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== Re: Your Special Talents == |
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Could someone add that she is a "songwriter" in the beginning of the biography? She has writing credits in almost half of her discography and that seems like an appropriate and accurate thing to add. ] (]) 07:27, 28 February 2024 (UTC) |
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Hello Rhiana: My name is Eric. I am a music lover and quite impressed with your style and all that you put in to your work. So much that it is the end of my work night, and I wanted to find a way to post you a compliment. Oh, and there is something else that is driving me to respond to you, and I think you should know. I grew up wanting to be involved in music and had brief experimentations with naturally playing drums, guitars, and other instruments for fun. I even had a group of friends while in college that actually practiced rap music, and ventured into doing it for the local clubs, schools, and some campus parties. Because of conflicting interests we never made more of it than that, but it was fun trying to make demo tapes, and thinking about what we needed to do to take things to another level. I particularly admired "LL Cool J" and I usually was the one that created lyrics for my group. I found it interesting to turn concepts and ideas on paper, into song material. And many times I would actually see ideas in my head become subjects of another professional artists work. So I confess that I feel some disappointment about not being an artist that you associate with, but now I am doing a job to help protect the American Homeland, and at least I have been blessed with an opportunity to do that. I believe when something means something to you, it is difficult to hide, and is revealed when you talk the talk, walk the walk, or just work your unique way.] (]) 08:26, 1 May 2012 (UTC)Sincerely, mr. eric a. harris. |
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{{reply to|Julioplantain}} Adding it to the lede may require further discussions since Rihanna is not highly regarded as a songwriter (and some editors would object), but I made sure to re-add it to the infobox where its inclusion is totally justified. The article mentions her songwriting, and she currently has <u>138 songwriting credits</u>. Only problem is, certain editors sometimes remove it from the infobox based on personal feelings. FMSky has days ago removed it from the infobox because they feel it's "disrespectful to the people actually writing her songs." That kind of POV is not encyclopedic at all, and we already went though that when debating whether or not Beyoncé should be presented as a songwriter. Besides, they cannot prove all of Rihanna's 138 credits were stolen, and it's not the first time they make such edits. |
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== Where have you been == |
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{{reply to|BD2412|Popcornfud}} Would you agree that "disrespectful to the people actually writing her songs" is pure POV? It's like someone claiming Kendrick Lamar is a real songwriter, while Drake is not; Lady Gaga is a real songwriter, while Madonna is not... I'm afraid such personal opinions don't belong on here. ] (]) 01:13, 20 August 2024 (UTC) |
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Where have you been is the first song to ever reach 4.9 million views in 24 hours. I Think this should be added to her 2011- present page. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 18:20, 3 May 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Agreed. Previous VEVO record held by Nicki Minaj broken by Rihanna: https://twitter.com/#!/VEVO/status/198095439415877633--] ] 21:10, 3 May 2012 (UTC) |
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* I will put it this way. I see someone like ], who played two undistinguished seasons in the NFL in the 1980s, after having been a fifth-round draft pick, and marked no stats, and no one is suggesting that "American football wide receiver" be removed from his description out of respect for "the people actually receiving the ball". ] ] 02:03, 20 August 2024 (UTC) |
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** {{reply to|FMSky}} As explained by the admin just above, based on ], the content of this encyclopedia is based on sourced information (138 songwriting credits, conformation of collaborative songwriting, awards, etc.) rather than one's personal opinion (of the worthiness of the songwriting of an artist, etc.). The lede is for the primary most notable professions, whereas the infobox is for the primary and secondary most known or notable professions. On that note, Rihanna was one of the songwriters nominated for composing the song "Lift Me Up" at the 2022 Golden Globes Awards.<ref>https://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/music-news/rihanna-taylor-swift-lady-gaga-golden-globes-best-song-nominees-1235280185/</ref> That song also won five awards. ] (]) 17:05, 20 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{ping|Israell}} No, actually you would need a source that specifically calls her a "songwriter", anything else is ] --] (]) 01:00, 21 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:Being "disrespectful to people writing the songs" or whatever isn't a valid reason to say she is or isn't a songwriter — but neither is a personal assessment about her work. |
