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| *Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) | *Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) | ||
| *Refactor |
*Refactor ''Media'' section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like ]. | ||
| *Remove ''See Also'' links (like ]) that are already linked in the body of the article. | *Remove ''See Also'' links (like ]) that are already linked in the body of the article. | ||
| *Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section | *Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section | ||
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| *<s>Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)</s> | *<s>Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)</s> | ||
| *Add some image of Moscow sport facilities, best of all - Grand Sport Arena in Luzhniki | *Add some image of Moscow sport facilities, best of all - Grand Sport Arena in Luzhniki | ||
| *Refactor ''Living Costs'' section, which is quite repetitive. | |||
Revision as of 18:38, 3 July 2006
From Moscow's peer review:
- Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
- Refactor Media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.
- Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.
- Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section
- Expand the Education section
- Explain the Crime Rates box better
- Copyedit the article
- Move Climate from under Tourism
- Put Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)
- Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
- Add a significant number of references
Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)- Add some image of Moscow sport facilities, best of all - Grand Sport Arena in Luzhniki
- Refactor Living Costs section, which is quite repetitive.