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== Footnote about Amazon ==


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As the editor who restored the footnote about Amazon's selective quotation noted, it is indeed telling. However, as far as I can see it's telling ''about Amazon'', rather than about Massad, since I do not believe Amazon allows authors editorial control over their books' pages, aside from occasionally deleting allegedly offensive reviews. Can anyone explain why this footnote is needed in an article about Massad? ] 20:00, 6 September 2006 (UTC)


==Quotes==
:No one has commented, so I'm going to remove the footnote.] 21:59, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
I think the extended quotes were mostly located in the section on Desiring Arabs. I just edited that section by substantially reducing the quotes. The quotes that remain, I believe, are important as they attest to the reception of the book. I also believe that they are compatible with other wikipedia entries in terms of style.] 16:06, 7 November 2007 (UTC)


* ''27-March-2008:'' I agree that the remaining quotes are truly necessary to support the intense wording, such as viewing the book as a "work of genuine brilliance" and other phrases that would be flagged for non-neutral ] concerns. Removing the direct quotes would certainly cause the wording to be debated for excessive claims, as happened in explaining ]'s damage on the ] coast as "utter total devastation": people who did not witness the damage could not believe that towns were flooded over 90% and refrigerators were found 6 miles away along the I-10 highway (or fishing boats were found in trees) due to the 35-foot waves, thus direct quotes were needed for the controversial subject matter (many people could not would not accept the notion of waves on land reaching the 4 floor); the controversy was fueled by news media focusing on flooded lawns in New Orleans when the town of ] had been submerged under 32 ft (10 m) of raging waters. For controversial subjects, extensive quotes are certainly justified and should be expected as the norm to support intense wording. At this point, I have untagged the article "]" for {quotefarm}, after 150 further revisions spanning another 5 months since the above changes. -] (]) 12:54, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
== the David Project ==
**Yup, there's been a complete rewrite since then. ] (]) 18:49, 27 March 2008 (UTC)


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:The David Project Center for Jewish Leadership promotes a fair and honest understanding of the Arab-Israeli conflict. We work to develop educated, skilled and courageous leaders to counter the ideological assault on Israel found on campuses, high schools, churches and in the general community.
It is clearly self-identified as a pro-Israel advocacy organization, not an academic freedom group. It's not even a matter of dispute, like with Campus Watch, etc. So would anonymous editors please stop describing it as "an organization that advocates balanced classroom lectures regarding the Middle East and opposes anti-Zionist lectures as inappropriate activism"? Thanks. ] 23:04, 20 September 2006 (UTC)


== Restructuring article ==
Is there an original source for the committee's "reprimand"? From the quotes I could find on the internet, it doesn't seem they accepted that he yelled at her to "get out," but simply stated that his response appeared to have been more heated than was appropriate. ] 18:43, 16 November 2006 (UTC)


This article is in terrible shape. When I last worked on it more than a year ago, it was pretty mediocre, but since then, despite vastly increasing in length it's actually gotten worse. I don't mean this as an insult to the efforts of any of the more recent editors, but battling over the details of praise, allegations, and sourcing has left the article unreadable.
:I made some changes in the section, in which I attempted to remove some of the sillier bias. Various transcripts of the procedings make clear that not even the student alleged that he told her to get out, nor that he referenced "Israeli atrocities." In current form, the full alleged statement is there, in the second paragraph. Both sides get heard, with Massad's slightly better explained than before. A little more back and forth, rather than piling it all on, followed by a little hobbled "defense." More work should be done, but I think it's an improvement. ] 05:34, 17 November 2006 (UTC)


As noted at the top the article has too many quotations; it tends to quote positive or negative comments on Massad's work at the expense of actually describing its content. The article also includes extensive sections on Massad's political opinions, or his alleged political opinions (even in some cases where the allegations have been withdrawn!). These appear selected for controversy, in many cases without evidence they have actually caused notable controversy, rather than to provide a concise and accurate overview of his politics. Finally, the structure of the article seems bizarre in some cases. Why are there three separate sections on allegations and counter-allegations of antisemitism? Why do Massad's views on Israel-Nazi comparisons deserve their own section?
== Category:Anti-Semitic people ==


Before beginning on any kind of massive rewrite project I want to get some consensus from other editors on what we eventually want the article to look like. Here's what I would propose:
It is a clear violation of ] to place Massad in this category. It has been alleged by the presidents of several countries that George W. Bush is a terrorist, and by David Icke that he is a Reptilian; whether or not one believe these accusations (I believe the former, not the latter) they do not warrant placing him in Category:Terrorists or Category:Reptilians. The same applies here, since Massad disputes the case. See ]:
:Category names do not carry disclaimers or modifiers, so the case for the category must be made clear in the article text. The article must state the facts that result in the use of the category tag and these facts must be sourced.


* Split off each of the books into its own article (even if they are only stubs). Leave only brief summaries of their content and even briefer summaries of academic reaction.
:For example, Category:Criminals should only be added when the notable crime has been described in the article and sources given, and the person has either been convicted or has pleaded guilty.
* Merge sections 5, 6, and 7 - those that deal with accusations of antisemitism towards Massad, and Massad's accusations of antisemitism towards others - into one, with fewer lengthy quotes.
* Merge sections 4 and 8 - those that deal with Massad's views of Israel and Zionism - into one, with fewer lengthy quotes.
* Add if possible a section on Massad's education and personal life. As it stands this article has very little biographical information in a standard sense.


Objections? Further ideas?
:Category tags regarding religious beliefs and sexual preference should not be used unless two criteria are met:
:* The subject publicly self-identifies with the belief or preference in question
:* The subject's beliefs or sexual preferences are relevant to the subject's notable activities or public life


] (]) 03:01, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
:Caution should be used in adding categories that suggest the person has a low reputation.
] 00:37, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


:I did some more trimming to hopefully make it easier to move the granite blocks of copy around. ] (]) 03:25, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
:: I think enough caution has been given - he's been accused as anti semite by ] and he actually calls zionists anti-semites so it's relevant category. btw, likening Israeli Prime Minister Ariel Sharon to a nazi and israelis to nazis is most certainly an anti-semite comment, and he doesn't deny those comments. ] 00:52, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


===Discussion regarding insertion of "Columbia Unbecoming" material in lede===
:::He denies likening Israelis or Zionists in general to Nazis and he hasn't been quoted directly as doing so - the source is some guy saying he got that impression from the speech. Likening Sharon to a Nazi is not antisemitic. I don't think that the comparison is great, although Sharon is a war criminal, but it's hardly antisemitic to simply liken any particular Jew to a Nazi. I don't think even comparisons of Israel to Nazi Germany are necessarily antisemitic, although I suppose they can be. And an accusation is certainly not enough to put him in the category. Isn't a professor at Columbia a reputable source? So should we categorize Martin Kramer and Daniel Pipes as anti-semites, because Massad has accused them? ] 01:00, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


::It is not usual for articles about controversial people to become quote-farms about the controversy. See ] for another example. It would be nice if such articles could actually be turned into ''biographies'', but I'm not sure that's possible.
:::well no doubt the article deals with anti-semitism. see what others think before changing it to anti-semites. ] 00:59, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


I have removed the sentences at the top of the article about the Columbia Unbecoming fracas. They were inaccurate. Massad was not formally reprimanded by the Ad hoc grievance committee. The committee also only found one alleged "incident" credible - not "many" and all of this is covered with much greater precision in the section of the article dealing with the controversy. ] (]) 16:31, 20 February 2010 (UTC)
::::I'm fine with the broader category, since Massad has been very vocal about anti-Semitism. ] 01:01, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


::Reorganizing the article so that it focused first on Massad's background and education would be a good start. I'm not sure if there's enough information about each book to spin off articles about them. But I agree that the rest of the article should be arranged thematically. For example, one section about antisemitism — allegations against Massad, his allegations against others, and his views concerning modern-day antisemitism vs. 19th century antisemitism — is better than three. I also think the bibliography at the bottom needs to be cut significantly. Somebody needs to identify Massad's most important papers and the rest should be deleted (as should the book reviews). — ] (] '''·''' ]) 04:01, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
I disagree. If he is an anti-semitic person he blongs in the people category. Holocaust museum's are also in the broader category--it is too broad IMO. Thanks. -- ] 02:41, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


I do not want this page to revert to an edit war. I deleted the innacurate information that had been added to the top of the article, and someone reinstated them with no discussion. here is a link to the Columbia ad hoc grievance report.http://www.columbia.edu/cu/news/05/03/ad_hoc_grievance_committee_report.html
:Well, yes, but there's dispute about whether he's actually an anti-semitic person, whereas there's no dispute that his views are one way or another relevant to anti-semitism. Even if he had never been accused of anti-semitism he might be placed in that category for his unusual arguments regarding the alleged anti-semitism of Israel supporters. Re 3RR, please see my comment on my talk page. ] 04:10, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
Massad was not "charged" with anything. Nor was he reprimanded. Potentially libelous statements do not belong in Misplaced Pages articles about living persons.] (]) 23:49, 20 February 2010 (UTC)


:Please read ]: "The lead should be able to stand alone as a concise overview of the article. It should define the topic, establish context, explain why the subject is interesting or notable, and summarize the most important points—including any notable controversies." Massad is known—perhaps ''best-known''—for the controversy surrounding the allegations made against him by his students. Removing it from the lede is a whitewash.
Allegations from serious people - like a U.S. congressman, and a former U.S. prosecutor - are not to be taken lighly, and are a matter of public record. They probably do belong in this article. I have made an attempt at putting them in along with Massad's denials. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 03:02, 13 November 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:If you don't agree with the summary in the lede, edit it. Don't delete it. —&nbsp;]&nbsp;<sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub> 00:10, 21 February 2010 (UTC)


I have rewritten the lead] (]) 16:25, 21 February 2010 (UTC)
==Mediation==


The lede as you have reinstated it is serious misinformation, and potentially libelous. To claim that a faculty member was reprimanded by his university when he was not is not defensible. Please read the only official document released by Columbia on the matter: www.columbia.edu/cu/news/05/03/ad_hoc_grievance_committee_report.html
I've for informal mediation just on the issue of the category. Really this ought to be simple, I think the involvement of a neutral will help. ] 02:32, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
Where is the reprimand? I am reverting my re-writing of the lede, until proof can be provided of Massad's reprimand. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 01:58, 22 February 2010 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


:I've rewritten the lede. It summarizes the article, and it's better than your effort at whitewash. —&nbsp;]&nbsp;<sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub> 02:14, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
: I've opened the mediation case, and to be honest it's more of a questionable mediation case if it's purely asking for a 3rd opinion - usually a poll should be conducted for that. However, I've opened it, with my opinions subject to other mediators' opinions too. See for more details. ] 10:52, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


OK. Better, but still too politicized. A university ad hoc grievance committee does not "charge" anyone with anything. The word "intimidation" is not part of the language of the report, and the report explicitly denies any discrimination. From the report: "C. Across the spectrum of these concerns, we found no evidence of any statements made by the faculty that could reasonably be construed as anti-semitic. Professor Massad, for one, has been categorical in his classes concerning the unacceptability of anti-semitic views.
:: Yeah, it is questionable. I should have just posted an RFC. I've done that now. Feel free to close the mediation case if you want. ] 13:40, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


D. We found no evidence that students had been penalized for their views by receiving lower grades."
::: OK, I've closed the mediation case. ] 14:48, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


There are no university documents that support the idea that any students ever made such accusations of discrimination. I am holding back from accusing you of smearing. Please do not accuse me of whitewashing. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 02:34, 22 February 2010 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:::: I'm going to rescue your comment from that page, though (it was the only substantive one):
:::::''I personally think the main catch here is what exactly is defined as 'anti-semitism'. I know very little about this professor, but if he was truly anti-Semitic he probably wouldn't still be employed by Columbia, which is a reputable university. There is a difference between attacking someone who is pro-Israel, and attacking someone because they are Israeli. I incline towards NOT including this person in the category of anti-Semitic people - that category should be left for true neo-Nazis, Fascists, or extremely right-wing persons, etc. However, this may be a controversial topic so it would be better if other mediators also made their POV in this matter clear. Jsw663 10:49, 21 September 2006 (UTC)''
:::: ] 21:48, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


:You must be looking at a different lede than the one I wrote. The words "charged", "intimidation", and "discrimination" don't appear in the lede at all. —&nbsp;]&nbsp;<sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub> 02:39, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
'''Outside comment'''. I think that placing (esp. living) people into {{cl|Anti-Semitic people}} should be done with '''extreme''' caution and reserved only to those who self-identify as such or like ("Jew haters"). Not knowing the Massad, I glanced over the article, and while his Anti-Zionist and even anti-Israeli attitude is fairly clear, anti-Semitism is still a far long shot from here. IMO it requires more than an accusation to be placed to that category; {{cl|Anti-Zionists}} and even {{cl|Anti-Semitism}} IMO suffice. ] 14:33, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


::I do not believe the information about Columbia Unbecoming belongs in the lede at all, and I feel that including it there may be construed as an effort to insert an anti-Massad POV into this article, which is totally inappropriate anyway but serious problematic for a living person. Inserting it in the lede looks to me like an obvious attempt to color the reader's view of the subject, which is not at all the role of WP. When considering the biography of a prominent living person, the lede needs to sum up what is important. Had Massad, say, been charged and convicted of a serious crime in 2004-2005, I can see placing it in the lede. But that is far from the case. All it is is a campus dispute in which some allegations against him were made and completely dismissed more than five years ago. Including such information in the lede is not the norm on WP. To say that the Columbia Unbecoming belongs in the lede, instead of say, the fact that Massad has won prominent awards for his books and academic work is clearly POV and has no place. For this reason, I removed it. The proper place for it to be discussed is in the section on the controversy. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 03:15, 22 February 2010 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
'''Outside comment''': I concur that placing someone in the category of "Anti-Semitic people" should rarely, if ever, be done for people who do not themselves self-identify that way. It might be acceptable to put such a person into a category if there was an overwhelming consensus among the reliable sources that unequivocally state the person IS anti-semitic. But it's a definite case to error on the side caution. --] 20:07, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


I agree that the information about the Columbia controversy is adequately covered in the relevant section of the article and is not at all appropriate in the lede.] (]) 03:36, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
== RfC ==


] reverted a change that two other editors agreed was appropriate and restored POV material without any discussion here. This is verging on vandalism of the page of a living person. Please use the talk page as intended before trying to insert/restore controversial, POV and irrelevant material into this biography.--] (]) 21:26, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
This debate appears to hinge on whether anti-Zionism is itself anti-Semitic (a rather vague term since it can apply to either anti-Arab or anti-Jewish sentiments). This is a deep and problematic question that Misplaced Pages should not attempt to decide editorially. Per ] I think Misplaced Pages should avoid categorizing Professor Massad as anti-Semitic. ''']''' 22:40, 22 September 2006 (UTC)


Cut the POV material from the lede -] (]) 22:20, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
:I have come for via the RfC page. Slander is dangerous. Placing that accusation in the article is one thing, placing it as a category is another thing. Please don't put it in that category. I agree with Durova.--] 21:25, 5 October 2006 (UTC)


:It is difficult to assume good faith when editors attempt to insert POV material and refuse to engage in discussion on the talk page. It is the editors seeking to have a non-standard lede -- which emphasizes POV material, who should seek consensus, not those attempting to ensure that the lede conforms to common WP practice. --] (]) 23:03, 22 February 2010 (UTC)


Please note the following relevant sections from the BLP page ]:
'''outside comment''': I'm here because I saw the RfC. Before I started writing I read what other users have to say. In short, I believe that allegations about being anti-Semitic should be mentioned in the article, as well as argumentation to the opposite by Massad himself or any other person. But, he should not be included in the category, which is something conclusive.--] 13:11, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


"Biographies of living persons must be written conservatively, with regard for the subject's privacy. Misplaced Pages is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid paper; it is not our job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives. The possibility of harm to living subjects must be considered when exercising editorial judgment.
Also coming here from rfc. The issue seems to be what he said, and whether those are anti-semitic comments. Further, anti-semite is itself a loose and politically charged term, thanks to political lobbyists blurrring the distinction between anti-Jewish and anti-Israel. I rather think the anti-semite category itself should be renamed to get around that blurring. ] does note that "''The views of critics should be represented if their views are relevant to the subject's notability and are based on reliable sources, and so long as the material is written in a manner that does not overwhelm the article or appear to side with the critics' material''". In that regard, his controversial views should certainly be included (along with relevant linked cites to back this assertion up). The category is a bit harder to decide on. Currently it categorieses him as an anti-Zionist, and denying "the right of Israel to exist as a 'Jewish state'" seems to count as that. That doesn't necessary imply anti-Jewish or anti-Israel though. And anti-Semite is sucha vague (not to mention politicised) term that I wouldn't want to see it used as a category. ] 12:16, 22 October 2006 (UTC)
This policy applies equally to biographies of living persons and to information about living persons on other pages. The burden of evidence for any edit on Misplaced Pages rests with the person who adds or restores material. Therefore, an editor should be able to demonstrate that it complies with all Misplaced Pages content policies and guidelines."


Also, from the Wikimedia Foundation's recent Resolution: Biographies of Living Persons ] which identified as one of the key problems: "People sometimes make edits designed to smear others. This is difficult to identify and counteract, particularly if the malicious editor is persistent."


It seems to me that the efforts to keep inserting into the lede information about a campus controversy from five years ago is not conservative, not in keeping with WP's role as an encyclopedia, and may be designed to smear Massad by emphasizing this minor point and giving it undue weight. This should stop. --] (]) 23:18, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
== Position in Columbia==
I've corrected a factual error. The article referred to ] as "the head of ]’s department of Middle Eastern and Asian Languages and Cultures". He is actually a professor in Columbia's department of history and holds no appointment of any kind in the MEALAC department. He is the director of the university's interdisciplinary Middle East institute, and the article now reflects this fact.<small>—The preceding ] comment was added by ] (] • ]) 05:58, October 29, 2006 (UTC{{{3|}}})</small>


:I'm not going to edit-war over it, but I strongly disagree with the two of you. Massad is perhaps best-known because of the controversy surrounding the allegations made against him by his students. Ignoring it in the lede is contrary to ].
:Thank you. -- ] 13:22, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
:Including it in the lede, on the other hand, ''doesn't'' violate ]. The paragraph says the allegations were unfounded, the university resisted pressure to fire him, and instead granted him tenure. I don't think that poisons the water at all.
:Finally, please don't minimize the issue by calling it a "campus controversy". It was a very important issue throughout the academic world, and it garnered a lot of press outside of academia. —&nbsp;]&nbsp;<sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub> 23:29, 22 February 2010 (UTC)


Your disagreement is noted. However Massad may be "best known" for the Columbia Unbecoming controversy only among the narrow segment for whom his views on certain narrow topics are an issue, but that is not why he is best known overall. Indeed there are specific groups that conduct public campaigns against him on these sorts of issues even when there is really no sustained, wider interest. So to argue that he is "best known" for this is extremely subjective and risks -- perhaps unintentionally -- serving the agendas of anti-Massad campaign groups. I am sure no one editing in good faith would want that. I would argue that Massad is best and most widely known for his academic work, books and publishing -- his scholarship which is cited in dozens of journals and books and referenced at numerous academic conferences in several fields. Since we should be cautious and conservative with BLP and given that the issue is discussed amply in the article, that is more than enough. --] (]) 00:54, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
== major update ==


:You are mistaken. Massad's academic work, however commendable, is known only to a very small percentage of the public; the campaigns against him, however nonsensical, are what he is best known for.
This entry needs updating. There are no reviews of The Persistence of the Palestinian Question. The reviews of Colonial Effects seem highly selective, and the negative reviews, which all come from very politically motivated sources are given far more space than the positive ones, even though the consensus amongst academic journals is that Colonial Effects is a field defining book. The only review of Desiring Arabs cited is Whitaker's hatchet job which is simply a rehash of his response to Massad's 2002 Public Culture Essay in Whitaker's Unspeakable Love and the review does not mention, let alone engage, the other 400 or so pages of Desiring Arabs. I have added reviews of all three books that represent with much greater accuracy the reviews of the books in general. If Massad's scholarship is to be discussed, I think fairness is important. I have not edited the representation of the David project/academic freedom controversy, but have commented on the section speculatively calling Massad an Orientalist, largely because I think it shows no understanding of what Orientalism is/was. My edits have made the entry much longer, mostly through the addition of bits from the twenty plus reviews the entry never mentions. In the interest of full disclosure, I did organize a petition in defense of Massad against the smear campagin mounted by the David Project, which is why I feel I am too interested a party to comment on that aspect of the entry. Fire away. Thanks.] 01:59, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
:Also, please don't dismiss other people's opinions by saying that the only way to proceed in good faith is your way. That's a not-very-veiled attack, and a failure to ] about others. —&nbsp;]&nbsp;<sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub> 04:03, 23 February 2010 (UTC)


If unfounded allegations from years ago by a tiny number of people are to be included in the lede of BLP, that makes a nonsense of the idea of caution, conservatism, and respecting the rights of the person about whom we are writing. It does seem to serve narrow agendas, however. It is certainly not in the spirit of the new tighter standards for BLP. No one has explained why it is not adequate that the Columbia Unbecoming issue is discussed at length in the article. Without any rational explanation for why it should be in the lede -- when there are clear reasons for it not to be -- there is an eagerness negative information about Massad to appear upfront, which certainly undermines AGF and suggests POV. In any case, I have placed a request for assistance on the Administrator's noticeboard: http://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Administrators%27_noticeboard/Incidents#3RR_and_Insertion_of_inappropriate_POV_material_in_lede_of_BLP_Joseph_Massad --] (]) 04:15, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
:Please review ] and ]. Terms similar to "overwhelmingly positive," are ]. The reviews were mixed, with both positive and negative results. Statements such as "an Israeli pundit associated with Campus Watch, who has attacked Massad's scholarship and politics since 2002," etc. are poisoning the well, trying to minimize the credibility of the reviwer by appealing to something other than their expertise. Near the entire "An irresponsible book review" text, etc. is a point-of-view diatribe without any support. Lastly, prose needs to be written from a formal, encyclopedic perspective, not like an attack or defense site. Thank you. -- ] 02:24, 8 October 2007 (UTC)


