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| Thank you for quality articles and expansions such as ], for tireless copy-editing, and for "", - let me tell you as gently as I can that you are an ]! | Thank you for quality articles and expansions such as ], for tireless copy-editing, and for "", - let me tell you as gently as I can that you are an ]! | ||
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| :Thanks very much Gerda. You're not such a bad Wikipedian yourself. :-) ] (]) 13:39, 1 November 2012 (UTC) | :Thanks very much Gerda. You're not such a bad Wikipedian yourself. :-) ] (]) 13:39, 1 November 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| ::I like to share, recommended reading ;) --] (]) 14:12, 1 November 2012 (UTC) | ::I like to share, recommended reading ;) --] (]) 14:12, 1 November 2012 (UTC) | ||
| :::I miss the photographer of the gem (who said Peace some hundred times to awesome Wikipedians, did you know?). My Christmas music is on my user, also for you, wish you could listen in reality today and tomorrow, my favourite line: "]" (ban complaining), --] (]) 13:46, 24 December 2012 (UTC) | :::I miss the photographer of the gem (who said Peace some hundred times to awesome Wikipedians, did you know?). My Christmas music is on my user, also for you, wish you could listen in reality today and tomorrow, my favourite line: "]" (ban complaining), --] (]) 13:46, 24 December 2012 (UTC) | ||
| ::::Thanks Gerda. I don't know why it is, but thinking about Christmas music I've always found '' Stille Nacht, heilige Nacht'' to be much more moving than ''Silent Night'', which sounds so prosaic. I wonder if it maybe has something to do with the stories of the First World War Christmas truces. ] (]) 06:21, 25 December 2012 (UTC) | ::::Thanks Gerda. I don't know why it is, but thinking about Christmas music I've always found '' Stille Nacht, heilige Nacht'' to be much more moving than ''Silent Night'', which sounds so prosaic. I wonder if it maybe has something to do with the stories of the First World War Christmas truces. ] (]) 06:21, 25 December 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| :::::Many times, I think, a different language offers the chance to be less prosaic. We sang "Stille Nacht" in church on Christmas Eve (many churches ban it as "kitschig"). A trumpet came in as a surprise in the third stanza, not kitschig ;) This year's was connected to a Second World War siege. Did you see that I decorated my talk with ] today, thinking of two gentlemen who invited me to share its FA honours although I only wrote the supporting articles, for example ], --] (]) 20:51, 25 December 2012 (UTC) | :::::Many times, I think, a different language offers the chance to be less prosaic. We sang "Stille Nacht" in church on Christmas Eve (many churches ban it as "kitschig"). A trumpet came in as a surprise in the third stanza, not kitschig ;) This year's was connected to a Second World War siege. Did you see that I decorated my talk with ] today, thinking of two gentlemen who invited me to share its FA honours although I only wrote the supporting articles, for example ], --] (]) 20:51, 25 December 2012 (UTC) | ||
| New decoration on my talk is "Letting go of the past", - I see so many old stories that I didn't take part in, connected to strong feelings. Things that look ] can be , --] (]) 10:49, 22 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
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| :A very worthy idea Gerda, but I can't see it catching on here. ] (]) 10:58, 22 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| I'm impressed by the progress made with this article. I had not realised you were taking it to FA so quickly, and have rather taken my eye off the details. I do have some concerns, which I thought I would air here rather than at FLC. First, why are you using the 1971 version of "Pevsner" rather than the current (2011) version (Hartwell et al)? I should have thought that FLs would require the latest edition. I have copies of both, and would be happy to "update" any of the relevant citations to the latest version. Actually my "1971" version is the one published by Yale in 2003. I should have thought they would have been identical, but I have my doubts, especially on two of the Pevsner quotations. In the lead you quote "the most elaborate, fantastical and wholeheartedly vulgar display of black-and-white timbering that England has to offer" (and there is no page number in that reference). The 2003 version (p. 255) says it "is the most popular of all English black and white houses, yet as it comes into sight — happily reeling, disorderly, but no offence meant — it seems at least unbelievable, and then a huge joke. This is due to the S range, the gatehouse range, leaning forward in overhangs in all three outer directions"; and this is quoted verbatim in 2011. Then in the Upper Floor subsection you quote Pevsner as saying the plaster depictions are "poor". That is not in the 2003 version; in fact there is no comment on their quality. 2011 says "The figures are fair copies but the texts depart somewhat from the original. The colours were probably a great deal brighter than now.". So has there been some redaction between 1971 and 2003? | |||
| ::If it was we didn't have to ask ;) - Do you know the poet? --] (]) 11:14, 22 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| Other comments re Pevsner, giving ref. nos.: | |||
| ::ps: I was amused to find "precious" in that poem three times --] (]) 11:19, 22 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| *5. 2011 gives much more detail about tree-ring analysis (p. 433) stating that the Hall, screens passage, Parlour and Withdrawing Room were built c. 1504–08. | |||
| *9a. About the H-shaped plan: 2011 states "forming a standard H-shaped plan" (p. 433), and does not use the word "roughly". | |||
| *9b. OK (p. 435) | |||
| *22. OK (p, 433) | |||
| *25. I cannot find this in 2011, so perhaps the 1971 reference should stay. | |||
| *37. Ditto: but this section was written (certainly in 2003) by Alec Clifton-Taylor, rather than by Pevsner and Hubbard. Should his authorship be acknowledged? | |||
| *39. OK, but it notes that the east window is blocked; maybe it would bemore accurate to say this than to say there "was a corresponding window ...". (p. 434) | |||
| :::I'm afraid I don't, no. I have a confession to make though, which is that I feel the same about poetry as I do about opera, musicals and ballet. I find them all pretentious and I pretty much hate them all. ] (]) 11:29, 22 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| Re National Heritage list: | |||
| *Why give so much prominence in the lead to the bridge? It is mentioned but once in the text of the description; and it does not form a separate building — the house and the bridge are part and parcels of the same listing. And it does not say it is in sandstone (that word does not appear in the description). In addition it has been pointed out to me in another context that it was not designated by English Heritage; it was listed in 1952, and EH was not formed until 1983. So perhaps that sentence should read (simply): "Little Moreton Hall is designated by English Heritage as a Grade I listed building". | |||
| ::::Taken. (I respect strong feelings, as said before, and accept that facts don't easily change them.) So next: do you know ] with another story about having been despised? --] (]) 11:51, 22 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| Would you like to have a Further Reading section, starting with "{{cite book | last = de Figueiredo| first = Peter | last2 = Treuherz | first2 = Julian | year = 1988 | title = Cheshire Country Houses | publication-place = Chichester | publisher = Phillimore | pages = 119–122 | isbn = 0-85033-655-4 }}"? --] (]) 13:05, 20 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :::::, with thanks, --] (]) 21:59, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :Thanks for your comments Peter. I'm actually using a 2001 reprint of Pevsner, because that's the only copy I could get from Manchester libraries. If it's significantly different from your 2011 version I'll be glad to accept your offer of help to update whatever's changed. The quote from the lead, "the most elaborate, fantastical and wholeheartedly vulgar display of black-and-white timbering that England has to offer" is actually from the front cover, and not repeated in the text. It's currently attributed to the frontispiece, but I'll change that. I should probably also change the Pevsner publication date to 2001 . | |||
