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== Wording about historical names in the lead == | |||
== RfC == | |||
{{re|Makeandtoss}} your {{diff||1218888331||edit}} makes the sentence read as if the word "Israel" has less historical relevance than the other names, while it has been used to refer to the region not less frequently than "Canaan", and for a longer time than "Holy Land" or "Palestine". ] (]) 19:21, 15 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{archive top|It's possible that this discussion will be seen by non-Wikipedians, so I've tried to explain what we've decided, and why, in enough detail that a non-Wikipedian would be able to follow it.{{pb}}This is a Request for Comment ("RfC"), which is a method we Wikipedians use to make tricky content decisions. Interested people who have accounts in good standing are invited to express a view. After a time, and when discussion has died down, another editor summarizes the discussion and communicates the decision the community has made. This process of writing a summary is called "closing".{{pb}}A sacred cow of Misplaced Pages is that the closer has to be neutral and uninvolved. The closer isn't the decider -- rather, the closer writes a closing summary that documents what the ''community'' has collectively decided. The closer is expected to apply relevant rules called policies and guidelines. This is my role, and the principle of uninvolvement is why I -- a man who knows nothing about this and has never even set foot in the Middle East -- am writing this. If I seem to be the decision maker, then that's an illusion.{{pb}}In the discussion below, the community decides if, and if so how, to "link" our article on ] from our article on Israel. In this case "link" means "Wikilink", which is where we use computer code to make the article text blue so a reader can click it and find another Misplaced Pages article. A decision about a link does not mean that any wording in the article has to be changed, because we can make a link without changing any text at all. But when editors are deciding how to implement the decision that we've made, they ''could'' decide to change the text, if that's the best way to do it.{{pb}}We make decisions by "rough consensus", which is a Wikipedian term meaning more than a majority. It does not have to mean unanimity. In this case editors are not of one mind, but we would have to say that the "rough consensus" -- a supermajority of responsible Wikipedians -- is that '''yes, we should link''' the article on ] '''in two places''': once in the "lead", which is the top few paragraphs above the table of contents, and once in the body, which is the main part of the article below the table of contents.{{pb}}The decision to link our article on Gaza genocide does not mean that Misplaced Pages is saying that Israel has committed genocide. We do not make that allegation in Misplaced Pages's voice, anywhere in this article or that one. "Gaza genocide" is the short title of an article in which Misplaced Pages explains about the allegations of genocide that ''other people'' (notably lawyers representing South Africa) have made, the findings of the International Court of Justice, and the commentary of reliable news sources and international experts. Misplaced Pages's article reflects what the sources we deem most reliable say about this, and we try to give appropriate prominence to Israel's denials. In this discussion we merely decide to include a pointer.{{pb}}Huldra's question also asks in which paragraph we should include these links, but the community has not given me sufficient guidance to answer that. I can only say that the links should be introduced.{{pb}}I hope this is clear and suffices to resolve the dispute. Queries, quibbles, comments, criticism, or complaints about this close are welcome, and should be directed to my talk page in the first instance.—] <small>]/]</small> 18:12, 19 January 2025 (UTC)|INCLUDE IN BODY AND LEAD}} | |||
Should the article ] be linked from this article, and if yes, where? | |||
:It does have less historical relevance than other names, that's why the main article on the region is ] and ] while ] is about biblical heritage. ] (]) 14:46, 16 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Possible answers: | |||
::The name "Israel" is what the indigenous people called their land for centuries, and it has more historical relevance than "Holy Land." ] (]) 16:44, 18 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No,''' it should not be linked | |||
*'''Yes,''' it should be linked in the lead. | |||
*'''Yes,''' it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph) | |||
cheers, ] (]) 22:20, 22 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Israel, as well as Judea, are not less historical than other names. They were the primary names at least since the early Iron Ages and until the ]. They are the most relevant names to the article, while there is still room to mention other names with the right historical context. But the problem is wider, most of the paragraph seems too insignificant to be mentioned in the lead. Israel is a Jewish nation state and its foundations based upon Jewish identity, regional history, culture, language and religion, and yet it is almost completely absent from the paragraph in favor of a generic regional description that teach almost nothing about the state's most relevant historical background. ] (]) 11:52, 20 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Please verify that the Land of Israel was a common name for the geographic reason throughout recorded history per ]. ] (]) 13:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
== RfC |
===Polling (RfC)=== | ||
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*'''Yes,''' it should be linked in the lead and the body of the article, attached to content similar to that {{u|Selfstudier}} developed above, and content similar to that {{u|Huldra}} developed in {{oldid2|1258656766}} would serve well in the lede. It's obviously something readers are going to be coming to this page to learn more about, and the information exists on the encyclopedia, the conversations about whether it belongs here or not have laready been had, so there's no reason this page should not serve reader needs. — ] 🚀 <sup>(] • ])</sup> 21:53, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes,''' adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph + add a single sentence to the end of lead , ] (]) 22:15, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:I don't understand why it would be necessary to add it as a completely separate paragraph (if we were to add it) instead of just putting at the end of the third paragraph, which is far more related, and less abrupt. ] (])<sup><span style="color: green"><small>Ping me!</small></span></sup> 20:46, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes,''' {{TQ|adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph}} and add a single sentence to the <s>end of</s> lead per Huldra, but I would modify their suggested text ''("In 2024, Israel was accused of committing the ])"'' to ''"In 2024, Israel was accused of committing ]"'' or similar. My logic for the change is that the accusation/dispute centres on whether Israel's actions in Gaza constitute genocide ''(or are legitimate self-defence/similar)'', rather than whether the 'Gaza genocide' is being committed by Israel ''(as opposed to some other State or body)'' which Huldra's text otherwise implies.] (]) 07:59, 24 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''', I agree with the inclusion in the lead. ] (]) 16:02, 24 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' to Selfstudier's suggestion in the body per the weight of reliable sources given (I'll leave to others to determine where), with a summary in the lead. Only suggestion is to add the arrest warrants on. '']''<sup>]</sup> 09:29, 25 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' it should be included in the lede and in the body text.--] (]) 14:21, 25 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' similarly to how self has suggested ] (]) 00:09, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' Not until a new article about Palestine's genocide against Israel is linked to the Palestine article.<ref name="b920">{{cite web | title=Situation in the State of Palestine: ICC Pre-Trial Chamber I issues warrant of arrest for Mohammed Diab Ibrahim Al-Masri (Deif) | website=International Criminal Court | date=2024-11-21 | url=https://www.icc-cpi.int/news/situation-state-palestine-icc-pre-trial-chamber-i-issues-warrant-arrest-mohammed-diab-ibrahim | access-date=2024-11-26}}</ref>] (]) 01:36, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:See ] and then perhaps think about making a policy based argument or your !vote will likely be ignored by whoever closes this RFC. '']''<sup>]</sup> 02:30, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' Given that there is no actual genocide. Very much not. ] (]) 05:06, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' The article "Gaza genocide" presents claims that lack broad consensus within the international community and are subject to significant dispute. Linking to such an article may mislead readers into perceiving these claims as established facts rather than contested allegations, thereby compromising the integrity of the host article. ] (]) 20:45, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' per MaskedSinger, Allthemilescombined1 and Eladkarmel; feels like including this would unduly shoehorn something in that doesn't belong in the general overview article. ''']'''<span style="border:2px solid #073642;background:rgb(255,156,0);background:linear-gradient(90deg, rgba(255,156,0,1) 0%, rgba(147,0,255,1) 45%, rgba(4,123,134,1) 87%);">]</span> 21:05, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Not in the lede'''. It should be made clear that these are accusations and many sources do not agree with this characterisation. Note that many country articles don't mention genocides in the lede even when there is a consensus that it happened (], ], ] (]), ], etc). ]<sub>]</sub> 21:38, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::] just a question: when you say "nor in the lead; does that mean you think it should be in the body? If so, which paragraph? ] (]) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes'''. There's a relevant section where it can be mentioned: ]. Right now, this article doesn't mention two important things: That the current Prime Minister of Israel, Benjamin Netanyahu, is a fugitive wanted for crimes against humanity by the International Criminal Court, and that Israel is being charged with genocide by South Africa in the International Court of Justice. I think there can be a new subsection in the "Israeli occupied territories" section, that mentions both facts. I see ] has given a sample text. I support that paragraph being added to the relevant section, but I think a mention of the ICC's arrest warrant of the Prime Minister of Israel (and Yoav Gallant's warrant too) could also be added, since it's also international litigation for crimes against humanity in Gaza. Mohammed Deif's arrest warrant doesn't need to be mentioned in this article. I think we can have a new subsection titled "Gaza Strip" that moves text that already exists in the section. So in addition to ]'s text, I would add the first sentence of the ] to the end of it, and make it look like ] (A link to a sandbox page that would show what the article would look like).--] (]) 05:43, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:As far as adding it to the lead, the already existing sentence in the lead, "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." seems to be a good enough summary, but I guess I would modify it to "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations, the International Criminal Court, and United Nations officials." The ICC is technically not a UN body, so it should be mentioned separately. But other than that, I think such a sentence would be fine. I'm open to suggestions on this though. ] (]) 05:48, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
<s>*'''No'''. The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda. Unless substantial new evidence emerges, analyzed by impartial, non-politicized sources and supported by more than two vague statements and casualty figures (which include a significant number of Hamas militants but the Hamas-run Health Ministry prefers not to differentiate militants from civilians), such claims lack the rigor required for inclusion in serious, encyclopedic coverage. ] (]) 06:53, 27 November 2024 (UTC)</s><small>Blocked sock ] (]) 11:08, 12 December 2024 (UTC)</small> | |||
*:"The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda." This is simply not true. See: ]. ] (]) 07:00, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No'''. This article is about the State of Israel. Not news. Should the articles about the ], the ], ], and many others feature the various ''proven'' genocides that actually took place, or even in the lead? Might as well say "also known as the Z.E.", in the lead or anywhere, with some extra brackets for good measure? This is a matter of an ongoing armed conflict, with fog of war and disinformation throughout. Not only would it be "commenting on an ongoing investigation" as they say, but entirely inappropriate and irresponsible. ] (]) 11:38, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' Per ], required {{tq|mention of significant criticism or controversies}}, clearly true and which several of the No !votes have acknowledged as being the case. A mention should be added via inclusion within the sentence "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes <s>and</s> crimes against humanity ] ] against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." ] (]) 12:10, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Not in the lede''' - a good chunk of the lede is already criticism, so adding additional accusations would seem like POV shoehorning. Not necessarily against inclusion in the body, but there isn't a specific proposal to comment on. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 23:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::] there is a question about whether it should be in the body. ("Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph") So, if you agree: which paragraph? ] (]) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::{{Re|Huldra}} Relevant material is currently in the body, unless it is reverted. The original dispute was about a sentence being added to the lead not material being added to the body, something which is not usually a source of dispute unless the amount of such material is undue. Option 2 already assumes material present in the body, no?. And option 1 just says no, so the third option is not really necessary. ] (]) 10:36, 4 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::{{Re|Selfstudier}} When I started this RfC on the 22 nov, it wasn't in the body (that was first added the 27th) so the the third option is useful (necessary?) for keeping it there, ] (]) 23:09, 4 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I just think the two things should not be mixed up, this RFC should not attempt to rubber stamp the addition that I made to the body, that should just be subject to the normal editing process. Imagine that I had not added it and people voted option 2? Then there would have had to have been another discussion about what should be in the body, so yes I have attempted to remedy a deficiency in the way the RFC was drafted and hopefully it meets with approval. ] (]) 23:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes in the body and the lede''': There are prominent RS (UN Special Committee, Israeli holocaust scholar ] to cite two examples) supporting the charachterization that Israel has been committing a genocide in Gaza, so there is no reason why this shouldn't be mentioned in the body. Accordingly, lede summarizes the body, so it should include that, given that it is one of the most prominent controversies Israel is facing second to the crime of apartheid in the West Bank (I am in favor of including both in the lede), though admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed, that's why for now it can be described as an accusation. The perfect short phrasing in my opinion for the lede can be: {{cquote|Israel's practices in the occupied territories has drawn sustained international criticism for violating the human rights of the Palestinians, including for maintaining an apartheid regime in the West Bank, as well as being accused of committing a genocide in Gaza.}} ] (]) 07:29, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Update to my "admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed," that is beginning to change as Amnesty International launched a report today . While this does not yet mean the threshold has been reached, but it gives a whole new significance to the inclusion of the "accusation" to the lede. ] (]) 12:01, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes, both in the lead and body''': Per sources and my understanding of ]. Some of these policies and guidelines are: | |||
::1) ]. ] sources can be used to assess ]. My understanding is that once DUEness is established, Misplaced Pages articles can be kept up to date. This is actually a strength of Misplaced Pages. For example, no one would argue mentioning something about the economy in this article is ]. ] and overview ] sources about Israel would include something about the economy. It could be too much or too little, but something about the economy would be DUE in this article. However, economic stats in this article would probably be much more up to date than many published overview ] sources about Israel such as . | |||
::Similarly, ] sources mention Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict at length. As such, Gaza genocide would be DUE. If in several years, newly published ] sources do not mention this, it can be taken out of the lead. If in several years, both newly published ] and overview ] sources about Israel do not mention this, it can also be taken out of the body. But for now, to keep the article up to date, this is DUE. ('''Update: quote from intro chapter in overview secondary source provided below''' ] (]) 19:17, 3 January 2025 (UTC)) | |||
::Sources are below, I cannot give lengthy quotes due to word count restrictions in ] | |||
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::*Britannica mentions these issues in the lead, although it's more brief than here | |||
::*, Israel entry (accessible through Misplaced Pages library). Partial quote from the lead: | |||
::{{tq2|...That conflict, which became known as the Arab-Israeli conflict, has heavily influenced Israel's development, as security issues have dominated Israeli politics and society since 1948...}} | |||
::*, Israel entry (accessible through Misplaced Pages library). There's nothing similar to the Misplaced Pages lead. The "lead" in encyclopedia entry is just few sentences about geography. But the history section mentions these issues. | |||
::* Israel entry (accessible through Misplaced Pages library). There's no history section, but large coverage, especially under Contemporary politics section. | |||
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::More tertiary sources can be found using Google Books, Google Scholar, or the (for example: ) | |||
::{{small|wording suggestion removed}} | |||
::The above wording makes the lead neutral as only the accusation is added in Wikivoice. Similarly, the text in the body should be NPOV. | |||
::2) ]. Lots of ]. See ]. There are already ] sources about this such as by ]. This source also ties Gaza genocide with Israeli-Palestinian conflict: {{tq|In this urgent, insightful essay, a respected historian places the Israeli-Palestinian war in context, challenging Western attitudes about the region}} | |||
::3) ]. The above proposal would trim the lead word count by something like 26 words. It'd still be more than 400 words, but even many featured articles are longer than 400 words. ] (]) 17:27, 3 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::You linked to four tertiary sources, but I don't see the word "genocide" in any of them? (Britannica links to recent news about it, but that seems temporary.) Maybe this is a sign that our lede's focus should somehow be different, but in terms of accusations of genocide, if anything it seems like a sign that we should omit them. | |||
::I don't think there's any dispute that something like {{tq|accusations that it has committed genocide}} would pass ], but that isn't really an argument for highlighting material in a lede. That comes down mainly to ] and to ], which tell us to {{tq|briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article}}. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 01:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I gave my reasoning for this. | |||
:::This is a recent and ongoing event. The Oxford Encyclopedia of the Modern World, published in 2008, would not have mentioned 2024 events. It's a reliable source, but they are not clairvoyant. | |||
:::My DUE argument was due to heavy coverage of Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict in Israel entries in tertiary sources. | |||
:::If sources published in the next few years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, it can be taken out of the body or the lead. | |||
:::But for now, we can keep the article up to date. I believe this is the precedent in Misplaced Pages. Otherwise Misplaced Pages would be several years or longer behind everything if we had to wait for overview ] or ] sources for everything. Once those type of sources covering recent events are available however, those sources would determine how we proceed. ] (]) 11:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''', it should be linked in the lead, at the end of the third paragraph where it discusses war crimes and crimes against humanity. This text has been through various iterations, but would benefit from greater precision by means of specificity. A great many countries have been accused of war crimes, making that a rather generic, not outstanding observation. While it is probably more notable that Israel has been accused of a particularly voluminous number of different war crimes in the post-WWII period, sitting above that are the very specific crimes against humanity in which it has been implicated –namely apartheid and genocide. Now apartheid has already been through the RFC process and denied a mention (based on rationales that grow poorer by the day) but to the question here, yes, it is extremely pertinent to mention the particularly nation-defining crime against humanity of genocide – the so-called crime of crimes. ] (]) 18:32, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' it is notable enough for an article, therefore should be linked. ] (]) 23:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Yes, but not in the lead.''' There's some discussion of genocide in the 21st century section of the article and this link could be put there, but it's not clear why this should be added to the lead. I am '''strongly opposed''' to adding it to the lead and most of the arguments for inclusion into the lead can be discounted on ]/]/] grounds. ] (]) 22:07, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes for the body, no for the lead''' It is certainly notable enough to mention in a relevant part of the article, but I think it is too recent to mention in the lead, since we cannot assess long-term historical importance yet. ] (]) 15:24, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:{{u|QuicoleJR}}, can you point to the relevant ] for your argument? ] (]) 15:32, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::The bar for something being included in the lead is pretty high, much higher than inclusion in the body. According to ], emphasis on material, such as the Gaza genocide, should reflect its relative importance to the topic as described by reliable sources. I think the current state of the lead is fine, although I would also be fine with adding a sentence or two about how Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal. I don't think the Gaza genocide by itself has enough weight to warrant inclusion in the lead. ] (]) 15:42, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::Gaza genocide is part of the Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict, which is heavily covered in Israel entries in ] sources. See the sources above. ] (]) 15:46, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::Yes, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict certainly warrants inclusion in the lead. However, is the Gaza genocide ''itself'' heavily covered in those entries? It is the level of coverage for the specific topic that matters, not the level of coverage of the wider subject it is part of. ] (]) 15:52, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::See the discussion above. ] (]) 15:59, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::] requires mention of significant criticism or controversies, this fits the bill, it needs no more than a wikilink. ] (]) 16:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::It says summarize the most important points. I am simply contending that this is not one of them. Israel is a sizable country with a lot of history, and I don't believe that this has enough DUE weight in reliable sources about Israel as a whole to warrant including prominently in the lead, although I think it is important enough to mention in the body. ] (]) 16:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::To be clear, the Israeli-Palestinian conflict definitely warrants inclusion in the lead, and we could probably add a sentence about the legality of Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank, but I think including the Gaza genocide specifically in the lead would be recentist and UNDUE, especially since the Israel-Hamas war is only covered by "several wars" in the lead. ] (]) 16:15, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::See the wording suggestion above. This could be added into the lead while trimming the lead. For ], we can look at coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict. If newer tertiary sources in the upcoming years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, Gaza genocide can be taken out. Do we have any tertiary sources published in the past few months? | |||
*::::::::If the only sources were newspaper articles, recentist arguments would succeed. However, we have so many secondary sources on Gaza genocide now. ] (]) 16:26, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::::Yes, we have many secondary sources on the Gaza genocide. We also have many secondary sources on a variety of other things, like the 7 October attacks or the ] of Israeli athletes. Those aren't included in the lead either. My question is whether secondary or tertiary sources on the topic of Israel as a whole mention the genocide. If not, it shouldn't be in the lead yet. ] (]) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::::Assessing DUEness of Munich massacre is easy, since it happened in 1972. Look at tertiary sources. ] (]) 16:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::::::Arguing that we should rush this into the lead because we can't assess long-term importance yet is pure recentism. I'm not saying we can't update the body to add this information, but we should wait on adding it to the lead until the long-term impact is more clear. ] (]) 16:35, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::::::That wasn't my argument, I won't respond any further to not ] ] (]) 16:38, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::It says {{tq|summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies}} I can assure you this is a prominent controversy. Well, unless you can convince me it isn't. ] (]) 16:19, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::It is a decently prominent controversy, but the State of Israel has had a ''lot'' of prominent controversies in its short history, and we can't stuff them all in the lead. I think mentioning that their occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal would cover the most important controversy, being their illegal occupation of Gaza and the West Bank. The Gaza genocide is arguably a subtopic of that. For an applicable example from another article, the featured article ] does not mention the atrocities they committed against China in World War II in the lead, even though it was, and still is, a very prominent controversy. Similarly, the lead of ] only gives the Holocaust two words in a sentence about the Nazi government. Similar considerations apply here. ] (]) 16:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::::And this would be exactly one word in the lead, per my suggestion. ] (]) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{od}} {{u|QuicoleJR}}, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? ] (]) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::What do you mean by that? ] (]) 14:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Please provide a recent (second half of 2024 for example) tertiary or overview ] source about Israel, and show that these issues are not mentioned. ] (]) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::The only one I have been able to find is Brittanica, which has been updated recently and makes no mention of the genocide. Very few overview sources have been published in that timeframe, and you are asking me to prove a negative. ] (]) 14:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::The ONUS is on you to prove that they ''are'' covered in such sources. ] (]) 14:18, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::And I did provide recent sources below. | |||
::::::Britannica's updates seem superficial. They have in history section, but it seems to stop at a certain point. ] (]) 14:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Only in the body''' while it’s a non-insignificant criticism, it’s not sufficiently significant to be included in the lead. Both based on the uncertain status and the recency of the accusation, the lead should instead continue referring to other, certain misconduct, per the relevant policies cited above, instead of referring to a disputed interpretation of some of the very recent actions. ] (]) 23:14, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:{{u|FortunateSons}}, can you please specify "the relevant policies"? ] (]) 16:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::], ], ], ] would probably be the most relevant ones ] (]) 08:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::{{u|FortunateSons}}, thank you for clarification. Note that ] and ] are not '''policies''', they are '''explanatory essays'''. You can get more information in ]. | |||
