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| Isn't just POV pushing, it's getting into libel territory. ] 01:54, 1 December 2005 (UTC) | Isn't just POV pushing, it's getting into libel territory. ] 01:54, 1 December 2005 (UTC) | ||
| ::I'll change "revealed" to "portrayed". Better? --] 02:16, 1 December 2005 (UTC) | ::I'll change "revealed" to "portrayed". Better? --] 02:16, 1 December 2005 (UTC) | ||
| ::By the way, I proofread the entire article and fixed its poor grammar. Verting my entire contribution because of a word is awfully impolite.--] 02:18, 1 December 2005 (UTC) | |||
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"They were revealed as parents who neglected their children, spent far too much time on their computers, exhibited anti-social behavior, made their young son do enormous amounts of chores, etc."
Isn't just POV pushing, it's getting into libel territory. Mark K. Bilbo 01:54, 1 December 2005 (UTC)
- I'll change "revealed" to "portrayed". Better? --Jason Gastrich 02:16, 1 December 2005 (UTC)
- By the way, I proofread the entire article and fixed its poor grammar. Verting my entire contribution because of a word is awfully impolite.--Jason Gastrich 02:18, 1 December 2005 (UTC)