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== Section title "Assassination attempt" == |
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What should the recent event in Tuscon with Congresswoman Giffords be titled in this article (and potentially related articles)? |
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Requesting comments and input from Politics, Society, Style, and Policy groups. (closed Jan 16, 2011 at 10:56pm CST, looks like discussion has pretty much died off) |
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-- ] (]) 16:13, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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'''Note''': Since I began this section yesterday (before the RfC started), this was ''before'' sources indicated official charges of attempted "assassination" were brought by the US Government - Examples of subsequent coverage: , , (and many others indicating the charge of attempted assassination). The chronological start of this section is below the line --] (]) 18:23, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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The title of the shooting section should be "Assassination attempt". While the shooting and killing of bystanders was not an assassination attempt, as it wasn't the case with ] during the ], the specific shooting of Giffords was. |
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Consider the following points: |
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:1. The shooting of Giffords is by definition an assassination attempt. See all definitions of "assassination" at ]. |
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:2. Multiple ] are calling this an "assassination attempt" including '']'', '']'', '']'', '']'' and the '']'' . |
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:3. Even the shooter reportedly considered this an "assassination" as reported by '']'', '']'' and '']'' . |
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:4. Whenever a politician is attacked with the intent to murder, every Misplaced Pages article about that respective politician refers to the incident as an assassination attempt and titles the section as so. |
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There is no reason for this article to be singled out as an exception. --] (]) 21:12, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:I don't actually disagree with this point, but I would say that when the event itself is just over 24 hours old we might wait until we, and reliable sources, have a little perspective. The articles you point to have some historic distance, and we've only found out a few hours ago that Giffords was apparently the target. There need be no rush to change this until this characterization is more widely accepted (which could mean tonight or tomorrow, or could be later than that). <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 21:28, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::It has not been confirmed that this was an assassination attempt. It should be listed as a shooting unless further information confirms it as an assassination attempt. --] (]) 21:32, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::Multiple reliable sources are reporting this as an "assassination attempt". All definitions of "assassination" define this as an attempted assassination. "Confirmed" is ambiguous and we have no definition as to what "confirmed" is, but we have reliable sources and and official definitions of the word "assassination" that "confirms" this was an assassination attempt. --] (]) 21:37, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::Yes, I also support waiting for an official announcement from the authorities , for the time being, shooting is plenty. ] (]) 21:39, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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← OK I am reconsidering this - I think this section has to mesh with the sub article ], but if it is correct that the shooter is being charged with attempted assassination, as I just heard a report, then that may change things for me. Thoughts? <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 22:21, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:While I know there are specific laws regarding the attempted assassination of a United States President, I don't think there's an official crime of attempting to assassinate a sitting congressperson or any other type of political official in the United States. I could be wrong.--] (]) 23:04, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::Actually there is, and he has been charged with it.--] (]) 23:07, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::Through the maze of news reports, I'm having trouble finding that confirmation. Can you please provide a link to that? --] (]) 23:10, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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. From '']: |
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::''"The United States on Sunday charged Jared Lee Loughner, the man suspected of killing six people and wounding a congresswoman in Arizona, with five criminal counts, including attempted assassination."'' |
