, well over one month ago, Ravenpuff did to the infobox, presenting the justification that being a ], this was somehow an improvement. Yet anyone doing a cursory comparison can readily see that this FP is actually an ''inferior version'' of the image. So it is obvious that FP was simply pretense for this deliberate vandalism.<br> | |||
Now my own starting point when evaluating that edit was to ]. But I stretched my imagination and could not arrive at any possible way that any editor could assess that this FP was an improvement over the Fully Restored version that got knocked out. Perhaps someone here might be able to present a scenario that is consistent with Good Faith. I cannot. It is extremely easy to see that the FP status had been conferred at least as far back as 2012. And that the Fully Restored version was not created until 2018. Had the Fully Restored version existed when the FP decision was being made, it seems quite obvious that FP status would have been given to that one instead. | |||
::No I don't think the comma does answer my second question. I think people could read it both ways - regardless of the correct grammatical meaning - and that make it ambiguous. It could easily be re-worded so that the meaning can only be taken one way and surely that is preferable? As to my first question, no I am not wrong. The Wright Flyer was not the first successful powered aircraft. If you go to the Wiki article for 'Aircraft' you will see that the definition includes lighter than air as a method of lift. If you then follow the links to the History of Aviation, you will see that powered lighter than air aircraft were first: "The first powered, controlled, sustained lighter-than-air flight is believed to have taken place in 1852 when Henri Giffard flew 15 miles (24 km) in France, with a steam engine driven craft". The first Zeppelin flew in 1900. The Wright Flyer was, as specified correctly in the second paragraph, "...the first powered, heavier-than-air machine to achieve controlled, sustained flight with a pilot aboard." The first sentence needs to be changed. I think it is important because many people think the Wright Brothers were the first people to fly and the first sentence reinforces that erroneous belief. I'm not trying to take anything away from their magnificent achievement or claim that some other obscure person actually flew a plane before them. I am simply trying to ensure the article is precise and correct.] (]) 17:54, 18 June 2014 (UTC) | |||
So why am I raising this issue about this Wright Flyer article being vandalized here in this section about photo colorization? Because Ariadacapo's edit from Jan 23, exactly 4 weeks ago, is yet another example of deliberate damage being done to the article, where subsequent editors have fully accepted this damage. If the actual objection was simply regarding colorization of the historical photo, then the edit which would be consistent with the goal of continual improvement of Misplaced Pages articles would be to simply SWAP the colored version with the black&white version, which was readily indicated ]. And who is the person who had uploaded that black&white version? None other than Ariadacapo. (B&w pic ].) | |||
:::I added "heavier-than-air" to the first sentence to meet your quite reasonable request. ] (]) 18:03, 18 June 2014 (UTC) | |||
The approach I myself decided to take upon observing these cases which were clearly damaging the article was to sit back and wait. My hope was that others here would, at the very minimum, raise questions to these editors who were inflicting the damage and give them opportunity to explain themselves. | |||
===Simplified initial statement=== | |||
To convey the most useful information, this article can be written to make it perfectly clear as to why the Wright Flyer was a landmark achievement. In order to do this, it helps to strip away all of the techno-jargon and give the public a simple and straightforward opening sentence. The article now says this: | |||
:"The Wright Flyer (...) was the world's first modern airplane." | |||
That's it. | |||
No gobbledygook about heavier-vs-lighter than air, 3-axis control, piloted, powered, etc. All of that, which is technically accurate, is encapsulated in "modern airplane". THIS is what's important. This is what people care about. And the lede can be satisfying to all because the elaborate descriptions have already been stated at the end. No need to clutter up the intro statement. Plain English works just fine. | |||
] & ], I am giving you that opportunity here and now. | |||
And even more important, this plain English statement is ''accurate''. The previous edit was not. Rubber-band powered planes were "successful heavier-than-air powered aircraft". And Sam Langley did a much larger "successful heavier-than-air powered aircraft" in 1896 (see photo ]). | |||
And this involves far more than just those two editors. This same question is being asked of you, ], ], ] and ]. If the four of you are objecting to Colorization, then why did none of you not simply swap the colorized photo for the historical black&white version? You all are denying ''anyone'' who comes here to learn about the Wright Flyer from seeing this image, regardless of form. And on top of this, there are all of the editors who let the degradation of the infobox image stand. That is two other editors, on top of everyone mentioned above. | |||
If you click through the new link to the ] article, you'll find this: | |||
:"They built on the works of Sir George Cayley dating from 1799, when he set forth the concept of the modern airplane..." | |||
So the first statement in this article now fits perfectly well with that article.--] (]) 01:34, 14 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
Of course, the central issue here in this section on Colorization is the question of Policy, which appears to remain unanswered. And the third issue being Consensus. I am starting my reply over here on the Talk by addressing Vandalism, because I see THIS to be the most immediate concern. I would hope that ALL of us, regardless of our differences when it comes to those other two issues, share the common goal of continually improving our article here. Any and all edits which deliberately inflict damage go against that goal, obviously. | |||
::I think your change is good, useful to the unsophisticated reader. It's certainly true that the Wrights flew the first airplane that could carry a man, take off on its own power, fly pretty well in the air with suitable maneuverability, fly a complete circuit and land on the same patch from which it took off. Those are necessary characteristics of a useful airplane, one that is not a toy or an impractical experiment. However, its shape is still not modern, because its rudders are in the front. ] (]) 02:23, 14 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
No one else here has fixed the infobox image. I intend to do that myself. And ''how'' this gets fixed goes back to the sticking point from one year ago regarding the issue of whether or not we, as a group, will choose to follow one of the most fundamental principles when it comes to editing: Consensus. After Vandalism, I see that to be the next priority on aspects here that need to be resolved. The way this was left hanging back in February of 2021, fully one year ago, was not a resolution. Not one consistent with Consensus, as I understand it. And not even with the Admin who intervened and presented an Essay which argued for Consistency Between Articles. I will hold off on that discussion until after this Vandalism issue gets resolved. If we cannot get this aspect under control, then we are walking backwards, no matter what our position on Consensus might be. --] (]) 00:19, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
:::I think the change to "modern airplane" was intended to indicate that the Wright aircraft was successful and practical. But "modern" in this context seems strange. It gives the misleading impression that there was some previous generation of winged machines which were flying and could be described by the word "airplane" and were superseded by the "modern" Wright design. The Wright airplane was "modern" in the sense that its fundamental control system became the basis for all airplanes that followed, not simply because it was superior to earlier machines, which were essentially non-flying. As has been noted by historians, the 1903 Flyer was not really "practical," so I am not suggesting it be described that way. In this historical context, I think the phrase "first successful airplane" is a better description than "first modern airplane," because it does not incorrectly imply that a dividing line existed in 1903 between flying non-modern airplanes and the flying "modern" Wright airplane. ] (]) 19:42, 14 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
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:A content dispute is ''not'' vandalism. Accusing editors of vandalism when it's not can be considered a personal attack. I highly advise you to.strike those comments so we.can proceed in good faith discussions on the matter. If you keep falsely accusing editors of vandalism, you will be reported to ANI, and may be blocked to prevent this from occurring again. ] (]) 00:26, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | ||
::Hello? | |||
:::::], can you please explain why you reverted this change? ("per the previous discussion" isn’t clear…) As ] wrote, the point was to make a clear-language statement in the lead. It is commonly understood that "airplane" is a heavier-than-air powered controlled aircraft, and that "successful airplane" describes one that permits fully-controlled flight. The precise details of the significance of the Flyer are made already in the article body. ] (]) 10:48, 17 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::"I believe the colorized and edited photo has no place in this article." - Ariadacapo | |||
::That is not a content objection. It is a photo colorization objection. | |||
::NO ONE, not even you, raised any objection other than colorization. | |||
::And your reply, and your threat, did not address the first vandalism issue which I had raised. The deliberate degradation of the infobox image. --] (]) 00:35, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
== 4th flight pic == | |||
:::It's a dispute over of content, in this case a photo. It is not vandalism. Anyway, you can defend yourself to the admins at ANI. ] (]) 01:21, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
:::Reported at ]. ] (]) 02:08, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
::::All of 2 minutes after I had raised the issue which I saw to be as Vandalism, you vandalize my post by clobbering the Subsection I had created for the express purpose of highlighting this issue. An issue which I had highlighted one year ago (see Archive). The subsection has now been restored. | |||
Gray is unquestionably a reliable source, but after all this time--and having looked at this pic many times--I now wonder at his conclusion when considering the recently raised doubts. The black blobs don't seem to correspond to the engine and prone pilot, and the left propeller can clearly be seen as if stopped, unlike the image of the first takeoff, in which both props are blurred. As editors, however, it's not up to us to pass judgement on the accuracy of a particular statement made by a reliable source. The statement is quite interesting and worthy of mention, but I'm open to putting it in a note instead of the text. ] (]) 21:55, 2 March 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::In light of Ravenpuff's explanation (below), I have modified the header title. | |||
::::My full reply is posted over there (]). | |||
::::My first post in this section here indicated that I was totally open to alternate reasons which might explain these edits which I've called attention to. You presented a reason which did nothing to explain why you clobbered the image, instead of switching to b&w. | |||
::::...and next, went straight to complaining to Admins, instead of presenting a rational rebuttal here as to why your revert was not deliberately inflicting damage. We have seen a history of Admins refusing to uphold WP. Or failure to logically explain why my understanding of WP is incorrect (instead, citing an Essay which contradicted their position). Anyone can look over at that new section where flags have been raised, and see that there are Admins who have mischaracterized the quality of my efforts here. So it appears that we are now entering another cycle of history repeating itself. | |||
:Thank you. I additionally realized later that nobody else is in the picture except for the three figures. If it was in-flight wouldn't there be at least one person (Orville) running after the plane? I suppose Orville (and possible other(s)) could have dashed ''backwards'' out of the camera frame, but that seems unlikely.<br>We're not obliged to copy down ''everything'' an otherwise reliable source says. If we think an author was drinking the day he made some dubious conclusion, we're perfectly allowed to ignore it as unreliable and even as ''unnotable''. I say "unnotable" because any otherwise reliable author can have a bad day, and that's not on-topic for the article. If there were ''additional'' reliable authors that supported him in that conclusion, then maybe it would be notable to mention in a note or something.<br>I undid the summary reversion because it was based on nothing more than a subjective "better", and it said nothing to address the edit summaries giving reasons for each edit.<br>] (]) 01:18, 5 March 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::Or perhaps, someone might surprise me. --] (]) 08:45, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
:I have no objection to using the highest-quality image here. Admittedly I did not scrutinise the files before making the change, not being an expert in this area. {{re|Wright Stuf}} featured pictures can be delisted and replaced; you can nominate the version you uploaded to replace the current featured picture if superior to it – see ]. At any rate, this does not count as vandalism. — <span style="font-family:'Linux Libertine','Georgia','Times',serif">''']'''</span> '''·''' '']'' '''·''' 00:37, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
== Identification of 4th flight photo == | |||
::], thank you for explaining what had happened with your infobox image edit. Given that, then I have mischaracterized what has happened in that case. It appears that I owe you an apology. | |||
The existing footnotes to reliable sources explicitly identify the photo as the fourth flight of Dec 17, 1903. The first ref, directly to the Library of Congress page containing the photo, is unequivocal. The photo has been well-known to historians for decades, and no reliable source questions its identification. It is emphatically not from 1908 in France, or any other time and place other than North Carolina on the stated date. I invite comment from editor Schily, who challenges the identification, so we may restore the photo's unquestioned identificaton without further reversions. ] (]) 09:55, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::I would be interested to know your reason why you have taken no further action, after this has been called to your attention. In my own view, it would at least be appropriate for you to explain why you see your chosen image to be the better choice. You have not done that (let alone revert). --] (]) 08:10, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
:No, you cannot. Historicans '''have''' doubt about this photo because it shows '''3 dark spots that cannot be caused''' by the Wright Flyer from 1903, so the photo is not worth anything as long as you cannot explain the three dark spots in the middle of the plane. Note that the only reliable photo from the Wright brothers flights from December 17, 1903 is the photo from the first 36m flight. Also note that Karl Jatho did already fly 18m on August 18, 1903 and 60m in November 1903 and that Gustav Weißkopf did fly 800m to 2.4km with several tests on August 14, 1901 already. I however have no problems if the subtitle for this photo explains why there is doubt on it's authenticity for December, 17 1903. ] (]) 11:35, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::I chose the current image because it appeared, at first glance, to be the better one – one is (currently) a featured picture, and the other is not. Since, as you pointed out, the other version should work better here, I shall not object if you revert my change and replace the image. — <span style="font-family:'Linux Libertine','Georgia','Times',serif">''']'''</span> '''·''' '']'' '''·''' 10:29, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
