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| *Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful. | *Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful. | ||
| *Add a significant number of references | *Add a significant number of references | ||
| *Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment) |
*<s>Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)</s> | ||
| *Add some image of Moscow sport facilities, best of all - Grand Sport Arena in Luzhniki | *Add some image of Moscow sport facilities, best of all - Grand Sport Arena in Luzhniki | ||
Revision as of 17:28, 3 July 2006
From Moscow's peer review:
- Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
- Refactor the media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.
- Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.
- Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section
- Expand the Education section
- Explain the Crime Rates box better
- Copyedit the article
- Move Climate from under Tourism
- Put Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)
- Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
- Add a significant number of references
Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)- Add some image of Moscow sport facilities, best of all - Grand Sport Arena in Luzhniki