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:--] (]) 23:12, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::: Looks that way - NYT using the word and this , if this document is verified. Title 18 of US Code 351 (c), but I think we have to wait a bit until this language is confirmed, and reported as such. The apparent criminal complaint was found on Slate <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 23:16, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::From '']'' - "''Prosecutors charged Jared Lee Loughner, 22, with five counts — killing federal government employees, attempting to assassinate a member of Congress and attempting to kill federal employees...''"--] (]) 23:18, 9 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::In spite of editors disputing the term "assassination" being used in the article, it should be noted that .--] (]) 00:20, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::::We didn't know that yesterday. --] (]) 00:29, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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And that is precisely why we need to take a breath and not rush to edit articles this way when they reflect breaking news. We are not a news agency - we have to stop posting everything that comes across the wire, then is contradicted or disputed, then changed further - even from reliable sources. It is a developing story and Misplaced Pages is NOT the place to get up to date news. In fact we do more damage than good by doing this, as we give the impression that we know what we're talking about, when we actually do not. "Medically induced coma" being the most recent example - one source says so, her doctors say otherwise - we should just leave it off until things are clarified and then we can give a narrative of what happened if we feel that is needed. And so on, all over this story. <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 00:45, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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Since the suspect has taken the 5th Amendment and is not saying anything, and since the suspect has only been charged and not convicted, is there any reason that the merely factual title of '2011 Tucson shooting' is insufficient? We will have years to determine the final state of this article, and rather than being so quick to rush in emotional or subjective wording, how about we start with a firm foundation and move at a reasonable pace? -- ] (]) 07:55, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:This isn't about the conviction of the suspect, it's about the event that occurred, which by all sources and definitions is an assassination attempt. We go by ], not a single user's opinion of them.--] (]) 08:56, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::You seem to REALLY want to call this an assassination. In reviewing the arguments above, the definition of assassination given says it is typically done with a political goal or by hire from someone with a political goal. We have no evidence what this person's goals are except a few 'notes' that were reported. The substance of these notes was not released. The suspect is in custody and is not speaking about his motives. There is absolutely nothing untrue about calling this a 'shooting'. This has been established beyond doubt. There is no pressing reason to continue to press for and to change it to the more loaded word of 'assassination'. Several editors have urged caution and restraint; please heed that advice. -- ] (]) 09:26, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::And incidentally, with regard to the appeal to ], Misplaced Pages should be trying to stay above the fray. These so-called reliable sources often tend to get caught up in the moment and in the hype of a story. If we have a choice, we should try to err on the side of accurate rather than emotional (See ] and ]). -- ] (]) 09:33, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::You may also want to review the discussions occuring on the pages that relate to this one as to the title. ] ] etc. -- ] (]) 10:18, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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The question over whether to use the word "assassination" is moot: several reliable third-party sources are describing this as an assassination. According to the BBC, Loughner is being charged with "one count of attempted assassination of a member of Congress" (see: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-us-canada-12145117) and the Seattle Times has reported that "Feds claim evidence of assassination plot" (see: http://seattletimes.nwsource.com/html/nationworld/2013893450_giffords10.html). I think it is properly referenced to use that term. ] | ] | ] 15:33, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:Yep. However, the article on the event should remain titled "shootings" until the reliable sources tell us more. ←] <sup>'']''</sup> ]→ 15:36, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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Again, there is hardly consensus here on a name change, so please leave it at a less inflammatory title. Just because news reports are liking to use the word 'assasination', as others have pointed out, the charges themselves do not include the word assassination (see section below), and additionally the suspect is not talking so we don't have a clear motive. There is no harm at all in simply leaving it as 2011 Tuscon shooting. Please note: ] |
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{{cquote|Scandal mongering, something "heard through the grapevine" or gossip. Articles and content about living people are required to meet an especially high standard, as they may otherwise be libellous or infringe the subjects' right to privacy. Articles should not be written purely to attack the reputation of another person.}} |