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:We go by reliable sources. If numerous reliable sources describe her as a songwriter then I'd support the inclusion in the infobox, but if not let's leave it out. The infobox should describe main roles. ] (]) 12:28, 21 August 2024 (UTC) |
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:: In addition to the aforementioned sources, here are more sources referring to Rihanna as a songwriter: <ref>https://www.billboard.com/music/music-news/rihanna-new-super-bowl-halftime-teaser-1235198687/</ref><ref>https://www.independent.co.uk/arts-entertainment/music/news/rihanna-barbados-queen-elisabeth-ii-republic-new-album-b484833.html</ref><ref>https://www.cbc.ca/news/entertainment/rihanna-photo-of-thailand-vacation-leads-to-2-arrests-1.1864226</ref><ref>https://abcnews.go.com/GMA/Style/brands-helping-women-back-lingerie-industry/story?id=60212864</ref><ref>https://www.msn.com/en-in/lifestyle/style/rihanna-and-a-ap-rocky-celebrate-son-rza-s-2nd-birthday-in-style/ar-BB1miEjB</ref><ref>https://www.today.com/style/bob-back-rihanna-rocks-sleek-new-do-ellen-t71671</ref><ref>https://variety.com/2022/music/news/rihanna-song-black-panther-wakanda-forever-1235412876/</ref><ref>https://www.accessonline.com/articles/rihanna-set-to-release-new-music-for-first-time-in-6-years-for-wakanda-forever</ref><ref>https://www.hellomagazine.com/celebrities/20230215164470/asap-rocky-dating-history/</ref>. ] (]) 05:28, 22 August 2024 (UTC) |
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== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 29 September 2024 == |
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"...he felt "Pon de Replay" was too big for her, saying "when a song is that big, it's hard to come back from. I don't sign songs, I sign artists". The audition resulted in Rihanna signing a six-album record deal with Def Jam Recordings in February 2005, on the same day of the audition, with Jay-Z saying "There's only two ways out. Out the door after you sign this deal. Or through this window ...", meaning that he was not going to let her leave with signing a record deal. After signing to Def Jam Recordings, Rihanna cancelled other meetings with record labels and relocated from Barbados to New York to live with Rogers' and his wife. Rihanna explained the concept behind the title of the album to Kidzworld, saying that the sun is representative of native Caribbean culture, as well as herself, and that the album consists of music from her heritage...." |
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This passage seems like a mish-mash of opinions and loose facts and some of it is not clear at all. The part where it starts with the Jay-Z quote, "There's only two ways out..." The author attemts to explain what they thought Jay-z was saying "meaning he was not going to let her leave with signing a record deal..." This explanation provided by the author does not clear things up and I wonder if this clarification should not be attempted at all because the quote seems to be self explanatory in that Jay-Z seems to be saying to Rihanna that the contract she has just signed with him is serious and she needs to deliver the six albums or jump out the window, figuritively. |
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In the artistry section under influences it states that during childhood Rihanna use to sing Whitney Houston songs and Houston's song "I Will Always Love You" made her develop a passion for music, but it doesn't state how Whitney Houston influenced her like it states Madonna and Mariah Carey influenced her, it just states that she use to sing Whitney Houston songs I wanted to add that Rihanna was also inspired by Whitney Houston as well and also add that Houston's song "I Will Always Love You" influenced her to do music as with citations. ] (]) 19:53, 29 September 2024 (UTC) |
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: ] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a ] and provide a ] if appropriate.<!-- Template:EEp --> ] (]) 23:46, 29 September 2024 (UTC) |
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== Genres == |
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the passage that starts "Rihanna explained the concept behind the title of the album to Kidzworld..." Not only does this sentence just hang out by itself, It needs to explain who or what "kidsworld" is and what album rihanna is speaking about. |
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Rihanna is and always has been a pop artist besides an R&B artist, so the music genres in the infobox should be either "Pop, dance, and R&B" or "Pop, R&B, and dance", not "R&B, pop, and dance", even AllMusic confirms she's a pop artist: https://www.allmusic.com/artist/rihanna-mn0000367188 ] (]) 22:44, 20 October 2024 (UTC) |
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== unclear passage Rihanna page == |
