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== RFC to move ahead on previous Intro and Origins proposals == | |||
== Gothic migration == | |||
{{Closed rfc top|There is limited participation and most of the discussion below is about what process is appropriate for revising the article and not the revised draft itself. There has been no further participation for well over a week and a close is requested. The only reasonable reading of this discussion is that the proposed draft '''did not gain a consensus''' in favor of implementation. <small>(])</small> ] ] ] 18:40, 14 July 2021 (UTC)}} | |||
{{red|NOTE ADDED 5 June 2021: Please ''do not close'' this RFC. It is on-going.}}--] (]) 08:00, 5 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:ADDED 7 July 2021. I just note that I think the idea here, based on previous discussions, is to keep this discussion alive for a long period and not rush the final decision. Not sure how others see it or how long this should go.--] (]) 10:19, 7 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
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This article could probably do with some critical notes inserted from books such as Christensen's 2002 study of the Getica, Kulikowksi's writings on Gothic origins from his ''Rome's Gothic Wars'', and so forth. The Scandinavian-origins narrative is not nearly as uncontroversial as this article currently seems to suggest. — ] (] · ]) 09:36, 25 September 2019 (UTC) | |||
Based on previous RFCs and discussions, may we now move ahead with the new Intro proposal of {{u|Krakkos}} (4th column , discussion ), and the new Origins section drafted by me (2nd column ) which would replace the current 3.1, 3.2, and 3.3? --] (]) 06:43, 6 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I haven't been keeping up with my barbarian origin theories, but I was under the impression that a large number of scholars today reject the notion of migrating Germanic tribes entirely, following attacks by ], among others. In this reading Scandinavian orgins are given to the Goths by the Romans because its far away and makes them Barbaric and later peoples are given Scandinavian origins because it becomes a trope.--] (]) 13:31, 25 September 2019 (UTC) | |||
:: Truthfully it's probably one of the most contested issues at the moment. The most I will venture to say is that there is evidence from the Gothic language that the Gothic language community - whether that is identical with the Goths as a supposed ethnic group or not I will leave aside for now - moved around quite a bit in its prehistory. Certainly the Gothic language did not originate in the Balkan/northwestern Pontic area where the Goths first appear (leaving aside earlier uncertain references; cf. Christensen 2002) in the historical record during the third century and where the Gothic Bible translation was created. Where it did originate is problematic. The language shares both features unique to North Germanic and features only found in West-Germanic and Gothic. It features loanwords from Proto-Slavic, but also Celtic loanwords not found in any other Germanic language. Gothic prehistory is mysterious as hell. — ] (] · ]) 13:50, 26 October 2019 (UTC) | |||
::: I know this discussion above is some months old, but the same topic was being raised more widely and I have been modifying ] and going over the literature. To put it on record here, the Gothic case is not necessarily the same as some of the other ones. (Indeed one of the concerns of scholars is the lumping together of "Germanic peoples" as if they all did the same thing. Some points: | |||
:::*The place where Goths live in contemporary sources was roughly the Ukraine. | |||
:::*The idea that they came from the north is something we need to balance carefully: (1) In reality it comes from the much later work of Jordanes, who also mentions ancient Egypt and Amazons. (2) OTOH archaeological and linguistic evidence is consistent with the idea that they came from the direction of the Baltic sea. (3) They certainly might descend from the Gutones of the Vistula estuary, but I don't think this can be called proven. (4) That they moved to the from Sweden is I think something which comes only from Jordanes and word games. It should be attributed and not reported as a known fact.--] (]) 08:02, 17 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
Pinging. {{u|Berig}}, {{u|Nishidani}}, {{u|Obenritter}}, {{u|Peter K Burian}}, {{u|Bloodofox}}, {{u|Ermenrich}}, {{u|Srnec}}, {{u|Carlstak}}, {{u|Mnemosientje}}, {{u|SMcCandlish}}, {{u|Yngvadottir}}, {{u|Alcaios}}, {{u|Pfold}}, {{u|North8000}}, {{u|Sea Ane}} feedback please. | |||
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== Etymology section: verification issue == | |||
*'''Yes''' (as proposer). I think these two drafts correspond to the various opinions and ideas mentioned in previous RFCs and discussions. I have already agreed with Krakkos on his lead proposal. There was a clear consensus in previous RFCs that the 3 sections about possible "pre Goths" which will be compressed now can better be expanded upon in other articles, because they have a tendency to expand and become controversial and overwhelming on this large article. Tweaks are possible of course, but I recommend moving ahead. --] (]) 06:43, 6 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
*'''Comment''' Changes to the initial parts of the ] (Origins) section are currently being discussed at an earlier RfC found at ]. I doubt whether it is helpful to have two ongoing RfCs on essentially the same question. We should probably resolve the earlier RfC before we "move ahead" with its conclusions. | |||
:{{ping|Krakkos}} This is still a clear verification failure. There are clearly several etymology proposals, and WP should not be picking a winner.--] (]) 07:54, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::{{ping|Krakkos}} we now have several theories, all different, but all stated as facts in "Misplaced Pages voice". This is clearly a case where Misplaced Pages should be explaining that there is no conclusive consensus, only several proposals.--] (]) 11:36, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
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:Concerning the proposed change to the Intro, i think we should get some feedback before we move ahead. ] (]) 08:39, 6 May 2021 (UTC) | ||
::I have now requested the closure of three ongoing RfCs above which cover similar questions as this one. ] (]) 09:06, 6 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} I'd like to comment on this closing sentence of the etymology section, which I believe needs tweaking but also shows a more general complication relevant to other sections: | |||
:::OK, I guess that makes sense, formally at least. No rush, so no harm getting the details right. Thanks Krakkos. OTOH, do you have any concern about this RFC as such? I didn't see any problem at least starting to ask people to look at the two proposals?--] (]) 14:48, 6 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{talkquote|The name "Goths" would eventually come to be applied to a large number of peoples, including Burgundians, Vandals, Gepids, Rugii, Scirii. On the basis of linguistics, these are today often referred to as East Germanic peoples. <Wolfram 1990, pp. 19-20.>}} | |||
::::Asking people to look at proposals is alright. On the other hand, posting the same proposal in mulitple RfCs and sections leads to confusion and makes it harder to work out sensible solutions. Interconnected RfCs should be handled in a reasonable order one step at the time. Making a new RfC with a request to "move ahead" with a counter proposal to a ] being ] is problematic. Regarding your counter proposal for the Origins section, i am concerned about its removal of many quality sources, its undue emphasis on the views of historians at the expense of philologists/linguists and archaeologists, and its lack of a coherent structure. ] (]) 17:56, 6 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
2 simple logical problems: | |||
:::::I posted one proposal in one RFC. This links the decisions about moving forward in two early parts of the article, and I think this is correct because these have clearly been linked discussions, also for other editors. (The shortening of the lead is also connected to the reduction of emphasis on "pre Goths".) There were no other open RFCs or running discussions. If you try to (re)open a second RFC that could then be problematic in the way you describe. The old RFC which led to my new Origins section proposal was clearly already useless as an RFC a month before it was terminated because it was no longer about one clear proposal. Many had been discussed and rejected. Mine is best considered a new one.--] (]) 18:43, 6 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
*You are avoiding mentioning that for example the Alans are also normally included in such lists, including the one of Wolfram which is being cited. | |||
{{od}} | |||
*YOUR strong preference for OVER-emphasizing "linguistic" definitions of ethnicities does not work here. It is not just a problem of the Alans probably not being Germanic-speaking but also that we have basically no evidence for the smaller peoples you mention. | |||
{{re|Andrew Lancaster}} ] has now been closed with the conclusion that there is a consensus to trim the early history sections and use ] as a basis for trimming and further refinement. Are you alright with moving ahead with this previous proposal? ] (]) 09:10, 9 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
Suggestions: | |||
:Apart from the new intro, drafted by you, the other part of this RFC is my draft of a shortened and united "Origins" section, to move ahead on a basis as described in that closure. During that previous RFC you proposed other ideas which all failed to create a concensus, so my draft is now the next one needing feedback. (We did not really need the closure because it was obvious what was agreed.) To quote the rest of the closure "{{tq|There is a rough consensus to use the proposed text as a basis for further refinement. Whether the participants in this discussion believe such refinement should take place in a sandbox, in the article directly, or on this talk page is not clearly established below but can be determined through the normal editing process.}}" --] (]) 18:18, 9 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
*I think Peter Heather's approach is more appropriate in such cases, and I know you are familiar with the way in which he writes of "Germanic dominated" peoples or groups of peoples. | |||
::There was a rough consensus in ] to use ] as a basis for further refinement. Would you object to moving ahead with that? ] (]) 08:24, 10 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
*Many of the sources, including the ones you allow, use the genuine classical term "Gothic peoples" (found in Latin in Ammianus Marcellinus, and Greek in Procopius for example). This can perhaps help distinguish when we write about this broader concept. (But you are correct to mention that the simple term "Goths" also applies to the broad group, and that should be mentioned at least in passing.) | |||
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:::I think my proposal is clear, and is the basis of this RFC. This draft evolves from that same previous RFC as all your drafts, and that's how I suggest we go ahead. Other editors can say if they prefer your draft, or a mix of the two, or neither. But I suggest we leave these two drafts unchanged for a while now, and try to allow other editors to absorb them and comment. --] (]) 12:42, 10 May 2021 (UTC) | ||
* '''Not an improvement'''. This "Origins proposal" ignores key conclusions from previous RfCs and is less informative and balanced than the current version. The proposal may be appreciated due to its shortness, but content quality is of greater value than content shortness. ] have reached consensus that this article should put less emphasis on dubious ] and more emphasis on archaeological, linguistic and contemporaneous historical evidence. Despite of this, the proposal maintains discussion on such origin stories while removing all references from linguists (], ], ], ] etc.), virtually all references to archaeologists (], ] etc.), and a large amount of essential references on contemporaneous historical evidence. Various sub-par sources are in turn introduced to support the minority viewpoint that "there is no Gothic history before the third century", while top-notch sources supporting the majority viewpoint are removed, ignored and/or misrepresented. It may also be noted that the proposal lacks a coherent structure, in contrast to the current version, which is at least chronologically structured. The History section of this article can certainly be improved and trimmed. Removing essential content and rewriting it in an incoherent manner in support of a minority viewpoint will put it on a weaker basis for such improvement. ] (]) 16:01, 10 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:'''Reply by Krakkos''' We are in a fortunate situation because ] has recently written ]s on the Goths. He classifies them as a Germanic people/tribe: | |||
:::{{u|Krakkos}} we've looked at the sources in previous discussions and you are misrepresenting them. That Gothic ''history'' starts in the third century is mainstream for historians, and ''history'' is the speciality of historians. Secondly, you are ignoring the fact that your draft proposal contains ''no'' discussion about some critical topics such as the mainstream idea that a small elite probably carried gothic/gothonic traditions between various places. So my draft actually ADDS critical information, which you've been hiding from our readers. Your draft is instead based on treating Jordanes as a fact, and there was a strong concensus that this article needs to get away from that. Thirdly, archaeologists are cited so much by you ONLY to defend your complete dependence upon Jordanes, ''but they are NOT Jordanes experts''. I am all for Misplaced Pages having a better coverage of the archaeological discussions - but the main discussions should not be in this article.--] (]) 09:43, 11 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:{{talkquote|"Goths, a Germanic people, who, according to Jordanes' Getica, originated in Scandinavia." {{cite book |last1=Heather |first1=Peter |author-link1=Peter Heather |date=2012b |year= |orig-year= |chapter=Goths |chapter-url=https://www.oxfordreference.com/view/10.1093/acref/9780199545568.001.0001/acref-9780199545568-e-2873? |editor1-last=Hornblower |editor1-first=Simon |editor1-link=Simon Hornblower |editor2-last=Spawforth |editor2-first=Antony |editor2-link= |editor3-last=Eidinow |editor3-first=Esther |editor3-link=Esther Eidinow |title=] |trans-title= |url= |url-status= |format= |type= |series= |language= |volume= |issue= |edition=4 |location= |publisher=] |page=623 |pages= |isbn=9780191735257 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date=January 25, 2020 |via= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
::::This article is about Goths rather than Jordanes. We should therefore be citing Goths experts rather than Jordanes experts. Your proposal increases the weight given to Jordanes and Jordanes experts, and that is opposite of the clear consensus established in previous RfCs. The chief mainstream historians on Goths are ] and ], but your proposal minimizes and misrepresents their views in order to push minority viewpoints as a matter of fact. That archaeological and linguistic evidence is of relevance to Gothic origins and early history is agreed upon both by mainstream scholars and by prior talk page consensus. Such evidence should be cited to archaeologists and linguists who are Goths experts, rather than Jordanes experts. That certain archaeological and linguistic evidence corroborates parts of Jordanes is not a valid argument for removing such evidence. Likewise, the addition of material about "gothic/gothonic traditions" does not necessate the misrepresentation of Heather and Wolfram and the complete removal of citations from archaeologists and linguists. Such misreprentation and removal of essential sources from experts on Goths reduces the quality of the article and puts it on a weaker basis for future improvement. ] (]) 11:31, 11 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:{{talkquote|"Goths. A Germanic *tribe whose name means ‘the people’, first attested immediately south of the Baltic Sea in the first two centuries." {{cite book |last1=Heather |first1=Peter |author-link1=Peter Heather |date=2018 |year= |orig-year= |chapter=Goths |chapter-url=https://www.oxfordreference.com/view/10.1093/acref/9780198662778.001.0001/acref-9780198662778-e-2090? |editor1-last=Nicholson |editor1-first=Oliver |editor1-link= |title=] |trans-title= |url= |url-status= |format= |type= |series= |language= |volume= |issue= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page=673 |pages= |isbn=9780191744457 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date=January 25, 2020 |via= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
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:::::Other editors should compare my draft to yours and the current version in order to confirm the facts. My drafting page (and indeed the archives of this talk page also contain extensive evidence concerning what the sources say.--] (]) 11:53, 11 May 2021 (UTC) | ||
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::::::Just for completeness, I forgot to link to my older comments on the draft which I understand to still be your latest draft for a shorter pre-history section: . A major concern is cherry-picking of sources in order to promote the Jordanes story, while hiding what experts in the various fields really believe and write.--] (]) 07:51, 30 May 2021 (UTC) | ||
*'''No''', I see no reason to remove studies on archaeology, lingistics, and genetics surrounding the origin of the Goths, and especially since the origin of the Goths is a very notable and still controversial topic.--] (]) 16:58, 10 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
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:::{{u|Berig}} perhaps there is a misunderstanding. The previous RFCs made it clear that there was a consensus not to ''remove'' such information from Misplaced Pages, but to focus upon it more in other articles. There are already many articles related to this article, concerning linguistic, archaeological etc topics. None of these topics can be done justice here. This article focuses on the topic "Goths" as that term is used in sources. The various disputed proposals about "pre Goths" should be mentioned and linked to, but there has been a strong consensus expressed about concerns that these disputes continually take over this article and talk page. There was also a strong theme of the need to ''stop'' making Misplaced Pages treat Jordanes as the main source for all of this. I would add that we really must make it more clear that mainstream scholars ''these days'' make use of the Vienna school's concept of a small elite who carry traditions with them, not requiring a large movement of people. In my draft this is ''added'', whereas previously it has been hidden from our readers. How can we justify this?--] (]) 09:43, 11 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
|Red and green notes by Andrew Lancaster, added at will as a drafting/discussion table | |||
*'''Pinging as reminder.''' The previous RFCs decided that the 3 controversial sections about possible Gothic origins before the 3rd century should be shortened, because the main discussion is for other articles. This is the current proposal, which actually covers reliably sourced topics currently excluded from our current article, despite being significantly shorter and simpler: (4th column). {{u|Nishidani}}, {{u|Obenritter}}, {{u|Peter K Burian}}, {{u|Bloodofox}}, {{u|Ermenrich}}, {{u|Srnec}}, {{u|Carlstak}}, {{u|Mnemosientje}}, {{u|SMcCandlish}}, {{u|Yngvadottir}}, {{u|Alcaios}}, {{u|Pfold}}, {{u|North8000}}, {{u|Sea Ane}}. So far: (1) Krakkos has also linked above to his older proposal, and I linked to my analysis of that draft showing the problems. If I understand correctly Krakkos would however prefer that the previous RFCs never get acted upon. (2) Berig also prefers that the previous RFCs never get acted upon. (3) No one else who participated in the previous RFCs has commented on the present proposal.--] (]) 08:43, 2 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
Note possibly useful source for below discussion, already posted here earlier by Andrew Lancaster: | |||
::The key conclusions of the previous RfCs were to increase emphasis on archaeological, linguistic evidence, contemporaneous historical accounts and secondary sources, and to shorten existing material. Attempts to act on these RfCs have been proposed and supported by the wider community, but you have opposed these efforts. Your proposal constitutes a complete rewrite of key sections of this article, in which top sources are replaced with sub-par ones, and essential information on archaeological, historical and linguistic evidence is entirely removed. This is the opposite of the conclusions of the RfCs, and constitutes a significant reduction of article quality. For more than a year you have made essentially the same proposal here multiple times (], ] etc.). Making the same proposals over and over again and pinging users endlessly until one gets the desired result is not a good approach. ] (]) 10:05, 2 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
*Andersson, Thomas (1998), zu Namen und Deutungen. in Goten 1. Philologisches in RGA 2 vol. 12 pp.402-403. Google: https://books.google.be/books?id=bcwfZW_soyMC | |||
:::LOL. '''This RFC is my first proposal''' and it was made slowly, based on the RFCs and aiming to match the diverse comments of other editors, after very thoroughly reassessing the sources. It includes additional information and sources compared to your current controversial Jordanes-based version. There is at this stage no evidence at all that there is any opposition to my proposal apart from you and Berig. But that is not surprising because you are both clearly opposed to the decisions and opinions in the previous RFCs and want the opening of this article to continue to be tacitly Jordanes-based, in order to spread the word that Goths are Swedes (and DNA will prove Jordanes right one day, etc, etc). None of your proposals show any interest in archaeology, let alone linguistics or DNA. ''Editors should read my actual draft.'' Your previously rejected draft is still clearly linked to as well, and people can still say if they prefer it, or see bits they like better. BTW on my drafting page I have also shown extra sources that can be added to my version, but many editors may find my draft over-footnoted. I do not believe your approach to sourcing always matches our community norms, but I've tried to follow you part of the way due to the inevitability of the outrage which will be expressed if the footnotes are fewer or less long. There is also a table showing the problems which your draft has, including source distortion. Anyway, I have no problem with my draft being rejected after a proper discussed, but what is more important it to make sure the drafting discussion and feedback leads to clarification of what changes are needed. Please do not disrupt this discussion with misleading {{red|red herring}} remarks.--] (]) 14:36, 2 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The name "Goths" means "men" or "the people". {{color|red| For our readers this is pretty unclear. Our sources are less bad, but often also a little vague. They cite other sources. Andersson in RGA, one such source, says that the name seems to be an ethnocentric "tribal" concept which describes this people as ejaculating men - perhaps comparing them to stallions or breeding stock! This is because the verb that these words look like in Germanic (they are assuming it is Germanic) means something like "pouring". I see around the internet that the Prussians might have a similar etymology.}} | |||
::::You made false remarks about me (and Berig) and then pinged a whole bunch of editors. Of course i have to respond to such {{red|red herrings}} which disrupt the discussion. This article should be based on the research on Goths by the foremost experts, including archaeolgists, historians and philologists. Your proposal involves the removal of the sources from these experts and their replacement with weaker ones which support the fringe viewpoint. Such removal is essentially what you have been proposing repeatedly for more than a year, using a supposed need for "simplicity" as justification. ] (]) 16:00, 2 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:= Wolfram 1990, p. 12. | |||
:::::That is not a valid excuse. However, I'll agree with one thing:- The "Goths are Swedes" theory, which only comes from Jordanes, and features ''Berig'', and which you have made the central theme of this article while pretending it is from modern archaeologists, is indeed a long term controversy among most editors of this article, and has indeed been raised before by me and others in different contexts before. You are right about that. But I repeat that this draft is a first attempt to make a quite carefully sourced compromise based on a wide range of editing opinions and a careful reassessment of the sources. {{red|Please let discussion go ahead?}}--] (]) 16:37, 2 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:= Heather 2018, p. 673. | |||
*'''Support''' With the caveat that my knowledge and depth on this is insufficient for a thorough confident answer. <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> (]) 13:38, 2 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:In the Gothic language of the Ostrogothic Kingdom in Italy, the Goths were called the *Gut-þiuda "Gothic people" (attested as dative singular Gut-þiudai). | |||
::Your feedback is precious. Are there any bits you throught particularly strong or weak?--] (]) 14:39, 2 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:= Lehmann 1986, pp. 163–164. | |||
*I was on the losing side of both RFCs. I do not share the community's view of how to make this article better or even of what is wrong with it. Therefore, I have no opinion on the implementation of the RFCs. ] (]) 00:33, 3 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The simplex variant of this name, *Gutans, or possibly *Gutôs, is inferred from a presumed genitive plural form gutani in the Pietroassa inscription. The Demonym is also attested in Greek as γόθοι, γότθοι, γόθθοι and in Latin as Gothi. | |||
::{{re|Srnec}} I do not think the RFCs above are clear enough about details to say your position "lost", and I also can't believe that you would say the differences between the two proposals currently being made have no connection to the points you made. My draft was made after your rejection of the one made by Krakkos. I also looked at the way other editors all referenced your opinions (e.g. {{u|Carlstak}}{{u|SMcCandlish}}). Could you double check what I am proposing? I suppose BTW you are referring to your two comments here: . Honestly I counted your opinions as having received a lot of support and I have tried to work to ''reduce'' "obsessive focus on origins", and the use of selected snippets about topics which can only be properly handled in dedicated article or articles.--] (]) 06:44, 3 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:= Braune, Wilhelm (1912). Gotische Grammatik (in German). V. Niemeyer. {{color|red|<I take it that you can not read this, right {{ping|Krakkos}}? It would be better to have a newer source though, like Thomas Andersson, above. Also, the defender of this passage Krakkos does not understand what it is saying, even in English, so how will our readers handle it?>}} | |||
Adding a note and also responding to Andrew's question, the caveat in my post is because I have not taken the deep dive needed to thoroughly learn the article, proposed changes and situation well enough to give full-fledged opinions. If y'all think that extra input is needed, I'd be happy to do that. Sincerely, <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> (]) 16:06, 3 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The word "Goths" derives from the stem Gutan-. {{color|red|<actually I understand there are two parts. -an- is clearly a separable part which does NOT appear in "Goths"/''Goti''.>}} | |||
:Personally I think the more detailed feedback that can be given the better. Having a draft rejected is no problem but a more important aim is gathering feedback and new perspectives.--] (]) 19:51, 3 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:This stem produces the singular *Gutô, plural *Gutaniz in Proto-Germanic. It survives in the modern Scandinavian tribal name Gutes, which is what the inhabitants of the present-day Swedish island Gotland in Baltic Sea call themselves (In Gutnish - Gutar, in Swedish "Gotlänningar"). | |||
:= Wolfram 1990, pp. 19-24. | |||
OK, I took a deeper dive. My first more detailed comment is on the half of the RFC dealing with the lead. I think that the specific question is substitution of the linked "column 4" for the current lead. IMO this would be a good move, with the understanding that this doesn't "lock in" the whole thing but leaves it open to tweaks. The lead should be a summary of the article. In comparison. the current lead is more of a blizzard of factoids that is hard to absorb and the column 4 looks like a easier-to-read summary. Since the lead should be a summary of the article, there should not be anything in the lead that is not in the article so removal of the old lead should not result in any loss of material. But you might want to double check that or possibly you did already. Sincerely, <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> (]) 21:15, 3 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Another modern Scandinavian tribal name, Geats (in Swedish "Götar"), which is what the (original) inhabitants of present-day Götaland call themselves, derives from a related Proto-Germanic word, *Gautaz (plural *Gautôz). Both *Gautaz and *Gutô relate to the Proto-Germanic verb *geutaną, meaning "to pour". {{color|red|<Any normal reader is now going to wonder if the above explanation was wrong, or what the connection to this new completely different looking explanation.>}} | |||
:I would agree with that step forward. Krakkos made it, and so presumably would not be opposed to that step either.--] (]) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
: = Compare modern Swedish gjuta (pour, perfuse, found), modern Dutch gieten, modern German gießen, Gothic giutan, old Scandinavian giota, old English geotan all cognate with Latin fondere "to pour" and old Greek cheo "I pour". {{color|red|<Do we need this in an article about Goths, and if we do then why only in a footnote?>}} | |||
:The Proto-Indo-European root of the word "geutan" and its cognates in other language is *gʰewd-. | |||
:::First, Srnec is a well-respected editor whose edits I've seen on many articles concerning historical topics on my watchlist. I can't remember that I've ever disagreed with an edit that he made, but if I did, I know that he would have a well-reasoned explanation of his thinking. I don't have time now to delve into this, but I know that Srnec's thoughts always deserve consideration—he is knowledgeable and expresses himself quite well. | |||
: = "gheu-". The American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language. Retrieved 18 September 2019. {{color|red|<This whole section starts vague and then disintegrates into high school notes.>}} | |||
:This same root may be connected to the name of a river that flows through Västergötland in Sweden, the Göta älv, which drains Lake Vänern into the Kattegat at the city of Gothenburg. | |||
:::One day years in the future some Wikipedian will do a forensic analysis of the voluminous discussion on this talk page and its continuing stasis. That person will be amazed and perhaps lose his or her sanity from contemplating all the ever-increasing gigabytes of argument. May he or she rest in peace—that's what I'm going to do.;-) ] (]) 02:04, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:= Wolfram 1990, pp. 19-24. | |||
::::{{re|Carlstak}} I propose that in order to avoid problems with the undead, ignore the whole history of the talk page and just read the short and simple draft? '''Any kind of feedback might help.''' The proposal does not require a re-reading of every debate because this simple single change is easy and uncontroversial to summarize: {{red|a big reduction of everything concerning speculations about the origins of the Goths before the third century}} (as {{u|Srnec}} requested). The people who don't like it agree that this is what is doing.--] (]) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:It is plausible that a flowing river would be given a name that describes it as "pouring", and that, if the original home of the Goths was near that river, they would choose an ethnonym that described them as living by the river. Another possibility is that the name of the "Geats" developed independently from that of the Gutar/Goths. {{color|red|Seems like a paywall article. I have doubts about whether WP should be giving this speculation.}} | |||
:::::I'm glad you have a sense of humor, Andrew. Please understand that I'm a bit zombified myself these days—I'm not quite running on all cylinders and just don't have much spare time. I read your shorter draft, compared it to the other, and find the short version to be much better—it's concise and less confusing, although I thought we had consensus that excessive footnoting with quotes from the referenced authors was not desirable. ] (]) 03:40, 5 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:="Götar". Nationalencyklopedin. Retrieved 18 September 2019. Link given: https://www.ne.se/uppslagsverk/encyklopedi/l%C3%A5ng/g%C3%B6tar | |||
::::::{{re|Carlstak}} It's a good point about having a sense of humour. Helps a lot with this article, and I don't think it is just you but maybe even our whole community which is getting a bit tired of some types of work (and yes we are all getting older, and apparently we are not doing well recruiting young people). Just on the footnotes, as far as I am concerning all the direct quotes can be removed (or reduced), but realistically I kept them in for discussion of the draft because we have a long history on this article (like Germanic peoples) of a specific argument that reduction of this is un-sourced, or even "removing quality sources". How do we stop the bots from removing the RFC template while discussion is on-going?--] (]) 07:57, 5 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The name "Goths" would eventually come to be applied to a large number of non-Gothic peoples, including Burgundians, Vandals, Gepids, Rugii, Scirii and even the non-Germanic Iranian Alans. On the basis of linguistics, these peoples, with the exception of the Alans, are often referred to as East Germanic peoples. | |||
:::::::{{Done}} As you can see, I've added the "RFCBot Ignore Expired" tag to the page. ] (]) 15:37, 5 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:=Wolfram 1990, pp. 19-20. | |||
* Resolve the earlier-opened RfC first, then, yes, let's get on with it ("it" being some combination of what's been proposed so far and whatever comes out of that other RfC). I think this is a good summary of the current consensus, based on past RfCs not counting that still-open one: "The previous RFCs decided that the 3 controversial sections about possible Gothic origins before the 3rd century should be shortened, because other articles." <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 11:32, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
*::{{re|SMcCandlish}} which RFC do you say is open? Which question is unanswered? Please clarify. I am glad you agree with my summary, but don't quite follow.--] (]) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