:Please read ]. The lede is supposed to summarize the content of the article.
ORIENTALISM
:Also, you still haven't explained what's negative about the paragraph in question. Please read my message above from 23:29 UTC. —&nbsp;]&nbsp;<sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub> 04:32, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
I don't see the point of the section asking: "Is Massad an Orientalist?". The term can be defined in various ways and tends to be used more as an insult than as a meaningful criticism. Trying to prove that he's an "orientalist" doesn't achieve anything in my view; it's more productive to examine the substance of his arguments. It would therefore be useful to include a section on the page giving a factual summary of Massad's views on homosexuality, which people can then agree or disagree with. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 08:47, 14 October 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


The material being contested in the lede is 50% of the lede (666 characters of 1232 character lede). However, ] states that "notable material should neither be suppressed nor allowed to overwhelm"
I agree that this section makes no sense, and it is hardly written from a neutral point of view. Only one of the reviewers - Mheisen - calls Massad an orientalist. None of the other three uses the term at all, so the entry appears to be fabricating an accusation in this section. Moreover, Whitaker is the only reviewer of Desiring Arabs mentioned. There have been others, and the entry has no real mention of the critical response to The Persistence of the Palestinian Question. I think the entry needs expansion and the "Is Massad an Orientalist?" section should be removed. What do other people think? ] 14:47, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
The section about this controversy in the article amounts to about 10-15% of the total content of the article. For me, this imbalance is the definition of overwhelming. ] (]) 04:45, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
:I agree that the Columbia controversy should not be given undue weight but it does deserve mention as it received pretty extensive media controversy and set up the whole showdown over Massad's tenure. ] (]) 18:43, 23 February 2010 (UTC)


== Update ==
==Subject of this article==
I note that this article contains approximately 2900 words of text ("Works" and "References" not included), yet 1900 of these deal specifically with coverage of ''Colonial Effects'', ''The Persistence of the Palestinian Question'' and ''Desiring Arabs''. Assuming these books warrant such coverage, I suggest that each should be accorded separate articles. I write this recognizing that the current sections devoted to these books can be consdered little more than quotefarms. ] 17:45, 6 November 2007 (UTC)


Some more cleanup done. I have removed one quote I am dubious about. It's the Middle East Quarterly review of the Massad book. The MEQ is not really considered a scholarly journal, and I would prefer that we replace it with an equivalent review in a genuinely scholarly source. I would not object to it as a source on a specifically political issue - such as the intimidation controversy - but I would prefer we find non-politicised alternatives for the part of the bio that actually discusses his work. ] (]) 13:45, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


== Restructuring <s>in progress</s> done ==
==Quotes==


I've finished working on the sections on Massad's politics.
I think the extended quotes were mostly located in the section on Desiring Arabs. I just edited that section by substantially reducing the quotes. The quotes that remain, I believe, are important as they attest to the reception of the book. I also believe that they are comaptible with other wikipedia entries in terms of style.] 16:06, 7 November 2007 (UTC)


I've moved stuff around quite a bit - please comment. I've also done some trimming, removing a couple of redundant Massad quotes (either used twice, or essentially identical to quotes that remain), cutting down the extensive block quotes from Massad's "Imperial Mementos", and removing a long section on a misquotation in the Columbia Spectator. Since the paper itself quickly admitted error, I see no reason the misquotation and response are worth noting in the article.
==NPOV==


Now I plan to move on to the books...
I have attempted to balnnce this article by adding some statements's of Massad's that are widely quoted by his critics.


] (]) 22:33, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
Look, this guy is the poster child outspoken anti-Israel critic in the American Academy. Two weeks ago th guy was denied tenure by Columbia after several years of regularly making headlines for his colorful criticism of Israel. Some of that material needs to be in the article so that a reader coming to Misplaced Pages to find out what all the fuss is about will leave puzzled and unenlightened. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 00:01, 14 November 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


:An excellent start. For the books, I'll look around as well. What we have to be careful about is avoiding reviews in sources that are essentially political fora. If possible, we should restrict ourselves to reviews from well-known peer-reviewed journals. It shouldn't be too difficult. ] (]) 22:44, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
Someone is removing material critical of Massad.
Thie is not a hagiography, nor is it Massad's personal C.V, with all negative material cleaned up.
Negative and mixed reviews of his book from major magazines and academic journals belong on this page.
And if responisble public figures , such as United States congressmen, make such a serious allegation as anti-Semitism - it belongs on the page. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 13:38, 19 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


::I've reworked the books a little, but made few changes. I didn't really evaluate the quality of the reviews, I just tried to make the book sections more readable and ensure that an actual description of the contents of the book was the first long paragraph in each section.
I hope everyone is happy, because the article has now been wiped totally clean. A near-total whitewash. All public criticism of his books is gone (even the heavily criticized "Desiring Arabs"), and most of the public criticism of his views has been removed as well. (What remains is now heavily qualified.) Congratulations; you now have a beautiful hagiography. I don't know that anyone arriving at this page would have any idea why he is so controversial. ] (]) 03:36, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
::I also added a very short section on Massad's education and career. A few minutes of Googling left me unable to turn up more information; I left an "expand-section" tag. I rewrote the article intro to better reflect the balance of topics in the article. I'm done, for now anyway.
::] (]) 23:29, 12 February 2008 (UTC)


I think the article is now in much better shape.
:The article has two sections on Massad's political views which are largely compilations of the most controversial things he has said and include explicit accusations of anti-semitism, as well as a section devoted exclusively to allegations of classroom intimidation. Together, these sections make up half the article. To describe this as a "whitewash" or a "hagiography" is absurd, and I'd hate to see what you consider a balanced critical biography.
:It's not true that criticism of his books is absent; the section on ''Colonial Effects'' includes negative quotes from two reviews. It's true that the ''Desiring Arabs'' section has only positive reviews, mostly derived from its Amazon page; if you know of negative reviews of ''Desiring Arabs'' '''in academic journals''', please cite them in the appropriate section, in ] fashion.
:] (]) 00:14, 8 March 2008 (UTC)


3 things:
==Blanket edit?==
i have just my of 18:25, 20 November 2007, which appear to have been caught up in a . I write this as I do not see how correcting spelling and applying ] guidelines concerning biographies, overlinking and redlinks can be considered "Pov Pushing", an accusation made in the edit summary. Indeed, I have removed the statement that "Jordan expert Asher Susser, essentially argues that Massad is an Orientalist" which I believe runs counter to ]. In short, Susser makes no such argument in the reference provided - the claim that he "essentially argues" is POV. I have also removed a reference which fails to support the accompanying statement - one that is critical of Massad. A citation request has been inserted in its place. Finally, I have no "personal grudge" against the subject and can only assume the accusation was addressed to another. ] (]) 16:43, 21 November 2007 (UTC)


1. The Al-Mheisen review of Colonial Effects has stood without a supporting citation for a very long time now. Unless someone can provide the citation, I propose deleting it.
==Massad attacks others with charges of racism and anti-Semitism==
2. How do we know if Massad is Christian - has he ever self-identified as such?
The strongest charge against Massad by his critics is that he is supposedly anti-Semitic and possibly racist, and that he fends off these charges while at the same time attacking others in the same way. So in an article about Massad, Massad's criticism of others and their arguments as racist and anti-Semitic is certainly a crucial issue. This is precisely the sort of thing others who hear about controversies involving Massad would find relevant information. I have included specific references to numerous articles in which Massad attacks others by calling them racist and anti-Semitic. In one article I cite, Massad uses the words "racist" or "racism" a stunning 35 times! These are facts. Could somebody explain how this is vandalism, rather than just deleting what they don't like?
3. The articles report of the semantics of the Columbia report are a little strong. The committee simply found that Massad had exceeded normal bounds etc in this one disputed instance. He was never formally reprimanded.
] (]) 02:07, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


] (]) <small>—Preceding ] was added at 15:21, 30 March 2008 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:Am I deleting something simply because i don't like it? Not at all. The reasons given by myself and others for removing the material in question have been clearly presented in the accompanying edit summaries. To address your post. The charge you mention in your first sentence is not supported by any sources. Who are these critics? Not one name is given, not one quotation is provided. As such, the material is, as , ]. Editorial comments like "Massad uses the words 'racist' or 'racism' over 30 times in this article" and "Massad refers to American Christian supporters of Israel as anti-Semites several times", appended to references, only serve to support this.] (]) 03:23, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


== Other Criticism section removed without discussion ==
::I don't think your edits are vandalism, but your persistence despite Misplaced Pages policies to the contrary may make other editors think they are. The article discusses, as it should, accusations of racism that Massad makes of others. It is ], however, to tie his accusations concerning others to similar allegations made against him — unless that connection is made by a ]. Please read ] for an explanation, and post here if you still have any questions. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 04:23, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


This whole section was unfairly deleted without discussion. Boodlesthecat claims that a letter to the editor is not a WP:RS. It clearly is a reliable for conveying what the notable author of that letter feels about the subject of this article. Basically, a letter by Foxman reliably proves that Foxman criticizes Mossad.Besides, the letter is also posted as a page on the ADL website, which is also a reliable source. As to Boodlesthecat's claim that "anonymous unproven allegation fails Undue Weight," very briefly mentioning the student's criticism in a criticism section does not seem at all to be undue weight. Finally, no valid reason was given for the removal of the critique by CAMERA. If there are no comments here in a reasonable time period, I will reinsert the criticism section. ] (]) 04:00, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
:::I have now explicitly added citations by both the New York Sun (a critic) and the Nation (a supporters) who specifically and directly acknowledge Massad's frequent use of the term "racist" against his opponents. This specifically addresses your points. Thanks for pointing them out. It makes for a better entry when everything is more carefully cited. ] (]) 04:44, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
:Please read the policies, particularly ]. Letters to the editor (this one apparently wasn't even published) are not reliable sources on Misplaced Pages, with some exceptions for letters to peer-reviewed journals. As to "anonymous unproven allegation fails Undue Weight," I think that is self explanatory; why do you think an anonymous student's complaint--unverified, unproven, anonymous--has any place in a biography? this is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid. as to the CAMERA criticism, someone else removed that, with the explanation that it was "CAMERA spamming"--which I entirely agree with. In fact, it seems what you largely do in your editing is find places to insert the not terribly reliable opinions of CAMERA into various articles, including this one. I believe it does amount to spamming. If you think CAMERA's opinions on Massad (or anything else) are notable,l find ] where those opinions were published. Misplaced Pages is not a repository for every extreme viewpoint on the CAMERA website--particularly when it concern biographies of living people. ] (]) 04:44, 14 March 2008 (UTC)


Boodlesthecat, you seem to be ignoring the substantive points I've raised. First, the letter by the ADL is ''also used as a statement by the ADL'' on the ADL website. Regardless, after looking through ] and ], I can find nothing forbidding letters-to-the-editor by the head of a notable organization, let alone an assertion published on that organzation's website. Please relay what specifically on ] and ] you are talking about. Nor can I find any specific policy stating that an allegation by an anonymous whistleblower ''quoted in a newspaper'' cannot be used. Finally, your views on CAMERA are well known. You don't like them. But it is absurd to suggest that they organization cannot be cited in Misplaced Pages articles. So basically, you are linking to various wikipedia guideline pages that don't support the assertions you are making. Unless there are any actual, specific guidelines barring this criticism section, it should be back up there. ] (]) 20:25, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
::::You haven't addressed the issue of synthesis at all. Nobody is disputing that Massad accuses other people of racism. The synthesis is the attempt to connect such accusations to allegations that Massad is an antisemite or a racist. You can't state two facts (A = Massad denies that he is antisemitic. B = Massad routinely calls other people racist or antisemitic.) to advance a position (C = The pot is calling the kettle black.) The use of the word "However" is a dead give-away. Unless a ] specifically ties Massad's accusations that others are racist or antisemitic with allegations by others that he is antisemitic, putting them together in this article is ]. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 05:57, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


:"Other criticism" is rightly removed. It is just a collection of dirt digging by various disgruntled persons. Nearly every notable person has enemies. We are not going to convert wikipedia into a paparazzi-style dirty laundry database. If there is a criticism, it must come from reputable persons, not from some nasty student. ] (]) 20:45, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
:::::Ah, I see. You have misinterpreted what I'm arguing. I <i>never</i> argue or state <i>anywhere</i> that Massad is a racist or an anti-Semite. I <i>am</i> saying that he denies these charges while accusing others of them. That's <i>all</i> I'm saying. And that's clearly a fact in evidence, according to the citations provided. In my most recent edit, I was very careful to avoid any insinuations of any other than Massad's practice of calling others racist and anti-Semitic. No more synthesis! <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 06:44, 19 January 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


I hadn't seen this discussion, but I removed the material since it clearly isn't ]. If there are points that can be added to previous sections, that's fine, or if another balanced section can be created, that's fine as well, but additional sections focused solely on criticism seem pretty clearly not to be consistent with neutrality. ] (]) 02:59, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
:You specifically said "Nobody is disputing that Massad accuses other people of racism." And yet you deleted a contribution by saying that he is not "accusing others of being racist." No matter. I have removed any assertion that Massad is calling anything or anyone racist. All that remains is the fact that Massad uses the terms "racist" and "anti-Semitic" frequently in his works, with citations, and that critics and supporters have noted this, again with citations. Now there is no editorializing, just a clear note of the facts. ] (]) 14:39, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


::Anonymous unproven charges by a "student," self published attack websites and letters to the editor do not meet ] standards. ] (]) 03:04, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
::First, a newspaper editorial isn't a reliable source. Second, I wrote that calling Israel a "racist state" or referring to its policies as racist is not an example of "accus others and their viewpoints as being racist", which is how you characterized it. You're accurate to describe it as "us the term racist", but that undermines the section header ("Charges by Massad of racism by others"). Take your pick. Either Massad accuses others of racism, or he uses the word often. The heading and the text have to be consistent. For the time being, I'll change the header to match your text. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 16:50, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
:::Charges published by mainstream newspapers, as well as by well known civil rights organizations clearly meet ] standards. Removal of well sourced material, on the other hand, is vandalism. Don't do it again. ] (]) 03:45, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
::::Removing material that doesn't meet ] standards, as outlined above, is not vandalism. Additionally, you are being . Please refer to that link, where you will read:<blockquote>Content disputes are ''not'' vandalism. Misplaced Pages defines vandalism very carefully to exclude good-faith contributions. Accusing other editors of vandalism is ] unless there is genuine vandalism, that is, a deliberate attempt to degrade the encyclopaedia, not a simple difference of opinion.</blockquote>
::::Additionally, solemn demands to "Don't do it again" are highly uncivil, particularly with regards to an article you have never been involved with. Please moderate your tone. Thanks! ] (]) 04:07, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
:::::The material you are removing is well sourced. It was published by mainstream newspapers, and on the web site of a well known civil rights organization. Removing it with the false claim that it is "poorly sourced" makes it hard to assume that you are interested in the quality of the encyclopedia. There is nothing uncivil in requesting that editors refrain form violating wikipedia policies - so, again, please don't do it. ] (]) 04:22, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
::::::Please ] and not characterize other editors points as "false claims" and the other 2 or 3 personal attacks in your response above. Once again:
::::::*An anonymous charge, unverified and unproven published in a tabloid does not meet ] standards.
::::::*Attacks from a highly partisan advocacy group published solely on that groups website does not meet ] standards.
::::::*A letter to the editor, published on the ADL website (''and NOT even in the newspaper it was sent to'') does not meet ] standards. A published report from the ADL on Massad would be acceptable, not a soundbite. ] (]) 04:29, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
:::::::I have made no personal attack against you. Making such false claims against editors is, in itself, a violation of ]. You are skating on very thin ice here, and I urge you to take more care with these uncivil accusations. As to your arguments: There is no difference whatsoever, in terms of ] standards, between an ADL report on the ADL website, and an ADL open letter. The NY Sun is a mainstream newspaper, and if it published the allegations, we can safely repeat them with no violation of BLP. ] (]) 04:36, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
:::::::::OK, I've had enough of your threatening tone "Dont do it again" "You're skating on thin ice" and your obnoxious insults ""False claims") ("hard to assume that you are interested in the quality of the encyclopedia"). ] (]) 04:46, 15 March 2008 (UTC)


Please stop making threats, ]. Instead, read Misplaced Pages's relevant policies: ], ], and ].
:::I agree on your edit of the title of the section. It was inconsistent with the new language of the section. However, I am concerned about your removal of the reference from the New York Sun. I wrote in the article that Massad's critics accuse him of using the terms "racist" and "racism". The New York Sun editorial board is a critic. I am not citing the New York Sun for informational content---that would indeed be wrong, as I am citing an editorial, not a reporting piece. But the point is to identify a critic who says that Massad uses terms like "racist" and "racism." And that's all that the citation does. There's no other way to show the existence of critics who say things unless you cite those critics. It's a catch-22. The entry now says that there exist critics who say that Massad uses terms like "racist" and "racism," and the citation merely establishes the existence of one such critic. It is a fact that these critics exist and have these opinions, without regard to the truth of those opinions. That's the full extent to which I am using the citation.] (]) 21:26, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
* A letter to the editor, even one written by God, is not a reliable source for a biography. The only possible exception might be for a letter to a professional journal whose letters are peer-reviewed before publication.
* Is there any indication that Massad's views concerning the massacre of the Israeli athletes in Munich is significant? You can't include every criticism that has ever been leveled against Massad, no matter how insignificant. See ] and ].
* CAMERA's criticism of Massad may be meaningful. Find some way to fit it into the article. There's absolutely no reason why an article (other than an attack article) should have a section titled "Other criticism".
If you continue your present course, including your threats, I will report you at ]. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 05:23, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
:*I sort of agree with Malik Shabazz. Letters to editors are not reliable sources, since anyone can do this (including yourself).] (]) 06:36, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
:**I believe it depends, as we have used letters to the editor that were published in peer-reviewed medical journals in articles that relate to those medical issues, but here it seems that this letter was not subject to the same rigor and there us the further issue of ] to worry about, so the letter should be removed for now. Malik is correct as well in the sense that articles about living people need to be written with special care. That Massad has been the subject of criticism for his views is well-documented and notable; how it should be written needs to bo done with care. Personally, I do not believe that ] should be ] inadmissible; they make it their business to monitor those they disagree with, just as ] does. But CAMERA criticism needs to be sourced to CAMERA, and it should be brought in proportion to the standard coverage of Massad in the press, as per ]. -- ] (]) 07:37, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
::Mackan79 and Malik Shabaaz, there are countless articles on wikipedia on controversial individuals or organizations where "criticism" sections have long been accepted by the wikipedia community. Should this one be any different? ] (]) 21:58, 16 March 2008 (UTC)


::::The fact that a newspaper editorial board is a critic of Massad doesn't make it a reliable source. Newspaper editorials aren't considered "reliable, third-party published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy". And you '''are''' citing the ''Sun'' for informational content: " routinely calls 'racist.'" That is informational content. A reliable source would be a news article or book that reports that Massad's critics say that he frequently uses the word racist. See the lede of ] as an example of a reliable source that reports what supporters and critics say about a controversial public figure. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 22:17, 19 January 2008 (UTC) :::Please read my comment more carefully. There is no question that this article should include ''meaningful'' criticism of Massad. But it shouldn't include ''every'' criticism of him that has ever been made, no matter how insignificant. If CAMERA's criticism is significant with respect to Massad's life-work, it should be included in connection with the description of Massad's scholarship and works. If the criticism is so out-of-place in the article that it needs a section of its own ("Other criticism"), it probably isn't meaningful to Massad's views (see ] and ]). — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 23:22, 16 March 2008 (UTC)


::::Malik Shabazz, of course you are right that all insignificant criticisms need not be part of this article. But more than one editor here feels the criticisms are in fact meaningful, to borrow your term. And it doesn't appear that a separate criticism section in and of itself proves that the criticism is out-of-place. As mentioned above, numerous articles on Misplaced Pages have criticism sections, so clearly the consensus is that such discrete sections are useful in articles about controversial figures. Finally, the inclusion of this section would hardly make the article a coatrack, as an overwhelming majority of the article as it currently stands is devoted to summarizing the professor's works and ideas. ] (]) 19:35, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
:::::So I need a reliable source that itself notes the existence of critics, rather than simply listing the critics myself. Acknowledged. I appreciate that you did not simply delete mention of this issue in the Misplaced Pages entry, but simply noted the need for a better citation. I think we can both agree that there exist critics who say that Massad uses the word "racist" and "racism." I don't think anybody could justifiable dispute that such critics exist. But I definitely concede and understand your point about sources here. I really appreciate your assistance and judiciousness. ] (]) 22:27, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
:::::My complaint is mostly that there is already quite a lot of controversy in the article that is discussed in context, as is appropriate. Adding an "other controversy" section to that is what I find problematic. I suppose it's somewhat one or the other: you could have an article on his views and then a section on criticism, or more ideally, you could do as in this article and discuss both together. But to add an additional criticism section to an article already filled with similar controversies seems like too much. I don't rule out that additional comments he made in the classroom, if well sourced, could be discussed in a section on controversy in the classroom, as we basically have. However, if that leaves some smaller things that don't fit the general structure, I think that's probably where a bio starts leaving things out (I'm sure other more prominent bios leave out much more). ] (]) 20:13, 21 March 2008 (UTC)


