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== Historic Low of sub-400 ppm CO2 Levels == | |||
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Shouldn't it be mentioned somewhere that at 380 ppm today, we are at an historic low of CO2 concentrations when we look back at past CO2 levels? The only other time CO2 has dropped below 400 ppm has been the late Carbiniferous some 300 million years ago, but at all other times CO2 has been above 400 ppm. The graph here | |||
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In fact it's been as high as 7000 ppm during the Cambrian period, which was so favorable to life that it resulted in the famous Cambrian Explosion, an explosion of biodiversity. This seems to contradict the predictions that our 380 ppm level will result in dire consequences for life. It's a basic crime of omission by leaving these facts out. ] (]) 21:00, 12 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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: The concentrations in prehistoric and prehuman times are relevant to paleoclimatology, but of only contingent relevance to the current warming. The current warming is ''not'' predicted to have effects such as mass extinctions and the like; rather, it's likely to cause changes that we'd rather, as humans, avoid. Costly changes lasting many human lifetimes.. --] 21:06, 12 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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: Or you could say that humans originated and evolved in a special niche in which CO2 concentrations were extraordinarily low. That's to say that one can speculate either way, so it probably shouldn't be included here. ] (]) 01:45, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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::Let's also say that "historic" usually refers to written history. CO2 is at an all-time ''high'' for at least 100 times longer than written history, and possibly for 2000 times longer than written history. The 20 million years currently most likely is about 10 times the average life time of ''a species''. And Tony, global warming ''is'' predicted to cause mass extinction, although it will be hard to separate it from the ] that's ongoing anyways. An extinction event does not require every third animal species to drop dead and rot away immediately. --] (]) 08:38, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Your assumption about "Historic" is erroneous - just convenient for your argument.] (]) 05:44, 15 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::I don't believe that this "historic low" is really relevant. However, it is yet another example of an issue that people should find if they search the article. Having found it, readers should be diverted to another article that (maybe) gives this feature the attention it deserves. | |||
:::The list of missing key-words may not include "historic low", it most certainly does include words such as "Antarctic", "desertification", "Amazon" and many others which are currently missing from the article. Two of those in my short-list above were removed immediately when I put them in. (Comments on "advocacy" of this kind by me to my TalkPage, please). ] (]) 10:35, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::: I think the resistance you're encountering here is because most other editors don't share your view of what this article should contain. You can't just stand around and say "X is missing", "Y is missing", and so on. You have to ''persuade'' by presenting evidence that a significant aspect of global warming is omitted. --] 12:38, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::] believes a discussion of this "historic low" needs inclusion, I've told him that a mention would indeed be valuable, but i couldn't support the whole nine yards. I trust others to contribute in a similarly balanced and article improving fashion. ] (]) 19:02, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Stephen, isn't it worth noting in the article that historically CO2 bottoms out at about the 400 ppm level. If you look at the Tertiary period in that graph it clearly shows CO2 levels starting at about 1000 ppm, then leveling out far before industrial production began. They have no where to go but up, at least it appears that way from past behavior of the planet. This just seems like relevant information that people reading up on Global Warming would want to know. ] (]) 15:24, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::*Tell us the "key-words" that help guide people to find out about this feature, and I'd support including them. But there is said to be a problem with article-bloat, so the discussion presumably needs to go somewhere else. ] (]) 19:16, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::*Jetta, that is not true. CO2 levels during the last half million years (i.e. "historic period"*100) or so have been between 200ppm and 300ppm (during the warmest periods of interglacials). Our best current estimates are that CO2 has not been as high as it was today in the last 20 million years. Assuming you talk about the graph labeled "Global Temperature and Atmospheric CO2 over Geologic Time" at , that graph is intended to show, in broad strokes, CO2 and temperature over half a billion years. It simply does not have the resolution to show details on the million year scale. The uncertainty for the last 20 million years in that graph goes from about 0 ppm to approxiately 350 ppm. shows the last 400000 years in some detail. --] (]) 19:19, 13 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::Well yes that's true, we are at another low point in CO2 concentrations. As I said, the current period started at around 1000 and decreased gradually then *leveled off* far before industrial inputs, leaving no where to go but up. Likely if we had more accurate records the Carboniferous would also show levels bottoming out at a similar number (you can see the error bars in the graph go to about 0). On examination of the micro level it was probably spiking up and down as we see today. But my main point here is that it is important to give data in context. You can look at smaller periods of time such as the transition from winter to summer and predict a massive trend in warming, or 1940 to 1970 and predict a massive decline in temperature, etc... up to all different time scales and periods. Without context, it can make people panic unnecessarily. The context here that is important for people to know is that: 1) the earth is at historic lows of CO2 2) It's been as high as 7000 ppm 3) Life thrived during the warmer periods 4) CO2 levels have gone down and up without any industrial activity in the past. This is important information for the average Misplaced Pages reader to know. ] (]) 14:43, 14 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::Now I'm confused. First, you write "the only other time CO2 has dropped below 400 ppm has been the late Carbiniferous (sic)" - i.e. you talk about hundreds of millions of years. Then you talk about the ], i.e. about time spans of 10s of millions of years (and CO2 was below 400 ppm for large parts of the Tertiary). Now you talk about a thousand years? Or a 1000 ppm? Anyways, no, the Earth is not at "historic lows of CO2". It is likely at unprecedented heights during the current geological age. Going back even 20 million years, you are talking about a different planet. The Mediterranean dried up about 6 million years ago. Both the Tethys Seaway and the Isthmus of Panama closed up during the last 20 million years. Sure, life "thrived" during higher CO2 concentration. But "life" the last time we had 3000 ppm was the dinosaurs, not humans. --] (]) 15:16, 14 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::@ - ] - the details of what you're talking about are not important for the reasons you've been told. No matter how good things may have been all those years ago, the re-imposition of those CO2 levels will likely be catastrophic to our way of life and possibly to our species. | |||
:::::::However, it is an interesting and perhaps significant discussion. Rather than try to argue the details of these 'historic lows', we need to provide readers with '''a)''' a signpost they'll be able to spot amongst the forest of other signposts and '''b)''' a proper discussion of this effect. The latter will almost certainly have to be on a sub-page because it cannot be fitted in here at the moment (though later it might come to be more important and be fetched back). ] (]) 22:55, 14 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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::::::::@] Can you give us a statement, boiled down to one sentence, with a ref so we can see it. I don't think the addition of one sentence will damage the page. We can point to the relative sub-article with a wikilink. ] (]) 04:47, 15 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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:::::::::Here's a simple statement that's more-or-less consistent with the designated scope of this article: "The current rise in CO2 levels is unprecedented since the appearance of '']'' on the earth approximately 200,000 years ago." Don't have time to provide a citation right now, but there are secondary RSs out there for this. The last time CO2 levels were 1000ppm, dinosaurs and ferns dominated the Earth. ... ] (]) 10:54, 15 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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::::::::::Simple statement C&P direct from ] "Present carbon dioxide levels are likely higher now than at any time during the past 20 and certainly higher than in the last 800,000." How that adds up to 'historic low' is beyond me, but a statement that says something like "Even though ancient pre-historical atmospheric CO2 levels may have been higher, present carbon dioxide levels are likely higher now than at any time during the past 20 and certainly higher than in the last 800,000." (with the same cite as that article) might be a useful addition? ‒ ] 11:49, 15 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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::::::::::Scratch that, per "These levels are much higher than at any time during the last 650,000 years, the period for which reliable data has been extracted from ice cores. Less direct geological evidence indicates that CO2 values this high were last seen about 20 million years ago." already included. ‒ ] 11:59, 15 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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:::::::::::What I'm proposing is that we just present the data to the readers of Misplaced Pages, unvarnished. It seems to me like some of the people above are trying to interpret the data for people, which strikes me as problematic. Malcolm McDonald's statements above are bordering on original research and Kenosis' statement would be repeating what is already said in the article. The proposed addition would be something like, "In the geologic scale, the earth is at historic lows of CO2. CO2 concentration has been as high as 7000 ppm during the Cambrian period, which resulted in the Cambrian Explosion, an explosion of biodiversity. The only other time earth's CO2 concentration has been comparable to present sub-400 ppm levels was during the Carboniferous, some 300 million years ago, after which CO2 levels recovered." The reference for this is provided above in my first statement.] (]) 15:55, 15 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::What's "unvarnished" about "CO2 concentration has been as high as 7000 ppm which resulted in the Cambrian Explosion, an explosion of biodiversity"? Moreover, ''why'' do you feel this data should be included? I'm not aware of any serious scientists who claims that conditions during the Cambrian or Carboniferous are in any way comparable to conditions today. Continents are configured differently, the biosphere is completely changed, heck, even the sun was significantly fainter back then. There also is no serious scientist who claims that the current increase is some kind of natural recovery. --] (]) 16:49, 15 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::^^^ That ‒ ] 08:09, 16 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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:The statement above is not interpretation of any kind. It is a fact that CO2 was at 7000 ppm and the Cambrian explosion followed. There is zero interpretation there. Whereas the claim that CO2 levels today are unnatural and deadly is controversial to say the least, as you are well aware. That claim is not an observation, it is an interpretation. So I'm saying let's just put these facts in the article, which are not interpretations, which put current CO2 levels in proper context to the earth's past, and which put the interpretations of AGW scientists in context as well. I'm also not sure why you are saying scientists don't think the earth's past is comparable to today. In many ways it is comparable, and in some ways it is not comparable. For you to say it is in no way comparable is your interpretation and sounds like original research to me. ] (]) 19:27, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::*Am I missing something here? I thought we're discussing an article on global warming not an article on historic (or even current) levels of carbon dioxide. If the current or historic levels of CO2 are relevant to this article, as established by reliable sources then it should obviously be included in a relevant context but otherwise it doesn't matter whether it's 'a fact'. It's also a fact that ] has an atmosphere 96.5% carbon dioxide by volume and has a surface tempeature of 740 K; and evidentally that "Republicans have received 75 percent of the oil and gas industry's $245 million in political contributions during the past 20 years" and evidentally, at least as of 2005 that "Bush, who has received more from the oil and gas industry than any other politician" (in the US); and that ] the US had the highest per capita emissions of CO2 of any country with a population over ~6 million; but in all cases again, not something that particularly belongs in the article unless there's some established relevance ] (]) 07:32, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::*That the current CO2 level is unnatural is a fact, not an opinion. We don't claim that it is "deadly" in the article, so that's a straw man. If CO2 levels were 7000ppm in the Cambrian explosion is uncertain - look at the error bars. However, this is picking nits. The main problem is that you wrote "resulted", suggesting a causal link for which you have provided no evidence, let alone reliable sources. But that still misses the point. The "explosion" took some 70-80 million years. The dinosaurs left us 65 million years ago, leading to an explosion in the diversity of mammals. Does that make a major asteroid strike desirable? Granting you your nit, yes, the precambrian Earth was in "some" ways comparable to today's Earth. However, you cannot usefully compare the climate system. The sun was about 6% less luminous than today, equivalent to a forcing of approximately 20W/m<sup>2</sup>, or more than 6 doublings of CO2 compared to preindustrial modern levels. The continents were configured very differently. Oxygen content started at 3% and rose to 15% or so - something that might be much more reasonably be connected to the Cambrian explosion. In short, it's a different system, and trying to frame parameters as "normal" because they are within boundaries experienced within the eep geological past is fallacious. For that concept of "normal", an Earth without humans is normal, as is one without mammals, as, indeed, is one without multicellular life. --] (]) 08:10, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Instead of saying "resulted in" we could say "was followed by", which contains no interpretation. You mention above that it "is a fact" that the current 382 PPM level is unnaturally high. Could I ask you how unnaturally high it is? In other words, how much ppm higher than what it is supposed to be today? This seems like a difficult thing to answer without a significant amount of interpretation because the history of CO2 levels is that it is bumping up and down all the time without any industrial or man made input. Sometimes it bumped up to as high as 7000 ppm, sometimes it was under 400 ppm, and all without industrial pollution in the past. So to me this seems like a very relevant thing to mention in an article that talks about CO2 levels with the earth today. You need to put in perspective what the earth has done in the past. You've kind of argued against your own case in my opinion by talking about what is "normal". Is it up to you to decide some arbitrary cutoff point in which "modern conditions" exist? You can't just arbitrarily select a narrow date range that Misplaced Pages readers are allowed to see data from. Like I said before, if you select the date range from June to December, it looks like massive global cooling! Yet it would be wrong to just focus on one small slice of data to try and convince people of a trend. ] (]) 20:02, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::The appropriate 'slice' for this article is the one which includes where there most recently seemed to be a natural (non-human affected, for the sake of debate) balance or steady-state in CO2 levels for an extended period of time. ‒ ] 07:58, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::The currently proposed statement is something like, "In the context of the geologic time scale, the earth is at historic lows of CO2. CO2 concentration has been as high as 7000 ppm during the Cambrian period, which was followed by the Cambrian Explosion, an explosion of biodiversity. The only other time earth's CO2 concentration has been comparable to present sub-400 ppm levels was during the Carboniferous, some 300 million years ago, after which CO2 levels recovered naturally." ] (]) 17:30, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::I regret encouraging you. Yes, it would be nice to have some "key-words" (eg historic low) that led the reader to some kind of explanation of this argument. (Even though I'm pretty sure it's a straw-man of the deniers). But you seem to want a discussion on the page, and that would be completely WP:UNDUE. ] (]) 18:07, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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# Article implies that global warming is isolated to earth, however other planets very likely undergo natural global warming and cooling just like the earth. This focus upon the earth has caused the article to be heavily written with an undertone that it contains an implied realistic hypotheses. This is really a theoretical hypotheses, especially since anthropogenic influence on global warming cannot be measured directly and may yet cause unpredictable effects. Thus the article should transform from a focus on earth, to the general phenomenon of global warming, globe warming of other planets and possibly include the surface of the sun and moons, then an explanation of possible causes such as effects proven by the IPCC, then known and hypothesised effects. | |||
# Article has a focus on warming of earth over the past century and does not express our knowledge of global warming before 150 years ago. | |||
# Article contains a strange fixation on the works of the IPCC with 26 citations of their direct works. Sources should vary a bit more than this. | |||
# Mathematical incompetence is implied with such example phrases as "Expressed as a linear trend, this temperature rose by 0.74 °C ± 0.18 °C over the period 1906–2005," "relative to the 1961–1990 average" and immediately following "relative to the average temperatures from 1940 to 1980," firstly temperature graphs are not linear in nature and differences between two time points do not require linear plotting to establish error bounds, secondly the associated graphs are presented relative to differing averages and these graphs are then presented next to each other, this may cause an unrealistic perception of recent global warming (especially since the global graph of average temperatures is 1 year out of date and contains a very strange comparative average). These graphs shouldn't even be in the introduction since global warming has occurred at other points in time, they should show a longer time period of global temperatures. | |||
# The introduction includes an unnecessarily complex explanation of the IPCC's hypothesises, and does not give any credence to alternative theories attempting to explain this scientific phenomenon. The length and complexity should be reduced, and a reduced focus on the IPCC. An example of subtle advertising is "these basic conclusions have been endorsed by more than 40 scientific societies and academies of science." | |||
# "The major greenhouse gases are water vapor, which causes about 36–70 percent of the greenhouse effect; carbon dioxide (CO2), which causes 9–26 percent; methane (CH4), which causes 4–9 percent; and ozone (O3), which causes 3–7 percent. Clouds also affect the radiation balance, but they are composed of liquid water or ice and so are considered separately from water vapor and other gases. Human activity since the Industrial Revolution has increased the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, leading to increased radiative forcing from CO2, methane, tropospheric ozone, CFCs and nitrous oxide. The concentrations of CO2 and methane have increased by 36% and 148% respectively since 1750." This information is not disputed, however since there is such a heavy focus on the human effect there should be a calculation of the total percentile contribution to these greenhouse gases by humans, and there should also be a note that increasing one greenhouse gas reduces the concentration of other greenhouse gases which may have a stronger effect to global warming than the introduced gas. A calculation of human contribution based on the above figures would be (note that the figures don't indicate the percentage of gasses released by humans, thus this calculation assumed 100% contribution by humans, or is above the maximum anthropogenic contribution): 0.36/1.36 * 0.09-0.26 + 1.48/2.48 * 0.04-0.09 = 5-12% Since 100% of all green house gases today cause 33 deg temperature warming, the theoretical cumulative anthropogenic effect is 0.05-0.12* 33 = 1.65-3.96 deg. | |||
# The introduction includes hypothesises of the effects of global warming upon the earth which have weak citations and is probably unnecessary.] (]) 03:04, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Thanks for catching that, I've refactored the list to be numbered, makes it easier to refer to each point. You're okay with that, right? Before we begin, do you really believe the article reads like an ad? I don't think very many people would appreciate an accusation like that, and I don't think that's the focus of your proposal. Anyways, the direction of this discussion is up to you. It's a big list, which one do you want to start with? ] (]) 08:48, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::The article does read a bit like an ad. I wouldn't expect a GM advertisement to tell me whether, for instance, there had just been a gigantic recall to fix the brakes of every vehicle they've ever made. But I expect the article on GM here to tell me all about it (if it's sufficiently notable, naturally) and if it fails to do so, I'm likely to walk away thinking to myself that Misplaced Pages is POV. | |||
::::Similarly for the GW article here. If ] (a firm believer in GW/AGW) is quoted in the Daily Mail as saying there may be 20 years of cooling ahead, I expect to quickly find what the reference work of record says about him and his words and the possibility that he's being mis-quoted and what his colleagues say. Or, I expect to be sent to a sub-article where this information is discussed, anyway. Currently, it would appear that Prof Latif is a top climatologist making a startling prediction the credibility of which WP will not tell me! The ] does not tell me what's going on, but then I'd not expect it to. So where is the discussion? ] (]) 13:22, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::This article reads like an ad in that it unnecessarily continuously promotes the perspective of the IPCC which is especially unneeded in the introduction. Having "The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) concludes that most of the observed temperature increase since the middle of the 20th century was caused by increasing concentrations of greenhouse gases resulting from human activity such as fossil fuel burning and deforestation. The IPCC also concludes that variations in natural phenomena such as solar radiation and volcanism had a small cooling effect after 1950. These basic conclusions have been endorsed by more than 40 scientific societies and academies of science, including all of the national academies of science of the major industrialized countries" in the introduction is far too much. The first point I would like to address is #1 in which global warming occurs on planets other than earth and should have a reasonable weighting in this article. ] (]) 01:51, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::: You appear to be saying that you don't want the lead to reference a scientific conclusion that is universally endorsed, but you do want it to reference your opinion that global warming on planets other than Earth is a significant fact. Do I have it right? --] 12:34, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::], one of the core WP editorial policies, requires that we use "reliable, third party sources ''with a reputation for fact checking and accuracy''" . The Daily Mail is ''not'' a reliable source for a scientific or technical article such as this. ... ] (]) 14:56, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::First, we should probably divide these 7 points so that each has their own heading and we can talk about them one by one, otherwise it is difficult to address these specific issues. Overall I think the reason it reads like an ad is due in part to the way some people here have been addressing the article. My experiences with trying to put the present sub-400 ppm CO2 levels in the context of the earth's history (see issue above) was met with basically, "How can we reinterpret this information so that it reinforces the AGW theory." We should not be taking sides and trying to only find things that reinforce AGW theory. The AGW theory is controversial to say the least, and I think we all acknowledge that. Anything in Misplaced Pages that is controversial should do a good job of explaining both sides of the controversy, but the information here seems to have been tailored to promoting the AGW theory. ] (]) 15:43, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Well, that's where your logic falls down. The AGW "theory" is not in the least bit controversial. It is endorsed by ... (I'm not going to restate the obvious here - read the relevant articles and ''all'' their references). The only thing that's controversial is when the Big Oil-funded right wing is going to give up pumping money into trying to persuade the uninformed and the gullible that there is nothing to worry about and that their business models will survive until the present board of directors can retire on the profits. The science is settled, and that's what this article is about. --] (]) 15:54, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I'm not sure how to respond to that. Have you been keeping current with news on AGW theory? There are many, many dissenting scientists. Misplaced Pages has a page just for AGW skeptics, and those are merely the prominent ones who have distinguished themselves. For every one of them there are dozens of non-notable scientists. This article here talks of an IPCC scientist who is dissenting. <ref>http://www.dailymail.co.uk/sciencetech/article-1242011/DAVID-ROSE-The-mini-ice-age-starts-here.html</ref> The theory clearly has a lot of scientific disagreement which makes it controversial. ] (]) 17:46, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Oh, you mean the man who said, "If my name was not ], my name would be global warming. So I really believe in Global Warming." You must stop believing what you read in the ] - they supported the wrong side and stirred up anti-semitism in the lead-up to WW2. They lost five libel cases in 2009 alone, over the ] lies they print. Read a better quality newspaper for your views, it'll damage your mind. --] (]) 18:31, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::The anon IP who introduced this section asserts the article "reads like an ad". JettaMann asserts "Overall I think the reason it reads like an ad is due in part to the way some people here have been addressing the article."