Misplaced Pages

Revision as of 22:13, 5 September 2007

Biography Unassessed

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Misplaced Pages's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography ??? This article has not yet received a rating on Misplaced Pages's content assessment scale.

United States: Texas Unassessed

This article is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the United States of America on Misplaced Pages. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions. Template Usage Articles Requested! Become a Member Project Talk Alerts United StatesWikipedia:WikiProject United StatesTemplate:WikiProject United StatesUnited States ??? This article has not yet received a rating on Misplaced Pages's content assessment scale. ??? This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale. This article is supported by WikiProject Texas.

Mark Lane and WSI

The source you cite seems to be a little confused. I'm talking about the source that claims Herbert testified at the WSI. (He didn't. He testified at the CCI vets inquiry.) I'm talking about the source that calls the CCI the Concerned Citizens Inquiry. (A nonexistent group.) The source that claims Fonda and Lane filmed the event. (They didn't, and in fact Fonda didn't see the film until a year later.)

It was veterans, according to the Nicosia source, objecting to any more interference by Lane or Fonda in the production of WSI. Try reading it, please. They still helped with fundraising events, Fonda primarily, but they were no longer on the steering committee or involved with the production. Xenophrenic 18:55, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

Either you or Nicosia has the narrative wrong here:

The origins of the WSI lay on the collaboration between VVAW and CCI. CCI wanted Lane out of the project because they thought he was a tool, Fonda said no, and VVAW sided with her. CCI and VVAW split, and WSI became the sole responsibility of the VVAW.

Todd Ensign

During the summer of 1970 we were approached by Al Hubbard who had become a full-time organizer with Vietnam Veterans Against the War. Al proposed that CCI join forces with Jane Fonda, Mark Lane, Rev. Dick Fernandez of CALC, and Donald Duncan (the Green Beret who had testified at the Russell Tribunal in Denmark).

In retrospect, we entered into a close collaboration with Fonda, Lane and the others without any real discussion of roles and responsibilities. Since we all agreed that our goal was a national hearing lasting several days, we assumed that other problems would take care of themselves.

At any rate, less than three months into planning for the Winter Soldier Investigation, most of the Vietnam veteran coordinators and Jeremy Rifkin had become adamant that WSI disassociate itself from Mark Lane. He had published a book, Conversations with Americans, which was denounced by a Vietnam expert in the Sunday Times Book Review as a shoddy piece of research.

Al Hubbard, the VVAW's representative on Winter Soldier, had originally been one of the veterans most critical of Lane. However, once he learned that Fonda wasn't willing to jettison her pal Mark, he promptly reversed himself. Al was to have some additional credibility problems later on when it was disclosed that, despite his war stories, he'd never served in Vietnam.

So, a split occurred and the work of organizing national hearings proceeded along two parallel tracks. We at CCI set our sights on a December event in Washington, DC, while the WSI's new organizers continued with the original plan to hold its hearings in Detroit. Fonda had insisted on this obscure venue because she saw it, mechanistically in my opinion, as a way to reach out to blue-collar America.

Hunt Pg 63

But the worst setback to the WSI occurred in early November when a bitter schism occurred between VVAW and CCI.

In early November, Ensign and Rifkin proposed that the WSI steering committee expel Mark Lane, but Jane Fonda was fiercely loyal to him. For months the two had become inseparable, traveling to college campuses and parties, raiding funds, rallying support. He had defended her when she was arrested in Cleveland on trumped-up drug charges. Now a group of impetuous antiwar organizers were demanding that she jettison her close friend. “Fonda, Lane, and the VVAW came as a package,”, wrote James Simon Kunen. When Fonda “threatened to withdraw her cash” Ensign recounted. The VVAW stuck with them and we split”.