Criticism sections appear in many articles but (in my view at least) are non-ideal - criticism should be integrated with the rest of the article, not isolated as some sort of counter-balance to a generally positive discussion. As it stands, the article already has ''three'' sections that are basically criticism sections, with responses worked in and a best effort at a neutral tone - the "alleged classroom intimidation", obviously, and also the "anti-semitism" and the "views on israel, zionism, and the u.s" sections - the last of which is basically a quotefarm for all the most potentially controversial comments Massad has ever made. The article certainly does not need more criticism for balance. If there is more that is notable, it should go in, but given the current state of the article, we should be extra cautious about giving criticism undue weight, and we absolutely should not create a section for lumping together a list of every criticism too minor to deserve its own section or integration into one of the others. I'm ok with the CAMERA quote, or preferably something better, going into the section on Massad's views; included critics' responses to those views is fair enough. An "other criticism" section? No way. ] (]) 20:51, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
:::By the way, what evidence is there that ''The Nation'' is a supporter of Massad? — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 16:57, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


== New Additions to Section "Desiring Arabs" ==
::::The explicit quotation from The Nation is:
:::::For Pipes & Co., Massad is something of a gift: He is strident, dogmatic, proud, deliberately provocative and utterly uncompromising in his defense of the Palestinian struggle. He is a man who traffics in absolutes, <i>a man who often infuriates even those who are sympathetic to his views.</i> <i>Said worried about his young friend's propensity for careless rhetoric</i>--a point that Massad himself acknowledged in his Al-Ahram obituary of Said: "He would caution (actually yell at) me against giving way to my 'youthful' enthusiasm in a world in which we have few friends and numerous enemies." Massad is a ferocious critic of Israel and Zionism, but he is also withering on the subject of the PLO and the Palestinian Authority. (He supports a single, binational state.) To his detractors he is a devil figure, a "dangerous intellectual." <i>Massad frequently acts out the role by unleashing a steady stream of inflammatory anti-Zionist rhetoric: "racist Jewish state" is a locution he constantly employs</i>. (Emphasis added.)
::::The Nation article is specifically talking about how supporters of Massad, like Edward Said, acknowledge his use of inflammatory rhetoric, and his use the term "racist." Nowhere do I say that The Nation is a supporter of Massad---that would be an original inference on my part. I am simply quoting The Nation's own words that Massad's supporters note his use of this terminology. That's precisely what it says in the text. ] (]) 21:25, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


To be added to the section on "Desiring Arabs"
:::::In that case, you've misrepresented the source by your choice of a pull-quote: "Massad frequently acts out the role by unleashing a steady stream of inflammatory anti-Zionist rhetoric: 'racist Jewish state' is a locution he constantly employs." That is a direct statement by the author of the article, and the context suggests that the author, or ''The Nation'', is a supporter of Massad. I'll edit the article to clarify your point. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 22:17, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


:One of the book's central arguments is that "The categories gay and lesbian are not universal at all and can only be universalized by the epistemic, ethical, and political violence unleashed on the rest of the world by the very international human rights advocates whose aim is to defend the very people their intervention is creating."
:::::You are clearly correct, and I concede your point. Your edits to the Misplaced Pages entry seem very clear, and I much appreciate them. Thanks again for your help! ] (]) 22:27, 19 January 2008 (UTC)


This is a direct quotation from the book, and is the book's main argument. Why is it controversial to add this to the beginning of the section about the book? ] (]) 18:11, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
==Deleting "Nazi comparison" claims--bogus original research==
Ive deleted the section below as bogus original research. If you read the "very controversial passage" supposedly pointed to by (unnamed) critics, you can see that Massad clearly does not compare Israel to Nazi Germany. The first part, about David Project claims, is just too sketchy to include in a biography (Despite the fact that this article seems to be a repository for every press release ] ever issued on the guy). Section below:<br />
'''Accusations that Massad compares Israel to Nazi Germany'''<br />
Massad has strenuously denied making any comparisons between Israel and Nazi Germany, writing in 2004, during the controversy over a film by the pro-Israel group the ]: "Moreover, the lie that the film propagates claiming that I would equate Israel with Nazi Germany is abhorrent. I have never made such a reprehensible equation."<ref>{{cite web
| url = http://weekly.ahram.org.eg/2004/715/op33.htm
| title = Intimidating Columbia University
| accessdate = 2007-12-27
| last = Massad
| first = Joseph
| authorlink = Joseph Massad
| year = 2004
| month = November
| publisher = ]
}}
</ref>


Another critical review:
Critics, however, have pointed to an article written by Massad that appeared in a 2000 issue of the '']''. In a very controversial passage, reprinted here in its entirety, Massad writes:


:''Desiring Arabs'' was also criticized by James Kirchick, a writer for the ], who wrote that Massad "legitimizes, with a complex academic posture, the deservedly reviled views on homosexuality espoused by ]," and that ''Desiring Arabs'' "might just be the most pernicious book ever published by a respectable academic press." According to Kirchick, Massad argues that "the case for gay rights in the Middle East is an elaborate scheme hatched by activists in the West," and that "Massad's intellectual project is a not-so-tacit apology for the oppression of people who identify openly as homosexual." <ref></ref>
:Palestinians and Arabs were not the only ones cast as Nazis. Israel was also accused — by Israelis as well as by Palestinians — of Nazi-style crimes. In the context of Israeli massacres of Palestinians in 1948, a number of Israeli ministers referred to the actions of Israeli soldiers as "Nazi actions," prompting Benny Marshak, the education officer of the Palmach, to ask them to stop using the term. Indeed, after the massacre at al-Dawayima, Agriculture Minister Aharon Zisling asserted in a cabinet meeting that he "couldn't sleep all night... Jews too have committed Nazi acts." Similar language was used after the Israeli army gunned down forty-seven Israeli Palestinian men, women, and children at Kafr Qasim in 1956. While most Israeli newspapers at the time played down the massacre, a rabbi rote that "we must demand of the entire nation a sense of shame and humiliation... that soon we will be like Nazias and the perpetrators of pogroms."


This review is carefully cited from a reliable source, namely, The New Republic. And that's a very prominent source. There are glowing reviews about the book, so why not critical reviews from reliable and indeed very prominent sources? ] (]) 18:11, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
:The Palestinians were soon to level the same accusation against the Israelis. Such accusations increased during the intifada. One of the communiqués issued by the Unified National Leadership of the Uprising defined the intifada as consisting of "the children and young men of the stones and Molotov cocktails, the thousands of women who miscarried as a result of poison gas and tear gas grenades, and those women whose sons and husbands were thrown in the Nazi prisons." The Israelis were always outraged by such accusations, even when the similarities were stark. When the board of ], for example, was asked to condemn the act of an Israeli army officer who instructed his soldiers to inscribe numbers on the arms of Palestinians, board chairman Gideon Hausner "squelched the initiative, ruling that it had no relevance to the Holocaust."<ref>{{cite journal
| last = Massad
| first = Joseph
| year = 2000
| month = Autumn
| title = '''Palestinian and Jewish History: Recognition or Submission?'''
| journal = ]
| volume = XXX
| issue = 1
| page = 52-67
}}</ref>
] (]) 23:33, 24 January 2008 (UTC)


::This book has sparked an interesting debate and criticism which the article already gives a fair amount of space to. Kirchick is really addressing a broader criticism he has of "Queer Studies"; it would be best imo to weave his and the other 2 similar critiques together. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 00:22, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
::And the line: "The Israelis were always outraged by such accusations, even when the similarities were stark." Those are Massad's words. He's not quoting anybody else. He says right there that sometimes the similarities are stark. That's not original research. That's what Massad is explicitly saying. ] (]) 04:13, 26 January 2008 (UTC)


:::Your statement that the article gives a fair amount of space is clearly a subjective statement. Kirchick also addresses "Queer Studies," but that does not detract from the fact that the main purpose of his article is that it's a review of Massad's book. It should be included somehow. If you can weave it together with the other reviews, then please do. Otherwise, I'm just going to add it. It makes very substantive criticisms both of Massad's book and of his larger thesis. ] (]) 02:20, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
== Original research ==


::::It's hardly subjective; it's there in the article. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 02:37, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Please review ]: '''Synthesis of published material serving to advance a position'''


:::::Right, but what's subjective is that there's enough space devoted already. I wouldn't agree. Who's to say if it's too much? We're talking about a couple of extra sentences here. When in doubt, and when we're not talking about adding extreme quantities of new information, I always think one should err on the side of more information, not less. And considering what we can agree is the rather extreme thesis of the book, I would say that displaying some points from a critical review from The New Republic is pretty fair. Like I said, if it can be weaved together with the other reviews, then so be it. But I'd like to add it nonetheless. It's informative. ] (]) 14:09, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
:Editors should not make the mistake of thinking that if A is published by a reliable source, and B is published by a reliable source, then A and B can be joined together in an article to advance position C. This would be synthesis of published material serving to advance a position, which constitutes original research. "A and B, therefore C" is acceptable only if a reliable source has published this argument in relation to the topic of the article.


::::::I think it's a reliable source. However, to paraphrase Clint Eastwood, the question you want to ask yourself right now is "Am I only going to call out the scariest quotes from the review I can find?" Note that the quote from the review by Rayyan Al-Shawaf totally distorts the tenor of that review, which is far more balanced and nuanced than you would guess from the quote used. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 18:45, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
If Massad writes that the moon is made of cheese, and NASA says that the moon is made of rocks, the article can't have a section about "Contested claims about the composition of the moon" unless a ] has written about the conflict between the two accounts ''in relation to Massad''. Without such a source, a section about "Contested claims about the composition of the moon" is ] and will be removed. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 06:50, 26 January 2008 (UTC)


:::::::I appreciate that you didn't react to the additions from the Al-Shawaf review by simply deleting them. Indeed, if you think that more quotations from the review would be helpful, then by all means, ''add them''. Information is good. It helps people understand what's going on. Meanwhile, tomorrow I am going to add the piece from the New Republic review.
:::It's not only original research, it's selective quoting that distorts and mangles the source used to support it. Massad is actually recounting an incident (almost verbatim) that was in Tom Segev's, which discussed Israeli Jews protesting actions such as the one described. To characterize (as Massad does) soldiers being ordered to "inscribe numbers on the arms of Palestinians" as a striking similarity to Nazi actions isn't "comparing Israel to Nazi Germany," it's simply pointing to an indisputable similarity in those actions.


:::::::By the way, did it ever occur to you that maybe the reason why there are so many negative reviews of his book is because the book is simply ridiculous? See the thesis quotation above! There is no such thing as homosexuality? It's just a "Western", "social construct"? At what point does a claim simply become objectively wrong? If a book's thesis is ridiculous, then it is not the job of Misplaced Pages editors to try to balance that out by including equal numbers of positive and negative reviews. If the preponderance of reviews are negative, then that's an objective fact that should be reflected in the section about the book. It's asking a lot just to allot an approximately equal amount of space for positive and negative reviews in the first place, as we are now doing.
:::What the Massad article actually is about is the incessant Nazi baiting of Arabs and Palestinians, or as he puts it, "various aspects of Israel's implicit linkage of the Jewish holocaust with its right to exist and Palestinian and Arab responses to that linkage" and "Israel's rhetorical equation of Arab and Palestinian leaders with Nazis." He discusses among other things the PLO's acknowledgment of the Holocaust and its victims, which he feels has been fruitless. Massad concluded (echoing a number of Israeli writers, among others) "As Palestinian recent history has shown, no Palestinian engagement with the holocaust will be satisfactory to Israel and its supporters. Israeli demands that Palestinians recognize the holocaust are not about the holocaust at all, but rather about the other part of the package, namely recognizing and submitting to Israel's "right to exist" as a colonial-settler racist state."


:::::::An example---suppose that some academic scholar published a book saying that there was no such thing as Jews. That all Jews were fakes, that the concept of Judaism is a recent invention of the 20th century, a lie, a Western invention with no basis in historical fact before the 20th century. One would certainly imagine a hugely negative response. Would we, as Misplaced Pages editors, be obligated to balance a section about such a book by providing several positive and several negative reviews, as we are now doing for the Massad book about gays? And I'm even allowing for that! Keep the several positive reviews. But don't tell me that the negative ones are too excessive. Please. ] (]) 07:01, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
:::So I would suggest finding an acceptable reliable source to make the point that apparently some editors are making here to the effect that Massad is fibbing when he says he didnt equate Israel and Nazi Germany; even the maniacally Massad bashing NY Sun has a bit more delicacy, saying Massad "also compares Israel's treatment of Palestinians to Nazi Germany's treatment of Jews." They (or their lawyers) seem to get the point that that is different than comparing the Israeli state to the Nazi state.] (]) 07:00, 26 January 2008 (UTC)


:::::::::Actually, it's not really our job to add anything based on whether or not we think something is ridiculous or not, but based on what the reliable sources say. The New Republic piece should get a brief mention because its a reliable source, although it's not really a book review, but a political polemic that makes use of Massad's book (and Kirchick is hardly an We should try to give primacy to peer criticism (see, eg, ] of controversial material, rather than outraged pundits. I also think it misunderstands or misrepresents the book, and I think you are misunderstanding it as well. Nowhere does Massad deny the existence of homosexulity/same sex relations (far from it), but instead is discussing "categories gay and lesbian," as identities, as not being universal. For example, those who challenge the imposition of Macdonald's into a third world country aren't denying the existence of food. You would need to read the book, and probably ]'s ] as well to get into this particular academic mindset. I actually think Massad is trying to navigate the slippery ground of finding a way through the anti-gay bigotry in a lot of the ME and resisting colonialism and imperialism as he sees it. Not an easy job; we know that "outside" attempts to promote equality for women in the region often run counter to indigenous efforts by women to navigate that terrain. And it's hard to argue with a main theme of the book--in Victorian days Arabs were demeaned for a supposed sexual perversity; now, the West attacks Arabs for the reverse, for being sexual prudes. To me, (soapbox), there's not a little bit of hypocrisy in this position coming from a country which has made plain it would rather have a civil war than allow two people of the same sex to marry each other! As to the analogy with a hypothetical author saying Judaism is "fake," of course that would be ridiculous, but I don't think it's a valid analogy, since Massad doesn't say homosexuals are fake. A perhaps stretched analogy would be an author (and there are more than a few) who says that Zionism is not a universal expression of Judaism. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 15:24, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
I propose deleting all claims without reliable sources. They have stood unsupported for too long now.] (]) 16:41, 27 January 2008 (UTC)


::::::::::First of all, I appreciate your excellent incorporation of the quotation into the section on his book. And I appreciate your taking the time to explain your views.
:Many of the uncited charges have now been removed. ] (]) 20:42, 27 January 2008 (UTC)


::::::::::But I disagree when you question whether I understand Massad's book, or Said's work. I can assure you that I've read much of both works, including ''Orientalism.'' I've personally read many of Massad's papers, as well. And I am very familiar with the ideology behind them. And of the hideous academic newspeak that characterizes much of it, which seems to have as its essence the goal of obfuscating arguments, being as impenetrable as possible, and attacking the notion that there exist any objective facts whatsoever about the world. As people working on an encyclopedia, whose raison d'etre is the accumulation of knowledge and facts about the world, we should all be offended. But that's beside the point. I wouldn't add my opinions on this issue to an encyclopedia article about Massad. That's not our place. All we can do is report the facts.
Thanks, but many still remain, and the section on the Talmud is entirely original research. I also propose that it be deleted.] (]) 16:08, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


::::::::::So, just as you would appreciate it if I don't make assumptions about where you are coming from, or about what you know, please reciprocate.
:Please list all disputed charges. As for the section on the Talmud, what appears is Massad's quotation, followed by a fact about the Talmud, with no opinion rendered in the text. As I said before, if Isaac Newton had pontificated publicly about the Holy Trinity or Alchemy or Numerology (which he did), those claims and that work would have to go in any legitimate encyclopedia entry on the man (as they generally do), although a good encyclopedia entry should not render any explicit value judgments and just let the facts speak for themselves. I suppose we could remove the historical fact about the Talmud. But Massad's words are not original research, and so they are perfectly legitimate for an encyclopedia entry on him. Res ipsum loquitor. Nowhere is there an opinion stated in the text. If his words sound absurd, well, you'll have to take that up with him. But I appreciate very much that we are having a discussion about this, without people just going and deleting stuff outright, in keeping with the very first Misplaced Pages dispute rule. ] (]) 16:25, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


::::::::::No, I do not think Massad disputes the existence of same-sex acts. I never questioned that. What I question is his claim that there do not exist people who are, simply, gay. People who simply do not have an attraction to members of the opposite sex but almost completely to members of their own sex. This has become a demonstrable fact of nature. And to assert otherwise is simply ridiculous. Just because the West discovers something doesn't make that a mere social construct. Newton's gravity formula was discovered by the West, and if you dispute it's validity, then, as Hume famously put it, feel free to step outside my 21st-story window.
1) Without a citation to a reliable source that also points out that Massad may have the languages of the Talmud wrong, this is original research, i.e. nowhere else besides this Misplaced Pages article has this issue come up - hence original research. If someone were to go through Massad's scholarship and list arbitrary facts that he got right, would that also have a place in an encyclopedia entry that has to rely on reliable sources? The only source we have for this claim of error - about which the author of this section of the article may very well be right - is the author of this section. If that is not original research, what is ? There are many venues where a critical reading of Massad's work is a worthy task - a Misplaced Pages encyclopedia entry is not one of them. The selection of this particular issue as noteworthy strikes me as ideologically motivated, but that is irrelevant - so no supporting citation for the claim/demonstration of error equals original research. If you can find a credible source, the section could stand, if not it is clearly original research and should be deleted.


2) RE the unsubstantiated claims: For a start wherever (citation needed) appears, plus "some critics," "some supporters" etc stand without adequate citational support. I will get back to you with more details later.] (]) 19:25, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


::::::::::Kirchick's review attacks Massad's thesis. That's how you review a book centered on a particular thesis. Would you rather Kirchick have spent his time instead commenting on Massad's grammar, his tone, or his vocabulary? So I also dispute your charge that Kirchick's piece is just a polemic and not primarily a review of Massad's book. ] (]) 18:29, 1 April 2008 (UTC)


<---Well then, ], we are probably akin to 2 blind editors trying to describe the elephant with respect to the book; we're seeing at from different vantage points. I have a particular abhorrence for gay-bashing of any sort, but I don't really see it with this book, although I don't particularly agree with much in it--I pretty much share the opinions of Al-Shawaf in the review cited (the book has good theoretic-historic analysis, but falls short on a practical level). I don't share Kirchick's hostility at all. In fact, I think the book will be (and already is) opening up discussion and debate about an issue that ''everybody'' has shoved under the table (honestly, do you picture a Republican OR Democratic US administration standing up for LGBT's in the Middle East? They won't even stand up, on a national level, for American LGBT's). I hope the debate gets heated enough to warrant it's own Wiki article--that would be progress! ] <sup>'']''</sup> 20:22, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
::What you are describing is classic original research as outlined in ]:


:You always surprise me. Just when I think that we're never going to agree about anything, we end up basically agreeing on quite a bit after all. I deeply despise gay-bashing, too, and I also hope that the larger discussion leads to a Wiki article. And I do agree that we seem to be seeing the book from different angles. But that's why it is necessary that there be multiple reviews listed in the entry, as we now have. There are three positive reviews of the book and three negative reviews listed. Before I made any changes, the only reviews mentioned in the article were glowingly positive, and surely you can acknowledge how biased that was. Thanks for helping me incorporate the additional material in a sensible way. ] (]) 21:20, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
::''Synthesizing material occurs when an editor tries to demonstrate the validity of his or her own conclusions by citing sources that when put together serve to advance the editor's position. If the sources cited do not explicitly reach the same conclusion, or if the sources cited are not directly related to the subject of the article, then the editor is engaged in original research''


::Book reviews in reliable sources are fine, as long as they at some point discuss the work. It's the "So and so is a mean old man" or the "So and so threatened to lock me in the university tower because I disagreed" kind of stuff that's problematic from a ] angle--even if the words might have appeared in a newspaper. Newspapers are full of people saying all kinds of things about other people. That doesn't mean it's encyclopedia worthy. Again, refer to ] article--there's probably a million quotes in reliable sources where someone is calling the authors of that book rabid racist scalawags, but we resist the temptation. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 21:48, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
::There doesn't appear to be anything in the literature indicating that Massad's musings on the Talmud are at all noteworthy; if anyone has anything to the contrary, please feel free to include it. ] (]) 16:43, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


The attempt to include negative reviews by journalists, some known and some unknown, to delegitimize Massad’s scholarship and to equate them with scholarly reviews is hardly a question of balance. First, Democartiya is a minor unknown neoconservative online journal that is hardly a major source on scholarship and Rayyan al-Shawaf has no qualifications whatsoever except as the unknown reviewer for this unknown publication), and morever, the review has been cherry-picked for negative criticisms. Second, Whitaker who attacked Massad in his own book and who Massad responds to in Desiring Arabs is hardly a scholarly source or an objective one. This review of the book focused only on the one chapter in the book that Massad had published before and ignored 400 pages of the book. Kirchick, a young Zionist acolyte, who in turn had not read the book but relied on Whitaker’s review is trudged in as another objective reviewer merely because he published his review in The New Republic and calls in his “review” for Massad to be denied tenure following the earlier call by New Republic editor Martin Peretz on Columbia to deny Massad tenure based on his anti-Israel views - hardly objective people or venues on the matter of Massad. Thirdly, regardless of the value of these journalistic reviews, it is further interesting that the politically motivated insertions of these reviews into the wikipedia entry on Massad did not show interest in quoting from other less politically motivated and arguably more serious newspapers which reviewed the book, namely The Financial Times and the Times Higher Education Supplement whose credibility surely is much greater than Whitaker’s own blog where his review appeared. Moreover a scholarly review in the influential Middle East Report by Harvard Professor Khaled El-Rouayheb is nowhere to be seen in this article. Also if the general media is going to be considered a reliable source in the discussion of scholarship, there is a recent review in the gay newpaper The Guide which had a huge spread on the book and an interview with Massad and positively reviewed the book by its own book editor Bill Andriette. Should this also be added? In the interest of not encumbering the entry on Desiring Arabs with all this politically motivated energy, the entry as it stands begins by saying that the book “received critical praise from academics and journalists.” I think this is sufficient - otherwise this article is going to revert to being a quote-farm (again) quite quickly. The journalistic
== Ad Hoc Committee Composition (Alleged Classroom Intimidation) ==
section should be deleted unless all the other reviews are included. But to cite briefly the positive reviews given the book by the most qualified and credible academics and then dedicate more than half the entry to reviews by minor journalists in obscure blogs and internet magazines, and clearly politically motivated actors is hardly balance. I support deleting this section.] (]) 15:22, 6 April 2008 (UTC)


