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| #The articles citations need attention. All references need to use the <nowiki>{{cite}}</nowiki> template. | |||
| #Harmonize citation style (using <nowiki>{{cite}}</nowiki>) and making sure all relevant page numbers are included. | |||
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#Section on "Mid-twentieth century" needs work: a) the first paragraph needs to bring together the de Beauvoir material and the second-wave material better; b) it should mention "difference feminism" somehow - it needs to convey that the assumptions underlying second-wave feminism were different than those underlying first-wave feminism. | ||
| #The "Socialism" subsection does not explain the general impact as well the other two sub-sections. It is too factoid-based. | |||
| #Section on "Mid-twentieth century" needs to mention "difference feminism" somehow - it needs to convey that the assumptions underlying second-wave feminism were different than those underlying first-wave feminism. | |||
| #Explanation of "feminisms", as in "multiple feminisms" in the Movements section | |||
| #Introduce the concept of patriarchy earlier in the article. It is so central to understanding nearly every form of feminism. | |||
| #Summarize ] and integrate. | |||
| #The "Pornography" section is a bit unclear. Could you spell out in a few sentences what exactly the debate was/is? The "Prostitution" section does that very well. | |||
| #Consider the structure and hierarchy of contents with regard to ] | |||
| #In the "Relationship to political movements" section, the "Socialism" subsection does not do nearly as good of a job explaining the general impact as the other two sections. It is too fact-based - this person, that organization, etc. to help the casual reader. | |||
| #Update ] further for ]’s ‘Before She Sleeps’ <ref>https://www.thehindu.com/books/life-before-men-vineetha-mokkil-reviews-bina-shahs-before-she-sleeps/article33470261.ece https://www.newindianexpress.com/lifestyle/books/2021/mar/21/before-she-sleeps-book-review-reluctance-rebellion-revolt-2278675.html https://www.telegraphindia.com/culture/books/review-before-she-sleeps-by-bina-shah/cid/1805002 ; Afzal, Malik Haroon; Pakri, Muhamad Rashidi Mohd; and Abdullah, Nurul Farhana Low (2021). Is Women’s | |||
| # Please Update first paragraph to include present times! Feminism is not past tense! eg Feminists still work to protect women and girls from domestic violence, sexual harassment, and sexual assault. They advocate for workplace rights, including maternity leave, and against forms of discrimination against women. | |||
| Empowerment a Thucydides’ Trap for Patriarchy in Pakistan? The Aurat (Woman) March-2020 and Bina | |||
| Shah’s Before She Sleeps. Journal of International Women's Studies, 22(9), 111-127. </ref> | |||
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Latest revision as of 11:24, 6 March 2022
- Improve article to featured standards
- The articles citations need attention. All references need to use the {{cite}} template.
- 10 citations need specific reference to page numbers.
- Section on "Mid-twentieth century" needs work: a) the first paragraph needs to bring together the de Beauvoir material and the second-wave material better; b) it should mention "difference feminism" somehow - it needs to convey that the assumptions underlying second-wave feminism were different than those underlying first-wave feminism.
- The "Socialism" subsection does not explain the general impact as well the other two sub-sections. It is too factoid-based.
- Explanation of "feminisms", as in "multiple feminisms" in the Movements section
- Summarize Women's rights and integrate.
- Consider the structure and hierarchy of contents with regard to featured standards
- Update Feminist literature further for Bina Shah’s ‘Before She Sleeps’
References
- https://www.thehindu.com/books/life-before-men-vineetha-mokkil-reviews-bina-shahs-before-she-sleeps/article33470261.ece https://www.newindianexpress.com/lifestyle/books/2021/mar/21/before-she-sleeps-book-review-reluctance-rebellion-revolt-2278675.html https://www.telegraphindia.com/culture/books/review-before-she-sleeps-by-bina-shah/cid/1805002 ; Afzal, Malik Haroon; Pakri, Muhamad Rashidi Mohd; and Abdullah, Nurul Farhana Low (2021). Is Women’s Empowerment a Thucydides’ Trap for Patriarchy in Pakistan? The Aurat (Woman) March-2020 and Bina Shah’s Before She Sleeps. Journal of International Women's Studies, 22(9), 111-127.