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==Clothing== | ||
PW, I'm familiar with your argument that tight clothing triggers DCS symptoms. The idea was presented by Maclean and Meyer well before Da Costa's paper. However, I invite you to consider this: | |||
Remade the article - No copyright material this time. | |||
:"Jacob Da Costa (1833–1900), who had studied the phenomenon during the American Civil War (Wooley 1982), concluded that there was no clear-cut cause, though his analysis of 200 cases (selection criteria were not stated) showed that 38.5% had been subject to ‘hard field service and excessive marching’, and a further 30.5% had previously suffered from diarrhoea (Da Costa 1871, p. 37; Wooley 2002). Since ‘irritable heart’, as Da Costa termed the disorder, was not confined to the infantry but affected the cavalry and artillery, '''he argued that the webbing and packs, which varied between these arms, could not have been the primary cause.''' Although this was widely regarded as a disorder suffered by soldiers in wartime, Da Costa made the important observation that the same cluster of symptoms could also be seen in civilians." | |||
==Banfield== | |||
The section on "posture" isn't working for me. Nobody outside of the The theory looks like it was created by a non-medical person who is trying to reinvent the wheel -- the "wheel" being garden variety ] and ]. I'd like to remove the last few paragraphs of the "History" section, beginning from the words "From 1982-1983..." Does anyone here -- that is, anyone here except Banfield, who has a clear ] in judging the merits and notability of his own work -- object? ] 01:08, 21 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
:No objection here. Nothing I can find in real medical literature sugests it merits such ], and I agree about the COI of his expounding anything to do with his own theory in this article. I've posted a note to that effect at ]; if necessary, it can go to ]. ] (]) 02:16, 21 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
Furthermore, when the British War Office redesigned the gear to prevent constriction, the men using the new gear had just as many problems as the men using the old gear. Therefore, everyone dropped this "tight clothing" idea: data trumped theory. | |||
I just don't think that we can present this as anything other than the first hypothesis, which was ''quickly'' discarded. ] (]) 17:43, 14 June 2008 (UTC) | |||
I agree with occupying undue space and will be happy to abbreviate my theory to one paragraph of plain text if required. I was attempting to highlight the distinguishing symptoms and the multiple factors relating to chest compression. | |||
:::WhatamIdoing; I don’t think that it is appropriate to abbreviate code ID’s, however, like you, I am also familiar with the causes of Da Costa syndrome, according to Da Costa himself, as I have previously provided the statistics for wikipedia here which somebody else has since deleted. I am also familiar with the affects of tight clothing on health. There were many articles on the subject in the nineteenth century which were published in research journals throughout the Western World when the corset debates were prominent, and ended convincingly against tight waisted corsets because the evidence showed that they did have very serious adverse affects by crushing, twisting, and displacing internal organs, thereby interfering with their function and producing horrendous health problems. In 1903 Alex Blad of Copenhagen referred to some 800 articles about the ailments caused by those displacements which were collectively called visceroptosis. | |||
However please consider the following; When I first looked at the Da Costa’s syndrome page I found that it was started on 15th May 06, and after 18 months there were only 11 contributions from 5 authors who provided only four lines of text, 8 links and no references, with a wikipedia note requesting help to expand the article. | |||
:::As you know, women who wore corsets were renown for getting breathless and exhausted in response to the slightest effort, and often felt faint, and they relieved all of those symptoms by unlacing their corsets. | |||
Since I made my first entry only 14 days ago, 75 lines of text in six subdivisions have been added with contributions from 50 additional edits, 18 by myself, and 32 by 5 additional authors, and I have outlined the history of the subject with 6 impeccable references, and other editors have contributed an additional 7 references, and there are now 20 additional links from several authors. | |||
:::Unfortunately some children were put into corsets from as early as 4 years old, to permanently deform them into wasp-waisted adults as they developed, and those children did not notice or accept the fact that corsets were responsible for their multiple diseases and early deaths. However the tighter the corset worn, the shorter the life expectancy, with statistics showing that the 13” diameter corset, which was available as a standard size in many street corner fashion shops in London, was associated with a life expectancy of only 35 years. | |||
Please also consider that Da Costa’s syndrome is a distinct entity in so far as “it is because these symptoms and signs are largely, and sometimes wholly, the exaggerated physiological responses to exercise . . . that I term the whole ‘the effort syndrome’ “ (T.Lewis 1919) since referred to as a synonym for the ailment. | |||
:::As the weight of evidence overcame the resistance of the corset protagonists millions of women changed over to loose garments to regain their health and strength and render the corset as a relic, and a serious mistake of fashion history. | |||
With regard to ] the triggers for symptoms appear to be different and there is no mention of chest pains, particularly, and, most commonly in the left inframammary area. That pain is a defining essential in Da Costa Syndrome history, and dysautonomia doesn’t account for it’s location, or why most ot the pains are asymmetric. However I have suggested how persistent postural compression of the chest produces all of the symptoms of Da Costa’s syndrome, including chronic orthostatic hypotension, and intolerance, in relation to faintness and fatigue. | |||
:::Most of that history has been forgotten which is why I have been providing the information for Misplaced Pages readers. | |||
:::The evidence indicates that one of the many causes of Da Costa’s syndrome in soldiers (palpitations, breathlessness, faintness, and fatigue on exertion) was tight straps about the chest, and Da Costa’s observations about the other factors which were associated with the development of the condition could explain the occurrence in cavalry or artillery units, where such straps were not worn] (]) 00:56, 16 June 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
::::::WhatamIdoing; for a medical research paper from 1887, describing detailed scientific measurements of tight clothing about the chest and waist, and measurements of the pressure in the chest and abdominal cavities, and the harmful affects on health, see here and note that I have previously provided that link from another wikipedia article to the Da Costa article page which was deleted by Gordonofcartoon on 29-12-07] (]) 06:50, 25 June 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
In regard to the ] syndrome the set of symptoms is similar but different, and the cause is excess oxygen consumption and “Most cases are caused by anxiety or stress”, whereas in Da Costa’s syndrome the cause is low oxygen consumption, ], during exhausting work such as running. | |||
:::::::I don't recall that at this instant. However, note that unless the connection between that particular corset study and DCS has been previously made in some reliable third-party source, it's ] to try to use it as corroborative background to the DCS article. ] (]) 14:07, 25 June 2008 (UTC) | |||
As you may appreciate it has been quite difficult to make these distinctions when so many similar symptoms and syndromes overlap. | |||
I respect the observations of Da Costa, and the principles of wikipedia, and appreciate your need for authoritative references, which is why I have used them in constructing and evaluating my ideas, and provided them for consideration. posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 07:27, 22 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
PW, I'm not sure what the "abbreviating code IDs" refers to. | |||
:Max, I apologize if my previous comments weren't clear. I don't want your made-up theory shortened; I want it ''removed entirely'' from this article. Misplaced Pages is not a reasonable place for promoting our pet theories. When a physician's group or a peer-reviewed scientific journal publishes your theory, then I'd be happy to include it. So far, however, the medical communities response has basically been resounding indifference, with a side order of rude remarks about your ignorance, and that means that your pet theory is not notable enough to justify even half a sentence on Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 18:42, 27 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
::I agree, and am removing it. And we also generally need to summarise the 'case history' material (the "''35% had symptoms, 38.3% had mild disability, and 15% had severe disability''" kind of thing). This is an encyclopedia article for general readership, not a med journal literature surrvey. | |||
However, on this topic, nobody here is claiming that tight clothing is good for people. We're just saying that the existing evidence strongly indicates that it doesn't ''cause'' DCS. We can support this: e.g., Da Costa specifically considered and rejected this early guess at a cause. ] (]) 17:31, 25 June 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I've also posted it to ]. ] (]) 01:05, 29 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Also, you might be interested in reading ], where information about the disadvantages of corsets would be appropriate. ] (]) 17:33, 25 June 2008 (UTC) | |||
WhatamIdoing, thank you for your courtesy. | |||
I understand that wikipedia verification policy allows a person to present a reasonably arranged set of facts, so long as each of them can be independently verified from multiple quality sources, and in some cases the contributor needs to provide exceptional sources of the highest quality, for the editors to consider. | |||
I have therefore added to the after 1950 history section with an extract from an exemplary source : The reference details are: Paul Wood, O.B.E. (revised edition 1956) Diseases of the Heart and Circulation, Eyre & Spottiswoode, London p.937-947 . . . Paul Wood, O.B.E., was Director, Institute of Cardiology, London. | |||
Regarding the research relating to the fitness programme at the SA Fitness Institute, the training programme was designed on the basis that the volunteers would participate in a programme if they were able to stay within their limits and improve at their own rate. That study verifiably predates the modern methods of treating CFS which include G.E.T. (graduated exercise training), and pacing, which I would like you to consider in relation to notability. | |||
] (])posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] was added at 01:56, 29 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:''I understand that wikipedia verification policy allows a person to present a reasonably arranged set of facts, so long as each of them can be independently verified from multiple quality sources'' | |||
:No. Only if the picture presented by that arrangement is generally agreed not to be a novel interpretation of those facts. Otherwise, it amounts to ] - "Synthesis of published material serving to advance a position". ] (]) 12:59, 29 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
Gordonofcartoon, I appreciate your comments and have amended the history 1982-2007 accordingly. The concept of training within limits may have been novel in the 1982 IFRT programme but it is now common practice in "pacing", which has been favorably reviewed in appropriate medical journals, and I have added a scanned copy of one of the newspaper article jpegs to my website ref.16 for verification of the project. Please also note the difference between DaCosta's exertion related symptoms and those of other types of CFS, re; your 'to do' list - Charles Wooley's Diseases of Yesteryear, Circulation, May 1976 p.749, para.2 | |||
] (]) posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] was added at 00:31, 14 January 2008 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
::::WhatamIdoing; if you check your own reference here and scroll down to the section called Disorderly Action of the Heart - which is a synonym for Da Costa’s syndrome, you will see reference to the comments on tight clothing and heavy military knapsacks etc as a proposed cause of the ailment. by Maclean 1867 p.111, & Myers 1870 p.81. The general idea was that a tight collar above, and a tight waist belt below, acts like a vice on the chest, resisting blood flow through the chest, and straining the heart and lungs, especially during strenuous exertion. | |||
==I'm going to go read ] now== | |||
::::Also consider Da Costa’s own comments in his 1871 paper: "On Irritable Heart," re; "UNDOUBTEDLY the WAIST BELT, but particularly THE KNAPSACK, may have had something to do with aggravating the trouble; but I could find no proof that they had produced it". | |||
Posturewriter, did you "forget" that promoting your own ] research ideas constitutes a ], or were you just hoping that no one would notice when you added all that information again? '''The guideline is that a theory needs to have "received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject."''' Until you can produce '"significant" coverage in "reliable" and "independent" sources, your pet theory is not notable enough to justify ''any space at all'' in this article. | |||
::::However, by contrast, on 25-6-08 you claimed that “Da Costa specifically considered and rejected this early guess at a cause” here . According to your reference he actually “argued that the webbing and packs, which varied between these arms, could not have been the primary cause” here , which indicates his observation was that the straps 'did contribute' to the symptoms, but not in a 'primary way', and that he hadn’t discarded the idea of the waist belt and knapsack being involved. Please stop misrepresenting the evidence] (]) 01:22, 6 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
::::WhatamIdoing; Please stop adding undue weight to your opinions by using expressions such as “We're just saying”. You are supposed to support your comments with scientific evidence, not with the opinions of other unnamed persons, who’s identity we are supposed to guess about. If they exist, then let them present their own evidence] (]) 01:22, 6 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
I'd like to point out as well that this article is on my daily watchlist, and I suspect that it's on several other editors' lists for the same reason. I think you can rely on me promptly noticing future attempts to use this article to promote your theory. (I do appreciate your other efforts, but you need to quit adding your own research theories to this article.) ] (]) 01:49, 14 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Misplaced Pages; A Democratically Compiled On-line Publication???== | |||
==]?== | |||
I'm not comfortable with the current development of the article. While the explicit Banfield material has been removed, it seems to me that the citations and case material added since have a distinct focus on chest compression, breathing, breathlessness, the diaphragm etc, that smells of ] slanting the whole picture toward the Banfield theory. ] (]) 17:38, 8 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
WhatamIdoing; why did you refer to the Da Costa Article page as my page today here ? The article was started by someone else on 15-5-2006 here 19 months before I made my first contribution on 19-12-07 here and information about myself was deleted 6 months ago, and you said that you appreciated my other efforts, and insisted that I only used information from top quality, independent, peer reviewed scientific journals several times including here , which I have since been doing until you deleted 75% of that information in one slab here and then Gordonofcartoon and yourself presented five thousand words of argument here , and on the Da Costa discussion page, to convince Edjonston to suspend me if I added any more information to the article page on the same page on 19-5-08, and then my 2500 word defence on 24-5-08 here was dismissed with Gordonofcartoons words “Please cut this readable length” on the same day here , implying that it is acceptable for editors to use 5000 words of criticism on me, but unreasonable for me to use half that number of words in defence. That process gave you and Gordonofcartoon a total dictatorship of the page, and then JFW invited me to contribute to discussions to influence the page content with his comment “Consider avoiding the Da Costa syndrome article proper, and rather concentrating on the talkpage. This is where you can really influence article content, and build consensus with other contributors” here and when I made valid suggestions on 26-6-08 here you used more policies to disregard them here etc. which enables you to maintain totalitarian control of the information with references from textbooks, dictionaries, committees, and childrens fiction novels. At the moment it is your page. However, I was informed that wikipedia was a democratically compiled publication, and that any member of the public was invited to join and contribute to the improvement of wikipedia articles, and to expect merciless editing, which is what I have been doing] (]) 08:14, 28 June 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
:Yes, I share these concerns. | |||
:''when I made valid suggestions on 26-6-08'' | |||
:Additionally, I'm unconvinced that Misplaced Pages benefits from a blow-by-blow account of nearly every paper that mentions it in passing. I've been thinking the last couple of weeks that at least three-quarters of the history section should be removed (as an issue of undue weight). | |||
:You didn't make valid suggestions. You made an argument based on a) your own analysis of a book (a classic example of the "unpublished analysis or synthesis of published material that serves to advance a position" that's mentioned mentioned right up front at ], a core policy) and b) on your continuing mistaken belief that a hatnote is a reference. ] (]) 00:07, 30 June 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Gordonofcartoon; Can you please explain how I am supposed to discuss the relevance of Gary Paulen’s novel unless I read it, and why you are trying to justify the use of a hatnote which contains a completely irrelevant and misleading item in a position of unwarranted prominence at the top of the article page] (]) 06:10, 2 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
:Posturewriter, why don't you put all this up on your own website? It would be a more appropriate home for such specialized material. ] (]) 20:34, 8 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::No-one's stopping you reading it; it's the interpretation of its content through the filter of your own theory that is original research. | |||
::As I said above, it's meant to be an encyclopedia article for the general reader, not an exhaustive academic literature survey. Liposuction time? ] (]) 20:51, 8 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::Take the hatnote issue to WP:HATNOTE if it bothers you. I've given you examples of typical hatnote usage; if you choose to disbelieve that's how it works, that's your problem. ] (]) 11:52, 2 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
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:::::PW, you'll also want to read ], which demands that disambiguation links, if any are needed, always be placed before the article itself starts. (Hatnote is just a slang term for a dab link at the top of an article.) ] (]) 07:04, 3 July 2008 (UTC) | ||
::::Definitely. I've just cut another 6000-character essay. ] (]) 13:27, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::Gordonofcartoon; I don’t like repeating myself, but as I said before I have read Da Costa’s original article, and I have read Paulsen’s book, and I observed that the symptoms are different. I did not have to research, analyse or filter anything to describe the obvious irrelevance of Paulsen’s book. My Webster’s dictionary gives several meanings for the word reference including “a book or passage to which a reader is referred”. Another one of many is “Mention”. The book is mentioned at the top of the page, so I was not mistaken about anything, just misinterpreted, and, or deliberately misrepresented by you. Also, as you have chosen to ignore my reasonable request, I will repeat it. If you want to discuss my observation of irrelevance, you should read Paulsen’s book yourself, and give me chapter and page numbers and direct quotes that you think makes them relevant, and I will discuss them. In the meantime, why should I register with obscure bugmenot sites, and read remotely related, unresolved hatnote guidelines when you have been ignoring my questions of relevance etc?. As I said before, and I will say it again, this is a discussion page, not your dictatorship] (]) 09:45, 3 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
:::I'm making a start. I just want to make a note here that some of what I'm deleting does not belong in this section because it's a textbook-perfect description of ]. ] (]) 20:56, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::Sorry, but a) your personal comparison of a book and article is clear-cut original research; b) dictionary-lawyering is a flavour of ] (hatnotes and references have well-defined functions here that are not based on Webster's dictionary). | |||
