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::I agree with Space4Time on our current language. For the last line: While there's certainly room for expansion like adding his later comments in ideal circumstances, we have to be careful on this enormous page. ] (]) 19:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ::I agree with Space4Time on our current language. For the last line: While there's certainly room for expansion like adding his later comments in ideal circumstances, we have to be careful on this enormous page. ] (]) 19:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
:::I completely disagree. Adding that quote wouldn't be much more content and would add context and neutrality. ] (]) 20:48, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | :::I completely disagree. Adding that quote wouldn't be much more content and would add context and neutrality. ] (]) 20:48, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
{{ping|X-Editor}} a better approach might be to write a few sentences on the overwhelming mainstream reporting and analysis of Trump's use of various weak prevarications and deflections to chum up his base and right-wing media supporters. Then we would be giving an encyclopedic overview without having to go into the details of what he said or to omit all or part of what he said each and every time.]] 20:00, 29 June 2022 (UTC) {{ping|X-Editor}}20:09, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | {{ping|X-Editor}} a better approach might be to write a few sentences on the overwhelming mainstream reporting and analysis of Trump's use of various weak prevarications and deflections to chum up his base and right-wing media supporters. Then we would be giving an encyclopedic overview without having to go into the details of what he said or to omit all or part of what he said each and every time. ]] 20:00, 29 June 2022 (UTC) {{ping|X-Editor}}20:09, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
:That actually sounds a lot better, but for now, the context should be added per my explanation above. ] (]) 20:43, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | :That actually sounds a lot better, but for now, the context should be added per my explanation above. ] (]) 20:43, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
{{ping|SPECIFICO}}{{ping|GordonGlottal}}{{ping|Space4Time3Continuum2x}}{{ping|Zaathras}}{{ping|MaximusEditor}} Just so everyone is clear, my proposed change is now adding this sentence to the UTR rally paragraph: "However, Trump later stated that "I'm not talking about the neo-Nazis and the white nationalists, because they should be condemned totally–but you had many people in that group other than neo-Nazis and white nationalists".<ref name="LAT170815">{{cite news |date=August 15, 2017 |title=Read the complete transcript of President Trump's remarks at Trump Tower on Charlottesville |newspaper=] |url=https://www.latimes.com/politics/la-na-pol-trump-charlottesville-transcript-20170815-story.html |access-date=December 28, 2021}}</ref>" and to add Trump saying "And some, I assume, are good people." next to the other part of the quote that says "They're bringing drugs. They're bringing crime. They're rapists." to the article. ] (]) 20:57, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | {{ping|SPECIFICO}}{{ping|GordonGlottal}}{{ping|Space4Time3Continuum2x}}{{ping|Zaathras}}{{ping|MaximusEditor}} Just so everyone is clear, my proposed change is now adding this sentence to the UTR rally paragraph: "However, Trump later stated that "I'm not talking about the neo-Nazis and the white nationalists, because they should be condemned totally–but you had many people in that group other than neo-Nazis and white nationalists".<ref name="LAT170815">{{cite news |date=August 15, 2017 |title=Read the complete transcript of President Trump's remarks at Trump Tower on Charlottesville |newspaper=] |url=https://www.latimes.com/politics/la-na-pol-trump-charlottesville-transcript-20170815-story.html |access-date=December 28, 2021}}</ref>" and to add Trump saying "And some, I assume, are good people." next to the other part of the quote that says "They're bringing drugs. They're bringing crime. They're rapists." to the article. ] (]) 20:57, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
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::Context is nothing of value? ] (]) 21:30, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ::Context is nothing of value? ] (]) 21:30, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
:::Zaathras has put it in a nutshell. Dog bites man. Trump denies XYZ -- not only do mainstream sources take this deflection as nonsense, they don't even bother mentioning it in subsequent discussions of his statement. Yes, there are the ] accounts of all kinds of presidential pronouncements, but the media and tertiary sources did not take that seriously. Fog is not context that clarifies.]] 22:25, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | :::Zaathras has put it in a nutshell. Dog bites man. Trump denies XYZ -- not only do mainstream sources take this deflection as nonsense, they don't even bother mentioning it in subsequent discussions of his statement. Yes, there are the ] accounts of all kinds of presidential pronouncements, but the media and tertiary sources did not take that seriously. Fog is not context that clarifies.]] 22:25, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
::::Fair enough and thanks for providing a better explanation. The paragraph is meant to summarize the most notable aspects of his response anyways and there is more context in the article about the UTR itself. ] (]) 22:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | |||
:The second one doesn't bother me, but nor do I really think it's necessary. For the first: fundamentally, the point of this section is to summarize the racial views of Donald Trump. At the top we say that he denies being a racist etc. Below we give various examples of incidents that have been taken to be a better reflection of his genuine views. The fact that he later reverted to his more PC, controlled statements or muddied the waters isn't really that relevant. The reader knows that he denies it and that claims otherwise are an attempt to read between the lines of his public persona. Anyone interested in more can look at the full page. ] (]) 21:51, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | :The second one doesn't bother me, but nor do I really think it's necessary. For the first: fundamentally, the point of this section is to summarize the racial views of Donald Trump. At the top we say that he denies being a racist etc. Below we give various examples of incidents that have been taken to be a better reflection of his genuine views. The fact that he later reverted to his more PC, controlled statements or muddied the waters isn't really that relevant. The reader knows that he denies it and that claims otherwise are an attempt to read between the lines of his public persona. Anyone interested in more can look at the full page. ] (]) 21:51, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | ||
{{ping|SPECIFICO}} You mentioned the idea of writing "a few sentences on the overwhelming mainstream reporting and analysis of Trump's use of various weak prevarications and deflections to chum up his base and right-wing media supporters ... without having to go into the details of what he said or to omit all or part of what he said each and every time." Do you have any suggestions on what that might look like and what sources we could use? That sounds much more encyclopedic than just cherrypicking several things he has said. ] (]) 22:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC) | |||
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01. Use the official White House portrait as the infobox image. (Dec 2016, Jan 2017, Oct 2017, March 2020) (temporarily suspended by #19 following copyright issues on the inauguration portrait, enforced when an official public-domain portrait was released on 31 October 2017)
02. Show birthplace as "Queens, New York City, U.S.
" in the infobox. (Nov 2016, Oct 2018, Feb 2021) "New York City" de-linked. (September 2020)
03. Omit reference to county-level election statistics. (Dec 2016)
04. Superseded by #15 Lead phrasing of Trump "gaining a majority of the U.S. Electoral College" and "
receiving a smaller share of the popular vote nationwide", without quoting numbers. (Nov 2016, Dec 2016) (Superseded by #15 since 11 February 2017)
05. Use Trump's annual net worth evaluation and matching ranking, from the Forbes list of billionaires, not from monthly or "live" estimates. (Oct 2016) In the lead section, just write: Removed from the lead per #47.