-- which is not really an explanation of how the article reads like an ad. I'd appreciate hearing, for instance, ''for what'' the article "reads like an ad". That is, what does it read like an ad ''for'' ? Or, for instance, what demonstrable characteristics of the article resemble an advertisement? ... ] (]) 18:48, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::"But wait! There's more! With your membership in the Global Warming Cabal you get a free pocket diaper steamer and an autographed picture of Guy Stewart Callendar! Just dial that toll free number -- 1-800-NOCO24ME!" ] (]) 19:16, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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I guess we could work some of the above-listed denialist talking points into the FAQ, those that aren't already there that is. --] 23:50, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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Yes, the article reads like an ad for the IPCC mission to hunt for human induced causes. If the IPCC were a privately owned org, the conflict of interests folks forces would be all over this issue. As is, there are folk working here to put the IPCC competition (NIPCC) out of business. Seems to me folks are denigh that this science is subject to change like any other NPOV. ] (]) 04:38, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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:]'s project? the "]"? ''"conflict of interest folks forces"? ... "folk working here to put the IPCC competition (NIPCC) out of business"?''. <br>..... OK then, leaving the rhetoric aside here, this slightly more specific assertion, of what is being asserted that "the article reads like an ad" ''for'' , helps to pin things down a bit. So the assertion is that the article reads like an ad for the premise that homo sapiens has played a substantial role in creating or accelerating global warming. I completely disagree, and think the assertion that it reads like an ad for the concept of anthropogenic global warming to be farfetched. It appears to me the article is, at present, entirely consistent with the editorial policy ] and the guideline ]. The WP internal peer review process which applies the ] and ] has already subjected the article to close scrutiny as to its compliance with WP editorial policies. If the article in any way resembled an ad, they'd have promptly instructed the participants to clean it up accordingly. And if the overwhelming scientific consensus were to change, as you suggest is possible, WP editors would be obliged to report such a change in scientific view accordingly. Lacking such a development, though, the issue of how the assertions of the scientific community are received by a small minority of scientists and by many non-scientists is relegated to a specific section, ], which links to other "main articles", e.g., ]. ... ] (]) 06:48, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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== Carbon capture rates for CCS == | |||
Yes, this article reads like an ad. | |||
Hi everyone. I have a few proposals regarding statements on ] in this article. Here's my first proposal. We have an unsourced sentence that says: | |||
A number of users have asked "WHY" does it read like an ad? Let us actually address that SPECIFIC ISSUE. | |||
: Where energy production or {{CO2}}-intensive ] continue to produce waste {{CO2}}, the gas can be captured and stored instead of released to the atmosphere. | |||
I propose changing it to: | |||
: Where energy production or {{CO2}}-intensive ] continue to produce waste {{CO2}}, technology can sometimes be used to capture and store most of the gas instead of releasing it to the atmosphere.<ref name=":2">{{Cite web |last1=Lebling |first1=Katie |last2=Gangotra |first2=Ankita |last3=Hausker |first3=Karl |last4=Byrum |first4=Zachary |date=2023-11-13 |title=7 Things to Know About Carbon Capture, Utilization and Sequestration |url=https://www.wri.org/insights/carbon-capture-technology |publisher=] |language=en}}</ref> | |||
As explained in the World Resources Institute source, "today’s carbon capture systems do not capture 100% of emissions. Most are designed to capture 90%, but reported capture rates are lower in some cases." Additionally, it is not economically or geologically feasible to deploy CCS at all or even most facilities. There are 2,400 coal power plants in the world and thus far we have managed to add CCS to four of them. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 21:41, 24 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
Here is the exact, precise explanation: | |||
:Done. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 20:30, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
(1) there is a completely fixed focus on the past few decades, with no selfawareness at all on this myopia. | |||
(2) the article is extremely focussed on the IPCC, with no selfawareness at all on this myopia. | |||
(3) The intro in particular is an extremely detalied exposition of IPCC thinking, with no selfawareness at all on this myopia. | |||
{{reflist-section}} | |||
The epitome of "scientific," if you will, writing, is that it has total continual self-awareness of it's own shortcomings, viewpoints, tones and agendas. | |||
== Carbon sequestration section == | |||
Conversely the epitome of "Madison Avenue" writing is that advertisement copywriting has utterly with no selfawareness of its own myopia: an advertisement marches forward with no awareness - no mention - of it's own myopia. That's exactly what is meant when someone says an article (whether in wikipedia, a magazine or elsewhere) "reads like an ad." | |||
The ''Carbon sequestration'' section has contents that describe ] and ]. These three concepts are often confused. The vast majority of carbon sequestration happens through spontaneous, non-anthropogenic processes that have been going on for hundreds of millions of years and will continue if we just leave the forests alone. Most of the content in this section is about human activity that aims to increase the amount of carbon that is sequestered, i.e. ]. There is also some content on ], which technically involves sequestration but is usually deployed in processes that desequester more carbon than they sequester. | |||
Unfortunately this precisely describes this article as it stands. | |||
I propose 1) Retitling this section as "Carbon dioxide removal" and 2) Moving the two sentences on CCS to the end of the first paragraph in the "Clean energy" section. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 20:11, 25 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
So, there's a very clear explanation of exactly why this article reads "like an ad." | |||
:Done. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 20:36, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
People who actually care about the quality of this article, should set to work on making it NOT read like an ad. | |||
== Paper about our work & suggestions == | |||
Assuming the questions "WHY does it read like an ad" were not rhetorical or empty, the above is a clear explanation of exactly what makes the article sound like an advert. | |||
] (]) 16:02, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:Please have a look at and either sign one of the suggested positions, or add a new one of your own. ] (]) 16:09, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
A came out on the work we do here, analysing how our group dynamics and our interpretation of policies and guidelines resulted in the current article. | |||
'''NOTE: additional peripheral discussion has been userfied to ], per ] and ]].''' ... ] (]) 17:56, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Dear Malcolm, is it? I had a look at the thing you directed me to, and, I did add my signature to the appropriate row, but I'm afraid I am not very interested in your thing over there! (Is it yours?) Is that, um, OK? (Or is this an official wiki position or something I don't understand, or?? Do I HAVE TO respond to that survey? Or?) | |||
The paper analyses whether we consider climate change as an event (vs process), and if we call it a crisis. It's somewhat critical of us doing neither sufficiently clearly. The paper doesn't give that many pointers how we could achieve this however. We've made progress over the last 6 years in changing the article to be more about climate change now, rather than climate change in the future, but I wonder if there is more to do here. (changing the crisis framing is a discussion I won't reopen). If there are no objections, I might send Steiert an email asking her to join us. In the meantime, I'm suggesting two changes in the lead | |||
::As one commentator there said, and it seems to make sense, "In my experience attempts to organise the improvement of a page rarely succeed. Some editors will not participate in your scheme, others will start up their own schemes. In my opinion the most important problem on the GW page is that of oppressive editing and page ownership, especially the rapid deletion and archiving of discussion. " | |||
The current rise in ] is ] burning ] <s>since the ]</s> --> | |||
::All true. The whole issue appears to be incredibly confusing. | |||
] has contributed to thawing ], ] and ] --> something in the present tense. I'd suggest leaving out polar amplification too. The quote doesn't fully capture this sentence anyway, and the source doesn't make the connection between polar amplification and these specific impacts. ] (]) 19:44, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::For instance, you yourself there go on to say ... "There is a massive problem of page ownership and oppressive editing and it's obvious to a lot of people. TalkPage deletions of other people's comments and rapid archiving are a big part of it." But in fact ..................... didn't YOU promptly delete some comments of mine on this talk page? (WHOEVER deleted comments of mine on the talk page did so in an incredibly rushed and haphazard manner, apparently pasting in semi-explanations (in a bizarre semi-polite manner) that did not even really scan with what was happening or make much sense). | |||
:Thanks for sharing this, interesting article. The study uses the May 2022 version of this article, I wonder what she'd think of the current version. | |||
::For example, the fact that the "glaciers fiasco" section below appears to be CLOSED TO COMMENT (by who? who does this?) is beyond comprehension. (The single most widely repeated factoid of the IPCC enterprise, has been admitted to be an utterly incorrect mix-up .... and that is not relevant to global warming? When the almost total focus of the article as it stands is the IPCC?? And someone (who?) has decided there is to be no discussion about this in hope of improving the article? It's particularly hilarious that the rationale given for the apparent closure of that section (who does that sort o thing anyway? Who? Wiki's owners?) is that it is not relevant to IMPROVING THE ARTICLE - heh! Funny.) | |||
::I appear to have walked in to some sort of ongoing war, or set of cliques, is that roughly correct? | |||
::As an "innocent bypasser" I observe that, | |||
::(A) the article itself is simply trash, risible, no serious person would think otherwise. | |||
::(Your first and most immediate problem is that it reads like, it is, an ad - the reasons why it reads like an ad have now been clearly outlined by a number of discussors. You completely ignore this at your peril; the article is becoming comedic an parodyable.) | |||
::(B) the whole discussion page is bizarre because (apparently!)... | |||
::(B.1) there seems to be two huge cliques of people involved in an ongoing intense, hugely time consuming war on the talk page, (Is this basically correct?) | |||
::(B.2) Just as the person above says, "... the most important problem on the GW page is that of oppressive editing and page ownership, especially the rapid deletion and archiving of discussion" | |||
::I mean it's hilarious (Indeed I'm sure after I post this, I'm sure someone will delete my entire comment here .. right? And then send me a confusing, not really on topic message with bizarre "semi-politeness" about why they are deleting all my typing.) | |||
::It's difficult to, well, discuss the article if DISCUSSION ITSELF is risibly edited, constantly (on an apparent 24 hour basis?) | |||
::It goes without saying that no serious person, with a life, would even bother for two minutes trying to help improve the article if DISCUSSION ITSELF is wildly censored. So, the "two clique" scene here as it exists (again, is this basically the case?) will persist, and the article itself will remain in the current humorous state. | |||
::I just spent a few hours of my life improving the difficult article on delayed choice quantum eraser experiments. The "community" if you will there appears to be completely interested in actually, um, improving articles. I can only assume that you have some sort of 'dual clique" scene going on here. | |||
::Again I assume this will probably all be deleted! Heh! Good luck to you all ] (]) 17:25, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Your problem is that everyone things you're a returned editor who had his nose bloodied in a battle at "Pokemon characters" and is editing as an anon to avoid your enemies. | |||
:::However, GW is an atrociously bad TalkPage where there are all sorts of interference and bad behavior. Such conduct has worked well enough in the past because it's driven people off in very short order and not left too much of a smell. | |||
:::Thankyou for signing into that chart on Martin's page . I've created another objection to what's going on based on what you've said and added your name - please tell me if you agree or edit out any mis-statement of your position. ] (]) 17:44, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:As for the sentence, {{tq|The current rise in...}}, I believe we had added "since the ]" to clarify what is meant by current. ] (]) 17:50, 31 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
== change to intro - restarting from archived version == | |||
::Upon reflection, I'd like to keep {{tq|since the Industrial Revolution}}. One of the criticism in the article is that we are vague in terms of our tenses. When things happened, are happening, or will happen. ({{tq|Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly}}) | |||
::{{tq|since the Industrial Revolution}} gives precision and clarity to that sentence. I think it accurately describes rough timescale of human-induced climate change. | |||
::Other overview sources might say things like {{tq|The industrial activities that our modern civilization depends upon have raised atmospheric carbon dioxide levels by nearly 50% since 1750}} | |||
::If you click ], it largely matches with above: {{tq|Beginning in Great Britain, the Industrial Revolution spread to continental Europe and the United States, from around 1760 to about 1820–1840.}} ] (]) 14:44, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::My thinking here is that "since the industrial revolution" may be a bit misleading, in the sense that most warming really happened in the last 50 years, rather than over such a long period of time. I'm also appreciating the simplicity of the POTD description below, and would like to move away from a ] in terms of number of links. ] (]) 17:13, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}That's a very good point, but I think we should add that (in the last 50 years part) into the lead, instead of removing "since the ]" part. I know you value conciseness but I think this time precision beats conciseness. | |||
Again, the study was up to May 2022 version of this article. . I think the current version of the lead is much more precise, as we define since when the current climate change has been happening. | |||
Industrial activities (NASA source) started with industrial revolution. Of course it was limited in 18th century. In 19th century it was few countries (UK etc), with coal etc. With technology (oil etc) and more countries industrializing, warming increased in 20th century, which is your point. | |||
Also note that many cumulative emissions graphs go back to 1750 . I'll check few more sources tomorrow, including ] sources, to see how they cover it. ] (]) 17:38, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
The previous conversation got archived (short archive timeframe on this page - I had no idea). Maybe a good thing, that. So let me revive it with a formal proposal. I suggest the first line of this article be replaced with the following two sentences: {{quotation|'''Global warming''' refers to empirical observations of a global increase in average oceanic and near-surface atmospheric temperatures, and to theoretical constructs which try to explain that increase in terms of human-derived or natural causation. It falls primarily under the scientific purview of climatologists, but because of the complexity of the subject matter other scientific disciplines have noteworthy investments in the debate.}} | |||
I have provided detailed reasons for this change in the archived discussion - ] - and will repeat them if necessary to pursue further discussion. | |||
:The prose quality of the first paragraph was definitely better in that version at least. I don't think "adding to greenhouse gases" is correct English. If I can find time, I might suggest a new version of our opening in a separate discussion section. | |||
Note: I have already read (and disposed of) a sufficient number of ]-type comments to recognize that a lot of people don't like this change. I'm sorry. However, I don't need any further reminders of general displeasure, so please don't comment unless you have some valid '''reasoning''' that opposes this change and are willing to engage in proper discussion towards consensus. Thanks. --] 05:38, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:My guess is that many sources don't talk about "industrial revolution" in their first paragraph, instead only use that when they go into the weeds of the topic. | |||
:I oppose this text for two reasons. First, because the words "global warming" do ''not'' refer to the theoretical constructs which try to explain it, so it is inaccurate. Second, the last sentence is purely original research as far as I can tell. — ] (]) 06:17, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:* NASA describes it as happening from the mid-20th century in their first paras (https://science.nasa.gov/climate-change/what-is-climate-change/) | |||
:* Met Office describes it similar to us (https://www.metoffice.gov.uk/weather/climate-change/what-is-climate-change), from the mid-1850s we started polluting. | |||
:* WMO doesn't describe the time period, except by refering to a pre-industrial baseline (https://wmo.int/topics/climate-change) | |||
:] (]) 18:03, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}{{ping|Femke}} here are some ] sources I found with database through . | |||
:: well, sorry, that's not going to work. | |||
::# Your first statement (as I have discussed extensively) is clearly and unambiguously wrong. Global warming ''does'' refer to the theoretical constructs, this article itself deals extensively with theoretical issues, and there is no way to separate 'theoretical' and 'empirical' issues in the way many people on this page try to, not without violating basic tenets of scientific methodology. I will happily explain this again in detail, if you like - just say the word. basically I'll be copy/pasting the argument I made in the archives, if that makes your life any easier. | |||
::# Your second statement is specious. Line two is neither 'original' nor 'research': it simply notes that most of the scientists who study the issue are climatologists, but that other specialties (oceanographers, physicists, etc.) have some input in the debate. I assume this is a self-evident and unobjectionable description based on the references I see on this page, but I'm open to revisions if you want to craft a more (to your mind) precise statement. | |||
:: do you have a more sophisticated argument to make? --] 07:38, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Refers, but what ''is'' it? Well, Ludwigs2, I do have objections, but I'm more interested in what's wrong with the current lead. Re-list your reasons from the archived discussion. Feel free to restart the thread. ] (]) 08:07, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::The first two sentences in the existing lede paragraph are particularly clumsy and refer to two different time periods. The alternative suggestion is a significant improvement on what's there now viz: '' CaC]'' | |||
::::I'm not currently seeing persuasive opposition to the new version. ] (]) 08:23, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
There are lots of results. Only some of them are below: | |||
:(outdent) Right, and I'm not seeing persuasive reason as to what in the current lead is wrong. MalcolmMcDonald, elaborate "clumsy and refer to two different time periods." A quote of the whole first paragraph from the article isn't an explanation, and I've refactored it. ] (]) 08:48, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::@ ChyranandChloe: Granting what Malcolm said, I think it's more important to note that the lead and the article as a whole refer to theory without ever addressing the ''fact'' that they are referring to theory. For example (just looking at the first paragraph), the increase in global surface temperature over the last 50 or so years is an empirical observation (yes), but the projected continuation of that trend is unambiguously a matter of theory, as is the conclusion that most of the observed temperature changes were caused by greenhouse gases, as are the conclusions about solar variation and volcanism. This broad confounding of empirical measurements with the models and theories that empirical evidence is designed to support (or refute) makes for a lot of confusing language throughout the article. Specifying clearly up-front that global warming refers to a theory or theories about what is happening to the earth (theories that are well-supported by the available empirical evidence) will begin making the article clearer, more scientifically accurate, and less contentious as a whole. --] 08:56, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::This is pretty much putting FAQ 8, but in the article, right? Here's where I'm confused about. When you said "Granting what Malcolm said", so you also believe that the lead is also "clumsy and refer to two different time periods." I don't see how your later statements support that. It sort of sounds like you want to side, I don't think it's wise to have your comments tied with his, but that's just me. ] (]) 09:13, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
The first two have detailed entries. I'd recommend you to check them: | |||
::::well, sort of. FAQ 8 sidles past the issue, giving a fairly good description of the difference between the colloquial and scientific uses of the word 'theory' but not really applying them to the topic, and most editors here seem to rely on the 'global warming is only about the observations' argument implied by FAQ 8's first line. I'm really trying to get past that misleading 1st-line assertion to something more like scientific theory as it's expressed later in FAQ 8. | |||
*Encyclopedia of Climate and Weather (2 ed.) {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780199765324.001.0001}}. Global Warming entry. Notes both pre-industrial increase and increase since 1970. | |||
::::With respect to Malcolm's point... I'm trying not to play politics here, despite the ] tendencies of this talk page. I think this: (1) I don't disagree with his assertion that it's a bit of a clumsy construction, (2) I don't think I'd object to the phrase ''merely'' on the grounds of clumsy language construction, but (3) I kind of suspect that his objection to the construction is ''really'' an objection to what he perceives as a violation of NPOV in the article, and I'm leaving an opening for that to be expressed more fully later if need be. I'll give that same grace to anyone in this debate, so long as I get the sense they are trying to communicate (not just beat someone over the head with words). --] 09:33, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::{{tq2|The term global warming has become synonymous in the press with human-induced climate change. ... Carbon dioxide concentrations in the atmosphere have increased such that 2009 values of about 385 ppmv are over 36 percent higher than preindustrial values of 280 ppmv and over half that increase has occurred since 1970 (Figure 1).}} | |||