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I'm sure there are other applicable guidelines. Our goal here should be to strive for NPOV and accuracy, not following the lead of the news media's hype. -- ] (]) 16:03, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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The term "assassination attempt" is clearly and unambiguously valid here. This has long been established, see ]. I'm not sure how low this convention remains true (governors? state reps? mayors? maybe not) but Members of Congress are not merely "killed" or "shot", they are "assassinated" or "survived an assassination attempt". That doesn't mean you can't also mix it up by using the words killed or shot to avoid repetition in the prose, but assassinated and assassination attempt are both the most formal and most correct terms here when referring to a president or member of congress. Regarding the section title, since the congresswoman was just one of many victims I am neutral about changing the section title, BUT within the article we should say somewhere in both the section and the lead that Giffords survived an assassination attempt. (unless she ultimately doesn't, and there's no hurry to update with breaking news now, but eventually those words should be included.) ] (]/]) 16:27, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:Is every shooting of a federal official automatically an assassination attempt? ←] <sup>'']''</sup> ]→ 16:29, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::Clearly not. If it was accidental, then no. If we are talking about a mere federal employee, federal law enforcement official, or a district judge, probably not. I don't know where the line is drawn precisely, but I am comfortable with saying that within the USA, when someone puts forth a credible attempt to murder a President or a Member of Congress (perhaps top cabinet-level officials too?), that is an assassination attempt. ] (]/]) 16:35, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::How do we know it was a deliberate assassination attempt, as opposed to some guy randomly opening fire in a crowd? ←] <sup>'']''</sup> ]→ 16:48, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::Well, you are right, I am presupposing malice and intent vs some guy randomly shooting a crowd he came across and the congresswoman, even though she was the first one shot at point-blank range, was just some random unremarkable lady to him, at the wrong place at the wrong time. If that were actually the case, it is not an assassination attempt, but that seems incredibly unlikely to me. I have no problem with putting the article on ice for a few days or a week to let the story calm down and let the facts sort themselves out, but if the facts of his obsession with Giffords that were leaked are formally introduced in court, then I doubt we would need to wait for a conviction. ] (]/]) 16:55, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::The facts presented at the trial could be reported as they are presented. And by the way, my first reaction on hearing some reports on this was that it was obviously an assassination attempt. However, wikipedia requires valid sourcing, as opposed to TV figures speculating and theorizing. ←] <sup>'']''</sup> ]→ 17:19, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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I see nothing wrong in a BLP article with a sourced comment saying there are ''allegations'' of an assassination attempt. — ] | ] 17:56, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:On a related note, I wonder if there is any such thing as an inadvertent assassination, as ] was killed in the shooting spree. Should that count as an assassination? — ] | ] 18:00, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::He was only charged with the attempted assassination of Rep. Giffords under 18 USC 351(c). Re-reading the charges as published by NYT, he's charged with first-degree murder for the death of Judge Roll (18 USC 1111). --] (]) 18:04, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::If the charges say "assassination", then it's fair game. The implication regarding the judge might be that his target was the Congresswoman, and that everyone else there was essentially "collateral damage", as McVeigh would have said. ←] <sup>'']''</sup> ]→ 18:21, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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As this individual has been charged with attempted assassination, a section title of "Alleged assassination attempt" is fully appropriate and doesn't violate ] or any other standards. --] (]) 18:25, 10 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:Agreed. The "alleged" word is important. It was ''allegedly'' or ''reportedly'' an assassination attempt, or the shooter ''was charged with'' attempted assassination. It should not be called an assassination attempt (or attempted assassination) without qualifier until the legal case has been adjudicated (assuming a guilty verdict or plea). Otherwise, we're essentially ] and possibly flouting the spirit of ] in the process. ] (]) 22:33, 15 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::Alleged is used in terms of suspects not in terms of victims, especially when the victim is still in the hospital fighting for her life. She wasn't allegedly shot.--] (]) 22:51, 15 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::''Alleged'' is used in terms of both suspects and incidents. In this instance I was applying it to the incident (an assassination attempt being an incident, not a person). That she was shot wasn't in question; the appropriateness of calling the shooting an assassination attempt was. ] (]) 05:56, 16 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::Newspapers including the ''New York Times'' are using "assassination attempt" without "alleged" (yesterday's front page). I think it's fine to follow their lead. '''<font color="navy">]</font>''' ''(<font color="green">]</font>)'' 20:14, 21 January 2011 (UTC) |
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I oppose using the word assassination per talk here ] There are also many sources that do not use the wording. - ] (]) 01:14, 23 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::I agree with NW, Jojhutton, and others above - most reliable sources refer to this as an assassination attempt on her, and this article is from her perspective, so I think it is completely correct to refer to this as such here. Save the "alleged" for an article about his legal status. (And by the way, reliable sources report that he wrote on a letter he received from her in 2007, adding to the reasons police conclude she was the target of an assassination attempt.) <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 04:14, 23 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::I also would prefer a less contentious word until we have a more definite picture of the facts. HOWEVER, considering that this article is focused on Gabrielle Giffords (unlike the 2011 Tucson Shooting article), it seems as if there is enough within the strict definition of the word 'assassination' for it to be able to apply here. So, at this point, I would mildly support using *either* word but ONLY on this article. The general event article (which describes the injury of 12 others and death of 6) is perfectly fine being labeled as 2011 Tucson shooting. -- ] (]) 20:48, 23 January 2011 (UTC) |
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== Gifford's seat == |
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Here is a question someone else may be able to answer and add in to the article, who takes control of her seat in congress while she is recovering? |
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] (]) 22:06, 16 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:I am pretty sure the answer is "nobody." She will simply be absent until she can return. I don't think this needs to be mentioned in the article, and in any event I have not seen it mentioned in any sources. ] (]) 23:40, 16 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::Neutron is correct. There is no provision for appointing a substitute Member while an elected Member of Congress is ill or injured. Even while Rep. Giffords is unable to serve, her office will remain open to perform constituent services functions and the like. (There is one precedent for the House of Representatives calling for a special election when a Member was permanently incapacitated and unable to participate, but that Member was diagnosed as being in a permanently comatose condition after a significant amount of time had elapsed.) ] (]) 23:59, 16 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::This was addressed in the article at one point, but an editor thought it was "bullshit" (according to the edit summary) and removed it. See . I for one, think it is worth mentioning but I'm not going to add it back myself.—] (]) 00:10, 17 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::It may be better to leave this issue alone for awhile longer, until there is a better sense of the Congresswoman's prognosis. ] (]) 00:23, 17 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::I agree on leving the issue alone until her long-term prognosis is understood more. She remains the congresswoman, but her staff will be limited in the kinds of services they can perform. I would suggest looking at the ] for a recent precedent on this matter. Though in the Johnson case, he was in a medically-induced coma for months, whereas Giffords is apparently gradually becoming more alert.]] 03:50, 17 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::I also agree, this can wait. I have a feeling that after another week or so, the "mainstream media" will start talking about it (with the content depending on what her doctors are saying at that point) and there will be an abundance of sources to say something in our article. ] (]) 04:33, 17 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:Doesn't Arizona law state that the governor appoints a replacement, if a representative dies or is permanently unable to fulfill their function? Just today, she made some remarkable progress, but with all due respect, her days of being able to represent her district are over - at least for her current term. She'll need to concentrate on herself and it will be a long process of healing to get to whatever level she'll be able to recover. This injury was pretty horrific, and unfortunately I don't think she'll have the faculty to ever be in politics again (sad.) ] (]) 01:15, 21 January 2011 (UTC) HammerFilmFan |
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::And you know this... how? She needs rehabilitation, but what makes you so sure "her days of being able to represent her district are over"? --] (]) 01:46, 21 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::I think I saw the article HammerFilmFan refers to; I don't have a reference handy now. The news service's analysis was that the law only applied to state and local officeholders who were unable to discharge their duties. (I think 90 days was the timeframe in the article.) The interpretation was that the state law didn't apply to Giffords, because she's a federal officeholder. —''']''' (]) 02:04, 21 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::It's definitely not in the power of a Governor to appoint a new Representative. They can appoint Senators in the case of a vacancy, but House seats remain vacant until a special election fills them. This, of course, could well be moot if Giffords is able to recover and return to work. Nobody will push her to resign, and her husband seems to think she could make a "full recovery". Granted he's not a doctor, but I assume that comment comes informed from discussions with her doctors. --] (]) 04:01, 21 January 2011 (UTC) |
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*There were two run-on sentences incorrectly joined with a semi-colon at the end of this section. While copy-editing, I noticed that of the 2 cites footnoting the last 'graf, the Slate.com cite mentioned neither spokesperson, and therefore was superfluous. Also, a cautionary note to other editors: the whole article uses quite a few "cite names" as ref's, so ignore redline "cite errors" when editing just a section when you preview your results. — ] (]) 18:37, 24 January 2011 (UTC) |
