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New Grove

I think the description of the New Grove Inn is very unfair, this is a regular pub with real people and should be embraced not avoided.

I can't see any description of the New Grove Inn in this article. Where do you mean? --Malleus Fatuarum 21:55, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Guys, let's not forget, that encyclopedia isn't a pub guide in the fist place. M0RD00R 22:11, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Residential town

To say that Whitefield has only ever been a residential town is to ignore its history. It has neither always been a town nor always been lacking in manufacturing industry. There were - for example - substantial textile mills on Hardmans Road, on Victoria Avenue by the railway bridge and off what is now Albert Road, for a start, and James Halstead (aka Polyflor Ltd) has long operated from Whitefield. Sitush 07:40, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

If you can find any sources regarding those, it would be helpful to mention them here or add them to the article. Jakew 11:03, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Some of the mills etc are clearly visible on historic Ordnance Survey maps and there are references to them also in Thomas Holt's "Pilkington Park" (pub. 1963, long out of print but I have a copy). Polyflor is a plc formerly known as James Halstead - their website and/or Companies House list their address as Whitefield. I can remember going in the buildings on Hardmans Road when it was still operating as a mill, as I did also in the recently converted building on Sefton Street - and I'm nowhere near drawing a pension yet. The site of Whitefield Brewery, by the way, is the current PMB garage on Higher Lane - the garage is actually the same building. I've still not worked out how to edit the main page to Wiki standads yet. Sitush 10:25, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

Place name

Can anyone provide a reference for the Lord Whitefie story referred to in the section explaining the origin of the Whitefield name? In all my 40-odd years here I have never heard anyone mention that as a possible origin, nor can I find a reference myself. The two published local histories - by Holt and by Wilson - do not refer to it, nor can some people I know who have lived in the place for over 80 years recall hearing it. Sitush (talk) 03:42, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

If neither of the local histories mention to Lord Whitefie story I think that's enough to say that it should be removed from the article. Feel free to do so. Nev1 (talk) 12:41, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks. I've just re-read the relevant bits of the two histories I mentioned (self-doubt!) and it confirms my point, although to be honest it looks iffy even without referring. Furthermore, the whole section on naming needs a rewrite, confirming some less iffy suspicions. I'm not sure that I can cite publication data in full but I can certainly cite the publication titles & authors & they are still available in local libraries, so I'll do the rewrite asap Sitush (talk) 00:24, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

Thanks, that's great. If you provide the name of the book and the author, there'll probably be the rest of the info on Amazon or somewhere. Also, would it be possible to include the page numbers? It's not so important but it help readers if they ever want to check the information for themselves. Nev1 (talk) 00:32, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

Sure, I'll sort something out along the lines that you refer to. Might need a bit of help with the formatting of citations/references but let's see what happens (sandbox, preview etc will help). I wouldn't bank on Amazon etc, though, for further info on the books - I've been searching for extra copies of them for a long time & have had no luck. As they were published locally and some time ago - one by a local newspaper with aspirations (then!) -they do not even carry an ISBN number. Sitush (talk) 00:16, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Fair enough, local library websites might have some info. If you need any help just ask here, or on my talk page, or on the talk page of the Greater Manchester wikiproject. Here's an example of the citation template: {{citation |first=Barry |last=Cunliffe |title=Danebury: Anatomy of an Iron Age Hillfort |publisher=Batsford Ltd |year=1983 |isbn=0713409983 }} gives: "Cunliffe, Barry (1983), Danebury: Anatomy of an Iron Age Hillfort, Batsford Ltd, ISBN 0713409983".

• "|first=" should be the author's first name
• "|last=" should be the author's surname
• "|title=" the title of the book
• "|publisher=" the publisher
• "|year=" year the book was publisher (of the edition you're using)
• "|isbn=" the isbn if available

There are other optional fields, such as "|url=" which allows a hyperlink to be included (for example if you've found the book on google books) but for locally published books the ones above should be enough. Hope that helps. Nev1 (talk) 00:36, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok, rewritten place name paragraph and removed completely the reference to th Whitefie story. Sitush (talk) 11:53, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Referencing

I'm almost done with Radcliffe, Greater Manchester and may start looking at this article. The biggest problem right now is the lack of references for the information already there. The Toponymy section has 2 references at the end of the paragraph. To which parts of that paragraph do each refer - or is the same information in both references? I can also supply the article with all the photographs it will need, just give me time to get over there. Parrot of Doom (talk) 13:30, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