:::::First of all I'm concerned that the article fails the reader. I have repeatedly come here for information and I've found it is not helpful. I've made suggestions for improvements, but the conduct of this page makes it very difficult to have any kind of sensible discussion. That's why I've not come back to try and fight for "Amazon" "rain-forest" "flames" and "go up in" to appear. Even desertification and the Antarctic are missing, which is pretty astounding. | |||
* Encyclopedia of Global Change {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780195108255.001.0001}}. | |||
:::::Secondly I'm concerned about the poor writing of this article in places (such as the lede) which it is extremely difficult to improve, as you're discovering. | |||
::Climate Change entry: | |||
:::::Thirdly I have concerns about POV in parts of the article (eg the ridiculously titled "Debate and skepticism"). | |||
::{{tq2|An Overview<br/>... During the past two centuries, anthropogenic activity has resulted in large increases in the atmospheric greenhouse gas content, which has caused a detectable increase in global temperatures and are predicted to continue to increase for many decades before the climate system reaches a new equilibrium. ...}} | |||
:::::I should not need to state that commenting must relate to improving articles and not concern other editors. ] (]) 12:02, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Global warming entry: | |||
===Theoretical construct?=== | |||
::{{tq2|..Levels rose to 275 ppmv during the warm interglacial phases, and that level is also considered representative of the preindustrial era of the nineteenth century...}} | |||
:What is a "theoretical construct"? I had to look it up - according to Blackwell, it's not something that is commonly used among scientist, but a philosophical term that describes "a term for something that is unobservable and postulated, such as force, atoms, field, or electrons", and "scientific realists reject the notion of a theoretical construct". I strongly suggest that a term with such a specialized philosophical meaning has not place in the introduction of an article of general interest. I'd also say that the term would be grossly misused. --] (]) 09:01, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::I had no problem understanding "theoretical construct". It suggests a linkage based on theory and seems to fit well with "which try to explain that increase in terms of human-derived or natural causation". Your objection may be that the words "try to" are surplus, I'd agree to leaving them out. ] (]) 13:08, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::That ignores the point that "technical construct" is apparently a ] that is used outside the boundaries of its understood meaning. --] (]) 13:20, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::Does the phrase get it's meaning across to me, and do I accept that its use complies with NPOV? My answer would be "Yes" on both counts. (Well, the words "try to" could be chopped but the rest of it reads properly). Newspapers manage to be interesting and infomative and credible (even the notorious Daily Mail talking about Prof Latif) and the WP article should aim to be better than them. Currently, I fear that it's worse, sometimes much worse. | |||
::::I would like to congratulate you for attempting "constructive opposition" to the proposed version, something we're not always seeing. ] (]) 13:28, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::Sorry, but either you don't get the technical meaning of the term "theoretical construct", or I don't get it. As far as I'm concerned, while there is a somewhat fuzzy interpretation consistent with an naive reading of the term (see the FAQ Q8), there is no plausible interpretation that is consistent with the technical meaning of the term. It's like saying "the mechanic used a spanner to move the car" when talking about a mechanic driving over the Golden Gate Bride to move the car from Oakland to San Diego. Yes, bridges "span", but its still a wrong use of language. --] (]) 14:49, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::You may be right and if you wish to change those two words I'd not object. However, the proposed paragraph makes a lot more sense than what we're using currently, which manages to use unnecessary temperature and mathematical precision to support a different statement. | |||
::::::Why do I get the impression that this discussion will be dragged out until those who can see the problems with the article and genuinely wish to improve it are forced to abandon the attempt? I want to re-write the "Feedback" section to cover the 4 most important elements (and remove the irrelevancies) and I want to incorporate desertification of the Amazon rain-forest, a significant gap. ] (]) 15:38, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::{{od|8|y}}@ Stephan. I'm happy to use the word 'theory' instead of 'theoretical construct'. very minor point. I had't meant anything special by the phrase, I just speak jargon by default. I'm confused, however, by the bit about 'scientific realists' - do they not believe that electrons exist, or do they believe that we can see electrons directly? both claims strike me as a bit... odd. --] 17:27, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
The two below have shorter entries: | |||
===Pedantic=== | |||
*A Dictionary of Weather (3 ed.) {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780191988356.001.0001}}. Separate entries for global warming and climate change (climatic change). Not mentioned there. | |||
That proposed introduction looks excessively pedantic to me. We should use plain English wherever possible, especially in the introductory sentence where we have not yet defined our terms. Currently we say: | |||
*A Dictionary of Human Geography {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780199599868.001.0001}}. Climate change entry. Not mentioned there, but source mentions Anthropocene. | |||
17:27, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:By the way, there is an entire encyclopedia on climate change communication, The Oxford Encyclopedia of Climate Change Communication. | |||
: ''Global warming is the increase in the average temperature of Earth's near-surface air and oceans since the mid-20th century and its projected continuation.'' | |||
That's a pretty short sentence, but it gets the message across without all the fiddling and scraping employed by the first sentence of the proposed alternative. As for the second sentence in the alternative, I don't know what it's doing there. --] 12:45, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Unfortunately, "Global Warming" as we know it is somewhat more than those straightforward words imply, in some quarters they're a swear-word. We need to pay lip-service to that view if we don't want to immediately lose that half of the visitors who, like me, came here to find the root of an NPOV discussion. ] (]) 13:08, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::: This is about the ''science''. The nonsense in the newspapers should stay in the newspapers. People who cannot tell newspaper reports from fact may have difficulties with the content of this encyclopedia, but the solution to that problem is not to change the content of the encyclopedia. Indeed we have no business trying to solve the problem at all. We are neither propagandists nor educators, we only write the facts about science from reliable sources. --] 13:37, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::I would debate you on the degree to which very knowledgeable editors of this article live in ivory towers where they can afford to ignore public debate and what's going on in the real world. However, I'm not going to do that because Misplaced Pages doesn't live in an ivory tower. The issue at stake is not the perfidy of newspapers or even the disastrous consequences for the planet but the dreadfully uninformative state of this article. And the poor writing, a problem that Ludswig2 is trying to fix with my support. ] (]) 15:08, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:@ Tony: as a statement of science, the current lead is ''wrong''. I'm happy to use plain English where and to the extent that plain English correctly explains the situation, but I see no reason to use what (at best) amounts to scientific baby talk. If you'd like to revise my proposal to be more accessible, we can discuss that, but what you've said here does not constitute an argument for not using it. --] 17:36, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:: We disagree about whether the introduction is wrong. I think it's correct, and I regard objections from pedantry as unhelpful. --] 17:45, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::This is not a matter of personal opinion. Try and . ] (]) 17:55, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::@ Tony: You are entitled to disagree, of course, but you are ''not'' entitled to disagree just for the sheer heck of it. I've given carefully thought-out explanations of why I think the article needs to include what I've included. Unless you have an argument that counters the explanations I've given, then I will acknowledge your disagreement but will be forced to ignore it. The article shouldn't suffer from misinformation simply because some editors don't like the information that's missing. --] 18:12, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::@ Bertport: dictionary definitions are now the final word in scientific discussions? when did that happen? --] 18:16, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::: Ludwigs2, please don't misrepresent me. I have told you that I disagree because the wording is correct and your objection seems to be sheer pedantry. Please don't falsely claim that I disagree "for the heck of it." --] 18:22, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::@ Ludwigs2: No, dictionaries do not supplant scientific discussions. The first sentence of this article should not be a "discussion" of any sort. But you have stated that the intro, which is a ''definition'', is incorrect. Definitions ''are'' the domain of dictionaries. ] (]) 18:40, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
===No pressing need=== | |||
I see no pressing need to change the existing lede. This looks like being yet another pile of unproductive and possibly acrimonious talking likely to lead nowhere. In particluar, I see no "misinformation" in the existing lede: L, if you want to insist on this point, you'll need to make it rather more clearly ] (]) 18:17, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
I think we should mention something like pre-industrial in the first paragraph. But we can shift things around. For example, the last sentence in first paragraph cites IPCC AR6 WG1 Technical Summary 2021, p. 67. That page mentions: | |||
:::::@ Tony and William: '''again''', I have spelled out my reasons in detail in this section and in the archived discussion. If you would like to address those reason, I'm listening. If you would like me to repeat those reasons, I will do that (within reason). If you don't want to read or discuss the arguments I've made, that's fine, but then you really don't really have anything to contribute to the conversation. All I'm hearing from the two of you is that ''you don't like it'', and that's just not a valid reason in a debate of this sort. --] 18:44, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
{{tq2|'''Since 1750''', changes in the drivers of the climate system are dominated by the warming influence of increases in atmospheric GHG concentrations and a cooling influence from aerosols, both resulting from human activities}} | |||
::::::I've read and understood (i presume) all your arguments, and reasons. Despite this i disagree with your change, for much the same reasons as that given by others. Your introduction is worse than the current one, readability is worse, explanation too complex, goes into details that is outside of the lead's purpose, focus is too narrow ... etc etc. --] (]) 18:54, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
p.4: | |||
::::::Asserting that you are listening is no substitute for listening. Mischaracterizing the responses of others does not pass for answering them. Calling yourself reasonable does not amount to being reasonable. ] (]) 18:57, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
{{tq2|Observed increases in well-mixed greenhouse gas (GHG) concentrations since around 1750 are unequivocally caused | |||
by human activities}} | |||
I'll make my proposal below in a new section ] (]) 19:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::@ Kim, I'm not sure I'm following you. you understand (and presumably agree with) the substantive change that the lead should acknowledge global warming as a theory, but you disagree with making that change on stylistic grounds? or am I misunderstanding you? | |||
:::::::@ Bertport: if I've mischaracterized something someone has said, please clarify. I am listening, but I might have misheard. | |||
:::::::With respect to reasonableness, I stand by my behavior. --] 19:01, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
== Article housekeeping == | |||
===The gravity analogy=== | |||
This is the problem: | |||
{{quotation|'''Gravity''' refers to empirical observations of the motions of mass-bearing objects, and to theoretical constructs which try to explain that motion in terms of their mass and distance from one another. It falls primarily under the scientific purview of physicists, but because of the complexity of the subject matter other scientific disciplines have noteworthy investments in the debate.}} | |||
Thanks {{u|Femke}} for removing unused references and other tidying. I could pitch in to help with that kind of thing for an hour or two this week. What else needs to be done? ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 02:26, 31 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
The problem is one of inappropriate distancing motivated by a pedantic wish to provide an exact and pathologically precise, defensive definition of the facts. By applying such distancing, we traduce the subject and give undue weight to alternative suggestions, such as that global warming will not continue, or that it's primarily of natural cause, or (in the case of gravity) that the Earth sucks. --] 18:33, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:Just to let you know, I intend to clean up after myself, but got sidetracked. For the areas I edited, some of the citations aren't to chapters but to overall IPCC reports. I'll be fixing those. ] (]) 16:54, 31 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Tony, on the ] article, no one has any issue with referring to gravity as a theory. There are major headings about the history of the theory and alternate theories, yah? and that even considering that the theories of gravity are ''much more solidly based in empirical evidence'' than the theories of global warming. If you're going to make reference to that page than we should have much more thorough discussions of theory on this page than it currently shows. | |||
::Thanks Bogazicili! | |||
::In terms of housekeeping, I try to do the following every one/two years: | |||
::* See if overcitation has slipped in, which is often a red flag for text-source integrity issues. One example is overcitation after "Smaller contributions come from ], organic carbon from combustion of fossil fuels and biofuels, and from anthropogenic dust", which has 6 sources. (I you could help here!) | |||
::* Check if jargon such as anthropogenic has slipped back in, and reword using plain English | |||
::* Reread the article, and check if there is text-source integrity for surprising statements | |||
::* Reread the article, and update numbers which need updating. | |||
::] (]) 17:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Not that big of an issue, but the source formatting is also slightly messy and inconsistent in places (e.g. Harvnb is used for most things but not all, some things are missing various fields, etc). ] (]) 19:17, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Wow, that's a lot of work that you've been doing regularly! I'll take on the overcitation thing. Will indicate here when I've finished checking. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 19:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I'll have much more time to work on this tomorrow (Sunday). I think I added most of the AR6 citations. I'll be fixing those tomorrow. And then I can also pitch in with the rest of the housekeeping. ] (]) 17:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I think I fixed the parts I had added. ] (]) 20:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Suggestions for the first sentence == | |||
::Ludwigs, you seem to have misunderstood the ''gravity'' example above. That is not the introduction to that article, but shows what an unnecessary mouthful that would be if it followed your proposed wording. The actual introduction there is much simpler, as are those for ], ] and most other articles on established scientific topics. They all begin, "'''X''' is..." and go on to explain in simple terms the established science in a clear sentence or two. Your proposal, to begin, "'''Global warming''' refers to empirical observations of..." and to go on to talk about "theoretical constructs which try to explain..." clearly sets out to muddy the water before the reader gets started. Such a rhetorical device may go down well in a political debating society, or in a lawyer's speech to the jury, but is not relevant (or normal) in a scientific context. Try as some people may, one cannot turn GW itself into a debating matter - it may be one of the first times that science has led politicians into doing the right thing, but trying to turn the science itself into a matter for debate, among those who do not understand it, is not relevant. The politics, debates, brinkmanship and gambling begin where the science leaves off, not just before it begins. --] (]) 21:31, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
The first sentence is awkward, and I'd love to craft a new first sentence before we get to be on the main page. The "in common usage" is especially jarring, and may fall slightly foul of ]. I have two suggestions: | |||
:::Nigel, I haven't misunderstood anything. I have no objection to any stylistic critiques you care to make - I'm sure that we can arrive at something nice if we work at it - but the substantive changes I'm quite set on. if you want to model things on the ''gravity'' article, then I will immediately add 'history of the theory' and 'alternate theories' sections to this article, and once they are in place and properly developed I will give up my concerns about the lead. Is that what you'd prefer? | |||
# '''Climate change''' encompasses '''global warming'''—Earth’s ongoing temperature increase—and its wider effects on Earth's climate. | |||
# '''Current climate change''' is the ongoing rise in global average temperatures and the resulting effects on Earth's climate. | |||
It's a common thing that more text gets bolded than the title alone, to clarify immediately to the reader what the topic is where there is some need for disambiguation. I think this may release us from the need to be a bit pedantic in the introduction. ] (]) 19:26, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I do not put style over substance, ever, and I am not inclined to sacrifice an accurate description of this topic over petty stylistic concerns. let's agree on the substantive point first, and then we can haggle of style issues. --] 23:29, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
: The preamble "In common usage" distinguishes current CC from "Climate change in a broader sense" that's in the second sentence. The distinction is important since we should (must?) quickly define the article title, focus attention on what ''this'' article is about, and link to the other article (Climate variability and change). I remember the community grappling with how to achieve these goals; the current text was the result. "In common usage" isn't jarring, though some might call it a bit formal. "Current climate change" (suggestion 2) isn't a much-used term. —21:10 The current wording tells the reader immediately that common-use "CC" is not the academically correct use. Of Suggestion 1 and 2, though, I definitely prefer Suggestion 1. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 22:23, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I find it depressing that we're spending so much time refuting misrepresentations of clearly stated arguments. The key question is, or should be: Is there actually any reasonable argument to replace the clear and accurate first sentence of this article with a sequence of unreadable circumlocutions? --] 21:52, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:: The distinction is not between "academic usage" and "common usage". Academics use the terms like everybody else in their papers. IPCC has it in their name, WMO classifies their reporting under climate change. The difference is between definitionally and non-definitionally. If you have a sentence with ''is'', you imply a definition, so we need to make clear in some way that we're talking about "Contemporary", "Present-day", "Current" climate change. What we can do as well is 2b: | |||
:Yes, I've given one that you refuse to address. Tony, please note: I ''will'' continue to raise this issue until it is resolved (one way or another) to my satisfaction. You can keep trying to avoid it - as you've done repeatedly in this discussion to date - or you can settle down and start editing cooperatively to address my '''perfectly valid''' concerns in a way that satisfies us both. I'm ok with either choice you make, but judging by your comments above I think that in the long run you'll be happier having taken the second option. Up to you. --] 23:22, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:: 2b. Current/present-day/contemporary '''Climate change''' ... | |||
:: As far as I'm concerned the issue is resolved: there is no consensus for your proposed change and I've given you my opinion of it. Feel free, ''within reason'', to advocate for your version. But ''please'' refrain from repeating your false claims that those who disagree with you have done so without engaging with your suggestions properly. I've stated my reasons above and I will not continue to repeat them. --] 23:38, 17 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 09:00, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::that's your business. however, I am obliged to disregard your '''opinion''' since you refuse to make any actual argument. I want to discuss an improvement to the encyclopedia, you're simply being obstructionist, and that is all that needs to be said on the matter. Oh... that, and 'have a nice day!' | |||
:::now, if anyone would ''actually'' like to discuss the matter, I'm listening. --] 00:53, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:I prefer 'Contemporary' to 'Current', but I like the wording in Suggestion 1 more. My suggestion would be something like: | |||
::::Pretending that you (one person) have the right to hold this article and all its contributors to some kind of ransom regarding changes ''you'' want to make to it, is unrealistic. You have been making similar demands here for some weeks now. This is not the way ] works. Many people have explained that the changes you propose do not improve the article, for various reasons. ] --] (]) 15:00, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Contemporary '''climate change''' encompasses '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]. | |||
:Also, if the first sentence changes, the next two will probably need tweaking too. ] (]) 12:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I wonder what percentage of the population knows what "contemporary" means. I'd estimate less than 80/90%, hence my suggestions for slightly less elegant wording. Two difficult words close to each other (contemporary/encompasses), makes it more difficult to guess the word meaning for those unaware. ] (]) 12:23, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::In that case, I would propose: "Present-day '''climate change''' includes both '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]." ] (]) 12:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I like that variation. Present-day may prevent some knee-jerk reactions of Wikipedians trained to remove the word '']'' from articles. ] (]) 12:58, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Pinging all those with recent talk page activity: {{ping|Clayoquot|Amakuru|Bogazicili|Chipmunkdavis|Sunrise|Alaexis}}. ] (]) 09:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::As I have said (repeatedly) until someone shows me my actual substantive point is invalid, I am obliged to argue for it. Consensus does not have anything to do with majority rule, it's a tool for improving the encyclopedia. This is a question about whether GW should be identified as a theory - I've given good reasons for it, no one has given good reasons against it. what would you do in my shoes? --] 17:11, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:I prefer the first one because it includes the other common term, global warming. Global warming also redirects to this page, as it should. ] (]) 14:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
===A shorter version=== | |||
After going through some of the history I think you make some good points. However, you suggestion would have to be shortened and changed to get any traction. My suggestion to your previously stated alternative. | |||
