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| == Removed "some think" from the first line == | |||
| It might seem offensive or nationalistic to put it the way it was put, but as rephrased it appears to un-define the word altogether. | |||
| Perhaps a paragraph about international recognition of the right to emigrate, and to renounce allegiance would make more sense, somewhere in the body of the article? | |||
Revision as of 17:19, 14 October 2005
The original was offensive in its nationalism
The original assumed that states own those they declare as citizens, and assumed that an actual "duty" of some sort is "owed" to the state. I changed the wording in an attempt to achieve neutrality, but I think it is clumsy and welcome alternative suggestions. --Silverback 10:28, 2 Oct 2004 (UTC)
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Removed "some think" from the first line
It might seem offensive or nationalistic to put it the way it was put, but as rephrased it appears to un-define the word altogether.
Perhaps a paragraph about international recognition of the right to emigrate, and to renounce allegiance would make more sense, somewhere in the body of the article?