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== Lead contains no summary of account == | |||
== Dating section == | |||
I think the dating section is a mess - propose to split into 4 subsections: | |||
*traditional (Jewish, Jewish-adjusted and Samaritan versions of the dating) | |||
*Early Exodus (scholar putting the event to 15-16th century BCE) | |||
*Late Exodus (scholar opinions putting the event to around 13-14th century BCE) | |||
*No basis (scholar opinions claiming that the event is a myth). | |||
This would make the dating a much more clear issue.] (]) 10:42, 28 January 2016 (UTC) | |||
:What you term the "Jewish" date is more normally called the Masoretic; what you term the "Jewish-adjusted" date is more properly termed the Seder Olam dating; and the Samaritan dating is a variant of the Masoretic, though neither is likely the original. None of these are scholarly and none have any followers outside quite extreme Christian and Jewish religious factions. The Seder Olam calendar, in particular, is ridiculous from the point of view of known history, compressing the entire Pwersian Empire into 52 years. | |||
:No modern scholars put the exodus in the 15th/16th centuries, nor in the 13th/14th; the consensus is that there was no exodus. Our article reflects this. ] (]) 05:50, 16 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
::To deny a theory you need to describe a theory. You are mainly busy with historical revisionism, which has nothing to do with the article. There is no consensus that there was no exodus; maybe there are opinions that there was no exodus in the 13th century, but the occasion of Exodus is a deal of controversy, and there are various theories in this regard. You are not improving Misplaced Pages by removing notable academic sources discussing those issues, basically violating Misplaced Pages's pillars. You may get banned for this.] (]) 20:56, 16 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::Sorry, but the consensus remains, Kitchen and Hoffmeier dissent from the consensus by arguing that the Exodus was "not impossible". To this day there is no external corroboration of the Exodus story from the Bible. A very shorthand introduction to this problem written by an Evangelical historian: . ] (]) 21:03, 16 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::An YouTube documentary is available at . This documentary is in several ways outdated (e.g. Documentary Hypothesis is not widely hold as valid, there is no evidence of David and Solomon's United Monarchy, etc.), but displays statements made by major scholars. ] (]) 21:13, 16 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::From the documentary, 0:23:00-0:24:00 (Bietak speaking) dates the possibility of Exodus between 1275-1208 BC. So that's when it could have taken place, if it took place at all. From 0:24:00-0:25:00 Dever says there is no evidence found for a mass migration corresponding to the Exodus. I do not claim this is the only possibility, but only that this is the consensus view. ] (]) 21:28, 16 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::So few opinions is unfortunate for a TV show. At least three would do better, especially that entire books and multiple articles have been compiled on 1540, 1512, 1491, 1446, 1312, 1290 as potential exodus dates. Where are those theories in the article? Some of those are refuted for sure, but refuted theories deleted by PiCo implies historical revisionism promoted by radicals. This is a very bad non-encyclopedic practice; certainly also non-academic (but Misplaced Pages is not pretending to be academic of course).] (]) 21:44, 16 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::::Well, you could mention some reliable sources to that extent, but they have to be recent (i.e. not outdated) and written by top scholars (full professors at reputable universities). ] (]) 21:51, 16 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
*{{ping|PiCo}} Masoretic means traditional.] (]) 10:39, 22 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:@] - does it really matter? "Masoretic" means the text of the Hebrew bible curated by the masoretes (or whatever alternative spelling you might like). The Masoretic calendar, which is what you're talking about here, is the internal calendar of that text. It dates events from the Creation, the Year Zero, to a point around December 164 BCE, when the temple was restored after having been defiled by the pagan Greek king of Syria - the span is exactly 4,000 years. The Samaritan calendar is a slightly different and only goes to the end of the Book of Joshua, because that's the last book in the Samaritan bible. The Greek Jewish bible has yet another version of the calendar. None are likely to be the original version. Nor would I call any of them the traditional Jewish calendar - that's the one contained in the Sefer Olam Rabbah, which differs yet again. I think you know all this already. I think you know all this already. None of them are actual calendars in our sense - all of them are primarily religious, and can't be used for dating real history.] (]) 11:44, 22 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
::Masoretic, coming from Canaanite / Hebrew / Samaritan word Masorti = traditional. When i said traditional Jewish or traditional Samaritan it is exactly what Masorti stands for. Just to clarify.] (]) 16:32, 22 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::The offer still holds: find full professors who advocate such dating in reasonably recent publications (but not merely in order to dismiss such dates as ]). ] (]) 21:39, 22 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::What ] says.] (]) 23:04, 22 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::There is some information at ], mentioning 1446 BCE and why it is not credible. ] (]) 23:55, 24 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::::Yes, but the whole paragraph in the lead is referring to 13th century BCE exodus theory (correct me if i'm wrong). To my view readers should know that "the historic and archaeological evidence points out that there was no exodus"... in the 13th century (Late Exodus). This is clearly said by all archaeologists in . Nothing about Early Exodus dates.] (]) 19:47, 25 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
*'''Comment''' - {{ping|PiCo}} considering your remark on my talk page concerning Hill et.al., do you agree to add information about the Early and Late Exodus dates?] (]) 19:56, 25 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
::I'll reply in the section at the bottom of this page - it's confusing having two conversations on the same topic.] (]) 02:23, 28 February 2016 (UTC) | |||
*'''Comment''' - Prof. Larry Geraty makes a fair summary of various dates at during the UCSD EXODUS CONFERENCE in 2013. That is a fair basis for the article section: conventional Early Date, conventional Late Date and Other theories (very early date, Thera theories, very late exoduses, etc).] (]) 22:34, 12 March 2016 (UTC) | |||
::With the mention that the date from Seder Olam is completely ] as far as historians are concerned, although it may have a religious significance for certain true believers. It's not the only instance of fringe dating of the Exodus from that video. ] (]) 01:41, 13 March 2016 (UTC) | |||
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== Historicity == | |||
We don't need to extensively discuss the historicity, but the lead is ''just'' vague enough to dismiss any attempt at it. "The historicity of the exodus continues to attract popular attention, but most histories of ancient Israel no longer consider information about it recoverable or even relevant to the story of Israel's emergence." Now it pretty much says 'No that doesn't matter, shut up though'. Then the final unattributed quote of that section makes it even more enigmatic. If we're going to have a lead section about historicity, it really shouldn't be this mystical when archeologists have literally given up on it. ] (]) 10:19, 24 May 2016 (UTC) | |||
Kitchen's and Hoffmeier's religiously biased arguments amount to nothing but speculation (possibly.....possibly). To finish the summarizing section with this quoatation seems extremely biased. A similarly biased quotation on the other side would be Michael Sherman's quote in the lead of the rationalwiki article on Evidence for the Exodus: | |||
"We are told that these people spent 40 years wandering around in the desert — they escaped, as slaves from Egypt, and so forth. There is not a shred of archaeological or historical evidence, outside of the Bible, that this is even true! That it ever even happened! You would think that if a people spent 40 years wandering around in the desert they'd leave some archaeological evidence? There's absolutely none. There's no evidence that somebody named Moses even existed." | |||
I believe this article would greatly benefit from a more neutral, evidence-based review of the historicity of the Exodus ] (]) 15:01, 17 October 2016 (UTC) | |||
:Comparing the current lead with the crude and clearly biased statements from RationalWiki does not necessitate finding a middle road. The last sentence in the lede is referenced and attributed and is not really even a debatable statement - the Exodus "narrative" is often referenced by many people groups. Also the historicity section already says there is essentially "no evidence" for the Exodus and that Kitchen and Hoffmeier and their theories are ignored by the rest of the scientific community. So I guess I'm struggling to understand your point. | |||
:That being said, if you have specific suggestions on improving the page, please feel free to express them. As you are new to Misplaced Pages, you may not be aware that statements placed in Talk to the effect of "this page is terrible" are generally ignored unless the editor also poses some solutions to the problems he/she sees. | |||
:Yours - ] (]) 16:14, 26 October 2016 (UTC)Ckruschke | |||
::I;m not familiar with wp policy. My original point was that the section as currently presented is biased (albeit far less so than the rationalwiki counterexample). Their arguments as presented here are merely speculation and essentially 'absence of evidence does not imply absence of evidence'. The summary of the historicity section should in my view be based on historical evidence. | |||