: I concede Femke's point (09:00) re academics/definitions. My concern is to explicitly convey that there are two definitions of CC. This distinction parallels the fact that today's CC is different from historical/generic CC. Detail: reviewing https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/contemporary, I'm OK with "current" or "present" or "present-day" or "recent" or "ongoing" or "newfangled" (well, maybe not "newfangled :-) :-). —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:03, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{quotation|Global warming refers to empirical observation of a global increase in average oceanic and near-surface atmospheric temperatures since the mid-20th century, and the theory which tries to explain that increase in terms of human-derived causation.}} ] (]) 01:56, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::I think it's more elegant to do it implicitly (present-day climate change), rather than explicitly. We want people to read about the topic of climate change, rather than about the intricacies of how terms are used in the first paragraph. ] (]) 17:06, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
: I have a problem with that. Human-derived causation is an inference, and not an integral part of anybody's theory. If we discovered tomorrow that the warming trend was significantly natural in causation, this would not make the trend go away. We would only have made an adjustment to the attribution of different mechanisms. --] 14:30, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::: By "explicitly" I didn't mean super-ultra-formally. I think the distinction of definitions is accomplished by the second sentence, "Climate change in a broader sense...". That's all I meant. I'm OK with most of the smaller-change proposal I've read in this discussion. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:11, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::This suggestion is not any kind of improvement on the existing opening sentences. It would replace some simple and easily cited facts with a lot of mealy-mouthed verbiage that achieves nothing except inviting the possibility of picking uncited holes in the basics of the science that this article is about. Almost every word and phrase can be challenged, and all together it amounts to ] to synthesise a whole new view of the published science: "refers to" - why can't we just say "is"? "empirical observation" - why qualify even this half of the new definition? Is there some other kind of observation that we're going to discuss? "average oceanic and near-surface atmospheric" - what's wrong with "near-surface air and oceans"? "the theory which tries to explain" - that just drips of an unspoken allegation that science itself is basically corrupt or ineffectual. "tries to explain that increase in terms of" - that is an actual misrepresentation of the way scientific modelling proceeds from observations towards explanations and projections. The science in this area did so many years or decades ago, and there is no need to imply in the first sentence that it is still struggling to emerge from its own primordial slime and assemble its first coherent thought. --] (]) 15:17, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:I have a slight preference for Sgubaldo's proposal. All of them sound fine to me though. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Just to clarify, since there are multiple proposals. I'm ok with this latest one: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." ] (]) 17:43, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:If no one objects, I'll wait until tomorrow to see if there's any more replies, and then I'll make the changes. ] (]) 19:12, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Changes made. ] (]) 12:43, 4 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== FYI: removed 'mainly' from lead == | |||
:::Arzel, thank you for trying. I'd personally be happy with your version, except that it needs to be expanded - it's not just about human-derived causation but about the relationship between possible forms of human and natural causation. | |||
I changed "The current rise in global average temperature is mainly driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution" to "The current rise in global average temperature is <s>mainly</s> driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution". The best guess is taht 100% of climate change is driven by human activities (per new source), so the old wording was misleading and the old source didn't talk about this. The word driven itself also doesn't require 100% causation (that would be is caused by), so even when the percentage of human-induced climate change deviates from observed climate change, this wording should remain correct. | |||
:::Nigel: The reason we can't just say 'empirical observation' is because empirical observations have no meaning in and of themselves. As I have said before, empirical observations are measurements of isolated events in time - they only have meaning to the extent that they are tied together by a theoretical structure which ''gives'' them meaning. saying that science has theories does not ''"drip of an unspoken allegation{s] that science itself is basically corrupt or ineffectual"'', it is a simple and accurate description of '''the way science actually works'''. --] 17:22, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
I did this boldly, as the old text was not really supported and misleading. Hope that's okay. ] (]) 10:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Agree'''. As Earth was on a very slight cooling trend for ~10,000 years, I remember reading that humans cause ''"more than"'' 100% of global warming, though it would be confusing to say that literally. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:07, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:piffle. When everyone stops arguing about irrelevancies and gets down to discussing the substantive issue I've raised, then this will move forward. If not, not. either way I am not about to give up on a credible improvement to the article because a few editors are on a tear about it. --] 17:45, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
*:The idea of a ] some 8,000 years ago is a . Regional climate proxies say there was one, but globally it's a more complex picture, and models think there's been continuous warming / stable temperatures. | |||
*:The more than 100% since pre-industrial also isn't true anymore as I understand it, as the last couple of years have seen very rapid warming. The source I cited is also the one used by the IPCC, and they say the best guess is exactly 100% caused by humans with some uncertainty. ] (]) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::{{ping|Femke}} do you still want to remove "since the Industrial Revolution" part? That can be reworded and moved to the last sentence. Proposal below. ] (]) 20:30, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== The lead, first paragraph == | |||
== alternate approach == | |||
This is what the first paragraph of the lead would look like, after recent changes and suggestions in ] and ] and above section. | |||
Didn't include the sources in the article, and some of the new sources are above. For the "accelerating in the past 50 years", I will use . | |||
: ''This follows on from ]'' | |||
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I've had one editor who has suggested that I might forgo revising the lead and instead work the idea of global warming as a scientific theory into the main body of the article. Since I think that will need to happen eventually anyway, I'd be happy to begin there and table the discussion of the lead to some future point. It's a bit more work, of course, but that's alright. if there's consensus that that would be a better approach, I'll post some specific revision suggestions here for comment. Is that what you all would prefer? --] 20:03, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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<s>In common usage, '''climate change''' describes '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]. ] also includes previous long-term changes to Earth's climate.</s> Present-day '''climate change''' includes both '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]. ] also includes previous long-term changes to Earth's climate. <s>The current</s> Present-day rise in ] is ], especially burning ]s. <s>especially ] burning since the ]</s> Fossil fuel use, ], and some ] and ] practices release ]es.<ref name="Our World in Data-2020">{{harvnb|Our World in Data, 18 September|2020}}</ref> These gases ] that the Earth ] after it warms from ], warming the lower atmosphere. <s>], the primary greenhouse gas driving global warming, ] and is at levels unseen for millions of years.</s> ] and accelerating in the past 50 years, greenhouse gas concentrations have been increasing. ], the primary greenhouse gas driving global warming, ] | |||
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] (]) 19:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I think the the new text is not great for flow. Most of the sentences are roughly the same lenght, with makes for slightly uncomfortable reading. I don't feel strongly about removing "industrial revolution", but I don't think moving it to later is that much of a change? ] (]) 21:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:no response to this. should I interpret that as agreement and begin revisions? --] 21:53, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::I suggested the changes with this criticism in mind. {{tq|Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly}} | |||
:: Specific ''suggestions'' for revision are always welcome. Those suggestions that gain consensus can be enacted. --] 23:47, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Now we have two clear dates (since 1750 and accelerating in the past 50 years). ] (]) 22:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::@] "accelerating in the last 50 years" suggests to me the rate of warming is increasing across that time period. i think you mean that the last 50 years has exhibited a higher rate of warming that the precedding period. | |||
:::you may also like to add to that, during this 50 year period, attribution studies are able to clearly discern human driven change from natural forcing -- this relates to the time series figure on the page. ] (]) 13:14, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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::Ludwig. Why not state the obvious: "global warming is commonly used to refer to the rapid warming of the earth at the end of the 20th century that led to huge public concern and resulted in the IPCC in 2001 issuing a report suggesting that unless action was taken to limit the production of manmade CO2 from burning fossil fuels that it was (likely, highly likely whatever they used) that there would be further warming of between 1.4 to 5.8C over the next century." It's a simple, factual definition which everyone - skeptic or believer ought to be able to agree with. ] (]) 00:00, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Equal timism? How quaint. --] 00:04, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
== Proposed replacement of graphic in "Impacts" section == | |||
:::85.210.3.125: that strikes me as factually untrue (at least with respect to temporal ordering), and seems to be trying to pack about 6 different ideas into one sentence. I wouldn't support adding the political and public concern elements into this article (not as this article is currently constructed - they'd work better elsewhere); the scientific points seem to be already included. or am I missing something? | |||
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:::Tony, give me a bit: I need to think about body addition more thoroughly. --] 00:32, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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I suggest a change of wording to the following sentence in the lede. "Warming '''will''' be strongest in the Arctic and '''will''' be associated with continuing retreat of glaciers, permafrost and sea ice." Changing the first '''will''' to '''may''' and the second '''will''' to '''would''' per ] I don't believe anyone knows for sure what might happen. Also, it is not clear if "Arctic" is referencing only the North Pole or both artic regions. ] (]) 01:41, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
I've long questioned the value of the "soil moisture" graphic in the short, crowded, under-emphasized "Impacts" section. | |||
:Arctic amplification of climate change is ''very'' widely accepted -- regardless of whether one considers past changes or future changes, or whether the global change is anthropogenic or natural. It's fundamental to how the climate system works. There's also no "both artic" regions; there's the Arctic, and Antarctica. ] (]) 01:56, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::I have heard people refer to both poles as the Artic Regions, that must just be a misunderstanding on my part. I am not saying that the Artic will not warm, only that the paragraph states definatively that it will be strongest in the Artic, do we know ''for sure'' that it would not be stronger in say sub-artic Siberia, or sub-artic Canada, or Greenland or thousands of other places? I would say it is not possible to say what areas would experience the greatest warming in the future. The second change from will to would is a grammatical/stlyistic change. "Would" is showing that retreat in glaciers is a characteristic of global warming in the Artic. ] (]) 02:42, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::: I suspect you're thinking about the term "]s". The term ] comes from an ancient Greek word referring to the constellation of the Great Bear. --] 15:22, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Regarding changing 'will' to 'may', the way it works is that the ] summarises the main points in the article, where 'main points' are defined by ]. So, what you would need to do is to find a large enough body of published science that says that warming ''may not'' be strongest in the Arctic, get this added to the relevant sections of the article, then discuss changing the lede to reflect the new information in the article. It's not mentioned as an option at the moment because there is not the weight of legitimate science that warrants coverage of that specific possibility in the article or the lede. So, there is a process here, and just reading the lede and trying to get "does" and "will" changed to "tries to" and "may" at random is not it. Start by reading up on the science, from peer-reviewed sources, bearing in mind WP:WEIGHT and WP:NOTNEWS. --] (]) 15:37, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Since I cannot even find a section in the main article that makes this points it doesn't even belong in the lede to begin with. Also, I would ask that you AGF, I read the section, noticed that it made a future statement of fact which doesn't appear to be possible to make and isn't even backed up in the main article. ] (]) 18:10, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
: All this fiddling with the lede is a symptom of Not Enough Real Things To Do. If you have nothing but this to contribute to the climate change articles, then find something else of interest to edit ] (]) 17:38, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::If you have nothing better to do than attack other editors perhaps you should not even be editing on WP. ] (]) 18:10, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::I was going to say something like that. I have plenty of real things to do - re-write the "Feedback" section so it tells us which are +ve and which -ve. Re-title and re-write the "Dissent" section. We could divvy some of these things up between us because there's no shortage. Find the part of the IPCC that said Himalayan glaciation would be almost gone by 2035, insert it and then insert a grovelling apology. Write up "Arctic to be free of ice by 2013" and it's denial. Write up the 20 years of cooling that we could be getting and explain how it's been <s>missed</s> ignored for 8 years but doesn't affect the overall picture. ] (]) 19:59, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::: 2035: if you're clueless about that (as you do appear to be) go read the crit of Ar4 article, where you'll find it all laid out in detail ] (]) 21:36, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::I found that exact article before you prompted me - but I did it with Google, there are no clues of any kind here. Even finding it again via WP was clumsy, I had to enter "AR4" in the search box and search for "2035" in the . Oops, it's not there! Fortunately, having gained some experience I know to search for "criticism", from which I discover the sub-article ]. | |||
:::::So that's how I discover that WMC's already been there (before the scandal broke in the newspapers) and written it up to say that the WWF meant to predict that, in the next 200 to 300 years, the glaciers will shrink from 500,000 km2 to 100,000km2 and meant to give the date of this as 2350 (mis-printing it as 2035, the wrong figure picked up by the IPCC). So the IPCC is in the clear (other than the lack of common sense). However, the changes you've made so far do not deal with the damaging allegation that the WWF report was not peer-reviewed research, and yet, that's what was used when writing the 2007 report! | |||
:::::If you weren't fielding my objections here, you would be completing "Criticism of IPCC AR4" article with the other needed information .... however, pestilential people are still going to come here and expect to be informed. | |||
:::::WP obviously can't compete with Google (even on information already contained in an article here!) but once I'm here, the article should inform me and answer specific questions that I have. Believe it or not, that's what brought me here in the first place (Dr William Happer, then soot). | |||
:::::I don't have many of the answers to make this article a credit to you, but I can tell you it is uninformative now and that commenting on editors rather than on the article still further highlights concerns about POV. ] (]) 09:21, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Moved this IP reply to me to my page. ] (]) 18:33, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Try reading it again, in particular ''It has been suggested that this report should not have been used, as it does not appear to be peer-reviewed . However, IPCC rules permit the use of non-peer-reviewed material, providing it is "internationally available".'' ] (]) 09:49, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::IPCC AR4 comes in 4 volumes of print, and it's incredibly difficult to read eg ''"some paragraphs and graphics were repeated up to five times – in SYR SPM, SYR TS, a WG TS, a WG ES, and a WG chapter, in similar but not identical forms."''. | |||
:::::::So I did a search for "peer" (at www.IPCC.ch, using the trusty "site:" command in Google) and the first entry I came across was : ''"The credibility of the IPCC reports is based on the fact that they summarize and integrate existing research, which itself has been scrutinized through publication in peer-review journals."'' | |||
:::::::Did nobody tell them? | |||
:::::::Actually, the next sentence but one might be even more relevant to our deliberations: ''"It is critical to communicate better how the statements in the reports are produced, because the thousands of supporting studies (and the work behind this) are not visible when these statements appear in newspapers and television. | |||
:::::::I'm a believer. Or I was when I first came here as a visitor. Can it be that the IPCC process is operated in a way that make a travesty of "consensus" and hands the entire work-in-progress over to believers who reject anyone else's input? | |||
:::::::To any of the people who once thought the direction I've taken is sound, but now think I'm repeating myself, please tell me to "shut up". ] (]) 13:50, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::<s>''"WMC's already been there ... and written it up to say ... misprint ...."'' those are significant allegations. Diff's please. ‒ ] 07:22, 20 January 2010 (UTC)</s> struck per ] on my talk page - no allegation was made. ‒ ] 05:56, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::NB: For others ease - The IPCC rules for non-peer-reviewed material are on the last couple of pages at http://www.ipcc.ch/pdf/ipcc-principles/ipcc-principles-appendix-a.pdf - I see nothing about ''providing it is "internationally available"'' with a quick skim. ‒ ] 08:14, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: Good grief, how much spoon-feeding do you need? It would be nice if you'd check with someone competent before doing your drive-by tagging. Don't do a "quick skim", do a text search, which is easy to do, since I've kindly (no, don't bother thank me, the shock would be too great) provided you with the key phrase "internationally available". If you do this, you get "Preparation of the first draft of a Report should be undertaken by Coordinating Lead Authors and Lead Authors. Experts who wish to contribute material for consideration in the first draft should submit it directly to the Lead Authors. Contributions should be supported as far as possible with references from the peer-reviewed and internationally available literature, and with copies of any unpublished material cited. Clear indications of how to access the latter should be included in the contributions. For material available in electronic format only, a hard copy should be archived and the location where such material may be accessed should be cited. Lead Authors will work on the basis of these contributions, the peer-reviewed and internationally-available literature, including manuscripts that can be made available for IPCC review and selected non-peer review literature according to Annex 2 and IPCC Supporting Material (see section 6). Material which is not published but which is available to experts and reviewers may be included provided that its inclusion is fully justified in the context of the IPCC assessment process (see Annex 2)." And so on and so forth. Is that clear enough for you? Can you now abandon your "Furthermore, blatant factual inaccuracies (IPCC criteria for non-peer-reviewed material, contradicts cited material)" nonsense? ] (]) 11:49, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I'm pleased to see someone else who uses "search" to find things they're interested in, I was afraid I might be the only one. | |||
::::::::::Does this mean I can insert a fleeting reference to Amazon, desertification, Antarctic, drought concerns and all the other things I've mentioned in order that people can find them and be sent to the right part of the article complex to be informed and get their questions answered? ] (]) 19:16, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: ‒ ] 06:14, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Since there doesn't seem to be much discussion regarding the main points of my suggestion I am going to take the silence as ambivalence and make the minor changes I suggested earlier. ] (]) 02:39, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
: No. Please don't read this section selectively. The very first response to your original comment, which was made just 15 minutes after it, explains why your edit would be a bad idea. A comment by another editor later that same day also discussed it and rejected it. --] 10:57, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Boris appeared to think I was saying that Arctic warming wouldn't happen, and didn't argue the actual merits of what I was saying. He made a constructive edit to my change which is still strong but doesn't attempt to make a definitive statement of fact. Nigel argued ] to which I explained that the claim wasn't being made in the body of the article, and I don't see how you can summarize a non-statement. I didn't see a statement of fact in the literature, and from my experience in research, such a statement would never be made. Nigel then made no further comment. WMC made a non-constructive statement, and there was nothing after that. I let a substantial amount of time go by before I made the edit, but if you can provide references that clearly state this is a fact then by all means change it back. It is now worded as it would be in scientific literature, and I fail to see any problem that anyone would have. ] (]) 17:16, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Do we all have to keep repeating ourselves every time you add a comment? You were wrong to say that the existing lede doesn't summarise the information in the current article. This is an overview, summary article and ] is linked no fewer than three times. There is a link to ] right in the lede of ]. If we all had to spend time walking everyone with an erroneous view through every link in every article to explain the subject matter, we'd get nowhere. It's best to read the articles, have some background in the relevant subject matter, and make suggestions based on reading actual reliable sources that other editors may not have picked up on yet. --] (]) 17:41, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
== Time for a major rewrite of this article? == | |||
This article is getting a bit stale (you can see this by looking at the nature of the talk page discussions), so it is high time for a complete rewrite. The contents will stay more or less the same, but the presentation can be completely different. This is best done by one editor offline. Perhaps we should vote on who should do this. ] (]) 18:26, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:well, while I agree with the notion that this article has gone a bit stale, I don't think an offline, single user revision is going to make a difference. the 'staleness' is in the editing atmosphere, not the article itself, and unless things loosen up on the talk page any offline document made will either be a carbon copy of this article or will be rejected out-of-hand the same way current changes to the article are rejected. Mediation is probably the best approach, but (based on commentary at the ]) I don't suppose people here are ready to go that route. sorry, I don't mean to be a complete naysayer, because I'd like to see this work. I just can't quite imagine how it would be successful. --] 18:36, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:: Let me suggest that a RFC be conducted on issues for a rewrite, to collect many views, and then a team take up task in a user space. Really, I would like to see this process for many pages in the project. If it goes well here, then there is real hope for improvement. ] (]) 22:20, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::I wish you luck and support your push for an RfC. ] (]) 22:31, 18 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Sounds pointless. The reason we've run out of senseible things to argue about might be that the article is just about right. Artificially creating a whole pile of things to argue over seems silly ] (]) 08:52, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:Totally agree it is pointless to rewrite an article which is so obviously biased that no one takes it seriously any longer! ] (]) 23:18, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Stale?!? What do you mean by "stale"? This article gets over half a million views per month. How is it stale?--] (]) 10:50, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