*:::I was responding to "Changes to the initial parts of the ] (Origins) section are currently being discussed at an earlier RfC found at ]. I doubt whether it is helpful to have two ongoing RfCs on essentially the same question. We should probably resolve the earlier RfC before we "move ahead" with its conclusions." If that's now also closed, then let's integrate the results of it with previous results. I tend to agree with: "The previous RFCs made it clear that there was a consensus not to ''remove'' such information from Misplaced Pages, but to focus upon it more in other articles." But the devil is in the details of how to shift focus and narrow scope. I tend to agree at least in spirit with this, too: "Interconnected RfCs should be handled in a reasonable order one step at the time. Making a new RfC with a request to "move ahead" with a counter proposal to a ] being ] is problematic." But I'm not sure that's a 100% accurate description. Regardless, I see enough blowback already to think that this new RfC is a bust. It would probably be most productive to prepare a draft revision based on the previous RfCs and then see if it meets with approval. Give us all something concrete to look at instead of more of the same arguments. They're getting hard to follow except for people really focused on this particular page. When I say we should get on with it, I mean get on with improving the article, which is a content endeavor not more talk-page argument. PS: ] is stuck at exactly the same stage of the same process: lots of discussion and "voting" about how to revise, but a need to just write the revision, with everyone's concerns in mind and balanced to the extent possible, then put that draft up and see if it sticks as the new base from which we'll work moving forward. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 11:58, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::{{re|SMcCandlish}} I can't follow, and I think one of us is misunderstanding the situation. According to me you are referring to a closed RFC as open. Also you are proposing that the next logical step is that someone should propose a new draft. ''That is exactly what this RFC is?'' In terms of the older draft of Krakkos, Krakkos called in an admin to close all the older RFCs, not me, but I've continued to remind editors that this draft also still exists. (The result of this RFC could also be a hybrid or something based on new ideas.) I also don't understand your reference to blowback EXCEPT in the inevitable sense that Krakkos and Berig do not agree with the opinions of other editors in the previous RFCs (as per the summary you agree with) and would prefer the article to keep the Goths-are-Swedes theme of the controversial opening sections. That is of course a disagreement which goes back long before I ever worked on this article, and one where both editors believe ideology-driven academia is partly to blame, and are waiting for new DNA evidence to prove them right. We can't expect any consensus that will resolve that disagreement at this time? I believe however we can come to a happier compromise if the ''academic'' versions of the Swedish proposal can be properly discussed in a more specialized article. I think most of believe trying to fit the MAIN discussion of that here is just never going to really work?--] (]) 13:52, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::If I'm misreading something, I'll just sit out for a while. Anyway, I don't think the present thread is going to come to an active consensus to do anything, and stick to my advice to work on a draft and try to get buy-in on it (taking editorial suggestions to work toward a compromise version). <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 10:28, 7 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::{{re|SMcCandlish}} This thread ''is'' meant to be an RFC about a specific draft. For any such draft RFC to work, indeed we need some feedback and "editorial suggestions". (That would also apply to any future draft.) ''So feedback is what is needed now.'' So far, this draft has had more positive feedback than the drafts of Krakkos in the previous RFC. The only criticism about my draft so far is from Krakkos who suggests my draft should have more footnotes. (Berig disagrees with the whole aim of shortening the origins discussions. That is not a criticism specific to any draft.)--] (]) 12:17, 7 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::This is far too much meta-discussion about my own input/viewpoint. I'm not in control of this discussion or any processes. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 16:10, 19 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::{{re|SMcCandlish}}, I can't really follow these occasional remarks, but the fact is that this RFC is now at a point where simple feedback (positive and/or negative) about the proposed draft is what would be most helpful. --] (]) 20:30, 19 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I can support the Krakkos lead, for its concision, and your Origins section, for its appropriate post-lead detail and sourcing, which is nevertheless more concise than what we started all this to revise. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 00:23, 20 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I agree with SMcCandlish on these points; they are my sentiments exactly. ] (]) 00:56, 20 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Thanks for the feedback {{re|SMcCandlish}} and {{re|Carlstak}}. I am not 100% clear what "more concise than what we started all this to revise" means. Does mean you find my draft to be on the short side? As background, feedback from {{u|Srnec}} on the previous drafts from Krakkos was pushing for a shorter version, as I understood it. Anything you think needs changing?--] (]) 06:28, 20 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::I don't mean that it's too short; rather, it is short enough . I.e., good job. If Srnec and someone else want to tighten it even further, I don't object, but I like how source-dense it is for the amount of verbiage, and how much verbiage it leaves for other articles to get into. <span style="white-space:nowrap;font-family:'Trebuchet MS'"> — ] ] ] 😼 </span> 05:29, 5 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Well, maybe one step towards simplification would be to do the change to the lead if there is a consensus or no objections. <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> (]) 12:09, 4 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{Closed rfc bottom}} | |||
== re-appearance of DNA section == | |||
I have removed the following which was added by what I understand to be a single topic IP editor with an interest in Swedish topics: | |||
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|DNA evidence seems to be consistent with the traditional perspective described by Jordanes of a Scandinavian migration. The DNA comparison shows the Gothic populations DNA structure is similar to southern Scandinavia. It is unclear if the Oksywie culture was replaced by the Goths or created by the Goths. Before the Gothic immigration, the DNA of Central Europe was different and more diverse. Exactly how this migration happened could not be reached. The study published in 2019 seem to confirm the notion that Goths originated in southern Sweden and Denmark. But the study also cites more research in archaeology and genetics is needed to gain a greater understanding of exactly how the Gothic migrations influenced the history of the region. The study studied populations from different periods and DNA structure in Northern Poland changed due to an influx of immigrants. In Kowalewko in Poland, the Gothic newcomers 200 AD had significantly different DNA from previous locals that inhabited the region. <ref> https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-019-43183-w </ref> <ref> https://www.researchgate.net/publication/332781862_Goth_migration_induced_changes_in_the_matrilineal_genetic_structure_of_the_central-east_European_population </ref> | |||
The spread of the Scandinavian I1 Dna group is also closely linked to the Migration period during the collapse of the Roman empire. Current research shows that before the Goths migrated ] was confined exclusively to Scandinavia. The migration of the Goths resulted in the spread of the genes outside of Scandinavia for the first time. Goths buried in Italy shared genetic affinity with modern-day Scandinavians also having a dominant I1 gene. <ref> Teska M, Michalowski A (2014). "Connection between Wielkopolska and the Baltic Sea Region in the Roman Iron Age". www.semanticscholar.org. S2CID 56295624. Retrieved 2020-12-10.</ref> | |||
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After many previous discussions, similar material was previously removed by {{u|Srnec}}. Concerned raised included ], ], ], ], ]. Archived discussions: , , . The section being expanded this way is also recently agreed to be one needing trimming, because focus on such speculative topics about pre Goths has been a significant distraction from the main topic .--] (]) 07:31, 30 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
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== Goths = Gutones and similar assumptions == | |||
But the large concentration around Rome is persistent with the Gothic sack of Rome. Over 15 per cent of I1 DNA in modern times. I1 only became dominant around 500 BC in Scandinavia. The fact that modern-day Romans have 15 per cent I1 is probably due to the Goths settling down in Rome. Before the migration period, modern-day Romans lacked I1 DNA. Know they have 15 per cent which is huge and do not indicate a small case migration of elite. The Goths buried in Rome also show Genetic affinity with modern-day Scandinavians with a dominant I1 gene not common in Germany Poland, or elsewhere. The DNA evidence suggests the Goths did migrate en mass from Scandinavia. Modern-day British populations also have 15 per cent I1 DNA thanks to the Vikings and Anglo Saxon migration from Scandinavia. Fifteen per cent around Rome is a very high number if you take into consideration 1500 years have passed and that modern-day Romans have so much Scandinavian heritage. Where did it come from if not the Goths? The German populations have 15 per cent so if they had sacked Rome the I1 spread would have been lower. For example, France or modern-day Frenchmen— conquered by the more German Franks have far less I1 DNA. | |||
*The lead jumps straight into making a simple equation between the Gutones in Tacitus, living on the Vistula, and the Goths in the Ukraine centuries later. This simple equation is not how our better sources explain it, and in fact this is uncertain. | |||
Only a pure Scandinavian group could have made Rome so incredibly Scandinavian. The Genetic evidence shows the Goths are almost identical to modern Swedes. Also the fact that the DNA | |||
*The etymology section has apparently been written to back this up with mention of a Gutone-like form on an inscription. You only need to read the WP article to see that this inscription is also uncertain. | |||
*Missing the uncertainty also means missing some of the colour. Our better sources describe the Goths as a mixed people. We also seem to be missing the whole concept of "Gothic peoples" which existed (i.e. Goths plus similar peoples, some of whom probably did not speak Germanic languages). | |||
*Another result of simplification is that lead treats the Visi/Ostro distinction as something which already existed in the Ukraine or even Poland. Did it?--] (]) 16:20, 15 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:: I agree with you that this is a bit of a confused article, could benefit from a thorough and critical rewrite. Small note though regarding the second bullet point - it is important to note that the part of the ] that is uncertain is not really the ''gutan-'' part, it's mainly the ''-iowi-'' part ''hailag'', too, is fairly unambiguous). The link with ''gutthiuda'' is also not particularly problematic. — ] (] · ]) 17:55, 16 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::: But still, it seems at least one proposal disagrees? Do do this well we ideally need sources which not only give proposals (there might be hundreds) but which also help explain what the current consensus or majority opinion in. Not always possible, but if you know of any...--] (]) 22:07, 16 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
Here is what Peter Heather says about one issue in this article (Heather, Peter (2012). Empires and Barbarians: The Fall of Rome and the Birth of Europe, page 199):--] (]) 09:26, 17 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:the immigrants had come across the Danube in two separate groups: Tervingi and Greuthungi. This distinction disappeared, in my view, by 395, in another by 408. But the date is a matter of detail. North of the Danube, the Greuthungi and Tervingi had been entirely separate political entities. Within a generation of crossing the Danube, the distinction disappeared. | |||
Another example of the pattern of misleading/hidden content in this article is the way in which the Hlöðskviða is treated as straightforward history in this article, and fitted together with Ammianus Marcellinus.--] (]) 13:46, 24 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks {{ping|Krakkos}} for looking at this, but to be clear, one concern here is that I would understand it the events in the saga can not simply be dated and connected to a single real conflict? That is what the inclusion of this material in the section where it now is, would seem to imply though?--] (]) 16:35, 24 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::I'm looking into it. But it will take some time. ] (]) 16:36, 24 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
Concerning origins myths, they should of course be mentioned. But apart from Jordanes and his Gutones story there were also other parts of Jordanes. And there were also Procopius and Isidor of Seville, who had things to say about the origins of the Goths.--] (]) 13:51, 24 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:Concerning origins narratives, Christensen, cited below, has a very detailed analysis.--] (]) 08:15, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::Our foremost sources on the Goths, ] and ], consider the Gutones ancestral to the Goths. In his 2018 entry on the Goths in '']'', Heather classifies the Goths as a "Germanic tribe". Divisions among the Goths are first attested in the 3rd century AD, and this article reflects this. The article doesn't discusses divisions into ] and ] until after the Hunnic invasion in the late 4th century, which is in accordance with reliable sources such as Heather. ] (]) 13:37, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::No, that dictionary is not a "foremost source", and what are you talking about? It would be ridiculous to base this article on that source only, and the community won't allow that way of working. Please be more reasonable and practical. There are several significant content-based content concerns listed above. Please address them in a practical, constructive and policy-based way rather than trying to trump them with some artificial concept of a "foremost source" that no other editor has recognized.--] (]) 20:05, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::To help you understand how RS discussions work, for example on RSN. Can you name any respectable source in this field which ''cites'' ''The Oxford Dictionary of Late Antiquity'' as an authority? Does Heather himself ever do it? Wolfram? Pohl? Goffart? Liebeschuetz? Halsall? You have to be able to show a practical and effective reputation. Goffart is on the other hand cited respectfully by everyone. If you want an example of an encyclopedic source in this field which is treated with respect, there is of course the Reallexikon der Germanischen Altertumskunde, which cites all of the above types of chaps, and also, BTW, Christensen, and Rübekeil. ''That'' is how we work on Misplaced Pages when we write articles.--] (]) 20:15, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::{{ping|Krakkos}} your editing today has gone even further in the direction of basing all sourcing on one preferred author. You have written quite a lot about how you know that there are quite a lot of scholars who disagree with that author. Obviously the article's content is controversial while it stays like this.--] (]) 19:13, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{ping|Krakkos}} and today also, despite everything, the article becomes more and more just based short dictionary articles by Peter Heather - one author who has not yet written about a lot of widely cited works in the 21st century on this topic, and whose specialist works on this topic, at least that we've found so far, were in the 1980s and 1990s. Instead, the article needs broader sourcing, reflecting the whole field. Your edits are deliberately going in this direction, as shown by you various comments about Goffart etc, so the word "censorship" really does come to mind in this case.--] (]) 13:22, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
== Goths and Gutones again == | |||
They also found almost all Goths remains buried in Italy being genetically related to Scandinavians. https://www.eupedia.com/europe/Haplogroup_I1_Y-DNA.shtml | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} The new second sentence still states as a simple fact, in effect, that the Goths were the Gutones, with no mention of controversy: | |||
::Eupedia and various discussion forums are the better places to discuss such speculative ideas. Here on Misplaced Pages we have a more boring aim, of just summarizing what holds fields agree upon, and/or what they are debating. Even that is complex enough. :) Individual research papers are can not be used to summarize a whole field, but for better or worse Misplaced Pages's community grudgingly accepts them to be reported in specialist articles on human population research, archaeology and so on. (Concerns about this have been posted regularly over the years.) This article is not one of those, because it has enough to do just covering the very rich topic of the Goths as known from history, but there are some related articles where we are reporting some of these things. However, a secondary problem we have had is that Wikipedians have been adding their own conclusions and not just giving a neutral report of these research papers. That is definitely against our core content policies, and something to do on other websites, not this one.--] (]) 11:15, 30 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:They are first documented by Roman writers in the 1st century AD as living along the lower Vistula | |||
This is obviously referring to the Goths=Gutones theory. (There is a citation to Heather, but with no page number, and also the sentence has two parts. In any case I think Heather and Wolfram are indeed authors who accept this theory to some extent, even if they also might not agree with the wording we have.) Most write-ups of this theory are more cautious than Heather and Wolfram, but both of them are arguably also more cautious than our sentence. Examples of stronger criticism of this theory, which are certainly not rare or limited to any small group of scholars: | |||
*{{citation|first=Ludwig |last=Rübekeil |chapter=Scandinavia in the light of ancient tradition |pages=594-604 |url=https://books.google.be/books?id=PBKxhq2p0PgC |title=The Nordic Languages |volume= 1 |year=2002 |editor-last1=Bandle}} | |||
**Rübekeil also gives a different etymology than WP. | |||
*{{cite book|first=Arne Søby |last=Christensen |title=Cassiodorus, Jordanes and the History of the Goths: Studies in a Migration Myth |year=2002|url=https://books.google.be/books?id=AcLDHOqOt4cC}} | |||
**Long and positive review by Ian Wood which goes into many details: http://www.dendanskehistoriskeforening.dk//pdf_histtid/103_2/465.pdf | |||
I think the wording should therefore be modified.--] (]) 07:48, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:I have modified the lead. However, ] and ] are certainly more reliable sources on the Goths than Rübekeil and Christensen. In his 2018 article on the Goths for ], Heather mentions no doubts about the equation between the Goths and Gutones. | |||
::I don't see how you can say Heather and Wolfram somehow trump Rübekeil and Christensen on this particular topic? Both Heather and Wolfram on this topic defer to the field, and talk about what "philologists" etc, think. Rübekeil and Christensen are people who get cited for specialist works on it (and there are not many) so the type of people the other two are deferring to. | |||
::Anyway, even if they were "better", it would make no difference: WP sourcing is not "winner take all" and we must NOT pick winners, when we know there is significant controversy. | |||
::Concerning the Oxford book, as mentioned many times tertiary works are generally not the best sources for resolving how to write up a subject where there is a controversy - especially, of course, when they are the type which does not mention controversies, because, to say it again, on WP we MUST report controversies. (In contrast, some of the German resources on topics like this give very detailed literature reviews concerning all the latest debates.) | |||
::In summary, the WP norms on this type of issue are really indisputable.--] (]) 13:57, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::This issue is a question of ]. As ] has phrased it, due weight is best determined through references from "commonly accepted ]". The highest-quality reference text on the Goths is Peter Heather's article on them in the 2018 edition of the ''The Oxford Dictionary of Late Antiquity''. No high-quality reference texts mention any doubts about the connection between the Gutones and Goths, and such doubts should therefore not be given much weight in the lead. ] (]) 14:06, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::No you are apparently misunderstanding the normal policy interpretations and community consensus, either ] or ]. Secondly, you have not at all shown that Heather's Dictionary article is the "commonly accepted reference work" or the "highest quality". The articles by Rübekeil and Christensen are widely cited by various expert writers as specialists on ''this specific topic'', at the very highest level of writing. Experts in this field OTOH do NOT generally cite Oxford, Cambridge or Britannica reference articles. And consider ]. Heather and Wolfram are bigger in sales and have a high status overall, but in the sections you are citing they defer to the specialists. We can get community feedback from ] if necessary but honestly there is no doubt about this IMHO. | |||
::::OTOH, thirdly the most important general point to please understand is that the threshold for saying that a whole group of strong sources are worse enough than some others to ''not be mentioned at all'' is also ''much'' higher than just saying that the source is a bit less strong in terms of book sales or University positions or whatever. Rübekeil and Christensen are certainly not ], which is what you seem to be arguing. --] (]) 15:02, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::BTW, I only gave two sources just to save time. I honestly did not think anyone would argue like this, given that WP is really even being written much more strongly than Wolfram or Heather to begin with. For one of the sources I even gave a review article, to confirm its status, but I also could have given more examples of reviews and comments especially about the Christensen article, and I could have given more sources which agree with a similar position. How far do we need to take this discussion? Consider also ]. You are not proposing a mere "balancing question" but the total censorship of a very highly discussed and respected position (similar to your arguments about Goffart). Honestly, you will not be able to make any stable articles if you continually try insisting on something so extreme. It is very far from the norms of this community. --] (]) 15:21, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::I'm not advocating any "total censorship", but minority positions should not be given undue weight, particularly not in the lead. The theory that the Gutones and the ] are unconnected to the Goths is contradicted by our best sources on the subject (], ]), and isn't mentioned at all in any of our best reference works (Heather, ], ]). These sources flatly equate the Gutones/Wielbark culture with the Goths, and thus take a stronger position than this article does. We are not "experts in the field", but volunteers writing an encyclopedia, and must therefore take due weight into account, which as Jimbo has said, is best determined through examining "commonly accepted ]." ] (]) 18:45, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::In other words, you are really advocating that due weight means "all or nothing" and really that ''would'' be censorship (zero mention) of the less popular opinion, no matter who cites it. That is really, really not going to work on WP if you keep trying this, and mentioning Jimbo is ridiculous to be honest. No normal editor on Misplaced Pages will agree with this approach, and neither will Jimbo. Get over it. Please ''make sure'' you mention the ''respectable'' minority positions whenever you write any article. If not, then it will just be a very long and hard process which will never work out well. | |||
:::::::But secondly, what would be a policy-based argument that your preferred sources are better than the ones which disagree? None. You have given no such policy-based argument. You have none. If it were really all or nothing, many of your favourite theories would be up for deletion. You seem to just see WP as a ] where you have to push out other opinions and get yours to dominate. Why do you say Heather is number one, and Goffart, for example, can be ignored? Such a position makes not policy sense at all. If you have a rational argument, explain it. Goffart is surely in the running for being ''the most prominent writer in this whole subject area'', and your way of writing about him has nothing to do with that of your favorites Heather or Wolfram or Liebeschuetz, who are clearly all heavily influenced by him. Nor have we even gone into the subject of what the German sources say, and your sources all cite the German sources. | |||
:::::::Thirdly on a point of detail, the question we are discussing is not about the relevance of Wielbark and archaeology. I don't see much dissent about the archaeological evidence, but more about whether we can specifically say that Goths=Guthones. Wielbark is not the name of a people. It is an archaeological material culture. The way you equate languages and material cultures and peoples is definitely something no serious author in the 21st century is doing any more. | |||
:::::::...Let me know if you insist on any of these points and then we can try to word a question together for one of the community discussion groups. If you were right though, we would then have to start deleting a lot of things you are writing into the articles. --] (]) 19:58, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::You have to use more sources and reflect what the field says. You can't just cite one source all the time.--] (]) 21:02, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::This article cites plenty of diverse sources, with weight given to the ]. Check the reflist. | |||
::::::::If ] is the preeminent scholar on the Goths, it seems strange that ''none'' of our best ]s mention his ] or list him as a source. | |||
::::::::That the Wielbark culture is to be equated with the Goths and related Germanic groups is the consensus of opinion in scholarship:{{talkquote|"s now '''generally accepted''' that the Wielbark culture incorporated areas that, in the first two centuries ad, were dominated by Goths, Rugi and other Germani... he Wielbark and Przeworsk systems have come to be understood as thoroughly dominated by Germanic-speakers..." - {{cite book |last1=Heather |first1=Peter |author-link1=Peter Heather |translator-last1= |translator-first1= |translator-link1= |year=2012 |orig-year= |chapter= |trans-chapter= |chapter-url= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |title=Empires and Barbarians: The Fall of Rome and the Birth of Europe |trans-title= |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=suwVDAAAQBAJ |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page= |pages=104, 679 |doi= |isbn=9780199892266 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |quote= |ref=}}}} | |||
::::::::I have no interest in any ]. We recently had a bitter edit war at ], and as soon as i backed down you completely rewrote the article. That article still has serious issues with original research, lack of sourcing and neutrality as a result of your editing. Instead of fixing the serious issues of that article, you have instead followed me to this one, an article which you have never edited before, and which is in the midst of a ] review. It seems clear that you're the one who has a ]. ] (]) 21:17, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Amazing answer avoidance. Again, you can't just name your favorite dictionary article as a "reference work". ''Has anyone ever cited it?'' Does any other Wikipedian even see it as an authority? Rule of thumb based on ] which can help avoid battles and create table articles.... | |||
*Publications which are never cited by anyone (outside WP) are ''not'' normally reference works or authorities. | |||
*Publications which are commonly cited by experts, are ''not'' the types of articles you should ''ever'' be censoring. Make sure you mention their positions in a fair and balanced way, and certainly do not ever delete all mention of them. | |||
:::::::::Also: I am watching a lot of articles connected to Germanic peoples now. Logical. Of course your own posts have constantly pointed out to me that there are other WP articles that you work on, which all have similarities. Some are split off from Germanic peoples. I think it is logical that groups of articles should be coordinated and not have completely different approaches. OTOH If you can explain any problems about ''my work'' on Germanic peoples, in terms of real policy, sourcing, logic, grammar, spelling, etc, that other people can understand, do so, on that talk page. Constructive feedback would be great. Last I heard your position was that what you think of as Goffart's opinions should not be mentioned there. In general your approach there was not constructive but a ].-] (]) 21:41, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::...and your Heather quote does not mention Gutones. Remember to read what you are replying to.--] (]) 21:51, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::] doesn't mention the Gutones, because he obviously equates them with the Goths. '']'' is certainly a reliable source. I'm not advocating any "censorship", but we must take ] into account when writing articles. What exactly are the changes you are proposing? ] (]) 10:05, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::No one is saying that this Oxford Dict is not reliable for anything, but it is a very big and serious call to be saying that a very commonly held scholarly position ('''doubt about Goths = Gutones''') should be not mentioned at all (so yes, censored). And this source you keep mentioning is not only un-cited by anyone, it does not even discuss the question. | |||
::::::::::::...So it clearly can not justify a censorship of other positions. ''So evidently these doubts need to be discussed in our article.'' By the way, not many specialist authors have addressed the Gutones equation in any detail since 2002. I think Christensen is the last book really focused on this, unless you count Goffart. Goffart describes it as the latest work on the topic ( p.265 ). Christensen has been cited and reviewed quite a few times, and I have not yet found any which brought counter arguments on this specific issue - not by Heather or Wolfram either? | |||
:::::::::::::And to repeat, these doubts do not necessarily deny a connection to the Wielbark culture, but only the very over-exact story based on Jordanes's version, which even Wolfram admits to be chronologically impossible (which is why he says there must have been several related tribes with similar names, and that the movements of peoples were small elite groups). As I have mentioned a few times, your combative way of pushing your preferred sources actually makes you write things up very differently (more extreme, less cautious, over-simplified) than the scholars you agree with.--] (]) 11:03, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
One more source I own, and have been reading, which was published after Christensen, cites him, and does discuss the question here: | |||
*{{citation|last=Steinacher|url=https://books.google.be/books?id=RIt4DwAAQBAJ|first=Roland|title=Rom und die Barbaren. Völker im Alpen- und Donauraum (300-600) |year=2017}} | |||
On page 48, roughly summarizing, he says that historians now dare to ask how and in which way the Gutones, starting in the 3rd century, might have been related to the so called Gothic peoples. Names and groups who used them should not be treated as the same without critical examination. The continuities and connections between the Wielbark culture and the Goths of the 4th century accepted, the relationships were more complex. The only thing sure is that the Goten/Gutonen/Gauten, as with the Rugii name, carried prestige and was prominent. Archaeology is basically in agreement that in the 2nd half of the 2nd century, culture and funeral norms from the Vistula area were similar to those from the northern edge of the pontic Steppe zone. What is debated is whether the reason for these parallels is the mobility of small bands, or large migration movements (as used to be generally accepted), or simply a culture transfer. For the traditional account, Jordanes plays a role. Archaeology can help? He then discusses the archaeological evidence, and concludes that the Goths show a lot of older local traditions along with influence of BOTH Wielbark and Przeworsk.--] (]) 12:04, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:BTW I am wondering if our article is not downplaying Przeworsk (possibly Vandals) too much as a possible vector of cultural transmission.--] (]) 12:06, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::I am also surprised we are using this source, and in fact using it quite a bit for quite unusual wording compared to what the real doubts of scholars are (like Goffart and Christensen):--] (]) 12:47, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
* {{cite web |url=https://www.ancient.eu/Goths/ |url-access= |title=The Goths |last1=Mark |first1=Joshua J. |author-link1= |date=October 12, 2014 |orig-year= |editor-last1= |editor-first1= |editor1= |editor-link1= |editor2-last= |editor2-first= |editor2-link= |editors= |department= |website=] |series= |publisher= |agency= |location= |page= |pages= |at= |language= |trans-title= |type= |format= |bibcode= |doi= |isbn= |jstor= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |access-date=September 17, 2019 |via= |quote= |ref=harv |subscription= |registration=}} | |||
::It looks like a online/paywall non-scholarly history magazine?--] (]) 12:47, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
Perhaps useful. Shows an example of Christensen being cited as important in a "reference work"; Reallexicon de Germanischen Altertumskunde: | |||
*{{citation|chapter=De nordgermanische Sprachzweig|title=Altertumskunde – Altertumswissenschaft – Kulturwissenschaft: Erträge und Perspektiven nach 40 Jahren Reallexicon de Germanischen Altertumskunde |editor-first1=Heinrich |editor-last1=Beck |editor-first2= Dieter |editor-last2=Geuenich |editor-first3= Heiko |editor-last3=Steuer|url=https://books.google.be/books?id=IvxfAHpY9TkC|first=Thorsten|last=Andersson|year=2012}} | |||
Roughly (p.235): A migration of the *gutaniz and other tribes out of Scandinavia has long been generally accepted, whereby we now mean a tradition-bearing "Kerne", in the wake of Wenskus, Wolfram and Pohl. Such migrations are however more recently strongly in question. Partly, this could be a reaction to earlier emphasis on Scandinavia. More difficult is perhaps the increasing criticism of Jordanes' legendary presentation of the gothic migration out of Scandinavia. Jordanes will thus be deliberately left out. My argumentation...--] (]) 14:38, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
== Supposed evidence from the Sagas == | |||
That proves the at least partial Scandinavian origins of the Goths. Is not better than to for example research something else about World war 2 or some other topic needing attention... <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 17:48, 30 May 2021 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Xsign --> | |||
It seems concerning that WP is not only stating as a simple fact that the Goths appear in Norse Gutasaga, which is not clear at all, but that this is being given as the FIRST bit of evidence concerning the origins of the Goths, before Graeco-Roman literature and archaeology?--] (]) 09:05, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:The relevance of the ] to the origins of the Goths is mentioned by ]. I have moved the section in question down below those on archaeological, literary and genetic evidence. ] (]) 13:27, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::I would say "possible relevance" but indeed I am not suggesting removing all mention, just re-sequencing it. I realize you are working on these sections bit by bit anyway, and I am making notes here on that basis. (I have edited one sub-section about classical authors you did not get to yet and added more sources to it, etc. Hopefully that will help integrate it into whatever structure you come up with. Actually I am not sure if the classical authors should be before or after Jordanes and the other origo writers. Readers need to consider them together in a sense?)--] (]) 14:00, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::Thanks for adding additional primary sources from ], ] and ]. I think the separation of Jordanes from the sections including earlier classical writers is fine. Jordanes deals with information on Gothic origins, while the classical writers write on contemporary affairs. ] (]) 14:18, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::Yes, but discussions about whether to believe anything in Jordanes revolve around those old authors, and discussions about whether the old authors say anything clearly relevant to the later Goths revolve around Jordanes. I am not saying the two sections need to be mixed though, only that the two sections should be written with an eye to the other. Probably they should be next to each other?--] (]) 14:51, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} I see a new problem introduced by your recent edits, connected to this Saga issue. | |||
