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| The original assumed that states own those they declare as citizens, and assumed that an actual "duty" of some sort is "owed" to the state. I changed the wording in an attempt to achieve neutrality, but I think it is clumsy and welcome alternative suggestions. --] 10:28, 2 Oct 2004 (UTC) | The original assumed that states own those they declare as citizens, and assumed that an actual "duty" of some sort is "owed" to the state. I changed the wording in an attempt to achieve neutrality, but I think it is clumsy and welcome alternative suggestions. --] 10:28, 2 Oct 2004 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 02:32, 22 June 2007
The original was offensive in its nationalism
The original assumed that states own those they declare as citizens, and assumed that an actual "duty" of some sort is "owed" to the state. I changed the wording in an attempt to achieve neutrality, but I think it is clumsy and welcome alternative suggestions. --Silverback 10:28, 2 Oct 2004 (UTC)
I tried a new wording. 68.99.231.207 02:32, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
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Removed "some think" from the first line
It might seem offensive or nationalistic to put it the way it was put, but as rephrased it appears to un-define the word altogether.
Perhaps a paragraph about international recognition of the right to emigrate, and to renounce allegiance would make more sense, somewhere in the body of the article?
Disambiguous page
This page should really be a page to clarify exactly what the user wants to find. I came here looking for information about the Allegiance computer game...even though there is a link at the bottom of this page for the computer game I should not have seen this page at all. Flyerhell 09:36, 6 December 2005 (UTC)
- The disambiguation link, though, is at the top of the page... --badpazzword 15:12, 9 December 2006 (UTC)