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== Odds and ends == == "over" vs "more than" ==


"Over" vs "more than" has been a bugbear of American journalists since ] invented this prescription in the late 19th century. It's largely ignored outside of journalism, and has rarely—if ever—been considered an issue outside of the US (this article is in Canadian English). I'd appreciate if Lugnuts would revert his mistaken "correction" in this article, which improves the article in no way.
*Okuyama, Yoshiko (2013) "Shinto and Buddhist Metaphors in Departures," Journal of Religion & Film: Vol. 17: Iss. 1, Article 39. Available at: http://digitalcommons.unomaha.edu/jrf/vol17/iss1/39 - Reliable, do you think? I'm tempted to say yes. A bit of good stuff here.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 07:18, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
* ''The Chicago Manual of Style'': "As an equivalent of more than, this word is perfectly good idiomatic English."
**The author, Yoshiko Okuyama, is an associate professor at the University of Hawaii, HILO (), so I guess that's it. I'll get on this when I get back home.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 07:28, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
* ''Garner's Modern American Usage'': "The charge that over is inferior to more than is a baseless crotchet."
***It says University of Nebraska at the top—I assume that's reliable. ''Journal of Religion & Film''{{'}}s a peer-reviewed journal. Looks legit to me. ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 07:46, 18 July 2014 (UTC)
* ''Fowler's Modern English Usage'': "Since the later part of the 19c there has been a strong tradition in American newspapers and some American usage guides of hostility to the use of ''over'' with a follwing numeral ... In Britain, ''over'' has been used with a following numeral without restriction or adverse comment throughout the same period''.
* ]&nbsp;] 14:48, 15 August 2015 (UTC)


* More from the style guides:
== little suggestion & question ==
* ''The American Heritage Guide to Contemporary Usage and Style''
I'm translating this wonderful article to Chinese, just begin last night, now processing the "Style" section, I got some suggestions and questions follow (I'm Chinese, so please forgive my English is not very well):
*: '''over/more than'''
#"As the film continues, Byrnes opined ..." This is the first time the reviewer's name came up, I think should mention his full name "Paul Byrnes", maybe even mention he is working for the newspaper at Sydney like below;
*:: While working as a newspaper editor in the late 19th century, William Cullen Bryant forbade the use of over in the sense of "more than," as in ''These rocks are over 5 million years old''. Bryant provided no rationale for this injunction, but such was his stature that the stipulation was championed by other American editors, who also felt no reason to offer an explanation. Later usage critics allowed the usage in some contexts, but their reasons are dubious at best. In point of fact, over has been used as a synonym of more than since the 1300s. Since no reasonable justification for its ban has ever been expounded, it may be safely ignored.
#:My mistake (happened when refactoring the section). Fixed.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 22:41, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
#"Yakita drew parallels between the instrument and the encoffining ceremony", also first time the name "Yakita" came up, and I can't found his (or her?) full name anywhere within the article, I check the source article "The dirty little secret of Oscar winner 'Departures'" by Roger Moore, still can't found anyone named "Yakita", consider this article has a lot about the director Yojiro Takita, maybe this is a typo?
#*Yes, it was a typo. Now fixed. ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 20:29, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
#**D'oh! That's me again. Thanks, Jaro and Curly.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 22:42, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
#Still tranlating, maybe more will follow.--] (]) 11:33, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
#* By the way, ], I've noticed all the work you've been doing translating FAs (like the Winsor McCay animation ones I wrote). Thanks a lot! ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 22:44, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
#**My thanks too.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 22:57, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
#Translation and double check done about an hour ago, here's two minor suggestion: 1. "Explanatory notes" h.: Hirosue did not won, only nominated; 2. I seem some of the Japanese author has there original name with the source, like 勝田友巳, 渡辺祥子, 山根貞夫, 福永聖二... but still some doesn't, this could be very useful infomation for anyone doesn't familiar with the tranlation from English to Japanese, so is there any chance to add those names? At last I must say: consider the length for this article, I'm very surprice that I could only found those three minor problems, starting late March 2013, I already tranlate over 400 FA, FL & GA, this is still very impressed! Good job and thanks for kind words from ] & ],hope my effort will be appreciated some day at Chinese Misplaced Pages.--] (]) 16:10, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
#* I only started adding the kanji in comments after I had trouble reading a couple of the names. Even simple, common names like 中島 are pronounced ''Nakajima'' for some families and ''Nakashima'' for others. And it works the other way—names like ''Tanabe'', which is 田辺 for ], and 棚部 for one of the sources in the article. I'll definitely addng them in the future. Whoever came up with the idea of multiple readings for kanji needs a firm ]. ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 21:31, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
#* The source says "2000年には映画『秘密』、2008年には映画『おくりびと』で、日本アカデミー賞優秀主演女優賞を受賞。", which means Hirosue won Best Actress both in 2000 for ''Himitsu'' and 2008 for ''Okuribito''. ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 21:36, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
#**The official website () says that Hirosue was only nominated in 2000. Will update this page.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 22:56, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
#Got something (I forgot last night, sorry). Some award that already had link should be specific, like ], and Hirosue's nomination, should be "nominated for a ]", another one: , but within the article, is a red link "]", at China, Golden Rooster & Hundred Flowers are actually two seperate awards, the first will held at odd year, I mean like 2001, 2003, 2005, 2007..., second one held at 2002, 2004, 2006, and consider the source's title is "金鸡国际影展举行颁奖典礼" (which should tranlate to "Golden Rooster International Film Festival Awards Ceremony Held", add the first word"Golden"), so I think at here this red link is unnecessary, should just change to ].--] (]) 01:21, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#:Are we sure that this is the Golden Rooster? I know why Curly used ILL, because the Chinese article combines the two.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 11:18, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#::The Oricon source calls the award 金鶏百花賞, which should be the Chinese 中国金鸡百花电影节. I remember having difficulty figuring this out, and I wouldn't be surprised if it turned out to be wrong (or if the sources got it wrong—it's not like Japanese–Chinese communication is known for being strong). ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 12:00, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#::The ja.wp article ] is the one that lists ''Okuribito'', and interwiki links to the Chinese ]. ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 12:15, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#:::the "Golden Rooster and Hundred Flowers Film Festival" are actually two awards, one for odd year, another for even year, put them together is simply for people doesn't remember exactly which year some movie win some award, and base on another source this article list: , I'm sure this is only the "Golden Rooster International Film Festival Awards Ceremony Held".--] (]) 14:09, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#::::I don't mind just having the link to GR. That's what several of the English sources had. Wish people on different Wikipedias would make up their minds whether or not they should be one or two articles, though.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 14:22, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#] source's publisher should be Flixster, like "publisher = Flixster | work = rotten tomatoes", and ] should be "publisher = CBS | work = Metacritic", ] should be "publisher = The New York Times Company | work = The New York Times". "work= The Hollywood Reporter | publisher = Prometheus Global Media", "publisher = IMDB.com | work = Box Office Mojo", "work = Variety | publisher = ]"--] (]) 01:39, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#:We haven't listed publishers for newspapers (any of them, far as I can tell), and for websites we've only listed those which are not necessarily recognizable as websites themselves.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 11:18, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#::I keep on being told that either the sources should ''all'' have the publisher, or none of them. As I sometimes can't even figure out who the publisher is, I've taken to just dropping it across the board (except for books, of course). ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 12:00, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#::*I think that's silly, to be honest. All or none? No, please. We don't need a publisher for newspapers, generally, but online news sources (especially non-English ones) may not be recognized as easily by individuals checking the article, and thus should be included.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 13:48, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
#::**Well, that depends on what you mean by "publisher". In the case of "work= The Hollywood Reporter | publisher = Prometheus Global Media", many editors put "The Hollywood Reporter" as "publisher"—I imagine because it's not immediately clear what the poorly-named parameter "work" is supposed to be for. From your comment, I don't get the feeling that you mean it's silly to leave out "Prometheus Global Media". ]&nbsp;⚞]⚟ 00:33, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
#:::Is fine for me, I just seem some articles had those, so I thought maybe this is the best something.--] (]) 14:09, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
# The claim that this is the first Japanese production to win an Academy Award for Best Foreign Language film utterly ignores the three Japanese films that won Honorary Foreign Language Awards for the best foreign language film released in the United States during the years prior to 1956: Rashomon (1951), Gate of Hell (1954), and Samurai, the Legend of Musashi (1955). The Honorary Foreign Language Award, given from 1947-1955, was the predecessor to the current Best Foreign Language Film Award that was introduced in 1956 to replace the Honorary Foreign Language Award. Some acknowledgement of this would be appropriate as how it's currently stated is misleading. ] (]) 04:27, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
#:Erm... did you miss the footnote? ? It's covered.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 04:43, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
#:: Maybe we could add "... though others had earlier won honorary awards" or something, and leave the details in the footnote? ]&nbsp;] 06:03, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
#:::Sources don't qualify their statement like that; we shouldn't in-text either. The statement remains 100% true even without a qualifier.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 09:04, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
#:::: Of course it's true, but I imagine Jlind is perhaps not the only reader to misread it. ]&nbsp;] 09:07, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
#:::::I'd rather we duplicate the footnote. I'll do that.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 09:08, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
#:::::And done.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 09:27, 15 August 2015 (UTC)