:::::I've passed it to ]. ] (]) 13:04, 3 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::This seems more like a content dispute than a discussion about style guidelines to me, but I can confirm that hatnotes are not references. - Dan ] (])(]) 14:27, 3 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Thx. The particular issue is a bit of a "meta" one: whether disambiguation hatnotes interact with content. | |||
:::::::I think there are zero considerations beyond shared name. But Posturewriter OTOH is arguing that a hatnoted article forms part of the information sourcing of the article that links to it - i.e. that disambiguation to ] will take readers somewhere where they'll be misinformed about "soldier's heart" the syndrome. | |||
:::::::This seems to me at the level of arguing that the hatnote at ] to ] might make people think the real Dunwich is a decrepit place full of Cthulhu-worshipping inbred mutants. ] (]) 15:36, 3 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Disambiguated== | |||
I just removed the Rosen section as ]. The full text of the article is available online and it refers to "the effort syndrome caused by chronic habitual hyperventilation" - i.e. hyperventilation syndrome - not "effort syndrome" as in Da Costa, and bundling it with other studies to focus on the breathing aspect looks definite WP:SYNTH. ] (]) 13:17, 23 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
I've expanded the ] disambigation page - it's a popular title - which makes the single-article disambiguation hatnote redundant. Problem solved? ] (]) 15:59, 3 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Oops (as I said at ]). I am way out of date (years, in fact) on developments at ], and wasn't aware of ]. ] (]) 19:14, 3 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Colloquial term ‘Soldier’s Heart'?== | |||
Gordonofcartoon; regarding your deletion of my review of Rosen’s study on the grounds that it refers to the effort syndrome caused by chronic habitual hyperventilation rather than the actual “Effort Syndrome”, I refer you to your online reference paragraph 2 page 761 where he uses the term synonymously with the expression “chronic habitual hyperventilation or effort syndrome” which he supports with citations 9-15 on page 764, one of which is entitled “The aetiology of effort syndrome” dated 1938, and two of which were on the synonymous subject of Irritable Heart by Sir Thomas Lewis, who, as you are aware, coined the term “Effort Syndrome” because of his study which showed that the symptoms often occur exclusively in response to exertion. Rosen’s article is also useful to the history of the subject because it refers to the similarity with the symptoms of modern chronic fatigue syndrome, myalgic encephalomyeltis, and postviral syndromes. Regarding the deletion on the grounds of synthesis; my actual reasons for reviewing this subject related to WhatamIdoings most recent explanation on this discussion page. He says that he deleted much of my review of Oglesby’s 1987 article on Da Costa’s Syndrome, because, in his opinion, it did not belong here because it was a description of the Hyperventilation Syndrome. I therefore reviewed the medical literature to find Rosen’s study which discusses hyperventilation as a possible cause of the Effort Syndrome, and two others which shed doubt on it, so I wrote brief reviews and grouped them together on the article page in chronological order to include in the gap in the history of research between 1980 and 2008. I also commented on S.Wolf’s research of 1947 because he found that abnormal function of the thoracic diaphragm was responsible for the breathlessness. I am therefore replacing the article because Rosen did use the term effort syndrome synonymously, and I was not synthesising anything of my own initiative but was responding to someone else’s idea.] (]) 08:32, 24 March 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
The title of Da Costa’s 1871 research paper was “On Irritable Heart”, and not “On Soldier’s Heart”, and on the first page he describes how he started his study some years earlier and states “I gave the name irritable heart - a name by which the disorder soon became known both within and without the walls of the hospital”, which means that “irritable heart” was the colloquial term, not Soldier’s heart, and on page 19 he refers to articles in 1867 by Maclean and others in BMJ where “in most of which the term irritable heart has been adopted”. If Da Costa, and most of the people he knew called it Irritable heart, and there have been at least 100 other labels before and since, mainly used for civilian cases, why do you want to give the word “Soldier’s Heart” undue prominence by putting it at the top of the ] article page when it can be more appropriately placed at the bottom of the page in a “See Also” section with several others of equal or more relevance, as has previously been the case. Many authors have preferred the label of “Da Costa’s syndrome” because of it’s neutrality re; NPOV re; it’s not exclusively a soldier’s condition or a post-war syndrome, nor a heart condition, nor an anxiety state, nor a nervous condition, nor a somatoform disorder etc. all of which are interpretations by people with particular specialities, backgrounds, or niche opinions called bias ] (]) 07:11, 14 July 2008 (UTC)posture writer | |||
:I'll leave it for now - see what others think - but as I said above, everything you add spins the subject toward a focus on breathing, breathlessness, the diaphragm etc - funnily enough, coinciding with the Banfield theory. Apart from that, this article needs pruning, not expanding: how many times has it been said that this is meant to be an encyclopedia entry for the general reader, not a treatise? ] (]) 11:15, 24 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Do you have any evidence that a general reader might end up at this article when searching for anything unrelated under the name of "irritable heart"? This is standard treatment for disambiguation and redirection. This is about ''navigating an encyclopedia with two million articles,'' not about the history of the term. ] (]) 18:38, 14 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Proposed page move== | |||
Currently, the ] several conditions as somatoform autonomic dysfunctions. Da Costa is one of them. What do you think about moving this page to ] and giving each sub-type/named condition its own subsection on the page? It removes some of the ] concerns in declaring Da Costa to be the same as the others. ] (]) 20:43, 24 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::WhatamIdoing; When I saw Gary Paulsen’s novel Soldier’s Heart ‘mentioned’ at the top of the Da Costa page, I thought it was relevant, and phoned my library to check it. I was told that it was a popular fiction paperback in the children’s section. I borrowed it and read it and still have a copy in case another editor reads it and questions my report that it was irrelevant to Da Costa’s syndrome. Reading it was a 100% waste of my time, and will be 100% waste of any other wikipedia readers time. It will also give the topic novices a 100% misunderstanding of Da Costa’s syndrome. It should not be mentioned on the top line for those reasons. Is that the type of evidence you want to ignore] (]) 07:07, 15 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
Rather than be criticised here, I will do some criticising of my own to give good reasons for not moving the page. | |||
::::The top of the ''page'' says "This article is about the medical condition also known as "soldier's heart". For other uses of the term, see Soldier's heart." This complies with ], which indicates that disambiguation links belong at the top of pages as a courtesy to people who are using ]s (usually due to visual impairments). Even if you personally don't mind making a disabled person wait until his/her computer has read the entire page out loud, just so you can have the link to the disambiguation page at the end of the article instead at the top of the page, we do not, in practice, have a significant amount of choice here. We must comply with this guideline. ] (]) 17:30, 15 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
1. In 1951 Paul Wood described 6 “cardinal symptoms” of Da Costa’s Syndrome which includes breathlessness which affects 93% of patients, making it the major symptom. It is relevant to give the appropriate amount of weight to the research into that symptom without anyone making any accusations of synthesis for anyone of a hundred different theories on the subject, including Whatamydoing's, and Gordonofcartoon repeated references to hyperventilation. I note that they are not accusing themselves of synthesis of anything! | |||
:::::The only thing I would question here is whether there's a need for the disambiguation link at all. How would a person looking for "soldier's heart" wind up on this page under normal circumstances?--] (]) 18:40, 15 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
2. On this discussion page on 10-2-08 Whatamydoing has criticised my review of Oglesby’s Harvard study of Da Costa’s Syndrome by arguing that he is deleting most of it on the grounds that it “does not belong in this section because it's a textbook-perfect description of hyperventilation syndrome.” . . . and on the next sentence dated 23-3-08 Gordonofcartoon criticises my review of Rosen’s study by stating that Rosen was discussing “hyperventilation syndrome - not "effort syndrome" as in Da Costa” My two critics are contradicting each other. | |||
::::::. ] (]) 18:57, 15 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
3. When Gordonofcartoon deleted my Rosen study he quoted Rosen from paragraph one “"the effort syndrome caused by chronic habitual hyperventilation" and then he, Gordonofcartoon, argues that Rosen is referring to hyperventilation syndrome, and not the "effort syndrome" as in Da Costa, which indicates that he, Gordonofcartoon, did not read the full article, or the references on page 764, and in fact, he did not even bother to read paragraph 2 where it states “The disability and the habitual hyperventilation or effort syndrome”. That sentence also ends with citations to the reference section that lists DaCosta related research. I would like to be euphemistic by saying that is not an example of top quality editing. | |||
:::::::NapoliRoma; I share your view that the hatnote isn’t necessary, and there are many reasons why the label is misleading. For example, Da Costa’s syndrome more commonly occurs in civilian women. I have been threatened with suspension if I add to the article page, so could you please consider removing the hatnote (which gives undue prominence to the label by placing it at the top of the page), and returning it to a See Also section at the end of the page] (]) 00:35, 16 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
4. At 8:43 p. m. on 24-3-08 in his most recent comment WhatamIdoing asks “What do you think about moving this page to Somatoform autonomic dysfunction . . . Why don’t you ask Gordonofcartoon who, at 11:15 a.m. on the same day, in the sentence immediately above, criticises me with the argument “how many times has it been said that this is meant to be an encyclopedia entry for the general reader”. Might I say, it is not a place for esoteric jargon. | |||
::::::::''How would a person looking for "soldier's heart" wind up on this page under normal circumstances?'' | |||
::::::::Because "soldier's heart", despite Posturewriter's claim to the contrary, is a common historical synonym for Da Costa's syndrome - and since not everyone hits the page via Misplaced Pages internal search, they ''ought'' to end up on this page. ] (]) 01:13, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::Placing the dab note at the end of the article ''is not an option.'' It can be removed entirely (if determined to have no connection/not be needed/whatever), but '''cannot''' be buried in a place that is known to be remarkably inconvenient for disabled people. ] (]) 01:05, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
5. If any editors wish to use jargon which the general wikipedia reader is unlikely to understand, could you please do so on a page which is devoted to the relevant audience, or submit your ideas to the appropriate academic journals. In the meantime can you stop editing this page and leave it to me to present a coherent account of the history of research into this subject, in clear chronological order, written in plain English. Any editors who are willing to assist me constructively in that regard will be appreciated. I assume that is consistent with wikipedia's fundamental policy of democratic compilation and distribution of knowledge to the whole of society.] (])posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] was added at 09:08, 25 March 2008 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:See ]. Alternatively, you could consider ] and ]. As you have a clear conflict of interest in this topic area, it is you, if anyone, who should be taking a back seat. ] (]) 10:15, 25 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
(<-zing!) OK, I knew I was stepping in it, but once pedantry is in your heart, it never leaves... | |||
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Re "people might search": try it; I did. If you search for soldier's heart on Google, Yahoo, or MSN, you do not get this page in the first tier of results. Putting a hatnote up because maybe this someday might change is not reasonable. | |||
Re "Gotta be at the top or nowhere, or millions of handicapped people will die": I think this overstates the case. By this argument, ''all'' links must be at the top. This would be difficult. | |||
My take, and understand I have no horse in this race: having a link to the "soldier's heart" dab page is not vital, but not a bad thing. But because there is little if any chance anyone will stumble on this page when looking for any other meaning of "soldier's heart", the one place it should ''not'' be is as a hatnote. It distracts the reader from the actual topic at hand for no defensible reason. Logically, the appropriate place for it would then be under "See also", with perhaps a bit of an explanation as to why it's there. Regards, ] (]) 01:29, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:According to ], which is a guideline, dab links should be at the top. Basically, the reason for this is: say a person using a screen reader was searching for Soldier's Heart, and somehow he or she ended up on the Da Costa's page instead. If the dab link isn't at the top, (s)he will probably miss it because after reading the first couple of sentences he or she will assume that it won't be there, since that is where they have historically been. Now, obviously WP:ACCESS is a guideline and WP:IAR is often applied. I see no reason why it should be here, since following the guideline does not result in any loss of usability to non-disabled users. ]]</span>] 02:29, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Since you are involved in accessibility for disabled, please try to be cautious in your assumptions about what they can do or not. To imply that someone can't follow a link placed at the ninth word of an article may be offensive. ] (]) 13:09, 22 December 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Not to be too repetitive, but what's being discussed is not, strictly speaking, a disambiguation link, at least not in the sense of what ] is discussing. The name of this page is not "soldier's heart", and there is no redirect to this page that resembles "soldier's heart". Thus, a link from this page to another page named "soldier's heart" does not perform a disambiguating function. | |||
::What's being discussed here, then, is a link. It is no different than a link to "fatigue" or "sweating". As such, ] does not appear to me to apply. Just as I would not include a link to "fatigue" as a hatnote on this page, I would not include a hatnote pointing to "soldier's heart".--] (]) 06:57, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::I also dislike being repetitive, so I'll try to be as clear as possible. In its current incarnation, the hatnote ''is'' a dab link. It seems to me that there is question as to whether there even should ''be'' a hatnote with this information. I know little about Da Costa's and nothing about "Soldier's Heart" in general, so I cannot express an opinion. I do, however, know that WP:ACCESS absolutely applies here because we are talking about a dab link: it's even using a dab template for G-d's sake. ]]</span>] 07:57, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::It sounds like we're saying the same thing, but in different ways. Yes, it is using a dab template, but that doesn't mean that it is performaing a legitimate disambiguation. If I placed at the top of the article the following: | |||
::::{{otheruses4|Mr. Coffee|the movie ''101 Dalmations''|Anchovy essence}} | |||
::::I would be using a disambiguation template, but I would not be providing a disambiguation, and ] would not apply. Clearly the current situation is not as absurd as my example, but having a link to ] is also not a disambiguation, because there is nothing ambiguous: just as this article is not about Mr. Coffee, neither is it named "soldier's heart," nor is there any redirect to this article that looks anything like "soldier's heart." Thus, like my example, the current hatnote is not a disambiguation, ''even though it uses a disambiguation template''. WP:ACCESS does not apply.--] (]) 14:25, 16 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::NapoliRoma and L'Aquatique; thankyou for your comments; My concerns here are not with policy, but with the false impression that reader’s get when the term “Soldier’s Heart” appears on the top line of the page. re: is it sensible for a doctor to tell a pregnant civilian woman on her first visit that she is suffering from the symptoms of Soldier’s Heart?. . . and what about civilian men, children of pre war age, and athletes etc. Perhaps you could remove it, or maybe put something which represents every case there such as - it is a type of - chronic fatigue syndrome? Do you understand why I think it is going to mislead readers who will end up in the children’s section of their local library reading irrelevant fiction - like I did - and I am an adult interested in Da Costa’s syndrome, with no interest in wasting my time - If your policy solves that problem then we are in agreement] (])posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] was added at 07:23, 17 July 2008 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
My proposal for the page move is based entirely on ], which say that "The article title should be the scientific or recognised medical name rather than the lay term or a historical eponym that has been superseded." The current ICD-10 code is F45.3: Somatoform autonomic dysfunction. | |||
::::::It's pretty much an example of my general point: superfluous hatnotes are distracting at best, and in your case actually took you off on a completely fruitless tangent. This is the opposite of improving usability (including accessibility).--] (]) 15:38, 17 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
I actually thought you'd be happy about this, because the ICD-10 organization gives you an ironclad excuse to put Da Costa's syndrome, cardiac neurosis, gastric neurosis, and neurocirculatory asthenia in the same article. ] (]) 19:19, 25 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
Repetition does not yield fact. The template is a disambiguation template, its purpose is for disambiguation, and therefore WP:ACCESS does in fact apply. Disambiguation is designed to provide alternate articles where there might be confusion regarding which article is about what, and this is one of those circumstances. If you think the template is inappropriate for the article, just remove it. But if it's going to be in the article, it needs to be at the top. There's really not a lot more to say. ]]</span>] 07:54, 18 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Da Costa symptoms do not 'mimic' those of heart disease, but are 'similar to' them; re - 2nd line== | |||
WhatamIdoing; You have impressive skills with language, and a considerable knowledge of wiki policies. My concerns are with the cavalier expressions you use on this discussion page, when referring to me or my ideas, and with the fact that each time I comply with a policy you add another version of it, or often a completely different policy, in a manner which seems reasonable on the surface, but also appears selective, to suit your purposes (not wiki’s) with the “excuse” (to use your word), that there is some fault in my contributions. You also don’t respond to my criticisms of you. You now refer to another policy regarding “naming requirements” in relation to a page (which was given the title by someone else) which has been used in wikipedia for nearly 2 years, which you want to move into a completely new one entitled “somatoform autonomic dysfunction”. I have viewed the guidelines where there are relavent policies (which you can select from) in ], which require wikipedia to be written in plain English so that everyone can understand it. Jargon is more appropriate for academic journals which are readable, but only by people who are familiar with it. I also don’t need a new page to give myself an “excuse” (to use your word) to include synonyms, or related conditions, because I can provide them here with the appropriate citations. I think that the page title ‘Da Costa’s Syndrome’ is appropriate because it gives respect to the person who identified it, and someone else, (who was not me), gave a section of the page the title of ‘History’. That section provides a place for all of the evidence and labels to be added chronologically, by anyone, (not just me), so instead of deleting the aspects of my contributions which you don’t agree with, (by describing it as synthesis to justify removing it), you can present your evidence with a brief, concise paragraph on the subject of “somatoform autonomic dysfuntion”. If you think it is too complicated and deserves it’s own space then you can set up a page for that specific purpose without moving this one. You might also consider that you and other editors have used several modern labels, and that they change from one year to another, whereas history is consistent.] (])posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] was added at 08:03, 27 March 2008 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
