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== "Recommend against" == | |||
== Sources for opposition to naturopathic medicine == | |||
The above conversation has digressed, so starting a new section about one specific statement: {{tq|Naturopathic practitioners commonly recommend against following modern medical practices, including but not limited to medical testing, drugs, vaccinations, and surgery.}} | |||
American Cancer Society | |||
http://www.cancer.org/treatment/treatmentsandsideeffects/complementaryandalternativemedicine/mindbodyandspirit/naturopathic-medicine | |||
There are four sources currently supporting that statement. Three of them are studies of students, not naturopaths, and one of them says the opposite: {{tq|Most chiropractic and naturopathic students are not averse to vaccination.}} The Skeptical Inquirer source doesn't seem to support the statement at all. None of them mention recommending against surgery or medical testing that I can see. | |||
American Academy of Family Physicians | |||
http://www.aafp.org/about/policies/all/naturopathic.html | |||
http://www.aafp.org/dam/AAFP/documents/advocacy/workforce/gme/ES-FPvsNaturopaths-110810.pdf <----comparing education and training between NDs and MDs specializing in family practice | |||
That's a pretty bold statement painting with a very broad brush, so unless the sources support it, this sentence should be removed, in my opinion. ] (]) 16:50, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
NIH's National Center for Complementary and Alternative Medicine | |||
:I can see some arguments either way about sourcing this to studies of naturopathy students, although to the extent that those sources are about what naturopaths are taught, what training they have when they go into practice, they may be legitimate. However, the SI source () is chock-full of examples of naturopaths rejecting modern medical practices. So I don't read it the way that you do. --] (]) 16:58, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
http://nccam.nih.gov/health/naturopathy/naturopathyintro.htm#hed5 | |||
::Are we reading the same SI article? I just read the whole thing again and I still don't see anything like that. Practicing alternative therapies and promoting them is one thing. It's a very different thing to ''recommend against'' getting surgery or a vaccine. That implies a level of malice would require some good sources. ] (]) 17:36, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
:::"Being a naturopathic physician, I believe in the body’s ability to heal itself. The body can do this very effectively when it is kept healthy. By taking extra good care of yourself and possibly working with a natural health practitioner, you can stay resistant to colds and the flu every winter. Remember, there are many routes to immunity besides obtaining a flu shot." One can quibble that this isn't a formal recommendation not to get a flu shot, but it's clearly recommending against getting one. --] (]) 17:46, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
::::Even if you accept that logic for that one person's statement, where do we get "commonly"? and "surgeries?" ] (]) 18:05, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
:::::Seems to be a lot of sourcing on this e.g. I guess they want to sell what they can (which doesn't include surgery), while also being dishonest about it (we don't oppose surgery!). Why not strengthen the sourcing if you feel the point isn't made well enough? ] (]) 18:10, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
::::::We could also tweak the wording of the sentence, instead of completely removing it. --] (]) 18:16, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
::::::That's a Consumer Reports owned contributed piece with no named author, so not sure how reliable. I can't imagine finding a reliable source for this since it seems like a somewhat exceptional claim that would need something more than a consumer reports PR piece. They commonly recommend against surgery when? In what cases would they tell a patient or the public to not get surgery? Maybe I'm completely wrong. And as Tryptofish suggested, I'd be fine rewording it somehow. Like, they "commonly prefer alternative treatments to conventional medicine, in general, including resistance to surgery and vaccines depending on the patient's needs or the practitioner's opinions." ] (]) 19:27, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Alternatively: they "commonly encourage alternative treatments that are rejected by conventional medicine, including resistance to surgery or vaccines for some patients." --] (]) 19:34, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
::::::::@] I think this is great, for what it's worth. It'd be nice to have better sources, but this wording seems much more accurate to me. ] (]) 19:40, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Does anyone have any objections to going ahead with that wording? --] (]) 21:03, 20 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::No. —] 21:04, 20 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
::::::::This seems more encyclopedic in tone, and is better supported by the sources. I say go for this. >> ] ] 17:40, 17 November 2023 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::It's already been implemented, but I guess nobody said so here. --] (]) 21:22, 17 November 2023 (UTC) | |||
:::::::The straining at the least to whitewash the page in the face of the sourcing is puzzling. The ''WaPo'' source is fine. Nothing exceptional about quacks quacking. ] (]) 19:39, 19 October 2023 (UTC) | |||
== Semi-protected edit request on 18 December 2023 == | |||
Medscape article published by Kimball C. Atwood, IV, MD | |||
http://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/471156 | |||
Perhaps there are more?? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 19:45, 30 October 2014 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:] Why do you need to propose sources for ''opposition to naturopathy''? Let's review your ''sources''. | |||
# American Cancer Society is not ''opposing to naturopathy''. It is declaring that ''naturopathy cannot cure cancer''. Can you quote a main body of knowledge for naturopathy pretending to cure cancer? This source is not relevant for opposing to naturopathy from a scientific point of view and from ]. | |||
# American Academy of Family Physicians is not ''opposing to naturopathy''. It is ''opposing to licensure of naturopaths''. This source is not relevant for opposing to naturopathy from a scientific point of view and from ]. | |||
# American Academy of Family Physicians is not ''opposing to naturopathy'', but comparing the number of training hours between MD and ND. Knowing that a ND is not a MD, the comparison is useless without also comparing the scope of practice. This source is not relevant for opposing to naturopathy from a scientific point of view and from ]. | |||
# Kimball Atwood is opposing to naturopathy with at least a strong Anglo-American bias and without any scientific demonstration. Piling-up examples is an ''illustration'', not a ''demonstration'' from a scientific point of view. | |||
(] (]) 10:35, 26 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
== Semi-protected edit request on 25 December 2014 == | |||
{{edit semi-protected|Naturopathy|answered=yes}} | {{edit semi-protected|Naturopathy|answered=yes}} | ||
Add links to give a mire balanced overview. | |||
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https://www.webmd.com/balance/what-is-naturopathic-medicine ] (]) 06:24, 18 December 2023 (UTC) | |||
Just came across the correct URL for the dead link at footnote 41. I believe it should go to: http://aanmc.org/careers/licensure/ | |||
Thanks | |||
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] (]) 05:56, 25 December 2014 (UTC) | |||
:] '''Done'''<!-- Template:ESp --> thanks for finding that ] (]) 10:41, 25 December 2014 (UTC) | |||
:] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a ] and provide a ] if appropriate.<!-- Template:ESp --> ] (] • ]) 08:09, 18 December 2023 (UTC) | |||
== NPOV: Naturopathic medicine is replete with pseudoscientific, ineffective, unethical, and possibly dangerous practices == | |||
== Restructuring the lead == | |||
I am questioning the neutrality ] of the sentence: "Naturopathic medicine is replete with pseudoscientific, ineffective, unethical, and possibly dangerous practices".<ref name= atwood2003>{{cite journal|last=Atwood |first= Kimball C., IV |year= 2003|doi= |title= Naturopathy: A critical appraisal |url= http://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/465994 |journal= Medscape General Medicine |volume= 5 |issue= 4 |page= 39 |pmid= 14745386}}{{registration required}}</ref>. My edits have been rejected by ].<br /> | |||
The questioned sentence is a quotation from the abstract of an article written in 2003 by ]. Let's review how well it does align to Misplaced Pages principles.<br /> | |||
=== Due and undue weight === | |||
]: "Neutrality requires that each article or other page in the mainspace fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in the published, reliable sources. Generally, the views of tiny minorities should not be included at all."<br /> | |||
The author, ], is writing in the last paragraph of his article: "This is the first article in a mainstream medical journal that critically summarizes the field of "naturopathic medicine." and that "...if the only articles on CAM that most physicians read are uncritical". This is clear confirmation by the author himself of the minority of his opinion. This undue weight shall be removed by at least quoting its minority.<br /> | |||
Or, this undue weight could simply be removed due to his "tiny minority", because it is the first article on this topic published in a reliable source. Other articles usually used as reference for supporting this one do not cover exactly the same topic.<br /> | |||
Or, this undue weight could be balanced by a quotation of the opposing opinion, from the same published reliable source, for example “Naturopathic medicine is indeed legitimate, effective, and wanted”.<ref name= bongiorno2004>{{cite journal|last=Bongiorno |first= Peter B |year= 2004|doi= |title= Naturopathic medicine is indeed legitimate, effective, and wanted|url= http://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/470701 |journal= Medscape General Medicine |volume= 6 |issue= 1 |page= 41 |pmid= }}</ref>. | |||
=== Article structure === | |||
]: "The internal structure of an article may require additional attention, to protect neutrality, and to avoid problems like POV forking and undue weight."<br /> | |||
Quoting a minority opinion in the first paragraph is a structural issue. This quotation would be better located in the section dedicated to ].<br /> | |||
=== Opinions as facts === | |||
]: "Avoid stating opinions as facts.(...) opinions should not be stated in Misplaced Pages's voice. Rather, they should be attributed in the text to particular sources"<br /> | |||
The author, ], is a member of an American NGO, ], devoted to promoting ]. As such, he can be seen as at least a promoter or as an advocate of a cause, but not as a neutral observer of the situation. He is having a conflict of interest ]. My opinion is supported by the following statement from a published reliable source: “Atwood is misleading, objectionable, and flagrantly biased"<ref name= katz2004>{{cite journal|last=Katz |first= David L |year= 2004|doi= |title= Acting in Defense of the Medical Literature |url= http://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/470713 |journal= Medscape General Medicine |volume= 6 |issue= 1 |page= 38 |pmid= 15208550 }}</ref>. It illustrates the fact that Atwood’s sentence is a controversial assertion. | |||
=== Nonjudgmental language === | |||
]: "prefer nonjudgmental language. A neutral point of view neither sympathizes with nor disparages its subject".<br /> | |||
The word "replete" (plenty of something) is a judgmental language, while a neutral wording would be "contains".<br /> | |||
=== Anglo-American focus === | |||
]: "should seek to improve articles by removing any examples of cultural bias that they encounter, or making readers aware of them".<br /> | |||
The author, Kimball Atwood, is writing that his article is "a summary of the current state of naturopathic medicine", based only on documents published by Anglo-American sources. It does not reflect the current state of naturopathic medicine worldwide. It is neglecting the fact that naturopathy is largely used, recognized and integrated in the national health system in German culture countries, such as Germany, Holland and Switzerland. | |||
This cultural bias shall be removed.<br /> | |||
=== Proposal === | |||
I am proposing to address the above problems by replacing the questioned sentence by:<br /> | |||
"In the first article in a mainstream medical journal that critically summarizes the field of naturopathic medicine"<ref name= atwood2003/> Kimball C. Atwood, an American Skeptic, concludes about naturopathy in the Anglo-American world that "naturopathic medicine is replete with ], ineffective, unethical, and possibly dangerous practices"<br /> | |||
I am welcoming factual and documented comments and seeking help for improving this article in a more neutral way. | |||
===References=== | |||
{{reflist-talk}} | |||
(] (]) 22:06, 24 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
I visited this article to gain further knowledge on the subject as a layperson. However within 2 seconds into the article I sensed an acute force deterring me from proceeding. I attribute such experience to the blend of descriptive and judgemental statements upon inspection. | |||
===Discussion=== | |||
The statement is sourced and accurate as is, I have no problem with it. ] (]) 23:14, 24 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:], I full agree with you: the statement is sourced and accurately quoted. This is not the problem. I am raising the ] issue. Please comment on the factual issues I have raised regarding ], ], ], ]. It cannot simply be ignored because the statement is properly sourced and accurately quoted.(] (]) 08:40, 25 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