| :::::I mentioned you in ], --] (]) 16:14, 11 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :In my copy, Pevsner (p. 257) says "The roof has two tiers of cusped, concave wind-braces and in the end tympana poor plaster decoration illustrating the Spear of Destiny whose rule is Knowledge and the Wheel of Fortune whose rule is Ignorance." But if "poor" doesn't appear in later editions then we could just drop it. | |||
| ::::::I , with thanks for being a great model, --] (]) 10:36, 31 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :As for the bridge, I must have misread something, as I'd got the impression from somewhere that the house and the bridge were listed separately, but they do appear to be listed together, as you say. I'd like to keep mention of the bridge, as it's not really part of the house IMO; both the Ancient Monument listing and Pastscape say the bridge is made of sandstone, so maybe I should add one of those citations? | |||
| :::::::My promised article became GA (you signed the promise, remember?), pictured on my talk, --] (]) 13:33, 8 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :5. Do you think we need to give more detail about the tree-ring analysis? I think we already make it clear that the H-shaped northern half of the house was built in 1504–08 don't we? | |||
| :*9a. Looking at the early floor plan it was clearly only roughly H-shaped, so I think "roughly" is OK? | |||
| :*25. That a feature of Cheshire's half-timbered houses is jetties hidden behind coving could be attributed to any number of sources, so even if that's not included in your later edition I don't think that's a problem, we could source it elsewhere. | |||
| :*37. OK, but we can be more precise than "Mow Cop" anyway. I've changed Mow Cop to "Tegg's Mill quarry near Macclesfield", but no doubt someone will ask how far away Macclesfield is, so I suppose I'd better check that and add it. | |||
| :*39. I'm not sure, perhaps, as the window is still there behind the panelling. Fell free to change it as you see fit. | |||
| ::::::::Remember (or not) that you were the 291st recipient of my ] prize, and the second one in br'erly style, - I miss you, all mentioned and several others, - gentleness seems to have left with you ;) --] (]) 22:25, 6 December 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :I've no objection to a further reading section; it's a while since I read de Figueiredo, but I don't recall that it adds anything significant? I might pop down to the library later and check. | |||
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| ::::::::: I gave the prize a better name, ]. - I ], again. (Look for Little Moreton Hall.) - Did you know that we now have not only the ] but also ]? - I miss ], --] (]) 07:53, 25 March 2014 (UTC), | |||
| : two years and still missed --] (]) 07:03, 1 November 2014 (UTC) | |||
| :I'd really like if possible to avoid having to cite multiple editions of Pevsner's ''Cheshire'', which I'm sure we could do if your edition has the "vulgar" quotation on the inside front cover. But even if it doesn't, we could probably use the 2001 edition just to source that quotation, as I'd be very loathe to lose it. In short, I'll leave it to you to decide what might usefully be updated/amended based on your 2003/2011 edition, as I trust your judgement completely. Once again, thanks for your help. ] (]) 15:26, 20 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| : ps: "ban complaining" still needed, - you don't miss much ;) --] (]) 07:05, 1 November 2014 (UTC) | |||
| : seven years and missed --] (]) 17:34, 1 November 2018 (UTC) | |||
| ::I think when using Pevsner as a source, it's best to use editions published before his 1983 death. He was not politially correct (in the architectural sense) and in my experience, later editions have been rather sanitised (rather like Enid Blyton) and much of the charm has subsequently been lost. One thing is for certain, with such definite and unreferenced opinions, he would have been banned as a Misplaced Pages editor. Which is rather a pity - we always ban the best ] (]) 18:24, 20 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
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| :::That's a good point. One example of that sanitisation I suppose is the expunging of "poor" when describing the tempera in the Long Gallery. The thing I really, really don't want to lose is that "vulgar" quotation. ] (]) 18:52, 20 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| Thank you for your interest in ]. I recommend to read his website (now not in the box, but in the external links), full of surprises (too bad that it's only in German). Sample "Kaum hat jemand nichts zu sagen, stellt er es auch schon ins Netz, damit möglichst viele nichts erfahren." (As soon as someone has nothing to say he puts it on the web so that many can learn nothing.) --] (]) 21:54, 11 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I've found the "vulgar" quote, and I don't believe it is by Pevsner. It's on the dust cover, with no attribution. Was it written by the publisher? When you compare it with what he actually wrote (quoted above), it really doesn't fit. IMO the evidence is not sufficiently robust to attribute it to Pevsner, no matter what you wish to include, it's not sufficiently reliable. | |||
| :Planyavsky is an interesting case (his article I mean). If the lead were expanded, as it ought to be, I'd have no particular objection to an infobox. My major objection is to those infoboxes that bleed interminably down the page, disrupting everything in their path, or those that simply repeat what's in the first sentence of the lead. Contrary to what some may think I'm agnostic about infoboxes, neither for nor against, but I do believe they need a serious rethink. ] (]) 22:15, 11 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Having said that, I agree that quotations by Pevsner himself should come from the volume(s) he actually wrote, but I do not see why we cannot use the up-to-date volume (as well) for the rest — what's the problem in that? --] (]) 21:27, 20 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| ::Feel free to expand the lead. - I think to see from when to when he held which post is easier to read in the box. (I didn't try to add for what part of his time as cathedral organist he was director of music there.) More generally: numbers to the box, personality in the text. - I am also an agnostic, but - repeating - if someone supplied a box for me I would just say thank you, no discussion. - The next TFA without a box is ], the box is "hidden" in the ], --] (]) 22:32, 11 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::It's on the dust cover of Pevsner's book, and I don't consider it at all likely that it was written by the publisher, Penguin Books. How is attributing it to the dust cover any different from attributing it to page N of the book itself? Would Pevsner not have objected to its inclusion if that were not indeed his opinion? ] (]) 23:05, 20 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :*As someone who has read Pevsner like others read Agatha Christie, I have no doubt at all that he used and wrote the word ‘vulgar’ – concerning Little Moreton, he may have meant in tongue-in-cheek, but he was a terrible old architectural snob who dislike ostentation and architectural overstatement. I just flicked through a couple of his 1960s volumes to try and find an example of him using ‘vulgar’, but as is always the way then one’s in a hurry, I couldn’t find one; however, in three minutes, I found that ] is ‘excruciating’ and Holy Trinity, ], is a “baffling’ early example of Norman revival architecture.” Reading through his volumes published over the years, it’s quite obvious that he mellowed with age or possibly was censored by his publishers. I know I have read of a house being described as ‘vile’which it probably is, but it's not today considered professional to say it. ‘Vulgar’ would not have been put on a fly-leaf if he didn’t say it. ] (]) 09:20, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :::I hear all the arguments about accessibility, and I agree with many of them, but not to the point of compromising the basic article layout. As Giano said, we have to be in somebody's comfort zone, else we're in nobody's comfort zone. The way to handle devices with different form factors and so on is to offer different interfaces, not to compromise the base interface. This is all just so basic I really can't understand what the objections are. Anyway, I'll have a go at expanding the lead, and you can see what you think. If you don't like it then you know what you can do, revert it. :-) | |||
