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== error identifying war: I think the country South Viet Nam, not South Korea == |
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== Semi-protected edit request on 27 October 2021 == |
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Please remove this line: |
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Powell, who was being treated for blood cancer, that affects the immune system, died from complications of COVID-19 on October 18, 2021. |
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As a lieutenant colonel commanding 1st Battalion, 32nd Infantry in South Korea, Powell was very close to his division commander, Major General Henry "Gunfighter" Emerson, whom he regarded as one of the most caring officers he ever met. Emerson insisted his troops train at night to fight a possible North Korean attack, and made them repeatedly watch the television film Brian's Song to promote racial harmony. ] (]) 23:19, 11 February 2023 (UTC) |
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Powell died from complications of COVID-19 on October 18, 2021, while being treated for a form of blood cancer that affected his immune system. |
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== Re-arranging the infobox template == |
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The first sentence is really complex with four commas, and "that" after a comma is either wrong or really unusual. Also, the note at the top of the article reminds us to use past tense in his article, and "affects" is present tense. ] (]) 16:53, 27 October 2021 (UTC) |
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:{{done}}<!-- Template:ESp --> ] (]) 17:20, 27 October 2021 (UTC) |
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I think personal details should be moved to the top. I understand he was notable for the positions he held, but having to scroll down to his D.O.B. and other details seems almost disrespectful. What are others views on this? ] (]) 18:24, 8 May 2023 (UTC) |
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== Please add that the first elementary school was named for him in The Woodlands Tx. Conroe ISD. == |
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: Ask yourself two questions: |
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# What does the ] say? |
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# How are similar infoboxes constructed? |
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: That's where you'll find solutions, or at least get closer. -- ] (]) (''''']''''') 18:40, 8 May 2023 (UTC) |
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::Good advice, thank you @] ] (]) 21:00, 8 May 2023 (UTC) |
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== Word/Spelling Correction == |
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Please add that the first elementary school was named for him in The Woodlands Tx. Conroe ISD. ] (]) 16:20, 5 November 2021 (UTC) |
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In the second to last sentence in the second paragraph, it states “…many command and staff positions and riding to the rank of four-star general.” I believe the word “riding” should be edited to read “rising”. ] (]) 23:41, 14 May 2023 (UTC) |
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== Trump Mention == |
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:{{done}} ‑‑] (] <b>·</b> ] <b>·</b> ]) 07:26, 15 May 2023 (UTC) |
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What is the reason, need or relevance for mentioning Trump in his death section? Not everything is about him. ] (]) 16:46, 5 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:I tried to change the phrasing to be a little more accurate. ] (]) 23:33, 3 January 2022 (UTC) |
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== Edit to text in segment concerning Powell's death... == |
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== Semi-protected edit request on 15 May 2022 == |
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"President Joe Biden and four of the five living former presidents issued statements calling Powell <u>'''as'''</u> an American hero." |
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Exactly why is it necessary to history to include he was vaccinated if there is no mention of covid as a direct cause of his death. How about we remove that portion and just mention how he died. ] (]) 22:06, 15 May 2022 (UTC) |
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:] '''Not done for now:''' please establish a ] for this alteration ''']''' using the {{tlx|edit semi-protected}} template.<!-- Template:ESp --> —](]) 22:15, 15 May 2022 (UTC) |
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Should be corrected to "calling Powell an American hero." ] (]) 22:55, 8 February 2024 (UTC) |
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== Colin Powell == |
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Colin Powell was not a “politician.” He never ran for any office. ] (]) 17:20, 3 April 2024 (UTC) |
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There is a line in the 4th paragraph that states Powell received three electoral votes in the 2016 Presidential election. This is not correct. I cannot provide proof but I believe the year was 1996. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 20:37, 20 May 2022 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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As a lieutenant colonel commanding 1st Battalion, 32nd Infantry in South Korea, Powell was very close to his division commander, Major General Henry "Gunfighter" Emerson, whom he regarded as one of the most caring officers he ever met. Emerson insisted his troops train at night to fight a possible North Korean attack, and made them repeatedly watch the television film Brian's Song to promote racial harmony. 2603:6010:62F0:240:A43B:7952:CC60:60E6 (talk) 23:19, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
I think personal details should be moved to the top. I understand he was notable for the positions he held, but having to scroll down to his D.O.B. and other details seems almost disrespectful. What are others views on this? MaximusEditor (talk) 18:24, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
In the second to last sentence in the second paragraph, it states “…many command and staff positions and riding to the rank of four-star general.” I believe the word “riding” should be edited to read “rising”. 2600:6C60:4D00:7BD:3187:F4FF:7D03:D72A (talk) 23:41, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
"President Joe Biden and four of the five living former presidents issued statements calling Powell as an American hero."
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Done ‑‑Neveselbert (talk · contribs · email) 07:26, 15 May 2023 (UTC)