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:Agree, it's well sourced and uncontentious. According to ] policy we need to make sure this mainstream take on naturopathy is prominent here, to be neutral. ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 07:24, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::], I am not pretending that the statement is right or wrong, but it is factually contentious. This is not my opinion, but a documented fact, according to a published and reliable source <ref name= katz2004>{{cite journal|last=Katz |first= David L |year= 2004|doi= |title= Acting in Defense of the Medical Literature |url= http://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/470713 |journal= Medscape General Medicine |volume= 6 |issue= 1 |page= 38 |pmid= 15208550 }}</ref> and according to a reliable recognized scientist: ], associate professor of public health practice at the Yale University School of Medicine. Please comment and respond in more details on the issues that I have raised.(] (]) 08:40, 25 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
{{reflist-talk}} | |||
::*That text by Katz is a ''comment'' on an article, right? ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 17:20, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::*], right, this is a comment. Does it undermine the validity of the opinion expressed? Being a direct critical comment by a well known and reputable scientist confirms the ''contentious'' aspect of Atwood's opinion. This comment being published by a reputable source confirms its quality, but not the validity of one against the other. MedGenMed would not publish a dummy or doubtful comment from an unknown and unverified source. My intention is not to enter into never-ending arguments about ]. My personal opinion is that what some people call ] contains some pseudoscientific, ineffective, unethical, and possibly dangerous practices. This is not the question. This is not my debate. My opinion does not count here. I am simply aiming to bring objectivity and neutrality ] to the ] article. Thank you for taking the time to answer each one of the various issues raised: ], ], ], ].(] (]) 19:53, 25 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
::::* Not ], not usable. ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 20:05, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::Alex, I think it'll put an end to the conversation faster if you explain why it is not a ] source and therefore not usable. ] (]) 20:55, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I think it's better for editors go get familiar with the ]s rather than I provide a potted version (which then invites the opportunity to take issue with how I've potted it). It is however also common sense that we don't use weak sources (comments) to undermine stronger ones. ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 21:13, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: I agree, but suit yourself. It's your time. ] (]) 22:19, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::], I am keen to get familiar and I am doing so. How would you think that individual members of the scientific community would respond in a reliable manner to Atwood article, if not by writing a comment in the same publication. This comment is not to be used for writing an article about ]. This comment is not to be used for undermine a source used for writing an article about ], but simply to illustrate its ''contentious'' aspect. According to ], the creator of the work, ], associate professor of public health practice at the Yale University School of Medicine, is regarded as authoritative in relation to the subject. It is not questionable. Even if you would not agree with my point of view on this matter, it does not prevent you to answer the other issues that I have raised, independently from this comment. (] (]) 21:28, 25 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
:::::::::What I think and what you think is immaterial (even if you base your opinion on interpreting comments, which is ]). Misplaced Pages shall reflect reliable published sources, and for a ] topic like naturopathy the ] when finding sources that identify the fringe view. Without new reliable sources, this discussion is pointless. ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 21:40, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::], then let's use the only recognized source, Atwood himself, when he is writing that " ''This is the first article in a mainstream medical journal that critically summarizes the field of naturopathic medicine.'' " and that " ''if the only articles on CAM that most physicians read are uncritical'' ". Isn't it a reliable source confirming the minority and the contentious aspect of his opinion?(] (]) 21:52, 25 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
:::::::::::], I was just wondering what y'all would think about this article which is also from PubMed and a credible journal (from Primary Care) and is not as biased and outdated (2010) of a review as the one being discussed. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2883816 <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned"> — Preceding ] comment added 22:22, 8 February 2015 (UTC)</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
In the leading section the first paragraph already imposes the subject a generally dissuading tone. With the pejorative word "pseudoscientific" being the first blow, the next two ambivalent statements (Difficult to generalize...; The ideology...) are then followed by a negative judgement (The ethics...) culminating with the even scathing "quackery". | |||
=== Failure to understand "neutral" in NPOV === | |||
I acknowledge my limit as a layperson and I have no intention in altering the wording but I do recommend a restructuring. It would be optimal if the descriptive and judgemental statements be separated into discrete paragraphs with the former preceding the latter. Inserting judgemental statements early on can be perceived as shoving in opinions and, as worded in an earlier discussion, setting an agenda. I cite the French version article as a good example for reference. ] (]) 16:56, 1 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
], as a newbie here, we're cutting you a lot of slack because we know it's not easy to understand all these policies and guidelines (PAG). You make a common mistake, by expecting our content and sources to be "neutral". You write in your edit summary: | |||
:Hi, {{u|Seanetienne}}, we do have an agenda already set, see ] and ]. ] (]) 17:02, 1 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
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::And that's utter disrespect from you, Mr @]. It is a consuming job to ward off conspiracy theorists and anti-science groups alike. However this time you have clamped down on the wrong person. I have no particular interest in alternative medicine and my attitude is ambivalent. | |||
::I have seen elegant treatment of problematic subjects and I regret that the equivalent cannot by be applied here. By your passive-aggressive wording labelling me a "lunatic charlatan" and cherry-picking my word choice it is apparent that you are already blinded by deep prejudice. | |||
::I hereby reject all your insinuation of all sorts. I shall not be commenting until someone tries to understand first instead of dismissing right away. I have done my fair share of input as an minor editor. ] (]) 18:06, 1 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Hi, {{u|Seanetienne}}, I have never called ''you'' a lunatic charlatan. I made previously no reference to your own person. Unless you are actively an author of medical pseudoscience, you have no reason to feel offended by the words of Jimmy Wales. I never said that the words "lunatic charlatans" apply to you, nor did I say I am Wales. It is difficult for me to comprehend why do you think that the essay ] applies to your own person. Wales's opinion is Wales's opinion. You seem to take it personally when either it isn't me who wrote the opinion (I'm not Wales), or I am simply not writing anything at all about your own person. ] (]) 21:13, 1 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Sorry this got off-topic from the intention of the opening post, but it's probably not a good idea to link to the "lunatics" essay in these kinds of discussions. ] (as well as ]) are probably better choices. --] (]) 21:46, 1 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Recent edits == | |||
Personal opinions are allowed, non-neutral comments are allowed, and we are required to document controversies, and even minority opinions, especially if they are published in RS. In this case Atwood represents the scientific majority, but since mainstream scientists tend to ignore fringe matters, scientific skeptics like Atwood express their opinions. Those skeptics are often experts in their subject areas. They are scientists, researchers, authors, etc.. | |||
I think the recent major rewrite of the page, , may have seriously introduced a false balance and may not have consensus. For the moment, I won't revert it myself, but I think it may have to be reverted if other editors besides me object. --] (]) 21:19, 6 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
There is never any indication in our PAG that sources or content must be neutral. It is '''editors''' who must remain neutral in their editing. That's the key to understanding NPOV. '''Editors''' are not allowed to misuse sources, or fail to replicate the exact spirit, bias, prejudice, or tone of a source. Censorship is not allowed. If the source is critical, the content will sound critical. If it's biased, so be it. We must remain neutral and reproduce that bias, even when it conflicts with our personal POV. | |||
: I object as well, but the content seems to have already been reverted. Perhaps the editor will come here to seek consensus? ] (]) 06:20, 7 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::With three of us objecting, I'm happy with the revert, for now. --] (]) 22:41, 7 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
If we only used "neutral" sources here, no article would contain any opinions, we could not deal with controversies and disagreements, in fact we would have very little content at all! Our job is to document the sum total of human knowledge, as it is documented in reliable sources. That "sum total" includes opinions and very non-neutral sources and content. | |||
:::Hello, I was the one editor that made recent changes. To be clear, I am not a paid editor and I don't have a strong bias on this topic. In fact, I am generally skeptical of alternative medicine though have recently become more curious about it as I personally explore some health issues. I was very surprised when I found both this page and the functional medicine page on Misplaced Pages to be so completely lacking in neutrality on the topics. In no way did I attempt to hide or minimize the many criticisms of naturopathy, but it seems plainly obvious to me the article in its current format really does not follow Misplaced Pages guidelines. I spent some real time researching legitimate sources that could help provide a more balanced. My goal in doing so was to help the article be more in line with the pillar ] | |||
:::This pillar states: ''We strive for articles with an impartial tone that ], giving ] for their prominence.'' ''We avoid ], and we characterize information and issues rather than debate them. In some areas there may be just one well-recognized point of view; in others, we describe multiple points of view, presenting each accurately and in context rather than as "the truth" or "the best view"'' | |||
It is '''editors''' who must remain neutral and not take sides by adding their own commentary. We all have our opinions, and they become obvious on talk pages. That's okay, but when we edit, we must edit neutrally. -- ] (]) 21:58, 25 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::The editor who reverted my edits seems to think that this topic has just one well-recognized point of view, or that that the view that naturopathy is only "quackery" has such prominence any disagreement with this violates the principle of due weight. This is not backed up by credible claims but rather seems like the editor has an axe to grind on this topic. This also seems to be contradicted by the fact that many US states and other nations offer formal license and regulatory frameworks for traditional medicines, which I also cited by linking to a list of states that currently license. It had previously read that "Naturopathy is prohibited in three ] (Florida, South Carolina, and Tennessee) and tightly regulated in many others. Some states have lax regulations, however, and may allow naturopaths to perform minor surgery or even prescribe drugs." This is not neutral, not does it give any credence to the legitimacy that a regulatory system confers. | |||
:::In introducing a more balanced tone I was careful to cite from legitimate, mainstream and credible sources such as a report published by the World Health Organization (WHO). Indeed, in this report, the WHO Director-General writes that "Traditional and complementary medicine (T&CM) is an important and often underestimated health resource with many applications." In flatly rejecting this, the editor completely ignores whole huge segments of the global population who very much do rely on traditional medicines. Implying that there is consensus that it is "quackery" seems to be a very western centric point of view. | |||