| I hate to disagree with experts, but on this occasion I must. The word "vulgar" does not appear on a flyleaf (according to Wiktionary that's a blank sheet within a book) but on the dust cover; ie it is not an integral part of the book. The dust cover, in addition to the paragraph containing the word "vulgar", also contains on the front flap a paragraph describing the series of books as "These distinguished books appear regularly in superbly illustrated new editions" (written by Pevsner?) followed by three quotes from critics (selected by Pevsner?). On the back flap are potted biographies of Pevsner himself and Hubbard, followed by details of the recently published volumes, and details of their financing (written also by Pevsner?). I know nothing about publishing, but I have read comments by authors who have been very upset by the contents of the dust covers provided by the publishers — so obviously they have not written or composed these themselves. | |||
| :::BTW, there's an article on the BBC's web site today about how Germans are coming to love us Brits, even to the point of preferring tea to coffee. Have you seen it? ] (]) 22:48, 11 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| I agree with Giano that Pevsner used terms like "vulgar" (and worse) in his descriptions; but this is not in a description, and not even in the body of the text. What he says in the text (quoted above) does not IMO sit logically or reasonably with the dust cover. According to Pevsner's biographer Susie Harries, he compiled the Cheshire volume late in his career when he was in his late 60s, not the best of health, and getting rather fed-up with his project to complete all the counties, but determined to do so. So, yes he was rushed; so much so that he did not write all the text in these later volumes himself. He estimated himself that 20% of the Cheshire volume was written by Hubbard (his driver and collaborator) (Harries, p. 668). That is not directly the point; what is the point is that I am sure he did not have time to bother with dust covers (which are often disposed of anyway), and would leave that side of the production completely to the publishers — who would write a blurb to attract purchasers rather than to give reliable information. Shall we take this discussion to FLC? --] (]) 10:51, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :::Do you see what I mean now? With a proper lead the infobox doesn't bleed into the article. ] (]) 23:41, 11 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :I certainly can't deny the possibility that the text wasn't written by or even approved of by Pevsner, which seems to leave us with two possibilities:either we lose the quotation or we lose the attribution to Pevsner. Pevsner, if it really was he who wrote that quoted text, is by no means alone among architectural historians in considering certain aspects of Little Moreton Hall's architecture to be vulgar; the decorative studwork seems to come in for quite a bit of criticism for instance. What's important to me is that we get the balance right, and don't give the impression that Little Moreton Hall is universally admired by all architectural historians. For FA I don't think that simply attributing the quotation to an anonymous author writing for a dust cover would be acceptable, therefore what I'm going to do is to remove the quotation for now and work on something later this evening to replace it. ] (]) 17:39, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :PS. Peter, please go ahead and make whatever amendments you think are appropriate based on your later editions; now that the quotation is gone, and the description of the tempera in the Chapel as "poor", there will quite probably no longer be any need to use the 2001 edition as a source. ] (]) 17:48, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| ::Just a quick response, as I have some "real" matters to deal with this evening. I have no problem with "vulgar", or anything like it, provided it is properly sourced. So if you find something reliable elsewhere, fine by me. I will try to make some amendments as you suggest tomorrow. Meanwhile, for your interest, Hartwell et al (the current "Pevsner") say "Cheshire is famous for its timber-framed houses, of which Little Moreton Hall and Bramall Hall rank with the finest examples in the country" (p. 23) and, under the section on Bramall Hall, it states it (Bramall) is "One of the four best timber-framed mansions of England. The others are Little Moreton Hall, Speke Hall in SW Lancashire, and Rufford Old Hall in N Lancashire" (p. 173). --] (]) 19:05, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :::That's definitely worth adding. I'll stick it in now/imminently. While looking around for an alternative "vulgar" quotation I came across a few other little bits and pieces that might be worth adding as well. There used to be something in the article claiming that the timber frame wouldn't originally have been painted black, nor the infill white, and that that style of decoration we take for granted today is relatively recent, but the source didn't seem reliable and as I couldn't at the time find an alternative I removed it. But I think I've found one now. ] (]) 19:19, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Yes, I understand that is correct, but I don't have a source. I've long understood from those who know better, that the Cheshire vernacular is actually brown and cream. There's a house in Frodsham that's been restored in this fashion, and it looks really good. Cheers. --] (]) 19:31, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I'll see what I can add on that later, but black and white definitely doesn't seem to have been how the Tudors would have seen the house; from what I've found so far it might actually have been very colourful. I had a look at the other three houses you mentioned. Bramall Hall is an FA and looks pretty good, but Speke Hall and Rufford Old Hall could do with some work. Might be a worthwhile project to get both of those up to at least GA. ] (]) 20:11, 21 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| I've updated the refs, and hope all is well with those. The only "old" Pevsner link remaining is the one saying "the overhanging jetties are hidden by coving" (Ref 25), which I cannot find in the current volume. I think you said you have other sources for that; if you were to use one of these, the "old" Pevsner could be deleted completely (unless you are romantic about keeping it!). IRO Speke Hall and Rufford Old Hall, I completely agree — so much to do! --] (]) 11:17, 22 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :That's great Peter, thanks very much. No. I've got no romantic attachment to the old Pevsner, so I'll try and dig out a new source for the coving. ] (]) 15:19, 22 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :... actually I think we'll have to keep the old Pevsner & Hubbard anyway, as note b explicitly refers to it as one of the older sources that incorrectly attributes the earliest parts of the house to 1450. ] (]) 15:51, 22 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Thank you for the lead! (I hope it is ok with you that I removed "also", twice.) - For the box, you will watch the "heart of the matter". I resisted the temptation to mention "homework", also, or likewise ;) --] (]) 09:21, 12 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::ps: (quoting you) ] --] (]) 11:43, 12 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Looking at your exquisite wording in that lead (and elsewhere), please have a look at another with insufficient lead (and more), ], - I came late to the article, --] (]) 18:00, 12 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :No, of course not. I just saw from reading through the FAC again that you'd managed to dig up some more material on the family. I've been wrestling with the SVG problem that forced me to upload the png floor plans you were complaining about the fuzziness of, and I have to admit that the svg versions I've just uploaded do look significantly crisper at thumbnail size. ] (]) 21:38, 29 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
