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Racialized immigrant and migrant groups frequently experience environmental injustice as agricultural workers. In Arctic and Subarctic regions of Europe, Indigenous groups face issues primarily concerned with raw natural resource extraction such as mining, logging, hydroelectric dams and oil and gas development, as well as encroachment from military facilities. Across Europe, concerns relating to environmental ] and child health have been documented among Indigenous, Romani, and other minority communities. Environmental reproductive justice, defined as a community's collective right to reproductive capacity unharmed by environmental contaminants,<ref name="Sanchez">Hoover, Plain, Sanchez, et al. "''." Environmental Health Perspectives'', December 2012, vol. 120, issue 12. Web. n. pag. DOI:10.1289/ehp.1205422 {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20170629044857/https://ehp.niehs.nih.gov/1205422/|date=June 29, 2017}} Retrieved September 3, 2017. </ref> encompasses "the inextricable connection between physical and cultural survival"<ref name="Wiebe">Wiebe, Sarah Marie. . UBC Press: Vancouver, 2016. Print. {{ISBN|9780774832649}}</ref> according to environmental justice scholar Sarah Marie Wiebe. | |||
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The effects of environmental marginalization may have related political implications for both Romani and Indigenous communities across Europe. Environmental justice and access to land-based rights is a significant issue, as both groups are generally minorities within the territories they inhabit, under the sovereignty of various nation states.<ref name=Ilona>{{cite journal|author=Klímová-Alexander, Ilona|title=Transnational Romani and Indigenous Non-territorial Self-determination Claims|journal=Ethnopolitics|volume=6|issue=3|pages=395–416|date=September 25, 2007|publisher=Routledge, Taylor & Francis Group|doi=10.1080/17449050701487413}}</ref>{{rp|395}} Romani and Indigenous groups often seek increased agency with regards to autonomy, self-governance and/or sovereignty;<ref name=Ilona/>{{rp|395}} thus issues surrounding the negotiation and sharing of | |||
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The visible part there is a section commented out) is based on . The reason I direct this at the metrics page is that this article on Misplaced Pages '''actually shows up''' in the actual statistics as one reference. The others are That's nowhere near academic consensus and not a publication you can base that sort of claim on. are the political musings of a PhD, a glorified blogpost. ] (]) 18:17, 19 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
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{{ping|François Robere}} Your comments, please. ] (]) 18:23, 19 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
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:{{ping|François Robere}} <small> ... crickets chirping ... a distant howl from a lone coyote ...</small>] (]) 18:57, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: As I said: a) the changes you've made to this article thus far make it impossible to discuss your reservations. The content has to be restored before any discussion continues; b) Are you sure you can contain yourself from spontaneously bursting into flames ''again''? You seem to be fond of your crickets, less so of other critters. ] (]) 21:50, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::{{u|François Robere}} can you please explain why you can't discuss the article without restoring the content first, everything is in the history? ] 22:10, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::: If all the changes are in the history, why can't we undo them and ''then'' discuss them? This works both ways. | |||
::: Also, I've already explained this in my complaint, as has the original author of the article in a previous discussion. Riddle me this: Which is easier - reading a book in binding, or reading a book in pieces? This article is in pieces, which the other editor is trying to force as a new status quo. If we accept these changes not only are we making more work for ourselves, but we are ]. Let us rebind the book and discuss it as a whole, as one is ''supposed'' to do, rather than clip pieces of lost content from the article's history. ] (]) 23:20, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::{{re|François Robere}} Once more, you don't have an actual argument. As this section '''specifically''' relates to a single section and a single source, i would have expected some argument why you want to keep it in, why my assessment of the source is false or why it is mainstream scientific opinion (other sources). No such argument was presented. Instead I get ] to leave the section in. I have outlined my reason to delete this ''specific'' section above, so either address that or stop wasting my time. Pretty much the same goes for the other sections. Please address points made, instead of generally whining, moaning and bitching about how ''mean'' yours truly is. "Put up or shut up" is the appropriate idiom here, I believe. ] (]) 14:10, 21 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::: {{ping|GB fan|p=,}} {{ping|Nihlus|p=,}} {{ping|Robert McClenon}} This is exactly what I meant. When I say they say ; and when I say they say . They like , but good heavens if makes a light-hearted comment! Kleuske just doesn't seem to get the point. I feel like I'm in a ] situation. And you can see that I'm not at all averse to discussion or argumentation ( ), but if my arguments are being ignored (and they have), and my appeal for civility is rejected (indeed, the other editor doesn't even seem to understand what I'm asking), then what's the point? Such "discussion" would not only be unpleasant, but would also lead nowhere. ] (]) 21:01, 21 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::::{{re|François Robere}} The ] analogy is rather apt, I must admit, since you haven't got a leg to stand on. ] (]) 07:50, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:] - Indeed, what's the point? Why are you calling me? I don't have a role in the content dispute about this article. What do you want me to do? You came to ] and made an untenable request; you asked ''admins'' to do something about a ''user'', ]. I am not an admin, and you didn't have a proper admin request. You asked to roll back changes made by Kleuske. If you really want to resolve the content dispute, you can publish a ] asking which of two versions of the article, yours or Kleuske's, should be kept. Otherwise, you haven't presented a plausible argument. You complain about Kleuske's ], and I see comments by both editors that are somewhat unpleasant and somewhat ], but nothing over the line. What's the point? What do you want? ] (]) 01:48, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: To quote from my talk page, pursuant to your message: | |||
Thanks! | |||
::: I've made two very coherent requests at ANI, was directed to DRN, then directed back, then both issues were closed (one of them by you) and now one of the admins (]) is asking me on the talk page what's the problem. And I'm just the one who gave ]! The original author decided to quit (and I don't mean the article, I mean ''Misplaced Pages''). '''So here's the problem''': Apparently no one cares enough to actually get involved in anything unless I cite one of Misplaced Pages's ], or an edit war breaks out, or the editor I complained about chases a bunch of other editors out like he already did. No, it's impossible to ask admins to help ''before'' an edit war erupts, or ''without'' sanctioning a rogue editor, or ''in favor'' of old-school civil discussion. No, ''we have to be shitty''. I'll know next time to ask for ''sanctions''. | |||
] (]) 00:28, 26 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
::: Are we a bloody bureaucracy or a cooperative enterprise? Just so I know. Because as it stands, if you're okay with an editor going "put up or shut up" after erasing 20% of an article against the wishes of two other editors, then Wiki has a '''serious''' problem. ] (]) 02:49, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: PS Here's a shortlist of policies you can chow on that the other editor seems, on the face of it, to have encroached upon: ], ], ], ], ], ]. Dear god, one day we'll have lawyers specializing in Misplaced Pages, as if we don't have enough of them already. ] (]) 03:14, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::{{re|François Robere}} More verbal foliage. if you have a point to make, please do so. If not, go play elsewhere. Thanks. ] (]) 07:48, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
{{u|François Robere}} let me clear up some statements you have made. On your talk page you say you went to ANI and were directed to DRN and then back to ANI. I have read through a lot associated with this and can not find anywhere you were directed to go to DRN. I did talk about dispute resolution and linked to ], the dispute resolution policy. I did not direct you to DRN, you decided the noticeboard was the way to go. Above you state that I asked you what's the problem. I never asked what's the problem. In response to your statement that it is impossible to discuss the article until the article is restored, I asked why you can't discuss it. Your response does not appear to say it is impossible to discuss, just that you don't want to discuss it until it is restored. I explained on your talk page page exactly why the ANI report was closed as a content issue and how to frame an ANI report so it is a conduct issue. Your response was to remove the section stating that you were quite clear. Throwing out acronyms without explaining who and where they are violated is not helpful. This is just like when I asked you at ANI for diffs of conduct issues that need to be addressed. You responded to look at the article history and provided one diff that was a content issue, not conduct. You seem to want others to dig through and find what you perceive as the problems rather than providing the evidence of a problem. ] 11:28, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
== Issue with the UK section == | |||
:{{re|GB fan}}I have the impression that ] thinks that since he was invited ({{diff|Environmental_racism_in_Europe|prev|oldid=815722836|}}) for a ], his role here is that of an arbiter, whose adjudications must be obeyed by lowly (even 'rogue') editors such as myself. That explains rather a lot, IMHO. ] (]) 12:30, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
: {{ping|Kleuske}} Not really, but it does help if one ''listens'' to other editors, and perhaps stops making changes as per their request while discussion is ongoing. You did neither. | |||
: {{ping|GB fan}} I'm happy we got to clear that one up - it was ], not ]. Important point! Mind, Sturgeontransformer tried ] before, so some board was due anyway. | |||
: {{tq|I never asked what's the problem... I asked why you can't discuss it}} Another important point. Thank you! | |||
: {{tq|Your response was to remove the section stating that you were quite clear}} Well, yes - I removed it because it was, with all due respect, a useless comment. This isn't a Supreme Court case, and any administrator with a backbone ''who read through any of the logs or talks'' would know the entire story in less time than it takes to make a cup of tea. Instead it gets dragged across multiple talk pages because it isn't "framed" properly. What does this contribute to Misplaced Pages? To this discussion? I thought there was ''some'' policy about ]. | |||
: This is what you get from <10 minutes of reading: | |||
::- Kleuske came and made some changes and objections | |||
::- Sturgeontransformer objected their changes and made some explanations | |||
::- Kleuske continued to make changes | |||
::- Sturgeontransformer asked for ] | |||
::- I came and gave a third opinion, and asked to stop editing for a while so we can discuss | |||
::- Kleuske continued to make changes | |||
::- Sturgeontransformer left Misplaced Pages, and I asked for ANI | |||
::- Kleuske went "Ha Ha Ha! You got nothin' on me!" | |||
: That's that, and it's all in the logs and talk - a simple question of whether it's okay for an editor to make huge changes without achieving consensus or not. | |||
: {{tq|This is just like when I asked you at ANI for diffs of conduct issues that need to be addressed}} I was obviously naive enough to think that the log, showing a chain of massive edits, reversals and counter-reversals was enough to show that ''something'' unhealthy was going on, framed "correctly" or not. | |||
: {{tq|You seem to want others to dig through and find what you perceive as the problems rather than providing the evidence of a problem}} I'm not asking you to do anything I haven't done myself when the 3O was filed. The issues were so evident I didn't even need to post a <code><nowiki>{{subst:third opinion}}</nowiki></code> (so both sides can summarize their positions). The affair escalated so quickly you don't even need to scroll past the first ] to get the gist of it. Hence my surprise that we've been discussing it for more days than the original content discussion. ] (]) 16:00, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::{{re|François Robere}} Please peruse ], so named because it's part of ], a core policy, that spells out where the ] lies, it states "'''The burden to demonstrate verifiability lies with the editor who adds or restores material, and is satisfied by providing a citation to a reliable source that directly supports the contribution'''". | |||
::I've been very careful to start a discussion on each and any change I made, provided sources and invested quite a bit of time figuring out what went on where. I have not edited the article, the past several days because a) I have better things to do and b) I wanted to give you time to respond to any of the points made. You have not responded to any of them, you have not argued a single point relating to the article. None of your contributions have been helpful in any way, shape or form in improving the actual article. All you have done so far, is berate me about my behavior, filed an ANI suit against me, called me "old chap", "darling" and "dear", whilst flatly refusing to discuss things unless you get your way and you think I have an attitude problem? ] (]) 17:06, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::I am seriously considering filing an ANI-case myself for disruptive editing, since all you have accomplished here is to waste everybody's time with drama. I'd rather not, since on the face of it it's a content dispute, but it's not the content that's being disputed. ] (]) 17:30, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
] - Read ] with regard to Kleuske's caution above that you have been wasting everyone's time with pointless drama. If you continue to persist, and Kleuske finds it necessary to file, other editors will be supportive of her. So either drop it, or request formal mediation. ] (]) 19:28, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
The UK section references 'Gander' in West London - but there's no such place. The pdf link in the reference appears to use 'Gander and Painham' Borough as a code for an unspecified location (?) Whatever the actual facts here, this section needs to be revised - we cant refer to non-existent places. | |||
: ] I've not the least interest in bureaucracy of any kind, Robert, least of all Misplaced Pages's. In fact, anything that does not directly serve Misplaced Pages's main goal of providing accurate, exhaustive, relevant and readable content is not only uninteresting to me, but arguably needless to the whole. That is why I do not file complaints very often (in ANI or anywhere else); that is why I did not ask for sanctions against Kleuske; and that is why "standard written English" is my language in this Misplaced Pages, and not ]. ] (]) 20:11, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