*''New Hart's Rules'':
==Only eight edits in the whole of 2013, but nearly 700 (and counting) in 2014!==
*: In expressing approximate figures some styles traditionally preferred more than to over. Modern usage tends to treat them as synonyms:
This article is just a total ego trip. A stable article is turned into a long-winded cut-and-paste. No more plain cast list, no more soundtrack list, no more simple location listing. Instead we have reams and reams of padding (ie twaddle) about how it was received and reviewed. Yeah we get that it was an international hit, but just how many reviewers comments does that require? Likewise how much does it matter the subject is taboo in Japan, it was a hit outside of Japan.
*:: She was born in Oxford and has lived in Ireland for over twenty-five years
*:: She was born in Oxford and has lived in Ireland for more than twenty-five years
*: although there are certain contexts in which one or the other is syntactically correct:
*:: We spent a lot of time together, well over two months, and so we really got to know each other
*::There's more than one way of tackling this problem
*: or sounds more natural, e.g. in reference to age:
*:: Applicants must be over 25 and have had a clean driving licence for more than five years


* ''The New York Times Manual of Style and Usage, 5th Edition'':
This article is why Misplaced Pages is a nothing more than an outlet for people with feeling of social inadequacies. The article is entirely invented by plagiarising what can be found on the internet or published sources (lol it's only an infringement of copyright if it's obvious, however all Misplaced Pages is paraphrased plagiarism!). Instead of keeping it tight - like the article was for an entire year, someone with a need to feel self important copy/pastes everything they can just so they can get a "good article". And in turn screws the reader.
*:


* ]&nbsp;] 11:12, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Sorry but the article is now a self-indulgent piece of crap that serves no useful purpose except to the person who wrote it. And they now spend all their time like a ] trying to stop any edits that might harm their precious ego trip. You can feel the sanctimonious sense of achievement oozing from the article, how the information contained therein is not for informing the casual reader but garnering self promotion for the author. The sections are too long, and the writing boorish and verbose.


Anyone with half-a-brain should be given the choice of whether they wish to read the non self-indulgent article from a year ago or this testament to hubris! An article that is all ego trip is only "good" for its author not the reader. :-( ] (]) 17:57, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