The second line of the ] article page contains another mistake because Da Costa’s syndrome does not “mimic” the symptoms of heart disease. it is more correct to say that the symptoms are so “similar” that many doctors were unable to recognise the differences until Da Costa and other researchers clearly identified and distinguished them, so it is understandable that many patients might think the same] (]) 07:11, 14 July 2008 (UTC)posture writer | |||
:This really needs more input: a) over the possible conflict of interest, and b) over the medical assessment. I've posted it to ] and ]. ] (]) 12:12, 27 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Agreed, for once; although it's a fairly common phraseology even in scholarly publications it's a definite example of ]. ] (]) 12:01, 14 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Source verification== | |||
Gordonofcartoon; I have posted a response to the comments you made on ] . Regarding your referral to me as “self-identified”; the only mention of my name currently in wikipedia was made by you there, and WhatamIdoing at the top of this page. My User page is blank. Regarding your comment that my "edits invariably add material relating to breathing-related studies" - I often refer to respiratory studies which are prominent in the research because they affect 93% of those patients according to Paul Wood in 1956 on the article page. ] (])posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] was added at 00:35, 30 March 2008 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
Re this <nowiki>{{Verify source}}</nowiki> : here's the Health Psychology Update issue (PDF): see pp 46-52. It's merely a description of pacing: no mention of DCS. ] (]) 18:12, 26 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Then it should be removed or {{tl|fact}}-tagged. ] (]) 23:02, 26 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:I'd support a page move to the proper scientific name for this condition. To address your concerns about accessibility by the layperson Posturewriter then there is no issue with creating a redirect from this page to a new page, or a disambiguation page if that is more appropriate. Inclusion of a sentence (Also known as Da Costa's Syndome, or something along those lines) at the beginning of the article should be completely satisfactory in ensuring no layperson is confused. I am also aware that to someone with limited knowlege of this disease (the definition of a layperson surely?) the name Somatoform Autonomic Dysfunction is far more informative than "Da Costa's Syndrome". ] (]) 10:45, 8 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
Gordonofcartoon; At 11:22 on 5-1-08 JamesSteward7 deleted a paragraph on pacing from the Chronic Fatigue Syndrome page here on the grounds that it was unreferenced. From my notes at that time it had been on the CFS page for more than a year, but was deleted soon after I added the reference to my webpage on 1-1-08. Why wasn’t it removed before then. I have since referred to ‘pacing’ on the DaCosta page. Why do you propose that it be removed from the Da Costa page now and not 6 months ago. It looks as though your are finding policy reasons for deleting things to suit your purposes. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 12:01, 27 July 2008</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> | |||
::The page move system automatically creates such redirects. ] (]) 18:02, 8 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
:As you've been asked before, please ]. I have no idea what goes on at the CFS page, and I answered the reference point now purely because Whatamidoing drew attention to it by tagging it. ] (]) 16:07, 27 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Well done, Gordonofcartoon: articulating the honest motives behind your actions in order to help Posturewriter assume good faith; as recommended ]. <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.8em;">☺</span> ] (]) 16:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==The Physical and Physiological Evidence for the Symptoms== | |||
SuperTycoon; I first found out about this condition when I read a medical dictionary for the general reader in 1975. The description of symptoms was clear and precise and written in plain English. It was published by someone like Reader’s Digest, but I cannot recall exactly. I later found that the technical terminology was “neurocirculatory asthenia” so I started using Dorland’s Medical Dictionary, and went to the University of Adelaide medical library to review the relevant research articles. I wrote my theory five years later, and in due course the director of the S.A. Fitness Institute asked me to co-ordinate a study of the condition because the staff cardiologists were too busy organising exercise programmes for patients with asthma, arthritis, obesity, smoking, and heart disease, and weren’t interested in this subject, but conducted the medical assessment of the volunteers. Newspapers reported an account of the South Australian study two years later and one of them has been scanned and placed on-line for editors who asked me to confirm it. I have also published a book on posture and health between 1994 and 2000, during which time I sold it to public schools and libraries. It was supported by 130 references from all sources, with the earliest being Hippocrates, and it contains 12 pages on my translation of 17th century medical terminology into modern English. If it was not for the word Da Costa’s syndrome being so clearly defined in a book for the general reader I would not have found it. I understand that wiki official naming guidelines give priority to plain English over jargon, and . . . “The names of Misplaced Pages articles should be optimised for readers over editors, and for a general audience over specialists”. I don’t have any objection to someone else setting up separate pages for specialists who can understand the sophisticated terminology and I could direct general readers to it for those who need to learn more. ~~posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 09:26, 9 April 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
NapoliRoma; In 1916 ] was aware that the symptom of fatigue in Da Costa’s syndrome was related to the abnormal pooling of blood in the abdominal and peripheral veins. That is a physical and physiological abnormality. Could you please therefore read the full review here which has since been deleted. Could you then please return it to the history section of the page chronologically, or add the abbreviated version below, and remove the comments on the second line of the article page which state “a physical examination does not reveal any physiological abnormalities”, as it gives the false impression that there is no scientific evidence of physical or physiological abnormality”. Please feel free to ask any questions on this matter. Thankyou. | |||
:'Somatoform autonomic dysfunction' is the group name, not the 'official term' for the conditions listed under it. The present article name is correct and should not be replaced with the name of the group. | |||
. . . In 1916 the Royal Society of Medicine conducted a series of discussions on cardiac-like ailments in military life in World War 1. According to ], who opened the conference, only 10% of cases involved actual heart disease. The remainder were referred to as having Soldier’s Heart, with no known cause. The condition was also seen in civilian life under similar circumstances after recovering from an exhausting illness such as typhoid fever, or from long periods of physical or mental strain. He noted that one of the significant symptoms was an abnormal chronic tendency to fatigue, particularly relating to exertion. He reported that the symptom of exhaustion was associated with “a persistent over-action of vasomotor influences" . . . and sometimes . . . "flushes of heat pass over the body, and warmth may tend to overfilling of the peripheral vessels. This is seen in people who ] when standing in a warm room, or who speedily become exhausted or even faint when exertion is made. In these, the blood tends to accumulate in the peripheral veins of the limbs and in the large abdominal veins”, which results in a reduced blood flow to the brain so that “the sense of exhaustion and ] are provoked". MacKenzie presented this description to show that this type of exhaustion is related to poor blood circulation and was not the same mechanism which produced exhaustion of the heart itself. <ref> {{cite journal|title=Discussions On The Soldier's Heart|journal=Proceedings of the Royal Society of Medicine, Therapeutical and Pharmacological Section|date=1916-01-18|first=Sir James |last=Mackenzie|coauthors=R.M.Wilson, PHilip Hamill, Alexander Morrison, O.Leyton, & Florence A.Stoney|volume=9|issue=|pages=27-60|id= |url=|format=|accessdate=2008-05-06 }}</ref> . . . | |||
:What I do not understand though is why this condition is listed there. Surely this is a physical disorder, not psychosomatic. ] (]) 22:38, 13 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Gofdonofcartoon; According to Oglesby Paul, Da Costa’s syndrome has no known cause here ] | |||
::This category includes: | |||
:::There is no scientific proof of anxiety as a cause, and any statement of that nature is opinion, and therefore contrary to NPOV. Please consider amending the misleading comments on the article page here . ] (]) 10:24, 27 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
::* Cardiac neurosis | |||
::* Da Costa's syndrome | |||
::* Gastric neurosis | |||
::* Neurocirculatory asthenia | |||
::Posturewriter has gone to great lengths to convince everyone that at least three of these four labels represent the same condition. It would be ] to create three identical articles, except changing the name at the top. We could create redirects for them; however, then we have to choose the "right" name -- which is DCS according to Posturewriter, and NCA according to most writers in the middle of the 20th century. If we dump them all into one larger article on the slightly broader subject, then we solve the problem entirely: no one can claim that they don't belong together, and no one will complain that the 'wrong' name was chosen for the main page. | |||
::Don't think of this as a "page move" so much as a "merge proposal" -- it's just that the page to be merged to doesn't exist yet. ] (]) 21:33, 15 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::No, that's not quite right. According to Oglesby Paul, there is no known cause. That's one reliable source. According to quite a number of other reliable sources, the cause is anxiety, or the disease is highly related to anxiety. We cannot elevate Paul's opinion over the other sources simply because it lines up with our own perspective. ] (]) 23:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==]== | |||
This article continues to grow more and more bloated with lengthy and unreadable dumps from papers. I'd like to have another go at reducing it to something informative and readable, and have left a message for ] asking for cooperation. ] (]) 20:50, 13 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::WhatamIdoing; I don’t think that quoting the opinions of particular groups who favor anxiety as a cause is a valid reason for excluding the opinions of many individuals or groups who don’t, or for excluding independent, peer reviewed scientific evidence of a physical cause. | |||
== Physical v psychosomatic == | |||
::Here is an example which you have previously deleted . . . 'In 1951 ] wrote that “the symptoms are similar to heart disease, but are not the same, and he adds, that they are also similar to, but can occur in the absence of anxiety, and therefore need to be discussed separately” here ] (]) 08:37, 29 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
''GDB wrote: "Surely this is a physical disorder, not psychosomatic"'' | |||
:::Now can you find a ] that says that in the last half century, and has excluded those misdiagnosed "DCS" patients that actually have ]? (WP:MEDRS strongly prefers sources that were published in the last ''five'' years, so please don't feel like I'm being picky by asking for something published in the last ''fifty'' years.) ] (]) 20:35, 29 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
IMO, most people who supposedly have DCS probably do have a physical disorder that affects autonomic nerve function. I'm with : Most of them have a problem with habitual ], which may or may not be triggered by anxiety. HVS explains ''all'' of the symptoms. It also explains why fitness training helps some patients, because when you exercise, you change (improve) your breathing patterns. Similarly, the "cardiac" DCS symptoms look strikingly like ]. | |||
::::WhatamIdoing; Regarding your previous comment; | |||
So, yes, most so-called DCS patients do have a "physical" problem -- and their physicians have a "sloppy diagnosis" problem. The existence of more precise labels, and better treatments, is why the term DCS has fallen out of use during the last half century. It's not because anyone believes that these patients or their problems don't exist; it's because we better understand their situations. | |||
::::1. Your suggestion that I haven’t provided information from the most recent fifty years is because you have deleted everything up to 1997, which includes Oglesby Paul’s 1980 paper, and you later deleted Volkov’s 1980 study, Rosen’s 1990 study, and Bazelmans 1997 study here . . . which was published only seven years ago. | |||
The dominant view is that most DCS patients are misdiagnosed, or at least under-diagnosed. Since the term has been around for so long, it's been folded into the ICD codes as essentially an anxiety disorder (or several anxiety disorders), thus the F45.3 coding. F45.33 is where you file all psychogenic respiratory problems, including anxiety-related hyperventilation. If cardiac palpitations predominate, then you can file it under F45.31. This is perhaps just as misleading as calling a ] a "psychosomatic disorder," but there is also some truth to it: many DCS patients do have an anxiety disorder. ] (]) 22:05, 15 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::2. The reason that I haven’t added anything in chronological order up until 2008 is because you have threatened me with suspension if I do, and you could have , and have, provided the information if you wanted to - without deleting everything else. | |||
:The research seems to indicate that symptoms worsen after exertion, i.e. there is what we call ]. An anxiety disorder or any other psychosomatic phenomenon cannot explain that. With primary cardiomyopathy, infection and malnourishment ruled out, the cause must be some kind of poisoning or pollution. Such a cause is not uncommon in warfare, with its heavy use of metals and chemicals without proper protection. So no, I don't think most of these patients were misdiagnosed. They had the ] of their era. ] (]) 22:29, 15 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Remember ] and ]. This is not a venue for general discussion on the subject. ] (]) 00:45, 16 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::The point is, that the article shouldn't present the opposite as a fact. ] (]) 07:24, 16 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::3. I provided evidence that the interpretation of Da Costa’s syndrome as ‘hyperventilation syndrome’ here was disputed with scientific evidence from 1990 in paragraph number 3. here . You can follow three of four older edits back from there to gain a better context. | |||
::::Guido, I'm not sure what 'the opposite' is in your note. | |||
::::Reliable sources (indeed, authoritative sources) call DCS an anxiety disorder, so the article says that. | |||
::::Reliable sources also say that most ''so-called'' DCS patients do not have DCS, but instead have one of several related, hereditary, "physical" problems with their autonomic nervous system, so the article says that. (Exercise intolerance, BTW, is a hallmark of autonomic nervous dysfunction.) | |||
::::What's your problem? We reported what the reliable sources said. ] (]) 03:39, 17 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::I have found no reliable source saying that DCS is an anxiety disorder. The source provided does not say so. Therefore, I have removed that particular statement. ] (]) 18:39, 20 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::Source found. ] (]) 19:53, 20 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Sorry, but that webpage is complete rubbish. ] (]) 20:59, 20 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::::In what way, apart from being written doctors saying something you don't like? Guido, I've assumed good faith so far, but if you continue this, I'm going to have to call ]. ''Addendum: I have called it'': | |||
::::::::You have, to say at the least, strong connections with a patient advocacy group whose general view is that conditions of this type aren't psychological. And we can bring in ]. Do you want to take it there? ] (]) 23:30, 20 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Excuse me? Are you getting personal because your pov is not backed up by reliable sources? If you find a published article that shows the syndrome to be an anxiety disorder, by all means put it in. But a random website won't do to support such a major statement in the lead, a statement that completely contradicts the WHO classification. ] (]) 07:27, 21 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Note what this website further has to say: "Classically, Da Costa's syndrome develops in two situations: in the relative or friend of an individual who has recently been diagnosed as suffering from a cardiac condition..." Do you want that in the article as well? We do have some standards on Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 07:34, 21 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::4. S.D. Rosen, in 1990, wrote “chronic fatigue syndrome, myalgic encephalomyelitis, and postviral syndrome, which they referred to as the modern terms for the effort syndrome”. The ‘effort syndrome’ was Sir Thomas Lewis term for Da Costa’s syndrome in 1919 here , which again, you deleted. | |||
Guido, please red the first paragraph of the Paul ref (PMID 3314950), and then restore the anxiety description. Note that you have to read the actual article, not merely the abstract. ] (]) 13:54, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:I was going to look into this source, since the abstract is ringing a lot of alarm bells, but I cannot find the full text. Could you cite that paragraph for us? ] (]) 14:12, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Never mind, I found it here: , thanks to Posturewriter. ] (]) 14:33, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::I've read it. What Paul says is in fact the opposite of what you claim: he says that patients would 'now' (i.e. in the 1980's) be (wrongly) labelled with e.g. anxiety neurosis while in reality ''neurocirculatory asthenia'' is easy to diagnose. ] (]) 14:38, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::5. I am familiar with Charles Wooley’s 1976 essay , which discusses the Mitral Valve Prolapse aspect, and have my own copy of it, and it has a University of Adelaide date stamp for July 1976, only two months after it was published in the U.S. (thirty years ago), and it has also been on Gordonofcartoon’s talk page here at the end of his to do list for 6 months, and I have previously asked him to comment on it, but he hasn’t. | |||
::::I'd say that your summary is an, um, unusual interpretation of that paragraph. Here's exactly what it says: | |||
:::::"Da Costa's Syndrome or neurocirculatory asthenia has a long and honourable history in the medical literature and in clinical medicine. Yet it is infrequently mentioned today. It is unlikely to have disappeared; it probably exists much as before but it is ''more often identified and labelled in psychiatric terms such as "anxiety state" or "anxiety neurosis".'' There is ''no harm in this shift in diagnostic labels''" . | |||
::::This paragraph clearly states that DCS is generally considered to be an anxiety-related condition, and that this author in particular sees "no harm" in that label. Later in the article, he refers to "the whole area of the treatment of disorders associated with anxiety" with a particular class of medications as being controversial -- further indication that DCS is usually classed as an anxiety disorder. He never states that DCS is not, in his opinion, ''un-''associated with anxiety, or that other physicians are "wrong" to use that label. ] (]) 19:52, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::No, it does not. It says 'more often' and 'labelled'. Ulcers also got labelled as psychiatric disorders. Read the entire article and you may understand better. ] (]) 21:02, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::6. My contributions were in the history section, and you have provided introductory comments about selected modern opinions which are not supported by that evidencef of history] (]) 04:24, 30 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter. | |||
::::::Guido, there are ''many'' sources that indicate a connection to anxiety. See, for another example, Dorland's Medical Dictionary: ''"it is considered to be a manifestation of an ]"'' ] (]) 22:46, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I'm not doubting that. It has been fashionable to call all kinds of conditions anxiety disorders. However, this is simply one of those many website that is making statements not based on reliable sources, and therefore it is itself also not reliable. ] (]) 00:13, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::1) Rosen, Volkov, and Bazelmans are ]. We must have ]. | |||
::::::::No, Guido, ] is '''not''' just "one of those many websites". It is one of the major medical dictionaries and is used by English-speaking healthcare workers around the world. ] (]) 02:27, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::2) I've threatened you with nothing. | |||
