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| '''Oppose:''' There are grievous grammatical errors and riotous rhetorical disasters in each of the first three sentences of this article. Please archive expeditiously.—] (]) 07:30, 3 September 2010 (UTC) | '''Oppose:''' There are grievous grammatical errors and riotous rhetorical disasters in each of the first three sentences of this article. Please archive expeditiously.—] (]) 07:30, 3 September 2010 (UTC) | ||
| '''Oppose, suggest withdrawal''' - this article is not ready for Featured status. A quick scan reveals immediate problems with structure, spelling and prose, such as: | |||
| *"After the closure of Harry Potter Movie Magic Experience in Australia, the rumours returned." - no rumours have yet been mentioned. | |||
| *"Appraisal by both Harry Potter fans and general guests alike of the attention to detail and the immersion that the land provides." - not a complete sentence. | |||
| *"This popularity has lead to long queues ..." basic attention to spelling. | |||
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- Nominator(s): Themeparkgc Talk 06:41, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
I am nominating this for featured article because I feel it meets the FA criteria. I have worked on this article to reach it to GA status. Most recently I requested a peer review which resulted in a variety of recommendations that I have incorporated. Themeparkgc Talk 06:41, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Oppose: There are grievous grammatical errors and riotous rhetorical disasters in each of the first three sentences of this article. Please archive expeditiously.—DCGeist (talk) 07:30, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
Oppose, suggest withdrawal - this article is not ready for Featured status. A quick scan reveals immediate problems with structure, spelling and prose, such as:
- "After the closure of Harry Potter Movie Magic Experience in Australia, the rumours returned." - no rumours have yet been mentioned.
- "Appraisal by both Harry Potter fans and general guests alike of the attention to detail and the immersion that the land provides." - not a complete sentence.
- "This popularity has lead to long queues ..." basic attention to spelling.