::::], it is now clear that you have no intention to revert it yourself. If your reason for not doing so is because FP status is something which you value as making your image a better one to present to the public, then I expect you're well aware of the other option available here: | |||
::Poppycock. The photo is firmly established as 1903. Take your activism somewhere else. ] (]) 12:31, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::::- Since it is important to you, then you can do what you had initially suggested that I do. Nominate for that Delist/Replace thing. | |||
::::I myself have no care whatsoever regarding FP status. Perhaps you know something that I don't know as to why FP is so important. I myself just use my own two eyeballs. I can readily see that one image tells a better story than the other, making it more historically valuable. Making it more valuable for this article. For example, in the Fully Restored version, you can see the ''start'' of the wooden rail which this airplane used to launch off of. In your FP, the length of the takeoff run is utterly ambiguous. For all anyone knows, Orv might have been travelling down it for hundreds of feet prior to liftoff. But in the Fully Restored version, everyone can see, quite clearly, exactly how long the maximum length of that takeoff run was. | |||
::::I see the ball to be in your court here. And of course, you have the option to leave it there. | |||
::Reliable sources don't support your challenge to the photo. ] (]) 12:46, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::I hope I have provided a thorough explanation here as to why one image provides significantly better information to the general public than the other image does. That is to say, I still see your edit as having done a negative improvement to our article. That is my opinion. I am fully open to considering any and all other productive views on this which may run counter to my own. --] (]) 12:01, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
:::Sorry to see that your activism is not open to arguments from flight experts and historians that rate it as highly doubtful. As long as there is no explanation for the three black spots the photo cannot be seen as reliable. If you can explain the three black spots, things may be different... ] (]) 13:58, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::::{{re|Wright Stuf}} I don't disagree with your evaluation of the versions of the photograph, or your judgement on whether to revert the change. Since you don't seem willing to do it either (it doesn't have to be me), I have reinstated the previous infobox image. | |||
:::::] status is accorded to the highest-quality images on Misplaced Pages, and can serve as a useful indicator to editors who want to use (say) a photograph of the ''Wright Flyer'' in an article. Featured pictures are also eligible to appear on the ] as the ] – the Daniels photograph could profitably be the POTD on an anniversary of the flight, for example. The version that holds featured status would be the one to appear; the featured status of the current FP can be transferred via a delist-and-replace nomination to the fully restored version. As you have much better knowledge than I about the merits of this version, I think you to be better suited to initiate or contribute to such a nomination. — <span style="font-family:'Linux Libertine','Georgia','Times',serif">''']'''</span> '''·''' '']'' '''·''' 12:37, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
::::::'''THANK YOU!''' | |||
::::I understand you have your own interpretation of this historical photo. Reliable sources cited in the caption unequivocally identify it. You have given no specific sources, reliable or otherwise, to support your action. If your demand for further "explanation" were followed, you could dictate every word in Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 15:45, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::::You stated: "Since you don't seem willing to do it either..." | |||
::::::Actually, you will find this in my original post: | |||
:::::::"No one else here has fixed the infobox image. I intend to do that myself." | |||
::::::The reason why I held back is because, once you appeared in our discussion here, I saw you to be the best person to do this change. And I am certain that everyone else here would have freaked out by the way I was going to make the change. | |||
::::::Thank you also for all the info regarding FP. I've long been aware of all that. And then with the pic we're discussing, when striving to evaluate your reasons, I had also seen this: | |||
::::: The reliability cannot be verified unless the sources would be based on non-fakeable facts. It would be e.g. a reliable photo it it was printed in a newspaper from 1903. ] (]) 16:28, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::::::"This image was selected as picture of the day on the English Misplaced Pages for December 17, 2023." | |||
::::::I myself could care less which version is used on that day. But maybe some time before December of 2023, I might find a reason to care. | |||
::::::You have brought nothing reliably sourced to this discussion – no sources at all, in fact. You don't have any leverage here. ] (]) 17:08, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::::Now I had stated that I owe you an '''<u>apology</u>'''. I am extremely sorry for having mischaracterized your motivations. There is loads of history in what has been happening here over the past year. So my reaction is laced with some variant of PTSD. Maybe Omicron-PTSD. That does not in any way excuse me having jumped the gun. Well... actually, I did not jump at all. I have been waiting very patiently for well over a month to address your change. Things have certainly gotten out of hand here. | |||
::::::In my ideal world, the response to my initial post here would have been your explanation, which you gave. And then the other editors piping in to explain their own motivations as being perfectly benign as well. Now me having raised this V-flag probably was the worst way to go about getting their feedback. But I am glad that with you, this has resolved in the way that I had originally hoped for. | |||
::::::I'm afraid you're making up Misplaced Pages rules as you go along. You don't really get to decide all by yourself what's fake and what's not. You even stated that the first flight photo is reliable, but it was also not published in a newspaper in 1903. Thousands, maybe millions, of photos of famous and have been taken, but not published at the time. They're not all fake. Learn about Misplaced Pages rules for reliable sources at ]. ] (]) 18:26, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::::Once again, ], I am sorry for the unnecessary and inaccurate mischaracterization of your work here. --] (]) 13:30, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
::::::::As long as you are making your own rules for reliability, we will be in a conflict. How about just following the rules used by historians? The photo in question is definitely not reliable using the usual rules, as it was not published in time and as it shows something that does not look like the original Wright flyer. Note that e.g. the original photo from the Weißkopf flight (the one, the newspaper lithography was made from) disappeared around 1906, which is before the photo in question first appeared. BTW: The first photo definitely shows the original Wright flyer and it has been analyzed by aviation experts already, from the height of the plane and the position of the rudder, this is definitely from a flight of around 30m. ] (]) 09:23, 27 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
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:This discussion is largely academic anyway, since the image in question is actually CC BY-NC-ND 2.0 (Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 2.0 Generic) and as such can't be used without a fair-use rationale, and since the black and white version is free it would obviously fail ] point 1. I've tagged it for deletion on Commons anyway. ] (]) 14:56, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | ||
::Thank you for raising that issue. But it is not academic at all to the discussion which is the focus of this particular subsection. The question that was presented to various editors is why they did not simply switch from the colorized image to the monochrome version. I have yet to see an answer presented which explains this as not being willful degradation of our article. | |||
::So you believe that you get real money when you receive two banknotes with the same serial numbers as long as you receive them from a "reliable person"? This is not how science works... ] (]) 14:34, 28 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::Now regarding copyright of the colorized image, I see your post to be highly relevant to the main section above. Should you decide to delete it here, and repost up there, I would be perfectly fine with you likewise deleting my reply here. | |||
:::You continue to rely on your own analysis rather than the published analysis of historians. You have no footing. ] (]) 16:17, 28 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::I still do not understand the reason why you say that use here on Misplaced Pages of that image should not be allowed. My understanding is that my act of uploading it to the Commons was in line with the creator's permissions. I am not a lawyer. And perhaps someone will present an explanation in which the light bulb will click on for me. --] (]) 15:37, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
:::You uploaded the colourized image to commons with a Creative Commons 2.5 free licence, when the original file on Flicker was under a "CC BY-NC-ND 2.0" licence, which is a non-free licence. Those are incompatible licences and thus your upload was a copyright violation, as it did not comply with the image's licence. You can note the image has been deleted from Commons, which renders quite a bit of this discussion moot. - ] (]) 15:56, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
:::::You continue to use strange own reliability rules instead of using the reliability rules used by historians. ] (]) 09:24, 29 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::Ok, that's an explanation that makes sense to me. THANK YOU for that. I apparently had made a major error in interpreting what the Flickr license actually meant. Curious that a copyright violation would go undetected for more than one year. | |||
I will repeat this as you dont appear to have understood, this is an encyclopedia not a website for historians or researchers all we do is use what reliable sources report. Nothing strange about the rules here, I am sure historians have blogs and discussion boards for this sort of thing but this is not that place. So I think as this is going nowhere we can end this discussion, thanks. ] (]) 17:49, 29 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::As for things becoming moot by that deletion, | |||
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::::it actually does absolutely nothing to answer the question as to why no one, yourself included, opted for the solution of swapping the colorized image to the black&white image. | |||
::::To this very moment, my own view is that it is an excellent image to have in our article. | |||
Hello fellow Wikipedians, | |||
::::There is one more image of the Wright Flyer which is the only other image I myself am aware of where it was photographed actually flying. The famous infobox image, and this other image. A grand total of two (2). Yet no one knows about this second pic. My own opinion is that it belongs in the article along with that Dec 14th image. | |||
::::No one switched to the b&w. Everyone deleted it. Repeatedly, and persistently. Voicing objection only to the fact that it was colorized. --] (]) 16:39, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
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:::::Well I can't speak for any other editors, but in my case, I removed it and didn't replace it with anything else, because the article already has a lot of images and didn't need anymore, especially in the section where that image appeared. It was down in the "Specifications" section and overlapped into the "See also" section. It just added to too much clutter, regardless of the other issues. - ] (]) 16:58, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
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This article uses the global dating system (dd/mm/yy). Why am I ranting about this? Well the flight, took place in Kill Devil, North Carolina, which is in the United States. The United States, however uses their own dating system (mm/dd/yy). I request to fix this. Please change all the dates in the article to fit mm/dd/yy. This is to give convenience to American readers. ] (]) 02:08, 22 December 2022 (UTC) | |||
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:"American Heritage" reference updated to working URL; archive links all ok. ] (]) 11:45, 23 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:Good catch. The article originally used MDY dates, but because of a mistaken change to the article date in May 2021, the date style was changed in December 2021. As such, I've started changing it back. ] (]) 03:02, 22 December 2022 (UTC) | |||
== "Crude" 12 horsepower engine == | |||
==Solving mystery of this photo== | |||
Was it crude by the standards of the day? 12 hp is pretty strong for 1903. Was it heavy? Not fuel efficient? What makes it crude?] (]) 14:30, 30 May 2019 (UTC) | |||
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: it was "a bit crude, even by the standards of the day." The description mentions the crudeness of the ignition, the cooling and fuel flow. ] (]) 16:55, 30 May 2019 (UTC) | |||
This photo shows the Wrights and party(the men from the Life Saving Station) bringing the Flyer back to the camp after the fourth flight on December 17, 1903. The airplane is in a state of disassembly and transit with the rudder laying on the ground in back of the machine. The engine and props have stopped. The front elevator has been detached and is in a more upright position as it had been twisted over and semi crushed after the fourth flight. Importantly the machine has probably already been brought back several hundred feet from where it ended the 852ft flight by the time this photo was snapped. One can compare the photo with the more clear frontal photo of the machine just after Wilbur's landing. | |||
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== Colorized photo == | |||
:I'm a bit confused, what's the mystery of the photo? Furthermore, will solving this mystery help improve the article? - ] <sub>]</sub><span style="color:#6B8E23">\</span><sup>]</sup> 22:12, 18 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
], ]; December 17, 1903. (colorized)]] | |||
was the prompt removal of the colorized photo presented in the infobox. This 1903 event happened in color. It was experienced and witnessed in color. The main reason for presenting the info here in black&white is because of a ''technology limitation'' which existed at that time. Well that limitation has now been removed. | |||
::I agree, what is your point? - ] (]) 00:23, 19 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
The rationale presented for the revert was this: | |||
::Because many people think the aeroplane is still flying. There was a caption by early flying historian Carroll Gray, it has now been reduced to a citation, and now essentially out of site. So I added some clearup.] (]) 19:47, 19 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
:"A link to colorized version for the curious would be ok, but misrepresentation in the article not ok for most famous aviation photograph." | |||
:::I can see how people might think that, but I don't know that it is a problem on Misplaced Pages. - ] <sub>]</sub><span style="color:#6B8E23">\</span><sup>]</sup> 00:08, 20 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
:Liking the uncropped version better, it gives a fuller experience of what the site looked like. I haven't looked if it's there yet, but if it is real, and seems to be, the uncropped version could be used on the page somewhere in a large enough size to provide the feeling of the scene. ] (]) 01:45, 19 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
::See ]. It's been there awhile. ] (]) 02:43, 19 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
::I added it for context and added the other front photo. Cropped versions are at Wikicommons.] (]) 19:48, 19 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