::"More than" is correct as it's dealing with a number (quantity) "more than a hundred Takita fans visit per day". In the '''very same section''' ("Impact") the opening paragraph states "...more than 230,000 copies were purchased". It would be incorrect to have that as "...over 230,000 copies were purchased". Thanks. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 15:21, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
==Cast==
::: It is not a ''discussion'' when you ''ignore'' what the other person has posted, Lugnuts. I've just demonstrated to you where you are wrong, and you have not addressed it in any way, shape, or form. "Over" is and always has been correct when used for quantities, and this correct usage has only been disputed in recent history by a segment of the American population (and ''Chicago'', ''Garner's'', and the ''AP Stylebook'' disagree with the prescription). This is not an American film, and it's not written in American English. ]&nbsp;] 15:26, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
A cast list is useful for the following reasons: Notable actors are listed (even if they have a minor role) - Concise Main actors can be found easily. There is no reason, why this section can not remain together with a plot section which also links to the main characters. A rule specific to one article created by ''the main contributers'' tastes a bit of ownership.] (]) 07:17, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
::: {{ping|Lugnuts}} Please demonstrate your good faith by reverting the disputed edit and ''participating'' in finding a consensus for your change. If you fail to find a consensus it'll go right back to where it was regardless. ]&nbsp;] 15:40, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
*We have a cast list: worked into the body of the plot. The main characters and their actors are readily accessible there, as is the context of their performance. Furthermore, ] recommends that only one form of cast list be included, and notes that stand-alone lists work better for stub-class articles (which this is certainly not). Through the GA and FA review process, there have been no complaints over the current format; there is a ] that it is acceptable. Your arguments otherwise are not convincing. Of course, ] may have other views.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 07:39, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
::::You must have not seen my reply, above, which clearly states the correct position. I'll repeat it again: "More than" is correct as it's dealing with a number (quantity) "more than a hundred Takita fans visit per day". In the '''very same section''' ("Impact") the opening paragraph states "...more than 230,000 copies were purchased". It would be incorrect to have that as "...over 230,000 copies were purchased". Thanks. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 16:54, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
:As far as I can see, removed the cast list and it was not challenged since. changed the status quo, therefore ] is no longer true. Any other opinions ? ] (]) 08:41, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
::No, I don't have an opinion, but I'm for the status quo unless a consensus is formed to the contrary. ]&nbsp;] 10:04, 2 March 2015 (UTC) ::::: Repeating your already-discredited position is not "discussing", Lugnuts. You're wrong, and I've demonstrated so. The ball is in your court to show that ''Chicago'', ''Garner's'', the ''AP Stylebook'', and ''Fowler's'' are wrong. ]&nbsp;] 16:57, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::So why is "more than" already used in the exact same segment without issue? Is that incorrect too? ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 17:17, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::*I quite honestly can't follow your logic, inwind. I've pointed you ''directly'' to the part of the MOS which implies that, in well-developed articles, a bare cast list is not enough/acceptable. You not only ignored that, but claimed that your edit (by a lone individual) is enough to overcome a consensus established by a dozen other editors.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 11:49, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
::::::: A non sequitur. They're both correct, so leave them both alone. ]&nbsp;] 17:28, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::*I think in this case, if we must have a section for casting list, it's should be more like ], with much detailed infomation. But consider there's already a "casting" section in this article, I think it's make this stand-alone lists pretty unnecessary, so I concur with Crisco 1492 here.--] (]) 14:38, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
::::::::Yes, they're both correct now. Crisco 1492 agrees, per on your talkpage. Lets get some further input - {{ping|Crisco 1492}} & {{ping|The Rambling Man}}. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 17:56, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::Any objections to adding an infobox in the casting section in a similar format as ] ? ] (]) 05:18, 3 March 2015 (UTC)
:::::::::"More than" please, per house style. Good movie too. ] (]) 17:57, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::*More manageable, but even then (if we're using ''Fight Club'' as an example) we'd have to limit it to the main cast. We've already got a good image of Hirosue (though I'd prefer one of Motoki, if there were a free image available), and that's more useful than an infobox repeating information that's already in the plot section. According to ], we'd have to lose the image if we wanted to put in an infobox there.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 05:38, 3 March 2015 (UTC)
:::::::::: What "house style", please? ]&nbsp;] 18:02, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::::::: I guess the one where we stick to traditionally correct grammar and don't concede to clumsy and unhelpful erosions to the English language through poor education. I'm done here, feel free to piss away a few more hours arguing the toss instead of actually seeking to improve Misplaced Pages. This is getting a free pass to ]. ] (]) 18:09, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::::::::: Why did you remove my question twice? As an admin, you should be well aware that's way over the line. The question being: '''''And why was The Rambling Man ]ed?''''' 18:17, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::::::::::I have no idea. You removed my response twice. I keep seeing the same "you have messages" message every time I go to my talkpage. I don't know, nor do I really care that much. You need to understand that nothing sinister is going on here. I'm glad you asked your question. I would hazard a guess that i's related to the response I gave, i.e. that we shouldn't kowtow to the pathetic erosion of the English language by the sloth and lack of education of the majority of its users. ] (]) 18:20, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::::::::::You also need to know, I'm enjoying (or attempting to enjoy) my Saturday night, watching '']'' and I don't need more of this endlessly lame debate. I am entirely in agreement with Lugnuts, there's nothing more to add. So please, get back to reality now and work on making things better, not worse. ] (]) 18:23, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::::::::::Looking at the history, it looks like Curly Turkey added something to their comment, and The Rambling Man replied just after. Most likely a hidden edit conflict resulted in the accidental removal of Curly Turkey's added comment, sadly that happens. The simple fix was as Curly Turkey later did, to ensure both comments were preserved. I presume neither side noticed that they were removing the other editor's comment until it was fixed. Unfortunate, but I don't see significant fault from either editor, if my reading of the situation is right. ] (]) 05:23, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::I agree with Curly Turkey that over seems to be perfectly acceptable grammar. Can you give some evidence for it being incorrect in Canadian or Japanese English? If there's no reason to prefer either particular word (which would be the case if both are perfectly acceptable and understandable), then we should go with the original wording. ] (]) 17:10, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::*They are synonyms in this situation, and I find it odd that a previous use of "more than" is being used as evidence that "over" is unacceptable. The use of synonyms is patently acceptable on Misplaced Pages, so long as it doesn't obfuscate the meaning. "Over" is both perfectly acceptable (as supported by the style guides referenced above) in English grammar, and in this context. If there is a "house rule" against the use of the word "over" in this situation, please link it. A claim that "we stick to traditionally correct grammar" without supporting evidence that "over" is "traditionally incorrect grammar" stands hollow.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 00:20, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::::Concur with Chris. Notably, since there is evidently a genuine dispute over whether or not the word "over" is acceptable, evidence for this house rule should be presented (which I presume means a discussion where this achieved consensus). You can't resonably expect someone to follow a "house rule", when they have good personal evidence their usage is perfectly acceptable English, and you have presented no evidence it isn't, or for this house rule. And note, this doesn't just affect this article, but any article me, Chris and Curly Turkey work on. Well I admit I don't work on many, I believe the other 2 editors do. ] (]) 05:05, 16 August 2015 (UTC)


:Right, to stop Curly crying some more - I didn't canvass anyone. I pinged two editors I thought would be interested in this issue for the following reasons: 1) Crisco as a contributor to the article in question and 2)TRM as an admin who deals with alot of issues around TFA/ITN, etc (mainpage articles in general). Check out the history on the mainpage's talkpage and ITN. TRM is very active in those areas. Why wouldn't you want to get the opinion of an valued editor in such a time? ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 08:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
==This article is a classic example of what a total violation of ] is!!==
:*"to stop Curly crying some more" - That kind of attitude just fans the flames. If you could kindly strike that, we may be able to build a consensus&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 08:05, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
First the editors ] and ] have a definite claim to this page and its content.
::When I get a proper apology, and not some poor attempt to avoid being blocked, then I might consider it. Ball's in his court. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 09:16, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
::*Sigh.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 09:25, 16 August 2015 (UTC)