*:::For interpretation of ] and ], we disagree, but this has been discussed above, so I'm not going to get into it again. ] (]) 14:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::Of course, but they are broadly accepted as a concretisation of policy; nevertheless, thank you for the reminder. ] (]) 18:04, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{od}} {{u|FortunateSons}}, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? ] (]) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::What do you imagine this source to be? There are news reports that don't mention genocide, but that not what you mean? ] (]) 14:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Something like or an encyclopedia, but published on second half of 2024. ] (]) 14:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I would defer to the cited Britannica here; more importantly, the fact that we’re discussing less than a handful of sources and a timeframe of 6 Months (or a year) is a strong indication that this is in fact recency bias. ] (]) 15:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{u|FortunateSons}}, Britannica doesn't seem that updated. See above. ] (]) 19:19, 3 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Which seems like a strong indication that there has not been sufficient change to justify us updating either. ] (]) 22:11, 3 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::That seems like an ] explanation. We do not know when Britannica updates their articles. It could be once in every 5 years for example. ] (]) 07:03, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: it’s possible, but that doesn’t seem to align with this. ] (]) 09:15, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I actually found the information | |||
::::::::::But for Israel, history seems to stop before ]: ] (]) 10:06, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::With this entry also not supporting your position, right? ] (]) 10:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::What do you mean? It shows that Israel entry wasn't really updated. Arab-Israeli wars entry was updated. ] (]) 11:38, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::Leave it to closer to decide relative merits, which won't really depend on whether Britannica is updated or not. ] (]) 11:46, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::None have been published to my knowledge, and it is on you to prove that they do exist. ] (]) 17:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Plenty of sourcing, obviously relevant and controversial enough to outweigh proforma objections. ] (]) 17:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{u|QuicoleJR}}, source provided below ] (]) 19:18, 3 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
*'''Not in the lead''' per ]. Would prefer to wait until a court conviction or acquittal has been made to decide. ] (]) 04:10, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:The ] is not recent only the ] is and that is still a significant controversy, regardless. ] (]) 17:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::Since 1955, the population of Palestine has steadily increased. The life expectancy has increased, the infant mortality and child death rate has decreased. So I don’t understand how Israel has been genociding the Palestinians if all these numbers are improving for them. ] (]) 00:34, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::Reminder of ] and ]. ] (]) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::Here is a source so it is not OR or NOTAFORUM. The source is a Jewish advocacy group. ] (]) 00:49, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::That isn’t a reliable source for the topic. ''']''' - 02:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::Without even getting into if the advocacy group source you provided is a reliable source, for accusation of genocide, we would use ] sources such as , so the source you provided does not invalidate those, per ]. ] (]) 14:27, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' should be linked in lead per Iskandar323's reasoning. ] (]) 23:16, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Comment, newer sources''' | |||
:*Overview ] source: . From the '''introduction''' chapter: | |||
::{{tq2|In this context we should not overlook the latest turning point in the history of Palestine – the attack by Hamas on 7th October 2023 on Israeli settlements adjacent to Gaza and the subsequent genocidal war that the state of Israel has carried out in the Gaza strip}} | |||
::'''Although the title says Palestine, it covers Israel too. See the definition on page 3''' in | |||
:*. Although this is an entry about geopolitics, and not an entry about Israel as a country, the prominence of ] is notable. Genocide accusations are also mentioned. | |||
::Given no recent (second half of 2024 for example) overview secondary or tertiary sources about Israel have been provided in this RfC, and given the lengthy coverage of Arab-Israel conflict in older tertiary sources about Israel, and given the above sources, I now think that '''three things are due both in the lead and in the body:''' | |||
::{{Ordered list | |||
|] | |||
|Most recent ] | |||
|]}} | |||
:: ] (]) 14:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::The lack of recent overviews (I don't think many have been published) does not mean that we should include these things in the lead. I support adding the Israel-Hamas war, I think the other two would be both be giving UNDUE weight to recent events. ] (]) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::The lack of recent overviews means we have to use what we have (above), while keeping in mind the heavy coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict in older sources. I just pinged you to ask for newer sources though, no need to discuss what we already discussed above. ] (]) 14:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''', the available sourcing here and on the related article indicates that it's a major part of the coverage and history of Israel. The arguments against inclusion don't make any sense, either; whether individual editors ''agree'' with it, or whether it's disputed, are reasons to be cautious about the precise wording for how we cover it, but they're not what we use to determine if we cover it at all - that question comes down to how broad and high-quality the sourcing is and how significant they treat it as. And the extensive academic sourcing clearly justifies treating it as a high-profile aspect of the topic worth discussing prominently here. A lead is supposed to contain {{tq|mention of significant criticism or controversies}}; we don't exclude high-profile stuff just because it's controversial. The sourcing disputing it above doesn't help; while it's not terribly high-quality, I'm sure higher-quality sourcing for that perspective exists... but it's written from the perspective of "this is an important and central argument over Israel", ie. a controversy worth covering even if they have a clear perspective on it. The sort of coverage that would be necessary to exclude it isn't just academics who disagree, but sourcing that establishes that it is broadly ''fringe'', which doesn't seem to be the case. --] (]) 15:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' in body (end of 21st century para) and lead per Selfstudier and Iskandar323, as well as ] - while I've seen several comments ''opposing'' the change on 10YT grounds, I actually think that as increasing amounts of information - backed by RS, of course - comes out on this topic, it will look increasingly strange in 10 years time for us to ''not'' have included this. Regardless of how one personally feels about the matter, this is a significant charge to be levied against a state, and it will be significantly more confusing to omit or downplay this information than to just include it. ] (]) 19:21, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
*The lead's so fucked up it might as well be included, and it obviously should be included in the body. ] (]) 23:42, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
=== Discussion (RfC) === | |||
{{closed rfc top|result=There is clear consensus for Option A with minor disagreements on the exact wording, specifically with respect to the phrase "amounts to." Since no reliable sources have been presented to substantiate that the inclusion of the phrase "amounts to" corresponds to a substantive distinction, I am inclined to keep the original wording proposed.] (]) 16:52, 25 May 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
:This doesn’t seem that actionable an RfC, or that productive a question. The content of the article is what is discussed, and links serve as navigational aids for delving into the content. Considering a link alone in the aether rather misses its purpose. ] (]) 09:02, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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::Seems that there should be first some material in the body related to the wikilink and ]. {{Re|Huldra}} Suggest you pull the RFC tag on this for now until some material can be put together for the article body. ] (]) 11:07, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Something like this perhaps | |||
:::] is accused of carrying out a ] against the ] by experts, governments, ] agencies, and ]s during ] of the ] in the ongoing ].<ref name="ohchr">{{cite web |author=<!--Not stated--> |date=16 November 2023 |title=Gaza: UN experts call on international community to prevent genocide against the Palestinian people |url=https://www.ohchr.org/en/press-releases/2023/11/gaza-un-experts-call-international-community-prevent-genocide-against |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20231224050530/https://www.ohchr.org/en/press-releases/2023/11/gaza-un-experts-call-international-community-prevent-genocide-against |archive-date=24 December 2023 |access-date=22 December 2023 |website=] |quote=Grave violations committed by Israel against Palestinians in the aftermath of 7 October, particularly in Gaza, point to a genocide in the making, UN experts said today. They illustrated evidence of increasing genocidal incitement, overt intent to "destroy the Palestinian people under occupation", loud calls for a 'second Nakba' in Gaza and the rest of the occupied Palestinian territory, and the use of powerful weaponry with inherently indiscriminate impacts, resulting in a colossal death toll and destruction of life-sustaining infrastructure.}}</ref><ref>{{cite magazine |last=Burga |first=Solcyré |date=13 November 2023 |title=Is What's Happening in Gaza a Genocide? Experts Weigh In |url=https://time.com/6334409/is-whats-happening-gaza-genocide-experts |magazine=] |access-date=24 November 2023 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20231125022352/https://time.com/6334409/is-whats-happening-gaza-genocide-experts/ |archive-date=25 November 2023}}; {{cite news |last=Corder |first=Mike |date=2 January 2024 |title=South Africa's genocide case against Israel sets up a high-stakes legal battle at the UN's top court |url=https://abcnews.go.com/International/wireStory/south-africas-genocide-case-israel-sets-high-stakes-106055104 |access-date=3 January 2024 |work=] |language=en |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240107013809/https://abcnews.go.com/International/wireStory/south-africas-genocide-case-israel-sets-high-stakes-106055104 |archive-date=7 January 2024}};{{Cite web |last=Quigley |first=John |date=3 July 2024 |title=The Lancet and Genocide By "Slow Death" in Gaza |url=https://arabcenterdc.org/resource/the-lancet-and-genocide-by-slow-death-in-gaza/ |access-date=13 July 2024 |website=Arab Center Washington DC |language=en-US |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240713161805/https://arabcenterdc.org/resource/the-lancet-and-genocide-by-slow-death-in-gaza/ |archive-date=13 July 2024}}</ref> Observers, including the ] and ] ],<ref name="Albanese_anatomy_of_a_genocide">{{cite Q|Q125152282|url-status=live}}</ref> have cited statements by senior Israeli officials that may indicate an "]" (in whole or in part) Gaza's population, a necessary condition for the legal threshold of genocide to be met.<ref name="ohchr"/><ref>{{harvnb|Burga|2023}}; {{cite journal |last=Soni |first=S. |date=December 2023 |title=Gaza and international law: The global obligation to protect life and health |journal=South African Journal of Bioethics and Law |volume=16 |number=3 |pages=80–81 |doi=10.7196/SAJBL.2023.v16i3.1764 |doi-access=free}}</ref><ref name="StateCrime">{{cite web |publisher=] |title=International Expert Statement on Israeli State Crime |website=statecrime.org |url=http://statecrime.org/international-expert-statement-on-israeli-state-crime |access-date=4 January 2024 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240106140101/http://statecrime.org/international-expert-statement-on-israeli-state-crime |archive-date=6 January 2024 |url-status=live}}</ref> A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide".<ref name="Brookings">{{cite web |url=https://www.brookings.edu/articles/gloom-about-the-day-after-the-gaza-war-pervasive-among-mideast-scholars/ |title=Gloom about the 'day after' the Gaza war pervasive among Mideast scholars |last1=Lynch |first1=Marc |last2=Telhami |first2=Shibley |date=20 June 2024 |publisher=] |access-date=29 June 2024 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240626215734/https://www.brookings.edu/articles/gloom-about-the-day-after-the-gaza-war-pervasive-among-mideast-scholars/ |archive-date=26 June 2024}}</ref> On 29 December 2023, South Africa instituted ] at the ] pursuant to the ],<ref name=":6">{{Cite news|date=December 29, 2023|title=South Africa launches case at top UN court accusing Israel of genocide in Gaza|url=https://apnews.com/article/south-africa-israel-un-court-palestinians-genocide-ffe672c4eb3e14a30128542eaa537b21|access-date=January 5, 2024|work=]|language=en|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240102144544/https://apnews.com/article/south-africa-israel-un-court-palestinians-genocide-ffe672c4eb3e14a30128542eaa537b21|archive-date=January 2, 2024|url-status=live}}</ref><ref>{{Cite news|last1=Rabin|first1=Roni Caryn|last2=Yazbek|first2=Hiba|last3=Fuller|first3=Thomas|date=2024-01-11|title=Israel Faces Accusation of Genocide as South Africa Brings Case to U.N. Court|url=https://www.nytimes.com/2024/01/11/world/middleeast/genocide-case-israel-south-africa.html|access-date=2024-01-13|work=The New York Times|language=en-US|issn=0362-4331|archive-date=13 January 2024|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240113053852/https://www.nytimes.com/2024/01/11/world/middleeast/genocide-case-israel-south-africa.html|url-status=live}}</ref><ref name="ICJ_SA_proceedings_vs_IL_29Dec2023">{{Cite web|date=December 29, 2023|title=Proceedings instituted by South Africa against the State of Israel on 29 December 2023|url=https://www.icj-cij.org/sites/default/files/case-related/192/192-20231228-app-01-00-en.pdf|access-date=January 5, 2024|website=]|url-status=live|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240105144115/https://www.icj-cij.org/index.php/node/203394|archive-date=January 5, 2024}} </ref><ref>{{Cite press release|date=December 29, 2023|title=South Africa institutes proceedings against Israel and requests the International Court of Justice to indicate provisional measures|issue=2023/77|url=https://www.un.org/unispal/document/icj-southafrica-israel-genocide-29dec2023/|location=The Hague, Netherlands|publisher=]|agency=]|access-date=January 5, 2023|archive-url=https://archive.today/20240105144230/https://www.un.org/unispal/document/icj-southafrica-israel-genocide-29dec2023/|archive-date=January 5, 2024|url-status=live}}</ref> | |||
:::This is just wrt the genocide issue, need something about the arrest warrants as well. ] (]) 15:43, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::It doesn't seem very neutral to cover statements from sources like Albanese without also covering accusations of bias on their part. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 23:36, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::It doesn’t make sense to cover things that aren’t relevant to the topic, like accusations of bias instead of addressing the substance of the statement. ''']''' - 00:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::If we don't want to get into such accusations of bias then we shouldn't be using sources like Albanese in the first place. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 17:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::That makes no sense to me. We dont include accusations of bias against the Times of Israel anytime we use them as a source, or the NYTimes, or Benny Morris, or whatever other reliable sources we cite. The ad hominem of "she's biased" is not relevant to the argument she makes or the qualifications she has to make them. At most, such accusations belong in the biography of Albanese, or Morris, or whatever other article that covers the sources themselves, not whenever they are cited. ''']''' - 17:23, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::That's not at all comparable. NYT and Morris are occasionally criticized by both sides for various perceived biases. Accusations of bias against Albanese are far more significant, e.g. with officials from several different governments openly calling her antisemitic or unfit for her role. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 18:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::They are directly comparable, and governments arent reliable sources for anything other than the views of the politicians heading those governments. It is a basic ad hominem, and it has nothing to do with the actual content of her comments. ''']''' - 19:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::It doesn't really make sense to call this an ad hominem, when source selection inherently involves evaluating sources rather than the content of their statements. Surely the ] here would be uninvolved ones with some semblance of objectivity. | |||
::::::::::Covering Albanese's claim here is like covering 's claim that there isn't a genocide. Clearly neither is among the BESTSOURCES, and neither claim is noteworthy enough that it would need to be covered anyway. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 19:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Biden is a politician speaking as a politician. Albanese is an expert in international law, speaking as an expert in international law. ''']''' - 20:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::I should add that she isn't just speaking as an expert in international law (which she undoubtedly is), but she is speaking as a UN official who is the current ]. To compare her speech with Biden (a non-expert politician who has absolutely no scholarship on the issue and doesn't have an international law background) is ridiculous. ] (]) 18:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::Special Rapporteurs are not UN officials, they are independent experts consulted by the UN, and they remain independent. See ] for an overview. ''']''' - 20:54, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::And Jews and others praising her, no? She must be doing something right. Afaics, she has tended to be ahead of the curve on most matters. ] (]) 19:06, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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I think it's time for us to have this discussion. | |||
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== Tag == | |||
I propose that the apartheid allegation be explicitly mentioned in the lead. This is an ] allegation, and I think the current lead which vaguely talks about "crimes of humanity" and "war crimes" is avoiding the core of the issue — precisely ''which'' crime is Israel being accused of? Apartheid is the principal one. | |||
{{resolved}}-tag removed !<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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{{Re|Moxy}} Reasons for , please? ] (]) 13:15, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Nothing but military info looks like nothing but conflict for 20+ years ...this article is not ]. Need info like ..90s saw first featuring direct election of the prime minister etc. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:22, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Specifically, I propose that the current version "{{tq|Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people from human rights organizations and United Nations officials.}}" be replaced with "{{tq|Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism. It has been accused of committing war crimes and crimes against humanity, including the crime of apartheid, against the Palestinian people from human rights organizations and United Nations officials.}}" ] (]) 00:17, 19 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::You tag says undue not that the section needs updating, which material is undue? And why? ] (]) 13:25, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::undue because its nothing but military history....no memtiom of any other history. Sounds like the most unstable country doing nothing but being at war. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::History on its own at 5116 words is half an article by itself. A lot is likely undue. ] (]) 13:47, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Agree so much details - over info that can be and is covred in sub articles that can be trimed like :''The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked in July 1947, with a series of widespread guerrilla raids culminating in the Sergeants affair, in which the Irgun took two British sergeants hostage as attempted leverage against the planned execution of three Irgun operatives. After the executions were carried out, the Irgun killed the two British soldiers, hanged their bodies from trees, and left a booby trap at the scene which injured a British soldier. The incident caused widespread outrage in the UK" <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:51, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::The section that has been tagged is ], a short section, the material {{tq|The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked...}} is not even in it, that material is in ] section, which has not been tagged. | |||
::::::So did you mean to tag something else? ] (]) 14:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Moxy explained that subsection above, it is just one of a few with similar issues. ] (]) 16:57, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::They haven't explained it, the material they quote is not tagged. ] (]) 16:59, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Sorry I thought I was pretty clear.... the whole section is just about military.... in fact we have two paragraphs for something that's happening in the past year. What we are looking for is substantial historical significant information about the country's social and historic evolution in that time. Best we simply don't regurgitate American news headlines. For example should mention ]... What kind of social human rights progress has there been? In 20 years there must be some sort of legal process that has changed.... democratic decline perhaps? What has happened on the diplomatic front.... like the mass increase in foreign aid? <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::{{tq|the whole section is just about military}} Which section? The only section that you tagged is the 21st Century section. If you meant to put the tag for the entire history section, then do that, I would also agree with that inline with multiple prior discussions asserting that it was way too long. ] (]) 21:05, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::{{green|Which section?}} Not interested in some sort of gameplay. Your initial post was about a tag in a section this is the topic of the ongoing conversation..... with mention by another and myself about the excess detail overall in the history section with an example that I gave. You either agree it's excessive or you don't.... best course of action would be to come up with some sort of prose for the section.... and a better summary. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 21:33, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::OK, you don't want to admit you got this all backwards, fine by me, bfn. ] (]) 23:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::What you have to ask yourself is does your approach to this conversation help improve that article or not. There is clearly a problem all over the history section...but the info in this tagged section is the topic of conversation...do you have any input what can be done to help the section? Then perhaps we can move on to other sections. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 15:57, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::I asked you what the problems were and your response was to quote something else from an untagged section, so if you can answer the original question that would be good. ] (]) 16:15, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::<s>Best you let someone that is competent deal with the tag</s>. <small>My bad just frustrated that the post has not moved forward in actual improvements. Will address the problem with prose after the content addition dispute is over.</small> <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 18:23, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::Couldn't agree more. ] (]) 18:30, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::What content addition dispute? ] (]) 19:50, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::Was not aware of . Let's deal with the content issue after all the current concers. Last post from me here.<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::::<s>I don't see what that has to do with the issue you have been describing in this section.</s>. OK, resolved for now. ] (]) 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 December 2024 == | |||
'''Option A: Mention apartheid.''' | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | |||
'''Option B: No change.''' | |||
In 21st century history, please change | |||
{{TextDiff|A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide".|A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars who were polled believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide".}} | |||
"mostly US-based Middle East scholars" is not an identifiable group, the phrase as written doesn't have a concrete definition. Which Middle East scholars' beliefs are being talked about here? The scholars who were polled are being talking about. Adding language that clarifies the source of these statistics and defines the group in question could make the statistics more useful. Thank you for your consideration. ] (]) 17:00, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
'''Option C: Other.''' | |||
:From the given citation, added "758" before "mostly" and "polled in 2024 by ]" before "believe" to clarify matters. ] (]) 17:42, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Survey=== | |||
== "]" listed at ] == | |||
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== Lede == | |||
*'''Bad RfC''' we already had a recent discussion regarding the language in the lead. No significant change has happened since. ] (]) 12:45, 19 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I suggest we wait for an action by the ICC or the ICJ before discussing this issue again, as that will probably influence the situation drastically. ] (]) 18:29, 19 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Agreed, a binding decision by one of those could be such a significant change. ] (]) 20:22, 19 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::A court decision by the ICJ supporting apartheid charachterization would turn the claims in to factual reality; i.e. Israel is maintaining an apartheid system, rather than Israel is accused of maintaining an apartheid system; i.e. ] would be turned into ]. In both cases this has nothing to do whether this should be mentioned in lede, because the lede is a summary of the body. ] (]) 13:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::You voted in the wrong place, and you misunderstood my comment: As there is no significant change (and a decision would be such a change), there is no reason to re-open a discussion so soon. ] (]) 13:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Strong support of option A''': this mention is long overdue and this is pretty much the elephant in the article. This is supported by the world's leading human rights organizations, including HRW and Amnesty International which are RS per WP. The lede is a summary of the body and given that we have a subsection on apartheid charges, then the least we could do is provide a simple mention of this. ] specifically says any prominent controversies should be mentioned; the charges of apartheid is obviously and most certainly a prominent controversy, which has its own WP article ], and is being mentioned in international forums including the ICJ genocide case. We are quite literally beautifying the horrors of this long-standing occupation and increasing settlement construction by not mentioning the findings (yes findings, not accusations) of major human rights groups. ] (]) 13:24, 22 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|Terrainman}} Are these your first edits to articles on WP that relate to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict? If so, please familiarize yourself with ] and ] which states that adding contested content requires achieving consensus on the talk page, not reverting. This responsibility is known as onus lying with the inserter of the material. ] (]) 12:47, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Option A''' Per Makeandtoss. ] (]) 08:59, 23 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:I appreciate you reformatting the RfC; <s> would you be so kind as to actually do it by fully next time, by not excluding my vote? </s> could you please include my vote next time?] (]) 09:45, 23 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::Your snarky attitude towards honest mistakes is not congruent with policy. I refer you to ], ]. ] (]) 11:36, 23 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::That wasn’t meant to be (overly) snarky, I just wanted my second correction regarding formatting to be less aggressive, I’ll fix the tone. :) ] (]) 12:28, 23 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::there should also be a reference to apartheid in its government type. ] (]) 18:04, 9 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::That being said, just a technicality: it’s not an AGF violation (as no bad faith was assumed) and likely not yet a civility violation (those require a de minimis bar to be crossed that wouldn’t have been reached even if I had meant it in a mean way). However, I definitely could have gone for a nicer phrasing, and apologise for that. ] (]) 12:33, 23 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Bad RfC''' per FortunateSons. ] (]) 20:47, 23 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Strong support for A''' per Makeandtoss. I would have assumed the allegations of apartheid were already mentioned in the lead, it should absolutely be added. ] (]) 09:29, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Ok, thank-you. The information I added was to improve the context of the paragraph, in a much needed way. From what I can see, nothing contested was added. ] (]) 12:51, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Option A''': sufficient weight for inclusion. -- ] (]) 03:03, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{ping|Terrainman}} Your additions to the lede/lead were reverted so the material is by definition is now contested, meaning you will have to gain consensus for them in the talk page, not revert. ] (]) 12:54, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I understand but your edit reason was to keep the brevity of the lead when my edit was rather brief in my view. It has been further edited by another user to make the additions more concise. ] (]) 13:14, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::{{ping|Terrainman}} Your additions still increased the material about the 1948 war from six to eight sentences in the lede. This needs to be trimmed even below six sentences. ] (]) 13:34, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I understand since that para is already very long, however unfortunately the topic is extremely complicated; hence why it was the longest para in the lead long before my edit. My addition provided essential context in my view, I also received thanks for it and it has been refined since by another editor. In my view if this para is to be made more concise we need to explore other options for that. ] (]) 13:48, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{ping|Terrainman}} Receiving thanks is not a measure of consensus, but discussion on the talk page. Your addition still duplicates mention of the UN partition plan in the second and third lede paragraphs, as well as non-summarizing elaborations on the Oslo Accords, which is also a duplicate mention in the third lede paragraph. ] (]) 14:03, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::The first sentence of the 3rd paragraph explains that the partition plan failed, which is crucial context! | |||