:Listen Nhoad, I don't know what you're background is or where you're coming from, but throwing around terms like "Zionist acolyte" like they're four-letter-words and saying that none of these people actually read Massad's book is tendentious at the least. I'll never describe Khaled El-Rouayheb as an "Arab apologist." That would be equally inappropriate, and probably an ignorant and gross exaggeration, just as your comment is. And, for the record, there are disputes about Massad's work from within academia---see for example criticism from other professors, like Dan Miron, from within his own department at Columbia. Somehow I doubt that such criticisms would survive long in this article, however.
I see that the following information was condensed into the statement "There had been some complaints that the committee contained members who had anti-Israel views." I have added the following information as additional citations. Thanks for cleaning this up! ] (]) 17:40, 26 January 2008 (UTC)


:And, by the way, claiming that reviews from other academics are inherently less biased than reviews outside academic is simple-minded and naïve. There's a lot of intellectual incest and backscratching that goes on in academia, as I'm sure you know, and hearing outside voices from mainstream people like, yes, The New Republic, is hardly an unacceptable thing. Sure, add more reviews if you like. But don't throw away reviews that you don't like, and make it look like ''Desiring Arabs'' only got a positive reception wherever it went. That's just dishonest.
:The composition of the committee was itself a focal point of further controversy. According to a report in the university newspaper at the time:


:The truth is that I'm getting pretty tired of all of this. If it weren't for me, this whole article would be simple and utter hagiography, and no one visiting it would have any clue as to why Massad is such a controversial character. If you think that my modifications and additions are simplistic and biased, then fine, but go find a better way to include critical and, yes, sometimes negative, reviews of Massad's work. But considering the history of this article, I seriously doubt that anybody else is willing to paint a balanced portrait of Massad, worts and all. Certainly not an editor for whom the word "Zionist" is thrown around like an indelible stain. ] (]) 04:41, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
:<blockquote>The committee is comprised of Lisa Anderson, dean of the School of International and Public Affairs; history professor Mark Mazower; Farah Griffin, professor of English and comparative literature and director of the Institute for Research in African-American Studies; Jean Howard, professor of English and vice provost for Diversity Initiatives; and professor of political science and history Ira Katznelson...<br />


::I think using "Zionist acolyte" as an epithet is both unproductive and offensive, but I also think ] has a valid point. Let me put it another way: Surely there were some negative reviews of ''Desiring Arabs'' from heavy-weights, whether academics or others. I think the section needs to include valid criticism of the book, but citing popular newspapers and magazines seems frivolous. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 05:12, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
:The students’ primary concerns about the constitution of the committee stem from the alleged personal and professional connections between its members and some of the professors being called into question for their behavior in the classroom, as well as connections between members of the committee and anti-Israel statements and causes. Anderson advised MEALAC professor Joseph Massad on his Ph.D. thesis... Mazower wrote publicly in The Financial Times that the United States is waging the recent war in Iraq for the sake of Israel, and that Israel is also to blame for global anti-Semitism. Griffin and Howard signed a 2002 divestment petition demanding that Columbia withdraw economic support from Israel.<ref>{{cite web
| url = http://www.columbiaspectator.com/node/16711
| title = Committee Draws Fire, Keeps Investigating MEALAC
| accessdate = 2008-1-25
| last = Hirschmann
| first = Lisa
| authorlink = Lisa Hirschmann
| year = 2005
| month = January
| publisher = ]
}}</ref></blockquote>


:::Thanks. I see your point. I agree with you that finding reviews from "heavier" sources would be better. Hopefully somebody who has access to some of these academic journals (which, unfortunately, usually aren't free to access) can do some looking. But I still think that there's value in displaying the reaction to the book from "the masses", at least its more prominent and mainstream representatives like a former editor for the Guardian's Middle East bureau and a chief writer at The New Republic. If people can find better stuff, positive or negative, please do add it! ] (]) 13:48, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
:Critics of the committee's composition included student Zac Frank, who wrote in the university newspaper:


Apologies for hastiness. I did not mean Zionism in any pejorative way. However, and I do not wish to poison the well here, both Martin Peretz and Kirchik have called in print for Massad to be denied tenure at Columbia - rendering them highly partisan- so I hardly think this makes The New Republic a place to find objective assessments of Massad's scholarly work.
:<blockquote>The appointment of the ad-hoc committee investigating intimidation, however, was incredibly misguided. While I do have confidence in the ability of the committee to be impartial and fair, it is not surprising that students making accusations would have a problem with its composition of Columbia faculty and administrators, some with ties to the professors involved. When there was a controversy surrounding the English department, a committee was convened with members from outside the University. If Bollinger were serious about this investigation and had any sense, he would have done the same in this situation, if for nothing else than to avoid even the appearance of conflict.<ref>{{cite web
If I were to add quotes from all the other reviews, I would worry that the article would revert back to the quote farm it was earlier. Moreover I think this section is in danger of becoming a coatrack of sorts. I am not being tendentious when I raise the question of whether Whitaker and Kirchick have read the book. Look at their reviews - this is a +-500 page book. All they discuss is the one chapter that was published earlier in Public Culture - "Re-orienting Desire: The Gay Intermational and the Arab World" on the current state of homo/sexual politics. Nothing is said about the fact that the primary focus of the work is on two-hundred years of Arab intellectual production on questions of sex/sexuality - the excavation and analysis of this largely unkown in English set of works and debates from the nineteenth and twentieth centuries and Massad's analysis of it is what is seen as the major contribution of the book by every other reviewer. It appears that unless you are invested in keeping the controversy about Massad alive, that particular chapter is not that central to the book. The argument I am making here is mostly original research and I would not put it in the article. Nonetheless, I do think that the quote from Whitaker should be removed - it appeared on his blog, not in The Guardian and therefore does not pass muster as a reliable source. I think given the public statements on Massad's tenure case by Peretz and Kirchik, that review - whether or not Kirchick actually read the whole book - his review strongly suggests he did not - contravenes NPOV guidelines. If Dan Miron has published a review of Desiring Arabs in a peer-reviewed journal, I think a brief quote from it would be legitimate.] (]) 15:59, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
| url = http://www.columbiaspectator.com/node/16973

| title = A Double Disservice: the David Project Fails in its Mission
Since there have been no attempts to justify how Whitaker's blog constitutes a reliable source - so i will delete it. ] (]) 15:31, 5 May 2008 (UTC) Given Kirchik's public call to deny Massad tenure in the article cited, I think this contravenes NPOV and the reference also should be deleted. ] (]) 15:50, 5 May 2008 (UTC) Since no-one has objected to the claim that Kirchik's public call to deny Massad tenure contravenes NPOV for over a month now, I have deleted this section. I do not think a partisan on-line journal like Democratiya constitutes a reliable source. If anyone can find similar criticisms in a reliable source, I would be amenable to having the criticism section reinstated. ] (]) 14:55, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
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| last = Frank
:I think I disagree with the removal of the ''New Republic'' review. The magazine, and Jamie Kirchick, are of sufficient notoriety that the review is notable, whether or not it is honest. Its honesty is not Misplaced Pages's to evaluate, in general. I'm ok with dropping the Democratiya review, which has a less notable source and an author who's not, apparently, notable enough to have a Misplaced Pages article. I'll wait for a response before I take any action to restore it, however. ] (]) 22:58, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
| first = Zac

| authorlink = Zac Frank
If there is a desire to reinstate the TNR review, I think it important it be contextualized in the light of the public statements of Peretz and Kirchik, and there have been many other reviews in the gay and mainstream press that also should be added then. See reviews in The Financial Times - http://www.ft.com/cms/s/0/d69aa534-4ed3-11dc-85e7-0000779fd2ac.html and The Guide - http://www.guidemag.com/magcontent/invokemagcontentarchive.cfm?GetMagArray=Article as well as others. Thanks. ] (]) 15:20, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
| year = 2005

I have removed the Democratiya review again. I thought we had established that a non-peer reviewed online journal does not constitute a reliable source. ] (]) 18:44, 5 February 2009 (UTC) Someone has reinstated the Democratiya review with no discussion. I think this is threatening to turn into an edit war. An non-peer reviewed online journal does not constitute a reliable source. I am removing it again. I have no problem with someone adding a critical review from a reliable source, but Democratiya does not cut it.] (]) 19:01, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

:Just curious, how do you know it is not peer-reviewed? -- ] (]) 19:23, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

::As described here , with its international review board, it seems like it would be a reliable source. Can you bring evidence, other than personal opinion, that it is not? -- ] (]) 19:52, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

::It seems to be used as a reference in articles published in ''International Sociology'' and ''Journal of Democracy'', which further bolsters its claim as a WP:RS. I have restored it pending proof that it cannot be considered reliable. -- ] (]) 19:59, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

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== New Addition to Section "Views on Israel, Zionism, and the U.S." ==

To be added to the section "Views on Israel, Zionism, and the U.S."

:At a panel discussion in ] in February 2007, entitled "Challenging Israeli Apartheid," Massad was quoted by the ] as saying "The only thing threatening Jews is its commitment to Apartheid and its racist people."<ref name = "MassadNYCPanel">{{cite web
| title = Prof. Massad Criticizes Israel's Palestine Policy
| last = Napolitano
| first = Taylor
| year = 2007
| month = February | month = February
| publisher = ] | publisher = ]
}}</ref></blockquote> }}</ref>


This statement is directly relevant to Massad's views on Israel and Zionism, and is supported by a reliable source, namely, a contemporary report in the university's student newspaper. Why not include it just because it might seem harsh? We aren't doing hagiography here. He said these words, and this is the reason why there is so much interest in him in academic circles these days. ] (]) 18:18, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
== Statements about the Talmud ==


:A. What does this add? The section has ample representation of his views on the matter.
The title "Contested Historical Claims about the Talmud" was antiquated (there are no longer any comments about critics contesting his statements), and so I replaced the title merely with "Statements about the Talmud." Now there are no editorial comments, just Massad's statements, which are in the factual record. ] (]) 02:04, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
:B. Read the bottom of this little article, where it says ''"'''CORRECTION''': The article also misquoted Massad as saying, "Does it threaten Jews? Absolutely not. ... The only thing threatening Jews is its commitment to apartheid and its racist people." Massad's original statement on this matter was phrased differently."'' Does this seem like a reliable source to you, with it's admitted problem of misquoting? ] <sup>'']''</sup> 00:31, 31 March 2008 (UTC)


::Your second point is correct. I hadn't noticed the correction at the bottom of the article. Please disregard this addition. ] (]) 14:12, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
The following entry was completely deleted by Malik Shabazz, who cited it as "original research":


{{reflist-talk}}
:== Statements about the Talmud ==
:In an article in ''Al-Ahram'', Massad writes:


== Changes to Section "Columbia Unbecoming" ==
:<blockquote>In keeping with the ]'s abduction of the ] into its new religion and its positing of modern European Jews as direct descendants of the ancient Hebrews, post-Enlightenment haters of Jews began to identify Jews as "Semites" on account of their alleged ancestors having spoken ]. In fact the ancient Hebrews spoke ], the language in which the ] was written, as well as parts of the bible.<ref name = "SemitesAntiSemites" /></blockquote>:The Babylonian ], comprising both the ] and the ], contains large swaths of both Hebrew and Aramaic. The central portion is in Hebrew.<ref>{{cite web
| url = http://www.jewishvirtuallibrary.org/jsource/loc/Talmud.html
| title = Judaic Treasures of the Library of Congress: The Talmud
}}
</ref>


I propose removing this passage from the section "Columbia Unbecoming"
:While ] and ] were spoken for a long time by ancient Jews, ], in various forms and at various historical stages, was also continuously used. Hebrew was used for the writing of religious texts, poetry, and so forth, as well as for speech. Even after the introduction of Aramaic, and its influence on Late Biblical Hebrew, Hebrew continued to develop, and today scholars use terms like Mishnaic/Rabbinic Hebrew and Medieval Hebrew.<ref>{{cite book
| title = A History of the Hebrew Language
| author = Angel Sáenz-Badillos
| publisher = Tr. John Elwolde. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press
| year = 1993
}}
</ref>


:In an editorial discussing the case one week after the release of the Committee report, the '']'' noted that while it believed Massad had been guilty of inappropriate behavior, it found the controversy overblown and professors such as Massad themselves victimized:
Original research, such as synthesis, would be making some additional statement that is not made by the references. No such statement is made. There are no synthesized opinions here. All that is stated is A, a quotation from Massad, and B, a fact about the Talmud. Where's the original research? Nowhere is there any statement about Massad or an opinion about him whatsoever. These are facts. It is unprofessional to you delete things without first explaining your reasoning. ] (]) 03:33, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
:<blockquote>There is no evidence that anyone's grade suffered for challenging the pro-Palestinian views of any teacher or that any professors made anti-Semitic statements. The professors who were targeted have legitimate complaints themselves. Their classes were infiltrated by hecklers and surreptitious monitors, and they received hate mail and death threats.<ref>Editorial. ''The New York Times.'' April 7, 2005.</ref></blockquote>


Every other statement from a newspaper editorial has been removed from this article, in keeping with WP:RS. Just look at the rest of the talk page for countless examples! Yet this blatant editorial opinion from the New York Times remains. Why are only favorable editorials kept while unfavorable ones removed?
I find your recent changes unprofessional and inexplicable. If you do not cease or at least provide a detailed explanation, I will report you. ] (]) 03:36, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


I'm all for removing all editorial opinions. After all, this is an encyclopedia article. But what's good for the goose is good for the gander. ] (]) 18:22, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
The very first rule in Misplaced Pages's entry on "Dispute Resolution" is:


:Which deletions are you referring to? It's a lot easier to discuss changes if you can just give examples, rather than complaints; and it's also easier to assume you are proposing changes in good faith to further the quality of this encyclopedia entry if you don't give as a rationale "what's good for the goose is good for the gander." Other than that, it seems an opinion piece from "a high-quality news organization" such as the ''New York Times'' is fine per ], especially given that it's directly addressing the issue of the controversy that the producers of "Columbia Unbecoming" engendered themselves (and not being cited simply as an ad hominen negative or positive statement). So, (in perhaps a variation of geese and ganders), if an organization like the David Project is going to incite such a controversy, it seems quite fair and NPOV to include the opinion of a high-quality news organization on the matter. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 00:10, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
<blockquote>When you find a passage in an article biased or inaccurate, improve it if you can. If that is not possible, and you disagree completely with a point of view expressed in an article, ''think twice before simply deleting it. Rather, balance it with your side of the story.'' Make sure that you provide reliable sources...<br />


::Do a search for the word "editorial" in this Talk page. There are so many examples I can't even begin to list them all. But I was directly challenged several times from mentioning editorials from several newspapers, like the NYSun, even when I was only citing them to point out the mere existence of critics of certain statements that Massad has made. So please explain to me why a pure editorial opinion from the NYTimes is more reliable than that of any other widely-circulated paper. I mean, the NYSun's editorial page has certain slants, but then again, so does the Times'. On what objective grounds do you consider the NYTimes editorial page "high quality"? You say that the NYTimes "seems" to be a "high quality" news organization. I might agree with you (and I do), but I also know a lot of people who would disagree. It sounds more like you just like the fact that the NYTimes happens to be giving a favorable review of the situation. Again, I propose deleting any editorial opinions from this article on Massad, good or bad. ] (]) 02:12, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Always explain your changes, especially when you want other people to agree with you. If you can say it in one line, use the edit summary; for longer explanations, use the talk page and add "see talk" to the edit summary.</blockquote>


:::With regards to your claiming that I "just like the fact that the NYTimes happens to be giving a favorable review of the situation," let me remind you of Misplaced Pages's guidelines of ] about other editors. For instance, although your edit history for the past three months seems to consist exclusively of adding negative information about Massad to this article, I am drawing no conclusions about your motivations. The admissibility of opinions from high-quality news organizations comes from ], not me. Check it out. As to a comparison of the NY Times and the NY Sun as high quality news organizations, I don't know what to tell you, although the fact that you "know a lot of people who would disagree" about the NY Times doesn't strike me as a persuasive argument against considering the Times to be a high quality news organization. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 03:27, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
] (]) 03:49, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


::::I'm quite sure that you're acting in good faith. I happen to know that you've stood up several times against people on Misplaced Pages who have espoused really horrible views, including people who were viciously anti-Semitic. And I deeply respect that. But in the present context, I think that there's no ''objective'' way to claim that the NYTimes editorial page is in any way higher quality than the editorial page of, say, the NYSun, except maybe to say that the NYTimes has a larger readership or a larger budget. So if we explicitly include an opinion from the NYTimes editorial page, I say that we add an opinion from another widely circulated NY-based newspaper editorial page that was following the controversy. It would be misleading to lead people to assume that the general consensus in New York, as expressed by typical editorial pages, basically came out on MEALAC's side in the controversy. ] (]) 14:20, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
:You're mistaken. Placing two true statements alongside one another ''for the purpose of advancing a point not made by a reliable source'' '''is''' ]:


:::::Again, to me it seems common knowledge that the ] would fall into ]'s category of high-quality and the ], launched just six years ago by a group headed by a ], is not. But more to the point, the Times in this instance is commenting on the ''Columbia controversy'' that Massad was embroiled in (in part, with the egging on of highly partisan sources such as the ''New York Sun''). The editorial from the Sun you unsuccessfully tried to include earlier was being used inappropriately to state facts, not to provide commentary on a situation from a high quality news org. In any case, it seems like night and day difference to me, but if you want to pursue it, feel free to request comment. But i think we've covered this ground already. ] <sup>'']''</sup> 14:35, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
::Editors should not make the mistake of thinking that if A is published by a reliable source, and B is published by a reliable source, then A and B can be joined together in an article to advance position C. This would be synthesis of published material serving to advance a position, which constitutes original research. "A and B, therefore C" is acceptable only if a reliable source has published this argument in relation to the topic of the article.


::::::"...to me it seems common knowledge that..." Come on! This is just your opinion again! And, while Conrad Black is obviously a jerk and a criminal, you know full well that he was not a convicted criminal when he started the paper. These post-hoc rationalizations are clearly logical fallacies. If Sulzberger were suddenly convicted of, I don't know, child molestation, would that nullify the NYTimes as a high-quality paper?
:(A) "Massad says the ancient Hebrews spoke Aramaic and the Talmud was written in Aramaic", (B) "The Talmud was written in both Hebrew and Aramaic", (C) "Massad is either ignorant or he's lying".


::::::This is ridiculous. I agree that using a NYSun editorial for factual information may not be acceptable. But it's a NY newspaper that was covering the MEALAC controversy. So were the Daily News and others. So, if we're going to include the NYTimes editorial specifically for its views on this conflict, why can we not include similar statements from the editorials of other prominent local newspapers on the conflict, say, just below the NYTimes statement? Again, I don't propose going back and adding statements of fact from editorials. I'm saying that if we include a pure opinion from the NYTimes, then we should add just below it a contrasting opinion on the outcome of the committee's report from another prominent local newspaper. Or, we could just eliminate all editorials as sources and be done with it. There is no ''objective'' argument against this, and you full well know it. ] (]) 06:47, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
:As the policy says, it's original research unless a reliable source has made the connection with respect to Massad.


:::::::Whoa. I just looked again at the NYTimes editorial, and the quotation pulled for the Misplaced Pages article totally warps the message of the editorial. The Times writes: "Sad to say, the school has botched the handling of this emotionally charged issue from the start, thereby allowing festering concerns to erupt into a full-scale boil." Then the editorial says:
:With respect to your threat to "report me", be my guest. ] gives editors authority to remove poorly sourced material and conjectural interpretations (''i.e.'', original research). I explained in ] why this was original research. Your response to my message was to remove the banner and change a few words. I'm sorry, but Misplaced Pages policy is on my side. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 03:53, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


:::::::<blockquote> botched this job, too, by appointing one member who had been the dissertation adviser for a professor who had drawn criticism and appointing three members who had expressed anti-Israel views that, critics allege, might incline them to soft-pedal complaints. It also limited the panel's mandate to include only some of the areas of complaint. People involved in the deliberations believe that the panel proceeded carefully and objectively in evaluating the evidence, but its composition ensured that the results would be greeted with skepticism.</blockquote>
::It is your ''opinion'' that (C) is "Massad is either ignorant or he's lying", since you say that it is "left to the reader" to decide that. That's an opinion on your part! No such statement is made. Massad is an academic, and he made a statement about an important historical document, the Talmud. This statement is not relevant in an encyclopedia entry on the man? These are facts! There are no value judgments made in the entry. You can't criticize me for making a comment (c) when no such comment is made! No, I don't think the Misplaced Pages policy is on your side, unless there's a policy against making invisible statements. ] (]) 04:06, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


:::::::Then they write: "And it has recognized that the Middle East studies department was out of control and, with the goal of strengthening its scholarship, has wrested away its power to appoint and promote faculty." They also say that Massad was "judged clearly guilty of inappropriate conduct." And then there's the conclusion:
::Here's explicitly what it says in the Misplaced Pages policy that you cite: "Editors should remove any contentious material about living persons that is ''unsourced'', ''relies upon sources that do not meet standards specified in Misplaced Pages:Verifiability'', or is a ''conjectural interpretation of a source''. No such material exists here. There isn't one sentence that falls into any of the three categories.