Hunt Pg 67:

Lane’s involvement with the planning of the WSI had been extensive. His legal and Financial assistance had proven invaluable. Few VVAWers doubted this sincerity or devotion to the effort. Yet they feared that associating with Lane could tarnish months of difficult work. “Then the question became, how do we protect our integrity? Recalled Joe Urgo, “how do we separate ourselves from this guy”

Organizers hoped Lane would maintain a low profile. Their wishes were fulfilled”

In short, Lane was involved, until the end, of the Detroit Winter Soldier Investigation. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 19:43, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

Please check the dates and events you outline above. The VVAW and CCI split in early November. Lane and Fonda backed the VVAW (the CCI guys, Uhl, Ensign and Rifkin would have nothing to do with them). Then 2 months later, out comes Sheehan's book review that demolishes Lane's reputation and credibility. Lane was never put back on the new steering committee, although he did continue to help with fundraising. See this.

Nicosia, 83-84

From the point when Fonda and Lane began drawing boundry lines over the various veterans' groups--one hesitates to say, like victors dividing the spoils of war, but the metaphor is irresistible--the veterans saw that they had no one to depend upon for their salvation but themselves, a situation they had known all too well the first time around, in Vietnam itself. This recognition, which could have been demoralizing, galvanized the veterans to take the reins into their own hands. A group of veterans who had testified for CCI in Washington, D.C.--including Mike McCusker of Oregon, and Ken Campbell, John Beitzel, and Nathan Hale from Philadelphia--went to Al Hubbard and put Al's leadership on the line. They told him that they would not stand for any more interference from the likes of Lane and Fonda, and that they intended to make the Winter Soldier Investigation a Vietnam veterans' production from start to finish.

In the end, Winter Soldier would be just that.

In short, Lane was an initial organizer, steering committee member, coughed up money for the CCIs various events and raised funds for the CCI-VVAW joint venture. Then he irritated everyone, caused the CCI-VVAW rift, got slammed in book reviews, lost his steering committee position and any control he may have had in the WSI project. You appear to want to portray him as Grand Poobah of the event from start to finish, and we both know that isn't so. Xenophrenic 20:55, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

You see, this is why it is important to WP:CITE your sources so others can verify them. None of the sources you provided earlier said that Lane was not part of the new steering committee, and suggested, indirectly at least, that his status had not changed. And despite his removal from the steering committee, he was still very much involved in the WSI. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 15:50, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

Yes, it is important to cite sources so others can verify them. Just as I have always done, and will continue to do. None of the sources I cited "suggested his status hadn't changed." You see, this is why it is important that you not form your own conclusions, and convey instead only what the sources do. After his ouster, his involvement with the WSI consisted of not much more than being an observer, and tending to his already pre-arranged fund-raising efforts. Xenophrenic 23:47, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Revert of recent edits by Cudgel

You inserted the following statement:

Through his association with Jane Fonda, Lane became a key figure in several of the non governmental “war crimes” investigations that took place during the Vietnam War, most notably the Winter Soldier Investigation originaly sponsored by the Citizens Commission of Inquiry and the Vietnam Veterans Against the War.

You cite Hunt as your source. Reviewing Hunt reveals just the opposite is true. Lane was investigating war crimes (for his book) before he met Fonda. VVAW first contacted Lane, then Lane introduced Fonda to the VVAW. VVAW then approached CCI, and encouraged the combining of efforts. You also removed edits and citations indicating VVAW vets insisted that Lane be removed from the project. I reverted it. Xenophrenic 23:47, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Further changes: You inserted statement that Sheehan's review showed "at least 4..." It is exactly 4, so I modified the wording to more accurately reflect the review. You inserted a statement implying Sheehan revealed some of the servicemen were never in Vietnam. Incorrect, it is Lane's book that reveals that, not Sheehan. I corrected it. Took out your statement that Sheehan revealed some servicemen deserted before going to Vietnam, when it was Lane's book that actually revealed that. Also trimmed some minutiae more appropriate to a CCI or WSI article, rephrased Lane's response to Sheehan to be more accurate, and included your source info. Xenophrenic 20:38, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Yet you still insist on writing Lane out of the actual events in Detroit? The source, from Hunt is clear, although he kept a low profile, his relationship with Fonda, the primary source of money for the event, meant that they could not exclude him completely. Also, the quote from Nicosia about WSI being an “all veteran’s affair” is a joke, there were lots of non-vets at WSI, like Marjorie Nelson, Stephanie Caldwell. The statement just does not hold up to scrutiny. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 21:23, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Also, CCI ditched lane before the book review, and VVAW staed with him because they couldnt lose Fonda's funding. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 21:28, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