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That would be a sound argument for an article which placed its focus on the photography aspect instead of the event itself. The ] entry is one such article. This one about the Wright Flyer is ''not'' a photography article. If life happened in black&white, then we could say that color is a misrepresentation. But knowing that nothing in real life is seen by human eyes in black&white, then it becomes clear that the original unrestored photo is the "misrepresentation". More accurately, it under-represents what actually happened. It is for this reason that the better version to present in the infobox is the colorized photo. I would suggest that... | |||
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This exact same argument stands for the parallel revert which happened by the same editor, ]. I recommend that all discussion of this issue be consolidated here, as I see it to be the same argument, with more harm than benefit happening by splitting the discussion across these two articles. In both places, the colorized photo has been re-added to the bottom of the articles. This was done as an interim measure. The end goal is clear consensus being established. --] (]) 11:01, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
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:A very nice work of art, the placement near the end of the page or maybe in the gallery, identified in the caption as colorized, seems fine. Should definitely not be the lead image in the infobox though, as it is essentially a faked image (i.e. the color of the sky, why is it such a light blue?). The original black and white photo is the iconic visual descriptor of the event. ] (]) 11:53, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Restoration serves encyclopedic accuracy by showing the photograph as it originally appeared, whereas colorization imparts an appearance which the photograph never had, misrepresenting it. In effect, colorizing is an editorialization, contrary to neutrality policy. You said: {{tq|"The main reason for presenting the info here in black&white is because of a technology limitation"}}. No, the reason for presenting it in black&white is because that's a correct representation of its actual appearance as a world-famous artifact. I believe it's inappropriate for the encyclopedia to manipulate it or any historical image in an attempt to recreate what an editor believes real life looked like. The encyclopedia is obligated to present historical information and imagery without distortion or editorializing. ] (]) 12:03, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
: Colorizing the photo involves many subjective decisions and the end result will vary very noticeably according to who carried it out. By contrast, the black & white photo or lightly edited versions of it faithfully represent the original document. This original photo ''is'' part of the history of this airplane. The fact that the brothers had someone there to take it, that the flights were meticulously recorded etc. is an integral part of the story and the success. For those who want/need better visualization of the airplane, there is a 3D model available. I think the colorized version, in spite of {{u|Wright Stuf}}’s hard work producing it and good faith addition, does not really belong to the article at all. -- ] (]) 14:42, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
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{{Outdent|1}} Reply to all three of you: | |||
Thanks, ]. I'm glad you like it. ], I'm glad to know that you too appreciate the effort. This was my first attempt at photo-real colorization. (Or rather, my second attempt. Back on December 16 & 17 of 2018, right on the heels of completing the b&w restoration project, I tried to dive straight into this colorization project. It failed miserably. I think that was because I was burned out at that moment, and did not have the necessary patience reserves. Yesterday's effort was a full success, but admittedly short of perfect. | |||
The question at hand here is whether addition to these articles as factual is appropriate and helpful, or damaging. | |||
Sky lightness has been called into question. One thing we can be certain of is that the sky was ''not'' grayscale. So even if the hue is off, it is certainly closer than the black&white image. But you specifically asked about the ''lightness'' of the sky. Here we have ''proof'' of exactly how light or dark the sky was, because this is what black&white photography captures best: brightness. Cognizant of the historical importance of the photo, I made the effort to ''not'' manipulate brightness values, concentrating on hue. This way, you can take this colorized photo, do a quick single step desaturization, and return to the black&white image with essentially no alteration. Brightness, including the lightness of the sky, is preserved. | |||
]: "Restoration serves encyclopedic accuracy by showing the photograph as it originally appeared..." | |||
I am the one who did the 2018 b&w restoration. I expect you're aware that an ''entire corner'' was broken off. To fill this in, I had to make the editorial choice of what to put there. Every single dab of the "cloning tool" is an editorial choice, deciding where to repeat pixels in order to remove damage. I made countless hundreds, probably over a thousand such fabrication edits which deviate from what has been historically preserved. | |||
Knowing that you are accepting of editorial choices within the realm of black&white restoration, let's revisit your objection to editorialization in the conversion to color:<br> | |||
If this process is done in a freewheeling manner, then I would READILY AGREE WITH YOU. "Was his shirt blue or brown? I am going to take a random guess." | |||
The position I am presenting here is that editorialization during the colorization process is ''factual'' when we have sufficient knowledge of what the original colors were. We know that sand is tan, wood is brown, the sky is blue, their suits and shoes and hats were very dark. These are all HARD FACTS. It is possible to do editorialization with such care that the output is ''historically accurate''. And I submit to all three of you that this is what has been accomplished here. | |||
There is not much room for freewheeling when it comes to how tan sand is, how blue the sky is, how brown wood is, how dark clothing is. And when it comes to the flyer itself, we have the rebuilt aircraft in living color, along with several exacting replicas which enable us to verify the correct colors. This was done with the level of care that meets encyclopedic standards of presenting factual info. If it did not, then I would not have presented it as such. | |||
A similar principle holds when converting a 2-D source image to '3-D" stereographic. Guesses need to be made. But these are highly educated guesses which are based in fact. We have a solid understanding of how to keep the manufactured output true to reality. We KNOW what this moment in time looked like to ]. And we can be ABSOLUTELY CERTAIN that what he saw was a lot closer to what I posted than it did to the historic b&w photo. Once again, this is an article focused on this event. It is not an article about historically significant photos. --] (]) 15:56, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
<br>I should also have replied to this:<br> | |||
:]: "Colorizing the photo involves many subjective decisions and the end result will vary very noticeably according to who carried it out." | |||
YES. I readily agree. The healthy approach, once someone offers an alternative colorization, is to then debate which one is more accurate. NOT "...well then, let's throw them all away." The proverbial colorized baby/bathwater adage. | |||
If you've done any photo post-processing, including perfectly linear edits from which the original can be recovered, then you know that 10 people will turn in 10 different images. This goes for EVERY SINGLE PHOTO PRESENTED HERE ON WIKIPEDIA. Cropping is one such huge decision that 100 editors can result in 100 different output. Many times, these results are ''radically'' different. | |||
The proper way to deal with these variations and inconsistencies is to ''adequately document'' what was done. NOT "Well, these aren't the same so let's throw them all away." Wikicommons makes it a breeze to track how a photo has been cropped or color balanced by various editors. It is likewise very easy to keep colorization documentation transparent. Click on the example here, and you can see that this was done. --] (]) 16:18, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
<br>What I have been advocating here is perfectly in line with how Misplaced Pages on the whole works.<br> | |||
If the attitude was "Well, this isn't a perfect article, so let's trash it and never show it to anyone", then Misplaced Pages would never have gone anywhere. But it is a HUGE SUCCESS not because it achieves perfection at any moment in time. Rather, the success is in this PROCESS which facilitates continuous improvement. | |||
If John T. Daniels had taken a color photo, NO ONE here would be arguing for the deletion of that to replace it with black&white. The crux of these objections have more to do with the '''''accuracy of the colorization process'''''. Ironically, the position you three have taken here amounts to: | |||
"Let's block the process of continual improvement. The old way is the better way." | |||
So the bigger question to ask is why are you here on Misplaced Pages at all. With this attitude you're championing, I would expect that your encyclopedia of choice would be World Book or Encyclopedia Britannica. Dealing with paper cuts as an acceptable risk. --] (]) 16:42, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:<s>Attack the ball, not the player. Treating other editors with respect is one of the five pillars of Misplaced Pages.</s> The historical accuracy of the event includes the iconic photograph, which you also provided in an alerted by less-changed form. This is the image that the world saw which introduced humans to the concept that their species was now skybound. That is the value of leading off the article with the black and white - it has resonated in the collective memory for almost 120 years. I approve of using your color version on the page, it is worthy of encyclopedic exhibition. Just not as the infobox introductory image (although I can see your point and partially agree that it would be useful, just not a guarantee of an totally accurate portrayal). ''World Book'' still exists? I know ''Britannica'' is online and awash with ads. Misplaced Pages is where the encyclopedia game is nowadays, and your interest in improving it with good images is commendable. I'm glad to see the colored version, like it a lot, but it's not the iconic and historical photo (and hard to believe that the sky was so pale blue in 1903, especially above the ocean). ] (]) 17:15, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::I am sorry if I came across as attacking anyone. I was actually hoping you all might get a chuckle out of the papercut quip. And I thought that the notion of reverting to old school book versions of encyclopedias would be obviously facetious. What I was trying to do with that last post was zoom out to the bigger picture. MUCH larger than just these two articles / one photo being discussed. My point was that what is at issue here is actually a '''''philosophical question''''', impacting Misplaced Pages across the board. And since photo colorization has been around a lot longer than Misplaced Pages, we could expect that our topic at hand was <u>settled policy</u> from well over a decade ago. | |||
::I just now looked it up, and apparently World Book DOES still exist. And maybe pigs have begun to fly as well. --] (]) 20:22, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::I even snuck a racism joke in there. I probably should apologize for that too. There is ''nothing funny'' about colorized babies. Black or white. Pick a lane and stay there. --] (]) 20:34, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Struck my comment, I wasn't taking you in good faith. Humor sometimes doesn't come across when written, now that I know it was written in good faith the papercut mention is pretty good. And I looked up ''World Book'' too, seems to be still running and put up a new edition in 2019! ] (]) 20:48, 6 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::{{u|Wright Stuf}}, I've added your image to the ] and ] pages with hopefully an adequate caption. They look good, and are relevant to the topics. ] (]) 01:18, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::Wow, THANK YOU! --] (]) 04:23, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{u|Wright Stuf}}: You said: {{tq|The position I am presenting here is that editorialization during the colorization process is factual when we have sufficient knowledge of what the original colors were. We know that sand is tan, wood is brown, the sky is blue, their suits and shoes and hats were very dark. These are all HARD FACTS. It is possible to do editorialization with such care that the output is historically accurate. And I submit to all three of you that this is what has been accomplished here.}} These are highly presumptuous comments. "Historically accurate"--according to what reliable source? "Tan", "brown" and "blue" are the most generic of descriptions of sand, wood and sky, but are no substitute for the undetermined reality of a given scene. You don't know if the sand was FFDAB9 or EEE8AA or FFE4B5 or FFDEAD, or if the sky was ADD8E6 or 1E90FF or B0C4DE or 87CEEB or whether it even was clear, blue...or overcast. But these are mere details. The overarching point I'm making is that it's not appropriate for an editor to arrogate to themself the role of proclaiming a "historically accurate" depiction of anything, especially not by radical revision of a world-famous image. You may think it is accurate. I think it is mere imagineering. You have argued that the articles are not about the "history of photography". My response: that's a non-sequitur. The purpose of the articles is to present accurate encyclopedic knowledge from reliable sources, including knowledge represented by photographs in their original form, or, at least, not radically manipulated to create a vision that springs from an editor's assumptions. In keeping with my original suggestion that a link would be ok, I won't object to image placement in secondary positions like See Also or a Gallery, but I could never support complete exclusion of the iconic b&w photo from either article, nor its placement anywhere other than in leading or context-appropriate positions. ] (]) 07:59, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
This discussion is steered completely off-track. This is a search for consensus about replacing/including one image. We don’t want walls of text, nor lecturing of other editors about what Misplaced Pages is about. {{u|Wright Stuf}}, please focus. Thanks. --] (]) 10:00, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I need to apologize yet again. For wasting everyone's time here with my "wall of text". I had expressed my expectation that this must have been an issue resolved long ago. I just now found this to be true. Please see new subsection below. --] (]) 12:40, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
=== Colorization of historical photos - Consensus was established way back in 2014 === | |||
As it turns out, we have an exact parallel to the issue being discussed here: | |||
- Use of a colorized historical photo in the infobox,<br> | |||
-- Ensuring that it is properly labeled as such,<br> | |||
- Keeping the black & white historical version in the article which is focused on photography.<br> | |||
Here are the articles from where our issue here was discussed and settled back in 2014: | |||
- Article focused on event/person using colorized historical photo in the infobox: ].<br> | |||
- Article focused on photography/photographer keeping the historical black & white version: ]. | |||
This is exactly parallel to our case here with the Wright Flyer article focused on the event, and the ] article focused on photography.<br> | |||
Had I found this earlier, I would not have wasted anyone's time (my own being most important to me). This matter was closed more than six years before I opened it. Based on this long established and extremely stable consensus which has endured throughout that entire period of well over 2,000 days, our article here has now been fixed. --] (]) 12:40, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Please link the consensus, I'm not seeing it. There is a two person discussion on the Chavchavadze talk page, one says it's a fake photo, the other disagrees and that's how it ends, with the photo being used. "Extremely stable" consensus is incorrect if this is what you are pointing to, as this very discussion above overturns that non-established consensus. Maybe a full RfC is needed, or maybe I'm missing the consensus you're talking about, but as of now the colored photo, no matter how interesting and reimaginingable informative, should not be used in the infobox per this discussion. ] (]) 12:55, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::In that article, there are a minimum of 4 editors who directly weighed in on the topic: Paul Barlow (edit ), Centpacrr (edit ), Damianmx (edit ) and Jaqeli (edit ).<br> | |||
