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An entry from Katsuhiko Nakajima appeared on Misplaced Pages's Main Page in the Did you know? column on 19 March, 2007.

Katsuhiko Nakajima was nominated as a good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (April 25, 2007). There are suggestions below for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

GA failed

This article needs some more work to get up to GA quality. It is well-sourced, but the prose needs work and some other issues, as follows:

• Please get rid of that placeholder image, it is quite unsightly.
• There are far too many red links in the article. Consider choosing 2 or 3 that are more likely to become articles soon and remove the rest for now. Or, create stubs for some of them.

 Done by Suriel1981 Bmg916_Sign 15:47, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

• The opening sentence is worded in such a way that it sounds like Kensuke Sasaki owns Katsuhiko Nakajima, although I'm sure you mean that Sasaki owns the office. Please reword.
• "At just 19 years old, and making his pro debut at 15..." is an awkward phrase, please rewrite.
• Lots of stylistic but grammatically incorrect comma usage in the prose. Please obtain a copyedit for comma usage.
• The "Career" heading is too long and includes the entire body of prose. Break up into subheadings.
• Remove POV commentary about his age like "just 19 years old" and "the young age of 14".
• The dates mentioned all need to include years so the statements are durable over time.

Thanks! --Mus Musculus (talk) 18:37, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

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