: That's a question I've been quietly waiting to be answered. Count Iblis says you can tell the article is stale "by looking at the nature of the talk page discussions." What is it about the talk page discussions that suggests staleness in the article content? --] 10:53, 19 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Over the course of a few years, the article should be re-written with many people contributing. ] (]) 08:10, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::well, I was waiting on Count Iblis, but I guess I'll go ahead and throw in my two cents worth. Any article that has developed a core group of editors who do nothing except sit around and block further development of the page is stale. It would be one thing if there was reasoned opposition to poor additions (which implies a certain open-mindedness and civility to people who propose changes, even if the changes won't work), but on this page, 90% of the responses are of the ''"sounds pointless"'' or ''"I don't like it"'' variety, and the few people who do try the reasonable approach get squelched out by a mass of irrelevant comments. I can point to about 6 major contributors to the page who really ought to take a wikibreak and regroup, because right now they are an impediment, not an asset. happens to the best of us, of course, but you all really ought to have the common sense to recognize when you've stepped over the line from maintaining an encyclopedic article to implicit page ownership. --] 19:59, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::: ''Any article that has developed a core group of editors who do nothing except sit around and block further development of the page'' - since that doesn't describe the current article, we don't have a problem by your defn. This isn't the only article on the subject. Why don't you display your undoubted talents by actually improving something rather than endless talk here? A quick review of your contribs doesn't show any substantive edits to any Cl Ch page other than this one. ''squelched out by a mass of irrelevant comments'' - yes, there I agree with you. There is far too much pointless chit-chat on this page. Alas, any attempt to deal with it is met by tedious cries of Censorship! ] (]) 20:33, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::Ludwigs is right. there are other and better ways to deal with differing opinions on the article's content, than for one side to simply delete all edits or efforts of the other side. --] (]) 20:44, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::: He is right to say that (though wrong to speak so casually of sides, as are you); he is wrong to assert that it occurs ] (]) 20:58, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::: Right on Ludwigs, folks who sit around defending a POV can abstain from a pointless waste of time or an RFC, unless they feel like they own the content here. ] (]) 21:12, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::(e/c) please note, William, I said nothing about sides - I spoke of a core group of editors (who may or may not be doing it for the same reasons). And (speaking scientifically) it is unsurprising to hear you say that I'm wrong, because when I look over your contributions to this talk page, that '''seems''' to be '''all you ever say.''' Now, perhaps I've missed some place where you've made a reasoned argument, or discussed a proposed change fairly, or otherwise worked with other editors towards building ]. If so, please point it out to me, because I'm not seeing it. Otherwise I'll just note this as one more example of typical, automatic naysaying. --] 21:18, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I haven't seen you do anything cooperative and constructive here. All you've done so far is assert a will to change things, and ignore arguments and consensus against your proposals. Assertions doesn't buy the day. You will have to convince people, by arguments, not by attempting to outwill or wear people down by repetition. Being stubborn and not hearing what people say is not constructive. --] (]) 21:30, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::What would you have me do, Kim? I make proposals, but no one discusses them except to say they don't want to consider them. I could edit the article, but it would be reverted immediately. I could give up on the issue and go somewhere else (which I suppose is what everyone wants) but I'm not inclined to do that yet. I have what I think is a good basis for revisions, I'm happy to edit cooperatively with others, and neither of those makes '''one damned bit''' of difference since no one is willing to discuss or edit cooperatively with me. | |||
:::::::::Seriously, Kim, you tell me how I can work on this page in a productive manner and I will ''happily'' oblige (so long as it doesn't involve me acceding to indefensible misinformation without discussion). I'd love to know how, because all I can see here is a page which is just plain constipated. pushing may not help with constipation, but there aren't a whole lot of other options. --] 21:46, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Don't try to make it a personal problem, all about you, and those wicked others. The fact is that all your suggestions so far have revolved around turning this article into one that takes a 50/50 (or some other proportion) view, like, "Maybe GW exists, or maybe it doesn't. Now let's take a 'balanced' look at the two options". That is never going to take root in article about settled science in the modern world. This isn't a matter of a few biassed editors keeping an article 'stale', it is an example of sensible rational people keeping Misplaced Pages sane. There are other articles where the economic problems that GW raises get discussed, where public opinion worldwide is reported, where political debates on, and business interests in the subject are covered. They all need work. But trying to start by getting "maybe there's no such thing" inserted into this basic science article is never going to happen, I'm afraid. You're about 20 - 30 years too late for that, in the rational world. --] (]) 22:01, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::: --] 23:44, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I've been a lurker here for years, watching the article and the discussions that go on but never really taking part. I would like to say that serious attempts to improve the article are great but far to often people apply an agenda, dont truely understand the scientific process, or have any real understanding of climate science to begin with, or use blogs as the basis for their entire scientific knowledge (yikes)....That said, I've been reading many of your comments about changing the lead and have to agree with what others have said. I don't beleive you have been convincing that it needs changing. I think editors here are reasonable if your comments and support behind them are compelling. If there is a problem its that people are not able to convince other editors and get frustrated in that they lack enough background in climate science to be convincing.--] (]) 22:12, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Wholesale in-real-time rewriting of a prominent FA is not practical. It would take forever for it to get hashed out. But I think it would be a very interesting exercise if those who are unsatisfied with the current article were to develop an alternative draft, say in someone's user space. If the result is better than the present article it could be adopted, or (more likely) sections of the current article could be replaced. ] (]) 22:06, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:Whole-sale changes to this article are urgently needed. It is not fit for purpose, it does not inform and it does not provide answers to the questions that people have when they arrive here. I have one particular section in mind but I'm not prepared to unveil my new version yet. ] (]) 22:38, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
The rewriting should follow this ]. ] (]) 04:54, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:That can't be the policy being operated at this article since it says: ''"Try to preserve useful content. As long as any of the facts or ideas added to the article would belong in a "finished" article, they should be retained and the writing tagged if necessary, or cleaned up on the spot"''. I've been pleading for days to be allowed to put back useful (perhaps vital) information about the Amazon, rain-forests, desertification, positive feedback etc. | |||
:I did try to find out all the special policies that are applied only to this suite of articles but my request was removed. I do worry that such behaviour is extremely disruptive and welcome the brave people who revert it, and welcome the appropriate edit summary. ] (]) 16:06, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
] is a very interesting ... I suppose this is fundamental to an inclusionist <s>illusionist</s> editors perspective. The degree of self appointed scientific expertise here (and a few good Misplaced Pages editors) with space concerns demands that new material have abundant source support. ] (]) 19:45, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Don't get too hung up on "preserve". If there's no consensus that an item belongs in the finished article, retaining it in the article just because somebody added it is not policy. | |||
Anyone trying to expand a featured article by adding something about their pet topic is likely run up against the same problem unless they first obtain consensus through discussion on the talk page that the topic belongs in the finished article. the situation is different for stubs and developing articles, where much of the subject may not yet have been covered and it's relatively easy for editors to agree on what should be added. --] 14:17, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
I suggest we proceed this way. William puts aside his objections and volunteers to work on a revised version, to be finished later this year. The advantage of that is that all the bikkering by sceptics on this talk page will be futile. Even if they could change something in the present text, that change would not be reflected in the new text, expecially not if William is going to write it up. Then when William replaces this version by the new text, we'll have discussions about that new text. These discussions will be of a technical nature and the sceptics won't have much to say in these discussions (or they'll only have irrelevant input which is then easy to ignore if there are some real discussions going on). ] (]) 12:52, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
: Please use this page to discuss the article, not the editors. --] 12:56, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
== More IPCC Fun and Games == | |||
The existing graphic's content is not discussed in article text. Also, soil moisture's broader implication on the ''impacts'' affecting humans is speculative and indirect, perhaps even suggesting that things'll get better and better for sub-Saharan Africa. (Aside: I speak out against captions that merely repeat what's in the graphic's own legends/text.) | |||
{{cot|Please use this page as a place to discuss improvements to the article ]; this is ] for general discussion.}} | |||
In light of the Himalayan glacier fiasco http://economictimes.indiatimes.com/opinion/columnists/swaminathan-s-a-aiyar/IPCC-imperialism-on-Indian-glaciers/articleshow/5478293.cms and this: http://rogerpielkejr.blogspot.com/2010/01/what-does-pielke-think-about-this.html it seems to me like it's time to take the IPCC findings with a big grain of salt. I think I'm not the only person who has left Misplaced Pages because climate change articles are "owned" by people who are determined to push the IPCC party line and ignore all proof of peer review manipulation, use of non-academic material (the glacier stuff from New Scientist) and the manipulation of data belonging to people like Pielke. ] (]) 19:46, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:That's an extreme view that no NPOV article could follow. The IPCC process is important because so many nation states are involved. | |||
:The glacier business is a right cock-up, and has exposed the astonishing fact that many IPCC participants thought only peer-reviewed material would be used, whereas other participants had written policy so they could do whatever they liked. Fortunately, nothing so diabolical could ever happen to an article written to the tried and trusted processes of Misplaced Pages. Even so, I agree this article is stale and I like what Ludswig2 said about it above. ] (]) 20:25, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::That is not an extreme view. The reason I do not edit this article is because it is so far from being neutral that I couldn't possibly endorse it in any way by my edits. That may be a selfish view - a kind of "walk by on the other side of the road to the crime", but to be quite honest, I would not wish to have my name as an author on such a wholly distorted document and all I can hope is that it is so obviously biased to the ordinary sensible people who have the misfortune to come across it that they will realise that it cannot be relied on as a source of information.] (]) 22:02, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::Oh really? If this article is so biased, could you name any other encyclopedia (and I am not talking about ) that portrays global warming in a more neutral way? Have you had a look at the of Encyclopædia Britannica, widely regarded as the most scholarly of encyclopaedias, lately? They also mention the IPCC conclusions right away. Are they following any agenda? '''<span style="color:#104E8B;font-size:80%;text-shadow:#BBBBBB 0.2em 0.2em 0.1em;">]</span> :]''' <sup>]</sup> 22:18, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
Meanwhile, the ''impacts'' on humans of progressively more intense hurricanes is immediately and intuitively evident (see also ]). I realize Graphic B is not global and is only one year's hurricanes, but I think the graphic speaks to a more striking and immediate impact of climate change. | |||
:::Is this going to be the pattern? First, hacking the emails out from CRU didn't 'bring down the whole of climate science', so now the 'glacier fiasco' is going to do it? You guys need to get your heads around just how big the scientific world is in our modern society. It's not just 4 guys in East Anglia and a little UN committee, you know. This has been going on for decades, involving thousands of highly qualified and professional researchers and reviewers and thinkers, writers, politicians, heads of state, whatever. We know you don't like it, that's why so much work was put in. Running around in circles shouting "Gotcha, you lying b****s!" every five minutes isn't going to make it all go away. Reflecting the science as it is in this article ''is'' neutral. Pretending that it's all a ] is irrational. --] (]) 22:22, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::Well, if everyone believes it, it must be true, right? Nigel, meet my friends Copernicus and Galileo. I'm afraid, when it comes to the hockey stick graph, the glaciers -- a big part of IPCC and Gore's case, and now the hurricanes (see Pielke's blog above. He was a main researcher on hurricane frequency) a lot of IPCC and CRU is coming up snake-eyes. So people like me will continue to refuse to do anything for Misplaced Pages.] (]) 23:06, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::: See ]. If we all knew the truth about everything we wouldn't need that policy. Nor for that matter would we need encyclopedias. There is a lot of disinformation around but the science seems to be sound. If and when that changes we'll eventually adapt the article to the changed circumstances. --] 23:11, 20 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Even taking the tired example of Copernicus and Galileo, that was a step change in ''science'': it wasn't a case of Joe Bloggs of East Penge sitting up in his bath with a brand new idea that was better than those of all of the world's scientists put together. ] was a mathematician, astronomer, physician, polyglot and scholar. He worked his whole life on these things, and had a huge circle of scientific colleagues and supporters, and mountains of careful observations and calculations, before he allowed his heliocentricity theory to be published, just before his death. He wasn't a blogger who found a wrong date in AR4, or a hacker who found some e-mails. If the scientific community find a better theory for what's wrong with burning all the earth's fossil fuels, i.e. better than global warming, then they'll publish it and we'll report it. But don't expect to find that your favourite blogger is a reincarnation of Copernicus or Galileo and has thought it out all by himself! --] (]) 19:42, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::: Oh come on Nigelj, climate "science" only really got going after the ice core samples in the 1960s - there has been precisely 5 decades of data (one decade being as far as climate is concerned only one data point). It has a record of predicting cooling in the 1970s using the Camp Century cycles (a fact you won't find in this biased load of trash here) - it then invented manmade warming in the 1970s to excuse the failure of predicted cooling, and then the fad was to predict warming, which happened for 2 decades (warming 1980, 1990) and then being totally confident on their "science" based on only two data points the idiots decided that they understood the total climate and in 2001 predicted warming, since when it has cooled. That's not science - that complete junk - real scientists won't to have nothing to do with these charlatans! ] (]) 20:51, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Very clever - but a ridiculous simplification of the state of the art. ] (]) 21:01, 21 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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== What's this article for? == | |||
:While I'm open to replacing that graph, I'm not a fan of adding another US-focused one in its place. Is it possible to do something similar for tropical cyclones in general? ] (]) 08:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:: It's Atlantic focused, not "US" focused per se. I've searched for CC-intensified (Pacific) typhoons but references applying ] to specific hurricanes/cyclones/typhoons are nearly non-existent. This chart was a rare discovery in how it makes CC's effects be concretely evident. If anyone finds similar references for the Pacific, let me know.. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:51, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:The soil moisture graph ] three years ago. I think we could probably remove it (or move it?) but I am a bit concerned that we don't mention "soil moisture" content anywhere in the text (or is it mentioned under a different term?). I was going to suggest to move it to ] but I see it's already there. - I think my suggestion would be to remove it but to not replace it with another fairly complicated, wordy schematic (such as graph B.). Either remove it without replacement or replace it with something very visual (a photo?). In general, we do have a lot of graphs, schematics and images already in this article. Perhaps one less is actually a good thing. ] (]) 13:22, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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::Droughts are mentioned. ] (]) 21:29, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
The points have all been made and the discussion has become circular. | |||
:I'd rather have ] chosen for the replacement than the other file. I do not believe using an image for one season restricted in one basin would reflect climate change's general impact on tropical cyclones. I'm a bit cautious on replacing the existing image, but I want to see more people discussing before I issue my final verdict. <span style="font-family:Times New Roman;font-size:100%;color:#00008B;background-color:transparent;;CSS">]]</span> 18:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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* '''Keep'''. Temperature, soil, precipitation are the 3 graphs in B. Future Climate Change, Risks, and Long-Term Responses in AR6 SYR SPM (page 14). We already have temperature in the article. ] (]) 21:25, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
Christopher Monckton, 3rd Viscount Monckton of Brenchley, is touring Australia making some very non-believer statements, a synopsis of which is presented here "Mr Rudd, your misguided warming policies are killing millions" He's going to come out with this bilge 8 times from Sydney on January 27th through to Perth on February 8th | |||
*:{{u|RCraig09}}, I'd recommend here for image B: ] ] (]) 21:32, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===IPCC's AR6 Fig. TS-22 etc.=== | |||
I won't try to precis his so-called arguments, you can imagine the kind of thing he's claiming. Or look them up yourselves. The important part is that lots of people will see him or his misleading article and will be coming to this Misplaced Pages article with questions they want answered as a result. Is the article going to answer their questions, or else lead them straight to other articles which will answer their questions? ] (]) 23:32, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:@] have you considered these figures? | |||
:*This article isn't here to debunk misleading statements about global warming. It's just an article in an encyclopedia. It's a pretty good description of what global warming is. People who are inclined to believe statements about science by people who have no relevant scientific qualifications will not get much out of Misplaced Pages and there isn't much we can do about that. We are absolutely not here to promote the scientific point of view or to debunk alternate views or minority science. We just describe the prevailing scientific consensus, and if that ever changes to "global warming was a scam, an ice age is on its way" we'll say that. --] 23:46, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:https://www.ipcc.ch/report/ar6/wg1/figures/technical-summary/figure-ts-22 ] (]) 13:21, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:*(ec)The aim of this (and any) article is to concisely describe its topic - in this case ] - in an encyclopedic manner. Its aim is not to react to each individual lie, fantasy, or unsupported claim out in the world. Such an approach would make it completely useless, in that it would bury what we know under mountains of stuff that is mostly irrelevant. If you want to explain 2+2=4, you don't start by refuting the claim that 2+2=5, or 2+2=7, or 2+2=Gonzo, or even 2+3=5. --] (]) 23:57, 22 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:: {{reply|DecFinney}} I think that Fig. TS-22 is far too complex and detailed for a layperson encyclopedia, especially in a high-level article such as this. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 15:10, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I wasnt imagining the whole thing. e.g. perhaps just the top right quarter. That seems like a really neat summary in lay terms of the kind of impacts different regions of the world could expect. It doesnt rely on the rest of the figure for understanding so I would assume its fine to crop it to make a new figure (but I am new-ish to wiki so am not sure of cropping policy). | |||
:::Such a figure seems much more relevant to any person in the world. Meanwhile figures based on the atlantic seem more like a token representation of impact (i.e. just one example) as well as introducing a regional bias and thereby limiting the interest for the wider global population. I appreciate you will not being trying to illustrate all impacts. Nevertheless, the figure I propose does do a pretty job of covering bases in the a concise manner. ] (]) 15:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::: {{reply|DecFinney}} I appreciate that Fig. TS-22(b) has a lot of information, a huge amount in fact: five values for each of 35 categories. Especially for a high-level article such as this, this micro-categorization would be overwhelming for lay readers. FYI: Generally there is no general prohibition on cropping as such (every edit involves selection of material from a larger-content publication), but I seem to recall that some organization, not sure if it's the IPCC, licensed things only if presented in their entirety. I wish I had a hurricane-intensification reference for both Atlantic and Pacific, but since the main point of Graphic "B" is ''climate change's intensification'' of hurricanes rather than hurricanes themselves, I think "B" is more than adequate for purpose. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 18:57, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::@] ok. the only multi-basin figure i can find that seems relevant to your aim is fig5 in https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/101/3/bams-d-18-0194.1.xml | |||
:::::this shows the consistent projection of increased TC intensity (and rain rate) in every basin. ] (]) 07:34, 17 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::: {{reply|DecFinney}} Thanks for the research. I like the global extent of the AMS datasets but the error ranges are, like, totally_outtasight_dude! I'll have to consider the various drawings in the AMS reference... I lean toward something like Figs. 3b and 4b more than the global map. A major advantage of ] is that it's not a long-term prediction (it's about climate change ''attribution''), and concrete values are provided in the context of peak winds and hurricane categories. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 21:28, 17 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::@] i agree 3b and 4b are better multi-basin figs to consider. | |||