::On top of this, there is tacit agreement from ''all other editors'' who made changes to this article ''without voicing objection'' to its most prominent image, which is clearly labeled as colorized. | |||
::And on top of those countless dozens of editors who expressed their consent by way of silence, there are the untold THOUSANDS of readers who saw this image, each one of them with the ability to remove it, or voice objection to it. So consensus in this case arguably involved a rough estimate of maybe five figures worth of people. | |||
::I can also provide links to places outside of this article where the colorization issue has been thoroughly discussed. But those threads do not relate near exactly as this one Ilia Chavchavadze case does, so I would be risking branching too far off-track for some here, starting into another wall of text. (], I need to thank you in particular for providing me with the motivation to do the deep search that was necessary to find this example. I knew from the start here that established precedent would be the most definitive way to resolve this issue, but I was too lazy to do the needle-in-haystack hunt.) But those other lengthy discussions I was able to find were quite fascinating... because those folks presented the exact same type of arguments we have been rehashing here. I'd be glad to share for anyone who wouldn't see this as a waste of space. | |||
::Now those who may not like what has been established here on Misplaced Pages, I'd like to suggest that the new fix for the Wright Flyer article is actually the ''best of both worlds''. No one even need *click* anymore to view the historical b&w photo. It's now been set up where a reader need only ] the ] and the b&w image pops up, without even leaving the article. --] (]) 13:55, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Here I was being lazy again, saying "maybe five figures worth of people". The precise number is '''100,000+ Page Views'''. () () | |||
:: And the precise number throughout that period were '''~140 Total Edits''', incl ~27 minor edits. (Hard stats ). --] (]) 14:23, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Of the four editors you said weighed in, two removed the digitally colored image and two replaced it. No consensus exists in that exchange. The consensus in this present discussion, so far, is to keep the historical and iconic black and white image. Besides, the image you're pointing to as the overriding consensus is not historically important in terms of being an internationally known multi-generational iconic image. Good work in finding it though, you're very persistent and that's an admirable trait in a Wikipedian (makes the other editors have to come up with the best arguments). You picked an iconic photo to make this point, and that, I agree, is the way to go to give the concept air and get it out in the open. Maybe an RfC is the way to play this, but I think it would end up favoring the iconic b&w over the nice but questionable "maybe true colored" rendition. ] (]) 16:08, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I don't see how a decision reached at the biography of Ilia Chavchavadze has foundational relevance to this article about the first successful airplane. The monochrome photo is historic, while any new colorized version is not. If someone's colorized version is discussed widely in the media, then we could conceivably include it. But that isn't happening. The policy I'm leaning on is ] in which minor issues that are peripheral to the topic are shed due to their lack of central importance. ] (]) 16:53, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{Outdent|1}} Reply to both ] & ]: | |||
I readily agree that the Wright Flyer photo carries ''orders of magnitude'' greater historical importance than some obscure guy who did some things. December 17, 1903, was a SINGULAR MOMENT in human history. Down to the split second, this photo has captured the singularity: The very start of humanity's first airplane flight. Nevertheless, '''PRECEDENT''' has been established. And precedent operates on ''PRINCIPLE''. The issue is not big vs small. It is wright vs wrong. 'Right', in this case, meaning being in accord with established Misplaced Pages principles. More succinctly, <u>Being 'right' scales</u>. | |||
That is to say, what is 'good' for the tiny case must also be good for our ginormous case. | |||
I will recommend 2 strategies for anyone wishing to overturn this established precedent:<br> | |||
:- Find a counterexample which fits the parallel outlined above. If you succeed in finding a case where consensus went the other direction, ''rejecting'' the colorization, then we will NO LONGER BE IN A STABLE STATE here. It will be conflicting consensus which will need to be resolved. | |||
:- Another approach would be for you all to go to that Talk page where six+ years of consensus has gotten entrenched... and work there to get this precedent re-evaluated. | |||
Now there is a 3rd Option which would be ideal: Create clear '''WP'''. But I have no idea how Misplaced Pages Policy comes into being. Rub Jimmy's head or something. | |||
:Randy: "Of the four editors you said weighed in, two removed the digitally colored image and two replaced it. No consensus exists in that exchange." | |||
Actually, '''it does establish consensus'''. For the moment, let's ignore the ''10s of thousands'' who decided to tacitly agree with no one outside of these two editors objecting. Those two ''assented'' to having their edits reverted. They did this by ''not persisting'' against the reverts. '''SILENCE CONSTITUTES AN ABSTENTION''' against voting down the change. And this very act of not acting... or rather, ''giving up'' their objection is what created the consensus. Centpacrr presented an extremely strong argument for why the proper action was to keep the colorized version, and to this day NO ONE has replied there to refute those excellent points. | |||
Consensus on this issue was asserted on 15 September 2014 at 22:04. Every single edit action since that moment has served to quicken and solidify CONSENSUS. There was one sole exception: More than a full year later, at 22:30 on 25 December 2015, Damianmx did a revert to what by that point in time had become a very stable situation. NO rationale was presented. Damianmx was promptly reverted. And THAT WAS THE END OF THAT. It is now more than 5 years later. Countless 10s of THOUSANDS of people have weighed in on the matter... by ''not'' weighing in. | |||
Centpacrr might as well have closed off his Talk post with, "Speak now, or forever hold you peace." As you all know, I happen to see the established consensus to fit with the basic principles which guide us here as Misplaced Pages editors. And this brings us to the ] rebuttal. This is a classic example of WP being misapplied. A policy is delineated for one set of circumstances... than an editor attempts an impressive contortionist backbend in an effort to get words to fit into a situation it never applied to. The overarching Policy is NPOV. Colorization is ''not'' a Neutrality issue. | |||
But let's say that we are Olympic caliber rhythmic gymnasts, and we wish to attempt the backbend anyway... Let's go for it. Well here is a quote from the first sentence from WP:NPOV: | |||
:"All encyclopedic content on Misplaced Pages must be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), which means representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic." | |||
Well we KNOW perfectly well what John T. Daniels' POV was at this instant. It was asserted early on here that he watched this moment in Living Color. The focus of this article is on the event. So our bent over version of WP:NPOV actually ''DEMANDS'' that the color image be presented. To argue otherwise would require evidence that he was totally colorblind. But then the person behind him witnessed this in full color. So that angle fails too. | |||
Now let's scroll down to UNDUE. Well here is a quote from the first sentence from that section: | |||
:"...each article ... represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint..." | |||
Here too, yet again, we have Zero Evidence that anyone witnessed this historic event in monochrome. Time to call the ambulance because our heroic gymnasts have broken their backs. We can now clearly see that the b&w infobox is the version in violation of bent WP:UNDUE. Absolutely no one, as far as known reliable sources tell us, witnessed this event in monochrome. | |||
Let's close here with a point I expect WE CAN ALL AGREE ON: | |||
The fundamental underlying issue is <u>Lack of Specific Policy Guidance</u>. Consensus needed to be dredged from an obscure corner of the Project. Sufficient. But not ideal. So I once again point to Option 3 above, for everyone wishing to accomplish a reversal of long-established Consensus. --] (]) 21:10, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
One more comment on the earlier Policy quote: "...representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias..." | |||
I readily agreed early on that the colorization process includes INHERENT BIAS. But this goes back to the baby/bathwater point. Comparing which version has less bias from how the event was witnessed, the b&w is like trying to enter a turtle in the Indy 500. Black&white is but a speedbump in the road of progress. The tried & true process which makes Misplaced Pages great. We are looping around the Brickyard in a cycle of continuous improvement, on the whole. The turtle gets to the Winner's Circle in the Turtle 500. And b&w photos likewise rise to the top in articles which focus on photography. --] (]) 21:42, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
==== "I do not like the established consensus, therefore I will refuse to follow it." ==== | |||
I expect everyone here is perfectly clear that the words in quotes above do not fly here on Misplaced Pages. --] (]) 21:52, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Give it up. Drop the stick. You don't have anything close to a local consensus here at this article. Some sympathetic thoughts have been directed your way, and some very stiff opposition. So the result is: no colorized photo. ] (]) 22:09, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:"The turtle gets to the Winner's Circle in the Turtle 500." That's pretty cool, did you make that up? Can't find in on the net. Of course there is no consensus here to include the colorization as the lead image, although it too is pretty cool. Are you saying ] should apply? I'm a fan of that one as well, but in this case the historian in me (he likes pancakes) sides with the established iconic black and white image. I may owe an apology though, just watched a film set near and on the ocean, and the sky was light blue like your image. So you say the color values in the coloring process read it out as light blue? Interesting. You've done some great work on Misplaced Pages, and it's obvious how much you believe in the outstandingness of the colorized image. I like how you fight until the last bell rings. ] (]) 22:51, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Wright Stuf, in your first response to my reversions to the black&white historic photograph, you ended by writing: "The end goal is clear consensus being established." That has happened. One editor favors the colorized image to be leading or exclusive: Wright Stuf. Four do not: RandyKryn, Ariadacapo, Binksternet, and DonFB. You have misunderstood consensus on Misplaced Pages. The Misplaced Pages policy on ] refers throughout to discussion by ''editors''. The word "reader/s" does not appear on the page. Consensus on the content of Misplaced Pages articles is achieved by editors, not readers. Furthermore, no rule directs that consensus in one article must transfer, migrate or automatically apply to any other article. Consensus is achieved on each article, separately. Only the consensus that created or revised a Policy or Guideline applies to all articles. I think you may need more experience on Misplaced Pages to gain a better understanding of its functioning. ] (]) 23:55, 7 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Replying to all three...<br> | |||
::I have been editing Misplaced Pages for an extremely long time. I have done multiple visits to Misplaced Pages Headquarters, including the obligatory photo standing next to the Puzzle Ball. | |||
:::]: "Consensus on the content of Misplaced Pages articles is achieved by editors, not readers." | |||
::My statement was perfectly clear that Consensus over there was established by 4 editors.<br> | |||
::Countless dozens of other editors supported it. Then I went further to explain that 5-figures worth of ''potential editors'' likewise provided tacit support. Through their choice of not editing. Feel free to drop this last category if you don't care to consider potential editors. This leaves you in the rough neighborhood of ~100ish editors who did consent to the colorized infobox. And the total of ACTIVE EDITORS who support the consensus just today JUMPED FROM 4 UP TO 9 now. Because while the 5 of us have been editing this Talk page, NONE of us have switched that infobox back to b&w. All 5 of us here have cast our votes by way of inaction. | |||
::'''9 editors. Plus ~100 other editors. Ignore this if you want. But it is a HARD FACT. Consensus on our issue is established fact. 6+ years now. | |||
:::DonFB: "Consensus is achieved on each article, separately." | |||
::Now you are making stuff up. I will be tickled pink if you can support that statement.<br> | |||
::And I will be the first to admit that I MADE UP this concept of consensus established in one article carries over to an article debating the same essential situation. The huge difference is that I supported my position with logic. I didn't bother with digging through WP on this because common sense prevails here. "Do we need to reinvent the wheel every time we need to get rolling?" Obviously not. | |||
::], I'm not here to fight. But then again, I won't refuse to engage, like a wussified Maverick post-flat spin.<br> | |||
::I actually was ready to concede to Viper's flight of 4 editors as being no match. "B&w infobox it is." That's where I was at. But then I watched that 4-ship formation (you can be the flight leader) dive straight below the consensus hard deck. The extremely unusual case where 1-vs-4 results with the solo pilot flying off into the sunset, while the commanding officer of the four opposed editors is in the awkward position of writing letters of condolences to the next of kin for the four. | |||
::The Hard Deck is an inviolable rule. Hence the "Hard". Consensus on Misplaced Pages is itself a rigid guideline. But as you point out, we happen to be equipped with the IAR Trump Card. (Post-Jan6, that card needs rebranding.) Let's call it the IAR Joker's Wild. Except I see you three to have pulled out the Joker here. Absolutely nothing I posted before was done with any thought to IAR. It is a card we all have, yes. But not one to be played lightly. | |||
::The proper use of IAR is this...<br> | |||
::When all other Policy fails, and you have justification to take an action which results in improvement to an article, THEN you have license to IAR. It is not to be used lightly without the sound justification for an out of the box exception. | |||
::Here, with this one photo, we are squarely inside the box. Colorization is an issue which impacts hundreds, if not thousands of Misplaced Pages images. The problem is that the walls of this particular box are invisible. No policy on colorization has yet been published. Not that I can find, at least. So we must do our best gauging of the walls by using other methods. And I was actually SHOCKED to find Consensus established in a case which perfectly matches ours. | |||
::Bottom line: The totality of policies we have to go by show that you three are the ones below the Hard Deck here. I don't know where the fourth wingman is right now. Consensus is ''not''... "Let's do a count of hands: Ok, 4 here, 1 there." Consensus is not democratic rule. Consensus has more to do with PRINCIPLE. Which answer conforms best to policies that guide us. Centpaccr presented a SOLID case for colorization. We have a case here which fits neatly within the box they built over there. | |||
::What you four amount to is, "Let's reinvent the wheel." But we were handed a wheel which works quite well.<br> | |||