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:AllMusic also states she does EDM and dancehall but you conveniently forgot to mention that didn’t you? There all all other genres that are sourced throughout her page such as hip hop, dubstep, and reggae why didn’t you mention them too? ] (]) 09:49, 21 October 2024 (UTC) |
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I have included the following excerpt to illustrate some parts of this page that i find difficult to understand. |
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:what about reggae? ] (]) 22:57, 29 October 2024 (UTC) |
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== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 25 November 2024 == |
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"...he felt "Pon de Replay" was too big for her, saying "when a song is that big, it's hard to come back from. I don't sign songs, I sign artists". The audition resulted in Rihanna signing a six-album record deal with Def Jam Recordings in February 2005, on the same day of the audition, with Jay-Z saying "There's only two ways out. Out the door after you sign this deal. Or through this window ...", meaning that he was not going to let her leave with signing a record deal. After signing to Def Jam Recordings, Rihanna cancelled other meetings with record labels and relocated from Barbados to New York to live with Rogers' and his wife. Rihanna explained the concept behind the title of the album to Kidzworld, saying that the sun is representative of native Caribbean culture, as well as herself, and that the album consists of music from her heritage...." |
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This passage seems like a mish-mash of opinions and loose facts and some of it is not clear at all. The part where it starts with the Jay-Z quote, "There's only two ways out..." The author attemts to explain what they thought Jay-z was saying "meaning he was not going to let her leave with signing a record deal..." This explanation provided by the author does not clear things up and I wonder if this clarification should not be attempted at all because the quote seems to be self explanatory in that Jay-Z seems to be saying to Rihanna that the contract she has just signed with him is serious and she needs to deliver the six albums or jump out the window, figuritively. |
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Rihanna didnt play major role in any movie <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 23:01, 25 November 2024 (UTC)</small> |
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:{{Not done}}: please provide ] that support the change you want to be made.<!-- Template:EEp --> ] (]) 04:39, 26 November 2024 (UTC) |
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== CFDA Award == |
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the passage that starts "Rihanna explained the concept behind the title of the album to Kidzworld..." Not only does this sentence just hang out by itself, It needs to explain who or what "kidsworld" is and what album rihanna is speaking about. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 08:29, 6 May 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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@] what's the issue? A 3 second Google will reveal plenty of significant coverage in reliable sources about Rihanna's award by the CFDA, in addition to what was already included in the article: |
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] (]) 16:06, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:Also, the ''Hollywood Reporter'' article that was cited is by-lined and a green reliable source at ]. No indication it is a churned press release. Just because they attributed the announcement that she was receiving the award to the CFDA doesn't make it churnalism... ''who else'' would announce she was receiving the award if not for the organization that was awarding it? ] (]) 16:17, 28 November 2024 (UTC) |
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== "]" listed at ] == |
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The redirect <span class="plainlinks"></span> has been listed at ] to determine whether its use and function meets the ]. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at '''{{slink|Misplaced Pages:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 December 5#The Most Famous Barbadian}}''' until a consensus is reached. <!-- Template:RFDNote --> ] (]) 02:27, 5 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Question about ] == |
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Firstly "2010–11: Loud and Endorsements" - really? The "Other ventures" section claims that she has been signing endorsement deals since 2005 and 2006, so what makes the recent perfume and book so particularly notable? And "2011–present: Talk That Talk and film debut" - just no. As has been discussed , her first film was also in the mid-2000s. ] (]) 22:19, 12 May 2012 (UTC) |
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:And "2007–08: Good Girl Gone Bad and new image" - "new image" is irrelevant when the girls has had more makeovers than I've had bowls of cereal. ] (]) 20:17, 17 May 2012 (UTC) |