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::::Thanks for picking it up, looks much better already. Did you know that he sang ] for ]? --] (]) 23:22, 13 March 2013 (UTC) | ||
| :::::I haven't finished yet Gerda, I'll be back tomorrow to add a little more. I'm always a little puzzled as to why it is that many editors seem to find it so difficult to write leads, when I think it's like falling off a log. Is it perhaps something to do with the way that our education systems have changed? I recall sitting in primary school classes listening to the teacher read a story and then asking us to summarise it in a paragraph or two. Wasn't so hard then and it isn't so hard now. What do you think? ] (]) 23:33, 13 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::BTW Gerda, I'm no musician. I just like hammering away on the keyboard of my Yamaha concert-sized synthesiser until my ears bleed. ] (]) 23:44, 13 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::take up that lead again, please, up to the MET. - Looking at the standard bios of singers, not much of a lead seems wanted. - I would like to expand ], would you help me? --] (]) 00:19, 15 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::I found help for that lead. - Did you get to reading: "A review describes his perfect timing in the recitatives, his pronounced declamation, technically perfect interpretation and phrasing of the arias, and his devotion to Handel's music and Jennens's text. The Air "]" was regarded as the center of the concert." - I noticed only today that you copy-edited my articles at least since 2011, and I never thanked you. Thank you! --] (]) 22:44, 16 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
| What I said above rather belongs in this context: I learned from you , --] (]) 16:22, 11 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::Ok, added some stuff about family & land extent. Feel free (of course) to trim & reorder (it overlaps with the house construction, so William II gets introduced before he's defined). Angus-Butterworth also has a lot more on the family that might be marginally relevant, including when it acquired the lordship of the manor, and a marriage with the Brereton family (apparently there are Brereton arms in the house). Cheers, ] <small>(])</small> 00:21, 30 November 2012 (UTC) | |||
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], believe it or not, "contentious area", believe it or not ... - Did you know he composed ]? --] (]) 22:23, 14 September 2013 (UTC) | ||
| :::::Deck the featured Hall, precious ;) --] (]) 13:35, 18 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Gosh, that seemed like hard work, but you made it at last! Thanks from the Cheshire Wikiproject for all you have done to raise the status of this most important building. A nice Christmas gift. Best wishes and many. many thanks. --] (]) 16:48, 18 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Thanks. At one point I thought it would go on forever. I'll have to take a look through the Cheshire articles and see if there's anything else I could maybe improve a little. I think it'll be a while before I tackle another house though. ] (]) 21:00, 21 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :*Nice work, conrtatulations. Looked like an easy subject for FA, but wirh so little out there, it was far from easy. ] (]) 17:44, 18 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| :*:It was certainly quite a bit more work than I'd anticipated. Still it's done now, on to something else. ] (]) 21:00, 21 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| == |
==MOS:IMAGES== | ||
| I have opened a formal RfC at ] on the deprecation of left-aligned images under sub-headings,an issue on which you commented in previous discussion there. ] (]) 09:52, 26 January 2014 (UTC) | |||
| Did you know that I have a history of reverting infoboxes? I , ] ;) --] (]) 22:39, 11 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :I have no stomach for an infobox battle. But Giano didn't want one, and it was he who made it invisible. I still regard the article as his, so I'd rather it was gone than made visible again. There was almost nothing in it anyway. ] (]) 23:16, 11 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::I don't like infobox battles. Just yesterday one was reverted that I added to an article I created ;) discussion on ]. I have JSB and Wagner in sandboxes, not ready for battle. - So here we are, you and I respect the wish of another editor, in mutual respect ;) --] (]) 08:39, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::ps: you saw that one of our respected editors designed the user page for the other? --] (]) 12:11, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::It's not difficult to find articles visually destroyed by the use of infoboxes, with great slabs of stuff down the right-hand side of the screen displacing everything in their path and forcing text to be squeezed between images on the left and infobox on the right. The conflation of infoboxes and metadata is dishonesty pure and simple, and against the backdrop of the recent QRpedia scandal looks decidedly fishy. In this specific case the infobox contained so little information at the expense of greatly reducing the size of the lead image as to be bordering on vandalism IMO. I have never added an infobox nor have I ever removed one; I consider that to be a matter for the judgement of the article's authors, not some man on a mission. ] (]) 17:33, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I have added several, to all ] since December for example, de/fr/it/nn all have them. - Space: they reduce white space next to the TOC. I have only few pics on the left. Example: ]. - "The conflation of infoboxes and metadata is dishonesty pure and simple", sorry, that phrase is not simple enough for me. - You know that the pic size can be adjusted, right? - As to "invisible", I don't know whom to believe, very conflicting statements, and I don't have the time to find out myself ;) --] (]) 18:21, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::The image in an infobox can't be resized without also resizing the infobox, which simply makes a bad situation worse. And put simply there is absolutely no good reason to link the metadata and infobox issues except dishonesty leading to a potential commercial gain, as with the QRpedia scandal that Pigsonthewing was also involved in. ] (]) 19:09, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Thanks for explaining, understood a bit more, --] (]) 19:15, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::How do you like ]? I didn't add the box, but it's my pic ;) --] (]) 09:22, 14 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::I think that the infobox, as is often the case, takes up too much screen real estate and distorts the layout of the article. The more I think about it the more I think that all infoboxes should be hived off to some kind of Micropedia along with their associated leads, linked to the Misplaced Pages article uncluttered by any infoboxes. That could then serve as a useful summary and index of Misplaced Pages, and anyone who wants to see the summary infobox could click on a link to the Micropedia entry. Nice picture BTW. ] (]) 14:24, 14 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::For some things, such as gems (e.g. ]) and people such as Presidents (]) they make sense as a quick summary. That said, I also have seen infobox overkill in some geography articles, where there could be multiple infoboxes... ]<sup>]</sup> 16:57, 14 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| *There's nothing to understand here at all Ms Arednt - you may leave us. Now, dear Signor Pondervaro; am I right in thinking that you are one of the Palermo Pondevaros? If so, that makes you cousin to dearest Giacomo, and of course...a beloved nephew of mine. I do feel we may be very close - do call me aunt ] (]) 20:18, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| *:I'm afraid not, I'm one of the Ponderevos of Wimblehurst. ] (]) 23:42, 12 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| *::That snarky remark at Gerda, "Lady," was not very ladylike. It's George's talk page, he can decide who stays and who goes. Gerda is making a good faith inquiry and having a good faith discussion. You weren't cute or funny here, if that happened to be your intent. ]<sup>]</sup> 16:57, 14 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == Old news == | |||