::It is absolutely clear that the proper course of action is for all 5 of us to regroup. ABOVE the Hard Deck. This means revert the Infobox back to color, and conform to long-established Consensus. Any notion of "local consensus" grates against the principle of Broad Consensus. Which all of us follow in alike circumstances. Like it or not, ] ''IS'' that parallel case. | |||
::And yes, I originated the Turtle 500 thing. I've probably taken all these analogies way too far. I sure hope you all like Top Gun. I was thinking that was a safe one, seeing how it is an aviation page which brought us all together. --] (]) 00:29, 8 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Ok, I am going to take a step back for a while to let this breathe. I am absolutely clear on what the next step here needs to be. Explicitly stated above. I hope that when I return, I find that the dough has risen. (First turtles, now baking. Yikes.) Goodbye for the time being. I have built another wall big enough to satisfy DT. That's definitely reason to take a breather. --] (]) 00:52, 8 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
=== TL, DR === | |||
Wow, ]! A colorized picture always scream "fake". It should be avoided. This is an encyclopedia, not a fantasy.--] (]) 07:34, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:That's a fair summary, IMHO.] (]) 09:12, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
===PoV-pushing=== | |||
{{user|Wright Stuf}} is very blatantly pushing their personal point of view (PoV) on Misplaced Pages, having first started messing with this image shortly after creating their account. We see here classic PoV-pushing behaviour in responding to criticism not by ]ing but by ] and piling up ] of text. A very clear consensus of "No, thank you" has emerged in the above discussion. This needs to end now, before it becomes ]. — Cheers, ] (]) 10:55, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
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(Inserted- Your input is being requested here:<br> ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ] and clarification from ]. --] (]) 23:32, 9 February 2021 (UTC)) | |||
I am going to ask everyone here for a momentary reset. Let's forget about the Wright Brothers...<br> | |||
Let's say that all of us here are interested in ], the Vietnamese Buddhist monk who lit himself on fire. We are faced with making the editorial choice on which of these two images to present in that Misplaced Pages article: | |||
: | |||
I am calling on every one of us here to vote. A simple one word answer is sufficient:<br> | |||
'''- monochrome''', or<br> | |||
'''- color''' | |||
I will vote last. --] (]) 13:53, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Again, similar to the Wright flight, the colorized version (if it's colorized and not an original) gives more information but is not the historical iconic black and white photo which is also a Misplaced Pages feature image. Colorization may have its place, and on the other hand there is ]. Iconic images align more with Ansel Adams (although he did play with the shading and other aspects to create his artistic photos), they have their own history and notability. ] (]) 14:40, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:So, monochrome. ] (]) 23:29, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Two different articles, with no correlation. Very different historic photos. I'm not participating in this sideshow. ] (]) 23:52, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Ditto. ] (]) 07:10, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
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Hello, people, a massive discussion like this over a colourised or black and white picture seems entirely unecessary - its a goddamn picture, not a question of life and death. A massive ] for everyone seems well deserved. If this much discussion can't solve such a petty detail, then it's time for a !vote or something else, cause clearly this is a waste of time. Cheers, ] (] / ]) 15:20, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Assume good faith, as this discussion has resulted in some good edits elsewhere, and to some editors it is not a petty detail. Massive trouts need plenty of water to swim in, and Misplaced Pages discussions like this are all wet. ] (]) 15:28, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::I agree with ] here. This is very simple and clear issue and does not require massive walls of text. Also the massive walls of text are discouraging others from bothering to participate as they know that any posts will be meet with more massive walls of text that are not worth getting drawn into. We have been over this all before, colouring photos is simply ] and doesn't go. - ] (]) 19:23, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:On second look, it looks like User:Wright Stuf might be (inadvertantly, though can't be sure) engaging in ]: since this debate started, the talk page has doubled in size from just under 50 kB to just under 100 kB, and simple maths from their contribution history give at least half of that amount. I suggest they let others express themselves, or at least not feel compelled to offer a detailed rebuttal to every editor who opposes them. As for my opinion on the whole thing, it is usually the fact that the historic event is depicted with the usual black and white picture (plenty of things are depicted in black and white without that causing problem). In fact, if I may, ] is a thing, and some people do experience life in not "full colour". I don't see why us non-colourblind people would suddenly complain about being restricted to a black and white picture, especially such a well known one. I've always found colourisations to be more interesting from the "computer gimmicks" point of view than the "restoring historical artefacts" one. ] (] / ]) 00:20, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Thanks for taking a second look. :) ] (]) 00:30, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::<br>], my persistence here has been founded on the principle of established Consensus. One which I am conforming to, and you are refusing to follow. In that light, if anyone is being bludgeoned here, it's me. I have expressed willingness to take an extended leave of absence from this entire discussion, and you come back to this section to say, "I suggest they let others express themselves". That is exactly what I announced. I was offering 10.5 months of you all choosing to go against Consensus, unopposed by me. | |||
::As for colorblindness, I had addressed that long ago here. Just scroll up a long ways. --] (]) 00:40, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
=== Fundamental issue: LACK of Policy guidance === | |||
]: "We have been over this all before, colouring photos is simply ] and doesn't go." {{Citation needed|reason=Reliable source needed for this unsubstantiated assertion, which if accurate could have saved us all a buttload of time|date=February 2021}} | |||
Perhaps ''you've'' been over it. But I haven't. And I've searched. The string ''colo'' (which covers colorization/colourization) does not appear ''one single time'' in WP:OR. Nor does colorization/colourization appear one single time in ]. This is the best I've been able to find... | |||
<blockquote>]:<br>"It is not acceptable for an editor to use ] to distort the facts or position illustrated by an image. Manipulated images should be prominently noted as such. Any manipulated image where the encyclopedic value is materially affected should be posted to ]."</blockquote> | |||
Everything I have been advocating here conforms with WP:NOR completely. That's NOR as published. Not NOR as imagined. --] (]) 20:57, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Wright Stuf, I suggest then that you ask for a policy clarification at ]. The consensus here is ''clearly'' against using the colorized image in the infobox, and leaning toward excluding it from the article altogether. There's also no interest in a poll at this time. Given that the colorization is your own work, you also have a clear bias towards using the image that could be considered a ]. I'd suggest backing off of this article and talk page for a while (probably a month or more), and pursue some other interests on or off Misplaced Pages. Please realize that discussions that drag on like this one has quickly become a time sink to most users, who have busy lives amd other interests besides Misplaced Pages. So please, give it a break, and allow things to simmer down here. ] (]) 21:27, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::I will be perfectly happy to give this a rest for ''the remainder of 2021''. <u>I will commit to this if '''''only 3''''' of you vote "monochrome" in the ] above</u>. ] has already weighed in. If his vote was for monochrome, then my (in)action would require only two more of you. (I would also like you to clarify on exactly where you stand, Randy. One word.) | |||
::As for COI, the colorization artist who I am seeking your feedback on is Sanna Dullaway. I am not her. I have never met her. I wouldn't know what she looked like if I did. | |||
::As for simmering down, I myself have not detected any signs of boilover. We have been engaged here in respectful, well-reasoned argumentation. I see the merit of your side, and I went so far as to map out '''THREE''' proper paths forward for anyone who wishes to contest the Consensus which was established in 2014 over on the Ilya article. | |||
::ME request policy clarification? Consensus on this issue was settled a very long time ago. In favor of the edit I have been advocating. For the ''exact same rationale'' I was supporting before finding Centpaccr's solid rebuttal. Because of that established consensus, <u>the onus is on all of you</u> to seek any Policy guidance which might have a hope of reversing the longstanding Consensus. FURTHERMORE, if you read my previous post, then you know that my position conforms ''perfectly'' with WP:NOR. This ball is in your court. I await your votes. Feel free to LIE up there if you simply want to get me to shut up. But my remaining months of 2021 will be spent knowing that I left here with my integrity intact. | |||
::It is all of you who are persistently refusing to follow long established Consensus. As highlighted at the top of that subsection, such behavior simply does not fly on Misplaced Pages. | |||
:::'''"I do not like the established consensus, therefore I will refuse to follow it."''' | |||
::This is simply ''not'' how Misplaced Pages operates. --] (]) 23:08, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::I see no mention of a Sanna Dullaway on the image file page. From the file: {{tq|"This image was restored by User:Wright Stuf in November, 2018 using GIMP, and then manually colorized on February 5, 2021, also using GIMP...John T. Daniels (restoration & colorization by Wright Stuf)}} If you're referring to a different image that you want added to the article, I missed that completely. If so, please make it clear what images you're discussing here. Thanks. ] (]) 23:39, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::I am preparing to exit this discussion. All that is needed is 2 more votes for 'monochrome' in the ] above. Sanna Dullaway is the artist who colorized that. Freakin PTSD inducing, I imagine. If I knew of any other image which could speak so powerfully, I would have used that one. --] (]) 23:58, 9 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::Sanna Dullaway colorized ]? that's not in the file information. ] (]) 00:02, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::Scroll up to the ] and you'll find the iconic photo of the burning monk, where the photog was awarded the Pulitzer Prize. I found Sanna's colorized version here: | |||
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::::::I'm obviously not communicating clearly. But I hope it's all clear now. --] (]) 00:15, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Why would we want to add a picture of a burning monk to an article about the Wright Flyer? And how does that excuse you of a COI for promoting an image of the Flyer that you (apparently) colorized? ] (]) 00:29, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Ok, I NOW finally understand what you were saying in your ''21:27, 9 Feb'' comment above. COI is a curious argument to inject here. Every single change made to Misplaced Pages carries that same bias. The principle you are arguing for here is that: | |||
:::::::::"Every single edit done on Misplaced Pages should be REVERTED, because the user who posted the change is heavily biased toward their new words." | |||
::::::::A most curious angle. But yes, I do admit that I'm heavily biased toward the color image I made. But you can also find here where I've expressed TOTAL OPENNESS to having that image '''immediately replaced''' the moment anyone comes forward with anything that gets closer to realism. --] (]) 01:02, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' the use of a colorized image as the lead image in this article or any other article that is not about colorizing, photo retouching, special effects or closely related articles. It amounts to original research. Go to Google Images, and enter "sand" in the search box. There is wide color variation in sand. I have experimented with colorizing photos myself and enjoyed Peter Jackson's '']'', a masterpiece of colorization. I am not opposed to colorization in the abstract. Even so, I am firmly in favor of using historic black and white photos as the lead images of encyclopedia articles when high quality color photos are not a available. I am also opposed to walls of text and the bludgeoning of discussions. ] ] 00:39, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Your comment here could be taken to indicate that you'd vote '''color''' for the monk image. Please post up there if you'd like to remove any doubt. | |||
::I interpret your position to be that you would '''Favor''' colorized here, or at least ''not oppose'', if only we had a better, more realistic looking colorization effort. Please correct me if that's mistaken. | |||
::All that said, ''I readily agree'' that the colorized Flyer is '''FAR FROM PERFECT'''. I am disappointed with in in several key aspects. Wilbur's fleshtones are HORRID. All of the wood tones are off from being perfectly convincing. Etc, etc. This was my first photo colorization. I did it with freeware. There are countless thousands of people who can do a MUCH BETTER JOB. But the argument presented toward the top is that using my far from perfect colorization will '''PUT US ON THE PATH''' toward continual improvement (see "philosophical question" & "Turtle 500" above.) --] (]) 01:26, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
So, Wright Stuf, your color version now appears in both articles: Wright brothers & Wright Flyer, though not exclusively, nor in a leading position (but pretty darn close in WB). Are you dissatisfied with that outcome? Consensus against your opinion in this discussion is overwhelming. By your logic, that would mean the historic photo in the other article you referenced should now be changed back to b&w. But I'll repeat: consensus in one article does not dictate a decision in another. You can use consensus elsewhere to support your argument, but not to command a result. ] (]) 01:22, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I make no commands of anyone here.<br> | |||
:If the Ilya article was not a ''perfect parallel'' in its essence, then I would be ''the first'' to agree with you that consensus over there would not apply here. Except that the situation there is the same in all important ways but one. That image has no iconic historical status. And this is exactly why the monk was selected, to help fill this one gap. | |||
::DFB: "Are you dissatisfied with that outcome?" | |||
:I am '''THRILLED''' that the current edits include the colorized version. But I hope it is clear to everyone that the reason this didn't end long ago is because of PRINCIPLE. We either follow Consensus, or we don't. Your question is akin to asking a lottery winner if they're satisfied with the check they received. "So what if the IRS took 90%? You still pocket 10%!" NO. That's not only dissatisfying. If you read the tax code, you'll see that '''a robbery just occurred'''. --] (]) 01:58, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
Ok, forget the monk. I am out of here. '''GOODBYE, and thank you all for this civil discussion.'''<br> | |||
Everyone here knows the direction Misplaced Pages Policy points us toward. I am exiting now with full faith in that process. In this principle. My parting comment, believe it or not... | |||
"." --] (]) 02:12, 10 February 2021 (UTC) | |||
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Kitty Hawk, alternate or original name?