:::::::Regarding Oslo accords, it is not a duplication. The second mention references them in a sentence about progress since then. ] (]) 14:28, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Furthermore, if we are setting this low a threshold in what is essential to the lead, there are multiple parts of the third paragraph which elaborate to a significant extend, rather than merely state the existence of key historical events which are in-fact needed to provide context for the rest of the paragraph. ] (]) 14:41, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Then all should be trimmed. ] (]) 17:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Additionally, when you say Lede, do you mean Lead? I just want to be sure I am not missing something here. ] (]) 12:52, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Lede and Lead are legitimate alternative spellings; both refer to the intro material which, in Misplaced Pages, should summarize the major points of rest of the article. A major issue for many Misplaced Pages articles is putting too much stuff in the lede. ] (]) 05:05, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Minor edit Request == | |||
*'''Option A:''' Definitely sufficient weight and the weight has only become more pronounced over the past seven months as the state has sunk deeper into racial prejudice and persecution. Even before that, in August, . There's more in the HRW . And now we have the thousands of additional administrative detentions underscoring the complete legal inequality, among the , including unlawful killings without charge. There was even a this past week. Or try written already in 2024 alone on the topic. ] (]) 20:48, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Remove "synonymous with Canaan" from the lede. | |||
*'''Strong support for option A:''' per Makeandtoss and Iskandar323. There is absolutely strong enough sources to support it. ] ] 08:38, 18 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:'''Modify slightly:''' Though, I think that the specific organizations should be listed with the phrasing {{tq|...including the crime of apartheid, against the Palestinian people from human rights organizations, including ''X'', ''Y'', and ''Z'', as well as United Nations officials.}} ] ] 08:44, 18 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::'''Okay actually maybe different phrasing:''' I think it's better to use the more definitive phrasing suggested in discussion of what Israel is doing ''amounting to'' apartheid, as supported by the ICJ and Amnesty. ] ] 08:53, 18 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
1. The borders of ancient Canaan don't line up with modern day Israel. | |||
===Discussion=== | |||
2. No real reason to mention ancient Canaan just like we don't mention that it's synonymous with British Mandatory Palestine or the Judea province of the Roman Empire. | |||
::'''Comment:''' as a compromise, I would support the wording proposed by DMH223344 on 02:48, 22 March 2024 (UTC): | |||
::“most human rights organizations consider Israel to enforce an apartheid system in the occupied territories." | |||
::This wording had received consensus from ~5 editors. I would oppose the wording suggested in this RfC. ] (]) 16:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::‘’’Support this’’’ as well as Makeandtoss’ reasoning. In order to employ more explicit wording there needs to either be a monopoly of sources or a high court judgement imo and we don’t have that at the moment ] (]) 10:24, 24 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::'''Comment''' There is an upcoming ] on Israeli practices in the OPT. As per during the recent public hearings, "24 States and three international organizations made the further claim that Israel’s policies and practices amount to a system of institutionalized racial discrimination and domination breaching the prohibition of apartheid under international law and/or amount to prohibited acts of racial discrimination.". Personally, I would like to wait for the ICJ deliberations on this matter to conclude before addressing what should be in the lead (although it being in the body is straightforward). ] (]) 15:13, 25 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Well, from my perspective, apartheid is already a fact since Amnesty and HRW are reliable sources, without regard to what western governments are claiming. Given this contradiction we have chosen to treat these conclusions as allegations. But in either case, whether conclusions or allegations, apartheid as a fact or as a claim should be in the lede as a summary of the body. Currently, the least we could do is have it described as a claim. After the ICJ deliberations, if affirmative, I think we would all be inclined to treat it as fact. So I would view it more of how to describe apartheid in the lede for now and later as two separate discussions. ] (]) 10:21, 26 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::When saying lede are you talking about the first paragraph or the third? The allegation of apartheid should be in the third if there are many reliable sources for it, it fits with what's already there in the same vein. If the ICJ concluded it was apartheid then it could be included as a fact imo ] (]) 10:51, 26 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::] is the summary of the body that is present before the article's contents; i.e. the four paragraphs. The first lede paragraph is under ]. Here I am referring to the third lede paragraph indeed. and I agree with your reasoning. ] (]) 11:18, 26 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I actually like the ICJ wording. The ICJ was careful in how they worded it, and the wording is more accurate. Apartheid is linked to race, and "Palestinian" is not a race, so the apartheid accusation is not really accurate. The ICJ wording doesn't say "there is apartheid" but that the system '''amounts to''' apartheid. Human Rights Watch also used "amounts to" up in DMH223344's comment on 00:21, 22 March 2024. | |||
:::The ICJ wording: | |||
:::"Israel’s policies and practices '''amount to''' a system of institutionalized racial discrimination and domination breaching the prohibition of apartheid under international law '''and/or amount to prohibited acts of racial discrimination'''." | |||
:::I would also prefer to wait for the ICJ deliberations. The current info in the Misplaced Pages Israel article about apartheid is not very good because it is basically "here is are bunch of organizations accusing Israel of apartheid.. a quote from a 2021 survey... these accusations were criticized by governments...here is a opinion by a Canadian law professor." Written like this, the content is not very lead-worthy, but content supported by more well-rounded/balanced ICJ deliberations and findings would make the apartheid accusations more lead-worthy. ] (]) 02:27, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Definition of race: a group of people sharing the same culture, history, language, etc.; an ethnic group. ] (]) 09:17, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I don’t know. I use duck.com as a default browser on this device and when I typed in Is Palestinian a race it said “ Palestinian is not considered a distinct race. Palestinians are an ethnonational group residing in the Southern Levant, sharing broad religious, linguistic, and cultural practices with other Arabs, with variations unique to Palestine. They are part of the broader Arab world and encompass Muslims and a minority of Christians.” | |||
:::::Also ethnicity and race are not the same. Hispanic/Latino is an ethnicity but not race. ] (]) 14:33, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Yes but no one in this discussion has talked about whether Palestinians are a race except yourself. It is imo not germane to the discussion. ] (]) 14:36, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Apartheid is a system of '''racial''' segregation. ] (]) 14:38, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::But according to the second definition in the American Heritage dictionary race is , “ A group of people united or classified together on the basis of common history, nationality, or geographic distribution.” So it could work if we go by that dictionary picking the second definition. ] (]) 14:40, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::] (South Africa version) and the ] are not the same thing. In addition, the definition of ] nowadays is more fluid. ] (]) 14:42, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I may have gotten confused from looking at the US census race categories. Middle Easterners are supposed to fill in White as their race . The census definitions for race and ethnicity are different and more strict. ] (]) 14:49, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Apartheid has never been that cut and dry, by that argument, ] wasn't an apartheid regime because it was largely wealth based voting, the apartheid comes from its treatment of the west bank, which it treats like a ], infact a nickname for the west bank is "bantustan" it is Segregation... ] (]) 18:01, 9 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Not just a bunch, a lot of weighty opinions on the matter and over a long period of time, this is not going to go away. Btw, that's not the ICJ wording, that is the wording used by the JustSecurity source, you would need to look at the individual country submissions to see what wording they actually used. | |||
:::: is the most authoritative finding so far "The comprehensive report, Israel’s Apartheid against Palestinians: Cruel System of Domination and Crime against Humanity, sets out how massive seizures of Palestinian land and property, unlawful killings, forcible transfer, drastic movement restrictions, and the denial of nationality and citizenship to Palestinians are all components of a system which amounts to apartheid under international law. This system is maintained by violations which Amnesty International found to constitute apartheid as a crime against humanity, as defined in the Rome Statute and Apartheid Convention." | |||
::::I don't think the "amounts to" is significant, is there a source for that? ] (]) 09:55, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::See, Amnesty is also using “amounts to “ | |||
:::::“ and the denial of nationality and citizenship to Palestinians are all components of a system which '''amounts to''' apartheid under international law.” | |||
:::::JustSecurity used “amounts to “ twice, Amnesty used it, and Human Rights Watch used it. I was trying to figure out why they used “amounts to” instead of is. One definition of “amounts to” is adding up. So maybe that is why they are using it instead of the race thing. ] (]) 15:19, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::International law is named after the most famous example, separation of European/non-European peoples. So I suppose sources on Israel use ‘amounts to’ instead of ‘is’ for language reasons. I think they are saying it fits international law because the actions taken in South Africa and Israel are materially the same, even if it isn’t the identical groups undergoing separation. ] (]) 15:45, 27 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{closed rfc bottom}} | |||
:We should get an uninvolved Editor to close this..... As of now it doesn't hold up to basic integrity to have it closed by the initiator..... That being said I don't disagree with the outcome.... Just doesn't look proper.....looks sneaky if you will.<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 21:39, 25 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::True. Then again, it appears to be unanimous and was open for five weeks. ] (]) 21:46, 25 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Editors should do their best to uphold the integrity of Misplaced Pages..... this isn't it. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 21:59, 25 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
On ], it is stated that "{{tq|if consensus is undoubtedly clear, even an involved editor may summarize the discussion}}" and "{{tq| the matter under discussion is not contentious and the consensus is obvious to the participants, then formal closure is neither necessary nor advisable}}". I decided to close in light of this. ] (]) 23:22, 25 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
3. The fact that Canaanites lives there is in the following sentence. ] (]) 22:47, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Israel Hebrew Name == | |||
:{{done}} ] (]) 16:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Restore Canaan and rephrase to avoid implying synonymity. ] (]) 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::This didn't address the points they made. 'Variably known as' still conflicts with all three points here. ] (]) 17:56, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== RFC: Human rights violations section == | |||
:@] not everyone can read ]. ] (]) 21:31, 6 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== A few missing historical names == | |||
{{rfc|pol|rfcid=9BBC7A9}} | |||
Should this article include a top level section about violations of human rights by the state of Israel? ] (]) 17:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
Bellow all the formal stuff we put on every country it mentions the names israel had been called historically, but it's missing some like Judea. ] (]) 22:58, 28 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
:It's not obvious what you mean by "missing". In the Classical antiquity section, for example, Judea is mentioned 4 times. ] (]) 04:13, 29 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
== English == | |||
{{Edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | |||
Just like Arabic, English is also a recognized language in Israel. Please add English alongside Arabic in the "recognized languages" section in the infobox. | |||
Here are the sources, as added to the article ]. | |||
===Survey=== | |||
'''Comment''' Not currently a subject of dispute? Maybe just create one and see what happens first? I wouldn't object personally but do we need an RFC for this right now? ] (]) 17:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:It was reverted quickly: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Israel&diff=1266366530&oldid=1266365841 ] (]) 18:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<ref>{{cite book|last=Spolsky|first=Bernard|title=Round Table on Language and Linguistics |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=ljumbfV_7y0C&pg=PA169|year=1999|publisher=Georgetown University Press|location=Washington, D.C. |isbn=0-87840-132-6|pages=169–70|quote=In 1948, the newly independent state of Israel took over the old British regulations that had set English, Arabic, and Hebrew as official languages for Mandatory Palestine but, as mentioned, dropped English from the list. In spite of this, official language use has maintained a de facto role for English, after Hebrew but before Arabic.}}</ref><ref>{{cite book|first=Hava|last=Bat-Zeev Shyldkrot|editor2-first=Hava|editor2-last=Bat-Zeev Shyldkrot |editor1-first=Dorit|editor1-last=Diskin Ravid|editor1-link=Dorit Ravid|title=Perspectives on Language and Development: Essays in Honor of Ruth A. Berman|chapter-url=https://books.google.com/books?id=xMzx6xFB0IgC&pg=PA90|publisher=Kluwer Academic Publishers|date=2004|page=90|chapter=Part I: Language and Discourse |isbn=1-4020-7911-7|quote=English is not considered official but it plays a dominant role in the educational and public life of Israeli society. It is the language most widely used in commerce, business, formal papers, academia, and public interactions, public signs, road directions, names of buildings, etc. English behaves 'as if' it were the second and official language in Israel.}}</ref><ref>{{cite book|first=Elana|last=Shohamy|title=Language Policy: Hidden Agendas and New Approaches|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=5mG09P64jzYC&pg=PA72|year=2006|publisher=Routledge|isbn=0-415-32864-0|pages=72?73|quote=In terms of English, there is no connection between the declared policies and statements and de facto practices. While English is not declared anywhere as an official language, the reality is that it has a very high and unique status in Israel. It is the main language of the academy, commerce, business, and the public space.}}</ref> ] (]) 23:23, 30 April 2024 (UTC) | |||
::That might have been just the into the sea thing? {{Re|Remsense}}. I would have thought a hr top level section would have involved moving stuff from elsewhere in the article into it? ] (]) 18:09, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a ] and provide a ] if appropriate.<!-- Template:EEp --> ] (]) 15:54, 2 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I made a mistake, please feel free to revert. Apologies. <span style="border-radius:2px;padding:3px;background:#1E816F">]<span style="color:#fff"> ‥ </span>]</span> 19:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Please add English alongside Arabic in the "recognized languages" section in the infobox. The sources I already gave. ] (]) 08:57, 6 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Could you revert so that I don't annoy any admins violating 1rr (even though I have your permission)? ] (]) 20:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Done. Apologies, again. <span style="border-radius:2px;padding:3px;background:#1E816F">]<span style="color:#fff"> ‥ </span>]</span> 20:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::ah I see, I had totally misunderstood your edit summary. Thanks for reverting. ] (]) 20:21, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''No''' How many countries have human rights violations? I would maybe accept a top level section for ] because that is pretty unique and a big part of what Israel physically is. Absolutely no for HR violations generally. ] ] 23:48, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:Coverage of Israel in RS is very often centered around human rights. That's not the case for most other countries. We should follow RS and similarly give top level attention to coverage of human rights. ] (]) 01:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
*::Agreed that Israeli-occupied territories should be a top level section. There could be a Human rights subsection under Government and politics section ] (]) 16:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
* Information should be integrated into the article where it would be relevant rather than standing out on its own... ] = "Avoid ] or ]. Try to achieve a ] by folding debates into the narrative, rather than isolating them into sections. " This poor article really needs some work..... most of the articles is focused on military actions and one point in time.<span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:-15deg;color:darkblue">''']'''</span><span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:15deg;color:darkblue">]</span> 00:28, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
===Discussion=== | |||
:] '''Not done:''' English is not a de jure official language in Israel as stated in your cites. The article text appears to cover this correctly. ] (]) 10:46, 6 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Then why not add it as a de facto recognized language with these citations and footnotes explaining it? It's stared that it's use comes even before Arabic so it makes no sense to leave it out of the infobox. ] (]) 14:28, 6 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Sweep them into the sea == | |||
:::There are a very large number of languages spoken in Israel as can be seen in the article on this at: ] linked to in the languages section of this article. We cannot put them in an infobox. Please stop reopening this request. ] (]) 22:01, 6 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::But English has a completely different status. One of the sources literally states "after Hebrew but before Arabic". It's not just another language used by someone in Israel, it is a working language of the state, a bit less important than Hebrew but more important than Arabic. Some articles use a row titled "working language" so perhaps we could use that here. I will reopen the request again for the last time. ] (]) 08:18, 7 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I'd like to support this suggestion. More sources are needed to back the claim of English as the working language. ] (]) 21:43, 7 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::English is used around the world, somewhat like French centuries ago. I've been to many countries in South America, Europe, and Asia-Pacific and had little problem using English. {OK, some difficulty in parts of the US.) This is partly due the prevalence of tech related documents written in English, and partly due to pop music and movies, and partly due to the annoying American tourists countries put up with. Israel is a special case. But these factors still exist. ] (]) 22:11, 7 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:] '''Not done for now:''' please establish a ] for this alteration ''']''' using the {{Tlx|Edit extended-protected}} template.<!-- Template:EEp --> ] (]) 00:27, 9 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Original sentence: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state and to "sweep them into the sea".' | |||
== Historically accurate information removed == | |||
Proposed change: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state.' | |||
], who clearly edits with a pro-Palestine bias, has removed historically accurate information to perpetuate an inaccurate viewpoint. While the original article may have addressed the remaining territory, it's essential to note that the combined territory of Israel, the West Bank, and Gaza constitutes only 23% of the British Mandate for Palestine. This information holds significant importance for maintaining neutrality. | |||
The quote that allegedly supports the inclusion of the the statement 'and to "sweep them into the sea"' is: | |||
{{tq2|A week before the armies marched, Azzam told Kirkbride: "It does not matter how many there are. We will sweep them into the sea.}} | |||
This quote is of course not consistent with the claim that the '''purpose''' of the invasion was to sweep the Jews into the sea. The other citations for this sentence include: | |||
{{tq2|Morris 2008, p. 396: "The immediate trigger of the 1948 War was the November 1947 UN partition resolution. The Zionist movement, except for its fringes, accepted the proposal."}} | |||
Compare: | |||
{{tq2|David Tal (2004). War in Palestine, 1948: Israeli and Arab Strategy and Diplomacy. Routledge. p. 469. ISBN 978-1-135-77513-1. Archived from the original on 19 December 2023. Retrieved 1 December 2018. "some of the Arab armies invaded Palestine in order to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state, Transjordan..."}} | |||
The <nowiki>]</nowiki> saw Israel's borders established over most of the former <s>remaining</s> Mandate territory<s>, which is not including the 77% which was previously used to establish <nowiki>]</nowiki> on 11 April 1922</s>, while the rest, the <nowiki>]</nowiki> and the <nowiki>]</nowiki>, were taken by <nowiki>]</nowiki> and <nowiki>]</nowiki> respectively. | |||
{{tq2|Morris 2008, p. 187: Ahmed Shukeiry, one of Haj Amin al-Husseini's aides (and, later, the founding chairman of the Palestine Liberation Organization), simply described the aim as "the elimination of the Jewish state." ... al-Quwwatli told his people: "Our army has entered ... we shall win and we shall eradicate Zionism"" }} | |||
] (]) 13:41, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
None of these support the claim about sweeping Jews into the sea. | |||
:I stopped reading at: {{tq| who clearly edits with a pro-Palestine bias}}. ] (]) 13:45, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Why not simply examine his edit history to either invalidate or validate my claim? ] (]) 13:47, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::He promptly archived my talk post, which called out his edits, indicating a clear intention to conceal actions that could be viewed as biased editing from initial viewers. ] (]) 13:49, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Please cease your ad hominem attacks immediately before action is taken against you. Archiving talk pages is within my right, which is even optional and not mandated by Misplaced Pages that even ] talk pages. As for my editing is supported by reliable sources and according to WP guidelines, unlike the last recent edit you tried to insert without a source. If it is an "indisputable fact", then I am sure it would be easy for you to provide a reliable source. ] (]) 13:53, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::https://www.nytimes.com/1982/10/05/opinion/is-jordan-palestine-of-course.html | |||
::::80%, it's an obvious fact for anyone with any knowledge of history of the Levant, here's your reliable source. ] (]) 13:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I will gladly provide 100 more if you'd like... ] (]) 13:58, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Opinion pieces are not reliable sources. And if it exists it is a fringe viewpoint in the literature. Doesn't belong in the lede as a summary of the body anyway. ] (]) 14:02, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::It is a geographical fact, geography is not an opinion. The British Mandate for Palestine included both "Palestine" and "Jordan". Jordan constituted 80% of the British Mandate for Palestine. This is not an opinion, this is fact. ] (]) 14:04, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::: Here I have provided additional sources to support the geographical fact that Jordan comprised roughly 80% of the british mandate for palestine. Do you think this is satisfactory to update and correct the article? | |||
::: <nowiki>https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/2021/05/28/dueling-histories-debate-over-historic-palestine/</nowiki> | |||
::: <nowiki>https://lsa.umich.edu/content/dam/cmenas-assets/cmenas-documents/unit-of-israel-palestine/Section1_BritishMandateInPalestine.pdf</nowiki> | |||
::: | |||
::: | |||
::] (]) 15:12, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:{{tq|it's essential to note that the combined territory of Israel, the West Bank, and Gaza constitutes only 23% of the British Mandate for Palestine.}} Rubbish, this is the propaganda nonsense that includes Jordan in the Mandate. ] (]) 16:03, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Your response is completely unconstructive and baseless. Jordan was indeed a part of the British Mandate for Palestine, ummm ]. ] (]) 16:10, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::And excluded from the Zionist provisions for nearly all of it, administered totally separately, and the border was not set until later so it wasn't even Jordan, it was just the other side of the Jordan. ] (]) 16:14, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I don't understand the relevance between that and the fact I am trying to include for the sake of neutrality. ] (]) 16:15, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Me either, stop writing rubbish and I won't respond to it. ] (]) 16:16, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::The administration of the area that constitutes Jordan today does not alter the historical fact that approximately 77% of the land allocated under the British mandate was used to establish the state of Jordan. The timing of border agreements made by outside additional parties does not negate the established borders and the allocation of land. Your argument appears to rely on a strawman fallacy ] (]) 16:21, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Please cite a reliable source showing this 77%. When you can't find one, let me know. ] (]) 16:23, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Are these not ]? | |||
::::::::: <nowiki>https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/2021/05/28/dueling-histories-debate-over-historic-palestine/</nowiki> | |||
::::::::: <nowiki>https://lsa.umich.edu/content/dam/cmenas-assets/cmenas-documents/unit-of-israel-palestine/Section1_BritishMandateInPalestine.pdf</nowiki> | |||
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::::::::] (]) 16:25, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Idk, you tell me. ] (]) 16:27, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::It was a rhetorical question. They are obviously reliable sources. ] (]) 16:28, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::You mentioned the ] -> "Whilst the Mandate for Palestine document covered both Mandatory Palestine (from 1920) and the Emirate of Transjordan (added in 1921), Transjordan was never part of Mandatory Palestine." and 4 reliable sources cited to that. ] (]) 16:31, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::Awesome, from strawman fallacy to now changing the goalpost. :) I provide reliable sources, now they are not good enough. We're not talking about Mandatory Palestine, my edit CLEARLY said British Mandate for Palestine. ] (]) 16:37, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::British Mandate for Palestine was a document, but your edit falsely and misleadingly makes a geographic connection with the area size. This point is irrelevant as far as the literature is concerned. And it still does not belong to the lede. ] (]) 16:41, 3 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Additionally: | |||
== NPOV in the lede == | |||
Ben-Ami: {{tq|The Arab states were driven to war in great measure by theperception that prevailed in their societies as to the Jewish state andthe threat it posed to the Arabs.}} | |||
Does anyone disagree with the content or the phrasing in this paragraph: | |||
::Israel is located in a region known historically as ], ], and the ]. In antiquity, it was home to several Canaanite, and later, ] states, and is referred to as the Land of Israel in Jewish tradition. The region was successively conquered and assimilated by the ], ], ], ], ] and ] empires, the ], ], ]s, ] and the ], causing the region to become very ].<ref>{{cite journal |last=Safier |first=Michael |title=The struggle for Jerusalem: Arena of nationalist conflict or crucible of cosmopolitan co-existence? |journal=City |volume=5 |issue=2 |pages= 135-168 |year=2010 |url=https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/pdf/10.1080/13604810120057921}}</ref><ref>{{cite book |last=Giaccaria |first=Paolo |title=The Mediterranean Other - The other Mediterranean |chapter=Cosmopolitanism: The Mediterranean Archives |pages=79-103 |year=2019 |publisher=Brill |url=https://brill.com/display/book/edcoll/9783657785315/BP000007.xml}}</ref> The late 19th century saw the rise of ] in Europe, a movement seeking a ], which garnered ] during ]. During the war, the Ottomans were defeated and the ] was set up in 1920. ] to ] increased considerably, leading to ] between Jews and Arabs.<ref>{{cite book |author=] |title= Righteous Victims: A History of the Zionist-Arab Conflict, 1881–2001 |publisher= Knopf |year= 1999 |edition= reprint |isbn= 9780679744757 |pages= |quote= The fear of territorial displacement and dispossession was to be the chief motor of Arab antagonism to Zionism down to 1948 (and indeed after 1967 as well). |url= https://books.google.com/books?id=746mQgAACAAJ}} Also quoted, among many, by Mark M. Ayyash (2019). ''Hermeneutics of Violence: A Four-Dimensional Conception''. University of Toronto Press, p. , {{ISBN| 1487505868}}. Accessed 22 March 2024.</ref> The 1947 ] triggered ] between the two groups, which saw the ] of most of Mandatory Palestine's predominantly Arab population, a central component of the fracturing, dispossession, and displacement of Palestinians known as the ] in Palestinian society.<ref>Honaida Ghanim, ] March 2009 Vol. 22, No. 1 pp.23-39 p.37</ref><ref>Stern, Yoav (13 May 2008). . '']''. {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20080612162136/http://www.badil.org/Publications/badil-nakba-60-info-packet/index.html|date=12 June 2008}}, BADIL Resource Center for Palestinian Residency and Refugee Rights; Cleveland, William L. ''A History of the Modern Middle East'', Boulder, CO: Westview Press, 2004, p. 270. {{ISBN|978-0-8133-4047-0}}</ref><ref>{{cite journal |last1=Ghanim |first1=Honaida |date=March 2009 |title=Poetics of Disaster: Nationalism, Gender, and Social Change Among Palestinian Poets in Israel After Nakba |journal=] |volume=22 |pages=23–39 |doi=10.1007/s10767-009-9049-9 |jstor=40608203 |s2cid=144148068 |number=1}}</ref> | |||
] (]) 10:43, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Rouhanna: {{tq|One goal of some of these armies was to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state; the Jordanian army, however, also sought to prevent the establishment of a Palestinian state by conquering and annexing (after achieving the tacit understanding of the Zionist leadership) parts of Palestine for the Hashemite Kingdom.}} | |||
:I've added | |||
:::...exacerbated by British colonial policy of ]. | |||
:at the end of the sentence on intercommunal conflict ] (]) 11:48, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Can you remove the cosmopolitan part in the lead OR add the corresponding info in the body as the lead is supposed to be a summary of the body? Also could you please check the article length as this article was previously tagged as being too long? ] (]) 11:54, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::That is a small paragraph summarising thousands of years of history, I think it is very concise, and smaller than a lot paragraphs in other ledes or even in this lede. Are citations included when discussing the article length? | |||
::Is that not a basic fact backed up by sources, therefore not needing to be in the body as per ]? Regardless I agree it needs to be mentioned in the body of the article, I'll work on it now. ] (]) 12:28, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:{{ping|Alexanderkowal}} Please revert first and seek consensus, rather than the other way around. As much as I agree with the framing of your edits, but this is really overdetailed. Lede should be as brief and factual as possible, without any analyses or the mention of multiple other things. ] (]) 12:52, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I'll shorten the final sentence to | |||
::::...Arab population, a central component of what is known as the Nakba in Palestinian society. | |||
::] (]) 13:10, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Still overdetailed, especially the cosmopolitan and the whole Nakba thing. ] (]) 13:15, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::They're small one clause sentences. The cosmopolitan part summarises the effect lots of different ruling empires had on the region and links that sentence back to the region/rounds it off. The Nakba sentence is just a few words long to add a highly relevant page link. Furthermore, the paragraph still remains quite short. ] (]) 13:21, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I changed ''very'' to ''fairly cosmopolitan'' ] (]) 13:25, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I'm trying to think of a couple words we could add to imply previous Jewish migrations such as after the Spanish inquisition ] (]) 13:29, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I am ok with shortening the sentence and don’t mind keeping the link to Nakba, but I will admit I my reasoning is completely biased, so I cannot really provide appropriate reasoning on that. Please see ] for article length guidelines. ] (]) 13:18, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::The guidelines are quite ambiguous, there might be a way to include the information in this paragraph with less words without killing the flow but I'm not seeing it ] (]) 13:24, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::It’s under ]. I can check the length later and trim appropriately if needed. I think I am ok with keeping the link to Nakba because the link was previously in the lead and seemed important to some editors, but that is pretty much the reason. Probably need additional feedback from others. ] (]) 13:33, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I think the part saying ''in Palestinian society'' is key to state the perspective ] (]) 13:35, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Would it not be easier to trim the sections down a little rather than the lede? | |||
::::::Also would ''very cosmopolitan'' be lede worthy? The only reason I put fairly was because I only had two sources. I suppose the word assimilated alludes to this, idk, but it wasn't necessarily the various empires causing this but waves of migration ] (]) 19:34, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I do really think this is key to the history of Israel/Palestine region and I'm amazed it wasn't already talked about in the article. Also, I don't understand why you referenced malaria ] (]) 19:36, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I am not familiar with that part of the history. Is it in the Misplaced Pages article for Palestine (region)? I mentioned malaria because I am wondering how cosmopolitan the region was if malaria was endemic. Also I am wondering if the cosmopolitan part is not mentioned because this article is mostly focusing on the region when it was/is named Israel. ] (]) 21:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I suppose it’s the age old focus on ] rather than ] ] (]) 21:12, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::@] how about rewriting the sentence that lists empires and replacing it with: | |||
:::::::: Located at a continental crossroad, the southern Levant came under the rule of many different empires, such as the Assyrian, Babylonian, Achaemenid, Hellenistic, Roman and Byzantine empires, the Arab Caliphates, Crusaders, Ayyubids, Mamluks and the Ottomans, with its wide array of holy sites in various faiths attracting waves of immigration throughout history. | |||
::::::This leads into the next sentence well and flows well, and we could trim the 26 words from elsewhere. ] (]) 21:01, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I would remove “many” and “its wide array of” for concision ] (]) 21:06, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Agreed, I suppose 'many' is rendered superfluous by the long list immediately after ] (]) 21:16, 10 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::What I'm seeing is mass changes by 2 new editors....... let's make sure we give good edit summaries. And let's make sure if there are reverts this is not taking personally....we can discuss things. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 03:57, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Yeah sorry I get impatient ] (]) 06:50, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Obv the premise for discussion shouldn’t be me defending changes but rather multiple people contributing to a consensus on the changes ] (]) 13:11, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::The list of empires wasn’t random, it was a list of empires in the order of those that ruled over the region. I really don’t think it makes sense for this period of history to be entirely ignored here. ] (]) 05:24, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::I agree with the copyedit; naming the various empires is unnecessary detail for the lead; "many different empires" is better. Although, I think even better would be improved by mentioning (in some brief formulation) that the different empires included Jewish, Islamic, Christian, and "other" empires. The whole "crossroads of three continents" thing. It explains why the area is important to Jews, Muslims, Christians, and others. ] (]) 06:05, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::I agree with that, although the many different empires refers to the time period after Judah. I think that would have to be in the first sentence of the paragraph ] (]) 06:26, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::How about “… Holy Land, and has been controlled by Jewish, Muslim, and Christian polities throughout history.” ] (]) 06:30, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Shapira: {{tq|As the sheer magnitude of the Palestinian Arabs’ defeat emerged, and as the horror stories of the Jews’ alleged brutality spread throughout the Arab world, the pressure exerted by public opinion on the Arab states to come to the aid of their Palestinian brethren intensified. Despite difficulties arranging a unified military command, as well as mutual suspicion regarding each other’s objectives in Palestine, on April 30 the Arab states decided to invade.}} | |||
{{reftalk}} | |||
Shlaim: {{tq|Seven Arab states sent their armies into Palestine with the firm intention of strangling the Jewish state at birth.}} ] (]) 17:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Recent changes == | |||
== Edit Request == | |||
{{ping|Alexanderkowal}} The recent edits are overdetailed and editorial, please summarize as follows: | |||
* From "Situated at a continental crossroad, the ] came under the rule of many different empires, such as" to "The ] came under the rule of many different empires, such as" | |||
* From " with ] attracting ]." to "with ]" | |||
* From "Increased ] and ] of ] led" to "Increased ] and ] led to" | |||
* From "most of ]'s predominantly Arab population, known as the ] in ], however a minority remained and became ]." to "most of ]'s predominantly Arab population, also known as the ]" | |||
] (]) 12:30, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Change the new "Human Rights violations" section, no other country the I checked (including those with serious human rights violation claims like North Korea, Saudi Arabia, Russia, Myanmar) have any kind of section named anywhere near as negatively. Those claims are usually found in the Government and Politics tab. The way it is now is a violation of ] ] (]) 20:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I agree with the first change but not the others. | |||
:The point of the sentence on waves of immigration is to allude to it being historically ethnically diverse, and page link to a relevant page on social history of the region. | |||
:For the British policy one, maybe just page link to divide and rule through British colonial policy? I’m surprised the British empire page doesn’t have a section on their style of rule in comparison to other colonial empires. | |||
:The one about Arab citizens of Israel is key to clarify, although it is controversial due to the accusations of apartheid. I think it’s very open to discussion ] (]) 12:59, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I fixed the Nakba one, not just known to Palestinians, to many. ] (]) 13:14, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I think that sentence was key to stating the perspective, and it is predominantly and primarily known in Palestinian society ] (]) 13:20, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::That is just false. ] (]) 13:21, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::My point is that the English Misplaced Pages reader is unlikely to have heard of it ] (]) 13:25, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::There are many things that an English reader might not have heard of, Aliyah for example, but both these things are explained in the text so not a problem. ] (]) 13:32, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::the Aliyah page is linked to via "Jewish migration" precisely because an english reader is unlikely to have heard it. ] (]) 14:22, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Its loci is in Palestinian society, just like the loci for the much wider known holocaust is in Israeli society. Any remembrance of Nakba is focused on Palestinian society ] (]) 13:30, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I thought you just made your point, is this another one? How many do you have? ] (]) 13:33, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Yes and you'd do well to address it. ] (]) 14:21, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::{{ping|Alexanderkowal}} As seen here there is no consensus for "in Palestinian society" so please remove it. ] (]) 08:10, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::There also wasn’t consensus for him to remove it, but since I initially acted without consensus I’ll revert. | |||
::::I have a really hard time knowing when consensus has been reached as people often don’t admit defeat in an argument when the outcome is binary ] (]) 09:18, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I added it because I felt I’d totally refuted his points or argument, if I had left it a day with no response would that have been the time to change it? ] (]) 09:20, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Nothing was refuted, merely asserted.{{tq|the loci for the much wider known holocaust is in Israeli society}} Jews everywhere, I would have thought. {{tq|Any remembrance of Nakba is focused on Palestinian society}}, see ] (]) 09:38, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I assumed your comment decrying my persistence was admission of refutation. I know Nakba is quite widely commemorated, especially in the Muslim world, however the loci is very important, Palestinians primarily commemorate it, if they stopped everyone would stop. The link you put also emphasises Palestinian society ] (]) 09:57, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::No-one disputes that Palestinians commemorate the Nakba. That was not the objection, it was the idea that Nakba is known only to Palestinians. In any case, that sort of detail is not necessary in the lead. ] (]) 10:05, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::it introduces the perspective of the Nakba article, and page links to Palestinian which is necessary for Israel's lede. Note that it isn't linked elsewhere ] (]) 10:12, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::The ] link is sufficient for the perspective. The reason that Palestinians are not linked anywhere is due to the practice of referring to them as Arabs "which saw the expulsion and flight of most of Mandatory Palestine's predominantly Arab population" for example, that "Arab population" is Palestinian, and the vast majority of "Arab citizens of Israel" are as well Palestinian. But it is not crucial for this article, links to the conflict, the territories and the hr issues are sufficient imo. ] (]) 11:07, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I'll page link Palestinians from Arab ] (]) 11:10, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::No such thing as "defeat in an argument". On Misplaced Pages in particular decisions are made by consensus and consensus involves following the guidelines and making compromises. Also familiarize yourself with ]. ] (]) 11:24, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::What if you're discussing something with someone and they don't reply ] (]) 11:41, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::Also you removed the bit on waves of migration without consensus, I do really think this ] needs to be linked to. I think putting | |||
:::::::::::::: ... and experienced waves of migration. | |||
::::::::::::with waves of migration linking to the page. This leads into the next sentence very well ] (]) 11:47, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::Sorry, but not only are you editing aggressively and without compromise, but also without regard to any WP guideline. It is you who inserted the waves of immigration bit without consensus. You have also violated -and continued to violate- 1RR multiple times despite being told to familiarize yourself with it. I won't be filing a complain at ], but someone eventually will and AE will outright sanction you. ] (]) 13:42, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::I agree I made an error in my first few edits and that this has wrongly changed the premise of discussion. However I started this discussion on the talk page and multiple editors have critiqued the edits and not stated opposition to certain inclusions, meaning there is a weak consensus, and I continue to engage in discussion. Can you please address my initial comment. ] (]) 13:52, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::I hope any administrator would recognise that I am editing in good faith. ] (]) 13:56, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Gave a better wikilink for British policy. ] (]) 13:20, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:In retrospect the ‘situated at a continental crossroad’ explains the succeeding sentence about why it came under the rule of lots of empires, but if you do still feel it’s too editorial than we can remove it ] (]) 13:04, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:The bit on the social history is context for the region having no real owner until the rise of ethnonationalism in the 19th century ] (]) 13:08, 11 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Ottoman Empire owned it for centuries, that's a real owner. ] (]) 13:11, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::My understanding is that it was more cosmopolitan than other regions, and the many series of migrations it saw meant that there wasn’t really an exclusive ethnic ownership ] (]) 14:00, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I don't follow how migration or demographics means there wasn't exclusive ownership. The migrants didn't own or control the land. New York City is a cosmopolitan city with lots of migrants; it's still owned and controlled by the USA. Exclusively. ] (]) 22:24, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::It’s just my impression, it might be wrong. If New York City had changed hands 10s of times over the course of a millennium combined with waves of immigration and emigration I can imagine how strong ownership wouldn’t be felt. I suppose the Ottomans held onto Palestine for long enough for it to change. ] (]) 07:25, 18 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I don’t know whether the nominal ownership by Turkish, and the Arab population, would’ve negated sentiment of ownership ] (]) 07:30, 18 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I suppose they possibility of losing something doesn’t always make people loosen their grip ] (]) 08:07, 18 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:In the next paragraph I think it should mention that there was immigration to Israel from people displaced by WW2 (and the holocaust) ] (]) 15:02, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{ping|Alexanderkowal}} Since the "with holy sites of various faiths attracting waves of immigration throughout history." has no consensus, please have it removed. ] (]) 15:02, 14 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Okay, can we discuss it? I can look through sources ] (]) 15:05, 14 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::* states ''"Typical of the cities of the Levant was a mixed population. ‘Levantine’ was an omnibus term used especially to refer to the Armenian, Greek, Italian and Jewish merchants...Conversions of individuals from one cultural environment to the next and back again were everyday occurrences. A new light is shed on minorities here. Neither marginalised nor treated as objects of tolerance or intolerance, in a social system based on communication and flexibility, they were the system's pillars and driving force."'' That's just in the abstract, I don't have access to the article | |||
:::* states ''"Anyone who studies the material culture of Egypt and the Levant will agree that migration, trade, translation, and assimilation were common practice."'' unsure if this is talking generally or about the first millennium BC | |||
:::* states ''"Migrants of various ethnic, religious and social origins made their way to Palestine, or crossed it while heading to other locations, or relocated their place of permanent residence, virtually in any given period between the mid-seventh century and the turn of the twelfth, as well as later on."'' I don't have access so can't see it talk about motives | |||
:::* states ''"the westward migration of the Jewish merchants from Iraq ...contributed greatly to the economic prosperity in Palestine and Egypt"'' | |||
:::* states ''"This means that the peoples living here have an identity distinct from the neighboring peoples but they have nevertheless always had an ongoing exchange through trade, inter�marriage, migration, exile, and displacement with many of the other regional peoples."'' | |||
:::It appears Arabs migrated for economic prosperity, so saying holy sites was wrong. It is a good page to link to though. I do think mention has to be made of migration from across the old world, or something referring to it being cosmopolitan and relatively diverse. ] (]) 15:41, 14 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Again, that is not how WP works. When material is challenged, reversion first and then discussion per ]. Even if true, it is not a unique piece of information and does not belong to the lede of Israel. ] (]) 15:47, 14 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::?? I did revert it. I then started discussion. Please ] ] (]) 16:05, 14 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I only noticed now. I am not arguing against the factuality, but against the prominence of this to the summary of an article about Israel. ] (]) 09:49, 15 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::It's context for the later Zionist migrations. Palestine was fairly cosmopolitan and was effectively built on migration with no real indigenous people compared to other regions. ] (]) 10:17, 15 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I don't see the connection with Zionist migrations. On the contrary genetic evidence has shown that Palestinians show a large degree of genetic continuity with Bronze era Levantines. Still not relevant to the lede of the state of Israel. ] (]) 10:20, 15 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Of course it is relevant, it summarises the social history of the region. If you disagree with the phrasing then we can rework it, but the content is very relevant in my view. ] (]) 10:23, 15 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::How would you summarise the social history of the region? I think the clause would have to refer to flow (migration) and stock (settled population), however I don't know where to place the emphasis. I think indicating ownership of the region by an ethnic group violates NPOV for this article and would also be ]. Maybe talking indirectly about the population and stating the Islamisation of the region? I think that's a good compromise ] (]) 10:56, 16 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::"ownership of the region"? "social history of the region"? I really don't see any of this as due for the lead. ] (]) 11:07, 16 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::The social history of the region is discussed in the body and the lede and it’s incredibly relevant to the conflict. It doesn’t make sense to only start talking about social history from the 19th century when the periods before that are so relevant. ] (]) 12:14, 16 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Palestinians were the indigenous people of Palestine. ] (]) 13:12, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Agreed, but it’s not as clear cut as other regions, and I think it’s natural for Israel’s page to have a slight Zionist bias. I’m more trying to correct for the lack of Zionist voices on this page, which I find surprising, to impale the content on the fence ] (]) 13:58, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::{{tq| I’m more trying to correct for the lack of Zionist voices on this page}} Seriously? ] (]) 14:13, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::? The only people I’ve engaged w on this page have been very anti-Israel, as much as I disagree with Zionism, particularly this manifestation of Zionism, in order to maintain NPOV Zionist arguments need to be involved and the grains of truth in them used, if what we’re trying to do is build a neutral encyclopaedia. ] (]) 14:22, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::The other way of looking at it is there are a lot of pro Israel (not Zionist) editors at this page (there are) but they don't agree with you. ] (]) 14:27, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::I haven't received much disagreement, I'm surprised the Nakba inclusion didn't need an RfC. Also, see ] ] (]) 14:32, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::{{tq|I haven't received much disagreement}} except from the {{tq|very anti-Israel}} people who have engaged with you? Think you better ease off with the them and us rhetoric, tbh. ] (]) 14:36, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::Yeah you’re probably right, it’s just the topic is often very partisan. I wouldn’t say I’m an us, more an irrelevant bystander with no deep understanding ] (]) 14:58, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::{{tqq|in order to maintain NPOV Zionist arguments need to be involved and the grains of truth in them used}} No, that's not ]. The "V" in NPOV is the viewpoints of ''reliable sources'', not the viewpoints of the subjects of the articles. ] (]) 22:22, 17 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::There are many RS that have a Zionist view or bias, including academic sources ] (]) 07:27, 18 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::See ]. | |||
:::::::I think this article should mention the motives for the Arab migrations from the 7th to 12th centuries. ] (]) 10:19, 15 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Why? ] (]) 10:37, 15 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::because it's relevant detail and I think it's a question the reader might have. Just say for economic prosperity I think ] (]) 10:40, 15 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:@] I disagree with your reversion of my edit, the Islamisation of the region does summarise content in the body and is entirely relevant and lede worthy as it provides context for the current conflict. I don't understand your argument here, it seems a very common sense inclusion. Unless you think there's negative connotations with the term "Islamisation"? ] (]) 18:28, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Same applies to paganism, Judaism and Christianity. ] (]) 08:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::It’s included there as context for the subsequent sentences. Would you rather it referred to Arab migrations rather than Islamisation? ] (]) 08:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:How about: | |||
:::''with the region having received many ] in Europe during the ] '' | |||
:I’d argue this is more lede worthy than the exodus from the Muslim world, it also page links to a relevant page on Jewish history ] (]) 10:36, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::You can’t have a summary of Israeli history without mentioning WW2 ] (]) 10:37, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Btw feel free to revert my edit about migration following WW2, I altered it so 1RR doesn't apply, but I should've discussed it first. Why don't you feel migrations should be included in the lede? It seems a central component of Israeli history ] (]) 12:13, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::"It seems like..."? Respectfully, I think you should read/learn more about this before making or proposing changes to these articles. Like: how many Jews moved to Israel, when, from where, and according to what sources? There is a lot of literature on these topics, the answers are complex, and they may surprise you. ] (]) 13:19, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::That's valid, however my statement there is correct. The migration from Europe occurred largely from 1920 to 1953. The ] section has a table that shows where they migrated from, and how many, from 1948-1953, with 338,000 total from Europe. Ofc there was migration to Palestine during the war and before, which I struggled to include in my edit without splitting it into two sentences in different places. ] and ] discuss this. My edit was based off of what I read on wikipedia, ideally I'd be more knowledgeable and accustomed with the topic. ] (]) 13:37, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::That's why I wrote "... and according to whom?" If you are reading things on Misplaced Pages articles and then changing other Misplaced Pages articles based on that, that's not a good approach. ], and that table, for example, is itself not very well sourced. Not terribly sourced, it's sourced to scholarship at least, but it seems to have one source, a paper, that's 20 years old. There are many entire books written about this, and history is always updated, so there are just better sources available for these numbers. And of course not all the sources agree with each other. And then there's context (which Misplaced Pages articles are particularly lacking in): 338k out of how many total? While there is no disputing that the Holocaust was very important to the history of Israel, IIRC it's also true that most Holocaust survivors did not move to Israel (many more went to the US, for example), and most Jewish immigrants to Israel were not Holocaust survivors. | |||