:], thanks for your useful explanation and for your support to a newbie. I fully understand that editors must be neutral and that sources must not be neutral. I fully understand that WP content must be written from a neutral point of view. I fully understand that fringe articles are under high scrutiny. I am not questioning Atwood's quote itself, but the way it is included in WP article. I understand and agree that I should not have written that Atwood's opinion is not neutral. It is my mistake. Sorry for that. | |||
:::I am going to revert back to the changes I made because I stand by them and believe that I was meticulous in my observance of rules and made a good faith effort to improve the article. ] (]) 12:37, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::{{tq|I am going to revert back to the changes I made}} You shouldn't. There are three editors objecting to the changes so there is no ] for them. Wait and see how the discussion develops. ] (]) 12:41, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:So far, despite valuable efforts by ], I have not seen factual arguments for demonstrating that I am 100% wrong with all the issues that I have raised. I agree that one of my source (Katz) could be seen as ''weak'', even if WP:RS does not define explicitly ''weak sources'' and ''comments''. | |||
:::::It was problematic from a whitewashing/] perspective. So not a good idea. ] (]) 12:42, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I think we're now at five editors objecting to the change, and one supporting it, so this is ]. Also, believing that one is "right" is not an accepted reason to edit against ]. And I want to explain that the ] policy does not say that we have to give similar prominence to every POV, and thus editors here are not claiming that the "quackery" perspective in the ''only'' recognized POV. We're saying that we should give ] weight according to the preponderance of reliable (in this case, ]) sources. | |||
:How can you factually support that " ''Atwood represents the scientific majority, but since mainstream scientists tend to ignore fringe matters'' "? This statement does not sound like a scientific fact or a scientific observation. With all respect, a minority of loud activists does not make a majority of opinions. | |||
::::::I'm open to the possibility that we should include some increased coverage of favorable perspectives, but I would want to be able to examine them one-by-one. I'm perfectly willing to discuss making some changes, here in talk, as opposed to just putting the changes ''en masse'' on the page without prior consensus. Wikiwriter, if you'd like to list here the changes that you think are most likely to gain consensus, with sourcing, I'd be happy to discuss them. --] (]) 18:18, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::{{tqred|"ignores whole huge segments of the global population who very much do rely on traditional medicines"}}—yup, the rely on such medicines because effective medicine is very expensive and many countries would go bankrupt through making it widely available to their population. Sad, but true. And it does not stop 99% of the traditional medicines from being quackery. E.g. the Cambodian government recognized that ] is ], but also that it is widely used in their country. ] (]) 18:42, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Other issues that I have raised have not yet been answered, e.g. ]. | |||
::::::::There are reasons for relying on tried and true medicine over generations, especially if cost is a factor, when we know that iatrogenic disease is one of the leading causes of illness. This is especially the case in the USA https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC4923397/ | |||
::::::::https://journals.lww.com/journalpatientsafety/Fulltext/2013/09000/A_New,_Evidence_based_Estimate_of_Patient_Harms.2.aspx ] (]) 20:36, 27 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Let's turn it the other way around. What is objectionable in my proposal, which is mainly quoting (in '''bold''') Atwood himself: " ''In '''the first article in a mainstream medical journal that critically summarizes the field of naturopathic medicine''', Kimball C. Atwood, an American Skeptic, concludes about naturopathy in the Anglo-American world that '''naturopathic medicine is replete with pseudoscientific, ineffective, unethical, and possibly dangerous practices''' '' "? It does not undermine Atwood's opinion. It is disclosing the exact and factual context in which Atwood is expressing his opinion, which is a scientific way of presenting things.(] (]) 22:43, 25 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
:::::::::Yes, mainstream medicine can be misused. But that only proves it is very powerful. ] (]) 21:27, 27 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Echoing the comments of Tryptofish I suggest, Wikiwriter43103840, that you present your desired content on this Talk page, one item at a time, so that it can be discussed amongst interested editors and a consensus - one way or another - achieved. Throwing everything into the article at once is simply not going to work. I note also that you should restrict your comments to ''content'', and not on your opinion(s) of other editors, as your comment above ({{tq|seems like the editor has an axe to grind on this topic}}) is unhelpful and could easily be interpreted as a personal attack (see ]). ] (]) 20:12, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
"Naturopathic medicine is replete with pseudoscientific, ineffective, unethical, and possibly dangerous practices." - I don't know much about naturopathy, but this sentence is hilariously non-neutral, and reads like someone speaking with an axe to grind. The idea that editors should be neutral but articles should not is also ridonkulous, when the opposite is true by any standard of journalistic integrity. That said, this sentence would easily fixed by saying "According to the scientific community" or "According to such-and-such". It's a strong opinion, and the fact that it's an opinion held by many scientists is interesting and noteworthy but largely irrelevant. A similar statement could be inserted, for example, into the Misplaced Pages description of religion. ("Religion is replete with unprovable assertions and has often led to unethical and even deadly choices."). A widely-held view by a particular group in a particular profession is fascinating, but it doesn't really have anything to do with WHAT THIS IS, and, as such, strikes as discordant in the first paragraph that would traditionally (and conventionally) be a summary / description of what something is, not what a particular group thinks about it (which would belong in something like a controversy section). Please approach contributions with a little more maturity. ] (]) 19:59, 2 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::: Agree. Wikiwriter43103840 would be best off working on this talk page making ] or something similar, identifying all changes in POV and the references that support such changes. --] (]) 20:40, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
: Scientists are experts in the field of medicine and as such their evaluation on the effectiveness of Naturopathy and pseudoscience in general are relevant and therefore valid to include in this encyclopedia. That's more than an opnion scientists offer, that opinion is based on the complete lack of ''evidence'' for the effectiveness of Naturopathy. Please don't launch ad hominem attacks on fellow editor by insinuating they are immature, be ]. ] (]) 06:40, 4 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::OK, apologies for just reverting without further discussion. | |||
::::::::Here are the changes that I made and why I made them: | |||
== Naturopathy and cancer == | |||
::::::::# The current opening reads as follows: " A wide array of ] practices branded as "natural", "non-invasive", or promoting "self-healing" are employed by its practitioners, who are known as '''naturopaths'''. Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the thoroughly discredited, like ], to the widely accepted, like certain forms of ]." Not only is this non-neutral, but it also is self contradictory. How can it be both "a wide array of ] practices" and also include "widely accepted" treatments? I suggested opening with a description that acknowledges the debates about it but does not immediately draw a conclusion. I included reference to the WHO report to back up my suggestion that a more positive POV deserves prominence alongside what is already there. | |||
In order to reflect the latest (Jan 2015) development of the research in oncology regarding the use of naturopathy for cancer, I am proposing to amend the end of last paragraph of the first section as follow: | |||
::::::::# The claim that "The diagnoses made by naturopaths often have no factual merit" is not supported by the citations provided. The citations could be good sources to legitimize a claim that naturopathy does not rely on the scientific method, or even that what it advises is often not supported by medical research, but to flatly claim that the diagnoses often have no factual merit seems to misrepresent the citations, unless I am missing something. | |||
::::::::# The following is also problematic: "Naturopathy is prohibited in three ] (Florida, South Carolina, and Tennessee) and tightly regulated in many others. Some states have lax regulations, however, and may allow naturopaths to perform minor surgery or even prescribe drugs." '''Why not just acknowledge that some states permit it and regulate it while others prohibit it? It does not seem like the purpose of this article to pass judgement ("lax") on public policy relating to the topic, the role of the article should be to describe public policy from a neutral perspective, and then describe various lobbying efforts focused on changing policies.''' | |||
: (...) According to the ], "scientific evidence does not support claims that naturopathic medicine can cure ] or any other disease, since virtually no studies on naturopathy as a whole have been published."<ref name=ACS>{{Cite web |title= Naturopathic Medicine | publisher = ] |date= November 1, 2008 <!-- url points to page updated after accessdate --> |url= http://www.cancer.org/Treatment/TreatmentsandSideEffects/ComplementaryandAlternativeMedicine/MindBodyandSpirit/naturopathic-medicine <!-- url points to page updated after accessdate --> | accessdate = 2010-11-20 |archiveurl= http://web.archive.org/web/20101130114645/http://www.cancer.org/Treatment/TreatmentsandSideEffects/ComplementaryandAlternativeMedicine/MindBodyandSpirit/naturopathic-medicine |archivedate= 2010-11-30 <!-- url points to page updated after accessdate -->}}</ref> However, the relevance of naturopathy in human cancer is beginning to be appreciated, as documented by renewed interest in nutraceutical research, the natural anticancer agents of dietary origin.<ref name=ahma>{{cite journal|first1=A |last1=Ahmad |first2=Ginnebaugh |last2=KR |first3=Li |last3=Y |first4=Padhye |last4=SB |first5=Sarkar |last5=FH | date = January 6, 2015 |title= Molecular Targets of Naturopathy in Cancer Research: Bridge to Modern Medicine|url= http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/25569626 |journal= Nutrients|volume= 6 |issue= 7(1) |page= 321-334 |pmid= 25569626 }}</ref> (] (]) 17:41, 27 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
::::::::The language I replaced it with attempts to explain that naturopathy is not one single approach or way of doing things. It includes fully licensed medical doctors who are also trained in naturopathy and use it as a form of complimentary medicine to totally dangerous anti-vax crazy people who are peddling things that could hurt people. I tried to encompass all of that, and to explain that it is debated. In my mind this was expanding on what is already here. What do you all think? ] (]) 21:20, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:::::::::NPOV isn't half-way between science and pseudoscience. NPOV sides with science and shuns pseudoscience. ] (]) 21:31, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::That would be a misrepresentation of the source. The article as a whole is focused on neutraceuticals and money quote is "... nutraceuticals have shown great promise in in vitro studies, but have fallen short in translational studies. The bioavailability of nutraceuticals remains a major concern." So the source actually agrees with the ACS. ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 17:08, 27 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I don’t think a Misplaced Pages article is about “siding” at all. It’s about explaining the world as it is. The purpose is not to stake out a position. I’m not sure why you seem to have it out for me. ] (]) 00:36, 9 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::], if this sentence would really misrepresent the article, why would this sentence be the first one on the abstract published on PubMed? Even if so far only in vitro is promising, it does not turn down the fact that ''the relevance of naturopathy in human cancer is beginning to be appreciated''. This is a valid sentence from a valid source. It is an interesting and up-to-date addition to the statement made by ACS. (] (]) 17:41, 27 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
:::::::::::You have the mistaken idea that {{tq|NPOV sides with science and shuns pseudoscience}} is open for rational debate, and that you would be allowed to disobey it. No, it is a matter of website policy, namely ], you might want to read it. | |||