:: ] (]) 15:36, 17 November 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::But there is no historical evidence. There are only religious texts written after the alleged events occurred. And even historical evidence rarely trumps physical evidence - after all, they say "History is written by the victors". That's not quite true as historical evidence can, for instance, include diaries, shopping lists, etc. But I digress. Whoever told you that absence of evidence does not imply absence of evidence was misleading you: | |||
{{quote|If someone were to assert that there is an elephant on the quad, then the failure to observe an elephant there would be good reason to think that there is no elephant there. But if someone were to assert that there is a flea on the quad, then one's failure to observe it there would not constitute good evidence that there is no flea on the quad. The salient difference between these two cases is that in the one, but not the other, we should expect to see some evidence of the entity if in fact it existed. Moreover, the justification conferred in such cases will be proportional to the ratio between the amount of evidence that we do have and the amount that we should expect to have if the entity existed. If the ratio is small, then little justification is conferred on the belief that the entity does not exist. | |||
in the absence of evidence rendering the existence of some entity probable, we are justified in believing that it does not exist, provided that (1) it is not something that might leave no traces and (2) we have comprehensively surveyed the area where the evidence would be found if the entity existed...<ref name="Moreland2003">{{cite book |first=J.P. |last=Moreland |first2=W.L. |last2=Craig |year=2003 |title=Philosophical Foundations for a Christian Worldview |publisher=InterVarsity Press |isbn=9780830826940 |lccn=2002154307 |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=mPEN_EDiZuQC&pg=PA156 |pages=155–156}}</ref>|] and ]|''Philosophical Foundations for a Christian Worldview''}} | |||
:::You are also asking us to delete the positive evidence, eg "The culture of the earliest Israelite settlements is Canaanite, their cult-objects are those of the Canaanite god El, the pottery remains are in the Canaanite tradition, and the alphabet used is early Canaanite." ] ] 16:18, 17 November 2016 (UTC) | |||
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::::What I'm asking is to move or delete the baseless conjecture and make the section reflect the evidence (historical, physcial) or in this case, complete lack thereof. I agree with you with respect to the salient differences between different instances of 'absence of evidence is not evidence of absence'. My view is that Kitchen's and Hoffmeier's conjecture attempts to give credence to treating this as an instance of a search for a 'flea' rather than an 'elephant' which seems disingenuous. It is true that not every grain of sand in the Sinai desert has been turned over but the substantial amount of excavation which has been performed has not yielded one iota of positive evidence. :::: ] (]) 08:46, 18 November 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::::] - What would that be? ] and I have already stated that the statements in the text that you have specifically stated that you took issue with were fair and corroborated by legitimate references. So which "baseless conjecture" would you like to move or remove that you have not already cited? Not trying to be difficult, but Misplaced Pages isn't meant to mirror everyone's specific POV - its meant to reflect the consensus POV. ] (]) 16:49, 18 November 2016 (UTC)Ckruschke | |||
::::::Not every publication in academic literature is worthy of being called a legitimate reference. The arguments by Kitchen and Hoffmeier as presented here are: | |||
::::::1. possibly the Egyptian records of the presence of the Israelites and their escape have been lost or suppressed; | |||
::::::2. possibly (or probably) the fleeing Israelites left no archaeological trace in the desert; | |||
::::::3. possibly the huge numbers reported in the story are mistranslated | |||
::::::1. There is no positive evidence whatsoever for the Exodus OT narrative, despite Egypt's . Nor is there any evidence whatsoever for widespread ] or plagues. | |||
::::::2. what did they do for '''decades''' in the desert? how did they survive? The 'or probably' is especially disingenuous in my opinion | |||
::::::3. possibly the story is made up? | |||
::::::The 'consensus POV' on the historicity should be based on the scientific consensus, which pays no mind to Kitchen's and Hoffmeier's religiously biased speculations. Why then end the summary of the historicity section with this? ] (]) 17:09, 26 November 2016 (UTC) | |||
::::::::To the user who undid my edit: Can you or anyone else please explain why the summary of the historicity section should end with speculations? It drives the narrative of the article in a disingenuos way. The article defines the message of the Exodus as | |||
::::::::that the Israelites were delivered from slavery by Yahweh and therefore belong to him through the Mosaic covenant. It tells of the enslavement of the Israelites in Egypt following the death of Joseph, their departure under the leadership of Moses, the revelations at Sinai (including the Ten Commandments), and their wanderings in the wilderness up to the borders of Canaan. | |||
::::::::I'll grant your side that the absence of archaelogical evidence in the Sinai desert is not sufficient in itself to deny the possibility of Hebrew people having traveled from Egypt through the Sinai. However, the notion of the Mosaic covenant, which is THE central part of the Exodus story, has ZERO historical support whatsoever outside the old testament. Is is too much to ask that the SUMMARY OF THE HISTORICITY (!!) section reflects this fact and does not attempt to muddy the waters with religous-based speculation? | |||
::::::::As to the credentials of James K. Hoffmeier, he is Professor of Old Testament and Ancient Near Eastern History and Archaeology at Trinity evangelical divinity school. Note that this is NOT a university but a seminary, whose mission statement is to be 'an evangelical learning community united around the gospel of the life, death, and resurrection of Jesus Christ.' I would hardly call this a reliable source. Furthermore, although he has published in numerous archaeolical journals he fails to provide a shred of actual evidence for the Exodus. | |||
::::::::I'm fine with it being moved to some other part of the article but it should not be the final sentence of the summary of the historicity. ] (]) 20:07, 5 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
Why does the lead contain no summary of the Exodus? Also, its historicity is quite secondary to its religious significance, so I think that paragraph should be last. <span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧁</span>]<span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧂</span> 18:47, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I didn't undo your edit, but you seem to have a basic misunderstanding of how edits work if there is established consensus on a section and other editors disagree with your opinion. Both I and ] have given you our opinions as to how we believe your edits are contrary to the consensus version of the page. You seem to think if you put up a wall of your opinion and then wait, that you can just go ahead and make whatever changes you want, consensus be damned. This is not how it works. | |||
:::::::::If you would like to make revisions, please place the EXACT sentences and your proposed edit into Talk and we as a community on this page will look at it and come to a consensus on your proposal. Please do not make any more unilateral changes on this page. ] (]) 20:34, 6 December 2016 (UTC)Ckruschke | |||
:Hi, {{u|Zanahary}}, there is ] for the story, ] is about its historicity (mainly). ] (]) 18:58, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::The following sentences in my opinion have no place in a summary of the historicity of the Exodus | |||
::] is the article about the myth’s origins—but even that article should have a brief overview of the narrative. This article is about the narrative called the Exodus, whose content spans a number of books besides the Book of Exodus. <span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧁</span>]<span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧂</span> 19:01, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Whatever. I'm not the decision maker in that respect. ] (]) 19:02, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Uh, okay! I’ll work on the lead. Open to thoughts from anyone with input. <span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧁</span>]<span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧂</span> 19:16, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I made an update to the lead. <span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧁</span>]<span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧂</span> 22:24, 9 September 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I think a brief summary can be included.—-] (]) 22:35, 9 September 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Out of Date == | |||
::::::::::possibly the Egyptian records of the presence of the Israelites and their escape have been lost or suppressed; possibly (or probably) the fleeing Israelites left no archaeological trace in the desert; possibly the huge numbers reported in the story are mistranslated | |||
The information in the "Origins and Historicity" is way out of date. It is obvious that the contributors and editors have not kept up with the results of archaeological excavations in the Nile Delta over the past few decades, especially the work by James Hoffmeier and Manfred Bietak. This material is now readily available in archaeological publications and has been much discussed at conferences such as those of ASOR and the SBL. This is not the fault of the editors and contributors alone -- in general, the Biblical studies community has fallen behind on absorbing and integrating this data. | |||
::::::::::My point is that ending this '''particular''' section with these sentences drives the narrative of the article in a disingenuous manner. These sentences could be moved to a separate section titled "'Fringe Views' or could be integrated into sections such as 'Numbers and logistics' and 'Archaeology' ] (]) 15:17, 8 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