:::::::::That might make it notable, but not reliable. ] (]) 11:31, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::3) You provided evidence from ] that not every single physician agrees with the majority opinion. Misplaced Pages, however, is built from ]. | |||
::::::4) That is Rosen's opinion in a ]. He is entitled to his opinion, but since it is not supported by ], we are not obligated to report it as fact. | |||
::::::5) No editor is under obligation to comment on a study just because you ask him to. | |||
::::::6) Your comments in the history section were unusually detailed -- for example, including the number of people in each study, the variety, severity, and/or proportions of their symptoms, the exact percentages that improved under different treatments -- which is a violation of ]. But you're right: I have relied heavily on modern ], which by and large do not agree with your personal conclusions. Like Rosen, you are entitled to your opinion, but since it is not supported by ], we are not obligated to report it as fact. ] (]) 06:44, 30 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
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=== Dorlands as a reliable source === | |||
{{Resolved|Consensus: ] is generally considered a reliable source. RFC tag removed.}} | |||
==Da Costa's syndrome same category as Peptic Ulcers== | |||
] is used by students and professors at every single English-language medical school in the world. Thousands of physicians reference it. As a flagship publication from the world's largest scientific publishing house, Elsevier, it clearly meets the WP:V description of "books published by respected publishing houses," and in fact it is used as a reference in hundreds of Misplaced Pages articles. Guido den Broeder apparently still thinks that this major reference work is not considered a reliable source for the purposes of the ] policy. Please reply below and let Guido know whether you think Dorland's is a reliable source. ] (]) 13:55, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:JFW - About 7 months ago, at 22:19 on 18-12-07 you responded to a question on the Misplaced Pages talk:WikiProject Medicine page with the words “The condition . . . could be described as "], ] or somesuch”. here . | |||
:As ] says, the reliability of a source depends on the context, i.e. what you want to cite it for. In this case, the dictionary makes a statement about the nature of Da Costa's syndrome, but does this without research and does not provide any sources as evidence for that statement. Hence, while it could be a reliable source for many other things, it is not a reliable source for that statement, and copying it as fact would be original research. ] (]) 14:36, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Dorland's is a reliable source. No dictionary cites its sources—we expect it to be a reference point as to the definition of terms. We have to assume its authors have made a good effort at establishing the consensus academic opinion on each subject. Is there evidence that this dictionary is held in poor regard? It won't be infallible, no source is. It won't be comprehensive, since it only allocates a paragraph or so to each word. But to 100% dismiss it requires evidence from an equal or higher authority. Not one's personal opinion. There's nothing "original research" about using a dictionary definition in an article. ]°] 15:02, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::The higher authority would be the WHO. This dictionary directly contradicts the WHO classification. In general, dictionaries make very poor sources in Misplaced Pages terms, exactly because they generally don't cite sources. They may be excellent and trusted dictionaries, but that does not make them a reliable source per ]. Therefore, Misplaced Pages does not use dictionary definitions, period. ] (]) 15:19, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Note furthermore that ] says: "Sources should directly support the information as it is presented in an article". That was not the case here, the article text was not taken from the dictionary but consisted of speculation beyond it, also without actually citing this source. ] (]) 15:30, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::I'm not going to get drawn into how the sources are being used in the article. The issue was the dismissal of Dorland's. By WHO, do you mean, ? I'm afraid I don't see any contradiction, though the WHO statements are necessarily broader as they are classifying several disorders. Misplaced Pages does use dictionary definitions. I don't know what gives you that idea. ]°] 15:47, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::Some other evidence regarding Dorland's being an authoritative source: | |||
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:::::* These are products of a straight google search, which had 111,000 hits. Taber's medical dictionary, the one I use, had about 15,000 less. | |||
:::::* Just FYI, I'm of the totally unscientific and baseless opinion that "Somatoform disorder" means "we have no idea what we're talking about, you must be crazy" so I'm not going to get into whether the source was used appropriately, I'm just remarking that Dorland's is a reliable source.] (]) 17:48, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::Even a well-known and highly respected dictionary is only a tool, not a reliable let alone authorative source. Dictionaries consist entirely of simplifications. ] (]) 12:56, 27 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:I agree with you, given that the ‘irritability’ or ‘over-responsiveness’ of the colon or heart are related, and commonly occur together. | |||
== Startle reflex? == | |||
:I followed your link to IBS 4.1 on the same day here and noted that it was described as being in the same category as ]s where the ‘learned illness behaviour’ and ‘psychosomatic’ theories had been discredited by the discovery of ] bacterial infection, which was found to be the real scientifically proven cause. I then checked those pages and noted that there were no lengthy descriptions of somatoform, anxiety, or psychosomatic factors being causes, or being put in prominent positions at the start and end of the page. Why didn’t you remove the descriptions of those factors on the Da Costa page - given that you have previously provided your links which show that all three ailments are in the same category?] (]) 09:29, 28 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
* ''At the time it was proposed, Da Costa's Syndrome was seen as a physiological explanation for soldier's heart, or signs and symptoms shown by some veterans such as an elevated startle reflex. These would now be understood as both physiological and psychological, and called PTSD.'' | |||
::I'd be surprised to find that this page is on JFW's watchlist. Did you leave a note at his talk page to let him know about your question? ] (]) 17:05, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
I have not found any source for this except this one interview and people quoting Misplaced Pages. AFAIK there is no research that shows an elevated startle reflex for soldier's heart. Elevated reflexes are not unheard of as a byptroduct of an autonomic disorder, by the way, so it would not be evidence for being equivalent to a PTSD. ] (]) 18:37, 20 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:If nobody knows another, more reliable source, I am inclined to reduce this sentence to ''At the time it was proposed, Da Costa's Syndrome was seen as an explanation for soldier's heart''' (also removing 'physiological' since at the time there was no distinguishment between physiological and psychosomatic). ] (]) 08:16, 22 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
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== New source == | ||
{{ISBN|0306444461}} has information about how the disease has been reinterpreted over time. Table 1 on page 127 may be particularly useful. ] (]) 00:20, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Much of the relevant chapter is accessible via Google Books: see . 00:58, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Oglesby Paul== | |||
] presently redirects to this article, which does not seem correct to me as it is not specifically a post-war syndrome, and the name also does not imply all the symptoms that appear in Da Costa's syndrome. Any ideas? ] (]) 08:43, 22 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
OK, here it is: . Do we all have access? | |||
Re-reading, the thrust of Paul's summary appears to be a) "''The aetiology is obscure''" (which is in the abstract); b) "''it probably exists much as before but is more often identified and labelled in psychiatric terms such as "anxiety state" or "anxiety neurosis"; c) there's no harm in those diagnostic labels "as long as the essential importance of the syndrome, its prognosis, and treatment are properly appreciated''". ] (]) 13:54, 1 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
Guido den Broeder: Thankyou for your question, and please accept my apologies for the delay. I have had some criticism to respond to. | |||
You will find some information on ES by scrolling down to the 1919 history chronologically here however WhatamIdoing deleted it here You may also wish to check out the following number 15, by Sir Thomas Lewis in the reference window on that page, and also Lewis T. (1933) Diseases of the heart, The MacMillan Co., New York p.158-164. As you have mentioned Da Costa described a range of symptoms which seemed to be cardiac in nature, but where there was often no evidence of heart disease in 1871, during the American Civil War. Decades later, in World War 1, Sir Thomas Lewis studied a similar set of symptoms and noted that in some cases they only occurred during exertion so he called it Effort syndrome. Most authors since then have used the terms as synonyms but they are slightly different. Essentially most people who get these symptoms during exercise also get them at other times, and associated with other symptoms. Sir James MacKenzie attributed the symptoms of breathlessness, fatigue, and faintness etc. to pooling of blood in the abdominal and peripheral veins during exercise, which reduces blood flow to the brain. I included that information in the last paragraph of the 1916 chronology here again but WhatamIdoing deleted it here . You may also notice that the various studies of Da Costa’s refer to symptoms which occur in civilian life, before, during, and after wars, so there are overlaps to be considered later. I hope these references are helpful] (]) 06:37, 28 May 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
:I plan to have a look at the page's history since I feel that too much has been deleted. ] (]) 21:30, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Yes, that's how I read it: ] unknown, ] psychiatric/anxiety. ] (]) 05:53, 2 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Category == | |||
==Da Costa Article page text replaced with the text from the Posturewriter/DaCostaDraft== | |||
I have changed the categorization of the article to Somatoform disorders. Personally I think this classification is wrong as well, but it's the official one by the WHO and we should follow that. ] (]) 09:30, 22 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
On 20-7-08 an RFC was established to resolve issues relating to the content of the ] article page here. | |||
Two of the editors who had no previous involvement suggested that the dispute could be settled if the interested parties prepared subpage texts to be merged later by NPOV’s in order to ensure that both sides were considered and that the information was presented in compliance with Misplaced Pages policy. | |||
I was the only individual to prepare such a page from 28-9-08 here and I included most of the information and references from the existing page, and responded to criticism from one of the editors. During that process an NPOV named Avnjay then rewrote the introduction and the history of the subject from 1863 to 1900. | |||
The same editor has described the new text as “actually a lot better and far more detailed than the one that is currently up and I can't find anything which is COI, unsourced (97 different sources quoted!!), or biased.” here | |||
There has been no activity on that subpage since 30-11-08 here, and although there has been some criticism from one editor, that has also ceased. | |||
== Response to 5000 words of criticism in the twelve days between 12-5-08 and 22-5-08 == | |||
There has been no criticism from NPOV’s, and another NPOV named SmokeyJoe has recently stated - “silence is consensus”. | |||
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I have therefore decided to move the text from the subpage to replace the article page text. | |||
EdJonston and NPOV editors; To save duplication I am responding to the current COI issue 2 on this discussion page and have notified you of that on the ] page. | |||
I have been watching the COI process with interest for the past week, and have attempted a start on a response several times, but each time another editor, or a repeat by the same editor came up with another policy reason for suspending me, or deleting or blocking my contributions, so I decided to wait until the dust settled. | |||
WhatamIdoing has swamped the COI editors with an overwhelming amount of information on the 15th May here and on the 17th May here and on the 18th May here to convince you to warn me not to contribute to the Da Costa’s Syndrome article page anymore. Given those circumstance I can understand your decision to block me from future contributions, but please give me my right of reply, as this is a discussion page, which refers to both sides contributing before making any final decision. | |||
To prepare my response I have been printing out an increasing number of pages (more than 7) of editors comments from the past 12 days (5000 words), with three editors being critics, ], ], and ], and one appears in support, ], and with you being the NPOV administrator. (WhatamIdoing on his own, has presented over 1500 words of criticism on the ] page, and 500 words on this discussion page above, making his total more than 2000 words in one week, so I think it is reasonable for me to present a 2300 word response since I am also responding to an additional two critics where the combined total against is more than double that at 5000). The three critics appear to be sifting through the fine print of wikipolicy to find something (anything) which they can use as a pretext for deleting the information, and have independently and simultaneously come up with four different policies - breach of copyright, conflict of interest, ] , and page move. They have also used seven labels for what they suggest now, or previously are the obvious, ‘garden variety’ ], ‘text-book perfect’ ], or correct modern name for Da Costa’s syndrome, namely, orthostatic intolerance, hyperventilation syndrome, post-war syndrome, PTSD, anxiety disorder, neuroses, somatoform autonomic dysfunction, and more. They are using phraseology which creates the impression that they are experts on this topic and can casually discuss it with apparent ease, but please note that WhatamIdoing has argued that it is hyperventilation syndrome ], and Gordonofcartoon has argued that it is not , so they are contradicting each other. WhatamIdoing also said that I declare “that DCS is a Chronic fatigue syndrome, with no reference”. Here are two references that he deleted . You can see them by scrolling down the page to the chronological date. ] in 1951 referred to ‘neurocirculatory asthenia’ as the synonym, (Paul Dudley White spent most of his career from 1917 to at least 1972 studying this subject) and S.D. Rosen used the ‘effort syndrome’ as the synonym in his 1990 study. | |||
I will comment on some of this and hope you give me the courtesy of considering it, and if you and, or other NPOV editors could please check the Da Costa article page (what remains of it), and the full discussion page, the current and previous COI pages - where most of these matters were resolved in my favor because of the lack of response to my replies here ]. Please note that WhatamIdoing said that the matter was not contested here . Could you please also check the previous WikiProject Medicine page on this topic, and the wiki Articles for deletion page about a theory which some editors criticise and I am not allowed to mention. | |||
I will now start with ] who has accused me of not providing enough information about myself to make it clear that I am the author of that theory, and he implies that I have been deliberately evasive ]. By contrast ] is complaining that I have been promoting myself and my ideas to such an obvious and extreme extent that I am violating wiki COI policy ]. They are contradicting each other again by interpreting the same information in exactly the opposite way to justify suspending me by using opposite arguments, to support two completely different policies. Also on 18-12-08 on the WikiProject Medicine page JFW said that I had a habit of citing my own work without mentioning that I only did that on a previous discussion page (not an article page) because the editors asked me to confirm my identity and publications in major newspapers etc. and it was in response to notability requirements etc. which became progressively more demanding and JFW also said “The condition is largely historical (see PMID 3314950 which is an excellent review) and could be described as ‘]’ or somesuch”, which he also linked to 'Irritable bowel syndrome' wiki page. I followed the link to IBS 4.1 , which discredited the somatoform and psychosomatic theories because they were in the same category as gastric ulcers, which were previously regarded as an example of ‘learned illness behaviour’, and psychosomatic conditions until the real cause and a reliable cure for ulcers was discovered in the 1990’s. | |||
Did he notice that? - If so, then why didn’t he remove all reference to anxiety in the opening paragraph on the Da Costa’s article page to make it consistent with the other two ailments in this category e.g. here on the gastric ulcer page where there is no reference to anxiety. Also, with regard to that evidence, why does WhatamIdoing want to invent a new page called Somatoform autonomic dysfunction here and call it an anxiety disorder when he said on the discussion page on 15-5-08 that the Da Costa’s syndrome patients “probably do have a physical disorder that affects autonomic nerve function” and on the next paragraph writes more definitely “yes, most so-called DCS patients do have a ‘physical’ problem”. The word somatoform has the opposite meaning because it refers to symptoms or ailments which have no physical or physiological evidence to account for them | |||