::::Best not unduly to pick bits of of (especially) abstracts, but to take the whole article and properly reflect its overall content. This article is excusively about neutraceuticals (rather than naturopathy at large as defined here on WP) and the "relevance" to human health is clearly made. This "beginning to be appreciated" stuff is just special pleading like "more research is needed" and we generally omit that kind of thing. ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 17:49, 27 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Misplaced Pages has no unfettered access to {{tqred|the world as it is}}. But it has unfettered access to scientific publications. ] (]) 17:59, 9 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::], who better than the authors of the article themselves can ''duly pick bits'' of their own article for writing a conclusion or an abstract? The authors themselves are naming ''naturopathy'', not me. Naturopathy is a set of tools and techniques, nutrition being one of them. The relevance of this naturopathic tool in the field of cancer is beginning to be appreciated. Which WP principle is supporting the fact that ''we generally omit'' to mention promising fields of scientific research where scientific evidence is still missing? In the context of naturopathy, where scientific evidence is still missing, it is worth mentioning that science is making progress while ''a number of novel nutraceuticals are under investigation (...) which clearly support naturopathy as a tool for modern medicine''. Ignoring this source would be ]. (] (]) 18:33, 27 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
::::::::::::You are unkind. ] (]) 02:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Misplaced Pages is not a ], which is why we wait for solid ]-compliant reviews of multiple good research studies with concrete results. Anything less allows for OR in the form of cherry picked data. -- ] (]) 06:10, 28 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::What I am saying is that Misplaced Pages has ], so our ] are not open to rational counter-argumentation, at least not at this talk page. This is not the place for changing the ]. Editors at this talk page cannot change the rules of the game. Not being aware that Misplaced Pages sides with mainstream science is extremely naive. ] (]) 19:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Concur with BR. When studies have been published ''and reviewed'' then there is encyclopedic content. The list of treatments that have been "under investigation" is endless and not particularly selective. When MEDRS quality sources discuss a subject paraphrased content can be developed. - - ] (]) 08:14, 29 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::: One last time, {{yo|Wikiwriter43103840}} ''per'' ], please restrict your comments here to ''article content'', not on your opinions about other editors. ] (]) 06:47, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::I feel the need to say, also, that tgeorgescu should be more willing to engage collegially with suggestions by Wikiwriter, who I feel had a somewhat valid reason for feeling treated unkindly. --] (]) 20:00, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Anglo-American focus == | |||
:::::::::::::::The few past days, I did not really engage with their positive claims, but I was sensing that they do not understand how Misplaced Pages works. ] (]) 01:48, 12 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
I am proposing to review the first section of the article in regard to WP:WORLDVIEW | |||
:::::::::Thanks for this post. My recollection of the edit was that more was changed than what those three points refer to, and what you've posted is more of a rationale than a proposal for revised text. But I'm happy to work with it for now, focusing on more limited corrections if any are needed. | |||
#Reference is missing for ''Today, naturopathy is primarily practiced in the United States and Canada.''. | |||
:::::::::# I could support rewriting those sentences to "A wide array of practices branded as "natural", "non-invasive", or promoting "self-healing" are employed by its practitioners, who are known as '''naturopaths'''. Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the ] and thoroughly discredited, like ], to the widely accepted, like certain forms of ]." I could also support "A wide array of often ] practices branded as "natural", "non-invasive", or promoting "self-healing" are employed by its practitioners, who are known as '''naturopaths'''. Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the thoroughly discredited, like ], to the widely accepted, like certain forms of ]." The second of those simply introduces the word "often" before the word "pseudoscientific". | |||
#Details specific to North America, such as ''Naturopathic practitioners in the United States can be divided into three categories (...)'', shall be moved to chapter 4.1 North America. | |||
:::::::::# I could support rewriting that sentence to "The diagnoses made by naturopaths often have no basis in science and are often not accepted by mainstream medicine". | |||
#Atwood Kimball reference is based exclusively on Anglo-American sources | |||
:::::::::# I could support rewriting the second sentence to "Some states, however, allow naturopaths to perform minor surgery or even prescribe drugs." | |||
(] (]) 21:23, 27 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
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:::::::::I'm very pro-science, but I can agree that there is some editorializing in the current versions of those three passages, and I'd be willing to go that far if other editors agree. I don't think any of the changes I described really shift the POV significantly, but they make the language more encyclopedic and professional. --] (]) 21:50, 8 March 2024 (UTC) | ||
::::::::::Thanks. I think this a good start. I need to spend more time on this and when I can I will be glad to propose further changes here in this discussion. Thanks for this. ] (]) 00:37, 9 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::], thanks for helping the newbie. Let's address these issues one by one. I confirm that reference is missing for the statement ''Today, naturopathy is primarily practiced in the United States and Canada.''. The source #24 (Romeyke 2011) does not support this statement. Please check this source. (] (]) 16:41, 28 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
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::::::::::Regarding the suggestions of Tryptofish, I like the first sentence of point 1, and the sentences in points 2 and 3. They are accurate and, importantly, carry an encyclopedic tone. ] (]) 06:29, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | ||
::::::::::Naturopathy, or naturopathic medicine, encompasses a variety of treatment methods, including dietary and lifestyle changes, stress reduction, the use of herbs and dietary supplements, homeopathy, manipulative therapies, exercise therapy, practitioner-guided detoxification, and psychotherapy and counseling. Naturopathy often finds itself at the center of debate because its practices frequently lack a rigorous scientific basis. | |||
::::], please read the source again. With all respect, you are wrong. The content is wrong. You are misunderstanding the article and making a syllogism. Let me explain why I disagree with you, with the source and with the statement, and why it should be removed. | |||
::::::::::Many in the scientific and medical communities categorize it as an alternative medicine form, emphasizing the pseudoscientific nature of some of its methods, such as homeopathy, which are widely discredited. Despite these challenges to its validity, naturopathy is also recognized by some, including the World Health Organization (WHO), which advocates for an integrative approach that combines the best of traditional and conventional medical systems. | |||
::::# Let me paraphrase Alexbrn: ''Best not unduly to pick bits of of (especially) abstracts, but to take the whole article and properly reflect its overall content. This article is exclusively about ''cost of stay of '''inpatient''' naturopathy in Germany (rather than statistics about worldwide distribution of naturopathy). The sentence you are quoting is the first one of the abstract, in the ''background'' section. It does not reflect at all the content of the source. This source cannot be used for supporting the questioned sentence. | |||
::::::::::The field of naturopathy employs a diverse array of practices, described by practitioners as "natural," "non-invasive," or promoting "self-healing." This diversity ranges from methods without scientific support to those accepted within some regions of mainstream medicine, like specific forms of psychotherapy. The spectrum of practices complicates the generalization of naturopathic medicine's efficacy and scientific standing. | |||
::::# The questioned source does not say that ''naturopathy is rare in Germany''. It says that '' '''inpatient''' naturopathy is rare in Germany''. This is absolutely not the same meaning. It also makes a lot of sense if you understand what naturopathy is in German culture. This source does not reveal any valid information about the prevalence of naturopathy, as such, in Germany, let alone United States and Canada. | |||
::::::::::The basis of naturopathy includes various sources, from accredited educational programs to traditions rooted in vitalism and folk medicine. Its controversial nature stems not only from the debate over its scientific validity but also from differing regulatory landscapes across the globe. For example, the practice faces outright prohibition in a few states in the United States. In contrast, others offer licensure or registration that may permit a range of activities, including minor surgery and prescribing medications. ] (]) 11:45, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::# Even if naturopathy, as such, would be rare in Germany, you could not validly conclude that it ''is primarily practiced in the United States and Canada'', without making a syllogism or an Anglo-American bias. How would you know that none of about 200 other countries on the Earth have a lower rate of naturopathy? This is simply not the fact. | |||
:::::::::::Sorry my intro got cut off. Here is my attempt at a re-write. Thoughts? ] (]) 11:46, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::# As a conclusion, this sentence is more than ''questioned''. It is simply wrong. It shall at least be removed from the lead and preferably from the entire article. | |||
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::::: I accept your reasoning and will not oppose your removal of the sentence ("Today, naturopathy is practiced primarily ...") and the ref in both places where the sentence is used. -- ] (]) 02:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::: ], thanks for your coaching and thanks for your agreement. For your information, the prevalence of naturopathy in the US is 0.3%, while it is about 3-4% in German culture countries, according to national statistic sources. (] (]) 08:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
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I prefer the revised sentences presented above by Tryptofish. ] (]) 12:29, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
Lets address the second point. 25% of the lead is dedicated to details concerning only the USA, while the USA population is less then 5% of world population, while USA is only one out of 20 countries where English is a national language. I see it as a clear USA bias. The content of the paragraph is not key for understanding what naturopathy is about from a global point of view. This paragraph shall not be included in the lead, but remain in the chapter 4.1 about North America. (] (]) 08:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
:Tryptofish's rewrite takes on a more encyclopedic tone. @], you have done a lot of rewriting which may necessitate new source requirements, and a bit too wordy for these purposes, IMO. ] (]) 16:11, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
: The lead must be based on the content of the article, not on any realities "out there" in the world. To fix any USA bias, add more material and sourcing for other countries and cultures. That's how we build the encyclopedia. Also please add those statistics you mention. -- ] (]) 15:25, 29 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::I've enacted those edits: . --] (]) 20:11, 11 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: ], I do not contest the fact that the lead must be based on the content. I am wondering what makes this paragraph intrinsically so interesting that it deserves to pop up in the lead. What are the WP criteria for being in the lead ? This paragraph is an insignificant detail about administrative issues concerning a tiny percentage of the world population. From an international reader point of view, this is a very strong Anglo-American bias. There is enough space in Chapter 4.1 for it. What about the other 200 countries on this planet ? Do they also deserve a space in the lead for their national particularism ? How large could be the lead ? (] (]) 16:13, 29 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
::Yes, some of the current sources would suffice and others would take some digging to be exact (I have them in mind but would want to find specific page numbers, etc). Before I did that work I wanted to bring this draft to this group. Could you help me understand what is not encyclopedic about my re-write? Is there anything that in there that others think would be additive to the current article, even without using the entirety of it? ] (]) 14:06, 12 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
::: I don't have any particular burden for keeping that (3rd) paragraph in the lead. -- ] (]) 03:23, 30 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::You're writing is fine, in my opinion. I just meant that your style was a little wordier, for example, {{tq|Naturopathy often finds itself at the center of debate because its practices frequently lack a rigorous scientific basis.}} Your thoughts were heard and considered, and these types of articles are difficult spaces, as they tend to draw editors who have strong opinions/feelings about how the subject is presented, so no reason to be discouraged. ] (]) 14:50, 12 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::: ], do you have any particular burden if I remove it ? In order to understand your point of view, may I ask if you are an Anglo-American citizen ? I am not (that must have been obvious so far). (] (]) 04:44, 30 January 2015 (UTC)) | |||