:Curly is now reverting, so I've asked him to participate in this discussion. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 06:39, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Second this has created a situation where even the addition of a simple easy-to-use cast list has become an issue!!
::And of course he . Oh well. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 06:55, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Curly Turkey}} - can you at least join the discussion instead of edit warring? You are aware of WP:3RR judging by your block log. You can see that several others, including Woodrich, have told you more than is correct. Thanks. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 07:00, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
:::*Diff, please, of me saying that "more than" is correct. " "Over" is both perfectly acceptable (as supported by the style guides referenced above) in English grammar, and in this context." is unambiguously the opposite of that.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 13:33, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
::::, Woodrich - "I agree about the grammar issue, TBH". Thanks. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 14:14, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::*My response was "I agree about the grammar issue" in a response to Curly Turkey on a comment made by Curly Turkey, on his talk page, and you thought I agreed with you? When I said that the grammar issue still needed to be dealt with (when the article had "more than" in place of "over")? When my post here was perfectly unambiguous? Alright.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 14:19, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::Thanks for clarifying. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 14:21, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::I saw that too and thought it was ambigious at the time. It seemed to me easily to intepreted as you agreeing with either Lugnuts or Curly Turkey, in the sense that it could have either been "I agree (with Lugnuts) about the grammar issue, to be honest" or "I agree (with you Curly Turkey) about the grammar issue, to be honest". Lugnuts seemed to be intepreting it as agreeing with themselves, but I thought you'd clarify soon enough (which you did), so didn't think much of it. ] (]) 15:06, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::*I guess it could have been ambiguous after the fact. It didn't feel ambiguous during the conversation with Curly Turkey&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 02:08, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::Yeah Chris Woodrich's comment on this talk page seems clear enough. (And their initial comment on Curly Turkey's talk page was fairly ambigious.) <p>I think the other point is that Curly Turkey has already provided evidence that over is acceptable. So far, all we have is Lugnuts who keeps insisting it's wrong but who hasn't provided any evidence for this and TRM who mentioned some house rule, but also provided no evidence for this (and from the comment above, may not intend to participate in this discussion any more). <p>I don't encourage edit warring (although there always needs to be at least 2 editors for an edit war, well with the odd exception of someone edit warring with themselves), but you can't simply insist that the other editor is in the wrong for reverting your change to the article and needs to talk. If all you've actually done on the talk page is kept insisting you are right without evidence and ignored the evidence presented by the other editor that you are wrong, there's really nothing to respond to. <p>] (]) 13:58, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::*Lugnuts, unless you can provide sources to support your assertion, I'm going to reinsert "over". The three style guides already listed above unambiguously state that "over" is acceptable in such a case, and that prescriptions against using it are generally in American English (not the Canadian English used in this article).&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 14:23, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::Go for it. However, ]. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 14:25, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::::Well wikipedia has always preferred to rely on reliable sources, rather than the word of Lugnuts. From your POV, not ideal, from our POV, we find it the best way to avoid mistakes. BTW, did you link to the wrong page? Because ''argumentum ad populum'' would suggest that . Preserving the article based on reliable sources, which as I mentioned is what we use on wikipedia, even if only 1 editor (actually 3) agreed with the views of RS, would be the right thing. ] (]) 14:59, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::::Thanks for that, Moe. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 06:51, 18 August 2015 (UTC)


== Deceased vs dead ==
Third the sole authors of this article - and their flagrant violation of ] - proves once again that many people who edit these articles are not really doing them for some greater good or the dissemination of worthwhile knowledge but for selfish egotistical reasons.


] begins with {{green|The word died is neutral and accurate; avoid euphemisms such as passed away}} and I would very strongly argue that {{red|deceased}} falls into the same category. {{green|Dead}} is a perfectly good, neutral, descriptive word. What do others think? --] (]) 19:28, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Fourthly this has created a vanity project that serves no one but the authors themselves. For example without a cast list are readers expected to trawl through the entire plot to pick out notable actors names from their appearance as characters in the film? How is that an efficient way to provide clear and concise information? Linking names to characters in a plot narrative is like leaving disassociated breadcrumbs around a maze!
: Is "deceased" in some way non-neutral? ]&nbsp;] 19:37, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::Yes, it is a ]. It is 8 letters rather than 4 and 2 syllables rather thaen 1. "Dead" is a perfectly good word, and being shorter, it is good writing to use it rather than a longer euphemistic one. --] (]) 19:39, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::: Can't argue with numbers, but I find it hard to imagine "deceased" being used to mean anything but "dead" or to soften the blow ''à la'' "departed". Besides, "families of the dead" and "families of the deceased" seem to have different idiomatic usages. I can imagine the first in the case of killed soldiers or bombing attack victims, while the latter seems more appropriate to everyday deaths. "Families of the dead" seems to carry a nuance inapproriate to the context. ]&nbsp;] 20:08, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
:::*I have to agree with Curly here. "Deceased" and "dead" are synonyms, with slightly different connotations (as Curly has already touched on), and both have only one meaning: no longer living. Contextually, "deceased" works better, for the reasons Curly has indicated above (and a quick Google search the same ). The article doesn't shy away from the word "dead", either. The version current as of this posting uses the word "dead" 17 times, whereas the word "deceased" is only used 3 (it would be 16-4 if the disputed instance in the summary were changed to "deceased"). Using synonyms to avoid repetitiveness is not "bad" writing. Rather, it's the opposite. An article would get rather dull if we only used "said" rather than include equally acceptable terms such as "stated" or "wrote".&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 00:01, 16 August 2015 (UTC)