| == Main page appearance: William the Conqueror == | |||
| Hi George--thanks for . I'm somewhat surprised, though, that you let all that sophomoric chit-chat stand. If you ever unretire, please don't be afraid to hang a pair of brass balls from your truck. Best, ] (]) 14:19, 13 June 2014 (UTC) | |||
| This is a note to let the main editors of ] know that the article will be appearing as ] on December 25, 2012. You can view the TFA blurb at ]. If you prefer that the article appear as TFA on a different date, or not at all, please ask featured article director {{user|Raul654}} or his delegates {{user|Dabomb87}}, {{user|Gimmetoo}}, and {{user|Bencherlite}}, or start a discussion at ]. If the previous blurb needs tweaking, you might change it—following the instructions at ]. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page. The blurb as it stands now is below: | |||
| == Precious anniversary == | |||
| <blockquote> | |||
| {{User QAIbox/auto|years=Eight}} | |||
| <div style="float: left; margin: 0.5em 0.9em 0.4em 0;">]</div> | |||
| miss you, the kind one --] (]) 07:49, 1 November 2020 (UTC) | |||
| ''']''' ('']'' 1028 – 1087) was the first ] ]. He had been ] since 1035, although his ] status and youth caused him difficulties and he did not secure his hold over the Duchy until about 1060. In the 1050s and early 1060s William became a contender for the English throne, then held by his childless relative ]. Other potential claimants included the powerful English earl ], who Edward named as the next king on his deathbed in January 1066. William argued that Edward had previously promised him the throne, and that Harold had sworn to support William's claim. William ] in September 1066, defeating Harold at the ], and was crowned on Christmas Day 1066. Several unsuccessful rebellions followed, but by 1075 William's hold on England was mostly secure. William's final years were marked by difficulties in his continental domains, troubles with his eldest son, and threatened invasions of England by the ]. In 1086 he ordered the compilation of the '']'', listing all the landholders in England and their holdings. He died in September 1087 on campaign in northern France, and was buried in ]. (]) | |||
| </blockquote> | |||
| ] (]) 23:01, 8 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| == Thanks == | |||
| Thanks for your help with ] which eventually made it to FL. Cumbria next! --] (]) 15:00, 15 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| == Seasons greetings... == | |||
| {| style="border:2px ; background-color: #90ee90;" | |||
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| |style="font-size: x-large; padding: 2; vertical-align: left; height: 1.1em;" | '''Happy Holidays''' | |||
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| |style="vertical-align: middle; border-top: 1px solid gray;" | Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday Season, from the horse and bishop person. May the year ahead be productive and troll-free. ] - ] 17:25, 21 December 2011 (UTC) | |||
| |} | |||
| Thanks Ealdgyth. Troll-free sounds good. ] (]) 06:16, 25 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| == Season's greetings == | |||
| {| style="background-color: #fdffe7; border: 1px solid #fceb92;" | |||
| |rowspan="2" style="vertical-align: middle; padding: 5px;" | ] | |||
| |style="font-size: x-large; padding: 3px 3px 0 3px; height: 1.5em;" | '''Best wishes at Christmas time!''' | |||
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| |style="vertical-align: middle; padding: 3px;" | Happy holidays! -- ] (]) 06:26, 25 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
| |} | |||
| == Little Moreton Hall == | |||
| Just to let you know that I've picked this for ]. Hope this is OK. If you want to tweak the blurb before it appears on the main page, please do. Congratulations on a lovely article! Regards, ]] 11:49, 3 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :Nice to see a bit of ] come true ;) --] (]) 12:30, 3 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :What a pleasant surprise! ] (]) 16:43, 3 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::Two TFAs in a few weeks, extra precious! --] (]) 15:28, 12 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::fr, it, tempted to do a German stub --] (]) 00:01, 13 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::I have a little problem to change the coordinates to the format the German infobox wants, --] (]) 19:14, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::What format does it want? ] (]) 20:49, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::example ], ] tells me nothing (no music), takes to two others, --] (]) 22:33, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I see. If you click on the coordinates you'll get them in different formats. The one you want (I think) is |BREITENGRAD=53/7/38/N, |LÄNGENGRAD=2/15/6/W. ] (]) 22:50, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::That looks good, but I get a message of a missing parameter, probably "REGION-ISO=", - any idea? --] (]) 23:05, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Can you give me a link to the article? I worked for Siemens for many years, so I had to be able to read a little German. The ISO code for the UK is GBR. ] (]) 23:12, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::Link? you go to it and then "deutsch" ;) --] (]) 23:21, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::"swallowed" - something seems wrong with that ISO but not wrong enough to prevent the coords from showing - as before ;) --] (]) 23:27, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::All seems fine now. Anything else you'd like me to help with on the German Misplaced Pages? ] (]) 23:34, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::even found the ISO: GB-CHW, and a few more cats ;) --] (]) 00:05, 19 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| === Little Moreton Hall de === | |||
| New day: thanks for the formatting! I changed it to cite web, otherwise you should say "abgerufen" for "retrieved", the template does the translation for you ;) - The template does not change the date format, so when going to de, you have to add the dots and change names of months. Going to de: you are welcome! Others did it before, ]? If you know of an article you would like to see in German, have it ] to your userspace, do what you can there (translation,selection of sections), ping me by leaving a note on your de-user, I will do what I can in translation. When you are happy I move to article space. If you wrote the English article yourself, you can skip the import. I see plenty of red links in the ] ;) --] (]) 07:54, 19 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == Another FLC == | |||
| Happy New Year! I feel it's time to try to get ] to FL status, and wonder if you would cast your eye over it, improve the text, and advise on anything else that might be necessary. Cheers. --] (]) 11:39, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :Happy New Year to you as well. Copyedit done. The only outstanding problem I can see is that the format of refs #6 and #7 are slightly different from the rest: "Hyde & Pevsner 2010" vs. "Hyde & Pevsner (2010)", caused by using the {{tl|Harvnb}} template for those two as opposed to the {{tl|sfnp}} template used for all the other citations. The best way I've seen of handling what I think it is you want to do, attribute a section of a book, is to treat McMillan, say, just like any other author, with a full {{tl|citation}} entry in the Bibliography describing the name of the section he wrote in the |contribution parameter and the page range of that section in the |pages parameter. I've done that for ref #6 to show you what I mean. ] (]) 21:51, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::Thanks again for your ultra-fast attention. I'd no idea how to fix the references — and it works (of course). All done now, so I'll nominate it and see if it attracts any interest. --] (]) 11:55, 6 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == Thanks and a ping == | |||