I insist on removing conjecture and conclusion that, while it may be loosly derived from the source, is not actually contained in the cited source. Fonda was Lane's "girlfriend?" On what page of Nicosia's book does he say (and let me get your quotes exact here) WSI was an “all veteran’s affair”? I don't see that in the article either. I do see in both the article and source where he says the vets wanted it to be an all veteran "production" and they wanted no more interference from outsiders like Lane and Barbarella. Produced by vets it was, but you are correct that non-vets attended. Hundreds of them did. Reporters, protesters, politicians, curious onlookers, guest speakers on chemical defoliants, psychology, international law, etc. Let me ask you, what part in "the actual events in Detroit" did Lane play after the reformation of the final steering committee? Include sources, please.

As I noted above, this BLP should reflect solid sources, and information specific to Lane. You can expand on the nuanced conflicts between CCI, VVAW, Fonda, Rifkin, etc., in more detail in more appropriate articles. Your source, by the way, starts out by saying, "Different factions offered conflicting explanations." You give only one of those explanations. Xenophrenic 03:34, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

You do realize that this quote: "Ultimately, the WSI was an event produced by veterans only, without the need of "so-called experts" such as Lane" is from Todd Ensign, who was not a part of WSI, but CCI right? So how can you take a quote about one thing, CCI, and apply it to WSI?

That quote is from Nicosia, page 84, and it states right in the quote which event it was about: WSI. Ensign is a source used, and even quoted, by Nicosia, of course, but the above quote is from Nicosia. Xenophrenic 20:02, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Wrong again: "As Ensign says, with Just pride: “we began that process (of holding hearings based on the testimony of veterans). It was a bottom up force. It didn’t need so-called experts or pseudo-Star-trekker type guys'", although the end does say the "Winter Soldier Investigation", Ensign was not part of it, he split with the CCI because he could not stand Lane.

That quote is from Nicosia, page 84, and it states right in the quote which event it was about: WSI. Ensign is a source used, and even quoted, by Nicosia, of course, but the above quote is from Nicosia. Now you are introducing another quote that really is from Ensign this time. You can't bait & switch here. Ensign, by the way, was a more significant part of WSI than Lane was. Ensign was integral to the initial development. Xenophrenic 21:47, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Ensign was not a part of WSI in detroit, he bolted. The current article text makes it seem like Ensign is speaking about WSI, when in fact he is speaking about CCI. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 23:36, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

Ensign was very much a part of WSI. As organizer, he focused the direction, interviewed veterans and collected testimony (several would testify at both events), laid out the structure of the event... Just because he split off to handle the Wash, DC event doesn't mean all the months of work he did on the WSI project just disappears. By that same token, Lane raised funds and used contacts that benefited CCI and VVAW organizers equally, before the split. The reason the article makes it seem like Ensign is speaking about WSI is because the source specifically states he is speaking about the WSI. Try reading it. Xenophrenic 06:40, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Lane was very much a part of WSI. As organizer, he focused the direction, interviewed veterans and collected testimony (several would testify at both events), laid out the structure of the event... Just because CCI dumped him and a few months later VVAW formed a new steeing committee with him doesn't mean all the months of work he did on the WSI project just disappears. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 18:41, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

I'm happy we are finally in agreement about Ensigns statement on the WSI event. Xenophrenic 19:14, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