:::::::<blockquote>But in the end, the report is deeply unsatisfactory because the panel's mandate was so limited. Most student complaints were not really about intimidation, but about allegations of stridently pro-Palestinian, anti-Israeli bias on the part of several professors. The panel had no mandate to examine the quality and fairness of teaching. That leaves the university to follow up on complaints about politicized courses and a lack of scholarly rigor as part of its effort to upgrade the department. One can only hope that Columbia will proceed with more determination and care than it has heretofore.</blockquote>
::And yes, let's consider the moon and cheese analogy. Please do tell me, if this were an encyclopedia article on a n ''astronomer'' who famously said that the moon was made of cheese, don't you think that would be a relevant item to note in his encyclopedia entry? Massad is a scholar of the Middle East, and he makes a statement about the Talmud. The reader is certainly free to agree with him if he or she wishes. But merely deleting that statement is just hiding stuff you don't like.] (]) 04:17, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


:::::::Now I must turn your earlier Clint Eastwood remark back to you, Boodles. Don't you think it's strange that the only quotation pulled from this long editorial was the one that made Massad look good, and totally altered the spirit of the larger editorial? Why, may I ask, have I been so heavily attacked for allegedly pulling quotations out of articles that make Massad look bad, but nobody else seems to have treated cases like this one in the same way? ] (]) 21:37, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
:::You seem to be confusing Middle Eastern Studies with Jewish Studies or Religion. What a professor of Arab History has to say about the language spoken by the Jews 1500-2400 years ago is no more significant than his opinion about what the moon is made of — both are outside his area of expertise.


:::::::::yes, but we're focusing on Massad (the article subject), not the panel or the overall investigation. We include the Times noting the "inappropriate conduct", and their opinion about the findings re: the intimidation against Massad et al. The opinions about the limitations of the panel, as they see it, are peripheral (although it is covered earler in the section anyway). ] <sup>'']''</sup> 22:00, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
::::Correct. But if a famous scholar on British history made prominent, non-facetious statements that the moon was made of cheese, I think that would be relevant to mention in an encyclopedia article, leaving the reader to make up his or her own mind about what it means. If it was discovered that Newton made countless prominent statements about the Holy Trinity (and he did), then even though this was not his field of expertise, it would still be highly important information to include in a biographical encyclopedia entry on him (as it is in many such entries on Newton). Otherwise you get a distorted picture of Newton. His claims about the Trinity, and about Alchemy, and about numerology, were vital to understanding his character. Nowhere does an encyclopedia entry have to make value judgments or express opinions on these beliefs.


This section is biased. We note the the committee found one allegation of abuse credible, but we omit evidence that 20 students say the same alleged instance of abuse never happend. Why not include all the evidence and let the public decide? Isn't inclusion of FACTS what this is all about? I will change unless I hear a good reason otherwise. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 05:51, 15 July 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:::I'm not going to revert you and start an edit war, but you are wrong. As the discussions above — and your recent edits — indicate, you have no understanding of ], especially ]. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 05:06, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
: It's not omitted. If you read the entire section you'll see that that the info on the 20 students is included.] (]) 15:13, 15 July 2009 (UTC)


{{reflist-talk}}
::::"but you are wrong, "you have no understanding." I understand these things full well. We disagree on how these rules should be interpreted in this particular context---we have agreed on its interpretation in other contexts, as you will recall. In the existence of such a dispute, I err on the side of leaving facts in place. Meanwhile, all opinions have been excised from the entry.


== Sharon quotation == == New Additions and Changes ==


In the latest edit, it says that the fraudulent Sharon quotation ("we, the Jewish people control America and the Americans know it") appeared in mainstream press outlets. I did a lot of searching, and I could only find it mentioned on internet hate sites. I don't like erasing possibly factual statements, so I added a "citation needed" tag, and it now awaits someone to find citations to mainstream news outlets. ] (]) 02:17, 28 January 2008 (UTC) If there are no objections in a reasonable period of time, say, in a couple of days, then I will carry out the aforementioned changes. ] (]) 18:24, 30 March 2008 (UTC)


:Could you clarify the proposed changes - are you only suggesting removing content based on the NYT editorial? Should we remove the Village Voice mention at the same time? ] (]) 21:54, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
:I see that Malik Shabazz has removed the "citation needed" label, because the source points out that the quotation "I control America" appeared in a column by Georgie Anne Geyer that appeared in the ''Chicago Tribune'' and the ''San Diego Tribune''. But this is a ''very'' different quotation. Surely everyone can appreciate the difference between claiming that Sharon said "I control America" and "we, the Jewish people control America." So I dispute the claim that the fraudulent quotation used by Massad ever appeared in the mainstream press. ] (]) 05:23, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


::I'm not sure what Technetium is talking about either, but I'd like to register that I think both the NYT and the Village Voice references should stay. The judgments of relative non-partisans on the issue will probably be helpful to casual readers. I don't object to including newspaper editorials - as I recall, imperfectly I'm sure, the ones that were removed were removed because they were 1) from tabloids (the Sun & Post are simply less reliable than the Times & Voice) and 2) pretty plainly based on serious confusions. ] (]) 22:07, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
:I have modified the text so that the "citation needed" tag is no longer necessary. Now the entry specifically notes that a ''different'' variant of the Sharon quotation was used in the mainstream press. ] (]) 05:28, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


== Additions to Section "The Persistence of the Palestinian Question" ==
By the way, this is the full quotation from Massad's paper:


The only reviews listed for this book are glowingly positive. I think it's fairly safe to say that this presents a rather biased and inaccurate portrayal of the book's actual reception in the academic and historical community. I will collect critical reviews and add them to this section. ] (]) 21:59, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
<blockquote>...more recently, in late September 2001, and during an acrimonious argument which erupted in a weekly Israeli cabinet meeting between Prime Minister and his Foreign Minister , the following interchange unfolded: Peres was warning Sharon that refusing to heed American requests for a ceasefire would endanger Israeli interests and "turn the U.S. against us." Sharon yelled at Peres in exasperation: "every time we do something you tell me the Americans will do this and will do that. I want to tell you something very clearly, don't worry about American pressure on Israel, we, the Jewish people control America and the Americans know it." This major ideological convergence between anti-Semites and Jewish supremacists in Israel is hardly surprising if one understood Zionism's project as nothing short of turning the Jew into the anti-Semite.</blockquote> ] (]) 02:33, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


In particular, I remember reading a critical review that specifically addressed Massad's abundant use of the so-called "academic newspeak". For example, from Ch. 1 of Massad's book ''The Persistence of the Palestinian Question'':
Malik Shabazz eliminated the beginning of the quotation "I want to tell you something very clearly, don't worry about American pressure on Israel, we, the Jewish people control America and the Americans know it," saying that he was "shortening quote so it makes sense in context". Please explain. What is the context, and why is cutting out these words necessary? ] (]) 04:20, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


<blockquote>Whereas the genetic moment of every national interpellation secures the subsequent claims made by popular nationalism anchoring the political and popular concept of the nation, every retelling of the story of the nation becomes in fact a moment of sublation (incorporation ''and'' transcendence), wherein the newly constituted Jordanian identity sublates its predecessor in an interminable process, and whereby the new Jordanian identity is reinscribed as the one that had always already existed as it does today.</blockquote> ] (]) 22:26, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
:I deleted the phrase "I want to tell you something very clearly, don't worry about American pressure on Israel", which makes no sense in the sentence:


OK. I am beginning to question Technetium's credibility. This is not a quote from "The Persistence of the Palestinian Question," but a quote from Massad's first book, "Colonial Effects." Under the ruse of balance, this editor seems to be willing to risk risible error in an attempt to discredit Massad. This is either bad faith or gross carelessness- neither of which are good for verifiable encyclopedic content. ] (]) 15:43, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
::The article itself included a passage in which former Israeli Prime Minister Ariel Sharon was quoted as saying "I want to tell you something very clearly, don't worry about American pressure on Israel, we, the Jewish people control America and the Americans know it."


:My incorrect attribution of this quotation, to which I admitted my uncertainty, was a mistake on my part. The talk page exists precisely for dealing with such uncertainty in a civilized way. Your direct attack on my credibility and your claim that I'm just trying to "discredit" Massad displays quite clearly your own biases on the subject. Personally, I like the quotation precisely because it is Massad's writing in the flesh so to speak, not filtered through a reviewer or anything else. I think any visitor to this Misplaced Pages article would be fascinated to see a small sample of Massad's actual academic writing. What could be more informative? ] (]) 04:48, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
:Who cares whether Sharon was being misquoted about whether he said he wanted to say something clearly, or that nobody should worry about American pressure on Israel? The key point of the alleged quote was that Sharon was claiming that the Jews control America. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 04:56, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


::], please read Misplaced Pages's policies concerning ] and ] and its guideline concerning ]. Editors who engage in personal attacks may be ]. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 05:21, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
===Used in mainstream press===
From the CAMERA reference:<br />
'''As it turns out, it is a hoax. Sharon never made either statement. Nor did Kol Yisrael ever report that he did.''


I do not wish to be personal here, but Technetium, where in your first posting do you admit uncertainty concerning the source of the quote? Secondly what do you mean by the so-called "academic newspeak." The sentences you cite - while academic - are not new or news. They are simply an application of Hegel's dialectic, particularly his idea of "aufhebung" - usually translated into English as "sublation" or "supercession" to a theory of postcolonial nationalism. I am interested to know why you think one of the places where Massad is most philosophically rigorous is necessarily representative of his work?] (]) 16:10, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
''Yet syndicated columnist Georgie Anne Geyer wrote in her May 10, 2002 opinion column, which appeared in the Chicago Tribune, San Diego Tribune, and other newspapers:''


:My uncertainty was implicit in my statement that I remembered reading this review somewhere, but didn't remember where or remember any further details about it. I was hoping somebody else had seen it and could remind me where to find it. As to my use of the term "academic newspeak", I am referring to the interesting phenomenon, admittedly a subjective observation on the part of its critics, wherein scholars in disciplines like history, languages, and culture (like Prof. Massad, a member of the Middle Eastern Languages and Culture department at Columbia) have introduced esoteric and extremely obtuse language into their work, some of which is borrowed from the most impenetrable recesses of disciplines like philosophy, like Hegel's work. (Can you really dispute my contention that Hegel's is one of the more inscrutable frameworks in philosophy?) Mere mortals like myself assume that historians and scholars of culture are focussed primarily on the accumulation of facts, the application of analysis to those facts, the comparison to the present day, and rough predictions about the future. Indeed, most do just this sort of thing. But it is always fascinating to see the work of professors who take a different approach. That's my point. And I think people would benefit from seeing it in Massad's work for themselves. This is revealing look into how Massad studies history and culture. By the way, I love seeing the words "philosophical" and "rigorous" appear in the same sentence. Warms my heart. And I say that as someone who happens to love philosophy. ] (]) 02:33, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
''In fact, it led Prime Minister Sharon to tell his Cabinet recently, "I control America."'' ] (]) 15:47, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


== Archiving ==
:If you'd read my comment before you would have noted that I specifically pointed out that Geyer said "I control America" not "we, the Jewish people control America." Can't you tell the difference? Massad is the ''only'' one who used the latter quotation. ] (]) 16:58, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


I have archived all discussions with no comments more recent than January 2008 into ]. This was a little bit tricky because a few old discussions had been commented on (stopping this was one of the reasons I wanted to archive), and I had to cut and paste around them. Let me know if I appear to have screwed anything up. ] (]) 22:36, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
== Use of false quotation ==


== Thanks, everyone! ==
An editor has deleted this, which seems valid, given that it was an error that was corrected. I assume we should assume good faith in biography subjects absent a reliable source proving otherwise.] (]) 16:46, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who contributed to the rewrite. I'd come to this page earlier this year looking for information about Massad's books and wasn't able to get any clear idea of his positions from it. At that time, the article just seemed like a lot of alternating praise and criticism bandied back and forth, but no real discussion of his work. Didn't edit it then because I didn't know enough about his scholarship, or the controversy in general, to contribute reliably. But this page is so much clearer now, and seems more balanced despite becoming shorter, while still including different sides of the controversy. As far as I can tell, the current article is a great example of being as NPOV as possible in contentious circumstances. So thanks, Wikifolks! (P.S. This is in response to the Jun 13 version of the page.) <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 18:12, 13 June 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:No, Massad ''did not'' retract the quotation or acknowledge the error. He ''quietly'' removed it in a second publication of the article in another journal, clearly hoping that nobody would notice. Had he actually published a retraction, then that would be a different story.


Many of the excised sections have ended up on the new Wikiquote page. Where can I find the relevant policies for wikiquote? Thanks. ] (]) 15:23, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
:I can't help but feel that ''every'' deletion here has been pro-Massad. I don't care whether material in this entry is pro-Massad or anti-Massad. But facts are facts, and it's really disgusting the way they are being selectively deleted. If you have information that you feel presents Massad in a different light, then by all means, ''add'' it. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 17:01, 28 January 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


==Libel suit==
::Standard procedure is to correct errors, the fact that Massad didn't "retract the quotation or acknowledge the error" might be an issue for you, but not for an encyclopedia. Please explain why this is encyclopedia worthy (for example, provide a reliable source reporting on the matter) before you revert. By the way, if you feel any "deletions" are in error, please explain. Calling them "disgusting" is not only rude, it isn't an explanation.] (]) 17:12, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


settling a libel suit by agreeing to pay damages and and issue a formal statement that an academic article contained false material is pretty significant. something this serious belongs on this man's page.] (]) 12:31, 13 July 2008 (UTC)Elan26
== Restructuring article ==


:It's very serious, but did '''Massad''' settle the suit? Was he a party to the suit? From what you've written, it seems like he was a third party. Sorry, but that makes the information irrelevant to his biography. See ]. — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 16:02, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
This article is in terrible shape. When I last worked on it more than a year ago, it was pretty mediocre, but since then, despite vastly increasing in length it's actually gotten worse. I don't mean this as an insult to the efforts of any of the more recent editors, but battling over the details of praise, allegations, and sourcing has left the article unreadable.


::You've got to be joking. Massad wrote a review of an important pro-Palestinian artist that was so libelous, with its allegations of plagiarism, that it got his journal sued; when his journal decided to settle, Massad called them "cowards." That's not relevant to his biography? He was merely a "third party" to all this? You're kidding, right? The whole case was about him! These people were all suing over his work! You are setting up a logical fallacy by defining away anybody who isn't the plaintiff or the defendant as merely a "third party"; the subject, in this case, Massad, is just as important and central! This isn't an "innocent bystander" we're talking about! And you don't think that this information is informative about the human being Joseph Massad, and is relevant to the biography of an academic? I'm reinstating the change.] (]) 18:00, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
As noted at the top the article has too many quotations; it tends to quote positive or negative comments on Massad's work at the expense of actually describing its content. The article also includes extensive sections on Massad's political opinions, or his alleged political opinions (even in some cases where the allegations have been withdrawn!). These appear selected for controversy, in many cases without evidence they have actually caused notable controversy, rather than to provide a concise and accurate overview of his politics. Finally, the structure of the article seems bizarre in some cases. Why are there three separate sections on allegations and counter-allegations of antisemitism? Why do Massad's views on Israel-Nazi comparisons deserve their own section?


== Reducing "Works" Section ==
Before beginning on any kind of massive rewrite project I want to get some consensus from other editors on what we eventually want the article to look like. Here's what I would propose:


Misplaced Pages is not a compendium of an academic's published work. This section needs to be shortened. In my view, the books should of course be kept, as well as only a minimal number of articles and book reviews to show the sort of work he has done. Thoughts? ] (]) 14:12, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
* Split off each of the books into its own article (even if they are only stubs). Leave only brief summaries of their content and even briefer summaries of academic reaction.
:If somebody doesn't reduce Massad's work section, I will. I prefer somebody that is familiar with his works does so. Misplaced Pages is not a compendium of an author's works. Please help.] (]) 17:56, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
* Merge sections 5, 6, and 7 - those that deal with accusations of antisemitism towards Massad, and Massad's accusations of antisemitism towards others - into one, with fewer lengthy quotes.
* Merge sections 4 and 8 - those that deal with Massad's views of Israel and Zionism - into one, with fewer lengthy quotes.
* Add if possible a section on Massad's education and personal life. As it stands this article has very little biographical information in a standard sense.


== section for tenure ==
Objections? Further ideas?


According to the Massad has received his tenure earlier this month. I was surprised that there is no section about the controversy about giving him tenure (began in late 2004 ).
] (]) 03:01, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


:I did some more trimming to hopefully make it easier to move the granite blocks of copy around. ] (]) 03:25, 10 February 2008 (UTC) I don't want start an edit war, but i'm thinking about adding a '''brief''' (few sentences) section about this. what do u think? --] (]) 12:34, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
: Agreed. Adding something with regards to the controversy is necessary. It doesn't have to be a coatrack but the entire controversy is quite notable. ] (]) 13:21, 30 June 2009 (UTC)


== Christian ==
::It is not usual for articles about controversial people to become quote-farms about the controversy. See ] for another example. It would be nice if such articles could actually be turned into ''biographies'', but I'm not sure that's possible.
I am removing the reference to Massad being "Christian" because no one has provided any RS for this claim. Before anyone puts it back, please explain the factual basis for this claim and provide an RS. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 20:51, 1 March 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
::Reorganizing the article so that it focused first on Massad's background and education would be a good start. I'm not sure if there's enough information about each book to spin off articles about them. But I agree that the rest of the article should be arranged thematically. For example, one section about antisemitism — allegations against Massad, his allegations against others, and his views concerning modern-day antisemitism vs. 19th century antisemitism — is better than three. I also think the bibliography at the bottom needs to be cut significantly. Somebody needs to identify Massad's most important papers and the rest should be deleted (as should the book reviews). — ]&nbsp;(]&nbsp;'''·''' ]) 04:01, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


=="Truths, facts and facts on the ground"==
== Update ==
...Massad's recent opinion piece in Al Jazeera may be useful. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 4px 1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - ''']'''</small> 18:40, 5 November 2011 (UTC)


== Modern genetic studies ==
Some more cleanup done. I have removed one quote I am dubious about. It's the Middle East Quarterly review of the Massad book. The MEQ is not really considered a scholarly journal, and I would prefer that we replace it with an equivalent review in a genuinely scholarly source. I would not object to it as a source on a specifically political issue - such as the intimidation controversy - but I would prefer we find non-politicised alternatives for the part of the bio that actually discusses his work. ] (]) 13:45, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


I believe that there should be a link to the article ] under the part where Massad claims modern Jews have no links to the ancient Hebrews, because these studies are more modern (and thus, not "European antisemitic constructions") and prove that European Jews do actually have origins in, and derive much of their ancestry from, the Fertile Crescent. His argument that they all look like Europeans is flawed, because there are many who look like Middle Easterners as well.] (]) 15:24, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
== Restructuring <s>in progress</s> done ==


:Has a ] made the connection between the genetic studies in question and Massad? If not, adding them to this article is considered impermissible ]. —&nbsp;]&nbsp;<sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub> 03:23, 15 October 2012 (UTC)
I've finished working on the sections on Massad's politics.


== External links modified ==
I've moved stuff around quite a bit - please comment. I've also done some trimming, removing a couple of redundant Massad quotes (either used twice, or essentially identical to quotes that remain), cutting down the extensive block quotes from Massad's "Imperial Mementos", and removing a long section on a misquotation in the Columbia Spectator. Since the paper itself quickly admitted error, I see no reason the misquotation and response are worth noting in the article.


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:An excellent start. For the books, I'll look around as well. What we have to be careful about is avoiding reviews in sources that are essentially political fora. If possible, we should restrict ourselves to reviews from well-known peer-reviewed journals. It shouldn't be too difficult. ] (]) 22:44, 12 February 2008 (UTC)


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::I also added a very short section on Massad's education and career. A few minutes of Googling left me unable to turn up more information; I left an "expand-section" tag. I rewrote the article intro to better reflect the balance of topics in the article. I'm done, for now anyway.
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This whole section was unfairly deleted without discussion. Boodlesthecat claims that a letter to the editor is not a WP:RS. It clearly is a reliable for conveying what the notable author of that letter feels about the subject of this article. Basically, a letter by Foxman reliably proves that Foxman criticizes Mossad.Besides, the letter is also posted as a page on the ADL website, which is also a reliable source. As to Boodlesthecat's claim that "anonymous unproven allegation fails Undue Weight," very briefly mentioning the student's criticism in a criticism section does not seem at all to be undue weight. Finally, no valid reason was given for the removal of the critique by CAMERA. If there are no comments here in a reasonable time period, I will reinsert the criticism section. ] (]) 04:00, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

:Please read the policies, particularly ]. Letters to the editor (this one apparently wasn't even published) are not reliable sources on Misplaced Pages, with some exceptions for letters to peer-reviewed journals. As to "anonymous unproven allegation fails Undue Weight," I think that is self explanatory; why do you think an anonymous student's complaint--unverified, unproven, anonymous--has any place in a biography? this is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid. as to the CAMERA criticism, someone else removed that, with the explanation that it was "CAMERA spamming"--which I entirely agree with. In fact, it seems what you largely do in your editing is find places to insert the not terribly reliable opinions of CAMERA into various articles, including this one. I believe it does amount to spamming. If you think CAMERA's opinions on Massad (or anything else) are notable,l find ] where those opinions were published. Misplaced Pages is not a repository for every extreme viewpoint on the CAMERA website--particularly when it concern biographies of living people. ] (]) 04:44, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
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Joseph Massad praised the October 7th Hamas terror attacks in Israel as "jubilant" and "awesome" in an article published on electronicintifada.net. He is an antisemite who uses the legitimacy of his academic post to disseminate Jew-hatred. ] (]) 07:31, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
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== On Israel and Zionism Section: Add link to genetic studies of Jews page ==

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Add a link to https://en.wikipedia.org/Genetic_studies_of_Jews to the existing section, "On Israel and Zionism", paragraph 2, somewhere within "Massad has spoken of genetic links being established between 19th-century European Jews" to add context to the discussion cited.