{{talkquote|Evidence from ] and the ] suggests connections with ] and the ].<Wolfram|1990|p=23>}} | |||
*Yes, the evidence from etymology is what is used. | |||
*No, the Gutasaga might sometimes be mentioned in passing but it is rarely if ever the actual evidence being used to argue for something. In any case implying that it is would be a bad distortion of how the field writes. I do not think it should be mentioned in this way, which implies that it is strong evidence, arguably a "proof". I think it is only ever seen as a possible "confirmation". (If A is true as discussed, then B can be explained by it.) | |||
Here, BTW, is what Wolfram, your preferred source here, really writes: | |||
{{talkquote|"the question is not whether Scandinavia was the "original homeland of the Goths"; at best it is whether certain Gothic clans came from the north across the Baltic Sea to the Continent". (p.37)}} | |||
I think our readers are having this point censored from them. Your use of your favourite citations, as has been pointed out to you many times, distorts and caricatures them, and is clearly intended to give our readers a completely different impression.--] (]) 10:10, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:'''Reply by Krakkos''' The sentence you're quoting cites page 23. Why are you falsely insinuating that it's page 37? Is this deliberate? Here is what page 23 "really writes": | |||
:{{talkquote|"The similarity of the name of the Gothic people and that of the island of Gotland seems to support the migration legend of the Origo Gothica. This area was also the home of the medieval Gutasaga." {{cite book |last=Wolfram |first=Herwig |author-link=Herwig Wolfram |translator-last1=Dunlap |translator-first1=Thomas J. |translator-link1= |year=1990 |chapter= |editor-last= |editor-first= |editor-link= |title=History of the Goths |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=xsQxcJvaLjAC |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page= |pages=23 |isbn=0520069838 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |via= |registration= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:] (]) 10:21, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::Correct, and THAT page shows that the Gutasaga is not the proof but a possible relevant side remark, as I explained above. My reason for ALSO citing page 37 is that it is from the same book and helps confirm how this writer really thinks, which is direct conflict with how you are reporting his opinions and using him as a source. Please remove this sentence which implies that the Gutasaga is part of a chain of reasoning leading to a conclusion. It is not.--] (]) 13:11, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::''When'' new publications appear which show something new, we look at those. That is how Misplaced Pages works. In the meantime, predicting what the new publications will show is for other types of websites. At this stage there is no body of published material with strong conclusions about Gothic origins, based on DNA. Eupedia is not a reliable source. And there is no publication at all which suggests sthat Rome is "incredibly Scandinavian"!! FWIW I1 is very widespread in Europe, and has a difficult distribution to make conclusions about because it is pre-agriculture.--] (]) 19:11, 30 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
== A missing topic or topics: how to fit == | |||
Sorry but I1 is very Scandinavian it is true that the gene has been found before. But it was not until the late Nordic bronze age it started to get broadly spread. Also, it is only dominant in Scandinavia and Northern Germany. Also, Scandinavians have 35-40 per cent I1 DNA. So it is very Scandinavian even if it have old origins it was not dominant in any region in Europe until the late Scandinavian Bronze age. Also, the Lombards could be a source of I1 in Rome. So maybe the Goths were R1A or another haplogroup... But calling it a none Scandinavian gene is pretty ignorant. Lombards could be the source of I1 in Italy. It only became dominant around 500 BC for unknown reasons. It also spread to Germany when the Celts got weakened by the Ceasars invasion. All Germanic people groups originate in Scandinavia or Northern Germany. Ceasar's invasion of the Gaul weakened, them so the Germanic peoples could invade. | |||
It is not dominant in any region except Scandinavia and Finland. The groups' origins are disputed but did not start to gain dominance until 500 before christ so all of its spread over the rest of Europe is contemporary history and all migrations that spread it is recorded in Southern European history. R1A also seem to be widespread in Italy so the Goths also had German ancestry. However, the Italian studies showed a great affinity with Scandinavians. In Gothic graves. For example, before the Anglo-Saxon invasion, no I1 was present in Britain. Ireland has no I1 except in Dublin due to it being founded by Norse settlers. Before that I1 was small or marginal. The clustered in Turkey comes from Varangian guards during medieval periods large swaths of Norse males migrated to the Byzantine empire to serve as guards. Northwestern Spain was the final refugee from the Islamic invasion. Sicily got I1 from Norman invasions. The cluster around Sankt Petersburg is due to Norse settlers using it as a trading hub. Laying the foundation for the Rus states. | |||
I will keep it simple, just to trigger thinking: | |||
The Germanic migrations dispersed I1 lineages to Britain (Anglo-Saxons), Belgium (Franks, Saxons), France (Franks, Visigoths and Burgundians), South Germany (Franks, Alamanni, Suebi, Marcomanni, Thuringii and others), Switzerland (Alamanni, Suebi, Burgundians), Iberia (Visigoths, Suebi and Vandals), Italy (Goths, Vandals, Lombards), Austria and Slovenia (Ostrogoths, Lombards, Bavarians), Ukraine and Moldova (Goths), as well as around Hungary and northern Serbia (Gepids). The I1 found among the Poles (6%), Czechs (11%), Slovaks (6%) and Hungarians (8%) is also the result of centuries of influence from their German and Austrian neighbours. The relatively high frequency of I1 around Serbia and western Bulgaria (5% to 10%) could be owed to the Goths who settled in the Eastern Roman Empire in the 3rd and 4th centuries. In Turkey and Russia unlike Rome, England or Germany it was not a full-scale migration therefore I1 did not become widespread only some Varangian guardsmen acting as police in Greece and Russia and settled and married Greek or Russian women. The I1 spread is closely linked with recorded historical events. Sicily have a concentration probably due to Norrman settlers moving in taking the houses of Muslim Arabs after the Norman conquest. Also Vladimir the Great seem to have also been descended from the I1 subgroup. | |||
*There is a broader concept in ancient and modern sources of "Gothic peoples" which includes Gepids, and perhaps the Rugii, Heruli, Scirri, Alans etc. We are not mentioning it I think. It is not easy to always draw a clear line between Goths in this sense and Goths in the sense of Tervingi etc (who are also not always called Goths). So I think it needs to be handled somehow. | |||
*There is a major phase in the history of the Goths and Gothic/Scythian peoples where many key bits of those peoples moved west of the Carpathians, near the Danube and Pannonia. The Huns also came and a lot of things happened before and after that included the creation of many minor kingdoms and some not-so-minor ones like the Ostrogoths. As I understand it, this "Danubian complex" became an archaeologically recognizable material culture which was very influential, while in the meantime the old Gothic/Vandal associated cultures west of the Elbe and Carpathians faded out in the meantime? Again a lot of stuff to handle, and maybe not easy. Best to think ahead about it.--] (]) 21:14, 25 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
But all this information in the article does not have to be written in the article of course. Just the fact that the origins lie in Scandinavia from I1 and that Goths probably were not intermixing that much with close by populations. Or it could be Lombards in the graveyard. The other things I mentioned about modern Rome citizens having a lot of I1 admixtures was just to prove my point. | |||
== why all the wrong publication dates and even edit warring about it? == | |||
Amorim, Carlos (2018-09-11). "Understanding 6th-century barbarian social organization and migration through paleogenomics". Nature Communications. 9 (1): 3547. Bibcode:2018NatCo...9.3547A. doi:10.1038/s41467-018-06024-4. PMC 6134036. PMID 30206220. | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} please explain why you keep switching publication dates of your favoured sources to newer dates, even after I correct them? . I think my edsum explains the problem, but you mixed your revert in with other edits and did not mention it. Is this by error? But you keep making similar errors? --] (]) 11:23, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:Note that I have not reverted your 2009->2012a revert, so if this is an error, perhaps you will fix it?--] (]) 11:29, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::The version of ''Empires and Barbarians'' by ] which is cited in this article is the 2012 reprint by ]. There is nothing wrong with the publication dates. ] (]) 15:54, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::A reprint date is not a publication date, and everyone calls this a 2009 book, including the publisher and other authors citing this work. The online versions are also showing 2009, despite you writing a misleading edsum. (Was there even a 2012 reprint?) Please fix it, and please do NOT use reprint dates. There is not good faith way to interpret your insistence on this silliness. Perhaps the biggest on-going debate on this and other articles concerning your editing is that you systematically favour older authors, older theories and older books. Every one of these errors is one where you make one of your favourites look more recent.--] (]) 16:57, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::The 2012 version is at pages, while the 2010 version is at to pages. They aren't identical. Misplaced Pages should use the most recent version, which is the 2012 version. ] (]) 17:57, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::The version you are calling 2012 says 2009. '''Look at the title page.''' You are getting your information from the google front page which is always full of mistakes. My 2009 version, on my desk has 734 pages, like the so-called 2012 edition according to you. If there was an expanded version the number of pages would not go down, but then again the so called 2010 version on google can not be read, so is clearly not our source. And no we should NOT pick the newest edition, we should give the one we use. And of course also a new printing would not be a new edition anyway. Why are you arguing things like this all the time???? --] (]) 18:06, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{ping|Krakkos}} will you revert your revert?--] (]) 20:14, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
More examples. | |||
* {{cite book |last=Wolfram |first=Herwig |author-link=Herwig Wolfram |translator-last1=Dunlap |translator-first1=Thomas J. |translator-link1= |year=1990 |chapter= |editor-last= |editor-first= |editor-link= |title=History of the Goths |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=xsQxcJvaLjAC |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page= |pages= |isbn=0520069838 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |via= |registration= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}} | |||
This was published 1988 in English (1979 in German). 1990 was the date of a paperback printing, but I see no reason to call that date the publication date. --] (]) 13:38, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:The frequency of old Y haplogroups in regions is not a good predictor at all of where the haplogroup originally dispersed from, but in any case this is not the place to try to publish your personal speculations. This is not a forum. We just make articles which summarize what has been published in expert fields as a whole. This is not the place to present novel hypotheses based on primary research. It just isn't what Misplaced Pages is for. Please familiarize yourself with how Misplaced Pages works.--] (]) 22:50, 30 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Undue genetic conclusions? == | |||
We currently have, in the opening discussion of "Origins and early history", this simple a decisive conclusion in Misplaced Pages voice: | |||
:Recent genetic studies has lent support to the Scandianvian theory.ref name="Stolarek_2019"/ | |||
There are actually two related articles in the bibliography: | |||
* {{cite journal |last1=Stolarek |first1=Ireneuz |author-link1= |date=February 6, 2018 |year= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |others= |title=A mosaic genetic structure of the human population living in the South Baltic region during the Iron Age |script-title= |trans-title= |url=https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-018-20705-6 |access-date=February 20, 2020 |url-access= |format= |department= |journal=] |type= |series= |language= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |publication-place= |publication-date= |volume=8 |issue=2455 |page= |pages= |at= |nopp= |arxiv= |asin= |bibcode= |bibcode-access= |biorxiv= |citeseerx= |doi=10.1038/s41598-018-20705-6 |doi-access= |doi-broken-date= |isbn= |issn= |jfm= |jstor= |jstor-access= |lccn= |mr= |oclc= |ol= |ol-access= |osti= |osti-access= |pmc=5802798 |pmid=29410482 |rfc= |ssrn= |zbl= |id= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |via= |layurl= |laysource= |laydate= |quote= |postscript= |ref=harv}} | |||
* {{cite journal |last1=Stolarek |first1=I. |author-link1= |date=May 1, 2019 |year= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |others= |title=Goth migration induced changes in the matrilineal genetic structure of the central-east European population |script-title= |trans-title= |url=https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-019-43183-w |access-date=February 20, 2020 |url-access= |format= |department= |journal=] |type= |series= |language= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |publication-place= |publication-date= |volume=9 |issue=6737 |page= |pages= |at= |nopp= |arxiv= |asin= |bibcode= |bibcode-access= |biorxiv= |citeseerx= |doi=10.1038/s41598-019-43183-w |doi-access= |doi-broken-date= |isbn= |issn= |jfm= |jstor= |jstor-access= |lccn= |mr= |oclc= |ol= |ol-access= |osti= |osti-access= |pmc=6494872 |pmid=31043639 |rfc= |ssrn= |zbl= |id= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |via= |layurl= |laysource= |laydate= |quote= |postscript= |ref=harv}} | |||
We always should be careful with individual reports of raw genetic data from small studies, but I note in this case the studies are particularly inconclusive in reality, because they are based on mitochondrial testing. The most solid conclusion seems to be that there was migration, but beyond that these are not very strong. Yet we are using these studies for a VERY DIFFICULT and exact conclusion: distinguishing between Scandinavian and other Germanic places of origins, such as the nearby Jastorf culture. I think this is not justified.--] (]) 12:28, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:These are recent studies, conducted by a team of qualified scholars, and published by ]. The ] of the study states that "the collected results seem to be consistent with the historical narrative that assumed that the Goths originated in southern Scandinavia". It's not ] to mention that in this article. ] (]) 15:48, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::Seeming consistent with something is what even a completely indecisive trial or experiment is. But the wording we have is "lends support". The problem is obvious.--] (]) 16:53, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::I believe this undue sentence should be removed from where it is now in the opening sections of the article. As you know, a typical solution on how to handle genetic claims, which is a controversial matter on WP, is to have a section near the end of the article which gives a short dry summary of findings so far. In this particular article even that would arguably be undue, but what we currently have is unusually questionable.--] (]) 19:16, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
I took articles published by genetic experts in Poland thought. | |||
== Potentially useful sources? == | |||
I just wanted to add the genetic research a team of 6 different DNA researchers from Poland concluded in their DNA analysis. I did never want to include this and also I1 is not an ancient genetic group. It developed during the Neolithic in Scandinavia and is not related to the I2 group. It is the only major DNA group in Europe with none Asiatic origins. The researchers concluded that the Goths females were married to or taken by neighbouring tribes. The gothic female genes are present among modern poles. But not male gothic DNA is not as common. Showing that the Goths kept for themselves for some reason. But that poles are also descended from them due to locals finding gothic women attractive. This was not my own conclusion this was based upon a polish team with 6 researchers. They concluded the Goths were partially Scandinavian or German in origin and that their women mixed with modern-day poles. | |||
Helpful perhaps.--] (]) 13:56, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
*{{citation|url=https://www.academia.edu/40560901/The_Gothic_migration_through_Eastern_Poland_archaeological_evidences_In_A._Cie%C5%9Bli%C5%84ski_B._Kontny_red._Interacting_Barbarians._Contacts_Exchange_and_Migrations_in_the_First_Millennium_AD_Neue_Studien_zur_Sachsenforschung_9_Warszawa-Braunschweig_2019_227_239 |chapter= The Gothic migration through Eastern Poland – archaeological evidences|editor-last1=Cieśliński |editor-last2= Kontny |title=Interacting Barbarians. Contacts, Exchange and Migrations in the First Millennium AD |series=Neue Studien zur Sachsenforschung |volume=9 |year= 2019 |pages=227–239|first= Jacek |last=Andrzejowski}} | |||
*{{citation|url=https://www.academia.edu/4115218/The_Przeworsk_Culture._A_Brief_Story_for_the_Foreigners_In_U._Lund_Hansen_and_A._Bitner-Wr%C3%B3blewska_eds._Worlds_Apart_Contacts_across_the_Baltic_Sea_in_the_Iron_Age._Nordiske_Fortidsminder_C_7_K%C3%B8benhavn-Warszawa_2010 |chapter=The Przeworsk Culture. A Brief Story (for the Foreigners)|editor-last1= Lund Hansen |editor-last2=Bitner-Wróblewska |title=Worlds Apart? Contacts across the Baltic Sea in the Iron Age |series= Nordiske Fortidsminder |volume=C/7| year=2010|first= Jacek |last=Andrzejowski}} | |||
Inducing the I1 haplogroup into Poland. . Eastern European populations do not have patrilinear ancestry from the Goths. It is not old 4000 years old. It only started to become common 500 before Christ. The Eupedia article also states that I1 large spread across Europe is a result of the Germanic migration period. It was a dead genepool until it for, some reason, had evolutionary benefits and spread across Scandinavia and Germany. Italic researchers concluded the Gothic graveyard were genetically similar to modern-day Scandinavians. The spread of I1 across Europe can only be traced to Germanic migrations. | |||
== describe where the Goths lived == | |||
But if the editors do not want to include DNA research in the article let's ignore my edits. But they are consistent with what I read in a research paper published by six genetic experts. No DNA edits I get it. I Will not try it again. | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}}, seriously? Please give a simple explanation about where you think they lived. I think the place description added matches the rest of the article, which is how leads should work. But what geographical places would you say the Goths lived in? If I add 3 sources to the sentence to get past this, what have you achieved? Making the article ugly? What is your point???--] (]) 17:51, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:We already have three top-quality sources on the Goths from the '']'', the '']'' and the '']'', written by ] and ]. There is no need to add additional sources to the lead. The lead should not mention theories not mentioned in any ]s on the Goths. The lead is long enough as it already is. ] (]) 18:11, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::'''So your tagging was dishonest and you now explain it a different way.''' Nothing new there, and of course this explanation is still not honest but as usual just veering off into the surreal. I will remove your dishonest tag. | |||
::Concerning the length of the lead etc please feel free of course to explain here honestly what you are talking about, but to me it is obvious that the opening of the article needs to connect a topic to reality for the reader. My edsum when adding these two simple sentences was: ''important to open with something which connects to well-known things, and distinguishes from other similar topics - where they lived in modern terms is a common method'' . Logical? Not? In other words the opening needs a bare minimum of something like this. If you did not agree, you should have explained honestly and given your reasoning instead of being dishonest. If length is a real concern, which I doubt, there is a lot of less important stuff in the lead. I predict you will however not engage in constructive discussion, as usual. After seeing the way you do this over and over, I don't even think lead length is a concern to you. | |||
::Concerning the RS status of the two tertiary sources you name, please name any expert source that cites them as a trusted authority. I believe it is evident that they are NOT "top quality" sources, but I also don't see how this connects to your dishonest cn tag. What is the connection? --] (]) 18:24, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
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== Poor sources for potential deletion == | |||
The notion that genetic evidence should be excluded from this article, when it appears in so many others, strikes me as very peculiar, if not outright special pleading. The genetic evidence is solid evidence, not "speculative ideas" as you call it. -- ] (]) 15:04, 30 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I see what you mean, but it is not quite that extreme. As a general rule on Misplaced Pages there is concern about the use of such research, but more about our ability to use it well. DNA information is concrete in a sense, but interpreting it is tricky because there are very few good secondary works which help us draw historical conclusions from isolated tests on skeletons here and there, and so we risk ]. Historically, on this article on others, editors including such material have based their historical conclusions almost entirely on the ideas of various online bloggers etc, despite superficially citing peer reviewed research reports which generally make very meagre comments about history or language. Typically what we therefore when apprioriate is list basic summaries of results from various articles, and keep it as neutral as possible, restraining ourselves from bringing in ideas from the blogosphere, no matter how interesting. If you follow the links I posted above I once proposed a way we could do that here but other editors preferred the current option, and I also agree with them. The OTHER issue here is not an opposition to DNA as such but the longer running discussion (see various RFCs) about trying to move coverage of Gothic origins to other articles (], ], ] etc). This does not only affect DNA, but also archaeology and discussions about Jordanes. I think I speak for a majority of editors (based on several RFCs) when I say that the space we dedicate to these topics on these articles is too little to be able to do justice to those topics, which are complex in their own right.--] (]) 13:25, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
::I agree with Elphion that the exclusion of genetic evidence from this article is unhelpful. Stolarek et al. (2019) did a genetic study which is directly relevant to the Goths: | |||
::{{talkquote|"The collected results seem to be consistent with the historical narrative that assumed that the Goths originated in southern Scandinavia; then, at least part of the Goth population moved south through the territory of contemporary Poland towards the Black Sea region, where they mixed with local populations and formed the Chernyakhov culture... he genetic relationships reported here... support the opinion that southern Scandinavia was the homeland of the Goths." – {{cite journal |last1=Stolarek |first1=I. |last2=Handschuh|first2=L. |last3=Juras|first3=A. |last4=Nowaczewska|first4=W. |last5=Kóčka-Krenz|first5=H. |last6=Michalowski|first6=A. |last7=Piontek |first7=J. |last8=Kozlowski |first8=P. |last9=Figlerowicz|first9=M. |display-authors=3 |date=May 1, 2019 |title=Goth migration induced changes in the matrilineal genetic structure of the central-east European population |journal=] |volume=9 |issue=1 |at=6737 |bibcode=2019NatSR...9.6737S |doi=10.1038/s41598-019-43183-w |doi-access=free |pmc=6494872 |pmid=31043639 |quote=}}}} | |||
::That study found evidence of Gothic connections with Scandinavia. Andrew Lancaster is constantly seeking to remove such evidence, and is using all types of ]s to justify such removal. One such pretext is to create ] like ] and ], and then to advocate the transfer of evidence he doesn't like from this article to the POV forks. Another pretext are supposed concerns about citing genetic studies. Interestingly, Andrew Lancaster has been citing himself at Misplaced Pages articles on genetics. His concerns about genetic studies seem quite selective. I think this article has space for a sentence or two about the genetic studies on Goths that have been published so far. ] (]) 14:20, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Why are you pretending a 2009 edit on another article is recent or relevant? I defer to my summary above for links to several past discussions about DNA relevant to THIS article, especially . The Stolarek 2019 article did mitochondrial DNA tests, which are useless for this purpose, and said the result was CONSISTENT with Goths coming from Sweden. The edit to remove it was made by {{u|Srnec}} and was also strongly agreed by others including {{u|Alcaios}} and {{u|Carlstak}}. I also refer to recent RFCs for discussion about moving origins details out of this article, where the closing admin noted a "clear consensus".--] (]) 16:18, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
I will start a list. If anyone sees a good reason to keep any of these, please explain it. For now I will not list all the basic-summary style tertiary sources yet, as some of these would be ok for non-controversial use, but clearly they also require discussion as they are being used in the wrong way.--] (]) 18:37, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
* {{cite web |url=https://www.livescience.com/45948-ancient-goths.html |url-access= |title=Who Were the Ancient Goths? |last1=Jarus |first1=Owen |author-link1= |date=March 18, 2016 |orig-year= |editor-last1= |editor-first1= |editor1= |editor-link1= |editor2-last= |editor2-first= |editor2-link= |editors= |department= |website=] |series= |publisher= |agency= |location= |page= |pages= |at= |language= |trans-title= |type= |bibcode= |doi= |isbn= |jstor= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |access-date=September 17, 2019 |via= |quote= |ref=harv |subscription= |registration=}} | |||
* {{cite web |url=https://www.ancient.eu/Goths/ |url-access= |title=The Goths |last1=Mark |first1=Joshua J. |author-link1= |date=October 12, 2014 |orig-year= |editor-last1= |editor-first1= |editor1= |editor-link1= |editor2-last= |editor2-first= |editor2-link= |editors= |department= |website=] |series= |publisher= |agency= |location= |page= |pages= |at= |language= |trans-title= |type= |format= |bibcode= |doi= |isbn= |jstor= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |access-date=September 17, 2019 |via= |quote= |ref=harv |subscription= |registration=}} | |||
Concerning the tertiary sources, there were already discussions at ] including - at least for the '''Britannica''' ones, demonstrating that most are old, and all written with no discussion of controversies etc, making them unsuitable for use on WP for any topic where there are several respected view points. There are now many '''Oxford''' tertiary work articles being cited. {{ping|Krakkos}} has Misplaced Pages library access to Oxford publications, so the question is whether more of us should also apply for that access so we can work. But Krakkos can perhaps confirm some points first: | |||
*From the citations being made, it appears that these Oxford articles do not mention controversies or alternative positions, or present the results of latest research. They just summarize the position of whoever writes them. Correct? | |||
*If this is not correct, then the question arises as to why they are constantly being used on this article to imply that there is only one mainstream opinion. | |||
*As already raised, it also seems that experts in the field never cite these articles as trusted authorities, but instead cite monograph works that have the explanations of debatable points etc. | |||
In other words, at first sight these tertiary works just aren't suitable for Misplaced Pages use on any topic which potentially requires the handling of different viewpoints. Or else something strange is happening. I am asking for any explanation that might show otherwise, so we can move forward on a more rational basis. Is there something I misunderstand about these articles in "dictionaries"?--] (]) 20:44, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:The author at ], Joshua J. Mark, is a former Professor of Philosophy and lecturer on history at ]. I disagree that he's a "poor source". His article on the Goths gives a neutral and up-to-date analysis of the various theories of ], ], ] etc. It is a useful source. ] (]) 09:53, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::What is it adding to the other sources? Mark is clearly not a big name and we clearly have no shortage of better publications. Please explain. Are you saying it is because he reviews what other authors write? But we have other sources like this also (just not by Heather)? Why would we for example use him above Pohl, Christensen, and the RGA articles? Also you have not addressed the more general issue with this insistent use of short tertiary source articles in general which is perhaps also connected to the need to use Mark. --] (]) 10:43, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::RGA and Pohl are German-language sources. I have never said that we should use Mark "above" Christensen. When evaluating ] however, i believe a 2018 work by ] in the ] is more suitable than a 2002 work by ] from ]. ] (]) 10:51, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::But you don't cite Heather for this?? Only Mark? And your explanation of why some scholars disagree is vague, unclear, too short, and I think inaccurate. The main concern is that the proposals are not proven, not that they are proven wrong. On the other hand there is also a complication of chronology you do not want to mention at all: Jordanes says the Goths left Scandinavia 2000 years earlier and were in Ukraine long before Tacitus. Wolfram etc all admit this to be an issue, and that means that while there probably WAS migration from Poland (based on archaeology and language, not Jordanes) the Gothic name may not have traveled in any strong connection to any large people. The Germanic peoples who eventually appear in records could have come from any number of Przeworsk or Wielbark or even other Germanic cultures. The best sources say this aspect is not clear. See Wolfram and Andersson and Steinacher. | |||
::::On Misplaced Pages we look for sources with a reputation for reliability. A normal indicator is whether experts in a field commonly cite it. This is how I came to propose Christensen as an important source: he is widely cited (though relatively young). Short summaries in Oxford dictionaries are NOT good sources for WP because their reputation is less and also their mission is generally opposed to ours, because they do NOT report the latest differences of position but rather give the keys to famous academics, generally English. | |||
::::We are of course writing about a field where everyone including Heather cites German-language sources very often. This does not mean Heather is a bad source. But his main specialist works on the Goths were in the 1980s and 1990s. It seems to me to be very convenient to have a problem with German language sources when your one-and-only hero source is from an older generation, and English language works being written in this century in a way which does not ignore newer work includes people you are trying to censor out of Misplaced Pages like Goffart. But also Pohl has published in English, if that is your real concern. --] (]) 11:49, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::For editors who aren't used to you, in the small range of edit types you do, one is that you make articles for the sources you want to push, and not for the ones you don't like. Then you post links or red-links on talk pages when dispute arises, and try to imply that widely cited scholars are "no-ones". A good example was your disparagement of Andrew Gillett on ] as a "self-styled independent scholar though he is widely cited in a respectful way by experts, and clearly Associate professor at Monash University with an impressive international record in other institutions, conferences, editing collections of papers etc. It was another example where you misrepresented the field, got caught, and then kept doing it. --] (]) 11:49, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
== A comment on the edit war == | |||
The lead as of this edit ] (20:26, 26 February 2020 Andrew Lancaster) is good, with one exception: the controversy over the Scandinavian origin is relegated entirely to suspicions cast on the reliability of Jordanes. The casual reader will assume that no other, more modern evidence bears on this. The other obvious comment to make is that beyond the lead the article fragments badly into warring references (a natural result of the warring). The main competing scenarios should be clearly stated, with the evidence for and against each added under each one. -- ] (]) 22:01, 26 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:The above-mentioned is issues with the lead are a result of a misrepresentation of the source which is used. | |||
:The relevant paragraph on Jordanes in the lead says this: | |||
:{{talkquote|"As speakers of a Germanic language, it is believed that at least a dominant class of Goths migrated from the direction of modern Poland, where such languages are believed to have been spoken at this time. They are generally believed to have been documented much earlier by Roman writers in the 1st century AD as living near the lower Vistula, where they are associated with the Wielbark culture. In his book Getica, the Gothic historian Jordanes claimed that the Goths originated in southern Scandinavia more than 1000 years earlier, but his reliability is disputed."}} | |||
:What the source used for the above-mentioned text says is this: | |||