One thing has not changed: there is still no evidence for a mass revolt of Israelite slaves at any time during the New Kingdom. However, we now know that much of the population of the Delta during the Second Intermediate Period and New Kingdom was West Semitic (the broader ethnic group to which Israel belongs) and that the geographic descriptions found in the Bible accurately reflect conditions during the 15th to 11th centuries BCE. | |||
Greenman262, shouting and writing everything in capitals is a poor strategy to convince people about the merits of your arguments. As for some of these arguments: | |||
"not sufficient in itself to deny the possibility of Hebrew people having traveled from Egypt through the Sinai". It is probably sufficient to indicate that they did not spend a significant period as desert nomads and/or did not have the numbers to leave evidence of their presence behind. However, Misplaced Pages does not care what its editors feel or think about any particular subject. It needs sources which make the connections and deductions for us. It is a frustrating aspect of the Misplaced Pages experience, but you have to realize it if you want to participate. Find sources which support your arguments. | |||
*"the Mosaic covenant ... has ZERO historical support whatsoever outside the old testament." While I honestly think that ] has a better claim at historicity than the ] (less need of ] and more plausible motivations for the characters), if our sources do not bring up the historicity of divine intervention, we can not address the matter in a Misplaced Pages article. Remember, no original research. | |||
*"Professor of Old Testament and Ancient Near Eastern History and Archaeology". So Hoffmeier probably is knowledgeable in the relevant fields of study and could even be called an expert. The likelihood of his personal bias on the matter and that his workplace sounds fishy is not enough to erase his comments. Editors should not delete whatever they or goes against their personal beliefs. | |||
*"I would hardly call this a reliable source." It would be unreliable in whatever article has to do with the resurrection of Jesus. However, that does not mean that they are fans of ] and are necessarily in denial of evidence. | |||
*"he fails to provide a shred of actual evidence for the Exodus". He does not have to provide evidence. Historians and archaeologists provide interpretations of the historical record and of various specific sources. Not every conjecture is based on concrete evidence, but that does not mean we can casually reject potential explanations for this or that problem. ] (]) 11:16, 8 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
I recently tried adding references to a few recent studies that attempt to integrate this material. They were rejected by an editor who claimed that TheTorah.com is not a reliable source. The editor in question is a specialist in Eastern European affairs whom, as far as I know, has no expertise in Ancient Near Eastern Archaeology or Biblical History. I used those sources only because they are the most readily available to readers who do not have the time or energy to comb through piles of research papers. I question how one defines a "reliable source" on a topic as contentious as biblical studies; is a source "unreliable" simply because it expresses an opinion different from that of the editor? ] (]) 23:19, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks for your comments. My main point which I capitalized for clarity is that K&H's views should not end the summary of the historicity section but should rather be moved to a seperate "Fringe Explanations and Views" section. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 13:33, 8 December 2016 (UTC)</small> | |||
:First, Wikipedians are not supposed to be experts, they just have to ] ], see ] for details. | |||
::The section you are referencing is a summary of the Historicity section. You cannot move this content into a separate section as it would no longer summarize all viewpoints/issues of the section. | |||
:I can grant you the point that there were Semites in Ancient Egypt. There just weren't millions of them, and there weren't any Israelites until 1210s BCE (that's technically when Israelites have been shown to exist). Let me spell it out clearly: before 13th century BCE there couldn't be any Israelite in Egypt, since according to the known evidence they did not exist yet. And yup, in the 13th century BCE and earlier, there were Semitic temples in Egypt, just there were no Yahwistic temples. Those Semites were polytheists and they did not worship Yahweh. What's the evidence for any Yahwist being in Egypt before 1250 BCE? I bet there is none. There's is a mention of "Ywh in the land of Shasu", but the Shasu were not Israelites. And saying that Yhw=Yahweh is not completely supported by evidence. Redford speculated that Yhw is the ancestor of Yahweh. ] (]) 23:45, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I really think you are making a bigger deal out of the two sentences than is merited - simply because it is the last two sentences doesn't mean it carries more weight. Whether you believe it or not, this is still a scholarly viewpoint of those with literal Biblical backgrounds. As I state and others have as well, not all content on a Wiki page is not required to be agreeable to all readers. ] (]) 19:41, 9 December 2016 (UTC)Ckruschke | |||
::Two of the articles that I cited were written by leading experts in the field: Gary Rendsburg of Rutgers University and Israel Knohl of Hebrew University. The citations themselves were rejected as "unreliable" by an editor simply because they were published on the website of thetorah.com. Isn't that "citing sources"? | |||
::Incidentally, neither of those papers claim that there were Yahweistic temples in Egypt, or even that the West Semites of the Delta would have identified themselves as Israelite. Certainly it is true that the first reference by name to Israelites by the title "Israelite" comes from the 13th century! What makes you think the articles in question claim differently? ] (]) 23:46, 7 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Those two scholars seem to be at the maximalist/conservative extreme of the scholarly spectrum. Misplaced Pages usually renders mainstream ]. While conservative scholars may be ], their arguments should be rendered with ]. ] (]) 00:03, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::What difference does that make? I added those citations to a section on "Possible Historical Origins" which explicitly notes that is presenting controversial and uncertain hypotheses! How can one possibly discuss "possible historical origins" if one categorically rejects the work of scholars working in that area as "unreliable"? | |||
::::Besides, they are not "maximalists". If you want to understand what a maximalist is, look at the web-site of the Associates for Biblical Research (https://biblearchaeology.org/). | |||
::::I will, however, review the policies concerning WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV to see if there is some other way they can be cited. They should be. ] (]) 00:23, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::What I think is not relevant. What are the ] and customs at Misplaced Pages, that's relevant. ] (]) 00:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Well, if those are the rules, then this entire article violates them far more aggregiously! | |||
::::::Talk about unattributed points-of-view, consider this far more opinionated and completely unattributed statement for the article: "Most mainstream scholars do not accept the biblical Exodus account as history for a number of reasons." ] (]) 00:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::We actually have ] for that, too, see ]. ] (]) 00:36, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Those rules read "A statement that all or most scientists or scholars hold a certain view requires reliable sourcing that directly says that all or most scientists or scholars hold that view." This article doesn't follow them! | |||
::::::::I don't disagree with the statement; I think it is true that "Most mainstream scholars do not accept the biblical Exodus account as history for a number of reasons.". I'm just wondering why that statement is treated as an exception to the rules! ] (]) 00:50, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Such sourcing is cited in the article, in the lead, in footnotes 4 and 5 and arguably also in 1 through 3. Cheers. ] (]) 00:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Having had a chance to review the "WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV" rules, it seems to me that adding a citation to a statement that already reads "with some instead dating it to the twelfth century BCE under Ramses III (20th dynasty)." to an opinion which does indeed date it to the twelfth century BCE complies with the rules. Ditto with the statement "The 17th dynasty expulsion of the Hyksos, a group of Semitic invaders, is also frequently discussed as a potential historical parallel or origin for the story.". So why were the added citations rejected? | |||
::::Don't get me wrong: I understand the underlying problem here of maintaining neutrality on a controversial subject such as this. But rejecting references to scholars whose viewpoints are identified as controversial only adds to bias! ] (]) 00:57, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::The citations were rejected because we need to use high quality academic sources. Not a popularizing website, even if it is written by academics. It is not peer-reviewed. Also, most of the things you added citations to already had citations that were better.--] (]) 01:00, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Actually, the existing citations are way out of date; and TheTorah.com is peer-reviewed, although not to the extent that, say, JNES or JBL is peer reviewed. Furthermore, the existing citations are way out of date. If you prefer, I can cite Israel Knohl's original book; but since it is in Hebrew I doubt most wikipedia readers could understand it. I could also cite Rendsburg's original article in Vetus Testamentum from 1992 (out-of-date) or his more recent article written jointly with Manfred Bietak from 2021. Would that meet Misplaced Pages's standards? | |||
::::::Also, I notice that the article refers under "see also" to Simcha Jacobovici's 2006 documentary "The Exodus Decoded". Hardly a peer-reviewed source! | |||