No, Lane was talking about CCI, as he was not involved in the final Detroit media event. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 19:18, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Ensign was not at WSI in Detroit, as he left to be a part of CCI in Washington exclusively because he did not want to work with Lane. Do you have a source that indicates that Ensign was at the Detroit hearings? Torturous Devastating Cudgel 14:57, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

When did I ever say he was at the WSI event? I believe you are responding to a different thread. I'll repeat the pertinent part of this thread here to get it back on track: Ensign was very much a part of WSI. As organizer, he focused the direction, interviewed veterans and collected testimony (several would testify at both events), laid out the structure of the event... Just because he split off to handle the Wash, DC event doesn't mean all the months of work he did on the WSI project just disappears. By that same token, Lane raised funds and used contacts that benefited CCI and VVAW organizers equally, before the split. The reason the article makes it seem like Ensign is speaking about WSI is because the source specifically states he is speaking about the WSI. Try reading it.Xenophrenic 18:10, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

But the worst setback to the WSI occurred in early November when a bitter schism occurred between VVAW and CCI. In early November, Ensign and Rifkin proposed that the WSI steering committee expel Mark Lane, but Jane Fonda was fiercely loyal to him. For months the two had become inseparable, traveling to college campuses and parties, raiding funds, rallying support. He had defended her when she was arrested in Cleveland on trumped-up drug charges. Now a group of impetuous antiwar organizers were demanding that she jettison her close friend. “Fonda, Lane, and the VVAW came as a package,”, wrote James Simon Kunen. When Fonda “threatened to withdraw her cash” Ensign recounted. The VVAW stuck with them and we split”. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 21:31, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Not sure what point you are trying to express with the above quote. Xenophrenic 21:47, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

And the other line "Vietnam veterans involved with the Winter Soldier Investigation, insisted that there be no interference from the likes of Lane.", is also ridiculous because he was involved, at the insistence of Fonda. As far as what role Lane played in the Detroit hearings (with sources, naturally)

You are correct that Lane was involved at the insistence of Fonda. It is also correct that he was later removed from involvement at the insistence of the vets producing WSI. I've seen the quote below (almost verbatim from Wilbur Scott's The Politics of Readjustment) before. Lane, Fonda and all of the organizers wanted the event filmed and distributed. Ultimately it was not Lane and Fonda that did so, despite the implication of that quote. It was done by the WinterFilm Collective instead. Can you point to a film made or distributed by F&L? In this BLP, we should strive for a better degree of accuracy. Xenophrenic 20:02, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

I have cited a WP:RS citing the information that Lane filmed the event and that’s the criteria for inclusion. Lanes was removed from the steering committee, but not from the project. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 21:17, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

BLPs typically require a raised RS bar. Or did I misinterpret the WP:BLP page? Xenophrenic 21:47, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Well, here is another: The Politics of Readjustment: Vietnam veterans since the war By Wilbur J. Scott, pg 19. Here too it says that Lane filmed the event and along with Fonda arrainged for its distribution. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 23:36, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

No, that is the same source. Sandra Bloom (from your ISTSS source) practically cuts & pastes Scott into her document, and also cites him. BLPs typically require a raised RS bar. Or did I misinterpret the WP:BLP page? Xenophrenic 06:40, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

If the source meets the criteria for inclusion, and by all indications both of these do, then it can be a part of the article (especially considering that you have presented nothing that states that Lane did not film the Detroit hearings) . So yes, you did misinterprate the BLP policy. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 14:57, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

The single source you cite does not meet the inclusion requirements for a BLP. Xenophrenic 18:10, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Please cite the relvant portion of BLP that would call for the exclusion of the citation. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 18:41, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

In January of 1971, they organized war crime hearings called the "Winter Soldier Investigation" in Detroit, sponsored by Jane Fonda, among others. One hundred and fifteen veterans, as well as Robert Lifton, presented testimony about atrocities committed in Vietnam, while Fonda, and antiwar activist, Mark Lane, filmed the testimony and arranged for distribution.