:{{talkquote|"Goths, a Germanic people, who, according to Jordanes' Getica, originated in Scandinavia. The Cernjachov culture of the later 3rd and 4th cents. ad beside the Black Sea, and the Polish and Byelorussian Wielbark cultures of the 1st–3rd. cents. ad, provide evidence of a Gothic migration down the Vistula to the Black Sea, but no clear trail leads to Scandinavia." {{cite book |last1=Heather |first1=Peter |author-link1=Peter Heather |date=2012b |year= |orig-year= |chapter=Goths |chapter-url=https://www.oxfordreference.com/view/10.1093/acref/9780199545568.001.0001/acref-9780199545568-e-2873? |editor1-last=Hornblower |editor1-first=Simon |editor1-link=Simon Hornblower |editor2-last=Spawforth |editor2-first=Antony |editor2-link= |editor3-last=Eidinow |editor3-first=Esther |editor3-link=Esther Eidinow |title=] |trans-title= |url= |url-status= |format= |type= |series= |language= |volume= |issue= |edition=4 |location= |publisher=] |page=623 |pages= |isbn=9780191735257 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date=January 25, 2020 |via= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:'''Reply by Krakkos''' There are additional issues with ] in the lead, which should be fixed. ] (]) 07:48, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::{{re|Krakkos}} your reply just raises the question once again of why you insist on using that specific tertiary source and no other sources, except for ones by the same author or people who agree with him. Of course this can never lead to a good stable article. Why do you keep ignoring this concern that I have raised over and over? See the various discussions above. Of course if you keep insisting on such sources then you can say that my edits do not match the "best sources". On my side I have explained other sources above, and tried to give you a chance to edit appropriately. You need to write in a way which reflects the field more broadly.--] (]) 08:00, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::To be clear, see the Steinacher and Andersson citations above which are far stronger sources and should be helpful. These are recently published specialist works, that get cited by other specialists, and which explain the diversity of the other literature. --] (]) 08:06, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Partially relevant ]-language sources by ] and ] are not "far stronger sources" than directly relevant ] sources by the world's foremost expert on the subject (]). ] (]) 09:32, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::Please explain why they are "partially" relevant and why language is an issue? They are certainly more up-to-date, more widely-cited, more focused particularly upon the topic, more able to cover competing opinions and debates and explain where the field is. ''These'' are the things relevant to WP:RS, and which would be discussed at WP:RSN for example. In contrast, WP has no policy against using German language publications. So your conclusions appear to be the opposite of the truth. Our WP community ''does'' however have standard concerns about using these types of tertiary works which don't discuss debates, at least for anything where a debate needs to be covered - which is precisely how you are using these ones.--] (]) 11:55, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' It would be nice if you could post these supposed quality sources here so that the community could examine them. ] (]) 11:58, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::My apologies. I thought of reminding that I posted summaries above, but thought it might just make my post too big, and was probably obvious. The summaries are at the bottom of the section .--] (]) 12:06, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' The section you're linking to is a complete mess. Which of these are "far stronger sources" than ], ], the ] and ]? ] (]) 12:17, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::The problem with the dictionaries has been explained over and over. How do you say the two sources now under discussion disagree with Wolfram? The way I understand it we have been asked to look at a specific sentence in the lead. Above, you took a position that the lead needed to say the same as a dictionary article by Heather, and no more. Correct? The way I read that, is that you are disputing that anything NOT in that dictionary sentence should NOT be in our article. For example, you have NOT actually for explained anything factually wrong, or unsourceable, in the sentence in the lead. So, I presumed you would agree that everything in the sentence posted above is sourceable to good sources. But you just don't want any other sources used. Not correct? Please review and explain what your point really was above, when you complained about the lead sentence which {{ping|Elphion}} commented on. My proposal is/was that if there is something in it now which is not in Heather we can just add a bit more sourcing (or replace Heather with sourcing which covers it all).--] (]) 12:38, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
I thought haplogroups were pretty consistent with ancestry. Especially when Genetic specialists in Poland agree they are true. Also, Goths had a central European or polish variant of R1A that also seem to be spread out along Spain and Italy in a similar cluster with I1. I also used an Italian source examining actual remains of Gothic warriors in Italian graveyards from 500 BP exactly after the sack of Rome by the Goths and Lombards. Taken from a Gothic burial in Rome. I1 at least seem to be the dominant group in the populations only in modern Swedes, Danes and in Norway I1 is dominant in Goths too... At least those found in the graveyards of Rome. | |||
:{{ec}} {{re|Elphion}} I certainly agree with the principle, but which other evidence is there for a Scandinavian origin, which is not somehow derived from Jordanes? Do you have any sources in mind, or wording proposals? Perhaps the closest I can think of in recent times would be something like the Andersson citation I have mentioned above, but I am not sure if this can be called fully independent of Jordanes. I suppose in that case the evidence is some name similarities (Gaut, Gotones, Goth) and this might be what you are referring to. But: | |||
<ref>Amorim CE, Vai S, Posth C, Modi A, Koncz I, Hakenbeck S, et al. (September 2018). "Understanding 6th-century barbarian social organization and migration through paleogenomics". Nature Communications. 9 (1): 3547. Bibcode:2018NatCo...9.3547A. doi:10.1038/s41467-018-06024-4. PMC 6134036. PMID 30206220.</ref> | |||
:*If you search for other evidence to show how Jordanes might be right, then is that really an argument that is independent from Jordanes? | |||
Also one similar examination done by genetic experts in Italy 2020 seems to confirm the Scandinavian origins of the Goths done in 2020 <ref>Estes R (2020-10-16). "Longobards Ancient DNA from Pannonia and Italy – What Does Their DNA Tell Us? Are You Related?". DNAeXplained - Genetic Genealogy. Retrieved 2020-12-11.</ref> | |||
:*In the case of Andersson and other expert authors in recent decades they normally are NOT really arguing that "the Goths" migrated en masse from Poland or Scandinavia, but only that there was an elite group who carried a tradition around. (The so-called Traditionskern approach.) Also see the Steinacher quote I explained above where he suggests the similar sounding names had a prestige value. | |||
{{reftalk}} | |||
:*In practice, how do we fit this in a lead. Should be possible if it is needed, but there should be consideration of which bits to put in the lead, and which down into the body. | |||
::::Since we had some semblance of consensus not to delve too deeply into the origin stories, I think we should refrain from including the genetic discussion in the main body of the test. Krakkos was right that a sentence or two is merited about the recent genomic evidence, but let's make them informational notes, as the science of genetics is still very young and in transition. We don't need this page becoming politicized by focusing on a controversial area. To this end, Andrew's position seems the most in keeping with editorial consensus. --] (]) 19:03, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:(Keep in mind by the way, that I am trying to mainly write ideas up here on the talk page, given the on-going practical issues this article is having. So even if I made an edit to a sentence, it does not mean that is how I would have written it.)--] (]) 07:54, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::{{ec}}FWIW, Haplogroups, types of DNA, obviously do have something to do with ''biological'' ancestry. But this article is not about biology, and ''mitochondrial'' DNA is a special small chunk of rarely mutating DNA that we only get from our mother, and these change very slowly and apparently (scientists have found) don't normally spread in a way which can be used to connection to language or ethnicity in smaller regions like Europe. If you've you've ever tracked your own mitochondrial DNA or, like me, worked with genealogists in large groups, you'll know how the closest mitochondrial matches of people with European ancestry tend to come from thousands of kilometres from their own known ancestors. This is why most well-known labs working on population history don't use mitochondrial DNA, at least not exclusively. | |||
::::ALSO, Roberta Estes is an American blogger. The article she discusses about Roman DNA is comparing to Hungary, looking for evidence of Lombard movement, ''not'' Scandinavia, ''not'' looking at Goths.--] (]) 19:18, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::This article is not about ] either. Does that mean we should purge the article of all references to Latin literature? Of course not. This article is about ancient people, and our understanding of ancient people is based on a combination of literary, linguistic, archaeological, genetic and other material. Genetic information can be used to get insight into many things, for example human migration and social organization. The ] that we inherit from our mothers is one type of such useful genetic information. examined what they perceived to be Gothic mtDNA, and drew some conclusions from it. I think the addition of a neutral reference to Stolarek et al. (2019) would be helpful. This could be done through formulating a sentence or an informational note. ] (]) 19:45, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::''Actually'' you will only find things neatly labelled as Goths in Latin and Greek literature. This article is about a ''historical'' people, i.e. known from the written record. All other types of investigation about them, such as archaeological or linguistic, start from the written record. But you won't find any neatly labelled Gothic DNA in the populations genetic literature. What you have published here in the past was not a neutral summary, but wishful thinking. You were the source. We can however say quite a lot about archaeological ideas concerning the origins of the Goths, but no version of this article or any other on WP has ever done a good job of that. (You've used archaeology sources only to sneak the Jordanes "Berig story" into "Misplaced Pages voice". Ironic! You use archaeologists as a proxy for a bit of Latin literature which is your indirect source for the "Goths are Swedes" myth you are continually trying to reinsert. You argue against citing experts on Jordanes, only because you know they all agree he can't be used this way. Using archaeologists as alternative non-expert sources for Jordanes appears to be the limit of your interest in archaeology.) The archaeology of Gothic origins deserves it's own article (] etc) and I think no one would have a problem with truly ''neutral'' summaries of articles like Stolarek's there.--] (]) 20:20, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::This article is about Goths. Detailed coverage on Jordanes and ''Getica'' belongs at the articles ] and '']''. This article should rely primarily on experts on Goths, as it currently does. The ] and archaeology of the Goths is indeed covered in detail at other articles. The ] and ] have also received detailed coverage elsewhere. This does not mean that we should purge this article of information about Gothic archaeology, Jordanes or the Visigoths and Ostrogoths. The scope of this article should be determined by the scope of the most relevant and reliable sources on the Goths, such as the works of ], ] and ]. These works provide substantial coverage of archaeological and linguistic evidence, which means that such evidence should also be covered here. ] (]) 20:54, 31 May 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Apart from the clear decisions from the RFCs, the entire field or fields relevant to Goths all write in such a way that the appearance of Goths in Roman sources in the 3rd century, for the first time under that name, and for the first time north of the Danube, represents the start of (to say the least) a distinct era of Gothic history. It is clearly a very nicely separable topic!? I have already shown how Heather and Wolfram make this point very clearly, and how you have misunderstood and distorted their words. You are flogging a dead horse and over-dramatizing, in order to create talk page confusion again. No one except you is purging anything from any published expert source. What needs to be purged are fringe stories from internet trolls who like to see themselves as living Goths, and desperately want to continue the old Swedish claim over them. There was an RFC and discussion continues. It ''should'' be a normal discussion about where to put what (including genetics, archaeology etc). The fact is that you are continually working against what our fellow editors have said they want, and waiting to reinsert the Goths-are-Swedes story, as you did a few months ago. All your proposals have nothing at all to do with people like Heather, Wolfram or Kazanski, as I have shown many times now. For another example ''you'' continue to "purge" and de-emphasize all mention of the Vienna school's ideas about an elite migration which are accepted by all three of them. You only use cherry-picked words from those writers in ways to change their meanings, in order to give the old story of how Goths are Swedes, which is adapted from Jordanes, and would not exist without Jordanes. It is you that wants the troll-adapted Jordanes to quietly dominate this article: You want your modern troll-adapted version of the Jordanes Berig etc story to be the story which Misplaced Pages tells, using the names of modern scholars to hide the real sources. That is also the only way in which you have used archaeological and DNA sources, which you seem to have no interest in, or understanding of, outside of this use - just as you have no interest in the actual scholarly literature about Jordanes. Please stop it and be a bit more practical? --] (]) 09:19, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::*{{talkquote|"'''Goths are first mentioned occupying territory in what is now Poland in the first century AD'''... The history of people labelled "Goths" thus spans 700 years... he ].... took shape in the middle of the first century AD... in Pomerania and lands either side of the lower Vistula... his is the broad area where our few literary sources place a group called Goths at this time... Tacitus Germania 43-4 places them not quite on the Baltic coast; Ptolemy Geography 3.5.8 locates them east of the Vistula; Strabo Geography 7.1.3 (if Butones should be emended to Gutones) broadly agrees with Tacitus... The mutually confirmatory information of ancient sources and the archaeological record both suggest that Goths can first be identified beside the Vistula." – {{cite book |last=Heather |first=Peter |author-link=Peter Heather |year=1998 |title=The Goths |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=eCf0Tjg0BukC |publisher=] |pp= |isbn=0-631-209-32-8 }}}} | |||
:::::::::*{{talkquote|"'''The Gothic name appears for the first time between A.D. 16 and 18'''. We do not, however, find the strong form Guti but only the derivative form Gutones... henever the Gutones and Guti are mentioned, these terms refer to the Goths on the Continent before their migration to the Black Sea." – {{cite book |last=Wolfram |first=Herwig |author-link=Herwig Wolfram |translator-last1=Dunlap |translator-first1=Thomas J. |year=1990 |title=History of the Goths |url=https://books.google.com/?id=xsQxcJvaLjAC |publisher=] |pp=20, 23 |isbn=0520069838 }}}} | |||
:::::::::: ] (]) 10:20, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} Classic ]. When you are exposed, this is what you do: post large irrelevant quotes, and ''always the same ones'', and always pretending you forget previous discussions about removed bits where you have "{{red|(...)}}". (You are sometimes joining bits that are pages apart or even in different chapters, and you always moving key qualifications. You also pick old books over new ones, questionable wordings from abstracts that disagree with the main bodies, compressed wordings from short dictionary articles instead of highly cited works by the same authors, and so on.) This is disruptive editing Krakkos. There is no other reason for you to be quoting the same large blocks of text over and over and over and over without any reference to previous discussion. '''Most importantly, these quotes are entirely irrelevant to the points made above.''' FWIW: | |||
:Wolfram, same work, p.44 says: {{tq|p.44: the acculturation of the Goths to the Pontic area and their ethnogenesis "at the shores of the Black Sea" are simultaneous and mutually depent processes: In other words, {{red|we should speak of the Goths only after the Gutonic immigrants had become "Scythians" at the Black Sea.}}}} | |||
While none of this is relevant to the comment you were replying to, the cherry picking is stunning.--] (]) 11:04, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Apart from a series of personal attacks, your point above was that Wolfram and Heather believe Goths appear "for the first time" in Roman sources in the 3rd century AD. This is a false claim which you have made over and over again. Quoting their most authoritative sources directly helps set the record straight. As long as you continue to misrepresent the views of Wolfram, Heather and others on this talk page, i will continue to quote their works directly, so that the community can make up its own mind on the basis of the actual evidence. ] (]) 11:48, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::No Krakkos, that was not my point, and it was not your point (and it is not even the point these scholars make, let alone the rest of the field; these two write about the ''name'' of the Goths but you twist their meaning all the time to write your fringe stuff about a single simple physical group of people). The point is that there was nothing wrong with the RFC decisions, and quotes like these can't be used to show they were wrong decisions, so please stop beating a dead horse. --] (]) 13:25, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
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{{ping|Krakkos}} back to the subject, please explain what '''"partially" relevant''' means and why '''language''' is an issue?. We clearly need to get back to this because you also today referred to Walter Pohl with identical terminology. What is it all about please?--] (]) 11:18, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
https://www.ebi.ac.uk/ena/browser/view/PRJEB39997?fbclid=IwAR1334H3S4xx3NN8V3mFLdBnYJVGSwZs1jgnU4MzIEduN2YyoA08yh7Xb6I This new research paper published 2021 proves without any reasonable doubt that some Goths at least had a DNA structure similar to modern Swedes. Done by the University of Fribourg. But those Scandinavian guys living in Poland might be something else... But according to the poles doing this archaeology project they were considered to be archaeologically Gothic and a majority of Individuals have I1 or R1B haplogroup. | |||
:]: "ecause this project is in English, '''English-language sources are preferred over non-English ones when available and of equal quality and relevance'''. ]'s book is from 2004, in ], and about "]". ]'s article is from 2018, in English and directly about the Goths. The citation from Pohl is of lower quality, less relevance and not even in English. It is redundant. ] (]) 11:43, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::*You are still not explaining what "partially relevant" means. | |||
::*You are only commenting on 1 of the 3 sources you have described this way. | |||
::*You are clearly using NOENG wrongly. These 3 sources are chosen because they are referenced to by experts including the ones you like. German happens to be one of the main languages used for this specific topic, and so the fact that some sources are only in German is no problem according to NOENG. | |||
::*You are continuing to ignore the problem which has been explained to you dozens of times with using short summary articles from dictionaries - specifically for any topic where the field has debates, and where the tertiary work is neither cited by the field, nor written in a way to discuss differing opinions in the field. The status of the author and the publication year of the WHOLE dictionary are not the most important points which over-ride those concerns in such cases. ]. | |||
::*Please justify your 2 claims of "lower quality" and "less relevance"? How have you judged the quality and relevance of the widely cited reference work by Pohl? --] (]) 11:52, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
The Pla de l'Horta villa near Girona in Spain is located in close proximity to a necropolis with a series of tombs associated with the Visigoths. The grave goods and the typology of the tombs point to a Visigothic origin of the individuals. A small number of individuals buried at the site were sampled for DNA analysis in a 2019 study. One of the samples belonged to haplogroup I1. This finding is in accordance with the common ancestral origin of the Visigoths and the Ostrogoths. | |||
{{ping|Elphion|Krakkos}} The above went in circles a bit, but in effect I think what Elphion proposed would be covered by a simple sentence added into the lead as follows:--] (]) 08:25, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
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|Possible new sentence in Green by Andrew Lancaster, drafting | |||
As speakers of a Germanic language, it is believed that at least a dominant class of Goths migrated from the direction of modern Poland, where such languages are believed to have been spoken at this time. They are generally believed to have been documented much earlier by Roman writers in the 1st century AD as living near the lower Vistula, where they are associated with the Wielbark culture, which is believed to have been at least partly Germanic-speaking. In his book Getica, the Gothic historian Jordanes claimed that the Goths originated in southern Scandinavia more than 1000 years earlier, but his reliability is disputed. {{color|green|Another possible indicator of connections is the presence in classical times of similarly named "Goutai" in Scandinavia and "Gutones" near the Vistula.<can be sourced to; see discussions about how the topic should be sourced in body text, for example .>}} The Wielbark culture expanded southwards towards the Black Sea, where by the late 3rd century AD it contributed to the formation of the Chernyakhov culture, which is associated with the Goths who were in frequent conflict and contact with the Roman Empire. By the 4th century AD at the latest, several groups were distinguishable, among whom the Thervingi and Greuthungi were the most powerful. During this time, Ulfilas began the conversion of Goths to Arianism. | |||
* = Heather 2012b, p. 623. "Goths, a Germanic people, who, according to Jordanes' Getica, originated in Scandinavia. The Cernjachov culture of the later 3rd and 4th cents. ad beside the Black Sea, and the Polish and Byelorussian Wielbark cultures of the 1st–3rd. cents. ad, provide evidence of a Gothic migration down the Vistula to the Black Sea, but no clear trail leads to Scandinavia." | |||
* = Heather 2018, p. 673. "Goths. A Germanic *tribe whose name means ‘the people’, first attested immediately south of the Baltic Sea in the first two centuries." | |||
* = Pritsak 2005. | |||
* = Heather 2018, p. 673. | |||
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:'''Reply by Krakkos''' The lead is already long enough as it is, and contains too much original research already. Adding more original research would not be an improvement. The proper remedy would be to get rid of the original research and stick to what reliable ]s on the Goths say. I believe what ] writes on Jordanes in the '']'' (2012b) addresses Elphion's concerns.. Theories that are not mentioned in any reference work on the Goths doesn't belong in the lead of Misplaced Pages's article on the Goths. ] (]) 08:57, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::{{re|Krakkos}} You can't seriously be calling this original research because you have yourself written/edited such comments in the body of this same article, and I just more-or-less based it off that. Please double check your thoughts here, and confirm whether you made a mistake making this claim, or indeed if I made a mistake. | |||
::Concerning your "reference work" proclamation, can you define this so we can get it discussed now? Which sources are you accepting as "reference works"? Only this one dictionary entry? | |||
::Can you state any WP policy or anything similar which actually says that anything NOT mentioned in such a dictionary entry should not be included in leads of articles? Or should we describe this as a rule proposed by one editor?--] (]) 11:25, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Edit warring over the content and structure of the lead has been a big problem at this article ever since you decided to edit it a few days ago. This has resulted in the lead at times becoming confusing and excessively long. Recent ]s from '']'' and the '']'' on Goths, written by the world's foremost expert on the Goths (]), provide us with excellent summaries on the Goths. If everyone is permitted to insert cherry-picked information from sub-par secondary sources in the lead, edit warring will continue forever. I think this should be avoided. Modeling the lead upon our best reference works serves as an efficient antidote to further edit warring, not only for the lead, but for the entire article. But it seems like you want the edit warring to continue. ] (]) 11:53, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::So, please confirm your claims or proposals: | |||
::::*There are TWO "references" as per this rule or proposal (both short "dictionary" articles, and by the same author). Only those two right? | |||
::::*The proposed rule is that only these two sources can be used now, in the lead. Correct? | |||
::::*And any topic not in the lead will not be allowed in the entire article, I now read. Correct reading? (So the article will be entirely structured based on those dictionary articles.) | |||
::::*The source of this rule is not WP policy, but you Krakkos. | |||
::::Let me know if there are any misunderstandings. | |||
::::Please also let's make sure I understand how to describe this fairly. Shall we call it a proposal, demand, vision, etc ...or do you say it is just policy for example? (If it is policy or similar I'd again like to ask for a citation to explain where it is from.)--] (]) 12:12, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
I read your article but your assumption is wrong your studying an ancient haplogroup but I1 is very new only 3500 years. The Visigothic royalty also had dominant I1 ancestry. According to studies done Spain by archaeologists in Spain. | |||
== Footnote concern == | |||
They DNA tested Visigothic nobles graves and they also had a dominant I1 groupings in 2019. <ref>Olalde I, Mallick S, Patterson N, Rohland N, Villalba-Mouco V, Silva M, et al. (March 2019). "The genomic history of the Iberian Peninsula over the past 8000 years". Science. 363 (6432): 1230–1234. Bibcode:2019Sci...363.1230O. doi:10.1126/science.aav4040. PMC 6436108. PMID 30872528.</ref> | |||
https://www.geni.com/projects/I-CTS6364-Y-DNA/36181 | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} Concerning footnotes, there have been similar discussions already on other articles especially ] where your footnoting evolved to the point of having 14 footnotes per sentence, but apparently they need to be discussed anew on every article and you don't accept what others say? See just for example my edsum , and the revert . Some basic normal aims: | |||
*The number of footnotes should be kept to a minimum. | |||
*As much as possible, footnotes should be at the ends of paragraphs, or ends of sentences. Footnotes in the middle of a sentence should be avoided if possible. | |||
*Things which are uncontroversial, or which have already been sourced in the article, do not need to be sourced over and over, in every section and every paragraph and every sentence, or even several times per sentence. (For example, that the Goths spoke a Germanic language.) | |||
*In most cases, it is not necessary to give many sources for one assertion. When this is needed, it implies there is a dispute, so best practice is to discuss with other editors how to avoid it. I don't think that is your concern though, because your uncompromising source choice (Peter Heather dictionary articles, almost always) is not exactly aimed at consensus or agreement, and easily could be improved without controversy. | |||
*In most cases, it is not necessary to give long quotations to back up an exact wording. (This is only needed in cases where the interpretation of the original source might not be obvious.) | |||
Instead what we are seeing is the same things being sourced over and over, using the same sources or sources all by one author. Also the quotations being inserted are not needed and are generally including many extra words not relevant to what needs sources. (Even if they are generally relevant to the article or talk page in some way.) I also note non-obvious SYNTH cases like this (from the case mentioned above) which are not even needed: | |||
*Sentence to be sourced: They are today sometimes referred to as being ''Germani''. | |||
*Sentence being quoted: "Militarized freedmen among the Germani appear in sixth- and seventh-century Visigothic and Frankish law codes." | |||
All of the above is based on the normal MOS etc guidelines. {{ping|Krakkos}} why do you fight so hard against these norms, and why do you seem to want uncontroversial sentences to be overloaded like this? To me, looking at the extra words you keep in including, it seems the footnotes are kind of like a message to other editors about something?--] (]) 08:28, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:Some more examples of quesitonable footnotes recently done: | |||
:*Sentence to be sourced: Roman historians write that the Gutones were in close contact with the ] and ], and that they were at times in conflict with the ]. | |||
:*Irrelevant extra quote added: A people of ] called the Gutae, possibly identical to the later ], are also mentioned, and it's possible that this people had close relations or even shared origins with the Gutones. | |||
:And over-sourcing : | |||
:*Half sentence to be sourced: The Goths were ], | |||
:*Footnotes: <ref name="Heather_2007">{{harvnb|Heather|2007|p=467}}. "Goths – Germanic-speaking group first encountered in northern Poland in the first century AD."</ref> | |||
*Second half-sentence: and are classified as a ] people by modern scholars. | |||
:*Footnotes: <ref name="Heather_OXLA">{{harvnb|Heather|2018|p=623}}. "Goths. A Germanic *tribe whose name means ‘the people’, first attested immediately south of the Baltic Sea in the first two centuries."</ref><ref name="Heather_OCD">{{harvnb|Heather|2012b|p=623}}. "Goths, a Germanic people, who, according to Jordanes' Getica, originated in Scandinavia. The Cernjachov culture of the later 3rd and 4th cents. ad beside the Black Sea, and the Polish and Byelorussian Wielbark cultures of the 1st–3rd. cents. ad, provide evidence of a Gothic migration down the Vistula to the Black Sea, but no clear trail leads to Scandinavia."</ref><ref name="Pritsak_ODB">{{harvnb|Pritsak|2005}}. Goths... a Germanic people..."</ref><ref name="Thompson_EB">{{harvnb|Thompson|1973|p=609}}. "Goths, a Germanic people described by Roman authors of the 1st century a.d. as living in the neighbourhood of the mouth of the Vistula river."</ref>{{sfn|Pohl|2004|p=24}} | |||
Note that these two facts, the language and categorization, were already sourced in the lead. Look for example at the multiple uses of these footnotes all pointing to the same page, and yet cited together, over and over, sentence after sentence, already several times in the lead: | |||
*<ref name="Heather_OCD">{{harvnb|Heather|2012b|p=623}} | |||
*<ref name="Heather_OXLA">{{harvnb|Heather|2018|p=623}} | |||
*{{sfn|Heather|2018|p=673}} | |||
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Can anyone give a justification for the ''insistence'' upon such things? (These are apparently not just random mistakes, because they are insisted upon and the same thing happens over and over and will be added to as in other articles.)--] (]) 09:18, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Reply by Krakkos''' Per ], it is useful to add quotes to sources when sources are "not easily accessible" or when one wants to "indicate precisely which information the source is supporting". ] further states that "When there is dispute about whether a piece of text is fully supported by a given source, direct quotes and other relevant details from the source should be provided". The sources quoted from are not all easily accessible, their claims have been contested, and your misrepresentation of these sources, as illustrated ], makes quoting them necessary. Your stacking of additional unnecessary sources to an already heavily cited sentence reveals that ] is none of your concern. Your real concern is that this article contains sources contradicting your views. ] (]) 09:22, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::Which claims have been disputed? And given how easy it would be to use an accessible source, why insist on using the Oxford sources which you happened to have access to via Misplaced Pages Library? Two simple answers requested.--] (]) 09:32, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' ] is, according to ], determined by coverage in "commonly accepted reference texts". The best reference texts on the Goths are written by ] and published by ]. These sources have been contested and misrepresented by you innumerable times. That makes it necessary to quote them. ] (]) 09:40, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::I have asked you many times how you can possible argue that a source which no experts cite is the "best reference text". You keep answering each time as if it were the first time. ]. But how is this relevant here? Why do you keep just announcing that Heather's dictionary article is the best, all over this talk page? Concerning the examples you give of disputed claims, I do not see that any of them dispute the above sentences either? They seem irrelevant to this discussion? I do not see your reply as an answer. Can you please read again and look at the real examples.--] (]) 11:00, 27 February 2020 (UTC) To be specific, and spell it out, here are some obvious questions... | |||
::::::*Why do we need an extra source with a specific sentence about Gutes and Geats to back up a sentence about Vandals and Lugii and Suevi? | |||
::::::*Why do we three Heather citations every time where one would do? | |||
::::::*Why do we need to source that the Goths were Germanic speaking, which is not controversial, several times in the lead and then again and again in the body? | |||
::::::*What is Pritsak adding to Heather and Pohl in these cases? | |||
::::::*Why do we need to write out a whole text about "Militarized freedmen" when the sentence being sourced is only about the fact that Peter Heather uses the word Germani to refer to Goths?--] (]) 11:07, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
quote: "Current DNA research indicates that I1 was close to non-existent in most of Europe outside of Scandinavia and northern Germany before the Migration Period." | |||
::::BTW The example you give of my "stacking unnecessary sources" is a wonderful example of the shamelessly misleading way in which you write on talk pages. I hope everyone clicks on the example to see my adding of ONE reference by a person who is not named Peter Heather, and my clear explanation of why I understand it was ''needed'' to source ''our wording''! Of course if you think it was not needed, then you could have explained this to me before, BTW.--] (]) 09:39, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Yes please click the example. You removed directly relevant English-language sources from ] and ], while adding an only partially relevant ]-language source by ]. ] (]) 09:45, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::So you describe a reduction in footnotes as a stacking of footnotes, which proves, supposedly that I do not care about over-citation. Just to be clear.--] (]) 11:00, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}{{ping|Krakkos}} these were the questions originally raised here in this section. Can you explain why the footnotes have the above characteristics? Please do not forget this concern, if you want to make a stable long-term version of the article. These are normal logical concerns which future editors will also see and act upon if they find them in the current state.--] (]) 17:30, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:'''Reply by Krakkos''' You have a strong tendency to insert unsourced information in the lead and even rewrite information in the lead regardless of what the sources say. This makes adding sources with quotes necessary. Information on Goths being "Germanic speaking" was added by you to the lead (again regardless of what the source says). ] has an article on the Goths in ''The ]''. That source is much more relevant and useful than an only partially relevant German-language citation from ]. That ] classifies the Goths as Germani is noteworthy. If it wasn't you wouldn't have been whining about it here. ] (]) 09:12, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::The examples you show don't seem to show any problems at all (1 edit of already un-sourced information, 1 edit which did not change meaning). Whatever problems you claim I created anyway, they would not be ''helped'' by the problems described above. Your description of the sources is also wrong for the reasons explained elsewhere, and you can discuss elsewhere. But you are changing subject here. '''Please note the detailed examples mentioned above.''' Please either fix them or discuss here in a constructive way. These are basic, and pretty much indisputable. None of these specific bullets are about your quote length problem. Consider ] | |||