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== what does Dr. Misplaced Pages say? == |
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I took out the part that the coma was to let her brain rest. I looked it up and, though I'm not a doctor, this is just Misplaced Pages misinformation. The internet says you sedate people to lower their brain pressure. Without a source, we can't say this was done for Giffords, even though it is true...seems like standard treatment according to the internet. ] (]) 23:08, 23 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:Except that we do have a source, and is cited a sentence or two later. We don't go with our own independent ], we go with sources, and the sources clearly say that she was placed in a medically-induced coma (which is a form of deep sedation, by the way) to let her brain rest, which is another way of saying to reduce brain pressure. <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 09:09, 29 January 2011 (UTC) |
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== Recovery section longer than her congressional career == |
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Should we carve out the recovery and shooting section since it is longer than her congressional section? |
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Then this article could simply say... |
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On January 8, 2011, Giffords was shot in the head during a meeting with constituents outside a Safeway near Tucson, AZ. She underwent multiple surgeries, including brain, throat, stomach, and eye surgeries. She was eventually transferred to a Houston hospital for rehabilitation. |
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====Biden comparison==== |
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Look at Joe Biden's article when he had a life threatening brain problem. It doesn't go into so much detail. It just says... |
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In February 1988, after suffering from several episodes of increasingly severe neck pain, Biden was taken by long-distance ambulance to Walter Reed Army Medical Center and given lifesaving surgery to correct an intracranial berry aneurysm that had begun leaking; the situation was serious enough that a priest had administered last rites at the hospital. While recuperating, he suffered a pulmonary embolism, which represented a major complication. Another operation to repair a second aneurysm, which had caused no symptoms but was also at risk from bursting, was performed in May 1988. The hospitalization and recovery kept Biden from his duties in the U.S. Senate for seven months. |
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====Reagan comparison==== |
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On March 30, 1981, only 69 days into the new administration, Reagan, his press secretary James Brady, Washington police officer Thomas Delahanty, and Secret Service agent Timothy McCarthy were struck by gunfire from would-be assassin John Hinckley, Jr. outside the Washington Hilton Hotel. Although "close to death" during surgery, Reagan recovered and was released from the hospital on April 11, becoming the first serving U.S. President to survive being shot in an assassination attempt. The attempt had great influence on Reagan's popularity; polls indicated his approval rating to be around 73%. Reagan believed that God had spared his life so that he might go on to fulfill a greater purpose. |
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So the proposal is to cut Giffords' section to about 4 sentences and, if you wish, have a sub-article on the details of her injury and recovery. Bottom line: |
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Giffords' article: 42 lines of text on my screen.<br /> |
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Biden: 6 lines<br /> |
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Reagan: 6 lines |
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We should not cut out the hard work of editors who gathered so much good information so a sub-article makes sense. |
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:No, this is not the time to cut this down or fork it off. This article has had over 1.9 million views this month, and although the numbers have significantly dropped over the last weeks, it is reasonable to assume that the reason we're getting traffic is because of the shooting, not because of her congressional career, and there's really no reason to have this forked off into a sub-article, as this article is not at all long or unwieldy. There's no reason to make it harder for people to find the information they're looking for - we're not the news, but we have to be realistic that people are coming here to understand these events and learn about her. We have already trimmed some of the details from immediately after the shooting, and as time goes on, I;m sure we'll trim some more. but I don't at all agree that this should be cut down now in the way you're suggesting. <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 08:00, 29 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:Also, while the Biden and Reagan examples are interesting, they really don't relate well to this situation. (And please don't forget ] and ].) Biden's health problem was extremely serious at the time, but is now placed in our article in proper perspective in terms of his whole life and career, with no sub-article. The assassination attempt on Reagan merits its own article which talks about the event, the shooter, Reagan's medical treatment and recovery, etc., and the main article ] is quite long and could not absorb all of the material specific to him. We do have a separate article ], but it is about more than Giffords, and the specifics about how that event has affected Giffords properly belongs here in the Gifffords bio.<strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 08:19, 29 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::I agree. Since Giffords shooting, though tragic and serious, doesn't compare historically as Reagan's. So instead of 6 lines, 4-5 is enough. ] (]) 08:22, 29 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::: You do not have consensus for this - I am reverting. Let there be some discussion first and see what other editors think, before making such a dramatic change, when there is disagreement stated. <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 08:30, 29 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::Although I believe consistency in coverage is a good thing, I don't see how one can decide the number of sentences to cover a historic event simply based on how many sentences some other event has in its coverage. This seems completely unrelated to the specific circumstances and based solely on a premise that may be flawed itself. |
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:::::It seems to me that a better standard would simply be to provide adaquate coverage for whatever the event is, in whatever length is needed. Does the coverage need to be exhaustive? Well depending on how you view an encyclopedia, maybe it does. But then again, it seems as if many people treat Misplaced Pages as a trivia guide and a starting point for knowledge, rather than as an exhaustive reservoir of knowledge. |
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:::::I would really like you to review the premise that consistency is based on a number of words or lines in an article, and perhaps change that to a premise that consistency means that we properly cover a subject whatever it happens to be. -- ] (]) 09:09, 29 January 2011 (UTC) |
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Tvoz, do not go against consensus. Right now, you are the only person making a fuss and opposed. Ryan want to cut out quite a bit. I agree but not quite as much. Avanu wants to discuss if there should be a rule based on number of words or lines. Tvoz is the odd man out. |
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I side with Avanu is that there should not be a predefined number of words. However, if this article sticks out from the others in having a whole lot of words, we must question whether we are having undue weight. I believe we are. If people really want gorey details about her head wound, they can go to the shooting article, which there is a "see" link. |
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Another problem is that there is prediction here, saying how many months it would take for recovery. None of those doctors treated her. It would be like saying "Micheal Douglas has throat cancer. 'People with his kind of cancer usually live 3-18 months so we expect Douglas to be like that, said a bystander, who happens to be a doctor.' " So if you just mass revert and put that it, you are editing badly, particularly if you don't say while such crystal ball predictions are good. |
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] (]) 01:58, 30 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:While some specific items might warrant being carved out, I don't agree with the mass deletion of the section that Madrid 2020 just did. The description of the injury and how she was treated is relevant and is likely to be useful to the average reader. However, I'm not sure that it warrants an article of its own. Given that the article on the shooting points back to this recovery section, it makes sense to leave the detail here—unless clear consensus emerges that Giffords' recovery warrants a separate article. —''']''' (]) 02:06, 30 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::There's plenty of space in the tucson shooting article. That's where people can read the many gorey details of the injuries. Perhaps, an intermediate length is a solution, which I'll try. ] (]) 02:23, 30 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::Then let's move the text there and leave a pointer to that article from this one, instead of the other way around. —''']''' (]) 02:33, 30 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::Great! Agreed. Ok, we have consensus except for Ryan who want a more severe cut and Tvoz who doesn't want any cut. ] (]) 21:51, 30 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::I'm not sure what consensus you're speaking of, Madrid/Pacific 1818. I'm not seeing how it makes more sense to have most of the details about her recovery in the shooting article, especially when we are already trying to keep the size of that article down. ] (]) 23:19, 30 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::See what C.Fred said. All that stuff should go in to the shooting article because it is undue weight in this article. It is not undue weight in the shooting article becuase that article has all kinds of facts, from the names and backgrounds of those killed to what Palin says to Giffords' recovery. If you, Flyer22, are unhappy about the length of the shooting article, then ask those editors in that article about what to spin off as a sub-article. The recovery section, and all that detail, does not belong here. Ask Pacific 1818 or C.Fred or Madrid 2020 or me. ] (]) 03:26, 31 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::::See what I stated at the shooting article. C. Fred being a respected administrator does not make his opinion above other editors. It is not undue weight here at all, in my opinion. Details of her recovery are only of interest to those interested in the shooting, you said. I say, "Says who?" People interested in this woman will be interested in her recovery, in my opinion. I am not unhappy about the length of the shooting article; others are, and you already know that. I will not be asking Madrid or Pacific 1818 anything, seeing as they are the