This image, used on the page, includes a note from Orville Wright which indicates that he is calling the plane Kitty Hawk. It is clickable for a larger image. Was Kitty Hawk the name that the Wright's used for this plane and, if so, did they also name it, then or later, the Wright Flyer or was that a name used by others? Here is an article which includes, near the bottom, evidence that the plane was called the Kitty Hawk. Seems enough to include it as an alternate name, but is there information that it should be the official name with Wright Flyer being the common name? The Smithsonian includes Kitty Hawk Flyer as an alternate name (click 'long description'), but Orville's note doesn't include the word 'Flyer'. Thanks. Randy Kryn (talk) 00:27, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
- The "Here is an article..." link above has a photo with the "Kitty Hawk" name displayed, would that be copyable for the page? Randy Kryn (talk) 20:29, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- The two photos (this page, and the truck with big sign in the wright.edu article) would be considered primary sources. But they seem to provide some support for applying the name "Kitty Hawk" to the plane. As a more general comment, I think the first sentence of any article should avoid, as much as possible, including a variety of different names (and pronunciations and linguistic versions) for the topic. I prefer that such additional identifiers be put at the end of the opening paragraph. Policy/Guidelines support that idea--of not stuffing the lead sentence with such material, making it hard to read. DonFB (talk) 02:10, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Sounds like a good format. The Smithsonian reference seems like the key one we presently have for the Kitty Hawk name (and Orville's note seems the icing on the cake). Randy Kryn (talk) 02:20, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Agree, the airandspace.si.edu article is good secondary source. DonFB (talk) 02:24, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Looking again at the initial naming sentence (which I've edited for brevity) its placement seems fine as it contains no pronunciation and is brief enough not to confuse readers or their topic comprehension. It may actually read awkwardly moving those to the end of the first paragraph, and could inhibit reading flow from the first to the second paragraph. What wording are you envisioning, maybe I'm missing it and you have a good sentence in mind. Thanks. Randy Kryn (talk) 12:09, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Well, I just wanted to state my preference as a general principle. I envisioned simply moving all the secondary names to the paragraph end, beginning: "The airplane is also known as...." I almost did, but decided I can live with its present form. Those kinds of ledes are a pet peeve, and I always worry a little that another editor coming along will see the multiple names up front and decide to add another, and pretty soon the lede becomes a big speed bump right at the start of the article. Several Policies/Guidelines urge not stuffing a lede sentence with multiple names, pronouncers, etc., and as a reader of the encyclopedia myself, I couldn't agree more. On a great many articles, however, those recommendations are honored in the breach. Here is one that was so bad as to be laughable: DonFB (talk) 02:19, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
- sol (smiling out loud and almost lol) at that article before your edit. I've had the same reaction to many other articles which overrun the first sentence with similar, but no doubt not as extreme, examples as that one. After reading that one, and thanks for pointing it out, I may use it on my talk page intro, the first sentence here seems like a walk in the park and doesn't seem like it would hinder the word flow for too many readers. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:27, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
- Well, I just wanted to state my preference as a general principle. I envisioned simply moving all the secondary names to the paragraph end, beginning: "The airplane is also known as...." I almost did, but decided I can live with its present form. Those kinds of ledes are a pet peeve, and I always worry a little that another editor coming along will see the multiple names up front and decide to add another, and pretty soon the lede becomes a big speed bump right at the start of the article. Several Policies/Guidelines urge not stuffing a lede sentence with multiple names, pronouncers, etc., and as a reader of the encyclopedia myself, I couldn't agree more. On a great many articles, however, those recommendations are honored in the breach. Here is one that was so bad as to be laughable: DonFB (talk) 02:19, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
- Looking again at the initial naming sentence (which I've edited for brevity) its placement seems fine as it contains no pronunciation and is brief enough not to confuse readers or their topic comprehension. It may actually read awkwardly moving those to the end of the first paragraph, and could inhibit reading flow from the first to the second paragraph. What wording are you envisioning, maybe I'm missing it and you have a good sentence in mind. Thanks. Randy Kryn (talk) 12:09, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Agree, the airandspace.si.edu article is good secondary source. DonFB (talk) 02:24, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Sounds like a good format. The Smithsonian reference seems like the key one we presently have for the Kitty Hawk name (and Orville's note seems the icing on the cake). Randy Kryn (talk) 02:20, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- The two photos (this page, and the truck with big sign in the wright.edu article) would be considered primary sources. But they seem to provide some support for applying the name "Kitty Hawk" to the plane. As a more general comment, I think the first sentence of any article should avoid, as much as possible, including a variety of different names (and pronunciations and linguistic versions) for the topic. I prefer that such additional identifiers be put at the end of the opening paragraph. Policy/Guidelines support that idea--of not stuffing the lead sentence with such material, making it hard to read. DonFB (talk) 02:10, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
THANK YOU, Randy, for highlighting this issue. And for these initial steps you've taken to correct the situation.
Any child who grew up as an avid builder of plastic model airplane kits knows very well that this most famous airplane is called the "Kitty Hawk". That's because this was clearly the name on the box: Google Image Search: kitty+hawk+wright+model+kit These ubiquitous kits, available all across the USA, spanned from the 1950s through the 1990s at a minimum.
And here is the motherload reference for the Wright Brothers' 1903 airplane being named the "Kitty Hawk":
This 'Wright 1903 Flyer "Operation Homecoming" Scrapbook' from the Smithsonian Institute has well over one hundred instances of this airplane being called the "Kitty Hawk". Furthermore, that is the name which is used exclusively throughout this document (with three rare exceptions cited below). Here are particular pages of note:
- - PDF p41,p45,p73,p221 of254: airplane referred to as "Kitty", for short, along with the commonly used name "Kitty Hawk".
- - PDF p29,p47-57,p81 of254: airplane referred to as "Kittyhawk" (with no space), along with the commonly used name "Kitty Hawk".
- - PDF p41,p67 of254: "Kitty Hawk Day" proclamation.
- - PDF p43 of254: US NAVY OFFICIAL MEMO & PLAN, airplane referred to as "Kitty Hawk" x2 in Memo, x1 in Plan, signed by XO of USS Palau.
Here are the rare exceptions to where the aircraft is referred to by any name other than the "Kitty Hawk" (or "Kitty", or "Kittyhawk"):
- - PDF p71 of254: airplane "...known as both the "Flyer" and the "Kitty Hawk"." (newspaper: Paterson Evening News, Paterson, NJ).
- - PDF p87 of254: "...Orville sought to have the 'Flyer' (as they called me)...", Magazine article, Current Science and Aviation.
- - PDF p109 of254: "...the Wright Brothers' "Flyer" is...", (along with calling it the "Kitty Hawk", newspaper: The Knickerbocker News, Albany, NY).
This speech transcript is what I consider to be the STRONGEST reference:
- - PDF p173 of254: Hap Arnold's message at the Smithsonian presentation event, Dec 17, 1948, "...this priceless airplane, the "Kitty Hawk", is back home...", "...I can never think of the "Kitty Hawk" without being aware of...", "...which the "Kitty Hawk" fathered...".
Hap Arnold knew the Wright Brothers personally. One of the "Early Birds", he was taught to fly by them at their school. He was the only 5-star general of the US Air Force, along with being the winner of the first Mackay Trophy, and being a founder of Pan Am and Project RAND.
And then of course there is Paul Garber of the Smithsonian who oversaw Operation Homecoming. Garber was one of the foremost historians on the pioneers of flight. He personally accompanied the aircraft during its legs from Nova Scotia to Washington DC. He had approval authority over these aspects of the entire mission, to include the name by which the airplane was referred to.
This Smithsonian reference includes examples from many various newspapers which referred to this airplane exclusively as the "Kitty Hawk", including The New York Times, The New York Sun, The Los Angeles Times, San Francisco Chronicle, Washington Daily News, Pittsburgh Post-Gazette, along with newspapers in Paterson, NJ, Dayton, OH, Omaha, NE, Scranton, PA, Albany, NY, Buffalo, NY, Nova Scotia, and Wellington, NZ.
Upon examination of the plethora of sources contained within this Smithsonian scrapbook, it indicates quite clearly that the PRIMARY NAME for this famous airplane is the "Kitty Hawk". And this was my first thought when I first happened across this article, many years ago: "I wonder why they aren't calling this plane the "Kitty Hawk". --Wright Stuf (talk) 02:13, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks Wright Stuf for your detailed research and analysis. Nice work. I enjoyed the link to decades of the scale model planes, all named Kitty Hawk. You've shown that there is a case for Kitty Hawk as primary name, and it would be an interesting RM (as Wright Flyer has probably become the common name). At a minimum your research shows that Kitty Hawk should remain as the main alternative. Randy Kryn (talk) 11:51, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- These were great documents to read. And here is another excellent reference:
- Wilbur & Orville Wright: A Bibliography Commemorating the One-Hundredth Anniversary of the First Powered Flight (NASA Publication SP-2002-4527, published Sep, 2002)
- On pg123 (pdf132of153) you can find a batch of even more examples where the airplane is referred to as the "Kitty Hawk":
- - Kitty Hawk in Museum. Aviation Week, Nov. 29, 1948, vol. 49, no. 22, p.15
- - The Kitty Hawk Comes Home at Last, by Findley, Earl N., U.S. Air Services, Dec. 1948, vol. 33, no. 12, pp. 5-6
- - Kitty Hawk's Last Landing. Air Force, Dec. 1948, vol. 31, no. 12, pp. 18-19
- - America Welcomes the Kittyhawk. Some Extracts from the American Press on the Return of the Aeronautical Beau Geste. Pylon, June 1949, vol. 8, no. 2, p. 21
- These were great documents to read. And here is another excellent reference:
- It's quite colorful to call this plane the "Aeronautical Beau Geste". That aside, Aviation Week and Air Force Magazine are not shabby references, as with the highly prestigious newspapers previously cited above, and of course the US Navy and US Air Force themselves, along with the Smithsonian, the folks who own, keep and maintain the Kitty Hawk. --Wright Stuf (talk) 16:59, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
Legacy section, in light of the name Kitty Hawk
Given the understanding that this famous aircraft has been widely and commonly known as the "Kitty Hawk", it is important for this article to likewise include the legacy of things which followed that were also named "Kitty Hawk". This includes aircraft and spacecraft, ships (airplane/aircraft carriers), and schools.
(These following blockquote paragraphs can be skipped as largely being an aside, separate from the Legacy section being recommended.)
