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There is a line in the 4th paragraph that states Powell received three electoral votes in the 2016 Presidential election. This is not correct. I cannot provide proof but I believe the year was 1996. There is a line in the 4th paragraph that states Powell received three electoral votes in the 2016 Presidential election. This is not correct. I cannot provide proof but I believe the year was 1996. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 20:37, 20 May 2022 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

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Semi-protected edit request on 27 October 2021

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Please remove this line:

Powell, who was being treated for blood cancer, that affects the immune system, died from complications of COVID-19 on October 18, 2021.

and add this line:

Powell died from complications of COVID-19 on October 18, 2021, while being treated for a form of blood cancer that affected his immune system.

The first sentence is really complex with four commas, and "that" after a comma is either wrong or really unusual. Also, the note at the top of the article reminds us to use past tense in his article, and "affects" is present tense. 64.203.186.93 (talk) 16:53, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

 Done ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 17:20, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Please add that the first elementary school was named for him in The Woodlands Tx. Conroe ISD.

Please add that the first elementary school was named for him in The Woodlands Tx. Conroe ISD. 67.11.8.55 (talk) 16:20, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

Trump Mention

What is the reason, need or relevance for mentioning Trump in his death section? Not everything is about him. 2600:1700:1400:7DE0:A015:A818:2677:E6CF (talk) 16:46, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

I tried to change the phrasing to be a little more accurate. Eruditess (talk) 23:33, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

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Exactly why is it necessary to history to include he was vaccinated if there is no mention of covid as a direct cause of his death. How about we remove that portion and just mention how he died. 2600:4040:1253:4D00:A1C3:B5A0:95B9:63BD (talk) 22:06, 15 May 2022 (UTC)

 Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{edit semi-protected}} template. —Sirdog (talk) 22:15, 15 May 2022 (UTC)

Colin Powell

There is a line in the 4th paragraph that states Powell received three electoral votes in the 2016 Presidential election. This is not correct. I cannot provide proof but I believe the year was 1996. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 184.101.49.24 (talk) 20:37, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

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