| Thank you for your work cleaning up United States v. Jackalow. I did notice that the references to the New York Times are now in a mixed format, several in smallcaps and others in the citenews template. I passed the article for references, both forms can be viewed as correct and everything else looks like it was fixed. However, it is a bit inconsistent and probably should be cleaned up before I give the article an overall pass. So, will you still be cleaning up the remaining NYT cites so they are all consistent with one another? Just checking... Also, I dove in and reworded one particularly awkward section of the article, I do not think I altered the meaning of anything, but as I am the GA reviewer, I would be more comfortable if you checked my edits and fixed anything I may have done improperly. I see some need to fix a few other small errors in the article, (some comma problems and run0on sentences, mostly) but didn't want to get too involved with it directly. ]<sup>]</sup> 20:41, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :Yeah, I was still working on that, but I will finish the job, promise. I haven't really looked at the article overall yet, but I'll do that when I've finished with the citations. I do understand your reluctance to dive into the article too deeply, so I'll do what I can. Like you, I think it's too good to fail. ] (]) 20:47, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::And the lead editor has apparently bailed from WP, hasn't edited since November. Thanks for stepping up. ]<sup>]</sup> 23:34, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::I came across the article completely by chance, by clicking on the Random article option as is my habit, and then on investigating the GA review I saw your question on the GA talk page and decided to try and help out. It's my impression that many, if not most, of Misplaced Pages's 3000 or so active editors are only interested in creating articles, not in improving existing articles, as there's no glory in that, just hard graft. Which I think is a shame, but not anything I can change except by example. ] (]) 23:47, 18 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I've been stalking Montana's edits ;P ! Hi George; I'm hoping, at some point, to get all the British Mountain and Moorland native pony breeds articles up to at least GA standard, ideally (longer-term) FA standard, with the aim of getting a featured topic kinda thing going. (the ] article was a TFA the other day; that's the first one I've got to FA level.) If you could pass an eye over any / all of them to tighten up the prose, improve, etc. then I'd be incredibly grateful, as Real Life issues have me a bit short of time and energy for article improvement just at the minute. ] (]) 11:17, 19 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::The list is ]. Perhaps a place to start is ], for obvious reasons (high traffic article that currently is pretty marginal). However, the less-known breeds get less traffic and are perhaps easier, as there are relatively few sources (they can easily get to GA, but probably will always lack comprehensiveness of material for FA). Other than Pesky, User:Dana boomer has sort of been singlehandedly taking stuff to GA, most recently ], and I'm sure she would love some more hands on deck. Dana, Pesky and I are willing to take point on the equestrian details if someone else wants to dive in and write! Let us know, we can shoot you some decent WP:RS links via Google Books, etc... ]<sup>]</sup> 20:12, 21 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::I won't be doing more than a bit of copyediting to help out Montanabw; horses aren't really my thing. ] (]) 20:57, 21 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::... having said that, I've done some work on ] this evening, more to come tomorrow. I think that with a bit more tidying up that would make a very plausible GA candidate. How are you on early British childrens' TV programmes? I could do with some help with '']'' for instance, which is set in Kansas, so that ought to be bread and butter for you. ;-) ] (]) 01:38, 22 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::Will peek at the TV show, I made one tweak on the Exmoor article, you may want to redo the ref links (I kind of suck at that). But I think all the sources were intended as footnotes, as I think there was a whine about the accuracy at one point and a need to dogpile the data occurred, but ask Pesky. ]<sup>]</sup> 01:31, 24 January 2013 (UTC) '''Follow up''' Peeked at FFF and tweaked. Hope it helped. ]<sup>]</sup> 18:03, 24 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::That looks great, thanks. ] (]) 18:13, 24 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::... and I also took a look at Dana's ] you mentioned. What a GA nomination that was, quite extraordinary. Does that kind of thing often happen at GAN? ] (]) 02:16, 22 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::When it involves me arguing with a soon-to-be-blocked troll about a horse article, yes (check out the GA for horse, just as an example). I sincerely believe that Murphy's Law governs the known universe. Or at least WikiProject Equine. ]<sup>]</sup> 01:23, 24 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == PONY! == | |||
| <div style="margin: auto; max-width: 60em; {{box-shadow|8px|8px|12px|rgba( 0, 0, 0, 0.7 )}} {{border-radius|1em}} border: 2px solid #696969; margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0.5em 1em 1em; background-color: #F0FFF0; color: black;" class="ui-helper-clearfix"> | |||
| <div> | |||
| <div style="float: right; margin-left: 1em; background-color: #ddd; border: 4px solid #ddd; {{box-shadow|0.1em|0.1em|0.5em|rgba(0,0,0,0.75)}} {{border-radius|0.5em}}">]</div> | |||
| <span style="font-size: 200%;">'''Pony!'''</span><br /> | |||
| Congratulations! For helping with British Isles pony breed articles, you have received a ]! Ponies are cute, intelligent, cuddly, friendly (most of the time, though with notable exceptions), promote good will, encourage patience, and enjoy carrots. Treat your pony with respect and he will be your faithful friend! ]<sup>]</sup> 01:23, 24 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| </div></div> | |||
| == Your comments at the Qeshm FAC == | |||
| George, I think we've addressed the last batch of suggestions. Just wanted to let you know. ''']'''] 17:00, 25 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :I think I've struck my oppose now haven't I? Good luck with the rest of the review. ] (]) 19:49, 1 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == ] == | |||
| Hello George: I saw one of your edits go by on Recent changes and couldn't resist looking at it; I don't know this album but Amazon will soon remedy that. As you can see I also couldn't resist messing with it, and I did see that you use that referencing style I'm not familiar with. Now, I never know if that format calls for articles to be listed separately or not, so I left them with the regular templates in hopes of your not minding reworking if this isn't right. I found a few tidbits through ProQuest, nothing much exciting. Looking through the archives of Jazziz I saw that it's the fave album of a bunch of musicians, esp. guitar players (I saw Mike Stern and Andy Summers) but I don't know if that is worthwhile mentioning so I didn't. Unfortunately my databases do not index ''Down Beat'', and that's a shame. Thank you, and my apologies if I indeed messed up your formatting, ] (]) 18:20, 1 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :I came across the article just by clicking on the Random article button, and it seemed like one that could do with a bit of TLC. What is it about my referencing style you find opaque? On articles where I have a free choice I only actually use three templates: {{tl|citation}}, {{tl|sfnp}}, and {{tl|r}}. This article's citation style was inconsistent, but