*'''Comment''': I'm coming from at ] (that's a ]). Like I stated there, this was discussed before at that talk page; see ]. "Deceased" is fine to use in place of "dead," and, depending on the context, sounds better than using "dead." ] (]) 01:06, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Finally thanks to these editors' ego trip....this article (a featured article no less) is just one big ] because almost half of it is about its "Reception". A cut-and-paste job of just about every newspaper article that ever mentioned it by name. FFS how many ways do you need to the same thing??? Hey it was a surprise success. Yeah we get that! But it's boring, repetitive and not needed. You know it's funny but if a random article from its history is selected: it can tell me more succinctly the facts about this film than the bloated turgid pile of waffle that this article is now. Back in 21012 there were even track listings of the soundtrack, perfect for doing a Youtube search to find them. None now!
**Thanks for the link. That's very useful.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 01:12, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
***Using synonyms to avoid repetition is definitely bad writing; it's called ] and should be avoided it as it is a dreadful effect. That's an interesting old discussion where some people agreed that "deceased" could be ok, but I still maintain that it is euphemism, that it should be avoided. It is almost exactly the same as the example given in the MoS guideline, and that trumps a single discussion or the opinion of an editor that the euphemism "sounds better". --] (]) 09:53, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
**** Well, two things: (a) "elegant variation" is about more than simply the use of synonyms; and (b) as I pointed out, I'm pretty sure it's a matter of idiom rather than anything like "elegant variation"—as Crisco pointed out, "dead" dominates and "deceased" appears when the idiom seems to demand it (I don't think I can accept "the families of the dead" in the context—the bodies are not returning from the ]). ]&nbsp;] 10:05, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
***** Having said that, I do think "People who work closely with the dead" is a better fit than "People who work closely with the deceased", though partly from context not really given (it also applies to leatherworkers, etc, and we wouldn't speak of "deceased cattle"). ]&nbsp;] 10:10, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
******Considering consensus at both that discussion and here seems to be that "deceased" is acceptable, and popular use shows a distinct difference in meaning, and that nobody here has supported your position, I think it's best to reinsert "deceased" into the plot. There is no consensus to remove it, and per ] "In discussions of proposals to add, modify or remove material in articles, a lack of consensus commonly results in retaining the version of the article as it was prior to the proposal or bold edit.". On a related note, I have asked at the MOS talk page to see if we could get an FAQ of sorts of words which may or may not be considered troublesome, but the idea doesn't seem to have any traction.
::::::Furthermore, your definition of ] is certainly not in-line with what the article says. It defines the act as "the unnecessary, and sometimes misleading, use of synonyms to denote a single thing", rather than simple synonymy. has some unmistakable examples; "Rarely does the 'Little Summer' linger until November, but at times its stay has been prolonged until quite late in the year's penultimate month" is indisputably problematic. Using the term "deceased" once, in a paragraph that has no other synonym for the word and a section that has only one other occurrence of a word meaning "not living", does not even begin to approach bad writing.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 10:24, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::I don't mind it in "People who work closely with the dead", but "families of the dead" is problematic both in terms of flow and in meaning, considering the slightly different connotations discussed above.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 10:27, 16 August 2015 (UTC)


::::::John, '''that discussion I linked to involves editors of that guideline'''. Their opinions that "deceased" is or is not a euphemism are obviously important. Their opinions show that your interpretation of the guideline is just that -- your interpretation (well, yours and anyone who agrees with you). And that opinion trumps nothing in this case. ] (]) 01:50, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Is getting a featured article like winning a high school essay contest? Because it sure as hell isn't about writing for a broad audience wanting tight, informative encyclopedic information! 09:19, 15 August 2015 (UTC) <small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) </small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

*"Almost half" reviews? I just counted the wordage; 1200 words and change, AKA less than a fifth of the length of the article. The track list was completely unreferenced, as was most of the article at the time. There was nothing of the "how" of ''Departures'', either, nor the (considerable) academic and critical analysis of its themes. Your hyperbole is not helping your point, nor is your disregard for Misplaced Pages's citation requirements.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 09:27, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::And even if that discussion had involved none of the editors of that guideline, it still stands that this matter was extensively discussed at that guideline talk page, '''including via a ]''', and the ] of the community was that "deceased" is fine to use. If you want another extensive discussion on the matter, then, by all means, start another WP:RfC at that talk page and/or advertise the matter via the ]. ] (]) 01:59, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
* IP 5.81.0.211: Inwind and Crisco disagreed about the list, I remained neutral, and nobody else took part in the discussion—by well-established consensus, that equates to maintaining the status quo. Where does WP:OWN come into this? By the way, your tone is strikingly similar to IP 31.51.45.135—are you not the same user? Whoever you are, you have a ''unique'' understanding of the word "tautology". ]&nbsp;] 09:59, 15 August 2015 (UTC)

* '''oppose''' the change from "deceased" to "dead" in this context. I imagine that "deceased" may sometimes be used as a euphemism for "dead", but this is not happening here. "Deceased" is the correct word to use in a more specific or intimate context. Both words are used in this article according to context, not merely to add variety. --] (]) 15:08, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
* '''oppose''', agree with the views of Mirokado and Flyer22 (particularly about a new RFC should be started if it's felt the old one came to the wrong conclusion). Personally if you look at any English newspaper, and replace all instances (including from the police, court references etc) of "deceased" with dead or dead person/man/woman/whatever, I would find at least some usages just plain odd. Consider for example. And note that while in this case, you could use the person's name, that wouldn't work if the name wasn't known, similarly words like victim and assailant also depend on details that may not be known whereas deceased only relies one one detail namely the person being dead. ] (]) 15:18, 17 August 2015 (UTC)

'''Amicus Curiae Comment:''' My take on this: much ado about little, but not quite nothing. Discussion highlighting the differences between the two words is appropriate. "Deceased" and "dead" are synonymous, and "deceased" is most definitely not a euphemism. The pair are a Latinate/Germanic doublet. ] "Deceased" is a more refined Latinate synonym as its etymology traces to Old French and Latin. ] "Dead" is Germanic in origin from Old English tracing to proto-Germanic, emerging in current Dutch and Danish with very similar pronunciation. ] In general, Latinate origin English word usage increases with age from infancy into adolescence, reading level and education. ] ] That is the real difference between them. Softened and emotionally warmer euphemisms for comparison: "(dearly) departed," "lamented," "lost," and so on, some of which are ambiguous without a clear context. Read any current obituary column in a major newspaper and you'll find plenty more, or if you're in the mood for humor, see the Monty Python "Polly Parrot" sketch :) Both "deceased" and "dead" are equally unambiguous, objective, and emotionally cold. The latter is why both are avoided in obits and public visiting areas of funeral parlors in favor of warmer euphemisms. Regarding "dead" versus "deceased" usage, which is preferred is occasionally driven by what would be expected in a particular context, such as legal or medical writing. Most often it's subjective style in how a passage flows and "reads" with the reading level at which the rest of the passage is written. It has no impact on precision; either has the same clarity. Neither is "dead" any more succinct than "deceased." The argument that four letters and one syllable is more concise than eight letters with two is, at very best, exceptionally weak. The average number of letters per word, syllables per word and average number of words per sentence ''in an entire document'' are general statistical metrics for reading level estimates and likely comprehension by target demographics. ] ] They do not measure precision or incisiveness. As a matter of subjective opinion, the usage of "dead" at the end of the sentence in question would be abruptly jarring to readers whereas the more refined "deceased" reads better in the sentence and the context of the entire paragraph. ] (]) 17:23, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

