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*<s>Russian State Library (former Lenin library) should be mentioned.</s> *<s>Russian State Library (former Lenin library) should be mentioned.</s>
*Perhaps a brief note about schools for students below college-age would be helpful in the ''Education'' section. *Perhaps a brief note about schools for students below college-age would be helpful in the ''Education'' section.
*Sport section should be improved, Moscow Hyppodrome mentioned. *Sport section should be improved, <s>Moscow Hyppodrome mentioned.</s>
*Modern city plan nedded to replace old ones. *Modern city plan nedded to replace old ones.
*Improve introduction *Improve introduction

Revision as of 04:47, 23 July 2006

From Moscow's peer review:

  • Remove image gallery (perhaps just replace it with a link to Wikimedia Commons) - no consensus
  • Refactor Media section (as it is currently just a list of external links) to make it look more like Johannesburg's Communications and media section.
  • Remove See Also links (like History of Moscow) that are already linked in the body of the article.
  • Remove the list from the Moscow tourist attractions section
  • Expand the Education section
  • Explain the Crime Rates box better
  • Copyedit the article
  • Move Climate from under Tourism
  • Put Air pollution in Moscow in a sub-section (as it's too short as it is)
  • Sift through the External Links and get rid of any that are not very helpful.
  • Add a significant number of references
  • Add something about water transport (Moscow has two passenger riverports and regular motorship routes used mostly for entertainment)

Other Items:

  • Add some image of Moscow sport facilities - Luzhniki and Krylatskoye sport complexes
  • Refactor Living Costs section, which is quite repetitive.
  • Russian State Library (former Lenin library) should be mentioned.
  • Perhaps a brief note about schools for students below college-age would be helpful in the Education section.
  • Sport section should be improved, Moscow Hyppodrome mentioned.
  • Modern city plan nedded to replace old ones.
  • Improve introduction

Lastly:

  • Do a final copyedit, with all the additional changes
  • Nominate for featured article status