Forbes estimates his net worth to be billion.
(July 2018, July 2018)
06. Do not include allegations of sexual misconduct in the lead section. (June 2016, Feb 2018)
07. Superseded by #35 Include "Many of his public statements were controversial or false." in the lead. (Sep 2016, February 2017, wording shortened per April 2017, upheld with July 2018) (superseded by #35 since 18 February 2019) 08. Superseded by unlisted consensus Mention that Trump is the first president elected "
without prior military or government service". (Dec 2016, superseded Nov 2024)
09. Include a link to Trump's Twitter account in the "External links" section. (Jan 2017) Include a link to an archive of Trump's Twitter account in the "External links" section. (Jan 2021)
Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American businessman, television personality, politician, and the 45th President of the United States." (Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Feb 2017) (superseded by #17 since 2 April 2017)
12. The article title is Donald Trump, not Donald J. Trump. (RM Jan 2017, RM June 2019)
13. Auto-archival is set for discussions with no comments for 7 days. Manual archival is allowed for (1) closed discussions, 24 hours after the closure, provided the closure has not been challenged, and (2) "answered" edit requests, 24 hours after the "answer", provided there has been no follow-on discussion after the "answer". (Jan 2017) (amended with respect to manual archiving, to better reflect common practice at this article) (Nov 2019)
14. Omit mention of Trump's alleged bathmophobia/fear of slopes. (Feb 2017)
15. Superseded by lead rewrite Supersedes #4. There is no consensus to change the formulation of the paragraph which summarizes election results in the lead (starting with "Trump won the general election on November 8, 2016, …"). Accordingly the pre-RfC text (Diff 8 Jan 2017) has been restored, with minor adjustments to past tense (Diff 11 Feb 2018). No new changes should be applied without debate. (RfC Feb 2017, Jan 2017, Feb 2017, Feb 2017) In particular, there is no consensus to include any wording akin to "losing the popular vote". (RfC March 2017) (Superseded by local consensus on 26 May 2017 and lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017) 16. Superseded by lead rewrite Do not mention Russian influence on the presidential election in the lead section. (RfC March 2017) (Superseded by lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017) 17. Superseded by #50 Supersedes #11. The lead paragraph is "
Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is the 45th and current president of the United States. Before entering politics, he was a businessman and television personality." The hatnote is simply {{Other uses}}. (April 2017, RfC April 2017, April 2017, April 2017, April 2017, July 2017, Dec 2018) Amended by lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017 and removal of inauguration date on 4 July 2018. Lower-case "p" in "president" per Dec 2018 and MOS:JOBTITLES RfC Oct 2017. Wikilinks modified per April 2020. Wikilink modified again per July 2020. "45th" de-linked. (Jan 2021) 18. Superseded by #63 The "Alma mater" infobox entry shows "
Wharton School (BS Econ.)", does not mention Fordham University. (April 2017, April 2017, Aug 2020, Dec 2020) 19. Obsolete Following deletion of Trump's official White House portrait for copyright reasons on 2 June 2017, infobox image was replaced by File:Donald Trump Pentagon 2017.jpg. (June 2017 for replacement, June 2017, declined REFUND on 11 June 2017) (replaced by White House official public-domain portrait according to #1 since 31 Oct 2017) 20. Superseded by unlisted consensus Mention protests in the lead section with this exact wording:
His election and policies(June 2017, May 2018, superseded December 2024) (Note: In February 2021, when he was no longer president, the verb tense was changed from "have sparked" to "sparked", without objection.) 21. Superseded by #39 Omit any opinions about Trump's psychology held by mental health academics or professionals who have not examined him. (July 2017, Aug 2017) (superseded by #36 on 18 June 2019, then by #39 since 20 Aug 2019)havesparked numerous protests.
22. Do not call Trump a "liar" in Misplaced Pages's voice. Falsehoods he uttered can be mentioned, while being mindful of calling them "lies", which implies malicious intent. (RfC Aug 2017, upheld by RfC July 2024)
23. Superseded by #52 The lead includes the following sentence:Trump ordered a travel ban on citizens from several Muslim-majority countries, citing security concerns; after legal challenges, the Supreme Court upheld the policy's third revision.(Aug 2017, Nov 2017, Dec 2017, Jan 2018, Jan 2018) Wording updated (July 2018) and again (Sep 2018). 24. Superseded by #30 Do not include allegations of racism in the lead. (Feb 2018) (superseded by #30 since 16 Aug 2018)
25. In citations, do not code the archive-related parameters for sources that are not dead. (Dec 2017, March 2018)
26. Do not include opinions by Michael Hayden and Michael Morell that Trump is a "useful fool manipulated by Moscow"
or an "unwitting agent of the Russian Federation"
. (RfC April 2018)
27. State that Trump falsely claimed
that Hillary Clinton started the Barack Obama birther
rumors. (April 2018, June 2018)
28. Include, in the Wealth section, a sentence on Jonathan Greenberg's allegation that Trump deceived him in order to get on the Forbes 400 list. (June 2018, June 2018)
29. Include material about the Trump administration family separation policy in the article. (June 2018)
30. Supersedes #24. The lead includes: "Many of his comments and actions have been characterized as racially charged or racist.
" (RfC Sep 2018, Oct 2018, RfC May 2019)
31. Do not mention Trump's office space donation to Jesse Jackson's Rainbow/Push Coalition in 1999. (Nov 2018)
32. Omit from the lead the fact that Trump is the first sitting U.S. president to meet with a North Korean supreme leader. (RfC July 2018, Nov 2018)
33. Do not mention "birtherism" in the lead section. (RfC Nov 2018)
34. Refer to Ivana Zelníčková as a Czech model, with a link to Czechs (people), not Czechoslovakia (country). (Jan 2019)
35. Superseded by #49 Supersedes #7. Include in the lead:Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics.(RfC Feb 2019) 36. Superseded by #39 Include one paragraph merged from Health of Donald Trump describing views about Trump's psychology expressed by public figures, media sources, and mental health professionals who have not examined him. (June 2019) (paragraph removed per RfC Aug 2019 yielding consensus #39)
37. Resolved: Content related to Trump's presidency should be limited to summary-level about things that are likely to have a lasting impact on his life and/or long-term presidential legacy. If something is borderline or debatable, the resolution does not apply. (June 2019)
38. Do not state in the lead that Trump is the wealthiest U.S. president ever. (RfC June 2019)
39. Supersedes #21 and #36. Do not include any paragraph regarding Trump's mental health or mental fitness for office. Do not bring up for discussion again until an announced formal diagnosis or WP:MEDRS-level sources are provided. This does not prevent inclusion of content about temperamental fitness for office. (RfC Aug 2019, July 2021)
40. Include, when discussing Trump's exercise or the lack thereof: He has called golfing his "primary form of exercise", although he usually does not walk the course. He considers exercise a waste of energy, because he believes the body is "like a battery, with a finite amount of energy" which is depleted by exercise.