::::::Please don't get me wrong: I really do understand the problems of maintaining neutrality in a topic such as this, where there is absolutely no concensus. ] (]) 01:12, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Hmm... no. In the mainstream academia the consensus is that the Exodus is either totally bunk or very dissimilar from the events related in the Bible. We have ] for that. Evangelical colleges and universities will disagree, but we don't consider them "mainstream". Orthodox Jews will disagree, idem ditto. ] (]) 01:15, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Again, why is that relevant to a section that is explicitly discussing theories that try to make historical sense out of the exodus? Should that entire section be deleted because it does not comply with what you call "mainstream concensus"? ] (]) 01:18, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Minority views are not banned from Misplaced Pages, but they don't get lion's share. ] (]) 01:19, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::But don't they have to be represented accurately and in an up-to-date fashion? | |||
::::::::::Incidentally, I've heard Rutgers and Hebrew University called many things, but "Evangelical" is not one of them. And I think most Orthodox Jews would be horrified by the theories which Knohl and Rendsburg expound. ] (]) 01:29, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Personally, I'm not opposed to briefly mentioning there are other opinions. But the consensus/most scholars claim is pretty well sourced. ] (]) 01:32, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::So what does that have to do with citations added to a section which is explicitly discussing alternative viewpoints? ] (]) 01:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::In other words, there are multiple views about how the Exodus really happened, but what all mainstream views have in common is positing that the story from the Bible is inaccurate. And Joel S. Baden claimed on YouTube that, wait, there is not one story of the Exodus, there are at least four in the Pentateuch, and they differ very much from each other. ] (]) 01:38, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::Archaeobuf -- if you'd like to draft something, it might help us to understand exactly what you're proposing. Like tgeorgescu, I would not be opposed to brief mentions of alternative theories like Knohl's. Cheers. ] (]) 01:40, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::OK; how do I draft something and to whom should it be submitted? ] (]) 01:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::What I am suggesting is you simply present it here on the talk page for comment, to see if it gains a consensus of editors. I think in the abstract what you suggest is fine, but as they say, the devil is in the details. Cheers. ] (]) 01:48, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::Will do. | |||
:::::::::::::::::I started out just trying to add a few citations, but I would like now to think the whole problem through and try to get it right. Give me time. ] (]) 02:17, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::All true; but what does that have to do with the rejected citations? | |||
::::::::::::::I might also add that all three articles that I tried to cite agree that what really happened is very different from the story in the Bible (at least as commonly interpreted). So by your definition, these are all mainstream! ] (]) 01:40, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::For Baden's argument see {{youtube|JC5lt5E3eXU|Canaanites Were Israelites & There Was No Exodus - Dr. Joel Baden}}. Check the transcript, search for "pentagonal" (i.e. Pentateuchal). The argument starts at 0:03:55. ] (]) 01:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::What's that got to do with citations added to a section dealing with alternative theories? | |||
::::::::::::::::I have to confess that I have not read Baden's magnum opus, "The Exodus; A Biography". The amount of material written on this subject is voluminous, and it is impossible to digest it all. My understanding, however, is that Baden's position is basically an upgraded version of a theory first proposed several decades ago by George Mendenhall and Norman Gottwald, holding that Israelites emerged from Canaanites. It is one of several such models currently used in the archaeological and biblical studies communities to understand the origins of Israel, all of which are considered hypothetical and unproven. ] (]) 02:14, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::Wrong. {{tq|Israelites emerged from Canaanites}} is not Baden's theory by a long shot, not even as him reviving the work of scholars deceased long ago. It it THE consensus view in the mainstream academia. Mainstream Bible scholars have various views about ''how'' Israelites emerged from Canaanites, but they all agree that the Israelites ''did'' emerge from Canaanites. That is, indeed, the only game in town, except for ] scholars. And of course, several sources to that extent are cited in our article. I advise you to read (it is not a long article). ] (]) 02:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::::Oh? What about the Shasu theory? The Syrian immigration theory? The re-sedentarizing nomad theory? Why do you keep trying to equate me and the scholars whose work I was trying to cite to Biblical inerrantists? | |||
::::::::::::::::::There is NO concensus about any of this among archaeologists and biblical scholars trying to understand the origins of Israel -- only questions. And that is the way scientific research proceeds. ] (]) 02:33, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::::You're barking at the wrong tree. I'm not in charge of the Bible scholars from ]. There are enough sources which clearly make the point that all other theories about the origins of the Israelites have been relegated to the academic dust bin. Of course, tiny groups did flock to Israel, and brought with them stories about Yahweh and escapes from Egypt. But the Israelite conquest of Canaan has been thoroughly debunked, no scholar worth his salt believes it. | |||
:::::::::::::::::::{{blockquote|1=The fact is that we are all minimalists -- at least, when it comes to the patriarchal period and the settlement. When I began my PhD studies more than three decades ago in the USA, the 'substantial historicity' of the patriarchs was widely accepted as was the unified conquest of the land. These days it is quite difficult to find anyone who takes this view.<br><br>In fact, until recently I could find no 'maximalist' history of Israel since Wellhausen. ... In fact, though, 'maximalist' has been widely defined as someone who accepts the the biblical text unless it can be proven wrong. If so, very few are willing to operate like this, not even John Bright (1980) whose history is not a maximalist one according to the definition just given.|2=Lester L. Grabbe, Some Recent Issues in the Study of the History of Israel, 2007}} | |||
:::::::::::::::::::Quoted by ] (]) 02:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::::::I agree, the idea of a massive conquest of Canaan by Israelites arriving in mass from Egypt at the end of the Late Bronze is not consistent with the currently available archaeological or documentary evidence. But the stories do exist, and that raises the question, "how did these stories arise"? On that, there is no concensus. Furthermore, Israelites clearly inhabited Israel and Judah during the Iron Age, and that raises the question, "where did they come from"? On that, too, there is no concensus. | |||
::::::::::::::::::::Besides, what does that have to do with the core question here: citing the work of scholars who are attempting to figure out the answers to those questions in a section dealing with such issues? ] (]) 02:49, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::::::I take mainstream ] at face value. It is not any of my business to second-guess it. ] (]) 02:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::::::::Let's go to bed; we are going around in circles. I will do as Dumizid suggested and try to put together an update to this section that brings it up-to-date with current research, and post it to the talk section for review. That will take me a while, and even then I am not certain that an unbiased review is possible. ] (]) 02:55, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::::::::To spell it out, yes, we are biased for mainstream scholarship, and we are biased against ] scholarship. These words have Wikipedically shared meanings which are explained in ]. | |||
:::::::::::::::::::::::Baden is known as a champion of the Neo-Documentary Hypothesis, but of course he does not claim to have invented NDH, and in fact NDH is a return to the old (initial) ways of DH, meaning plot threads only. I don't think his take upon the origin of the Israelites amounts to original research, rather than restating stock knowledge. There is a trend in the academia that when one is lower on the pecking order, they are mostly busy with summarizing and evaluating the points made by more important scholars. Because somebody still has to teach the basics to the students. ] (]) 06:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::::::::::What does Baden's opinion on the New Documentary Hypothesis have to do with properly citing sources in a section dealing with theories about the Exodus? ] (]) 11:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::::::::::{{cite book|last1=Noll|first1=K.L.|year=2001|chapter=6. The Iron Age I|chapter-url=http://books.google.nl/books?id=2rnyjxLHy-QC&pg=PA157&dq=israelites+canaanites+emerged+consensus&hl=nl&sa=X&ei=61iKUraFNaKN7QahgIGoDQ&ved=0CCUQ6AEwAA|title=Canaan and Israel in Antiquity: An Introduction|location=London|publisher=Continuum|page=157|isbn=9781841273181|issn=0266-4984|quote=''The Conquest Model'' For much of the twentieth century, this hypothesis for the emergence of early Israel in Canaan enjoyed a consensus among historians, but it has been abandoned by almost all competent historians today. Essentially, the Conquest Model was a paraphrase of the biblical story (minus the miracles, of course).}} | |||
:::::::::::::::::::::::::{{cite book | last=George | first=Arthur | last2=George | first2=Elena | title=The Mythology of Eden | publisher=Hamilton Books | year=2014 | isbn=978-0-7618-6289-5 | url=https://books.google.com/books?id=xrKuAwAAQBAJ&pg=PA30 | access-date=10 August 2024 | page=30 | quote=In summary, the real history is the reverse of the Bible's account: The Israelites were the ''result'' rather than the ''cause'' of the collapse of the Canaanite city-states.}} | |||