I've updated it to conform to what seems to be your preferred style, using the {{tl|cite}} templates, as you're more likely than me to continue working on the article. BTW, the |accessdate parameter is only used if you're providing a web address, irrelevant otherwise and thus ignored by the template. ] (]) 19:48, 1 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::Sorry, you clearly know much more than I ever will: I use the citation templates that I can pull down via some (Twinkle?) menu. I've seen articles with the sfn style that have a bibliography for books and a parenthetic reference pointing there, and "regular" footnotes with the entire reference in it for articles and websites. I thought maybe that's what you were going for but wasn't sure, hence my apology. (That accessdate field comes automotically; I'll make sure to leave it blank next time if there is no URL.) I just looked at the Template:R page and that goes right over my head. My curiosity was piqued but my involvement probably short-lived since I don't have a jazz library and, as I said, no access to the relevant publications. Please don't let anything conform to my "preference"--it's my preferred method only by default. Thanks for cleaning it up, ] (]) 20:36, 1 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::I learned what little I know about citations by being picked up by the late Jack Merridew/Br'er Rabbit while I was trying to do a bit with '']'' for doing it "wrong". I took a bit of convincing, but I'm a convert now. ] (]) 20:52, 1 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Uncle G has been trying to teach me things, apparently, but not with much success I'm afraid. It would be a blast if it turned out that G ''was'' Merridew. Anyway, the book template has this handy button: paste in the URL (or the ISBN) and it's filled in automatically--which is probably one reason I prefer this (semi-automated pull-down) method. I'm going to look at those pages you linked again. Thank you, ] (]) 20:59, 1 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| *I got the CD in yesterday: it is ''really'' that good. ] (]) 14:00, 10 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == Brown == | |||
| I think you may be interested to know that ] is officially up for FA. Just an FYI. ]<sup>]</sup> 00:48, 5 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :Good luck with that. Let me me know if there's anything I can do to help. ] (]) 02:46, 5 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::Maybe just watchlist the review and if there is a need to explain why something needs to be done a certain way (to me or to a reviewer), point to some useful links. I have respect for your views on editing. ]<sup>]</sup> 21:30, 6 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::As you may have seen, I've been bold and tweaked your inflation calculations. For one thing they were far too misleadingly "precise", and for another I'm pretty certain that CPI/RPI isn't appropriate in cases like this one. ] (]) 16:13, 7 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::::No problem with bold, the point was the perception that Blunt was selling at fire sale prices, however we get there. ]<sup>]</sup> 23:42, 7 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == Commentary on edits == | |||
| Hello, my fellow George, | |||
| I noted your edits on ]. I am not writing to complain. Instead, I thought I would point out a couple of details that may (or may not be) be peculiar to my self-chosen niche in WP. No complaints, here–just some tips. | |||
| * ] with a single 's' is a German airplane builder. Honest. | |||
| *:I never doubted that it was. What I changed was this sentence: "He brought his '''Abatros''' fighter with him from Jasta 18 ...". ] (]) 20:32, 8 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| * I list both 10 and 13 digit ISBNs so that either number can be used to retrieve biblio info. I intend to do so until I have indisputable proof that the migration to 13 digits is complete. In this case, you may be a bit over-tidy. | |||
| *:I think that's pointless, but it's your choice of course. Bumming around as I tend to do I not infrequently also see ISBNs give for both hardback and paperback versions, which I think is even more pointless. But as I say, it's your choice. ] (]) 20:32, 8 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| * Osprey Publishing books are often credited to differing authors, depending on whether you refer to Amazon or to Google Advanced Book Search for biblio info. The two sites often disagree with one another when it comes to authorship of its World War I aviation books; the most common difference is crediting Harry Dempsey as an author instead of an illustrator. | |||
| *:I simply went by what the front cover of the book says is the author. ] (]) 20:32, 8 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| * And I do note an error when the article says Strähle flew a plane bearing ]'s markings. Berthold and Strähle's planes shared common background markings, as was usual in German jastas. However, each pilot's plane additionally also had distinctive personal markings. | |||
| *:The article could obviously do with quite a bit more work in several areas. ] (]) 20:32, 8 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| Hope these tips seem helpful. | |||
| ] (]) 17:10, 8 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :The citations are still a bit unsightly with their raw URLs; any objection to me trying to tidy them up a bit? ] (]) 20:32, 8 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| == I wonder why == | |||
| I bother with this featured stuff. --] (]) 09:46, 9 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :So do I Peter, so do I. ;-) After my own Little Moreton Hall marathon it may well be a while before I try again, doesn't seem worth the hassle really, for a few marginal improvements and an inordinate amount of nit-picking. ] (]) 14:41, 9 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::I suppose vanity may have something to do with it. Although in my naivety I suppose I think I am supporting the various Wikiprojects. --] (]) 14:51, 9 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::All very worthy, but not so good for your blood pressure. ] (]) 15:03, 9 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| To avoid further drama involving 3rr accusations, may be moving ] to a personal sandbox and making edits there would be best? You can always restrict editing of it by making a suitable announcement on the talk page? (I know its not ideal, but it may help stop a band of editors who have seemingly emerged from nowhere changing back to Mabbett's infobox.) ] ] 18:22, 15 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :I'd rather stick pins in my eyes than let Mabbett and his supporters win, and I suspect that Giano feels the same. If there's a rational argument in favour of visible infoboxes I've yet to see it. ] (]) 18:27, 15 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| ::It was just a thought to allow the tweaks to be done without constantly having to deal with an apparent tag-team of editors who revert everything without any discussion. ] ] 18:38, 15 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::I'll just have to take my chances with Mabbett and his tag team. Have you ever seen him answer a question? ] (]) 19:05, 15 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Giano feels the same! <small><span style="border:1px solid blue;padding:1px;">]</span></small> 19:50, 15 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
| {{od}}Practice tip: May not work for everyone, but I've found that ever since I added that wkikstress thermometer to my talk page, it has had the paradoxical effect of keeping me a bit saner -- I up the stress level BEFORE I go totally nuts (though usually AFTER I've said somehthing bitey and snarky that will have people whining at me for the following week, so it's not perfect). ]<sup>]</sup> 00:08, 18 February 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Thank you for quality articles and expansions such as There was an Old Woman Who Lived in a Shoe, for tireless copy-editing, and for "it's always good to learn something new", - let me tell you as gently as I can that you are an awesome Wikipedian!
