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| ==My shutzhund== | |||
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| We were the proud owners of Shandlebourg Harko (KIM)to us, the British N.E Schutzhund club's very 1st Schutzhund 111 dog. | |||
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| We went into this sport completely green, Kim was bought as a pet and all his life gave us a lot of love, he loved a cuddle and gave us his all, with the expertise help and hard work of helper Ian Lynch and advice from Michael Naisbit,( neither had Qualified a schutzhund 111 dog theirselves ) who had watched Schutzhund and helped bring it over to Britain we qualified Kim Schutzhund 111 at the very early age of 2 years old. We entered Kim in trials all over the country and had a great time, he gave us a lot of pleasure all his life. H e Qualified to compete in the National Championships 3 times and tried very hard but alas we noticed something not right, it took a while but found he had a slipped disc, he was only seven years old yet he had still competed, he was so brave. | |||
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| We took him to the best we knew, Mr Ness at Blyth who operated on him, the operation went well and all seemed ok but, not wanting to take chances decided to retire him from trials, later we were glad we did as another disc went 18 month later at the age of 8yrs, this time the news was bad, Mr Ness couldnt operate, it would have needed two plates and would have greatly weakened his spine which would probably have snapped so we took him home, gave him all the medication available to make sure he was not in any pain and keep his muscles supple loved and spoiled him for a few more precious months but the time came in October 2002 when the paralasys got to a point when Kim needed help so we very sadly had him put to sleep. We will always love him and we miss him so much, always his man and dad, Sandra and Brian. | |||
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| : Strangely, Malcolm Ness was the consultant on my ], when he was suspected of having hip dysplasia. But he didn't, at least, not major enough to worry over. He's indeed very good at what he does. Sorry to hear the sad story. ] 12:28, Jul 27, 2004 (UTC) | |||
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| ==American vs. other lines== | |||
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| If the American and international breeds differ, can we have a picture of both and the key differences? ] 12:28, Jul 27, 2004 (UTC) | |||
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| :The internation working lines have been bred more for performance at Schutzhund and tending style herding than for looks. Since the founding stock was herding dogs, it is not surprising that the working lines more closely resemble the original founding stock. Working dogs have a wider range of coat colors (sable, black and tan, bi-color, black), a more level back, a steeper croup and upper arm, among other differences. | |||
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| :The international show lines were basically indentical to the working lines up to around 1970. Perhaps the last great show/working dogs were Bodo and Bernd vom Lierberg (1967). It is not clear to me why the split occured, but it is easy to see from looking at the pictures from the time. The split accelerated rapidly in the early 1990's when the Martin brothers gained control of the SV. They pushed a "banana backed" carrot colored dog that is still prevalent in the international show ring. The working lines tried to resist the trend, but since they share the same gene pool, you can see some show characteristics in the modern working lines. There has been a slight retreat from the extremes advocated by the Martin brothers, but it is still easy to recognize an international show lines dog by the color and arched back. The left most column of pictures is show males, the middle column show females, and the right column working dogs (probably all males). | |||
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| :The American/Canadian show dog was largely identical to the international dogs up until the mid 1960's. Although the American breeders did not emphasize Schutzhund, there was a lot of traffic between Germany and North American that maintained the working characteristics of the American show dog. Lance of Fran Jo (1969) was possibly the start of the split between America and the rest of the world. Compared to other dogs of the time he had extreme angulation of the hock (rear ankle joint) and supposedly a beautiful flying trot. Well, if a little is good, a whole lot more must be better. American breeders began to push for more and more extreme angulation, almost to the exclusion of all other traits. American show lines are easily recognized by their extremely angulated, almost collapsed rear end and swan neck. Seen head on they appear very narrow compared to the broader international dogs. Scroll down to the Grand Victor and Grand Victorix. These are the ideal GSD acording to the US show establishment. | |||
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| == Variants == | |||
| :I haven't touched on the temperament and health. American show lines have been a victim of puppy mills and can be spooky and fear aggressive. International show lines probably make the best pets temperament wise although occasionally you will come across a fearful one. They are less active than working lines. Working lines are not good pets for most people. They must be trained to do a job or they will invent one of their own. A bored German Shepherd is a destructive German Shepherd. Some working lines dogs can be very hard (resistent to corrections), independent, and agressive, but most are very even tempered. Unfortunately the health of all lines is suspect. | |||
| Why is the variant section included in this? We don't list crossbreeds and offshoots in other articles. Examples: the crossbreed ] is not mentioned in ] or ] (except in passing in the "see also" segment of poodle), nor is the breed ] included in ]. I do not own a copy of Hancock's book, but I'm really surprised by this. The ] is a Russian breed whose foundational stock was German Shepherds 100 years ago.<ref>{{Cite book |last=Morris |first=Desmond |title=Dogs: the ultimate dictionary of over 1,000 dog breeds. |publisher=Trafalgar Square Publishing |year=2001 |isbn=1-57076-219-8 |location=North Pomfret, VT |pages=446–447}}</ref> King Shepherds and Shiloh Shepherds are notably crossbreeds, although the Shiloh Shepherd is now establishing as a new breed/breed in development.<ref>{{Cite web |title=How is a Shiloh different from a German or King shepherd? |url=https://www.shiloh-shepherd.com/pages/howdifferent.html |access-date=2023-11-23 |website=www.shiloh-shepherd.com}}</ref> And White shepherds and White Swiss Shepherds have their own page. ] (]) 16:49, 23 November 2023 (UTC) ] (]) 16:49, 23 November 2023 (UTC) | |||
| :There are other lines as well. Due to the isolation brought about by the rabies quarantine, the UK developed a very deep chested show dog that is still referred to as an "Alsatian" by some to distinguish it from the international lines. America has developed some oversized lines, the Shilo and King shepherds, and some breeders are breeding all white dogs. | |||
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| :See for more pictures and information. This site is an advocate for the working lines. ] 04:28, Sep 28, 2004 (UTC) | |||
| ::I think it could be interesting to mention the different international lines. Here in northern Europe the American line (with collapsed hindlegs) is considered an animal welfare issue and is very very unusual. I have heard some vetrinarians don't even treat these dogs, partly not to support the ownership, partly to avoid the dangers of unpredictable behaviour. ] 05:48, 22 Oct 2004 (UTC) | |||
| :::If by this you mean things like the differences between German (international) lines and DDR or Chech or French lines, then we are getting very specialized. Due to the Iron Curtain, the Eastern block dogs were isolated for forty years and there are some differences. Eastern block show dogs remained much closer to their working cousins. Eastern block working dogs were not much influenced by the Western (international) show lines. Eastern dogs, working and show, tend to be blockier, smaller and perhaps more hard and aggressive than their Western counterparts. French dogs were largely bred for Ring Sport more than Schutzhund and tend to be lighter and more athletic. Herding lines dogs (HGH) have also changed over the years. It used to be they were strongly attracted to sheep and were strong independent workers. Because there is much less need for actual herding dogs and because of the way HGH trails are judged, the dogs have lost some of their independend working ability. This is all broad generalization and individuals in each line vary considerably. As you divide the breed into smaller groups it becomes harder to distinguish them. They are all still German Shepherd Dogs, well except for American show lines which really should be considered as separate breed IMHO. ] 00:23, 23 Oct 2004 (UTC) | |||
| == Pituitary dwarfism == | |||
| The URL for "realgsd" (See above "for more pictures and informaton") has changed to: http://realgsd.ca | |||
| I am the owner of that web site and hereby give permission to use any of my graphics and articles here in Misplaced Pages. I would like to become a contributor here, but have yet to find out how to ad pictures. --] 17:27, 7 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| @] the section I wrote did get a bit large but I figured it wasn't undue given the other section being 50% larger and most of that section being generic dog specific health. I have looked at it and there's some information that isn't needed such as the Weimaraner sentence and reducing some content like the stuff on genes. I did quite a detailed description as there's no page for the article to link to for further reading. | |||
| ==Ace the bat hound and bizhat== | |||