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== Joseph Massad called the October 7 attacks on Israel "awesome" and "astounding" ==

One of the reasons there was a petition calling for Massad's removal was the fact that he praised the October 7 terror attacks on Israel as "awesome", "astounding" and "incredible" and that they were a "stunning victory." This should be added to this wikipedia.. ] (]) 13:17, 19 June 2024 (UTC) <ref> https://www.businessinsider.com/columbia-professor-faces-removal-petition-after-pro-hamas-attack-article-2023-10 </ref>

:I agree. Will be done. ] (]) 14:30, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

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Quotes

I think the extended quotes were mostly located in the section on Desiring Arabs. I just edited that section by substantially reducing the quotes. The quotes that remain, I believe, are important as they attest to the reception of the book. I also believe that they are compatible with other wikipedia entries in terms of style.Nhoad 16:06, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

  • 27-March-2008: I agree that the remaining quotes are truly necessary to support the intense wording, such as viewing the book as a "work of genuine brilliance" and other phrases that would be flagged for non-neutral WP:NPOV concerns. Removing the direct quotes would certainly cause the wording to be debated for excessive claims, as happened in explaining Hurricane Katrina's damage on the Mississippi coast as "utter total devastation": people who did not witness the damage could not believe that towns were flooded over 90% and refrigerators were found 6 miles away along the I-10 highway (or fishing boats were found in trees) due to the 35-foot waves, thus direct quotes were needed for the controversial subject matter (many people could not would not accept the notion of waves on land reaching the 4 floor); the controversy was fueled by news media focusing on flooded lawns in New Orleans when the town of Biloxi had been submerged under 32 ft (10 m) of raging waters. For controversial subjects, extensive quotes are certainly justified and should be expected as the norm to support intense wording. At this point, I have untagged the article "Joseph Massad" for {quotefarm}, after 150 further revisions spanning another 5 months since the above changes. -Wikid77 (talk) 12:54, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

Most smartest wiki policies on editorials/forums

28-March-2008: In the topic above ("Massad attacks others.."), the User:Technetium25 makes the point that an editorial can establish that an opinion was stated; however, Misplaced Pages has limited "rules of evidence" and discounts the use of editorials or forums for any type of information. That excessive viewpoint limits Misplaced Pages in being able to keep up with emerging information. The general problem limiting rules of evidence is analogous to the legal issue of proving action versus intent of committing a crime. At the basic level, the action could be proven to have happened with the defendant; however, at a closer level, the action could be characterized as intended (deliberate), justifiable (such as self-defense) or under duress (forced by captors). Misplaced Pages should allow similar multiple levels of evidence: at the basic level, showing an opinion (or concept or invention) was stated (as in an editorial, blog or forum); however, at a deeper level, then qualifying that the opinion/invention was true, or accurate, or workable, or quick, etc. as evidenced in a reliable source at that level, able to judge the qualities. It is similar to the notion of quantity versus quality: such as a blog listing 200 opinions favoring a concept, versus an analytical source noting that all 200 opinions came from a single group or location, etc. Currently Misplaced Pages has a snobbish attitude in the rules of evidence: such as 25 people can testify they saw the defendant shooting the others; however "Misplaced Pages" rejects those testimonies because the 25 witnesses were not reliable experts writing in professional journals, with doctorates in gun ballistics, and medical degrees in optics for viewing events, so there's no wiki-evidence and the defendant is free to go. Again, it's the simple issue of evidence that various opinions exist, at all, versus evidence of the quality of those opinions (judging truth, accuracy, vengeful, or merciful opinions, etc.). However, it's not the only current wiki-problem: narrow Misplaced Pages policies on rules of evidence are just one of many areas for improvement in WP. There's no reason to solely blame policies about evidence, because Misplaced Pages also has problems for the wide left sidebar on each page (couldn't the jigsaw globe be 1 inch wide not 2? why can't the WP sidebar compress to a thin edge?), and Misplaced Pages can't protect parts of pages against hack edits (why can't Misplaced Pages compare an edited article to a controlled baseline file of required sections/text and warn users?), etc. There are so many "trivial" issues that Misplaced Pages (and most wiki projects) handle in a neophyte manner, hence narrow policies of evidence should not be blamed solely. The good news is that the solutions to the numerous problems are trivial, such as WP allowing multiple levels of evidence for quantity/existence versus qualities, supported by appropriate expert sources for each quality under consideration. Progress starts with noting the problems, such as User:Technetium25 making the point that an editorial can establish that an opinion was stated. Misplaced Pages could be a thousand times better with just a few trivial changes -- it's all so clear to me now. -Wikid77 (talk) 08:51, 28 March 2008 (UTC)

Restructuring article

This article is in terrible shape. When I last worked on it more than a year ago, it was pretty mediocre, but since then, despite vastly increasing in length it's actually gotten worse. I don't mean this as an insult to the efforts of any of the more recent editors, but battling over the details of praise, allegations, and sourcing has left the article unreadable.

As noted at the top the article has too many quotations; it tends to quote positive or negative comments on Massad's work at the expense of actually describing its content. The article also includes extensive sections on Massad's political opinions, or his alleged political opinions (even in some cases where the allegations have been withdrawn!). These appear selected for controversy, in many cases without evidence they have actually caused notable controversy, rather than to provide a concise and accurate overview of his politics. Finally, the structure of the article seems bizarre in some cases. Why are there three separate sections on allegations and counter-allegations of antisemitism? Why do Massad's views on Israel-Nazi comparisons deserve their own section?

Before beginning on any kind of massive rewrite project I want to get some consensus from other editors on what we eventually want the article to look like. Here's what I would propose:

  • Split off each of the books into its own article (even if they are only stubs). Leave only brief summaries of their content and even briefer summaries of academic reaction.
  • Merge sections 5, 6, and 7 - those that deal with accusations of antisemitism towards Massad, and Massad's accusations of antisemitism towards others - into one, with fewer lengthy quotes.
  • Merge sections 4 and 8 - those that deal with Massad's views of Israel and Zionism - into one, with fewer lengthy quotes.
  • Add if possible a section on Massad's education and personal life. As it stands this article has very little biographical information in a standard sense.

Objections? Further ideas?

Kalkin (talk) 03:01, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

I did some more trimming to hopefully make it easier to move the granite blocks of copy around. Boodlesthecat (talk) 03:25, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

Discussion regarding insertion of "Columbia Unbecoming" material in lede

It is not usual for articles about controversial people to become quote-farms about the controversy. See Nadia Abu El Haj for another example. It would be nice if such articles could actually be turned into biographies, but I'm not sure that's possible.

I have removed the sentences at the top of the article about the Columbia Unbecoming fracas. They were inaccurate. Massad was not formally reprimanded by the Ad hoc grievance committee. The committee also only found one alleged "incident" credible - not "many" and all of this is covered with much greater precision in the section of the article dealing with the controversy. Nhoad (talk) 16:31, 20 February 2010 (UTC)

Reorganizing the article so that it focused first on Massad's background and education would be a good start. I'm not sure if there's enough information about each book to spin off articles about them. But I agree that the rest of the article should be arranged thematically. For example, one section about antisemitism — allegations against Massad, his allegations against others, and his views concerning modern-day antisemitism vs. 19th century antisemitism — is better than three. I also think the bibliography at the bottom needs to be cut significantly. Somebody needs to identify Massad's most important papers and the rest should be deleted (as should the book reviews). — Malik Shabazz (talk · contribs) 04:01, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

I do not want this page to revert to an edit war. I deleted the innacurate information that had been added to the top of the article, and someone reinstated them with no discussion. here is a link to the Columbia ad hoc grievance report.http://www.columbia.edu/cu/news/05/03/ad_hoc_grievance_committee_report.html Massad was not "charged" with anything. Nor was he reprimanded. Potentially libelous statements do not belong in Misplaced Pages articles about living persons.Nhoad (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2010 (UTC)

Please read WP:LEDE: "The lead should be able to stand alone as a concise overview of the article. It should define the topic, establish context, explain why the subject is interesting or notable, and summarize the most important points—including any notable controversies." Massad is known—perhaps best-known—for the controversy surrounding the allegations made against him by his students. Removing it from the lede is a whitewash.
If you don't agree with the summary in the lede, edit it. Don't delete it. — Malik Shabazz /Stalk 00:10, 21 February 2010 (UTC)

I have rewritten the leadNhoad (talk) 16:25, 21 February 2010 (UTC)

The lede as you have reinstated it is serious misinformation, and potentially libelous. To claim that a faculty member was reprimanded by his university when he was not is not defensible. Please read the only official document released by Columbia on the matter: www.columbia.edu/cu/news/05/03/ad_hoc_grievance_committee_report.html Where is the reprimand? I am reverting my re-writing of the lede, until proof can be provided of Massad's reprimand. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Nhoad (talkcontribs) 01:58, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

I've rewritten the lede. It summarizes the article, and it's better than your effort at whitewash. — Malik Shabazz /Stalk 02:14, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

OK. Better, but still too politicized. A university ad hoc grievance committee does not "charge" anyone with anything. The word "intimidation" is not part of the language of the report, and the report explicitly denies any discrimination. From the report: "C. Across the spectrum of these concerns, we found no evidence of any statements made by the faculty that could reasonably be construed as anti-semitic. Professor Massad, for one, has been categorical in his classes concerning the unacceptability of anti-semitic views.

D. We found no evidence that students had been penalized for their views by receiving lower grades."

There are no university documents that support the idea that any students ever made such accusations of discrimination. I am holding back from accusing you of smearing. Please do not accuse me of whitewashing. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Nhoad (talkcontribs) 02:34, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

You must be looking at a different lede than the one I wrote. The words "charged", "intimidation", and "discrimination" don't appear in the lede at all. — Malik Shabazz /Stalk 02:39, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
I do not believe the information about Columbia Unbecoming belongs in the lede at all, and I feel that including it there may be construed as an effort to insert an anti-Massad POV into this article, which is totally inappropriate anyway but serious problematic for a living person. Inserting it in the lede looks to me like an obvious attempt to color the reader's view of the subject, which is not at all the role of WP. When considering the biography of a prominent living person, the lede needs to sum up what is important. Had Massad, say, been charged and convicted of a serious crime in 2004-2005, I can see placing it in the lede. But that is far from the case. All it is is a campus dispute in which some allegations against him were made and completely dismissed more than five years ago. Including such information in the lede is not the norm on WP. To say that the Columbia Unbecoming belongs in the lede, instead of say, the fact that Massad has won prominent awards for his books and academic work is clearly POV and has no place. For this reason, I removed it. The proper place for it to be discussed is in the section on the controversy. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tirpse77 (talkcontribs) 03:15, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the information about the Columbia controversy is adequately covered in the relevant section of the article and is not at all appropriate in the lede.Nhoad (talk) 03:36, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

Plot Spoiler reverted a change that two other editors agreed was appropriate and restored POV material without any discussion here. This is verging on vandalism of the page of a living person. Please use the talk page as intended before trying to insert/restore controversial, POV and irrelevant material into this biography.--Tirpse77 (talk) 21:26, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

Cut the POV material from the lede -Nhoad (talk) 22:20, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

It is difficult to assume good faith when editors attempt to insert POV material and refuse to engage in discussion on the talk page. It is the editors seeking to have a non-standard lede -- which emphasizes POV material, who should seek consensus, not those attempting to ensure that the lede conforms to common WP practice. --Tirpse77 (talk) 23:03, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

Please note the following relevant sections from the BLP page ]:

"Biographies of living persons must be written conservatively, with regard for the subject's privacy. Misplaced Pages is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid paper; it is not our job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives. The possibility of harm to living subjects must be considered when exercising editorial judgment. This policy applies equally to biographies of living persons and to information about living persons on other pages. The burden of evidence for any edit on Misplaced Pages rests with the person who adds or restores material. Therefore, an editor should be able to demonstrate that it complies with all Misplaced Pages content policies and guidelines."

Also, from the Wikimedia Foundation's recent Resolution: Biographies of Living Persons ] which identified as one of the key problems: "People sometimes make edits designed to smear others. This is difficult to identify and counteract, particularly if the malicious editor is persistent."

It seems to me that the efforts to keep inserting into the lede information about a campus controversy from five years ago is not conservative, not in keeping with WP's role as an encyclopedia, and may be designed to smear Massad by emphasizing this minor point and giving it undue weight. This should stop. --Tirpse77 (talk) 23:18, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

I'm not going to edit-war over it, but I strongly disagree with the two of you. Massad is perhaps best-known because of the controversy surrounding the allegations made against him by his students. Ignoring it in the lede is contrary to WP:LEDE.
Including it in the lede, on the other hand, doesn't violate WP:BLP. The paragraph says the allegations were unfounded, the university resisted pressure to fire him, and instead granted him tenure. I don't think that poisons the water at all.
Finally, please don't minimize the issue by calling it a "campus controversy". It was a very important issue throughout the academic world, and it garnered a lot of press outside of academia. — Malik Shabazz /Stalk 23:29, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

Your disagreement is noted. However Massad may be "best known" for the Columbia Unbecoming controversy only among the narrow segment for whom his views on certain narrow topics are an issue, but that is not why he is best known overall. Indeed there are specific groups that conduct public campaigns against him on these sorts of issues even when there is really no sustained, wider interest. So to argue that he is "best known" for this is extremely subjective and risks -- perhaps unintentionally -- serving the agendas of anti-Massad campaign groups. I am sure no one editing in good faith would want that. I would argue that Massad is best and most widely known for his academic work, books and publishing -- his scholarship which is cited in dozens of journals and books and referenced at numerous academic conferences in several fields. Since we should be cautious and conservative with BLP and given that the issue is discussed amply in the article, that is more than enough. --Tirpse77 (talk) 00:54, 23 February 2010 (UTC)

You are mistaken. Massad's academic work, however commendable, is known only to a very small percentage of the public; the campaigns against him, however nonsensical, are what he is best known for.
Also, please don't dismiss other people's opinions by saying that the only way to proceed in good faith is your way. That's a not-very-veiled attack, and a failure to assume good faith about others. — Malik Shabazz /Stalk 04:03, 23 February 2010 (UTC)

If unfounded allegations from years ago by a tiny number of people are to be included in the lede of BLP, that makes a nonsense of the idea of caution, conservatism, and respecting the rights of the person about whom we are writing. It does seem to serve narrow agendas, however. It is certainly not in the spirit of the new tighter standards for BLP. No one has explained why it is not adequate that the Columbia Unbecoming issue is discussed at length in the article. Without any rational explanation for why it should be in the lede -- when there are clear reasons for it not to be -- there is an eagerness negative information about Massad to appear upfront, which certainly undermines AGF and suggests POV. In any case, I have placed a request for assistance on the Administrator's noticeboard: http://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Administrators%27_noticeboard/Incidents#3RR_and_Insertion_of_inappropriate_POV_material_in_lede_of_BLP_Joseph_Massad --Tirpse77 (talk) 04:15, 23 February 2010 (UTC)

Please read WP:LEDE. The lede is supposed to summarize the content of the article.
Also, you still haven't explained what's negative about the paragraph in question. Please read my message above from 23:29 UTC. — Malik Shabazz /Stalk 04:32, 23 February 2010 (UTC)

The material being contested in the lede is 50% of the lede (666 characters of 1232 character lede). However, WP:LEDE states that "notable material should neither be suppressed nor allowed to overwhelm" The section about this controversy in the article amounts to about 10-15% of the total content of the article. For me, this imbalance is the definition of overwhelming. 166.128.236.232 (talk) 04:45, 23 February 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the Columbia controversy should not be given undue weight but it does deserve mention as it received pretty extensive media controversy and set up the whole showdown over Massad's tenure. Plot Spoiler (talk) 18:43, 23 February 2010 (UTC)

Update

Some more cleanup done. I have removed one quote I am dubious about. It's the Middle East Quarterly review of the Massad book. The MEQ is not really considered a scholarly journal, and I would prefer that we replace it with an equivalent review in a genuinely scholarly source. I would not object to it as a source on a specifically political issue - such as the intimidation controversy - but I would prefer we find non-politicised alternatives for the part of the bio that actually discusses his work. Relata refero (talk) 13:45, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

Restructuring in progress done

I've finished working on the sections on Massad's politics.

I've moved stuff around quite a bit - please comment. I've also done some trimming, removing a couple of redundant Massad quotes (either used twice, or essentially identical to quotes that remain), cutting down the extensive block quotes from Massad's "Imperial Mementos", and removing a long section on a misquotation in the Columbia Spectator. Since the paper itself quickly admitted error, I see no reason the misquotation and response are worth noting in the article.

Now I plan to move on to the books...

Kalkin (talk) 22:33, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

An excellent start. For the books, I'll look around as well. What we have to be careful about is avoiding reviews in sources that are essentially political fora. If possible, we should restrict ourselves to reviews from well-known peer-reviewed journals. It shouldn't be too difficult. Relata refero (talk) 22:44, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
I've reworked the books a little, but made few changes. I didn't really evaluate the quality of the reviews, I just tried to make the book sections more readable and ensure that an actual description of the contents of the book was the first long paragraph in each section.
I also added a very short section on Massad's education and career. A few minutes of Googling left me unable to turn up more information; I left an "expand-section" tag. I rewrote the article intro to better reflect the balance of topics in the article. I'm done, for now anyway.
Kalkin (talk) 23:29, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

I think the article is now in much better shape.

3 things:

1. The Al-Mheisen review of Colonial Effects has stood without a supporting citation for a very long time now. Unless someone can provide the citation, I propose deleting it. 2. How do we know if Massad is Christian - has he ever self-identified as such? 3. The articles report of the semantics of the Columbia report are a little strong. The committee simply found that Massad had exceeded normal bounds etc in this one disputed instance. He was never formally reprimanded.

Nhoad (talk) —Preceding comment was added at 15:21, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

Other Criticism section removed without discussion

This whole section was unfairly deleted without discussion. Boodlesthecat claims that a letter to the editor is not a WP:RS. It clearly is a reliable for conveying what the notable author of that letter feels about the subject of this article. Basically, a letter by Foxman reliably proves that Foxman criticizes Mossad.Besides, the letter is also posted as a page on the ADL website, which is also a reliable source. As to Boodlesthecat's claim that "anonymous unproven allegation fails Undue Weight," very briefly mentioning the student's criticism in a criticism section does not seem at all to be undue weight. Finally, no valid reason was given for the removal of the critique by CAMERA. If there are no comments here in a reasonable time period, I will reinsert the criticism section. Gni (talk) 04:00, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Please read the policies, particularly WP:BLP. Letters to the editor (this one apparently wasn't even published) are not reliable sources on Misplaced Pages, with some exceptions for letters to peer-reviewed journals. As to "anonymous unproven allegation fails Undue Weight," I think that is self explanatory; why do you think an anonymous student's complaint--unverified, unproven, anonymous--has any place in a biography? this is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid. as to the CAMERA criticism, someone else removed that, with the explanation that it was "CAMERA spamming"--which I entirely agree with. In fact, it seems what you largely do in your editing is find places to insert the not terribly reliable opinions of CAMERA into various articles, including this one. I believe it does amount to spamming. If you think CAMERA's opinions on Massad (or anything else) are notable,l find reliable sources where those opinions were published. Misplaced Pages is not a repository for every extreme viewpoint on the CAMERA website--particularly when it concern biographies of living people. Boodlesthecat (talk) 04:44, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Boodlesthecat, you seem to be ignoring the substantive points I've raised. First, the letter by the ADL is also used as a statement by the ADL on the ADL website. Regardless, after looking through WP:BLP and WP:RS, I can find nothing forbidding letters-to-the-editor by the head of a notable organization, let alone an assertion published on that organzation's website. Please relay what specifically on WP:BLP and WP:RS you are talking about. Nor can I find any specific policy stating that an allegation by an anonymous whistleblower quoted in a newspaper cannot be used. Finally, your views on CAMERA are well known. You don't like them. But it is absurd to suggest that they organization cannot be cited in Misplaced Pages articles. So basically, you are linking to various wikipedia guideline pages that don't support the assertions you are making. Unless there are any actual, specific guidelines barring this criticism section, it should be back up there. Gni (talk) 20:25, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

"Other criticism" is rightly removed. It is just a collection of dirt digging by various disgruntled persons. Nearly every notable person has enemies. We are not going to convert wikipedia into a paparazzi-style dirty laundry database. If there is a criticism, it must come from reputable persons, not from some nasty student. Mukadderat (talk) 20:45, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

I hadn't seen this discussion, but I removed the material since it clearly isn't NPOV. If there are points that can be added to previous sections, that's fine, or if another balanced section can be created, that's fine as well, but additional sections focused solely on criticism seem pretty clearly not to be consistent with neutrality. Mackan79 (talk) 02:59, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Anonymous unproven charges by a "student," self published attack websites and letters to the editor do not meet WP:BLP standards. Boodlesthecat (talk) 03:04, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
Charges published by mainstream newspapers, as well as by well known civil rights organizations clearly meet WPLBLP standards. Removal of well sourced material, on the other hand, is vandalism. Don't do it again. Canadian Monkey (talk) 03:45, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
Removing material that doesn't meet WP:BLP standards, as outlined above, is not vandalism. Additionally, you are being tendentious. Please refer to that link, where you will read:

Content disputes are not vandalism. Misplaced Pages defines vandalism very carefully to exclude good-faith contributions. Accusing other editors of vandalism is uncivil unless there is genuine vandalism, that is, a deliberate attempt to degrade the encyclopaedia, not a simple difference of opinion.