The aircraft naming story is particularly interesting. Aside from single aircraft being given the name "Kitty Hawk", there is the legacy naming of an entire aircraft type as the "Kittyhawk". Then there is the naming pattern observed within a particular aircraft corporation. Grumman, for example, is widely noted for using nicknames ending in "-cat". These are the Wildcat, Hellcat, Tigercat, Bearcat and Tomcat for the F4F, F6F, F7F, F8F and F-14 respectively. Continuing the "cat" theme, there was also the Grumman Panther, Cougar, Jaguar and Tiger. We can guess that when Grumman won the Lunar Module contract, there were strong arguments within the company to give this spacecraft a "-cat" name to continue this legacy. And when that didn't happen, there were 9 Apollo crews who flew these, with the commanders of Apollo 11, 12, 13, 14, 16 & 17 all having been Navy carrier pilots. In the case of Apollo 12 & 14, BOTH moonwalkers were Navy officers who had flown off of carriers. So any of these missions could have given their spaceships "-cat" callsigns. Neil Armstrong, Pete Conrad, Al Bean, Fred Haise, Alan Shepard, John Young and Gene Cernan all had flown Grumman "cats" off of carriers as their primary aircraft. The others (Lovell, Mitchell, etc) probably flew Grumman "cats" as a Navy test pilot. The best opportunity seems to have been Apollo 12, the All-Navy crew, with all three being Grumman "cat" veterans, with moonwalkers Conrad & Bean having flown the F9F Cougar operationally (VF-43 & VA-44 repectively), and the Command Module Pilot Dick Gordon having flown the F11F Tiger as a test pilot.But that didn't happen. I've never seen anyone refer to the LM as the Lunacat, nor similar. These "Moon Sailors" never did that. And I've never heard this topic raised, nor any of the moonwalkers asked this directly. But Apollo 14 did name their Command Module the Kitty Hawk (made by North American Aviation, a company which curiously has the same initials as the "First Man", N.A.A.). In parallel with this entrenched history of Grumman "-cats", there is another aircraft company which has an extremely long history of using the "-hawk" nickname. Though I don't hear anyone discuss this one. The Wright Brothers started their own aircraft company. In later years, Wright Aeronautical merged with Curtiss to become Curtiss-Wright, a company which exists to this day, headquartered in North Carolina. You can visit their homepage, and that page shows you the Wright Flyer. Click on that image, and it says this:
- "Curtiss-Wright Corporation ... has a long history with its roots dating back to Orville and Wilbur Wright's first flight in 1903, and Mr. Glenn Curtiss, the father of naval aviation. In 1929, the companies founded by these three great aviation pioneers, the Curtiss Aeroplane and Motor Company and Wright Aeronautical Corporation, merged to form the largest aircraft company at the time..."
So it is this company which produced the P-40 Kittyhawk. Along with an entire line of "-hawk" aircraft, even predating the Wright merger. This includes the P-1, P-2, P-3, P-5, P-6, P-11, P-17, P-22, P-23, P-36 and AT-4 & AT-5 ...ALL named "Hawk". The P-40 is also known as the Warhawk and the Tomahawk. Various other Curtiss models were named the Seahawk, Sparrowhawk, Goshawk and Blackhawk. Then there was the Dayton-Wright XO-3 Mohawk . (Other companies have produced airplanes named the Skyhawk, Nighthawk, Jayhawk, and most recently the Red Hawk, along with the Hawkeye, and the more obscure Hawk Junior. Helo nicknames include the Black Hawk, Seahawk, Pave Hawk, Jayhawk and SpeedHawk. Pilotless aircraft have been named the Global Hawk, T-Hawk and SpyHawk.)
Now I am not aware of these Hawk-themed aircraft nicknames as being connected with the Wright Brothers, or was done in tribute to them (with the obvious exception being the Kittyhawk). But I do see it to be important to have this mentioned here in the Talk page in case anyone were to find a reference where it is stated that there is some connection or tribute. If that were to be found, then it would be important to include that in the Legacy section.
One could even go so far as to identify commonality between these two different families of aircraft nicknames, both the -cat and -hawk traditions. The name "Kitty Hawk" has connotations of both -cat and -hawk. And then there is likewise commonality in the launching mechanism used by the Wright brothers, as well as the Navy carrier jet aircraft from more than one company, the Tomcat, the Skyhawk, etc. These used what is commonly called a "cat launch", here with the term 'cat' being an abbreviation for 'catapult'. 'Cats' using 'cats'. But this peripheral connection goes far beyond the naming pattern topic. And this entire blockquote section can be set aside for current purposes.
For the time being, the recommendation being proposed is to add a Legacy section where direct connections are clear. This includes the specific aircraft and spacecraft named the Kitty Hawk, along with the ships, and even one school in Texas, where the students at Kitty Hawk Middle School in San Antonio are known as The Flyers. This school is located on Kitty Hawk Rd. And this road is one mile from the Main Entrance at Randolph, Air Force Base, the famous pilot training base that was given the nickname "West Point of the Air". Another school, back at the Outer Banks, is First Flight High School, with their mascot being the Nighthawks, yet another -hawk themed name. Across the street is First Flight Middle School, where they are the Seahawks, and also First Flight Elementary, the Flyers. All three of these schools are adjacent to the Wright Brothers Memorial, with statue of the airplane being even closer.
Another excellent subsection for this would include mention of these statues of the Kitty Hawk, like this other one at Embry-Riddle in Daytona, Florida, in Chanute, Kansas, at Maxwell AFB, AL, etc. At least citing the most prominent ones. It seems to be a fitting complement to the Reproductions section.
And there's also the "Kitty Hawk Air Society" of the US Air Force Junior ROTC. Here's one page of theirs: with pin photo showing the Wright Flyer.
Far more important, and arguably the most important of all of these, is the NACA (seal), the 40-plus year predecessor to NASA itself. --Wright Stuf (talk) 23:30, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
- Here's another one I had missed:
- The Viking B-8 Kitty Hawk, used as a trainer during World War II (along with the Waco and Cub). One of the most famous pilots who trained in this Kitty Hawk was none other than Ted Williams, who flew this as prep for entering the "V-5 Naval Aviation program". The screening was done at Amherst's Civilian Pilot Training Course as the first phase of officer candidate training (ref). This B-8 Kitty Hawk was built by Viking Flying Boat Co. of New Haven, CT, after a merger with Bourdon Aircraft Corporation of Hillsgrove, Rhode Island (info HERE & HERE, stating that 34 were built). THIS document shows that George Bush was picked at the same place and time as Ted Williams by the Naval Aviation Cadet Selection Board. So it appears that it would be a reasonable guess that George Bush ALSO flew the B-8 Kitty Hawks at Amherst. (Bush & Williams ended up as "Cloudbusters" in the V-5 program at Chapel Hill along with Gerald Ford, as stated by Anne Keene in her vid, with John Glenn going thru the V-5 program in Iowa.) The marketing slogan that Bourdon used was:
- The Kitty Hawk: "Flies Like a Hawk — Lands Like a Kitten"
- (see AD, with the logo of pilot's wings featuring a cat's face as the center crest, and the words KITTY HAWK on the wings.)
- Imagine if someone were to discover a photo of a pilot like Ted Williams or George Bush flying one of these Kitty Hawks. --Wright Stuf (talk) 21:05, 22 January 2022 (UTC)
- The P-40 Kittyhawk and Tomahawk names are British creations. GraemeLeggett (talk) 21:41, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
- Here's an in-depth reference which explains:
- "...the export version of the P-40, tagged the Tomahawk by Curtiss."
- "...designating it the D-model, while the Royal Air Force gave it a new name: the Kittyhawk."
- https://www.google.com/books/edition/Curtiss_P_40/2pCHCwAAQBAJ?hl=en&gbpv=1
- Here's an in-depth reference which explains:
- And here's another excellent reference which shows that the name "Warhawk" was not used until the F-model (Kittyhawk Mk II):
- This section of Misplaced Pages explains that the batch of P-40s delivered to the AVG Flying Tigers were "Tomahawks":
- Tomahawk IIB's, to be exact. So P-40C's. That was well before the USAAF started calling the P-40F's the Warhawk.
- Then there's also the fighterbomber units who nicknamed their P-40's the "Kittybomber". --Wright Stuf (talk) 04:48, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
- "Kittybomber" is Kittyhawk+bomber (see also "Hurribomber" from (Hawker) Hurricane+bomber, "Whirlibomber" from Westland Whirlwind+bomber and Bombphoon from Bomb(er)+Hawker Typhoon.
- British designations early in the war for American aircraft were taken from placenames in the US. GraemeLeggett (talk) 06:33, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
- One other issue to be resolved. Are things named Kitty Hawk named after the aircraft itself or the first flight (location)?GraemeLeggett (talk) 07:45, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
- Re: Place vs Plane
- I myself do not see that as being anything that needs to be resolved.
- ...because the only reason why the place became famous is because of that singular event which happened on one particular day in history. The day that this aircraft became the first successful airplane.
- Now the US Navy, for example, will tell you their official story that the aircraft carrier was named in tribute to the place...
- "Named for: Kitty Hawk, N.C., and for Kill Devil Hill, the site approximately four miles south of the village of Kitty Hawk, where Orville and Wilbur Wright made the first successful sustained powered flights in a heavier-than-air machine on 17 December 1903.
- https://www.history.navy.mil/research/histories/ship-histories/danfs/k/kitty-hawk-cva-63-ii.html
- Now the US Navy, for example, will tell you their official story that the aircraft carrier was named in tribute to the place...
- But I see this to be as silly as if those kids in San Antonio were told that their school, Kitty Hawk Middle School, is named after THE ROAD!
- It creates cognitive dissonance as to why these kids refer to themselves as "The Flyers", and not, say, "The Asphalts".
- And with the US Navy, to maintain that the ship is named for the village, then it DOES NOT explain why their ship's symbol unambiguously depicts the airplane:
- If it was really only named for the village of Kitty Hawk, then a proper symbol would be the Town Hall, or at least their local 7-Eleven.
- These prominent facts make it absolutely clear that regardless of what their official story might be, these are all examples of things being de facto named in honor of the Wright Brothers and their airplane.
- Even in the case of the USS Wright, here is a patch design which does not depict a silhouette of the two brothers, but instead shows their airplane in flight:
- All of this is unambiguous evidence that what is being honored here is not merely the place, and not only the two men, but THE EVENT that was accomplished by these two brothers at this particular place. These are unequivocal tributes to the Wright Flyer, the Kitty Hawk. --Wright Stuf (talk) 16:03, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
OOPS. I now see that I misread your comment, Graeme.
You were questioning:
- Plane vs Event
Not Plane vs Place.
Here I do not see how the two can be separated. Again, the only reason why the plane is famous is because of the event. And I would assert that our biggest guide on that question is the fact that here on Misplaced Pages, this Wright Flyer article covers both. There is no separate article covering the event as distinct from the aircraft. We have articles on the inventors, the photographer, and the plane. Each of these discuss the event. But not a separate article for that. And so I see no need whatsoever for us to split out any such distinction. And I don't see how we would go about attempting to do that, even if someone saw that to be a productive effort. --Wright Stuf (talk) 16:39, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
Here is what I see to be another excellent guide for us here...
This example of The Spirit of St. Louis (disambiguation).
We have an entire section on Charles Lindbergh#In popular culture.
I have not delved into this, but I would be shocked if anyone there attempts to split out any distinction between the aircraft vs the event. --Wright Stuf (talk) 16:47, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
Italics
Hello Ahunt. Single aircraft which are named are italicized (Wright Flyer, Enola Gay, etc.). Saw you also removed italics from the name of a Space Shuttle and the Ingenuity helicopter, so wanted to let you know before other Space Shuttle pages are unitalicized. Thanks. Randy Kryn (talk) 21:48, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
Why was section discussing pieces of Flyer on Moon and Mars deleted???
All,
Why did editor Randy Kryn remove the short section about pieces of the Wright Flyer being brought to the Moon and Mars? His edit claims "there is an entire section about this at the page below" but it's not clear what "page" he is referring to. I no longer see any references to these in the article.
Certainly, the section as written was entirely accurate and now no information about the Wright Flyer pieces brought to the Moon and Mars appears in this article at all.