*Why do we need an extra source with a specific sentence about Gutes and Geats to back up a sentence about Vandals and Lugii and Suevi? (If it was an error just say so.) | |||
*Why do we three Heather citations every time where one would do? (The same author 3 times adds nothing in terms of any ] you might be trying to achieve about the field as a whole.) | |||
*Why do we need to source that the Goths were Germanic speaking, which is not controversial, several times in the lead and then again and again in the body? (No, I have not disputed this, so please stop implying that I have.) | |||
*What is Pritsak adding to Heather and Pohl in these cases? (We do not need multiple sources for such things, unless you are trying to achieve ] by counting how many writers agree with each other.) | |||
*Why do we need to write out a whole text about "Militarized freedmen" when the sentence being sourced is only about the fact that Peter Heather uses the word Germani to refer to Goths? (If it was an error just say so.)--] (]) 09:26, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} I think the above concerns (footnote examples) are really pretty striking, and would be seen as difficult to follow by almost anyone. So I really do think you should make a constructive attempt to explain why you insist upon, what you insist upon. Honestly it is very difficult to see any good rationale. (I can think of some reasons editors sometimes push for such things, but those are not good reasons.) Anyone who edits this article in the future, and wants to avoid problems with you forum shopping to admins, will need to understand and be able to predict what is acceptable to you.--] (]) 12:20, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
==Christensen example== | |||
::{{ec}} Here is an example which seems intended to be misleading, added yesterday : | |||
::*Sentence to be sourced: The earliest possible mentions of the Goths are Roman sources of the 1st century AD, who refer to a people called the "Gutones" living along the lower Vistula. | |||
::*<<harvnb|Christensen|2002|pp=32-33, 38-39>>. "During the first century and a half AD, four authors mention a people also normally identified with 'the Goths'. They seem to appear for the first time in the writings of the geographer Strabo... It is normally assumed that are identical with the Goths... It has been taken for granted that these Gotones were identical to the Goths... Finally, around 150, Klaudios Ptolemaios (or Ptolemy) writes of certain who are also normally identified with the 'the Goths'... Ptolemy lists the , also identified by Gothic scholars with the Goths..."</> | |||
::Christensen, despite the number of words pasted in, is actually arguing ''against'' this identification in the past. (It was published in 2002.) While recent works tend to cite Christensen as an important work bringing this identification into doubt, we are apparently using him in the opposite way. When we later mention doubts, we do not cite Christensen, but a very poor source (Mark) and the wording is very vague. Will anyone justify this one?--] (]) 09:30, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Christensen is not cited for that sentence. The sentence above is sourced from ] and ]. Christensen is cited in the next sentence. This "example" is dishonestly presented. ] (]) 09:49, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::My apologies. It is very hard to dismantle these over-footnoted paragraphs and I have made an error, but the problem does not go away. The statement being sourced is "The Gutones are generally" considered ancestral or even identical to the later Goths." So the problem is still there, and effectively my point above is the same. Can you explain why Christensen is being used to say the opposite of what he says?--] (]) 11:00, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Christensen is cited for the opposite of what he believes, not the opposite of what he says. He says that the Gutones are "normally" identified with the Goths, and that "it has been taken for granted that these Gotones were identical to the Goths". This article says, citing Christensen, that "The Gutones are generally considered ancestral or even identical to the later Goths." There is no misrepresentation of Christensen. ] (]) 11:10, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::No one reading the citation will be able to understand all that will they? They certainly won't be reading that already in 2002, this position being stated in our article was considered "taken for granted" IN THE PAST, and that the article we are citing is one of the main ones cited since, and DISAGREES with what ''used to be'' "taken for granted" IN THE PAST. To make it even worse, when you come to discuss disagreements below, you only cite Mark, and we only say some people disagree. In fact it would be more accurate to say that in the 21st century even supporters of Jordanes (such as Andersson in the RGA, explained above) no longer take it for granted. The RGA is a widely cited work, unlike your Oxford dictionaries. All of this is being censored and hidden from Misplaced Pages readers. Heather, in the meantime, has apparently not written any fresh research on this for a long time, and his stand points are often now out of line with people who have. For example his comments in the dictionaries you like do not even show awareness of more recent debates. Mind you, I suppose we do not really know when he wrote those little dictionary entries and what his instructions were. Those works are very long projects, and not designed to publish full explanations on all the latest debates. So, yes, Christensen, and the field generally, is being misrepresented.--] (]) 11:27, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Christensen writes that "it ''is'' normally assumed that" the Gutones "are identical with the Goths". Christensen is clearly not referring only to the past. Christensen's book is from 2002. The '']'' and '']'' are from 2012 and 2018 respectively, and thus more recent. As their articles on the Goths mentions no doubts about the equation between Gutones and Goths, this is still clearly a minority view, which should not be given ] in this article. ] (]) 11:44, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::How can you judge what a minority view is based on Oxford dictionary articles of unknown date and specifically not covering anything like differences of opinion? In contrast you ''knowingly'' insist on ignoring what RGA, Goffart, Edward James, Ian Wood, Pohl, Steinacher, Wolfram, etc etc etc all say. And YET, you cite a MUCH worse source, Mark, because you DO KNOW there is dispute. Strange no?--] (]) 12:04, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::...and unfortunately you distracted me successfully from the topic, which to remind, was: ''So, yes, Christensen, and the field generally, is being misrepresented.'' I think your answer basically confirms that you know this, because you've jumped straight to another argument to justify why you would block our readers from knowing this. And of course, by the way, Christensen was talking about the past. The reactions to Christensen's work show us what happened after 2002. And BTW Heather does not disagree I guess, he just does not mention it, as you would expect in a simplified little Oxford dictionary article.--] (]) 12:12, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Who is ] anyway? ] (]) 11:52, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::What is important to WP policy (WP:RS) is his reputation for reliability in the field of expertise, and this is shown by the extensive positive literature reviews and citations his work has gained. But he is I believe an associate professor at the University of Copenhagen. (This book was based on his Doctorate apparently. It seems Ian Wood and Lund were involved with his examination.) You should stop using red links as a way of avoiding real WP policy. --] (]) 12:04, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' We have someone who might have been an assistant professor at the ] who published a book through ] in 2002. Christensen is probably retired by now (he was born in 1945), meaning that he never made it past associate professor and never published any other noteworthy work except from this one. ], who is Chairman of the Medieval History Department and Professor of Medieval History at ], and considered the world's foremost authority on the ], has more recently written ''The Fall of Rome'' (2005) and ''Empires and Barbarians'' (2009). ''Empires and Barbarians'' contains no less than 842 references to "Goth", but flatly contradicts and makes no mention whatsoever of Christensen or his theories. Christensen's theories are flatly contradiced, and not even mentioned by any reliable ] on the Goths. ], who is the former Head of the Ancient History department and Professor of Ancient History at the ], has dismissed Christensen's theories as "surely too extreme", "little more than a long footnote to Heather's work", and something "only real enthusiasts will feel the need to consult". I'm sorry, but this stuff isn't suitable for the lead. ] (]) 16:30, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::{{ping|Krakkos}} it does not matter what you proclaim to me. These insults which you throw around at scholars are silly. And surely you've been in WP long enough to understand the basics of our RS policy. On Misplaced Pages, it matters what the experts cite when they write their focused works on this topic, and if they wanted to all cite a tweet by Donald Trump, or the instagram account of Justin Bieber then that is up to them, and WP tells us to pay attention to them, when they are writing their most focused work. As far as I know, Heather has not written any new focused monographs on this topic in the 21st century, that would tell us what he thinks about the latest debates, or at least you and I have not found them? What we know is that those who have, such as Goffart, Halsall, James, Ian Wood, Steinacher, Matthias Springer, who are certainly of comparable stature to Heather, do mention Christensen as the latest person to have done a proper study the question of Jordanes and the migrations. I can see on google that Walter Pohl has cited him several times also but can't seem to find one I can access. | |||
"The Pla de l'Horta villa near Girona in Spain is located in close proximity to a necropolis with a series of tombs associated with the Visigoths. The grave goods and the typology of the tombs point to a Visigothic origin of the individuals. A small number of individuals buried at the site were sampled for DNA analysis in a 2019 study. One of the samples belonged to haplogroup I1. This finding is in accordance with the common ancestral origin of the Visigoths and the Ostrogoths." | |||
{{od}} OTOH, Perhaps the closest I can find is a short footnote in his Afterword to Curta (ed.) where he complains about Goffart being "minimizing" about Jordanes and taking him as too "literary" and "deliberately misleading", but whatever all that means Heather also effectively says Goffart is correct that Jordanes and Paul the Deacon can be found to have "historical value only limited" and "it is very unclear that tell us anything at all profound about the deeper Germanic past before those kingdoms came into existence." | |||
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*{{citation|last=Heather |first=Peter|chapter=Afterword |editor-last=Curta |editor-first=Florin|title=Neglected Barbarians |year=2010|series=Studies in the Early Middle Ages|volume=32|page=606}} | |||
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So to spell it out: | |||
*You want to treat Heather as the only and "best" authority (which is absolutely the wrong approach according to WP policy) but anyway... | |||
*Heather, when he wrote a relatively recent comment about recent people mentioned not Christensen, but Goffart. So will you cite Goffart? Again, your attitude to him is completely wrong according to WP policy, but anyway... | |||
*Goffart cites Christensen. So Heather cites Goffart who cites Christensen. This is relevant to WP:RS, because it shows reputation on this topic. | |||
Really this article will in the long run cite Goffart and Christensen and Gillett too, who is another frequently cited person for Jordanes. (Heather is not.) I can't imagine any version of this article which deliberately censors such references can be stable and lasting. If I were you I would edit in a way that at least contributes something to the longer term result.--] (]) 17:27, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:'''Reply by Krakkos''' Nothing is being censored, but this article should not be defined and structured through non-mainstream theories. Goffart and Christensen are already mentioned in the article. Who is "Gillett"? ] and ] are the most cited scholars for ''Goths''. That's what matters. This article is about Goths, not Jordanes. ] (]) 17:46, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::But there are sections about Jordanes and in those sections... Why do I need to spell that out? Concerning Gillett, you must not have read my explanation about YOUR history of misrepresentations of scholars including Gillett, posted above. There are links there. I am guessing you probably never really carefully read what you were writing, or what answers were being given to you, the first time either. Despite your ridiculously strong comments about Gillett then, similar to your silly remarks more recently about Christensen. You are always too busy battling to actually carefully read sources, or other editors.--] (]) 18:00, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
I still watch this from a previous bot-invited RFC visit. So I don't have the depth & expertise here that y'all do and so my comments are from just a quick overview. I agree that it should be kept out. It looks like "somebody's research and interpretation of it" rather than something broad and solid enough (with secondary analysis) to be in an encyclopedia article. Various policies point out that type of a problem with this.<b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> (]) 13:38, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} your hypocritical abuse of WP:RS never ceases to amaze. Despite all your supposed concern about the low academic status of Christensen, you have no problem citing two very minor book reviews of him, despite there being so many positive big name reviews, which '''happen''' to defend Peter Heather!! , Do you realize how crude you sometimes appear? This is cherry picking from weak sources while you are STILL censoring the best known sources. The use of these reviews in this biased way is not something for a lasting and stable version. | |||
:Thanks for the input. The dubious genetic material shared by the IP should certainly be kept out. I'm open to including reliable material that is directly relevant to the Goths, but in such cases it should handled it carefully. In any case, the field of genetics is progressing rapidly, and more solid information will hopefully be available in the future. ] (]) 14:18, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
We are not writing an article about the beliefs of Peter Heather. We should not take his side on every issue, or censor or caricature any people who disagree with him. | |||
::Yes, but you are also "forgetting" that the articles you want to reintroduce into this article were put into multiple Misplaced Pages articles, not just this one. (Also, in articles like this one it was reproduced in multiple versions throughout the article, and you did not cooperate with discussions to improve that!) So the only questions which have really been relevant are about the neutrality of the summaries, and (as per the RFCs) the decision to place the main discussions in archaeology articles about the material cultures whose DNA is being discussed. There has been no purge, and no purge is proposed.--] (]) 14:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::'''Reply by Krakkos''' This is what ] says in 2009/2012 about the views of ] on the name of the Goths: | |||
:::{{talkquote|"In the period of Dacian and Sarmatian dominance, '''groups known as Goths – or perhaps 'Gothones' or 'Guthones' – inhabited lands far to the north-west, beside the Baltic. Tacitus placed them there at the end of the first century ad, and Ptolemy did likewise in the middle of the second''', the latter explicitly among a number of groups said to inhabit the mouth of the River Vistula. River Vistula. '''Philologists have no doubt''', despite the varying transliterations into Greek and Latin, '''that it is the same group name that suddenly shifted its epicentre from northern Poland to the Black Sea in the third century'''."{{cite book |last1=Heather |first1=Peter |author-link1=Peter Heather |translator-last1= |translator-first1= |translator-link1= |year=2012a |orig-year= |chapter= |trans-chapter= |chapter-url= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |title=Empires and Barbarians: The Fall of Rome and the Birth of Europe |trans-title= |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=suwVDAAAQBAJ |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page= |pages= |doi= |isbn=9780199892266 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:::Note that ] (as far as is known) is a historian, not a philologist. This is what top reviewers say about Christensen's theories: | |||
:::{{talkquote|"I think that '''Christensen has been too stringent in denying the existence of Gothic elements in the text'''. {{cite journal |last1=Wood |first1=Ian N. |author-link1=Ian N. Wood |date= |year=2003 |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |others= |title=Cassiodorus, Jordanes and the History of the Goths |script-title= |trans-title= |url=http://www.dendanskehistoriskeforening.dk//pdf_histtid/103_2/465.pdf |access-date=February 27, 2020 |url-access= |format= |department= |journal=] |type= |series= |language= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |publication-place= |publication-date= |volume=103 |issue=2 |page= |pages=465-484 |at= |nopp= |arxiv= |asin= |bibcode= |bibcode-access= |biorxiv= |citeseerx= |doi= |doi-access= |doi-broken-date= |isbn= |issn= |jfm= |jstor= |jstor-access= |lccn= |mr= |oclc= |ol= |ol-access= |osti= |osti-access= |pmc= |pmid= |rfc= |ssrn= |zbl= |id= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |via= |layurl= |laysource= |laydate= |quote= |postscript= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:::{{talkquote|"'''Christensen's''' conclusion... is therefore partly based on '''dubious reasoning''', which '''does nothing to strenghten the central argument of the book'''." {{cite journal |last1=Sønnesyn |first1=Sigbjørn |author-link1=|date= |year=2004 |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |others= |title=Arne Søby Christensen, Cassiodorus, Jordanes and the History of the Goths |script-title= |trans-title= |url=https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/03468750410005719 |access-date=February 27, 2020 |url-access= |format= |department= |journal=] |type= |series= |language= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |publication-place= |publication-date= |volume=29 |issue=3-4 |page= |pages=306-308 |at= |nopp= |arxiv= |asin= |bibcode= |bibcode-access= |biorxiv= |citeseerx= |doi=10.1080/03468750410005719 |doi-access= |doi-broken-date= |isbn= |issn= |jfm= |jstor= |jstor-access= |lccn= |mr= |oclc= |ol= |ol-access= |osti= |osti-access= |pmc= |pmid= |rfc= |ssrn= |zbl= |id= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |via= |layurl= |laysource= |laydate= |quote= |postscript= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:::{{talkquote|"This is '''surely too extreme'''... he fact remains that this, even if very clearly presented and argued, is '''little more than a long footnote to Heather's work'''; '''only real enthusiasts will feel the need to consult it'''." {{cite journal |last1=Whitby |first1=Michael |author-link1=Michael Whitby |date=October 2003 |year= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |others= |title=A. S. Christensen: Cassiodorus, Jordanes and the History of the Goths. Studies in a Migration Myth |script-title= |trans-title= |url=https://www.cambridge.org/core/journals/classical-review/article/s-christensen-cassiodorus-jordanes-and-the-history-of-the-goths-studies-in-a-migration-myth-pp-xi-391-copenhagen-museum-tusculanum-press-2002-cased-59-isbn-8772897104/54232C7F12C23D50970B9EB008189C61 |access-date=February 27, 2020 |url-access= |format= |department= |journal=] |type= |series= |language= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |publication-place= |publication-date= |volume=53 |issue=2 |page=498 |pages= |at= |nopp= |arxiv= |asin= |bibcode= |bibcode-access= |biorxiv= |citeseerx= |doi=10.1093/cr/53.2.498 |doi-access= |doi-broken-date= |isbn= |issn= |jfm= |jstor= |jstor-access= |lccn= |mr= |oclc= |ol= |ol-access= |osti= |osti-access= |pmc= |pmid= |rfc= |ssrn= |zbl= |id= |archive-url= |archive-date= |url-status= |via= |layurl= |laysource= |laydate= |quote= |postscript= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:::]'s reference to "real enthusiasts" was quite prophetic i must say. ] (]) 18:17, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::Well I am not quite sure what you mean but if you are saying I am taking a side then I hope that is not true. The point is much simpler. Your quotes are going too far and into too much detail and even taking a side. What you are not quoting is reviews, which is unusual and not a strong source. This is something you would do if we have several sections on this debate. But as you mentioned before, this is not even an article about Jordanes, and so the debates just have to be mentioned. Maybe reviews can be cited, but not the colorful stuff which verges on insults. The aim should be more like "some people like Heather and Wolfram say A, and some people like Goffart and Christensen argue differently, because.... Also I tend to think that just the reviews in books are going to be more neutral and authoritative. If I were citing a review article (these tend to be more colorful) I would normally only do it with a bigger name reviewer. Maybe it is best if you just look at it yourself with my words in mind and think about future critics of this article and not me. Comments like " a long footnote to Heather" are not encyclopedic. Take your time on getting this balance right. That is what I suggest. BTW I think the reviews I have read show that there is sympathy for Goffart, Christensen, and Gillett in between the lines. Nearly everyone has moved their position a bit even if it annoys them.--] (]) 19:41, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
== collecting quotes to help future discussion about pre 3rd century "pre" Goths == | |||
::::Concerning the remark about all philologists answered within the above, I think you also are missing the point. We are taking one sentence from one author which we know disagrees with everything else we are reading, for example Wolfram. Wolfram (like Andersson) is I think saying the Gutone and Gaut words might just have been related tribes - and that the connection is not actual mass migration. I think that is a really interesting and important trend in the field right? I am really enjoying Steinacher's style of explaining it also.--] (]) 19:41, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' ] equates the Gutones with the Goths just as Heather does: | |||
:::::{{talkquote|"Goths—or Gutones, as the Roman sources called them... The Gothic name appears for the first time between A.D. 16 and 18. We do not, however, find the strong form Guti but only the derivative form Gutones... Hereafter, whenever the Gutones and Guti are mentioned, these terms refer to the Goths." {{cite book |last=Wolfram |first=Herwig |author-link=Herwig Wolfram |translator-last1=Dunlap |translator-first1=Thomas J. |translator-link1= |year=1990 |chapter= |editor-last= |editor-first= |editor-link= |title=History of the Goths |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=xsQxcJvaLjAC |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page= |pages=18, 20, 23 |isbn=0520069838 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |via= |registration= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:::::] writes, like Heather, that the equation of the Gutones with the Goths is supported by ]s/]s: | |||
:::::{{talkquote|"inguists believe there is an indisputable connection." {{cite book |last1=Christensen |first1=Arne Søby |author-link1=Arne Søby Christensen |translator-last1= |translator-first1= |translator-link1= |year=2002 |orig-year= |chapter= |trans-chapter= |chapter-url= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |title=Cassiodorus, Jordanes and the History of the Goths |trans-title= |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=AcLDHOqOt4cC |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page=41 |pages= |doi= |isbn=9788772897103 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
Trying to help by saying something simple. Almost the whole field might agree with this? | |||
*Heather AGREES that the origins myths do not prove much. Is there any expert in this field saying "just trust Jordanes" any more? | |||
*Actually the criticism of Jordanes etc also means that we need to look at the archaeological and linguistic evidence. And it is pretty strong in this case. | |||
*HOWEVER, the new criticism means that the connection between the similar sounding names might not be a simple story of a large number of people moving from together with one unchanging name from Poland to Ukraine. The Traditionskern idea is ONE possible way that it might not have been that simple. Steinacher's comment about there being a "prestige name" is a similar idea. (Both could be true.) But in the end the point is that the details are uncertain. Maybe for us that is all we need to say?--] (]) 19:55, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::Steinacher's source for the prestige name bit is: | |||
*Andersson, Thomas (1998), zu Namen und Deutungen. in Goten 1. Philologisches in RGA 2 vol. 12 pp.402-403. I am looking.--] (]) 20:05, 27 February 2020 (UTC) Google: https://books.google.be/books?id=bcwfZW_soyMC --] (]) 20:15, 27 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
Even if we come to some clear action plans soon, it seems this topic might come back again, either here or on related articles, and discussions has been anything-but-helped by lumping big quotes into the normal talk page. So I hope this workpage helps: ].--] (]) 13:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
I think these points are still undeniably important for further editing: | |||
*Criticism of Jordanes as a source, associated perhaps mostly with Goffart, Gillett, and Christensen, IS "mainstream", and those writers ARE mainstream and highly respected and cited as such, so we should do the same. As shown above Heather's main concern could be seen as trying to show readers that he already thought something similar in the 1990s. (The differences between these commentators and their critics like Heather, Liebeschuetz, etc are about details I think are articles are not even mentioning.) | |||
*The manipulated Christensen quote as given above is misleading to a reader. That obviously has to be avoided, and would be easy to avoid in the case given just by avoiding the use of a manipulated long quote in the middle of a sentence. | |||
*I refer also to concerns mentioned above about the over use of long quotes and lots of similar quotes, which is bad for many reasons and not seen as better in any way on WP. (It is normally something an experienced editor will see as a red flag that there is a POV pusher at work.) Using ''quantity'' of quotes to win a battle is also ] by the way. | |||
*Over-reliance on any single author is never good, and this article currently has a worsening problem with this. It urgently needs to be moved in the opposite direction, of allowing more sources and more viewpoints. | |||
*Allowing more viewpoints does NOT mean adding something like "some scholars disagree but they have been called illogical and biased in book reviews". Obviously. | |||
*Use of short dictionary articles written to reflect the position of only one academic is bad, and should especially be totally avoided on any topic which involves a known debate or complexity in the field. These quite simply are NOT the best sources, and battling on and on about it is getting no where. This can be confirmed by community feedback at ] if necessary.--] (]) 07:51, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Criticism of ], and theories by ] and ], are already mentioned in the article. Christensen's theories are labelled "too extreme" by ], and neither him nor his theories are discussed in any way in our best secondary sources or ]s on the Goths. Regardless, this article is about Goths, it's not about ] or '']''. Who is "Gillett", and why should his theories be given equal weight to those of ] and ]? ] (]) 09:20, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::I have answered who Andrew Gillett is above. You have written about him before in quite strong words that turned out to be ridiculous, which is an experience you should have learned from. The point about that is Krakkos, that IF Jordanes needs to be discussed, which surely seems to be the case, then Andrew Gillett is a recent and more specialized source than Heather. Your first sentence has ambiguous pronouns, but in any case Goffart, Christensen and Gillett ARE, undeniably, some of the "best secondary sources" on Jordanes and what he says about the Goths. Dictionary articles which don't discuss disputes are, in contrast, unsuitable for WP use on any discussions of debated points (]). Heather and Wolfram, as authors, are clearly experts, but their main detailed publications were in the 1980s and 1990s. If they have not written about some recent publication in one of the recent short works, it basically proves nothing. But of course they DO both cite Goffart, and Goffart who has written in more detail more recently, cites more people. The implications for WP:RS can't be more clear. If we need to confirm community norms at WP:RSN let's just do it, but honestly you must already see that all roads will lead to the same result. | |||
:::Concerning the article as a whole though, the above bullet list covers more real issues. The article is currently being dominated by Heather and anyone who agrees with him. In many parts of the article this has only gotten worse. That is not a long-run sustainable situation. This is not just a disagreement with one other editor who has a different "taste"; but a basic policy issue which there is no point banging your head against over and over and over.--] (]) 09:42, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|Krakkos}} here are the two places you have focused on Christensen in the article. I hope the problems are obvious to you. | |||
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::The Gutones are generally considered ancestral or even identical to the later Goths, but not everyone accepts this. | |||
{{color|red|<Just to consider how bad the above is, it flat out disagrees with Wolfram. He is presumably included in "everyone".>}} {{colour|green|'''Proposal''': ''A simpler sentence would be uncontroversial and would not need all these SYNTH sources. EG:'' "The Vistula Gutones are generally considered to have a connection to the later Ukraine Goths, and to share an etymologically related name."}} | |||
:'''Evidence from classical sources''' | |||
::Historian Arne Søby Christensen has argued that the Gutones and similarly named peoples mentioned by early Roman authors were possibly not identical to the Goths, but '''concedes that such an equation is generally accepted and makes sense chronologically'''. Christensen's theories have rejected as "based on dubious reasoning" and "surely too extreme" by other historians such as Michael Whitby, who considers them "little more than a long footnote" to what has already been published on the subject by Peter Heather and others. Among philologists and linguists, there is no doubt that "Gutones" and similar names mentioned by early Roman authors is the same as that of the Goths. | |||
{{color|green|'''Proposal''': Historian Arne Søby Christensen has argued that the Gutones mentioned by early Graeco-Roman authors were possibly not identical to the Goths, though it has been "taken for granted" by many scholars. Among philologists and linguists, there is no doubt that "Gutones" and similar names mentioned by early Roman authors is based upon the same etymological word root as that of the Goths.}} | |||
:'''Footnotes''' | |||
*30 Christensen 2002, pp. 32-33, 38-39. "During the first century and a half AD, four authors mention a people also normally identified with 'the Goths'. They seem to appear for the first time in the writings of the geographer Strabo... It is normally assumed that are identical with the Goths'''...''' It has been taken for granted that these Gotones were identical to the Goths'''...''' Finally, around 150, Klaudios Ptolemaios (or Ptolemy) writes of certain who are also normally identified with the 'the Goths'... Ptolemy lists the , also identified by Gothic scholars with the Goths..." | |||
*31 Christensen 2002, p. 41. "However, linguists believe there is an indisputable connection." {{color|red|i.e. between the WORDS, not the WHOLE POPULATIONS. BTW as an example Christensen cites Wolfram and quotes him, so the meaning is 100% clearly different from our sentence}} | |||
*32 Christensen 2002, p. 343. "They might possibly have been mentioned in some geographical and ethnographical works dating from the first century AD, but the similarity in the names is not significant'''...''' {{color|red|}} Chronologically it would, of course, be quite a '''realistic possibility'''..." {{color|red|<Missing:>...since we have demonstrated that Jordanes's account of the battle between Goths and Romans during the reign of Emperor Domitian, in the first century, had nothing to do with Gothic history. <Christensen is pointing out that it is '''possible''' not that it "makes sense"! The specific context is showing that different accepted theories conflict with each other, and it is clear "makes sense" is not the intended meaning.}} | |||
*70 Whitby 2003, p. 498. "This is surely too extreme... he fact remains that this, even if very clearly presented and argued, is little more than a long footnote to Heather's work; only real enthusiasts will feel the need to consult it." {{color|green|<prososal: remove this source, an unknown book review, entirely from the whole article>}} | |||
*71 Sønnesyn 2004, p. 308. "Christensen's conclusion... is therefore partly based on dubious reasoning, which does nothing to strenghten the central argument of the book." {{color|green|<prososal: remove this source, an unknown book review, entirely from the whole article>}} | |||
*72 Wood 2003, p. 484. "I think that Christensen has been too stringent in denying the existence of Gothic elements in the text." | |||
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I don't think this is acceptable balanced writing, and accurate use of our sources. The cherry picking of words and careful removals of key bits to change the meaning are stunning. In fact, what scholars agree, and what Christensen is referring to is the connection between the WORDS, not the peoples. Wolfram etc are NOT arguing the words equate to whole peoples, but only to small culturally significant elites.--] (]) 11:04, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::This subsequent edit makes it worse, more clearly misrepresents Wolfram and others . The connection is between words, not whole peoples.--] (]) 11:44, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::'''Reply by Krakkos''' | |||