That was me, getting to grips with how to reference. I have the two books mentioned and will be quite drastically citing, editing, adding over the next few days. In the instance you refer to, I did originally set up seperate reference points in the para but it seemed to me to be very untidy when done that way. Neither book mentions all the variations, both mention two of them. Suggestions, hints, tips etc welcome Sitush (talk) 17:21, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

One option might be, while you're building the article, to insert hidden text in the page. The code is <!--"text"--!> - well that's how I do it. That way you can keep track of facts, and only when the article is at GAC or FAC would the text be removed. Parrot of Doom (talk) 18:26, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm slightly confused by this because I know the facts/do not need an aide memoire/have known the info for most of my life ... and if the text is hidden then the aide memoire is not a lot of use to anyone else. Clearly, I'm missing your point - could you elaborate please. I'll be coming back to you about photos also, specifically how to deal with WP requirements for historic photos from old postcards (like, 80 year old ones), so any pointers on this would also be appreciated. I've got to start somewhere! Sitush (talk) 18:47, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Its an aid for editors. That way if things get shuffled around (as invariably happens), and someone asks you to reference a line that's been removed from its original position. You should also bear in mind that the article must be written so that it is accessible by anyone. There are a load of things I'd love to put in the Radcliffe article - things that I know - but unless I can find a reference for them, I can't. Parrot of Doom (talk) 19:15, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

I understand a bit better, I think. Re: references, that is precisely what I'm trying to do, since the article was void of them and has been for a long time. I think I've covered all the citation flags you raised a couple of days ago (but not one which I raised myself and which refers to a comment which is a borderline POV issue) but feel free to add more & I'll see what I can find. Sitush (talk) 19:25, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

For photos/images over 70 years old you can upload them (preferably on wikipedia commons, but one step at a time) and put this template on it: {{PD-UK-unknown}}. If you add info such as author, date, and a description the image will be fine. Images less than 70 years old are more problematic, you enter the realm of fair use which gets comlicated. Geograph has lots of picture, all of which can be used on wikipedia. Flickr has some, you have to do an advanced search looking for creative commons licenses which allow the image to be changed and redistributed for profit. The trick is knowing which license information on the article. Nev1 (talk) 18:56, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

I agree it looks a bit tidier to have references at the end of the paragraph, but if they're after the facts they back up it's easier for readers to check. Nev1 (talk) 18:08, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Point taken. Perhaps I should reinstate my original referencing for this para Sitush (talk) 18:47, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Besses Band - notable?

Can Besses o'th' Barn Band (and the associated Boys Band) be listed under Notable People ? I've got quite a bit of info on them here and they were/are pretty famous around the world, although I've yet to locate a specific Wikipeia entry for them. Sitush (talk) 17:40, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

They may not be notable enough in their own right to warrant an article, but they could go in a new culture section in the article. Nev1 (talk) 18:07, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Lead

Hello,

I noticed the great work being done here, and so thought it befitting to expand the lead somewhat beyond the two sentences that we previously had. However, that said, it's a little bit "generic", borrowing bits and pieces from other articles (like for example Royton), and so it would benefit from someone with a bit more local knowledge sifting through the content.

There is still the option of a fourth paragraph to discuss other matters too don't forget (see WP:UKCITIES).

I based my edits on this, however it isn't a reliable source, and so we'll need something better to work from.

Hope that all helps, --Jza84 |  Talk  02:33, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Population

Really good work going on here of late - thanks to all, especially for guiding me in my own bits. And, boy, do I need the guidance!

The Wilson book in the bibliography has a LOT of population stats, going back wel before 1901 and as far back as hearth tax returns etc, but the source of the stats is not given and I have been concerned about including them, mainly because of boundary changes etc. This is yet another aspect upon which I would appreciate opinion regarding inclusion/manner of doing so etc Sitush (talk) 01:01, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Back to 1801 is probably reliable as that's when the census started, before that they would be estimates. There's no harm in adding them to make a general point, eg: "between 1664 and 1801 the population of Whitefield remained the same/grew/shrank as demonstrated by the hearth returns which indicate the town had a population of xxx; this is probably beacuse..." Nev1 (talk) 01:07, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Agreed. Oldham does something simillar in its Demography section; has a table for the main stats, but mentions some older figures in the prose. :) You're doing great Sitush! --Jza84 |  Talk  01:27, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Stand

Probably best directed at ParrotOfDoom, would info re: the district of Stand be best included here or in the Radcliffe entry which you have put so much effort into? I'm starting to think that the Pilkington family (of the area, not more generally as a surname) should perhaps even have its own entry but to do this would be way beyond my current abilities. Sitush (talk) 01:01, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

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