(RfC Aug 2019)
41. Omit book authorship (or lack thereof) from the lead section. (RfC Nov 2019)
42. House and Senate outcomes of the impeachment process are separated by a full stop. For example: He was impeached by the House on December 18, 2019, for abuse of power and obstruction of Congress. He was acquitted of both charges by the Senate on February 5, 2020.
(Feb 2020)
43. The rules for edits to the lead are no different from those for edits below the lead. For edits that do not conflict with existing consensus: Prior consensus is NOT required. BOLD edits are allowed, subject to normal BRD process. The mere fact that an edit has not been discussed is not a valid reason to revert it. (March 2020)
44. The lead section should mention North Korea, focusing on Trump's meetings with Kim and some degree of clarification that they haven't produced clear results. (RfC May 2020)
45. Superseded by #48 There is no consensus to mention the COVID-19 pandemic in the lead section. (RfC May 2020, July 2020)46. Use the caption "Official portrait, 2017" for the infobox image. (Aug 2020, Jan 2021)
47. Do not mention Trump's net worth or Forbes ranking (or equivalents from other publications) in the lead, nor in the infobox. (Sep 2020)
48. Supersedes #45. Trump's reaction to the COVID-19 pandemic should be mentioned in the lead section. There is no consensus on specific wording, but the status quo is Trump reacted slowly to the COVID-19 pandemic; he minimized the threat, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing.
(Oct 2020, RfC Aug 2020)
49. Supersedes #35. Include in lead: Trump has made many false and misleading statements during his campaigns and presidency, to a degree unprecedented in American politics.
(Dec 2020)
50. Supersedes #17. The lead sentence is: Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, and businessman who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021.
(March 2021), amended (July 2021), inclusion of politician (RfC September 2021)
51. Include in the lead that many of Trump's comments and actions have been characterized as misogynistic. (Aug 2021 and Sep 2021)
52. Supersedes #23. The lead should contain a summary of Trump's actions on immigration, including the Muslim travel ban (cf. item 23), the wall, and the family separation policy. (September 2021)
53. The lead should mention that Trump promotes conspiracy theories. (RfC October 2021)
54. Include in the lead that, quote, Scholars and historians rank Trump as one of the worst presidents in U.S. history.
(RfC October 2021) Amended after re-election: After his first term, scholars and historians ranked Trump as one of the worst presidents in American history.
(November 2024)
55. Regarding Trump's comments on the 2017 far-right rally in Charlottesville, Virginia
, do not wiki-link "Trump's comments" in this manner. (RfC December 2021)
56. Retain the content that Trump never confronted Putin over its alleged bounties against American soldiers in Afghanistan
but add context. Current wording can be altered or contextualized; no consensus was achieved on alternate wordings. (RfC November 2021) Trump's expressions of doubt regarding the Russian Bounties Program should be included in some capacity, though there there is no consensus on a specific way to characterize these expressed doubts. (RfC March 2022)
57. Do not mention in the lead Gallup polling that states Trump's the only president to never reach 50% approval rating. (RfC January 2022)
58. Use inline citations in the lead for the more contentious and controversial statements. Editors should further discuss which sentences would benefit from having inline citations. (RfC May 2022, discussion on what to cite May 2022)
59. Do not label or categorize Trump as a far-right politician. (RfC August 2022)
60. Insert the links described in the RfC January 2023.
61. When a thread is started with a general assertion that the article is biased for or against Trump (i.e., without a specific, policy-based suggestion for a change to the article), it is to be handled as follows:
- Reply briefly with a link to Talk:Donald Trump/Response to claims of bias, optionally using its shortcut, WP:TRUMPRCB.
- Close the thread using
{{archive top}}
and{{archive bottom}}
, referring to this consensus item. - Wait at least 24 hours per current consensus #13.
- Manually archive the thread.
This does not apply to posts that are clearly in bad faith, which are to be removed on sight. (May 2023)
62. The article's description of the five people who died during and subsequent to the January 6 Capitol attack should avoid a) mentioning the causes of death and b) an explicit mention of the Capitol Police Officer who died. (RfC July 2023)
63. Supersedes #18. The alma mater field of the infobox reads: "University of Pennsylvania (BS)". (September 2023)
64. Omit the {{Very long}}
tag. (January 2024)
65. Mention the Abraham Accords in the article; no consensus was achieved on specific wordings. (RfC February 2024)
66. Omit {{infobox criminal}}
. (RfC June 2024)
67. The "Health habits" section includes: "Trump says he has never drunk alcohol, smoked cigarettes, or used drugs. He sleeps about four or five hours a night." (February 2021)
Lead paragraphs
In my opinion, the format of the lede of the page at the time of this writing does not comply with MOS:LEAD which states, "As a general rule of thumb, a lead section should contain no more than four well-composed paragraphs and be carefully sourced as appropriate"; the page has six paragraphs. I tried to fix it , but User:Space4Time3Continuum2x reverted, with the explanation that my edit was "Not an improvement. The first few sentences should establish the subject’s notability. In Trump’s case there’s only one sentence doing that, needs to be separate from summary of education and career. His stand-alone, the two impeachments, need to stay in a separate paragraph." I will quote MOS:BEGIN, "The first paragraph should define or identify the topic with a neutral point of view, but without being too specific. It should establish the context in which the topic is being considered by supplying the set of circumstances or facts that surround it. If appropriate, it should give the location and time. It should also establish the boundaries of the topic".