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:::I provided an answer to your question on your Talk page, as doing so here might be inconsistent with ]. ] (]) 16:32, 12 March 2024 (UTC) | ||
:::I read JoJo's reply on your talk page, and I think it's a very reasonable explanation. | |||
:::I'll try to add some further explanation to the comments already made. The first thought I have when reading your suggested text is to ask myself: why would we need these changes? You can see from the changes that I recently enacted on the page, that I approached it as trying to fix things where I believed there was a valid reason to fix it. A lot of what you propose here moves content around, but I'm not seeing what problem it solves. | |||
:::For those things where I do see the reason why, I'm having the same reaction as Pyrrho and JoJo. The sentence that Pyrrho quotes just above strikes me as a little bit ], because "center of debate" comes across a little like "center of attention", and I think that's hyperbole. The paragraph that begins "Many in the scientific... " is where I particularly see a false balance of POV. First, "many" is an understatement. Second, by saying that they "emphasize" the negative aspects, it comes across as implying a little bit that there is a choice happening to emphasize those things while ignoring more positive things, which isn't supported by most sources. Third, when you say: "Despite these challenges... ", you make it sound like we would be saying, in Misplaced Pages's voice, that the "truth" would be breaking through. Although I'm not opposed to giving ''some'' additional weight to the WHO position (somewhere on the page, not sure about the lead), I wouldn't want to give it equal ] with the more critical views. After all, after the recent corrections, we already do make it clear that there are things like some types of psychotherapy that are accepted as mainstream. None of what I've just described is ''really bad'', more like just not enough of an improvement on what we have now. And in subtle ways, it seems to me like POV-pushing, because the changes in tone and emphasis trend in one direction. --] (]) 19:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Semi-protected edit request on 10 October 2024 == | |||
== NPOV problem fixed == | |||
{{edit semi-protected|Naturopathy|answered=yes}} | |||
I am trying to fix a problem with the Naturopathy article because of people just reverting edits that were meant for fixing a NPOV problem.--] (]) 13:31, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
Change "Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the pseudoscientific and thoroughly discredited, like homeopathy, to the widely accepted, like certain forms of psychotherapy." to a more accurate and respectful way to describe Naturopathic Medicine. That is to refer to it as "A holistic, evidence-informed approach to healthcare. It emphasizes the body’s innate ability to heal itself, focusing on natural therapies such as nutrition, lifestyle modification, herbal medicine, physical medicine, and, where applicable, modern medical diagnostics and interventions. Licensed Naturopathic Doctors (Licensed NDs, NMDs) are trained in both conventional medical sciences and natural therapies, allowing them to blend modern diagnostic tools with a broad range of natural treatments to support whole-person health." ] (]) 17:29, 10 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks for finally coming here and Talking. NPOV doesn't mean what you think it means. Please actually read ], and in particular the section ]. Thanks. ] (]) 13:32, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
: '''Not done.''' The requested content is ] ], and is inconsistent with the independent, reliable, secondary sources. ] (]) 18:01, 10 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::] '''<i style=color:red>DOES NOT APPLY</i> to naturopathy because all the claims behind naturopathy are mostly scientific facts.'''-- ] (]) 15:08, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
::As a leading paragraph, the language around this profession must be in line with the integrative form of medicine it is. It is preventative and functional at the core. It is not pseudoscientific at the core, but rather some of the schools are connected with top research centers. For example the Sonoran University's Plant Medicine Research Center (https://www.sonoran.edu/research/ric-scalzo-institute/) connected with Biology Research centers at Arizona State University and other institutions. Here are some of the research projects at this institute alone https://www.sonoran.edu/research/projects/. Therefore, my question is what would be recommended here to incorporate a more accurate introductory paragraph? Also, why isn't this page being monitored and corrected by the professional Naturopathic Medical association, rather than those who are not connected with this profession? | |||
:::I understand that you are asserting that. However, the article presents ''many'' reliable sources (as defined in ]) that contradict your assertion. WP content is based on reliable sources (which for health content, are defined in MEDRS), not on assertions of editors. If you don't understand that please read ] and ], which are WP policy. That is how we do things in Misplaced Pages. (and btw, making your assertion bold, all-caps, and red-colored doesn't add validity to it.) Thanks. ] (]) 15:18, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
::Here is another possible change from the national professional association (https://naturopathic.org/page/AboutNaturopathicMedicine): | |||
:::Do you have links to peer-reviewed papers that identify and study our "special vital energy" and its healing properties? --] <sup>]</sup> 15:24, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
::"The past 30 years has seen an extraordinary increase in consumer demand for safe, effective, and cost-effective natural health care. Naturopathic medicine has emerged as the health-care profession best suited to meet this demand, with naturopathic doctors trained in the art and science of both natural and conventional medicine. Naturopathic medicine is recognized as one of the original systems of medicine offering safe, effective patient-centered care that is a vital part of healthcare in the twenty-first century." ] (]) 20:04, 13 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::NeilN and Jytdog, this special vital energy you are talking about is basically your immune system. Now, it's my turn to fix the ] problem on this exact article. | |||
:::::Please heed what NeilN and Jytdog are saying, they are correct. Do you have any peer reviewed articles that support your position at all? ] (]) 15:50, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::And you can tell the state of a person's immune system by ]. Very scientific. --] <sup>]</sup> 15:53, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::: That's ] which is yet another pseudoscientific concept. ] (]) 16:16, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::What I mean by "vital energy fields" is immune systems, with immune cells <i style=color:red>INCLUDED</i>. -- ] (]) 18:29, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::i'll take it you are the same person that was editing under the other IP address. see my 2nd message to you above, which you are still not dealing with (including the pointlessness of making your words red or bold). This will be my last response to you, unless you start dealing with the policy and sourcing issues I discussed there, and that others here have also mentioned to you. I will just ignore posts with further unsupported assertions, and recommend that others here do the same.] (]) 18:47, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::This NPOV problem is too serious to ignore, so I have decided to fix the problems with this article about <i style=color:orange>millions<i/> of treatments that have been proven to be very effective. I will cite after the semi-protection goes away because that will make it possible for a ]. Also, naturopathy is '''''NOT''''' pseudoscience. So revert your edit that reverted my edit, and remove this article from the Pseudoscience template and the Pseudoscience category on this wiki so misleading claims made by drug companies won't affect Misplaced Pages. --] (]) 20:10, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Please stop changing the colours of your posts, it is hard to read. Oh and a source, an actual ] source, got one? ] (]) 20:13, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::That would be the website I JUST POSTED!!!!! --] (]) 20:15, 5 March 2015 (UTC)<b/> | |||
{{od}} Please actually read ]. Thanks. ] (]) 20:16, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:I encourage the IP editor to also read ]. The statements we have about pseudoscience, for example, are well sourced. ] (]) 20:47, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
These guys are not letting us reach a ]. <small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 22:03, 5 March 2015 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:Consensus is not, "Do what I say, I don't need proper sources". Have you read ] yet? --] <sup>]</sup> 22:09, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:Consensus is reached, through reasoned discussion that is '''based on policies and guidelines'''. We have told you what the relevant policies and guidelines are, and you are not dealing with them. Again please come back when you have read them and have arguments based on them. This place is not a wild west. ] (]) 22:10, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
I have read these and your arguments are not credible towards anybody who has read these rules. --] (]) 22:13, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
:'These guys are not letting us' so these two IPs are different people? OK..... Actually IP editor(s?) have you ever considered the off chance that maybe when everyone else who is an experienced editor is telling you something, perhaps, just maybe, you are wrong? ] (]) 22:19, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
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Naturopathy works.--] (]) 22:51, 5 March 2015 (UTC) | |||
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:::] research about plants is important, but generally it's not what naturopathy does. | |||
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::::Understood about soapboxing. However, the difference between Naturopathic Medicine from licensed professionals, is not the same as the overarching term "Naturopathy", and it is not pseudoscience. If the term Naturopathic Medicine is included on this page, then the lead paragraph is slandering the profession and not allowing correction to be made. The same can be said for the Alternative Medicine page. The word "pseudo-science" written in the lead paragraph will persuade people in a very clear direction, rather than providing facts around what these forms of health care are actually about. ] (]) 21:02, 13 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:::::And the truth is that naturopathy is to a large extent obsolete due to huge progress in mainstream medicine. ] (]) 22:14, 13 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::The modalities used by Licensed Naturopathic Doctors, and other Integrative Doctors, including Allopathic Doctors who have integrated with those modalities, are proven to be no where near obsolete. They, in fact, are continuing to increase in use each year as the general population of multiple countries have found that it is better to approach a healthy lifestyle before needing a doctor. It has been a bonus for these people newly entering the world of Integrative and Naturopathic medicine, when they find out that their illnesses can also be treated in this way. "Traditional, complementary and alternative medicine (TCAM) includes products (e.g. herbal medicines, dietary supplements) and therapies/practices (e.g. chiropractic, acupuncture), and is a popular healthcare choice for many people. This study systematically reviewed national surveys of TCAM use around the world. We identified studies carried out in 14 different countries and one continent (Europe) on the extent of use of TCAM in the general population. TCAM use was found to be substantial, ranging from 24 to 71.3%" https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35788539/ | |||
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::::::It's even increasing in veterinary medicine https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34157762/ ] (]) 20:56, 27 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Chiropractic? Means how to get cervical arterial dissection. | |||
:::::::Acupuncture? Means how to get infected or perforated lungs. | |||
:::::::Just because naturopathy is broadly used, it does not mean it isn't quackery. | |||
:::::::And frankly, I had a dislocated shoulder, very painful. Basically, I had to choose between ingesting opiates and no treatment. I decided that no treatment was the better option. That's why sometimes naturopathy is the preferred treatment: since no treatment is the preferred treatment option. ] (]) 21:12, 27 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::So, in that respect Reiki or chamomile tea are in fact substitutes for no treatment. ] (]) 11:02, 7 November 2024 (UTC) |
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"Recommend against"
The above conversation has digressed, so starting a new section about one specific statement: Naturopathic practitioners commonly recommend against following modern medical practices, including but not limited to medical testing, drugs, vaccinations, and surgery.