===One Editor's Commentary=== | |||
] (]) 14:56, 21 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
I have spent much more time than it takes to make a cup of tea, and it took me much longer than that to be able to grasp what the problem is. Part of why it has taken me longer than FR thinks it should is that FR thinks that the issue is obvious, and that anyone should agree with them. It is obvious that there is an issue, and that FR is part of the problem, but it isn't clear what the problem is. FR complains about ]'s temper. I see FR's temper. It appears that FR may be baiting Kleuske (by using overly familiar nicknames), and that Kleuske is failing to take the bait (good for her). (I would normally think that the insulting attitude taken by FR toward Kleuske was gender-based, except that I also see that FR refers to Kleuske in the masculine gender, so I don't think that there is sexism, even if there is a bad attitude.) | |||
:Given that only one very specific study has been provided, it's a hefty section. When adding to it that it's a part of West London obviously colloquially identified by some portion of the population (Irish travellers; West Londoners?), more sources are needed to identify where/what it is, as well as any other opinions on the situation. For the moment, I'm going to tag the section for further references. --] (]) 22:19, 24 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
It appears that the original article was contentious, containing a lot of poorly sourced and cherry-picked evidence that purports to be of racism. It appears that Kleuske trimmed out a considerable amount of questionable material, and FR doesn't like it. They can discuss here. This is an article talk page, and its primary purpose is to discuss article content. It appears that FR thinks that Kleuske's edits must be rolled back in order to discuss them. That is neither justified by Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines or by common sense. But FR doesn't want to discuss the merits of the edits until they are rolled back. It doesn't work like that. FR filed at ANI, but it was dismissed as not a properly filed conduct dispute, and no one could see any real claim that Kleuske or anyone else had done anything wrong. FR filed at DRN, but it was dismissed as not a properly stated content dispute, and FR didn't help because they kept insisting that this was about Kleuske, not about the article. | |||
::Thank you for bringing up this issue! I appreciate your efforts to help improve this article, and I fully support your decision to add a banner requesting additional references. This is good - I fully agree with all of your concerns. At this point in time, I have not yet found additional sources, but I will keep looking. I welcome other editors' efforts, especially those who live in the UK who may have better access to local research resources. This is one of many sites mentioned throughout the article that I plan to do more in-depth research on in the foreseeable future. ] (]) 18:50, 26 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
Okay, if FR still wants to discuss this, I have some advice. First, frame it very clearly as a discussion of article content. That will also require a content forum, rather than a conduct forum like ANI, but there isn’t a conduct issue that I can parse in ]. I would suggest that the content dispute can still be addressed either via a ] choosing between a historical version of the article and the version of the article after Kleuske’s edits, or a ] with an experienced mediator. That is where to go from here. Either RFC or RFM. The alternatives to those are that FR can leave it alone because he doesn’t have the patience or courtesy to continue to pursue this, or that FR can continue to be angry, which will result in being ignored or being blocked. It might at this point be too complicated for a good neutral RFC, so I would suggest RFM be requested. ] (]) 16:50, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
UPDATE: I am in the process of contacting the Irish Traveller Movement to inquire about the specific location of this site, and one of the organizations that funded the report. ] (]) 01:40, 27 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks. ] (]) 17:06, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Excellent! I've found that to be one of the great pleasures of Misplaced Pages: discovering areas I was barely familiar with (not just literal geographic areas), and having my interest piqued into researching. Misplaced Pages is like the gift of intellectual and emotional stimulation that just keeps on giving, so long as one can learn to put up with POV pushers and battleground mentality users. In the end, the highs outweigh the lows. We're not going to stop incivility, but we can enjoy the sojourns and making this a resource meaningful to anyone who reads it. It's always a pleasure to discover other editors who are here to make it a great project. If I can be of any assistance on this, or any article, please let me know. --] (]) 03:37, 27 November 2017 (UTC) | |||
: '''I've kept cool and even-handed, and not even humored myself but for one occasion, until ''after'' the whole thing became the farce that it is now.''' | |||
: And while on chronology - I have yet to see even one admin address with any seriousness anything that happened on this page prior to my arrival - a part of the chronicle that I've addressed several times, and have asked addressed several times. | |||
: '''As for gender: I find your comment not only distasteful, but completely devoid of truth.''' In the first, I do not give a leprechaun's behind whether any editor is male, female, queer, non-binary or anything else or in-between, and had you any sense of character you would've seen that before you spoke. Second, and continuing in the line of "obvious things that seem to have been misplaced", I used ''"they"'' rather than ''"he"'' throughout this entire discussion, as well as other discussions; take from that what you will. | |||
: '''On the merits of the "stable version"''': I have been asked numerous times to avoid edits until after discussion proceeded; I have seen the "stable version" hailed on ''dozens'' of occasions as the one to refer to; I have been asked to avoid sweeping changes even of ludicrous material until consensus is reached; and now you claim this is all nonsense - everyone should quietly disagree and let the changes pass, even when it's one editor's disregard towards others' comments and requests (as this one has done ''on multiple occasions''). Very well, then - '''let them destroy the article as they please. A shame for ]'s extensive work (as disputed as it was), a shame for Misplaced Pages, and a shame on ''you'' administrators who cannot even bring yourselves to pronounce the sentence "please avoid inflammatory language".''' ] (]) 19:55, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::No. You ] wrote: "'''So here's the problem:''' Apparently no one cares enough to actually get involved in anything unless I cite one of Misplaced Pages's 300 or so policies and guidelines, or an edit war breaks out, or the editor I complained about chases a bunch of other editors out like he already did. No, it's impossible to ask admins to help ''before'' an edit war erupts, or without sanctioning a rogue editor, or ''in favor'' of old-school civil discussion. | |||
:::First, you are (as in other places) referring to ] in the masculine, which you said you didn’t. Second, I only see Kleuske trying to engage in old-school civil discussion and not you. Third, my assessment of your character takes into account how you addressed Kleuske using disparaging nicknames, and indeed perhaps I shouldn’t have thought gender was an issue, because maybe you always use insulting familiarity with '']''. Enough. If you want civil discussion, file a ]. If not, Kleuske has warned that she is ready to file another ANI. ] (]) 23:54, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::: Oh gosh, wow. I mistook them for male twice! And I only used "they" 18 times in this thread, 7 times on ANI, and probably a bunch more somewhere else, for an overall of upwards of 25 times.... versus 2. I'm honestly intrigued as to why you even posted the question. By the way - am I a male? A female? Genderqueer? Do you still think your deference to sexism had ''any'' merit? | |||
:::: As for your other points - here's, again, a short chronicle: | |||
::::: KL: {{tq|I have rarely seen such a utter and complete mess... I intend to weed out... idiotic assumptions, overused sources and, frankly ludicrous claims...}} | |||
:::: By this point they already removed several sections of the article with little explanation, so ST asks: | |||
::::: ST: {{tq|Please do not add commentary, your own point of view, or your own personal analysis... Removing large quantities of cited material without adequate rationale and posting strong language... is not appropriate editing behavior}} | |||
::::: KL: {{tq|Yeah... That's your sayso...}} | |||
::::: ST: {{tq|Many of your questions have been addressed in previous discussions in the talk archives, which I would advise you to refer to... There are much more constructive ways to address these questions than deleting large sections of text and immediately attacking editors in the talk page}} | |||
:::: Now KL finally gives a list of their reservations; however by this point they gutted much of the article, and ST refuses to engage: | |||
::::: ST: {{tq|Dispute resolution will soon be underway. Other editors will be involved.}} | |||
:::: But KL doesn't seem to care: | |||
::::: KL: {{tq|No arguments? Not addressing a single point, above? I'm disappointed}} | |||
:::: So ST reiterates: | |||
::::: ST: {{tq|Third Opinion dispute resolution submitted. This will allow for an independent party to provide input in a neutral way.}} | |||
:::: At this point I arrive, after having picked up the ], and after asking the sides for some order write a 17 points reply: | |||
::::: FR: {{tq|Let's... stay focused on the points, shall we? Also, just to keep it orderly, let's stop editing the article for a day or two until we sort all of this out. Can we do that? Thanks!}} | |||
:::: KL replies with a single paragraph along with an unasked-for explanation of policies, not addressing most of what I've written. ST gives a detailed review of their sources, including the "why" and "where" they've used them. | |||
:::: I again reply to both of them, addressing each of the points of the two. Along the way I pose some specific questions to the two, which ST addresses and KL ignores. | |||
:::: KL quotes some ], attaches an unrelated diagram, and agrees to go point-by-point, following immediately with an unsportsmanlike remark: | |||
::::: KL: {{tq|Please refrain from cute remarks... I do not find it amusing}} | |||
:::: Of course, they have no problem amusing themselves a couple of comments earlier: | |||
::::: KL: {{tq|''bad thing''(tm)}} | |||
:::: My next reply address two of their points, their above remark as well as their diagram, in addition asking them "not to tear into it too much too soon" (by this point they cut the article by about 20%, with little reasoning). My intent was to continue the discussion point-by-point, but obviously KL doesn't get any of my points: | |||
::::: KL: {{tq|You have not addressed a single point and right now, you're only wasting time and energy}}. | |||
::::: FR: {{tq|This isn't a battle, Kleuske, don't be so bellicose. Re-read what I wrote above, you'll see both a question directed at you, as well as myself suggesting on several occasions going through the motions one by one, with time. In the meanwhile try and be patient, and assume good faith.}} | |||
::::: KL: {{tq|Oh, wow... Complaining about the tone. You actually went down a notch... stop wasting my time.}} | |||
:::: What do you think - '''was I patient enough?''' Or, do you reckon, was that a good time to pander to someone who obviously doesn't care what I say in a very basic sense? | |||
:::: So I went and asked for ANI ''without personal sanctions against KL'', because I'm ''that cool'', and instead of receiving aid I feel Like I need to see a ]. | |||
:::: And this, my dear presumptuous admin (or whatever you are on Misplaced Pages), is the stupid, short, easy-to-find log that began all of this, that seems to be completely hidden from admins. If ] had any sense in him (!) he would've hidden one of his soul shards here, living happily ever after and ruling over us all. ] (]) 01:29, 23 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
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::So true! Misplaced Pages really is "the gift that keeps on giving". In addition to all the new subjects I've learned about, writing here has taught me skills in writing neutrality and critical thinking that I likely never would have learned anywhere else. With regards to the UK section, I will send you an email very shortly with the specifics of my latest findings. For issues related to research ethics, I would prefer to first discuss the matter off the main talk page first. Talk soon! ] (]) 04:28, 4 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::The names used in the report are obviously made up, in order to maintain the anonymity of the people who live there. I don't think we should be using them on Misplaced Pages, but rather refer to them more generically. ] (]) 00:01, 16 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
== Recent Comment - WP:SYNTH claims == | |||
== Complaint. == | |||
The following comment was recently posted to my user page: | |||
{{ping|Sturgeontransformer}}, {{ping|Me, Myself, and I are Here}} | |||
I have rarely seen such a utter and complete mess of ] and ] and ] as this particular article. It is sourced by a few publications, none of which are mainstream, most of which are activist and all of which are severely overused. The arbitrary designation of some populations as " Indigenous groups" (Saami, for one) is idiotic, since actually Europeans are indigenous to Europe. | |||
''I am still keeping an eye on the massive WP:SYNTH that is now "Environmental inequality in Europe". Kleuske (talk) 21:11, 13 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
Case in point, the section "The Netherlands" in which (non-citizen) Roma getting less than the best spots for their camps is now called "racism", since, presumably, the Dutch have an obligation to offer prime real estate to any citizen of another country coming in and demanding land. This may be news to the authors, but The Netherlands is a '''very''' densely populated country. I just removed a link to the Bikini Atoll atomic test programs as a) the U.S. is not in Europe and b) it's got fuck-all to do with any minority in Europe. | |||
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https://en.wikipedia.org/User_talk:Sturgeontransformer#Please_note%3A_As_of_December_2017%2C_I_am_taking_an_extended_absence_from_Wikipedia_editing._Thank_you. | |||
== RfC about claims that the entire article is a WP:SYNTH == | |||
I intend to go over this article with a fine toothed comb and weed out the idiotic assumptions, overused sources and, frankly ludicrous claims. ] (]) 12:55, 14 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
Should the article be deleted based upon claims that it is a ]? ] (]) 21:50, 13 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
:] is not for hosting deletion discussions. If you want to initiate a discussion about whether the article should be deleted, and why, the formal ] process should be used. --] 🌹 (]) 22:11, 13 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