| I've got two solutions: first is to slightly reduce some content as I identified. The second would be to significantly reduce the content and create an article for the condition. I believe it meets notability but I am not completely sure. Some non-medical sources for notability include a book <ref>{{cite book | last=Walker | first=Joan Hustace | title=Everything German Shepherd Book | publisher=Simon and Schuster | date=2011-12-15 | isbn=978-1-60550-920-4 | page=62}}</ref> and some news articles on dwarf German Shepherds | |||
| I'd like to hear your thoughts. ] (]) 02:55, 27 March 2024 (UTC) ] (]) 02:55, 27 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
| I have reverted the addition of a link to http://germanshepherd.bizhat.com . The link doesn't add much information about the dog and some of the information on that page might be copyrighted. It's far better to link to more official resources when it comes to breed standards and such. ] 18:07, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC) | |||
| :I must apologise, {{u|Traumnovelle}}, I had forgotten that User:Sacristy is also you. I have no special expertise in this area, nor any clear idea how significant this topic is to this breed (compared to, say, the high incidence of ] brought about by generations of misguided selective breeding for a stance that makes the unfortunate animals look deformed). Just my 2 eurocents: this is TMI for this page, where there should probably be no more than a brief mention and a blue link. Not sure that a stand-alone article is needed: at the moment ] redirects to ], not sure if that or ] is the better target, but in either case it should be straightforward to start a new section for animals. Or add it to the ]? I wouldn't worry about non-medical sources myself – the scientific material should be sufficient. Regards, ] (]) 13:59, 27 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
| ::It's not a common condition but I'd say the public interest in dwarf German Shepherds as a 'cute' thing and the fact the mutation originated in the breed with all other cases being from breeds with German Shepherd lineage makes it relevant/notable to the breed. I've reduced the paragraphs to three and the word count is more than halved now. ] (]) 17:17, 27 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
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| I removed Ace the Bathound and the link to http://germanshepherd.bizhat.com again. Ace the Bathound is linked in the list of fictional dogs. As noted below http://germanshepherd.bizhat.com doesn't add much. This is the second time each of these links has been added and removed. I'm not an experienced Wikipedian so I don't know how do deal with such revision wars, but if these edits reappear, we probably should do something. ] 19:46, 14 Nov 2004 (UTC) | |||
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| ==Re: Ace, The Bat-Hound;== | |||
| Ace, the Bat-Hound is an important Chapter of GSD lore. If he doesn't get a seperate link on the GSD page, Ace's page probably should have one. | |||
| Michael Reiter. | |||
| :I doubt that most people except fans of older Batman comics (and I'm one) would even recognize the reference. I'd say that Ace is far less important than, say, ], and at the moment even RTT doesn't have a link here. So we should either go ahead & duplicate all fictional & famous GSDs here with appropriate headings (meaning we'll have to maintain the lists here & on the main list pages) or we shdn't be listing just one. ] | ] 19:56, 18 Nov 2004 (UTC) | |||
| ==Re: Re: Ace, The Bat-Hound-"I'd say that Ace is far less important than, say, ]-"== | |||
| I have to disagree. Ace is a treasured part of the silver age Batman mythos, and a treasured part of the vast, rich legacy of the GSD. | |||
| He deserves his own link because he has his own page. I didn't write it, and I don't know who did. Incidentally, all GSDs are heirs apparents to a vast, rich legacy of loyalty and bravery that they and their fictional counterparts are heir to. | |||
| I hope to see a page or pages on Both Littlest Hoboes, and Rex the Wonder Dog, if there aren't any already... | |||
| Michael Reiter | |||
| *No, I don't consider it important information about the breed. List of fictional dogs is just for that, and link to the list as well as perhaps a comment that GSD are often found in fiction is more than enough. Ace is not very well known outside a small group of fans. No need to weight down the article with pointless links. ] 13:47, 20 Nov 2004 (UTC) | |||
| == White GSDs == | |||
| ''Moved section from article to ]; moved this Talk section to ]; haven't done any merging or editing, though. ] | ] 21:48, 21 Jun 2005 (UTC)'' | |||
| == East German Shepherd Dog Breed == | |||
| I can't find any evidence of an effort to create an East German Shepherd Dog breed. I know several people who are very involved with DDR dogs and they have never heard of such. The statement to that effect needs backing references. | |||