:::{{talkquote|"henever the Gutones and Guti are mentioned, these terms refer to the Goths." {{cite book |last=Wolfram |first=Herwig |author-link=Herwig Wolfram |translator-last1=Dunlap |translator-first1=Thomas J. |translator-link1= |year=1990 |chapter= |editor-last= |editor-first= |editor-link= |title=History of the Goths |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=xsQxcJvaLjAC |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page= |pages=23 |isbn=0520069838 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |via= |registration= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:::] (]) 11:52, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::You have yourself been citing other remarks by Wolfram, including from more recent works, which show why this quote is not giving an accurate impression of what he believes. Not even close and there is no way you can deny that you know this, surely?--] (]) 12:11, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{talkquote|"the question is not whether Scandinavia was the "original homeland of the Goths"; at best it is whether certain Gothic clans came from the north across the Baltic Sea to the Continent". (Wolfram 1990 p.37)}} | |||
:::::Apparently as a battling pointy edit, you've now added to the front of the paragraph so as to emphasize controversial aspects of your work and show you are not going to pay any attention to the concerns of other editors: "{{color|red|All}} philologists and linguists consider them to be the same names." How is that encyclopedic writing and a balanced accurate use of a range of sources? | |||
:::::What are you trying to achieve with this?--] (]) 12:11, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' | |||
::::::{{talkquote|"Philologists have no doubt, despite the varying transliterations into Greek and Latin, that it is the same group name that suddenly shifted its epicentre from northern Poland to the Black Sea in the third century." {{cite book |last1=Heather |first1=Peter |author-link1=Peter Heather |translator-last1= |translator-first1= |translator-link1= |year=2012 |orig-year= |chapter= |trans-chapter= |chapter-url= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |title=Empires and Barbarians: The Fall of Rome and the Birth of Europe |trans-title= |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=suwVDAAAQBAJ |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page=115 |pages= |doi= |isbn=9780199892266 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
::::::] (]) 12:41, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::So, to spell it out and go through one more step, please remove the word "All". It is not in the source, and it goes beyond the source and even if one source said this, we are not here to represent one writer. | |||
:::::::...and then there are the numerous obvious distortions shown above, which need to be fixed please...--] (]) 13:06, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I have made two proposed new texts for the two distorted paragraphs above. They show, honestly, that it is very easy to avoid the unnecessary controversy and source synthesis within thickets of footnotes which seem to keep thickening. Can we use the proposed green sentences?--] (]) 13:25, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' Using the proposals in the green text would involve the removal of quality sources and the misrepresentations of remaining sources. This is unhelpful and i'm opposed to it. The article ], which you have recently completely rewritten, contains HUGE amounts of unsourced text. Why can't you instead work on improving your own poor articles? Why can't you just leave me alone? ] (]) 13:45, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} I am already giving you a LOT of leeway and taking a much softer approach than many Wikipedians would. '''What you are insisting upon above is a deliberate distortion of our reporting of individual authors, works and the field as a whole.''' The problem with your way of thinking is that I do not own and articles, and neither do you. We are part of a community which has a lot of "rules" or norms. Secondly these are not just proposals above, but also a careful explanation of problems, where you are, I think quite knowingly, ignoring and working against the community norms. If my concerns are mistaken, then you can explain. If you have other ways of addressing them, then fine. But just trying to bully and push other editors in circles is not going to work Krakkos. If you can't accept the community way of working then you need to accept that a lot of the work you are doing will not last (on ANY article). Maybe you should develop your own website or work on one of those less strict ones where more original research is allowed? Personally I work on different websites or other types of publication when I feel like doing different types of work - and I think many Wikipedians do. Anyway, your response is nonsensical in terms of WP norms, and the concerns raised above are relatively serious (because your own posts seem to shown this is deliberately fraudulent, not just naive synth and misreading) and need a solution ASAP.--] (]) 14:09, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:{{ping|Krakkos}} so do I take it you are adamantly refusing to make any sorts of edits to correct the obvious problems shown above? I am still hoping YOU will CHOOSE to fix them, but let me know if this is a foolish hope.--] (]) 15:18, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:I've gone ahead and started a new article: ]. There seems to be a clear enough agreement that any attempt to expand discussions of this topic ''needs to be done somewhere else'', and I believe our explanations of the topic need expansion somewhere on Misplaced Pages if they are to be clear and accurate. Highly compressed versions are constantly going to be controversial distractions. From my work on this new article so far, a single independent article does seem possible. (I am open to other ideas about merging it to other Goth-related articles. Other relevant articles are ], ], ], and ] but I think the overlap is OK at this point.) I really hope this helps us in the future. I truly believe it ''can''.--] (]) 10:45, 29 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Caricatures of ] == | |||
::'''Note added later:''' censoring WP to block mention of Goffart and several other normal authorities was also a theme of problems on ], where {{ping|Krakkos}} found himself in opposition with all other editors. I should therefore link to some example discussions, which also involve, like on this article, attempts to censor sources including anything published in German: ,,.--] (]) 18:16, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
== New section on warfare == | |||
As I write, here are all the mentions of Walter Goffart, and these are being added to and made worse today. Maybe I should just let them speak for themselves. They are clearly a travesty of biased writing. This can not be depicted as an attempt to give a fair summary of the field. It also completely distorts the "favoured" authors like Heather who are made to look as crude as Krakkos! Heather (and Goffart) do sometimes use overblown rhetoric, but using it selectively like this is shameful, without exaggeration, to see in Misplaced Pages. | |||
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:'''Jordanes and Getica''': | |||
::Jordanes' account is controversial, and certainly contains many inaccuracies.{{color|red|<1994 source despite so many newer ones??>}} It has not been possible to confirm archaeologically his account of a Gothic origin in Scandinavia. '''Walter Goffart''' claims that the Getica is an entirely fabricated propaganda piece produced as part of a political conspiracy, with no foundation in oral tradition. {{color|red|<1994 source despite so many newer ones??>}} Critics of Jordanes typically argue that since his work contains certain obvious errors, it must be entirely unreliable. Because he considers Jordanes completely unreliable, '''Goffart''' further charges that all archaeological evidence on the early Goths is unreliable, as this evidence is connected to Jordanes.{{color|red|<using weak source for crude wording, instead of citing Goffart himself; sentence should be removed>}} '''Goffart's''' theories on Getica has by Peter Heather been rejected as a "flawed" and "unconvincing" conspiracy theory.{{color|red|<we do not need to, we may not, sycophanticlly imitate all the rhetorical colour which makes more sense outside of an encyclopedic context of course>}} Herwig Wolfram considers Getica to be a work of indispensable value to Gothic history. He considers it a relic of Gothic oral tradition, and believes that the Gothic elite originated in Scandinavia.{{color|red|<1994 source but Heather seems to have shifted position since then and no longer writes so strongly?>}} Heather also suggests that Getica is partially based on authentic Gothic tradition. Jordanes' account of Gothic settlement in modern-day Poland is considered accurate by most historians.{{color|red|<weak source for crude strong wording. This sentence should be removed.>}} | |||
:'''Archaeological evidence''' | |||
::'''Certain scholars, such as Walter Goffart''', completely ignore archaeological evidence on the Goths. {{color|red|<striking source distortion and no attempt to cite the actual author. see fn note below>}} They contend that archaeological evidence on the Goths is largely derived from Jordanes, and because they consider Jordanes unreliable, this makes archaeological evidence on the Goths unreliable as well. {{color|red|<this minor book review is not the right way to cite Goffart. read Goffart instead>}} | |||
:Footnotes: | |||
*24. Mark 2014. {{color|green|<prososal: remove this source, a paywall online educational webpage, entirely from the whole article>}} | |||
*30. Mark 2014. "Historians such as Peter Heather have identified Gothiscandza with Gdansk in modern Poland, and this theory is generally supported..." {{color|green|<prososal: remove this source, a paywall online educational webpage, entirely from the whole article>}} | |||
*45 Heather 1994, p. 3.{{color|red|<1994 source but Heather seems to have shifted position since then and no longer writes so strongly?>}} | |||
*46 Heather 1994, p. 40.{{color|red|<1994 source but Heather seems to have shifted position since then and no longer writes so strongly?>}} | |||
*47 Whitby 2003, p. 498. {{color|green|<prososal: remove this source, an unknown book review, entirely from the whole article>}} | |||
*48 Mark. {{color|green|<prososal: remove this source, a paywall online educational webpage, entirely from the whole article>}} | |||
*49 Heather 1994, pp. 43, 45.{{color|red|<1994 source but Heather seems to have shifted position since then and no longer writes so strongly?>}} | |||
*50 Heather 2012a, p. 667. "In my view, the textual evidence indeed suggests that Jordanes worked using Cassiodorus' text (as he claims) and I find the various conspiracy theories that have been offered against this unconvincing." | |||
*51 Heather 1994, p. 7.{{color|red|<1994 source but Heather seems to have shifted position since then and no longer writes so strongly?>}} | |||
*52 Sønnesyn 2004, p. 308. "Peter Heather has argued that Jordanes' account of the genealogy of the Amal family may in part be based on a Gothic tradition. This claim is opposed by Christensen with something looking suspiciously like circular argumentation." {{color|green|<prososal: remove this source, an unknown book review, entirely from the whole article>}} | |||
*83. Heather 2012a, p. 650. {{color|red|<''Really''? Heather really wrote "Goffart ... objects to '''old-style assumptions''', based on the famous Jordanes, Getica 26-32, that Scandinavia in particular and Germania in general was a womb of nations, endlessly producing future invaders of the Roman Empire until was overwhelmed. As a comment on old-fashioned historiography, '''this is fair enough''', though his work does not '''engage''' with the '''detailed''' archaeological evidence". What a difference!! Also the footnote number should be cited, because we are citing a note here!>}} | |||
::We should take a step back as judges of the whole field to consider whether Heather is an archaeologist? No. Is he more "archaeological"? Well, here some context. One of his most recent papers on Gothic origins matters was his afterword to Florin Curta's book of paper's mainly archaeological: | |||
::*{{citation|last=Heather |first=Peter|chapter=Afterword |editor-last=Curta |editor-first=Florin|title=Neglected Barbarians |year=2010|series=Studies in the Early Middle Ages|volume=32}} | |||
::Let us then consider Curta's MORE recent paper which is quite relevant on this: | |||
::*{{citation|first=Florin |last=Curta|chapter=Migrations in the Archaeology of Eastern and Southeastern Europe in the Early Middle Ages (Some Comments on the Current State of Research) |title=Migration History of the Medieval Afroeurasian Transition Zone|editor-first1=Johannes |editor-last1=Preiser-Kappeler|editor-first2=Lucian |editor-last2=Reinfandt |editor-first3=Ioannis |editor-last3=Stouraitis |year=2020 |pages=101-138|url=https://www.academia.edu/41330449/Migrations_in_the_archaeology_of_Eastern_and_Southeastern_Europe_in_the_early_Middle_Ages_some_comments_on_the_current_state_of_research_}} | |||
::{{talkquote|The idea that the Goths migrated out of northern Europe to the fringes of the Empire rests “mainly on the evidence of a single ancient source, the Getica of Jordanes, around which complicated structures of scholarly hypothesis have been built”.5 One could argue in principle that the Sântana de Mureş Černjachov culture came into being “because of a migration out of the Wielbark regions, but one might equally argue that it was an indigenous development of local Pontic, Carpic, and Dacian cultures”.6 Peter Heather, however, is skeptical about skepticism. To him, there can be no doubt that the Wielbark people morphed into the Sântana de Mureş Černjachov people, who became Goths in the course of a century-long migration across Eastern Europe, from the Baltic to the Black Sea.7 The lack of archaeological evidence in support of such a model of early medieval migration is gleefully dismissed etc. }} | |||
::So if this is what an archaeology-connected collaborator with the right specialization thinks of Heather on this exact type of topic, can someone give any reason to treat Heather as the only source we need for Gothic archaeology? I am thinking that is a mistaken methodology which {{ping|Krakkos}} should not insist upon any more.--] (]) 18:44, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
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{{ping|Krakkos}} ''really''? As a specific recommendation on one detail I believe Mark, Whitby, and Sønnesyn are weak sources being used inappropriately and add nothing to this article. They should be removed entirely as far as I can see.--] (]) 10:27, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:'''Reply by Krakkos''' ] ''does'' consider ] completely unreliable, and he ''does'' ignore archaeological evidence on the Goths because he considers such evidence as derived from Jordanes. These aren't caricatures, but facts. ] and Sønnesyn aren't cited for Goffart's theories. This is a misrepresentation by you. ] (]) 10:39, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::No, this is a misrepresentation of what said about Whitby and Sønnesyn. And yes, Goffart said various things, but the above PRESENTATION of him as an authority is a ridiculous crude caricature. If you can not understand that balancing sources requires a certain style of presentation you should not be editing Misplaced Pages. Why do you keep trying to push things like this, which are so obviously inappropriate and never going to be accepted by this community?--] (]) 11:14, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
Another use of Goffart connects to other problems with the way of using sources... | |||
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The Goths and other East Germanic-speaking groups, such as the Vandals and Gepids, eventually came to live outside of Germania, {{color|red|<No, not all of them did, which means this is wrong>}} and were thereafter {{color|red|<misleading word! they never had been...>}} never considered Germani by ancient Roman authors {{color|red|<Except Apollinarus Sidonius and the Burgundians, but this is far from relevant here, but it makes this text wrong>}}, who consistently categorized them among the "Scythians" or other peoples who had historically inhabited the area. | |||
{{color|green|PROPOSAL: The Goths and other East Germanic-speaking groups, such as the Vandals and Gepids, were never called "Germani" (]) by Graeco-Roman authors, who consistently categorized them as "Scythians" and associated their ancestry with other Danubian and steppe peoples such as Getians, Huns and Sarmatians.}} | |||
*15. Goffart 1989, p. 112. "Goths, Vandals, and Gepids, among others, never called themselves German or were regarded as such by late Roman observers." | |||
*16. Goffart 2010, p. 5 "The use of “German” waned sharply in late antiquity, when, for example, it was mainly reserved by Roman authors as an alternative to “Franks” and never applied to Goths or the other peoples living in their vicinity at the eastern end of the Danube." {{color|red|<actually this footnote is irrelevant to this article, it is about the OTHER "real" Germani. The term was NEVER used for the East Germanic speakers>}} | |||
*17 Wolfram 2005, p. 5. "Goths, Vandals, and other East Germanic tribes '''were differentiated from the Germans''' and were referred to as Scythians, Goths, or some other special names." | |||
*18. Heather 2007, p. 467. "Goths – Germanic-speaking group first encountered in northern Poland in the first century AD."{{color|red|I presume this work, not much used on this article, was cited here instead of the "best" most recent Heather works, because the wording was handy for POV?>}} | |||
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:'''Reply by Krakkos''' ] writes (correctly) that the Vandals and Goths were initially considered Germani. None of the sources used say that Roman writers associated Gothic ancestry with "Huns and Sarmatians." This proposal will amount to a misrepresentation of the sources and original research. I don't consider it an improvement. You recently completely rewrote the article ], and that article still contains huge amounts of unsourced text and other issues. Why can't you instead work on improving that article, and permit me to work in peace on this one together with ]? Why can't you just leave me alone? ] (]) 14:02, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::{{re|Krakkos}} really? If we need to add more sources to make your point then we just do that. Indeed your must have other sources in mind it seems because now you mention Herwig Wolfram saying something which is NOT cited above. So clearly adding a source ''when it is really needed'', (I don't normally need to oversource because I am not a controversial editor pushing POVs), is something we both understand and know how to do. Can you please give the Wolfram citation now?? Let's see what he really said. But I think "Goths" were NEVER called Germani, and that is what our sources say. '''You know this.''' I think this can direction of explanation will just go in circles and end up at the same conclusion: the sentence needs to be changed. It is deliberately misleading and deliberately distorts what authors, publications and the field says. | |||
::Did ] offer to work on the content of the article BTW? In answer to your question of why I don't want to "leave you alone", this is WP. It is a joint effort by a community.--] (]) 14:31, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::'''Reply by Krakkos''' The fact that Wikipdia is a community effort does not entitle you to ] other editors. Jens Lallensack has come up with a solution, but you do not seem to be abiding by it. ] (]) 14:50, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::You should have learned by now NOT to continually twist the words of others, including other Wikipedians, sources, policies etc. This might feel like it is working when you are laying low and working on unknown articles and categories, but this is not something you should keep taking for granted now. I have indeed been trying to mainly post my concerns on this talk page, rather than editing, giving you a chance to show good faith. Having made that major concession your edits and talk page posts show ''absolutely no concern at all for such concerns''. I have limited myself to commenting a small % of the mass of POV edits you are making, and you are seeing that as a signal to do even more. This is highly problematic because it is very difficult to come back later and retrace all the source distortions for example. So your bad faith behavior is where the problem is. If you just accepted to fix some of the ''obvious'' problems I point to instead of throwing up surreal smoke screens and parent-shopping all the time, imagine what that would be like...--] (]) 15:14, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::{{ping|Krakkos}} I presume you will not be bringing any source to the table which shows Wolfram or anyone else demonstrating that Goths were EVER called Germani or Germanic peoples before modern times. (As per discussion above.) If I misunderstand, here is where to post!--] (]) 18:18, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' | |||
::::::{{talkquote|"lready in late antiquity '''the Germanic name''' was limited first to the Alamanni and then to the Franks as the dominant tribal groups in traditional Germania. While the '''Gutones, the Pomeranian precursors of the Goths, and the Vandili, the Silesian ancestors of the Vandals, were still considered part of Tacitean Germania''', the later Goths, Vandals, and other East Germanic tribes were differentiated from the Germans and were referred to as Scythians, Goths, or some other special names. The sole exception are the Burgundians, who were considered German because they came to Gaul via Germania." {{cite book |last=Wolfram |first=Herwig |author-link=Herwig Wolfram |year=1997 |chapter= |editor-last= |editor-first= |editor-link= |title=The Roman Empire and Its Germanic Peoples |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=tOnQDfRU-poC |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page=5 |pages= |isbn=978-0520085114 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |via= |registration= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
::::::{{talkquote|"Archaeologists equate the earliest history of the Goths with the artifacts of a ] named after the East Prussian town ]... In any case, the Goths—or Gutones, as the Roman sources called them - were initially under foreign domination... '''henever the Gutones and Guti are mentioned, these terms refer to the Goths'''." {{cite book |last=Wolfram |first=Herwig |author-link=Herwig Wolfram |translator-last1=Dunlap |translator-first1=Thomas J. |translator-link1= |year=1990 |chapter= |editor-last= |editor-first= |editor-link= |title=History of the Goths |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=xsQxcJvaLjAC |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page= |pages=12, 23 |isbn=0520069838 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |via= |registration= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
::::::{{talkquote|"In the period of Dacian and Sarmatian dominance, '''groups known as Goths – or perhaps 'Gothones' or 'Guthones' – inhabited lands far to the north-west, beside the Baltic. Tacitus placed them there''' at the end of the first century ad, and Ptolemy did likewise in the middle of the second, the latter explicitly among a number of groups said to inhabit the mouth of the River Vistula. River Vistula. Philologists have no doubt, despite the varying transliterations into Greek and Latin, that it is the same group name that suddenly shifted its epicentre from northern Poland to the Black Sea in the third century." {{cite book |last1=Heather |first1=Peter |author-link1=Peter Heather |translator-last1= |translator-first1= |translator-link1= |year=2012 |orig-year= |chapter= |trans-chapter= |chapter-url= |editor1-last= |editor1-first= |editor1-link= |title=Empires and Barbarians: The Fall of Rome and the Birth of Europe |trans-title= |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=suwVDAAAQBAJ |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher=] |page=115 |pages= |doi= |isbn=9780199892266 |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
::::::{{talkquote|"Beyond the Ligii are the '''Gothones, who are ruled by kings, a little more strictly than the other German tribes'''." {{cite book |last=Tacitus |author-link=Tacitus |translator-last1=Church |translator-first1=Alfred John |translator-link1=Alfred John Church |translator-last2=Brodribb |translator-first2=William Jackson |translator-link2= |year=1876 |chapter= |editor-last= |editor-first= |editor-link= |title=Germania |url=https://en.wikisource.org/Germania_(Church_%26_Brodribb) |series= |language= |volume= |edition= |location= |publisher= |page=XLIV |pages= |isbn= |archive-url= |archive-date= |access-date= |via= |registration= |subscription= |quote= |ref=harv}}}} | |||
:::::: ] (]) 19:41, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Thanks... So to be clear, Wolfram does NOT say that the Romans or Greeks called '''Goths''' ''Germani'' or Germanic peoples. He does, unsurprisingly given our understanding of his proposals say that the "precursors" were called Germani. Consider (1) ] ] and (2) as shown above recently, Wolfram's most recent understanding of precursor means only that there is some kind of cultural/elite connection between the two peoples with similar names (so we have to explain to our readers that "same people" here means "people with related elites" or something like that? (To be clear, he has specifically noted, as you know, that the Goths can NOT be the Gutones of Tacitus in a literal sense) and (3) we know that even in this weak form the field is not in a consensus. Heather and his fans prefer to talk about how the archaeological data shows a general movement in the right direction, though it tells us no exact tribal histories and names. Am I wrong?--] (]) 20:16, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
::::::::'''Reply by Krakkos''' In view of what is cited above, i don't think there is any reason to rewrite ]. I'll leave it up to the rest of the community to make up their opinion. ] (]) 20:52, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} Concerning '''Classification''', I've noted the multiple ''factual'' mistakes of wording above in red and putting aside the way you need to '''synthesize''' several sources to defend yourself on ONE of those factual mistakes, when we report the field consensus in Misplaced Pages voice we can not be choosing our favorite position and censoring or ridiculing all the others. The uncontroversial baseline is what most experts would agree with, and then differences between them need to be explained neutrally as a next step. Neutrally, of course, does not mean looking for sycophantic minor book reviews to explain the positions of the people we don't like in a ridiculing way, instead of citing the authors and their supporters in a fair way themselves, which shows their arguments in their best (and most interesting) forms. | |||
{{u|Joe Flats 123}}, I think all or most of the material you've added is not specifically about Goths but about what we modern people call "Germanic peoples"? Ancient authors did provide distinct descriptions of the Goths, but I think you are using descriptions of ''other'' Germanic peoples? Roman authors repeatedly insisted that the Goths were a Scythian people in terms of their customs etc. For example, a major part of the new material is a block of text from Mauricius about the "Fair haired peoples" such as Franks and Lombards. These are western European groups who the Romans did not associate with the Goths. The Strategikon has a different section for discussion about Scythian peoples, and in Book IV this work makes clear that Goths, as in other works, are Scythian. Are you not using the wrong section of the Strategikon? To give an example of a difference, while the fair haired peoples can easily be drawn out of formation by simulated retreats, the Goths are experts in performing such simulated retreats. And rather than being happy to dismount, like the fair-haired peoples, this work claims that because they grow up on horseback, the Scythians are not happy walking around on foot. If on the other hand we say this is not explicitly enough about Goths, that's fine, but we can't use descriptions of western europeans as a stand-in, surely?--] (]) 16:12, 30 June 2022 (UTC) | |||
As usual, after writing out the normal common sense approach on WP to such matters, I ask myself why I constantly have to explain such obvious things for one special WP editor, over and over and over. And indeed why bother. Krakkos listens to no one. | |||
{{u|Andrew Lancaster}} I think you are right for the Strategikon section, i will delete that. However, i know that the paragraph or two before that talks about weapons and armour explicitly for the Goths, so i wont delete that. :) | |||
There are also the other two sections above, '''Jordanes and Getica''', and '''Archaeological evidence'''? To be really clear about what I have demonstrated above, given that euphemisms clearly win me nothing, they are deliberate tabloid quality partisanship. {{ping|Krakkos}} you've made great "efforts" (appealing to admins etc) to get this far in these efforts, but this BS can't remain. This style makes WP into a sycophantic bully boy for your favorite author, crudely attacking other authorities that the author in question, not known for being soft himself, would never be so dishonest to do in a similar way. It is surreal to see something like this on WP. If you see any way of explaining why that should be acceptable, then please do explain. I think my position is clear unless new information changes it.--] (]) 22:15, 28 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
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== another re-appearance of the DNA section == | |||
== a drafting table == | |||
@] I don't know who reintroduced the genetics section, but you have reintroduced strong claims into another section, about the name of the Goths, indicating that DNA proves the "Goths" to be from Scandinavia. There is no such evidence, and this has been discussed and agreed here several times in the past. Of course there could be new evidence one day, but I don't see it? | |||
To save space here, and keep discussions hopefully more compressed and easy to connect I am making a table of drafting remarks for the article, on a drafting page on my userspace. https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Andrew_Lancaster/Germanic_peoples_drafting (It can be moved to here or somewhere else.) One aim is to have links to any relevant past discussions. I have started by breaking up the lead and adding some basic remarks. There is a third column where short notes can perhaps be added... . Feedback welcome, or indeed ''called-for''. --] (]) 15:49, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
*The Genomic Atlas website you are now citing as a new source does not appear to be a reliable source according to Misplaced Pages norms. If necessary please take it to ] and ask for someone else's opinion. | |||
:To me, it is not a very long lead? (This has been raised recently as a concern.) Having said that, I think it would be great to keep a similar length if possible. It is just that I would not see it as such a problem that we need to delete anything or avoid adding anything anyone is really concerned about? Feedback anyone?--] (]) 17:46, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
*The Stolarek et al. article from 2023 only mentions the Goths once: "Some theories link the emergence of the Wielbark culture with the migration of people commonly referred to as Goths". (There is a lot more that could be said about the problems of using a research report like this, with vague conclusions.) | |||
::The current lead contains certain information not mentioned in the cited text. I think these source falsifications should be removed per ]. There are also issues with repetition and the chronology is at times confusing. I think the lead was better before the edit warring. It was in accordance with the cited sources, more concise and clear, yet covered all the essentials. ] (]) 19:56, 29 February 2020 (UTC) | |||
*The Antonio et al. article of 2023 does not mention Gothic DNA, or the Wielbark culture. | |||
:::So how do we fix those problems if you refuse to explain them... | |||
On this basis I believe the genetics section, and also this misplaced genetics digression in the name section, should be removed or stripped down quite a lot. At the moment this is basically ]. (I also don't see why all these things need to be repeated in a section which is supposed to be about the name of the Goths?) ] (]) 21:21, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::*Which "source falsifications" are you referring to? | |||
::Concur entirely with {{u|Andrew Lancaster}} about this matter. This topic has been repeatedly argued on pages related to the ancient Germanic peoples in general and this page especially. There is overwhelming consensus about the speciousness of these sorts of claims. | |||
:::*Please also describe the issues with repetition and chronology. You mean there is repetition in the lead? | |||
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:::As an update {{u|Isacdaavid}} you posted on RSN (thank you) and received two very clear negative responses concerning the new source. I think we are going is that the DNA claims need trimming or deleting. If anyone has other evidence, or good proposals on ways of trimming it, now would be a good moment to get involved in this discussion.--] (]) 17:38, 14 November 2024 (UTC) | ||
:::I agree with deletion or trimming. And I know it's a new and fast paced field, but there is no exception to the requirement that we use secondary and not primary sources to write encyclopaedic articles. ] (]) 17:51, 14 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::*In my opinion, at least the prose is better in the original version of the lead compared to the current one. A sentence like "As speakers of a Germanic language, it is believed that at least a dominant class of Goths migrated from the direction of modern Poland" let me wonder – what is a "dominant class of Goths", and why does the Germanic language speak for an origin in modern Poland? This does not make sense to a reader new to the topic. And to be fair {{u|Andrew Lancaster}}, implying other editors of "abusing" something is not "constructive" in any way as well. Unless ] is strictly followed, I will not get involved in this discussion any further; it just isn't fun. --] (]) 20:35, 29 February 2020 (UTC) |
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RFC to move ahead on previous Intro and Origins proposals
- The following discussion is an archived record of a request for comment. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this discussion. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
NOTE ADDED 5 June 2021: Please do not close this RFC. It is on-going.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 08:00, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- ADDED 7 July 2021. I just note that I think the idea here, based on previous discussions, is to keep this discussion alive for a long period and not rush the final decision. Not sure how others see it or how long this should go.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 10:19, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
Based on previous RFCs and discussions, may we now move ahead with the new Intro proposal of Krakkos (4th column here, discussion here), and the new Origins section drafted by me (2nd column here) which would replace the current 3.1, 3.2, and 3.3? --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 06:43, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
Pinging. Berig, Nishidani, Obenritter, Peter K Burian, Bloodofox, Ermenrich, Srnec, Carlstak, Mnemosientje, SMcCandlish, Yngvadottir, Alcaios, Pfold, North8000, Sea Ane feedback please.
- Yes (as proposer). I think these two drafts correspond to the various opinions and ideas mentioned in previous RFCs and discussions. I have already agreed with Krakkos on his lead proposal. There was a clear consensus in previous RFCs that the 3 sections about possible "pre Goths" which will be compressed now can better be expanded upon in other articles, because they have a tendency to expand and become controversial and overwhelming on this large article. Tweaks are possible of course, but I recommend moving ahead. --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 06:43, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- Comment Changes to the initial parts of the Goths#History (Origins) section are currently being discussed at an earlier RfC found at Talk:Goths#RfC on proposal to simplify the Prehistory, Early history and Movement towards the Black Sea sections and merge them into a single Origins and early history section. I doubt whether it is helpful to have two ongoing RfCs on essentially the same question. We should probably resolve the earlier RfC before we "move ahead" with its conclusions.
