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* '''Incremental improving of article''': * '''Upgrade article per outline (below)''':
** Revise lead. '''Mostly done.''' ** Revise lead. {{done}}
** Aspects of sustainability/Definition section. '''Mostly done.''' ** Aspects of sustainability/Definition section.
** Historic framing of sustainability, section '''Mostly done... may need some condensing but material is good.''' ** Historic framing of sustainability, section
** U.N. section. May be too large or redundant in information presentation, and need consolidating. ** U.N. section. May be too large or redundant in information presentation, and need consolidating.
** ] for some sections to reduce article size ** ] for some sections to reduce article size
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***accurate and verifyable ***accurate and verifyable
***comprehensive and cohesive ***comprehensive and cohesive
***neutral. '''Needs work''' ***neutral.
***suitable images. '
***stable. '''Pretty stable'''.
***suitable images. '''Seem good'''.
***Edit and verify all footnotes ***Edit and verify all footnotes
** Decide on appropriate content of the "Further Reading" section. ** Decide on appropriate content of the "Further Reading" section.
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'''Current tasks''' '''Current tasks'''
* The lead has been revised and will be uploaded.
See the bottom of this talk page for the latest discussions and contribute to improving the article. Mostly that is being done in real time with counter point sandbox discussions also. Participation in editing the article is encouraged and suggestions and comments are welcome below.
* History section is current focus of attention (see subpage)

Revision as of 17:03, 10 December 2008

  • Upgrade article per outline (below):
    • Revise lead.  Done
    • Aspects of sustainability/Definition section.
    • Historic framing of sustainability, section
    • U.N. section. May be too large or redundant in information presentation, and need consolidating.
    • Summary style for some sections to reduce article size
    • Decide on content of the "See Also" section and Sustainability "Template"
    • Edit entire article according to "Featured article criteria:
      • clear; style conforms to MoS
      • accurate and verifyable
      • comprehensive and cohesive
      • neutral.
      • suitable images. '
      • Edit and verify all footnotes
    • Decide on appropriate content of the "Further Reading" section.
    • Determine whether to submit for WP:GA or WP:FA status
    • Final copyediting and submission for assessment

Current tasks

  • The lead has been revised and will be uploaded.
  • History section is current focus of attention (see subpage)