:::::::::::::::::::::::::{{cite book | last=Niesiolowski-Spano | first=Lukasz | last2=Laskowski | first2=Jacek | title=The Origin Myths and Holy Places in the Old Testament: A Study of Aetiological Narratives | publisher=Taylor & Francis | year=2016 | isbn=978-1-134-93837-7 | url=https://books.google.nl/books?id=WMLsCwAAQBAJ&pg=PA21 | access-date=10 August 2024 | page=11 | quote=The religious text which formed a theology was there to legitimise a system of values, a way of exercising power, and the establishment of a national consciousness. In the hands of the Bible’s authors, the past was material to be freely shaped, and while they worked on it, they paid little attention to fidelity to reality. For the Israelites the stories of, for example, Egyptian slavery, the feast of Passover, the exodus from the land of the Nile and the conquest of Canaan were essential: they had to full theological and political aims. It is hard, therefore, to accept them as an objective description of past events.}} ] (]) 23:30, 10 August 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Inclusion of Americans in lead == | |||
== Taking into account "Patterns of evidence:The Exodus" == | |||
I feel that the final bit in the lead about the narrative resonating with Americans is not due. This is not a major aspect of the Exodus, and its placement in the lead feels like Americo-centrism. Surely the narrative has resonated with all sorts around the world who have been culturally exposed to Abrahamic religion—why is relatively recent American history in the lead? I know of no other overview/reference source that introduces the Exodus with discussion of its presence in American imagination. <span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧁</span>]<span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧂</span> 16:30, 13 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
Hi, | |||
I just finished watching "Patterns of evidence:The Exodus" on NetFlix. | |||
:Looking at article content, it doesn't fit per ]. ] (]) 18:16, 13 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
This documentary makes in my opinion several valid points that can be followed up be viewing the materials referenced concerning the digs in Avaris. | |||
::The corresponding subsection in the body of the article, ], lists US political movements as well as liberation theology in Latin America. The real problem is that this section isn't broad enough. The Exodus has been used as inspiration for may modern political movements. I'm afraid I know little about that subject, but '''' (2019), cited in the source list, seems to discuss it fairly extensively. I've found some other possibly useful sources listed in ''The Pentateuch'' (2012) by Walter J. Houston: | |||
::*Cone, James H. (1997). ''God of the Oppressed, Revised Edition''. | |||
::*Croatto. J. Severino (1981) ''Exodus, a Hermeneutics of Freedom''. | |||
::*Gottwald, Norman K.; Horsley, Richard A., eds. (1993). ''The Bible and Liberation: Political and Social Hermeneutics''. | |||
::*Pixley, George V. (1987). ''On Exodus: A Liberation Perspective''. | |||
::*Sugirtharajah, R. S. ''Voices from the Margin: Interpreting the Bible in the Third World''. (There are several editions of this one, the most recent of which seems to be 2016). | |||
::] (]) 18:25, 13 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::The Exodus has had influence on social, religious, and political movements in many places throughout history. That there's a section on America alone is because there's not relatively enough on other places and eras. Not a single reference overview source so emphasizes the Exodus's influence on American movements. It is just not lead-worthy. <span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧁</span>]<span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧂</span> 19:18, 6 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::You seem to have missed the point. The lead summarizes the article. If you’re unhappy that that section is mostly about America (although ] is not particularly American, you can expand it to include other areas.—-] (]) 19:55, 6 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::The lead summarizes the major aspects of the article. Not every section of the article needs a blurb in the lead. As it stands, the lead's blurb of the American influence is way overweight. <span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧁</span>]<span style="position: relative; top: -0.5em;">꧂</span> 20:25, 6 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Who-tags == | |||
I have no "bone in this fight" as I am a non religous person. | |||
{{u|Gråbergs Gråa Sång}}, why are you marking the names of scholars with who and non-sequitur tags?--] (]) 19:03, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:Because they need a bit of in-text context. "Historian", "theologian", "4th century rabbi", "blogger" or whatever is correct. Readers should be told who this person is and why they're allowed to talk at the reader. ] (]) 19:08, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
I've just edited a section of the 'Archaeology' under the Historicity of the Exodus. Previously, it stated that there was no evidence whatsoever for the exodus (leaving of peoples from Egypt), which is false. During the reign of Amenhotep II a city of Egypt and major military base known as Avaris was entirely abandoned, which would coincide with the exodus assuming the exodus date of 1446 BC (which I will make further edits on this Misplaced Pages page later on). I cited a paper from the journal JAIE which clearly cites this abandonment, and then shows that this abandonment indeed took place under the reign of Amenhotep II. A sudden abandonement of a city that probably hosted tens of thousands of inhabitants (25,000-30,000 from what I read) is definite evidence for the historicity of the exodus, which indicates a massive exodus of the Hebrew peoples from Egypt all at once, consistent with the sudden abandonment of Avaris which entirely happened all at once. Is this absolute evidence for the entire story? No, but it is '''some''' evidence, and that was the point of my edit (which I may need to re-do if it gets removed because I may have missed an editing step or something). | |||
::As both the names you've tagged are modern scholars, is "scholar X" not sufficient?--] (]) 19:09, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::If "scholar" is the best we can do, sure, but my preference would be a bit more specific. A scholar of 15th century Venetian glassware won't do us much good in this article. I'd like to see at least "historian", "biblical scholar", "16th century theologian" or what we may have in there. I think writing like "Early Christian authors such as Justin Martyr, Irenaeus, and Augustine" is ok, though I'm tempted to get some {{when}} data in there. ] (]) 19:15, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I added biblical scholar to both, with outside evidence - but I don't think this is something we should be doing unless someone can be showed NOT to have expertise (in which case we shouldn't be citing them in these contexts anyway).--] (]) ] (]) 19:49, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::And I think in-text description should be the default, Wikipedians have on occasion been less than perfect when picking sources. To take one example, "first century CE Jewish historian ]" (at first mention) is the way to go IMO, we should not assume that the reader knows who Josephus was. I'm not suggesting adding "21th century" to people like Kenneth Sparks. If he was 19th century, that might be different. ] (]) 20:00, 5 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Lead contains no summary of account
Why does the lead contain no summary of the Exodus? Also, its historicity is quite secondary to its religious significance, so I think that paragraph should be last. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 18:47, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, Zanahary, there is Book of Exodus for the story, The Exodus is about its historicity (mainly). tgeorgescu (talk) 18:58, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sources and parallels of the Exodus is the article about the myth’s origins—but even that article should have a brief overview of the narrative. This article is about the narrative called the Exodus, whose content spans a number of books besides the Book of Exodus. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 19:01, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Whatever. I'm not the decision maker in that respect. tgeorgescu (talk) 19:02, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Uh, okay! I’ll work on the lead. Open to thoughts from anyone with input. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 19:16, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- I made an update to the lead. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 22:24, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- I think a brief summary can be included.—-Ermenrich (talk) 22:35, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- I made an update to the lead. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 22:24, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- Uh, okay! I’ll work on the lead. Open to thoughts from anyone with input. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 19:16, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Whatever. I'm not the decision maker in that respect. tgeorgescu (talk) 19:02, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sources and parallels of the Exodus is the article about the myth’s origins—but even that article should have a brief overview of the narrative. This article is about the narrative called the Exodus, whose content spans a number of books besides the Book of Exodus. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 19:01, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Out of Date
The information in the "Origins and Historicity" is way out of date. It is obvious that the contributors and editors have not kept up with the results of archaeological excavations in the Nile Delta over the past few decades, especially the work by James Hoffmeier and Manfred Bietak. This material is now readily available in archaeological publications and has been much discussed at conferences such as those of ASOR and the SBL. This is not the fault of the editors and contributors alone -- in general, the Biblical studies community has fallen behind on absorbing and integrating this data.
