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| * Why is "Macaroni Hamin" capitalised? | * Why is "Macaroni Hamin" capitalised? | ||
| * {{tq|] (also known as ])}} - are these two stews the same or different? They link to 2 different Misplaced Pages articles. Maybe they should be merged? | * {{tq|] (also known as ])}} - are these two stews the same or different? They link to 2 different Misplaced Pages articles. Maybe they should be merged? If they're the same, what's with the 2 links? Something needs fixing here. | ||
| * {{tq|including ... and more}} - one or the other, but not both! | * {{tq|including ... and more}} - one or the other, but not both! | ||
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Nominator: PeleYoetz (talk · contribs) 11:34, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 13:11, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
Comments
is known for several iconic dishes
- maybe reword, something like "has several distinctive dishes", as "iconic" seems to apply to almost everything nowadays.
- Consider linking to Mediterranean cuisine, which may do better than
typical of the Mediterranean climate
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bustling markets
- maybe drop the "bustling", true of most street markets really.
- Why is "Macaroni Hamin" capitalised?
hamin (also known as cholent)
- are these two stews the same or different? They link to 2 different Misplaced Pages articles. Maybe they should be merged? If they're the same, what's with the 2 links? Something needs fixing here.
including ... and more
- one or the other, but not both!
Images
- All the images are on Commons and are plausibly licensed.
- Article has 9 images in the text, followed by a "Gallery" section with 11 more images. This is perhaps rather a large number, but more troubling is the unsorted nature of "Gallery": the obvious question is "what's it for?", given that the text is already cited. Better would be to include small galleries in "Main dishes" and in "Desserts" and to get rid of "Gallery"; indeed, you could have one with the street images in "History" – very likely, many of the existing Gallery images could be reused in those places.
Sources
- Article is fully cited.
- The 2 refs in the lead section should be moved from there.
- Sources in Hebrew should be marked with |language=he-IL, and the titles of those sources should be translated in a |trans-title= parameter.
- The "rp" notation with a page number after a ref is used only once; it would be desirable to put this page number into the citation. I note that Ottolenghi is cited twice, in the same paragraph; the first usage has no page number, so ideal would be to put two page numbers into the citation, i.e. |pages=xyz, 174.