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:05, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks very much Gerda. You're not such a bad Wikipedian yourself. :-) George Ponderevo (talk) 13:39, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
- I like to share, recommended reading ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:12, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
- I miss the photographer of the gem (who said Peace some hundred times to awesome Wikipedians, did you know?). My Christmas music is on my user, also for you, wish you could listen in reality today and tomorrow, my favourite line: "verbannet die Klage" (ban complaining), --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:46, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks Gerda. I don't know why it is, but thinking about Christmas music I've always found Stille Nacht, heilige Nacht to be much more moving than Silent Night, which sounds so prosaic. I wonder if it maybe has something to do with the stories of the First World War Christmas truces. George Ponderevo (talk) 06:21, 25 December 2012 (UTC)
- Many times, I think, a different language offers the chance to be less prosaic. We sang "Stille Nacht" in church on Christmas Eve (many churches ban it as "kitschig"). A trumpet came in as a surprise in the third stanza, not kitschig ;) This year's Peace music was connected to a Second World War siege. Did you see that I decorated my talk with Messiah today, thinking of two gentlemen who invited me to share its FA honours although I only wrote the supporting articles, for example Messiah Part I, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:51, 25 December 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks Gerda. I don't know why it is, but thinking about Christmas music I've always found Stille Nacht, heilige Nacht to be much more moving than Silent Night, which sounds so prosaic. I wonder if it maybe has something to do with the stories of the First World War Christmas truces. George Ponderevo (talk) 06:21, 25 December 2012 (UTC)
- I miss the photographer of the gem (who said Peace some hundred times to awesome Wikipedians, did you know?). My Christmas music is on my user, also for you, wish you could listen in reality today and tomorrow, my favourite line: "verbannet die Klage" (ban complaining), --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:46, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
New decoration on my talk is "Letting go of the past", - I see so many old stories that I didn't take part in, connected to strong feelings. Things that look complicated and loaded with history can be so simple, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:49, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
- A very worthy idea Gerda, but I can't see it catching on here. George Ponderevo (talk) 10:58, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
- If it was we didn't have to ask ;) - Do you know the poet? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:14, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
- ps: I was amused to find "precious" in that poem three times --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:19, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
- I'm afraid I don't, no. I have a confession to make though, which is that I feel the same about poetry as I do about opera, musicals and ballet. I find them all pretentious and I pretty much hate them all. George Ponderevo (talk) 11:29, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
- Taken. (I respect strong feelings, as said before, and accept that facts don't easily change them.) So next: do you know the editor with another story about having been despised? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:51, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
- Thinking of you, with thanks, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:59, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
- I mentioned you here in WP:Great Dismal Swamp, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:14, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
- I mentioned you again, with thanks for being a great model, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:36, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- My promised article became GA (you signed the promise, remember?), pictured on my talk, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:33, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
- Remember (or not) that you were the 291st recipient of my PumpkinSky prize, and the second one in br'erly style, - I miss you, all mentioned and several others, - gentleness seems to have left with you ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:25, 6 December 2013 (UTC)
- I gave the prize a better name, Project Quality Article Improvement/PumpkinSky Prize. - I mentioned you, again. (Look for Little Moreton Hall.) - Did you know that we now have not only the Great Dismal Swamp but also Ethics of Dissensus? - I miss the concealed you, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:53, 25 March 2014 (UTC),
- two years and still missed --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:03, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
- ps: "ban complaining" still needed, - you don't miss much ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:05, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
- seven years and missed --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:34, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
Planyavsky
Thank you for your interest in the article. I recommend to read his website (now not in the box, but in the external links), full of surprises (too bad that it's only in German). Sample "Kaum hat jemand nichts zu sagen, stellt er es auch schon ins Netz, damit möglichst viele nichts erfahren." (As soon as someone has nothing to say he puts it on the web so that many can learn nothing.) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:54, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
- Planyavsky is an interesting case (his article I mean). If the lead were expanded, as it ought to be, I'd have no particular objection to an infobox. My major objection is to those infoboxes that bleed interminably down the page, disrupting everything in their path, or those that simply repeat what's in the first sentence of the lead. Contrary to what some may think I'm agnostic about infoboxes, neither for nor against, but I do believe they need a serious rethink. George Ponderevo (talk) 22:15, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
- Feel free to expand the lead. - I think to see from when to when he held which post is easier to read in the box. (I didn't try to add for what part of his time as cathedral organist he was director of music there.) More generally: numbers to the box, personality in the text. - I am also an agnostic, but - repeating - if someone supplied a box for me I would just say thank you, no discussion. - The next TFA without a box is Messiah (Handel), the box is "hidden" in the structure, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:32, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
- I hear all the arguments about accessibility, and I agree with many of them, but not to the point of compromising the basic article layout. As Giano said, we have to be in somebody's comfort zone, else we're in nobody's comfort zone. The way to handle devices with different form factors and so on is to offer different interfaces, not to compromise the base interface. This is all just so basic I really can't understand what the objections are. Anyway, I'll have a go at expanding the lead, and you can see what you think. If you don't like it then you know what you can do, revert it. :-)
- BTW, there's an article on the BBC's web site today about how Germans are coming to love us Brits, even to the point of preferring tea to coffee. Have you seen it? George Ponderevo (talk) 22:48, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
- Do you see what I mean now? With a proper lead the infobox doesn't bleed into the article. George Ponderevo (talk) 23:41, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for the lead! (I hope it is ok with you that I removed "also", twice.) - For the box, you will watch the "heart of the matter". I resisted the temptation to mention "homework", also, or likewise ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:21, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
- ps: (quoting you) I have a confession to make --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:43, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
- Looking at your exquisite wording in that lead (and elsewhere), please have a look at another with insufficient lead (and more), Andreas Scholl, - I came late to the article, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:00, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for picking it up, looks much better already. Did you know that he sang He was despised for us? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:22, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
- I haven't finished yet Gerda, I'll be back tomorrow to add a little more. I'm always a little puzzled as to why it is that many editors seem to find it so difficult to write leads, when I think it's like falling off a log. Is it perhaps something to do with the way that our education systems have changed? I recall sitting in primary school classes listening to the teacher read a story and then asking us to summarise it in a paragraph or two. Wasn't so hard then and it isn't so hard now. What do you think? George Ponderevo (talk) 23:33, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
- BTW Gerda, I'm no musician. I just like hammering away on the keyboard of my Yamaha concert-sized synthesiser until my ears bleed. George Ponderevo (talk) 23:44, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
- take up that lead again, please, up to the MET. - Looking at the standard bios of singers, not much of a lead seems wanted. - I would like to expand BWV 76, would you help me? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 00:19, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
- I found help for that lead. - Did you get to reading: "A review describes his perfect timing in the recitatives, his pronounced declamation, technically perfect interpretation and phrasing of the arias, and his devotion to Handel's music and Jennens's text. The Air "He was despised" was regarded as the center of the concert." - I noticed only today that you copy-edited my articles at least since 2011, and I never thanked you. Thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:44, 16 March 2013 (UTC)
- take up that lead again, please, up to the MET. - Looking at the standard bios of singers, not much of a lead seems wanted. - I would like to expand BWV 76, would you help me? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 00:19, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for picking it up, looks much better already. Did you know that he sang He was despised for us? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:22, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
What I said above rather belongs in this context: I learned from you and said so, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:22, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
Planyavsky again, believe it or not, "contentious area", believe it or not ... - Did you know he composed Psalm 269? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:23, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
MOS:IMAGES
I have opened a formal RfC at Misplaced Pages talk:Manual of Style/Images#Request for comment on the deprecation of left-aligned images under sub-headings,an issue on which you commented in previous discussion there. DrKiernan (talk) 09:52, 26 January 2014 (UTC)
Old news
Hi George--thanks for these edits. I'm somewhat surprised, though, that you let all that sophomoric chit-chat stand. If you ever unretire, please don't be afraid to hang a pair of brass balls from your truck. Best, Drmies (talk) 14:19, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
Precious anniversary
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miss you, the kind one --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:49, 1 November 2020 (UTC)