, and WhatamIdoing also states in the first three lines that the autonomic feature is a response, not a cause, here , and Da Costa research history is full of evidence of physical or physiological cause, including, as Sir James MacKenzie said in 1916, the pooling of blood in abdominal veins reduces blood flow to the brain and causes the fatigue and faintness during exertion. EdJonston, did you notice that all this trouble with my critics started after I entered that review last week on 12-5-08 , and WhatamIdoing deleted it within 3 days here , and collectively two other editors also introduced four different policies of complaint. Did those criticisms divert your attention away from that important fact from history?, which is independently verifiable and from the most reliable source - a major scientific medical conference on the subject! I am reporting on other peoples research, not my own. I am just the messenger here. That is typical of the type of information, and the speedy delete that follows. They delete most references to the observations, discoveries, and measurements of the physical, physiological, biochemical, and neurological abnormalities, especially, as in the case just mentioned, the most important ones. It gives the impression that they are erasing all of that information from the article page to make their choice of the label ‘somatoform autonomic dysfunction’ look plausible. There have been more than 50 labels for Da Costa’s syndrome, and the ‘modern’ ‘accepted’ label tends to change every decade. Misplaced Pages is a democratically compiled encyclopedia, yet WhatamIdoing has suggested various reasons that other labels be considered, such as orthostatic intolerance or hyperventilation syndrome , etc. and now insists that only the mainstream dictionary or coded definitions should be given. If that is what wikipedia wants then all that is required is a photocopy machine and a medical dictionary as source material for every disease? Then it wouldn’t be necessary to to ask members of the public to assist with compilation. Some months ago I prepared a replacement for the original medical dictionary type description in the introduction, with one that included the views of all people, including researchers of the past (those who concluded that it is an anxiety disorder, and those who found evidence that it is physical), and the evidence and opinions of patient action groups, and individuals, which is collective and inclusive and therefore NPOV, but because of the other editors predictable response I haven’t posted it. Is it wikipedia policy to exclude the evidence and opinion of all of those other people. I am writing the history of Da Costa’s syndrome research and presenting the major discoveries in chronological order, and have made many references to psychological or social factors which influence the condition where appropriate, for example here , but other editors are trying to convince you that I am cherrypicking articles to suit my own ideas. Please consider the actual meaning of Somatoform , and then look at the history of research, and decide the naming issue, and then tell me if you need any more information about the copyright issue where I am giving information for free. I notified all COI editors in the last paragraph of the previous COI issue that I put the reference window on my website after joining wiki, and reviewed the best sources I could find because editors asked for independently verified sources of the highest quality. I use that as a source for selecting the best of the best to abbreviate for wiki and then WhatamIdoing says that I am using wiki as “a dumping ground” for my original research. Also, if Gordonofcartoon thinks that Harvard quality research is ] (rubbish that needs to be swept under the carpet - I don’t, and anything rejected by wiki has been put straight back onto my website, and now new reviews are put there in full before I abbreviate them for wiki, and I am giving wiki other people’s evidence and opinions, and keeping my own). Also, about something else that I entered once in good faith, and was accused of being disrespectful for adding it a second time. I was accused of taking up undue space for non-notable research, so I abbreviated it and explained on the discussion page that I had provided online proof of publication in a major newspaper, as requested, in a reasonable attempt to make it notable. WhatamIdoing just implied on this COI page, that I added that edit the second time, without change, and without mentioning my reasons on the discussion page , and then he ignores evidence of multiple major state newspaper accounts, as if they don’t exist, and says that I must only use independent peer reviewed major journal citations for everything , and he says I am on watchlists and will be deleted again unless I only use quotes from major peer reviewed journals , and then Gordonofcartoon deletes reviews of major peer reviewed journals on the grounds of a new policy of synthesis . In the meantime I accepted the deletion again, in accordance with the advertised warning re; if you are not prepared to accept merciless editing don’t contribute. This process was repeated later, by responding to my reply with a page move suggestion here . I have contributed, I write without fear or favor, I have won most of the debates for six months, and complied with policies where required, I have been warned about being on watchlists, and editors have attempted to discredit me through personal attacks here . When Supertycoon misunderstands me as a medically ignorant person here , how am I supposed to respond without revealing my actual background here , yet Gordonofcartoon again chooses to say I have self-identified in his second sentence here . Does he want me to say nothing so that he and WhatamIdoing can continue misrepresenting me as medically ignorant here and here . I have been accused of editing against consensus, to create the impression that many editors are against me, when currently only two editors are doing 95% of the criticising. Those two editors don’t apologise when I prove that they are mistaken on issues here , but choose to continue relentlessly here , but with new policies . My critics don’t seem to me to be editing for NPOV to improve the presentation which is supposed to be their role, but more like they want to be contributors with an opposing view, yet when I invite them to do that by setting up another page with another terminology, they don’t. If they set up such a page from their own initiative it would already be there but it isn’t , so their only motive is to remove this one. That is neither good editing, nor genuine contributing. WhatamIdoing was discussing COI relentlessly last week, and he ignored your advice to take a break and continued until he persuaded you to warn me for disruptive editing. I thought it was a good idea to take a break so that I could spend some time thinking about this. I also thought that it was discourteous for WhatamIdoing to ignore your request for a break, and that it was a violation of wiki discussion policy. Also, I am not an editor, I am a contributor, and the editors are being disruptive to my contributions. They aren’t editing, they are using the slightest fineprint policy reasons for deleting entire slabs of information which are extracted from reliable, independently verifiable sources. Could you please give me two weeks to reply to any future issues before making any decisions, because I prefer not to act hastily in regard to this volume of elaborate criticisms re: I don't wish to make comments that can be misconstrued again, or interpreted as violating another policy, or in plain English, they will say I am at fault if I do, and at fault if I don't etc. ] (])posturewriter <small>—Preceding ] was added at 04:16, 24 May 2008 (UTC)</small><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:Please cut this readable length. ] (]) 12:21, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Make an effort, don't attack someone and then refuse to listen to what he has to say in his defence. ] (]) 13:44, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Firstly, it's not my job to make an effort, it's PostureWriter's to follow ]. Secondly, it looks like classic ] to me. ] (]) 03:32, 30 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::It's either soup or ]. I think he's objecting that his opinion is being shut out and that other editors are being too factual, people are objecting with opinions that contain too much information. There may be a valid concern here, but it just isn't very persuasive since it rambles so much. ''"Also, I am not an editor, I am a contributor, and the editors are being disruptive to my contributions."'' seems to be the argument.] (]) 04:13, 30 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
I have taken into account the fundamental objectives of Wikpedia by presenting the sum of all knowledge on the topic, rather than providing selective conclusions from modern sources] (]) 07:54, 25 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
==PBS interview== | |||
I'm restoring. It looks considerably tendentious to remove as "non-notable PTSD source making unsourced claims" an interview with "Matthew Friedman, executive director of the VA's National Center for PTSD". That position makes his view a notable viewpoint, and there's no obligation for people cited to provide sources. ] (]) 12:31, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Neither Friedman, nor his center has on article an Misplaced Pages, nor can I find any reason why they should have one (could be my fault, but that's how it is). It is a well-known phenomenon that people tend to see all things in this world as belonging to their personal niche, and hence consider them nails, horses, or post-traumatic stress syndromes, as the case may be. There are countless such centers, we cannot possibly build Misplaced Pages articles in this manner. | |||
:Find a (reliable) scientific study that links Da Costa's syndrome and PTSD, and you can put it in. But no random websites, please. ] (]) 13:39, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Reverted to prior version. If we link to the final version of ], we find the closing statement: | |||
::Guido, this ''is'' a reliable source. The speaker is the head of the largest government health agency in the entire world that specializes in PTSD. He has both an MD and a PhD: a physician, a researcher, and a professor at ]'s medical school. ] is a the US's primary educational television system. | |||
::''User:Posturewriter is reminded of the WP:COI policy, and asked to avoid editing articles that fall under that scope for him. He is encouraged to contribute elsewhere in order to foster contructive editing throughout all parties, and is warned that further COI trouble will lead to a topic ban. Posturewriter should also, recognizing the COI issue, write a userspace essay, User:Posturewrite/COI declarations on how WP:COI applies to himself.'' | |||
::He names Da Costa as one of the early post-war syndromes in a brief review of the history of post-war syndromes. There are no experimental studies that compare DCS to ''anything'' as modern as PTSD. (How exactly would you run that experiment? Randomly assign a DCS or PTSD label to different people and see what happens?) However, anyone with a little bit of basic information can look at the definitions and see that there could be some overlap, and that both phenomena were first described in the context of soldiers. ] (]) 14:12, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:There was no general invitation to write separate drafts: Posturewriter chose to do so unilaterally, without guidance from medical editors, and making it abundantly clear that some existing editors were unwelcome. I don't know about others, but I've not commented on it for that reason and because it was clearly happening outside Misplaced Pages's normal collective editorial process. | |||
:::Fair enough, opinions on notability can differ. But by your reasoning the source cannot possibly be reliable. We cannot draw conclusions based on people's speculations, no natter how many titles they have. All we have to go on is the historical research, which does not report symptoms common to PTSD, as far as I can see (but correct me if I'm wrong). ] (]) 14:15, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:The "actually a lot better and far more detailed" quote is highly selective anyway; that comment was written in good faith by a non-medical editor, but full context needs to be seen at ], where an experienced medical editor replied with the view that the draft has considerable problems of style, weight and neutrlaity. | |||
:Given the RFC conclusion and the ongoing conflict of interest - see the the Posture Theory website (including the personal attack hidden in black-on-black at the foot of the page) - it is not his call to move his draft to articlespace. ] (]) 15:50, 25 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::]; Please stop telling lies. You were fully aware of the subpage suggestion by Avnjay in the seventh paragraph here and another recommendation by ] at 11:18 on 8-8-08 who wrote “If you want to create a userspace version of an article (such as Da Costa’s syndrome), get it perfected, and then seek to replace the existing article, then go for it” here. and you did comment on it at 16:30 on the same day when you wrote “No. I'm fed up with this” here] (]) 07:21, 26 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
::::I'm totally confused by this response. Let's try this again: | |||
::::These statements are a plain '''facts''': | |||
::::# Matthew J. Friedman is widely considered to be one of the world's foremost authorities on PTSD. | |||
::::# Matthew J. Friedman has published more than 50 articles in peer-reviewed scientific journals about PTSD. | |||
::::# Matthew J. Friedman is the Executive Director of the ] Center for PTSD. | |||
::::# Matthew J. Friedman is on the faculty of the ], where he teaches psychiatry and neuroscience. | |||
::::# Matthew J. Friedman is a ]. | |||
::::How do you add up these facts and get "by your reasoning the source cannot possibly be reliable"? By ''my'' reasoning, this is one of the most reliable sources in the entire world for this information. Who else could be a reliable source on the postwar syndromes if someone who has dedicated his entire professional career to PTSD isn't? ] (]) 19:34, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::Also, his or his oragnisation's presence or not on Misplaced Pages is irrelevant. ] (]) 19:36, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::He may be a reliable source on PTSD (I'd have to check that, points 2-5 say nothing and 1 is your statement), but not on Da Costa's syndrome, on which he has not done any research AFAIK. But if you think that a single remark by one physician in an interview is enough to overthrow the WHO classification, I suggest we ask for expert comment. ] (]) 20:58, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::'']; Please stop telling lies. You were fully aware'' | |||
:::::::You might also like to look at PMID 15274499: "The 20th century offered many examples of post-war syndromes such as Da Costa's syndrome, irritable heart, shell shock, effort syndrome, medical evacuation syndrome, post-traumatic stress disorder, and Gulf War syndrome." DCS is regularly, routinely, and frequently placed in the spectrum of post-war syndromes. In fact, I'm not sure that anyone except you has ever questioned this. ] (]) 22:42, 24 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::Please ]. I had no recollection of any general invitation, and certainly wouldn't have supported the idea unless it were a generally open draft (not a private sandbox only open to you and friendly editors). I don't read everything - especially with disputes spread over multiple pages - and by that time it looks as if my attention was drifting with the deluge of obfuscation. ] (]) 18:34, 26 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Thanks. From the citation it is clear that Da Costa's syndrome is NOT considered the same as PTSD in this publication, but a different post-war syndrome. There are many post-war syndromes. I am not questioning that Da Costa's syndrome is one of them, on the contrary. But they are not all the same. Some are physical, some are psychosomatic, and with some we don't know. ] (]) 00:07, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I also support the removal of Posturewriter's unbalanced and poorly sourced version. | |||
Still not convinced that a number of ] think that DCS is just an older description of PTSD? Try these sources... | |||
::PW, shall we take this step by step? Nearly all of your sources are unreliable in terms of Wikipeda's policies. I realize that you won't take my word for it. I'm willing to discuss your sources, one at a time, at ], which is where questions of this type are usually settled. Does that work for you? ] (]) 01:32, 26 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::Because of the time zone complications, I decided to start tonight anyway. I picked the iguana website for the first source to contest. It's at ]. ] (]) 02:19, 26 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
* "For at least a century before PTSD was officially born, investigators noted somatic, physiologic, and behavioral consequences of trauma, currently embedded in the DSM-IV criteria. As early as 1871, Da Costa described the autonomic cardiac symptoms of soldiers exposed to the horrors of the Civil War." (PMID 12462860) | |||
:::::]; Your obvious objective is to maintain control of the content on the ] article page by continually using dubious policy interpretations as part of a never ending wild goose chase. If your motives were sincere you would leave my text on the article page and then we could discuss each reference one at a time] (]) 07:21, 26 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
* "What kind of syndromes can be considered as post-traumatic? When, in 1871, Jacob Mendez da Costa, an American army physician, described the syndrome of ''irritable heart'' (Da Costa 1871, Paul 1987), he described a post-traumatic syndrome within the cultural context of his time." (ISBN 0471978736, page 205). (For more on "the cultural context of his time," and the political pressures, see page 35 in .) | |||
*Apart from the iguana website, the rest of the sources in that huge history section (which could make a stand-alone article) don't look at first sight to be outrageously daft. What is the problem with them? ]] 14:56, 26 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
* "During the Civil War, a PTSD-like disorder was referred to as the ‘Da Costa's Syndrome’ (3), from the American internist Jacob Mendez Da Costa (1833–1900; Civil War duty: military hospital in Philadelphia)." (PMID 16322808) | |||
::My primary concern is not the history section, but since you've asked, the biggest problem with the history section is a ] issue: Posturewriter seriously overemphasizes and even misrepresents much of the history. For example, "In 1916 Sir James MacKenzie chaired a major medical conference aimed at gaining a better understanding of the condition." Actually, MacKenzie gave a single, short presentation about this condition, at a normal medical conference that made no claim of being focused on this condition. | |||
::There's also a style problem. This is not encyclopedic writing. Do we really need to list each and every person that wrote about related conditions during the first sixty years? I don't think it's appropriate. Do we need to describe the contents of each and every paper? I don't think it's appropriate. Do we need three entire paragraphs on a medical textbook from 1951? (Note that a 1950s textbook has been selected because ] wasn't identified until the next decade.) This is all an inappropriate level of detail. Posturewriter is welcome to put it up on his own website, but detailed descriptions of relatively minor papers don't represent an encyclopedic article. | |||
::And above all, why doesn't the history section rely on the ''history'' papers? They do exist, and a couple are even cited in passing. But Posturewriter has instead relied on his own interpretation of ] instead of basing the history section around good secondary sources that directly address the relevant history. ] (]) 19:14, 26 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::Acknowledged, and voicing broad agreement. ]] 15:29, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
* "Reports of disorders following war experience certainly go back to the American Civil War (1861-1865). At this time a physician (Jacob Mendez Da Costa) described patients who developed palpitations (which are consistent with panic attacks or PTSD). The psychiatric aspects were not fully recognized and the condition was known at that time as “Da Costa’s heart”." (ISBN 1862593376; chapter 11 of Pridmore's psychiatry textbook is online ) | |||
I have replaced the existing page a text that has been described by NPOV Avnjay as “a lot better and far more detailed than the one that is currently up and I can't find anything which is COI, unsourced (97 different sources quoted!!), or biased” here] (]) 09:04, 27 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
Guido, I can keep this up just about as long as necessary, but I think I've made my point. Note that I'm not trying to influence your personal POV here. Whether or not you or I personally agree with a connection to PTSD is absolutely irrelevant. As I've said above, I personally think that more DCS cases can be explained by autonomic nerve dysfunction (with primary symptoms of hyperventilation and vasovagal dysfunction ) than by anything else, including PTSD. As Misplaced Pages editors, however, we have to represent the breadth of the published record instead of just our private views, and many, many ] that think DCS is, or is highly related to, PTSD. This view may not be deserve the exactly same weight as the WHO schema, but the view is definitely a ''significant'' presence in the literature and deserves representation in this article. ] (]) 03:42, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
WhatamIdoing; regarding your continuing suggestion that I am ignoring MVP, I have added a paragraph and 6 references on it, four from Charles Wooley up until 2004 here, whose 1976 paper here has been on ]'s User page for 12 months, since 20-12-07 here without being discussed by him despite me asking him and you to review it. Note that it has Mitral Valve Prolapse Syndrome as a synonym in the title] (]) 09:04, 27 January 2009 (UTC)posturwriter | |||
:That is a common misconception. An article should not reflect the breadth of the published record, but the breadth of the published reliable record. Of these four sources, the first three only express an opinion not backed up by research, while the fourth did look at elements of the research and (therefore) only concludes 'consistent with' - which is correct, but of little value (it is consistent with all kinds of disorders). We cannot put original research in the article by saying that DCS '''is''' an anxiety syndrome or '''would be considered''' a form of PTSD. The best we can do is the same as Paul did, i.e. mention that such labels are sometimes attached, but we cannot write that these labels are correct. And then we would need to do that in a way that keeps the article neutral. ] (]) 11:29, 25 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:]. I noted it there to read, and haven't yet got around to it. I can't read everything and can't attend to everything, especially amid the general excess of verbiage. Unlike you, I am not interested in this sole topic, and can't be expected to notice every single detail of it (particularly given your failure to follow the ] to be concise and keep discussion focused). | |||
==Summary style== | |||
:You have also been told before: that Avnjay quote is out of context. It was made in good faith, but he/she is not a medical editor, and was unaware of the many problems pointed out by WhatamIdoing, who is. ] (]) 09:28, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
WhatamIdoing; In 1871 Da Costa came to the conclusion that many factors seemed to overlap in causing a syndrome which has since been named after him, but close study revealed that it was "Fevers" 17%, "Diarrhoea" 30.5%, "Hard field service, particularly excessive marching" 34.5%, and finally, "Wounds, injuries, rheumatism, scurvy, ordinary duties of soldier life, and doubtful causes" 18%, and the symptoms are palpitations, breathlessness and fatigue in response to exertion, but you deleted that evidence here | |||
and now you are saying that it is the modern equivalent of Post-traumatic stress disorder where the wikipedia page describes it as being caused by “an anxiety disorder that can develop after exposure to one or more terrifying events in which grave physical harm occurred or was threatened” here ] | |||
:::] if you haven't been able to read something about Da Costa's syndrome that has been on your "to do" list for more than 12 months then you shouldn't be editing the page, and you definitely should not be criticising my 60 references. | |||
::: Also note that WhatamIdoings qualifications are self-described here in particular WhatamIdoing is not a healthcare professional and have no plans to become one" . . . and is "typically useless in cardiology" and "can contribute at a very basic level, such as copy editing or reviewing sources" . . . and . . . If it's important . . . WhatamIdoing "can become an "instant expert" on more or less any narrow subject". | |||
You also quote Oglesby (by referring to him as Paul 1987). Oglesby says that it won’t do any harm to call DCS an anxiety disorder nowadays (meaning it is OK for the time being), so long as it is understood that in order to gain a proper understanding of the condition “It is educational to review and summarise the past. What has been forgotten should not necessarily be forgotten” here . | |||
:::I highlight the fact that you are too busy to learn about the things you profess to know, and WhatamIdoing is only an "instant expert" and is "useless at cardiology" so should not be commenting on the complex 140 years of Da Costa's syndrome research, or on MVP.] (]) 10:08, 27 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
::::''not a healthcare professional'' | |||
If Oglesby of Harvard Medical School regards evidence from history as important, why have you deleted my review of his research history by calling it ] (lingo for unimportant obsolete rubbish that has limited interest to readers and needs to be swept away) here | |||
::::Did I say anything about being a healthcare professional? I said "medical editor" - one who routinely edits on medical topics here, and hence is thoroughly conversant with aspects such as ]. ] (]) 10:25, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
and here . You will recall that I did a one page review of Oglesby’s 10 page history of medical controversies on this topic, and Gordonofcartoon deleted it and replaced it with one or two lines about anxiety here . He essentially deleted reliable independent evidence from a reputable peer reviewed journal and replaced it with his opinion. I would like all NPOV editors to read Oglesby’s full article here | |||
:::Posturewriter has been blocked for COI violations and editwarring. He's also not usually active on weekdays, so we'll presumably be able to take this up next weekend. | |||
:::I've reverted to the previous version. I note that Posturewriter declined to remove the unreliable source after being informed that (despite his arguments) every editor at RSN opposed the use of a personal webpage in this article. | |||
Also please note that on the next edit WhatamIdoing deleted a lot of other evidence of the type that Oglesby recommended “should not necessarily be forgotten” here | |||
:::For the record, I believe that a choice to re-insert his strongly disputed and seriously unbalanced text without explicit support on this talk page by at least one established editor other than Posturewriter will be considered further edit warring and likely earn him another block. I hope that he will be willing to talk instead of to edit war. ] (]) 18:27, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
Also, in the opening paragraph of the article page here you say that Da Costa’s syndrome causes the symptoms, when the syndrome is a set of symptoms, and not the cause of them?] (]) 08:03, 27 May 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
*Posturewriter is banned. Apologies for not getting round to this sooner. ] (]) 15:45, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::Just a minor note: If you read the cardiologist's , you'll see that Paul is his last name, not his first. ] (]) 03:32, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::::WhatamIdoing; thanks, I have been curious about the apparent non sequitur in his name, given that his research is published in English language journals] (]) 06:32, 29 May 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
:::::::::Unusual, isn't it? The first time I saw it, I thought that the printer made a typo. ] (]) 18:27, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Because this is an encyclopedia for the general reader, not a treatise for the expert. We ''summarize'' information that will be interesting to the ''average reader,'' who is neither a physician nor a patient. The information that "should not necessarily be forgotten" is information that should not necessarily be forgotten ''by the physician who is charged with diagnosing or treating this,'' not the average reader. | |||
:What the average reader needs to know is this: It's an old name, there's some diversity of opinion on what it "really" represents, and nobody really uses this diagnostic label any longer (because the doc who thinks its HVS uses that label, the one who thinks its PTSD uses that label, and so forth). The average reader has absolutely no need for an explication of all the papers that talk about this phenomenon. ] (]) 13:46, 27 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Actually, this is an encyclopedia for everyone, and everything. Further, while we don't need to spell out every detail of every study, neither do we need to summarize in such a fashion that entire threads of research are forgotten. ] (]) 21:28, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Please read ]. ] (]) 23:12, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::That page is not about what Misplaced Pages is, and its comment in passing is wrong. See ]. ] (]) 23:51, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::I have now corrected that page, one that you have edited a lot and where I have noticed that you are consistently making this mistake. ] (]) 00:21, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::"]" is an official guideline that was developed through an extensive process of community input and revision. I see that your "corrections" have been reverted -- three times within one hour. ] (]) 02:34, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Which only means that the page is wrong again. There are many errors in official guidelines, especially where things are mentioned in passing. This guideline is not a guideline on what Misplaced Pages is and can therefore not be used to make your point. ] (]) 09:01, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::::You have been invited on that page to make a case for your preferred version. Let's continue the discussion ]. Any editor is welcome to join the discussion. ] (]) 18:24, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::It is (again) the one making the claim who has to make his case. ] (]) 18:52, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
== ICD-9 == | |||
Pleas note that ICD9-CM is not a WHO product, it is published by the ]. ] (]) 07:33, 27 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Surgeon General == | |||
Found a lot of interesting material at from the Office of Medical History. ] (]) 08:46, 27 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
It is interesting. I will have a look at that reference and comment later] (]) 06:37, 28 May 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
== Names for this phenomenon == | |||
Guido, | |||
These names represent exactly the same condition: | |||
* Cardiac neurosis | |||
* Da Costa's syndrome | |||
* Neurocirculatory asthenia | |||
* Irritable heart syndrome | |||
* Effort syndrome | |||
The names change as people attempt to more precisely define the condition, or want to promote their personal views of the cause. So Cardiac neurosis is "DCS, and I think it's entirely psychological"; Neurocirculatory asthenia is "DCS, caused by weak nerves affecting the heart"; Irritable heart is "DCS, and it's entirely physical"; and so forth. | |||
Saying that they're different is entirely unsupported by ''any'' of the published papers -- it's like saying that ] is not ]. | |||
So: The article currently cites several papers that assert these are the same condition, and many more have been cited in the past (but deleted because it made the article too detailed). I invite you to produce reliable sources which assert that these are materially different. In the absence of that, I invite you to quit introducing this particular factual error into this article. ] (]) 13:56, 27 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:What factual error would that be? | |||
:It's the other way around, the claim that two things are the same needs proof. | |||
:To explain this situation, however: one can say that to some extent these names they were attached to the same condition or at least share a certain subset of symptoms. Only to some extent though, where the main point is that DCS is restricted to post-war syndrome, whereas NA includes the general population; furthermore DCS is more detailed in its symptom description while NA in part presupposes a certain etiology. These two are therefore not the same, but could be equivalent or interchangeable. However, that is not a fact, but a statement by authors. The other three diagnoses are so poorly defined that mentioning them in the article at all serves no purpose IMHO. ] (]) 14:18, 27 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Actually, DCS is ''not'' solely a post-war syndrome, nor even a post-trauma syndrome. Some individual authors emphasize that aspect, but it is certainly not the only interpretation. | |||
::Most papers about DCS use one or more names interchangeably. See from NORD, which lists several terms (more than I give above) as exact synonyms. Many original scientific papers, and name several of these as exact synonyms. So I have good, reliable sources -- both original research papers and independent, third-party reviews -- that all assert that these terms are synonyms. | |||
::Unless you can produce several reliable sources that say these names represent materially different syndromes, then I ask you to please quit changing the article to promote your unsourced, personal POV that they are different. ] (]) 19:49, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::I strongly suggest that you follow ]. Meanwhile, once again, your first two sources are unreliable, while the third does not do what you claim it to do. ] (]) 21:21, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::# Please explain why you believe that the National Organization for Rare Diseases -- the preeminent organization for rare diseases, which is considered the most authoritative and comprehensive organization in the entire world for rare diseases, and whose work is cited with approval by several governments, including, for example, the US and Canada -- is "unreliable." | |||
::::# Please explain why a report by Paul Wood, MD, FRCP, published in ], is "unreliable." On what grounds, exactly? Are you aware that Paul Wood was a physician at the National Hospital for Diseases of the Heart, in the Effort Syndrome Unit itself? Do you think he somehow held that position without knowing anything about the sole subject of the entire unit? | |||
::::# Please explain how "THE purpose of this report is to summarize present-day knowledge about neurocirculatory asthenia (anxiety neurosis, neurasthenia, effort syndrome) with special attention to its relationships with life situations..." can be interpreted in any way other than "These four names refer to exactly the same thing." | |||
::::I find your lectures about civility offensive and suggest that you stop using that policy as a bludgeon in your ongoing efforts to thwart my efforts to make this article accurate. ] (]) 23:10, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::I am not going to repeat the same exercise over and over again. Your original research will not make it into the article, and that's the end of it, no matter how many sources you are willing to misinterpret. ] (]) 23:54, 28 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::So I interpret this remark as meaning that you've been unable to find a single plausible source to support your POV, and that you find it difficult to claim with a straight face, for example, that the head of a unit dedicated to this syndrome doesn't know what it's called. Thank you for your comments. I'll restore the correct information, with the extra sources listed here. ] (]) 03:01, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::::WhatamIdoing; You have used 2 references to argue that 5 diagnostic labels are synonyms for Da Costa’s syndrome, including cardiac neuroses and neurocirculatory asthenia here . However, although many authors use them as synonyms, not all do. For example, Oglesby Paul, who you often refer to as one of your reliable sources, uses the term neurocirculatory asthenia as a synonym for Da Costa’s syndrome, and Cardiac Neurosis as a synonym for cardiophobia, when he says that “Not all patients with neurocirculatory asthenia have a cardiac neurosis, and not all patients with cardiac neurosis have neurocirculatory asthenia” - which were his exact words in his closing paragraph on page 313 here . In plain English he is saying that some people get palpitations, breathlessness, faintness and fatigue during exertion (Da Costa’s syndrome), but they don’t misinterpret it as heart disease, or worry about it (cardiophobia) - they just avoid the levels of activity which cause the symptoms] (]) 06:32, 29 May 2008 (UTC)posturewriter | |||
:::::::::@WAID: It's the claim that needs evidence, not the removal of it. Your claim can, however, not be proven. It is not possible to prove that two different diagnoses address the same condition, and therefore no article should say something like that. What it can say is what it already says, that sources consider them equivalent, or that they are used interchangeably, or that they have the same code, etc. But that's all. The article doesn't need to repeat it a million times either. Using the best reliable source (Paul) suffices. ] (]) 09:08, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
(Undent) Thanks, Posturewriter. I've incorporated that information. Is there another example of this distinction being made explicit that you might like to include, or is this good enough for now? ] (]) 19:11, 29 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Please don't lie in your edit summary. I have again reverted your massive edit for which there is no consensus, and will look if something can be salvaged from it tomorrow. ] (]) 20:11, 29 May 2008 (UTC) |
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PW, I'm familiar with your argument that tight clothing triggers DCS symptoms. The idea was presented by Maclean and Meyer well before Da Costa's paper. However, I invite you to consider this:
- "Jacob Da Costa (1833–1900), who had studied the phenomenon during the American Civil War (Wooley 1982), concluded that there was no clear-cut cause, though his analysis of 200 cases (selection criteria were not stated) showed that 38.5% had been subject to ‘hard field service and excessive marching’, and a further 30.5% had previously suffered from diarrhoea (Da Costa 1871, p. 37; Wooley 2002). Since ‘irritable heart’, as Da Costa termed the disorder, was not confined to the infantry but affected the cavalry and artillery, he argued that the webbing and packs, which varied between these arms, could not have been the primary cause. Although this was widely regarded as a disorder suffered by soldiers in wartime, Da Costa made the important observation that the same cluster of symptoms could also be seen in civilians."
Furthermore, when the British War Office redesigned the gear to prevent constriction, the men using the new gear had just as many problems as the men using the old gear. Therefore, everyone dropped this "tight clothing" idea: data trumped theory.
I just don't think that we can present this as anything other than the first hypothesis, which was quickly discarded. WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:43, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
- WhatamIdoing; I don’t think that it is appropriate to abbreviate code ID’s, however, like you, I am also familiar with the causes of Da Costa syndrome, according to Da Costa himself, as I have previously provided the statistics for wikipedia here which somebody else has since deleted. I am also familiar with the affects of tight clothing on health. There were many articles on the subject in the nineteenth century which were published in research journals throughout the Western World when the corset debates were prominent, and ended convincingly against tight waisted corsets because the evidence showed that they did have very serious adverse affects by crushing, twisting, and displacing internal organs, thereby interfering with their function and producing horrendous health problems. In 1903 Alex Blad of Copenhagen referred to some 800 articles about the ailments caused by those displacements which were collectively called visceroptosis.
- As you know, women who wore corsets were renown for getting breathless and exhausted in response to the slightest effort, and often felt faint, and they relieved all of those symptoms by unlacing their corsets.
- Unfortunately some children were put into corsets from as early as 4 years old, to permanently deform them into wasp-waisted adults as they developed, and those children did not notice or accept the fact that corsets were responsible for their multiple diseases and early deaths. However the tighter the corset worn, the shorter the life expectancy, with statistics showing that the 13” diameter corset, which was available as a standard size in many street corner fashion shops in London, was associated with a life expectancy of only 35 years.
- As the weight of evidence overcame the resistance of the corset protagonists millions of women changed over to loose garments to regain their health and strength and render the corset as a relic, and a serious mistake of fashion history.
- Most of that history has been forgotten which is why I have been providing the information for Misplaced Pages readers.
- The evidence indicates that one of the many causes of Da Costa’s syndrome in soldiers (palpitations, breathlessness, faintness, and fatigue on exertion) was tight straps about the chest, and Da Costa’s observations about the other factors which were associated with the development of the condition could explain the occurrence in cavalry or artillery units, where such straps were not wornPosturewriter (talk) 00:56, 16 June 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- WhatamIdoing; for a medical research paper from 1887, describing detailed scientific measurements of tight clothing about the chest and waist, and measurements of the pressure in the chest and abdominal cavities, and the harmful affects on health, see here and note that I have previously provided that link from another wikipedia article to the Da Costa article page which was deleted by Gordonofcartoon on 29-12-07Posturewriter (talk) 06:50, 25 June 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- I don't recall that at this instant. However, note that unless the connection between that particular corset study and DCS has been previously made in some reliable third-party source, it's original research to try to use it as corroborative background to the DCS article. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 14:07, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
- WhatamIdoing; for a medical research paper from 1887, describing detailed scientific measurements of tight clothing about the chest and waist, and measurements of the pressure in the chest and abdominal cavities, and the harmful affects on health, see here and note that I have previously provided that link from another wikipedia article to the Da Costa article page which was deleted by Gordonofcartoon on 29-12-07Posturewriter (talk) 06:50, 25 June 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
PW, I'm not sure what the "abbreviating code IDs" refers to.
However, on this topic, nobody here is claiming that tight clothing is good for people. We're just saying that the existing evidence strongly indicates that it doesn't cause DCS. We can support this: e.g., Da Costa specifically considered and rejected this early guess at a cause. WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:31, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
- Also, you might be interested in reading Corset#Disadvantages, where information about the disadvantages of corsets would be appropriate. WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:33, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
- WhatamIdoing; if you check your own reference here and scroll down to the section called Disorderly Action of the Heart - which is a synonym for Da Costa’s syndrome, you will see reference to the comments on tight clothing and heavy military knapsacks etc as a proposed cause of the ailment. by Maclean 1867 p.111, & Myers 1870 p.81. The general idea was that a tight collar above, and a tight waist belt below, acts like a vice on the chest, resisting blood flow through the chest, and straining the heart and lungs, especially during strenuous exertion.
- Also consider Da Costa’s own comments in his 1871 paper: "On Irritable Heart," re; "UNDOUBTEDLY the WAIST BELT, but particularly THE KNAPSACK, may have had something to do with aggravating the trouble; but I could find no proof that they had produced it".
- However, by contrast, on 25-6-08 you claimed that “Da Costa specifically considered and rejected this early guess at a cause” here . According to your reference he actually “argued that the webbing and packs, which varied between these arms, could not have been the primary cause” here , which indicates his observation was that the straps 'did contribute' to the symptoms, but not in a 'primary way', and that he hadn’t discarded the idea of the waist belt and knapsack being involved. Please stop misrepresenting the evidencePosturewriter (talk) 01:22, 6 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- WhatamIdoing; Please stop adding undue weight to your opinions by using expressions such as “We're just saying”. You are supposed to support your comments with scientific evidence, not with the opinions of other unnamed persons, who’s identity we are supposed to guess about. If they exist, then let them present their own evidencePosturewriter (talk) 01:22, 6 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
Misplaced Pages; A Democratically Compiled On-line Publication???