Additionally, solemn demands to "Don't do it again" are highly uncivil, particularly with regards to an article you have never been involved with. Please moderate your tone. Thanks! Boodlesthecat (talk) 04:07, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
The material you are removing is well sourced. It was published by mainstream newspapers, and on the web site of a well known civil rights organization. Removing it with the false claim that it is "poorly sourced" makes it hard to assume that you are interested in the quality of the encyclopedia. There is nothing uncivil in requesting that editors refrain form violating wikipedia policies - so, again, please don't do it. Canadian Monkey (talk) 04:22, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
Please assume good faith and not characterize other editors points as "false claims" and the other 2 or 3 personal attacks in your response above. Once again:
  • An anonymous charge, unverified and unproven published in a tabloid does not meet WP:BLP standards.
  • Attacks from a highly partisan advocacy group published solely on that groups website does not meet WP:BLP standards.
  • A letter to the editor, published on the ADL website (and NOT even in the newspaper it was sent to) does not meet WP:BLP standards. A published report from the ADL on Massad would be acceptable, not a soundbite. Boodlesthecat (talk) 04:29, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
I have made no personal attack against you. Making such false claims against editors is, in itself, a violation of WP:NPA. You are skating on very thin ice here, and I urge you to take more care with these uncivil accusations. As to your arguments: There is no difference whatsoever, in terms of WP:BLP standards, between an ADL report on the ADL website, and an ADL open letter. The NY Sun is a mainstream newspaper, and if it published the allegations, we can safely repeat them with no violation of BLP. Canadian Monkey (talk) 04:36, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
OK, I've had enough of your threatening tone "Dont do it again" "You're skating on thin ice" and your obnoxious insults ""False claims") ("hard to assume that you are interested in the quality of the encyclopedia"). Boodlesthecat (talk) 04:46, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Please stop making threats, Canadian Monkey. Instead, read Misplaced Pages's relevant policies: WP:BLP, WP:V, and WP:RS.

  • A letter to the editor, even one written by God, is not a reliable source for a biography. The only possible exception might be for a letter to a professional journal whose letters are peer-reviewed before publication.
  • Is there any indication that Massad's views concerning the massacre of the Israeli athletes in Munich is significant? You can't include every criticism that has ever been leveled against Massad, no matter how insignificant. See WP:Undue weight and WP:Coatrack.
  • CAMERA's criticism of Massad may be meaningful. Find some way to fit it into the article. There's absolutely no reason why an article (other than an attack article) should have a section titled "Other criticism".

If you continue your present course, including your threats, I will report you at WP:ANI. — Malik Shabazz (talk · contribs) 05:23, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

  • I sort of agree with Malik Shabazz. Letters to editors are not reliable sources, since anyone can do this (including yourself).Bless sins (talk) 06:36, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
    • I believe it depends, as we have used letters to the editor that were published in peer-reviewed medical journals in articles that relate to those medical issues, but here it seems that this letter was not subject to the same rigor and there us the further issue of WP:BLP to worry about, so the letter should be removed for now. Malik is correct as well in the sense that articles about living people need to be written with special care. That Massad has been the subject of criticism for his views is well-documented and notable; how it should be written needs to bo done with care. Personally, I do not believe that CAMERA should be ipso facto inadmissible; they make it their business to monitor those they disagree with, just as CAIR does. But CAMERA criticism needs to be sourced to CAMERA, and it should be brought in proportion to the standard coverage of Massad in the press, as per WP:NPOV#Undue weight. -- Avi (talk) 07:37, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
Mackan79 and Malik Shabaaz, there are countless articles on wikipedia on controversial individuals or organizations where "criticism" sections have long been accepted by the wikipedia community. Should this one be any different? Gni (talk) 21:58, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
Please read my comment more carefully. There is no question that this article should include meaningful criticism of Massad. But it shouldn't include every criticism of him that has ever been made, no matter how insignificant. If CAMERA's criticism is significant with respect to Massad's life-work, it should be included in connection with the description of Massad's scholarship and works. If the criticism is so out-of-place in the article that it needs a section of its own ("Other criticism"), it probably isn't meaningful to Massad's views (see WP:Undue weight and WP:Coatrack). — Malik Shabazz (talk · contribs) 23:22, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
Malik Shabazz, of course you are right that all insignificant criticisms need not be part of this article. But more than one editor here feels the criticisms are in fact meaningful, to borrow your term. And it doesn't appear that a separate criticism section in and of itself proves that the criticism is out-of-place. As mentioned above, numerous articles on Misplaced Pages have criticism sections, so clearly the consensus is that such discrete sections are useful in articles about controversial figures. Finally, the inclusion of this section would hardly make the article a coatrack, as an overwhelming majority of the article as it currently stands is devoted to summarizing the professor's works and ideas. Gni (talk) 19:35, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
My complaint is mostly that there is already quite a lot of controversy in the article that is discussed in context, as is appropriate. Adding an "other controversy" section to that is what I find problematic. I suppose it's somewhat one or the other: you could have an article on his views and then a section on criticism, or more ideally, you could do as in this article and discuss both together. But to add an additional criticism section to an article already filled with similar controversies seems like too much. I don't rule out that additional comments he made in the classroom, if well sourced, could be discussed in a section on controversy in the classroom, as we basically have. However, if that leaves some smaller things that don't fit the general structure, I think that's probably where a bio starts leaving things out (I'm sure other more prominent bios leave out much more). Mackan79 (talk) 20:13, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Criticism sections appear in many articles but (in my view at least) are non-ideal - criticism should be integrated with the rest of the article, not isolated as some sort of counter-balance to a generally positive discussion. As it stands, the article already has three sections that are basically criticism sections, with responses worked in and a best effort at a neutral tone - the "alleged classroom intimidation", obviously, and also the "anti-semitism" and the "views on israel, zionism, and the u.s" sections - the last of which is basically a quotefarm for all the most potentially controversial comments Massad has ever made. The article certainly does not need more criticism for balance. If there is more that is notable, it should go in, but given the current state of the article, we should be extra cautious about giving criticism undue weight, and we absolutely should not create a section for lumping together a list of every criticism too minor to deserve its own section or integration into one of the others. I'm ok with the CAMERA quote, or preferably something better, going into the section on Massad's views; included critics' responses to those views is fair enough. An "other criticism" section? No way. Kalkin (talk) 20:51, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

New Additions to Section "Desiring Arabs"

To be added to the section on "Desiring Arabs"

One of the book's central arguments is that "The categories gay and lesbian are not universal at all and can only be universalized by the epistemic, ethical, and political violence unleashed on the rest of the world by the very international human rights advocates whose aim is to defend the very people their intervention is creating."

This is a direct quotation from the book, and is the book's main argument. Why is it controversial to add this to the beginning of the section about the book? Technetium25 (talk) 18:11, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

Another critical review:

Desiring Arabs was also criticized by James Kirchick, a writer for the New Republic, who wrote that Massad "legitimizes, with a complex academic posture, the deservedly reviled views on homosexuality espoused by Mahmoud Ahmadinejad," and that Desiring Arabs "might just be the most pernicious book ever published by a respectable academic press." According to Kirchick, Massad argues that "the case for gay rights in the Middle East is an elaborate scheme hatched by activists in the West," and that "Massad's intellectual project is a not-so-tacit apology for the oppression of people who identify openly as homosexual."

This review is carefully cited from a reliable source, namely, The New Republic. And that's a very prominent source. There are glowing reviews about the book, so why not critical reviews from reliable and indeed very prominent sources? Technetium25 (talk) 18:11, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

This book has sparked an interesting debate and criticism which the article already gives a fair amount of space to. Kirchick is really addressing a broader criticism he has of "Queer Studies"; it would be best imo to weave his and the other 2 similar critiques together. Boodlesthecat 00:22, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Your statement that the article gives a fair amount of space is clearly a subjective statement. Kirchick also addresses "Queer Studies," but that does not detract from the fact that the main purpose of his article is that it's a review of Massad's book. It should be included somehow. If you can weave it together with the other reviews, then please do. Otherwise, I'm just going to add it. It makes very substantive criticisms both of Massad's book and of his larger thesis. Technetium25 (talk) 02:20, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
It's hardly subjective; it's there in the article. Boodlesthecat 02:37, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Right, but what's subjective is that there's enough space devoted already. I wouldn't agree. Who's to say if it's too much? We're talking about a couple of extra sentences here. When in doubt, and when we're not talking about adding extreme quantities of new information, I always think one should err on the side of more information, not less. And considering what we can agree is the rather extreme thesis of the book, I would say that displaying some points from a critical review from The New Republic is pretty fair. Like I said, if it can be weaved together with the other reviews, then so be it. But I'd like to add it nonetheless. It's informative. Technetium25 (talk) 14:09, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
I think it's a reliable source. However, to paraphrase Clint Eastwood, the question you want to ask yourself right now is "Am I only going to call out the scariest quotes from the review I can find?" Note that the quote from the review by Rayyan Al-Shawaf totally distorts the tenor of that review, which is far more balanced and nuanced than you would guess from the quote used. Boodlesthecat 18:45, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
I appreciate that you didn't react to the additions from the Al-Shawaf review by simply deleting them. Indeed, if you think that more quotations from the review would be helpful, then by all means, add them. Information is good. It helps people understand what's going on. Meanwhile, tomorrow I am going to add the piece from the New Republic review.
By the way, did it ever occur to you that maybe the reason why there are so many negative reviews of his book is because the book is simply ridiculous? See the thesis quotation above! There is no such thing as homosexuality? It's just a "Western", "social construct"? At what point does a claim simply become objectively wrong? If a book's thesis is ridiculous, then it is not the job of Misplaced Pages editors to try to balance that out by including equal numbers of positive and negative reviews. If the preponderance of reviews are negative, then that's an objective fact that should be reflected in the section about the book. It's asking a lot just to allot an approximately equal amount of space for positive and negative reviews in the first place, as we are now doing.
An example---suppose that some academic scholar published a book saying that there was no such thing as Jews. That all Jews were fakes, that the concept of Judaism is a recent invention of the 20th century, a lie, a Western invention with no basis in historical fact before the 20th century. One would certainly imagine a hugely negative response. Would we, as Misplaced Pages editors, be obligated to balance a section about such a book by providing several positive and several negative reviews, as we are now doing for the Massad book about gays? And I'm even allowing for that! Keep the several positive reviews. But don't tell me that the negative ones are too excessive. Please. Technetium25 (talk) 07:01, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
Actually, it's not really our job to add anything based on whether or not we think something is ridiculous or not, but based on what the reliable sources say. The New Republic piece should get a brief mention because its a reliable source, although it's not really a book review, but a political polemic that makes use of Massad's book (and Kirchick is hardly an impartial writer on Middle East issues. We should try to give primacy to peer criticism (see, eg, The Bell Curve of controversial material, rather than outraged pundits. I also think it misunderstands or misrepresents the book, and I think you are misunderstanding it as well. Nowhere does Massad deny the existence of homosexulity/same sex relations (far from it), but instead is discussing "categories gay and lesbian," as identities, as not being universal. For example, those who challenge the imposition of Macdonald's into a third world country aren't denying the existence of food. You would need to read the book, and probably Edward Said's "Orientalism" as well to get into this particular academic mindset. I actually think Massad is trying to navigate the slippery ground of finding a way through the anti-gay bigotry in a lot of the ME and resisting colonialism and imperialism as he sees it. Not an easy job; we know that "outside" attempts to promote equality for women in the region often run counter to indigenous efforts by women to navigate that terrain. And it's hard to argue with a main theme of the book--in Victorian days Arabs were demeaned for a supposed sexual perversity; now, the West attacks Arabs for the reverse, for being sexual prudes. To me, (soapbox), there's not a little bit of hypocrisy in this position coming from a country which has made plain it would rather have a civil war than allow two people of the same sex to marry each other! As to the analogy with a hypothetical author saying Judaism is "fake," of course that would be ridiculous, but I don't think it's a valid analogy, since Massad doesn't say homosexuals are fake. A perhaps stretched analogy would be an author (and there are more than a few) who says that Zionism is not a universal expression of Judaism. Boodlesthecat 15:24, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
First of all, I appreciate your excellent incorporation of the quotation into the section on his book. And I appreciate your taking the time to explain your views.
But I disagree when you question whether I understand Massad's book, or Said's work. I can assure you that I've read much of both works, including Orientalism. I've personally read many of Massad's papers, as well. And I am very familiar with the ideology behind them. And of the hideous academic newspeak that characterizes much of it, which seems to have as its essence the goal of obfuscating arguments, being as impenetrable as possible, and attacking the notion that there exist any objective facts whatsoever about the world. As people working on an encyclopedia, whose raison d'etre is the accumulation of knowledge and facts about the world, we should all be offended. But that's beside the point. I wouldn't add my opinions on this issue to an encyclopedia article about Massad. That's not our place. All we can do is report the facts.
So, just as you would appreciate it if I don't make assumptions about where you are coming from, or about what you know, please reciprocate.
No, I do not think Massad disputes the existence of same-sex acts. I never questioned that. What I question is his claim that there do not exist people who are, simply, gay. People who simply do not have an attraction to members of the opposite sex but almost completely to members of their own sex. This has become a demonstrable fact of nature. And to assert otherwise is simply ridiculous. Just because the West discovers something doesn't make that a mere social construct. Newton's gravity formula was discovered by the West, and if you dispute it's validity, then, as Hume famously put it, feel free to step outside my 21st-story window.


Kirchick's review attacks Massad's thesis. That's how you review a book centered on a particular thesis. Would you rather Kirchick have spent his time instead commenting on Massad's grammar, his tone, or his vocabulary? So I also dispute your charge that Kirchick's piece is just a polemic and not primarily a review of Massad's book. Technetium25 (talk) 18:29, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

<---Well then, Technetium25, we are probably akin to 2 blind editors trying to describe the elephant with respect to the book; we're seeing at from different vantage points. I have a particular abhorrence for gay-bashing of any sort, but I don't really see it with this book, although I don't particularly agree with much in it--I pretty much share the opinions of Al-Shawaf in the review cited (the book has good theoretic-historic analysis, but falls short on a practical level). I don't share Kirchick's hostility at all. In fact, I think the book will be (and already is) opening up discussion and debate about an issue that everybody has shoved under the table (honestly, do you picture a Republican OR Democratic US administration standing up for LGBT's in the Middle East? They won't even stand up, on a national level, for American LGBT's). I hope the debate gets heated enough to warrant it's own Wiki article--that would be progress! Boodlesthecat 20:22, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

You always surprise me. Just when I think that we're never going to agree about anything, we end up basically agreeing on quite a bit after all. I deeply despise gay-bashing, too, and I also hope that the larger discussion leads to a Wiki article. And I do agree that we seem to be seeing the book from different angles. But that's why it is necessary that there be multiple reviews listed in the entry, as we now have. There are three positive reviews of the book and three negative reviews listed. Before I made any changes, the only reviews mentioned in the article were glowingly positive, and surely you can acknowledge how biased that was. Thanks for helping me incorporate the additional material in a sensible way. Technetium25 (talk) 21:20, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
Book reviews in reliable sources are fine, as long as they at some point discuss the work. It's the "So and so is a mean old man" or the "So and so threatened to lock me in the university tower because I disagreed" kind of stuff that's problematic from a WP:BLP angle--even if the words might have appeared in a newspaper. Newspapers are full of people saying all kinds of things about other people. That doesn't mean it's encyclopedia worthy. Again, refer to The Bell Curve article--there's probably a million quotes in reliable sources where someone is calling the authors of that book rabid racist scalawags, but we resist the temptation. Boodlesthecat 21:48, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

The attempt to include negative reviews by journalists, some known and some unknown, to delegitimize Massad’s scholarship and to equate them with scholarly reviews is hardly a question of balance. First, Democartiya is a minor unknown neoconservative online journal that is hardly a major source on scholarship and Rayyan al-Shawaf has no qualifications whatsoever except as the unknown reviewer for this unknown publication), and morever, the review has been cherry-picked for negative criticisms. Second, Whitaker who attacked Massad in his own book and who Massad responds to in Desiring Arabs is hardly a scholarly source or an objective one. This review of the book focused only on the one chapter in the book that Massad had published before and ignored 400 pages of the book. Kirchick, a young Zionist acolyte, who in turn had not read the book but relied on Whitaker’s review is trudged in as another objective reviewer merely because he published his review in The New Republic and calls in his “review” for Massad to be denied tenure following the earlier call by New Republic editor Martin Peretz on Columbia to deny Massad tenure based on his anti-Israel views - hardly objective people or venues on the matter of Massad. Thirdly, regardless of the value of these journalistic reviews, it is further interesting that the politically motivated insertions of these reviews into the wikipedia entry on Massad did not show interest in quoting from other less politically motivated and arguably more serious newspapers which reviewed the book, namely The Financial Times and the Times Higher Education Supplement whose credibility surely is much greater than Whitaker’s own blog where his review appeared. Moreover a scholarly review in the influential Middle East Report by Harvard Professor Khaled El-Rouayheb is nowhere to be seen in this article. Also if the general media is going to be considered a reliable source in the discussion of scholarship, there is a recent review in the gay newpaper The Guide which had a huge spread on the book and an interview with Massad and positively reviewed the book by its own book editor Bill Andriette. Should this also be added? In the interest of not encumbering the entry on Desiring Arabs with all this politically motivated energy, the entry as it stands begins by saying that the book “received critical praise from academics and journalists.” I think this is sufficient - otherwise this article is going to revert to being a quote-farm (again) quite quickly. The journalistic section should be deleted unless all the other reviews are included. But to cite briefly the positive reviews given the book by the most qualified and credible academics and then dedicate more than half the entry to reviews by minor journalists in obscure blogs and internet magazines, and clearly politically motivated actors is hardly balance. I support deleting this section.Nhoad (talk) 15:22, 6 April 2008 (UTC)

Listen Nhoad, I don't know what you're background is or where you're coming from, but throwing around terms like "Zionist acolyte" like they're four-letter-words and saying that none of these people actually read Massad's book is tendentious at the least. I'll never describe Khaled El-Rouayheb as an "Arab apologist." That would be equally inappropriate, and probably an ignorant and gross exaggeration, just as your comment is. And, for the record, there are disputes about Massad's work from within academia---see for example criticism from other professors, like Dan Miron, from within his own department at Columbia. Somehow I doubt that such criticisms would survive long in this article, however.
And, by the way, claiming that reviews from other academics are inherently less biased than reviews outside academic is simple-minded and naïve. There's a lot of intellectual incest and backscratching that goes on in academia, as I'm sure you know, and hearing outside voices from mainstream people like, yes, The New Republic, is hardly an unacceptable thing. Sure, add more reviews if you like. But don't throw away reviews that you don't like, and make it look like Desiring Arabs only got a positive reception wherever it went. That's just dishonest.
The truth is that I'm getting pretty tired of all of this. If it weren't for me, this whole article would be simple and utter hagiography, and no one visiting it would have any clue as to why Massad is such a controversial character. If you think that my modifications and additions are simplistic and biased, then fine, but go find a better way to include critical and, yes, sometimes negative, reviews of Massad's work. But considering the history of this article, I seriously doubt that anybody else is willing to paint a balanced portrait of Massad, worts and all. Certainly not an editor for whom the word "Zionist" is thrown around like an indelible stain. Technetium25 (talk) 04:41, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
I think using "Zionist acolyte" as an epithet is both unproductive and offensive, but I also think Nhoad has a valid point. Let me put it another way: Surely there were some negative reviews of Desiring Arabs from heavy-weights, whether academics or others. I think the section needs to include valid criticism of the book, but citing popular newspapers and magazines seems frivolous. — Malik Shabazz (talk · contribs) 05:12, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
Thanks. I see your point. I agree with you that finding reviews from "heavier" sources would be better. Hopefully somebody who has access to some of these academic journals (which, unfortunately, usually aren't free to access) can do some looking. But I still think that there's value in displaying the reaction to the book from "the masses", at least its more prominent and mainstream representatives like a former editor for the Guardian's Middle East bureau and a chief writer at The New Republic. If people can find better stuff, positive or negative, please do add it! Technetium25 (talk) 13:48, 7 April 2008 (UTC)

Apologies for hastiness. I did not mean Zionism in any pejorative way. However, and I do not wish to poison the well here, both Martin Peretz and Kirchik have called in print for Massad to be denied tenure at Columbia - rendering them highly partisan- so I hardly think this makes The New Republic a place to find objective assessments of Massad's scholarly work. If I were to add quotes from all the other reviews, I would worry that the article would revert back to the quote farm it was earlier. Moreover I think this section is in danger of becoming a coatrack of sorts. I am not being tendentious when I raise the question of whether Whitaker and Kirchick have read the book. Look at their reviews - this is a +-500 page book. All they discuss is the one chapter that was published earlier in Public Culture - "Re-orienting Desire: The Gay Intermational and the Arab World" on the current state of homo/sexual politics. Nothing is said about the fact that the primary focus of the work is on two-hundred years of Arab intellectual production on questions of sex/sexuality - the excavation and analysis of this largely unkown in English set of works and debates from the nineteenth and twentieth centuries and Massad's analysis of it is what is seen as the major contribution of the book by every other reviewer. It appears that unless you are invested in keeping the controversy about Massad alive, that particular chapter is not that central to the book. The argument I am making here is mostly original research and I would not put it in the article. Nonetheless, I do think that the quote from Whitaker should be removed - it appeared on his blog, not in The Guardian and therefore does not pass muster as a reliable source. I think given the public statements on Massad's tenure case by Peretz and Kirchik, that review - whether or not Kirchick actually read the whole book - his review strongly suggests he did not - contravenes NPOV guidelines. If Dan Miron has published a review of Desiring Arabs in a peer-reviewed journal, I think a brief quote from it would be legitimate.Nhoad (talk) 15:59, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Since there have been no attempts to justify how Whitaker's blog constitutes a reliable source - so i will delete it. Nhoad (talk) 15:31, 5 May 2008 (UTC) Given Kirchik's public call to deny Massad tenure in the article cited, I think this contravenes NPOV and the reference also should be deleted. Nhoad (talk) 15:50, 5 May 2008 (UTC) Since no-one has objected to the claim that Kirchik's public call to deny Massad tenure contravenes NPOV for over a month now, I have deleted this section. I do not think a partisan on-line journal like Democratiya constitutes a reliable source. If anyone can find similar criticisms in a reliable source, I would be amenable to having the criticism section reinstated. Nhoad (talk) 14:55, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

I think I disagree with the removal of the New Republic review. The magazine, and Jamie Kirchick, are of sufficient notoriety that the review is notable, whether or not it is honest. Its honesty is not Misplaced Pages's to evaluate, in general. I'm ok with dropping the Democratiya review, which has a less notable source and an author who's not, apparently, notable enough to have a Misplaced Pages article. I'll wait for a response before I take any action to restore it, however. Kalkin (talk) 22:58, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

If there is a desire to reinstate the TNR review, I think it important it be contextualized in the light of the public statements of Peretz and Kirchik, and there have been many other reviews in the gay and mainstream press that also should be added then. See reviews in The Financial Times - http://www.ft.com/cms/s/0/d69aa534-4ed3-11dc-85e7-0000779fd2ac.html and The Guide - http://www.guidemag.com/magcontent/invokemagcontentarchive.cfm?GetMagArray=Article as well as others. Thanks. Nhoad (talk) 15:20, 18 June 2008 (UTC)

I have removed the Democratiya review again. I thought we had established that a non-peer reviewed online journal does not constitute a reliable source. Nhoad (talk) 18:44, 5 February 2009 (UTC) Someone has reinstated the Democratiya review with no discussion. I think this is threatening to turn into an edit war. An non-peer reviewed online journal does not constitute a reliable source. I am removing it again. I have no problem with someone adding a critical review from a reliable source, but Democratiya does not cut it.72.229.130.126 (talk) 19:01, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

Just curious, how do you know it is not peer-reviewed? -- Avi (talk) 19:23, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
As described here http://www.intute.ac.uk/socialsciences/cgi-bin/search.pl?term1=democratiya, with its international review board, it seems like it would be a reliable source. Can you bring evidence, other than personal opinion, that it is not? -- Avi (talk) 19:52, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
It seems to be used as a reference in articles published in International Sociology and Journal of Democracy, which further bolsters its claim as a WP:RS. I have restored it pending proof that it cannot be considered reliable. -- Avi (talk) 19:59, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

References

  1. Queer Theory

New Addition to Section "Views on Israel, Zionism, and the U.S."