Per Space4Time3Continuum2x's own opinion, "the first few sentences should establish the subject’s notability. In Trump’s case there’s only one sentence doing that". If there is only one sentence doing that, then even by their standard, we don't have it as a well-composed paragraph in the lede, in contradiction of what MOS:LEAD indicates that there should be. According to MOS:PARA, "single-sentence paragraphs should be minimized, since they can inhibit the flow of the text". Although in the page certainly the single-sentence paragraphs are minimized, there is still the issue that they can inhibit the flow of the text and, although it can denote emphasis, in writing generally paragraphs should consist of more than a single short sentence or be several lines long. I checked other president's pages (Lincoln, Roosevelt, Carter, Reagan, and Obama) at the time they were granted at least good article status, and none of them have more than four paragraphs in the lede, although Obama's has a short first paragraph.
My suggestion is to analyze whether it's the best practice to leave the first paragraph as a single-sentence or short paragraph and to copyedit and reform the lede in such a way as to at least comply with having four paragraphs per the standard of MOS:LEAD and don't break with the rest of presidential pages format of the lede.Thinker78 (talk) 18:16, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Most mobile readers... that is 70% of our viewership... will only scroll down one time...thus reading only one sentence because of the current layout with a one sentence paragraph and giant infobox data. Our mobile readers will simply move on to another website to obtain information and if they are American it will most likely be youtube, facebook or amazon that are full of junk info. Looking to retain readers fix the layout...its why we have an MoS. A one sentence paragraph is a journalistic style that is not really encyclopedic. Moxy- 21:18, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Thinker78, MOS:LEADLENGTH says that "As a general guideline—but not absolute rule—the lead should usually be no longer than four paragraphs" and also that "The appropriate length of the lead section depends on the total length of the article." Of the presidents you mentioned, Reagan, Clinton, Obama, Roosevelt also have more than four paragraphs, and in FDR’s case two of those paragraphs ought to be split up into two each. (Then again, four terms, New Deal, World War II compared to Trump’s meager resume.)
- Your edit summary said that you used Bill Clinton’s article as the model for merging the first and second paragraph. Clinton’s first paragraph does have four sentences but then, aside from two terms as president, he was also governor of Arkansas (two terms, non-consecutive) and husband of NY senator, secretary of state, and 2016 Democratic presidential nominee Hillary Clinton. (IMO attorney general of Arkansas is not leadworthy, by comparison). Carter: governor of Georgia, Nobel Peace Prize for post-presidential humanitarian work. Obama: U.S. senator, first African-American president. Reagan: governor of California, fairly well-known Hollywood actor. FDR: elected president four times, New Deal, World War II. I’ll just quote Lincoln's entire first paragraph:
Abraham Lincoln (/ˈlɪŋkən/ LINK-ən; February 12, 1809 – April 15, 1865) was an American lawyer and statesman who served as the 16th president of the United States from 1861 until his assassination in 1865. Lincoln led the nation through the American Civil War and succeeded in preserving the Union, abolishing slavery, bolstering the federal government, and modernizing the U.S. economy.
If we wanted to add something to Trump’s first paragraph, I would support adding the two impeachments, the incitement to insurrection, the false statements, the racist and misogynistic comments and actions, not the bachelor’s degree or working for his father.
- Moxy, do you have sources for your statements of what
Most mobile readers, 70 percent of our viewership
do? Viewership, as in Nielsen ratings? Quoting from the most recent source (2019) mentioned on the linked Wikimedia draft page:How good is this data?
It has some limitations:
Missing older browsers (Android browser,chrome < 39, Safari, iOS < 11.3.
Respects “Do Not Track”
Anomalous large amount of missing data on mobile
Doesn’t perfectly capture “reading.” Only measures that the page is visible.
(That doesn't capture "reading" at all, just "viewing".)
We collected sampled 0.1% of page views from 2017-11-20 through 2018-10-25
- Just looking at the Current consensus should give you an idea how many times the lead has been discussed, and you'll find numerous other discussions in the currently 145 archives. IMO, the current version of the lead does its job
serv as an introduction to the article and a summary of its most important contents
per MOS lead section. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 12:36, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Space4Time3Continuum2x, thanks for your reply. You stated, "MOS:LEADLENGTH says that "As a general guideline—but not absolute rule—the lead should usually be no longer than four paragraphs" and also that "The appropriate length of the lead section depends on the total length of the article."" I understand it is not an absolute rule but your quote about the length doesn't appear to be relevant because Donald Trump is a long article that warrants four paragraphs. Besides, it has more than four. You also state, "Of the presidents you mentioned, Reagan, Clinton, Obama, Roosevelt also have more than four paragraphs". True, but I stated in my original post, "at the time they were granted at least good article status". You apparently read those pages in the current form, not the version at the time they were granted good article status. I included the links to the versions I checked. Regarding this proposal and its applicability to Donald Trump, "and in FDR’s case two of those paragraphs ought to be split up into two each", according to MOS:LEAD there should be no more than four paragraphs and well-composed on top of that. Therefore instead of making more than four paragraphs in the lead and splitting them because they contain too different info, maybe four well-composed paragraphs should be included with info that warrants staying in the same paragraph. After all, the pages are long enough to get proper material for the lead. Finally, I know it's not an absolute rule or policy, but generally it is a good idea to follow the guidelines to keep some order and proper format in the pages. Thinker78 (talk) 16:21, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
- The lead is fine as-is, without your changes. Also, it is rather difficult to take any suggestions you have made seriously, given your "BUT BIAS!" attacks on other editors here and especially here. Zaathras (talk) 16:40, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
- Zaathras, you stated, "The lead is fine as-is, without your changes." That's not how consensus is discussed. You need to state what guidelines and policies you base your opinion that is fine as it is. Arbitrarily saying it is fine just because you disagree with my criticism in other threads is inappropriate. Per WP:TALKDONTREVERT, "the arguments "I just don't like it" and "I just like it" usually carry no weight whatsoever." Besides, in this thread I'm discussing layout, form, not content, so it is completely irrelevant the other discussions you point out.Thinker78 (talk) 14:48, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- There is no need for editors to continually defend the longstanding status quo every time an editor dissents. The onus is entirely on you to make simple clear compelling suggestions, one by one, and try to convince editors to accept them as new consensus. If you fail, the established text will remain and editors are under no obligation to respond to anything you offer here, most of all if it is assigning them unnecessary homework. SPECIFICO talk 15:12, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- Certainly, there is no need for editors to continually defend the longstanding status quo, because they can contribute Misplaced Pages when they want, they are not under contractual obligations nor are they employees. If you think the page needs to stay static without giving explanations, that's your opinion, but neither you nor any given group of editors WP:OWN this page. I understand there is a consensus about the content of the lead, but not the form. I checked the enumerated consensus items before my edits. I presented my opinion for analysis of other editors. I have to add that many pages have not been compliant with policies or guidelines for years until someone noticed and made the relevant edit to fix the situation. So a status quo doesn't necessarily mean a page should stay that way.Thinker78 (talk) 15:39, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- There is no need for editors to continually defend the longstanding status quo every time an editor dissents. The onus is entirely on you to make simple clear compelling suggestions, one by one, and try to convince editors to accept them as new consensus. If you fail, the established text will remain and editors are under no obligation to respond to anything you offer here, most of all if it is assigning them unnecessary homework. SPECIFICO talk 15:12, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Thinker78:, you are owed nothing. If I have a preference for the current paragraph layout, that preference is not reliant on an intricate explanation. As for