::::Don't get me wrong, I think it's great that you're volunteering to improve these articles, but the best way to go about that is sources->body->lead, of the same article, as opposed to changing the lead (or body) of one article just based on what it says in another article. (Keeping in mind that main articles will often have better information than sub-articles, but not always, which is why one always has to check the sources.) And sources, plural, never depending on just one source. Sources from a variety of viewpoints, not just one American, Israeli, or Palestinian author. And preferably, ''best'' sources, not just "any" paper or book.<p>IMO, the best way to figure out what to write about immigration in the Israel article is to take a few recent books about Israel's history from the most reputable scholars from a variety of viewpoints, and see what they say about immigration, and then summarize that. ] (]) 14:37, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Okay I'll do more research in the future, thank you. Yeah cherry picking sources isn't the best way to go about it. In the sources I gave, one was from an Israeli journal, and one was critical of Israeli exceptionalism so I thought it was a wide consensus. | |||
:::::] lists pogroms after WW2, and a lot of Jewish migration was prior to the Holocaust ] (]) 14:43, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Yup, and also, off the top of my head, one thing sources from the '90s may not accurately capture (as compared to sources from, say, the last 10 years) is the significance of post-Soviet Jewish migration to the current demographics of Israel. IIRC, more Russian Jews came in the '90s and 2000s than Holocaust survivors in the '40s and '50s. How much a Misplaced Pages article talks about one wave of migration vs another should be based on how the current best sources treat the issue. And seriously, thanks for volunteering to work on this, Misplaced Pages could use all the help it can get. ] (]) 15:05, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Yeah, I'm surprised at the lack of active editors, no worries, I'll look into it. Thanks for the advice ] (]) 15:11, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::My impression does seem to be accurate, and I was very confident on it despite the weasel wording | |||
::: is a journal article with the title: ''Immigration is Israel's History, So Far'' | |||
::: is a book titled: ''Country on the Move: Migration to and within Israel, 1948–1995'' | |||
::: is critical of Israeli exceptionalism and states: ''Migration has been a major social issue in Israel for well over 50 years. Indeed,its centrality in the value context of the society goes back to well before the establishment of the state in 1948 (Leshem and Shuval (Eds), 1998).'' ] (]) 14:06, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::My edits on the word 'pre-emptively' were wrong and naive, I just wanted to counter the narrative that people flee their homes willingly ] (]) 14:11, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Yeah, this is extremely unusual. ] ] 23:42, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== {{anchor|rfc_7A115BD}}] in the lede == | |||
::Looks like we need an RFC after all. ] (]) 00:26, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
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:::Sorry, I don't know what you mean. The HR violations section was created accidentally, right? ] ] 00:35, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
On whether to include the Nakba pagelink in this paragraph in the lede: | |||
::::Nope. ] (]) 00:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:: Israel is located in a region known historically as ], ], and the ]. In antiquity, it was home to several ], and later, ] states, and is referred to as the Land of Israel in ]. Situated at a continental crossroad, the ] subsequently came under the rule of different empires, such as the ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ], ] and ] empires. The late 19th century saw the rise of ] in Europe, a movement seeking a ], which garnered ] during ]. During the war, ] led to the setting up of ] in 1920. Increased ] combined with ] led to ] between Jews and Arabs.<ref>{{cite book |author=] |title= Righteous Victims: A History of the Zionist-Arab Conflict, 1881–2001 |publisher= Knopf |year= 1999 |edition= reprint |isbn= 9780679744757 |pages= |quote= The fear of territorial displacement and dispossession was to be the chief motor of Arab antagonism to Zionism down to 1948 (and indeed after 1967 as well). |url= https://books.google.com/books?id=746mQgAACAAJ}} Also quoted, among many, by Mark M. Ayyash (2019). ''Hermeneutics of Violence: A Four-Dimensional Conception''. University of Toronto Press, p. , {{ISBN| 1487505868}}. Accessed 22 March 2024.</ref><ref>{{cite journal |last1=Fildis |first1=Ayse |last2=Nisanci |first2=Ensar |title=British Colonial Policy “Divide and Rule”: Fanning Arab Rivalry in Palestine |year=2019 |journal=International Journal of Islamic and Civilizational Studies |volume=6 |issue=1 |publisher=UTM Press |url=https://d1wqtxts1xzle7.cloudfront.net/78420814/ea601a07a2310f41e37ea266a47b38107202-libre.pdf?1641751843=&response-content-disposition=inline%3B+filename%3DBritish_Colonial_Policy_Divide_and_Rule.pdf&Expires=1715344527&Signature=UEfPzsmbLIHNW7Sd0jLxe4OpYUu4sPt5cIaU2beASuCt0BXqpfOQmcXAcR9EAPzkenh~ohMRrZlUREfMTTfqEosnMw8oqlVa2Ap6HVteACMhsC0VpH~MUmjcYs8f8rQUrWjZTnMuKwhEtiRQ92Md~PThKvq6IbAds05mX-cJzPamGLZ7fpx8xA3ejpYDXiG1uYE7Ks550xBeDWLCCPkfuOUJXMTbmJAucKnXRZnDL78EuDeQx0CNpSWdujVlcd82klFyLverjL5AAJs5AH2eHNVpXzym0fPdbY2YJWz5sgMYZOC9oN09cDXB007r7qRj2nFSL3Zs13Un0i~~1~pwbg__&Key-Pair-Id=APKAJLOHF5GGSLRBV4ZA}}</ref> The 1947 ] triggered ] between the two groups, which saw the ] of most of Mandatory Palestine's predominantly ], known as the ],<ref>Honaida Ghanim, ] March 2009 Vol. 22, No. 1 pp.23-39 p.37</ref><ref>Stern, Yoav (13 May 2008). . '']''. {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20080612162136/http://www.badil.org/Publications/badil-nakba-60-info-packet/index.html|date=12 June 2008}}, BADIL Resource Center for Palestinian Residency and Refugee Rights; Cleveland, William L. ''A History of the Modern Middle East'', Boulder, CO: Westview Press, 2004, p. 270. {{ISBN|978-0-8133-4047-0}}</ref><ref>{{cite journal |last1=Ghanim |first1=Honaida |date=March 2009 |title=Poetics of Disaster: Nationalism, Gender, and Social Change Among Palestinian Poets in Israel After Nakba |journal=] |volume=22 |pages=23–39 |doi=10.1007/s10767-009-9049-9 |jstor=40608203 |s2cid=144148068 |number=1}}</ref> while a minority remained and became ].<ref name=":2" /> | |||
:::::Are we both talking about the top level section I just deleted? ] ] 00:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::I created it. It was not created accidentally, please revert your edit. ] (]) 01:55, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Sorry, I was confused by a comment Remsense left. I think it's an extremely controversial addition. Is there some WP rule reason that I have to revert, or is there consensus I'm not seeing? ] ] 02:09, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::There's definitely an open discussion.... Best leave it out till the process is done. Thinking about adding undue tags in relation to three or four sections... there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine. Will gather some thoughts together and bring it up at the project page see if we can help. <span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:-15deg;color:darkblue">''']'''</span><span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:15deg;color:darkblue">]</span> 02:14, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::{{tq|there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine}}, right, and its relationship with Palestine and Palestinians is a core part of the coverage of Israel in RS. I'm curious where you think the undue tags should go. ] (]) 02:33, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Article is to big ingeneral and suffers from in the new style - 21st century should be summarized much better. Israeli-occupied territories, International opinion and Accusations of Apartheid should be integrated into history and/ or foreign relations with just a few sentences for each topic leading our readers to main articles. See ] for how its done.,see also ] and ]. <span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:-15deg;color:darkblue">''']'''</span><span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:15deg;color:darkblue">]</span> 03:05, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::That seems like a strange suggestion, of course the occupation is relevant to the history, but it is also a crucial aspect of Israeli politics today. ] (]) 03:34, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Israel != Germany ] (]) 09:44, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
== Edit request regarding the map == | |||
] (]) 14:01, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
I am writing to express concern about the recent changes to the map. The current map includes territories marked in green, representing areas such as Palestinian territories and even the Golan Heights. This change departs from the previous map, which accurately reflected the internationally recognized borders as endorsed by the United Nations. Marking these territories in green introduces a controversial interpretation that is not widely accepted by major international organizations. | |||
:I'm linking to this on ] and ] in the hope we can build a strong consensus on this issue. ] (]) 14:06, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Can someone more experienced and more neutral than me please take over and manage discussion ] (]) 14:12, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Is this supposed to be an ]? See ]. And where is the ]? (ie Is this even disputed by anyone other than yourself?) ] (]) 15:04, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I don’t dispute it, I’m for its inclusion. Two people have stated either opposition or wariness. ] (]) 15:19, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::There is a weak consensus at the moment to include it. On such a controversial issue, a strong one is infinitely better although the merit of this RfC would depend on a good facilitator and efforts to build a consensus from both sides. ] (]) 15:22, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::You misunderstand me, where is the discussion where any editor queried the inclusion of the word nakba? ] (]) 15:54, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::It was reverted with a valid reason, I reinstated it due to weak consensus and started this RfC so as to hear arguments ] (]) 16:03, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::If all we are talking about is an insertion, a removal and a reinsertion without any subsequent discussion, then there is presumed consensus. | |||
::::::Btw, if the removal was for a valid reason, then it would have been better, although not compulsory, to have started the discussion per ]. | |||
::::::But if there is no current discussion, then this RFC is not required and you should close it (remove the RFC tags). ] (]) 16:19, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I’ll close it and maybe reopen it if there’s further disagreement ] (]) 16:42, 12 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*Yes, include -- this is a different article from ], so it makes sense to mention Nakba in the lead. --] (]) 03:05, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*Oppose, this is redundant, we already mention the ]. ] (]) 18:07, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:This is a discussion not an RFC so no need for support/oppose comments. ] (]) 18:17, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:Would it be an improvement if it were to say: | |||
*::: ''known as the ] in Palestinian society.'' | |||
*:in order to make it clear that that article is written from the Palestinian perspective, and frame it. If this were done, would you support its inclusion in the lede here? ] (]) 18:21, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::{{tq|that article is written from the Palestinian perspective}} If that's true, add some other perspectives so that it isn't. ] (]) 18:25, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::I have stated that the Israeli perspective on the Nakba, current and past, should be included in the body and the lede of the article. It's too intense a topic for me to write on it without a deeper understanding. Until then, I do think it'd be good to frame the article here. This also clearly differentiates it from the expulsion and flight article, so the reader understands why we included them both. ] (]) 18:32, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::Nope, you can't frame the article as not being NPOV merely because it hasn't been edited to your satisfaction, that's not the way it works. ] (]) 18:35, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::Of course you can, this is entirely how it works, via consensus of editors. If multiple editors question the NPOV of an article, it gets an NPOV banner until that is addressed. I think the Nakba article is very good article, and it's right that the bulk should be written from the Palestinian perspective, but there also needs to be a bit from the Israeli perspective, that isn't just apologia. ] (]) 18:39, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::{{tq|this is entirely how it works, via consensus of editors. If multiple editors question the NPOV of an article, it gets an NPOV banner}} If that was the way it worked, every contentious article would have a permanent NPOV tag. ] (]) 18:43, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::Ahaha true ] (]) 18:44, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::There is no neutrality tag at the Nakba article, therefore it is NPOV and not written from the Palestinian perspective only. If you add such a tag, then go to the article and explain what needs to be fixed there and it will get fixed, either way it is not "Palestinian". ] (]) 18:43, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::I'll move discussion to that page and clarify my argument. ] (]) 18:45, 19 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{reftalk}} | |||
1. Lack of Consensus: Major international bodies such as the United Nations, the European Union, and other globally recognized entities do not depict these territories in a distinct color that implies sovereignty or control by specific nations. The new map’s coloration could mislead readers into assuming a level of recognition or legitimacy that does not exist. | |||
== Separate section for "Criticism (of Israel)"? == | |||
2. Neutrality Concerns: Misplaced Pages strives to maintain a neutral perspective, especially on contentious geopolitical issues. By adopting a map with disputed territories marked differently, the page risks appearing to take a stance, which could alienate users and detract from Misplaced Pages’s reputation as an impartial source. | |||
In the ] section, there is a "see also" link for the ]. I wonder if there should be a separate section altogether for that, especially considering some of the criticism for the state is not entirely about "government and politics" (examples: islamophobia, antisemitism, etc). ] (]) 03:06, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
3. Consistency with Historical Usage: The previous map, in use for over 20 years, was widely accepted as a neutral representation of the region. It respected international consensus and did not introduce contentious visual elements. Returning to this map would preserve the neutrality and credibility of the content. | |||
:Not what we are looking for...] "Segregation of text or other content into different regions or subsections, based solely on the apparent POV of the content itself, may result in an unencyclopedic structure..." ] " Sections within an article dedicated to negative criticisms are normally also discouraged. " <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 03:21, 13 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
4. Precedent for Reliable Sources: Most authoritative atlases and online mapping tools, including those maintained by major international organizations, avoid marking these territories in distinct colors to sidestep misinterpretation. Aligning with these standards would bolster Misplaced Pages's reliability. | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 20 May 2024 == | |||
I respectfully request that the map be reverted to its previous version, which better reflects the official and internationally recognized borders. This change would ensure that Misplaced Pages adheres to its guiding principles of neutrality and accuracy. ] (]) 18:01, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | |||
There is a typo. JewIsh instead of Jewish. | |||
Please fix it. ] (]) 16:17, 20 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:done ] (]) 16:44, 20 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
:You don't have the needed qualifications to edit about this topic(you don't yet have 500 edits), please see your user talk page. ] (]) 18:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 23 May 2024 == | |||
:]The map reflects Israel's international recognized borders and the territories it claims (East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights) and occupies militarily (West Bank excl. East Jerusalem and the Gaza Strip). This is mostly consistent with other country articles, such as ] (map depicts unrecognized claim over the former Sanjak of Alexandretta) and ] (map depicts claims over the Ukrainian territories it occupied since 2014). However, there is an argument to removing the West Bank (excl. East Jerusalem) and the Gaza Strip from the map and using ] instead, since Israel does not ''de jure'' claim the territory and it is internationally recognized as being part of the State of Palestine. ] 22:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::There is no basis for Israeli claims to either EJ or the Golan, they are unrecognized annexes and along with the West Bank and Gaza are considered as occupied territories. ] (]) 22:59, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::However, for consistency reasons, it would be justifiable to exclude territories not annexed by Israel, as locator maps don't typically include territories under military occupation, but do include territories unilaterally annexed. For example, the map of Russia does not include ] and ] in light green, despite them being internationally recognized as Russian-occupied territories, but does include Crimea, as it was illegally annexed in 2014. Similarly, the map of the ] does not include ]. as it is not annexed territory of the US. ] 23:20, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::Anyone that wants to can see Green Line Israel by clicking on a radio button, the initial question really is what we want the default view to be, that or with occupied territories shown. If it were up to me I would show Green Line Israel, excluding Golan, as default. | |||
::::Then the alternate view should show all occupied territories, including purportedly annexed territories. Btw "disputed" is not a NPOV term here, see ]. | |||
::::Other article maps do not affect what happens with the situation here. ] (]) 11:02, 2 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::If all territories under military occupation are to be included on the map, why are Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria, newly occupied since 2024, excluded? There is also a significant difference in the legal status of East Jerusalem versus the rest of the West Bank. Israeli civil law is applied in East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights, whereas it is extended to Israeli settlers in the rest of the West Bank only via emergency regulations. Gaza remains militarily occupied due to control over its airspace, territorial waters, and borders, but Israeli civil law is not extended and Israel does not formally claim the territory as its own. Meanwhile, if militarily-occupied territories are to be included, Southern Lebanon nor the newly occupied parts of Syria are shown in light green. | |||
:::::The map of Russia excludes Ukrainian territories that are occupied but not annexed, and the Ukraine map omits its military occupation of parts of Kursk Oblast. The Russian article map did not include the four annexed oblasts until after they were annexed, despite Russia beginning settlement activities before then . Other Misplaced Pages articles consistently differentiate between annexed and occupied territories, marking only annexed areas. | |||
:::::The map should either show all territories under Israeli military presence or limit itself to lands Israel ''formally'' claims as its own. Unrecognized or illegal claims should be marked in light green, in contrast to the West Bank (beyond East Jerusalem) and Gaza, which are solely claimed by the State of Palestine. This distinction is already visible on the map for the State of Palestine, where annexed territories like East Jerusalem and Latrun are marked differently from areas claimed exclusively by Palestine. ] 19:20, 2 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::Just to repeat that what we do here on this page for the map here does not depend on what is done at any other page. | |||
::::::Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria have not as yet been declared as occupied territory by any competent authority afaik. | |||
::::::Lands that Israel {{tq|formally claims}} (EJ/Golan) are also illegal claims, so designated by the UNSC (reaffirmed recently by the ICJ in respect of EJ), so this distinction is of no import. | |||
::::::As things stand, I simply want to note the OP request as not done (no consensus of EC editors). Presumably you do not want to do that. So I suggest we wait and see if any other editors have a view. ] (]) 19:31, 2 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 January 2025 == | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | {{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | ||
I request an edit change of the GDP (Nominal), GDP (PPP), GDP Per Capita (Nominal), and GDP Per Capita (PPP) of Israel to 2025 in Accordance to IMF's October 2024 Database. The source will remain the same as the source currently shown, but the access date will be changed to "2 January 2025". Please Change Before (X) to After (Y). | |||
The page states that Israel is located in the historic Canaan and “Palestine” areas. This is supposed to be “Judea” as historically “Palestine” only existed as a British Mandate from 1918-1948. Please update this language to be historically accurate as Canaan and Judea are the correct terms for this point in Israel’s history. Canaan does not exist today, and the land of Judea is where Israel currently exists. (Submitted by a Middle East historian) ] (]) 13:39, 23 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Not done. Unsourced opinion. ] (]) 13:48, 23 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Recent lede edits == | |||
{{ping|Alexanderkowal}} The lede is a summary, and your recent edits do not treat it as such. ] (]) 14:38, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
Before (X): 2024 Estimate | |||
:Can you specify which edits? The sentence about migration after WW2 has a paragraph on it in the body. I admit my incentive to edit was not to summarise the body but make a good summary of the topic, and that that is problematic. There should be a paragraph about the rise of antisemitism in Europe which gives context to the climate that Zionism was born in and popularised in. Whether I can write that and do it justice, idk, although the research is easy ] (]) 14:50, 28 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
GDP (PPP) | |||
• Total | |||
Increase $541.343 billion (47th) | |||
• Per capita | |||
Increase $54,446 (29th) | |||
GDP (nominal) | |||
== Map: add main towns, Isr. settlements outside Isr. == | |||
• Total | |||
Increase $528.067 billion (29th) | |||
• Per capita | |||
Increase $53,110 (18th) | |||
Maybe it's not the best place to open the discussion, but let's have it started. | |||
After (Y): 2025 Estimate | |||
'''Regarding maps of towns & regions:''' | |||
GDP (PPP) | |||
• Total | |||
Increase $565.878 billion (47th) | |||
• Per capita | |||
Increase $55,847 (29th) | |||
GDP (nominal) | |||
'''It is important to have the main features on the map also on the other side of border or armistice lines'''. For the PA these are Palestinian towns & Israeli settlements, elsewhere Lebanese etc. towns, trans-border roads etc. Why? Because '''white surfaces aren't informative. There is peaceful and violent interaction across those lines''' - main roads into the West Bank, border crossings, common industrial zones, border incidents (shooting, terror attacks, IDF incursions, historical battles), ecological issues, and so forth. One comes here for inf. and gets - '']''. | |||
• Total | |||
Increase $550.905 billion (29th) | |||
• Per capita | |||
Increase $54,370 (18th) ] (]) 18:18, 2 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:{{Done}} Thank you. ] ] 16:20, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
Use a different colour, of course - keep the white or whatever - but border or armistice lines are porous, not the ultimate confines of ]. We should only add important features, but those are needed. If a selection or graphic alteration is too difficult to achieve, technically or otherwise, then keep all there is, but in pale grey. ] (]) 10:15, 29 May 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Edit Request == | |||
:Concrete example. One reads about shooting from ] toward ]. Going to B.H. page, there is no Tulkarem on the map/location plan. Current solution: | |||
:# go to coordinates | |||
:# choose type of map | |||
:# figure out places, often spelled differently. | |||
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At the end of the History section there are a few sentences about accusations if genocide against Israel. Since there's an ongoing RfC about its very inclusion shouldn't it be removed until the RfC is concluded? ] (]) 18:30, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
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:Was discussed at ], EC editors are aware of the addition, in the RFC the majority is not really objecting to due inclusion of material in the article body, the principal debate is as to whether a link is due in the lead. ] (]) 18:40, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
Hopefully this is uncontroversial and accurate, but I am open to guidance if mistaken. | |||
::alright np, I just don't know all the rules regarding the process ] (]) 20:47, 4 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
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view · edit Frequently asked questions Why is Jerusalem listed as Israel's capital in the infobox? Israel declares Jerusalem to be its capital, and has its seat of government there. However, the lack of international recognition is notable, hence the subtext was added "(limited recognition)" as the result of this RfC. For further information see Status of Jerusalem. |
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INCLUDE IN BODY AND LEAD It's possible that this discussion will be seen by non-Wikipedians, so I've tried to explain what we've decided, and why, in enough detail that a non-Wikipedian would be able to follow it.This is a Request for Comment ("RfC"), which is a method we Wikipedians use to make tricky content decisions. Interested people who have accounts in good standing are invited to express a view. After a time, and when discussion has died down, another editor summarizes the discussion and communicates the decision the community has made. This process of writing a summary is called "closing".A sacred cow of Misplaced Pages is that the closer has to be neutral and uninvolved. The closer isn't the decider -- rather, the closer writes a closing summary that documents what the community has collectively decided. The closer is expected to apply relevant rules called policies and guidelines. This is my role, and the principle of uninvolvement is why I -- a man who knows nothing about this and has never even set foot in the Middle East -- am writing this. If I seem to be the decision maker, then that's an illusion.In the discussion below, the community decides if, and if so how, to "link" our article on Gaza genocide from our article on Israel. In this case "link" means "Wikilink", which is where we use computer code to make the article text blue so a reader can click it and find another Misplaced Pages article. A decision about a link does not mean that any wording in the article has to be changed, because we can make a link without changing any text at all. But when editors are deciding how to implement the decision that we've made, they could decide to change the text, if that's the best way to do it.We make decisions by "rough consensus", which is a Wikipedian term meaning more than a majority. It does not have to mean unanimity. In this case editors are not of one mind, but we would have to say that the "rough consensus" -- a supermajority of responsible Wikipedians -- is that yes, we should link the article on Gaza genocide in two places: once in the "lead", which is the top few paragraphs above the table of contents, and once in the body, which is the main part of the article below the table of contents.The decision to link our article on Gaza genocide does not mean that Misplaced Pages is saying that Israel has committed genocide. We do not make that allegation in Misplaced Pages's voice, anywhere in this article or that one. "Gaza genocide" is the short title of an article in which Misplaced Pages explains about the allegations of genocide that other people (notably lawyers representing South Africa) have made, the findings of the International Court of Justice, and the commentary of reliable news sources and international experts. Misplaced Pages's article reflects what the sources we deem most reliable say about this, and we try to give appropriate prominence to Israel's denials. In this discussion we merely decide to include a pointer.Huldra's question also asks in which paragraph we should include these links, but the community has not given me sufficient guidance to answer that. I can only say that the links should be introduced.I hope this is clear and suffices to resolve the dispute. Queries, quibbles, comments, criticism, or complaints about this close are welcome, and should be directed to my talk page in the first instance.—S Marshall T/C 18:12, 19 January 2025 (UTC)The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Should the article Gaza genocide be linked from this article, and if yes, where?