To be added to the section "Views on Israel, Zionism, and the U.S."

At a panel discussion in New York City in February 2007, entitled "Challenging Israeli Apartheid," Massad was quoted by the Columbia Spectator as saying "The only thing threatening Jews is its commitment to Apartheid and its racist people."

This statement is directly relevant to Massad's views on Israel and Zionism, and is supported by a reliable source, namely, a contemporary report in the university's student newspaper. Why not include it just because it might seem harsh? We aren't doing hagiography here. He said these words, and this is the reason why there is so much interest in him in academic circles these days. Technetium25 (talk) 18:18, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

A. What does this add? The section has ample representation of his views on the matter.
B. Read the bottom of this little article, where it says "CORRECTION: The article also misquoted Massad as saying, "Does it threaten Jews? Absolutely not. ... The only thing threatening Jews is its commitment to apartheid and its racist people." Massad's original statement on this matter was phrased differently." Does this seem like a reliable source to you, with it's admitted problem of misquoting? Boodlesthecat 00:31, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Your second point is correct. I hadn't noticed the correction at the bottom of the article. Please disregard this addition. Technetium25 (talk) 14:12, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

References

  1. Napolitano, Taylor (2007). "Prof. Massad Criticizes Israel's Palestine Policy". Columbia Spectator. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |url= (help); Unknown parameter |month= ignored (help)

Changes to Section "Columbia Unbecoming"

I propose removing this passage from the section "Columbia Unbecoming"

In an editorial discussing the case one week after the release of the Committee report, the New York Times noted that while it believed Massad had been guilty of inappropriate behavior, it found the controversy overblown and professors such as Massad themselves victimized:

There is no evidence that anyone's grade suffered for challenging the pro-Palestinian views of any teacher or that any professors made anti-Semitic statements. The professors who were targeted have legitimate complaints themselves. Their classes were infiltrated by hecklers and surreptitious monitors, and they received hate mail and death threats.

Every other statement from a newspaper editorial has been removed from this article, in keeping with WP:RS. Just look at the rest of the talk page for countless examples! Yet this blatant editorial opinion from the New York Times remains. Why are only favorable editorials kept while unfavorable ones removed?

I'm all for removing all editorial opinions. After all, this is an encyclopedia article. But what's good for the goose is good for the gander. Technetium25 (talk) 18:22, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

Which deletions are you referring to? It's a lot easier to discuss changes if you can just give examples, rather than complaints; and it's also easier to assume you are proposing changes in good faith to further the quality of this encyclopedia entry if you don't give as a rationale "what's good for the goose is good for the gander." Other than that, it seems an opinion piece from "a high-quality news organization" such as the New York Times is fine per WP:RS, especially given that it's directly addressing the issue of the controversy that the producers of "Columbia Unbecoming" engendered themselves (and not being cited simply as an ad hominen negative or positive statement). So, (in perhaps a variation of geese and ganders), if an organization like the David Project is going to incite such a controversy, it seems quite fair and NPOV to include the opinion of a high-quality news organization on the matter. Boodlesthecat 00:10, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Do a search for the word "editorial" in this Talk page. There are so many examples I can't even begin to list them all. But I was directly challenged several times from mentioning editorials from several newspapers, like the NYSun, even when I was only citing them to point out the mere existence of critics of certain statements that Massad has made. So please explain to me why a pure editorial opinion from the NYTimes is more reliable than that of any other widely-circulated paper. I mean, the NYSun's editorial page has certain slants, but then again, so does the Times'. On what objective grounds do you consider the NYTimes editorial page "high quality"? You say that the NYTimes "seems" to be a "high quality" news organization. I might agree with you (and I do), but I also know a lot of people who would disagree. It sounds more like you just like the fact that the NYTimes happens to be giving a favorable review of the situation. Again, I propose deleting any editorial opinions from this article on Massad, good or bad. Technetium25 (talk) 02:12, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
With regards to your claiming that I "just like the fact that the NYTimes happens to be giving a favorable review of the situation," let me remind you of Misplaced Pages's guidelines of assuming good faith about other editors. For instance, although your edit history for the past three months seems to consist exclusively of adding negative information about Massad to this article, I am drawing no conclusions about your motivations. The admissibility of opinions from high-quality news organizations comes from WP:RS, not me. Check it out. As to a comparison of the NY Times and the NY Sun as high quality news organizations, I don't know what to tell you, although the fact that you "know a lot of people who would disagree" about the NY Times doesn't strike me as a persuasive argument against considering the Times to be a high quality news organization. Boodlesthecat 03:27, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
I'm quite sure that you're acting in good faith. I happen to know that you've stood up several times against people on Misplaced Pages who have espoused really horrible views, including people who were viciously anti-Semitic. And I deeply respect that. But in the present context, I think that there's no objective way to claim that the NYTimes editorial page is in any way higher quality than the editorial page of, say, the NYSun, except maybe to say that the NYTimes has a larger readership or a larger budget. So if we explicitly include an opinion from the NYTimes editorial page, I say that we add an opinion from another widely circulated NY-based newspaper editorial page that was following the controversy. It would be misleading to lead people to assume that the general consensus in New York, as expressed by typical editorial pages, basically came out on MEALAC's side in the controversy. Technetium25 (talk) 14:20, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Again, to me it seems common knowledge that the New York Times would fall into WP:RS's category of high-quality and the New York Sun, launched just six years ago by a group headed by a convicted criminal, is not. But more to the point, the Times in this instance is commenting on the Columbia controversy that Massad was embroiled in (in part, with the egging on of highly partisan sources such as the New York Sun). The editorial from the Sun you unsuccessfully tried to include earlier was being used inappropriately to state facts, not to provide commentary on a situation from a high quality news org. In any case, it seems like night and day difference to me, but if you want to pursue it, feel free to request comment. But i think we've covered this ground already. Boodlesthecat 14:35, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
"...to me it seems common knowledge that..." Come on! This is just your opinion again! And, while Conrad Black is obviously a jerk and a criminal, you know full well that he was not a convicted criminal when he started the paper. These post-hoc rationalizations are clearly logical fallacies. If Sulzberger were suddenly convicted of, I don't know, child molestation, would that nullify the NYTimes as a high-quality paper?
This is ridiculous. I agree that using a NYSun editorial for factual information may not be acceptable. But it's a NY newspaper that was covering the MEALAC controversy. So were the Daily News and others. So, if we're going to include the NYTimes editorial specifically for its views on this conflict, why can we not include similar statements from the editorials of other prominent local newspapers on the conflict, say, just below the NYTimes statement? Again, I don't propose going back and adding statements of fact from editorials. I'm saying that if we include a pure opinion from the NYTimes, then we should add just below it a contrasting opinion on the outcome of the committee's report from another prominent local newspaper. Or, we could just eliminate all editorials as sources and be done with it. There is no objective argument against this, and you full well know it. Technetium25 (talk) 06:47, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
Whoa. I just looked again at the NYTimes editorial, and the quotation pulled for the Misplaced Pages article totally warps the message of the editorial. The Times writes: "Sad to say, the school has botched the handling of this emotionally charged issue from the start, thereby allowing festering concerns to erupt into a full-scale boil." Then the editorial says:

botched this job, too, by appointing one member who had been the dissertation adviser for a professor who had drawn criticism and appointing three members who had expressed anti-Israel views that, critics allege, might incline them to soft-pedal complaints. It also limited the panel's mandate to include only some of the areas of complaint. People involved in the deliberations believe that the panel proceeded carefully and objectively in evaluating the evidence, but its composition ensured that the results would be greeted with skepticism.

Then they write: "And it has recognized that the Middle East studies department was out of control and, with the goal of strengthening its scholarship, has wrested away its power to appoint and promote faculty." They also say that Massad was "judged clearly guilty of inappropriate conduct." And then there's the conclusion:

But in the end, the report is deeply unsatisfactory because the panel's mandate was so limited. Most student complaints were not really about intimidation, but about allegations of stridently pro-Palestinian, anti-Israeli bias on the part of several professors. The panel had no mandate to examine the quality and fairness of teaching. That leaves the university to follow up on complaints about politicized courses and a lack of scholarly rigor as part of its effort to upgrade the department. One can only hope that Columbia will proceed with more determination and care than it has heretofore.

Now I must turn your earlier Clint Eastwood remark back to you, Boodles. Don't you think it's strange that the only quotation pulled from this long editorial was the one that made Massad look good, and totally altered the spirit of the larger editorial? Why, may I ask, have I been so heavily attacked for allegedly pulling quotations out of articles that make Massad look bad, but nobody else seems to have treated cases like this one in the same way? Technetium25 (talk) 21:37, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
yes, but we're focusing on Massad (the article subject), not the panel or the overall investigation. We include the Times noting the "inappropriate conduct", and their opinion about the findings re: the intimidation against Massad et al. The opinions about the limitations of the panel, as they see it, are peripheral (although it is covered earler in the section anyway). Boodlesthecat 22:00, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

This section is biased. We note the the committee found one allegation of abuse credible, but we omit evidence that 20 students say the same alleged instance of abuse never happend. Why not include all the evidence and let the public decide? Isn't inclusion of FACTS what this is all about? I will change unless I hear a good reason otherwise. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.160.238.226 (talk) 05:51, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

It's not omitted. If you read the entire section you'll see that that the info on the 20 students is included.ShamWow (talk) 15:13, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

References

  1. Editorial. Intimidation at ColumbiaThe New York Times. April 7, 2005.

New Additions and Changes

If there are no objections in a reasonable period of time, say, in a couple of days, then I will carry out the aforementioned changes. Technetium25 (talk) 18:24, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

Could you clarify the proposed changes - are you only suggesting removing content based on the NYT editorial? Should we remove the Village Voice mention at the same time? PhilKnight (talk) 21:54, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm not sure what Technetium is talking about either, but I'd like to register that I think both the NYT and the Village Voice references should stay. The judgments of relative non-partisans on the issue will probably be helpful to casual readers. I don't object to including newspaper editorials - as I recall, imperfectly I'm sure, the ones that were removed were removed because they were 1) from tabloids (the Sun & Post are simply less reliable than the Times & Voice) and 2) pretty plainly based on serious confusions. Kalkin (talk) 22:07, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Additions to Section "The Persistence of the Palestinian Question"

The only reviews listed for this book are glowingly positive. I think it's fairly safe to say that this presents a rather biased and inaccurate portrayal of the book's actual reception in the academic and historical community. I will collect critical reviews and add them to this section. Technetium25 (talk) 21:59, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

In particular, I remember reading a critical review that specifically addressed Massad's abundant use of the so-called "academic newspeak". For example, from Ch. 1 of Massad's book The Persistence of the Palestinian Question:

Whereas the genetic moment of every national interpellation secures the subsequent claims made by popular nationalism anchoring the political and popular concept of the nation, every retelling of the story of the nation becomes in fact a moment of sublation (incorporation and transcendence), wherein the newly constituted Jordanian identity sublates its predecessor in an interminable process, and whereby the new Jordanian identity is reinscribed as the one that had always already existed as it does today.

Technetium25 (talk) 22:26, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

OK. I am beginning to question Technetium's credibility. This is not a quote from "The Persistence of the Palestinian Question," but a quote from Massad's first book, "Colonial Effects." Under the ruse of balance, this editor seems to be willing to risk risible error in an attempt to discredit Massad. This is either bad faith or gross carelessness- neither of which are good for verifiable encyclopedic content. Nhoad (talk) 15:43, 6 April 2008 (UTC)

My incorrect attribution of this quotation, to which I admitted my uncertainty, was a mistake on my part. The talk page exists precisely for dealing with such uncertainty in a civilized way. Your direct attack on my credibility and your claim that I'm just trying to "discredit" Massad displays quite clearly your own biases on the subject. Personally, I like the quotation precisely because it is Massad's writing in the flesh so to speak, not filtered through a reviewer or anything else. I think any visitor to this Misplaced Pages article would be fascinated to see a small sample of Massad's actual academic writing. What could be more informative? Technetium25 (talk) 04:48, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
Nhoad, please read Misplaced Pages's policies concerning civility and personal attacks and its guideline concerning assuming good faith. Editors who engage in personal attacks may be blocked. — Malik Shabazz (talk · contribs) 05:21, 7 April 2008 (UTC)

I do not wish to be personal here, but Technetium, where in your first posting do you admit uncertainty concerning the source of the quote? Secondly what do you mean by the so-called "academic newspeak." The sentences you cite - while academic - are not new or news. They are simply an application of Hegel's dialectic, particularly his idea of "aufhebung" - usually translated into English as "sublation" or "supercession" to a theory of postcolonial nationalism. I am interested to know why you think one of the places where Massad is most philosophically rigorous is necessarily representative of his work?Nhoad (talk) 16:10, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

My uncertainty was implicit in my statement that I remembered reading this review somewhere, but didn't remember where or remember any further details about it. I was hoping somebody else had seen it and could remind me where to find it. As to my use of the term "academic newspeak", I am referring to the interesting phenomenon, admittedly a subjective observation on the part of its critics, wherein scholars in disciplines like history, languages, and culture (like Prof. Massad, a member of the Middle Eastern Languages and Culture department at Columbia) have introduced esoteric and extremely obtuse language into their work, some of which is borrowed from the most impenetrable recesses of disciplines like philosophy, like Hegel's work. (Can you really dispute my contention that Hegel's is one of the more inscrutable frameworks in philosophy?) Mere mortals like myself assume that historians and scholars of culture are focussed primarily on the accumulation of facts, the application of analysis to those facts, the comparison to the present day, and rough predictions about the future. Indeed, most do just this sort of thing. But it is always fascinating to see the work of professors who take a different approach. That's my point. And I think people would benefit from seeing it in Massad's work for themselves. This is revealing look into how Massad studies history and culture. By the way, I love seeing the words "philosophical" and "rigorous" appear in the same sentence. Warms my heart. And I say that as someone who happens to love philosophy. Technetium25 (talk) 02:33, 13 April 2008 (UTC)

Archiving

I have archived all discussions with no comments more recent than January 2008 into /Archive 1. This was a little bit tricky because a few old discussions had been commented on (stopping this was one of the reasons I wanted to archive), and I had to cut and paste around them. Let me know if I appear to have screwed anything up. Kalkin (talk) 22:36, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Thanks, everyone!

I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who contributed to the rewrite. I'd come to this page earlier this year looking for information about Massad's books and wasn't able to get any clear idea of his positions from it. At that time, the article just seemed like a lot of alternating praise and criticism bandied back and forth, but no real discussion of his work. Didn't edit it then because I didn't know enough about his scholarship, or the controversy in general, to contribute reliably. But this page is so much clearer now, and seems more balanced despite becoming shorter, while still including different sides of the controversy. As far as I can tell, the current article is a great example of being as NPOV as possible in contentious circumstances. So thanks, Wikifolks! (P.S. This is in response to the Jun 13 version of the page.) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.244.2.156 (talk) 18:12, 13 June 2008 (UTC)

Many of the excised sections have ended up on the new Wikiquote page. Where can I find the relevant policies for wikiquote? Thanks. Nhoad (talk) 15:23, 18 June 2008 (UTC)

Libel suit

settling a libel suit by agreeing to pay damages and and issue a formal statement that an academic article contained false material is pretty significant. something this serious belongs on this man's page.Elan26 (talk) 12:31, 13 July 2008 (UTC)Elan26

It's very serious, but did Massad settle the suit? Was he a party to the suit? From what you've written, it seems like he was a third party. Sorry, but that makes the information irrelevant to his biography. See WP:COATRACK. — Malik Shabazz (talk · contribs) 16:02, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
You've got to be joking. Massad wrote a review of an important pro-Palestinian artist that was so libelous, with its allegations of plagiarism, that it got his journal sued; when his journal decided to settle, Massad called them "cowards." That's not relevant to his biography? He was merely a "third party" to all this? You're kidding, right? The whole case was about him! These people were all suing over his work! You are setting up a logical fallacy by defining away anybody who isn't the plaintiff or the defendant as merely a "third party"; the subject, in this case, Massad, is just as important and central! This isn't an "innocent bystander" we're talking about! And you don't think that this information is informative about the human being Joseph Massad, and is relevant to the biography of an academic? I'm reinstating the change.Technetium25 (talk) 18:00, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Reducing "Works" Section

Misplaced Pages is not a compendium of an academic's published work. This section needs to be shortened. In my view, the books should of course be kept, as well as only a minimal number of articles and book reviews to show the sort of work he has done. Thoughts? ShamWow (talk) 14:12, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

If somebody doesn't reduce Massad's work section, I will. I prefer somebody that is familiar with his works does so. Misplaced Pages is not a compendium of an author's works. Please help.ShamWow (talk) 17:56, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

section for tenure

According to the New york Post Massad has received his tenure earlier this month. I was surprised that there is no section about the controversy about giving him tenure (began in late 2004 ).

I don't want start an edit war, but i'm thinking about adding a brief (few sentences) section about this. what do u think? --Histolo2 (talk) 12:34, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. Adding something with regards to the controversy is necessary. It doesn't have to be a coatrack but the entire controversy is quite notable. ShamWow (talk) 13:21, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Christian

I am removing the reference to Massad being "Christian" because no one has provided any RS for this claim. Before anyone puts it back, please explain the factual basis for this claim and provide an RS. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.239.180.183 (talk) 20:51, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

"Truths, facts and facts on the ground"

...Massad's recent opinion piece in Al Jazeera here may be useful. Sean.hoyland - talk 18:40, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Modern genetic studies

I believe that there should be a link to the article genetic studies on Jews under the part where Massad claims modern Jews have no links to the ancient Hebrews, because these studies are more modern (and thus, not "European antisemitic constructions") and prove that European Jews do actually have origins in, and derive much of their ancestry from, the Fertile Crescent. His argument that they all look like Europeans is flawed, because there are many who look like Middle Easterners as well.69.248.98.23 (talk) 15:24, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Has a reliable source made the connection between the genetic studies in question and Massad? If not, adding them to this article is considered impermissible original research. — Malik Shabazz /Stalk 03:23, 15 October 2012 (UTC)

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Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 28 November 2023

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Joseph Massad praised the October 7th Hamas terror attacks in Israel as "jubilant" and "awesome" in an article published on electronicintifada.net. He is an antisemite who uses the legitimacy of his academic post to disseminate Jew-hatred. 71.255.70.84 (talk) 07:31, 28 November 2023 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. M.Bitton (talk) 23:26, 30 November 2023 (UTC)

On Israel and Zionism Section: Add link to genetic studies of Jews page

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Add a link to https://en.wikipedia.org/Genetic_studies_of_Jews to the existing section, "On Israel and Zionism", paragraph 2, somewhere within "Massad has spoken of genetic links being established between 19th-century European Jews" to add context to the discussion cited.

To Massad has spoken of genetic links being established between 19th-century European Jews

 Done It baffles me that this request has remained open for so long. * Pppery * it has begun... 22:01, 21 May 2024 (UTC)

Joseph Massad called the October 7 attacks on Israel "awesome" and "astounding"

One of the reasons there was a petition calling for Massad's removal was the fact that he praised the October 7 terror attacks on Israel as "awesome", "astounding" and "incredible" and that they were a "stunning victory." This should be added to this wikipedia.. Apndrew (talk) 13:17, 19 June 2024 (UTC)

I agree. Will be done. Vegan416 (talk) 14:30, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

References

  1. https://www.businessinsider.com/columbia-professor-faces-removal-petition-after-pro-hamas-attack-article-2023-10
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