the other discussions
, I linked them to give examples of your bad-faith behavior on this talk page. Zaathras (talk) 20:46, 10 June 2022 (UTC)- Zaathras, it is not helpful to attack my integrity, specially throwing false accusations about my editing. The discussions I had that you pointed out were within my privileges as editor to discuss issues in the talk page. I like neutrality in articles and I simply expressed my opinion about problems this page may have and Misplaced Pages as a whole has. "An editor must not accuse another of misbehavior without evidence, especially when the accusations are repeated or severe. If accusations must be made, they should be raised, with evidence, on the user-talk page of the editor they concern or in the appropriate forums." Per WP:FOC, "Focus on article content during discussions, not on editor conduct; comment on content, not the contributor." The reason why I replied to what you stated is because you publicly accused me falsely of bad-faith behavior. Now, I request that if you have any accusations against me and if you want to continue said topic, bring it to my talk page and I would follow the proper process. In this thread focus on the discussion about paragraphs in the lead of the Donald Trump page. Thanks.Thinker78 (talk) 02:18, 11 June 2022 (UTC):
In the Donald Trump page as in any other page all it takes is for a large enough group of biased, like-minded editors to take ownership, quashing any edits that don't reflect their bias.
Your words, my friend, and a shining example of a bad-faith personal attack against other editors. Comments like that can lead to you being removed from this topic area, so, tread carefully, and cease the slurs. Now. Zaathras (talk) 03:32, 11 June 2022 (UTC)- "Like-minded editors taking ownership and quashing edits not reflecting their bias" — that's hardly WP:AGF, even if you don't mention anyone by name. On this page, everything, including the formatting and the punctuation, has been discussed extensively. The page has a number of editors who have been editing this and related articles for years and act as WP:SHEPHERDs, not WP:OWNERs. Reliably sourced improvements are always welcome, insistence on someone's POV that's not based on new RS not so much. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 12:40, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
- Zaathras, it is not helpful to attack my integrity, specially throwing false accusations about my editing. The discussions I had that you pointed out were within my privileges as editor to discuss issues in the talk page. I like neutrality in articles and I simply expressed my opinion about problems this page may have and Misplaced Pages as a whole has. "An editor must not accuse another of misbehavior without evidence, especially when the accusations are repeated or severe. If accusations must be made, they should be raised, with evidence, on the user-talk page of the editor they concern or in the appropriate forums." Per WP:FOC, "Focus on article content during discussions, not on editor conduct; comment on content, not the contributor." The reason why I replied to what you stated is because you publicly accused me falsely of bad-faith behavior. Now, I request that if you have any accusations against me and if you want to continue said topic, bring it to my talk page and I would follow the proper process. In this thread focus on the discussion about paragraphs in the lead of the Donald Trump page. Thanks.Thinker78 (talk) 02:18, 11 June 2022 (UTC):
- Zaathras, you stated, "The lead is fine as-is, without your changes." That's not how consensus is discussed. You need to state what guidelines and policies you base your opinion that is fine as it is. Arbitrarily saying it is fine just because you disagree with my criticism in other threads is inappropriate. Per WP:TALKDONTREVERT, "the arguments "I just don't like it" and "I just like it" usually carry no weight whatsoever." Besides, in this thread I'm discussing layout, form, not content, so it is completely irrelevant the other discussions you point out.Thinker78 (talk) 14:48, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- The lead is fine as-is, without your changes. Also, it is rather difficult to take any suggestions you have made seriously, given your "BUT BIAS!" attacks on other editors here and especially here. Zaathras (talk) 16:40, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
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Personally, I'm sick of the bickering and wish all editors here would re-read WP:Focus on content.........NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 13:50, 11 June 2022 (UTC) :Thanks for tagging my talk page, and I did not bicker. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:08, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
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- Should do what is best to retain readers. Making our readers scroll 4 times before there is any real info is a deterrent to read on . More data Moxy- 15:34, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- Your cited data is 5 years old. also, what % of visitors are android users? ValarianB (talk) 15:39, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- 70 percent use non desktop versions ...this can be seen on any page by the "Pageviews Analysis" Misplaced Pages:Pageview statistics ..Moxy- 19:57, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- I don't get what page 14 of a 2014 quarterly mobile review has to do with the lead or this entire article. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 16:12, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- OK in mobile view (all explained in the link) after the first paragraph we see the info box then the second paragraph...so in this case we see one sentance then a huge i mean huge infobox. So most will only scroll one time......meaning they will never read more than the one sentence lead paragraph. Moxy- 19:51, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- As a desktop fullscreen PC guy...... THANK YOU for this important education. When my brain is working better, if no one else has already dealt with this, I'll start thinking about it. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 21:03, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- Unless there is a project-wide movement to shape editing to accommodate non-PC users, IMO all of this largely irrelevant. It does no good to customize this one page to fit a presumptive attentiveness issue of Android users. I'd point out that, per Help:Mobile access, the Misplaced Pages does not seem too eager to address mobile users. All they get is a redirect to a slightly browser-friendlier m.wikipedia.org, the actual wikipedia apps are all but abandoned. Zaathras (talk) 21:24, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- I know little about Adaptive web design but one thing I'm certain about is folks are foolishly myopic if they ignore it. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 21:31, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- It seems that you are missing the point. I am not against making Misplaced Pages articles more accessible on modern non-desktop computer interfaces. But a single discussion at Talk:Donald Trump on tweaking the lede of Donald Trump is a sub-optimal way to tackle what is a broad and project-wide concern. Zaathras (talk) 21:41, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- Our developers do think of this its why the infobox appears after the first paragraph despite it being coded before the paragraph. Its to allow us to hook our readers if you will. A one sentence paragraph is wasting the point of why we have the box after the first paragraph. On a side note a one sentence paragraph is something used in journalistic circles not encyclopedic content. Thus its assumed by our developers a paragraph will contain more than one sentence. Moxy- 02:40, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