- Concerning the proposed change to the Intro, i think we should get some feedback before we move ahead. Krakkos (talk) 08:39, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- I have now requested the closure of three ongoing RfCs above which cover similar questions as this one. Krakkos (talk) 09:06, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- OK, I guess that makes sense, formally at least. No rush, so no harm getting the details right. Thanks Krakkos. OTOH, do you have any concern about this RFC as such? I didn't see any problem at least starting to ask people to look at the two proposals?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 14:48, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- Asking people to look at proposals is alright. On the other hand, posting the same proposal in mulitple RfCs and sections leads to confusion and makes it harder to work out sensible solutions. Interconnected RfCs should be handled in a reasonable order one step at the time. Making a new RfC with a request to "move ahead" with a counter proposal to a proposal being discussed in a ongoing RfC is problematic. Regarding your counter proposal for the Origins section, i am concerned about its removal of many quality sources, its undue emphasis on the views of historians at the expense of philologists/linguists and archaeologists, and its lack of a coherent structure. Krakkos (talk) 17:56, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- I posted one proposal in one RFC. This links the decisions about moving forward in two early parts of the article, and I think this is correct because these have clearly been linked discussions, also for other editors. (The shortening of the lead is also connected to the reduction of emphasis on "pre Goths".) There were no other open RFCs or running discussions. If you try to (re)open a second RFC that could then be problematic in the way you describe. The old RFC which led to my new Origins section proposal was clearly already useless as an RFC a month before it was terminated because it was no longer about one clear proposal. Many had been discussed and rejected. Mine is best considered a new one.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 18:43, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- Asking people to look at proposals is alright. On the other hand, posting the same proposal in mulitple RfCs and sections leads to confusion and makes it harder to work out sensible solutions. Interconnected RfCs should be handled in a reasonable order one step at the time. Making a new RfC with a request to "move ahead" with a counter proposal to a proposal being discussed in a ongoing RfC is problematic. Regarding your counter proposal for the Origins section, i am concerned about its removal of many quality sources, its undue emphasis on the views of historians at the expense of philologists/linguists and archaeologists, and its lack of a coherent structure. Krakkos (talk) 17:56, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- OK, I guess that makes sense, formally at least. No rush, so no harm getting the details right. Thanks Krakkos. OTOH, do you have any concern about this RFC as such? I didn't see any problem at least starting to ask people to look at the two proposals?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 14:48, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- I have now requested the closure of three ongoing RfCs above which cover similar questions as this one. Krakkos (talk) 09:06, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
@Andrew Lancaster: Talk:Goths#RfC on proposal to simplify the Prehistory, Early history and Movement towards the Black Sea sections and merge them into a single Origins and early history section has now been closed with the conclusion that there is a consensus to trim the early history sections and use this proposal as a basis for trimming and further refinement. Are you alright with moving ahead with this previous proposal? Krakkos (talk) 09:10, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
- Apart from the new intro, drafted by you, the other part of this RFC is my draft of a shortened and united "Origins" section, to move ahead on a basis as described in that closure. During that previous RFC you proposed other ideas which all failed to create a concensus, so my draft is now the next one needing feedback. (We did not really need the closure because it was obvious what was agreed.) To quote the rest of the closure "
There is a rough consensus to use the proposed text as a basis for further refinement. Whether the participants in this discussion believe such refinement should take place in a sandbox, in the article directly, or on this talk page is not clearly established below but can be determined through the normal editing process.
" --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 18:18, 9 May 2021 (UTC)- There was a rough consensus in the previous RfC to use my proposal as a basis for further refinement. Would you object to moving ahead with that? Krakkos (talk) 08:24, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- I think my proposal is clear, and is the basis of this RFC. This draft evolves from that same previous RFC as all your drafts, and that's how I suggest we go ahead. Other editors can say if they prefer your draft, or a mix of the two, or neither. But I suggest we leave these two drafts unchanged for a while now, and try to allow other editors to absorb them and comment. --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 12:42, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- There was a rough consensus in the previous RfC to use my proposal as a basis for further refinement. Would you object to moving ahead with that? Krakkos (talk) 08:24, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- Not an improvement. This "Origins proposal" ignores key conclusions from previous RfCs and is less informative and balanced than the current version. The proposal may be appreciated due to its shortness, but content quality is of greater value than content shortness. Previous RfCs have reached consensus that this article should put less emphasis on dubious origin stories and more emphasis on archaeological, linguistic and contemporaneous historical evidence. Despite of this, the proposal maintains discussion on such origin stories while removing all references from linguists (Brink, Rübekeil, Andersson, Strid etc.), virtually all references to archaeologists (Kazanski, Kokowski etc.), and a large amount of essential references on contemporaneous historical evidence. Various sub-par sources are in turn introduced to support the minority viewpoint that "there is no Gothic history before the third century", while top-notch sources supporting the majority viewpoint are removed, ignored and/or misrepresented. It may also be noted that the proposal lacks a coherent structure, in contrast to the current version, which is at least chronologically structured. The History section of this article can certainly be improved and trimmed. Removing essential content and rewriting it in an incoherent manner in support of a minority viewpoint will put it on a weaker basis for such improvement. Krakkos (talk) 16:01, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- Krakkos we've looked at the sources in previous discussions and you are misrepresenting them. That Gothic history starts in the third century is mainstream for historians, and history is the speciality of historians. Secondly, you are ignoring the fact that your draft proposal contains no discussion about some critical topics such as the mainstream idea that a small elite probably carried gothic/gothonic traditions between various places. So my draft actually ADDS critical information, which you've been hiding from our readers. Your draft is instead based on treating Jordanes as a fact, and there was a strong concensus that this article needs to get away from that. Thirdly, archaeologists are cited so much by you ONLY to defend your complete dependence upon Jordanes, but they are NOT Jordanes experts. I am all for Misplaced Pages having a better coverage of the archaeological discussions - but the main discussions should not be in this article.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 09:43, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- This article is about Goths rather than Jordanes. We should therefore be citing Goths experts rather than Jordanes experts. Your proposal increases the weight given to Jordanes and Jordanes experts, and that is opposite of the clear consensus established in previous RfCs. The chief mainstream historians on Goths are Heather and Wolfram, but your proposal minimizes and misrepresents their views in order to push minority viewpoints as a matter of fact. That archaeological and linguistic evidence is of relevance to Gothic origins and early history is agreed upon both by mainstream scholars and by prior talk page consensus. Such evidence should be cited to archaeologists and linguists who are Goths experts, rather than Jordanes experts. That certain archaeological and linguistic evidence corroborates parts of Jordanes is not a valid argument for removing such evidence. Likewise, the addition of material about "gothic/gothonic traditions" does not necessate the misrepresentation of Heather and Wolfram and the complete removal of citations from archaeologists and linguists. Such misreprentation and removal of essential sources from experts on Goths reduces the quality of the article and puts it on a weaker basis for future improvement. Krakkos (talk) 11:31, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- Other editors should compare my draft to yours and the current version in order to confirm the facts. My drafting page (and indeed the archives of this talk page also contain extensive evidence concerning what the sources say.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:53, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- Just for completeness, I forgot to link to my older comments on the draft which I understand to still be your latest draft for a shorter pre-history section: . A major concern is cherry-picking of sources in order to promote the Jordanes story, while hiding what experts in the various fields really believe and write.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 07:51, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
- Other editors should compare my draft to yours and the current version in order to confirm the facts. My drafting page (and indeed the archives of this talk page also contain extensive evidence concerning what the sources say.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:53, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- This article is about Goths rather than Jordanes. We should therefore be citing Goths experts rather than Jordanes experts. Your proposal increases the weight given to Jordanes and Jordanes experts, and that is opposite of the clear consensus established in previous RfCs. The chief mainstream historians on Goths are Heather and Wolfram, but your proposal minimizes and misrepresents their views in order to push minority viewpoints as a matter of fact. That archaeological and linguistic evidence is of relevance to Gothic origins and early history is agreed upon both by mainstream scholars and by prior talk page consensus. Such evidence should be cited to archaeologists and linguists who are Goths experts, rather than Jordanes experts. That certain archaeological and linguistic evidence corroborates parts of Jordanes is not a valid argument for removing such evidence. Likewise, the addition of material about "gothic/gothonic traditions" does not necessate the misrepresentation of Heather and Wolfram and the complete removal of citations from archaeologists and linguists. Such misreprentation and removal of essential sources from experts on Goths reduces the quality of the article and puts it on a weaker basis for future improvement. Krakkos (talk) 11:31, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- Krakkos we've looked at the sources in previous discussions and you are misrepresenting them. That Gothic history starts in the third century is mainstream for historians, and history is the speciality of historians. Secondly, you are ignoring the fact that your draft proposal contains no discussion about some critical topics such as the mainstream idea that a small elite probably carried gothic/gothonic traditions between various places. So my draft actually ADDS critical information, which you've been hiding from our readers. Your draft is instead based on treating Jordanes as a fact, and there was a strong concensus that this article needs to get away from that. Thirdly, archaeologists are cited so much by you ONLY to defend your complete dependence upon Jordanes, but they are NOT Jordanes experts. I am all for Misplaced Pages having a better coverage of the archaeological discussions - but the main discussions should not be in this article.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 09:43, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- No, I see no reason to remove studies on archaeology, lingistics, and genetics surrounding the origin of the Goths, and especially since the origin of the Goths is a very notable and still controversial topic.--Berig (talk) 16:58, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- Berig perhaps there is a misunderstanding. The previous RFCs made it clear that there was a consensus not to remove such information from Misplaced Pages, but to focus upon it more in other articles. There are already many articles related to this article, concerning linguistic, archaeological etc topics. None of these topics can be done justice here. This article focuses on the topic "Goths" as that term is used in sources. The various disputed proposals about "pre Goths" should be mentioned and linked to, but there has been a strong consensus expressed about concerns that these disputes continually take over this article and talk page. There was also a strong theme of the need to stop making Misplaced Pages treat Jordanes as the main source for all of this. I would add that we really must make it more clear that mainstream scholars these days make use of the Vienna school's concept of a small elite who carry traditions with them, not requiring a large movement of people. In my draft this is added, whereas previously it has been hidden from our readers. How can we justify this?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 09:43, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- Pinging as reminder. The previous RFCs decided that the 3 controversial sections about possible Gothic origins before the 3rd century should be shortened, because the main discussion is for other articles. This is the current proposal, which actually covers reliably sourced topics currently excluded from our current article, despite being significantly shorter and simpler: (4th column). Nishidani, Obenritter, Peter K Burian, Bloodofox, Ermenrich, Srnec, Carlstak, Mnemosientje, SMcCandlish, Yngvadottir, Alcaios, Pfold, North8000, Sea Ane. So far: (1) Krakkos has also linked above to his older proposal, and I linked to my analysis of that draft showing the problems. If I understand correctly Krakkos would however prefer that the previous RFCs never get acted upon. (2) Berig also prefers that the previous RFCs never get acted upon. (3) No one else who participated in the previous RFCs has commented on the present proposal.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 08:43, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- The key conclusions of the previous RfCs were to increase emphasis on archaeological, linguistic evidence, contemporaneous historical accounts and secondary sources, and to shorten existing material. Attempts to act on these RfCs have been proposed and supported by the wider community, but you have opposed these efforts. Your proposal constitutes a complete rewrite of key sections of this article, in which top sources are replaced with sub-par ones, and essential information on archaeological, historical and linguistic evidence is entirely removed. This is the opposite of the conclusions of the RfCs, and constitutes a significant reduction of article quality. For more than a year you have made essentially the same proposal here multiple times (Talk:Goths/Archive 6#Should the Origins 3.1 and Migration 3.2 sections be move out of History?, Talk:Goths/Archive 8#RFC about the Name section etc.). Making the same proposals over and over again and pinging users endlessly until one gets the desired result is not a good approach. Krakkos (talk) 10:05, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- LOL. This RFC is my first proposal and it was made slowly, based on the RFCs and aiming to match the diverse comments of other editors, after very thoroughly reassessing the sources. It includes additional information and sources compared to your current controversial Jordanes-based version. There is at this stage no evidence at all that there is any opposition to my proposal apart from you and Berig. But that is not surprising because you are both clearly opposed to the decisions and opinions in the previous RFCs and want the opening of this article to continue to be tacitly Jordanes-based, in order to spread the word that Goths are Swedes (and DNA will prove Jordanes right one day, etc, etc). None of your proposals show any interest in archaeology, let alone linguistics or DNA. Editors should read my actual draft. Your previously rejected draft is still clearly linked to as well, and people can still say if they prefer it, or see bits they like better. BTW on my drafting page I have also shown extra sources that can be added to my version, but many editors may find my draft over-footnoted. I do not believe your approach to sourcing always matches our community norms, but I've tried to follow you part of the way due to the inevitability of the outrage which will be expressed if the footnotes are fewer or less long. There is also a table showing the problems which your draft has, including source distortion. Anyway, I have no problem with my draft being rejected after a proper discussed, but what is more important it to make sure the drafting discussion and feedback leads to clarification of what changes are needed. Please do not disrupt this discussion with misleading red herring remarks.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 14:36, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- You made false remarks about me (and Berig) and then pinged a whole bunch of editors. Of course i have to respond to such red herrings which disrupt the discussion. This article should be based on the research on Goths by the foremost experts, including archaeolgists, historians and philologists. Your proposal involves the removal of the sources from these experts and their replacement with weaker ones which support the fringe viewpoint. Such removal is essentially what you have been proposing repeatedly for more than a year, using a supposed need for "simplicity" as justification. Krakkos (talk) 16:00, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- That is not a valid excuse. However, I'll agree with one thing:- The "Goths are Swedes" theory, which only comes from Jordanes, and features Berig, and which you have made the central theme of this article while pretending it is from modern archaeologists, is indeed a long term controversy among most editors of this article, and has indeed been raised before by me and others in different contexts before. You are right about that. But I repeat that this draft is a first attempt to make a quite carefully sourced compromise based on a wide range of editing opinions and a careful reassessment of the sources. Please let discussion go ahead?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 16:37, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- You made false remarks about me (and Berig) and then pinged a whole bunch of editors. Of course i have to respond to such red herrings which disrupt the discussion. This article should be based on the research on Goths by the foremost experts, including archaeolgists, historians and philologists. Your proposal involves the removal of the sources from these experts and their replacement with weaker ones which support the fringe viewpoint. Such removal is essentially what you have been proposing repeatedly for more than a year, using a supposed need for "simplicity" as justification. Krakkos (talk) 16:00, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- LOL. This RFC is my first proposal and it was made slowly, based on the RFCs and aiming to match the diverse comments of other editors, after very thoroughly reassessing the sources. It includes additional information and sources compared to your current controversial Jordanes-based version. There is at this stage no evidence at all that there is any opposition to my proposal apart from you and Berig. But that is not surprising because you are both clearly opposed to the decisions and opinions in the previous RFCs and want the opening of this article to continue to be tacitly Jordanes-based, in order to spread the word that Goths are Swedes (and DNA will prove Jordanes right one day, etc, etc). None of your proposals show any interest in archaeology, let alone linguistics or DNA. Editors should read my actual draft. Your previously rejected draft is still clearly linked to as well, and people can still say if they prefer it, or see bits they like better. BTW on my drafting page I have also shown extra sources that can be added to my version, but many editors may find my draft over-footnoted. I do not believe your approach to sourcing always matches our community norms, but I've tried to follow you part of the way due to the inevitability of the outrage which will be expressed if the footnotes are fewer or less long. There is also a table showing the problems which your draft has, including source distortion. Anyway, I have no problem with my draft being rejected after a proper discussed, but what is more important it to make sure the drafting discussion and feedback leads to clarification of what changes are needed. Please do not disrupt this discussion with misleading red herring remarks.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 14:36, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- The key conclusions of the previous RfCs were to increase emphasis on archaeological, linguistic evidence, contemporaneous historical accounts and secondary sources, and to shorten existing material. Attempts to act on these RfCs have been proposed and supported by the wider community, but you have opposed these efforts. Your proposal constitutes a complete rewrite of key sections of this article, in which top sources are replaced with sub-par ones, and essential information on archaeological, historical and linguistic evidence is entirely removed. This is the opposite of the conclusions of the RfCs, and constitutes a significant reduction of article quality. For more than a year you have made essentially the same proposal here multiple times (Talk:Goths/Archive 6#Should the Origins 3.1 and Migration 3.2 sections be move out of History?, Talk:Goths/Archive 8#RFC about the Name section etc.). Making the same proposals over and over again and pinging users endlessly until one gets the desired result is not a good approach. Krakkos (talk) 10:05, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- Support With the caveat that my knowledge and depth on this is insufficient for a thorough confident answer. North8000 (talk) 13:38, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- Your feedback is precious. Are there any bits you throught particularly strong or weak?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 14:39, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
- I was on the losing side of both RFCs. I do not share the community's view of how to make this article better or even of what is wrong with it. Therefore, I have no opinion on the implementation of the RFCs. Srnec (talk) 00:33, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Srnec: I do not think the RFCs above are clear enough about details to say your position "lost", and I also can't believe that you would say the differences between the two proposals currently being made have no connection to the points you made. My draft was made after your rejection of the one made by Krakkos. I also looked at the way other editors all referenced your opinions (e.g. CarlstakSMcCandlish). Could you double check what I am proposing? I suppose BTW you are referring to your two comments here: . Honestly I counted your opinions as having received a lot of support and I have tried to work to reduce "obsessive focus on origins", and the use of selected snippets about topics which can only be properly handled in dedicated article or articles.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 06:44, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
Adding a note and also responding to Andrew's question, the caveat in my post is because I have not taken the deep dive needed to thoroughly learn the article, proposed changes and situation well enough to give full-fledged opinions. If y'all think that extra input is needed, I'd be happy to do that. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 16:06, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
- Personally I think the more detailed feedback that can be given the better. Having a draft rejected is no problem but a more important aim is gathering feedback and new perspectives.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 19:51, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
OK, I took a deeper dive. My first more detailed comment is on the half of the RFC dealing with the lead. I think that the specific question is substitution of the linked "column 4" for the current lead. IMO this would be a good move, with the understanding that this doesn't "lock in" the whole thing but leaves it open to tweaks. The lead should be a summary of the article. In comparison. the current lead is more of a blizzard of factoids that is hard to absorb and the column 4 looks like a easier-to-read summary. Since the lead should be a summary of the article, there should not be anything in the lead that is not in the article so removal of the old lead should not result in any loss of material. But you might want to double check that or possibly you did already. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 21:15, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
- I would agree with that step forward. Krakkos made it, and so presumably would not be opposed to that step either.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- First, Srnec is a well-respected editor whose edits I've seen on many articles concerning historical topics on my watchlist. I can't remember that I've ever disagreed with an edit that he made, but if I did, I know that he would have a well-reasoned explanation of his thinking. I don't have time now to delve into this, but I know that Srnec's thoughts always deserve consideration—he is knowledgeable and expresses himself quite well.
- One day years in the future some Wikipedian will do a forensic analysis of the voluminous discussion on this talk page and its continuing stasis. That person will be amazed and perhaps lose his or her sanity from contemplating all the ever-increasing gigabytes of argument. May he or she rest in peace—that's what I'm going to do.;-) Carlstak (talk) 02:04, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Carlstak: I propose that in order to avoid problems with the undead, ignore the whole history of the talk page and just read the short and simple draft? Any kind of feedback might help. The proposal does not require a re-reading of every debate because this simple single change is easy and uncontroversial to summarize: a big reduction of everything concerning speculations about the origins of the Goths before the third century (as Srnec requested). The people who don't like it agree that this is what is doing.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- I'm glad you have a sense of humor, Andrew. Please understand that I'm a bit zombified myself these days—I'm not quite running on all cylinders and just don't have much spare time. I read your shorter draft, compared it to the other, and find the short version to be much better—it's concise and less confusing, although I thought we had consensus that excessive footnoting with quotes from the referenced authors was not desirable. Carlstak (talk) 03:40, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Carlstak: It's a good point about having a sense of humour. Helps a lot with this article, and I don't think it is just you but maybe even our whole community which is getting a bit tired of some types of work (and yes we are all getting older, and apparently we are not doing well recruiting young people). Just on the footnotes, as far as I am concerning all the direct quotes can be removed (or reduced), but realistically I kept them in for discussion of the draft because we have a long history on this article (like Germanic peoples) of a specific argument that reduction of this is un-sourced, or even "removing quality sources". How do we stop the bots from removing the RFC template while discussion is on-going?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 07:57, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- Done As you can see, I've added the "RFCBot Ignore Expired" tag to the page. Carlstak (talk) 15:37, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Carlstak: It's a good point about having a sense of humour. Helps a lot with this article, and I don't think it is just you but maybe even our whole community which is getting a bit tired of some types of work (and yes we are all getting older, and apparently we are not doing well recruiting young people). Just on the footnotes, as far as I am concerning all the direct quotes can be removed (or reduced), but realistically I kept them in for discussion of the draft because we have a long history on this article (like Germanic peoples) of a specific argument that reduction of this is un-sourced, or even "removing quality sources". How do we stop the bots from removing the RFC template while discussion is on-going?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 07:57, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- I'm glad you have a sense of humor, Andrew. Please understand that I'm a bit zombified myself these days—I'm not quite running on all cylinders and just don't have much spare time. I read your shorter draft, compared it to the other, and find the short version to be much better—it's concise and less confusing, although I thought we had consensus that excessive footnoting with quotes from the referenced authors was not desirable. Carlstak (talk) 03:40, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- @Carlstak: I propose that in order to avoid problems with the undead, ignore the whole history of the talk page and just read the short and simple draft? Any kind of feedback might help. The proposal does not require a re-reading of every debate because this simple single change is easy and uncontroversial to summarize: a big reduction of everything concerning speculations about the origins of the Goths before the third century (as Srnec requested). The people who don't like it agree that this is what is doing.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- One day years in the future some Wikipedian will do a forensic analysis of the voluminous discussion on this talk page and its continuing stasis. That person will be amazed and perhaps lose his or her sanity from contemplating all the ever-increasing gigabytes of argument. May he or she rest in peace—that's what I'm going to do.;-) Carlstak (talk) 02:04, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- Resolve the earlier-opened RfC first, then, yes, let's get on with it ("it" being some combination of what's been proposed so far and whatever comes out of that other RfC). I think this is a good summary of the current consensus, based on past RfCs not counting that still-open one: "The previous RFCs decided that the 3 controversial sections about possible Gothic origins before the 3rd century should be shortened, because other articles." — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 11:32, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish: which RFC do you say is open? Which question is unanswered? Please clarify. I am glad you agree with my summary, but don't quite follow.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- I was responding to "Changes to the initial parts of the Goths#History (Origins) section are currently being discussed at an earlier RfC found at Talk:Goths#RfC on proposal to simplify the Prehistory, Early history and Movement towards the Black Sea sections and merge them into a single Origins and early history section. I doubt whether it is helpful to have two ongoing RfCs on essentially the same question. We should probably resolve the earlier RfC before we "move ahead" with its conclusions." If that's now also closed, then let's integrate the results of it with previous results. I tend to agree with: "The previous RFCs made it clear that there was a consensus not to remove such information from Misplaced Pages, but to focus upon it more in other articles." But the devil is in the details of how to shift focus and narrow scope. I tend to agree at least in spirit with this, too: "Interconnected RfCs should be handled in a reasonable order one step at the time. Making a new RfC with a request to "move ahead" with a counter proposal to a proposal being discussed in a ongoing RfC is problematic." But I'm not sure that's a 100% accurate description. Regardless, I see enough blowback already to think that this new RfC is a bust. It would probably be most productive to prepare a draft revision based on the previous RfCs and then see if it meets with approval. Give us all something concrete to look at instead of more of the same arguments. They're getting hard to follow except for people really focused on this particular page. When I say we should get on with it, I mean get on with improving the article, which is a content endeavor not more talk-page argument. PS: Talk:ByteDance is stuck at exactly the same stage of the same process: lots of discussion and "voting" about how to revise, but a need to just write the revision, with everyone's concerns in mind and balanced to the extent possible, then put that draft up and see if it sticks as the new base from which we'll work moving forward. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 11:58, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish: which RFC do you say is open? Which question is unanswered? Please clarify. I am glad you agree with my summary, but don't quite follow.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:43, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish: I can't follow, and I think one of us is misunderstanding the situation. According to me you are referring to a closed RFC as open. Also you are proposing that the next logical step is that someone should propose a new draft. That is exactly what this RFC is? In terms of the older draft of Krakkos, Krakkos called in an admin to close all the older RFCs, not me, but I've continued to remind editors that this draft also still exists. (The result of this RFC could also be a hybrid or something based on new ideas.) I also don't understand your reference to blowback EXCEPT in the inevitable sense that Krakkos and Berig do not agree with the opinions of other editors in the previous RFCs (as per the summary you agree with) and would prefer the article to keep the Goths-are-Swedes theme of the controversial opening sections. That is of course a disagreement which goes back long before I ever worked on this article, and one where both editors believe ideology-driven academia is partly to blame, and are waiting for new DNA evidence to prove them right. We can't expect any consensus that will resolve that disagreement at this time? I believe however we can come to a happier compromise if the academic versions of the Swedish proposal can be properly discussed in a more specialized article. I think most of believe trying to fit the MAIN discussion of that here is just never going to really work?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 13:52, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- If I'm misreading something, I'll just sit out for a while. Anyway, I don't think the present thread is going to come to an active consensus to do anything, and stick to my advice to work on a draft and try to get buy-in on it (taking editorial suggestions to work toward a compromise version). — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 10:28, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish: This thread is meant to be an RFC about a specific draft. For any such draft RFC to work, indeed we need some feedback and "editorial suggestions". (That would also apply to any future draft.) So feedback is what is needed now. So far, this draft has had more positive feedback than the drafts of Krakkos in the previous RFC. The only criticism about my draft so far is from Krakkos who suggests my draft should have more footnotes. (Berig disagrees with the whole aim of shortening the origins discussions. That is not a criticism specific to any draft.)--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 12:17, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
- This is far too much meta-discussion about my own input/viewpoint. I'm not in control of this discussion or any processes. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 16:10, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish:, I can't really follow these occasional remarks, but the fact is that this RFC is now at a point where simple feedback (positive and/or negative) about the proposed draft is what would be most helpful. --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 20:30, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- I can support the Krakkos lead, for its concision, and your Origins section, for its appropriate post-lead detail and sourcing, which is nevertheless more concise than what we started all this to revise. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 00:23, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
- I agree with SMcCandlish on these points; they are my sentiments exactly. Carlstak (talk) 00:56, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback @SMcCandlish: and @Carlstak:. I am not 100% clear what "more concise than what we started all this to revise" means. Does mean you find my draft to be on the short side? As background, feedback from Srnec on the previous drafts from Krakkos was pushing for a shorter version, as I understood it. Anything you think needs changing?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 06:28, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
- I don't mean that it's too short; rather, it is short enough . I.e., good job. If Srnec and someone else want to tighten it even further, I don't object, but I like how source-dense it is for the amount of verbiage, and how much verbiage it leaves for other articles to get into. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 05:29, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback @SMcCandlish: and @Carlstak:. I am not 100% clear what "more concise than what we started all this to revise" means. Does mean you find my draft to be on the short side? As background, feedback from Srnec on the previous drafts from Krakkos was pushing for a shorter version, as I understood it. Anything you think needs changing?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 06:28, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish:, I can't really follow these occasional remarks, but the fact is that this RFC is now at a point where simple feedback (positive and/or negative) about the proposed draft is what would be most helpful. --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 20:30, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- This is far too much meta-discussion about my own input/viewpoint. I'm not in control of this discussion or any processes. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 16:10, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish: This thread is meant to be an RFC about a specific draft. For any such draft RFC to work, indeed we need some feedback and "editorial suggestions". (That would also apply to any future draft.) So feedback is what is needed now. So far, this draft has had more positive feedback than the drafts of Krakkos in the previous RFC. The only criticism about my draft so far is from Krakkos who suggests my draft should have more footnotes. (Berig disagrees with the whole aim of shortening the origins discussions. That is not a criticism specific to any draft.)--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 12:17, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
- If I'm misreading something, I'll just sit out for a while. Anyway, I don't think the present thread is going to come to an active consensus to do anything, and stick to my advice to work on a draft and try to get buy-in on it (taking editorial suggestions to work toward a compromise version). — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 10:28, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
- @SMcCandlish: I can't follow, and I think one of us is misunderstanding the situation. According to me you are referring to a closed RFC as open. Also you are proposing that the next logical step is that someone should propose a new draft. That is exactly what this RFC is? In terms of the older draft of Krakkos, Krakkos called in an admin to close all the older RFCs, not me, but I've continued to remind editors that this draft also still exists. (The result of this RFC could also be a hybrid or something based on new ideas.) I also don't understand your reference to blowback EXCEPT in the inevitable sense that Krakkos and Berig do not agree with the opinions of other editors in the previous RFCs (as per the summary you agree with) and would prefer the article to keep the Goths-are-Swedes theme of the controversial opening sections. That is of course a disagreement which goes back long before I ever worked on this article, and one where both editors believe ideology-driven academia is partly to blame, and are waiting for new DNA evidence to prove them right. We can't expect any consensus that will resolve that disagreement at this time? I believe however we can come to a happier compromise if the academic versions of the Swedish proposal can be properly discussed in a more specialized article. I think most of believe trying to fit the MAIN discussion of that here is just never going to really work?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 13:52, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
- Well, maybe one step towards simplification would be to do the change to the lead if there is a consensus or no objections. North8000 (talk) 12:09, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
re-appearance of DNA section
I have removed the following which was added by what I understand to be a single topic IP editor with an interest in Swedish topics:
DNA evidence seems to be consistent with the traditional perspective described by Jordanes of a Scandinavian migration. The DNA comparison shows the Gothic populations DNA structure is similar to southern Scandinavia. It is unclear if the Oksywie culture was replaced by the Goths or created by the Goths. Before the Gothic immigration, the DNA of Central Europe was different and more diverse. Exactly how this migration happened could not be reached. The study published in 2019 seem to confirm the notion that Goths originated in southern Sweden and Denmark. But the study also cites more research in archaeology and genetics is needed to gain a greater understanding of exactly how the Gothic migrations influenced the history of the region. The study studied populations from different periods and DNA structure in Northern Poland changed due to an influx of immigrants. In Kowalewko in Poland, the Gothic newcomers 200 AD had significantly different DNA from previous locals that inhabited the region.