| I agree that there is a DDR line of dogs, but from what I have seen that line is being rapidly integrated into the international lines. There are a lot of people, myself included, that like the DDR dogs. It is hard to find a dog bred entirely from DDR stock. It is easy to find a working dog with a lot of DDR dogs behind him/her. There are also other important lines such as the Chech lines. A discussion of DDR dogs is worthwhile, but only as part of a broader discussion of the other Eastern block dogs and their impact on the breed as a whole. | |||
| :Cool. Can you write up such a thing, or modify the recent post to be broader spectrum? I don't know anything about it myself. ] | ] 17:45, 24 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::I'll give it a try but I'm pretty sure someone will have to edit it for POV. ] 13:11, 26 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| The former DDR's registry was officially taken over by the SV after the fall of the iron curtain, thus the "DDR" GSD can never be a seperate breed. Also, there used to be a lot more show breeding going on in the former DDR then is known in North America. --] 17:25, 7 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| == Giant Shepherds, etc., etc. == | |||
| It seems that this article has become a method for adding credibility to fringe breed lines not generaly recognized by the dog world, and in the case of the "Shiloh Shepherd", what seems to be an outright advertisement by a specific breeder. | |||
| Anyone can breed dogs that lie outside of the accepted standards, and there are plenty of organizations that cater to those breeders by recognizing oddball breeds. So I suggest that we limit the discussion to the GSD and the breed lines which are widely recognized. The discussion on working dogs vs show dogs, for example, is very relevant to those interested in the breed; but "oversized" doesn't seem worthy of inclusion, unless the discussion centers around the substantial health problems associated with those dogs. | |||
| Similarly, I would argue against giving white and long-haired shepherds separate headings, since they are both considered faults within the breed - unless the discussion centers around that context. The argument for a DDR heading is just weak. | |||
| Finally, the statement that the white haired shepherd has always existed is just wrong. The white fur is a recessive trait, and these dogs were specifically bred for their coat color. The resulting temperment problems are well known and discussed. Again, this is an attempt to give credibility to an otherwise discredited breed line. | |||
| :We've had various discussions over the last year and a half in various places (most likely the dog breeds project pages and ] archives) about "what makes a breed a breed". What it boiled down to is that, if people are likely to be looking in an encyclopedia for a reasonably legitimate breed name, there ought to be a description of it. For example, cockapoos aren't recognized by any breed registry, but the name has been used for so long by so many people that it has some legitimacy as a name that many people are likely to want to know more about; "semidachshund", which is what i use for my own mixed breed, is entirely contrived and individual and has no place here. So the next decision is what is "reasonably legitimate". I, for one, check my various dog books and go Web searching whenever a new breed appears somewhere in Misplaced Pages. If it looks as if there are multiple breeders using the name, breed clubs that promote the breed, and so on, it seems reasonable to include the breed here. If one wants to know what the AKC or the FCI has recognized, they can go to their web sites to find out more. ] | ] 28 June 2005 20:51 (UTC) | |||
| ::Sure, and maybe I'm a little harsh on the Shiloh crowd. BUT, I would argue there needs to be some editorial input as to how these unrecognized lines are presented. For example, I think it's entirely appropriate to add a heading called "Variations" or something similar, under which are descripions of or links to the breed lines that are not recognized as part of the GSD standard. That way, maybe we can list the breed lines without getting caught in dog-world politics. After all, this is an article on the GSD, not "dogs that look like a GSD", or "dogs that were developed from the GSD". See my point? On the other hand, if there is a real debate whether particlular lines meet the standard, then a description of the debate under a separate heading is appropriate, such as the one we have for show vs. working lines. | |||
| :Got it. I agree. I moved to a new Variants section under Miscellaneous. See whether that covers your objections. ] | ] 29 June 2005 22:16 (UTC) | |||
| ==Bum's Rush?== | |||
| Why is the cat putting the bum's rush on the dog in that picture? What does that even mean? ] 15:11, 29 July 2005 (UTC) | |||
| : Getting "The Bum's Rush" is slang for being kicked out of a place, usually violently (onto your bum). This is most often used in the context of a resturant or bar. And that cat is clearly trying to get that german shepherd dog to leave! I think this could be an amercianism. ] 18:01, 29 July 2005 (UTC) | |||