- Possible answers:
- No, it should not be linked
- Yes, it should be linked in the lead.
- Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph)
cheers, Huldra (talk) 22:20, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
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- Yes, it should be linked in the lead and the body of the article, attached to content similar to that Selfstudier developed above, and content similar to that Huldra developed in would serve well in the lede. It's obviously something readers are going to be coming to this page to learn more about, and the information exists on the encyclopedia, the conversations about whether it belongs here or not have laready been had, so there's no reason this page should not serve reader needs. — penultimate_supper 🚀 21:53, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph + add a single sentence to the end of lead like this, Huldra (talk) 22:15, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- I don't understand why it would be necessary to add it as a completely separate paragraph (if we were to add it) instead of just putting at the end of the third paragraph, which is far more related, and less abrupt. ARandomName123 (talk) 20:46, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes,
adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph
and add a single sentence to theend oflead per Huldra, but I would modify their suggested text ("In 2024, Israel was accused of committing the Gaza genocide)" to "In 2024, Israel was accused of committing genocide in Gaza" or similar. My logic for the change is that the accusation/dispute centres on whether Israel's actions in Gaza constitute genocide (or are legitimate self-defence/similar), rather than whether the 'Gaza genocide' is being committed by Israel (as opposed to some other State or body) which Huldra's text otherwise implies.Pincrete (talk) 07:59, 24 November 2024 (UTC) - Yes, I agree with the inclusion in the lead. JacktheBrown (talk) 16:02, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes to Selfstudier's suggestion in the body per the weight of reliable sources given (I'll leave to others to determine where), with a summary in the lead. Only suggestion is to add the arrest warrants on. TarnishedPath 09:29, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes it should be included in the lede and in the body text.--Ortizesp (talk) 14:21, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes similarly to how self has suggested DMH223344 (talk) 00:09, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No Not until a new article about Palestine's genocide against Israel is linked to the Palestine article.Allthemilescombined1 (talk) 01:36, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- See WP:OTHERCONTENT and then perhaps think about making a policy based argument or your !vote will likely be ignored by whoever closes this RFC. TarnishedPath 02:30, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No Given that there is no actual genocide. Very much not. MaskedSinger (talk) 05:06, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No The article "Gaza genocide" presents claims that lack broad consensus within the international community and are subject to significant dispute. Linking to such an article may mislead readers into perceiving these claims as established facts rather than contested allegations, thereby compromising the integrity of the host article. Eladkarmel (talk) 20:45, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No per MaskedSinger, Allthemilescombined1 and Eladkarmel; feels like including this would unduly shoehorn something in that doesn't belong in the general overview article. Andre🚐 21:05, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Not in the lede. It should be made clear that these are accusations and many sources do not agree with this characterisation. Note that many country articles don't mention genocides in the lede even when there is a consensus that it happened (Bosnia and Herzegovina, Iraq, Syria (Yazidi genocide), Uganda, etc). Alaexis¿question? 21:38, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- User:Alaexis just a question: when you say "nor in the lead; does that mean you think it should be in the body? If so, which paragraph? Huldra (talk) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes. There's a relevant section where it can be mentioned: Israel#Israeli-occupied_territories. Right now, this article doesn't mention two important things: That the current Prime Minister of Israel, Benjamin Netanyahu, is a fugitive wanted for crimes against humanity by the International Criminal Court, and that Israel is being charged with genocide by South Africa in the International Court of Justice. I think there can be a new subsection in the "Israeli occupied territories" section, that mentions both facts. I see Selfstudier has given a sample text. I support that paragraph being added to the relevant section, but I think a mention of the ICC's arrest warrant of the Prime Minister of Israel (and Yoav Gallant's warrant too) could also be added, since it's also international litigation for crimes against humanity in Gaza. Mohammed Deif's arrest warrant doesn't need to be mentioned in this article. I think we can have a new subsection titled "Gaza Strip" that moves text that already exists in the section. So in addition to Selfstudier's text, I would add the first sentence of the arrest warrant article to the end of it, and make it look like THIS (A link to a sandbox page that would show what the article would look like).--JasonMacker (talk) 05:43, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
- As far as adding it to the lead, the already existing sentence in the lead, "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." seems to be a good enough summary, but I guess I would modify it to "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations, the International Criminal Court, and United Nations officials." The ICC is technically not a UN body, so it should be mentioned separately. But other than that, I think such a sentence would be fine. I'm open to suggestions on this though. JasonMacker (talk) 05:48, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
*No. The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda. Unless substantial new evidence emerges, analyzed by impartial, non-politicized sources and supported by more than two vague statements and casualty figures (which include a significant number of Hamas militants but the Hamas-run Health Ministry prefers not to differentiate militants from civilians), such claims lack the rigor required for inclusion in serious, encyclopedic coverage. ABHammad (talk) 06:53, 27 November 2024 (UTC)Blocked sock Selfstudier (talk) 11:08, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- "The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda." This is simply not true. See: Expert opinions in the Gaza genocide debate. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 07:00, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
- No. This article is about the State of Israel. Not news. Should the articles about the United States, the United Kingdom, Germany, and many others feature the various proven genocides that actually took place, or even in the lead? Might as well say "also known as the Z.E.", in the lead or anywhere, with some extra brackets for good measure? This is a matter of an ongoing armed conflict, with fog of war and disinformation throughout. Not only would it be "commenting on an ongoing investigation" as they say, but entirely inappropriate and irresponsible. Skullers (talk) 11:38, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes Per WP:LEDE, required
mention of significant criticism or controversies
, clearly true and which several of the No !votes have acknowledged as being the case. A mention should be added via inclusion within the sentence "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimesandcrimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." Selfstudier (talk) 12:10, 27 November 2024 (UTC) - Not in the lede - a good chunk of the lede is already criticism, so adding additional accusations would seem like POV shoehorning. Not necessarily against inclusion in the body, but there isn't a specific proposal to comment on. — xDanielx /C\ 23:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- User:XDanielx there is a question about whether it should be in the body. ("Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph") So, if you agree: which paragraph? Huldra (talk) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Huldra: Relevant material is currently in the body, unless it is reverted. The original dispute was about a sentence being added to the lead not material being added to the body, something which is not usually a source of dispute unless the amount of such material is undue. Option 2 already assumes material present in the body, no?. And option 1 just says no, so the third option is not really necessary. Selfstudier (talk) 10:36, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Selfstudier: When I started this RfC on the 22 nov, it wasn't in the body (that was first added the 27th) so the the third option is useful (necessary?) for keeping it there, Huldra (talk) 23:09, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- I just think the two things should not be mixed up, this RFC should not attempt to rubber stamp the addition that I made to the body, that should just be subject to the normal editing process. Imagine that I had not added it and people voted option 2? Then there would have had to have been another discussion about what should be in the body, so yes I have attempted to remedy a deficiency in the way the RFC was drafted and hopefully it meets with approval. Selfstudier (talk) 23:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Selfstudier: When I started this RfC on the 22 nov, it wasn't in the body (that was first added the 27th) so the the third option is useful (necessary?) for keeping it there, Huldra (talk) 23:09, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Huldra: Relevant material is currently in the body, unless it is reverted. The original dispute was about a sentence being added to the lead not material being added to the body, something which is not usually a source of dispute unless the amount of such material is undue. Option 2 already assumes material present in the body, no?. And option 1 just says no, so the third option is not really necessary. Selfstudier (talk) 10:36, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- User:XDanielx there is a question about whether it should be in the body. ("Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph") So, if you agree: which paragraph? Huldra (talk) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes in the body and the lede: There are prominent RS (UN Special Committee, Israeli holocaust scholar Omer Bartov to cite two examples) supporting the charachterization that Israel has been committing a genocide in Gaza, so there is no reason why this shouldn't be mentioned in the body. Accordingly, lede summarizes the body, so it should include that, given that it is one of the most prominent controversies Israel is facing second to the crime of apartheid in the West Bank (I am in favor of including both in the lede), though admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed, that's why for now it can be described as an accusation. The perfect short phrasing in my opinion for the lede can be:
“ | Israel's practices in the occupied territories has drawn sustained international criticism for violating the human rights of the Palestinians, including for maintaining an apartheid regime in the West Bank, as well as being accused of committing a genocide in Gaza. | ” |
- Update to my "admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed," that is beginning to change as Amnesty International launched a report today charachterizing that Israel is committing genocide in Gaza. While this does not yet mean the threshold has been reached, but it gives a whole new significance to the inclusion of the "accusation" to the lede. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:01, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, both in the lead and body: Per sources and my understanding of Misplaced Pages:Policies and guidelines. Some of these policies and guidelines are:
- 1) Misplaced Pages:Neutral_point_of_view#Due_and_undue_weight. WP:Tertiary sources can be used to assess WP:DUE. My understanding is that once DUEness is established, Misplaced Pages articles can be kept up to date. This is actually a strength of Misplaced Pages. For example, no one would argue mentioning something about the economy in this article is WP:UNDUE. WP:Tertiary and overview WP:Secondary sources about Israel would include something about the economy. It could be too much or too little, but something about the economy would be DUE in this article. However, economic stats in this article would probably be much more up to date than many published overview WP:Secondary sources about Israel such as Routledge Handbook on Contemporary Israel.
- Similarly, WP:Tertiary sources mention Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict at length. As such, Gaza genocide would be DUE. If in several years, newly published WP:Tertiary sources do not mention this, it can be taken out of the lead. If in several years, both newly published WP:Tertiary and overview WP:Secondary sources about Israel do not mention this, it can also be taken out of the body. But for now, to keep the article up to date, this is DUE. (Update: quote from intro chapter in overview secondary source provided below Bogazicili (talk) 19:17, 3 January 2025 (UTC))
- Sources are below, I cannot give lengthy quotes due to word count restrictions in Misplaced Pages:Contentious topics/Arab–Israeli conflict
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- More tertiary sources can be found using Google Books, Google Scholar, or the Misplaced Pages Library (for example: Oxford Reference Online database)
- wording suggestion removed
- The above wording makes the lead neutral as only the accusation is added in Wikivoice. Similarly, the text in the body should be NPOV.
- 2) Misplaced Pages:Verifiability. Lots of WP:RS. See Template:Expert opinions in the Gaza genocide debate. There are already WP:Secondary sources about this such as Gaza Faces History by Enzo Traverso. This source also ties Gaza genocide with Israeli-Palestinian conflict:
In this urgent, insightful essay, a respected historian places the Israeli-Palestinian war in context, challenging Western attitudes about the region
- 3) MOS:LEADLENGTH. The above proposal would trim the lead word count by something like 26 words. It'd still be more than 400 words, but even many featured articles are longer than 400 words. Bogazicili (talk) 17:27, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- You linked to four tertiary sources, but I don't see the word "genocide" in any of them? (Britannica links to recent news about it, but that seems temporary.) Maybe this is a sign that our lede's focus should somehow be different, but in terms of accusations of genocide, if anything it seems like a sign that we should omit them.
- I don't think there's any dispute that something like
accusations that it has committed genocide
would pass WP:V, but that isn't really an argument for highlighting material in a lede. That comes down mainly to WP:DUE and to MOS:LEDE, which tell us tobriefly summarize the most important points covered in an article
. — xDanielx /C\ 01:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)- I gave my reasoning for this.
- This is a recent and ongoing event. The Oxford Encyclopedia of the Modern World, published in 2008, would not have mentioned 2024 events. It's a reliable source, but they are not clairvoyant.
- My DUE argument was due to heavy coverage of Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict in Israel entries in tertiary sources.
- If sources published in the next few years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, it can be taken out of the body or the lead.
- But for now, we can keep the article up to date. I believe this is the precedent in Misplaced Pages. Otherwise Misplaced Pages would be several years or longer behind everything if we had to wait for overview WP:Secondary or WP:Tertiary sources for everything. Once those type of sources covering recent events are available however, those sources would determine how we proceed. Bogazicili (talk) 11:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it should be linked in the lead, at the end of the third paragraph where it discusses war crimes and crimes against humanity. This text has been through various iterations, but would benefit from greater precision by means of specificity. A great many countries have been accused of war crimes, making that a rather generic, not outstanding observation. While it is probably more notable that Israel has been accused of a particularly voluminous number of different war crimes in the post-WWII period, sitting above that are the very specific crimes against humanity in which it has been implicated –namely apartheid and genocide. Now apartheid has already been through the RFC process and denied a mention (based on rationales that grow poorer by the day) but to the question here, yes, it is extremely pertinent to mention the particularly nation-defining crime against humanity of genocide – the so-called crime of crimes. Iskandar323 (talk) 18:32, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes it is notable enough for an article, therefore should be linked. SKAG123 (talk) 23:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, but not in the lead. There's some discussion of genocide in the 21st century section of the article and this link could be put there, but it's not clear why this should be added to the lead. I am strongly opposed to adding it to the lead and most of the arguments for inclusion into the lead can be discounted on WP:10YT/WP:NOTTHENEWS/WP:RECENTISM grounds. Nemov (talk) 22:07, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes for the body, no for the lead It is certainly notable enough to mention in a relevant part of the article, but I think it is too recent to mention in the lead, since we cannot assess long-term historical importance yet. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:24, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you point to the relevant Misplaced Pages:Policies and guidelines for your argument? Bogazicili (talk) 15:32, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- The bar for something being included in the lead is pretty high, much higher than inclusion in the body. According to MOS:LEADNO, emphasis on material, such as the Gaza genocide, should reflect its relative importance to the topic as described by reliable sources. I think the current state of the lead is fine, although I would also be fine with adding a sentence or two about how Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal. I don't think the Gaza genocide by itself has enough weight to warrant inclusion in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:42, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Gaza genocide is part of the Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict, which is heavily covered in Israel entries in WP:Tertiary sources. See the sources above. Bogazicili (talk) 15:46, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict certainly warrants inclusion in the lead. However, is the Gaza genocide itself heavily covered in those entries? It is the level of coverage for the specific topic that matters, not the level of coverage of the wider subject it is part of. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:52, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- See the discussion above. Bogazicili (talk) 15:59, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- WP:LEDE requires mention of significant criticism or controversies, this fits the bill, it needs no more than a wikilink. Selfstudier (talk) 16:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says summarize the most important points. I am simply contending that this is not one of them. Israel is a sizable country with a lot of history, and I don't believe that this has enough DUE weight in reliable sources about Israel as a whole to warrant including prominently in the lead, although I think it is important enough to mention in the body. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- To be clear, the Israeli-Palestinian conflict definitely warrants inclusion in the lead, and we could probably add a sentence about the legality of Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank, but I think including the Gaza genocide specifically in the lead would be recentist and UNDUE, especially since the Israel-Hamas war is only covered by "several wars" in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:15, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- See the wording suggestion above. This could be added into the lead while trimming the lead. For WP:DUE, we can look at coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict. If newer tertiary sources in the upcoming years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, Gaza genocide can be taken out. Do we have any tertiary sources published in the past few months?