There are four sources currently supporting that statement. Three of them are studies of students, not naturopaths, and one of them says the opposite: Most chiropractic and naturopathic students are not averse to vaccination.
The Skeptical Inquirer source doesn't seem to support the statement at all. None of them mention recommending against surgery or medical testing that I can see.
That's a pretty bold statement painting with a very broad brush, so unless the sources support it, this sentence should be removed, in my opinion. Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 16:50, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- I can see some arguments either way about sourcing this to studies of naturopathy students, although to the extent that those sources are about what naturopaths are taught, what training they have when they go into practice, they may be legitimate. However, the SI source () is chock-full of examples of naturopaths rejecting modern medical practices. So I don't read it the way that you do. --Tryptofish (talk) 16:58, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Are we reading the same SI article? I just read the whole thing again and I still don't see anything like that. Practicing alternative therapies and promoting them is one thing. It's a very different thing to recommend against getting surgery or a vaccine. That implies a level of malice would require some good sources. Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 17:36, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- "Being a naturopathic physician, I believe in the body’s ability to heal itself. The body can do this very effectively when it is kept healthy. By taking extra good care of yourself and possibly working with a natural health practitioner, you can stay resistant to colds and the flu every winter. Remember, there are many routes to immunity besides obtaining a flu shot." One can quibble that this isn't a formal recommendation not to get a flu shot, but it's clearly recommending against getting one. --Tryptofish (talk) 17:46, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Even if you accept that logic for that one person's statement, where do we get "commonly"? and "surgeries?" Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 18:05, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Seems to be a lot of sourcing on this e.g. I guess they want to sell what they can (which doesn't include surgery), while also being dishonest about it (we don't oppose surgery!). Why not strengthen the sourcing if you feel the point isn't made well enough? Bon courage (talk) 18:10, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- We could also tweak the wording of the sentence, instead of completely removing it. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:16, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- That's a Consumer Reports owned contributed piece with no named author, so not sure how reliable. I can't imagine finding a reliable source for this since it seems like a somewhat exceptional claim that would need something more than a consumer reports PR piece. They commonly recommend against surgery when? In what cases would they tell a patient or the public to not get surgery? Maybe I'm completely wrong. And as Tryptofish suggested, I'd be fine rewording it somehow. Like, they "commonly prefer alternative treatments to conventional medicine, in general, including resistance to surgery and vaccines depending on the patient's needs or the practitioner's opinions." Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 19:27, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Alternatively: they "commonly encourage alternative treatments that are rejected by conventional medicine, including resistance to surgery or vaccines for some patients." --Tryptofish (talk) 19:34, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Tryptofish I think this is great, for what it's worth. It'd be nice to have better sources, but this wording seems much more accurate to me. Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 19:40, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Does anyone have any objections to going ahead with that wording? --Tryptofish (talk) 21:03, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
- This seems more encyclopedic in tone, and is better supported by the sources. I say go for this. >> boodyb 17:40, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
- It's already been implemented, but I guess nobody said so here. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:22, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Tryptofish I think this is great, for what it's worth. It'd be nice to have better sources, but this wording seems much more accurate to me. Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 19:40, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- The straining at the least to whitewash the page in the face of the sourcing is puzzling. The WaPo source is fine. Nothing exceptional about quacks quacking. Bon courage (talk) 19:39, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Alternatively: they "commonly encourage alternative treatments that are rejected by conventional medicine, including resistance to surgery or vaccines for some patients." --Tryptofish (talk) 19:34, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Seems to be a lot of sourcing on this e.g. I guess they want to sell what they can (which doesn't include surgery), while also being dishonest about it (we don't oppose surgery!). Why not strengthen the sourcing if you feel the point isn't made well enough? Bon courage (talk) 18:10, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Even if you accept that logic for that one person's statement, where do we get "commonly"? and "surgeries?" Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 18:05, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- "Being a naturopathic physician, I believe in the body’s ability to heal itself. The body can do this very effectively when it is kept healthy. By taking extra good care of yourself and possibly working with a natural health practitioner, you can stay resistant to colds and the flu every winter. Remember, there are many routes to immunity besides obtaining a flu shot." One can quibble that this isn't a formal recommendation not to get a flu shot, but it's clearly recommending against getting one. --Tryptofish (talk) 17:46, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- Are we reading the same SI article? I just read the whole thing again and I still don't see anything like that. Practicing alternative therapies and promoting them is one thing. It's a very different thing to recommend against getting surgery or a vaccine. That implies a level of malice would require some good sources. Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 17:36, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
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Add links to give a mire balanced overview. https://www.webmd.com/balance/what-is-naturopathic-medicine 105.209.150.182 (talk) 06:24, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
- Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Deltaspace (talk • contribs) 08:09, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Restructuring the lead
I visited this article to gain further knowledge on the subject as a layperson. However within 2 seconds into the article I sensed an acute force deterring me from proceeding. I attribute such experience to the blend of descriptive and judgemental statements upon inspection.
In the leading section the first paragraph already imposes the subject a generally dissuading tone. With the pejorative word "pseudoscientific" being the first blow, the next two ambivalent statements (Difficult to generalize...; The ideology...) are then followed by a negative judgement (The ethics...) culminating with the even scathing "quackery".
I acknowledge my limit as a layperson and I have no intention in altering the wording but I do recommend a restructuring. It would be optimal if the descriptive and judgemental statements be separated into discrete paragraphs with the former preceding the latter. Inserting judgemental statements early on can be perceived as shoving in opinions and, as worded in an earlier discussion, setting an agenda. I cite the French version article as a good example for reference. Seanetienne (talk) 16:56, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, Seanetienne, we do have an agenda already set, see WP:PSCI and WP:LUNATICS. tgeorgescu (talk) 17:02, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- And that's utter disrespect from you, Mr @Tgeorgescu. It is a consuming job to ward off conspiracy theorists and anti-science groups alike. However this time you have clamped down on the wrong person. I have no particular interest in alternative medicine and my attitude is ambivalent.
- I have seen elegant treatment of problematic subjects and I regret that the equivalent cannot by be applied here. By your passive-aggressive wording labelling me a "lunatic charlatan" and cherry-picking my word choice it is apparent that you are already blinded by deep prejudice.
- I hereby reject all your insinuation of all sorts. I shall not be commenting until someone tries to understand first instead of dismissing right away. I have done my fair share of input as an minor editor. Seanetienne (talk) 18:06, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, Seanetienne, I have never called you a lunatic charlatan. I made previously no reference to your own person. Unless you are actively an author of medical pseudoscience, you have no reason to feel offended by the words of Jimmy Wales. I never said that the words "lunatic charlatans" apply to you, nor did I say I am Wales. It is difficult for me to comprehend why do you think that the essay WP:LUNATICS applies to your own person. Wales's opinion is Wales's opinion. You seem to take it personally when either it isn't me who wrote the opinion (I'm not Wales), or I am simply not writing anything at all about your own person. tgeorgescu (talk) 21:13, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry this got off-topic from the intention of the opening post, but it's probably not a good idea to link to the "lunatics" essay in these kinds of discussions. WP:PSCI (as well as WP:MEDRS) are probably better choices. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:46, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, Seanetienne, I have never called you a lunatic charlatan. I made previously no reference to your own person. Unless you are actively an author of medical pseudoscience, you have no reason to feel offended by the words of Jimmy Wales. I never said that the words "lunatic charlatans" apply to you, nor did I say I am Wales. It is difficult for me to comprehend why do you think that the essay WP:LUNATICS applies to your own person. Wales's opinion is Wales's opinion. You seem to take it personally when either it isn't me who wrote the opinion (I'm not Wales), or I am simply not writing anything at all about your own person. tgeorgescu (talk) 21:13, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
Recent edits
I think the recent major rewrite of the page, , may have seriously introduced a false balance and may not have consensus. For the moment, I won't revert it myself, but I think it may have to be reverted if other editors besides me object. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:19, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- I object as well, but the content seems to have already been reverted. Perhaps the editor will come here to seek consensus? JoJo Anthrax (talk) 06:20, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- With three of us objecting, I'm happy with the revert, for now. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:41, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, I was the one editor that made recent changes. To be clear, I am not a paid editor and I don't have a strong bias on this topic. In fact, I am generally skeptical of alternative medicine though have recently become more curious about it as I personally explore some health issues. I was very surprised when I found both this page and the functional medicine page on Misplaced Pages to be so completely lacking in neutrality on the topics. In no way did I attempt to hide or minimize the many criticisms of naturopathy, but it seems plainly obvious to me the article in its current format really does not follow Misplaced Pages guidelines. I spent some real time researching legitimate sources that could help provide a more balanced. My goal in doing so was to help the article be more in line with the pillar "Misplaced Pages is written from a neutral point of view."
