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| *{{U|Stephen}} - queue 4 - " can be demolished" is not suitable in tone, the article doesn't use this phrasing. In fact, the article puts it much better: "The larvae from a single egg cluster can destroy a whole cabbage or cauliflower plant". ] (]) 08:36, 9 March 2017 (UTC) | *{{U|Stephen}} - queue 4 - " can be demolished" is not suitable in tone, the article doesn't use this phrasing. In fact, the article puts it much better: "The larvae from a single egg cluster can destroy a whole cabbage or cauliflower plant". ] (]) 08:36, 9 March 2017 (UTC) | ||
| *{{U|Stephen}} - queue 4 - "in Aurora, Colorado was" comma needed after Colorado. ] (]) 08:37, 9 March 2017 (UTC) | *{{U|Stephen}} - queue 4 - "in Aurora, Colorado was" comma needed after Colorado. ] (]) 08:37, 9 March 2017 (UTC) | ||
| *{{U|Stephen}} - queue 5 - "Pangolins are believed to be the world's most trafficked mammal" in the article. The hook has lost the "believed to be".... ] (]) 08:56, 9 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
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Francis Schonken inaccurate I'm afraid. The vast majority of what I wrote related to the ongoing plague of errors on the main page. That some people still want to enable admins who call people "prick", "asshole" and tell them "fuck you" and allow them to do so willingly is a serious indictment. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:55, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
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- Stephen - queue 4 - " can be demolished" is not suitable in tone, the article doesn't use this phrasing. In fact, the article puts it much better: "The larvae from a single egg cluster can destroy a whole cabbage or cauliflower plant". The Rambling Man (talk) 08:36, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
- Stephen - queue 4 - "in Aurora, Colorado was" comma needed after Colorado. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:37, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
- Stephen - queue 5 - "Pangolins are believed to be the world's most trafficked mammal" in the article. The hook has lost the "believed to be".... The Rambling Man (talk) 08:56, 9 March 2017 (UTC)