:{{re|Sturgeontransformer}} Please read ] and remember that a template does not equal an actual argument. So far my criticism includes ], ], ], sources that are completely inadequate (unless you think North America and Canada are in Europe), poor sources (a single quote cover entire paragraphs, repeatedly) and If I go through it once more, I'm sure I will see a few more. ] (]) 19:25, 14 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::Thank you for the clarification, ] | |||
Removing large quantities of cited material without adequate rationale and posting strong language (including personal attacks) on edit histories and talk pages is not appropriate editing behavior, regardless of one's history as an editor. Disruptive editing does not require additional discussion, and continued disruptive editing may be reported.] (]) 19:38, 14 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::] (]) 22:48, 13 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
:{{re|Sturgeontransformer }} Please peruse ] and clarify which "personal attacks" and what "possible vandalism" you perceive. Also vapid accusations are not appropriate substitutes for actual arguments. ] (]) 19:41, 14 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:{{Ping|Sturgeontransformer}} Let me make myself exceedingly clear. Any source that does not '''explicitly''' call some behavior "environmental racism" gives rise to ] if it's used in an article on "environmental racism". So far, I have yet to encounter that source. The best I found was "environmental injustice", which is not the same as "environmental racism". ] (]) 20:59, 14 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
Does this article have basic issues with ]? | |||
Many of your questions have been addressed in previous discussions in the talk archives, which I would advise you to refer to. Secondly, there are possible alternative titles for the article such as "Race and environmental issues in Europe" or "Environmental justice / injustice in Europe"; this issue was partially brought up in a discussion in Archive 2, and is something I would have been happy to discuss if asked. There are much more constructive ways to address these questions than deleting large sections of text and immediately attacking editors in the talk page right off the bat. It is reasonable for an editor to be reluctant to go into detailed talk page discussions when the first comment posted implies that the editors are "idiotic"--that does not indicate a willingness to partake in constructive dialogue. Further, removing significant portions of text does not address neutrality concerns. | |||
] 22:50, 13 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
:Yes. Additionaly, there's problems with sourcing, neutrality, editorializing and ]. ] (]) 07:45, 14 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
:Not to mention the sheer walls of text. ] (]) 07:49, 14 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
Thank you for summarizing your concerns. Now we need outside editors (who have not commented previously) to provide input. The issue of section-blanking will need to be discussed, with regards to whether or not that complies with Misplaced Pages policy (I will not add any new content as long as the practice of section-blanking in this article is left unaddressed. I also will not revert any new content removals at this time, either). I am not going to take a position on these issues from this point onwards (at least as far as the Rfc is concerned); rather, I am requesting that more editors take a look at these issues and come to a consensus. If a consensus is not reached, or if not enough editors provide input, it may be appropriate to either nominate the article for deletion or to seek formal dispute resolution. | |||
Simply because an article addresses a topic that is arguably associated with a perceived political viewpoint does not automatically render the article non-neutral, as you appear to have suggested in your first post on the talk page. For example, if a liberal claimed that an article on ] was right-wing bias simply by its existence and inclusion of opinions of those in favor of his positions, that would not be a valid argument. Likewise, if a relevant published source that denied the existence of environmental racism in Europe was found, it could be included as a legitimate perspective in context. It's perfectly within Misplaced Pages's mandate to include articles on controversial subjects, as long as the neutrality is adhered to (and again, removing entire sub-sections of articles does not necessarily address neutrality concerns). If you continue to disagree, I will to refer this matter to the dispute resolution system for a third-party opinion. | |||
And, I should add, I will not oppose any nominations for deletion. ] (]) 17:29, 14 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
See also: | |||
See also: a thread has been opened on the No original research noticeboard. | |||
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https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:No_original_research/Noticeboard#Does_the_Environmental_inequality_in_Europe_article_have_WP:SYNTH_issues? | |||
] (]) 02:09, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Ok.... | |||
:I called it tendentious and that's a point you haven't addressed. | |||
:#'''None''' of the sources i've inspected use the term "environmental racism". The worst I found was "environmental injustice". If you call something "environmental racism", w/o any source claling it that, it's ] and, since the term 'racism' is a quite loaded one, it can justifiably be called 'tendentious'. | |||
:# Adding a series of projects (mining, hydro-electric power and more) under that banner without anyone or any source cited calling it 'environmental racism' or even an accusation being levelled is a prime example of ] and ]. This problem pervades the article and it's the main problem I have. | |||
:#The article is extremely poorly sourced, one reference covering multiple paragraphs. This point has been raised by others and has not been addressed in any way, shape or form. | |||
:#Image captions contained claims that weren't sourced to anythi, but were clearly intended to convey a message. Case in point the "deforestation" images, the image of a (illegal) encampment near St. Denis with the caption "Proximity to highway infrastructure is a frequently cited form of environmental burden that affects many Romani settlements in France." If it's "frequently cited", please cite the sources that cite it. The source of the image which you uploaded) does not say anything of the sort. <s>Moreover, '''you have no permission''' to upload that file, which makes it a copyright violation. This will be addressed on ] shortly (no fair use on Commons).</s> | |||
:#The article uses excessive quotes from sources who have not been established to be authorative on the subject. | |||
:#The article only represents a single POV, disregarding others (case in point, the Calais Jungle and various illegal (not 'informal', illegal) Roma settlements. | |||
:#The attitude you are displaying here seems to be one of ]. You have not adressed a single concern I have raised, but have tried to intimidate me (templating, casting aspersions, etc). This is a serious issue. | |||
:#Talk-pages of other pages are ''not'' sources, though the 'indigenous'-bit is only a minute part of the problems I have with this article. | |||
:#Tone policing and referring to other discussions are not substitutes for actual arguments. In the above I find no arguments, no sources, and no rationale whatsoever. You are, of course, free to call in whatever 'second opinion' you want, but make sure that 'second opinion' addresses ], ], ] and ]. | |||
:] (]) 12:18, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
Thanks, | |||
Dispute resolution will soon be underway. Other editors will be involved. ] (]) 14:59, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:No arguments? Not addressing a single point, above? I'm disappointed. ] (]) 15:18, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 18:16, 14 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::] dispute resolution submitted. This will allow for an independent party to provide input in a neutral way. The following is a copy of the notification on Third Opinion, which can be found under "Active disagreements": | |||
:{{tq|The issue of section-blanking will need to be discussed}} I have carefully documented all deleted sections, you chose not to address a single one. Since section-blanking is usually considered disruptive behavior, I feel obliged to point out ] and how not to throw them. ] (]) 21:06, 14 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
::Hi ], | |||
:::''] and ] disagree on whether the Arctic and Subarctic Europe (Sápmi) section of ] should be removed, and they disagree on claims of inherent bias regarding the entire article.'' 15:32, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::An AfD debate has been opened for this article. Please feel free to share your thoughts on the AfD discussion page. ] (]) 20:50, 16 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::There's a list of points above, which is much wider than the constrained representation offered by ], here. Specifically I contend the article is a ], contains ]/], is written tendentiously (i.e. far from having a ]), that '''none''' of the sources mentioned say anything about ''environmental racism'' (]/]), that excessive and selective quotes are used and that image captions made claims which are not supported by the sources of those images, i.e. that it is mainly the opinion of the author(s) of those captions. So far, no actual response has been forthcoming. For some reason ] was brought up, though. ] (]) 16:03, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::For clarity's sake, I will go through my edits and explain | |||
::::# ]. The Bimini Atoll isn't in Europe, tests were conducted by the USA, so it's completely unrelated to the subject at hand | |||
::::# Pointing out that (despite UN definitions) Frisians, Bavarians and Catalans are indigenous to Europe. (this is actually a very minor point) | |||
::::# which is sourced to studies on ''"Indigenous Peoples of North America"'' and ''"Indigenous Mobilization and Environmental Justice in Canada’s Chemical Valley"''. This is actually quite serious, since neither of the articles even mention Europe. | |||
::::# was illegal and occupants had offers for alternative housing, which were refused. Mentioning that in an article on ''environmental racism'' is ludicrous at best and dishonest at worst. Even if it was built on a "former toxic waste dump" as was alleged. | |||
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::::# because the caption is flatly contradicted by the image description on Commons. | |||
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::::# near St. Denis, which was erected illegally. Giving this as an example of ''environmental racism'' is, again, ludicrous at best and flat-out dishonest at worst. | |||
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::::#, since after a lengthy introduction on the Saami many conflicts and disagreements were mentioned but no actual ''environmental racism'' was claimed anywhere. Hence ]/]. | |||
::::] (]) 16:40, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::Let me add that my problems with this article by no means end there. This is just the batch I addressed first. ] (]) 16:52, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
UPDATE: Additional information has been posted to the article for deletion nomination summary. ] (]) 06:44, 18 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::: Hey there, | |||
:Please remember that when ] concludes (no earlier than 20:41, 23 June 2018 (UTC)), the closing admin will not take into account any comments made other than on that page, such as those in this section. --] 🌹 (]) 20:01, 18 June 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::: Let's avoid long words like "tendentious" (I have no idea what that means!) and excessive <code><nowiki>]</nowiki></code> links and stay focused on the points, shall we? Also, just to keep it orderly, let's stop editing the article for a day or two until we sort all of this out. Can we do that? Thanks! | |||
::::: I'll continue with the enumeration ] used above, but first a somewhat obvious note: The issues of ''legality'' and ''justice'' are separate, and the a lack in the first should not preclude us from writing about the second. | |||
:::::# I don't think it's improper to use "environmental racism" if the sources use "environmental injustice", but it can be inaccurate if the sources don't mention race or ethnicity at all; however it doesn't necessarily preclude it from being used here. I think this should be discussed on a case-by-case basis. | |||
:::::# I'm not sure what mentions of mining etc. are being referred to here. Please use <code><nowiki>{{tq}}</nowiki></code>. | |||
:::::# 157 sources for an article of this length isn't bad, and their spread (from just a few glances) seems about average. Nevertheless, sourcing is easy to improve - just add qualified sources. | |||
:::::# Captions don't have to be sourced if they recur in the article body and are sourced there, which seems the case here. As for the photo - photos can be illustrative and their caption needn't match the original as long as it is correct. | |||
:::::# Again, please be specific, and better yet: Open a new thread. | |||
:::::# You're free to modify the article as you see fit, pending sources. | |||
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:::::# I agree that discussions shouldn't be repeated. It's tedious for experienced editors to repeat the same argument over and over, so they tend to avoid it when they can. If you're directed to an archived page where consensus has already been reached, please read the discussion first; if you have something to add on top of ''that'' argument, or if you feel the situation changed enough that it merits a renewed discussion, then reopen it. Otherwise try to keep it ]. | |||
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:::::<small>second batch, break inserted to keep numbering in sync. ] (]) 18:54, 16 December 2017 (UTC)</small> | |||
:::::# ] What's the relevance of the Bikini Atoll tests to this? | |||
:::::# I believe this was mentioned to discern them from the migratory and immigrant communities mentioned earlier in the sentence. | |||
:::::# The sources' names aren't a problem. What do the sources' texts say? | |||
:::::# I don't see any problem there. You can add mentions of alternative housing and legality where proper, keeping in mind this is a review article, so they must be concise. | |||
:::::# See above on image captions. | |||
:::::# Commons only mention a location. Where's the contradiction? | |||
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:::::# See above on legality. | |||
:::::# "Informal" can be dropped altogether, hence making any POV concerns redundant. | |||
:::::# Some of these can be made shorter and more concise. | |||
:::::# Glancing over the removed material, it indeed does not seem to constitute racism. Inequality, class warfare, civil rights abuse - yes; but not overt racism. If this is to be included in this article, the article must be renamed and its focus clarified here, as well as in the body. ] (]) 18:08, 16 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::::The main problem I have, and that's a very big problem I have, is that lumping together a large amount of social, cultural and legal issues, problems, concerns and whatever with disputes over mines, dams and hunting rights, etc/ under the very loaded term 'environmental racism' and not citing a single source that actually alleges 'environmental racism' is a problem. It's a problem because it's a coatrack and the only reason we have to assume it's 'environmental racism' is the article's sayso. That contravenes ] and using ] without backing that up with sources, | |||