:::::::there is a part 1 to that paper which is about attribution. when i glanced at it, i didnt spot any suitable figures. https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/100/10/bams-d-18-0189.1.xml | |||
:::::::attribution with TCs is still pretty statistically limited. i have to admit that fig1f probably justifies a focus on NAtlantic if you want to stick to an attribution based figure. | |||
:::::::thats my last input. thanks for the discussion. im happy with whatever you decide. ] (]) 09:08, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: Many thanks. I haven't been able to conjure a ] to represent multi-basin attribution/changes that's more elegant than separate bar charts with distracting and divergent error bars scattered around a world map. I think that ] already captures predicted impacts quite well, and that an example of ] (Graphic "B", above) deserves space in this article. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:36, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Underemphasis on extreme event attribution=== | |||
I might lead you to where the source presented could be better included in ], <s>this article appears to ignore economics for the time being</s>. ] (]) 01:26, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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: That's because it's about the science. --] 01:34, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
The preceding discussion brings out the point that ] is not even mentioned in this article. I think it's very important because, more and more, the intensification of specific current events are being presented to the public as being caused by global warming. This attribution is distinct from projections of future intensification such as that shown in ]. Though attribution science is not yet fully developed, and is statistical in nature, I think that something should be added to the "Impacts" section. Agreement? Suggestions? —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: Really it does cover economics, however it might take about a dozen sources to successfully included the market failure issues raised in the soource. ] (]) 01:52, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::The article does have a section ], but doesn't mean we have to brood over it. Enescot and I talked a while back about improving the section, and if you're looking for the "controversy," this is it. Right now Enescot is working the ], which makes a good ] easier to write, you should help him. ] (]) 07:21, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::@ - ] - you want me to believe that this article is written about the science. | |||
:::Please tell me how this article helps me with this scientific claim from Monckton: ''"Peer-reviewed analyses of changes in cloud cover over recent decades - changes almost entirely unconnected with changes in CO2 concentration - show that it was this largely natural reduction in cloud cover from 1983-2001 and a consequent increase in the amount of short-wave and UV solar radiation reaching the Earth that accounted for five times as much warming as CO2 could have caused."'' | |||
:::Or, if you prefer, answer me the question I posed first, "What's this article for?" ] (]) 10:20, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::"Scientific" claim? As for your other question, see my answer above. --] (]) 10:27, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::: I have taken this problem to ]. --] 11:14, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:@] sounds reasonable to me. | |||
This article claims to be about GW, scientific evidence for it and its causes, responses to it, and debate an scepticism. Monkton's letter is mainly about the human response to global warming. It essentially argues that mitigation is pointless and counterproductive. It is therefore of considerable relevance to the claimed content of this article and some mention of it in this article, with any specific response from those who disagree, is warranted. ] (]) 14:08, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:i think most good science comms would say that the chance of event is made more likely by climate change. it may go as far as to say it was basically impossible before, i.e. 1 in a million year event or something but the message can get a bit lost in that. of course one can odten say there's no precident in the records. | |||
: It's a comment from a person with absolutely no relevant scientific credentials promoting a tiny fringe view. To put it into this article would be undue weight. It might fit into other articles such as ] or ], where Monckton's ideas are already discussed because they are relevant to those articles. --] 14:26, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:im not sure about the plot. its not obvious to me exactly what the x axis means or what information helps determine it. what is the source of the figure? ] (]) 21:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:First of all Monckton belongs on the rather extreme ] of this, once reliable secondary sources begin taking him seriously, ''then'' we can discuss where (or if) it belongs on one of the many subarticles to this one. Secondly human responses to global warming belong (as i said) on one of the subarticles, that get ] here, it doesn't merit inclusion directly. There is an ''extreme'' amount of information on this particular subject, and that is why there are so many sub-topical articles to this one. If Monckton's views where significant, then they would have relevance for one (or more) of the following: ], ], ], ]. But the only sub-article where this might ''currently'' be on-topic and in-weight is ] (the last part of the article, where he basically accuses most climate scientists of fraud) Now could we please get back to something that ''is'' on-topic? --] (]) 14:38, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:: {{reply|DecFinney}} Welcome to Misplaced Pages! Sources can usually be found on the Wikimedia Commons file description page (click through image itself), or in captions of charts placed in Misplaced Pages articles. Here the source is {{blue|{{cite web |last1=Lindsey |first1=Rebecca |title=Extreme event attribution: the climate versus weather blame game |url=https://www.climate.gov/news-features/understanding-climate/extreme-event-attribution-climate-versus-weather-blame-game |website=Climate.gov |publisher=National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240609120512/https://www.climate.gov/news-features/understanding-climate/extreme-event-attribution-climate-versus-weather-blame-game |archive-date=9 June 2024 |date=15 December 2016 |quote=Graphic adapted from Figure 4.7 in NAS 2016. |url-status=live}}.}} The x-axis means the degree to which models can accurately represent or predict real-world events. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 21:43, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::As far as I can see, much of the letter does not question the science, it simply points out that, even with the most pessimistic IPCC predictions and the most optimistic mitigation expectations, the expected benefits of mitigation will be insignificant. Where is this issue addressed in 'mainstream' literature? What could be more on-topic than this. ] (]) 14:46, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::@] cheers, sorry. phone app doesnt let me follow an image link. | |||
:::Unless his argument is picked up and discussed by mainstream scientists, it's fruitless to argue from the position that it's "on-topic". This is an encyclopedia article and the Neutral point of view is in operation on this encyclopedia. --] 14:54, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::image is ok. I'd change caption "more generally" to "in addition" as this is listing the other two bullets from the article that gives the necessary conditions for confidence in attribution. they are not more general than the point the graph is illustrating. id actually suggest they are more specific. | |||
:::No, it is not on-topic. That would possibly be on-topic at the article ] not here. And could we please drop it. This is an ] for goodness sake, it is thus relevant ''only'' to the opinion of Monckton, and he is not relevant within a scientific or political context (sorry). --] (]) 14:58, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::i think youve edited the image a bit? it now looks like the colours have some meaning red/green/blue. but i dont think they did in the article, where each impact had a different colours? what do the colours mean here? | |||
:::the image also has removed the word "extreme" from quite a few impacts compared to the article. i would consider this to be substantive change. "extreme rainfall" (if meaning e.g. 99th percentile, short timescales) is affected by climate change differently to longer timescale averaged rainfall, which is how i would interpret the term "rainfall" on its own. i would say that scientific understanding for extreme rainfall is possibly better than mean rainfall change, and therefore i think it might not be appropriate to change that terminology in the plot. ] (]) 15:22, 30 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::: {{reply|DecFinney}} Thanks for the feedback. The colors merely categorize the events (blue for cold, green for water-related, red for heat-related) to make the graphic more intuitively meaningful for a lay reader. The graphic's title includes "...'''extreme''' events..." so that the graphic can avoid needless repetition in the various individual elements. I'm not quite following your suggestion re the caption, but editors can change textual captions through ordinary editing. is a link to the image description page. Separately: I'm hoping for more participation from others about adding new content to the article. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 15:39, 30 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::@] I see you're points regarding the image edits. regarding caption, i will make edits when the image is in the article then, if it still seems appropriate. ] (]) 15:53, 30 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::@] I see you're points regarding the image edits. regarding caption, i will make edits when the image is in the article then, if it still seems appropriate. ] (]) 15:54, 30 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Mentioning SRM under "Reducing and recapturing emissions" == | |||
::::My description of what this article is about was taken essentially from the current article contents, which includes a main section on responses to GW, which includes a sub-section on mitigition. | |||
Hello! I am new to this talk page. I have been working on the ] and noticed that SRM is mentioned in the Climate Change article. '''I have some questions about how SRM is mentioned in this article.''' | |||
::::Monckton makes a point about mitigation being pointless. This is not based on an argument about science but on published results, including information published by the IPCC. If there are no reliable sources giving a contrary view to that expressed by Monkton then reference to his report should be included in the article. What sources are there saying that Monkton is wrong? ] (]) 15:44, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::Sorry, but you appear not to be ]: Please read up on what constitutes a ] and how wikipedia determines ] of sources. When you are talking about sections, then please notice the little "main article: <subarticle>" on top of those sections, they are there because the sections are ] of sub-articles. Monckton's ] is ] ''only'' for his <u>personal</u> opinion, and that opinion is ] here (and almost everywhere - since it is a ]), it doesn't really matter whether he is right/wrong/whatever. Finally what "report" are you talking about? We are discussing an opinion article in the Australian. Drop it please! --] (]) 15:58, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::In order for ] to be relevant you need to give some sources that specifically disagree with what he says. You have not done so yet. ] (]) 16:31, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Erh? You seem to have gotten something wrong. The onus is on the person who wants to add or readd material to demonstrate due weight. Not the other way around. --] (]) 16:36, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::If I have a source that says something, and no one else has a source that disagrees with my source, then there is no due weight to be considered, it can be added to the article without further ado. Weight is only a consideration of there is an opposing view. So far you have not mentioned one. ] (]) | |||
:::::::::Huh? The whole of this article is about the enormous weight of scientific opinion the disagrees with Monckton. --] (]) 17:14, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Please don't change the topic, I think ] is wrong and it is not helpful to claim what he is doing. The policy ] covers exactly ] is telling us. | |||
:::::::::::As i said on my talk-page, imperfect is not about weight. What you should be looking at, is ]/] and ] in Monckton's case, since he ''does'' make some outrageous claims. --] (]) 18:32, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Furthermore, Monckton claims to have peer-reviewd science on his side on cloud-cover, so an article (particularly one artificially constrained to only address scientific issues) has got to inform people and deal with the scientific issues. ] (]) 17:20, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Well, Monckton can make as many claims as he wants... and while he is a bit more relevant than John Doe, he is still only an individual making claims. He isn't an expert, and he has no scientific relevance, sorry. --] (]) 18:35, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I can see nothing in this article that disagrees with Monckton's main point, which is that if mitigation proceeds to plan it will have a tiny effect on GW, according to published data. Where is the argument against that? ] (]) 19:28, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Try ] (as has been pointed out to you several times), ] (or t:MoGW) is ''not'' a ] to discuss "main points" in opinion articles. --] (]) 19:41, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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Should SRM really be mentioned under the heading "Reducing and recapturing emissions"? | |||
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Given that SRM would only ‘mask’ climate change instead of addressing the cause, greenhouse gas emissions. "SRM contrasts with climate change mitigation activities, such as emission reductions and carbon dioxide removal (CDR), as it introduces a ‘mask’ to the climate change problem by altering the Earth’s radiation budget, rather than attempting to address the root cause of the problem, which is the increase in greenhouse gases (GHGs) in the atmosphere" (). | |||
== NASA says 2000-9 was warmest decade on record; 7 disappearing glaciers == | |||
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I was astonished that Kenosis removed these sources today. The first is a brand new news item. And the second, while perhaps flawed, is a useful illustration. | |||
I suggest either deleting the two sentences on SRM altogether or clearly explaining to the readers that SRM is somewhat related but is not a mitigation option in the pure sense. ] (]) 12:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:http://www.mcclatchydc.com/256/story/82867.html "WASHINGTON — A new analysis of NASA temperature data collected from more than 1,000 weather stations around the globe, from satellites monitoring ocean temperatures and from Antarctic research stations shows that 2000 to 2009 was the warmest decade on record...." | |||
:I agree with 1HumbleB's concerns (disclosure: we have worked together on the ] article; that's how I got interested in this). For comparison, in the article ] we have quite a good description of what SRM has to do with mitigation (or doesn't have to do with it). I have just moved that section further down in the article; it was under "definition" there until now which I don't think was ideal. It reads like this at the ] article: | |||
:http://www.mnn.com/technology/research-innovations/blogs/top-7-disappearing-glaciers "Here for 10,000 years ... gone in 10. Seven glaciers that are melting before our eyes. Some photos (and a few charts)...." | |||
:== Related approaches == | |||
:=== Relationship with solar radiation modification (SRM) === | |||
:While ] (SRM) could reduce surface temperatures, it temporarily masks climate change rather than addressing the root cause, which is greenhouse gases.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 14">IPCC (2022) in , Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States]</ref>{{rp|14–56}} SRM would work by altering how much solar radiation the Earth absorbs.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 14" />{{rp|14–56}} Examples include reducing the amount of sunlight reaching the surface, reducing the optical thickness and lifetime of clouds, and changing the ability of the surface to reflect radiation.<ref>{{Cite book |last=National Academies of Sciences |first=Engineering |url=https://nap.nationalacademies.org/catalog/25762/reflecting-sunlight-recommendations-for-solar-geoengineering-research-and-research-governance |title=Reflecting Sunlight: Recommendations for Solar Geoengineering Research and Research Governance |date=25 March 2021 |isbn=978-0-309-67605-2 |language=en |doi=10.17226/25762 |s2cid=234327299}}</ref> The ] describes SRM as a climate risk reduction strategy or supplementary option rather than a climate mitigation option.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 14" /> | |||
:The terminology in this area is still evolving. Experts sometimes use the term ''geoengineering'' or ] in the scientific literature for both CDR or SRM, if the techniques are used at a global scale.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 1">IPCC (2022) in , Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States</ref>{{rp|6–11}} IPCC reports no longer use the terms ''geoengineering'' or ''climate engineering''.<ref name="IPCC AR6 WGI Glossary">IPCC, 2021: . In . Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, USA, pp. 2215–2256, doi:10.1017/9781009157896.022.</ref> ] (]) 10:15, 7 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: To simplify things: I'd like to propose to '''delete these two sentences''' (for the reasons given above): {{tq|] (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.<ref>{{harvnb|IPCC SR15 Ch4|2018|pp=347–352}}</ref>}}. Especially the first out of these two sentences is problematic in my opinion. The phrasing reads as if there is a relationship between SRM and deep emission reductions; and it lacks nuance. Also, the topic of SRM opens a can of worms and would require more space than what can be given in this high level article. Therefore, I think it's better not to mention it here at all. Readers can easily find it in the ] article instead. ] (]) 21:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::So I went ahead and deleted the two sentences in question (as there was no disagreement voiced on the talk page). Subsequently, User:RCraig09 re-instated the two sentences with the edit summary comment: "The content was in the section, ]: and there was no implication that SRM is mitigation. You can distinguish mitigation from SRM if you think it's important." | |||
:::My response: this section is all about climate change mitigation. Directly under the section heading it says "'''Main''': Climate change mitigation". Therefore, why do we talk about SRM in this section, which is <u>not</u> about climate change mitigation? It is also <u>not</u> about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Rather, it's about ''masking the warming effects'', i.e. actively attempting to achieve global cooling. | |||
:::So I still think that those two sentences have no place here. If others say SRM must be mentioned in this section (why?), then the two sentences ought to be changed (as per my earlier comments) and it should be made clear that SRM is neither about mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Otherwise we'll just create confusion. ] (]) 13:03, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I agree with @]'s points. The fact that the content was previously included under this heading and that there is NO implication that SRM is mitigation, IMO does not justify keeping it here. SRM is unrelated to climate change mitigation. It should not be listed under this heading because its inclusion implies a connection to reducing or recapturing emissions, which is not accurate. Even if we revise the sentences to clarify that SRM is neither mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions," it would still be misplaced under this heading. | |||
::::I suggest we delete the sentences all together. ] (]) 11:58, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::: Through its reduction of permafrost melt and other positive-feedback global warming processes, SRM has the ''indirect effect'' of "Reducing ...emissions" that is a section title. SRM thus helps impede the climate change that is the subject of this article. SRM therefore has a place in this article, and I'm certainly not opposed to editors pointing out the distinction between SRM and more direct mitigation techniques. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::SRM does not "reduce emissions", so I don't know what you mean with "indirect effect of reducing emissions". For comparison, in the climate change mitigation article, SRM is mentioned at the end under "related approaches". I don't know if SRM is all that important that it needs to be included in this high level article (?). People can easily find it through the sub-articles. But if several editors think it ought to be mentioned then I would either mention it elsewhere in the article, or change the section heading or make it very explicit that SRM is not climate change mitigation and does not reduce emissions. - Does anyone else have an opinion about this? ] (]) 22:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::For now, I've changed the wording of the two sentences to this (the bolding is used to show the changes): {{tq|] (SRM) is '''under discussion as a possible supplement''' to reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and '''] concerns''', and its risks are '''not well understood'''.}} The old version was {{tq|] (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.}}. (I am not sure if the wording "supplement" is sufficiently clear, and not overly optimistic.) ] (]) 22:17, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: At 17:07 I explained how SRM would inhibit permafrost melt—it would thus inhibit release of methane that was previously embedded in the permafrost. That is the indirect effect of SRM. Yes, it is a widely reported "related approach" that should be mentioned here. Re wording: closely follow source descriptions. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 22:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Copernicus: 2024 above +1.5°C == | |||
What is the rationale for removing them from this talk page? The Edit summary ("Removing irrelevant talk section. Outside the scope of WP:TALK") is clearly untrue because these sources need to be discussed. Malcolm McDonald said they were flawed, but called the first one "IPCC 2007" (it is not) and offered unsubstantiated allegations against the latter. Do these sources deserve to be discussed or not? ] (]) 18:46, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
https://climate.copernicus.eu/2024-track-be-first-year-exceed-15oc-above-pre-industrial-average | |||
::Reasonably fair enough, and I'll stand corrected on this one for being a bit too quick to the gun. The reason was that this talk page is increasingly and regularly becoming a ] with many in violation of the policy ] and the guideline ]. Kindly recall this article is under ] for reasons that have been well discussed and documented-- central among which are repeated patterns of disruptive and tendentious article and talk-page editing. Anyway the original thread was as follows (Malcolm's comment reproduced here in its original form):... ] (]) 19:07, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
:::"NASA says 2000-9 was warmest decade on record; 7 disappearing glaciers" | |||
Yes, I know | |||
:::http://www.mcclatchydc.com/256/story/82867.html "WASHINGTON — A new analysis of NASA temperature data collected from more than 1,000 weather stations around the globe, from satellites monitoring ocean temperatures and from Antarctic research stations shows that 2000 to 2009 was the warmest decade on record...." | |||
* ]. | |||
* We'll have to wait another 10 years for the 20 year average. | |||
Still ] could mention 2024 as the first year above +1.5 C. ] (]) 12:38, 10 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::http://www.mnn.com/technology/research-innovations/blogs/top-7-disappearing-glaciers "Here for 10,000 years ... gone in 10. Seven glaciers that are melting before our eyes. Some photos (and a few charts)...." ] (]) 16:07, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
::::People are getting increasingly sick of falsities passed off as "scientific" results. As two commentators have already noted, the two photos alleged to show the Matterhorn (one covered in ice, one bare) on that blog are completely different mountains. After the scandalous flaws in the IPCC 2007 document (5 more listed today newspaper) a bit more scientific rigour is in order. ] (]) 16:51, 23 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
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Carbon capture rates for CCS
Hi everyone. I have a few proposals regarding statements on carbon capture and storage in this article. Here's my first proposal. We have an unsourced sentence that says:
- Where energy production or CO2-intensive heavy industries continue to produce waste CO2, the gas can be captured and stored instead of released to the atmosphere.