One thing has not changed: there is still no evidence for a mass revolt of Israelite slaves at any time during the New Kingdom. However, we now know that much of the population of the Delta during the Second Intermediate Period and New Kingdom was West Semitic (the broader ethnic group to which Israel belongs) and that the geographic descriptions found in the Bible accurately reflect conditions during the 15th to 11th centuries BCE.
I recently tried adding references to a few recent studies that attempt to integrate this material. They were rejected by an editor who claimed that TheTorah.com is not a reliable source. The editor in question is a specialist in Eastern European affairs whom, as far as I know, has no expertise in Ancient Near Eastern Archaeology or Biblical History. I used those sources only because they are the most readily available to readers who do not have the time or energy to comb through piles of research papers. I question how one defines a "reliable source" on a topic as contentious as biblical studies; is a source "unreliable" simply because it expresses an opinion different from that of the editor? Archaeobuf (talk) 23:19, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- First, Wikipedians are not supposed to be experts, they just have to WP:CITE WP:SOURCES, see WP:CITIZENDIUM for details.
- I can grant you the point that there were Semites in Ancient Egypt. There just weren't millions of them, and there weren't any Israelites until 1210s BCE (that's technically when Israelites have been shown to exist). Let me spell it out clearly: before 13th century BCE there couldn't be any Israelite in Egypt, since according to the known evidence they did not exist yet. And yup, in the 13th century BCE and earlier, there were Semitic temples in Egypt, just there were no Yahwistic temples. Those Semites were polytheists and they did not worship Yahweh. What's the evidence for any Yahwist being in Egypt before 1250 BCE? I bet there is none. There's is a mention of "Ywh in the land of Shasu", but the Shasu were not Israelites. And saying that Yhw=Yahweh is not completely supported by evidence. Redford speculated that Yhw is the ancestor of Yahweh. tgeorgescu (talk) 23:45, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Two of the articles that I cited were written by leading experts in the field: Gary Rendsburg of Rutgers University and Israel Knohl of Hebrew University. The citations themselves were rejected as "unreliable" by an editor simply because they were published on the website of thetorah.com. Isn't that "citing sources"?
- Incidentally, neither of those papers claim that there were Yahweistic temples in Egypt, or even that the West Semites of the Delta would have identified themselves as Israelite. Certainly it is true that the first reference by name to Israelites by the title "Israelite" comes from the 13th century! What makes you think the articles in question claim differently? Archaeobuf (talk) 23:46, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Those two scholars seem to be at the maximalist/conservative extreme of the scholarly spectrum. Misplaced Pages usually renders mainstream Bible scholarship. While conservative scholars may be WP:CITED, their arguments should be rendered with WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:03, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- What difference does that make? I added those citations to a section on "Possible Historical Origins" which explicitly notes that is presenting controversial and uncertain hypotheses! How can one possibly discuss "possible historical origins" if one categorically rejects the work of scholars working in that area as "unreliable"?
- Besides, they are not "maximalists". If you want to understand what a maximalist is, look at the web-site of the Associates for Biblical Research (https://biblearchaeology.org/).
- I will, however, review the policies concerning WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV to see if there is some other way they can be cited. They should be. Archaeobuf (talk) 00:23, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- What I think is not relevant. What are the WP:RULES and customs at Misplaced Pages, that's relevant. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Well, if those are the rules, then this entire article violates them far more aggregiously!
- Talk about unattributed points-of-view, consider this far more opinionated and completely unattributed statement for the article: "Most mainstream scholars do not accept the biblical Exodus account as history for a number of reasons." Archaeobuf (talk) 00:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- We actually have WP:RULES for that, too, see WP:RS/AC. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:36, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Those rules read "A statement that all or most scientists or scholars hold a certain view requires reliable sourcing that directly says that all or most scientists or scholars hold that view." This article doesn't follow them!
- I don't disagree with the statement; I think it is true that "Most mainstream scholars do not accept the biblical Exodus account as history for a number of reasons.". I'm just wondering why that statement is treated as an exception to the rules! Archaeobuf (talk) 00:50, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Such sourcing is cited in the article, in the lead, in footnotes 4 and 5 and arguably also in 1 through 3. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 00:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- We actually have WP:RULES for that, too, see WP:RS/AC. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:36, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- What I think is not relevant. What are the WP:RULES and customs at Misplaced Pages, that's relevant. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Having had a chance to review the "WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV" rules, it seems to me that adding a citation to a statement that already reads "with some instead dating it to the twelfth century BCE under Ramses III (20th dynasty)." to an opinion which does indeed date it to the twelfth century BCE complies with the rules. Ditto with the statement "The 17th dynasty expulsion of the Hyksos, a group of Semitic invaders, is also frequently discussed as a potential historical parallel or origin for the story.". So why were the added citations rejected?
- Don't get me wrong: I understand the underlying problem here of maintaining neutrality on a controversial subject such as this. But rejecting references to scholars whose viewpoints are identified as controversial only adds to bias! Archaeobuf (talk) 00:57, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- The citations were rejected because we need to use high quality academic sources. Not a popularizing website, even if it is written by academics. It is not peer-reviewed. Also, most of the things you added citations to already had citations that were better.--Ermenrich (talk) 01:00, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, the existing citations are way out of date; and TheTorah.com is peer-reviewed, although not to the extent that, say, JNES or JBL is peer reviewed. Furthermore, the existing citations are way out of date. If you prefer, I can cite Israel Knohl's original book; but since it is in Hebrew I doubt most wikipedia readers could understand it. I could also cite Rendsburg's original article in Vetus Testamentum from 1992 (out-of-date) or his more recent article written jointly with Manfred Bietak from 2021. Would that meet Misplaced Pages's standards?
- Also, I notice that the article refers under "see also" to Simcha Jacobovici's 2006 documentary "The Exodus Decoded". Hardly a peer-reviewed source!
- Please don't get me wrong: I really do understand the problems of maintaining neutrality in a topic such as this, where there is absolutely no concensus. Archaeobuf (talk) 01:12, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Hmm... no. In the mainstream academia the consensus is that the Exodus is either totally bunk or very dissimilar from the events related in the Bible. We have WP:RS for that. Evangelical colleges and universities will disagree, but we don't consider them "mainstream". Orthodox Jews will disagree, idem ditto. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:15, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Again, why is that relevant to a section that is explicitly discussing theories that try to make historical sense out of the exodus? Should that entire section be deleted because it does not comply with what you call "mainstream concensus"? Archaeobuf (talk) 01:18, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Minority views are not banned from Misplaced Pages, but they don't get lion's share. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:19, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- But don't they have to be represented accurately and in an up-to-date fashion?