:::::''"Let's avoid long words like "tendentious" (I have no idea what that means!) and excessive <code><nowiki>]</nowiki></code> links and stay focused on the points, shall we?"'' | |||
::::::Ok. Lemme explain the big words here: | |||
::::::]: The article is a huge variety of unrelated disputes, issues, plans, pollution, protests, and what not, laced with problems ] have all over Europe, collected under the title ''environmental racism'', which is supported by ''not a single source'' claiming this, that or the other is an example of ''environmental racism''. | |||
::::::]: The article uses ] and fails to back it up with reliable sources. | |||
::::::]: If you cite an issue as an example of environmental racism, ''policy requires'' a source stating "this is an example of environmental racism". | |||
::::::]: It's not the number of sources that matters, it's the ] and of course, they should actually support the claims made. | |||
::::::]: The article cites all these different issues as examples of environmental racism without citing an actual source that calls it that, expecting the reader to accept what the article says, because the author(s) thought so. Saying "environmental injustice" is the same as "environmental racism" without providing a source that says it is, is also an example of ]. | |||
::::::]: I haven't yet brought it up, but it may be worth reading, since the article positively ''reeks'' of ]. | |||
::::::If you want, we can dissect this thing on a per country basis, one a day. since pretty much none of it, as far as I can ascertain, is adequately sourced. If you think sourcing it isn't a problem, by any means, knock yourself out. ] (]) 20:21, 16 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::::: I agree with Kleuske that all of these are problems with the current article. There is a massive amount of content currently in the article that should be removed. ] (], ]) 07:03, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
== November 2018 == | |||
Hi ], | |||
A bit of background: I've never commented on an article before. Basically, first-time caller, long-time listener, though I care enough about Misplaced Pages to have donated money a few times. | |||
Thank you for the Third Opinion. I appreciate your taking the time to help clarify these questions. In turn, I will attempt to provide a detailed articulation of my perspectives regarding this article. | |||
I came to the article's talk page because sections of it immediately struck me as downright inflammatory. It focuses on particular groups (Romani and Sinti) to the exclusion of others, and makes suppositions not supported by the sources, although there are areas that bear keeping as-is. I was going to raise the idea of removing or revising some of the worst content, but I've had a chance to read the cluster that was the rest of the talk page. I don't in any way want to become involved in a flame war or a revert war. There is no point in wasting my time or effort in such things. | |||
The article needs a substantial amount of work, and I welcome more editors to help improve it. ]’s edits were not vandalism; this stated, civil editing and communication is extremely important. | |||
Instead, I will just say that claiming that the Holocaust is an example of "environmental racism" is beyond the pale. For some reason, there is a picture of the "Gorleben exploratory mine for storing uranium waste" that is never tied into the article's text and thus conveys an impression that Romani and Sinti are living in a uranium waste repository. If "environmental racism" is indeed a thing, then surely there are significant examples of it for other disadvantaged groups, such as Middle-Eastern refugees, black Africans, persons from ex-Communist nations, and so forth. For example, a search of the article for the words "Muslim", "Islam", "refugee", "migrant", etc. turned up token references for Italy and Spain - no such stories that deal with the current wave of migration, where such things would be expected if it were happening. | |||
As mentioned previously, I am very open to a potential name change for the article. “Environmental issues and race in Europe” could be a more neutral and accurate title, if community consensus supported the change. “Environmental justice / inequality issues in Europe” is another option, which would further widen the scope of the article to include class-based issues that do not necessarily involve race or ethnicity. If it came to a vote, I would probably be in favor of a name change, barring a convincing argument from other editors. | |||
Other areas turn up contradictory claims: "One severe example of environmental inequality in Lukavac, where Romani persons lack adequate access to energy resources, is the practice of coal theft. Young Romani men climb onto moving freight trains departing from the Lukavac coal mine in an attempt to push coal off the tops of the roofless cars by hand. After the coal falls to the ground, the men then collect the coal into 50 kilogram bags which are then sold in town for two Euros apiece." If the idea was that the men were stealing goods to support their direct, immediate domestic needs (the classic example of stealing a loaf of bread to feed one's family), it's easier to believe that this might be part of inequality. But it seems more like detailing a practice from the illicit economy that benefits the thieves in other ways. At best, it leaves an ambiguous impression in the mind of someone who had no prior experience with such matters. Surely other, better examples can be found if this is widespread. | |||
“Environmental racism” and “environmental justice / injustice” are problematic terms. What is just, unjust, or racist will often be contested. The above terms do have an established presence in both academic and popular discourse. The article performs two functions. First, it summarizes theory regarding environmental racism / injustice, with a focus on Europe and issues that are unique to the continent. Second, the article compiles cases where race or ethnicity is identified in the same context as environmental issues and social exclusion together. When possible, the article includes context surrounding the history of each respective documented case. The possibility of establishing a list-type article to house this information is also a consideration. | |||
At best, this article needs some serious consolidation and neutrality. Hopefully, it will attract enough voices to become truly independent of one or two views. ] (]) 00:28, 12 November 2018 (UTC) | |||
Nearly all of the sources used in this article (182 in total, if counting the sections removed) specifically reference race or ethnicity, and likewise, the vast majority reference specific environmental issues. Several of the sources do explicitly refer to the term “environmental racism.” | |||
::No part of the article claims in any way that the Holocaust was environmental racism or inequality, and it is only briefly mentioned for historical context as to why certain groups later ended up living in certain areas. And the article, in its original form, did mention many different groups: low-income ethnic majority (white) people; African and Middle Eastern migrants (see section on Spain, Greece, and Italy); Sami people in Sweden, Norway, and Finland (that section was removed and can be found in the article history); and a bunch of different Native groups in Russia. The introduction (which mentioned all of these diverse groups quite clearly) was removed. | |||
These sources are listed below. Some of these sources (and additional sources listed for other related terminology) may have been lost in the recent content removals. I have listed sources by name and publishing information to ensure that they can be researched as easily as possible without having to search them down in the article. Several of these sources also use the terms “environmental injustice / environmental justice” as well. | |||
::It is always recommended to read the article history. This article has seen major content changes.] (]) 08:01, 18 January 2019 (UTC) | |||
* See page 9, 51: Steger, Tamara et al. eds. ''Making the Case for Environmental Justice in Central & Eastern Europe''. Archived October 6, 2016, at the Wayback Machine. Budapest: CEU Center for Environmental Policy and Law, The Central European University; The Health and Environment Alliance; and The Coalition for Environmental Justice, March 2007. pp. 1–57. Web. April 10, 2016. | |||
Agree with 24.36.21.142. In its current state the article (90% of it) deserves title "List of cases of dscrimination against Roma people in Europe" or something like this. —] (]) 21:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
* See page 253: Harper, Krista; Steger, Tamara; Filčák, Richard (2009). “''Environmental Justice and Roma Communities in Central and Eastern Europe''”. Environmental Policy and Governance Env. Pol. Gov. Wiley InterScience. 19: 251–268. doi:10.1002/eet.511. | |||
Also agree with 24.36.21.142. The fixation on Romani makes the article seem lopsided: either relevant information pertaining to other groups should be introduced, or the name of the page should be changed. I was linked here from an article regarding British green belt zones and supposed "environmental racism" suffered by minority groups in the country; however, this article does not discuss Britain at all, so I can safely remove the link from the previous page. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 14:58, 4 January 2025 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
* Vincze, Enikő (2013). “''Urban Landfill, Economic Restructuring and Environmental Racism''”. Philobiblon: Transylvanian Journal of Multidisciplinary Research in Humanities. Cluj, Romania: Babes-Bolyai University. XVIII (2): 389–405. | |||
* See page 74-75: Orta, Lucy; et al., eds. (2010). ''Mapping the Invisible: EURoma Gypsies''. London, UK: Black Dog Publishing. | |||
* See page 238-9: Pellow, David Naguib (2007). ''Resisting Global Toxics: Transnational Movements for Environmental Justice''. Cambridge, Massachusetts: MIT Press. | |||
* Rodrigues, Peter and Matelski, Maaike. ''Monitor racism and the extreme right: Roma and Sinti''. Archived July 29, 2017, at the Wayback Machine. Anne Frank House / Leiden University: Amsterdam, 2004. Print. p. 40 | |||
The term “environmental discrimination” is mentioned in one source: | |||
* See page 5: Filčák, Richard. ''Living Beyond the Pale: Environmental Justice and the Roma Minority''. Budapest: Central European University Press, 2012. Project MUSE. p. 5-163. Web. April 8, 2016. | |||
Other sources reference “environmental justice / injustice.” These sources include: | |||
* Babourkova, Rosalina (6 October 2010). “''The environmental justice implications of utility privatization: the case of the electricity supply in Bulgaria’s Roma settlements''”. International Journal of Urban Sustainable Development. Taylor & Francis. 2 (1): 24–44. doi:10.1080/19463138.2010.511029. | |||
* Wiebe, Sarah Marie. ''Everyday Exposure: Indigenous Mobilization and Environmental Justice in Canada’s Chemical Valley''. UBC Press: Vancouver, 2016. Print. ISBN:9780774832649 (https://www.ubc press.ca/everyday-exposure) | |||
* Laurian, Lucie. "''Environmental Injustice in France''.” Journal of Environmental Planning and Management, Archived June 25, 2017, at the Wayback Machine. 51:1, 55–79. 2008. Routledge, Taylor & Francis. Web. Retrieved April 10, 2016. | |||
* Filčák, Richard. ''Living Beyond the Pale: Environmental Justice and the Roma Minority''. Budapest: Central European University Press, 2012. Project MUSE. p. 5-163. Web. April 8, 2016. | |||
* Hoover, Plain, Sanchez, et al. "''Indigenous Peoples of North America: Environmental Exposures and Environmental Justice.''” Environmental Health Perspectives, December 2012, vol. 120, issue 12. Web. n. pag. DOI: 10.1289/ehp.1205422 Archived June 29, 2017, at the Wayback Machine. Retrieved September 3, 2017. | |||
* Spiric, Jovanka (May 5, 2015). “''Pollution from the Topilnica smelter, Veles, Macedonia''”. Environmental Justice Atlas. Retrieved June 15, 2016. Archived June 17, 2017, at the Wayback Machine. | |||
* Donhahoe, Brian. “''The Law as a Source of Environmental Injustice in the Russian Federation''.” Agyeman, Julian and Ogneva Himmelberger, Yelena et al, eds. Environmental Justice and Sustainability in the Former Soviet Union. Cambridge, Massachusetts: MIT Press, 2009. Print. ISBN 9780262260305 | |||
The other sources that do not explicitly mention “racism,” “environmental racism,” “environmental justice,” or “environmental injustice” do refer directly to either race or ethnicity. In these articles, the cases referenced are generally described as “X” minority ethnicity is in a context of experiencing “X” environmental issue. | |||
One source does not address specific case studies of environmental inequality. It examines land rights issues involving Indigenous and Romani communities, which is relevant to understanding the legal implications of environmental inequality / racism: | |||
* Klímová-Alexander, Ilona (September 25, 2007). “''Transnational Romani and Indigenous Non-territorial Self-determination Claims''”. Ethnopolitics. Routledge, Taylor & Francis Group. 6 (3): 395–416. doi:10.1080/17449050701487413. | |||
Another source does not refer to the above terms explicitly, however, the primary focus of the report is to examine the correlation between ethnicity and air pollution in the UK; the report is described as a “Racial Equality Impact Assessment”: | |||
* UK Government. "''UK notification to the European Commission to extend the compliance deadline for meeting PM₁₀ limit values in ambient air to 2011—Racial Equality Impact Assessment (England)''. Archived July 10, 2011, at the Wayback Machine..” The ENDS Report. UK Government, August 2009. p. 1-15. Web. April 10, 2016. | |||
With regards to assessing each scenario on a case-by-case basis, the effort should be aided by detailed referencing and archiving of sources. The vast majority of the sources have been archived using the Wayback Machine. Of the few articles that are not archived due to robots txt. issues, most are located in relatively stable locations (such as government agencies) with detailed source information included in the article. | |||
With regards to the sections removed concerning the Arctic regions of Sweden, Finland, and Norway, the main sources almost exclusively concern the effects of industrial developments on Sami people as a distinct ethnic group, and how certain developments arguably impact them disproportionately. I would therefore disagree that this is not a racial issue, or a primarily civil rights issue. | |||
Several of these sources delve particularly in-depth documenting the history of racism towards Sami, drawing direct links between anti-Sami government policies, current environmental degradation of their historical territories, and how the latter issue affects their collective health and cultural identity. The following sources argue explicit links between anti-Sami discrimination and environmental issues: | |||
* Sametinget (Swedish Sami Parliament) (2014). “''Minerals and Mines in Sápmi: The Viewpoint of the Swedish Sami Parliament”. Appendix 2, Preparatory Report from the Sami Parliament in Sweden/Sámediggi/Sámedigge/Saemiedigkie/Sametinget for the United Nations Special Rapporteur on the Rights of Indigenous Peoples, Ms. Victoria Tauli-Corpuz, prior to her 2015 August visit to Sápmi and Sweden''. Sami Parliament in Sweden/Sámediggi/Sámedigge/Saemiedigkie/Sametinget. pp. 2–14. Retrieved July 10, 2016. Archived October 6, 2016, at the Wayback Machine. | |||
* Bowers, India Reed (August 2015). “''Preparatory Report from the Sami Parliament in Sweden/Sámediggi/Sámedigge/Saemiedigkie/Sametinget for the United Nations Special Rapporteur on the Rights of Indigenous Peoples, Ms. Victoria Tauli-Corpuz, prior to her 2015 August visit to Sápmi and Sweden''” (Report). Sami Parliament in Sweden/Sámediggi/Sámedigge/Saemiedigkie/Sametinget. pp. 1–36. Retrieved July 10, 2016. Archived October 6, 2016, at the Wayback Machine. | |||