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The result of the move request was: '''moved''', previous title redirected to the dab page, ]. Accolades list moved, too. I don't think it's the normal practice to move FACs and PRs so I haven't moved them, but if I'm wrong about that ping me or drop a note on my talk. ] (]) 11:49, 23 August 2015 (UTC)

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*'''Support''' per ]. ''']''' <sup>]</sup> 13:36, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
*'''Comment''' - If this is moved, the accolades list will also have to be moved.&nbsp;—&nbsp;] (]) 14:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
*'''Support''' per ]. ''']''' • ] 02:43, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
*'''Support''' per ], Ambiguous disambiguation is a bad idea -- ] (]) 05:38, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
*'''Support''' I don't think it's likely an argument could be made that this film is the primary topic for Departures, and while potentially an argument could be made that it's the primary topic for the film, that isn't that useful and so is a a bad idea, per Lugnuts, 67.70.32.190 et al. . ] (]) 15:27, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
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"over" vs "more than"

"Over" vs "more than" has been a bugbear of American journalists since William Cullen Bryant invented this prescription in the late 19th century. It's largely ignored outside of journalism, and has rarely—if ever—been considered an issue outside of the US (this article is in Canadian English). I'd appreciate if Lugnuts would revert his mistaken "correction" in this article, which improves the article in no way.

  • The Chicago Manual of Style: "As an equivalent of more than, this word is perfectly good idiomatic English."
  • Garner's Modern American Usage: "The charge that over is inferior to more than is a baseless crotchet."
  • Fowler's Modern English Usage: "Since the later part of the 19c there has been a strong tradition in American newspapers and some American usage guides of hostility to the use of over with a follwing numeral ... In Britain, over has been used with a following numeral without restriction or adverse comment throughout the same period.
  • Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 14:48, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
  • More from the style guides:
  • The American Heritage Guide to Contemporary Usage and Style
    over/more than
    While working as a newspaper editor in the late 19th century, William Cullen Bryant forbade the use of over in the sense of "more than," as in These rocks are over 5 million years old. Bryant provided no rationale for this injunction, but such was his stature that the stipulation was championed by other American editors, who also felt no reason to offer an explanation. Later usage critics allowed the usage in some contexts, but their reasons are dubious at best. In point of fact, over has been used as a synonym of more than since the 1300s. Since no reasonable justification for its ban has ever been expounded, it may be safely ignored.
  • New Hart's Rules:
    In expressing approximate figures some styles traditionally preferred more than to over. Modern usage tends to treat them as synonyms:
    She was born in Oxford and has lived in Ireland for over twenty-five years
    She was born in Oxford and has lived in Ireland for more than twenty-five years
    although there are certain contexts in which one or the other is syntactically correct:
    We spent a lot of time together, well over two months, and so we really got to know each other
    There's more than one way of tackling this problem
    or sounds more natural, e.g. in reference to age:
    Applicants must be over 25 and have had a clean driving licence for more than five years


"More than" is correct as it's dealing with a number (quantity) "more than a hundred Takita fans visit per day". In the very same section ("Impact") the opening paragraph states "...more than 230,000 copies were purchased". It would be incorrect to have that as "...over 230,000 copies were purchased". Thanks. Lugnuts 15:21, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
It is not a discussion when you ignore what the other person has posted, Lugnuts. I've just demonstrated to you where you are wrong, and you have not addressed it in any way, shape, or form. "Over" is and always has been correct when used for quantities, and this correct usage has only been disputed in recent history by a segment of the American population (and Chicago, Garner's, and the AP Stylebook disagree with the prescription). This is not an American film, and it's not written in American English. Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 15:26, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
@Lugnuts: Please demonstrate your good faith by reverting the disputed edit and participating in finding a consensus for your change. If you fail to find a consensus it'll go right back to where it was regardless. Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 15:40, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
You must have not seen my reply, above, which clearly states the correct position. I'll repeat it again: "More than" is correct as it's dealing with a number (quantity) "more than a hundred Takita fans visit per day". In the very same section ("Impact") the opening paragraph states "...more than 230,000 copies were purchased". It would be incorrect to have that as "...over 230,000 copies were purchased". Thanks. Lugnuts 16:54, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Repeating your already-discredited position is not "discussing", Lugnuts. You're wrong, and I've demonstrated so. The ball is in your court to show that Chicago, Garner's, the AP Stylebook, and Fowler's are wrong. Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 16:57, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
So why is "more than" already used in the exact same segment without issue? Is that incorrect too? Lugnuts 17:17, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
A non sequitur. They're both correct, so leave them both alone. Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 17:28, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Yes, they're both correct now. Crisco 1492 agrees, per his post on your talkpage. Lets get some further input - @Crisco 1492: & @The Rambling Man:. Lugnuts 17:56, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
"More than" please, per house style. Good movie too. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:57, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
What "house style", please? Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 18:02, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
I guess the one where we stick to traditionally correct grammar and don't concede to clumsy and unhelpful erosions to the English language through poor education. I'm done here, feel free to piss away a few more hours arguing the toss instead of actually seeking to improve Misplaced Pages. This is getting a free pass to WP:LAME. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:09, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Why did you remove my question twice? As an admin, you should be well aware that's way over the line. The question being: And why was The Rambling Man WP:CANVASSed? 18:17, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
I have no idea. You removed my response twice. I keep seeing the same "you have messages" message every time I go to my talkpage. I don't know, nor do I really care that much. You need to understand that nothing sinister is going on here. I'm glad you asked your question. I would hazard a guess that i's related to the response I gave, i.e. that we shouldn't kowtow to the pathetic erosion of the English language by the sloth and lack of education of the majority of its users. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:20, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
You also need to know, I'm enjoying (or attempting to enjoy) my Saturday night, watching Blue Ruin and I don't need more of this endlessly lame debate. I am entirely in agreement with Lugnuts, there's nothing more to add. So please, get back to reality now and work on making things better, not worse. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:23, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Looking at the history, it looks like Curly Turkey added something to their comment, and The Rambling Man replied just after. Most likely a hidden edit conflict resulted in the accidental removal of Curly Turkey's added comment, sadly that happens. The simple fix was as Curly Turkey later did, to ensure both comments were preserved. I presume neither side noticed that they were removing the other editor's comment until it was fixed. Unfortunate, but I don't see significant fault from either editor, if my reading of the situation is right. Nil Einne (talk) 05:23, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
I agree with Curly Turkey that over seems to be perfectly acceptable grammar. Can you give some evidence for it being incorrect in Canadian or Japanese English? If there's no reason to prefer either particular word (which would be the case if both are perfectly acceptable and understandable), then we should go with the original wording. Nil Einne (talk) 17:10, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
  • They are synonyms in this situation, and I find it odd that a previous use of "more than" is being used as evidence that "over" is unacceptable. The use of synonyms is patently acceptable on Misplaced Pages, so long as it doesn't obfuscate the meaning. "Over" is both perfectly acceptable (as supported by the style guides referenced above) in English grammar, and in this context. If there is a "house rule" against the use of the word "over" in this situation, please link it. A claim that "we stick to traditionally correct grammar" without supporting evidence that "over" is "traditionally incorrect grammar" stands hollow. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:20, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Concur with Chris. Notably, since there is evidently a genuine dispute over whether or not the word "over" is acceptable, evidence for this house rule should be presented (which I presume means a discussion where this achieved consensus). You can't resonably expect someone to follow a "house rule", when they have good personal evidence their usage is perfectly acceptable English, and you have presented no evidence it isn't, or for this house rule. And note, this doesn't just affect this article, but any article me, Chris and Curly Turkey work on. Well I admit I don't work on many, I believe the other 2 editors do. Nil Einne (talk) 05:05, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Right, to stop Curly crying some more - I didn't canvass anyone. I pinged two editors I thought would be interested in this issue for the following reasons: 1) Crisco as a contributor to the article in question and 2)TRM as an admin who deals with alot of issues around TFA/ITN, etc (mainpage articles in general). Check out the history on the mainpage's talkpage and ITN. TRM is very active in those areas. Why wouldn't you want to get the opinion of an valued editor in such a time? Lugnuts 08:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
When I get a proper apology, and not some poor attempt to avoid being blocked, then I might consider it. Ball's in his court. Lugnuts 09:16, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Curly is now reverting, so I've asked him to participate in this discussion. Lugnuts 06:39, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
And of course he reverts the kind offer. Oh well. Lugnuts 06:55, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
@Curly Turkey: - can you at least join the discussion instead of edit warring? You are aware of WP:3RR judging by your block log. You can see that several others, including Woodrich, have told you more than is correct. Thanks. Lugnuts 07:00, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Diff, please, of me saying that "more than" is correct. " "Over" is both perfectly acceptable (as supported by the style guides referenced above) in English grammar, and in this context." is unambiguously the opposite of that. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 13:33, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Here you go, Woodrich - "I agree about the grammar issue, TBH". Thanks. Lugnuts 14:14, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
  • My response was "I agree about the grammar issue" in a response to Curly Turkey on a comment made by Curly Turkey, on his talk page, and you thought I agreed with you? When I said that the grammar issue still needed to be dealt with (when the article had "more than" in place of "over")? When my post here was perfectly unambiguous? Alright. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:19, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for clarifying. Lugnuts 14:21, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
I saw that too and thought it was ambigious at the time. It seemed to me easily to intepreted as you agreeing with either Lugnuts or Curly Turkey, in the sense that it could have either been "I agree (with Lugnuts) about the grammar issue, to be honest" or "I agree (with you Curly Turkey) about the grammar issue, to be honest". Lugnuts seemed to be intepreting it as agreeing with themselves, but I thought you'd clarify soon enough (which you did), so didn't think much of it. Nil Einne (talk) 15:06, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Yeah Chris Woodrich's comment on this talk page seems clear enough. (And their initial comment on Curly Turkey's talk page was fairly ambigious.)