- It seems that you are missing the point. I am not against making Misplaced Pages articles more accessible on modern non-desktop computer interfaces. But a single discussion at Talk:Donald Trump on tweaking the lede of Donald Trump is a sub-optimal way to tackle what is a broad and project-wide concern. Zaathras (talk) 21:41, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- I know little about Adaptive web design but one thing I'm certain about is folks are foolishly myopic if they ignore it. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 21:31, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- Unless there is a project-wide movement to shape editing to accommodate non-PC users, IMO all of this largely irrelevant. It does no good to customize this one page to fit a presumptive attentiveness issue of Android users. I'd point out that, per Help:Mobile access, the Misplaced Pages does not seem too eager to address mobile users. All they get is a redirect to a slightly browser-friendlier m.wikipedia.org, the actual wikipedia apps are all but abandoned. Zaathras (talk) 21:24, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- As a desktop fullscreen PC guy...... THANK YOU for this important education. When my brain is working better, if no one else has already dealt with this, I'll start thinking about it. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 21:03, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- OK in mobile view (all explained in the link) after the first paragraph we see the info box then the second paragraph...so in this case we see one sentance then a huge i mean huge infobox. So most will only scroll one time......meaning they will never read more than the one sentence lead paragraph. Moxy- 19:51, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- Your cited data is 5 years old. also, what % of visitors are android users? ValarianB (talk) 15:39, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- Should do what is best to retain readers. Making our readers scroll 4 times before there is any real info is a deterrent to read on . More data Moxy- 15:34, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
Where did you get the information on WP developers' assumptions? infobox appears after the first paragraph despite it being coded before the paragraph
- as a non-coder I’m asking myself why/how it appears after the first paragraph if that isn't specified in the code (if/then or whatever)? Our first sentence does exactly what MOS Biographies' first sentence says it should do, i.e., "neutrally describe the person, provide context, establish notability and explain why the person is notable". (Does Misplaced Pages even need to "hook readers", at 5 billion visitors per month?) I can think of a few things I would add to the first paragraph but I'm pretty sure that there'd be very emphatic objections. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 12:03, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
- After the problem of FA reviews moving the box down one paragraph we asked the developers to do this automatically. The article should try and look academic not journalistic in appearance read me. Best to look credible off the bat. Moxy- 20:20, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
References
- Kiefer.Wolfowitz and Ironholds arbitration (closed Aug 2013)
Opinion pieces are not reliable for straightforward facts
Per WP:RSOPINION, "Some sources may be considered reliable for statements as to their author's opinion, but not for statements asserted as fact. ... A prime example of this is opinion pieces in mainstream newspapers. When using them, it is best to clearly attribute the opinions in the text to the author and make it clear to the readers that they are reading an opinion." I edited this article to bring it in line with this guideline (removing two citations to opinion pieces and using inline attribution for another), but was reverted by User:SPECIFICO, who also reintroduced a misquotation. I would appreciate input from others about this issue. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 20:37, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
- Feel free to correct the misquote. You're also free to find other sources you think are more solid for the facts. SPECIFICO talk 21:11, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
- Done. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 20:31, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- Well done. SPECIFICO talk 21:22, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- Done. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 20:31, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
Condense foreign policy line in intro
The lead is very long, and "America First" only appears once in the body of the article (see MOS:LEADREL). Since we describe his foreign policy in detail already, and that's all the term refers to, I think we should merge that line with the following sentence:
In foreign policy, Trump withdrew the U.S. from the proposed Trans-Pacific Partnership trade agreement, the Paris Agreement on climate change, the Iran nuclear deal, and initiated a trade war with China.
─ ReconditeRodent « talk · contribs » 11:30, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- Agreed and done. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:13, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- I agree. Also that kind of jargon is too likely to be misinterpreted or two prone to multiple diverse meanings for it to be informative in an encyclopedia. Sources I've seen just say that Trump liked the sound of "america first" which, like MAGA, is vague and likely to reinforce many voters' preconceived views. SPECIFICO talk 14:18, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- Seems ok. Iamreallygoodatcheckers (talk) 15:13, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
Political legacies
WP:NOTFORUM. @SandRand97: actually, we won't "be here all day", because the WP:BURDEN is entirely on you to show that your proposed content comports with our Policies and Guidelines regarding Verification, Neutral Point of View, and article Lead sections. If you have well-reasoned policy-based arguments and sources, please present them here. Nobody is obligated to respond to you. SPECIFICO talk 14:11, 25 June 2022 (UTC) |
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How is this not neutral? As has been suggested: “Trump’s most notable political legacies are his two impeachments, his alleged provocation of the January 6th attack and being singlehandedly procedurally responsible for giving abortion law-making in the U.S. back to state legislatures. The latter due to all three of his conservative Supreme Court judge appointees voting to overturn Roe v. Wade in June 2022, which was unconstitutionally imposed at the federal level in January 1973.“ It includes two left-wing perspectives and two right-wing perspectives, and is factually accurate in its words content SandRand97 (talk) 09:24, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
I think there is an argument that the three Trump-appointed justices’ opting to overturn Roe vs Wade deserves to belong in the lede (even if it occurred after his presidency, it is difficult to deny, if at all, that the Supreme Court verdict occurred because of Trump and his judicial appointments). JLo-Watson (talk) 10:15, 25 June 2022 (UTC) @SandRand97: you violated the 24-hour BRD cycle in effect on this page - see WARNING: ACTIVE ARBITRATION REMEDIES above. You added an unsourced op-ed to the lead. The lead summarizes the body, and whatever you add to the body needs to be based on reliable secondary sources. I doubt very much that reliable secondary sources exist for any of your claims, from the alleged legacies to your opinion that the SC justices overturned the
Abortion rights are not in the federal Constitution. It’s a fact that the original imposition of Roe v. Wade was unconstitutional, not an opinion. I’m not going to argue about it because there’s nothing to argue about. You can’t argue with facts. Have a good day. SandRand97 (talk) 13:27, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