Strongly need this restored. TheGreyMouser2016 (talk) 03:01, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- As I said in my edit summary, a section already existed when you added yours. You can find it at Wright Flyer#Artifacts. Please have a look to see if more needs to be added, thanks. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:05, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
P.S. I now see that the "page" he was referring to is within the "Artifacts" roll-up subsection of this article. However, still need to understand why the Moon and Mars references are better hidden in an "Artifacts" roll-up section and not in the main body of the article. TheGreyMouser2016 (talk) 03:06, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- I don't know what you mean by 'roll up section'. The topics have a decent sized section with some good images. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:08, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- TheGreyMouser2016, thanks for the suggestion, I've added a brief note in the lead as a summary of the Artifacts section. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:16, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- When TheGreyMouser2016 mentions the "roll- up subsection", I can only conclude that this editor is reading the article on the godforsaken mobile app which displays only the lead section of the article, unless the reader clicks on a pull-down menu to actually read the body of the full article. Randy Kryn, this is the type of havoc that WMF software foolishness wreaks. The fully functional desktop site works fine on 2021 mobile devices and the app is addressing 2010 problems. Cullen Let's discuss it 03:27, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- The only time I looked at Misplaced Pages on mobile was when a friend looked something up about 10 years ago, and I've never edited on mobile, so thanks for the explanation and a sad thing to hear. Because of TheGreyMouse's commendable persistence I've added a summary to the lead which should do the trick. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:34, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- Randy Kryn, I do 99% of my editing on Android smartphones, and I use the desktop site. I only check out the mobile site from time to time, to verify that it still sucks, which it still does. Cullen Let's discuss it 03:39, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, not the mobile life for me. Edit on a chesttop laptop, much easier laying around than sitting up. My related quibble is the small size of the default print, I crank my machine up to 175 percent and that suits me fine. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:44, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- I have removed it from the lede - a couple of swatches of cloth are too minor to put in the lede and has little to do with the aircraft and its flights during its operational life time. It is mentioned down in the body of the article under "artifacts" and that is sufficient. - Ahunt (talk) 12:18, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hello Ahunt. The lead summarizes its page and, apparently, is the only thing shown on some screens. Instead of removing these important honors of the Wright Flyer this lead could use a couple more paragraphs in addition to this one. Maybe concentrate on extending the lead summary, which is now too short, and provide the standard lead-overview of the article. Randy Kryn (talk) 12:25, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- It doesn't matter really, even if the lede is expanded, or split into more paras, the fact that a tiny swatch of fabric was sent to Mars is still really minor and wouldn't belong in the lede. - Ahunt (talk) 12:29, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- I'd disagree. If there was an adequate lead summarizing the page the honoring, no matter how large a piece of the Wright Flyer was used (what if NASA had sent an entire wing of the plane? The tiny fabrics, and the wood which went to the Moon, have the same effect: symbolizing in real-time and space the enormity of what the Wright's accomplished) it would find inclusion in the summary. Randy Kryn (talk) 13:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- I would basically classify it as WP:TRIVIA, but let's see if any other editors think it should be in the lede. - Ahunt (talk) 13:37, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- I'd disagree. If there was an adequate lead summarizing the page the honoring, no matter how large a piece of the Wright Flyer was used (what if NASA had sent an entire wing of the plane? The tiny fabrics, and the wood which went to the Moon, have the same effect: symbolizing in real-time and space the enormity of what the Wright's accomplished) it would find inclusion in the summary. Randy Kryn (talk) 13:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- It doesn't matter really, even if the lede is expanded, or split into more paras, the fact that a tiny swatch of fabric was sent to Mars is still really minor and wouldn't belong in the lede. - Ahunt (talk) 12:29, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hello Ahunt. The lead summarizes its page and, apparently, is the only thing shown on some screens. Instead of removing these important honors of the Wright Flyer this lead could use a couple more paragraphs in addition to this one. Maybe concentrate on extending the lead summary, which is now too short, and provide the standard lead-overview of the article. Randy Kryn (talk) 12:25, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- I have removed it from the lede - a couple of swatches of cloth are too minor to put in the lede and has little to do with the aircraft and its flights during its operational life time. It is mentioned down in the body of the article under "artifacts" and that is sufficient. - Ahunt (talk) 12:18, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, not the mobile life for me. Edit on a chesttop laptop, much easier laying around than sitting up. My related quibble is the small size of the default print, I crank my machine up to 175 percent and that suits me fine. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:44, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- Randy Kryn, I do 99% of my editing on Android smartphones, and I use the desktop site. I only check out the mobile site from time to time, to verify that it still sucks, which it still does. Cullen Let's discuss it 03:39, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- The only time I looked at Misplaced Pages on mobile was when a friend looked something up about 10 years ago, and I've never edited on mobile, so thanks for the explanation and a sad thing to hear. Because of TheGreyMouse's commendable persistence I've added a summary to the lead which should do the trick. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:34, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- When TheGreyMouser2016 mentions the "roll- up subsection", I can only conclude that this editor is reading the article on the godforsaken mobile app which displays only the lead section of the article, unless the reader clicks on a pull-down menu to actually read the body of the full article. Randy Kryn, this is the type of havoc that WMF software foolishness wreaks. The fully functional desktop site works fine on 2021 mobile devices and the app is addressing 2010 problems. Cullen Let's discuss it 03:27, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- TheGreyMouser2016, thanks for the suggestion, I've added a brief note in the lead as a summary of the Artifacts section. Randy Kryn (talk) 03:16, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
- Interesting but in the end it is trivia and doesnt need a mention in the lead. MilborneOne (talk) 17:17, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
The Wright brothers were not the first
Stringfellow beat them. https://www.newscientist.com/definition/first-powered-flight/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.170.14.66 (talk • contribs)
- From this article:
The U.S. Smithsonian Institution describes the aircraft as "the first powered, heavier-than-air machine to achieve controlled, sustained flight with a pilot aboard."
- From the article Wright brothers:
They made the first controlled, sustained flight of a powered, heavier-than-air aircraft...
- Key words are pilot, and also controlled, which, back then, would be a pilot. DB1729 (talk) 04:39, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
References
- "Exhibitions". 2016-04-28.
- I think the key word that you quote is "sustained" that doesnt apply to Stringfellow. MilborneOne (talk) 11:54, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
- @MilborneOne: Well, Stringfellow's craft flew about 90 feet vs Wright's 120 feet. So I gathered the key distinction was control. Stringfellow's craft was unmanned and thus uncontrolled. DB1729 (talk) 13:13, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
In the UK in a small village near Great Ayton there was a steam powered craft that half glided and half flew over a field a few years before the Wright brothers. It is not very well known but the wright brothers were the first to make a sustained flight back in 1903. I'm unaware of any other pre WB flight! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrew James Gilbert (talk • contribs) 04:40, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
- Misplaced Pages content is based on published reliable sources. AndyTheGrump (talk) 04:43, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
Colorized image (again)
The article once again features a colorized image, in the Specifications section, as added by Wright Stuf in this edit. I believe the colorized and edited photo has no place in this article. I also remember this was the consensus in the talk page discussion last year, which I hope we do not need to reproduce here. I will remove it now. Ariadacapo (talk) 19:45, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- Despite the consensus, this image seem to be constantly reintroduced. I agree it does not belong, looks really awful. It looks more like a screenshot from a video game than a historical photograph. - Ahunt (talk) 01:36, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- I again oppose use of this colorized image in this article, which is jam packed full of original research on the part of the colorizing editor. No one can possibly know what the actual colors were at the time of the flight, and all of the truly encyclopedic content is contained in the black and white photo. This simply does not belong here. Cullen328 (talk) 07:24, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
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Vandalism - or perhaps an alternative explanation as to recent edits which have degraded article qualityThis article has been repeatedly vandalized. And subsequent editors appear to be perfectly accepting of incremental deliberate damage that has been done. On Jan 12, well over one month ago, Ravenpuff did THIS EDIT to the infobox, presenting the justification that being a Featured Picture, this was somehow an improvement. Yet anyone doing a cursory comparison can readily see that this FP is actually an inferior version of the image. So it is obvious that FP was simply pretense for this deliberate vandalism. Now my own starting point when evaluating that edit was to AGF. But I stretched my imagination and could not arrive at any possible way that any editor could assess that this FP was an improvement over the Fully Restored version that got knocked out. Perhaps someone here might be able to present a scenario that is consistent with Good Faith. I cannot. It is extremely easy to see that the FP status had been conferred at least as far back as 2012. And that the Fully Restored version was not created until 2018. Had the Fully Restored version existed when the FP decision was being made, it seems quite obvious that FP status would have been given to that one instead. So why am I raising this issue about this Wright Flyer article being vandalized here in this section about photo colorization? Because Ariadacapo's edit from Jan 23, exactly 4 weeks ago, is yet another example of deliberate damage being done to the article, where subsequent editors have fully accepted this damage. If the actual objection was simply regarding colorization of the historical photo, then the edit which would be consistent with the goal of continual improvement of Misplaced Pages articles would be to simply SWAP the colored version with the black&white version, which was readily indicated over on the Commons. And who is the person who had uploaded that black&white version? None other than Ariadacapo. (B&w pic here.) The approach I myself decided to take upon observing these cases which were clearly damaging the article was to sit back and wait. My hope was that others here would, at the very minimum, raise questions to these editors who were inflicting the damage and give them opportunity to explain themselves. Ariadacapo & Ravenpuff, I am giving you that opportunity here and now. And this involves far more than just those two editors. This same question is being asked of you, BilCat, Ahunt, GraemeLeggett and Cullen328. If the four of you are objecting to Colorization, then why did none of you not simply swap the colorized photo for the historical black&white version? You all are denying anyone who comes here to learn about the Wright Flyer from seeing this image, regardless of form. And on top of this, there are all of the editors who let the degradation of the infobox image stand. That is two other editors, on top of everyone mentioned above. Of course, the central issue here in this section on Colorization is the question of Policy, which appears to remain unanswered. And the third issue being Consensus. I am starting my reply over here on the Talk by addressing Vandalism, because I see THIS to be the most immediate concern. I would hope that ALL of us, regardless of our differences when it comes to those other two issues, share the common goal of continually improving our article here. Any and all edits which deliberately inflict damage go against that goal, obviously. No one else here has fixed the infobox image. I intend to do that myself. And how this gets fixed goes back to the sticking point from one year ago regarding the issue of whether or not we, as a group, will choose to follow one of the most fundamental principles when it comes to editing: Consensus. After Vandalism, I see that to be the next priority on aspects here that need to be resolved. The way this was left hanging back in February of 2021, fully one year ago, was not a resolution. Not one consistent with Consensus, as I understand it. And not even with the Admin who intervened and presented an Essay which argued for Consistency Between Articles. I will hold off on that discussion until after this Vandalism issue gets resolved. If we cannot get this aspect under control, then we are walking backwards, no matter what our position on Consensus might be. --Wright Stuf (talk) 00:19, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
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Uses global dating system
This article uses the global dating system (dd/mm/yy). Why am I ranting about this? Well the flight, took place in Kill Devil, North Carolina, which is in the United States. The United States, however uses their own dating system (mm/dd/yy). I request to fix this. Please change all the dates in the article to fit mm/dd/yy. This is to give convenience to American readers. MLBFanAdrien (talk) 02:08, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
- Good catch. The article originally used MDY dates, but because of a mistaken change to the article date in May 2021, the date style was changed in December 2021. As such, I've started changing it back. BilCat (talk) 03:02, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
Solving mystery of this photo
This photo shows the Wrights and party(the men from the Life Saving Station) bringing the Flyer back to the camp after the fourth flight on December 17, 1903. The airplane is in a state of disassembly and transit with the rudder laying on the ground in back of the machine. The engine and props have stopped. The front elevator has been detached and is in a more upright position as it had been twisted over and semi crushed after the fourth flight. Importantly the machine has probably already been brought back several hundred feet from where it ended the 852ft flight by the time this photo was snapped. One can compare the photo with the more clear frontal photo of the machine just after Wilbur's landing.
Koplimek (talk) 22:07, 18 February 2023 (UTC)
- I'm a bit confused, what's the mystery of the photo? Furthermore, will solving this mystery help improve the article? - ZLEA T\ 22:12, 18 February 2023 (UTC)
- I agree, what is your point? - Ahunt (talk) 00:23, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
- Because many people think the aeroplane is still flying. There was a caption by early flying historian Carroll Gray, it has now been reduced to a citation, and now essentially out of site. So I added some clearup.Koplimek (talk) 19:47, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
- I can see how people might think that, but I don't know that it is a problem on Misplaced Pages. - ZLEA T\ 00:08, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
- Liking the uncropped version better, it gives a fuller experience of what the site looked like. I haven't looked if it's there yet, but if it is real, and seems to be, the uncropped version could be used on the page somewhere in a large enough size to provide the feeling of the scene. Randy Kryn (talk) 01:45, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
- See Wright Flyer#Flight trials at Kitty Hawk. It's been there awhile. BilCat (talk) 02:43, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
- I added it for context and added the other front photo. Cropped versions are at Wikicommons.Koplimek (talk) 19:48, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
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The Wright Flyer, also known as the Kitty Hawk, made the first sustained flight by a manned heavier-than-air powered and controlled aircraft – an airplane – on December 17, 1903. Invented and flown by the Wright brothers, it marked the beginning of the pioneer era of aviation. The Wright Flyer is a single-place biplane design with anhedral (drooping) wings, front double elevator and rear double rudder. It used a 12-horsepower (9-kilowatt) gasoline engine powering two pusher propellers. Employing "wing warping", it was relatively unstable and very difficult to fly. The Wright brothers flew it four times in a location south of Kitty Hawk, North Carolina. The airplane flew 852 feet (260 m) on its fourth and final flight, but was damaged on landing, and minutes later was wrecked when powerful gusts blew it over. The aircraft never flew again but was shipped home and subsequently restored by Orville Wright. It was housed in the Science Museum in London from 1928 to 1948, and is now exhibited at the National Air and Space Museum in Washington, D.C. This photograph, taken by John T. Daniels, a local member of the United States Life-Saving Service, shows the Wright Flyer seconds into its first flight in 1903. Photograph credit: John T. Daniels; restored by Lise Broer Recently featured: |
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