- If the only sources were newspaper articles, recentist arguments would succeed. However, we have so many secondary sources on Gaza genocide now. Bogazicili (talk) 16:26, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, we have many secondary sources on the Gaza genocide. We also have many secondary sources on a variety of other things, like the 7 October attacks or the Munich massacre of Israeli athletes. Those aren't included in the lead either. My question is whether secondary or tertiary sources on the topic of Israel as a whole mention the genocide. If not, it shouldn't be in the lead yet. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assessing DUEness of Munich massacre is easy, since it happened in 1972. Look at tertiary sources. Bogazicili (talk) 16:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Arguing that we should rush this into the lead because we can't assess long-term importance yet is pure recentism. I'm not saying we can't update the body to add this information, but we should wait on adding it to the lead until the long-term impact is more clear. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:35, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- That wasn't my argument, I won't respond any further to not WP:Bludgeon Bogazicili (talk) 16:38, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Arguing that we should rush this into the lead because we can't assess long-term importance yet is pure recentism. I'm not saying we can't update the body to add this information, but we should wait on adding it to the lead until the long-term impact is more clear. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:35, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assessing DUEness of Munich massacre is easy, since it happened in 1972. Look at tertiary sources. Bogazicili (talk) 16:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, we have many secondary sources on the Gaza genocide. We also have many secondary sources on a variety of other things, like the 7 October attacks or the Munich massacre of Israeli athletes. Those aren't included in the lead either. My question is whether secondary or tertiary sources on the topic of Israel as a whole mention the genocide. If not, it shouldn't be in the lead yet. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says
summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies
I can assure you this is a prominent controversy. Well, unless you can convince me it isn't. Selfstudier (talk) 16:19, 18 December 2024 (UTC)- It is a decently prominent controversy, but the State of Israel has had a lot of prominent controversies in its short history, and we can't stuff them all in the lead. I think mentioning that their occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal would cover the most important controversy, being their illegal occupation of Gaza and the West Bank. The Gaza genocide is arguably a subtopic of that. For an applicable example from another article, the featured article Japan does not mention the atrocities they committed against China in World War II in the lead, even though it was, and still is, a very prominent controversy. Similarly, the lead of Germany only gives the Holocaust two words in a sentence about the Nazi government. Similar considerations apply here. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- And this would be exactly one word in the lead, per my suggestion. Bogazicili (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It is a decently prominent controversy, but the State of Israel has had a lot of prominent controversies in its short history, and we can't stuff them all in the lead. I think mentioning that their occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal would cover the most important controversy, being their illegal occupation of Gaza and the West Bank. The Gaza genocide is arguably a subtopic of that. For an applicable example from another article, the featured article Japan does not mention the atrocities they committed against China in World War II in the lead, even though it was, and still is, a very prominent controversy. Similarly, the lead of Germany only gives the Holocaust two words in a sentence about the Nazi government. Similar considerations apply here. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- To be clear, the Israeli-Palestinian conflict definitely warrants inclusion in the lead, and we could probably add a sentence about the legality of Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank, but I think including the Gaza genocide specifically in the lead would be recentist and UNDUE, especially since the Israel-Hamas war is only covered by "several wars" in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:15, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says summarize the most important points. I am simply contending that this is not one of them. Israel is a sizable country with a lot of history, and I don't believe that this has enough DUE weight in reliable sources about Israel as a whole to warrant including prominently in the lead, although I think it is important enough to mention in the body. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict certainly warrants inclusion in the lead. However, is the Gaza genocide itself heavily covered in those entries? It is the level of coverage for the specific topic that matters, not the level of coverage of the wider subject it is part of. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:52, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Gaza genocide is part of the Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict, which is heavily covered in Israel entries in WP:Tertiary sources. See the sources above. Bogazicili (talk) 15:46, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- The bar for something being included in the lead is pretty high, much higher than inclusion in the body. According to MOS:LEADNO, emphasis on material, such as the Gaza genocide, should reflect its relative importance to the topic as described by reliable sources. I think the current state of the lead is fine, although I would also be fine with adding a sentence or two about how Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal. I don't think the Gaza genocide by itself has enough weight to warrant inclusion in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:42, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you point to the relevant Misplaced Pages:Policies and guidelines for your argument? Bogazicili (talk) 15:32, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you mean by that? QuicoleJR (talk) 14:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please provide a recent (second half of 2024 for example) tertiary or overview WP:Secondary source about Israel, and show that these issues are not mentioned. Bogazicili (talk) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The only one I have been able to find is Brittanica, which has been updated recently and makes no mention of the genocide. Very few overview sources have been published in that timeframe, and you are asking me to prove a negative. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The ONUS is on you to prove that they are covered in such sources. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:18, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- And I did provide recent sources below.
- Britannica's updates seem superficial. They have very detailed information about Netanyahu’s second stint in history section, but it seems to stop at a certain point. Bogazicili (talk) 14:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please provide a recent (second half of 2024 for example) tertiary or overview WP:Secondary source about Israel, and show that these issues are not mentioned. Bogazicili (talk) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you mean by that? QuicoleJR (talk) 14:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Only in the body while it’s a non-insignificant criticism, it’s not sufficiently significant to be included in the lead. Both based on the uncertain status and the recency of the accusation, the lead should instead continue referring to other, certain misconduct, per the relevant policies cited above, instead of referring to a disputed interpretation of some of the very recent actions. FortunateSons (talk) 23:14, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you please specify "the relevant policies"? Bogazicili (talk) 16:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- MOS:LEADNO, WP:Recentism, WP:10YT, WP:DUE would probably be the most relevant ones FortunateSons (talk) 08:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, thank you for clarification. Note that WP:10YT and WP:Recentism are not policies, they are explanatory essays. You can get more information in WP:SUPPLEMENTAL.
- For interpretation of WP:DUE and MOS:LEADNO, we disagree, but this has been discussed above, so I'm not going to get into it again. Bogazicili (talk) 14:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Of course, but they are broadly accepted as a concretisation of policy; nevertheless, thank you for the reminder. FortunateSons (talk) 18:04, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- MOS:LEADNO, WP:Recentism, WP:10YT, WP:DUE would probably be the most relevant ones FortunateSons (talk) 08:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you please specify "the relevant policies"? Bogazicili (talk) 16:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you imagine this source to be? There are news reports that don't mention genocide, but that not what you mean? FortunateSons (talk) 14:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Something like Routledge Handbook on Contemporary Israel or an encyclopedia, but published on second half of 2024. Bogazicili (talk) 14:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would defer to the cited Britannica here; more importantly, the fact that we’re discussing less than a handful of sources and a timeframe of 6 Months (or a year) is a strong indication that this is in fact recency bias. FortunateSons (talk) 15:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, Britannica doesn't seem that updated. See above. Bogazicili (talk) 19:19, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- Which seems like a strong indication that there has not been sufficient change to justify us updating either. FortunateSons (talk) 22:11, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- That seems like an WP:OR explanation. We do not know when Britannica updates their articles. It could be once in every 5 years for example. Bogazicili (talk) 07:03, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
But the work doesn't end there. Articles and multimedia are regularly revised and updated, ensuring they stay up to date. It's a rigorous, thorough process, but it's worth it. Our editorial methods are what make Britannica a digital source of knowledge and information you really can trust and enjoy.
it’s possible, but that doesn’t seem to align with this. FortunateSons (talk) 09:15, 4 January 2025 (UTC)- I actually found the information 2023–present: Israel-Hamas War
- But for Israel, history seems to stop before 3rd Netanyahu government: Bogazicili (talk) 10:06, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- With this entry also not supporting your position, right? FortunateSons (talk) 10:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- What do you mean? It shows that Israel entry wasn't really updated. Arab-Israeli wars entry was updated. Bogazicili (talk) 11:38, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- Leave it to closer to decide relative merits, which won't really depend on whether Britannica is updated or not. Selfstudier (talk) 11:46, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- What do you mean? It shows that Israel entry wasn't really updated. Arab-Israeli wars entry was updated. Bogazicili (talk) 11:38, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- With this entry also not supporting your position, right? FortunateSons (talk) 10:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- That seems like an WP:OR explanation. We do not know when Britannica updates their articles. It could be once in every 5 years for example. Bogazicili (talk) 07:03, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- Which seems like a strong indication that there has not been sufficient change to justify us updating either. FortunateSons (talk) 22:11, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, Britannica doesn't seem that updated. See above. Bogazicili (talk) 19:19, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- None have been published to my knowledge, and it is on you to prove that they do exist. QuicoleJR (talk) 17:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Plenty of sourcing, obviously relevant and controversial enough to outweigh proforma objections. Selfstudier (talk) 17:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, source provided below Bogazicili (talk) 19:18, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- I would defer to the cited Britannica here; more importantly, the fact that we’re discussing less than a handful of sources and a timeframe of 6 Months (or a year) is a strong indication that this is in fact recency bias. FortunateSons (talk) 15:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Something like Routledge Handbook on Contemporary Israel or an encyclopedia, but published on second half of 2024. Bogazicili (talk) 14:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you imagine this source to be? There are news reports that don't mention genocide, but that not what you mean? FortunateSons (talk) 14:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Not in the lead per WP:RECENTISM. Would prefer to wait until a court conviction or acquittal has been made to decide. Wafflefrites (talk) 04:10, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- The Palestinian genocide accusation is not recent only the Gaza genocide is and that is still a significant controversy, regardless. Selfstudier (talk) 17:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Since 1955, the population of Palestine has steadily increased. The life expectancy has increased, the infant mortality and child death rate has decreased. So I don’t understand how Israel has been genociding the Palestinians if all these numbers are improving for them. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:34, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reminder of WP:OR and WP:NOTAFORUM. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Here is a source so it is not OR or NOTAFORUM. The source is a Jewish advocacy group. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:49, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- That isn’t a reliable source for the topic. nableezy - 02:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Without even getting into if the advocacy group source you provided is a reliable source, for accusation of genocide, we would use WP:Secondary sources such as , so the source you provided does not invalidate those, per WP:NPOV. Bogazicili (talk) 14:27, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Here is a source so it is not OR or NOTAFORUM. The source is a Jewish advocacy group. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:49, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reminder of WP:OR and WP:NOTAFORUM. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Since 1955, the population of Palestine has steadily increased. The life expectancy has increased, the infant mortality and child death rate has decreased. So I don’t understand how Israel has been genociding the Palestinians if all these numbers are improving for them. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:34, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- The Palestinian genocide accusation is not recent only the Gaza genocide is and that is still a significant controversy, regardless. Selfstudier (talk) 17:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes should be linked in lead per Iskandar323's reasoning. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 23:16, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Comment, newer sources
- Overview WP:Secondary source: Routledge Handbook on Palestine. From the introduction chapter:
In this context we should not overlook the latest turning point in the history of Palestine – the attack by Hamas on 7th October 2023 on Israeli settlements adjacent to Gaza and the subsequent genocidal war that the state of Israel has carried out in the Gaza strip
- Although the title says Palestine, it covers Israel too. See the definition on page 3 in pdf preview (click on preview pdf in the link)
- The Palgrave Handbook of Contemporary Geopolitics, Geopolitics in Israel entry. Although this is an entry about geopolitics, and not an entry about Israel as a country, the prominence of 7 October Hamas-led attack on Israel is notable. Genocide accusations are also mentioned.
- Given no recent (second half of 2024 for example) overview secondary or tertiary sources about Israel have been provided in this RfC, and given the lengthy coverage of Arab-Israel conflict in older tertiary sources about Israel, and given the above sources, I now think that three things are due both in the lead and in the body:
- Bogazicili (talk) 14:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The lack of recent overviews (I don't think many have been published) does not mean that we should include these things in the lead. I support adding the Israel-Hamas war, I think the other two would be both be giving UNDUE weight to recent events. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The lack of recent overviews means we have to use what we have (above), while keeping in mind the heavy coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict in older sources. I just pinged you to ask for newer sources though, no need to discuss what we already discussed above. Bogazicili (talk) 14:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the available sourcing here and on the related article indicates that it's a major part of the coverage and history of Israel. The arguments against inclusion don't make any sense, either; whether individual editors agree with it, or whether it's disputed, are reasons to be cautious about the precise wording for how we cover it, but they're not what we use to determine if we cover it at all - that question comes down to how broad and high-quality the sourcing is and how significant they treat it as. And the extensive academic sourcing clearly justifies treating it as a high-profile aspect of the topic worth discussing prominently here. A lead is supposed to contain
mention of significant criticism or controversies
; we don't exclude high-profile stuff just because it's controversial. The sourcing disputing it above doesn't help; while it's not terribly high-quality, I'm sure higher-quality sourcing for that perspective exists... but it's written from the perspective of "this is an important and central argument over Israel", ie. a controversy worth covering even if they have a clear perspective on it. The sort of coverage that would be necessary to exclude it isn't just academics who disagree, but sourcing that establishes that it is broadly fringe, which doesn't seem to be the case. --Aquillion (talk) 15:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC) - Yes in body (end of 21st century para) and lead per Selfstudier and Iskandar323, as well as WP:10YT - while I've seen several comments opposing the change on 10YT grounds, I actually think that as increasing amounts of information - backed by RS, of course - comes out on this topic, it will look increasingly strange in 10 years time for us to not have included this. Regardless of how one personally feels about the matter, this is a significant charge to be levied against a state, and it will be significantly more confusing to omit or downplay this information than to just include it. Smallangryplanet (talk) 19:21, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- The lead's so fucked up it might as well be included, and it obviously should be included in the body. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:42, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
Discussion (RfC)
- This doesn’t seem that actionable an RfC, or that productive a question. The content of the article is what is discussed, and links serve as navigational aids for delving into the content. Considering a link alone in the aether rather misses its purpose. CMD (talk) 09:02, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- Seems that there should be first some material in the body related to the wikilink and South Africa's genocide case against Israel. @Huldra: Suggest you pull the RFC tag on this for now until some material can be put together for the article body. Selfstudier (talk) 11:07, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- Something like this perhaps
- Israel is accused of carrying out a genocide against the Palestinian people by experts, governments, United Nations agencies, and non-governmental organisations during its invasion of the Gaza Strip in the ongoing Israel–Hamas war. Observers, including the UN Special Committee to investigate Israeli practices and United Nations Special Rapporteur Francesca Albanese, have cited statements by senior Israeli officials that may indicate an "intent to destroy" (in whole or in part) Gaza's population, a necessary condition for the legal threshold of genocide to be met. A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide". On 29 December 2023, South Africa instituted proceedings against Israel at the International Court of Justice pursuant to the Genocide Convention,
- This is just wrt the genocide issue, need something about the arrest warrants as well. Selfstudier (talk) 15:43, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't seem very neutral to cover statements from sources like Albanese without also covering accusations of bias on their part. — xDanielx /C\ 23:36, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn’t make sense to cover things that aren’t relevant to the topic, like accusations of bias instead of addressing the substance of the statement. nableezy - 00:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- If we don't want to get into such accusations of bias then we shouldn't be using sources like Albanese in the first place. — xDanielx /C\ 17:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That makes no sense to me. We dont include accusations of bias against the Times of Israel anytime we use them as a source, or the NYTimes, or Benny Morris, or whatever other reliable sources we cite. The ad hominem of "she's biased" is not relevant to the argument she makes or the qualifications she has to make them. At most, such accusations belong in the biography of Albanese, or Morris, or whatever other article that covers the sources themselves, not whenever they are cited. nableezy - 17:23, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That's not at all comparable. NYT and Morris are occasionally criticized by both sides for various perceived biases. Accusations of bias against Albanese are far more significant, e.g. with officials from several different governments openly calling her antisemitic or unfit for her role. — xDanielx /C\ 18:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- They are directly comparable, and governments arent reliable sources for anything other than the views of the politicians heading those governments. It is a basic ad hominem, and it has nothing to do with the actual content of her comments. nableezy - 19:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't really make sense to call this an ad hominem, when source selection inherently involves evaluating sources rather than the content of their statements. Surely the WP:BESTSOURCES here would be uninvolved ones with some semblance of objectivity.
- Covering Albanese's claim here is like covering Biden's claim that there isn't a genocide. Clearly neither is among the BESTSOURCES, and neither claim is noteworthy enough that it would need to be covered anyway. — xDanielx /C\ 19:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Biden is a politician speaking as a politician. Albanese is an expert in international law, speaking as an expert in international law. nableezy - 20:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- I should add that she isn't just speaking as an expert in international law (which she undoubtedly is), but she is speaking as a UN official who is the current United Nations Special Rapporteur on the occupied Palestinian territories. To compare her speech with Biden (a non-expert politician who has absolutely no scholarship on the issue and doesn't have an international law background) is ridiculous. JasonMacker (talk) 18:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Special Rapporteurs are not UN officials, they are independent experts consulted by the UN, and they remain independent. See United Nations special rapporteur for an overview. nableezy - 20:54, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- I should add that she isn't just speaking as an expert in international law (which she undoubtedly is), but she is speaking as a UN official who is the current United Nations Special Rapporteur on the occupied Palestinian territories. To compare her speech with Biden (a non-expert politician who has absolutely no scholarship on the issue and doesn't have an international law background) is ridiculous. JasonMacker (talk) 18:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Biden is a politician speaking as a politician. Albanese is an expert in international law, speaking as an expert in international law. nableezy - 20:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- And Jews and others praising her, no? She must be doing something right. Afaics, she has tended to be ahead of the curve on most matters. Selfstudier (talk) 19:06, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- They are directly comparable, and governments arent reliable sources for anything other than the views of the politicians heading those governments. It is a basic ad hominem, and it has nothing to do with the actual content of her comments. nableezy - 19:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That's not at all comparable. NYT and Morris are occasionally criticized by both sides for various perceived biases. Accusations of bias against Albanese are far more significant, e.g. with officials from several different governments openly calling her antisemitic or unfit for her role. — xDanielx /C\ 18:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That makes no sense to me. We dont include accusations of bias against the Times of Israel anytime we use them as a source, or the NYTimes, or Benny Morris, or whatever other reliable sources we cite. The ad hominem of "she's biased" is not relevant to the argument she makes or the qualifications she has to make them. At most, such accusations belong in the biography of Albanese, or Morris, or whatever other article that covers the sources themselves, not whenever they are cited. nableezy - 17:23, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- If we don't want to get into such accusations of bias then we shouldn't be using sources like Albanese in the first place. — xDanielx /C\ 17:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn’t make sense to cover things that aren’t relevant to the topic, like accusations of bias instead of addressing the substance of the statement. nableezy - 00:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't seem very neutral to cover statements from sources like Albanese without also covering accusations of bias on their part. — xDanielx /C\ 23:36, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Seems that there should be first some material in the body related to the wikilink and South Africa's genocide case against Israel. @Huldra: Suggest you pull the RFC tag on this for now until some material can be put together for the article body. Selfstudier (talk) 11:07, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
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- "Situation in the State of Palestine: ICC Pre-Trial Chamber I issues warrant of arrest for Mohammed Diab Ibrahim Al-Masri (Deif)". International Criminal Court. 2024-11-21. Retrieved 2024-11-26.
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Grave violations committed by Israel against Palestinians in the aftermath of 7 October, particularly in Gaza, point to a genocide in the making, UN experts said today. They illustrated evidence of increasing genocidal incitement, overt intent to "destroy the Palestinian people under occupation", loud calls for a 'second Nakba' in Gaza and the rest of the occupied Palestinian territory, and the use of powerful weaponry with inherently indiscriminate impacts, resulting in a colossal death toll and destruction of life-sustaining infrastructure.
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Tag
Resolved-tag removed !Moxy🍁 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
@Moxy: Reasons for the tag, please? Selfstudier (talk) 13:15, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Nothing but military info looks like nothing but conflict for 20+ years ...this article is not History of the Israel Defense Forces. Need info like ..90s saw first featuring direct election of the prime minister etc. Moxy🍁 13:22, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- You tag says undue not that the section needs updating, which material is undue? And why? Selfstudier (talk) 13:25, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- undue because its nothing but military history....no memtiom of any other history. Sounds like the most unstable country doing nothing but being at war. Moxy🍁 13:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- History on its own at 5116 words is half an article by itself. A lot is likely undue. CMD (talk) 13:47, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Agree so much details - over info that can be and is covred in sub articles that can be trimed like :The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked in July 1947, with a series of widespread guerrilla raids culminating in the Sergeants affair, in which the Irgun took two British sergeants hostage as attempted leverage against the planned execution of three Irgun operatives. After the executions were carried out, the Irgun killed the two British soldiers, hanged their bodies from trees, and left a booby trap at the scene which injured a British soldier. The incident caused widespread outrage in the UK" Moxy🍁 13:51, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- The section that has been tagged is Israel#21st century, a short section, the material
The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked...