Torturous Devastating Cudgel 14:52, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Other notes on changes you made: Lane "became a key figure" in the inquiries? Conjecture. Key fundraiser, perhaps. "most notably the WSI"? Incorrect. The CCI event was more notable, with much more national coverage than the WSI. "according to their service records"? Not completely accurate. Non-service record related comments made by the DoD were incorporated into the review, too. Xenophrenic 20:02, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Lane was a key figure, Nicosia describes him as a "chief planner", and its interesting that you would refer to him as a "Key fundraiser" here, when you continue to remove the reference in other articles. Whether CCI or WSI was more notable is a matter of opinion, and but a quick google search for CCI yields 746 hits verses 18,700 hits for WSI. The material that Sheehan uses in his review always refers to "Marine Crops records" and "Army records" which would be another name for their service records. There is also a detail account in of many more of these individuals in Stolen Valor, however I don’t have my copy in front of me. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 20:33, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

The material Sheehan uses in his review sometimes comes from MC and Army records, and sometimes he says things like, "The Marine Corps contends it does not give courses in torture," which is not a statement from a service record but a DoD person. Info from service records as well as from DoD personnel all fall under the source: Department of Defense.

I remove the qualifier "primary funder" when Fonda, Nash, UAW and others are far above him in bringing in the cash. And Marine Crop (sic) records were indeed one of the DoD sources - I don't see the problem. Xenophrenic 21:47, 28 August 2007 (UTC)

Nicosia's book would seem to disagree with that assesment. 23:36, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

If it does, I'm sure you'll point out where. Until then, it will remain an unsourced assertion and fail to remain in the BLP article. He raised funds (but not even close to Fonda's efforts) and that is conveyed in the article already. You seem to be trying to inflate his importance. After the veterans took over the project, Lane's importance was reduced almost to zero. Xenophrenic 06:40, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

That is certainly the POV you are trying to have dominate the article, but unfortunately the sources do not back this interpretation of events. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 14:57, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

If it does, I'm sure you'll point out where (that means cite a source). Until then, it will remain an unsourced assertion and fail to remain in the BLP article. Xenophrenic 18:10, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Questions and comments on Cudgel's edits

The war crimes inquiries were indeed sponsored by antiwar organizations, and you should quit trying to hide that fact. Is "non" a word in the english language? It's not in my dictionary as anything other than a prefix. Lane became a key figure in several (as in, 3 or more?) inquiries? Can you name them, define level of "keyness" in each and source it please? You removed a source citation to Ensign while leaving the material from Ensign? That can only be an accident, so I replaced it. From the article, "Lane's close association with CCI and VVAW would be short-lived." You keep trying to remove VVAW from that line while ignoring the fact that Lane's association with VVAW went from close to distant (at best) after the vets took over the WSI project. "Then the question became, 'How do we protect our integrity?'" recalled Joe Urgo, "'How do we seperate ourselves from this guy?'" (That's from the source you cited.) Seperate they did. Lane spent the rest of his time jetting around the country trying to defend his book, but he did make it back in time to see the WSI event. No, he didn't film it (his partner Mugar admits Lane sucks at using even the simplest of cameras) and neither did Fonda, although everyone involved with the project wanted it filmed. Fonda had some comment about the filming of WSI that I'll dig up for you. Xenophrenic 07:35, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Define “keyness”, ok, he along with Fonda were the primary fundraisers (lots of sources on that one), Nicosia refers to him as one of the “"chief planner", the name of the event, the “Winter Soldier Investigation”, was Lane’s idea (Hunt); calling him a “key figure” is very appropriate here. I removed the VVAW from the passage, because although he was not part of the newly formed steering committee, he was still involved in the event (at the behest of Fonda and Hubbard), and filmed it (two sources on this one, cited in the article). If you have a source that states that Lane was not at the hearings, and a source that specifically states he did not participate in the media event in Detroit, by all means bring it to the table, because so far, I have cited two WP:RS’s that state that he was there.