* Briggs, Chad M. Norsk Geografisk Tidsskrift – Norwegian Journal of Geography, 2006. 60:2, 149–160. Published online February 18, 2007. Routledge, Taylor & Francis Group. Web. April 10, 2016. doi:10.1080/00291950600723146 | |||
* Kuokkanen, Rauna & Bulmer, Marja K (2006). “''Suttesája: From a Sacred Sami Site and Natural Spring to a Water Bottling Plant? The Effects of Colonization in Northern Europe''”. In Washington, Sylvia Hood; Rosier, Paul C. & Goodall, Heather. Echoes from the Poisoned Well: Global Memories of Environmental Injustice. Oxford, UK: Lexington Books. | |||
* Civil Rights Defenders, Sweden (June 13, 2014). “''Joint submission to the UN Universal Periodic Review of SWEDEN: 21st Session of the UPR Working Group of the Human Rights Council, January/February 2015''” (PDF). Civil Rights Defenders. pp. 1–17. Retrieved July 10, 2016. Archived October 6, 2016, at the Wayback Machine. Madslien, Jorn. | |||
Two paragraphs from the lead section were also removed. These paragraphs helped provide context, especially with regards to introducing, comparing, and contrasting the relation between racism and environmental inequalities in the European Arctic with similar inequalities found in the rest of Europe. Without these paragraphs, the cohesiveness of the rest of the article is weakened, as they helped explain why the issue of environmental racism / injustice / inequality is relevant to a European legal, political, and social context. | |||
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The rationale for keeping the ] link is the same for other links such as the ], ], and ]. The rationale is that since these cases concern subject matter involving racialized groups who are disproportionately affected by environmental issues, they help give additional context to the article subject matter on a global scale. | |||
With regards to overall neutrality, this article would benefit from more input involving editors from diverse aspects of the political spectrum. I have specifically made an effort to highlight the social and economic benefits of certain controversial industrial projects, and to openly address the role of racialized individuals in worsening or perpetuating existing social tensions (for example, garbage, violence, internal corruption, failure to obey laws, and other antisocial behavior). Nonetheless, neutrality requires more voices. | |||
Acknowledging the predominantly liberal views of many of the sources used for this article (and my own personal views, which I try to be self-aware of) I would strongly support inviting Misplaced Pages editors who self-identify as politically conservative or right-leaning to provide assessment and suggestions regarding neutrality of this article. Their input could potentially be extremely valuable in helping this article achieve greater neutrality. Further, this fits into the broader argument of addressing neutrality issues through adding new perspectives, rather than removing them. | |||
I will not edit the article for an extended period of time. This is to give other editors more space to have a voice if they would like to take on an active role in the improvement of this article. I will also not be posting further on the talk page during this time unless specifically requested to do so from third party editors. I will not reinstate any of the removed content; at this point, having presented my rationale, I think that decision should rest entirely within the consensus of other editors. | |||
Sincerely, | |||
] (]) 11:30, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
: ] {{tq|lumping together a large amount of social, cultural and legal issues}} The article is meant to do that - it's a list-type article, so one can expect it to be broad and varied, rather than in-depth. And that shouldn't be a problem ''as long as all of the listings are indeed cases of environmental racism''. And that can be checked (and here is a good place as any to recall, as Sturgeontransformer notes, that "environmental justice" and its derivatives ''are'' recurring terms in the literature, so the article on its own has merit). Two things here can be corrected fairly easily: First, what do you think about changing the article's name to something along the lines Sturgeontransformer suggest? That would solve several of the terminology issues you raised. Second, ] what do you think about moving the Roma to their own "cross-European" or "trans-European" section? Their problems insofar as this article is concerned tend to recur across Europe, and it could make both the article as well as the discussion somewhat clearer. | |||
: By the way, I should note I don't think it's necessary for a source to use the exact terminology we use in an article (eg. "environmental injustice"), as long as the content justifies it (eg. "members of the... group have been discriminated against in allocation of land since the 1950's"). | |||
: I don't like coatracks. Silly pieces of furniture, just taking up space. But I don't think this is it. Otherwise thank you elaborating. | |||
: I suggest waiting on this just a bit. It may be better to agree on the sources first. | |||
: ] This ''is'' a list-type article, given that it dissects the subject along geographic lines (not a "List of..."-kind article, but still a list). I think some sections could be made shorter, with ''less'' context, relying on the relevant articles to provide it. | |||
: {{tq|In , the cases referenced are generally described as “X” minority ethnicity is in a context of experiencing “X” environmental issue.}} The definition of "discrimination" would be "that other groups aren't or wouldn't have been subjected to the same treatment", so these sources have to show that: a) Majority groups (or parts thereof) are not experiencing “X”; and b) Were they to experience it or a similar phenomenon they would've been treated differently by society/authorities etc. If source establish these two, there shouldn't be any problem including it. | |||
: Overall this article seems carefully sourced, but we'll have to see some of the specific examples Kleuske brings. | |||
: You may want to have a separate introductory section and concentrate all the background material there, making the lead more concise. | |||
: I would elaborate on some of the "see also" links to clarify the connections to this article. | |||
: {{tq|With regards to overall neutrality, this article would benefit from more input involving editors from diverse aspects of the political spectrum... neutrality requires more voices.}} Kudos. | |||
: ] (]) 23:52, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
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::{{re|François Robere}} First off, I consider the "list-type article" a red herring, since "list-type articles" have a proper definition and delineation, that is, a clear reason to include X but not Y. This is lacking completely. They also carry titles such as "List of This, That and the Other" instead of "Environmental racism in Europe" (note the ]) with inclusion criteria that are anybodies guess. Also the MOS does have a section on lists, but not on "list style articles", so your "list style article" boils down to a ], which is a ''bad thing''(tm). If the sources cited do not specify "environmental racism", they cannot be cited to support examples of "environmental racism" without failing ], which is a core policy. | |||
::Secondly, the article is '''anything but''' "carefully sourced", since earlier (below) I poked holes in a source used to support 40 claims (i.e. it's less than a ]) and I did not even have to dig that deep to do it. By "poking holes" i mean, provided evidence the claims made are unsupported by reality. The Wuppertal cellphone transmission towers (see below) took the biscuit as being flat-out ludicrous and nevertheless it's uncritically reproduced in the article. Your stating it's "carefully sourced" does not make it so. In Grahams hierarchy of disagreement, your at the "contradiction" level. | |||
::Also: | |||
::#I have made this a project, so I will be looking at this article regularly, since it takes quite a bit of time going through sources. | |||
::#To provide some structure to the discussion, I will discuss my actions (and provide reasons) below on a per country basis. If you object, please add to the appropriate section. | |||
::#Please refrain from cute remarks about coatrack being nasty pieces of furniture, since it does not anything to the discussion and I do not find it amusing. | |||
::] (]) 01:19, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::: ] You're a very serious person, aren't you? Well, some lightheartedness will do you no harm. . | |||
::: Re: Lists: The intention wasn't to conform to a particular category of articles on Misplaced Pages (see my note to Sturgeontransformer on that), but it's certainly not a decoy article (what you call a "coatrack") in any way; it tries to stay on topic, from what I can see, even if it's sometimes too and definitely in need of further editing. | |||
::: What I stated, to be precise, is that ''overall it seems carefully sourced''. Do not aim your ire at that; soon enough we'll get to your specific notes and see. | |||
::: Try not to tear into it too much too soon. Someone has made a significant effort putting it all together, and I don't believe it was done with any ill intention. ] (]) 02:34, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::: PS Do not assume ignorance on the part of others; Graham's hierarchy is nothing new, and neither are Wiki policies. One can be a better or a worse editor, but the truly ignorant ones are still a minority. ] (]) 02:39, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::{{re|François Robere}} Again, contradiction is not an argument and neither is nitpicking semantics. You have not addressed a single point and right now, you're only wasting time and energy. I look forward to an actual point if and when you choose to make one. If you do, do so below and you can address ''specific'' points. ] (]) 13:07, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::: This isn't a battle, ], don't be so bellicose. Re-read what I wrote above, you'll see both a question directed at you, as well as myself suggesting on several occasions going through the motions one by one, with time. In the meanwhile try and be patient, and ]. ] (]) 14:21, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Oh, wow... Complaining about the tone. You actually went down a notch in the hierarchy you're so familiar with. State the question (I'm not going to hunt for it) or stop wasting my time. Thank you. ] (]) 14:26, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::::: I was just now in the middle going through some of your claim below, but this attitude of yours gives me no pleasure or motivation to continue doing so. Best of luck to you, and for the record: I object any and all of your changes, and will support a reversion of them to the . ] (]) 15:19, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::::::{{re|François Robere}} Translation: you have no actual arguments and resent anybody pointing that out. ] (]) 15:39, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
=== Sources === | |||
Ok. Lets start with number one... | |||
. The paper does mention the term, does not, however, use it to describe the actual situation. The article is heavily used ('''40''' claims are sourced to this article alone, which is a red flag in and of itself) | |||
*The study limits itself to Central and Eastern Europe, but is used to support statements like "The United Kingdom Department of Health supported a 2004 study that identified Romani and Travellers as being subject to disproportionate health needs compared to other ethnic minority groups in the UK, yet receiving substantially less health services." (references ''am'' and ''an'') The only mention of the UK, however, is a (unsourced) claim that "A high percentage of Gypsy and Traveller communities in the United Kingdom (UK) are located in areas that are fully unsuitable for living and raising families." | |||
*Sourced by the same article: "In the Romani settlement of Prilep in Macedonia, there is no working sewage system." (reference ''ad'') which is based on a (unreferenced) blurb in the source. Nevertheless, when checking this out I find in the "Roma Times", which does not include any such graphic detail and instead mentions improvements. It does not mention lack of sewage, nor does it use the (loaded) term "ghetto". Another source talks about a number of problems, but strangely does not mention any issues with sewage, which, if the graphic description in the source would be accurate, would have been a major problem. Yet another publication () Also fails to mention any feces dripping from the walls or indeed, any sewage at all. It does mention, though, that the settlement is an illegal one, something the Misplaced Pages-article, strangely, fails to note. | |||
*Another claim sourced by this document ''"Another example of environmental discrimination can be found in Wuppertal, where a series of cellphone transmission towers are situated on the roofs of schools where the majority of students are immigrants."'' The (source) article however, fails to cite ''any'' sources to support this claim, and we're left with Dr. Stegers sayso. It is reproduced almost verbatim in the Misplaced Pages article despite much evidence pointing out that Cell-phone towers doe not actually pose any risk.(, etc. A look at shows an even distribution of cellphone towers. | |||
*Ostrava. The Misplaced Pages article states: "In Ostrava, Romani communities have been residing in living accommodations situated on top of an abandoned mine where methane gas exposure and subsidence are serious concerns.:21 Ostrava has one of the largest Romani communities in the Czech Republic." The actual article, however, fails to mention mines or methane gas. The fact that middle class people move to better neighbourhoods is a) hardly surprizing and b) hardly evidence for "environmental racism". | |||
Etc. Since it's Sunday and I have other obligations, I will leave it at this for now. This is only *one* source which has been a) severely overused and b) not shown to be authoritative (hardly ever cited). It also makes claims which are contradicted by other sources. The Misplaced Pages article makes claims its source does not, which is worse. This is a ''serious'' problem if 40 claims are based on that single document. ] (]) 14:02, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
Another source used in the article is titled: . The title alone should be a clue that it's less that ], but the claims made are presented as fact in the article and sometimes (Duesseldorf) even flat-out misrepresented in our article. This is not acceptable. ] (]) 15:01, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
=== Countries === | |||
After reading the above wall of citations (copied from the article) it seems more appropriate to proceed on a country by country basis. Of course, comments are welcome. | |||
====Latvia==== | |||
The article states: "A large part of live in run-down apartments without amenities or running water inside; many of these apartments do not have central heating and are heated with wood, while in some instances the nearest water source is two kilometres away.:32" It fails to mention the following line: | |||
:"All interviewees unanimously stressed the poor Roma housing conditions which are mostly due to the fact that Roma are unemployed." (p. 32) Also "A respondent of the Roma NGO Nevo Drom pointed out in the interview: ‘As far as I can see, the housing conditions in Latvia in comparison to other EU countries are the best. In Latvia, Roma people live in their own houses or private apartments, but also together with other ethnic groups. They are not excluded in this sense. There are so-called Roma districts, but they are not segregated, but are created out of their own choice.’" (p 32) | |||