SPECIFICO then just take that part out. It’s not complicated. SandRand97 (talk) 13:28, 25 June 2022 (UTC) Valjean: If amendments are consistent with the original constitution, then no. Again I don’t want to get into an argument about this because we’ll be here all day and I’m sure we all have better things to do. SandRand97 (talk) 13:35, 25 June 2022 (UTC) |
Unite The Right comments
@Space4Time3Continuum2x: I changed that paragraph based on the more balanced perspective from the Unite the Right rally page itself, which calls it a white supremacist rally rather than a far-right rally and notes defenses of Trumps remarks. Per WP:RSP, RCP has no consensus on reliability, but is still to avoid. However, the USA Today source I added summarizes the defence of the remarks as "However, some people say they believe Trump also condemned white supremacists and neo-Nazis as part of his "very fine people" statement." This should be included in the paragraph. In addition, the addition I made to the article saying "Trump also condemned both neo-Nazis and white nationalists in response to the rally." is backed up by Politico, which is reliable. I suggest changing the paragraph to the following: "Trump's comments on the 2017 white supremacist rally in Charlottesville, Virginia, condemning "this egregious display of hatred, bigotry and violence on many sides" and stating that there were "very fine people on both sides", were criticized by some as implying a moral equivalence between the white supremacist demonstrators and the counter-protesters. Others interpreted his "fine people" remark as explicitly denouncing white supremacists and neo-Nazis. Trump also condemned both neo-Nazis and white nationalists in response to the rally." As for the quote, it should be expanded because not mentioning what he said after the main comment would be quoting out of context when the CNN source provided shows the full quote. The last thing we want to engage in is quotemining. X-Editor (talk) 02:07, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- The point of having sub-articles on related topics is to keep the information there, and not bloat this giant article any more than it already is. Also Trump's "both sidesing" the affair does not belong here. Zaathras (talk) 02:28, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Zaathras: I agree that sub-articles exist for a reason, but my proposed change would only add slightly more content and is far more neutral. The current paragraph leaves out crucial context, such as not mentioning that Trump condemned white nationalists and neo-Nazis. You also didn't address my comment regarding the quotemine of Trump. X-Editor (talk) 02:55, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- I think X-Editor makes a good point. This article is to big but I think this is important enough to include both for the more balanced perspective. I also agree that this way is far more neutral. MaximusEditor (talk) 05:36, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Zaathras: I agree that sub-articles exist for a reason, but my proposed change would only add slightly more content and is far more neutral. The current paragraph leaves out crucial context, such as not mentioning that Trump condemned white nationalists and neo-Nazis. You also didn't address my comment regarding the quotemine of Trump. X-Editor (talk) 02:55, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- We’re not bound by the content of other WP articles. BTW, Unite the Right Rally goes on to say that "far-right groups participated," and then lists them by name.
- You added POV in the name of balance. You used a partisan commentator (Cortes—more on him below) as a source for part of the first sentence you added (WP:RS), and interpreted a primary source (a transcript of Trump’s comments) for the second sentence (WP:OR—Do not analyze, evaluate, interpret, or synthesize material found in a primary source yourself). Our current text says (I bolded the text changed or added in your version):
That’s neutral, short, and to the point. Your version:Trump's comments on the 2017 far-right rally in Charlottesville, Virginia, condemning "this egregious display of hatred, bigotry and violence on many sides" and stating that there were "very fine people on both sides", were widely criticized as implying a moral equivalence between the white supremacist demonstrators and the counter-protesters.
Trump's comments on the 2017 white supremacist rally in Charlottesville, Virginia, condemning "this egregious display of hatred, bigotry and violence on many sides" and stating that there were "very fine people on both sides", were criticized by some as implying a moral equivalence between the white supremacist demonstrators and the counter-protesters. Others characterized the interpretation of the latter comment as a hoax, because Trump's "fine people" statement explicitly denounced white nationalists. Trump also condemned both neo-Nazis and white nationalists in response to the rally.
- "Others", per your only source, is Wall Street trader, Trump campaign operative, and Fox commentator Steve Cortes commenting on RealClear Politics—are you seriously arguing that he is a reliable source? Well, here’s a comment published on The Bulwark (website), not really a left-leaning outlet, on Steve Cortes’s "Charlottesville hoax" conspiracy theory. He tried to repurpose the name of the conspiracy theory "Charottesville Hoax" (a claim that Heather Heyer’s murder was a hoax) to an alleged hoax perpetrated by media outlets falsely quoting/reporting on Trump’s comments. No, the media didn’t do either, and both Trump’s statements and the media reports have been fact checked over and over again.
because Trump's "fine people" statement explicitly denounced white nationalists.
USA Today says that's partly false "because he did not say directly, 'There were very fine people on both sides, & I'm not talking about the Neo-nazis and white supremacists because they should be condemned totally.' The two statements were separate, the second part coming later, after further questioning from reporters." In other words, journalists eventually managed to drag a denouncement out of Trump but that didn't prevent him from reverting to "fine people on both sides". Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 12:26, 29 June 2022 (UTC)- @Space4Time3Continuum2x: You're actually right about the USA Today article not saying it is an interpretation. As for the FactCheck.org link, it does say that some people disagree with the interpretation, but links to an article titled "Pence joins in the effort to rewrite Trump's Charlottesville history" as evidence, so clearly whitewashing. However, Trump did still later condemn white supremacists and Neo-nazis in a later statement. So i would propose adding the sentence "However, Trump later stated that "I'm not talking about the neo-Nazis and the white nationalists, because they should be condemned totally–but you had many people in that group other than neo-Nazis and white nationalists"." after the initial paragraph that is already there for context and balance. You're also right about the RCP article represents a clear COI and it's disappointing that his interpretation was displayed uncritically in the UTR rally article for quite some time. X-Editor (talk) 18:46, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Space4Time3Continuum2x: However, you haven't addressed my concerns of this article quotemining Trump by not mentioning that he said "And some, I assume, are good people." after he said "They’re bringing drugs. They’re bringing crime. They’re rapists." You might say that was to give plausible deniability, but this interpretation doesn't matter if it hasn't been documented in reliable sources. X-Editor (talk) 18:54, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- It has been documented as such, as have many of his clarifications, jokes, and slips of the tongue. SPECIFICO talk 19:39, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- This article does not document the other quote where he condemns them, which is why I want to add the quote to the paragraph in the article about his response to the rally. X-Editor (talk) 20:43, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- I briefly wondered whether "quotemining" was referring to the Mexican rapists sentence but since that had nothing with the Unite the Right rally I didn't address it. I'm not strongly opposed to adding the sentence to the quote, I just don't see what it would add. The three bald statements (all Mexicans, no assuming) followed by a weak, "well, maybe some are not" — he's not walking anything back. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 19:56, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- It would add context, because if people only see the first part of the quote, they might interpret that as him saying that all of them are doing that, when the second part shows that is not the case. I actually agree with SPECIFICO below that it might be better to write a summary of how mainstream reporting interprets his provocations instead of just showing specific comments from him, but for now, the context should be added. X-Editor (talk) 20:43, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- It has been documented as such, as have many of his clarifications, jokes, and slips of the tongue. SPECIFICO talk 19:39, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- I agree with Space4Time on our current language. For the last line: While there's certainly room for expansion like adding his later comments in ideal circumstances, we have to be careful on this enormous page. GordonGlottal (talk) 19:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- I completely disagree. Adding that quote wouldn't be much more content and would add context and neutrality. X-Editor (talk) 20:48, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