Where is that "chief planner" comment page, again, if you don't mind? I'd like to see which period it relates to: pre-CCI ultimatum, pre-sheehan review, or post-VVAW Vets ultimatum.

You state Lane was "still involved in the event" and also filmed the event? Can you please state clearly what that involvement was after the non-Lane committee was formed, with clear sources?

Is "non" a word in the english language? Xenophrenic 18:00, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Well the filming, (two sources on that one now) and the fact that they were glad he "kept a low profile" would seem to indicate that he had involvement in the Detroit media event. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 18:41, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

"would seem to indicate?" Please don't draw your own conclusions and try to squeeze them into an article, especially a BLP. Convey what the sources say, nothing more, nothing less. Xenophrenic 19:14, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Well, the sources say he filmed it, its good that we are in agreement on this key point. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 19:18, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

I'm glad we agree. You have one unreliable source claiming he and Fonda filmed it (Scott), and countless others that quote Scott's incorrect info. Scott, in the same breath, also claims Herbert testified at the WSI when he did not. Scott refers incorrectly to the Citizens' Commission of Inquiry as the "Concerned Citizens Inquiry" - clearly the man is confused. Do you have second source (one that doesn't quote the Scott errors, please) showing Fonda and Lane filmed the event and distributed it? What was the name of the film and the distributor? I know only of the film from the Winterfilm Collective, and they make no mention of Lane in the filming credits or distribution credits (although they do credit Fonda, Nash and Sutherland among financiers - still no Lane). We have to get this "right," according to the BLP instructions. Xenophrenic 21:47, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

Still waiting on your source page for the "chief planner" designation you claim is in Nicosia's book. Google can't find it, and neither can I. Xenophrenic 21:47, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

Were there people in VVAW who didn’t like him and wanted to see him go (like Urgo), yes, the sources are clear on this point, but they are also clear that Fonda’s inbsistence on keeping him around, coupled with her cash meant that they could not afford to kick him out and upset her.

Did the VVAW not like him and wanted to see him go, yes, the sources are clear on this point. Sources are clear that when the CCI threatened to go if Lane didn't... VVAW stuck with the money. Moving down the timeline (after Sheehans Review), sources are equally clear that VVAW veterans also gave an ultimatum, and the vets took control of the project without Lane. You keep trying to hide this. Xenophrenic 18:00, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Absolutely not, its still in there, but so too is his continued involvement. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 18:41, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

It is still in there now, correct - until you edit it out again. As for Lane's continued involvement, that consisted of what, again (something other than the tired "he filmed it" myth)? Xenophrenic 19:14, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

And where, exactly,is your source that Lane did not film the event and was not present for it? I am struggling to find it here in talk? Torturous Devastating Cudgel 19:18, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

So you say Lane wasn't even present, Cudgel? Please provide a source for that as well. Add that to the list of sources you need to provide about Lane's "involvement" after the vets took over. Xenophrenic 01:25, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

If you feel so strongly about this, file an WP:RFC and get some other editors to comment on this. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 14:42, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Feel strongly? I'm just conveying what the sources say. I feel strongly that editors shouldn't extrapolate conclusions and try to insert them into BLPs. Xenophrenic 18:00, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Accuracy and Neutrality of whole article in dispute

(A dispute tag has been placed in the article, but temporarily removed until specific details of the dispute are presented here for discussion.) 1) Lane was present in Detroit for the hearings. Scott confirms this. Scott meets all the criteria for a WP:RS and WP:BLP. Furthermore, no source specifically denies that Lane was present in Detroit. This is a factual concern.

