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| *Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) | *Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) | ||
| : disagree. having small gallery some 4x4 photos, or 4x5 is very good. ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| *Refactor ''Media'' section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like ]. | *Refactor ''Media'' section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like ]. | ||
| *Remove ''See Also'' links (like ]) that are already linked in the body of the article. | *Remove ''See Also'' links (like ]) that are already linked in the body of the article. | ||
| *Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section | *Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section | ||
| *Expand the Education section | *Expand the Education section | ||
| *Explain the Crime Rates box better | *<s>Explain the Crime Rates box better</s> | ||
| : well, same table is in nyc article. it is understable. ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| *Copyedit the article | *Copyedit the article | ||
| *<s>Move Climate from under Tourism</s> | *<s>Move Climate from under Tourism</s> | ||
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| *Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful. | *Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful. | ||
| *Add a significant number of references | *Add a significant number of references | ||
| :disagree ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| *<s>Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)</s> | *<s>Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)</s> | ||
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| *Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes | *Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes | ||
| : i just took krylatskoye this sunday. i'll add later when will process all photos. ] 16:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| *Refactor ''Living Costs'' section, which is quite repetitive. | *Refactor ''Living Costs'' section, which is quite repetitive. | ||
Revision as of 18:27, 5 July 2006
From Moscow's peer review:
- Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons)
- Refactor Media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.
- Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.
- Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section
- Expand the Education section
Explain the Crime Rates box better- Copyedit the article
Move Climate from under TourismPut Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)- Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
- Add a significant number of references
Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)
Other Items:
- Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes
- Refactor Living Costs section, which is quite repetitive.