WhatamIdoing; why did you refer to the Da Costa Article page as my page today here ? The article was started by someone else on 15-5-2006 here 19 months before I made my first contribution on 19-12-07 here and information about myself was deleted 6 months ago, and you said that you appreciated my other efforts, and insisted that I only used information from top quality, independent, peer reviewed scientific journals several times including here , which I have since been doing until you deleted 75% of that information in one slab here and then Gordonofcartoon and yourself presented five thousand words of argument here , and on the Da Costa discussion page, to convince Edjonston to suspend me if I added any more information to the article page on the same page on 19-5-08, and then my 2500 word defence on 24-5-08 here was dismissed with Gordonofcartoons words “Please cut this readable length” on the same day here , implying that it is acceptable for editors to use 5000 words of criticism on me, but unreasonable for me to use half that number of words in defence. That process gave you and Gordonofcartoon a total dictatorship of the page, and then JFW invited me to contribute to discussions to influence the page content with his comment “Consider avoiding the Da Costa syndrome article proper, and rather concentrating on the talkpage. This is where you can really influence article content, and build consensus with other contributors” here and when I made valid suggestions on 26-6-08 here you used more policies to disregard them here etc. which enables you to maintain totalitarian control of the information with references from textbooks, dictionaries, committees, and childrens fiction novels. At the moment it is your page. However, I was informed that wikipedia was a democratically compiled publication, and that any member of the public was invited to join and contribute to the improvement of wikipedia articles, and to expect merciless editing, which is what I have been doingPosturewriter (talk) 08:14, 28 June 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- when I made valid suggestions on 26-6-08
- You didn't make valid suggestions. You made an argument based on a) your own analysis of a book (a classic example of the "unpublished analysis or synthesis of published material that serves to advance a position" that's mentioned mentioned right up front at WP:NOR, a core policy) and b) on your continuing mistaken belief that a hatnote is a reference. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 00:07, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
- Gordonofcartoon; Can you please explain how I am supposed to discuss the relevance of Gary Paulen’s novel unless I read it, and why you are trying to justify the use of a hatnote which contains a completely irrelevant and misleading item in a position of unwarranted prominence at the top of the article pagePosturewriter (talk) 06:10, 2 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- No-one's stopping you reading it; it's the interpretation of its content through the filter of your own theory that is original research.
- Take the hatnote issue to WP:HATNOTE if it bothers you. I've given you examples of typical hatnote usage; if you choose to disbelieve that's how it works, that's your problem. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 11:52, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
- Gordonofcartoon; Can you please explain how I am supposed to discuss the relevance of Gary Paulen’s novel unless I read it, and why you are trying to justify the use of a hatnote which contains a completely irrelevant and misleading item in a position of unwarranted prominence at the top of the article pagePosturewriter (talk) 06:10, 2 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- PW, you'll also want to read WP:Accessibility, which demands that disambiguation links, if any are needed, always be placed before the article itself starts. (Hatnote is just a slang term for a dab link at the top of an article.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:04, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
- Gordonofcartoon; I don’t like repeating myself, but as I said before I have read Da Costa’s original article, and I have read Paulsen’s book, and I observed that the symptoms are different. I did not have to research, analyse or filter anything to describe the obvious irrelevance of Paulsen’s book. My Webster’s dictionary gives several meanings for the word reference including “a book or passage to which a reader is referred”. Another one of many is “Mention”. The book is mentioned at the top of the page, so I was not mistaken about anything, just misinterpreted, and, or deliberately misrepresented by you. Also, as you have chosen to ignore my reasonable request, I will repeat it. If you want to discuss my observation of irrelevance, you should read Paulsen’s book yourself, and give me chapter and page numbers and direct quotes that you think makes them relevant, and I will discuss them. In the meantime, why should I register with obscure bugmenot sites, and read remotely related, unresolved hatnote guidelines when you have been ignoring my questions of relevance etc?. As I said before, and I will say it again, this is a discussion page, not your dictatorshipPosturewriter (talk) 09:45, 3 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- Sorry, but a) your personal comparison of a book and article is clear-cut original research; b) dictionary-lawyering is a flavour of WP:SOUP (hatnotes and references have well-defined functions here that are not based on Webster's dictionary).
- I've passed it to WP:HATNOTE. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 13:04, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
- This seems more like a content dispute than a discussion about style guidelines to me, but I can confirm that hatnotes are not references. - Dan Dank55 (talk)(mistakes) 14:27, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
- Thx. The particular issue is a bit of a "meta" one: whether disambiguation hatnotes interact with content.
- I think there are zero considerations beyond shared name. But Posturewriter OTOH is arguing that a hatnoted article forms part of the information sourcing of the article that links to it - i.e. that disambiguation to Soldier's Heart (novel) will take readers somewhere where they'll be misinformed about "soldier's heart" the syndrome.
- This seems to me at the level of arguing that the hatnote at Dunwich to Dunwich (Lovecraft) might make people think the real Dunwich is a decrepit place full of Cthulhu-worshipping inbred mutants. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 15:36, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
- This seems more like a content dispute than a discussion about style guidelines to me, but I can confirm that hatnotes are not references. - Dan Dank55 (talk)(mistakes) 14:27, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
- Gordonofcartoon; I don’t like repeating myself, but as I said before I have read Da Costa’s original article, and I have read Paulsen’s book, and I observed that the symptoms are different. I did not have to research, analyse or filter anything to describe the obvious irrelevance of Paulsen’s book. My Webster’s dictionary gives several meanings for the word reference including “a book or passage to which a reader is referred”. Another one of many is “Mention”. The book is mentioned at the top of the page, so I was not mistaken about anything, just misinterpreted, and, or deliberately misrepresented by you. Also, as you have chosen to ignore my reasonable request, I will repeat it. If you want to discuss my observation of irrelevance, you should read Paulsen’s book yourself, and give me chapter and page numbers and direct quotes that you think makes them relevant, and I will discuss them. In the meantime, why should I register with obscure bugmenot sites, and read remotely related, unresolved hatnote guidelines when you have been ignoring my questions of relevance etc?. As I said before, and I will say it again, this is a discussion page, not your dictatorshipPosturewriter (talk) 09:45, 3 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
Disambiguated
I've expanded the Soldier's heart disambigation page - it's a popular title - which makes the single-article disambiguation hatnote redundant. Problem solved? Gordonofcartoon (talk) 15:59, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
- Oops (as I said at WP:HATNOTE). I am way out of date (years, in fact) on developments at WP:HATNOTE, and wasn't aware of WP:NAMB. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 19:14, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
Colloquial term ‘Soldier’s Heart'?
The title of Da Costa’s 1871 research paper was “On Irritable Heart”, and not “On Soldier’s Heart”, and on the first page he describes how he started his study some years earlier and states “I gave the name irritable heart - a name by which the disorder soon became known both within and without the walls of the hospital”, which means that “irritable heart” was the colloquial term, not Soldier’s heart, and on page 19 he refers to articles in 1867 by Maclean and others in BMJ where “in most of which the term irritable heart has been adopted”. If Da Costa, and most of the people he knew called it Irritable heart, and there have been at least 100 other labels before and since, mainly used for civilian cases, why do you want to give the word “Soldier’s Heart” undue prominence by putting it at the top of the Da Costa's syndrome article page when it can be more appropriately placed at the bottom of the page in a “See Also” section with several others of equal or more relevance, as has previously been the case. Many authors have preferred the label of “Da Costa’s syndrome” because of it’s neutrality re; NPOV re; it’s not exclusively a soldier’s condition or a post-war syndrome, nor a heart condition, nor an anxiety state, nor a nervous condition, nor a somatoform disorder etc. all of which are interpretations by people with particular specialities, backgrounds, or niche opinions called bias Posturewriter (talk) 07:11, 14 July 2008 (UTC)posture writer
- Do you have any evidence that a general reader might end up at this article when searching for anything unrelated under the name of "irritable heart"? This is standard treatment for disambiguation and redirection. This is about navigating an encyclopedia with two million articles, not about the history of the term. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:38, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
- WhatamIdoing; When I saw Gary Paulsen’s novel Soldier’s Heart ‘mentioned’ at the top of the Da Costa page, I thought it was relevant, and phoned my library to check it. I was told that it was a popular fiction paperback in the children’s section. I borrowed it and read it and still have a copy in case another editor reads it and questions my report that it was irrelevant to Da Costa’s syndrome. Reading it was a 100% waste of my time, and will be 100% waste of any other wikipedia readers time. It will also give the topic novices a 100% misunderstanding of Da Costa’s syndrome. It should not be mentioned on the top line for those reasons. Is that the type of evidence you want to ignorePosturewriter (talk) 07:07, 15 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- The top of the page says "This article is about the medical condition also known as "soldier's heart". For other uses of the term, see Soldier's heart." This complies with WP:ACCESSIBILITY, which indicates that disambiguation links belong at the top of pages as a courtesy to people who are using screen readers (usually due to visual impairments). Even if you personally don't mind making a disabled person wait until his/her computer has read the entire page out loud, just so you can have the link to the disambiguation page at the end of the article instead at the top of the page, we do not, in practice, have a significant amount of choice here. We must comply with this guideline. WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:30, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
- The only thing I would question here is whether there's a need for the disambiguation link at all. How would a person looking for "soldier's heart" wind up on this page under normal circumstances?--NapoliRoma (talk) 18:40, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
- NapoliRoma; I share your view that the hatnote isn’t necessary, and there are many reasons why the label is misleading. For example, Da Costa’s syndrome more commonly occurs in civilian women. I have been threatened with suspension if I add to the article page, so could you please consider removing the hatnote (which gives undue prominence to the label by placing it at the top of the page), and returning it to a See Also section at the end of the pagePosturewriter (talk) 00:35, 16 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- How would a person looking for "soldier's heart" wind up on this page under normal circumstances?
- Because "soldier's heart", despite Posturewriter's claim to the contrary, is a common historical synonym for Da Costa's syndrome - and since not everyone hits the page via Misplaced Pages internal search, they ought to end up on this page. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 01:13, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- NapoliRoma; I share your view that the hatnote isn’t necessary, and there are many reasons why the label is misleading. For example, Da Costa’s syndrome more commonly occurs in civilian women. I have been threatened with suspension if I add to the article page, so could you please consider removing the hatnote (which gives undue prominence to the label by placing it at the top of the page), and returning it to a See Also section at the end of the pagePosturewriter (talk) 00:35, 16 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- Placing the dab note at the end of the article is not an option. It can be removed entirely (if determined to have no connection/not be needed/whatever), but cannot be buried in a place that is known to be remarkably inconvenient for disabled people. WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:05, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
(<-zing!) OK, I knew I was stepping in it, but once pedantry is in your heart, it never leaves... Re "people might search": try it; I did. If you search for soldier's heart on Google, Yahoo, or MSN, you do not get this page in the first tier of results. Putting a hatnote up because maybe this someday might change is not reasonable. Re "Gotta be at the top or nowhere, or millions of handicapped people will die": I think this overstates the case. By this argument, all links must be at the top. This would be difficult. My take, and understand I have no horse in this race: having a link to the "soldier's heart" dab page is not vital, but not a bad thing. But because there is little if any chance anyone will stumble on this page when looking for any other meaning of "soldier's heart", the one place it should not be is as a hatnote. It distracts the reader from the actual topic at hand for no defensible reason. Logically, the appropriate place for it would then be under "See also", with perhaps a bit of an explanation as to why it's there. Regards, NapoliRoma (talk) 01:29, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- According to WP:ACCESS, which is a guideline, dab links should be at the top. Basically, the reason for this is: say a person using a screen reader was searching for Soldier's Heart, and somehow he or she ended up on the Da Costa's page instead. If the dab link isn't at the top, (s)he will probably miss it because after reading the first couple of sentences he or she will assume that it won't be there, since that is where they have historically been. Now, obviously WP:ACCESS is a guideline and WP:IAR is often applied. I see no reason why it should be here, since following the guideline does not result in any loss of usability to non-disabled users. L'Aquatique 02:29, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- Since you are involved in accessibility for disabled, please try to be cautious in your assumptions about what they can do or not. To imply that someone can't follow a link placed at the ninth word of an article may be offensive. El imp (talk) 13:09, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
- Not to be too repetitive, but what's being discussed is not, strictly speaking, a disambiguation link, at least not in the sense of what WP:ACCESS is discussing. The name of this page is not "soldier's heart", and there is no redirect to this page that resembles "soldier's heart". Thus, a link from this page to another page named "soldier's heart" does not perform a disambiguating function.
- What's being discussed here, then, is a link. It is no different than a link to "fatigue" or "sweating". As such, WP:ACCESS does not appear to me to apply. Just as I would not include a link to "fatigue" as a hatnote on this page, I would not include a hatnote pointing to "soldier's heart".--NapoliRoma (talk) 06:57, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- I also dislike being repetitive, so I'll try to be as clear as possible. In its current incarnation, the hatnote is a dab link. It seems to me that there is question as to whether there even should be a hatnote with this information. I know little about Da Costa's and nothing about "Soldier's Heart" in general, so I cannot express an opinion. I do, however, know that WP:ACCESS absolutely applies here because we are talking about a dab link: it's even using a dab template for G-d's sake. L'Aquatique 07:57, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- It sounds like we're saying the same thing, but in different ways. Yes, it is using a dab template, but that doesn't mean that it is performaing a legitimate disambiguation. If I placed at the top of the article the following:
- This article is about Mr. Coffee. For the movie 101 Dalmations, see Anchovy essence.
- I would be using a disambiguation template, but I would not be providing a disambiguation, and WP:ACCESS would not apply. Clearly the current situation is not as absurd as my example, but having a link to soldier's heart is also not a disambiguation, because there is nothing ambiguous: just as this article is not about Mr. Coffee, neither is it named "soldier's heart," nor is there any redirect to this article that looks anything like "soldier's heart." Thus, like my example, the current hatnote is not a disambiguation, even though it uses a disambiguation template. WP:ACCESS does not apply.--NapoliRoma (talk) 14:25, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- I also dislike being repetitive, so I'll try to be as clear as possible. In its current incarnation, the hatnote is a dab link. It seems to me that there is question as to whether there even should be a hatnote with this information. I know little about Da Costa's and nothing about "Soldier's Heart" in general, so I cannot express an opinion. I do, however, know that WP:ACCESS absolutely applies here because we are talking about a dab link: it's even using a dab template for G-d's sake. L'Aquatique 07:57, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
- NapoliRoma and L'Aquatique; thankyou for your comments; My concerns here are not with policy, but with the false impression that reader’s get when the term “Soldier’s Heart” appears on the top line of the page. re: is it sensible for a doctor to tell a pregnant civilian woman on her first visit that she is suffering from the symptoms of Soldier’s Heart?. . . and what about civilian men, children of pre war age, and athletes etc. Perhaps you could remove it, or maybe put something which represents every case there such as - it is a type of - chronic fatigue syndrome? Do you understand why I think it is going to mislead readers who will end up in the children’s section of their local library reading irrelevant fiction - like I did - and I am an adult interested in Da Costa’s syndrome, with no interest in wasting my time - If your policy solves that problem then we are in agreementPosturewriter (talk)posturewriter —Preceding comment was added at 07:23, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
- It's pretty much an example of my general point: superfluous hatnotes are distracting at best, and in your case actually took you off on a completely fruitless tangent. This is the opposite of improving usability (including accessibility).--NapoliRoma (talk) 15:38, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Repetition does not yield fact. The template is a disambiguation template, its purpose is for disambiguation, and therefore WP:ACCESS does in fact apply. Disambiguation is designed to provide alternate articles where there might be confusion regarding which article is about what, and this is one of those circumstances. If you think the template is inappropriate for the article, just remove it. But if it's going to be in the article, it needs to be at the top. There's really not a lot more to say. L'Aquatique 07:54, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
Da Costa symptoms do not 'mimic' those of heart disease, but are 'similar to' them; re - 2nd line
The second line of the Da Costa's syndrome article page contains another mistake because Da Costa’s syndrome does not “mimic” the symptoms of heart disease. it is more correct to say that the symptoms are so “similar” that many doctors were unable to recognise the differences until Da Costa and other researchers clearly identified and distinguished them, so it is understandable that many patients might think the samePosturewriter (talk) 07:11, 14 July 2008 (UTC)posture writer
- Agreed, for once; although it's a fairly common phraseology even in scholarly publications it's a definite example of pathetic fallacy. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 12:01, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
Source verification
Re this {{Verify source}} : here's the Health Psychology Update issue (PDF): see pp 46-52. It's merely a description of pacing: no mention of DCS. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 18:12, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
- Then it should be removed or {{fact}}-tagged. WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:02, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
Gordonofcartoon; At 11:22 on 5-1-08 JamesSteward7 deleted a paragraph on pacing from the Chronic Fatigue Syndrome page here on the grounds that it was unreferenced. From my notes at that time it had been on the CFS page for more than a year, but was deleted soon after I added the reference to my webpage on 1-1-08. Why wasn’t it removed before then. I have since referred to ‘pacing’ on the DaCosta page. Why do you propose that it be removed from the Da Costa page now and not 6 months ago. It looks as though your are finding policy reasons for deleting things to suit your purposes. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Posturewriter (talk • contribs) 12:01, 27 July 2008
- As you've been asked before, please assume good faith. I have no idea what goes on at the CFS page, and I answered the reference point now purely because Whatamidoing drew attention to it by tagging it. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 16:07, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Well done, Gordonofcartoon: articulating the honest motives behind your actions in order to help Posturewriter assume good faith; as recommended here. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 16:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
The Physical and Physiological Evidence for the Symptoms
NapoliRoma; In 1916 Sir James Mackenzie was aware that the symptom of fatigue in Da Costa’s syndrome was related to the abnormal pooling of blood in the abdominal and peripheral veins. That is a physical and physiological abnormality. Could you please therefore read the full review here which has since been deleted. Could you then please return it to the history section of the page chronologically, or add the abbreviated version below, and remove the comments on the second line of the article page which state “a physical examination does not reveal any physiological abnormalities”, as it gives the false impression that there is no scientific evidence of physical or physiological abnormality”. Please feel free to ask any questions on this matter. Thankyou. . . . In 1916 the Royal Society of Medicine conducted a series of discussions on cardiac-like ailments in military life in World War 1. According to Sir James Mackenzie, who opened the conference, only 10% of cases involved actual heart disease. The remainder were referred to as having Soldier’s Heart, with no known cause. The condition was also seen in civilian life under similar circumstances after recovering from an exhausting illness such as typhoid fever, or from long periods of physical or mental strain. He noted that one of the significant symptoms was an abnormal chronic tendency to fatigue, particularly relating to exertion. He reported that the symptom of exhaustion was associated with “a persistent over-action of vasomotor influences" . . . and sometimes . . . "flushes of heat pass over the body, and warmth may tend to overfilling of the peripheral vessels. This is seen in people who faint when standing in a warm room, or who speedily become exhausted or even faint when exertion is made. In these, the blood tends to accumulate in the peripheral veins of the limbs and in the large abdominal veins”, which results in a reduced blood flow to the brain so that “the sense of exhaustion and syncope are provoked". MacKenzie presented this description to show that this type of exhaustion is related to poor blood circulation and was not the same mechanism which produced exhaustion of the heart itself. . . .