@X-Editor: a better approach might be to write a few sentences on the overwhelming mainstream reporting and analysis of Trump's use of various weak prevarications and deflections to chum up his base and right-wing media supporters. Then we would be giving an encyclopedic overview without having to go into the details of what he said or to omit all or part of what he said each and every time. SPECIFICO talk 20:00, 29 June 2022 (UTC) @X-Editor:20:09, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- That actually sounds a lot better, but for now, the context should be added per my explanation above. X-Editor (talk) 20:43, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
@SPECIFICO:@GordonGlottal:@Space4Time3Continuum2x:@Zaathras:@MaximusEditor: Just so everyone is clear, my proposed change is now adding this sentence to the UTR rally paragraph: "However, Trump later stated that "I'm not talking about the neo-Nazis and the white nationalists, because they should be condemned totally–but you had many people in that group other than neo-Nazis and white nationalists"." and to add Trump saying "And some, I assume, are good people." next to the other part of the quote that says "They're bringing drugs. They're bringing crime. They're rapists." to the article. X-Editor (talk) 20:57, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- This really adds nothing of value to the article. The former president has offered these mealy-mouthed half-retraction half-excusemaking at several junctures, from Charlottesville to J6. Zaathras (talk) 21:04, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Context is nothing of value? X-Editor (talk) 21:30, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Zaathras has put it in a nutshell. Dog bites man. Trump denies XYZ -- not only do mainstream sources take this deflection as nonsense, they don't even bother mentioning it in subsequent discussions of his statement. Yes, there are the contemporaneous accounts of all kinds of presidential pronouncements, but the media and tertiary sources did not take that seriously. Fog is not context that clarifies. SPECIFICO talk 22:25, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Fair enough and thanks for providing a better explanation. The paragraph is meant to summarize the most notable aspects of his response anyways and there is more context in the article about the UTR itself. X-Editor (talk) 22:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Zaathras has put it in a nutshell. Dog bites man. Trump denies XYZ -- not only do mainstream sources take this deflection as nonsense, they don't even bother mentioning it in subsequent discussions of his statement. Yes, there are the contemporaneous accounts of all kinds of presidential pronouncements, but the media and tertiary sources did not take that seriously. Fog is not context that clarifies. SPECIFICO talk 22:25, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Context is nothing of value? X-Editor (talk) 21:30, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- The second one doesn't bother me, but nor do I really think it's necessary. For the first: fundamentally, the point of this section is to summarize the racial views of Donald Trump. At the top we say that he denies being a racist etc. Below we give various examples of incidents that have been taken to be a better reflection of his genuine views. The fact that he later reverted to his more PC, controlled statements or muddied the waters isn't really that relevant. The reader knows that he denies it and that claims otherwise are an attempt to read between the lines of his public persona. Anyone interested in more can look at the full page. GordonGlottal (talk) 21:51, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
@SPECIFICO: You mentioned the idea of writing "a few sentences on the overwhelming mainstream reporting and analysis of Trump's use of various weak prevarications and deflections to chum up his base and right-wing media supporters ... without having to go into the details of what he said or to omit all or part of what he said each and every time." Do you have any suggestions on what that might look like and what sources we could use? That sounds much more encyclopedic than just cherrypicking several things he has said. X-Editor (talk) 22:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
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- Johnson, Jenna; Wagner, John (August 12, 2017). "Trump condemns Charlottesville violence but doesn't single out white nationalists". The Washington Post. Retrieved October 22, 2021.
- Kessler, Glenn (May 8, 2020). "The 'very fine people' at Charlottesville: Who were they?". The Washington Post. Retrieved October 23, 2021.
- Holan, Angie Dobric (April 26, 2019). "In Context: Donald Trump's 'very fine people on both sides' remarks (transcript)". PolitiFact. Retrieved October 22, 2021.
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- Politico Staff (August 15, 2017). "Full text: Trump's comments on white supremacists, 'alt-left' in Charlottesville". Politico.
I'm not talking about the neo-Nazis and the white nationalists, because they should be condemned totally – but you had many people in that group other than neo-Nazis and white nationalists
- Cortes, Steve (March 21, 2019). "Trump Didn't Call Neo-Nazis 'Fine People.' Here's Proof". RealClearPolitics. Retrieved 2021-02-15.
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- Farley, Robert (February 11, 2020). "Trump has condemned white supremacists". FactCheck.org. Retrieved 2020-10-22.
- {{cite news |author=Politico Staff |date=August 15, 2017 |title=Full text: Trump's comments on white supremacists, 'alt-left' in Charlottesville |work=Politico |url=https://www.politico.com/story/2017/08/15/full-text-trump-comments-white-supremacists-alt-left-transcript-241662 |quote="I'm not talking about the neo-Nazis and the white nationalists, because they should be condemned totally – but you had many people in that group other than neo-Nazis and white nationalists"
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Article by Politico and best and worst Presidents
Talk:Donald_Trump#Current_consensus, item 54, says it should be included. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:17, 29 June 2022 (UTC)The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Not sure this should be included as a fact. It may be a fact that they conducted a survey, but it is way to subject to political bias. 152.86.89.11 (talk) 16:16, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Bringing this BLP to NPoV is a frustrating process, IMHO. GoodDay (talk) 16:33, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- Except we do not include it as a fact (unless the OP is saying that the poll did not come to that conclusion). 16:42, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
Too Biased Against Trump
Repetitive, drive-by IPs asking nothing new. Zaathras (talk) 21:01, 29 June 2022 (UTC)The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
I hate Trump as much as the next guy, but even I can see the bias against him in this article. If you are going to take the time to write an article about him, please do it without bias. 172.74.203.83 (talk) 20:52, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
- What are some suggestions you have that would make the article less biased? The content in this page is often debated, so we're open to suggestions. X-Editor (talk) 21:00, 29 June 2022 (UTC)
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