I propose changing it to:
- Where energy production or CO2-intensive heavy industries continue to produce waste CO2, technology can sometimes be used to capture and store most of the gas instead of releasing it to the atmosphere.
As explained in the World Resources Institute source, "today’s carbon capture systems do not capture 100% of emissions. Most are designed to capture 90%, but reported capture rates are lower in some cases." Additionally, it is not economically or geologically feasible to deploy CCS at all or even most facilities. There are 2,400 coal power plants in the world and thus far we have managed to add CCS to four of them. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 21:41, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 20:30, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
References
- Lebling, Katie; Gangotra, Ankita; Hausker, Karl; Byrum, Zachary (2023-11-13). "7 Things to Know About Carbon Capture, Utilization and Sequestration". World Resources Institute.
Carbon sequestration section
The Carbon sequestration section has contents that describe carbon dioxide removal and carbon capture and storage. These three concepts are often confused. The vast majority of carbon sequestration happens through spontaneous, non-anthropogenic processes that have been going on for hundreds of millions of years and will continue if we just leave the forests alone. Most of the content in this section is about human activity that aims to increase the amount of carbon that is sequestered, i.e. carbon dioxide removal. There is also some content on carbon capture and storage, which technically involves sequestration but is usually deployed in processes that desequester more carbon than they sequester.
I propose 1) Retitling this section as "Carbon dioxide removal" and 2) Moving the two sentences on CCS to the end of the first paragraph in the "Clean energy" section. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 20:11, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 20:36, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
Paper about our work & suggestions
A paper by Olivia Steiert came out on the work we do here, analysing how our group dynamics and our interpretation of policies and guidelines resulted in the current article.
The paper analyses whether we consider climate change as an event (vs process), and if we call it a crisis. It's somewhat critical of us doing neither sufficiently clearly. The paper doesn't give that many pointers how we could achieve this however. We've made progress over the last 6 years in changing the article to be more about climate change now, rather than climate change in the future, but I wonder if there is more to do here. (changing the crisis framing is a discussion I won't reopen). If there are no objections, I might send Steiert an email asking her to join us. In the meantime, I'm suggesting two changes in the lead
The current rise in global average temperature is primarily caused by humans burning fossil fuels since the Industrial Revolution -->
Amplified warming in the Arctic has contributed to thawing permafrost, retreat of glaciers and sea ice decline --> something in the present tense. I'd suggest leaving out polar amplification too. The quote doesn't fully capture this sentence anyway, and the source doesn't make the connection between polar amplification and these specific impacts. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:44, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for sharing this, interesting article. The study uses the May 2022 version of this article, I wonder what she'd think of the current version.
- As for the sentence,
The current rise in...
, I believe we had added "since the Industrial Revolution" to clarify what is meant by current. Bogazicili (talk) 17:50, 31 October 2024 (UTC)- Upon reflection, I'd like to keep
since the Industrial Revolution
. One of the criticism in the article is that we are vague in terms of our tenses. When things happened, are happening, or will happen. (Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly
) since the Industrial Revolution
gives precision and clarity to that sentence. I think it accurately describes rough timescale of human-induced climate change.- Other overview sources might say things like
The industrial activities that our modern civilization depends upon have raised atmospheric carbon dioxide levels by nearly 50% since 1750
- If you click Industrial Revolution, it largely matches with above:
Beginning in Great Britain, the Industrial Revolution spread to continental Europe and the United States, from around 1760 to about 1820–1840.
Bogazicili (talk) 14:44, 1 November 2024 (UTC)- My thinking here is that "since the industrial revolution" may be a bit misleading, in the sense that most warming really happened in the last 50 years, rather than over such a long period of time. I'm also appreciating the simplicity of the POTD description below, and would like to move away from a WP:seaofblue in terms of number of links. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:13, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Upon reflection, I'd like to keep
That's a very good point, but I think we should add that (in the last 50 years part) into the lead, instead of removing "since the Industrial Revolution" part. I know you value conciseness but I think this time precision beats conciseness.
Again, the study was up to May 2022 version of this article. This is the 31 May 2022 version of the article. I think the current version of the lead is much more precise, as we define since when the current climate change has been happening. Industrial activities (NASA source) started with industrial revolution. Of course it was limited in 18th century. In 19th century it was few countries (UK etc), with coal etc. With technology (oil etc) and more countries industrializing, warming increased in 20th century, which is your point.
Also note that many cumulative emissions graphs go back to 1750 Our World in Data. I'll check few more sources tomorrow, including WP:Tertiary sources, to see how they cover it. Bogazicili (talk) 17:38, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- The prose quality of the first paragraph was definitely better in that version at least. I don't think "adding to greenhouse gases" is correct English. If I can find time, I might suggest a new version of our opening in a separate discussion section.
- My guess is that many sources don't talk about "industrial revolution" in their first paragraph, instead only use that when they go into the weeds of the topic.
- NASA describes it as happening from the mid-20th century in their first paras (https://science.nasa.gov/climate-change/what-is-climate-change/)
- Met Office describes it similar to us (https://www.metoffice.gov.uk/weather/climate-change/what-is-climate-change), from the mid-1850s we started polluting.
- WMO doesn't describe the time period, except by refering to a pre-industrial baseline (https://wmo.int/topics/climate-change)
- —Femke 🐦 (talk) 18:03, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
@Femke: here are some WP:Tertiary sources I found with Oxford Reference Online database through Misplaced Pages Library.
There are lots of results. Only some of them are below:
The first two have detailed entries. I'd recommend you to check them:
- Encyclopedia of Climate and Weather (2 ed.) doi:10.1093/acref/9780199765324.001.0001. Global Warming entry. Notes both pre-industrial increase and increase since 1970.
The term global warming has become synonymous in the press with human-induced climate change. ... Carbon dioxide concentrations in the atmosphere have increased such that 2009 values of about 385 ppmv are over 36 percent higher than preindustrial values of 280 ppmv and over half that increase has occurred since 1970 (Figure 1).
- Encyclopedia of Global Change doi:10.1093/acref/9780195108255.001.0001.
- Climate Change entry:
An Overview
... During the past two centuries, anthropogenic activity has resulted in large increases in the atmospheric greenhouse gas content, which has caused a detectable increase in global temperatures and are predicted to continue to increase for many decades before the climate system reaches a new equilibrium. ...- Global warming entry:
..Levels rose to 275 ppmv during the warm interglacial phases, and that level is also considered representative of the preindustrial era of the nineteenth century...
The two below have shorter entries:
- A Dictionary of Weather (3 ed.) doi:10.1093/acref/9780191988356.001.0001. Separate entries for global warming and climate change (climatic change). Not mentioned there.
- A Dictionary of Human Geography doi:10.1093/acref/9780199599868.001.0001. Climate change entry. Not mentioned there, but source mentions Anthropocene.
- By the way, there is an entire encyclopedia on climate change communication, The Oxford Encyclopedia of Climate Change Communication.
I think we should mention something like pre-industrial in the first paragraph. But we can shift things around. For example, the last sentence in first paragraph cites IPCC AR6 WG1 Technical Summary 2021, p. 67. That page mentions:
Since 1750, changes in the drivers of the climate system are dominated by the warming influence of increases in atmospheric GHG concentrations and a cooling influence from aerosols, both resulting from human activities
p.4:
Observed increases in well-mixed greenhouse gas (GHG) concentrations since around 1750 are unequivocally caused by human activities
I'll make my proposal below in a new section Bogazicili (talk) 19:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
Article housekeeping
Thanks Femke for removing unused references and other tidying. I could pitch in to help with that kind of thing for an hour or two this week. What else needs to be done? Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 02:26, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Just to let you know, I intend to clean up after myself, but got sidetracked. For the areas I edited, some of the citations aren't to chapters but to overall IPCC reports. I'll be fixing those. Bogazicili (talk) 16:54, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Bogazicili!
- In terms of housekeeping, I try to do the following every one/two years:
- See if overcitation has slipped in, which is often a red flag for text-source integrity issues. One example is overcitation after "Smaller contributions come from black carbon, organic carbon from combustion of fossil fuels and biofuels, and from anthropogenic dust", which has 6 sources. (I you could help here!)
- Check if jargon such as anthropogenic has slipped back in, and reword using plain English
- Reread the article, and check if there is text-source integrity for surprising statements
- Reread the article, and update numbers which need updating.
- —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Not that big of an issue, but the source formatting is also slightly messy and inconsistent in places (e.g. Harvnb is used for most things but not all, some things are missing various fields, etc). Sgubaldo (talk) 19:17, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Wow, that's a lot of work that you've been doing regularly! I'll take on the overcitation thing. Will indicate here when I've finished checking. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 19:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'll have much more time to work on this tomorrow (Sunday). I think I added most of the AR6 citations. I'll be fixing those tomorrow. And then I can also pitch in with the rest of the housekeeping. Bogazicili (talk) 17:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think I fixed the parts I had added. Bogazicili (talk) 20:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'll have much more time to work on this tomorrow (Sunday). I think I added most of the AR6 citations. I'll be fixing those tomorrow. And then I can also pitch in with the rest of the housekeeping. Bogazicili (talk) 17:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
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Contemporary climate change involves rising global temperatures and significant shifts in Earth's weather patterns. Climate change is driven by emissions of heat-trapping greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide and methane. Emissions come mostly from burning fossil fuels (coal, oil and natural gas), and also from agriculture, forest loss, cement production and steel making. Climate change causes sea level rise, glacial retreat and desertification, and intensifies heat waves, wildfires and tropical cyclones. These effects of climate change endanger food security, freshwater access and global health. Climate change can be limited by using low-carbon energy sources such as wind and solar energy, by forestation, and shifts in agriculture. Adaptations such as coastline protection cannot by themselves avert the risk of severe, pervasive and irreversible impacts. Limiting global warming in line with the goals of the 2015 Paris Agreement requires reaching net-zero emissions by 2050. This animation, produced by NASA's Scientific Visualization Studio with data from the Goddard Institute for Space Studies, shows global surface temperature anomalies from 1880 to 2023 on a world map, illustrating the rise in global temperatures. Normal temperatures (calculated over the 30-year baseline period 1951–1980) are shown in white, higher-than-normal temperatures in red, and lower-than-normal temperatures in blue. The data are averaged over a running 24-month window. Video credit: NASA; visualized by Mark SubbaRao Recently featured: |
Suggestions for the first sentence
The first sentence is awkward, and I'd love to craft a new first sentence before we get to be on the main page. The "in common usage" is especially jarring, and may fall slightly foul of WP:REFER. I have two suggestions:
- Climate change encompasses global warming—Earth’s ongoing temperature increase—and its wider effects on Earth's climate.
- Current climate change is the ongoing rise in global average temperatures and the resulting effects on Earth's climate.
It's a common thing that more text gets bolded than the title alone, to clarify immediately to the reader what the topic is where there is some need for disambiguation. I think this may release us from the need to be a bit pedantic in the introduction. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:26, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- The preamble "In common usage" distinguishes current CC from "Climate change in a broader sense" that's in the second sentence. The distinction is important since we should (must?) quickly define the article title, focus attention on what this article is about, and link to the other article (Climate variability and change). I remember the community grappling with how to achieve these goals; the current text was the result. "In common usage" isn't jarring, though some might call it a bit formal. "Current climate change" (suggestion 2) isn't a much-used term. —21:10 The current wording tells the reader immediately that common-use "CC" is not the academically correct use. Of Suggestion 1 and 2, though, I definitely prefer Suggestion 1. —RCraig09 (talk) 22:23, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- The distinction is not between "academic usage" and "common usage". Academics use the terms like everybody else in their papers. IPCC has it in their name, WMO classifies their reporting under climate change. The difference is between definitionally and non-definitionally. If you have a sentence with is, you imply a definition, so we need to make clear in some way that we're talking about "Contemporary", "Present-day", "Current" climate change. What we can do as well is 2b:
- 2b. Current/present-day/contemporary Climate change ...
—Femke 🐦 (talk) 09:00, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer 'Contemporary' to 'Current', but I like the wording in Suggestion 1 more. My suggestion would be something like:
- Contemporary climate change encompasses global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate.
- Also, if the first sentence changes, the next two will probably need tweaking too. Sgubaldo (talk) 12:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I wonder what percentage of the population knows what "contemporary" means. I'd estimate less than 80/90%, hence my suggestions for slightly less elegant wording. Two difficult words close to each other (contemporary/encompasses), makes it more difficult to guess the word meaning for those unaware. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 12:23, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- In that case, I would propose: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." Sgubaldo (talk) 12:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I like that variation. Present-day may prevent some knee-jerk reactions of Wikipedians trained to remove the word MOS:Current from articles. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 12:58, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- In that case, I would propose: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." Sgubaldo (talk) 12:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I wonder what percentage of the population knows what "contemporary" means. I'd estimate less than 80/90%, hence my suggestions for slightly less elegant wording. Two difficult words close to each other (contemporary/encompasses), makes it more difficult to guess the word meaning for those unaware. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 12:23, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
Pinging all those with recent talk page activity: @Clayoquot, Amakuru, Bogazicili, Chipmunkdavis, Sunrise, and Alaexis:. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 09:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer the first one because it includes the other common term, global warming. Global warming also redirects to this page, as it should. Bogazicili (talk) 14:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I concede Femke's point (09:00) re academics/definitions. My concern is to explicitly convey that there are two definitions of CC. This distinction parallels the fact that today's CC is different from historical/generic CC. Detail: reviewing https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/contemporary, I'm OK with "current" or "present" or "present-day" or "recent" or "ongoing" or "newfangled" (well, maybe not "newfangled :-) :-). —RCraig09 (talk) 17:03, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think it's more elegant to do it implicitly (present-day climate change), rather than explicitly. We want people to read about the topic of climate change, rather than about the intricacies of how terms are used in the first paragraph. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:06, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- By "explicitly" I didn't mean super-ultra-formally. I think the distinction of definitions is accomplished by the second sentence, "Climate change in a broader sense...". That's all I meant. I'm OK with most of the smaller-change proposal I've read in this discussion. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:11, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think it's more elegant to do it implicitly (present-day climate change), rather than explicitly. We want people to read about the topic of climate change, rather than about the intricacies of how terms are used in the first paragraph. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:06, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I have a slight preference for Sgubaldo's proposal. All of them sound fine to me though. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- Just to clarify, since there are multiple proposals. I'm ok with this latest one: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." Bogazicili (talk) 17:43, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- If no one objects, I'll wait until tomorrow to see if there's any more replies, and then I'll make the changes. Sgubaldo (talk) 19:12, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- Changes made. Sgubaldo (talk) 12:43, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
FYI: removed 'mainly' from lead
I changed "The current rise in global average temperature is mainly driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution" to "The current rise in global average temperature is mainly driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution". The best guess is taht 100% of climate change is driven by human activities (per new source), so the old wording was misleading and the old source didn't talk about this. The word driven itself also doesn't require 100% causation (that would be is caused by), so even when the percentage of human-induced climate change deviates from observed climate change, this wording should remain correct.
I did this boldly, as the old text was not really supported and misleading. Hope that's okay. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 10:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- Agree. As Earth was on a very slight cooling trend for ~10,000 years, I remember reading that humans cause "more than" 100% of global warming, though it would be confusing to say that literally. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:07, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- The idea of a Holocene Thermal Maximum some 8,000 years ago is a bit contested. Regional climate proxies say there was one, but globally it's a more complex picture, and models think there's been continuous warming / stable temperatures.
- The more than 100% since pre-industrial also isn't true anymore as I understand it, as the last couple of years have seen very rapid warming. The source I cited is also the one used by the IPCC, and they say the best guess is exactly 100% caused by humans with some uncertainty. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Femke: do you still want to remove "since the Industrial Revolution" part? That can be reworded and moved to the last sentence. Proposal below. Bogazicili (talk) 20:30, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
The lead, first paragraph
This is what the first paragraph of the lead would look like, after recent changes and suggestions in Talk:Climate_change#Suggestions for the first sentence and Talk:Climate_change#Paper about our work & suggestions and above section.
Didn't include the sources in the article, and some of the new sources are above. For the "accelerating in the past 50 years", I will use .
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Bogazicili (talk) 19:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think the the new text is not great for flow. Most of the sentences are roughly the same lenght, with makes for slightly uncomfortable reading. I don't feel strongly about removing "industrial revolution", but I don't think moving it to later is that much of a change? —Femke 🐦 (talk) 21:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I suggested the changes with this criticism in mind.
Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly
- Now we have two clear dates (since 1750 and accelerating in the past 50 years). Bogazicili (talk) 22:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Bogazicili "accelerating in the last 50 years" suggests to me the rate of warming is increasing across that time period. i think you mean that the last 50 years has exhibited a higher rate of warming that the precedding period.