- Incidentally, I've heard Rutgers and Hebrew University called many things, but "Evangelical" is not one of them. And I think most Orthodox Jews would be horrified by the theories which Knohl and Rendsburg expound. Archaeobuf (talk) 01:29, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Personally, I'm not opposed to briefly mentioning there are other opinions. But the consensus/most scholars claim is pretty well sourced. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:32, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- So what does that have to do with citations added to a section which is explicitly discussing alternative viewpoints? Archaeobuf (talk) 01:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- In other words, there are multiple views about how the Exodus really happened, but what all mainstream views have in common is positing that the story from the Bible is inaccurate. And Joel S. Baden claimed on YouTube that, wait, there is not one story of the Exodus, there are at least four in the Pentateuch, and they differ very much from each other. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:38, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Archaeobuf -- if you'd like to draft something, it might help us to understand exactly what you're proposing. Like tgeorgescu, I would not be opposed to brief mentions of alternative theories like Knohl's. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 01:40, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- OK; how do I draft something and to whom should it be submitted? Archaeobuf (talk) 01:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- What I am suggesting is you simply present it here on the talk page for comment, to see if it gains a consensus of editors. I think in the abstract what you suggest is fine, but as they say, the devil is in the details. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 01:48, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Will do.
- I started out just trying to add a few citations, but I would like now to think the whole problem through and try to get it right. Give me time. Archaeobuf (talk) 02:17, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- What I am suggesting is you simply present it here on the talk page for comment, to see if it gains a consensus of editors. I think in the abstract what you suggest is fine, but as they say, the devil is in the details. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 01:48, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- OK; how do I draft something and to whom should it be submitted? Archaeobuf (talk) 01:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- All true; but what does that have to do with the rejected citations?
- I might also add that all three articles that I tried to cite agree that what really happened is very different from the story in the Bible (at least as commonly interpreted). So by your definition, these are all mainstream! Archaeobuf (talk) 01:40, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- For Baden's argument see Canaanites Were Israelites & There Was No Exodus - Dr. Joel Baden on YouTube. Check the transcript, search for "pentagonal" (i.e. Pentateuchal). The argument starts at 0:03:55. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- What's that got to do with citations added to a section dealing with alternative theories?
- I have to confess that I have not read Baden's magnum opus, "The Exodus; A Biography". The amount of material written on this subject is voluminous, and it is impossible to digest it all. My understanding, however, is that Baden's position is basically an upgraded version of a theory first proposed several decades ago by George Mendenhall and Norman Gottwald, holding that Israelites emerged from Canaanites. It is one of several such models currently used in the archaeological and biblical studies communities to understand the origins of Israel, all of which are considered hypothetical and unproven. Archaeobuf (talk) 02:14, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Wrong.
Israelites emerged from Canaanites
is not Baden's theory by a long shot, not even as him reviving the work of scholars deceased long ago. It it THE consensus view in the mainstream academia. Mainstream Bible scholars have various views about how Israelites emerged from Canaanites, but they all agree that the Israelites did emerge from Canaanites. That is, indeed, the only game in town, except for WP:FRINGE scholars. And of course, several sources to that extent are cited in our article. I advise you to read this (it is not a long article). tgeorgescu (talk) 02:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC)- Oh? What about the Shasu theory? The Syrian immigration theory? The re-sedentarizing nomad theory? Why do you keep trying to equate me and the scholars whose work I was trying to cite to Biblical inerrantists?
- There is NO concensus about any of this among archaeologists and biblical scholars trying to understand the origins of Israel -- only questions. And that is the way scientific research proceeds. Archaeobuf (talk) 02:33, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- You're barking at the wrong tree. I'm not in charge of the Bible scholars from WP:CHOPSY. There are enough sources which clearly make the point that all other theories about the origins of the Israelites have been relegated to the academic dust bin. Of course, tiny groups did flock to Israel, and brought with them stories about Yahweh and escapes from Egypt. But the Israelite conquest of Canaan has been thoroughly debunked, no scholar worth his salt believes it.
The fact is that we are all minimalists -- at least, when it comes to the patriarchal period and the settlement. When I began my PhD studies more than three decades ago in the USA, the 'substantial historicity' of the patriarchs was widely accepted as was the unified conquest of the land. These days it is quite difficult to find anyone who takes this view.
— Lester L. Grabbe, Some Recent Issues in the Study of the History of Israel, 2007
In fact, until recently I could find no 'maximalist' history of Israel since Wellhausen. ... In fact, though, 'maximalist' has been widely defined as someone who accepts the the biblical text unless it can be proven wrong. If so, very few are willing to operate like this, not even John Bright (1980) whose history is not a maximalist one according to the definition just given.- Quoted by tgeorgescu (talk) 02:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- I agree, the idea of a massive conquest of Canaan by Israelites arriving in mass from Egypt at the end of the Late Bronze is not consistent with the currently available archaeological or documentary evidence. But the stories do exist, and that raises the question, "how did these stories arise"? On that, there is no concensus. Furthermore, Israelites clearly inhabited Israel and Judah during the Iron Age, and that raises the question, "where did they come from"? On that, too, there is no concensus.
- Besides, what does that have to do with the core question here: citing the work of scholars who are attempting to figure out the answers to those questions in a section dealing with such issues? Archaeobuf (talk) 02:49, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- I take mainstream WP:SCHOLARSHIP at face value. It is not any of my business to second-guess it. tgeorgescu (talk) 02:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Let's go to bed; we are going around in circles. I will do as Dumizid suggested and try to put together an update to this section that brings it up-to-date with current research, and post it to the talk section for review. That will take me a while, and even then I am not certain that an unbiased review is possible. Archaeobuf (talk) 02:55, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- To spell it out, yes, we are biased for mainstream scholarship, and we are biased against WP:FRINGE scholarship. These words have Wikipedically shared meanings which are explained in WP:RULES.
- Baden is known as a champion of the Neo-Documentary Hypothesis, but of course he does not claim to have invented NDH, and in fact NDH is a return to the old (initial) ways of DH, meaning plot threads only. I don't think his take upon the origin of the Israelites amounts to original research, rather than restating stock knowledge. There is a trend in the academia that when one is lower on the pecking order, they are mostly busy with summarizing and evaluating the points made by more important scholars. Because somebody still has to teach the basics to the students. tgeorgescu (talk) 06:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- What does Baden's opinion on the New Documentary Hypothesis have to do with properly citing sources in a section dealing with theories about the Exodus? Archaeobuf (talk) 11:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Noll, K.L. (2001). "6. The Iron Age I". Canaan and Israel in Antiquity: An Introduction. London: Continuum. p. 157. ISBN 9781841273181. ISSN 0266-4984.
The Conquest Model For much of the twentieth century, this hypothesis for the emergence of early Israel in Canaan enjoyed a consensus among historians, but it has been abandoned by almost all competent historians today. Essentially, the Conquest Model was a paraphrase of the biblical story (minus the miracles, of course).
- George, Arthur; George, Elena (2014). The Mythology of Eden. Hamilton Books. p. 30. ISBN 978-0-7618-6289-5. Retrieved 10 August 2024.
In summary, the real history is the reverse of the Bible's account: The Israelites were the result rather than the cause of the collapse of the Canaanite city-states.
- Niesiolowski-Spano, Lukasz; Laskowski, Jacek (2016). The Origin Myths and Holy Places in the Old Testament: A Study of Aetiological Narratives. Taylor & Francis. p. 11. ISBN 978-1-134-93837-7. Retrieved 10 August 2024.
The religious text which formed a theology was there to legitimise a system of values, a way of exercising power, and the establishment of a national consciousness. In the hands of the Bible's authors, the past was material to be freely shaped, and while they worked on it, they paid little attention to fidelity to reality. For the Israelites the stories of, for example, Egyptian slavery, the feast of Passover, the exodus from the land of the Nile and the conquest of Canaan were essential: they had to full theological and political aims. It is hard, therefore, to accept them as an objective description of past events.
tgeorgescu (talk) 23:30, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- Noll, K.L. (2001). "6. The Iron Age I". Canaan and Israel in Antiquity: An Introduction. London: Continuum. p. 157. ISBN 9781841273181. ISSN 0266-4984.
