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Ariana Grande is currently a Music good article nominee. Nominated by Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) at 09:22, 14 July 2023 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page. Short description: American singer and actress (born 1993)

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	Ariana Grande was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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"Beliefs" section – misquoted source

The Beliefs section states: She has said that she and Frankie have followed the teachings of Kabbalah, a branch of Jewish mysticism, since she was 12, quoting MTV News (https://web.archive.org/web/20220209002618/http://www.mtv.com/news/1972089/ariana-grande-questions-religion/). The article cited only says she's checked out a Kabbalah center in Florida and really had a connection with it, which is far from the same thing. 2A02:A319:C146:7800:41:D350:B8A2:CE8C (talk) 22:33, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

You are correct. I've removed that statement and rewritten other parts of the paragraph to reflect what the sources say. Aoi (青い) (talk) 22:56, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ariana Grande/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 14:45, 25 July 2023 (UTC)

This is the second GA nom, following an auto fail from 8 years ago. The article seems to be more stable now, and I am ready to help make this a GA article. I am going on holiday from 27 July to 3 August so I may not be able to respond swiftly. Cherrell410 15:01, 25 July 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

Leaving my suggestions for improvement below:

• Early life: final sentance of first paragrahph: this needs to be clarified on when it was last updated.
• 2008–2012: citation needed tag needs to be dealt with
• 2008-2012: much of the last paragraph occurs in the 2013, and should be moved into the section below
• 2013-2015: first sentance of second paragraph needs a citation
• 2013-2015: another citation needed tag
• 2013-2015: the beginning of the final paragraph should talk more about this tour, as it was pretty notable as her first world tour
• 2015-2017: first para: her and meghan trainor: replace the pronoun her with something else
• 2015-2017: to promote the related album --> to promote the album
• 2015-2017: funk wav bounces vol 1 should be italicized
• The following ref numbers aren't reliable and need to be replaced or removed (not in any order): 282, 289, 74 (i'm seeing gossip), 77 (same), 342, 429, 432, 441
• Ref 464 is missing parameters

I dealt with most of the problems alr Brachy08 _(Talk) 00:57, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

• Drive-by comment: the article cites a few unreliable sources per WP:RSP, like IBTimes and Inquisitr. Sources like PopSugar are also questionable, especially for a BLP. Pamzeis (talk) 11:40, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
• Cherrell410 are you gonna finish the review or have you just abandoned it in its entirely? — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 23:15, 29 September 2023 (UTC)

  Brachy0008 I should advise you to change the page number from 2 to 3, since the reviewer has been inactive since 24 September, as he only made one edit after making one edit since 6 September. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 06:23, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 August 2023

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Change personal life status Stuart McKing (talk) 14:03, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. WikiVirusC 14:09, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 5 August 2023

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Ariana Grande and her husband, Dalton Gomez, are separated, TODAY.com can confirm. 2600:1011:B059:E15A:0:44:5EEE:A901 (talk) 06:14, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate.

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Xan747 ✈️ 🧑‍✈️ 13:45, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

It has been confirmed that Ariana is dating Ethan

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In 2023, Grande announced a seperation and a divorce from her husband and reportedly began dating actor and singer Ethan Slater. Wandavisionvixen101 (talk) 16:44, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

Not adding it in, per WP:GOSSIP Brachy08 _(Talk) 01:56, 6 August 2023 (UTC)

References

1. Clack, Erin (July 27, 2023). "Ariana Grande and Ethan Slater Are 'Full-On Dating' After Being 'Sweet' with Each Other on Set: Source (Exclusive)". People. Retrieved 2023-07-28.

Lead changes

@Mirrored7: your comment in the edit summary here was not appropriate. Comment on the content, not on the contributor. If you have a problem, take it to ANI or another forum.

Mirrored7 and Ronherry, it's probably best to discuss substantive changes to the lead since there is an ongoing GAN above. While I would not have made all of the changes that Ronherry did, I do agree that the lead is a bit long and all those specific numbers would be better presented in the article body (and does not necessarily merit repeating in the lead). MOS:LEADLENGTH says that most featured articles have a lead that's about 300 words long. The current lead of this article is almost 700 words long. Some additional conciseness and brevity may be desirable. Aoi (青い) (talk) 22:33, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

As a person who rarely edits this page, I think the lead section looks annoyingly bloated. It really needs to be trimmed. This is an encyclopedia, not a fan page. Bluesatellite (talk) 06:23, 10 September 2023 (UTC)

I feel that this statement on the fourth paragraph, "Grande is one of the world's best-selling music artists,.." is opinion based and trivial. I would like to help trim down on the lead but don't want to do the wrong thing. Cwater1 (talk) 14:40, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

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I am the best ariana grande!DO NOT DECLINE THIS EDIT!!!!!!! Miracle Rules (talk) 21:19, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

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