:That's called "quotemining", i.e. not accurately summarizing the source, but cherrypicking it to make a point. The document identifies '''none''' of the issues adressed as "environmental racism" or "environmental injustice". ] (]) 14:48, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
====The Netherlands==== | |||
A '''single''' source. The publication flat-out states that there are little to no complaints by Roma or Sinti and the "research" is done by interviewing other researchers and advocates (methodology). | |||
''"In one case, a Romani camp was identified as being located within the blasting zone of an explosives factory, a situation that Rodrigues and Matelski have explicitly identified as "environmental racism".'' | |||
The glaring problem here is that ''there are no explosives factories in the Netherlands''. There ''used'' to be one, (Muiden Chemie), but that went out of business and was closed down when the report (2004) and its alleged source (2003) were published. The citation in the source is dismal: "Noordhollands Dagblad 20 November 2003" (sic). The claim is impossible to check and without a secondary source, no more than a claim c.q. an opinion. Again: ]? Also, other sources the blast zone was also inhabited by locals. | |||
Most remarkable is the sources mention of an expulsion in Houten (near Utrecht) in 2002 and the subsequent "revolving door". Some research indicates that the family involved was expelled ''because they caused lots of problems'', such as fraud, public drunkenness, domestic violence, intimidation and were payed compensation of270.000 euro and got housed in a fucking villa.(, ,). Again, ] or a bit ]? In my estimation it's presenting an opinion as fact. | |||
The simple problem, of course is that a nomadic lifestyle is impossible in a densely populated, small country in which '''every square inch''' is spoken for. Do Romani have problems? Yes. Is the conclusion "environmental racism" warrented? Hell, no. ] (]) 21:35, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
====Belgium==== | |||
{{blockquote|The only complaints for which the Belgian equality body (CEOOR) was contacted were related to cases of imminent evictions from illegal halting sites or, in the case of Roma, from insalubrious houses. No complaints led to court cases as they were all resolved through mediation or political debate. Nor were there cases of blatant racism or discrimination towards Roma or Travellers.|RAXEN, Housing Conditions of Roma and Travellers March 2009}}". | |||
The article states: ''"In the ] of ], municipal governments have placed disproportionate numbers of encampment sites for nomadic Romani in locations which are isolated, poorly serviced by amenities, and environmentally problematic in nature."'' (p. 1-69, i.e. the entire document), but, strangely, the source mentions no such thing. It does mention that encampments are not usually in prime locations, but that does not equate to the claims made in the article, let alone "environmental racism". ], anyone? The esteemed author(s) of the Misplaced Pages article seem to have drawn their own conclusions, which is unacceptable. ] (]) 21:57, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Again... Tiny, densely populated countries are not suitable to a nomadic lifestyle. That's not "racism", that's a fact of life. Other people live there, too. ] (]) 21:59, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
====Germany==== | |||
The intro for this section is poisoning the well right from the start. | |||
=====Cologne===== | |||
A refugee camp on the site of a former chemical factory (i.e. not just Roma). The terrain located '''in the city center''' () and is inhabited by (mostly) Germans. At least a few sources can confirm some basic facts, the existence of a camp and problems resulting from it. However, the picture that arises is not one of "environmental racism". Needless to say, the term "environmental racism" isn't used in ''any'' of the sources. | |||
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* Zur Lage von Kindern aus Roma-Familien in Deutschland | |||
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* ''"Tausende von Angehörigen der Sinti und Roma zieht es Jahr für Jahr nach Köln. Die Aufnahmefähigkeit der Stadt ist aber nur begrenzt. Die Rheinmetropole versucht, mit verschiedenen Massnahmen die Entwicklung zu steuern. In letzter Zeit hat es seitens der Roma dagegen immer wieder Proteste gegeben."'' (Thousands of Sinti and Roma travel to Cologne every year. The capacity f the city to accomodate them, however, is limited. The city tries to control the influx using several measures, which has recently resulted in various protests). ] (]) 14:10, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
Ah, lest I forget. We actually have an ] on the chemical factory in question. ] (]) 14:29, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
=====Nuremberg, Fuerth===== | |||
Not a prime location and according to the source ("Housing Conditions of Sinti and Roma", RAXEN) a social worker expressed concerns. Notable quotes follow: | |||
*''"She commented on the unfortunate location of the settlement in Nuremburg-Fürth, which is – although the buildings are attractive and adequately equipped – located within the industrial area of the city, near the train tracks."'' | |||
*''"Two Sinti and Roma representatives (Interviews No. 1 and 4) expressed their concerns about privileging certain population groups through such specific projects, as this may not contribute to positive attitudes towards the groups: ‘It does not generate sympathy when you privilege particular groups’"'' Mind you, Roma and Sinti representatives are worried that ''privilege may endanger acceptance''. Again... ]? ] (]) 14:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
=====Düsseldorf Sinti settlement===== | |||
Not prime real estate and Sinti are expected to comply with building regulations, which of course is utterly racist. The bus only goes twice an hour (which beats the twice a day bus in most rural regions). The ] source ("Germany's Policies toward Sinti and Roma: Living Apartheid?") makes no mention of "environmental racism and is contrasted with the quote above (Raxen Report). | |||
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=====Kistnersgrund===== | |||
Sinti settlement near waste-dump, big (national) stink arises, Sinti moved to a better location. which even the source acknowledges (" In the past decades the heating system on the settlement has been improved, and now residents have central heating") | |||
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====United Kingdom==== | |||
=====Scrap Metal Dealers Act, 2013===== | |||
It's not "environmental racism" if a law, intended to address a common problem, fails to exempt specific minorities. In essence the source demanded that the law be applicable to all, except Romani. Also wordpress.com is not generally seen as a ]. Did ''nobody'' see any problems with that? ] (]) 16:46, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
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Racialized immigrant and migrant groups frequently experience environmental injustice as agricultural workers. In Arctic and Subarctic regions of Europe, Indigenous groups face issues primarily concerned with raw natural resource extraction such as mining, logging, hydroelectric dams and oil and gas development, as well as encroachment from military facilities. Across Europe, concerns relating to environmental ] and child health have been documented among Indigenous, Romani, and other minority communities. Environmental reproductive justice, defined as a community's collective right to reproductive capacity unharmed by environmental contaminants,<ref name="Sanchez">Hoover, Plain, Sanchez, et al. "''." Environmental Health Perspectives'', December 2012, vol. 120, issue 12. Web. n. pag. DOI:10.1289/ehp.1205422 {{webarchive|url=https://web.archive.org/web/20170629044857/https://ehp.niehs.nih.gov/1205422/|date=June 29, 2017}} Retrieved September 3, 2017. </ref> encompasses "the inextricable connection between physical and cultural survival"<ref name="Wiebe">Wiebe, Sarah Marie. . UBC Press: Vancouver, 2016. Print. {{ISBN|9780774832649}}</ref> according to environmental justice scholar Sarah Marie Wiebe. | |||
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The effects of environmental marginalization may have related political implications for both Romani and Indigenous communities across Europe. Environmental justice and access to land-based rights is a significant issue, as both groups are generally minorities within the territories they inhabit, under the sovereignty of various nation states.<ref name=Ilona>{{cite journal|author=Klímová-Alexander, Ilona|title=Transnational Romani and Indigenous Non-territorial Self-determination Claims|journal=Ethnopolitics|volume=6|issue=3|pages=395–416|date=September 25, 2007|publisher=Routledge, Taylor & Francis Group|doi=10.1080/17449050701487413}}</ref>{{rp|395}} Romani and Indigenous groups often seek increased agency with regards to autonomy, self-governance and/or sovereignty;<ref name=Ilona/>{{rp|395}} thus issues surrounding the negotiation and sharing of | |||
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The visible part there is a section commented out) is based on . The reason I direct this at the metrics page is that this article on Misplaced Pages '''actually shows up''' in the actual statistics as one reference. The others are That's nowhere near academic consensus and not a publication you can base that sort of claim on. are the political musings of a PhD, a glorified blogpost. ] (]) 18:17, 19 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|François Robere}} Your comments, please. ] (]) 18:23, 19 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:{{ping|François Robere}} <small> ... crickets chirping ... a distant howl from a lone coyote ...</small>] (]) 18:57, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: As I said: a) the changes you've made to this article thus far make it impossible to discuss your reservations. The content has to be restored before any discussion continues; b) Are you sure you can contain yourself from spontaneously bursting into flames ''again''? You seem to be fond of your crickets, less so of other critters. ] (]) 21:50, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::{{u|François Robere}} can you please explain why you can't discuss the article without restoring the content first, everything is in the history? ] 22:10, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::: If all the changes are in the history, why can't we undo them and ''then'' discuss them? This works both ways. | |||
::: Also, I've already explained this in my complaint, as has the original author of the article in a previous discussion. Riddle me this: Which is easier - reading a book in binding, or reading a book in pieces? This article is in pieces, which the other editor is trying to force as a new status quo. If we accept these changes not only are we making more work for ourselves, but we are ]. Let us rebind the book and discuss it as a whole, as one is ''supposed'' to do, rather than clip pieces of lost content from the article's history. ] (]) 23:20, 20 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::{{re|François Robere}} Once more, you don't have an actual argument. As this section '''specifically''' relates to a single section and a single source, i would have expected some argument why you want to keep it in, why my assessment of the source is false or why it is mainstream scientific opinion (other sources). No such argument was presented. Instead I get ] to leave the section in. I have outlined my reason to delete this ''specific'' section above, so either address that or stop wasting my time. Pretty much the same goes for the other sections. Please address points made, instead of generally whining, moaning and bitching about how ''mean'' yours truly is. "Put up or shut up" is the appropriate idiom here, I believe. ] (]) 14:10, 21 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::: {{ping|GB fan|p=,}} {{ping|Nihlus|p=,}} {{ping|Robert McClenon}} This is exactly what I meant. When I say they say ; and when I say they say . They like , but good heavens if makes a light-hearted comment! Kleuske just doesn't seem to get the point. I feel like I'm in a ] situation. And you can see that I'm not at all averse to discussion or argumentation ( ), but if my arguments are being ignored (and they have), and my appeal for civility is rejected (indeed, the other editor doesn't even seem to understand what I'm asking), then what's the point? Such "discussion" would not only be unpleasant, but would also lead nowhere. ] (]) 21:01, 21 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
:] - Indeed, what's the point? Why are you calling me? I don't have a role in the content dispute about this article. What do you want me to do? You came to ] and made an untenable request; you asked ''admins'' to do something about a ''user'', ]. I am not an admin, and you didn't have a proper admin request. You asked to roll back changes made by Kleuske. If you really want to resolve the content dispute, you can publish a ] asking which of two versions of the article, yours or Kleuske's, should be kept. Otherwise, you haven't presented a plausible argument. You complain about Kleuske's ], and I see comments by both editors that are somewhat unpleasant and somewhat ], but nothing over the line. What's the point? What do you want? ] (]) 01:48, 22 December 2017 (UTC) | |||
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The effects of environmental marginalization may have related political implications for both Romani and Indigenous communities across Europe. Environmental justice and access to land-based rights is a significant issue, as both groups are generally minorities within the territories they inhabit, under the sovereignty of various nation states. Romani and Indigenous groups often seek increased agency with regards to autonomy, self-governance and/or sovereignty; thus issues surrounding the negotiation and sharing of
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The visible part there is a section commented out) is based on this article. The reason I direct this at the metrics page is that this article on Misplaced Pages actually shows up in the actual statistics as one reference. The others are "sixteen readers on Mandalay" That's nowhere near academic consensus and not a publication you can base that sort of claim on. These are the political musings of a PhD, a glorified blogpost. Kleuske (talk) 18:17, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
@François Robere: Your comments, please. Kleuske (talk) 18:23, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
- @François Robere: ... crickets chirping ... a distant howl from a lone coyote ...Kleuske (talk) 18:57, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
- As I said: a) the changes you've made to this article thus far make it impossible to discuss your reservations. The content has to be restored before any discussion continues; b) Are you sure you can contain yourself from spontaneously bursting into flames again? You seem to be fond of your crickets, less so of other critters. François Robere (talk) 21:50, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
- François Robere can you please explain why you can't discuss the article without restoring the content first, everything is in the history? ~ GB fan 22:10, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
- If all the changes are in the history, why can't we undo them and then discuss them? This works both ways.