- you may also like to add to that, during this 50 year period, attribution studies are able to clearly discern human driven change from natural forcing -- this relates to the time series figure on the page. DecFinney (talk) 13:14, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I suggested the changes with this criticism in mind.
References
- Our World in Data, 18 September 2020 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFOur_World_in_Data,_18_September2020 (help)
Proposed replacement of graphic in "Impacts" section
A. Existing graphic: The sixth IPCC Assessment Report projects changes in average soil moisture at 2.0 °C of warming, as measured in standard deviations from the 1850 to 1900 baseline.B. Proposed replacement: Climate change's increase of water temperatures intensified peak wind speeds in all eleven 2024 Atlantic hurricanes.C. Second proposed replacement: Times series of Category 4 and 5 Atlantic hurricanesI've long questioned the value of the "soil moisture" graphic in the short, crowded, under-emphasized "Impacts" section.
The existing graphic's content is not discussed in article text. Also, soil moisture's broader implication on the impacts affecting humans is speculative and indirect, perhaps even suggesting that things'll get better and better for sub-Saharan Africa. (Aside: I speak out against captions that merely repeat what's in the graphic's own legends/text.)
Meanwhile, the impacts on humans of progressively more intense hurricanes is immediately and intuitively evident (see also ). I realize Graphic B is not global and is only one year's hurricanes, but I think the graphic speaks to a more striking and immediate impact of climate change.
Please comment below, on your preference. —RCraig09 (talk) 23:19, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- While I'm open to replacing that graph, I'm not a fan of adding another US-focused one in its place. Is it possible to do something similar for tropical cyclones in general? —Femke 🐦 (talk) 08:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- It's Atlantic focused, not "US" focused per se. I've searched for CC-intensified (Pacific) typhoons but references applying extreme event attribution to specific hurricanes/cyclones/typhoons are nearly non-existent. This chart was a rare discovery in how it makes CC's effects be concretely evident. If anyone finds similar references for the Pacific, let me know.. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:51, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- The soil moisture graph was added by User:Efbrazil three years ago. I think we could probably remove it (or move it?) but I am a bit concerned that we don't mention "soil moisture" content anywhere in the text (or is it mentioned under a different term?). I was going to suggest to move it to effects of climate change but I see it's already there. - I think my suggestion would be to remove it but to not replace it with another fairly complicated, wordy schematic (such as graph B.). Either remove it without replacement or replace it with something very visual (a photo?). In general, we do have a lot of graphs, schematics and images already in this article. Perhaps one less is actually a good thing. EMsmile (talk) 13:22, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- Droughts are mentioned. Bogazicili (talk) 21:29, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'd rather have this image chosen for the replacement than the other file. I do not believe using an image for one season restricted in one basin would reflect climate change's general impact on tropical cyclones. I'm a bit cautious on replacing the existing image, but I want to see more people discussing before I issue my final verdict. ZZ'S 18:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- Keep. Temperature, soil, precipitation are the 3 graphs in B. Future Climate Change, Risks, and Long-Term Responses in AR6 SYR SPM (page 14). We already have temperature in the article. Bogazicili (talk) 21:25, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- RCraig09, I'd recommend here for image B: Effects_of_climate_change#Extreme_storms Bogazicili (talk) 21:32, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
IPCC's AR6 Fig. TS-22 etc.
- @RCraig09 have you considered these figures?
- https://www.ipcc.ch/report/ar6/wg1/figures/technical-summary/figure-ts-22 DecFinney (talk) 13:21, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I think that Fig. TS-22 is far too complex and detailed for a layperson encyclopedia, especially in a high-level article such as this. —RCraig09 (talk) 15:10, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I wasnt imagining the whole thing. e.g. perhaps just the top right quarter. That seems like a really neat summary in lay terms of the kind of impacts different regions of the world could expect. It doesnt rely on the rest of the figure for understanding so I would assume its fine to crop it to make a new figure (but I am new-ish to wiki so am not sure of cropping policy).
- Such a figure seems much more relevant to any person in the world. Meanwhile figures based on the atlantic seem more like a token representation of impact (i.e. just one example) as well as introducing a regional bias and thereby limiting the interest for the wider global population. I appreciate you will not being trying to illustrate all impacts. Nevertheless, the figure I propose does do a pretty job of covering bases in the a concise manner. DecFinney (talk) 15:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I appreciate that Fig. TS-22(b) has a lot of information, a huge amount in fact: five values for each of 35 categories. Especially for a high-level article such as this, this micro-categorization would be overwhelming for lay readers. FYI: Generally there is no general prohibition on cropping as such (every edit involves selection of material from a larger-content publication), but I seem to recall that some organization, not sure if it's the IPCC, licensed things only if presented in their entirety. I wish I had a hurricane-intensification reference for both Atlantic and Pacific, but since the main point of Graphic "B" is climate change's intensification of hurricanes rather than hurricanes themselves, I think "B" is more than adequate for purpose. —RCraig09 (talk) 18:57, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 ok. the only multi-basin figure i can find that seems relevant to your aim is fig5 in https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/101/3/bams-d-18-0194.1.xml
- this shows the consistent projection of increased TC intensity (and rain rate) in every basin. DecFinney (talk) 07:34, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Thanks for the research. I like the global extent of the AMS datasets but the error ranges are, like, totally_outtasight_dude! I'll have to consider the various drawings in the AMS reference... I lean toward something like Figs. 3b and 4b more than the global map. A major advantage of is that it's not a long-term prediction (it's about climate change attribution), and concrete values are provided in the context of peak winds and hurricane categories. —RCraig09 (talk) 21:28, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 i agree 3b and 4b are better multi-basin figs to consider.
- there is a part 1 to that paper which is about attribution. when i glanced at it, i didnt spot any suitable figures. https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/100/10/bams-d-18-0189.1.xml
- attribution with TCs is still pretty statistically limited. i have to admit that fig1f probably justifies a focus on NAtlantic if you want to stick to an attribution based figure.
- thats my last input. thanks for the discussion. im happy with whatever you decide. DecFinney (talk) 09:08, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Many thanks. I haven't been able to conjure a graphical approach to represent multi-basin attribution/changes that's more elegant than separate bar charts with distracting and divergent error bars scattered around a world map. I think that already captures predicted impacts quite well, and that an example of Extreme event attribution (Graphic "B", above) deserves space in this article. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:36, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Thanks for the research. I like the global extent of the AMS datasets but the error ranges are, like, totally_outtasight_dude! I'll have to consider the various drawings in the AMS reference... I lean toward something like Figs. 3b and 4b more than the global map. A major advantage of is that it's not a long-term prediction (it's about climate change attribution), and concrete values are provided in the context of peak winds and hurricane categories. —RCraig09 (talk) 21:28, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I appreciate that Fig. TS-22(b) has a lot of information, a huge amount in fact: five values for each of 35 categories. Especially for a high-level article such as this, this micro-categorization would be overwhelming for lay readers. FYI: Generally there is no general prohibition on cropping as such (every edit involves selection of material from a larger-content publication), but I seem to recall that some organization, not sure if it's the IPCC, licensed things only if presented in their entirety. I wish I had a hurricane-intensification reference for both Atlantic and Pacific, but since the main point of Graphic "B" is climate change's intensification of hurricanes rather than hurricanes themselves, I think "B" is more than adequate for purpose. —RCraig09 (talk) 18:57, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I think that Fig. TS-22 is far too complex and detailed for a layperson encyclopedia, especially in a high-level article such as this. —RCraig09 (talk) 15:10, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Underemphasis on extreme event attribution
The preceding discussion brings out the point that Extreme event attribution is not even mentioned in this article. I think it's very important because, more and more, the intensification of specific current events are being presented to the public as being caused by global warming. This attribution is distinct from projections of future intensification such as that shown in . Though attribution science is not yet fully developed, and is statistical in nature, I think that something should be added to the "Impacts" section. Agreement? Suggestions? —RCraig09 (talk) 17:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 sounds reasonable to me.
- i think most good science comms would say that the chance of event is made more likely by climate change. it may go as far as to say it was basically impossible before, i.e. 1 in a million year event or something but the message can get a bit lost in that. of course one can odten say there's no precident in the records.
- im not sure about the plot. its not obvious to me exactly what the x axis means or what information helps determine it. what is the source of the figure? DecFinney (talk) 21:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Welcome to Misplaced Pages! Sources can usually be found on the Wikimedia Commons file description page (click through image itself), or in captions of charts placed in Misplaced Pages articles. Here the source is Lindsey, Rebecca (15 December 2016). "Extreme event attribution: the climate versus weather blame game". Climate.gov. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA). Archived from the original on 9 June 2024.
Graphic adapted from Figure 4.7 in NAS 2016.
. The x-axis means the degree to which models can accurately represent or predict real-world events. —RCraig09 (talk) 21:43, 24 December 2024 (UTC)- @RCraig09 cheers, sorry. phone app doesnt let me follow an image link.
- image is ok. I'd change caption "more generally" to "in addition" as this is listing the other two bullets from the article that gives the necessary conditions for confidence in attribution. they are not more general than the point the graph is illustrating. id actually suggest they are more specific.
- i think youve edited the image a bit? it now looks like the colours have some meaning red/green/blue. but i dont think they did in the article, where each impact had a different colours? what do the colours mean here?
- the image also has removed the word "extreme" from quite a few impacts compared to the article. i would consider this to be substantive change. "extreme rainfall" (if meaning e.g. 99th percentile, short timescales) is affected by climate change differently to longer timescale averaged rainfall, which is how i would interpret the term "rainfall" on its own. i would say that scientific understanding for extreme rainfall is possibly better than mean rainfall change, and therefore i think it might not be appropriate to change that terminology in the plot. DecFinney (talk) 15:22, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Thanks for the feedback. The colors merely categorize the events (blue for cold, green for water-related, red for heat-related) to make the graphic more intuitively meaningful for a lay reader. The graphic's title includes "...extreme events..." so that the graphic can avoid needless repetition in the various individual elements. I'm not quite following your suggestion re the caption, but editors can change textual captions through ordinary editing. Here is a link to the image description page. Separately: I'm hoping for more participation from others about adding new content to the article. —RCraig09 (talk) 15:39, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 I see you're points regarding the image edits. regarding caption, i will make edits when the image is in the article then, if it still seems appropriate. DecFinney (talk) 15:53, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 I see you're points regarding the image edits. regarding caption, i will make edits when the image is in the article then, if it still seems appropriate. DecFinney (talk) 15:54, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Thanks for the feedback. The colors merely categorize the events (blue for cold, green for water-related, red for heat-related) to make the graphic more intuitively meaningful for a lay reader. The graphic's title includes "...extreme events..." so that the graphic can avoid needless repetition in the various individual elements. I'm not quite following your suggestion re the caption, but editors can change textual captions through ordinary editing. Here is a link to the image description page. Separately: I'm hoping for more participation from others about adding new content to the article. —RCraig09 (talk) 15:39, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Welcome to Misplaced Pages! Sources can usually be found on the Wikimedia Commons file description page (click through image itself), or in captions of charts placed in Misplaced Pages articles. Here the source is Lindsey, Rebecca (15 December 2016). "Extreme event attribution: the climate versus weather blame game". Climate.gov. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA). Archived from the original on 9 June 2024.
Mentioning SRM under "Reducing and recapturing emissions"
Hello! I am new to this talk page. I have been working on the SRM article and noticed that SRM is mentioned in the Climate Change article. I have some questions about how SRM is mentioned in this article.
Should SRM really be mentioned under the heading "Reducing and recapturing emissions"?
Given that SRM would only ‘mask’ climate change instead of addressing the cause, greenhouse gas emissions. "SRM contrasts with climate change mitigation activities, such as emission reductions and carbon dioxide removal (CDR), as it introduces a ‘mask’ to the climate change problem by altering the Earth’s radiation budget, rather than attempting to address the root cause of the problem, which is the increase in greenhouse gases (GHGs) in the atmosphere" (IPCC_AR6_WGII_CCB-CWGB, p. 77).
I suggest either deleting the two sentences on SRM altogether or clearly explaining to the readers that SRM is somewhat related but is not a mitigation option in the pure sense. 1HumbleB (talk) 12:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with 1HumbleB's concerns (disclosure: we have worked together on the solar radiation modification article; that's how I got interested in this). For comparison, in the article climate change mitigation we have quite a good description of what SRM has to do with mitigation (or doesn't have to do with it). I have just moved that section further down in the article; it was under "definition" there until now which I don't think was ideal. It reads like this at the climate change mitigation article:
- == Related approaches ==
- === Relationship with solar radiation modification (SRM) ===
- While solar radiation modification (SRM) could reduce surface temperatures, it temporarily masks climate change rather than addressing the root cause, which is greenhouse gases. SRM would work by altering how much solar radiation the Earth absorbs. Examples include reducing the amount of sunlight reaching the surface, reducing the optical thickness and lifetime of clouds, and changing the ability of the surface to reflect radiation. The IPCC describes SRM as a climate risk reduction strategy or supplementary option rather than a climate mitigation option.
- The terminology in this area is still evolving. Experts sometimes use the term geoengineering or climate engineering in the scientific literature for both CDR or SRM, if the techniques are used at a global scale. IPCC reports no longer use the terms geoengineering or climate engineering. EMsmile (talk) 10:15, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- To simplify things: I'd like to propose to delete these two sentences (for the reasons given above):
Solar radiation modification (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.
. Especially the first out of these two sentences is problematic in my opinion. The phrasing reads as if there is a relationship between SRM and deep emission reductions; and it lacks nuance. Also, the topic of SRM opens a can of worms and would require more space than what can be given in this high level article. Therefore, I think it's better not to mention it here at all. Readers can easily find it in the climate change mitigation article instead. EMsmile (talk) 21:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)- So I went ahead and deleted the two sentences in question (as there was no disagreement voiced on the talk page). Subsequently, User:RCraig09 re-instated the two sentences with the edit summary comment: "The content was in the section, →Reducing and recapturing emissions: and there was no implication that SRM is mitigation. You can distinguish mitigation from SRM if you think it's important."
- My response: this section is all about climate change mitigation. Directly under the section heading it says "Main: Climate change mitigation". Therefore, why do we talk about SRM in this section, which is not about climate change mitigation? It is also not about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Rather, it's about masking the warming effects, i.e. actively attempting to achieve global cooling.
- So I still think that those two sentences have no place here. If others say SRM must be mentioned in this section (why?), then the two sentences ought to be changed (as per my earlier comments) and it should be made clear that SRM is neither about mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Otherwise we'll just create confusion. EMsmile (talk) 13:03, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with @EMsmile's points. The fact that the content was previously included under this heading and that there is NO implication that SRM is mitigation, IMO does not justify keeping it here. SRM is unrelated to climate change mitigation. It should not be listed under this heading because its inclusion implies a connection to reducing or recapturing emissions, which is not accurate. Even if we revise the sentences to clarify that SRM is neither mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions," it would still be misplaced under this heading.
- I suggest we delete the sentences all together. 1HumbleB (talk) 11:58, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Through its reduction of permafrost melt and other positive-feedback global warming processes, SRM has the indirect effect of "Reducing ...emissions" that is a section title. SRM thus helps impede the climate change that is the subject of this article. SRM therefore has a place in this article, and I'm certainly not opposed to editors pointing out the distinction between SRM and more direct mitigation techniques. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- SRM does not "reduce emissions", so I don't know what you mean with "indirect effect of reducing emissions". For comparison, in the climate change mitigation article, SRM is mentioned at the end under "related approaches". I don't know if SRM is all that important that it needs to be included in this high level article (?). People can easily find it through the sub-articles. But if several editors think it ought to be mentioned then I would either mention it elsewhere in the article, or change the section heading or make it very explicit that SRM is not climate change mitigation and does not reduce emissions. - Does anyone else have an opinion about this? EMsmile (talk) 22:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- For now, I've changed the wording of the two sentences to this (the bolding is used to show the changes):
Solar radiation modification (SRM) is under discussion as a possible supplement to reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and global governance concerns, and its risks are not well understood.
The old version wasSolar radiation modification (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.
. (I am not sure if the wording "supplement" is sufficiently clear, and not overly optimistic.) EMsmile (talk) 22:17, 19 December 2024 (UTC)- At 17:07 I explained how SRM would inhibit permafrost melt—it would thus inhibit release of methane that was previously embedded in the permafrost. That is the indirect effect of SRM. Yes, it is a widely reported "related approach" that should be mentioned here. Re wording: closely follow source descriptions. —RCraig09 (talk) 22:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- For now, I've changed the wording of the two sentences to this (the bolding is used to show the changes):
- SRM does not "reduce emissions", so I don't know what you mean with "indirect effect of reducing emissions". For comparison, in the climate change mitigation article, SRM is mentioned at the end under "related approaches". I don't know if SRM is all that important that it needs to be included in this high level article (?). People can easily find it through the sub-articles. But if several editors think it ought to be mentioned then I would either mention it elsewhere in the article, or change the section heading or make it very explicit that SRM is not climate change mitigation and does not reduce emissions. - Does anyone else have an opinion about this? EMsmile (talk) 22:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Through its reduction of permafrost melt and other positive-feedback global warming processes, SRM has the indirect effect of "Reducing ...emissions" that is a section title. SRM thus helps impede the climate change that is the subject of this article. SRM therefore has a place in this article, and I'm certainly not opposed to editors pointing out the distinction between SRM and more direct mitigation techniques. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- To simplify things: I'd like to propose to delete these two sentences (for the reasons given above):
References
- ^ IPCC (2022) Chapter 14: International cooperation in Climate Change 2022: Mitigation of Climate Change. Contribution of Working Group III to the Sixth Assessment Report of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change, Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States]
- National Academies of Sciences, Engineering (25 March 2021). Reflecting Sunlight: Recommendations for Solar Geoengineering Research and Research Governance. doi:10.17226/25762. ISBN 978-0-309-67605-2. S2CID 234327299.
- IPCC (2022) Chapter 1: Introduction and Framing in Climate Change 2022: Mitigation of Climate Change. Contribution of Working Group III to the Sixth Assessment Report of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change, Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States
- IPCC, 2021: Annex VII: Glossary . In Climate Change 2021: The Physical Science Basis. Contribution of Working Group I to the Sixth Assessment Report of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change . Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, USA, pp. 2215–2256, doi:10.1017/9781009157896.022.
- IPCC SR15 Ch4 2018, pp. 347–352 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFIPCC_SR15_Ch42018 (help)
Copernicus: 2024 above +1.5°C
https://climate.copernicus.eu/2024-track-be-first-year-exceed-15oc-above-pre-industrial-average
Yes, I know
- WP:NOTCRYSTAL.
- We'll have to wait another 10 years for the 20 year average.
Still Climate_change#Warming_since_the_Industrial_Revolution could mention 2024 as the first year above +1.5 C. Uwappa (talk) 12:38, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
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