The spread of the Scandinavian I1 Dna group is also closely linked to the Migration period during the collapse of the Roman empire. Current research shows that before the Goths migrated Haplogroup I-M253 was confined exclusively to Scandinavia. The migration of the Goths resulted in the spread of the genes outside of Scandinavia for the first time. Goths buried in Italy shared genetic affinity with modern-day Scandinavians also having a dominant I1 gene. |
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After many previous discussions, similar material was previously removed by Srnec. Concerned raised included WP:UNDUE, WP:PRIMARY, WP:SCIRS, WP:OR, WP:SYNTH. Archived discussions: , , . The section being expanded this way is also recently agreed to be one needing trimming, because focus on such speculative topics about pre Goths has been a significant distraction from the main topic .--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 07:31, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
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But the large concentration around Rome is persistent with the Gothic sack of Rome. Over 15 per cent of I1 DNA in modern times. I1 only became dominant around 500 BC in Scandinavia. The fact that modern-day Romans have 15 per cent I1 is probably due to the Goths settling down in Rome. Before the migration period, modern-day Romans lacked I1 DNA. Know they have 15 per cent which is huge and do not indicate a small case migration of elite. The Goths buried in Rome also show Genetic affinity with modern-day Scandinavians with a dominant I1 gene not common in Germany Poland, or elsewhere. The DNA evidence suggests the Goths did migrate en mass from Scandinavia. Modern-day British populations also have 15 per cent I1 DNA thanks to the Vikings and Anglo Saxon migration from Scandinavia. Fifteen per cent around Rome is a very high number if you take into consideration 1500 years have passed and that modern-day Romans have so much Scandinavian heritage. Where did it come from if not the Goths? The German populations have 15 per cent so if they had sacked Rome the I1 spread would have been lower. For example, France or modern-day Frenchmen— conquered by the more German Franks have far less I1 DNA.
Only a pure Scandinavian group could have made Rome so incredibly Scandinavian. The Genetic evidence shows the Goths are almost identical to modern Swedes. Also the fact that the DNA
They also found almost all Goths remains buried in Italy being genetically related to Scandinavians. https://www.eupedia.com/europe/Haplogroup_I1_Y-DNA.shtml
Sorry but I1 is very Scandinavian it is true that the gene has been found before. But it was not until the late Nordic bronze age it started to get broadly spread. Also, it is only dominant in Scandinavia and Northern Germany. Also, Scandinavians have 35-40 per cent I1 DNA. So it is very Scandinavian even if it have old origins it was not dominant in any region in Europe until the late Scandinavian Bronze age. Also, the Lombards could be a source of I1 in Rome. So maybe the Goths were R1A or another haplogroup... But calling it a none Scandinavian gene is pretty ignorant. Lombards could be the source of I1 in Italy. It only became dominant around 500 BC for unknown reasons. It also spread to Germany when the Celts got weakened by the Ceasars invasion. All Germanic people groups originate in Scandinavia or Northern Germany. Ceasar's invasion of the Gaul weakened, them so the Germanic peoples could invade. It is not dominant in any region except Scandinavia and Finland. The groups' origins are disputed but did not start to gain dominance until 500 before christ so all of its spread over the rest of Europe is contemporary history and all migrations that spread it is recorded in Southern European history. R1A also seem to be widespread in Italy so the Goths also had German ancestry. However, the Italian studies showed a great affinity with Scandinavians. In Gothic graves. For example, before the Anglo-Saxon invasion, no I1 was present in Britain. Ireland has no I1 except in Dublin due to it being founded by Norse settlers. Before that I1 was small or marginal. The clustered in Turkey comes from Varangian guards during medieval periods large swaths of Norse males migrated to the Byzantine empire to serve as guards. Northwestern Spain was the final refugee from the Islamic invasion. Sicily got I1 from Norman invasions. The cluster around Sankt Petersburg is due to Norse settlers using it as a trading hub. Laying the foundation for the Rus states. The Germanic migrations dispersed I1 lineages to Britain (Anglo-Saxons), Belgium (Franks, Saxons), France (Franks, Visigoths and Burgundians), South Germany (Franks, Alamanni, Suebi, Marcomanni, Thuringii and others), Switzerland (Alamanni, Suebi, Burgundians), Iberia (Visigoths, Suebi and Vandals), Italy (Goths, Vandals, Lombards), Austria and Slovenia (Ostrogoths, Lombards, Bavarians), Ukraine and Moldova (Goths), as well as around Hungary and northern Serbia (Gepids). The I1 found among the Poles (6%), Czechs (11%), Slovaks (6%) and Hungarians (8%) is also the result of centuries of influence from their German and Austrian neighbours. The relatively high frequency of I1 around Serbia and western Bulgaria (5% to 10%) could be owed to the Goths who settled in the Eastern Roman Empire in the 3rd and 4th centuries. In Turkey and Russia unlike Rome, England or Germany it was not a full-scale migration therefore I1 did not become widespread only some Varangian guardsmen acting as police in Greece and Russia and settled and married Greek or Russian women. The I1 spread is closely linked with recorded historical events. Sicily have a concentration probably due to Norrman settlers moving in taking the houses of Muslim Arabs after the Norman conquest. Also Vladimir the Great seem to have also been descended from the I1 subgroup. But all this information in the article does not have to be written in the article of course. Just the fact that the origins lie in Scandinavia from I1 and that Goths probably were not intermixing that much with close by populations. Or it could be Lombards in the graveyard. The other things I mentioned about modern Rome citizens having a lot of I1 admixtures was just to prove my point. Amorim, Carlos (2018-09-11). "Understanding 6th-century barbarian social organization and migration through paleogenomics". Nature Communications. 9 (1): 3547. Bibcode:2018NatCo...9.3547A. doi:10.1038/s41467-018-06024-4. PMC 6134036. PMID 30206220.
But if the editors do not want to include DNA research in the article let's ignore my edits. But they are consistent with what I read in a research paper published by six genetic experts. No DNA edits I get it. I Will not try it again. |
The notion that genetic evidence should be excluded from this article, when it appears in so many others, strikes me as very peculiar, if not outright special pleading. The genetic evidence is solid evidence, not "speculative ideas" as you call it. -- Elphion (talk) 15:04, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
- I see what you mean, but it is not quite that extreme. As a general rule on Misplaced Pages there is concern about the use of such research, but more about our ability to use it well. DNA information is concrete in a sense, but interpreting it is tricky because there are very few good secondary works which help us draw historical conclusions from isolated tests on skeletons here and there, and so we risk WP:SYNTH. Historically, on this article on others, editors including such material have based their historical conclusions almost entirely on the ideas of various online bloggers etc, despite superficially citing peer reviewed research reports which generally make very meagre comments about history or language. Typically what we therefore when apprioriate is list basic summaries of results from various articles, and keep it as neutral as possible, restraining ourselves from bringing in ideas from the blogosphere, no matter how interesting. If you follow the links I posted above I once proposed a way we could do that here but other editors preferred the current option, and I also agree with them. The OTHER issue here is not an opposition to DNA as such but the longer running discussion (see various RFCs) about trying to move coverage of Gothic origins to other articles (Gutones, Wielbark culture, Origin stories of the Goths etc). This does not only affect DNA, but also archaeology and discussions about Jordanes. I think I speak for a majority of editors (based on several RFCs) when I say that the space we dedicate to these topics on these articles is too little to be able to do justice to those topics, which are complex in their own right.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 13:25, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- I agree with Elphion that the exclusion of genetic evidence from this article is unhelpful. Stolarek et al. (2019) did a genetic study which is directly relevant to the Goths:
"The collected results seem to be consistent with the historical narrative that assumed that the Goths originated in southern Scandinavia; then, at least part of the Goth population moved south through the territory of contemporary Poland towards the Black Sea region, where they mixed with local populations and formed the Chernyakhov culture... he genetic relationships reported here... support the opinion that southern Scandinavia was the homeland of the Goths." – Stolarek, I.; Handschuh, L.; Juras, A.; et al. (May 1, 2019). "Goth migration induced changes in the matrilineal genetic structure of the central-east European population". Scientific Reports. 9 (1). 6737. Bibcode:2019NatSR...9.6737S. doi:10.1038/s41598-019-43183-w. PMC 6494872. PMID 31043639.
- That study found evidence of Gothic connections with Scandinavia. Andrew Lancaster is constantly seeking to remove such evidence, and is using all types of pretexts to justify such removal. One such pretext is to create POV forks like Gutones and Origin stories of the Goths, and then to advocate the transfer of evidence he doesn't like from this article to the POV forks. Another pretext are supposed concerns about citing genetic studies. Interestingly, Andrew Lancaster has been citing himself at Misplaced Pages articles on genetics. His concerns about genetic studies seem quite selective. I think this article has space for a sentence or two about the genetic studies on Goths that have been published so far. Krakkos (talk) 14:20, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- Why are you pretending a 2009 edit on another article is recent or relevant? I defer to my summary above for links to several past discussions about DNA relevant to THIS article, especially this one. The Stolarek 2019 article did mitochondrial DNA tests, which are useless for this purpose, and said the result was CONSISTENT with Goths coming from Sweden. The edit to remove it was made by Srnec and was also strongly agreed by others including Alcaios and Carlstak. I also refer to recent RFCs for discussion about moving origins details out of this article, where the closing admin noted a "clear consensus".--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 16:18, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
I thought haplogroups were pretty consistent with ancestry. Especially when Genetic specialists in Poland agree they are true. Also, Goths had a central European or polish variant of R1A that also seem to be spread out along Spain and Italy in a similar cluster with I1. I also used an Italian source examining actual remains of Gothic warriors in Italian graveyards from 500 BP exactly after the sack of Rome by the Goths and Lombards. Taken from a Gothic burial in Rome. I1 at least seem to be the dominant group in the populations only in modern Swedes, Danes and in Norway I1 is dominant in Goths too... At least those found in the graveyards of Rome.
Also one similar examination done by genetic experts in Italy 2020 seems to confirm the Scandinavian origins of the Goths done in 2020
References
- Amorim CE, Vai S, Posth C, Modi A, Koncz I, Hakenbeck S, et al. (September 2018). "Understanding 6th-century barbarian social organization and migration through paleogenomics". Nature Communications. 9 (1): 3547. Bibcode:2018NatCo...9.3547A. doi:10.1038/s41467-018-06024-4. PMC 6134036. PMID 30206220.
- Estes R (2020-10-16). "Longobards Ancient DNA from Pannonia and Italy – What Does Their DNA Tell Us? Are You Related?". DNAeXplained - Genetic Genealogy. Retrieved 2020-12-11.
- Since we had some semblance of consensus not to delve too deeply into the origin stories, I think we should refrain from including the genetic discussion in the main body of the test. Krakkos was right that a sentence or two is merited about the recent genomic evidence, but let's make them informational notes, as the science of genetics is still very young and in transition. We don't need this page becoming politicized by focusing on a controversial area. To this end, Andrew's position seems the most in keeping with editorial consensus. --Obenritter (talk) 19:03, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)FWIW, Haplogroups, types of DNA, obviously do have something to do with biological ancestry. But this article is not about biology, and mitochondrial DNA is a special small chunk of rarely mutating DNA that we only get from our mother, and these change very slowly and apparently (scientists have found) don't normally spread in a way which can be used to connection to language or ethnicity in smaller regions like Europe. If you've you've ever tracked your own mitochondrial DNA or, like me, worked with genealogists in large groups, you'll know how the closest mitochondrial matches of people with European ancestry tend to come from thousands of kilometres from their own known ancestors. This is why most well-known labs working on population history don't use mitochondrial DNA, at least not exclusively.
- ALSO, Roberta Estes is an American blogger. The article she discusses about Roman DNA is comparing to Hungary, looking for evidence of Lombard movement, not Scandinavia, not looking at Goths.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 19:18, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- This article is not about Latin literature either. Does that mean we should purge the article of all references to Latin literature? Of course not. This article is about ancient people, and our understanding of ancient people is based on a combination of literary, linguistic, archaeological, genetic and other material. Genetic information can be used to get insight into many things, for example human migration and social organization. The mtDNA that we inherit from our mothers is one type of such useful genetic information. Stolarek et al. (2019) examined what they perceived to be Gothic mtDNA, and drew some conclusions from it. I think the addition of a neutral reference to Stolarek et al. (2019) would be helpful. This could be done through formulating a sentence or an informational note. Krakkos (talk) 19:45, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- Actually you will only find things neatly labelled as Goths in Latin and Greek literature. This article is about a historical people, i.e. known from the written record. All other types of investigation about them, such as archaeological or linguistic, start from the written record. But you won't find any neatly labelled Gothic DNA in the populations genetic literature. What you have published here in the past was not a neutral summary, but wishful thinking. You were the source. We can however say quite a lot about archaeological ideas concerning the origins of the Goths, but no version of this article or any other on WP has ever done a good job of that. (You've used archaeology sources only to sneak the Jordanes "Berig story" into "Misplaced Pages voice". Ironic! You use archaeologists as a proxy for a bit of Latin literature which is your indirect source for the "Goths are Swedes" myth you are continually trying to reinsert. You argue against citing experts on Jordanes, only because you know they all agree he can't be used this way. Using archaeologists as alternative non-expert sources for Jordanes appears to be the limit of your interest in archaeology.) The archaeology of Gothic origins deserves it's own article (Wielbark culture etc) and I think no one would have a problem with truly neutral summaries of articles like Stolarek's there.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 20:20, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- This article is about Goths. Detailed coverage on Jordanes and Getica belongs at the articles Jordanes and Getica. This article should rely primarily on experts on Goths, as it currently does. The literature and archaeology of the Goths is indeed covered in detail at other articles. The Visigoths and Ostrogoths have also received detailed coverage elsewhere. This does not mean that we should purge this article of information about Gothic archaeology, Jordanes or the Visigoths and Ostrogoths. The scope of this article should be determined by the scope of the most relevant and reliable sources on the Goths, such as the works of Peter Heather, Herwig Wolfram and Michel Kazanski. These works provide substantial coverage of archaeological and linguistic evidence, which means that such evidence should also be covered here. Krakkos (talk) 20:54, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- Apart from the clear decisions from the RFCs, the entire field or fields relevant to Goths all write in such a way that the appearance of Goths in Roman sources in the 3rd century, for the first time under that name, and for the first time north of the Danube, represents the start of (to say the least) a distinct era of Gothic history. It is clearly a very nicely separable topic!? I have already shown how Heather and Wolfram make this point very clearly, and how you have misunderstood and distorted their words. You are flogging a dead horse and over-dramatizing, in order to create talk page confusion again. No one except you is purging anything from any published expert source. What needs to be purged are fringe stories from internet trolls who like to see themselves as living Goths, and desperately want to continue the old Swedish claim over them. There was an RFC and discussion continues. It should be a normal discussion about where to put what (including genetics, archaeology etc). The fact is that you are continually working against what our fellow editors have said they want, and waiting to reinsert the Goths-are-Swedes story, as you did a few months ago. All your proposals have nothing at all to do with people like Heather, Wolfram or Kazanski, as I have shown many times now. For another example you continue to "purge" and de-emphasize all mention of the Vienna school's ideas about an elite migration which are accepted by all three of them. You only use cherry-picked words from those writers in ways to change their meanings, in order to give the old story of how Goths are Swedes, which is adapted from Jordanes, and would not exist without Jordanes. It is you that wants the troll-adapted Jordanes to quietly dominate this article: You want your modern troll-adapted version of the Jordanes Berig etc story to be the story which Misplaced Pages tells, using the names of modern scholars to hide the real sources. That is also the only way in which you have used archaeological and DNA sources, which you seem to have no interest in, or understanding of, outside of this use - just as you have no interest in the actual scholarly literature about Jordanes. Please stop it and be a bit more practical? --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 09:19, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
"Goths are first mentioned occupying territory in what is now Poland in the first century AD... The history of people labelled "Goths" thus spans 700 years... he Wielbark culture.... took shape in the middle of the first century AD... in Pomerania and lands either side of the lower Vistula... his is the broad area where our few literary sources place a group called Goths at this time... Tacitus Germania 43-4 places them not quite on the Baltic coast; Ptolemy Geography 3.5.8 locates them east of the Vistula; Strabo Geography 7.1.3 (if Butones should be emended to Gutones) broadly agrees with Tacitus... The mutually confirmatory information of ancient sources and the archaeological record both suggest that Goths can first be identified beside the Vistula." – Heather, Peter (1998). The Goths. Blackwell Publishing. ISBN 0-631-209-32-8.
"The Gothic name appears for the first time between A.D. 16 and 18. We do not, however, find the strong form Guti but only the derivative form Gutones... henever the Gutones and Guti are mentioned, these terms refer to the Goths on the Continent before their migration to the Black Sea." – Wolfram, Herwig (1990). History of the Goths. Translated by Dunlap, Thomas J. University of California Press. pp. 20, 23. ISBN 0520069838.
- Apart from the clear decisions from the RFCs, the entire field or fields relevant to Goths all write in such a way that the appearance of Goths in Roman sources in the 3rd century, for the first time under that name, and for the first time north of the Danube, represents the start of (to say the least) a distinct era of Gothic history. It is clearly a very nicely separable topic!? I have already shown how Heather and Wolfram make this point very clearly, and how you have misunderstood and distorted their words. You are flogging a dead horse and over-dramatizing, in order to create talk page confusion again. No one except you is purging anything from any published expert source. What needs to be purged are fringe stories from internet trolls who like to see themselves as living Goths, and desperately want to continue the old Swedish claim over them. There was an RFC and discussion continues. It should be a normal discussion about where to put what (including genetics, archaeology etc). The fact is that you are continually working against what our fellow editors have said they want, and waiting to reinsert the Goths-are-Swedes story, as you did a few months ago. All your proposals have nothing at all to do with people like Heather, Wolfram or Kazanski, as I have shown many times now. For another example you continue to "purge" and de-emphasize all mention of the Vienna school's ideas about an elite migration which are accepted by all three of them. You only use cherry-picked words from those writers in ways to change their meanings, in order to give the old story of how Goths are Swedes, which is adapted from Jordanes, and would not exist without Jordanes. It is you that wants the troll-adapted Jordanes to quietly dominate this article: You want your modern troll-adapted version of the Jordanes Berig etc story to be the story which Misplaced Pages tells, using the names of modern scholars to hide the real sources. That is also the only way in which you have used archaeological and DNA sources, which you seem to have no interest in, or understanding of, outside of this use - just as you have no interest in the actual scholarly literature about Jordanes. Please stop it and be a bit more practical? --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 09:19, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- This article is about Goths. Detailed coverage on Jordanes and Getica belongs at the articles Jordanes and Getica. This article should rely primarily on experts on Goths, as it currently does. The literature and archaeology of the Goths is indeed covered in detail at other articles. The Visigoths and Ostrogoths have also received detailed coverage elsewhere. This does not mean that we should purge this article of information about Gothic archaeology, Jordanes or the Visigoths and Ostrogoths. The scope of this article should be determined by the scope of the most relevant and reliable sources on the Goths, such as the works of Peter Heather, Herwig Wolfram and Michel Kazanski. These works provide substantial coverage of archaeological and linguistic evidence, which means that such evidence should also be covered here. Krakkos (talk) 20:54, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- Actually you will only find things neatly labelled as Goths in Latin and Greek literature. This article is about a historical people, i.e. known from the written record. All other types of investigation about them, such as archaeological or linguistic, start from the written record. But you won't find any neatly labelled Gothic DNA in the populations genetic literature. What you have published here in the past was not a neutral summary, but wishful thinking. You were the source. We can however say quite a lot about archaeological ideas concerning the origins of the Goths, but no version of this article or any other on WP has ever done a good job of that. (You've used archaeology sources only to sneak the Jordanes "Berig story" into "Misplaced Pages voice". Ironic! You use archaeologists as a proxy for a bit of Latin literature which is your indirect source for the "Goths are Swedes" myth you are continually trying to reinsert. You argue against citing experts on Jordanes, only because you know they all agree he can't be used this way. Using archaeologists as alternative non-expert sources for Jordanes appears to be the limit of your interest in archaeology.) The archaeology of Gothic origins deserves it's own article (Wielbark culture etc) and I think no one would have a problem with truly neutral summaries of articles like Stolarek's there.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 20:20, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
- This article is not about Latin literature either. Does that mean we should purge the article of all references to Latin literature? Of course not. This article is about ancient people, and our understanding of ancient people is based on a combination of literary, linguistic, archaeological, genetic and other material. Genetic information can be used to get insight into many things, for example human migration and social organization. The mtDNA that we inherit from our mothers is one type of such useful genetic information. Stolarek et al. (2019) examined what they perceived to be Gothic mtDNA, and drew some conclusions from it. I think the addition of a neutral reference to Stolarek et al. (2019) would be helpful. This could be done through formulating a sentence or an informational note. Krakkos (talk) 19:45, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
Classic WP:IDHT. When you are exposed, this is what you do: post large irrelevant quotes, and always the same ones, and always pretending you forget previous discussions about removed bits where you have "(...)". (You are sometimes joining bits that are pages apart or even in different chapters, and you always moving key qualifications. You also pick old books over new ones, questionable wordings from abstracts that disagree with the main bodies, compressed wordings from short dictionary articles instead of highly cited works by the same authors, and so on.) This is disruptive editing Krakkos. There is no other reason for you to be quoting the same large blocks of text over and over and over and over without any reference to previous discussion. Most importantly, these quotes are entirely irrelevant to the points made above. FWIW:
- Wolfram, same work, p.44 says:
p.44: the acculturation of the Goths to the Pontic area and their ethnogenesis "at the shores of the Black Sea" are simultaneous and mutually depent processes: In other words, we should speak of the Goths only after the Gutonic immigrants had become "Scythians" at the Black Sea.
While none of this is relevant to the comment you were replying to, the cherry picking is stunning.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:04, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- Apart from a series of personal attacks, your point above was that Wolfram and Heather believe Goths appear "for the first time" in Roman sources in the 3rd century AD. This is a false claim which you have made over and over again. Quoting their most authoritative sources directly helps set the record straight. As long as you continue to misrepresent the views of Wolfram, Heather and others on this talk page, i will continue to quote their works directly, so that the community can make up its own mind on the basis of the actual evidence. Krakkos (talk) 11:48, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- No Krakkos, that was not my point, and it was not your point (and it is not even the point these scholars make, let alone the rest of the field; these two write about the name of the Goths but you twist their meaning all the time to write your fringe stuff about a single simple physical group of people). The point is that there was nothing wrong with the RFC decisions, and quotes like these can't be used to show they were wrong decisions, so please stop beating a dead horse. --Andrew Lancaster (talk) 13:25, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- Apart from a series of personal attacks, your point above was that Wolfram and Heather believe Goths appear "for the first time" in Roman sources in the 3rd century AD. This is a false claim which you have made over and over again. Quoting their most authoritative sources directly helps set the record straight. As long as you continue to misrepresent the views of Wolfram, Heather and others on this talk page, i will continue to quote their works directly, so that the community can make up its own mind on the basis of the actual evidence. Krakkos (talk) 11:48, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
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https://www.ebi.ac.uk/ena/browser/view/PRJEB39997?fbclid=IwAR1334H3S4xx3NN8V3mFLdBnYJVGSwZs1jgnU4MzIEduN2YyoA08yh7Xb6I This new research paper published 2021 proves without any reasonable doubt that some Goths at least had a DNA structure similar to modern Swedes. Done by the University of Fribourg. But those Scandinavian guys living in Poland might be something else... But according to the poles doing this archaeology project they were considered to be archaeologically Gothic and a majority of Individuals have I1 or R1B haplogroup. The Pla de l'Horta villa near Girona in Spain is located in close proximity to a necropolis with a series of tombs associated with the Visigoths. The grave goods and the typology of the tombs point to a Visigothic origin of the individuals. A small number of individuals buried at the site were sampled for DNA analysis in a 2019 study. One of the samples belonged to haplogroup I1. This finding is in accordance with the common ancestral origin of the Visigoths and the Ostrogoths. I read your article but your assumption is wrong your studying an ancient haplogroup but I1 is very new only 3500 years. The Visigothic royalty also had dominant I1 ancestry. According to studies done Spain by archaeologists in Spain. They DNA tested Visigothic nobles graves and they also had a dominant I1 groupings in 2019. https://www.geni.com/projects/I-CTS6364-Y-DNA/36181 quote: "Current DNA research indicates that I1 was close to non-existent in most of Europe outside of Scandinavia and northern Germany before the Migration Period."
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I still watch this from a previous bot-invited RFC visit. So I don't have the depth & expertise here that y'all do and so my comments are from just a quick overview. I agree that it should be kept out. It looks like "somebody's research and interpretation of it" rather than something broad and solid enough (with secondary analysis) to be in an encyclopedia article. Various policies point out that type of a problem with this.North8000 (talk) 13:38, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the input. The dubious genetic material shared by the IP should certainly be kept out. I'm open to including reliable material that is directly relevant to the Goths, but in such cases it should handled it carefully. In any case, the field of genetics is progressing rapidly, and more solid information will hopefully be available in the future. Krakkos (talk) 14:18, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, but you are also "forgetting" that the articles you want to reintroduce into this article were put into multiple Misplaced Pages articles, not just this one. (Also, in articles like this one it was reproduced in multiple versions throughout the article, and you did not cooperate with discussions to improve that!) So the only questions which have really been relevant are about the neutrality of the summaries, and (as per the RFCs) the decision to place the main discussions in archaeology articles about the material cultures whose DNA is being discussed. There has been no purge, and no purge is proposed.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 14:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
collecting quotes to help future discussion about pre 3rd century "pre" Goths
Even if we come to some clear action plans soon, it seems this topic might come back again, either here or on related articles, and discussions has been anything-but-helped by lumping big quotes into the normal talk page. So I hope this workpage helps: Talk:Goths/Quotes.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 13:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- I've gone ahead and started a new article: Origin of the Goths. There seems to be a clear enough agreement that any attempt to expand discussions of this topic needs to be done somewhere else, and I believe our explanations of the topic need expansion somewhere on Misplaced Pages if they are to be clear and accurate. Highly compressed versions are constantly going to be controversial distractions. From my work on this new article so far, a single independent article does seem possible. (I am open to other ideas about merging it to other Goth-related articles. Other relevant articles are Origin stories of the Goths, Wielbark culture, Name of the Goths, and Gutones but I think the overlap is OK at this point.) I really hope this helps us in the future. I truly believe it can.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 10:45, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
New section on warfare
Joe Flats 123, I think all or most of the material you've added is not specifically about Goths but about what we modern people call "Germanic peoples"? Ancient authors did provide distinct descriptions of the Goths, but I think you are using descriptions of other Germanic peoples? Roman authors repeatedly insisted that the Goths were a Scythian people in terms of their customs etc. For example, a major part of the new material is a block of text from Mauricius about the "Fair haired peoples" such as Franks and Lombards. These are western European groups who the Romans did not associate with the Goths. The Strategikon has a different section for discussion about Scythian peoples, and in Book IV this work makes clear that Goths, as in other works, are Scythian. Are you not using the wrong section of the Strategikon? To give an example of a difference, while the fair haired peoples can easily be drawn out of formation by simulated retreats, the Goths are experts in performing such simulated retreats. And rather than being happy to dismount, like the fair-haired peoples, this work claims that because they grow up on horseback, the Scythians are not happy walking around on foot. If on the other hand we say this is not explicitly enough about Goths, that's fine, but we can't use descriptions of western europeans as a stand-in, surely?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 16:12, 30 June 2022 (UTC)
Andrew Lancaster I think you are right for the Strategikon section, i will delete that. However, i know that the paragraph or two before that talks about weapons and armour explicitly for the Goths, so i wont delete that. :) --Joe Flats 123
another re-appearance of the DNA section
@Isacdaavid I don't know who reintroduced the genetics section, but you have reintroduced strong claims into another section, about the name of the Goths, indicating that DNA proves the "Goths" to be from Scandinavia. There is no such evidence, and this has been discussed and agreed here several times in the past. Of course there could be new evidence one day, but I don't see it?
- The Genomic Atlas website you are now citing as a new source does not appear to be a reliable source according to Misplaced Pages norms. If necessary please take it to WP:RSN and ask for someone else's opinion.
- The Stolarek et al. article from 2023 only mentions the Goths once: "Some theories link the emergence of the Wielbark culture with the migration of people commonly referred to as Goths". (There is a lot more that could be said about the problems of using a research report like this, with vague conclusions.)
- The Antonio et al. article of 2023 does not mention Gothic DNA, or the Wielbark culture.
On this basis I believe the genetics section, and also this misplaced genetics digression in the name section, should be removed or stripped down quite a lot. At the moment this is basically WP:OR. (I also don't see why all these things need to be repeated in a section which is supposed to be about the name of the Goths?) Andrew Lancaster (talk) 21:21, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Concur entirely with Andrew Lancaster about this matter. This topic has been repeatedly argued on pages related to the ancient Germanic peoples in general and this page especially. There is overwhelming consensus about the speciousness of these sorts of claims.
- As an update Isacdaavid you posted on RSN (thank you) and received two very clear negative responses concerning the new source. I think we are going is that the DNA claims need trimming or deleting. If anyone has other evidence, or good proposals on ways of trimming it, now would be a good moment to get involved in this discussion.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 17:38, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with deletion or trimming. And I know it's a new and fast paced field, but there is no exception to the requirement that we use secondary and not primary sources to write encyclopaedic articles. Sirfurboy🏄 (talk) 17:51, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- Concur entirely with Andrew Lancaster about this matter. This topic has been repeatedly argued on pages related to the ancient Germanic peoples in general and this page especially. There is overwhelming consensus about the speciousness of these sorts of claims.
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