- Also, I've already explained this in my complaint, as has the original author of the article in a previous discussion. Riddle me this: Which is easier - reading a book in binding, or reading a book in pieces? This article is in pieces, which the other editor is trying to force as a new status quo. If we accept these changes not only are we making more work for ourselves, but we are rewarding them for the way they chose to do it. Let us rebind the book and discuss it as a whole, as one is supposed to do, rather than clip pieces of lost content from the article's history. François Robere (talk) 23:20, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
- @François Robere: Once more, you don't have an actual argument. As this section specifically relates to a single section and a single source, i would have expected some argument why you want to keep it in, why my assessment of the source is false or why it is mainstream scientific opinion (other sources). No such argument was presented. Instead I get special pleading to leave the section in. I have outlined my reason to delete this specific section above, so either address that or stop wasting my time. Pretty much the same goes for the other sections. Please address points made, instead of generally whining, moaning and bitching about how mean yours truly is. "Put up or shut up" is the appropriate idiom here, I believe. Kleuske (talk) 14:10, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
- @GB fan, @Nihlus, @Robert McClenon: This is exactly what I meant. When I say "try not to tear into it too much" and "do not assume ignorance on the part of others" they say "you have not addressed a single point and right now, you only wasting time and energy"; and when I say "this isn't a battle" they say "stop wasting my time". They like their own jokes, but good heavens if someone else makes a light-hearted comment! Kleuske just doesn't seem to get the point. I feel like I'm in a black knight situation. And you can see that I'm not at all averse to discussion or argumentation ( ), but if my arguments are being ignored (and they have), and my appeal for civility is rejected (indeed, the other editor doesn't even seem to understand what I'm asking), then what's the point? Such "discussion" would not only be unpleasant, but would also lead nowhere. François Robere (talk) 21:01, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
- @François Robere: The black knight analogy is rather apt, I must admit, since you haven't got a leg to stand on. Kleuske (talk) 07:50, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- @François Robere: Once more, you don't have an actual argument. As this section specifically relates to a single section and a single source, i would have expected some argument why you want to keep it in, why my assessment of the source is false or why it is mainstream scientific opinion (other sources). No such argument was presented. Instead I get special pleading to leave the section in. I have outlined my reason to delete this specific section above, so either address that or stop wasting my time. Pretty much the same goes for the other sections. Please address points made, instead of generally whining, moaning and bitching about how mean yours truly is. "Put up or shut up" is the appropriate idiom here, I believe. Kleuske (talk) 14:10, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
- User:François Robere - Indeed, what's the point? Why are you calling me? I don't have a role in the content dispute about this article. What do you want me to do? You came to WP:DRN and made an untenable request; you asked admins to do something about a user, User:Kleuske. I am not an admin, and you didn't have a proper admin request. You asked to roll back changes made by Kleuske. If you really want to resolve the content dispute, you can publish a Request for Comments asking which of two versions of the article, yours or Kleuske's, should be kept. Otherwise, you haven't presented a plausible argument. You complain about Kleuske's incivility, and I see comments by both editors that are somewhat unpleasant and somewhat sarcastic, but nothing over the line. What's the point? What do you want? Robert McClenon (talk) 01:48, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- To quote from my talk page, pursuant to your message:
- I've made two very coherent requests at ANI, was directed to DRN, then directed back, then both issues were closed (one of them by you) and now one of the admins (GB fan) is asking me on the talk page what's the problem. And I'm just the one who gave WP:3O! The original author decided to quit (and I don't mean the article, I mean Misplaced Pages). So here's the problem: Apparently no one cares enough to actually get involved in anything unless I cite one of Misplaced Pages's 300 or so policies and guidelines, or an edit war breaks out, or the editor I complained about chases a bunch of other editors out like he already did. No, it's impossible to ask admins to help before an edit war erupts, or without sanctioning a rogue editor, or in favor of old-school civil discussion. No, we have to be shitty. I'll know next time to ask for sanctions.
- Are we a bloody bureaucracy or a cooperative enterprise? Just so I know. Because as it stands, if you're okay with an editor going "put up or shut up" after erasing 20% of an article against the wishes of two other editors, then Wiki has a serious problem. François Robere (talk) 02:49, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- PS Here's a shortlist of policies you can chow on that the other editor seems, on the face of it, to have encroached upon: WP:NPOV, WP:VERIFY, WP:NOR, WP:CIVIL, WP:CONS, WP:NPA. Dear god, one day we'll have lawyers specializing in Misplaced Pages, as if we don't have enough of them already. François Robere (talk) 03:14, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- @François Robere: More verbal foliage. if you have a point to make, please do so. If not, go play elsewhere. Thanks. Kleuske (talk) 07:48, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- To quote from my talk page, pursuant to your message:
François Robere let me clear up some statements you have made. On your talk page you say you went to ANI and were directed to DRN and then back to ANI. I have read through a lot associated with this and can not find anywhere you were directed to go to DRN. I did talk about dispute resolution and linked to WP:DR, the dispute resolution policy. I did not direct you to DRN, you decided the noticeboard was the way to go. Above you state that I asked you what's the problem. I never asked what's the problem. In response to your statement that it is impossible to discuss the article until the article is restored, I asked why you can't discuss it. Your response does not appear to say it is impossible to discuss, just that you don't want to discuss it until it is restored. I explained on your talk page page exactly why the ANI report was closed as a content issue and how to frame an ANI report so it is a conduct issue. Your response was to remove the section stating that you were quite clear. Throwing out acronyms without explaining who and where they are violated is not helpful. This is just like when I asked you at ANI for diffs of conduct issues that need to be addressed. You responded to look at the article history and provided one diff that was a content issue, not conduct. You seem to want others to dig through and find what you perceive as the problems rather than providing the evidence of a problem. ~ GB fan 11:28, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- @GB fan:I have the impression that François Robere thinks that since he was invited () for a third opinion, his role here is that of an arbiter, whose adjudications must be obeyed by lowly (even 'rogue') editors such as myself. That explains rather a lot, IMHO. Kleuske (talk) 12:30, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Kleuske: Not really, but it does help if one listens to other editors, and perhaps stops making changes as per their request while discussion is ongoing. You did neither.
- @GB fan: I'm happy we got to clear that one up - it was WP:DR, not WP:DRN. Important point! Mind, Sturgeontransformer tried WP:3O before, so some board was due anyway.
I never asked what's the problem... I asked why you can't discuss it
Another important point. Thank you!Your response was to remove the section stating that you were quite clear
Well, yes - I removed it because it was, with all due respect, a useless comment. This isn't a Supreme Court case, and any administrator with a backbone who read through any of the logs or talks would know the entire story in less time than it takes to make a cup of tea. Instead it gets dragged across multiple talk pages because it isn't "framed" properly. What does this contribute to Misplaced Pages? To this discussion? I thought there was some policy about being bold.- This is what you get from <10 minutes of reading:
- - Kleuske came and made some changes and objections
- - Sturgeontransformer objected their changes and made some explanations
- - Kleuske continued to make changes
- - Sturgeontransformer asked for WP:3O
- - I came and gave a third opinion, and asked to stop editing for a while so we can discuss
- - Kleuske continued to make changes
- - Sturgeontransformer left Misplaced Pages, and I asked for ANI
- - Kleuske went "Ha Ha Ha! You got nothin' on me!"
- That's that, and it's all in the logs and talk - a simple question of whether it's okay for an editor to make huge changes without achieving consensus or not.
This is just like when I asked you at ANI for diffs of conduct issues that need to be addressed
I was obviously naive enough to think that the log, showing a chain of massive edits, reversals and counter-reversals was enough to show that something unhealthy was going on, framed "correctly" or not.You seem to want others to dig through and find what you perceive as the problems rather than providing the evidence of a problem
I'm not asking you to do anything I haven't done myself when the 3O was filed. The issues were so evident I didn't even need to post a{{subst:third opinion}}
(so both sides can summarize their positions). The affair escalated so quickly you don't even need to scroll past the first 4-5 paragraphs to get the gist of it. Hence my surprise that we've been discussing it for more days than the original content discussion. François Robere (talk) 16:00, 22 December 2017 (UTC)- @François Robere: Please peruse WP:BURDEN, so named because it's part of WP:V, a core policy, that spells out where the burden of proof lies, it states "The burden to demonstrate verifiability lies with the editor who adds or restores material, and is satisfied by providing a citation to a reliable source that directly supports the contribution".
- I've been very careful to start a discussion on each and any change I made, provided sources and invested quite a bit of time figuring out what went on where. I have not edited the article, the past several days because a) I have better things to do and b) I wanted to give you time to respond to any of the points made. You have not responded to any of them, you have not argued a single point relating to the article. None of your contributions have been helpful in any way, shape or form in improving the actual article. All you have done so far, is berate me about my behavior, filed an ANI suit against me, called me "old chap", "darling" and "dear", whilst flatly refusing to discuss things unless you get your way and you think I have an attitude problem? Kleuske (talk) 17:06, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- I am seriously considering filing an ANI-case myself for disruptive editing, since all you have accomplished here is to waste everybody's time with drama. I'd rather not, since on the face of it it's a content dispute, but it's not the content that's being disputed. Kleuske (talk) 17:30, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
User:François Robere - Read the boomerang essay with regard to Kleuske's caution above that you have been wasting everyone's time with pointless drama. If you continue to persist, and Kleuske finds it necessary to file, other editors will be supportive of her. So either drop it, or request formal mediation. Robert McClenon (talk) 19:28, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- User:Robert McClenon I've not the least interest in bureaucracy of any kind, Robert, least of all Misplaced Pages's. In fact, anything that does not directly serve Misplaced Pages's main goal of providing accurate, exhaustive, relevant and readable content is not only uninteresting to me, but arguably needless to the whole. That is why I do not file complaints very often (in ANI or anywhere else); that is why I did not ask for sanctions against Kleuske; and that is why "standard written English" is my language in this Misplaced Pages, and not WP. François Robere (talk) 20:11, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
One Editor's Commentary
I have spent much more time than it takes to make a cup of tea, and it took me much longer than that to be able to grasp what the problem is. Part of why it has taken me longer than FR thinks it should is that FR thinks that the issue is obvious, and that anyone should agree with them. It is obvious that there is an issue, and that FR is part of the problem, but it isn't clear what the problem is. FR complains about User:Kleuske's temper. I see FR's temper. It appears that FR may be baiting Kleuske (by using overly familiar nicknames), and that Kleuske is failing to take the bait (good for her). (I would normally think that the insulting attitude taken by FR toward Kleuske was gender-based, except that I also see that FR refers to Kleuske in the masculine gender, so I don't think that there is sexism, even if there is a bad attitude.)
It appears that the original article was contentious, containing a lot of poorly sourced and cherry-picked evidence that purports to be of racism. It appears that Kleuske trimmed out a considerable amount of questionable material, and FR doesn't like it. They can discuss here. This is an article talk page, and its primary purpose is to discuss article content. It appears that FR thinks that Kleuske's edits must be rolled back in order to discuss them. That is neither justified by Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines or by common sense. But FR doesn't want to discuss the merits of the edits until they are rolled back. It doesn't work like that. FR filed at ANI, but it was dismissed as not a properly filed conduct dispute, and no one could see any real claim that Kleuske or anyone else had done anything wrong. FR filed at DRN, but it was dismissed as not a properly stated content dispute, and FR didn't help because they kept insisting that this was about Kleuske, not about the article.
Okay, if FR still wants to discuss this, I have some advice. First, frame it very clearly as a discussion of article content. That will also require a content forum, rather than a conduct forum like ANI, but there isn’t a conduct issue that I can parse in standard written English. I would suggest that the content dispute can still be addressed either via a Request for Comments choosing between a historical version of the article and the version of the article after Kleuske’s edits, or a request for mediation with an experienced mediator. That is where to go from here. Either RFC or RFM. The alternatives to those are that FR can leave it alone because he doesn’t have the patience or courtesy to continue to pursue this, or that FR can continue to be angry, which will result in being ignored or being blocked. It might at this point be too complicated for a good neutral RFC, so I would suggest RFM be requested. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:50, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks. Kleuske (talk) 17:06, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- I've kept cool and even-handed, and not even humored myself but for one occasion, until after the whole thing became the farce that it is now.