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Should the lead of the page say "The Right Excellent Robyn Rihanna Fenty"? I don't know what the typical rules for styles of address like this are. I do know that the ] page uses his title of "Sir", so should we follow that example? ] (]) 02:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== dit request on 30 December 2024 == |
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As is evident, I've started to cleanup the article by making it more concise and focused. Thus far, this has included polishing the "Biography" section, including integration with "Other ventures". I shall next look at the Philanthropy section to see how this can be improved. Per ] (particularly ]) and ], it is important that this page doesn't just become a list of rambling facts about Rihanna's life and career. It is really relevant that she once played a charity gig and raised a few hundred dollars? Not necessarily. Is it worth discussing all of the particular (and often obscure) records that she's broken when these feats are already mentioned in the respective album and single articles? Perhaps not. ] (]) 21:04, 25 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:You can't just start to "polish" the article and removing 50kb of it without notifying single thing of what are you planning to do with Calvin and me (the biggest contributors to the project). The article was built for like 7 years. Some of the information that you removed because of your ] has to be present there. And for the singles successes soon it will be built legacy section cause she really needs one. So what If you can find information on their respective pages? That information shouldn't be available elsewhere. You are taking Misplaced Pages too POV, a fact. — ] ] 00:19, 26 June 2012 (UTC) |
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::I do not need to '''personally''' inform you or other Misplaced Pages users of my edits before I make them because you, or any other users, do not ] this article. I did, however, inform the article talk page before I made the bulk of the changes and explained my reasons for doing so, quoting relevant examples of the content that I disagreed with. Instead of just claiming that I show ], would you like to illustrate specific examples here and ] instead of irrationally reverting? ] (]) 00:26, 26 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::I don't want to personally inform me, but at least talk to the project I guess. How can you just come over the article and remove 50kb and just saying you start to "polish" it and adding some random comments. You could just point more specifically what needs to be changed so that can people (together with you) be aware on what should be worked. I agree that a loads of the article should be cut, but not in a way of removing more than 50kb in 13 edits. — ] ] 00:29, 26 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:::: Such drastic removal of content should be discussed between users prior to it being done. Leaving a message about what you've done and why isn't a discussion. <font face="Arial" size="2em">] (])</font> 00:33, 26 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Again, WikiProjects are an irrelevance per ] and ]. I have every right to make these edits. Regarding the extent of the changes, you're getting too caught up in the numbers. Yes, 50kb has been removed, but what has been "lost"? "Rihanna sang at x Charity concert in 2006" and "Here's a bunch of obscure records that single X broke in the Austrian charts". All content that I removed was either irrelevant and inconsequential or (already) belongs elsewhere. ] (]) 00:35, 26 June 2012 (UTC) |
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:So, I ask again. Which specific changes have you objected to and do you have a policy-lead or consensual reason for them to be upheld? ] (]) 00:36, 26 June 2012 (UTC) |
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Could someone add that she is a "songwriter" in the beginning of the biography? She has writing credits in almost half of her discography and that seems like an appropriate and accurate thing to add. Julioplantain (talk) 07:27, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
In the artistry section under influences it states that during childhood Rihanna use to sing Whitney Houston songs and Houston's song "I Will Always Love You" made her develop a passion for music, but it doesn't state how Whitney Houston influenced her like it states Madonna and Mariah Carey influenced her, it just states that she use to sing Whitney Houston songs I wanted to add that Rihanna was also inspired by Whitney Houston as well and also add that Houston's song "I Will Always Love You" influenced her to do music as with citations. Wikikingeditor (talk) 19:53, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
Should the lead of the page say "The Right Excellent Robyn Rihanna Fenty"? I don't know what the typical rules for styles of address like this are. I do know that the David Attenborough page uses his title of "Sir", so should we follow that example? Di (they-them) (talk) 02:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC)