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*Convert all references to use the {{tl|citeweb}} template |
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*Convert all (web) references to use the {{tl|citeweb}} template |
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*Edit the lead to conform the WP:LEAD guidelines |
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*The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at ]; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article. |
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*COPYEDIT - remove redundancies, make text crisp and concise, specify when talking about size and avoid misplaced formality |
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*This article may need to undergo ], where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is ], than an appropriate subpage would be ], such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail. |
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*See ] |
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*There are a few occurrences of ]s in this article- please observe ]. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. |
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**''allege'' |
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**might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper ] (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please <strike>strike</strike> this comment). <!--This javascript cannot determine if a citation is provided; if all weasel terms are covered by citations, please strike this--> |
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*Watch for ] that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's ].) |
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**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “<font color='red'><s>All</s></font> pigs are pink, so we thought of <font color='red'><s>a number of</s></font> ways to turn them green.” |
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Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, ]. |
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*As done in ], footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the ], but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, ''the sun is larger than the moon .'' is usually written as ''the sun is larger than the moon.'' |
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*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of ]. See also ]. |
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*You may wish to browse through ] for further ideas. |
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