Lane was present during the WSI. Even I confirmed this (see above discussions). His presence was never up for debate. The factual concerns were over whether Lane was still "involved" in the production after the vets took over the project, and whether Lane "filmed the event." Scott is an error-ridden source. He bungles the name of the CCI, claims Herbert was at the WSI (uh uh, he was at the CCI event), and totally confuses the joining of Lane with the CCI by claiming Lane and Fonda "hired Rifkin and Ensign" as organizers. In truth, the CCI (started by Rifkin and Ensign, not F&L as Scott says) had already been running inquiries long before Lane and Fonda even heard of the antiwar movement. Scott may meet the weak criteria for WP:RS, but he falls short of the additional accuracy needed for WP:BLP. I'm collecting additional sources that accurately define Lane's level of participation after the vets took over. Xenophrenic 20:59, 4 September 2007 (UTC)

You have fought every attempt to include material demonstrating that Lane was present, as you continue to remove the following: "Lane kept a low profile during the actual hearings, relieving those were worried about his sinking reputation.". As far as your comments on the reliability of Scott, he does not say explicitly where Herbert spoke and the narrative given is a fairly good representation of the events. Considering that you have finally agreed that Scott is a WP:RS the material is suitable for inclusion into the article. Nowhere in WP:BLP does it mention any need for additional accuracy. Please cite the policy properly if you are going to policy shop. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 03:28, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

"Editors must take particular care adding biographical material about a living person to any Misplaced Pages page. Such material requires a high degree of sensitivity..." - From WP:BLP

"Material about living persons must be sourced very carefully. Without reliable third-party sources, a biography will violate the No original research and Verifiability policies, and could lead to libel claims." - From WP:BLP

"We must get the article right. Be very firm about the use of high quality references." - From WP:BLP

"Editors should also be on the lookout for biased or malicious content about living persons. If someone appears to be pushing an agenda or a biased point of view, insist on reliable third-party published sources and a clear demonstration of relevance to the person's notability.

Repeating above: Never had a problem with you showing Lane was there. I do have a problem with you showing any involvement of Lane after the vets took over, and/or showing that he filmed it. As for Scott, I disagree that he is a reliable source. I said he "may meet the weak criteria for WP:RS" but not as a source for a WP:BLP.

"Material about living persons available solely in questionable or dubious sources should be handled with caution, and, if derogatory, should not be used at all in biographies of living people, either as sources or via external links." - From WP:BLP

Scott has shown himself to be about as questionable as possible. Let's see if we can find a backup source (who isn't just looping back to Scott). Please continue. Xenophrenic 06:30, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

You have not cited any specific policy that applies here. If Scott is a WP:RS (as you have already said) then he is an WP:RS, as there is no such category of kinda-sorta-maybe RS. Scott is not self published, the material does not come from a blog, and this particular book of his was published by a fairly reputable publisher. Nothing in it is derogatory in nature to Lane, and there is nothing contentious about the material, except to you, and that’s certainly not part of any editing guideline. In fact, others WP:RS’s have thought the material to be reliable enough to use in their own work . The material will go back in, and if you feel so strongly about it, post it on the WP:BLP board and have others weigh in about it.Torturous Devastating Cudgel 22:13, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

2) The name “Winter Soldier Investigation” was Lane’s idea, see Hunt pg 59: “The idea behind the name came from the New York City attorney Mark Lane”. This is a factual concern.

I've seen this in a couple sources, so no argument from me. Not sure it's really an encyclopedic addition, but if it goes in it should have a small blurb as to "why" that name was suggested by Lane. (The Paine reference about summer soldiers only fighting the fair weather battles, and shrinking when it gets rough, etc...) Xenophrenic 20:59, 4 September 2007 (UTC)

Why is this unencyclopedic and why have you continued to remove it? Torturous Devastating Cudgel 03:28, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

"Ask yourself whether the source is reliable; whether the material is being presented as true; and whether, even if true, it is relevant to an encyclopedia article about the subject." - From WP:BLP.

It wasn't intentionally removed; probably swept away when the BLP violations were removed. I don't see any reason why it can't find a home in the article though. Xenophrenic 06:30, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

the source is reliable, and definitely of note ,as Lane was responsible for the name of the event. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 22:13, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

3) The removal of the review by James Reston Jr, whichas of my last edit had a specific page # in Stolen Valor, pg 132. That too meets the criteria for inclusion. This is a POV concern.

Page 132, as of your last edit, and no page number at all in previous edits. Page 123 now? I'd like to know for sure, since I will be checking it. I've no doubt more than one person reviewed Lane's book, but I'd like to see those reviews accurately represented. Xenophrenic 20:59, 4 September 2007 (UTC)

I did mean pg 132, mistyped in the comment above, and that’s been fixed. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 03:28, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

No prob, I'll have a full transcript of the material before the day ends. This one should be resolved fairly quickly. Xenophrenic 06:30, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

I would like to see what interesting interpretation is placed on this one. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 22:13, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

4) The removal of the following “Lane collaboration with VVAW did not end with his involvement in the Detroit Winter Soldier hearings in Detroit, he later joined forces with VVAW again, when he along with Fonda and Mike Hunter of VVAW traveled to Paris in March of 1971 where they met with representatives of the North Vietnamese government” was done even though there was a citation associated with it, Stacewicz. You claim the citation does not exist, but another citation for the material can also be found here. Citation meets criteria for a WP:RS and WP:BLP. This is a factual and POV concern. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 17:30, 4 September 2007 (UTC)

Your first source claimed page 284 in Stacewicz' book. An incorrect cite, and Lane isn't even mentioned in that section. Do you have another page number? I know from other sources that there was a meeting in Summer of 1972 of peace delegations where many attended. I'm still looking for sources that support Lane's "collaboration" with anyone; Lane's "joining forces" with anyone; or even Lane travelling with anyone. Those sound like conclusions or conjecture. Xenophrenic 20:59, 4 September 2007 (UTC)

I have the Stacewicz book in my hand. I am looking at page 284. There is no mention of Lane, and no mention of a 1971 trip to Paris. Just to be sure we don't have a page number mix-up due to different editions, I've checked every mention of Lane throughout the book. I see nothing even remotely resembling the above material. I'll ask one more time for you to provide a correct citation, before putting this Stacewicz issue to rest. Xenophrenic 06:30, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

5) Stacewicz pg 284 was a valid source for the material (in number 4 above), but since no readily available online source can be cited for all to see, I have also used the following. Why did you not comment on this source as well? Torturous Devastating Cudgel 03:28, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

Stacewicz is not a valid source (see issue 4 above). As for your Rothrock source, I decided to pick up a copy. The library didn't have it. The state-wide library system didn't have it. They didn't even have a catalog entry for it. Any other published works by this guy? No. So I hit the bookstore, and they didn't have it. Never did -- but they could order it. Same thing with Borders, Barnes & Noble, Amazon -- they never had it, but they would be happy to have one printed off just for me. This seemed a bit odd, so I researched the book further. Self-published by AuthorHouse! I should have guessed.

From WP:Verifiability: "Anyone can create a website or pay to have a book published, then claim to be an expert in a certain field. For that reason, self-published books, personal websites, and blogs are largely not acceptable as sources."

"Self-published sources should never be used as third-party sources about living persons, even if the author is a well-known professional researcher or writer; see WP:BLP#Reliable_sources.

I looked a little closer at the link you provided to the Google-Book page, and checked the citations used by the esteemed Mr. Rothrock for the material you indicated. He sources it back to the partisan humor and spoof website wintersoldier.com! His whole book is infested with such citations. I'll stop here, before I really start "commenting." The Rothrock issue is now closed. Xenophrenic 06:30, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

I had not realized it was self published. I will photocopy Stacewicz, and upload it for all to evaluate. Torturous Devastating Cudgel 22:13, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

• Unassessed biography articles
• WikiProject Biography articles
• Unassessed United States articles
• Unknown-importance United States articles
• Unassessed United States articles of Unknown-importance
• Unassessed Texas articles
• Unknown-importance Texas articles
• WikiProject Texas articles
• WikiProject United States articles