I think the other point is that Curly Turkey has already provided evidence that over is acceptable. So far, all we have is Lugnuts who keeps insisting it's wrong but who hasn't provided any evidence for this and TRM who mentioned some house rule, but also provided no evidence for this (and from the comment above, may not intend to participate in this discussion any more).

I don't encourage edit warring (although there always needs to be at least 2 editors for an edit war, well with the odd exception of someone edit warring with themselves), but you can't simply insist that the other editor is in the wrong for reverting your change to the article and needs to talk. If all you've actually done on the talk page is kept insisting you are right without evidence and ignored the evidence presented by the other editor that you are wrong, there's really nothing to respond to.

Nil Einne (talk) 13:58, 17 August 2015 (UTC)

  • Lugnuts, unless you can provide sources to support your assertion, I'm going to reinsert "over". The three style guides already listed above unambiguously state that "over" is acceptable in such a case, and that prescriptions against using it are generally in American English (not the Canadian English used in this article). — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:23, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Go for it. However, a mistake is still a mistake. Lugnuts 14:25, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Well wikipedia has always preferred to rely on reliable sources, rather than the word of Lugnuts. From your POV, not ideal, from our POV, we find it the best way to avoid mistakes. BTW, did you link to the wrong page? Because argumentum ad populum would suggest that changing the article based on the unsupported assertations of Lugnuts, TRM and a misunderstood comment from Chris Woodrich, is wrong. Preserving the article based on reliable sources, which as I mentioned is what we use on wikipedia, even if only 1 editor (actually 3) agreed with the views of RS, would be the right thing. Nil Einne (talk) 14:59, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for that, Moe. Lugnuts 06:51, 18 August 2015 (UTC)

Deceased vs dead

WP:EUPHEMISM begins with The word died is neutral and accurate; avoid euphemisms such as passed away and I would very strongly argue that deceased falls into the same category. Dead is a perfectly good, neutral, descriptive word. What do others think? --John (talk) 19:28, 15 August 2015 (UTC)