same person. A person who seems to make the same type of edits, reverts and arguments as you. In fact, I am pretty certain you are Madrid as well. ] (]) 07:49, 31 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::::I only found out about this congresswoman and the shooting because of the preëmption of ] two weeks ago for an interview with her husband. Probably outside of the area she represents she was not that well known. Now she is known for surviving an assassination attempt. I have this article in my watchlist to check on her recovery because i hope it goes well and in the long term i am most curious to know if her position on guns changes. Her article reflecting how well she is known for various things is proportional. Before reading this article i saw her picture and though Chris Martin's wife would be perfect if a movie were made of this. In reading the article i learnt she is the second cousin of Mrs Martin. Ok, something else that has proportional mention in the article. If she recovers and drafts some famous legislation and writes a book and runs for president then her article will change but for now she is by far most widely known for surviving an assassination attempt so having her political career being a smaller section is appropriate. Not that things about her work can't be included but that her political career section does not define the size of other sections in the article. <span class="plainlinks"></span> seems of appropriate balance to me. <font face="Georgia">] & ] ☯ ]</font> 08:37, 31 January 2011 (UTC) |
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:::::::::And, looking at that version, I'm not seeing how the assassination and recovery information is bigger than her political career anyway. ] (]) 08:52, 31 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::::::::::''And my part 2, which got an edit conflict by the time i was done writing it:''<br/>In direct response to the proposal, Misplaced Pages did not exist at the time of either the Joe Biden or Ronald Reagan incidents, and so when their articles were eventually created there was a much larger pool of events to pick from in making a comprehensive article that properly and proportionally represented the totality of their public lives to that point. Once Mrs Giffords is recovered and back at work then the section recounting her daily status could be significantly reduced and left to article history but for now people like myself are coming to her article just for such things. If Misplaced Pages had been around would you have though that Ronald Reagan's article in those days and months following would have contained so little information on the event and his status? Some 30 years on a mere 6 lines of text might be enough but in-the-moment it would be a dis-service to those reading the article to excise so much. Reagan attempted assassination article is presently 35,127 bytes. Giffords attempted assassination article is 95,934 bytes. While it is true that more information is more readily available to compile the Giffords article it is fair to say that over time it will be trimmed down as things like speculation about hoping she can still talk and breathe and walk and return to work is confirmed and made too redundant to keep in the article in great detail. Then there is also the matter of the Giffords assassination attempt article not being just about her but about those bystanders who were killed and wounded and for that reason is entitled ]. The assassination of Abraham Lincoln is presently 49,190 bytes so on pure size i don't see any being out of place. Abraham Lincoln's main article is 132,009 bytes and the section on the assassination is 26 lines long including wrapping around the two pictures in the section at a resolution of 1024x768 with a 10pt Georgia font. <font face="Georgia">] & ] ☯ ]</font> 09:25, 31 January 2011 (UTC) |
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← Excuse me, but there most certainly is not consensus to remove this material from here and move it to the shooting article. The details of her recovery are most relevant to her life, and they would bog down the shooting article which has to cover the broader topic including the shooter, the legal proceedings, etc. Giffords' recovery belongs here, as it is specific to her. But in any case, we don't take stuff out of one article and dump it into another without consensus both here and there - it would be a merge - and as far as I can see, there is no consensus in either place. I also think Flyer22 is quite right in her observation that there may be some socking going on here, and if that's the case, appropriate action will be taken. Meanwhile, this is an ongoing discussion, and these mass removeals should not continue. <strong>]</strong>/<small>]</small> 09:22, 31 January 2011 (UTC) |
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::I also didn't see a consensus. It might helpful for people to review what constitutes a consensus. I also do not agree with the approach of labeling people as "odd man out". We're all here (hopefully) for the same purpose, and that is to produce the best article we can. The definition of that is what leads to these discussions, and Madrid-2020, it really feels like you are wanting to rush that process, but please don't let your passion and eagerness prevent you from carefully considering other opinions. I have no strong feelings about the length of the article. Honestly if it stays the length it is now, or even gets longer, and it is good writing and useful information, then I would say leave it there. My point earlier was that you should judge the content in an article by its merit, not by comparing its length to some other article of a possibly similar type. Please give people time to consider and discuss and come to a true consensus. -- ] (]) 14:56, 31 January 2011 (UTC) |
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