- Gofdonofcartoon; According to Oglesby Paul, Da Costa’s syndrome has no known cause here ]
- There is no scientific proof of anxiety as a cause, and any statement of that nature is opinion, and therefore contrary to NPOV. Please consider amending the misleading comments on the article page here . Posturewriter (talk) 10:24, 27 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- No, that's not quite right. According to Oglesby Paul, there is no known cause. That's one reliable source. According to quite a number of other reliable sources, the cause is anxiety, or the disease is highly related to anxiety. We cannot elevate Paul's opinion over the other sources simply because it lines up with our own perspective. WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- WhatamIdoing; I don’t think that quoting the opinions of particular groups who favor anxiety as a cause is a valid reason for excluding the opinions of many individuals or groups who don’t, or for excluding independent, peer reviewed scientific evidence of a physical cause.
- Here is an example which you have previously deleted . . . 'In 1951 Paul Dudley White wrote that “the symptoms are similar to heart disease, but are not the same, and he adds, that they are also similar to, but can occur in the absence of anxiety, and therefore need to be discussed separately” here Posturewriter (talk) 08:37, 29 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- Now can you find a WP:MEDRS-compliant source that says that in the last half century, and has excluded those misdiagnosed "DCS" patients that actually have mitral valve prolapse? (WP:MEDRS strongly prefers sources that were published in the last five years, so please don't feel like I'm being picky by asking for something published in the last fifty years.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 20:35, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- WhatamIdoing; Regarding your previous comment;
- 1. Your suggestion that I haven’t provided information from the most recent fifty years is because you have deleted everything up to 1997, which includes Oglesby Paul’s 1980 paper, and you later deleted Volkov’s 1980 study, Rosen’s 1990 study, and Bazelmans 1997 study here . . . which was published only seven years ago.
- 2. The reason that I haven’t added anything in chronological order up until 2008 is because you have threatened me with suspension if I do, and you could have , and have, provided the information if you wanted to - without deleting everything else.
- 5. I am familiar with Charles Wooley’s 1976 essay Diseases of Yesteryear, which discusses the Mitral Valve Prolapse aspect, and have my own copy of it, and it has a University of Adelaide date stamp for July 1976, only two months after it was published in the U.S. (thirty years ago), and it has also been on Gordonofcartoon’s talk page here at the end of his to do list for 6 months, and I have previously asked him to comment on it, but he hasn’t.
- 6. My contributions were in the history section, and you have provided introductory comments about selected modern opinions which are not supported by that evidencef of historyPosturewriter (talk) 04:24, 30 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter.
- 1) Rosen, Volkov, and Bazelmans are primary sources. We must have secondary sources.
- 2) I've threatened you with nothing.
- 3) You provided evidence from primary sources that not every single physician agrees with the majority opinion. Misplaced Pages, however, is built from secondary sources.
- 4) That is Rosen's opinion in a primary source. He is entitled to his opinion, but since it is not supported by secondary sources, we are not obligated to report it as fact.
- 5) No editor is under obligation to comment on a study just because you ask him to.
- 6) Your comments in the history section were unusually detailed -- for example, including the number of people in each study, the variety, severity, and/or proportions of their symptoms, the exact percentages that improved under different treatments -- which is a violation of WP:SUMMARY. But you're right: I have relied heavily on modern secondary sources, which by and large do not agree with your personal conclusions. Like Rosen, you are entitled to your opinion, but since it is not supported by secondary sources, we are not obligated to report it as fact. WhatamIdoing (talk) 06:44, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
References
- Mackenzie, Sir James (1916-01-18). "Discussions On The Soldier's Heart". Proceedings of the Royal Society of Medicine, Therapeutical and Pharmacological Section. 9: 27–60.
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Da Costa's syndrome same category as Peptic Ulcers
- JFW - About 7 months ago, at 22:19 on 18-12-07 you responded to a question on the Misplaced Pages talk:WikiProject Medicine page with the words “The condition . . . could be described as "Irritable bowel syndrome, irritable heart syndrome or somesuch”. here .
- I agree with you, given that the ‘irritability’ or ‘over-responsiveness’ of the colon or heart are related, and commonly occur together.
- I followed your link to IBS 4.1 on the same day here and noted that it was described as being in the same category as Peptic ulcers where the ‘learned illness behaviour’ and ‘psychosomatic’ theories had been discredited by the discovery of Helicobacter pylori bacterial infection, which was found to be the real scientifically proven cause. I then checked those pages and noted that there were no lengthy descriptions of somatoform, anxiety, or psychosomatic factors being causes, or being put in prominent positions at the start and end of the page. Why didn’t you remove the descriptions of those factors on the Da Costa page - given that you have previously provided your links which show that all three ailments are in the same category?Posturewriter (talk) 09:29, 28 July 2008 (UTC)posturewriter
- I'd be surprised to find that this page is on JFW's watchlist. Did you leave a note at his talk page to let him know about your question? WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:05, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
New source
ISBN 0306444461 has information about how the disease has been reinterpreted over time. Table 1 on page 127 may be particularly useful. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:20, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- Much of the relevant chapter is accessible via Google Books: see Psychiatric and Respiratory Aspects of Functional Cardiovascular Syndromes. 00:58, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Oglesby Paul
OK, here it is: http://heart.bmj.com/cgi/reprint/58/4/306. Do we all have access?
Re-reading, the thrust of Paul's summary appears to be a) "The aetiology is obscure" (which is in the abstract); b) "it probably exists much as before but is more often identified and labelled in psychiatric terms such as "anxiety state" or "anxiety neurosis"; c) there's no harm in those diagnostic labels "as long as the essential importance of the syndrome, its prognosis, and treatment are properly appreciated". Gordonofcartoon (talk) 13:54, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, that's how I read it: Etiology unknown, Medical classification psychiatric/anxiety. WhatamIdoing (talk) 05:53, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Da Costa Article page text replaced with the text from the Posturewriter/DaCostaDraft
On 20-7-08 an RFC was established to resolve issues relating to the content of the Da Costa's syndrome article page here. Two of the editors who had no previous involvement suggested that the dispute could be settled if the interested parties prepared subpage texts to be merged later by NPOV’s in order to ensure that both sides were considered and that the information was presented in compliance with Misplaced Pages policy. I was the only individual to prepare such a page from 28-9-08 here and I included most of the information and references from the existing page, and responded to criticism from one of the editors. During that process an NPOV named Avnjay then rewrote the introduction and the history of the subject from 1863 to 1900. The same editor has described the new text as “actually a lot better and far more detailed than the one that is currently up and I can't find anything which is COI, unsourced (97 different sources quoted!!), or biased.” here
There has been no activity on that subpage since 30-11-08 here, and although there has been some criticism from one editor, that has also ceased. There has been no criticism from NPOV’s, and another NPOV named SmokeyJoe has recently stated - “silence is consensus”. I have therefore decided to move the text from the subpage to replace the article page text.
I have taken into account the fundamental objectives of Wikpedia by presenting the sum of all knowledge on the topic, rather than providing selective conclusions from modern sourcesPosturewriter (talk) 07:54, 25 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter
- Reverted to prior version. If we link to the final version of Misplaced Pages:Requests for comment/Posturewriter, we find the closing statement:
- User:Posturewriter is reminded of the WP:COI policy, and asked to avoid editing articles that fall under that scope for him. He is encouraged to contribute elsewhere in order to foster contructive editing throughout all parties, and is warned that further COI trouble will lead to a topic ban. Posturewriter should also, recognizing the COI issue, write a userspace essay, User:Posturewrite/COI declarations on how WP:COI applies to himself.
- There was no general invitation to write separate drafts: Posturewriter chose to do so unilaterally, without guidance from medical editors, and making it abundantly clear that some existing editors were unwelcome. I don't know about others, but I've not commented on it for that reason and because it was clearly happening outside Misplaced Pages's normal collective editorial process.
- The "actually a lot better and far more detailed" quote is highly selective anyway; that comment was written in good faith by a non-medical editor, but full context needs to be seen at User talk:WhatamIdoing#Misplaced Pages:Requests for comment/Posturewriter, where an experienced medical editor replied with the view that the draft has considerable problems of style, weight and neutrlaity.
- Given the RFC conclusion and the ongoing conflict of interest - see the off-wiki complaints the Posture Theory website (including the personal attack hidden in black-on-black at the foot of the page) - it is not his call to move his draft to articlespace. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 15:50, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
- Gordonofcartoon; Please stop telling lies. You were fully aware of the subpage suggestion by Avnjay in the seventh paragraph here and another recommendation by SmokeyJoe at 11:18 on 8-8-08 who wrote “If you want to create a userspace version of an article (such as Da Costa’s syndrome), get it perfected, and then seek to replace the existing article, then go for it” here. and you did comment on it at 16:30 on the same day when you wrote “No. I'm fed up with this” herePosturewriter (talk) 07:21, 26 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter
- Gordonofcartoon; Please stop telling lies. You were fully aware
- Please assume good faith. I had no recollection of any general invitation, and certainly wouldn't have supported the idea unless it were a generally open draft (not a private sandbox only open to you and friendly editors). I don't read everything - especially with disputes spread over multiple pages - and by that time it looks as if my attention was drifting with the deluge of obfuscation. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 18:34, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
- I also support the removal of Posturewriter's unbalanced and poorly sourced version.
- PW, shall we take this step by step? Nearly all of your sources are unreliable in terms of Wikipeda's policies. I realize that you won't take my word for it. I'm willing to discuss your sources, one at a time, at Misplaced Pages's Reliable Sources Noticeboard, which is where questions of this type are usually settled. Does that work for you? WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:32, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
- Because of the time zone complications, I decided to start tonight anyway. I picked the iguana website for the first source to contest. It's at Misplaced Pages:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard#Da_Costa.27s_syndrome. WhatamIdoing (talk) 02:19, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
- WhatamIdoing; Your obvious objective is to maintain control of the content on the Da Costa's syndrome article page by continually using dubious policy interpretations as part of a never ending wild goose chase. If your motives were sincere you would leave my text on the article page and then we could discuss each reference one at a timePosturewriter (talk) 07:21, 26 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter
- Apart from the iguana website, the rest of the sources in that huge history section (which could make a stand-alone article) don't look at first sight to be outrageously daft. What is the problem with them? Jayen466 14:56, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
- My primary concern is not the history section, but since you've asked, the biggest problem with the history section is a WP:DUE issue: Posturewriter seriously overemphasizes and even misrepresents much of the history. For example, "In 1916 Sir James MacKenzie chaired a major medical conference aimed at gaining a better understanding of the condition." Actually, MacKenzie gave a single, short presentation about this condition, at a normal medical conference that made no claim of being focused on this condition.
- There's also a style problem. This is not encyclopedic writing. Do we really need to list each and every person that wrote about related conditions during the first sixty years? I don't think it's appropriate. Do we need to describe the contents of each and every paper? I don't think it's appropriate. Do we need three entire paragraphs on a medical textbook from 1951? (Note that a 1950s textbook has been selected because Mitral valve prolapse wasn't identified until the next decade.) This is all an inappropriate level of detail. Posturewriter is welcome to put it up on his own website, but detailed descriptions of relatively minor papers don't represent an encyclopedic article.
- And above all, why doesn't the history section rely on the history papers? They do exist, and a couple are even cited in passing. But Posturewriter has instead relied on his own interpretation of primary sources instead of basing the history section around good secondary sources that directly address the relevant history. WhatamIdoing (talk) 19:14, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
- Acknowledged, and voicing broad agreement. Jayen466 15:29, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
I have replaced the existing page a text that has been described by NPOV Avnjay as “a lot better and far more detailed than the one that is currently up and I can't find anything which is COI, unsourced (97 different sources quoted!!), or biased” herePosturewriter (talk) 09:04, 27 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter
WhatamIdoing; regarding your continuing suggestion that I am ignoring MVP, I have added a paragraph and 6 references on it, four from Charles Wooley up until 2004 here, whose 1976 paper here has been on User:Gordonofcartoon's User page for 12 months, since 20-12-07 here without being discussed by him despite me asking him and you to review it. Note that it has Mitral Valve Prolapse Syndrome as a synonym in the titlePosturewriter (talk) 09:04, 27 January 2009 (UTC)posturwriter
- Misplaced Pages:Assume good faith. I noted it there to read, and haven't yet got around to it. I can't read everything and can't attend to everything, especially amid the general excess of verbiage. Unlike you, I am not interested in this sole topic, and can't be expected to notice every single detail of it (particularly given your failure to follow the Misplaced Pages:Talk page guidelines to be concise and keep discussion focused).
- You have also been told before: that Avnjay quote is out of context. It was made in good faith, but he/she is not a medical editor, and was unaware of the many problems pointed out by WhatamIdoing, who is. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 09:28, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
- Gordonofcartoon if you haven't been able to read something about Da Costa's syndrome that has been on your "to do" list for more than 12 months then you shouldn't be editing the page, and you definitely should not be criticising my 60 references.
- Also note that WhatamIdoings qualifications are self-described here in particular WhatamIdoing is not a healthcare professional and have no plans to become one" . . . and is "typically useless in cardiology" and "can contribute at a very basic level, such as copy editing or reviewing sources" . . . and . . . If it's important . . . WhatamIdoing "can become an "instant expert" on more or less any narrow subject".
- I highlight the fact that you are too busy to learn about the things you profess to know, and WhatamIdoing is only an "instant expert" and is "useless at cardiology" so should not be commenting on the complex 140 years of Da Costa's syndrome research, or on MVP.Posturewriter (talk) 10:08, 27 January 2009 (UTC)posturewriter
- not a healthcare professional
- Did I say anything about being a healthcare professional? I said "medical editor" - one who routinely edits on medical topics here, and hence is thoroughly conversant with aspects such as WP:MEDRS. Gordonofcartoon (talk) 10:25, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
- Posturewriter has been blocked for COI violations and editwarring. He's also not usually active on weekdays, so we'll presumably be able to take this up next weekend.
- I've reverted to the previous version. I note that Posturewriter declined to remove the unreliable source after being informed that (despite his arguments) every editor at RSN opposed the use of a personal webpage in this article.
- For the record, I believe that a choice to re-insert his strongly disputed and seriously unbalanced text without explicit support on this talk page by at least one established editor other than Posturewriter will be considered further edit warring and likely earn him another block. I hope that he will be willing to talk instead of to edit war. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:27, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
- Posturewriter is banned. Apologies for not getting round to this sooner. Moreschi (talk) 15:45, 28 January 2009 (UTC)