- This pillar states: We strive for articles with an impartial tone that document and explain major points of view, giving due weight for their prominence. We avoid advocacy, and we characterize information and issues rather than debate them. In some areas there may be just one well-recognized point of view; in others, we describe multiple points of view, presenting each accurately and in context rather than as "the truth" or "the best view"
- The editor who reverted my edits seems to think that this topic has just one well-recognized point of view, or that that the view that naturopathy is only "quackery" has such prominence any disagreement with this violates the principle of due weight. This is not backed up by credible claims but rather seems like the editor has an axe to grind on this topic. This also seems to be contradicted by the fact that many US states and other nations offer formal license and regulatory frameworks for traditional medicines, which I also cited by linking to a list of states that currently license. It had previously read that "Naturopathy is prohibited in three U.S. states (Florida, South Carolina, and Tennessee) and tightly regulated in many others. Some states have lax regulations, however, and may allow naturopaths to perform minor surgery or even prescribe drugs." This is not neutral, not does it give any credence to the legitimacy that a regulatory system confers.
- In introducing a more balanced tone I was careful to cite from legitimate, mainstream and credible sources such as a report published by the World Health Organization (WHO). Indeed, in this report, the WHO Director-General writes that "Traditional and complementary medicine (T&CM) is an important and often underestimated health resource with many applications." In flatly rejecting this, the editor completely ignores whole huge segments of the global population who very much do rely on traditional medicines. Implying that there is consensus that it is "quackery" seems to be a very western centric point of view.
- I am going to revert back to the changes I made because I stand by them and believe that I was meticulous in my observance of rules and made a good faith effort to improve the article. Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 12:37, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
I am going to revert back to the changes I made
You shouldn't. There are three editors objecting to the changes so there is no WP:consensus for them. Wait and see how the discussion develops. Robby.is.on (talk) 12:41, 8 March 2024 (UTC)- It was problematic from a whitewashing/WP:GEVAL perspective. So not a good idea. Bon courage (talk) 12:42, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- I think we're now at five editors objecting to the change, and one supporting it, so this is WP:1AM. Also, believing that one is "right" is not an accepted reason to edit against WP:CONSENSUS. And I want to explain that the WP:NPOV policy does not say that we have to give similar prominence to every POV, and thus editors here are not claiming that the "quackery" perspective in the only recognized POV. We're saying that we should give WP:DUE weight according to the preponderance of reliable (in this case, WP:MEDRS) sources.
- I'm open to the possibility that we should include some increased coverage of favorable perspectives, but I would want to be able to examine them one-by-one. I'm perfectly willing to discuss making some changes, here in talk, as opposed to just putting the changes en masse on the page without prior consensus. Wikiwriter, if you'd like to list here the changes that you think are most likely to gain consensus, with sourcing, I'd be happy to discuss them. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:18, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- "ignores whole huge segments of the global population who very much do rely on traditional medicines"—yup, the rely on such medicines because effective medicine is very expensive and many countries would go bankrupt through making it widely available to their population. Sad, but true. And it does not stop 99% of the traditional medicines from being quackery. E.g. the Cambodian government recognized that cupping therapy is WP:CB, but also that it is widely used in their country. tgeorgescu (talk) 18:42, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- There are reasons for relying on tried and true medicine over generations, especially if cost is a factor, when we know that iatrogenic disease is one of the leading causes of illness. This is especially the case in the USA https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC4923397/
- https://journals.lww.com/journalpatientsafety/Fulltext/2013/09000/A_New,_Evidence_based_Estimate_of_Patient_Harms.2.aspx EDA2Z (talk) 20:36, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, mainstream medicine can be misused. But that only proves it is very powerful. tgeorgescu (talk) 21:27, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
- "ignores whole huge segments of the global population who very much do rely on traditional medicines"—yup, the rely on such medicines because effective medicine is very expensive and many countries would go bankrupt through making it widely available to their population. Sad, but true. And it does not stop 99% of the traditional medicines from being quackery. E.g. the Cambodian government recognized that cupping therapy is WP:CB, but also that it is widely used in their country. tgeorgescu (talk) 18:42, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- Echoing the comments of Tryptofish I suggest, Wikiwriter43103840, that you present your desired content on this Talk page, one item at a time, so that it can be discussed amongst interested editors and a consensus - one way or another - achieved. Throwing everything into the article at once is simply not going to work. I note also that you should restrict your comments to content, and not on your opinion(s) of other editors, as your comment above (
seems like the editor has an axe to grind on this topic
) is unhelpful and could easily be interpreted as a personal attack (see WP:PA). JoJo Anthrax (talk) 20:12, 8 March 2024 (UTC)- Agree. Wikiwriter43103840 would be best off working on this talk page making edit requests or something similar, identifying all changes in POV and the references that support such changes. --Hipal (talk) 20:40, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- OK, apologies for just reverting without further discussion.
- Here are the changes that I made and why I made them:
- The current opening reads as follows: " A wide array of pseudoscientific practices branded as "natural", "non-invasive", or promoting "self-healing" are employed by its practitioners, who are known as naturopaths. Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the thoroughly discredited, like homeopathy, to the widely accepted, like certain forms of psychotherapy." Not only is this non-neutral, but it also is self contradictory. How can it be both "a wide array of pseudoscientific practices" and also include "widely accepted" treatments? I suggested opening with a description that acknowledges the debates about it but does not immediately draw a conclusion. I included reference to the WHO report to back up my suggestion that a more positive POV deserves prominence alongside what is already there.
- The claim that "The diagnoses made by naturopaths often have no factual merit" is not supported by the citations provided. The citations could be good sources to legitimize a claim that naturopathy does not rely on the scientific method, or even that what it advises is often not supported by medical research, but to flatly claim that the diagnoses often have no factual merit seems to misrepresent the citations, unless I am missing something.
- The following is also problematic: "Naturopathy is prohibited in three U.S. states (Florida, South Carolina, and Tennessee) and tightly regulated in many others. Some states have lax regulations, however, and may allow naturopaths to perform minor surgery or even prescribe drugs." Why not just acknowledge that some states permit it and regulate it while others prohibit it? It does not seem like the purpose of this article to pass judgement ("lax") on public policy relating to the topic, the role of the article should be to describe public policy from a neutral perspective, and then describe various lobbying efforts focused on changing policies.
- The language I replaced it with attempts to explain that naturopathy is not one single approach or way of doing things. It includes fully licensed medical doctors who are also trained in naturopathy and use it as a form of complimentary medicine to totally dangerous anti-vax crazy people who are peddling things that could hurt people. I tried to encompass all of that, and to explain that it is debated. In my mind this was expanding on what is already here. What do you all think? Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 21:20, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- NPOV isn't half-way between science and pseudoscience. NPOV sides with science and shuns pseudoscience. tgeorgescu (talk) 21:31, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- I don’t think a Misplaced Pages article is about “siding” at all. It’s about explaining the world as it is. The purpose is not to stake out a position. I’m not sure why you seem to have it out for me. Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 00:36, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
- You have the mistaken idea that
NPOV sides with science and shuns pseudoscience
is open for rational debate, and that you would be allowed to disobey it. No, it is a matter of website policy, namely WP:PSCI, you might want to read it. - Misplaced Pages has no unfettered access to the world as it is. But it has unfettered access to scientific publications. tgeorgescu (talk) 17:59, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
- You are unkind. Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 02:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
- What I am saying is that Misplaced Pages has WP:RULES, so our WP:RULES are not open to rational counter-argumentation, at least not at this talk page. This is not the place for changing the WP:RULES. Editors at this talk page cannot change the rules of the game. Not being aware that Misplaced Pages sides with mainstream science is extremely naive. tgeorgescu (talk) 19:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
- One last time, @Wikiwriter43103840: per WP:PA, please restrict your comments here to article content, not on your opinions about other editors. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 06:47, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- I feel the need to say, also, that tgeorgescu should be more willing to engage collegially with suggestions by Wikiwriter, who I feel had a somewhat valid reason for feeling treated unkindly. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:00, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- The few past days, I did not really engage with their positive claims, but I was sensing that they do not understand how Misplaced Pages works. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:48, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
- I feel the need to say, also, that tgeorgescu should be more willing to engage collegially with suggestions by Wikiwriter, who I feel had a somewhat valid reason for feeling treated unkindly. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:00, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- You are unkind. Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 02:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
- You have the mistaken idea that
- I don’t think a Misplaced Pages article is about “siding” at all. It’s about explaining the world as it is. The purpose is not to stake out a position. I’m not sure why you seem to have it out for me. Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 00:36, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for this post. My recollection of the edit was that more was changed than what those three points refer to, and what you've posted is more of a rationale than a proposal for revised text. But I'm happy to work with it for now, focusing on more limited corrections if any are needed.
- I could support rewriting those sentences to "A wide array of practices branded as "natural", "non-invasive", or promoting "self-healing" are employed by its practitioners, who are known as naturopaths. Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the pseudoscientific and thoroughly discredited, like homeopathy, to the widely accepted, like certain forms of psychotherapy." I could also support "A wide array of often pseudoscientific practices branded as "natural", "non-invasive", or promoting "self-healing" are employed by its practitioners, who are known as naturopaths. Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the thoroughly discredited, like homeopathy, to the widely accepted, like certain forms of psychotherapy." The second of those simply introduces the word "often" before the word "pseudoscientific".
- I could support rewriting that sentence to "The diagnoses made by naturopaths often have no basis in science and are often not accepted by mainstream medicine".
- I could support rewriting the second sentence to "Some states, however, allow naturopaths to perform minor surgery or even prescribe drugs."