| == Hey, Trysha! == | |||
| Hello, Trysha. This is ] 20:15, 29 July 2005 (UTC). "Getting the Bum's Rush", is found on both sides of the 49<sup>th</sup> parallel. That is essentially what is happening in the picture, with the Korat Cat repelling the friendly advances of the German Shepherd Dog. | |||
| Write me back sometime! | |||
| ] 20:15, 29 July 2005 (UTC) | |||
| =="German Shepherd"== | |||
| ''Moved from top'' | |||
| I contributed this text and it was removed: | |||
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| Note that the correct name for these animals is '''German Shepherd Dog''', | |||
| which is a translation from German wprd "Deutscheschäferhund." Referring to | |||
| them as "German Shepherds" is incorrect, albeit common. | |||
| </pre> | |||
| I find many references (including on the Misplaced Pages) to "German Shepherd" as opposed to "German Shepherd Dog," which is the correct translation. Reading some of the pages, you'd think lots of people owned German lamb-tenders ;) I think there should be a mention of this incorrect usage on the page...what do you all think? -Drew | |||
| :Your text (or something similar) is still in the article. It is now in the Miscellaneous section. ] 17:33, 15 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
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Variants
Why is the variant section included in this? We don't list crossbreeds and offshoots in other articles. Examples: the crossbreed Labradoodle is not mentioned in Labrador Retriever or Poodle (except in passing in the "see also" segment of poodle), nor is the breed Alaskan Klee Kai included in Alaskan husky. I do not own a copy of Hancock's book, but I'm really surprised by this. The East European Shepherd is a Russian breed whose foundational stock was German Shepherds 100 years ago. King Shepherds and Shiloh Shepherds are notably crossbreeds, although the Shiloh Shepherd is now establishing as a new breed/breed in development. And White shepherds and White Swiss Shepherds have their own page. Annwfwn (talk) 16:49, 23 November 2023 (UTC) Annwfwn (talk) 16:49, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
References
- Morris, Desmond (2001). Dogs: the ultimate dictionary of over 1,000 dog breeds. North Pomfret, VT: Trafalgar Square Publishing. pp. 446–447. ISBN 1-57076-219-8.
- "How is a Shiloh different from a German or King shepherd?". www.shiloh-shepherd.com. Retrieved 2023-11-23.
Pituitary dwarfism
@Justlettersandnumbers the section I wrote did get a bit large but I figured it wasn't undue given the other section being 50% larger and most of that section being generic dog specific health. I have looked at it and there's some information that isn't needed such as the Weimaraner sentence and reducing some content like the stuff on genes. I did quite a detailed description as there's no page for the article to link to for further reading. I've got two solutions: first is to slightly reduce some content as I identified. The second would be to significantly reduce the content and create an article for the condition. I believe it meets notability but I am not completely sure. Some non-medical sources for notability include a book and some news articles on dwarf German Shepherds
I'd like to hear your thoughts. Traumnovelle (talk) 02:55, 27 March 2024 (UTC) Traumnovelle (talk) 02:55, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- I must apologise, Traumnovelle, I had forgotten that User:Sacristy is also you. I have no special expertise in this area, nor any clear idea how significant this topic is to this breed (compared to, say, the high incidence of dysplasia of the hip brought about by generations of misguided selective breeding for a stance that makes the unfortunate animals look deformed). Just my 2 eurocents: this is TMI for this page, where there should probably be no more than a brief mention and a blue link. Not sure that a stand-alone article is needed: at the moment Pituitary dwarfism redirects to Growth hormone deficiency, not sure if that or Hypopituitarism is the better target, but in either case it should be straightforward to start a new section for animals. Or add it to the list of dog diseases? I wouldn't worry about non-medical sources myself – the scientific material should be sufficient. Regards, Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 13:59, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- It's not a common condition but I'd say the public interest in dwarf German Shepherds as a 'cute' thing and the fact the mutation originated in the breed with all other cases being from breeds with German Shepherd lineage makes it relevant/notable to the breed. I've reduced the paragraphs to three and the word count is more than halved now. Traumnovelle (talk) 17:17, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
References
- Walker, Joan Hustace (2011-12-15). Everything German Shepherd Book. Simon and Schuster. p. 62. ISBN 978-1-60550-920-4.
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