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| *Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) | *Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) - '''no consensus''' | ||
| ⚫ | *<s>Refactor ''Media'' section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like ].</s> | ||
| : disagree. having small gallery some 4x4 photos, or 4x5 is very good. ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ⚫ | *<s>Remove ''See Also'' links (like ]) that are already linked in the body of the article.</s> | ||
| ⚫ | *Refactor ''Media'' section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like ]. | ||
| *<s>Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section</s> | |||
| ⚫ | *Remove ''See Also'' links (like ]) that are already linked in the body of the article. | ||
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*<s> Expand the Education section</s> | ||
| ⚫ | *<s>Explain the Crime Rates box better</s> | ||
| *Expand the Education section | |||
| ⚫ | *<s>Copyedit the article</s> | ||
| ⚫ | *Explain the Crime Rates box better | ||
| : well, same table is in nyc article. it is understable. ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ⚫ | *Copyedit the article | ||
| *<s>Move Climate from under Tourism</s> | *<s>Move Climate from under Tourism</s> | ||
| *<s>Put ''Air pollution in Moscow'' in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)</s> | *<s>Put ''Air pollution in Moscow'' in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)</s> | ||
| *Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful. | *<s>Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.</s> | ||
| *Add a significant number of references | *<s>Add a significant number of references </s> | ||
| :disagree ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| *<s>Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)</s> | *<s>Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)</s> | ||
| *Add information about Moscow's <i>znamya</i> (distinct from its flag): see http://www.mos.ru/cgi-bin/pbl_web?vid=1&osn_id=0&subr_unom=3766&datedoc=0 | |||
| ⚫ | *Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes | ||
| Other Items: | |||
| : i just took krylatskoye this sunday. i'll add later when will process all photos. ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ⚫ | *<s>Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes</s> | ||
| *Refactor ''Living Costs'' section, which is quite repetitive. | *<s>Refactor ''Living Costs'' section, which is quite repetitive. </s> | ||
| *<s>Russian State Library (former Lenin library) should be mentioned.</s> | |||
| *<s>Perhaps a brief note about schools for students below college-age would be helpful in the ''Education'' section.</s> | |||
| *<s>Sport section should be improved, Moscow Hippodrome mentioned.</s> | |||
| *Modern city plan nedded to replace old ones. | |||
| *<s>Improve introduction</s> | |||
| *<s>Add a ''Future development'' section with information about ]</s> and other ongoing projects. | |||
| *''Parks and landmarks'' should be improved and expanded to mention ], Victory Park memorial complex, <s>Gorkiy Park of Culture and rest, Sokolniki, Izmailovskiy park, Losinoostrovskiy park </s> and others, as well as overall depiction of resort zones. | |||
| *A ''religious life'' section proposed | |||
| *A ''night life'' section proposed | |||
| Lastly: | |||
| *Do a final copyedit, with all the additional changes | |||
| *Nominate for featured article status | |||
Latest revision as of 16:55, 18 February 2008
From Moscow's peer review:
- Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) - no consensus
Refactor Media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions sectionExpand the Education sectionExplain the Crime Rates box betterCopyedit the articleMove Climate from under TourismPut Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.Add a significant number of referencesAdd something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)- Add information about Moscow's znamya (distinct from its flag): see http://www.mos.ru/cgi-bin/pbl_web?vid=1&osn_id=0&subr_unom=3766&datedoc=0
Other Items:
Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexesRefactor Living Costs section, which is quite repetitive.Russian State Library (former Lenin library) should be mentioned.Perhaps a brief note about schools for students below college-age would be helpful in the Education section.Sport section should be improved, Moscow Hippodrome mentioned.- Modern city plan nedded to replace old ones.
Improve introductionAdd a Future development section with information about IBCand other ongoing projects.- Parks and landmarks should be improved and expanded to mention VDNKh, Victory Park memorial complex,
Gorkiy Park of Culture and rest, Sokolniki, Izmailovskiy park, Losinoostrovskiy parkand others, as well as overall depiction of resort zones. - A religious life section proposed
- A night life section proposed
Lastly:
- Do a final copyedit, with all the additional changes
- Nominate for featured article status