- I'm very pro-science, but I can agree that there is some editorializing in the current versions of those three passages, and I'd be willing to go that far if other editors agree. I don't think any of the changes I described really shift the POV significantly, but they make the language more encyclopedic and professional. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:50, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I think this a good start. I need to spend more time on this and when I can I will be glad to propose further changes here in this discussion. Thanks for this. Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 00:37, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
- Regarding the suggestions of Tryptofish, I like the first sentence of point 1, and the sentences in points 2 and 3. They are accurate and, importantly, carry an encyclopedic tone. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 06:29, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- Naturopathy, or naturopathic medicine, encompasses a variety of treatment methods, including dietary and lifestyle changes, stress reduction, the use of herbs and dietary supplements, homeopathy, manipulative therapies, exercise therapy, practitioner-guided detoxification, and psychotherapy and counseling. Naturopathy often finds itself at the center of debate because its practices frequently lack a rigorous scientific basis.
- Many in the scientific and medical communities categorize it as an alternative medicine form, emphasizing the pseudoscientific nature of some of its methods, such as homeopathy, which are widely discredited. Despite these challenges to its validity, naturopathy is also recognized by some, including the World Health Organization (WHO), which advocates for an integrative approach that combines the best of traditional and conventional medical systems.
- The field of naturopathy employs a diverse array of practices, described by practitioners as "natural," "non-invasive," or promoting "self-healing." This diversity ranges from methods without scientific support to those accepted within some regions of mainstream medicine, like specific forms of psychotherapy. The spectrum of practices complicates the generalization of naturopathic medicine's efficacy and scientific standing.
- The basis of naturopathy includes various sources, from accredited educational programs to traditions rooted in vitalism and folk medicine. Its controversial nature stems not only from the debate over its scientific validity but also from differing regulatory landscapes across the globe. For example, the practice faces outright prohibition in a few states in the United States. In contrast, others offer licensure or registration that may permit a range of activities, including minor surgery and prescribing medications. Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 11:45, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry my intro got cut off. Here is my attempt at a re-write. Thoughts? Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 11:46, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- NPOV isn't half-way between science and pseudoscience. NPOV sides with science and shuns pseudoscience. tgeorgescu (talk) 21:31, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- Agree. Wikiwriter43103840 would be best off working on this talk page making edit requests or something similar, identifying all changes in POV and the references that support such changes. --Hipal (talk) 20:40, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- It was problematic from a whitewashing/WP:GEVAL perspective. So not a good idea. Bon courage (talk) 12:42, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- With three of us objecting, I'm happy with the revert, for now. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:41, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
I prefer the revised sentences presented above by Tryptofish. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 12:29, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- Tryptofish's rewrite takes on a more encyclopedic tone. @Wikiwriter43103840, you have done a lot of rewriting which may necessitate new source requirements, and a bit too wordy for these purposes, IMO. Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 16:11, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- I've enacted those edits: . --Tryptofish (talk) 20:11, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, some of the current sources would suffice and others would take some digging to be exact (I have them in mind but would want to find specific page numbers, etc). Before I did that work I wanted to bring this draft to this group. Could you help me understand what is not encyclopedic about my re-write? Is there anything that in there that others think would be additive to the current article, even without using the entirety of it? Wikiwriter43103840 (talk) 14:06, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
- You're writing is fine, in my opinion. I just meant that your style was a little wordier, for example,
Naturopathy often finds itself at the center of debate because its practices frequently lack a rigorous scientific basis.
Your thoughts were heard and considered, and these types of articles are difficult spaces, as they tend to draw editors who have strong opinions/feelings about how the subject is presented, so no reason to be discouraged. Pyrrho the Skipper (talk) 14:50, 12 March 2024 (UTC) - I provided an answer to your question on your Talk page, as doing so here might be inconsistent with article Talk page guidelines. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 16:32, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
- I read JoJo's reply on your talk page, and I think it's a very reasonable explanation.
- I'll try to add some further explanation to the comments already made. The first thought I have when reading your suggested text is to ask myself: why would we need these changes? You can see from the changes that I recently enacted on the page, that I approached it as trying to fix things where I believed there was a valid reason to fix it. A lot of what you propose here moves content around, but I'm not seeing what problem it solves.
- For those things where I do see the reason why, I'm having the same reaction as Pyrrho and JoJo. The sentence that Pyrrho quotes just above strikes me as a little bit WP:PEACOCK, because "center of debate" comes across a little like "center of attention", and I think that's hyperbole. The paragraph that begins "Many in the scientific... " is where I particularly see a false balance of POV. First, "many" is an understatement. Second, by saying that they "emphasize" the negative aspects, it comes across as implying a little bit that there is a choice happening to emphasize those things while ignoring more positive things, which isn't supported by most sources. Third, when you say: "Despite these challenges... ", you make it sound like we would be saying, in Misplaced Pages's voice, that the "truth" would be breaking through. Although I'm not opposed to giving some additional weight to the WHO position (somewhere on the page, not sure about the lead), I wouldn't want to give it equal WP:WEIGHT with the more critical views. After all, after the recent corrections, we already do make it clear that there are things like some types of psychotherapy that are accepted as mainstream. None of what I've just described is really bad, more like just not enough of an improvement on what we have now. And in subtle ways, it seems to me like POV-pushing, because the changes in tone and emphasis trend in one direction. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
- You're writing is fine, in my opinion. I just meant that your style was a little wordier, for example,
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Change "Difficult to generalize, these treatments range from the pseudoscientific and thoroughly discredited, like homeopathy, to the widely accepted, like certain forms of psychotherapy." to a more accurate and respectful way to describe Naturopathic Medicine. That is to refer to it as "A holistic, evidence-informed approach to healthcare. It emphasizes the body’s innate ability to heal itself, focusing on natural therapies such as nutrition, lifestyle modification, herbal medicine, physical medicine, and, where applicable, modern medical diagnostics and interventions. Licensed Naturopathic Doctors (Licensed NDs, NMDs) are trained in both conventional medical sciences and natural therapies, allowing them to blend modern diagnostic tools with a broad range of natural treatments to support whole-person health." EDA2Z (talk) 17:29, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
- Not done. The requested content is flowery WP:SOAP, and is inconsistent with the independent, reliable, secondary sources. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 18:01, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
- As a leading paragraph, the language around this profession must be in line with the integrative form of medicine it is. It is preventative and functional at the core. It is not pseudoscientific at the core, but rather some of the schools are connected with top research centers. For example the Sonoran University's Plant Medicine Research Center (https://www.sonoran.edu/research/ric-scalzo-institute/) connected with Biology Research centers at Arizona State University and other institutions. Here are some of the research projects at this institute alone https://www.sonoran.edu/research/projects/. Therefore, my question is what would be recommended here to incorporate a more accurate introductory paragraph? Also, why isn't this page being monitored and corrected by the professional Naturopathic Medical association, rather than those who are not connected with this profession?
- Here is another possible change from the national professional association (https://naturopathic.org/page/AboutNaturopathicMedicine):
- "The past 30 years has seen an extraordinary increase in consumer demand for safe, effective, and cost-effective natural health care. Naturopathic medicine has emerged as the health-care profession best suited to meet this demand, with naturopathic doctors trained in the art and science of both natural and conventional medicine. Naturopathic medicine is recognized as one of the original systems of medicine offering safe, effective patient-centered care that is a vital part of healthcare in the twenty-first century." EDA2Z (talk) 20:04, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Pharmacognosy research about plants is important, but generally it's not what naturopathy does.
- Also, Misplaced Pages isn't a PR venue, see WP:SOAPBOXING. tgeorgescu (talk) 20:15, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Understood about soapboxing. However, the difference between Naturopathic Medicine from licensed professionals, is not the same as the overarching term "Naturopathy", and it is not pseudoscience. If the term Naturopathic Medicine is included on this page, then the lead paragraph is slandering the profession and not allowing correction to be made. The same can be said for the Alternative Medicine page. The word "pseudo-science" written in the lead paragraph will persuade people in a very clear direction, rather than providing facts around what these forms of health care are actually about. EDA2Z (talk) 21:02, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Our official stance: WP:LUNATICS. In other words: Misplaced Pages is biased for mainstream science and the medical orthodoxy.
- And the truth is that naturopathy is to a large extent obsolete due to huge progress in mainstream medicine. tgeorgescu (talk) 22:14, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- The modalities used by Licensed Naturopathic Doctors, and other Integrative Doctors, including Allopathic Doctors who have integrated with those modalities, are proven to be no where near obsolete. They, in fact, are continuing to increase in use each year as the general population of multiple countries have found that it is better to approach a healthy lifestyle before needing a doctor. It has been a bonus for these people newly entering the world of Integrative and Naturopathic medicine, when they find out that their illnesses can also be treated in this way. "Traditional, complementary and alternative medicine (TCAM) includes products (e.g. herbal medicines, dietary supplements) and therapies/practices (e.g. chiropractic, acupuncture), and is a popular healthcare choice for many people. This study systematically reviewed national surveys of TCAM use around the world. We identified studies carried out in 14 different countries and one continent (Europe) on the extent of use of TCAM in the general population. TCAM use was found to be substantial, ranging from 24 to 71.3%" https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35788539/
- https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/36103571/
- It's even increasing in veterinary medicine https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34157762/ EDA2Z (talk) 20:56, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
- Chiropractic? Means how to get cervical arterial dissection.
- Acupuncture? Means how to get infected or perforated lungs.
- Just because naturopathy is broadly used, it does not mean it isn't quackery.
- And frankly, I had a dislocated shoulder, very painful. Basically, I had to choose between ingesting opiates and no treatment. I decided that no treatment was the better option. That's why sometimes naturopathy is the preferred treatment: since no treatment is the preferred treatment option. tgeorgescu (talk) 21:12, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
- So, in that respect Reiki or chamomile tea are in fact substitutes for no treatment. tgeorgescu (talk) 11:02, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Understood about soapboxing. However, the difference between Naturopathic Medicine from licensed professionals, is not the same as the overarching term "Naturopathy", and it is not pseudoscience. If the term Naturopathic Medicine is included on this page, then the lead paragraph is slandering the profession and not allowing correction to be made. The same can be said for the Alternative Medicine page. The word "pseudo-science" written in the lead paragraph will persuade people in a very clear direction, rather than providing facts around what these forms of health care are actually about. EDA2Z (talk) 21:02, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
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