is not even in it, that material is in Israel#British_Mandate_for_Palestine section, which has not been tagged. - So did you mean to tag something else? Selfstudier (talk) 14:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Moxy explained that subsection above, it is just one of a few with similar issues. CMD (talk) 16:57, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- They haven't explained it, the material they quote is not tagged. Selfstudier (talk) 16:59, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry I thought I was pretty clear.... the whole section is just about military.... in fact we have two paragraphs for something that's happening in the past year. What we are looking for is substantial historical significant information about the country's social and historic evolution in that time. Best we simply don't regurgitate American news headlines. For example should mention Disengagement Plan... What kind of social human rights progress has there been? In 20 years there must be some sort of legal process that has changed.... democratic decline perhaps? What has happened on the diplomatic front.... like the mass increase in foreign aid? Moxy🍁 20:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
the whole section is just about military
Which section? The only section that you tagged is the 21st Century section. If you meant to put the tag for the entire history section, then do that, I would also agree with that inline with multiple prior discussions asserting that it was way too long. Selfstudier (talk) 21:05, 28 November 2024 (UTC)- Which section? Not interested in some sort of gameplay. Your initial post was about a tag in a section this is the topic of the ongoing conversation..... with mention by another and myself about the excess detail overall in the history section with an example that I gave. You either agree it's excessive or you don't.... best course of action would be to come up with some sort of prose for the section.... and a better summary. Moxy🍁 21:33, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- OK, you don't want to admit you got this all backwards, fine by me, bfn. Selfstudier (talk) 23:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- What you have to ask yourself is does your approach to this conversation help improve that article or not. There is clearly a problem all over the history section...but the info in this tagged section is the topic of conversation...do you have any input what can be done to help the section? Then perhaps we can move on to other sections. Moxy🍁 15:57, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- I asked you what the problems were and your response was to quote something else from an untagged section, so if you can answer the original question that would be good. Selfstudier (talk) 16:15, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
Best you let someone that is competent deal with the tag. My bad just frustrated that the post has not moved forward in actual improvements. Will address the problem with prose after the content addition dispute is over. Moxy🍁 18:23, 29 November 2024 (UTC)- Couldn't agree more. Selfstudier (talk) 18:30, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- What content addition dispute? Selfstudier (talk) 19:50, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- Was not aware of 'this'. Let's deal with the content issue after all the current concers. Last post from me here.Moxy🍁 20:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
I don't see what that has to do with the issue you have been describing in this section.. OK, resolved for now. Selfstudier (talk) 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- Was not aware of 'this'. Let's deal with the content issue after all the current concers. Last post from me here.Moxy🍁 20:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- I asked you what the problems were and your response was to quote something else from an untagged section, so if you can answer the original question that would be good. Selfstudier (talk) 16:15, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- What you have to ask yourself is does your approach to this conversation help improve that article or not. There is clearly a problem all over the history section...but the info in this tagged section is the topic of conversation...do you have any input what can be done to help the section? Then perhaps we can move on to other sections. Moxy🍁 15:57, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- OK, you don't want to admit you got this all backwards, fine by me, bfn. Selfstudier (talk) 23:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Which section? Not interested in some sort of gameplay. Your initial post was about a tag in a section this is the topic of the ongoing conversation..... with mention by another and myself about the excess detail overall in the history section with an example that I gave. You either agree it's excessive or you don't.... best course of action would be to come up with some sort of prose for the section.... and a better summary. Moxy🍁 21:33, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry I thought I was pretty clear.... the whole section is just about military.... in fact we have two paragraphs for something that's happening in the past year. What we are looking for is substantial historical significant information about the country's social and historic evolution in that time. Best we simply don't regurgitate American news headlines. For example should mention Disengagement Plan... What kind of social human rights progress has there been? In 20 years there must be some sort of legal process that has changed.... democratic decline perhaps? What has happened on the diplomatic front.... like the mass increase in foreign aid? Moxy🍁 20:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- They haven't explained it, the material they quote is not tagged. Selfstudier (talk) 16:59, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Moxy explained that subsection above, it is just one of a few with similar issues. CMD (talk) 16:57, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- The section that has been tagged is Israel#21st century, a short section, the material
- Agree so much details - over info that can be and is covred in sub articles that can be trimed like :The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked in July 1947, with a series of widespread guerrilla raids culminating in the Sergeants affair, in which the Irgun took two British sergeants hostage as attempted leverage against the planned execution of three Irgun operatives. After the executions were carried out, the Irgun killed the two British soldiers, hanged their bodies from trees, and left a booby trap at the scene which injured a British soldier. The incident caused widespread outrage in the UK" Moxy🍁 13:51, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- History on its own at 5116 words is half an article by itself. A lot is likely undue. CMD (talk) 13:47, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- undue because its nothing but military history....no memtiom of any other history. Sounds like the most unstable country doing nothing but being at war. Moxy🍁 13:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- You tag says undue not that the section needs updating, which material is undue? And why? Selfstudier (talk) 13:25, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 December 2024
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In 21st century history, please change
− | A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide". | + | A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars who were polled believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide". |
"mostly US-based Middle East scholars" is not an identifiable group, the phrase as written doesn't have a concrete definition. Which Middle East scholars' beliefs are being talked about here? The scholars who were polled are being talking about. Adding language that clarifies the source of these statistics and defines the group in question could make the statistics more useful. Thank you for your consideration. Mikewem (talk) 17:00, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- From the given citation, added "758" before "mostly" and "polled in 2024 by Brookings" before "believe" to clarify matters. Selfstudier (talk) 17:42, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
""Israel"" listed at Redirects for discussion
The redirect "Israel" has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Misplaced Pages:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 December 7 § "Israel" until a consensus is reached. Ca 15:00, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
Lede
@Terrainman: Are these your first edits to articles on WP that relate to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict? If so, please familiarize yourself with WP:ARBPIA and WP:ONUS which states that adding contested content requires achieving consensus on the talk page, not reverting. This responsibility is known as onus lying with the inserter of the material. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:47, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, thank-you. The information I added was to improve the context of the paragraph, in a much needed way. From what I can see, nothing contested was added. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 12:51, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions to the lede/lead were reverted so the material is by definition is now contested, meaning you will have to gain consensus for them in the talk page, not revert. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:54, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand but your edit reason was to keep the brevity of the lead when my edit was rather brief in my view. It has been further edited by another user to make the additions more concise. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:14, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions still increased the material about the 1948 war from six to eight sentences in the lede. This needs to be trimmed even below six sentences. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:34, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand since that para is already very long, however unfortunately the topic is extremely complicated; hence why it was the longest para in the lead long before my edit. My addition provided essential context in my view, I also received thanks for it and it has been refined since by another editor. In my view if this para is to be made more concise we need to explore other options for that. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:48, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Receiving thanks is not a measure of consensus, but discussion on the talk page. Your addition still duplicates mention of the UN partition plan in the second and third lede paragraphs, as well as non-summarizing elaborations on the Oslo Accords, which is also a duplicate mention in the third lede paragraph. Makeandtoss (talk) 14:03, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- The first sentence of the 3rd paragraph explains that the partition plan failed, which is crucial context!
- Regarding Oslo accords, it is not a duplication. The second mention references them in a sentence about progress since then. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 14:28, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Furthermore, if we are setting this low a threshold in what is essential to the lead, there are multiple parts of the third paragraph which elaborate to a significant extend, rather than merely state the existence of key historical events which are in-fact needed to provide context for the rest of the paragraph. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 14:41, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Then all should be trimmed. Makeandtoss (talk) 17:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Furthermore, if we are setting this low a threshold in what is essential to the lead, there are multiple parts of the third paragraph which elaborate to a significant extend, rather than merely state the existence of key historical events which are in-fact needed to provide context for the rest of the paragraph. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 14:41, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Receiving thanks is not a measure of consensus, but discussion on the talk page. Your addition still duplicates mention of the UN partition plan in the second and third lede paragraphs, as well as non-summarizing elaborations on the Oslo Accords, which is also a duplicate mention in the third lede paragraph. Makeandtoss (talk) 14:03, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand since that para is already very long, however unfortunately the topic is extremely complicated; hence why it was the longest para in the lead long before my edit. My addition provided essential context in my view, I also received thanks for it and it has been refined since by another editor. In my view if this para is to be made more concise we need to explore other options for that. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:48, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions still increased the material about the 1948 war from six to eight sentences in the lede. This needs to be trimmed even below six sentences. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:34, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand but your edit reason was to keep the brevity of the lead when my edit was rather brief in my view. It has been further edited by another user to make the additions more concise. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:14, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions to the lede/lead were reverted so the material is by definition is now contested, meaning you will have to gain consensus for them in the talk page, not revert. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:54, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Additionally, when you say Lede, do you mean Lead? I just want to be sure I am not missing something here. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 12:52, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Lede and Lead are legitimate alternative spellings; both refer to the intro material which, in Misplaced Pages, should summarize the major points of rest of the article. A major issue for many Misplaced Pages articles is putting too much stuff in the lede. Erp (talk) 05:05, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Minor edit Request
Remove "synonymous with Canaan" from the lede.
1. The borders of ancient Canaan don't line up with modern day Israel.
2. No real reason to mention ancient Canaan just like we don't mention that it's synonymous with British Mandatory Palestine or the Judea province of the Roman Empire.
3. The fact that Canaanites lives there is in the following sentence. Fyukfy5 (talk) 22:47, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done QuicoleJR (talk) 16:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Restore Canaan and rephrase to avoid implying synonymity. Makeandtoss (talk) 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- This didn't address the points they made. 'Variably known as' still conflicts with all three points here. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 17:56, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Restore Canaan and rephrase to avoid implying synonymity. Makeandtoss (talk) 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
RFC: Human rights violations section
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Should this article include a top level section about violations of human rights by the state of Israel? DMH223344 (talk) 17:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Survey
Comment Not currently a subject of dispute? Maybe just create one and see what happens first? I wouldn't object personally but do we need an RFC for this right now? Selfstudier (talk) 17:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was reverted quickly: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Israel&diff=1266366530&oldid=1266365841 DMH223344 (talk) 18:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- That might have been just the into the sea thing? @Remsense:. I would have thought a hr top level section would have involved moving stuff from elsewhere in the article into it? Selfstudier (talk) 18:09, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- I made a mistake, please feel free to revert. Apologies. Remsense ‥ 论 19:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Could you revert so that I don't annoy any admins violating 1rr (even though I have your permission)? DMH223344 (talk) 20:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Apologies, again. Remsense ‥ 论 20:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- ah I see, I had totally misunderstood your edit summary. Thanks for reverting. DMH223344 (talk) 20:21, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Apologies, again. Remsense ‥ 论 20:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Could you revert so that I don't annoy any admins violating 1rr (even though I have your permission)? DMH223344 (talk) 20:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- I made a mistake, please feel free to revert. Apologies. Remsense ‥ 论 19:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- That might have been just the into the sea thing? @Remsense:. I would have thought a hr top level section would have involved moving stuff from elsewhere in the article into it? Selfstudier (talk) 18:09, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- No How many countries have human rights violations? I would maybe accept a top level section for Israeli-occupied territories because that is pretty unique and a big part of what Israel physically is. Absolutely no for HR violations generally. Bitspectator ⛩️ 23:48, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Coverage of Israel in RS is very often centered around human rights. That's not the case for most other countries. We should follow RS and similarly give top level attention to coverage of human rights. DMH223344 (talk) 01:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Agreed that Israeli-occupied territories should be a top level section. There could be a Human rights subsection under Government and politics section Bogazicili (talk) 16:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Coverage of Israel in RS is very often centered around human rights. That's not the case for most other countries. We should follow RS and similarly give top level attention to coverage of human rights. DMH223344 (talk) 01:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Information should be integrated into the article where it would be relevant rather than standing out on its own... WP:COUNTRYSECTIONS = "Avoid sections focusing on criticisms or controversies. Try to achieve a more neutral text by folding debates into the narrative, rather than isolating them into sections. " This poor article really needs some work..... most of the articles is focused on military actions and one point in time.Moxy🍁 00:28, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Discussion
Sweep them into the sea
Original sentence: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state and to "sweep them into the sea".'
Proposed change: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state.'
The quote that allegedly supports the inclusion of the the statement 'and to "sweep them into the sea"' is:
A week before the armies marched, Azzam told Kirkbride: "It does not matter how many there are. We will sweep them into the sea.
This quote is of course not consistent with the claim that the purpose of the invasion was to sweep the Jews into the sea. The other citations for this sentence include:
Morris 2008, p. 396: "The immediate trigger of the 1948 War was the November 1947 UN partition resolution. The Zionist movement, except for its fringes, accepted the proposal."
David Tal (2004). War in Palestine, 1948: Israeli and Arab Strategy and Diplomacy. Routledge. p. 469. ISBN 978-1-135-77513-1. Archived from the original on 19 December 2023. Retrieved 1 December 2018. "some of the Arab armies invaded Palestine in order to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state, Transjordan..."
Morris 2008, p. 187: Ahmed Shukeiry, one of Haj Amin al-Husseini's aides (and, later, the founding chairman of the Palestine Liberation Organization), simply described the aim as "the elimination of the Jewish state." ... al-Quwwatli told his people: "Our army has entered ... we shall win and we shall eradicate Zionism""
None of these support the claim about sweeping Jews into the sea.
Additionally:
Ben-Ami: The Arab states were driven to war in great measure by theperception that prevailed in their societies as to the Jewish state andthe threat it posed to the Arabs.
Rouhanna: One goal of some of these armies was to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state; the Jordanian army, however, also sought to prevent the establishment of a Palestinian state by conquering and annexing (after achieving the tacit understanding of the Zionist leadership) parts of Palestine for the Hashemite Kingdom.
Shapira: As the sheer magnitude of the Palestinian Arabs’ defeat emerged, and as the horror stories of the Jews’ alleged brutality spread throughout the Arab world, the pressure exerted by public opinion on the Arab states to come to the aid of their Palestinian brethren intensified. Despite difficulties arranging a unified military command, as well as mutual suspicion regarding each other’s objectives in Palestine, on April 30 the Arab states decided to invade.
Shlaim: Seven Arab states sent their armies into Palestine with the firm intention of strangling the Jewish state at birth.
DMH223344 (talk) 17:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Edit Request
Change the new "Human Rights violations" section, no other country the I checked (including those with serious human rights violation claims like North Korea, Saudi Arabia, Russia, Myanmar) have any kind of section named anywhere near as negatively. Those claims are usually found in the Government and Politics tab. The way it is now is a violation of WP:NPOV Fyukfy5 (talk) 20:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, this is extremely unusual. Bitspectator ⛩️ 23:42, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Looks like we need an RFC after all. Selfstudier (talk) 00:26, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I don't know what you mean. The HR violations section was created accidentally, right? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:35, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Nope. Selfstudier (talk) 00:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Are we both talking about the top level section I just deleted? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- I created it. It was not created accidentally, please revert your edit. DMH223344 (talk) 01:55, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I was confused by a comment Remsense left. I think it's an extremely controversial addition. Is there some WP rule reason that I have to revert, or is there consensus I'm not seeing? Bitspectator ⛩️ 02:09, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There's definitely an open discussion.... Best leave it out till the process is done. Thinking about adding undue tags in relation to three or four sections... there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine. Will gather some thoughts together and bring it up at the project page see if we can help. Moxy🍁 02:14, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine
, right, and its relationship with Palestine and Palestinians is a core part of the coverage of Israel in RS. I'm curious where you think the undue tags should go. DMH223344 (talk) 02:33, 1 January 2025 (UTC)- Article is to big ingeneral and suffers from in the new style - 21st century should be summarized much better. Israeli-occupied territories, International opinion and Accusations of Apartheid should be integrated into history and/ or foreign relations with just a few sentences for each topic leading our readers to main articles. See Germany for how its done.,see also Misplaced Pages:Summary style and WP:COUNTRYSECTIONS. Moxy🍁 03:05, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- That seems like a strange suggestion, of course the occupation is relevant to the history, but it is also a crucial aspect of Israeli politics today. DMH223344 (talk) 03:34, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Israel != Germany Selfstudier (talk) 09:44, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Article is to big ingeneral and suffers from in the new style - 21st century should be summarized much better. Israeli-occupied territories, International opinion and Accusations of Apartheid should be integrated into history and/ or foreign relations with just a few sentences for each topic leading our readers to main articles. See Germany for how its done.,see also Misplaced Pages:Summary style and WP:COUNTRYSECTIONS. Moxy🍁 03:05, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There's definitely an open discussion.... Best leave it out till the process is done. Thinking about adding undue tags in relation to three or four sections... there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine. Will gather some thoughts together and bring it up at the project page see if we can help. Moxy🍁 02:14, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I was confused by a comment Remsense left. I think it's an extremely controversial addition. Is there some WP rule reason that I have to revert, or is there consensus I'm not seeing? Bitspectator ⛩️ 02:09, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- I created it. It was not created accidentally, please revert your edit. DMH223344 (talk) 01:55, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Are we both talking about the top level section I just deleted? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Nope. Selfstudier (talk) 00:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I don't know what you mean. The HR violations section was created accidentally, right? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:35, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Looks like we need an RFC after all. Selfstudier (talk) 00:26, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Edit request regarding the map
I am writing to express concern about the recent changes to the map. The current map includes territories marked in green, representing areas such as Palestinian territories and even the Golan Heights. This change departs from the previous map, which accurately reflected the internationally recognized borders as endorsed by the United Nations. Marking these territories in green introduces a controversial interpretation that is not widely accepted by major international organizations.
1. Lack of Consensus: Major international bodies such as the United Nations, the European Union, and other globally recognized entities do not depict these territories in a distinct color that implies sovereignty or control by specific nations. The new map’s coloration could mislead readers into assuming a level of recognition or legitimacy that does not exist.
2. Neutrality Concerns: Misplaced Pages strives to maintain a neutral perspective, especially on contentious geopolitical issues. By adopting a map with disputed territories marked differently, the page risks appearing to take a stance, which could alienate users and detract from Misplaced Pages’s reputation as an impartial source.
3. Consistency with Historical Usage: The previous map, in use for over 20 years, was widely accepted as a neutral representation of the region. It respected international consensus and did not introduce contentious visual elements. Returning to this map would preserve the neutrality and credibility of the content.
4. Precedent for Reliable Sources: Most authoritative atlases and online mapping tools, including those maintained by major international organizations, avoid marking these territories in distinct colors to sidestep misinterpretation. Aligning with these standards would bolster Misplaced Pages's reliability.
I respectfully request that the map be reverted to its previous version, which better reflects the official and internationally recognized borders. This change would ensure that Misplaced Pages adheres to its guiding principles of neutrality and accuracy. AIexperts (talk) 18:01, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- You don't have the needed qualifications to edit about this topic(you don't yet have 500 edits), please see your user talk page. 331dot (talk) 18:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- The map reflects Israel's international recognized borders and the territories it claims (East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights) and occupies militarily (West Bank excl. East Jerusalem and the Gaza Strip). This is mostly consistent with other country articles, such as Syria (map depicts unrecognized claim over the former Sanjak of Alexandretta) and Russia (map depicts claims over the Ukrainian territories it occupied since 2014). However, there is an argument to removing the West Bank (excl. East Jerusalem) and the Gaza Strip from the map and using File:Israel (orthographic projection) with disputed territories.svg instead, since Israel does not de jure claim the territory and it is internationally recognized as being part of the State of Palestine. 2018rebel 22:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There is no basis for Israeli claims to either EJ or the Golan, they are unrecognized annexes and along with the West Bank and Gaza are considered as occupied territories. Selfstudier (talk) 22:59, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- However, for consistency reasons, it would be justifiable to exclude territories not annexed by Israel, as locator maps don't typically include territories under military occupation, but do include territories unilaterally annexed. For example, the map of Russia does not include Abkhazia and South Ossetia in light green, despite them being internationally recognized as Russian-occupied territories, but does include Crimea, as it was illegally annexed in 2014. Similarly, the map of the United States does not include Al-Tanf. as it is not annexed territory of the US. 2018rebel 23:20, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Anyone that wants to can see Green Line Israel by clicking on a radio button, the initial question really is what we want the default view to be, that or with occupied territories shown. If it were up to me I would show Green Line Israel, excluding Golan, as default.
- Then the alternate view should show all occupied territories, including purportedly annexed territories. Btw "disputed" is not a NPOV term here, see Status of territories occupied by Israel in 1967#Disputed territories.
- Other article maps do not affect what happens with the situation here. Selfstudier (talk) 11:02, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- If all territories under military occupation are to be included on the map, why are Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria, newly occupied since 2024, excluded? There is also a significant difference in the legal status of East Jerusalem versus the rest of the West Bank. Israeli civil law is applied in East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights, whereas it is extended to Israeli settlers in the rest of the West Bank only via emergency regulations. Gaza remains militarily occupied due to control over its airspace, territorial waters, and borders, but Israeli civil law is not extended and Israel does not formally claim the territory as its own. Meanwhile, if militarily-occupied territories are to be included, Southern Lebanon nor the newly occupied parts of Syria are shown in light green.
- The map of Russia excludes Ukrainian territories that are occupied but not annexed, and the Ukraine map omits its military occupation of parts of Kursk Oblast. The Russian article map did not include the four annexed oblasts until after they were annexed, despite Russia beginning settlement activities before then . Other Misplaced Pages articles consistently differentiate between annexed and occupied territories, marking only annexed areas.
- The map should either show all territories under Israeli military presence or limit itself to lands Israel formally claims as its own. Unrecognized or illegal claims should be marked in light green, in contrast to the West Bank (beyond East Jerusalem) and Gaza, which are solely claimed by the State of Palestine. This distinction is already visible on the map for the State of Palestine, where annexed territories like East Jerusalem and Latrun are marked differently from areas claimed exclusively by Palestine. 2018rebel 19:20, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- Just to repeat that what we do here on this page for the map here does not depend on what is done at any other page.
- Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria have not as yet been declared as occupied territory by any competent authority afaik.
- Lands that Israel
formally claims
(EJ/Golan) are also illegal claims, so designated by the UNSC (reaffirmed recently by the ICJ in respect of EJ), so this distinction is of no import. - As things stand, I simply want to note the OP request as not done (no consensus of EC editors). Presumably you do not want to do that. So I suggest we wait and see if any other editors have a view. Selfstudier (talk) 19:31, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- However, for consistency reasons, it would be justifiable to exclude territories not annexed by Israel, as locator maps don't typically include territories under military occupation, but do include territories unilaterally annexed. For example, the map of Russia does not include Abkhazia and South Ossetia in light green, despite them being internationally recognized as Russian-occupied territories, but does include Crimea, as it was illegally annexed in 2014. Similarly, the map of the United States does not include Al-Tanf. as it is not annexed territory of the US. 2018rebel 23:20, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There is no basis for Israeli claims to either EJ or the Golan, they are unrecognized annexes and along with the West Bank and Gaza are considered as occupied territories. Selfstudier (talk) 22:59, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 January 2025
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I request an edit change of the GDP (Nominal), GDP (PPP), GDP Per Capita (Nominal), and GDP Per Capita (PPP) of Israel to 2025 in Accordance to IMF's October 2024 Database. The source will remain the same as the source currently shown, but the access date will be changed to "2 January 2025". Please Change Before (X) to After (Y).
Before (X): 2024 Estimate GDP (PPP) • Total Increase $541.343 billion (47th) • Per capita Increase $54,446 (29th)
GDP (nominal) • Total Increase $528.067 billion (29th) • Per capita Increase $53,110 (18th)
After (Y): 2025 Estimate
GDP (PPP)
• Total
Increase $565.878 billion (47th)
• Per capita
Increase $55,847 (29th)
GDP (nominal) • Total Increase $550.905 billion (29th) • Per capita Increase $54,370 (18th) AviationLover27 (talk) 18:18, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- Done Thank you. Bitspectator ⛩️ 16:20, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
Edit Request
At the end of the History section there are a few sentences about accusations if genocide against Israel. Since there's an ongoing RfC about its very inclusion shouldn't it be removed until the RfC is concluded? Fyukfy5 (talk) 18:30, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- Was discussed at #Tag, EC editors are aware of the addition, in the RFC the majority is not really objecting to due inclusion of material in the article body, the principal debate is as to whether a link is due in the lead. Selfstudier (talk) 18:40, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
- alright np, I just don't know all the rules regarding the process Fyukfy5 (talk) 20:47, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
Is this article WP:BCLASS?
I looked at the article assessment and I was surprised to see this article is only at a C. Are there any shortcomings that are causing that to happen? Chess (talk) (please mention me on reply) 20:53, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
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