- What does Baden's opinion on the New Documentary Hypothesis have to do with properly citing sources in a section dealing with theories about the Exodus? Archaeobuf (talk) 11:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Let's go to bed; we are going around in circles. I will do as Dumizid suggested and try to put together an update to this section that brings it up-to-date with current research, and post it to the talk section for review. That will take me a while, and even then I am not certain that an unbiased review is possible. Archaeobuf (talk) 02:55, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- I take mainstream WP:SCHOLARSHIP at face value. It is not any of my business to second-guess it. tgeorgescu (talk) 02:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Wrong.
- For Baden's argument see Canaanites Were Israelites & There Was No Exodus - Dr. Joel Baden on YouTube. Check the transcript, search for "pentagonal" (i.e. Pentateuchal). The argument starts at 0:03:55. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Archaeobuf -- if you'd like to draft something, it might help us to understand exactly what you're proposing. Like tgeorgescu, I would not be opposed to brief mentions of alternative theories like Knohl's. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 01:40, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- In other words, there are multiple views about how the Exodus really happened, but what all mainstream views have in common is positing that the story from the Bible is inaccurate. And Joel S. Baden claimed on YouTube that, wait, there is not one story of the Exodus, there are at least four in the Pentateuch, and they differ very much from each other. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:38, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- So what does that have to do with citations added to a section which is explicitly discussing alternative viewpoints? Archaeobuf (talk) 01:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Personally, I'm not opposed to briefly mentioning there are other opinions. But the consensus/most scholars claim is pretty well sourced. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:32, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Minority views are not banned from Misplaced Pages, but they don't get lion's share. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:19, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Again, why is that relevant to a section that is explicitly discussing theories that try to make historical sense out of the exodus? Should that entire section be deleted because it does not comply with what you call "mainstream concensus"? Archaeobuf (talk) 01:18, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Hmm... no. In the mainstream academia the consensus is that the Exodus is either totally bunk or very dissimilar from the events related in the Bible. We have WP:RS for that. Evangelical colleges and universities will disagree, but we don't consider them "mainstream". Orthodox Jews will disagree, idem ditto. tgeorgescu (talk) 01:15, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- The citations were rejected because we need to use high quality academic sources. Not a popularizing website, even if it is written by academics. It is not peer-reviewed. Also, most of the things you added citations to already had citations that were better.--Ermenrich (talk) 01:00, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Those two scholars seem to be at the maximalist/conservative extreme of the scholarly spectrum. Misplaced Pages usually renders mainstream Bible scholarship. While conservative scholars may be WP:CITED, their arguments should be rendered with WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:03, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Inclusion of Americans in lead
I feel that the final bit in the lead about the narrative resonating with Americans is not due. This is not a major aspect of the Exodus, and its placement in the lead feels like Americo-centrism. Surely the narrative has resonated with all sorts around the world who have been culturally exposed to Abrahamic religion—why is relatively recent American history in the lead? I know of no other overview/reference source that introduces the Exodus with discussion of its presence in American imagination. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 16:30, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Looking at article content, it doesn't fit per WP:LEAD. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 18:16, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- The corresponding subsection in the body of the article, The Exodus#As historical inspiration, lists US political movements as well as liberation theology in Latin America. The real problem is that this section isn't broad enough. The Exodus has been used as inspiration for may modern political movements. I'm afraid I know little about that subject, but The Book of Exodus: A Biography (2019), cited in the source list, seems to discuss it fairly extensively. I've found some other possibly useful sources listed in The Pentateuch (2012) by Walter J. Houston:
- Cone, James H. (1997). God of the Oppressed, Revised Edition.
- Croatto. J. Severino (1981) Exodus, a Hermeneutics of Freedom.
- Gottwald, Norman K.; Horsley, Richard A., eds. (1993). The Bible and Liberation: Political and Social Hermeneutics.
- Pixley, George V. (1987). On Exodus: A Liberation Perspective.
- Sugirtharajah, R. S. Voices from the Margin: Interpreting the Bible in the Third World. (There are several editions of this one, the most recent of which seems to be 2016).
- A. Parrot (talk) 18:25, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- The Exodus has had influence on social, religious, and political movements in many places throughout history. That there's a section on America alone is because there's not relatively enough on other places and eras. Not a single reference overview source so emphasizes the Exodus's influence on American movements. It is just not lead-worthy. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 19:18, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- You seem to have missed the point. The lead summarizes the article. If you’re unhappy that that section is mostly about America (although liberation theology is not particularly American, you can expand it to include other areas.—-Ermenrich (talk) 19:55, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- The lead summarizes the major aspects of the article. Not every section of the article needs a blurb in the lead. As it stands, the lead's blurb of the American influence is way overweight. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 20:25, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- You seem to have missed the point. The lead summarizes the article. If you’re unhappy that that section is mostly about America (although liberation theology is not particularly American, you can expand it to include other areas.—-Ermenrich (talk) 19:55, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- The Exodus has had influence on social, religious, and political movements in many places throughout history. That there's a section on America alone is because there's not relatively enough on other places and eras. Not a single reference overview source so emphasizes the Exodus's influence on American movements. It is just not lead-worthy. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 19:18, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- The corresponding subsection in the body of the article, The Exodus#As historical inspiration, lists US political movements as well as liberation theology in Latin America. The real problem is that this section isn't broad enough. The Exodus has been used as inspiration for may modern political movements. I'm afraid I know little about that subject, but The Book of Exodus: A Biography (2019), cited in the source list, seems to discuss it fairly extensively. I've found some other possibly useful sources listed in The Pentateuch (2012) by Walter J. Houston:
Who-tags
Gråbergs Gråa Sång, why are you marking the names of scholars with who and non-sequitur tags?--Ermenrich (talk) 19:03, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- Because they need a bit of in-text context. "Historian", "theologian", "4th century rabbi", "blogger" or whatever is correct. Readers should be told who this person is and why they're allowed to talk at the reader. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 19:08, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- As both the names you've tagged are modern scholars, is "scholar X" not sufficient?--Ermenrich (talk) 19:09, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- If "scholar" is the best we can do, sure, but my preference would be a bit more specific. A scholar of 15th century Venetian glassware won't do us much good in this article. I'd like to see at least "historian", "biblical scholar", "16th century theologian" or what we may have in there. I think writing like "Early Christian authors such as Justin Martyr, Irenaeus, and Augustine" is ok, though I'm tempted to get some data in there. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 19:15, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- I added biblical scholar to both, with outside evidence - but I don't think this is something we should be doing unless someone can be showed NOT to have expertise (in which case we shouldn't be citing them in these contexts anyway).--Ermenrich (talk) Ermenrich (talk) 19:49, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- And I think in-text description should be the default, Wikipedians have on occasion been less than perfect when picking sources. To take one example, "first century CE Jewish historian Josephus" (at first mention) is the way to go IMO, we should not assume that the reader knows who Josephus was. I'm not suggesting adding "21th century" to people like Kenneth Sparks. If he was 19th century, that might be different. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 20:00, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- I added biblical scholar to both, with outside evidence - but I don't think this is something we should be doing unless someone can be showed NOT to have expertise (in which case we shouldn't be citing them in these contexts anyway).--Ermenrich (talk) Ermenrich (talk) 19:49, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- If "scholar" is the best we can do, sure, but my preference would be a bit more specific. A scholar of 15th century Venetian glassware won't do us much good in this article. I'd like to see at least "historian", "biblical scholar", "16th century theologian" or what we may have in there. I think writing like "Early Christian authors such as Justin Martyr, Irenaeus, and Augustine" is ok, though I'm tempted to get some data in there. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 19:15, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- As both the names you've tagged are modern scholars, is "scholar X" not sufficient?--Ermenrich (talk) 19:09, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
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