Is "deceased" in some way non-neutral? Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 19:37, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Yes, it is a euphemism. It is 8 letters rather than 4 and 2 syllables rather thaen 1. "Dead" is a perfectly good word, and being shorter, it is good writing to use it rather than a longer euphemistic one. --John (talk) 19:39, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Can't argue with numbers, but I find it hard to imagine "deceased" being used to mean anything but "dead" or to soften the blow à la "departed". Besides, "families of the dead" and "families of the deceased" seem to have different idiomatic usages. I can imagine the first in the case of killed soldiers or bombing attack victims, while the latter seems more appropriate to everyday deaths. "Families of the dead" seems to carry a nuance inapproriate to the context. Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 20:08, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
  • I have to agree with Curly here. "Deceased" and "dead" are synonyms, with slightly different connotations (as Curly has already touched on), and both have only one meaning: no longer living. Contextually, "deceased" works better, for the reasons Curly has indicated above (and a quick Google search shows the same difference). The article doesn't shy away from the word "dead", either. The version current as of this posting uses the word "dead" 17 times, whereas the word "deceased" is only used 3 (it would be 16-4 if the disputed instance in the summary were changed to "deceased"). Using synonyms to avoid repetitiveness is not "bad" writing. Rather, it's the opposite. An article would get rather dull if we only used "said" rather than include equally acceptable terms such as "stated" or "wrote". — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:01, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Comment: I'm coming from this alert at Misplaced Pages talk:Manual of Style/Words to watch (that's a WP:Permalink). Like I stated there, this was discussed before at that talk page; see Misplaced Pages talk:Manual of Style/Words to watch/Archive 4#"Deceased" is much like "passed away", yes?. "Deceased" is fine to use in place of "dead," and, depending on the context, sounds better than using "dead." Flyer22 (talk) 01:06, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the link. That's very useful. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:12, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
      • Using synonyms to avoid repetition is definitely bad writing; it's called elegant variation and should be avoided it as it is a dreadful effect. That's an interesting old discussion where some people agreed that "deceased" could be ok, but I still maintain that it is euphemism, that it should be avoided. It is almost exactly the same as the example given in the MoS guideline, and that trumps a single discussion or the opinion of an editor that the euphemism "sounds better". --John (talk) 09:53, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
        • Well, two things: (a) "elegant variation" is about more than simply the use of synonyms; and (b) as I pointed out, I'm pretty sure it's a matter of idiom rather than anything like "elegant variation"—as Crisco pointed out, "dead" dominates and "deceased" appears when the idiom seems to demand it (I don't think I can accept "the families of the dead" in the context—the bodies are not returning from the Battle of Midway). Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 10:05, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
          • Having said that, I do think "People who work closely with the dead" is a better fit than "People who work closely with the deceased", though partly from context not really given (it also applies to leatherworkers, etc, and we wouldn't speak of "deceased cattle"). Curly Turkey ¡gobble! 10:10, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
            • Considering consensus at both that discussion and here seems to be that "deceased" is acceptable, and popular use shows a distinct difference in meaning, and that nobody here has supported your position, I think it's best to reinsert "deceased" into the plot. There is no consensus to remove it, and per WP:NOCON "In discussions of proposals to add, modify or remove material in articles, a lack of consensus commonly results in retaining the version of the article as it was prior to the proposal or bold edit.". On a related note, I have asked at the MOS talk page to see if we could get an FAQ of sorts of words which may or may not be considered troublesome, but the idea doesn't seem to have any traction.
Furthermore, your definition of elegant variation is certainly not in-line with what the article says. It defines the act as "the unnecessary, and sometimes misleading, use of synonyms to denote a single thing", rather than simple synonymy. This has some unmistakable examples; "Rarely does the 'Little Summer' linger until November, but at times its stay has been prolonged until quite late in the year's penultimate month" is indisputably problematic. Using the term "deceased" once, in a paragraph that has no other synonym for the word and a section that has only one other occurrence of a word meaning "not living", does not even begin to approach bad writing. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 10:24, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
I don't mind it in "People who work closely with the dead", but "families of the dead" is problematic both in terms of flow and in meaning, considering the slightly different connotations discussed above. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 10:27, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
John, that discussion I linked to involves editors of that guideline. Their opinions that "deceased" is or is not a euphemism are obviously important. Their opinions show that your interpretation of the guideline is just that -- your interpretation (well, yours and anyone who agrees with you). And that opinion trumps nothing in this case. Flyer22 (talk) 01:50, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
And even if that discussion had involved none of the editors of that guideline, it still stands that this matter was extensively discussed at that guideline talk page, including via a WP:RfC, and the WP:Consensus of the community was that "deceased" is fine to use. If you want another extensive discussion on the matter, then, by all means, start another WP:RfC at that talk page and/or advertise the matter via the WP:Village pump. Flyer22 (talk) 01:59, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
  • oppose the change from "deceased" to "dead" in this context. I imagine that "deceased" may sometimes be used as a euphemism for "dead", but this is not happening here. "Deceased" is the correct word to use in a more specific or intimate context. Both words are used in this article according to context, not merely to add variety. --Mirokado (talk) 15:08, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
  • oppose, agree with the views of Mirokado and Flyer22 (particularly about a new RFC should be started if it's felt the old one came to the wrong conclusion). Personally if you look at any English newspaper, and replace all instances (including from the police, court references etc) of "deceased" with dead or dead person/man/woman/whatever, I would find at least some usages just plain odd. Consider for example. And note that while in this case, you could use the person's name, that wouldn't work if the name wasn't known, similarly words like victim and assailant also depend on details that may not be known whereas deceased only relies one one detail namely the person being dead. Nil Einne (talk) 15:18, 17 August 2015 (UTC)

Amicus Curiae Comment: My take on this: much ado about little, but not quite nothing. Discussion highlighting the differences between the two words is appropriate. "Deceased" and "dead" are synonymous, and "deceased" is most definitely not a euphemism. The pair are a Latinate/Germanic doublet. "Deceased" is a more refined Latinate synonym as its etymology traces to Old French and Latin. "Dead" is Germanic in origin from Old English tracing to proto-Germanic, emerging in current Dutch and Danish with very similar pronunciation. In general, Latinate origin English word usage increases with age from infancy into adolescence, reading level and education. That is the real difference between them. Softened and emotionally warmer euphemisms for comparison: "(dearly) departed," "lamented," "lost," and so on, some of which are ambiguous without a clear context. Read any current obituary column in a major newspaper and you'll find plenty more, or if you're in the mood for humor, see the Monty Python "Polly Parrot" sketch :) Both "deceased" and "dead" are equally unambiguous, objective, and emotionally cold. The latter is why both are avoided in obits and public visiting areas of funeral parlors in favor of warmer euphemisms. Regarding "dead" versus "deceased" usage, which is preferred is occasionally driven by what would be expected in a particular context, such as legal or medical writing. Most often it's subjective style in how a passage flows and "reads" with the reading level at which the rest of the passage is written. It has no impact on precision; either has the same clarity. Neither is "dead" any more succinct than "deceased." The argument that four letters and one syllable is more concise than eight letters with two is, at very best, exceptionally weak. The average number of letters per word, syllables per word and average number of words per sentence in an entire document are general statistical metrics for reading level estimates and likely comprehension by target demographics. They do not measure precision or incisiveness. As a matter of subjective opinion, the usage of "dead" at the end of the sentence in question would be abruptly jarring to readers whereas the more refined "deceased" reads better in the sentence and the context of the entire paragraph. Jlind (talk) 17:23, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

Requested move 16 August 2015

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The result of the move request was: moved, previous title redirected to the dab page, Departure. Accolades list moved, too. I don't think it's the normal practice to move FACs and PRs so I haven't moved them, but if I'm wrong about that ping me or drop a note on my talk. Jenks24 (talk) 11:49, 23 August 2015 (UTC)



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