- And while on chronology - I have yet to see even one admin address with any seriousness anything that happened on this page prior to my arrival - a part of the chronicle that I've addressed several times, and have asked addressed several times.
- As for gender: I find your comment not only distasteful, but completely devoid of truth. In the first, I do not give a leprechaun's behind whether any editor is male, female, queer, non-binary or anything else or in-between, and had you any sense of character you would've seen that before you spoke. Second, and continuing in the line of "obvious things that seem to have been misplaced", I used "they" rather than "he" throughout this entire discussion, as well as other discussions; take from that what you will.
- On the merits of the "stable version": I have been asked numerous times to avoid edits until after discussion proceeded; I have seen the "stable version" hailed on dozens of occasions as the one to refer to; I have been asked to avoid sweeping changes even of ludicrous material until consensus is reached; and now you claim this is all nonsense - everyone should quietly disagree and let the changes pass, even when it's one editor's disregard towards others' comments and requests (as this one has done on multiple occasions). Very well, then - let them destroy the article as they please. A shame for Sturgeontransformer's extensive work (as disputed as it was), a shame for Misplaced Pages, and a shame on you administrators who cannot even bring yourselves to pronounce the sentence "please avoid inflammatory language". François Robere (talk) 19:55, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- No. You User: François Robere wrote: "So here's the problem: Apparently no one cares enough to actually get involved in anything unless I cite one of Misplaced Pages's 300 or so policies and guidelines, or an edit war breaks out, or the editor I complained about chases a bunch of other editors out like he already did. No, it's impossible to ask admins to help before an edit war erupts, or without sanctioning a rogue editor, or in favor of old-school civil discussion.
- First, you are (as in other places) referring to User:Kleuske in the masculine, which you said you didn’t. Second, I only see Kleuske trying to engage in old-school civil discussion and not you. Third, my assessment of your character takes into account how you addressed Kleuske using disparaging nicknames, and indeed perhaps I shouldn’t have thought gender was an issue, because maybe you always use insulting familiarity with H. sapiens. Enough. If you want civil discussion, file a Request for Mediation. If not, Kleuske has warned that she is ready to file another ANI. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:54, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- Oh gosh, wow. I mistook them for male twice! And I only used "they" 18 times in this thread, 7 times on ANI, and probably a bunch more somewhere else, for an overall of upwards of 25 times.... versus 2. I'm honestly intrigued as to why you even posted the question. By the way - am I a male? A female? Genderqueer? Do you still think your deference to sexism had any merit?
- As for your other points - here's, again, a short chronicle:
- KL:
I have rarely seen such a utter and complete mess... I intend to weed out... idiotic assumptions, overused sources and, frankly ludicrous claims...
- KL:
- By this point they already removed several sections of the article with little explanation, so ST asks:
- ST:
Please do not add commentary, your own point of view, or your own personal analysis... Removing large quantities of cited material without adequate rationale and posting strong language... is not appropriate editing behavior
- KL:
Yeah... That's your sayso...
- ST:
Many of your questions have been addressed in previous discussions in the talk archives, which I would advise you to refer to... There are much more constructive ways to address these questions than deleting large sections of text and immediately attacking editors in the talk page
- ST:
- Now KL finally gives a list of their reservations; however by this point they gutted much of the article, and ST refuses to engage:
- ST:
Dispute resolution will soon be underway. Other editors will be involved.
- ST:
- But KL doesn't seem to care:
- KL:
No arguments? Not addressing a single point, above? I'm disappointed
- KL:
- So ST reiterates:
- ST:
Third Opinion dispute resolution submitted. This will allow for an independent party to provide input in a neutral way.
- ST:
- At this point I arrive, after having picked up the WP:3O, and after asking the sides for some order write a 17 points reply:
- FR:
Let's... stay focused on the points, shall we? Also, just to keep it orderly, let's stop editing the article for a day or two until we sort all of this out. Can we do that? Thanks!
- FR:
- KL replies with a single paragraph along with an unasked-for explanation of policies, not addressing most of what I've written. ST gives a detailed review of their sources, including the "why" and "where" they've used them.
- I again reply to both of them, addressing each of the points of the two. Along the way I pose some specific questions to the two, which ST addresses and KL ignores.
- KL quotes some policies, attaches an unrelated diagram, and agrees to go point-by-point, following immediately with an unsportsmanlike remark:
- KL:
Please refrain from cute remarks... I do not find it amusing
- KL:
- Of course, they have no problem amusing themselves a couple of comments earlier:
- KL:
bad thing(tm)
- KL:
- My next reply address two of their points, their above remark as well as their diagram, in addition asking them "not to tear into it too much too soon" (by this point they cut the article by about 20%, with little reasoning). My intent was to continue the discussion point-by-point, but obviously KL doesn't get any of my points:
- KL:
You have not addressed a single point and right now, you're only wasting time and energy
. - FR:
This isn't a battle, Kleuske, don't be so bellicose. Re-read what I wrote above, you'll see both a question directed at you, as well as myself suggesting on several occasions going through the motions one by one, with time. In the meanwhile try and be patient, and assume good faith.
- KL:
Oh, wow... Complaining about the tone. You actually went down a notch... stop wasting my time.
- KL:
- What do you think - was I patient enough? Or, do you reckon, was that a good time to pander to someone who obviously doesn't care what I say in a very basic sense?
- So I went and asked for ANI without personal sanctions against KL, because I'm that cool, and instead of receiving aid I feel Like I need to see a venereologist.
- And this, my dear presumptuous admin (or whatever you are on Misplaced Pages), is the stupid, short, easy-to-find log that began all of this, that seems to be completely hidden from admins. If Voldemort had any sense in him (!) he would've hidden one of his soul shards here, living happily ever after and ruling over us all. François Robere (talk) 01:29, 23 December 2017 (UTC)
References
- ^ Klímová-Alexander, Ilona (September 25, 2007). "Transnational Romani and Indigenous Non-territorial Self-determination Claims". Ethnopolitics. 6 (3). Routledge, Taylor & Francis Group: 395–416. doi:10.1080/17449050701487413.
Recent Comment - WP:SYNTH claims
The following comment was recently posted to my user page:
I am still keeping an eye on the massive WP:SYNTH that is now "Environmental inequality in Europe". Kleuske (talk) 21:11, 13 June 2018 (UTC) https://en.wikipedia.org/User_talk:Sturgeontransformer#Please_note%3A_As_of_December_2017%2C_I_am_taking_an_extended_absence_from_Wikipedia_editing._Thank_you.
RfC about claims that the entire article is a WP:SYNTH
Should the article be deleted based upon claims that it is a WP:SYNTH? Sturgeontransformer (talk) 21:50, 13 June 2018 (UTC)
- Requests for comment is not for hosting deletion discussions. If you want to initiate a discussion about whether the article should be deleted, and why, the formal articles for deletion process should be used. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 22:11, 13 June 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for the clarification, User:Redrose64
- Sturgeontransformer (talk) 22:48, 13 June 2018 (UTC)
Does this article have basic issues with WP:SYNTH? Sturgeontransformer 22:50, 13 June 2018 (UTC)
- Yes. Additionaly, there's problems with sourcing, neutrality, editorializing and WP:NPOV. Kleuske (talk) 07:45, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
- Not to mention the sheer walls of text. Kleuske (talk) 07:49, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
Thank you for summarizing your concerns. Now we need outside editors (who have not commented previously) to provide input. The issue of section-blanking will need to be discussed, with regards to whether or not that complies with Misplaced Pages policy (I will not add any new content as long as the practice of section-blanking in this article is left unaddressed. I also will not revert any new content removals at this time, either). I am not going to take a position on these issues from this point onwards (at least as far as the Rfc is concerned); rather, I am requesting that more editors take a look at these issues and come to a consensus. If a consensus is not reached, or if not enough editors provide input, it may be appropriate to either nominate the article for deletion or to seek formal dispute resolution.
And, I should add, I will not oppose any nominations for deletion. Sturgeontransformer (talk) 17:29, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
See also: a thread has been opened on the No original research noticeboard.
Thanks,
Sturgeontransformer (talk) 18:16, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
The issue of section-blanking will need to be discussed
I have carefully documented all deleted sections, you chose not to address a single one. Since section-blanking is usually considered disruptive behavior, I feel obliged to point out WP:ASPERSIONS and how not to throw them. Kleuske (talk) 21:06, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
- Hi Kleuske,
- An AfD debate has been opened for this article. Please feel free to share your thoughts on the AfD discussion page. Sturgeontransformer (talk) 20:50, 16 June 2018 (UTC)
UPDATE: Additional information has been posted to the article for deletion nomination summary. Sturgeontransformer (talk) 06:44, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
- Please remember that when Misplaced Pages:Articles for deletion/Environmental inequality in Europe concludes (no earlier than 20:41, 23 June 2018 (UTC)), the closing admin will not take into account any comments made other than on that page, such as those in this section. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 20:01, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
November 2018
A bit of background: I've never commented on an article before. Basically, first-time caller, long-time listener, though I care enough about Misplaced Pages to have donated money a few times.
I came to the article's talk page because sections of it immediately struck me as downright inflammatory. It focuses on particular groups (Romani and Sinti) to the exclusion of others, and makes suppositions not supported by the sources, although there are areas that bear keeping as-is. I was going to raise the idea of removing or revising some of the worst content, but I've had a chance to read the cluster that was the rest of the talk page. I don't in any way want to become involved in a flame war or a revert war. There is no point in wasting my time or effort in such things.
Instead, I will just say that claiming that the Holocaust is an example of "environmental racism" is beyond the pale. For some reason, there is a picture of the "Gorleben exploratory mine for storing uranium waste" that is never tied into the article's text and thus conveys an impression that Romani and Sinti are living in a uranium waste repository. If "environmental racism" is indeed a thing, then surely there are significant examples of it for other disadvantaged groups, such as Middle-Eastern refugees, black Africans, persons from ex-Communist nations, and so forth. For example, a search of the article for the words "Muslim", "Islam", "refugee", "migrant", etc. turned up token references for Italy and Spain - no such stories that deal with the current wave of migration, where such things would be expected if it were happening.
Other areas turn up contradictory claims: "One severe example of environmental inequality in Lukavac, where Romani persons lack adequate access to energy resources, is the practice of coal theft. Young Romani men climb onto moving freight trains departing from the Lukavac coal mine in an attempt to push coal off the tops of the roofless cars by hand. After the coal falls to the ground, the men then collect the coal into 50 kilogram bags which are then sold in town for two Euros apiece." If the idea was that the men were stealing goods to support their direct, immediate domestic needs (the classic example of stealing a loaf of bread to feed one's family), it's easier to believe that this might be part of inequality. But it seems more like detailing a practice from the illicit economy that benefits the thieves in other ways. At best, it leaves an ambiguous impression in the mind of someone who had no prior experience with such matters. Surely other, better examples can be found if this is widespread.
At best, this article needs some serious consolidation and neutrality. Hopefully, it will attract enough voices to become truly independent of one or two views. 24.36.21.142 (talk) 00:28, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
- No part of the article claims in any way that the Holocaust was environmental racism or inequality, and it is only briefly mentioned for historical context as to why certain groups later ended up living in certain areas. And the article, in its original form, did mention many different groups: low-income ethnic majority (white) people; African and Middle Eastern migrants (see section on Spain, Greece, and Italy); Sami people in Sweden, Norway, and Finland (that section was removed and can be found in the article history); and a bunch of different Native groups in Russia. The introduction (which mentioned all of these diverse groups quite clearly) was removed.
- It is always recommended to read the article history. This article has seen major content changes.173.180.129.239 (talk) 08:01, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
Agree with 24.36.21.142. In its current state the article (90% of it) deserves title "List of cases of dscrimination against Roma people in Europe" or something like this. —188.243.247.38 (talk) 21:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
Also agree with 24.36.21.142. The fixation on Romani makes the article seem lopsided: either relevant information pertaining to other groups should be introduced, or the name of the page should be changed. I was linked here from an article regarding British green belt zones and supposed "environmental racism" suffered by minority groups in the country; however, this article does not discuss Britain at all, so I can safely remove the link from the previous page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.189.58.242 (talk) 14:58, 4 January 2025 (UTC)
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